Working Girl 10

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Working Girl 10

By
Susan Brown

Toni is back and still in the dreaded salon! Can she cope?

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Working Girl 10

By

Susan Brown.

 

Half an hour later, my body was painfully free of hair in all of the places that Bridget used the wax stuff. It felt like a bad case of sunburn but Bridget rubbed on some cream and that helped a lot.

I had a sneaking admiration for girls now and the pain and suffering they got through to make themselves look pretty. I thought shaving was a drag (although I didn’t have to do much of that, thank goodness). But all the waxing, plucking, pulling and pushing girls had to go through to make themselves attractive, put the things that men had to do in the shade.

Now take washing your hair as an example. As a man you just grab a bottle of Whatever shampoo or shower gel, wet your hair, put the stuff on, rinse and rough dry with a towel, then comb your hair into some semblance of order.

Now to girls, it’s almost like a religious thing. First you choose the correct shampoo and conditioner for your hair. There appears to be thousand of different hair types. I thought that dry, normal and greasy was all you had to worry about, but nooooo there are shampoos for fine, oily, limp, coarse, split ends, processed hair, coloured etc. Shampoos that make your hair shiny, have more volume, ya di ya di ya…..

There are equally as many types of conditioner as shampoos, no wonder that the companies that make these products earn a fortune!

Enough of my ranting. You can see I had too much time on my hands waiting for Bridget to finish doing her stuff. Lets get back to the nitty gritty.

Bridge finally let me get dressed and left the room.

I got dressed in my far too skimpy clothes.

Although I was sore, I could immediately feel the difference as my feminine clothes slid on more smoothly than before.

My breast forms made me gasp as they nestled in my silky bra against my now hairless chest. The panties tights, skirt and blouse, all slipped over my hairless body without resistance and the feeling was, to say the least, erotic. Percy liked it too and it took a bit of tugging and pulling before I could tuck him up and to send him to sleep. My old granddad told me once that when he was in the army during the war. They used to put bromide in soldiers’ tea to stop their willies becoming too aroused. I think that I needed something like that!

Just as I finished putting my lacy top and salon smock back on, Bridget came in.

‘Are you decent? OK, sit in the chair again and I’ll sort out your hair.’

‘You just did it.’

‘Yes and you just messed it up again putting your top back on!’

Luckily, the damage was not too great and in a few minutes after almost choking in the pungent fumes of industrial strength hair spray, the hair was repaired to her satisfaction.

‘Now Toni I want you to shut your eyes and trust me.’

‘Why?’ I said suspiciously.

‘I need to do your makeup but before that I need to do something.’

‘What?’

‘It’s a surprise. You will like it, I promise. Now be a good girl and shut your eyes.’

Being of a trusting, if somewhat simple nature, I shut my eyes.

I heard someone come into the room.

Suddenly, both my ear lobes were grabbed, some cold stuff put on them and then before I could say anything, my eyes popped open wide as I felt a stabbing pain in both ears.

‘OWWW! Oh, ****, ******.’

‘My, my, that’s not the language that polite young ladies use,’ said a grinning Bridget. ‘You needed your ears pierced if you are going to look girly.’

My ears started to throb a bit as I complained bitterly. The other grinning accomplice to my torture left the room giggling for some strange warped reason..

‘That hurt! I didn’t need my ears pierced. I could have used clip on earrings.’

‘They are crappy and you don’t get much choice. Once your ears are healed, you can stop using the studs and wear some lovely dangly ones.’

I wasn’t convinced, but said nothing more. There was no point. The foul deed had been done now.

‘Don’t forget to keep rotating the studs and keep them clean, you don’t want an infection.’

‘So I can blame you if my ears drop off?’

‘Now you’re being silly. Right, back to business. Let’s do your makeup.’

‘Oh goodie!’

‘Tut tut, no sarcasm, please.’

With that Bridget started applying her lotions and potions. I kind of zoned out, My ears throbbed and my body was sore from the waxing, so I didn’t pay much attention to what she was doing, but she had this habit of sticking her tongue out wiggling it while she concentrated and I was kind of mesmerised by it.

Finally, I was pronounced finished.

‘Right Toni, the moment of truth. Let’s carefully take your smock off. Now close your eyes and turn around.’

‘Oh no, you’re not going to get me to do that again! You’ll probably pierce my navel or do something else unspeakable.’

