Ghouls, Costumes and Perfume Part 2 Conclusion!

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Ghouls, Costumes, and Perfume? Part 2


By Nikki Thong

This is a true Halloween story about eighteen year old twins a boy and girl Nikki and Ann, and their quest to win a costume contest that turns into an adventure that changes their lives forever. Will Halloween ever be the same for them or anyone who reads this? The story does contain a couple of hints at sexual feelings but no real sex, just the desires that normal eighteen year olds get at that age when bodies are close and lips are met. I didn’t want to have to break this into two parts but then thought I should. This is the big finish.

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The next day we spent most of it getting ready for the Halloween costume party, three hundred dollars was the grand prize and they were determined to win it. Plus there were various smaller prizes too. The party was being put on by the local community center and was a rather large event, it was only for teens ages thirteen to eighteen this was our last year. The last year with most of our friends we had known for a long time, most would be going off to college or jobs and lives as young adults soon leaving their childhoods behind, left with only memories. Hopefully, good ones that would influence their growing adulthood in a positive way.

It took quite a bit of time getting the costumes on, most of it spent on hair and makeup. We had each put eighteen inch extensions in the back of their hair clipping them in close to the scalp blending them in, in back so they hung out longer down our backs. Extensions were put in locations on the sides as well some towards the front making long streaks of color down the sides of our faces. Nikki's were a bright purple and Ann's were bright red.

Our makeup was perfect to add color to our faces matching our dresses with sparkly gems stuck in star burst like lines under their eyes on their cheeks. Our eye shadow heavy and colorful, Ann's shades of pink with red glittery triangles in the outer corners of her eyes, mine purple with glittery bright purple both of us using Maybelline's Color Explosion Eye shadows. They had the effect of colored masks around our eyes. Ann had bright red glossy lipstick on and mine was a deep glossy purple berry color. My cheeks had a light purple blush Ann's light red, it gave us the opposite look Ann sweet and innocent, me more dark and naughty and sexy.

Our dresses were gorgeous and cute, with just a hint of sexiness, but, not slutty. Ann had got them both at the costume store and all the accessories too. We were the Dolly Twins!

Mine was the Dark Dolly in black and purple, the top part black with purple polka dots the bottom of the under skirt was black and purple angled stripes. The back of my dress had a large sweetheart cut out showing a large portion of my back, we were both wearing stick on bras to give our breasts the same sort of look. The dresses had cap ruffled trimmed short sleeves and rounded neck lines with cute little square aprons hanging from around our waists with a big heart trimmed in contrasting colors on the front of the aprons. Mine was black and purple Ann's red and white. Ann's dress was identical to mine, except hers was red with white polka dots and stripes, and white sleeves.

We had short fluffy mini tulle multi layered petticoats under our skirts to hold them out, but we added little mini tulle fluffy belle shaped mini tutus to puff them out even more making the little polyester satin dresses stick out even more. We wore pretty frilly satin panty bloomers under them with three rows of patterned wide lace from waist to the middle of our bottoms, the lace circling the panties. My panties were bright purple satin with black lace; Ann's were red with white lace. My petticoat was black, my tutu purple, Ann's petticoat was red her tutu white.

On our legs we wore stay up thigh highs that had alternating two inch wide horizontal stripes circling our legs, Ann's red and white, mine black and purple. We both wore Mary Jane shoes with wide four inch heels and double buckles over our feet, mine black, Ann's white. Ann put big purple satin bows in my hair at the sides and red in hers, I of course had the glittery bat hair comb in mine as well. We both had lace and satin chokers around our necks that matched our dresses too.

When we were finished with our costumes we posed in the mirror practicing our mirror image stances and poses making sure we stayed in our characters doing the opposite of what the other did. I felt so good and we looked adorable, I couldn’t wait for everyone to see us, especially Tony, why I cared so much I didn’t know, yet. We went out and showed mom and dad, they laughed and clapped happily playing along and taking pictures of us. Dad even posed for a couple with us sitting on his lap Ann smiling innocent and me looking sort of naughty and playful.

