Just take a look at the comment I wrote you on your latest transbike. Trust me on this Stannie-kun, no one starts out a genius in writing, you just have to work at it, but you need someone who is you're real life friend to proof it for you, or to read it non-judgementally. This site is a story place for amateurs like myself and above, however you haven't quite hit that mark. So pwease, just stop, take some time to think things through, and do some research on how people really talk, that's all ^^

I just got to be me :D