‘I promise I won’t do anything to you. Just trust me this one last time. I won’t hurt you.’

I did as I was told, muttering under my breath and with a heavily beating heart, I shut my eyes and turned around.

I heard the sound of cloth falling on the floor.

‘Open your eyes, Toni.’

I opened my eyes and was a bit startled to see the large mirror in front of me. I gasped at the apparition in front of me.

I was looking at myself but it was as if I was looking at someone else.

I was wearing the same clothes, but they looked different because my hair had been teased and tugged into a very feminine style. I had a fringe (what Americans for some reason call bangs) just above my thinned out and femininely arched brows. My hair was longer and fuller and came down to my shoulders in a gentle wavy style.

I heard in the distance, Bridget talking to me.

‘I put in some hair extensions. That will help until your hair grows out. You must come and see me at least every other week, so we can keep you looking lovely.’

The wonderful hair changed the shape of my face, making it thinner and more girly. My eyes had a delicate shading of purple merging into pink. My eyelashes were thick and full with the delicate touch of mascara, making my eyes big and bambi like. My face now had what looked like a peaches and cream complexion. Healthy, vibrant and full of life.

My lips, seemed fuller and was a wonderful shade of shocking pink.

In short, despite all my male hang-ups and concerns that I would be ‘outed’ at any minute for being a pervy man dressed up as a girl, I only saw a girl in the mirror. Not a man or boy, but a lovely vibrant young girl.

‘What do you think, Toni?’

‘Wow!’

‘I take it you like?’

‘Wow!’

‘I assume that means that you are happy with the results?’

My mouth got into gear as I realised that Bridget was talking to me. I couldn’t drag my eyes from the mirror and the beautiful vision reflected in it.

‘Is that me?’

‘Yes’ hon, all you.’

‘Thank you.’ I whispered, seeing the mouth in the mirror saying the words.

It was a bit unreal. I couldn’t quite get the hang of the fact that the image reflected me, Tony Summers. A boy aged 18 years. This wasn’t Tony. I could see nothing that could possibly remind me of Tony, except, perhaps the nose. But my nose was always a bit small and tweaked up at the end, just like my mother. Sheila had done a great job at getting me looking good enough to face the general public, without being found out as an impostor. But this was on a different level. This was premier division stuff compared to Sunday league.

Just then there was a knock on the door.

I didn’t turn around, I was still looking at the girl in the mirror. I heard the gentle tones of Sheila.

‘Bloody Hell!’

‘Hi, Sheila, scrubs up well, doesn’t she?’

‘Too right, Bridge. God, Toni with you looking like that, I could change religion and become a lesbian!’

I giggled nervously as I realised that Sheila too, couldn’t see anything of Tony now.

I tore my eyes away from my reflection in the mirror and I turned to face the two girls.

‘You think I look OK, then?’

‘Daarling, you look wonderful,’ said Bridget enthusiastically.

‘Drop dead gorgeous. I’m quite jealous, you cow!’ Said an equally enthusiastic Sheila, ‘But we have to go now. I’ve booked lunch at a swanky restaurant, using my slimy ex’s plastic and we only have half an hour to get there.’

‘I don’t think….’

‘Now you can’t tell me that you are worried about passing, you look about twice as girly as me and I’m no slouch in that department. Come on grab your purse and lets hit the road.’

As we left the salon, Bridget came over, gave me a hug and then handed me her card.

‘Toni, if you need a chat about things, give me a ring. My home and mobile numbers is on the back of the card. You may want to talk about what you are feeling and I might be able to give you some advice. OK?’

‘Yes. Thanks Bridge for all you’ve done. I will ring you soon, promise.’

We went out into the bright sunshine and I was so aware of my hairless body brushing against the fabric of my skirt and top in the light breeze. My full hair swayed gently as we walked to Sheila’s car. There were a lot of people around and I noticed that men and women were looking at me. Some women smiled others frowned. Men seemed to look at my legs then face and ended up on my breasts. It was a bit uncomfortable. I knew now how pretty girls felt when being ogled at and I must admit, secretly. I liked it. God, where did that come from! Was I becoming a flirt, five minutes after being turned girly?

In no time we were in the car driving towards the restaurant.

I didn’t say much, but kept looking at myself in the vanity mirror. Sheila was talking but I wasn’t taking in what she was saying.

