Tommy - The Trials and Tribulations of a Girl?

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I just posted the final chapter of "Tommy - The Trials and Tribulations of a Girl?" And I think it was the hardest thing that I've ever written.

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Final chapter

Robyn B's picture

It is with sadness that I learn that this story has come to an end.

It is with great joy that I rejoice in this story as I followed the story from the beginning. It became a regular part of my life logging on to BCTS to find the latest chapter. There are other stories, long stories that I have read and fully enjoyed but they had other worlds or extra elements to them that separated them from normal reality.

This story is different in that I related to much of what was happening in the world events of that time. Those events were real to me and it was great to have them wound into the fabric of this story.

As I do with Earth based stories I use Goggle maps and satellite imagery to help fill out the placement of the story. I then get to find out just how much of the story is placed in reality and how much is poetic license. It was good to zoom in to see La Placita Dining Rooms and all the other places mentioned in the story particularly if the locations were included in street view.

A great task finished, and Teddie, you can rest now for a while and enjoy real life until the urge to write once again takes over. I will keep an eye out for further offerings you make.

Thank you.

Robyn B
Sydney

Final Chapter

Teddie:
I salute you, your writing ability and I truly enjoyed the entire story. I understand how hard it was to finish this wonderful story. I looked forward every week to reading another couple of chapters. I enjoyed the Native American, Navajo theme and salute you once again for maintaining our interest and entertainment for so long.
“Hágoónee', Teddie.”

JaimieS

Perhaps a new (mis)adventure?

Skin-walkers or similar.

Diné all over Kai and Ajie's usual '"migration range" reporting unusual symptoms, fears, won't talk to white medical people, Nurse Ajie can't spot anything physical ... Keeps happening, and it takes our favorite couple, and Naainish, to work it all out, patch up those affected, to 'catch' and to bring the skin-walker back into Harmony and Beauty.