Somewhere Else Entirely -83-

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Garia steps in something unpleasant... and that is the start of a desperate, terrifying struggle for life against foes both unexpected... and unimaginable! With the company in disarray she begins to show the qualities that any Queen must have.

Somewhere Else Entirely

by Penny Lane

83 - Thunderbolt


Disclaimer: The original characters and plot of this story are the property of the author. No infringement of pre-existing copyright is intended. This story is copyright (c) 2011-2013 Penny Lane. All rights reserved.



Garia blinked and opened her eyes. She was momentarily confused. Why was it so bright? Ah! She remembered then, how she was wrapped up warm in their camp, with nothing but the sky above her. She snuggled down inside the cloak which was wrapped completely around her, tasting the smells of the open countryside, listening to the sounds of the camp slowly coming to life. A faint crackling told her that someone had prodded their fire into life, so it must be about time to think about rising.

Her breath came out white so it was still somewhat cool, but Garia wasn't too concerned about that. Although they had brought nightgowns both she and Jenet had decided to sleep fully dressed, aware of how cold it could get at these altitudes at night. She loosened her wrappings and lifted herself on one elbow to survey the campsite.

One man was about, adding kindling to the fire to bring it to life. Another was leading two of the frayen out of the ring, she knew not where. Twisting, she saw Keren still sleeping nearby and then remembered what else had been decided overnight. A wave of joy enveloped her body as she recalled again what he had said to her. The die was cast now, let the chips fall where they may.

A figure came striding across the ring to her, crouching beside her and speaking softly.

"Milady? It is about dawn. You may sleep a little longer, if you so desire. It will be some time before we can break our fast."

Garia sat up, stretching. "No, thank you, Feteran. I'm happy being nice and warm down here but I won't sleep again, I don't think. Anything to report?"

"All is peaceful, milady. We have seen nothing, neither animals nor men, all night. We are taking the frayen down to the stream to drink and then picketing them out so they may find some forage." Feteran looked at the cloudless sky. "I think it is going to be another clear day."

"That's good," she said. "I'd hate to think we came all the way out here and then had to sit and watch it rain all day."

She untangled herself from the cloak and climbed to her feet, smoothing out the creases in her clothes.

"Um, I have to go to the latrine. Best if I go now, before everyone else rises?"

Feteran nodded. "As you say, milady. Will you require help?"

Garia looked at Jenet, still sleeping beside her.

"No, I don't think so, I'll manage."

The two walked over to the canvas enclosure. Feteran checked that it was empty and then stood outside while Garia did what was necessary. She came out looking at her hands.

"Hmm! Tricky business, that, if you're female."

"So I understand, milady."

"I need to wash my hands in the stream, then I'll help get the frayen sorted out."

"As you wish, milady."

As they walked down the gentle slope to the stream Feteran said, "I believe His Highness came to a decision last night."

"He did, commander. You know what it is?" Feteran nodded. "Do you approve?"

Feteran hesitated before replying. "It is difficult for me, milady, and I expect that Jenet will find it difficult also. We are sworn to you, and we will follow you as we are sworn, but before we came to your service we were both sworn to the King. His Highness's decision is going to cause trouble for the Kingdom, milady."

"I know, and I understand. I'm not planning to do anything that will upset the Kingdom, Feteran. We'll figure out some way round this, just you wait and see." Now it was Garia's turn to hesitate. "But do you approve? This is going to be important to all our futures, Feteran. Speak freely, if you will."

"Milady, the attraction between the Prince and yourself was plain for me to see, that first time we formally met in the training room. It might have just been the normal attraction of two young people but as I have become familiar with you both it is obvious that your feelings run much deeper. You must needs work closely with each other in the future, in this great enterprise which will transform Palarand, so it makes sense - to me - that you are naturally close to each other." He paused, considering his words. "Unfortunately, others may not see what we who have been close to both of you can see. I cannot guess the future, milady."

"I'm not expecting a smooth ride, Feteran," she agreed, "and I have no idea how various factions inside and outside Palarand are going to take it, but Keren has decided that, to him, I am more important than the Kingdom. We'll just have to see how everyone else deals with that."

"As you say, milady. I will add that I think you are more important to the Kingdom than the Prince, at this present time. He is but a King to be, you are Palarand's future."

"I'm not sure I care to be that important, Feteran. And don't underestimate Keren either." After some steps she said, "I think we're not the only ones to have reached an agreement, are we? What about yourself?"

Feteran nodded. "You are right, milady. Mistress Jenet and myself have spent most of our lives in the palace in the service of His Majesty. Despite that, our tasks were separate and, while we knew of each other, our paths seldom crossed. It is only since we began this adventure with House Blackstone that we have come to know each other well. We have much in common, of course, but there is also much we have to learn of each other, and I find that I look forward to that exploration. Do you approve?"

"Of course! If that's the way you both feel then I'm happy for you and I do approve."

"Thank you, milady. We will try to ensure that our... relationship does not affect our duties too much."

"Heh. I am having much the same problem, commander. While we're out here at the back end of nowhere, we have to keep clear heads, don't we?"

"As you say, milady."

Reaching the water, Garia cleaned herself up in the stream. The two retraced their steps to collect a frayen each, which they watered and then staked out on long lead lines to graze between the camp and the river. After doing two Garia found Jenet waiting for her when they reached the ring of stones once more.

"Milady! You let me sleep on!"

"That's all right, Jenet. Good morning. I knew once I woke I wouldn't be able to go back again, so I got up and helped move the frayen. How did you sleep?"

"Very well, milady. It was strange to sleep out under the stars but I can find no ill effects."

One of the men called, "Commander, Milady, there is pel ready."

Keren joined them at the fire, yawning. After exchanging carefully bland pleasantries they took mugs of pel and then the business of breakfast began. While some of the men chose bread and cheese most preferred the staple of grain porridge, even though it meant more cleaning up afterwards. After the breakfast dishes and pots had been taken down to the stream to clean, Feteran called a meeting to detail the day's activities.

"Milady wishes to ride to the head of the valley, which Master Michen informs us will take barely a bell for the round trip. I think His Highness, the Baroness and myself would all like to see what lies beyond our borders, since these are also the borders of Palarand. For that purpose we should also venture north and south to make ourselves familiar with the country round about. I don't think we need take all the gear or pack animals, so I'll ask for two volunteers to remain here and mind the camp while we ride. That will take us to about lunch time, so I propose having lunch when we return here and then we may pack up and start back. Is that agreeable to you, Milady?"

"It is, commander."

"Highness?"

"I see no problems, commander. But perhaps Master Yarling wishes to spend some time examining the rocks around us."

Yarling shrugged. "It will not take me long, Highness, although I would like a look into the valley to the south, if you would permit me."

"Garia? Perhaps we can ride part of the way back along the ridge. That will allow Master Yarling to see what lies beyond."

"That's an idea. We don't have to return the exact same path we came here on."

"As you say, milady. Is there anything you must needs do before we begin?"

Garia considered. She was warm enough while wearing her pea coat but she couldn't wear her swords if she did so. Coat or swords? There was a more pressing task, however.

She asked, "You'll be bringing the other frayen back into camp? Very well, commander. While you're doing that, we'll go visit the latrine and then I'll put my swords on."

"Of course, milady."

As Garia made herself ready she was joined by Keren and Feteran.

"Milady, since the men are all busy we shall escort you and Jenet to the latrine."

"Expecting trouble, commander?" Keren asked with a grin.

"Highness, I am always expecting trouble. I would not be doing my duty if I did not."

"Lead on, then."

When Garia emerged from the latrine Keren and Feteran were having an animated discussion nearby. She was so intent on their conversation as she walked to join them that she did not take care of her footing.

"Oh, shit! Eww! Literally!"

She had stepped in something soft, smelly and thoroughly unpleasant.

"What have you done?" Keren asked as the two men joined her.

"Been careless... look, it's all over my boot and my foot as well. When Jenet comes out I'll have to go down to the stream and wash this off."

"No matter, milady," Feteran said. "This will cause only a little delay, I am sure."

When Jenet joined them she pulled a face at the mucky boot. Because of the 'knitted string' construction of the uppers, the frayen-dropping had gone right into the weave and all over Garia's left heel.

"We can rinse this off, can't we?" Garia asked. "Down at the stream?"

"We can, milady, but it will forever stain the boot upper. It will take some clever work by the palace wardrobe to restore the color."

"That's not so important right now. Let's go, I want to get this cleaned off as soon as possible."

The four walked down to the stream, Feteran calling out the reason for the delay to the men as he passed. The stream was about two feet wide here, sunk in a deep channel between banks they had to scramble down. There were easier ways to the water but they had been churned up by the frayen when they were drinking. Jenet unlaced Garia's boot and then tried to wash it clean while Garia attended to her foot, scrubbing it dry with tufts of grass pulled from the bank.

"That is about as good as I can manage, milady," Jenet said, holding up the boot. "Of course, it is almost impossible to dry this material."

"It'll do," Garia said. "We've spent enough time on this already. Dab off as much as you can and then the rest will dry as we ride along."