We were about to leave when Ann grabbed my hand dragging me shuffling on my heels to my room, she pointed at the pink box I put in the closet I knew what she wanted and I pulled it down. Ann teasing me about my panties showing when I reached like that, I just shrugged flashing them at her giggling. We both sprayed a generous cloud of Rock Princess on ourselves Ann sticking the small one in her little glittery red purse with her other stuff, and I put the larger one in my little black purse that had a white skull face on the front with a purple bow on its head.

When I was putting the box back in the closet another card fell out a smaller one, I thought it was the same one but Ann said it wasn't. I opened it staring at it. I handed it to Ann. She looked at me her face filled with fear and caution.

"Are you going to go Nikki?" She asked grabbing my arm.

"I have to Ann; he says he knows what happened at Dad's lab. I have to find out; maybe I can get it back." I told her. "Listen, you go ahead, I have a quick stop to make, don’t worry I'll be there shortly just wait for me in the parking lot."

I left in Ann's car Ann took mine in case we were being tailed by the security guys from Dad's work. Hopefully they would follow Ann thinking she was me. I was right they took off after her and I left a moment later with no tail and made a quick stop. I arrived at the large brick community center building in the sprawling park and family complex seeing Ann sitting in the car and parking next to her. She nodded her head back to a few spots behind her and I looked seeing the black SUV of the men who followed her.

We got out of the car walking happily hand in hand to the building the light fading quickly as we went inside. We both knew the man and woman who were taking tickets at the door and checking us in, they loved our costumes and couldn’t believe it was me in all that tulle and makeup. A DJ and announcer announced us as we made our entrance calling us the Dolly Twins, Ann the Sweet Rag Dolly and me Nikki the Purple Dark Dolly. We minced into the dimly lit ballroom doing a spin holding hands doing some cute little poses and moves and dancing into the room to the applause of the large crowd of party goers.

Then we walked around talking to people we saw we knew laughing and commenting on each other's costumes, I whispered to Ann that from what I see here unless the judges are blind we got the win in the bag, she laughed saying not to get to cocky. While we got soft drinks and milled about talking to friends all of whom were totally shocked how good I looked in my costume and Ann in hers and how much we looked alike but different we played our parts. I did get some teasing from some of the guys that always thought I was a little strange anyway a couple of them giving me crap about wearing such pretty panties and making some fag comment.

Right in front of a bunch of girls and my sister I grabbed one of the guys around the neck pulling him to me, putting one hand on his chest and asked, what you don’t want to play with Dark Dolly, I bet you would love to play with Dolls like us acting overtly sexy. The guy blushed deeply stuttering a weak denial when I said I could feel his hard on through his pants. He practically ran away in fright while we all laughed. The girls all saying I was too much and to come dance. So we did and danced a lot having fun like teenage girls.

I kept looking around for Tony, wondering what he was wearing, he had kept it secret because we kept our costumes secret and wouldn’t tell him. It was when I went outside to get some air and one of the guys from earlier had followed me out and cornered me threatening to make me suck his dick, then Tony suddenly appeared. He grabbed the guy by the neck punching him in the gut pushing the air from his lungs then telling him to get lost or he would get worse. Tony was a big muscular guy and a bit of a jock but, still my friend. He had just rescued me and I found myself in his arms thanking him shaking in fright.

He was holding me tightly affectionately stroking my bared back telling me he was here to protect me, and suddenly he was pulling my chin up with his fingers telling me how pretty I was and he always knew I would be dressed like this. I felt so feminine and frail in his arms so vulnerable and good too, and before I knew it our lips were pressed tightly against each others in a passionate kiss that had me trembling and tingling from head to toe and especially in the middle somewhere. Tony had one arm tightly around my waist holding my lower back the other on my neck and chin as I slipped my hands around his neck our lips entwined wetly fighting in our mouths.

I was tingling all over and lightheaded and felt my clitty bent back tightly in the layers of satin covering it pulsing and tingling in time with my heartbeat. My whole body felt warm, hot even as his lips and tongue worked at mine, I heard a little soft girlish whimper escape my lips and I felt a trickle of warm pre-cum seep into my satin panty crotch dampening it. I rubbed my thighs together enjoying the feelings that were rushing through my body.

