Really Do need Help Writing this new version

i seem to be good at saying the wrong things, I would really like to be able to turn Version 2 of Rae Summers: A new beginning into something that people find at least a little entertaining. So any suggestions as to making it better will be appreciated.

for nearly 30 years I have dealt with being a nymph and for 27 of them I have been fortunate to have Had a couple of very excellent Doctors. I talk about this all the time it helps me remember that I am a good Person, and I control when and who, for a long time I did not Maybe I am wrong about sharing this but with out sharing it becomes a very heavy burden. I see how loving this community is and all I wish to do is share Love and Light with you all and hopefully make learn to entertain as well as most of you have so far everything I have read has been excellent even surprising in some cases. Thank you all for this lovely place. Goddess Bless You All.

Love Desiree

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