The boot was refitted and laced. Garia was about to stand when a bugle blast shattered the calm. She immediately stood to see what was happening but Feteran roughly pulled her down again.

"The alarm, milady! The camp is attacked!" He glanced significantly at Keren. "They may not yet know we are outside, Highness."

"Good thinking!" Keren said. He aimed a finger upstream. "If we keep low, we can put some distance between ourselves and the camp."

"As you say, Highness!"

Crouching low under the lip of the bank, the four scrambled along, attempting to avoid making too much noise or disturbance which could attract attention. The noise of the stream covered a certain amount of sound but an accidental splash might reveal their presence.

Garia had no idea how far they had come. It may have been a hundred strides, it may have been half or double that, it was difficult to tell while they were in the stream bed. While she was scrambling along behind Feteran, with Jenet behind her and Keren bringing up the rear, there was a strange thump which brought them all to an instant halt. Garia risked a peek over the lip of the bank to see a small cloud of brown smoke rising into the sky.

"Maker! What was that?"

"Dunno." But she had a very good idea, and it meant bad news. "Let's keep going."

After another fifty strides or so there was a loud boom which stopped them again. Involuntarily all four stood to see what had happened, ducking down again immediately, but the damage was done. There was a shout from the direction of the camp.

"We are seen! Run!"

The four stood and began to run, initally along the stream bed, since the bank was not easy to climb. Stealth was pointless now so the only defense was speed. Unfortunately, she soon realized that she and Jenet were hampering the chase, since while she was fit her own legs were short and Jenet was not accustomed to this kind of exercise at all.

No swords! Her precious blades, provided for just such a circumstance as this, were still with her pack in the camp. Apart from the utility knife attached to her right boot she had no weapon. Keren and Feteran both had swords, of course, but that was all. For the first time in many weeks, she began to feel real fear.

"Fet! Slow down," Keren gasped from behind. "The women cannot run as fast as us."

Feteran slowed right down and turned to look behind them.

"We are pursued," he said, panting. "Four or five, I deem."

He began to look around for a place to make a stand.

"I've no swords!" Garia told him between breaths.

Keren scowled. Would his romance come to a sticky end before it had even begun? He felt desperately angry with those whose chased them.

Feteran pointed. "Up there! We may find a place to face them!"

A group of large boulders lay along the skyline to their north. Although there were visible gaps, like with their camp, others promised a chance where their attackers could not come at them from all sides. The chances were slim, but they were all that the four had.

Panting, they struck off up the slope toward the boulders. It seemed that they were larger, and further away, than anyone had realized. Halfway there, Garia's lungs were on fire and she wondered that Jenet was still on her feet at all. Feteran must have realized the same thing because he came back and began helping Jenet to climb. Garia's legs were turning to rubber and she looked despairingly at Keren, who appeared to be in little better shape.

They staggered through a gap at one end of the cluster of boulders to find... that it was not any kind of enclosure at all, merely an open arc of stones perhaps three to four strides high and fifty long. There would be no protection to be found here, unless -

"There!"

The three boulders at the far end had fallen together, leaving a narrow gap at the bottom a man could squeeze himself between. Keren stuck an arm around Garia and ushered her along the line of immense rocks. Behind them, the shouts grew louder as their pursuers gained on them. Garia and Jenet were practically stuffed into the gap between the rocks as Keren and Feteran drew their swords to face their attackers, backing into the crevice themselves as they did so.

- * -

The predator had about reached the western end of the range it normally covered. There had been a herd of gavakhan it had been taking to feed its young, but these had gotten leery of late and split into smaller groups which were harder to track. It cast about and, finding nothing of note, turned back to hunt elsewhere. The day, after all, was yet young.

The sudden, sharp noise drew the beast's attention. The small, strange cloud fixed that attention on a group of different prey animals, doing something not far from where the predator was. These animals were usually avoided, since they sometimes fought back in ways that gavakhan could not, but the meat had an interesting flavor and the carcases were easier for it to carry. It turned again, noting more activity on the nearer hillside.

- * -

The six men burst through the line of stones the same place that Garia had come through. The men, all waving swords, slowed momentarily to get their bearings. One, who might have been their leader, spotted Keren and Feteran and gestured with his sword.

"There they are! Get the bitch, kill the rest!"

The six men charged across the space separating them from Keren, Feteran, Garia and Jenet.

Death fell from the skies.

Garia, standing behind Keren, had a brief glimpse as a huge shadow blocked out the daylight before the immense beast landed squarely on top of the chasing men, felling them like tenpins. Keren and Feteran were knocked back into the crevice by the downdraft of prodigious wings, which promptly folded along the flanks of the creature.

The head was about the same size as that of Tyrannosaurus Rex but more streamlined, with teeth that were in proportion. It cast about on the long neck, trying to see what it had caught. One of the men, merely knocked over, scrambled to his feet and tried to flee but the beast turned, the neck snaked out, the head twisted and the man was caught with a rib-crushing crunch. Of the others, two were definitely dead, crushed beneath the claws of a foot like that of an eagle but a stride across. The others might have been dead, since they did not move, and two would certainly soon die from terrible stomach wounds.

Garia and her friends crushed themselves as far back into the crevice as possible, hoping the beast wouldn't bother with them. She could see glimpes of the shimmering hide, covered with red-brown scales that sparkled in the sun as the underlying muscles shifted. She had never been so frightened in her entire life. This was far worse than when one of the same species had flown across during the Harvest Festival.

The beast, of course, hadn't noticed them at all. Its attention had been fixed on the six chasers, and now it considered briefly what to do. It could carry two of these small creatures, and with luck the rest would still be here when it returned. Perhaps it could convince its mate to join it, there would be enough to feed all of them if no other creature found the meat before they returned.

It closed a huge taloned foot around one of the bodies, which screamed in agony. Ignoring the noise it picked up the man who had tried to get away in its mouth, spread its wings and launched itself into the air. The downdraft floored the four hidden in the crevice. Picking themselves up they went to the entrance.

"Quick!" Feteran urged hoarsely. "We don't know how far that thing has to fly. It will come back to take the others!"

They staggered out of their hiding place and were confronted by the slaughter left by the great beast. There were four bodies on a carpet of grass splashed with blood. Three were still possibly alive, the skull of the fourth being crushed. One of the men, his intestines spilling out of his body, hauled himself onto his elbows.

"Mercy, Lord! Mercy, Lady!"

Feteran went directly to him, sword poised, but Garia stopped him with a shout. She might have been full of fright but her sense of justice still functioned.

"No! Leave them!"

Feteran hesitated, turned.

"I heard what you said!" Garia shouted at the man. "Get the bitch, kill the rest, you said. You'd keep me and kill the Prince? You'd kill my maid? Death is too good for you! The ptuvil started this, let the ptuvil finish it! Commander, get their weapons. I don't want any of these taking the easy way out before that creature comes back."

"Milady?"

"Get their weapons, Feteran. No suicides here."

Keren added, "This time, I agree. Do it, Feteran."

"As you command, Highness."

Garia picked up a sword from those scattered by the ptuvil's attack for herself. Everything else, swords and knives, they collected and threw away between two of the boulders. The dying man watched them with horror.

"My Lady!" he pleaded, "You can't -"

"I just did. You started all this, you bastards! Now you'll have to accept the consequences." She turned to her companions. "Let's get out of here, this place stinks."

They retraced their route up, swords ready in case the six had been followed by any more of their party. Occasionally one or other of them turned quickly to look behind, fearful that the huge flying creature had returned. Garia wondered if anybody had survived at their camp. She staggered down the hillside, kept upright from time to time by Keren's touch.

Eventually it all caught up with her. Her sight began to fade and there was a strange roaring in her ears. Her knees began to buckle as the adrenalin drained and the magnitude of what had just happened sank in.

"K- Keren..."

He grabbed her as she collapsed, swinging round and lifting her into his arms like he had done so many months before. He called to Feteran.

"Tend you Jenet, Fet! I have Garia."

Somehow they all kept hold of their swords as they carried on down the hillside as fast as they could. Feteran couldn't pick Jenet up but he had his arm around her waist, supporting her. Halfway down to the stream they met Toranar and Brendel coming up, swords at the ready.

"Highness! Thank the Maker! We feared - after seeing the monster - that no-one survived."

Keren came gratefully to a halt. "We survived, though those who sought us did not. What of the camp?"

"We live, Highness, but there are grevious wounds, caused by some new evil we have never seen before. We beat them off, Highness, Commander, but three got away."

Feteran asked, "It is safe? We may approach the camp? Do they not try another attack?"

Toranar shook his head. "No, Commander. Of those who fled, at least two carry Stott's arrows. It is only Stott's skill with the bow that saved us, commander." He frowned as he saw Garia in Keren's arms. "Milady! Is she hurt?"

"No, Toranar," Keren replied, "Merely exhausted and frightened, as am I. I do not mind admitting it, not after being so close to such a beast. Now, let us get back to the camp because it will come again, to collect the men who are left behind."

Toranar did a double take. "There are some alive, Highness? Should we not make them prisoner?"