‘TONI!’

I jumped.

‘Sorry Sheila. Did you say something?’

‘Yes. If you can possibly tear your eyes away form the mirror. I was saying that this restaurant is really great. It’s the top one in the area and has had rave reviews in the papers. I would love to see that slime ball Steve’s face when he sees the bill for your salon trip and the meal. That will teach him to mess with me!’

I began to take notice where we were. It was funny. The area rang a bell. We turned the corner and there it was. It had to be, didn’t it? The same restaurant that Davis took me to and where I poured lager over his smug pockmarked face.

‘I can’t go in there. I must be banned. That’s where Davis took me!’

‘Ooops. I didn’t know. Sorry. Anyway it’s booked now and no one will recognise you with your hair change and everything. Come on are you a girl or a mouse?’

‘Eek!’

‘Come on Mini. If anyone recognises you, I promise we won’t stay if you don’t want to.’

I hesitantly followed Sheila in with trepidation.

Jeeves was there, all smug, smarmy and subservient.

‘Hello, ladies, how may I help you?

He was wringing his damp hands a bit like Uriah Heep, being ‘ever so humble’.

‘We have a table booked in the name of Jones.’

He looked at his list.

‘Ah yes. Please step this way, Madam.’

‘It’s Ms.’

‘Sorry!’

He walked us over to a table in the corner. I breathed a sigh of relief that he didn’t recognise me.

After sitting us down and leaving us with a menu, he left us in peace.

‘See, Toni. I told you he wouldn’t realise who you were. You look so different now. Lets order then we can have a nice little confab.’

We both ordered a smoked salmon salad and after the hovering waiter, who looked like a stripped down version of Jeeves, had left us, we tucked in to the delicious meal.

‘Well Toni. You have your interview in two days time. Are you up for it.’

‘It’s a bit soon. I still don’t know if I can pull it off. Anyway, there are probably loads of other girls going for the job.’

‘I like the way you said ‘other’ girls. Does that mean you are accepting that you are a girl now?’

‘It was only a slip of the tongue. Anyway, I’ve only just started even thinking about this. Don’t push me to soon. Anyway, if I don’t get this job, I can go back to being Tony again.’

‘Is that what you want?’

‘I DON’T KNOW!’

‘Shhh, don’t shout. The last thing you want is to draw attention to yourself.’

‘Sorry. It’s just that I keep having to remember who I am underneath this girly exterior. I don’t want to loose my past.’

‘You will never loose your past. You are just looking after your future.’

I felt myself tearing up.

Sheila leaned across and held my hand.

‘Look Toni, its about time I say things that might upset you. Don’t shout or be angry. OK?’

I nodded, apprehensive at what she might say. I looked around. Luckily, the restaurant was not full and as we were in the corner, we seemed quite private.

‘Firstly, I’ll ask a few questions. Just give me a straight answer. OK.’

‘OK.’

As a boy did you think that you were masculine?’

‘Not really. I tried, but I was one of the weedy boys. Not good at sports, except running. I was OK at that. I suppose because of my light frame.’

‘We both know that you are a bit shy, why is that?’

‘I don’t know. I get tongue tied and I always think that when I say something it will be silly, stupid and show me up.’

‘Do you relate better to boys or girls?’

‘Girls, I suppose. I went to a boy’s boarding school. I was a bit small, I didn’t fit in and I just didn’t seem to have much in common with the other boys. The head master had twin daughters, Suzy and Jemma. Somehow I got to know them and I had my happiest times with them. The other boys made fun of me, saying I was a sissy and stuff like that. Then there is you. I think of you as my best friend, even though you are ancient.’

‘Bloody cheek! I’m only ten years older than you and I have all my teeth!’

We both giggled and then Sheila carried on quizzing me.

‘OK .So we have established that you are shy and you relate better to girls than boys. Do you like the way you are dressed.’

I didn’t want to answer.

‘Come on Toni. Be honest with yourself. Tell me do you like the way you look?’

I could feel tears welling up in my eyes again, as I nodded and whispered. ‘Yes but its wrong.’

‘Why is it wrong?’

‘Because I’m a boy and boys should not have these feelings.’

‘So you think that being a boy is only about what is between your legs?’

‘Yes, no, I don’t know. I’m confused. My talk with Bridget has made me think about everything and I don’t know what to do about it.’