"Tony, I, I, d-don’t think we should…" I whispered between kisses into his mouth my voice breathy.

"Shhhhh, Nikki, I have always seen you like this, dreamed of you being like this. I have held this in for far too long." He whispered back then pulled me up tightly in his arms off the ground like a doll as he kissed and sucked at my neck making me shudder trembling femininely in his strong arms. His chest was pressing firmly against my lightly padded small boy breasts.

Suddenly my whole body felt warm then hot, especially my chest I thought in my mind I wish I had beautiful young firm breasts to feel pressing against him instead of nothing. Suddenly the warmth grew more intense till it grew to a fierce burning then a deep pain that was pain but wasn't, more like pressure I felt my skin getting tighter on my chest and felt muscles burning like I had done a hundred push ups. My back hurt my arms felt weak and strange. My nipples felt like they were on fire. It felt like they were growing, stretching, and my breasts swelling pushing out against Tony's chest. I groaned loudly in pain then cried out.

I pushed against him with my hands weakly feeling dizzy, Tony held me kissing and nibbling my neck moaning affections for me. My feet kicking in the air Tony finally set me down loosening his grip letting me slide down his body, we could both see a glowing reddish light coming off my chest till it slowly faded to nothing as I held his arms tightly in my hands my purple fingernails digging into his black long jacket. He looked down puzzled at me, concern on his face. Gasping for breath slowly the pain subsided.

"What's wrong baby? Are you OK?" He asked gently, I put my hands to my chest holding it feeling the difference. My eyes grew wide and I looked down at my chest pulling the top of my dress away.

"Oh my God, what the heck?" I gasped panting as I saw that my small barely A-cup puffy boy breasts were now full round B-cups pushing out the stick on bra cups. "My breasts grew, holy shit my breasts grew bigger."

"Holy shit they are, how?" Tony said looking closely seeing the obvious extra flesh and swelling pushing my dress out more.

"I don’t know but I have to find my sister now." I hoarsely screamed.

We quickly got back inside finding my sister she said something about yes Nikki I see Tony found you that's great, I'm busy right now, as I pulled at her sleeve. Ann was dancing with a nice looking guy that I had never seen before or didn’t know at least. I grabbed her arm telling her it's important. She excused herself and followed me behind her to the girl's room. I showed her, I thought she was going to faint. I explained what happened and she said well if that's all you have to do wish some bigger ones for her while I'm at it, chuckling and the other girls parts if I wanted them maybe they would show up too.

Of course it ended up in a are you crazy I have breasts now argument leading my sister to proclaim exasperatedly that they are now bigger than hers thank you very much. That brought us back to laughing insanely at the irony. The thing is I wasn't sure how or why it happened, what I said or thought, Ann suggested I go do what I was doing when it happened which led to me blurting out that I was making out with Tony, which led to an uncomfortable a-hah moment. Finally it was agreed I don’t do anything else right now fearing I might grow a vagina on my face next or something equally horrible. Then I yelling at Ann, great now you put that in my head, shit. Kittens, puppies, and rainbows I started to think.

Tony and I danced a bunch of songs when Ann and I returned, the strange feeling of the weight on my chest and the feelings of pushing them against him on the dance from was not lost on me. Also just walking was now a whole new experience I found myself having to now get used to a slightly different center of gravity, I was grateful they weren't larger.

The judges six of them four adults and two teens had talked to us and were amazed and fascinated that I was actually a boy, I even had to show them my driver's license to make them fully believe it, which either a made me feel really good or a little sad. I decided I felt better about it than I did sad. I liked being a girl.

It was nearing the end and the winners were announced, to everyone's agreement we won the grand prize happily taking our prize in an envelope and sashes proclaiming us the winners of the Halloween Bash! Tony even won a prize, dinner for two for best look-alike movie star costume, he was Neo from the Matrix and he did look like him kind of. I was happy he won something too.

