I know what you mean but you will get the thoughts soon we all do ..... you story is very good and clean fun ...
we know that her dad is looking for her and dosnot have any idea what is going on ... rocko will be the key to the problem and protect her from dad..
after vinny kidnaps her to make her tell whear andrew is and dad is there trys to bear her her phone is in her bra and can be traced ...
when she recovers from this shock she has to go back to school and bullys spot her and try the same stuff that they did before beating her
but get caught and are arrested. for assault sexual harrasment and a number of other things ... She gets to play the giutar for some friends and
a whol new thing happens when the whole school hears her singing over the intercom some one turned it on and she is now famous in that school ..