Hello everyone. ITs christine again.
Well I have a few questions I hope someone answer for me.
Well this all started around 5 years ago when I started reading TG fiction and I came across this pretty well writen story Called Alicia’s Summer Vacation. The main character was a 12 year old boy was well Written but the intense cruelty of it all to an innocent child made my blood boil.
IT was about an older sister that must have come from hell, and a apathetic brother that allowed his older sister Kathy to feminize their little brother Al, and enslave him as the houses maid. Their parentd died so they left the eldest brother incharge of the household.

What annoyed me so bad, was that he seemed to go thought it silently and his sister was just so outrageously cruel and sadistic to the little boy. No real motivation for it all was offered, except at the very end when hes crying she says she always wanted a sister.
The boy was informed at the very end that his brother signed him into school as Alicia and it ended. I cant imagine it going any further and while its reasonable to assume he might go though the summer being isolated and femininzed once he hits school well thats that. whats his motivation for being silent then.

It kept bugging me so I decided to write a finish for the story but that short story, free him kept bugging me, because the main story was so annoying, so i decided to change the boy a little but then everything has to change. Every single scene.
So from there i decided to write my entirely own story but keep the sister and her friend and the main sequence of events up to a point. Give the sister a strong motivation and the other woman. If i could make it somewhat plausible.
Im curious if that is ok.

I am assuming it is since thats exactly what tigger did with her seasons, what slothrop did with his angel at least to a point.
and what bluto did with his return. there all wonderful stories.