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Then came the time I had been both dreading and anxiously waiting for, time to go and meet this Mr. Durac. We said our goodbyes and I told Ann I would meet them later at the all might diner. I hugged Tony goodbye and he pulled me up kissing me deeply while Ann looked on wide eyed, her mouth agape. I got in Ann's car and drove off while the waited decoying the guys in the black SUV. Ann had gotten in my car waiting while Tony and a couple of others hung around talking. That was when the card fell out of my visor and Ann looked at the name written on it for the first time.

She kept reading it saying the name, and then finding a pen wrote the letters unscrambling them in different spellings, till she hit on the one that I already had figured out.

"Oh shit, shit, damn. No Nikki it can't be." She cried out loud, and then started typing on her phone frantically hitting send, while Tony looked on puzzled.

"What was that all about? Who is Al Durac? Why did Nikki have to go meet him?" He asked concern on his face. Ann handed him the note and what she wrote. "Dracula, what, Dracula really, no fucking way, Ann that's insane."

"Yes and Nikki is on her way to meet him right now. Do you know where this Summit Bar and Grill is?"

"Yeah." Tony said getting in the passenger seat Ann started the car and sped off the SUV following a good distance behind thinking this was a waste of time. While speeding through town Ann got lucky and lost the SUV following her, the security agents giving up.

In the mean time Ann's phone chimed and Tony picked it up reading the text message showing it to Ann it read simply: I KNOW!!!!

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I walked into the dark bar; it was dank and run down not the sort of place a well dressed guy like Durac would frequent, I thought. Looking around I spotted a couple of guys drinking at the bar talking. The bar tender looked strangely at me for a moment then ignored me as I looked around walking towards the back of the bar. I passed several booths looking seeing they were all empty.

Finally I saw a dark shadow far in the corner; I walked slowly closer my fingers trembling. I took a deep breath letting it out slowly, I was scare afraid at what I might find. It was him, he was seated half doubled over he looked different older, gaunt and thinner. His hair also was grayer his face mostly hidden. I stopped by the table then slid in opposite him.

"So my dear child you came, good, your braver than I thought, or foolish." He laughed a slow rasping laugh his hand slid out across the table into the light the flesh looked translucent sickly white and cracked. I shivered seeing it feeling revulsion.

"I see you are wearing my little gift, it mixes beautifully with your natural scent." He said sniffing in.

"I, I want what you stole, you hurt people, my father, my family taking what you did. You have to give it back." I implored. "It's wrong, people are going to get in trouble, give it back and no one will know about you."

"My dear child do you really think you're in any position to make demands?" He said then began laughing maniacally which turned into a dry raspy cough.

"I'm not your child and you don’t sound too good." I observed defiance in my voice.

"You look lovely by the way, the Gothic look suits you. I would have loved to have seen you in something from that period, the woman then were so, elegant and submissive, you would have fit right in. Of course you're not quite a woman are you?" He pointed out smiling wryly, coughing again. "Part maybe, oh but you can be, cough, so much more, cough, cough, if you will it."

"What are you talking about?" I asked watching him closely, wary of some trick.

"Nikki my dove, I have seen so much, so many eons have passed, so much time alone waiting, waiting, and searching for the answers the final equation. We came here long ago, eons ago, rulers of the stars and became such to the primitive people of this planet." He explained, his voice weakening and rasping. "We once had a great civilization large cities the primitive people on this planet worshipped us as Gods, fed us, or rather we fed on them. They kept us alive thriving for eons, centuries without change."

I watched him as he painted a picture with his words in my mind, of a time long before the world we now know; perhaps those ancient astronaut nuts weren't that far off I thought.

"The balance was kept for ages, the humans thrived as well, we taught them, brought them up almost to our level many of them at least. We gave them long life and powers to control their environment, their bodies, they lived long fruitful lives." He said his head lolling back coughing.

"Then they wanted too much, they started to breed with others on the planet, the populations grew too large, cough, our scientists found the enzyme in their blood that we fed on was changing, mutating, losing its purity, too much breeding watering down the strength we needed." I heard the deep sadness in his voice as he spoke. "There was war, so much death on both sides. The blood changed, in the early days a small feeding on one could sustain us for years, by the time we were cut down to but a few hundred it took dozens to sustain our power for a few weeks. We couldn’t sustain our selves or the race much longer."

