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I'd like to take a moment and give a fellow author here a bit of a push.

I've been reading RobertaME's autobiographical work, "For God so loved the world", and while a lot of it is painful, it is ultimately a story of faith and survival.

If you're so inclined, she'd love feedback on the piece, which is found here:

https://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/90781/god-so-loved-world

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I don't know what to say...

RobertaME's picture

The idea that you would like my story enough to say something about it in your blog is...

I'm stunned! Thank you! So very much! I'm truly honored you think it's even half as good as what you write... the princess of flash fiction! ::giggle::

Just... wow!

See!

I told you!

Giving an Author a Push

laika's picture

Wow. A recommendation from Dorothy is an endorsement worth noting; and good incentive for checking out Roberta's stories (I confess I found the PDF format a bit offputting for some reason, but I can get over that...). That's the kind of push any author here would love. Not like...

Back in the 1970's I had a job as a grain sampler for the California Department of Agriculture; more often than not working in a grain elevator at the Port of Long Beach that was 8 or 10 stories high. It was a wonderful job. Those were looser, less responsible times and I pretty much just drank beer all day with the steveadors and longshoremen and the occasional foreign shiphand. The floors were a long distance apart, and each had these roll-up garage doors that opened in the building's sides to let out the grain dust that filled the air when the conveyors were running, with only a single waist-high bar across them to keep someone from stepping out into the air like Wile E. Coyote and going SPLAT!

So one day on one of my breaks I was sitting in one of these big doorways with my legs dangling over the edge writing a story on my clipboard (no laptops back then); the cars down in the parking lot 100 feet below looking like toys; when this longshoreman who worked there came up to warn me: "You shouldn't sit there!"

I told him, "Don't worry, I'm good with heights. I won't fall. And if I sit anywhere else the dust gunks up my pen."

But his concern was that somebody might come up and push me off to my death.

"That's nuts!” I laughed, “Why would anyone do that? They'd lose their good union job at the very least."

He said that you never know what's going through someone's head, and they might give in to "a sudden impulse", born of some dark murderous psycho problem.

I though it had to be the most ridiculous thing I had ever heard, and a bizarre thing to worry about, so I continued sitting there every break and lunch time for the three years I worked there.

And then one night, a decade and several jobs later (I was even living in a different city by then) the weirdest thing happened. I bolted awake from a dead sleep at 3 am; with my heart racing from the sudden realization:

Holy Shit! It was HIM!!! The reason my friend was worried about such a strange thing was because he was the one who had a compulsion to do that, and for all I know had voices in his head telling him: "K|LL! K|LL! K|LL!!"
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Or maybe not, maybe it was just something he had heard about someone doing. But I don't sit on ledges like that any more without good reason and the absolute certainty that there aren't any crazy people around; because that's the kind of push an author doesn't want!
~hugs, Veronica

Gift Wrapped Push

It's apparent that a push isn't tangible. I just tried to buy one on Amazon and they don't have them. Not even a cheap knock off.

I can remember standing in line in grade school and being chastised for being "Pushie" which was not good.

Perhaps rather than a push what a writer wants is a pat -- on the back.

Jill

Angela Rasch (Jill M I)

You're probably right

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Yes, getting that from Dorothy was totally unexpected and a deep honor!

As for your story, you're probably right. I mean, why would he even bring it up unless it occurred to him to do it? Not that I think he was some sort of homicidal maniac, I mean, he didn't do it... but often I think that most people have those inclinations, but don't act on them because they fear what will happen to them if they do. I'll admit that I myself have, from time to time, had some pretty vicious thoughts of acting out violence against certain people... but I don't act on them. It's natural, I think.

This is why jails and prisons work. Their very existence is a deterrent to anti-social behavior for the vast majority who might be inclined to do something crazy "just for kicks." Perhaps your "friend" felt that desire to push you off the ledge, just to see what would happen, but never did because he feared getting caught and punished.

I've been watching a lot of old TV cop shows lately (Adam 12, Dragnet, Kojak, etc.) and they actually talked about those sort of things... that the entire criminal justice system existed for the purpose of keeping good people from becoming bad ones through neglect of their conscience. I think it was Pete Malloy who once said, "We're out there keeping the honest people honest, Reed. We give people's conscience some needed backup when they need it. Just seeing us rolling on the street is enough, sometimes." or words to that effect. (I can't remember what episode it was, there were 178 and I don't remember things verbatim like I used to)

Anyway, you're probably right. It was probably him. I'm glad he didn't, though! We wouldn't have you here!

By the way, if anyone does read any of my stories, I would LOVE feedback, no matter what you think of them. Positive, negative, curiosity, critique... I just want to know what people think. That's why I posted them up. I read all these stories here and I see so many great conversations about them, and I wanted to be part of that. I'm not after praise... honestly! My ego doesn't need stroked. I have a good life without it and don't need or even want that. I just want to know people's thoughts about them. What did they make you think? Did you agree with the point of the story? Disagree? Didn't get it?

The only dumb question is the one never asked!

Hugs everyone!