The Price to Pay - Volume 4 Conclusion - My boo-boo - first 200 readers

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Hi Everyone

In my rush to get to the end, which been filling my head for days, I left out a few crucial lines that may or may not be significant :-)

If you were one of the first 200 readers you would have missed it.
Sooooorry

Hugs

Alys


"Yes, they are," said Amarjit," and do you know where there is a really good medical school?"

"Manchester, Liverpool and London I guess." I replied.

"And?"

"Oh, I'm slow, here in Cardiff of course," I said

"Yes," said Amarjit," I'm thinking of applying here, so hopefully your sister can show me around some of the student facilities this weekend. Do you know what my parents said about going to Cardiff?"

"No, can't guess at all," I responded.

"They said that Cardiff would be a good place to go because my friend Celyn would be nearby and she's not trying to be Lesbian like me!" Amarjit said, laughing.


Comments

We Might Just Forgive You

joannebarbarella's picture

But only if you're very good and produce your future episodes twice as quick as you have done in the past,
Joanne

Forgiveness :-)

Joanne

You are too kind :-)

Will do my best to produce one a month from now on, is that twice as quick, not too good on the Math(s):-)

Hugs

Alys

It Just Goes to Show

how human you are - and a wonderful author - and have a great sense of humour. And they do add to the story.

Celyn's sister? Or am I just being thick (as usual)?

Susie

Celyn's sister

Susie

Celyn's elder sister, Taran, who is a student in Cardiff Uni, has appeared in a few chapters. Sometimes referred to as Goth-Girl by Celyn. One of the motivations for Celyn's mother to dress her in feminine clothes, which Celyn tolerates bit is not ultra keen about, is Taran's complete rejection of that sort of style.

I was going to put a scene with her in the latest chapter but ran out of time. She will appear a bit more in volume 5.

Hugs,

Alys

BTW, Taran means 'Thunder' in Welsh, so I guess she might have a bit of a temper :-)

Thanks

Frank's picture

In my case, I needed them...I'm just a dumb Yankee after all (SHUT UP ANGEL!!!!!!)

The added info was very helpful...I even figured out where the dialog went :)

Huggles!!!

Alexis

Hugs

Frank

At least Alexis is honest...

...about herself...

Giggle, giggle...

Sorry Alexis, you told me to shut up!

Giggle

"Be Your-Self, So Easy to Say, So Hard to Live!"

Cute exchange

Wonder if Celyn and Amarjit can get together again on Celyn's rebound. Seem to remember that they were great as lovers as well as as friends. If Sion can't handle having a really talented girl friend, that's HIS problem. Too bad it become Celyn's problem too.

Nice job Alys.

Woody