He coughed greatly black fluid spraying from his mouth across the wall beside him. He wiped at his mouth with his sleeve. I wrinkled my nose in disgust, and pity.

"The last remaining went into a type of hibernation underground a sort of waiting death, sleeping for me to return and save them. One of us could survive feeding often. But, my feeding usually kills now; it doesn’t give the gift any longer except on rare occasions with one who has remnants of the gene from the old race. I have found few in the last three hundred years, and can feed a small bit giving me some extra power and you the gift; a trade off as it were." He laughed coughing fitfully again blackness dribbling down his chin.

"You are one such descendant. Oh I wanted to drain you my dear, it took great strength of will not to, I tasted just a bit, tasting your sweetness pumping through your veins, but, I needed you. Needed you to help me reach the others, awaken them to fix the blood, your father's lab found the cure, they don’t know it, but I do." He reached out to me his hand shaking violently his cough weak and deep shaking his body, I leaned back afraid of his touch. "Please just a taste my dear to help me finish, to sa-sa-save my r-race."

He wheezed deeply his hand shaking on the table his fingernails sharp and pointed his skin almost clear.

"We are like the white buffalo I, su-suppose, no, no, more to, roam, eh my child…" He rasped deeply his breath shuddering rattling in his chest. In one swift motion I pulled the bat shaped hair comb from my hair raising it gleaming in my hand.

"Your time is over Durac, time for the white buffalo to die off." With a flash I brought my hand down hard the long sterling silver spikes hitting him in the neck opening his throat up, the weak skin giving way easily. I expected a shower or spray of blood I turned ducking away, but only a weak, meager trickle ran out. I looked back seeing the look on his face, a wry smile on his cracked thin lips, his face sallow and thinning, his skin drying out before my eyes.

Watching sadly as he died before me I felt my sister beside me, I glanced at her seeing the look of horror and revulsion her hand slipped in mine. Tony was behind me his strong hand on my shoulder squeezing it. We watched silently as he faded to a form of ashen dust.

"My God Nikki what was he?" Ann asked softly watching in disbelief tightly clutching my hand.

"Just the last of the white buffalo sis, all long dead now, ashes to ashes." I answered softly, I would explain it later, I stood up backing away from the table looking at the bat lodged in his neck, and I picked up the mini data drive he had set on the table with his last breath. It contained the secrets he needed, but so did we. Then in a puff of wind he was gone, the bat clattered metallically to the table I picked it up turning taking Tony's hand and my sister's and walked out the door.

Epilogue:

I gave the data to my father, he brought it back saying his daughter had found out who took it and not to ask any questions, they were more than happy to just have it back. Dad's company actually put ten million dollars into a secret off shore account as a reward for me to use as I want. Heck they will make billions on this new synthetic blood formula so they can afford it. My sister is in school and doing really great, of course we are closer than ever. Tony and I have been travelling, seeing the world; we made love looking at the Eiffel tower last night, maybe the Parthenon next week who knows. He seems to appreciate and love me in either form I take though I prefer to stay female most of the time.

You see I found I can change my gender at will. One of the side effects, part of the gift from Durac, or Dracula I guess, I feel good about that as now I can be who and what I want when I want. I also can bend peoples wills a little, give them a nudge to my way of thinking, it comes in handy at times. I have no idea what else I can do I will learn as I go I guess.

At least I don’t have a taste for blood or any of that nonsense, old myths I guessed, like the stake in the heart and garlic crap. I think it was his lack of the right blood that killed him finally, or maybe he had grown tired of the loneliness and hanging on to something he knew was long dead. He also mentioned longer life as part of the gift too, who knows how long I have only time will tell, either way it will be long and fun, and filled with pleasure and adventure, and I'm happy, really happy with my life now. Then again I always was I just didn’t know it yet.

"Tony, will you stop I'm trying to write, mmmmm, yes, that feels good, well guess I gotta go, see ya!" Giggles.

The End?