Keren shook his head wearily as he began walking again. "They are meat, Toranar, only meat. Come, I need to be sitting down somewhere. Milady becomes heavy in my arms."

~o~O~o~

Garia regained her senses as they crossed the stream and insisted on being put down. She felt weak but was able to walk on her own, if only in slow, cautious steps. A few of the frayen remained picketed on the lower slope, including Snep, but there were other mounts scattered all over the hillside where they had been abandoned or frightened off by the noise of the attack. The group reached the circle of stones and passed inside, where they were immediately offered skins of water to drink from. Clutching their skins, they sank down against two nearby boulders, utterly spent from their fight and fright. D'Kenik came to stand in front of Feteran and salute, though his leg was bloody.

"Commander, Thoran is dead. He has a terrible chest wound made by a strange weapon the bandits used. He lived, though we did not believe he would survive for very long. Most of the rest of us also have wounds from this weapon, most are painful but no more. There was a second weapon, but something happened to it and the two who carried it were killed, also with grevious injuries. Three survived to ride away but two take Stott's arrows with them in their bodies."

Garia put her skin down. "Those people aren't bandits, D'Kenik. They are agents of Yod, I think. How many do you think there were?"

D'Kenik scratched his head. "As you may know, milady, it can be difficult to account numbers during battle. Three escaped, there are five bodies though two are dead by their own hand. I do not know how many saw you and gave chase."

"Six," Keren said wearily. "We were but four, and milady without even her swords, or I would have given us an even chance against them. But for the ptuvil we were lost."

Garia said, "We need to find out everything we can about these people. Collect all the bodies, all the weapons, everything. We want to gather up all those frayen before they wander away, there may be clues in their saddlebags or packs. Not to mention if the ptuvil comes back and sees them wandering around... What about these... evil weapons you mention?"

"We dare not touch them, milady," D'Kenik replied. "We have left them where they lay. Not knowing how they work we fear to trigger them again."

Garia nodded. "A wise move, although they are probably safe. I have a strong suspicion I know what they are and how they work."

Oh, God, please let them be primitive! If they have any smart engineers among them, we are sunk!

Keren raised an eyebrow and looked at her. "You do? Should you be saying anything about them here?"

"Keren, they're already here and somebody else has them. The secret is out, all we can do now is make sure we're not too far behind because, believe me, these people will press ahead with development as fast as they possibly can."

Keren sighed and leaned back, exhausted. "I take your point. But there are other dangers for Palarand than Yod."

"True. Look, let's get ourselves cleaned up and the camp organized and then we can talk about future strategy. D'Kenik, you mentioned something about wounds?"

"Aye, milady. It is as though all were stabbed by some round spike or nail. Most wounds are small but some bleed freely. Master Michen has an arm which appears smashed."

Garia began to lever herself to her feet. "Jenet, are you ready and able to help? I think we have a bandaging job to do."

"Of course, milady." Jenet also began to rise.

D'Kenik objected, "Milady, it is well in hand -"

"Wait a while, D'Kenik. I want to inspect those weapons first. If I'm right, you'll have stones or metal embedded in those wounds which has to come out. If you don't you'll most likely get poisoned."

D'Kenik took her first to the weapon which had 'failed'. Garia saw at once that the barrel of the crude gun had exploded at the breech end, possibly through bad powder, poor training or a flaw in the metal. A man lay either side of the weapon, both had most of their faces blown off. The other weapon lay beside a man with an arrow sticking out of his chest. Garia thought he looked familiar.

"Is that Durko?"

D'Kenik looked closely. "Aye, milady, I do believe you are right. That explains how they knew where we were."

Keren joined them. "Aye, and it was Durko's wagon that had the bad axle, remember? It seems we carried our own spy around with us the whole time. This is the weapon?"

"Yes," Garia said. "Looking at it, I would call it a very crude shotgun. You simply hold it up and point it at your enemy, then light whatever is inside the barrel. What comes out the end we call shot, which can be small, spherical balls of metal or perhaps just scrap metal or even stones. That's what is inside every one of the wounds our men has. If that shot or those stones stay inside the wounds they can go bad and infect the wound. You'll need tweezers to get them out, and there aren't any this side of Blackstone."

"Not so, milady," D'Kenik said. "We can make tweezers from what we have in the camp, if there is need. It is something all guardsmen learn during training in the field. What must we do?"

Garia spun, her decisions already formed. "Okay. We need to clean all the wounds using water from the stream which has been boiled. We'll need fresh bandages as well. Jenet, go find my nightgown and start tearing it into strips."

"But, milady -"

"We're not wearing them and judging by the amount of bloody bodies I see around me we'll need more bandages than we seem to have available. I want the bandages to be boiled before use and I think we'll boil the tweezers as well. Keren, Feteran? If you would take some skins down to the stream, we'll get the fire going ready. Toranar? Are you the only one not injured?"

"No, milady, Brendel and Stott are also unscathed. Your commands?"

"Start fetching those frayen back here, right away. Start on the east side, please, because that is the direction that ptuvil is going to return from when it comes. Bring them inside the stones. I know it will be crowded but if we can keep them close to us it should stop them from panicking. If we lose those mounts it's a heck of a walk back to Blackstone, especially with wounded."

"As you command, milady."

Garia's body was desperately tired but her mind was working overtime. Somehow she had sized up the situation and worked out exactly what had to be done. Keren and Feteran glanced at each other but grabbed skins and went immediately down the slope while Toranar and Brendel left to entice their mounts back.

She looked down at the body of the gunman, noticing for the first time the bag half hidden beneath the body where he had fallen on it. She bent down and pulled it out, having to untangle the diagonal strap first from the body and then from the arrow still sticking up from the chest. Opening the bag she saw what she had expected to find, ammunition for further discharges of the crude gun. She took the bag back to her stone and sank down against it, taking another swig from her water skin.

"Milady, can we help?"

It was Stott, crouching down beside her. Most of the other men had gathered round.

"I don't know, Stott," she said. "I might get some clues as to how those things worked from what's in here."

She spread her skirt and emptied the bag into her lap. There were ten small bags, five each of blue and white, made of silk and cylindrical shaped - to fit in the barrel, she guessed. There were rough wads of wool and a bundle of lengths of stiff string each about as long as her middle finger. Pinching the blue bags she decided that these were powder, although how they worked she did not yet know. The white bags were full of hard lumps so she took the knife from her boot and opened one with the point. Small stones, all roughly the same size, tumbled out onto her skirt. She nodded.

"Right. Two things. First, every wound made by that weapon will have one of these at the bottom. That's what you are looking for with those tweezers. We need to get those out and make sure the wound is flushed out and clean. Second, Stott, I want you to fetch that gun over here, please. It will be heavy but it is safe to carry."

The field tweezers were an education for Garia. A twig was selected from the kindling and carefully stripped of bark. The wood was then split lengthways. One end of a strip of bark was then placed between the halves to keep them apart and the rest wound tightly round one end to provide a spring. Some whittling with a knife to achieve the right shape and length and it was ready.

Stott returned with the gun as the less wounded men went off to boil their tweezers. He laid the cumbersome object carefully beside Garia, who examined it properly for the first time. A heavy cylinder of wrought iron, about two feet long with a bore of about an inch and a half. The iron was less than half that in thickness. The stock was a crudely carved piece of wood with the front jammed into one end of the barrel and secured by two rivets which went through holes bored through the barrel from side to side. At the far end, a T-shaped piece of wrought iron had been lashed to the barrel with wire. On the dependant part of the T a piece of wood had been riveted to provide a forward grip. There was no obvious sign of a firing mechanism apart from a small hole in the top of the barrel. The mouth of the barrel had been flared slightly but she couldn't tell whether that was deliberate or not.

"Okay." She smiled at Stott. "You need to find me a... stick, about as long as this barrel. It will probably have a small pad at one end and a brush at the other, or something like that."

"Milady?"

"Uh, the men who fired this will have had them. They are needed to clean out the barrel after each shot and to push the next shot down the barrel."

"Ah! Milady, I think I saw something like you describe somewhere near the other weapon. I wondered what it might be."

Stott returned with the blood-soaked ramrod and handed it to Garia.

"Milady, why did you call that pipe a barrel?"

"Um, I think when these were first made they were constructed of long strips of iron and bound round with rings of iron. It's sort of the same construction as a barrel, with staves and hoops, so the name stuck." She thought. "There's a lot of words we use with these things that come from someplace else. Like we refer to 'shooting' and 'shot', though it isn't the same as using your bow."

"Will you teach us the art, milady? Or is this something that has to remain secret?"

Garia sighed. "I wanted it to remain secret, Stott, because the wars that we had after guns came into use were far more terrible than anything you might have experienced here. Only it seems Yod isn't giving us that chance. I'll explain all to the camp, but only after we're all cleaned up, fed and rested. I wanted to see if I can get this thing set up if we need it later. Remember, there's a damn great flying creature out there which thinks we'd make it a fine lunch."

"What about those men?" Denard asked. "Milady, do you think they will return?"

