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The random musing of a small-time TF and TG author.
Hey, TBC readers.
I just published my third story in my "undesirable classes" universe and I thought it would be nice to hold a little competition.
I am open to suggestions on what name the main protagonist will carry. Both male and female. Of course, the name should fit the context. It should fit into the setting and the female name should fit the class.
Now I hear you cry out "But, Cassy! We don't know the place or class that is featured in the next story." Right you are. But only partially. And here my little competition starts.
Since I planned out all nine of the stories in advanced I managed to hide little nods to later stories in the ones I published so far. A trend I am eager to continue. Not only has the place being named in a previous story. The class was mentioned too. Now, connecting the dots could require some guesswork, but I am sure it can be solved. And even if you don't this could be a fun reason to reread the first three stories.
Now, I am eager to find out how many of you can pick up the bread crumbs and tell place and class. If you do send me a PM with the answer to both, as well as the names you suggest for the next story.
Until next time.
Hugs and kisses,
Cassy
Hello readers of TBC,
I sadly have to say that there won't be a part 18 of "The Lokian Way" this weekend.
Although I nearly have reached my usual word count I will not upload what I have.
The reason is that this update will be one choke full of details about the past and the magic in Mercy's world.
I already wrote nearly all of Mercy's school trip to the wax museum of famous magicians.
However, the plan was it to pair up with Mercy's next trickster group meeting.
Sadly none of it I wrote yet.
I actually spend most of my time not writing but researching background information.
That means when part 18 will come out, it will have more meat on its bones than my usual parts.
Story-wise and word count-wise.
It also means that given my writing speed that will be probably next Sunday.
I expect many new theories when the update will come out.
I apologize to all of you who were waiting for part 18.
Until next time,
Cassy
Hey readers of TBC,
I must admit I am kind of in a bind.
Lately, my progress had been marginal and what I wrote I didn't like.
My usual bag of tricks doesn't help.
Tried to clear my head by writing flash fiction.
Now I have a dozen tiny stories but next to no progress on "The Lokian Way".
Writing the ending of a story is always hard for me. Not that the next part is the ending.
But it is very very close. Trying to make sure that every last detail is right can be exhausting.
Now I could blame all this on my muse, but the truth is my muse is active.
Along with her sisters. And they all want my attention.
Just not for "The Lokian Way".
But so far my resolve hasn't wavered.
I try to get out the next part as soon as I can.
Just can't tell when that will be.
Hey, TBC readers.
There is one topic that keeps spinning in my head.
For some time now part of my creative juices run around Succubus and Incubus in stories. I mean I already published two stories about them. ("Natural Affection" and "Strange Attraction")
However, something always bothered me about it. Both, Incubus and Succubus, lure people into sex with extraordinary abilities. Be that pheromones or straight out magic. Now here is the thing. For me, logic-wise that equals to sexual assault, right?
I mean it suppresses one's right to choose to have sex or not. It is overridden by an intense need to have sex. Rational thinking is shut off. Just like if someone is roofied.
You can hardly argue that a victim is willing or being able to give consent. Even if a Succubus zooms in on a total playboy who would probably sleep with her anyway. If she uses any means to override his choice in the matter it should count as sexual assault.
Now if the topic is so cut and dry, why write a blog post about it? Well, for one I think not every author who uses Incubus and Succubus flag their stories accordingly.
On the other hand, I am currently writing a rather somber story, that deals with this topic. In it, the main protagonist is forced to do succubus type seduction under influence of a similar type of influence (extreme arousal to get him to magically seduce people he normally wouldn't want to have sex with). I do not describe the sex scenes in detail. Because I see them, for the same reasons, as rape.
But that leaves me with a certain dilemma. How do I properly flag a story that is about the moral ramifications about sexual assault with magical means without people turning away in disgust from the story because they think it will favorably highlight rape in the story.
I mean I haven't noticed it yet on TBC, but on FM a lot of forced feminization stories go into sexual assault territory without flagging it. As if it is kind of expected by the tags of forced feminization.
I would like to hear your thoughts on the topic. I will be thankful for every opinion on this topic. If you don't want to comment publically I hope you will send me a PM on this topic.
Thanks for reading.
Hugs,
Cassy
We all know those ugly crashes.
When a huge traffic accident happens and so many cars crash into each other that they start to pile up.
That's how my life currently feels like. Just with "distractions".
The least of them is work. The whole company is under pressure to finish a project on time.
That means overtime. While that doesn't prohibit me from writing, it does sap my creative juices and my will to write.
But my work offers a double whammy. I may spend one or two weeks in February on business trips.
While I can write on the trip (I write on an ASUS zenpad 8.0) I can't edit written texts for errors.
