Hi!
Critiques of story chapters are requested. See below for link to Critique Circle.
It is free, but you do have to become a Critique Circle Member (free also).
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A young woman is killed but survives by blending bodies with a PTSD veteran who is committing suicide.

Over the College summer break, a suicidal PTSD veteran and a young woman without a body are forced to share a body. This saves both of them, but what is the cost. Sarah and Alex struggle to save each other and still survive and thrive as individuals. Each has deep secrets that threaten their life, with no obvious solution. A story of love, compassion, and growth. Their gradual understanding of their needs, hopes, and abilities makes them both better persons. While they fight each other for understanding and priority of needs, they must be continually aware that there are people, such as the one who originally tried to kill her, and groups including the government that want to capture them, and force them to use what they discover for unknown uses.

This novel is being reviewed and is available for reading of the rough draft in a private queue in Critiques Circle. My ID is the same there. Once there, please get a (free) membership then PM indicating desire to be a member of my private critique circle. Cheers!
http://critiquecircle.com/novel.asp?action=view&id=2301