"I don't think so. God, I hope not, not with us in this state! No, the numbers are against it, Denard. We know six died up there," she waved an arm toward the place where they had encountered the ptuvil, "and there are five bodies here. If three got away then that makes fourteen. There's no sense, in this kind of action, leaving men behind in case they need a second try. If there had been any more men they would have used them, to try and overwhelm the camp." She thought. "Which direction did they come from, do you know?"

"Over the ridge to the south and down the slope, milady. They were halfway down before we spotted them, though fortunately everyone except yourselves were inside the ring. When they arrived -"

Garia held up a hand. "Stop right there. I want a proper debriefing from everyone once we are in a fit state to do so. That way everyone can hear what happened and learn from our experiences."

"Of course, milady."

Garia had recovered a little by now and she, Jenet and Feteran did the bandaging while the others, including Keren, prepared lunch for the company. The wounds were first bathed in boiled water and then probed for the shot. In Yarling's case the stone had passed clean through his upper left arm, so bandaging was all that was required. D'Kenik had one stone taken out of a thigh, Denard had three stones, two in the thigh and one in the shoulder. Michen was worst out of those that had survived. He had been standing alongside Thoran, who had taken the main force of the blast, and several stones had shattered his right upper arm bone. Removing the stones had proved very painful but they had attempted to set and splint the bone as best they could. Nobody knew whether he would ever regain the use of that arm.

While this was happening the frayen were being recovered and brought into the circle of stones. The previous night their mounts had all been kept inside but this time they seemed to take up more room, so they were forced to rearrange their camp. All the frayen were bunched into the western two-thirds of the camp while the men, their packs, saddles and equipment together with the new weapons and six corpses filled up the eastern end. This was because, Feteran explained, if the ptuvil came back and spooked the beasts at least they would stampede away from the men and not trample them.

Even the camp fire had to be moved. This had delayed the making of lunch so while they waited Garia asked Feteran about the apparent increase in frayen numbers.

"We have gained some beasts, milady, and we have taken losses of our own."

"Oh? I guess some of those are the bandits' beasts, then."

"Aye, milady, although not all that they must have had. We have lost two also. Denard's mount broke his neck against the stone in panic when the first of those weapons was..."

"Fired. That's what we generally call the operation."

"Ah, I see, milady. Fired, then. And the men discovered a pack beast outside, with a crossbow bolt through its ribs. It must have been released from a very close range to have penetrated so tough a hide. I regret they were forced to put it out of its misery. There are also two pack animals with flesh wounds made by the shot. We have, with difficulty, removed the stones but of course there is no way we may bandage so large a creature. They will just have to take their chances."

"That could be a problem. Go on."

"We recovered eight frayen belonging to those who attacked us, milady. All carry the traditional style saddle so we know they are not ours. Three more must have borne the survivors away but there must be more, perhaps as many as three, that have wandered away out of sight."

"Hmm. We'll have to take those bodies back, I guess, and we'll need to shift some packs about, so we'll be making use of those extra beasts. Good work, commander."

Finally, it was a very subdued company that gathered round to take lunch. Yarling, Michen and Denard discovered the utility of forks as they could manage to eat using only their uninjured arms. There had been no spares so the utensils were shared, after cleaning. Mug of pel in hand, Garia went to sit by Keren, who had his back to a rock in the sun. She intended to sit down beside him but he extended his arm so she ended up with her back leaning against his chest.

"Mmmm, that's good," she said. "I feel so tired."

All her muscles relaxed and she let her head tip back to rest on his shoulder. The sun was in her face so she closed her eyes.

"I agree," Keren said as he put his arm round her waist. There was no reply.

Feteran found them moments later. Keren's head had slid sideways to rest on Garia's head and both were sleeping soundly. The others gathered to watch.

"Let them rest," Feteran said softly. "They have done much hard work this day."

"Aye to that, sir," Stott said. "She will make us a fine Queen."

"If I ever doubted that," Feteran replied, "I doubt it no more. But first, we have to get them back alive to the palace."

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Type of firearm

Based on the description they are Matchlock Blunderbusses or Arquebus. As they are a very crude version then I suspect that they required a crew of two to operate them since they sounded like they were too heavy for a singe person to aim them. Especially as I saw no reference to a crude monopole being used to hold up the barrel.

Something also tells me that Fikt did not actively participate in this attack, at least from the front. If he did then I imagine that he was the single survivor that did not leave with one of Stott's arrows.

Edit: Addendum to firearms. Because the weapons were so crude I suspect that there is no actual trigger mechanism so this means that the Gunner would manually touch the slowmatch to the touchhole to fire the powder the same way cannon's were initially fired before the British developed the flintlock mechanism for their naval cannons.

I suspect that Fikt was 'get

I suspect that Fikt was 'get the bitch, kill the rest'. You know, the one that gets to sit and wait to die or become ptuvil chow.


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

Fikt

It could go either way. Garia has seen Fikt and would certainly recogize his voice so I guess we will find out in chapter 84.

Has she seen him? I thought

Has she seen him? I thought he was waiting for her to be brought to him, and hadn't gotten there yet...
I'll go back and re-read that section.


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

Fikt

Fikt was the leader of the four who tried to abduct her in Dekarran castle. He escaped. It was dim light and only a brief encounter so she probably wouldn't recognize him on sight but she'd probably remember his voice.

Penny

Wasn't expecting the ......

.... fell stoop of the ptuvil.

I suspected that the attackers would have guns - and am as relieved as Garia is that they are still crude.
I wonder if Fikt was one of those that got away.
Seems fairly typical that he sends others to do his dirty deeds.

So, it seems that there needs to be a rapid metallurgic upgrade to make superior guns.

And so starts the Arms Race ......

Brilliant stuff, Penny, thanks.

D

"The Cost of Living Does Not Appear To Have Affected Its Popularity"in most, but not all, instances

It's not really a

It's not really a metallurgical upgrade. The steels made as far back as the 1400's were adequate to make barrels that could use gunpowder. The problem is in the actual fabrication. The best shotgun barrels made in the late 1800's, for example, were damascus, but in varying qualities.

http://firearmshistory.blogspot.com/2010/06/barrel-making-pa...

I've actually cleaned up a double-hammer break action shotgun made prior to 1913 in Belgium. (probably for Sears or another similar company) - you can see the patterns as in the above post.

Basically, you forge an extremely hard rod of iron/steel, then hammer a ribbon of steel around it. Ream out the remaining barrel. The earliest versions of this actually created rifling because of the seams at the twists.

What it needs is for people to make them properly - needless to say, if they've got another person captive to milk for ideas, they're not likely to get more than ideas out of him/her. Oppressive governments don't encourage flexibility of thought, so they won't go far beyond those ideas.

"We have shotguns!" "Well, we have coehorn mortars, grenades, claymore mines, and a bad attitude towards you for attacking us three times without declaring war."

Snaplocks/flintlocks were a major improvement over matchlocks, but there were a few _major_ developments that changed guns completely.

1) prepared cartridges (paper wrapped gunpowder. tear off the end, pour in the powder, put the paper in as a wad, ram the ball on top) over powder horns.
2) percussion caps (even more than the next)
3) brass cartridges with percussion cap.
4) auto-extractors along with multi-cartridge magazines.

Yes, I didn't include guncotton/smokeless propellant in the list. That was actually a minor improvement that simply made it easier to keep shooting without having to stop and clean the barrel. Many shotguns still used black powder cartridges even after smokeless propellant had replace gunpowder in rifles and pistols.

Percussion caps are _dangerous_ to make, and almost as dangerous to press into the brass. fulminate of mercury (for example) is nothing to mess with unless you have strong walls and a very light roof.


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I think people forgot one thing...

and that is Artillery. Before shotguns were muskets, and before them hand cannons. In europe, it all began in 1415 with Hussite Wars, where for first time in Europe were massively used hand cannons along with artillery. So it is safe to assume, that if Yod has one, it certainly will have other. So no castle wall in Paraland is safe any longer. And there will be other delopements too. Remember that Yod invaded other country in unusual time.
In case of artillery metalurgy advancement was needed, as iron was too brittle to make guns, so most often used marial until 20th century was actually gunnery bronze.

Victoria Cross

The British medal for extreme valour is the Victoria Cross.
They are made from the bronze taken from a captured field piece used in the Crimean War - which is quite late in the day. 1853-1856

improvements

Re: 1) prepared cartridges (paper wrapped gunpowder. tear off the end, pour in the powder, put the paper in as a wad, ram the ball on top) over powder horns.
2) percussion caps (even more than the next)
3) brass cartridges with percussion cap.
4) auto-extractors along with multi-cartridge magazines.

My vote would be for #3 to be more significant than #2. Percussion caps did improve ignition reliability, but not on the same order as the self-contained metallic cartridge. Caps were still rather subject to inclement weather, and even in repeating arms (e.g. cap-and-ball revolver) were subject to at least two major failure modes: not seated fully, leading to misfire; and loss of the cap from the nipple due to vigorous activity.

