Punishment or Gift

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So, the obvious short answer is both. What I wanted to explore here is how readers reconcile these two different approaches especially if they occur in the same story.

In my story "The Prankster" the protagonist is punished for being a manipulative insensitive jerk by actually being forced to change sex. In the end of the story, she actually enjoys the change and future role. So, was Ryan punished or given a gift? What I have noticed from reviews on multiple sites is that there is some conflict within reviewers as to how to look at the ending.

In the story "The Choice" many reviewers said the witch's punishment was too harsh but was it really a punishment at all if the ending is positive for the characters involved. Which goes back to the original question of whether the transformation is a punishment or gift.

In the Count of Monte Cristo, prison is actually a gift in disguise because it helps Edmund Dante find lost treasure that makes him extremely rich and extremely influential in Paris society. He gets the girl, gets his revenge, and lives happily ever after. Is this a man just making the best of a negative situation or does it justify negative actions because the end is happy.

In other words, do we justify forced transformations as being morally acceptable if the end result is positive? Do we blur the lines of tragedy and comedy to the point where we cannot distinguish the two. Is it truly a happy ending if the protagonist is brainwashed or mentally changed to the point where the original character no longer exists.

In my story Room 1408, I had a curious reviewer that suggested that protagonist character Michael had become the woman she was always meant to be. Is this true? Here we have a male character tortured and forced by a haunted room to change into a woman with the alternative being death or greater suffering. Was Michael always supposed to be a woman and the room helped her realize it or was Michael just beaten into submission by the room? Is the evil of the room morally acceptable knowing that Michael's life went in a more positive direction afterwards.

I think there may be two types of readers. One is the type that wants to be the character in the story and live the fantasy of the story as if they were in it themselves. The second is looking at the story from the outside and examining everything in a more objective way. In Room 1408, if the reader fantasizes about being a woman than Michael's change is desirable. If the reader looks at it objectively, that room is an evil sadistic room. Many reviewers have asked why the room is the way it is. I don't really have an answer because its based off the Stephen King novel of the same name. It's an evil room because it's evil. Should there be an answer and could any answer satisfy the mystery?

And my final question is whether there is more exiting drama in a protagonist that is forced to change and deals with the situation or a protagonist that seeks change and ultimately finds it? What is more satisfying? What has greater plot drama and character development?

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