I was looking at my story stats page after a recent story post and noticed that the collateral traffic bumped too. Daily hits on the few other items I have posted here wiggled. What an interesting side effect.

Nearly every comment posted on that story pointed something out. I made a major flaw. One that probably messed up the rest of the story for those who read it. I'm not sure when I committed the mistake but it was the farthest thing from my mind as I clicked that final "post" button. Oh well. Next time, Water under the bridge, What ever will be will be. Que sera sera.

It's too bad that modern cinema is so cynical. No one could ever publish a movie like The Man Who Knew Too Much ever again. Jimmy Stewart is one of my deepest loves. And who would not want to be Doris Day. I probably will never republish that "Kitty" story. Even with corrections. I will take all the advice into consideration. I will work harder on cntinuity and feed what I have learned forward into my next attempt.

I want to thank all who pointed out my, now obvious, mistake. Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts. I love you all.

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