I may not even have (free) wifi in the hotel.
As if that wasn't enough I soon have to move (for various reasons).
I think you all know how stressful that can be.
To top it off the whole move has to be done by end of February too.
(Great timing universe. Great timing. *slowclaps*)
Currently, relief comes rarely and may bring its own trouble.
Today I was at the Japanese festival (in Berlin).
I go there every year and it is interesting and fascinating.
On the other hand, it was a long day and I am exhausted.
Might have eaten too many Onigiri (rice balls) too.
And of course, some of my muses used the opportunity to break out.
Now they pestering about "new and exciting" ideas.
No matter how much I remind them that "The Lokian Way" comes first.
I hope that explains why I may not be around much on TBC the next month.
Sadly this also means updates will be most unlikely to occur.
Which freakin' sucks. I wanted to finish "The Lokian Way" before the end of February.
Now I might have to push the finish line to march.
I hope you all doing well.
Sincerely, your (exhausted) Cassy Bee
Hey everyone,
I know it has been quiet around me lately.
The good news is that most of my work related troubles are resolved.
I am also nearly finished with my big move into a new apartment.
However, there is still one hurdle in my way.
Changing my landline (and DSL) will take two weeks.
So today will be the last day I have regular internet access at either home.
I should be back online on the first of March.
I may now and then take a quick peek at TBC through free wi-fi spots around the town.
But since my main editing software (Grammarly) only works online I won't be able to upload new stories until March.
However, now that I have more time on my hands again, I am looking forward to getting creative again.
After all, there is an ending to write for "The Lokian Way".
Hugs and kisses,
Cassy
Hey everyone,
you might be wondering why I haven't posted anything in a while.
Well, currently I think the world has it out for me. It really wants to make me miserable.
You might know from my last blog entry that I have moved apartments.
While that was stressful, it was successful.
With one little holdup. My ISP took over a month to hook up my new apartment.
There had been other smaller stuff, but the real bummer was yet to come.
Recently my pad crashed. Hard. The very one I do all my writing on it.
Because of the move, I hadn't had time to make a backup in so long.
Now the final verdict has been come down. I had to do a factory reset.
Which means over a month of writing is gone. Overall I guess between 30k - 40k words.
Part of it was scenes and snippets for "the lokian way". Mostly from the planned final part.
Other works had been hit harder. One story I worked on had 11k words and was about three quarters done.
Several smaller works are gone too. Progress on a dozen or so stories lost to a state of two months ago.
So, with all that given my writing mood wasn't very great.
The only silver lining I currently have is the damn scene (of "the lokian way") I have been fiddling with the last few weeks.
Because of the nature of the scene, I didn't dare to write it on my commute. So I copied it to my PC. So thankfully the one scene that gave me the most trouble in the last few weeks is saved.
I have put aside my whole Sunday to rewrite what was lost. At least for "the lokian way".
Everything else might take longer. With a little luck, I have a new part uploaded on Sunday or early Monday.
Anyway. Sorry for the long silence.
Hope to be more active again.
Hugs and kisses,
Cassy
Hey, TBC readers.
"The Lokian Way" is finally done. Don't get me wrong. I loved writing this serial, but it was time to jump to a new story. Call it "writer's fatigue" if you will, to write so long on one story.
Immediate future:
Now that the story is done I am no less busy. For one I have to re-edit "The Lokian Way" in chunks that I can post on Fictionmania. Because I am pretty sure there are some readers who want to read it but don't visit Big Closet much or at all(What a shame!).
I am also tempted to do a chapter by chapter commentary of "The Lokian Way". Explaining also the basic foundation and concepts I worked on. Giving details that are more hidden in the story.
Vote if you want a commentary by me for "The Lokian Way" or not: Vote here!
Things I learned from writing "The Lokian Way":
Overall I think writing a serial for the first time was a positive experience. Granted I made some mistakes. I hope to learn from them. I guess I should keep a buffer of 3 to 4 parts/chapters on hand. My absence following my moving of apartments really hit my count of readers on "The Lokian Way". I also should invest more time to refine the plot and characters before starting a serial.
For the next one or two months:
I vow to return to my roots. Meaning writing short stories. But more importantly to finish some of those I already started. Some are long overdue to receive their end.
I also have a few story ideas I really wanted to write, but made myself put off to focus on writing "The Lokian Way".
Then there are a few ideas for open-ended serials. One that does not have an overarching plot or planned end. However, some vow only to read completed serials or those they judge will be eventually finished. I am not sure if introducing open-ended serials to readers of mine will work out.
