I have just posted a new story. This is one that has been on the backburner for a while as I concentrated on River. There are only four more chapters to River, and two are already at the editors, with a third nearly written. So I decided to get a start on this story. I have five episodes written (more if I can find the right stick where I put the update). These will be posted over the next week or two, and then I will have to fall back to a weekly routine.
I want to mention that some readers may object to the strong religious flavor of this story. I know a lot of readers here are non-believers. I am one of them. But for this story I am taking a very pro-religion tack, especially at the start. Hopefully a good story will keep people reading. Like always, this is an R-rated story, so those looking for a story to read with one hand will be disappointed.
Let me know if you like the story, here or in the comments.
I do promise that River will not end. I have already written the first chapter of the sequel, which is when Mark goes to college. That won't be posted for a bit though.
Dawn Natelle
Comments
The older I get...
The older I get the more I realize how much mankind is clueless about the universe around it. Existence of god becomes more and more plausible.
Your approach to using god and entities associated with god in your story is quite nice. The subject of suicide is unsettling as it and thoughts of it are very common in our community. The collateral psychological damage that suicides inflict on others is well described and resolved through divine intervention.
I believe the first two chapters are very well written.
P.S. i have had similar dark thoughts myself.