Depending on Garia's subject knowledge, if their technology is close to making percussion caps, two types of repeating arms are within their near reach. Had Gary grown up in Tennessee or Illinois, Garia would probably be familiar with Jonathan Browning (John M.'s father), who may well have invented the first "box magazine" fed, repeating firearm in the 1830s - which was only possible after percussion caps were available. He might have been, even in Kansas. The revolving cylinder is actually a little more difficult to produce - and slower to reload (even if both have spares available.)

IIRC, the metal-smiths already have drawing technology to the level required to impact-draw cartridge brass, once they get the alloy correct.

Looking forward to the next chapter ...

The revolving mechanism is

The revolving mechanism is actually simpler to make, and more tolerant of .. tolerances than the ejection mechanism of even a lever action rifle.

I voted for percussion caps as a bigger change than the centerfire cartridge because percussion caps changed the entire gun structure. You no longer needed the complicated assemblies that made up the snaplock/matchlock structure, and the barrel no longer needed to be pierced on the side, but a hole could be placed in the back - which meant barrels could also be replacable/threaded.

Moving from the cap outside the breech to inside the breech wasn't, to me, as big of a change.

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Oh yes - the percussion cap also allowed the revolver to exist - even if it was a revolving barrel assembly, such as the pepperpot/pepperbox pistol, rather than a true revolving cylinder.


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Wonderful.

Once again, Garia has shown her mettle and also that she will make an excellent queen for Palarand. Yod failed again, even if some of that was sheer luck and a hungry beast. Good chapter.

Maggie

Thoran

For those of you who might be wondering who Thoran is, I have the answer. He is one of the un-named Palace Guardsmen who escorted Captain Bleskin to his retirement home and then on to Blackstone.

Honorary Texan

I'm making you an Honorary Texan. With your tale telling abilities you are right at the top of the list of tall tale tellers of all time. This story just gets better and better.

With those primitive guns now

there, time for Garia to help them invent the bulletproof vest, Gatling gun and other such things of war. And with a steam engine possible, a tank as well.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

nah, Garia's tech tree goes down another path.

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Obviously Garia is going to introduce Tesla death-ray weaponry.

And now I have the whole palarand/yod conflict in my head as a C&C battle.

Here we go...

Coehorn mortar hunting... feral cats..

http://www.buckstix.com/CoehornMortarHunt.htm

(I don't know if the guy actually hunted cats or not, but the design and information is good - and fun to read)


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

SEE...

OMG!! Another SEE!! Yea! I can't wait to get into it too the blurb sounds like it's going to be a nail biter! Thanks so much Penny!

Wow, we knew they would be

Wow, we knew they would be attacked and knew weapons would be used but who could have guessed that they would inadvertently be saved by a Ptuvil. I don't blame Garia for leaving those men to die when the Ptuvil returns, in effect it was a conspiracy to commit treason even if Yod is behind it Palarand's own country men were party to it.

Pity the shoemaker wasn't identified among the dead. Looks like an investigation might be in order to see if more traitors are around.

I love Stott and Feteran's last comments, lets hope the king and queen feel so too.

Great story, thanks for adding another chapter so soon after the last, as one of my favorite stories I always look forward to more.

Big hugs

Lizzie :)

Yule

Bailey's Angel
The Godmother :p

So gunpowder ...

So, gunpowder has been invented by The Supremacy of Yod. Garia had better get her innovation skates on if she's to play 'catch-up' in the arms race. For that is what has just been started. It had to come, indeed it's inevitable when one considers the unlimited avarice that is so characteristic of men or creatures like them. Still, so far it only seems to be crude smooth-bore muskets without even a flint lock so Garia does not have far to go to catch up. What's more, Garia seems to have given Paraland a higher degree of engineering knowledge and that should stand the kingdom in better stead.

Still she's going to have to move quickly albeit reluctantly.

Thanks Penny, I've been waiting for another really significant development and this was it.

XX

Bevs.

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Garia and her swords...

There have been several chapters now with Garia fumbling about with her weapons. It's been irritating me for a bit...

I really don't understand this imaginary difficulty Garia has with carrying her weapons. Further, strapping swords to your back is really an absurd way to carry a sword as it is next to impossible to sheath and only done in fantasy stories by authors who have never handled a sword or very large swords that would drag on the ground otherwise. Certainly it looks cool (if you've never tried drawing a sword...), but it's incredibly impractical.

Unless Garia is a midget or the she is carrying greatswords, there is no reason she can't use a baldric or side carrier. I was under the impression that the swords were both lighter and shorter than normal swords anyways (the whole issue with convincing the smith to make them...) making the need for a back scabbard completely useless.

So... how many attacks has this been on Garia so far?

Four

As I recall anyway.

Strapped to her back

I assume at least part of the reason for the swords being strapped to her back is that it would be unfeasible to carry them strapped to her waist - both due to her skirts and the need to mount / dismount Snep easily. The harnesses have probably been designed with a quick release mechanism to make it easy to withdraw them (but possibly harder to resheath). Most of the time they're intended to be a visible show that she can defend herself, and as we were reminded last chapter, they're only sharpened at the tip so could be used to stab someone in extremis, but their primary function is defence against anyone attacking her with a sword - she can trap theirs between her two blades and use that to gain some leverage.


As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!

Question: Have you ever worn

Question: Have you ever worn a blade of any type, or a weapon in a holster?

Garia is something like 5' tall, and probably doesn't weigh more than 7 stone or so, even with the exercising.

When wearing a blade (I tried this years ago with a WW-I bayonet, which was _only_ 22 inches long or so) requires a strong belt, (there's a reason they wore baldrics) and generally is balanced to have the blade stick out behind you. For a woman, their hips would tend to kick that blade to the side every step. The women I've seen wearing them on the side tended to have them much further back than a man would wear them.

Naval swords sit behind you as well, with the hilt to the back.

To draw the sword, you have to use one hand to grasp the scabbard and bring the hilt into position for the other hand to grasp it.

In any case, having a sword down the leg would mean that the tip would drag the ground - for her height. By putting them on the back, they're readily available on horseback or walking. Sitting is awkward, but sitting with a sword is a pain no matter what.

Now, drawing a sword over the shoulder is actually pretty easy, but putting it back is hard.


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

Swords, hollywood and pure fantasy...

Actually I have worn swords, short swords, large knives and firearms in holsters, all for extended periods of time.

And every explanation so far as to why Garia has to have crossed swords on a back hanger is wrong, and clearly demonstrates a lack of experience/knowledge in wearing swords. The fact that you mentioned having the sword run down the leg, and mentioned a sword dragging on the ground tells me that you tried wearing a sword on a thin belt and not only had this not work, but never actually learned how to wear a sword properly.

I'm only 5'6. That's 6"s taller than Garia. And I wear a hand and half arming sword on my hip when I go to renfaire. The sword in it's scabbard is 40" long. 29" of that length is from the tip to the guard (where it fastens to the belt.) Even if just my LEGS were 6" shorter, it still doesn't drag on the ground even if it was hanging straight vertically (which it doesn't because that's wrong). And that is a Hand-and-Half arming sword, not a short sword like Garia has. (In it's belt and carrier, I can actually kneel and not have the sword touch the ground...)

As to attaching swords to your belt. First off, don't use a modern dress belt. Sword belts were 1.25" to 2" in width and made of a heavy 8+ ounce leather. That means that the belt doesn't wobble, curl or distort from weight. Second get a sword carrier (you can google sword carriers to see they they look like). Sword carriers are particularly useful for rapiers. Which routinely have 36-40" blade lengths. Average height people wear rapiers all the time and they don't drag the swords on the ground. The Sword carrier has the added advantage of canting the sword at an angle making it so it doesn't drag the ground (mostly important for rapiers) and for allowing the sword carrier to hang over the hip/thigh when riding a horse making it so the sword hangs properly when riding.

You mentioned naval swords "sitting behind you" and women wearing a sword much further back than a man. My question: how many points were the scabbard attached to the belt? I'm willing to bet only at a single point: meaning that if someone walked the sword would flop around. Pushing the sword to behind your hip will reduce the swing but still make the sword flop around a bit. Sword Carriers attach to the belt at multiple points meaning that the sword can't wobble around like before. And if you mean modern marine dress saber as a "Naval sword" then it's the same thing as the navy doesn't use a sword carrier and just hangs them from a chain fastening to the belt at a single point.

Now lets cover drawing swords over shoulders vs from across the waist. The distance from your opposite hip to your opposite hand during a normal draw for someone 5'6" is ~42". Whereas the draw distance from the hand to the same shoulder is merely ~26".

That means to draw your average FULL SIZE sword with a 28"-32" blade you don't have to fully extend your arm to it's maximum draw length to draw from across the hip. Whereas to draw from over the shoulder you cannot draw a full length sword, even at your maximum draw length. To then say that drawing a sword over your shoulder is "pretty easy" when it's clearly not possible given arm lengths and sword lengths is somewhat disingenuous at best.

If you ever seen Iaido or other japanese sword drawing arts you'd see them rotate their hips such that they increase the available draw distance they have to draw the sword, meaning their draw length is even shorter, which means they can draw the blade, clear the scabbard and start a strike sooner because they don't have to extend their arm as far to free the sword.