In preparation for my next big serial:
I have many ideas for serials but judging by my current mood I reduced them to three. However, how am I to judge which serials readers on TBC want to read? I think it is time for an experiment. I hope to write the first chapter of each serial in the next two month. Then I let the readers vote which one I should continue.
Will relying on a vote to work? I have no idea, but I am curious to giving it a try.
If one succeeds, another one bites the dust:
Sissification is for a long time a white whale for me. I never could really get into it. While I see some attraction, I am deterred by a simple circumstance: there are only a limited amount of plot arcs in the genre and they are overused.
So I try to experiment with the genre. One experiment was "What A Troublesome Ghost". Rather than feminizing a man, it was reducing the feminity of a woman against her will. It was somewhat successful, but I could see how fans of the sissification genre might feel cheated by it.
Another experiment was "Hidden App". There are many stories that use PC's and applications to alter people. (Master PC for one)
For "Hidden App" I chose another approach. The app can trap people inside an extra dimension. Users then can play around with their captive using game-like mechanics. Imagine a mix of "Fallout Shelter" and a dress up game.
Sadly I was more in love with the idea/mechanic than the story in itself. Resulting in the first spurt of writing, followed by months of sometimes poking at it.
Now I am calling it dead. As with two other stories ("About Thorns And Sleeping Beauties" and "The Summer Job") I uploaded "Hidden App" in my "unfinished stories" section of my TBC profile.
Those who are curious can check it out there.
Speaking of "The Summer Job":
What the hell is up with that? Since posting the story it constantly draws 3 to 11 hits each day. Mind you the readers directly jump into the story without going through the organizational page above it. So how come it gets so many hits? My best guess is that a few readers are so enamored with the story that they have it bookmarked and read it nearly daily.
What vexes me more is that I have no clue what makes the story so alluring. Is it the ponygirls? Should I write more stories that feature them? Or is it the hucows? The BDSM aspect?
I posted it on purpose as an organizational page so only those who are looking for it might find it. That means no kudos function. But one could add a comment. Or write a PM. Yet no one ever did. Leaving me baffled and guessing. Does someone want me to continue the story? Or only feature more on of the above-named aspects? I have no clue. And until someone steps forward and talks to me about it I never will.
In conclusion:
Busy times ahead. Thank you all who read my stuff in the past and I hope you will continue so in the future.
Hugs and kisses,
Cassy
Hey, TBC readers.
I know the title means different things to every writer. For me it is ideas. There are writers who hunt ideas desperately. I am desperate because I am hunted by ideas.
"Just how?" you might ask. Well, it is hard to concentrate on writing one serial or story and now and then ideas pop into your mind that bug the hell out of you. Every new idea I get there is this impulse to start writing it as a story. I am getting better at controlling said impulses, but it is no wonder I have about three dozen stories started and never finished.
I am still wondering how other people deal with those. It isn't helping that my writing time is limited. Normally I write in my commute to or from work. I love my work, but there are some tasks that are ... boring. And in this lull, they are stalking and hunting me: ideas! If worse comes to worse I have hours alone with them. Usually enough to create a whole basic plot in my head and a first draft about the characters. It is so hard to not start writing a story when you have all that on hand. Well, or on the mind.
If it isn't a new idea, then it doesn't mean I am safe. Nope. Old ideas are only waiting patiently their time to strike again. And by now they are a small army. Of course, old ideas usually have already a storyline in my head. So if I am left alone with an oldie they usually get more details. And with it the urge to write them rises.
By now I guess you are thinking "Cassy talks big, but are there really that many?" Let's do a breakdown.
194 general ideas.
5 in the Mercy-verse (The Lokian Way)
6 sequels to short stories I already posted (that aren't part of a verse)
3 in the "Little Stump Manor" verse (sequels to "What A Troublesome Ghost"
3 sequels in the "The Totalitarian Society You Will Love"
7 in "The Bending Frontier" (space opera sci-fi / no magic)
1 in the "Reality Storm" verse (Three already written and to be published soon)
2 in the "Don't Drink And Genderbend" verse
2 in the "Arti" verse (first story about 50% done)
9 in the "Undesirable Classes" verse (and a few more vague ideas)
4 in the "Plant Punk" verse (like cyberpunk but with plants instead of cyber)
6 in the "Dimension Mages" verse (one story already posted, but only as first part of a trilogy)
2 in the "Suit Yourself" verse (sci-fi bodysuits)
6 in "Caverns And Dungeons" verse (Same verse as "The Fatale")
5 more in the "Tales Of Heirloom Gems" verse
4 in the "Nuty" verse (Urban Sci-Fi, one is a potential long-running serial)
3 in "Women Needed" verse (Urban Fantasy)
4 in "Magic Radio"
3 in "Nymphlings!!!" verse (fantasy/humor)
2 in the "U.P.P.P.S." verse (United Pixie and Ponygirl Postal Service)
5 in the "Chaos Seeds" verse
7 in Morpheus "Legacy" verse (I know gals. It's a closed verse. A girl still can dream though.)
