In need of a quick and dirty edit

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Looking for someone familiar with or willing to familiarize themselves with my Slacker story... Slacker five is ready, but needs a once over as i don't always trust my writing *smirk*
Cheers,
Diana M. Howe, Moongoddess at Large

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