Off the Front Part 1

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Marley looked up from behind the wheel she was truing as she heard the bell attached to the door. "Great, two bimbos," she thought as she watched the two young women enter the bike shop. She put the spoke wrench down and wiped her hands on the the worn denim apron then walked out to the sales floor. It was a Wednesday afternoon and she was closing the shop, which meant besides fixing bikes she had to deal with customers, which was far from her favorite activity. She removed the shop worn apron and hung it on a peg, "Can I help you?" Marley asked.
"We're looking for bikes," the taller girl said. They both wore matching Pi Beta Phi Sorority sweatshirts and had the carefree look of girls who'd never had to deal with real life, Marley thought. She instantly disliked them.
"Well you've come to the right place, here let me show you a few," Marley said. She moved her thin body gracefully through the crowded shop, and to a row of cruiser style bikes that were popular with college students. "These are great for getting around campus," she said.
"Well actually we are looking for something a bit more like race bikes," the tall girl said again. She was taller than Marley, and very athletic looking.
"We're going to train for the Little 500," the shorter blond said.
"Oh, you're going to race it next year?" Marley asked.
"Yeah, I'm the Pi Beta Phi coach, team captain, and whatever else they decide to make me do." the taller girl said.
"You haven't raced it before?" Marley asked.
"No last year the team was mostly Seniors, but our house doesn't take it seriously. I spoke out that we should do better than last place, and thanks to my big mouth I'm in charge now," the taller girl said.
"It's good you've got like 6 months to get ready, and you definitely want a drop bar bike to train on. You can spend alot of money on a road bike, but you don't really need to, let me show you what we have," Marley said as she directed the girls over to the bargain area of the shop. "These bikes are about the cheapest drop bar bikes we've got, at about 600 dollars, but they're way nicer then the coaster brake bikes you'll be riding. Marley gave an overview of the bikes, and found that her customers were both engaged, asking questions and genuinely interested.
"I'm Stacey, by the way, and this is Brita," Stacey said and held out her hand.
"I'm Marley," she said and carefully took Stacey's hand noting that it was just as big as her own.
"Do you own this shop?" Stacey asked.
"Oh no, I just work here, fix bikes and stuff, part time, I'm going to school too," Marley answered.
"Oh thats so cool, what's your major?" Stacey asked.
"Physical therapy, what's yours?" Marley asked.
"Marketing and communications, I love your outfit, that shirt is so cute." Marley looked down at her T-shirt, it showed a boy pedaling like crazy on a bike with a girl riding on the back wearing a long black dress with a big red bow. Marley's outfit was completed with tights and a short skirt with decorative buttons up the front, and Doc Martin Boots sort of a cute punk look.
"Thanks, Marley said and blushed a bit.
"Kiki, is one of my favorites," Stacey said.
"You know Kiki's Delivery Service, that is so cool," Marley said.
"Yeah I love Ghibli, Howl's Moving Castle is my favorite," Stacey said. Brita lightly punched her in the side and made a noise. "Oh, Brita has a date or something, we'll definitely take the bikes." Marley gave the bikes a quick adjustment, and adjusted the saddles. Stacey bought both bikes on a credit card and thanked Marley for the help.
"Oh, if you guys are interested, we do shop rides on Tuesday and Thursday nights, I usually ride on Thursdays. It would be good practice for you to get used to riding around others," Marley said.
"That sounds awesome, thanks!" Stacey said while Brita hurried her out the door. Marley watched the girls clumsily mount their new bikes and ride down the sidewalk, her eyes following Stacey until she rode out of sight.
"Calm down girl, she's not your type." Marley said out loud to herself and put her apron back on.

Marley rolled her pink spray painted beater bike into the communal bike rack, scanned her card to enter the apartment building, and made her way to the 3rd floor. "Hey," she said and dumped her messenger bag on the kitchenette counter. Amy rolled over on the couch and sat down her Psychology book. The apartment the two girls shared was far more spacious than a dorm room, tasteful Japanese art prints were interspersed with brightly colored anime posters, there was little in the way of furniture, other than a couch and coffee table. The four bicycles hanging from the ceiling on hooks were dead giveaway that this was the home of a serious cyclist.
"You're late," Amy said in her detached monotone voice.
"Yeah I sold a couple bikes to some sorority girls and had to finish the repair work I was doing," Marley said as she flopped onto her bed.
"I hope you get paid for that extra time," Amy replied.
"Yes Mr. Scrooge I did, they were buying their bikes for the Little 500," Marley said.
"Let me guess, they were bubbly, friendly, and invited you to a 'mixer' or some other social event," Amy said.
"They were friendly, and one of them liked my shirt."
"Ahh, perhaps you can start watching your cartoons with her, and stop torturing me with them," Amy said.
"You know you like them, anyway it got me thinking, why haven't you ever done the Little 5?" Marley asked.
"Because it's a stupid event, you ride dumb little under geared bikes on a dumb cinder track while a bunch of drunken idiots watch," Amy said.
"You were never invited on a team." Marley said with a laugh.
"No, I was invited," Amy said.
"Oh, you were kicked off, that's it!"
"No, I quit... I was the only one who took it seriously, all they wanted to do was hang out and drink, it was a waste of time and it still is," Amy huffed. Marley poured a bowl of cereal and sat down on the couch. Amy picked her book up and pushed her thick glasses up her nose, then sat up higher on the couch, "You want to do it don't you?"
"Do what?" Marley asked.
"Race the Little 500."
"You know I can't do that," Marley said unable to disguise the bitterness from her voice.
"Why?" Amy asked.
"You know why, don't be stupid," Marley said.
"You know NCAA rules stipulate that..." Amy was cut off.
"I don't give a shit what the rules say OK, I'm not racing, what do you think it will be like for me when they all find out that chick they're racing against has a dick, or maybe you forgot how well it worked out the first time?" Marley asked.
"I'm sorry, I'm not trying to upset you," Amy said.
"No, its fine, who said I want to start racing again anyway, and like you said, it's a stupid event. Now I've got something new for us to watch, "Midnight Occult Civil Servants," Amy said flicking on the TV.
"Oh Lord spare me," Amy said, but once the show as she put down her book and pushed the glasses up her nose again.

