In the latest story I posted, "Bikini Beach: Swin Date", Paula, the tranasformee, meets a young girl in the Ladies' Changing Room. The girl is upset because she was a grown man, and his wife used the Beach to transform him into a twelve-year old. The girl is starting to think of the wife as her mother and is forgetting what it was like to be a man.
When Paula talks to Grandmother about this girl, the Old Woman seems happy at the notion that the adult male is "disappearing" and the girl, Sally Hammond, is taking her place.
I don't know how other readers feel, but I did get one very negative review about Grandmother and her motives for causing that to happen.
The thing is, that reviewer doesn't know the entire story, not by a long shot. Next week, I'll post "Bikini Beach: Teaching Sally", and the truth, as they say, will out.
Comments
We don't get to know do we?
Some times negative things happen to us. We don't know if we deserved it or not.
G
There is a difference between ...
... things happening to us and things being DONE to us. If I fall on a knife and die, it's an accident. If I'm stabbed and I die, it's murder. Either way, I'm dead, but the first was random chance, and the second was deliberate intent.
And if I'm stabbed and I die because someone knows I'm going to start World War 3, or be responsible for some horrible tragedy, they should have the courtesy to tell me why I'm dying, so I know and can choose to give up my life willingly. If I don't choose, then kill me, because I'm too stupid or selfish to live. *grin*
Looking forward to the tale, Ellie.
Randalynn
Well sadly there are people who come here
.... with agendas and only come to criticize and never to provide encouragement when a story is written well. I think stuff happens as well and Goddess knows life is not always fair.
Kim