I have a new story, and I could use a pre-reader

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I'm have 4 chapters already written, and I've plotted out the story. I'd like someone to give me an honest opinion about it.

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Patricia Marie Allen's picture

Need to know more about what I'm getting into. I'm currently working on finishing Jeremy Chandler's "My Summer in Pantyhose." He left the story in a spot that my muse latched onto. I currently have 10 chapters and it will take at least 10 more to get the story to September.

That said I could use a break, but not a very long one. You say 4 chapters; how many words? I've done some editing for different people, but I get the feeling you're not looking for and editor. So do you want to someone to point out sections that should be rewritten to make it clearer; plot or story line suggestions???

Send me a PM with more info and I'll get back to you.

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Patricia

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Thank you,

I would love to get your input. However, the link thingie only takes .rtf files, and it is messing up my formatting when I save it in .rtf. I would need your email address. I can send it in Open Office or Word format.