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For those of you who have read Djinn Games, thank you for the comments and kudos.
But I changed my mind about something. The title just hadn't felt right to me, so the story is now 'The Price of Betrayal', so don't jump on it thinking it's another new one and get disappointed, please.
Why did I change it after posting the first chapter?
I dunno, it just felt right?
Maggie
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Don't feel bad Maggie
I've changed my working titles from all the way up to the last minute. I don't think I've changed one after they've been posted though. Coming up with the right one is tough anyways. I'm simply hoping it doesn't take long for chapter two to come out. Talk about how you've really grabbed us readers in the first chapter. You've done it again with this very much darker story of yours.
hugs
Grover
Thank you
For the tip, and I agree... your original title sort of led me to believe there'd be some sort of magical coliseum like thingy he'd be trapped into...
This new one feels a little better, and I can only assume will become an even greater fit in future chapters.
Just who's betrayal is what the price of? I shall read on to find out!
Abigail Drew.
For the better
Apart from anything else, I have a sneaky feeling that someone has used Djinn Games already.
I thought that perhaps it was a re-post, but as I read it I realised I hadn't seen this before.
Xi
I think the title is "Djinn"-uinely better!
heh heh. Djinn-uinely, get it? ;P
Does that mean if you ask her
Does that mean if you ask her for a drink, you'll get a Djinn and tonic?
I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.
No, more like
Djinn-ger ale! ^.^
It's a woman's prerogative.
I live to change my mind and confound males. :)
Gwendolyn
Gee, Maggie...
Of all the Djinn joints you had to walk into....
Love, Andrea Lena
Don't worry Drea
We'll be Djinn-tle!
Nope
Step djinn-gerly.
I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.
Title?
Your story has a title?
The words "Maggie Finson" are enough for me...
Penny
Author
Hey! I get it Penny. You know something is up when you buy a book and the author's name takes up half the cover. I've had to search for the title of the darn thing which is sometimes in nearly fine print.
In this case. BY MAGGIE FINSON has real weight and value. Maggie you make laugh, cry and even angry like now at a certain Persian Sorcerer. Maggie you rock! :)
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Grover