The only people who carry swords over their shoulders are ninjas in hollywood movies, or others in fantasy settings. It is simply not practical given arm lengths and the motions necessary during drawing the blade.

The only time I've ever seen someone carry a sword on their back is someone who had a claymore and a back hanger, and even then they didn't draw the sword over their shoulder. Instead they unhooked the sword from the hanger by lifting it slightly, and then swung it around their body.

There are tons of resources online given the popularity of renaissance fairs and other reenactment groups that can show you how to properly carry a sword. Perpetuating falsehoods, given the amount of information on the subject, makes no sense.

My gun belt has a 2" leather

My gun belt has a 2" leather belt, with a tiedown for the thigh. It has no baldric.

A "sword carrier" is someone who carries the sword for you - you don't wear him. Cursor, for example, was one name for the person who carried a Roman officer's weapon. Otherwise, you have a _belt_, a scabbard, and a baldric. The baldric is used to counteract the drag of the sword on the belt.

(In Japanese, it's tachimochi)

Now, you could be talking about a frog, or even a rapier carrier, but neither of those are 'sword carriers'. As for fencing, I learned under a master class fencer. The downside is that you don't tend to put a foil or epee, and for that matter, almost never a saber or rapier, on the body.

I've also spent a lot of years at various renfests, including helping out twice (that's two different years) at a weapons booth.

In any case, watch the women out there. If they're not wearing pants, swords are a bitch.

I think you're making a couple of assumptions that aren't warranted. 1) is that you're assuming that the blades are longer than her arms. 2) that the entire scabbards are firmly strapped to the body at all points, so they can't move.

I've always envisioned that the scabbards (closer to holsters for these) are in an X pattern over the back, with a pivot point in the center. They would then connect at the side to a belt. Pulling the swords out would be much like pulling a sai loose, but the scabbards would rise up, allowing the swords to be pulled _forwards_ as much as they are upwards. This would also mean that it would be extremely difficult to put them back in by yourself, other than one at a time, because of not being locked in place. (Note that she's been helped to put them back in place at least once.) (I figured that they're used much like a sai - catch the opposing blade in the fork (yoku) and pin it. In this case, it's just that you use two blades to do it. The handles could also be used as knuckle-dusters)

You probably have some knowledge I don't - I've never really been interested in spending weeks wandering around in full 14th century garb and weaponry, for example - but you've also showed the same ignorance you're accusing others of.

IT'S A STORY. Just because we try to put together logical reasons for things doesn't mean that you can't ignore it just because it's not perfectly the way you envision it!


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

Well,

For myself, I understood that Garia draw her sword by reaching behind her back, not over her shoulder.
After little searching I found basically four types wearing two swords -
samurai style - two swords on side (usually katana and wakizashi, wakizashi is basically short sword),
two swords weared by woman side-by-side,
ninja style - two swords in one scabbard woren diagonally across back and drawn from top and bottom
crossed swords across back - drawn across shoulders.

I even remeber fifth method fit more for long daggers or short swords - two scabbards placed horizontally across back drawn from sides.

Here are links:
samurai style - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p97lchaJ-xo, http://i733.photobucket.com/albums/ww339/DarkArticulation/05..., http://www.ehow.com/how_5653202_wear-samurai-swords.html
side-by-side - http://img1.etsystatic.com/007/0/5852228/il_fullxfull.381692... for more pics http://www.etsy.com/listing/111271050/dual-sword-belt-reserv...
ninja style - http://www.karatemart.com/dual-wielding-ninja-sword-set
crossed across back - http://www.knifecave.com/fantasy/store/products/Master+Cutle..., http://www.knifecave.com/fantasy/store/products/Master+Cutle...

None of those styles would cause the scabbard be dragged across ground by short person.

For the avoidance of doubt

The fitting of Garia's swords is described in the later part of chapter 47. The scabbards are arranged so that the hilts project one above each shoulder, with the knuckleguards on the outside to clear her head/helmet.

She draws the swords forward over each shoulder to form a vertical cross in front of her. This style of defensive swordplay is entirely made up, but of course I know next to nothing about sword techniques and it might really exist somewhere. (I also know next to nothing about guns.)

I would remind my readers that this story is set on another world which has dragons, animals which can apparently read minds, three moons and a great nebula in the sky. Things might not always be the same as they are on Earth.

Penny

Thanks Penny

Such a pleasant surprise to see the new episode this morning. On top of that, it's the one with the action that you had been setting up over the last several postings.

Curious about the possible makeup and count of the raiders, I went back a couple of postings to the meeting between Fikt and Durko. By my count, the most raiders they could have had was 15 (Fikt, Durko, 2 Trogan leftovers, 1 miner, 4 workmen, 1 additional wagoneer, 3 maybe up to 5 town's people). Fikt is likely to be one of the dead or wounded, and maybe even the shoemaker (although he doesn't strike me as one to take direct action). Fikt would need to be there to direct the attack and probably even operate one of the new weapons. There wasn't any attempt at identifying the Ptuvil's victims, and we have 2 with their faces mostly blown off. It will be interesting to see who is missing back in town. That all said; Fikt could easily be the one who got off uninjured to cause more trouble in the future (authoress prerogative).

Serpents for the garden of Eden

It is a tragedy this had to happen this way. But now the race will be won by the fastest innovator. With just the basics Garia knows she can keep the kingdom out ahead. But expect that secrets will leak and there will be the need to plan ahead. But given the nature of Yod there may be a war in the making.
Is there a spy guild to decern just how bad the situation is
Great story and getting better. Thanks for all your hard work.

Michele

With those with open eyes the world reads like a book

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Spy Guild

As far as I know there is nothing of that sort yet. Any kind of 'intelligence' work is basically done by amateurs. Consider who was given the task of investigating Garia when she first turned up at the palace - Morlan, a Questor, simply because he was known to be brainy.

Needless to say, all that might change rather abruptly in the future.

Penny

Talk to the whores. They'll

Talk to the whores. They'll hear _everything_, and would make a good start :)


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

Another wonderful chapter,

Another wonderful chapter, Penny. I love the way you have developed the people. I feel like I almost know them. Also a great plot.

Hugs,

Mark <3

Ptuvils and shotguns

That was a very narrow escape by Garia and company - still, they've left the Ptuvil a reward for inadvertently helping them in the form of the attackers, who inadvertently brought about their own demise by causing such a loud explosion they attracted the attention of the beastly avian.

Still, on future expeditions to the area, it might be useful to wear the house colours, so as to better blend into the landscape and avoid attracting unwarranted attention from Ptuvils.

As for Fikt, given his role in proceedings, I imagine he stayed behind at Blackstone - after all, he probably wouldn't want to put himself in unnecessary danger; besides which any men lost in operations can be treated as martyrs to the cause. The cause in question being Yod, although it appears as though his men were unaware of the irony that many resented Garia's rule because she was changing the status quo, yet Fikt equips them with new weapons which most definitely do affect the status quo!

With regards to what to do next, it would be advisable to stick around Blackstone, carrying on business as usual (although staying closer to town - delaying full exploration of the territory until the next visit). After all, it would be expected of them to curtail their visit and decamp back to Palarand asap. The journey back should be safer anyway if it's combined with one of the now regular supply visits, which would create extra traffic on the road together with the wagons offering additional cover.

Given the current weapons technology is quite primitive, they could probably survive without guns of their own until they're back at Palarand if Stott can help train others in the use of the longbow, which is the only other ranged weapon of note (and was used to kill several attackers). Once back at Palarand, the engineers can get to work on both improving the quality of blackpowder and producing limited quantities (for the time being, given there are likely to be spies in Palarand) of a safer and lighter gun. It's probably worth pointing out that castle walls are likely to be safe in the medium term, given we're currently unaware of any development of heavy artillery. Besides which, even before the invention of artillery, it was possible to put castles under seige, inavde them and even slight them with trebuchets and seige engines. Although apparently in reality, trebuchets weren't used so much to destroy castle walls (after all, if you destroy the walls, once you've captured it you've got the problem of a huge hole in your defences!) but to throw things inside the castle walls such as the severed heads of slain soldiers and fireballs (since there were plenty of wooden structures within the walls which would burn quite well).

Meanwhile, Garia and Keren's relationship is pretty much official, and Jenet / Feteren aren't far behind. With Garia's aid, they might end up being another convention breaker: if/when Jenet and Feteren wed, I imagine Garia would still like Jenet to remain in her service rather than giving it up to be a home-maker (as was common in many Earth countries until a few decades ago) - besides which, as Jenet and Feteren will probably still be living within the Palace, there wouldn't be much in the way of household duties to undertake, and there'd be plenty of free babysitters for children of any class born within the walls!


As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!

Colors

Briefly, Garia, Feteran and Jenet were wearing house colors as they were in their riding outfits (having slept in them!). Keren would have been in palace colors of blue and red; I'm not sure how easily that would have shown up against that sort of landscape.