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Great start

Great start
Thanks for the story

Trans girls in women's events.

Sorry. Call this seventy-four-year-old post-op a dinosaur but I can't go with trans-women competing in all women events, especially girls who've transitioned after puberty/teen-years. I've watched cis girls who've trained diligently for years fail to get sports scholarships into college because they been beaten by transwomen who still enjoy male skeletal advantages and musculatr advantages left over from their male growth years. I've seen the girls who were excellent athletes watch their hopes and aspirations disappear as they sit in tears at the end of an event because they just know that the masculine individual in female running knickers is all man skeletally.speaking. Female pelvises just cannot move as directionally as male pelvises and there's an end to it. The truth is there should be transgender games, just as there are disabled games and invicta games. It's NOT FAIR on CIS Girls!

Natal girls have even been KILLED competing in contact sports with transgendered girls who still enjoy masculine strengths and bone densities.

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That's exactly the issue that

That's exactly the issue that Marley is dealing with. In my old story I never finished he raced as a 13 year old against girls and got 2nd place, I plan on exploring that fall out when they got caught.

Really?

I'll be honest, I have yet to see a TG girl in sports. I certainly haven't heard of a TG girl killing a GG girl in competition. Given how much of a fuss the media throws up when there is even a whiff of the so-called TG ringers participating, I'm reasonably sure there is little likelihood of large numbers of TG girls competing in organized sports of anykind, except for the WWF maybe. And I could even say that most high school and college coaches of female sports would not be in favor of boosting a TG player at the expense of a well-talented GG player.

If you doubt me, just look at the multi-year uproar over South African runner Mokgadi Caster Semenya. Accused of being XY (male) instead of XX (female), she has been banned and then reinstated numerous times. In spite of having been required to undergo genetic sex testing multiple times, as of a year or two ago there has been no official statement on the results of her tests. It has been suggested that she might have a defect that renders her body incapable of processing testosterone, which according to some rules makes her eligible to compete as a women. Other accusations against her have gone unsubstantiated, so they remain accusations, nothing more.

If one case against one female athlete can't be settled after all this time, don't you think the scrutiny of a TG athlete by comparison would be a piece of cake? And front page news.

TG Games? Ha-ha, it is to laugh. Ha-ha. /Sarcasm off


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

"I have yet to see a TG girl in sports"

I can remember Renée Richards, an ophthalmologist who also was a top tennis player. She was 41 or 42 when she transitioned and continued to compete in tennis, doing well but not dominating. She sued the United States Tennis Association (USTA) for the right to compete as a woman, and won the case.

However, she later said "Having lived for the past 30 years, I know if I'd had surgery at the age of 22, and then at 24 went on the tour, no genetic woman in the world would have been able to come close to me. And so I've reconsidered my opinion."

Cite references for these

Cite references for these claims. The truth is that transgendered are actually at a disadvantage physically in sport, and only those with a natural talent are able to compete at the new level.

And yes I do know what I am talking about from experience of coaching womens rugby.

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Estarriol

I used to be normal, but I found the cure....

interesting start!

I look forward to more.

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A fine first chapter..

Characters that are interesting, not stereotyped, and well differentiated, subjects close to my heart- bicycles, studio ghibli, and romance. Although Howl’s Moving Castle is not my favorite - Totoro, Spirited Away, and Cagliostro are my tops. I was startled and interested by Beverly’s post. On reflection, her comments on on the unfair advantages of post puberty tg women make a lot sense. I see her point, and agree for the worlds where people are competing for some real form of best. However, as someone who really enjoys sports in my community and isn’t very good any of them, I would think that this very strong caution only applies to pretty serious competitors who work near the top of their form. For amateurs who care, but are probably at best 60 percent of their top form, the. I care aboout commitment and sportsmanship way more than any physical quality. People play intramural sport to have fun.

Thanks, I've never heard of

Thanks, I've never heard of Cagliostro, got to check that one out. Hope I can write a story to keep you coming back!

Welcome to BC community...

You're starting with a good story.
Hugs, Jessie C

Jessica E. Connors

Jessica Connors

An excellent star

This is going to be a very entertaining story, and I don't think it's the first you have written. Welcome to Bigcloset. Bronwen