Authors Note:

As I said at the end of part 1 I, originally I wrote this as a multi part story on Fictionmania posted this month, you can find it under my name their sissy nikki thong, there it is titled Ghosts, Ghouls, Goblins and Panties? I know I don’t like the title either and have wanted to change it. That story is quite a bit different has a lot more details and more adventure to it as Nikki goes on an adventure with Al Durac. There are also some pretty steamy and very romantic love scenes with Tony and Nikki as they discover their true feelings for each other. Check it out if you like.

Please leave a comment, especially if you read the other version I would love to know which version people like. I have been told I write some of the hottest sex and love scenes most have ever read on FM, but, they are there to advance the story and usually are between two lovers not just there with feeling and great deep emotion, some borrowed from my own life.

Nikki Thong

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Nice tale

It's certainly a different take on the halloween story - hopefully courtesy of dad's company's research, Ann can be treated to longer life (should she so wish) - after all, it sounds as thought they were fairly close and Ann's costume idea did contribute to plot development.

Meanwhile, from your brief synopsis of some of the events in the original tale over at FM, it sounds as though you've taken your time to tweak it to suit the slightly different tastes of this site's readership. Well done.

--B


As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!

Thanks B

I'm so glad you enjoyed the tale. It did take quite a bit to tailor it for a different audience or at least to make it a more subdued story for a wider audience. Not that the other version was just meant to be fap fodder. As I said the sex though rather explicit in its descriptions had great purpose. They helped bring Nikki to the awakening of her feminine self that she had denied and kept hidden, who hasn't done that?

In the other version it was that love scene that she discovered she could change herself. Also how she slowly came to learn of Tony's hidden love for her and her acceptance of it. We are after all sexually driven creatures, we humans, that and our pain and how we deal with it are some of the main driving forces that make us all who we are. "I need my pain it makes me what I am" James T. Kirk Star Trek V.

Peace!

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"

another story perhaps!

Maybe another time Stan we will revisit that avenue and see what happens.

Peace!

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"

I like this ver better Nikki

I'm probably just old fashioned but!

LoL
Rita

I'm a dyslexic agnostic insomniac.

'Someone who lies awake at night wondering if there's a dog.'

Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)

LoL
Rita

Not old fashioned

Just fashioned! Giggles Rita. Thanks though hun, I'm glad you liked it, it was a lot of work trimming it down and still trying to keep it true to itself and still keep it a little sexy, I am guilty of painting pictures with words that some might not want to look at, but still cant take their eyes off.

The sex scenes I have written are always full of the emotion that the characters are feeling, the pleasure and the pain and the desire for more, I dont do crude, even the stories or chapters I have written that I rated triple x were because the sex was used to push that part of the story along not just for the shock or "wet factor".

Hugs!

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"

Dracula Doesn't Bite!

It's not easy coming up with a new twist on such an old standard. Actually, I had always thought that the Dracula theme had been "done to death" (pun intended). But you took that tired, dusty old tale, added your own spice to it, and came up with something completely new. Bravo Nikki!

Oh my I am flattered!

Thanks so much Lora! You don't know how much that means to me! I'm happy you found my twist entertaining and different! Love that to on you in that picture too.

Oh my white ball of fluff of a cat Sugar, is meowing at me insisting I follow her, what have you gotten into now? Back in a bit!

Hugs

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"

I didn't finish reading

I didn't finish reading this, I stopped when you rushed past the attempted rape by the outline of a rapist (it would need quite a bit more description to become a cardboard cutout). Part one was well written if a bit rushed to my taste, but this is too much. Given your description of the version on FictionMania I figure I'll try it and see how it goes.

As I said I had to edit

The story down considerably for the sake of the contest to move the story to its conclusion efficiently so it would not be too long. In its original form on fictionmania it is six parts long each over 14 thousand words, it would have been too long for this contest. Plus the way the stories are set out on this site a story that long to look write would have been twice as many parts if not more. You would still be reading it past 31 October. But thanks for reading. Please vote and leave a comment on FM.

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"

Nikki Thong

"Be loving, forgiving, open, happy, sharing, thoughtful, musical, cry a little everyday, but for goodness sakes be honest with yourself!"
"Satin makes me sooooo happy! Giggles!"