I had no idea that it would be such a headach to order in Spain. I knew the language difference so I thought I prepaired. I took several years of spanish in college, I have a friend thats mexican that she helped me also. I took a trip to Madrid Spain thinking that I knew enough spanish to get by reasonibly but no where near fleuntly.
So imagin my shock when I tried to talk to a waiter the first day only to get a dumb look back that told me 'What is this moron trying to say to me' lol.
How ever I had been on a trip overseas recently and I injured myself over there. I ccame back in alot of pain in my back. That has prevented me from sitting at the computer and typing. I am finally getting back to my stories which I totally intend on finishing, when I am able.
I posted a very short one for you all tonight and I hope it is good. It was all i could do for tonight as it hurts to sit in a chair for any long period of time.
one thing that always dumbfounds me in TG fiction is they seem to always have some doctor or nurse willing to perform extremly illegal treatments on unwilling subjects, or children. Where do they come from lol. where do you find such doctors or nurses willing to risk their licenses and their livelyhoods or prison
I started writing a new story, I posted the first chapter on this site and on Crystals. I am enjoying the idea and writing it. How ever I wonder if this is a good idea. I havent really recieved the feedback I had hoped for. I guess many readers dont like horror with a transgender twist in it.
On crystals, I got this review: For pity's sake, let us know it's a story about vampires so we don't waste our time. "Vampire venom?" Puhlease!
I am working on an idea for a new story I intend on posting here, but, yeah theres a but, I think this would really work good in first person POV. But there are several characters that I would like to go into to that are quite important for the flow of the story.
So I am thinking of entering the main characters POV and then changing POV to another to show the scene from another
Is that Possible, WOuld that be too jaring? Has that ever been done before for a published noval
I have a few thoughts that I want to let you know. The first is that this story of mine isnt entirely original. I got the original idea for this story from Linda Lafrance and her story "The story of Prissy" In that story a sexist boy makes a bunch of nasty comments during a debate and the girls get him back by feminizing him for a weekend. They inflict terrible humiliations on him and he submissively goes though it even in the end, he seems to have no backbone.
Someone told me that my latest story attempt was very disjointed, so can someone tell me what that means, and how I can correct that problem? How can I make my story join?
Rami posted a message to my story accusing me of trying to decieve the readers and I honestly did not. He said many more tags needed to be applied and I knew.
Hello everyone it is me here. I don't know if anyone noticed but I posted a story here a few months ago. I thought it was a good start at a long serial but my muse went away so progress stoped. I am sorry if anyone is upset. Well he returned from where ever he went to :) but now he seems to want me to take another direction. I have another idea for a story but I need some advice on it so I will give a few details. There was a good cartoon I used to watch way back in the 80s about a supercomputer that could project holographic images anywhere.
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