Of course Fikt (if he was there) and the men he led would just have been wearing the usual sort of clothes any farmer, villager, townsman or workman might have been wearing: various colors, probably mismatched, not blending into anything at all. Yod has begun using camoflage for its soldiery but I doubt anyone else will have thought of the idea.

As to the rest, well, we'll see.

Penny

Guns and bows

Given the current weapons technology is quite primitive, they could probably survive without guns of their own until they're back at Palarand if Stott can help train others in the use of the longbow, which is the only other ranged weapon of note (and was used to kill several attackers)

There's a famous quote that goes "if you wish to train a longbowman, start with his grandfather". Longbows require a huge amount of training to achieve accuracy and range. However, the other guardsmen do have crossbows, which, if they are reasonably well developed, should be both more accurate and easier to use than the black powder blunderbuss the Yodians had (and less likely to have a fatal catastrophic failure).

Good episode. They were really lucky with the Ptuvil, although they did have a decent defensible position, they might have been able to hold out until reinforcements arrived, though it would have been bloody.

Going through history, you

Going through history, you have to wonder sometimes why humans bothered making hand cannons. The originals were far less accurate than a crossbow, hit no harder, and took far longer to load - and required more training.

It wasn't until the late 1500's or so that muskets became useful enough for hunting or anything else, and well into the late 1600's before handguns were useful. (springlock/caplock) The percussion cap, and then the brass cartridge, changed everything.


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Panic

While they were slower and less efficient than crossbows they do induce mass panic into the typical medievel army concisting primarily of peasant levies armed with farm implements. Most battles had very few professional soldiers in the fighting so if you can make the levies run away the few true Men-at-arms could be easily overwelmed.

Training

Yes... and no.

If by 'training' you mean the sequence of operations someone has to learn to safely operate and maintain the weapon, I'll agree with you.

If by 'training' you mean the length of time someone will take to become proficient with the weapon, then I'd have to disagree.

As was mentioned above, the longbow is a lifetimes' study, whereas any man could learn to use a firearm with at most a week or two's training, and wouldn't need to be as physically fit to do it. Garia will point this out in the next chapter.

Penny

I was talking about

I was talking about crossbows, not longbows. I'm fully cognizant of the generations of practice it takes to create good longbowmen. Palarand isn't Wales, after all. (I even _said_ crossbows)

As for physical fitness, early hand cannons required as much (or more) fitness than crossbows. Especially when they added cranks to the bows. (Goatsfoot levers are a whole lot better than trying to do it with sheer muscle power. Even the pocket crossbows I own were tough for my father to cock, my mother couldn't really do it - she's probably the size Garia is. )

Crossbows are _easy_ to learn how to use. Windage is a bit more tricky than for a firearm, but the real difference is how the bolts snap up into the air when you fire them, then curve back down. They _don't_ shoot straight out. I got a shock the first time I fired the pistol bows I own.


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Yikes!

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This is quite the exciting chapter! A dragon attack and the start of an arms race. Who could ask for more? Well... I could use a wee bit more romance, though the scene at the end was very cute. Now that I think about it, Snep might need a good rub down to soothe his nerves. Any volunteers? heeeee

Thanks and kudos!

- Terry

I can only agree

Very nicely done. Same questions about Fikt, the flea or pest. Also, I wonder.......I can't recall his name, but Garia whipped up on him nicely and tore his leg up and sent him home. He HAS to be carrying a grudge. Wonder how involved he is in trying to get some payback on her. His anger may even have turned him into one of the heads of the get Garia conspiracy. He may even be trying for the throne, since the King has taken such a shine to her, against him.

That particular noble was of

That particular noble was of another kingdom/country.


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As much as I hate to suggest it

... this has reached the point where Palarand has to do what Yod is trying to do with Garia, namely try to kidnap and/or kill Yod's equivalent of her.

What is the point of having a council protecting the release of knowledge when Yod has a loose cannon, so to speak, giving over knowledge heedlessly.

At this point all I have to offer is my 'wow' just like all of the rest of the commentators.

Kim

I had

the same exact thoughts Kimmie. Good for the goose.....

It's not heedlessly. I'd

It's not heedlessly. I'd suspect that unlike Garia, who is giving general and specific information, the 'source' in Yod is only giving out what information is being demanded.

So, what happens if you're told what to do, and how to do it, but not _why_ it's done that way?

Remember, the best way to deal with a dictator is doing _exactly_ what you're told. Period.


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Well maybe not I guess

... considering how controlling Yod seems to be.

However, Yod's 'Garia' cannot stay there. Eventually even controlling idiots can get lucky and ask the right questions and demands the right knowledge.

Sadly, firearms are coming to Anmar like it or not. Luckily for them the King can dictate who are allowed to have them.

Garia has a critical decision then. How advanced a weapon would she teach them to make? She lives in modern times and have literally centuries of gun technology to draw upon if she was a gun nut as Gary and remember it all. Too advanced a weapon can bring wholesale slaughter.

Kim

Well, I could see the 'organ

Well, I could see the 'organ gun', or something similar, but it's hard to say.

Unless their chemical questors can come up with acceptable caps, the flintlock would be the best they could come up with. I'm sure they won't be very good (to start) with boring out solid barrels, so they'd have to do the hammer/wrap method. Bore standardisation will make a big difference as well as the assembly line. (which will change the guilds even MORE)

(With the organ gun, you have a row of barrels, the ends were usually matchlock or similar, or just a touchhole, and you'd pass a flame down the back of the barrels to have them go off in sequence, or a fuse to have them basically go off at the same time. You run the thing around like a wheelbarrow)

If you _know_ about gatling guns, percussion caps (even cap pistol caps), and brass cartridges, you've just about been given the entirety of modern warfare, other than the autoloading mechanisms.


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small unit tactics

Someone needs to teach Fikt and his crew some better tactics. Charging the sheltered encampment carrying the firepower like that was just asking to get wiped out, even with the good guys getting hurt. Shows how effective the new weapons really are.

See previous post. I suspect

See previous post. I suspect Yod is getting exactly what they've demanded from their 'source' - but aren't getting the 'why' things are done that way.

Think about it - camoflauge, but then invaded Russia in Winter... :)


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Fikt's tactics

Fikt's tactics would probably have worked, if it hadn't been for Stott. Remember, with one discharge of a single weapon they killed one and injured four. Garia's men had no idea what the weapon did or how it worked so wouldn't even have known to dive out of the way.

I'm not going to go into detail as there's a debrief in the next chapter, but if it hadn't been for Garia stepping in the shit and the appearance of the ptuvil things would have turned out very different.

Penny

Ouchie...

I just realised something.

Sunburn! Keren and Garia just fell asleep with their faces to the sun. Ooops.


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Sounds like several directions to go in

Greek fire anyone? And if they have trapped hydrocarbons (coal), there should also exist some form of oil as well. and if Garia is as read as most young men are (were?), she should know at least the primary periodic table, if not their atomic weights and raw materials identification (it has been 30+ years), or at least the metallic ones anyways. Last I remember there were about 105 or so, but I am sure there have been more discovered by now. The interest in said elements was sparked by the Start Trek episode in which Kirk created a small cannon :P

As to flushing out the enemy, a trap should be set for them, perhaps stropping out of sight of the town ad sending in the wounded men, with a request to come take care of the other "victims". Then have the guardsmen appear more wounded then the are (if at all) and leave them in town to watch the townspeople, while the trusted ones go with Feteran to meet with Garia and Keren and have a small war council; after all, would they not need a wagon or two to retrieve any "bodies"? The billipossities are endless with as devious a mind as Penny has :)

As always, this is a great story and hopefully will keep going for a while (hint hint!). hugs,

Diana

Screaming Ptuvils

I think Garia and the dragon are going to be good friends, after all she did give him lunch. It might take a while, maybe after he's tried toasting Snep like a marshmallow and one very grumpy Garia has poked him up the nose with a sharp stick and discovers he's really not as scary a he looks. Dragon pulls spear from nostril and glares at Garia "Stop that! It really hurts you know."

He'll make an excellent reconnaissance platform and probably quite good at dropping large things on people from a great height.

The whole issue of Garia and swords has always confused me. She can't have a sword made because she is not tall enough to draw one, but Gary should have known the Japanese aren't very tall and have an illustrious martial tradition built around swords and they were worn pushed though a belt or slung from one. And if he had adopted hakama for Garia he could have had skirts and trousers all in one and would also have doubled up as training wear.

Keep up the good work Penny

So a hostage situation coming up?

I gather those kidnappers will need to hole up somewhere and may try to take over either the abandoned farmhouse or the one with the family as they need to get those arrows out.

It will be interesting to see if Fikt was already killed or Garia will hear his voice and confront him and take him down personally *grin*.

I like the latter as one might imagine.

On the Yod pet Earthling front, I wonder if he had to be nearby to train these asshats in using these weapons so there is a slim chance they can get him/her too.

Kim

I'd Be Surprised

The guys with arrows in them will be lucky to still be alive after riding for a while let alone in any shape to assist in taking over anything. It's more likely the uninjured guy will abandon/kill the wounded guys and try to blend into the population or get away. If Fikt is still in the picture as a second uninjured person, things could change to something more like you described.