I blew my nose on a tissue and carefully wiped my eyes. I could see traces of makeup on the tissue and this reinforced the duality of my situation. Was I a girl trapped in a boys body or a boy with delusions.

‘What I think is that you are finally finding out who you are. I saw your face at the salon when you saw yourself in the mirror. You loved what you were seeing, even though you may not realise it yet. I think that you are happier looking like you are now, a pretty girl, than a boy who doesn’t know where he is going.’

I looked up at Sheila and was just about to agree with her when someone moving caught my eye over the other side of the room.

My heart immediately leapt into my mouth. I gasped and nearly fainted.

‘What is it. What’s wrong Toni?’ Said Sheila turning around in her seat.

It was Davis. The sick, disgusting and odious Davis, coming across the room with a blond, gum chewing bimbo in a PVC dress, tottering on stiletto heals. They were heading straight towards our table and I had nowhere to hide!

To be continued……..

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Nothing Would Surprise Me Now...

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At this point in the story, it wouldn't surprise me to learn that Sheila was offered a promotion by a doctor who works at her hospital and who secretly loves M2F TGs if she could get him a date with a TG girl that was still a virgin... and that's the only reason she's 'helping' Tony. (much in the way a lion 'helps' the gazelle get some good exercise... followed by a really long nap)

Seriously though, while this comedy of errors is amusing in its own way, just how much crap is Tony supposed to put up with before he breaks down and puts a hole in the nearest river? I know that it's all being told from the POV of him writing about it after the fact, but if Tony doesn't get a break soon the story will veer so far away from suspension-of-disbelief-land that it would take a sworn affidavit from 10 eyewitnesses and supporting photographs to even see believability again!

Moving forward with hope that the perfect crapstorm he's found himself in abates soon and we at least start to see the light at the end of the tunnel... and that it's not an oncoming train!

Wow ten chapters already

I thought I had read this before, but maybe juust something titled close to the same.

easy and fun to read, sorry about not commenting on them all just so much fun and i have 22 chapters to go and a whole lot of other Susan Brown gems to read

2 out of 5 boxes of tissue(mostly from the laughing at the bikers and the crazy date oh it feels like one chapter) and 5 gold starsDesHS.jpg

Goddess Bless you

Love Desiree

Goddess Bless you

Love Desiree

Murphy

just can't leave Working Girl alone. After being beautified in the salon, the girls go to the same bistro that Davis took WG to. Now he is there, heading to their table. What next for Toni?This series ROCKS!!!!

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

Was this file truncated?

Not only was it unusually short, but there's no copyright line and it appears that it ends with a cut-off word.

On the other hand, I'm quite glad to see you continuing the story.

Huggs,
Deni

I think you're right

I too think this chapter was unintentionally cut short. Probably a cut and paste error.

Hugs and love,
Cindy

Ooops!!!

Sorry for the shortened story. I did'nt check that I had cut and pasted properly.

It's been one of those days :(

Hugs
Sue

Developing as well as Toni

The story is good as related thus far. It seems to have stalled a little but is, in reality, moving on several different levels. I do hope to soon read the results of the job interview. But then, if she is not hired, that would be the end of a delightful story. My money says she ends up as the personal assistant to the president or general manager, sealing her doom as a new woman.
Then, I am looking for an attorney to discover the fraud by his late mother's husband and restitution be made, less of course, the lawyers fees.
Thank you For sharing this with us via The Big Closet.

Another Welcome Chapter

I'm curious to see where this is going.

Poor Toni has had a raw deal, frankly though accidental electrocutions happen, this one seems suspicious. Was Mom murdered by this bastard? That the boy was so well treated by his real parents to be cast of with almost nothing? I think the stepfather at a minium lied about the will being changed, or at worst is a murderer.

I hope Toni the girl has the guts to confront this Australian jerk, and the creepy landlord and get his/her rightful inheritance and/or justice.

I hope to see Home Alone continued at some point. You have a gift for creating believable characters.

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

A Great Story

Susan, your story is a very good read. Its got me glued waiting for the next installment. With all the bad luck Tony has had, I am mentally picturing him as Bruce Campbell (film - Army of Darkness). Hehehe. I can tell this will be probably another 11 chapters to resolve itself out but it will be worth the wait. You did well with Home Alone (of which Im still waiting for another installment) and have expanded your abilities with this tale.

Sephrena Miller