Drabble Theatre: Reflecting

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“So what’s wrong with being a boy?”

“Nothing, but I’m not a boy!”

“Okay, okay, that’s obviously clear by now. But will she understand?”

“She loves me right? Nothing would change that… I hope”

“God, I don’t even want to think about that possibility.”

“I have to tell her though. I don’t think I can carry on like this.”

“Yeah, I know… I know…”

“Think I’m ready to face her?”

“Ready? Probably not. But I can’t wait for that.”

“Johnny, are you talking to the mirror again?”, mom’s voice came from the hallway.

“Mom, I need to tell you something…”

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Very well done

erin's picture

Just the marrow of the story.

Hugs,
Erin

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

Who Is The Fairest?

joannebarbarella's picture

Lovely kicker done in a drabble,
Hugs,
Joanne

neat

That is a great dabble. It makes me want to know how Mom will handle it. I guess thats left to our imagination.

Neat

kristina l s's picture

little mental back and forth. Fears and imponderables with a tinge of hope. WE do.

Kristina

Nicely Done...

...without any sign (at least that I could see) of strain to make it fit so concisely.

Good work, and a good vignette.

Eric

Drabble Theatre: Reflecting

Maybe Mother knows already.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine