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ROFG SO HARD!!!!

BILL CLINTON XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Transgender, Gamer, Little, Princess, Therian and proud :D

Now it all makes sense!

Hehe. I knew I had to include someone famous in the list for giggles. Bill just fits, eh?

ROFG SO HARD!!!!

BILL CLINTON XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Transgender, Gamer, Little, Princess, Therian and proud :D

The prolog begins at the birth of you-know-who 29 years ago

Having read the complete saga so far and the prolog, we know NOW the Archeron Journals need SERIOUS updating.

For one we know WHY Taylor turned out as she did. And more of who Don WAS before he was corrupted.

To use the power of that dammed archeron we now know stole half of the soul of... Don was a fool and Visanu did not die painfully enough.

It seems likely Don's fall from grace and Reanna's death were all orchestrated by that vile archeron. And Amber's transformation too.

Then what of Sarah and her stealing Amber's supposedly dead child? Also corrupted or what?

Will Taylor and the archeron spirit of her mom help Amber? Perhaps with Courtney's assistance?

A great injustice was forced upon Taylor, her mom, Amber and Danaella. Will they get restitution and peace? Does anything of the good man who was Don Calvin survive to possibly be redeemed?

Will either child ever return to their mother's loving arms?

I'd say Taylor's mom deserves a new human body...and Sarah so far seems a ripe candidate to give her's up given the cruel hoax she is playing on Amber and Amber's daughter.

Am intrigued as to what will follow.

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

Updates, Updates, and more Updates!

Some of the names need some updating here, huh? I'm hesitant to make it current, because that may spoil things for future readers of Amber's story, so I think I may just delete the names from the journals. I also have an entry on the Fallen waiting in the wings, but I'm just not happy with it yet. Soon as I can polish it to my standards, I'll post it.
 
 
 

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Now you know just how Taylor, and who was responsible. It was a shame Visnau had to die off-page, so his demise could not be witness in its gruesome gory. But the new tale may have some flashbacks from other perspectives. It may come out somehow.

Both Sarah's and Don's motive will be explored in the new tale. It will have more breadth than Amber's story, and be told from multiple perspectives, so you'll more in-depth with some of the other characters. I'm not sure how large a role each will play yet, though. I just knew how I wanted it to start, and I have a general scope so far.

RL is being a pain right now, and I'm also working on CyberRealm (already posted Chapter 1), but I'm getting the gears rolling on Whispers. Soon. :)

-Ken