Great Chapter

Always looking forward to the next chapters! :} I knew the bowman would come in very handy and he did!

Now, I think that they will find the rest of the bandits at the farm house where they will have taken it over possibly?

Either way I think shit will hit the fan pretty soon. Black Powder guns, oh my! The future does not look so bright now does it for her Kingdom. Now, she is going to have to create something more deadly than the black powder weapon in order to keep her kingdom safe, better weapons than what Yod has created. Cannons, rifles,explosives, etc. Just what she did not want to have to do!

Try to make a safe world and what happens, some yokel has to mess things up, sigh!

Vivien

Parland has a huge advantage if they must build firearms

They already can machine brass steam engine cylinders. And have made serviceable working electric generations and motors. Though so far only as demonstration models but they are improving fast as there are synergies between them. And Parland is encouraging the sharing/pooling of data and ideas.

THAT did not happen on Earth until the 1700s. Think of the Newcomen and Watt engines. First used to pump mines and in municipal water works.

That gives them the tech for bronze artillery pieces. like a Napoleonic ten pounder.

Or with their rapidly advancing metallurgy and machine tools -- I assume she mentioned the concept of machine tools. Hell to build the steam engines the ability to cast, forge and machine parts would be a necessity --they could quickly learn to bore a reliable and far more accurate/powerful steel barrel. And the metal casting tech used in their new printing presses can be altered to produce bullets with ease. Far better than the scrap and rocks Yod used.

I agree Yod's guns are very early tech and as or more dangerous to the user than the intended victims.

Hell, with just gunpowder alone, and the ability to make coak and all the nifty volatile distillates that can be recovered as byproducts, grenades, fire bombs, crude flame throwers and other very powerful weapons can be readily made.

I also agree, Yod's *Garia* be he a man or a woman needs to be taken out or rescued.

Given how odd Yod's advances have been I also agree that person is being told to *do this, give us that* and thus the Yod progress, if you can call their warfare tech progress, is haphazard at best and not well integrated.

As a quick fix, weren't there double stringed cross bows IE an over under arrangement?

That would double their firepower. Plus rapidly completing a telegraph system. First optical the semaphore towers and telescopes, then later electric, would give Parland a massive tactical advantage in knowing were and when attacks are coming from.

Know thy enemy. Be strong where he is weak and not be where he is strong and all that. Her transportation ideas, IE the soon to be possible railways would also make Parland strong against an invasion.

Fragmentation grenades on an arrow or launched via a simple black powder rocket or a catapolt might be of some use. IE cheap but terrifying mobile artillery. Accuracy is poor but the terror effect or the ability to wound and panic massed troops would be invaluable if used well. Or the use of advanced fire arrows and simple time/fuzed bombs to destroy Military supplies and so on.

But whatever the tech the King MUST keep tight reign on it.

Odd that Yod let the killers/kidnapers have advanced weapons. Or are these first gen and they have a limited number of better ones?

Is Garia perceived as such a threat they would risk letting Parland know they have guns?

But then Yod seems a strict oligarchy and patronistic IE woman hating thus they assumed their hired thugs would win easily.

They have underestimated her again and I doubt she will make the same error twice.

Must believe on word of this the King and his brother will call out the army to her rescue.

I agree she did the cruel but right thing with the dying assassin.

A swift death was a mercy he would not have offered. Also a living though crippled man would be bait to the dragon and buy them time to escape to relative safety.

Plus IF word gets out that the petite young woman is a take no prisoners field commander the enemy will possibly begin to respect her. As more importantly will doubters on Parland.

She has been seen to offer mercy were it is warranted and good may come of it but has also been seen to be emotionless, professional and regal when death was requires. IRE the trials and executions.

If Garia is not ready and worthy to be the next queen, even the next Empresses, who is?

Nice treat two chapters so soon.

John in Wauwatosa

P.S. As to Keren and her... I think they are to the point in their relations where they would be together, be lovers even if he must marry another for diplomatic reasons. Though he might just resign for "the woman I love" I suspect he will find a way to do both, become king and marry his love .

There were many a king and queen who did their duty but it was widely known Ms Such and Such or Mr You Know Who was their true bed partner.

But in Garia's case she is already a Baroness, one of a soon to much enlarged and wealthy barony. Is she not already qualified as a *noble*? And thus might be declared suitable as the wife and queen to Keren?

There is always the non ruling line IE can't take the throne examples of The late Queen Mother of England and of Prince Phillip, Elizabeth's consort.

So there are ways to make her queen. But then her judgment is such, Keren , Feteran and others have noted so, that she IS qualified to rule, her origins notwithstanding.

The biggest, strongest argument in favor of her as next queen is she IS the future of Parland. The kingdom must do all it can to keep her safe. What better place than at the future kings side? It is in Parlands self interest to make her into the queen, their growing love is immaterial but a nice component in the equation.

John in Wauwatosa

I just re-read all of SEE

I just re-read all of SEE (Yes, I've done that at least six times so far :) )

Okay - this is just observations.

1) Fikt is a very hands-on person, which isn't necessary good for a spy, or spymaster, which is what he's been pretending to be. He insisted on being one of the two guards that tried for Garia in Decarinium/Dekkaran, rather than being where he could run away to try again in case of a problem. With that sort of mentality, he'd almost _have_ to had been one of the six ptuvil chow.

2) We have three people running away, two with sticks in them, one without. If they haven't recognized the bodies (D'Kenik would know at least some by sight because of the census), I'd suspect that it was townspeople that got away. Other townsfolk will know who was missing for the day/night - it's hard to hide anything in a small town. Same with the wagoneers and workers.

3) The guns are matchlock. (That's what the strings are - fuses) I suspect that Garia's counterpart is being milked strictly for military information - weapons, tactics, strategies. Unfortunately, when you do that, you don't find out about what Garia has been giving them - the background _behind_ them, as well as the infrastructure to properly take advantage of it.

4) Putting hoops around the barrel breech would probably be a good idea - at least to fix the one they still have handy. Putting rivets through the barrel doesn't do much for structural integrity, especially when the barrels are probably wrought iron, rather than a stronger nickel or even silicon steel. (technically, wrought iron is a very high-carbon steel, which means it's brittle and corrodes easily. It's used because the corrosion is of a desired kind - when it hits a certain point, the corrosion protects the iron further inside. Copper alloys do the same thing)

5) Concrete may become even more important than they think. With rock crushers going, they could actually dig into the Stone Sea (during the summer) and pave over what amounts to a channel. Concrete block construction requires no real rebar (for small buildings), and blocks can actually be pretty light. You don't want them to be solid (much like clay bricks. Adobe bricks are solid mud, but fired clay bricks need the holes to be properly fired)

6) The Stone Sea may be just as important as the coal mines. With crumbly limestone, you have an easy to create/crush gravel to create underlayments for road or rail construction. I can see it now - a railroad running the 2/5 grade, with a two lane road next to it. Hmmm.. Garia might have to introduce the banjo. Stringed instrument that's basically a drum with a dajan attached to it.


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ambush failed

but since three got away, they could still cause problems ...

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Keren saw that Garia would make a fine queen and so did the men. I liked the part about letting the dragon have them. It’s a pity that Yod had to introduce guns.

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Wake up call

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This attack is one wail of a wake up call, since they were complacent in thinking they could be attack. It was good Garia, Keren, and Feteran were awy from camp or things might have been different.

Damn the pea coat, get a cape so she can wear her swords at all times she out and about. All this have to wear certain clothing for this or that is going to get her killed when she can't wear her swords because "it isn't done."

A breach exploding could have been from flawed metal, but also because the fools over charged the guns. This fools don't understand pressures from the combustion of the gun powder or how it affect the metal, so they may decide if this much works more will be better.

Garia has surely seen pictures of muskets, with the flash pan using a cap or flint. She needs to get word back to the palace and get better guns in production or they will be up a creek.

And the healers will now face a different kind of healing when they have to work on bullet wounds.

When they get back to Blackstone it's time they start kicking some butt to find out everyone involved in this attack and wanting to get her out. And be damn of the consequences.

"Clean up on aisle 5..." Dumb bandits weren't aware of the flying shoppers who dropped in to pick up some fresh meat for dinner--dumb city slickers. What are the odds that the ptuvil just happened to be in that exact area at that specific time? Might there already be a communication system already be set up but by the animals?

Others have feelings too.

Not sure

How rough townsmen and lazy bandits were fit enough to chase our heros up the hill an catch up to them.

Perhaps because when your

Perhaps because when your main transportation was feet or animal, everyone tended to be in fair shape. Riding a horse, for example, still involves working a LOT of muscles.


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Only just

I will add that everyone was gasping once they had, eventually, reached the stones.

It is amazing what one can accomplish when one is fleeing for one's life and, conversely, what one can do when chasing that person and seeing them come to the end of their resources.

...Not to mention, be so focused on the chase that they forget to look up!

Penny

Failing to look up seems to

Failing to look up seems to be a very human thing to do. Probably because most of the threats to us as developed monkeys generally roam ground level - especially on the grassy plains.


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