3 in Morpheus "Great Shift" verse
1 in Morpheus "Twisted" verse
That's a long list. Still with me? Not nodded off halfway through? Good. Or bad. Anyway. I am open to advise from other authors. How are you dealing with more ideas than you can handle? Because I enjoyed some quiet time while writing "The Lokian Way". But now that it is over the ideas are rushing me again. Trying to make up for lost time? Don't know.
Anyway. Time to end this blog post. Before I used to post a synopsis for some of my story ideas. With mixed success. So I decided on something else: flash fiction! What are those? Very very short stories. I find them too small to post them as an individual story so maybe here is a good place for them. Let me know how you like it.
Without further ado here is the first one.
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Survival At All Cost
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Derek was a survivor. Had to be. Where he grew up you either learn to survive or die trying. The welfare slums were a hard place to grow up. Those who did, they learned hard lessons.
He did everything to survive. Ran with the bad crowd if it meant a full stomach and a roof over his head. Crime was his daily bread.
Never once had he attended some protest or rally. Fouls errant. That's what get you killed, or worse, imprisoned.
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Derek jerked up as shots rang out. Another of his gang died miserably somewhere in this godforsaken mall. The job should have been easy. Break into a mall for the rich. Steal some shit. Make it out.
The last part fell through. Now they were trapped with no way out. Armed security guards sweeping shop by shop. Putting an end to his friend's lives.
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But Derek had a plan. He always had one. By now he wasn't even on plan B or even X, Y, or Z. More like plan triple-Z-holy-shit-I-hope-this-works.
He drew another deep breath and twitched as his leg moved just a little. There the bullet wound wasn't making this any easier. He guessed the blood would lead his executioners right to him. Rather sooner than later. All the way to this little shop of high-end sleazy delight. They would find him behind the display for the newest sex-bot money could buy.
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It was a ridiculous thing. No woman had such plum lips or massive knockers. It looked fake and artificial. Testimony to how desperate Derek was. Now he trusted a shoddy cortical implant and a faulty cable to work long enough to upload his consciousness into this abomination.
A flashlight swiped the shop. It came to rest on him. This was it. The end. Dereks run on survival and life coming to an abrupt conclusion. Defiant he looked up along the barrel of the gun that would kill him and into the masked face of his murderer.
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Hey there.
Cassy again here. If you like the basic premise then good news. I am nearly done with a story having nearly the same premise, but in a different setting.
I hope you get to read it soon.
Until next time.
Hugs and kisses,
Cassy
Hi there,
my last blog entry has been some while so I thought I give a little update. Since finishing "Last Regrets" I focused my attention on short stories. Resulting in five published in the last two weeks. It scratched an itch I had for quite some time.
However, I can't only publish short stories, yet I don't feel ready to take a new serial yet. That's why I am currently working on the third story in my "Undesirable Classes" universe. Plot-wise it will be closer to "Natural Affection" than "Last Regrets", but will have its own unique focus. As I am going for a faster pace with this one the overall length of the story will be shorter than "Last Regrets". I am aiming for 20K to 25K words in the total of which 6K are already written.
I plan to mainly focus on the third and fourth stories in the UC verse before I plan to write the next serial. Now and then a short story might slip through.
But there is a small favor a few of you could help me with. No one of us knows everything. (And those who claim otherwise are usually full of shit.) Writers aren't any different. I write to the best of my ability and knowledge. Knowing that both are limited in scope. Getting better at writing is squarely on my shoulders, but with the knowledge part, you could help.
I am looking for "expert" that I can quiz if I write a story in their area of expertise. Since I rarely know beforehand what I might need I hope here for an open call for those interested. If you have knowledge of something you might think it is worthwhile for a story then please contact me. It could be specific as for details about a kind of job or more obscure as that you are familiar with an area you wish one of my stories would take place.
Currently, I am looking for a few specific areas of expertise and I hope I find someone who is willing to be quizzed on one of them.
These are:
-> Military/Army: general practices; ranks; bouncing off possible tactics; and more
-> Tanks: how parts are named; physical limitations; doctrine I should know
-> Survivalist: which improvisations might work; priorities in a survival situation
-> Boarding schools/teacher
That is all for now.
If I have missed anything just leave a comment below and I try to address that one too.
Until then.
Hugs and kisses,
Cassy
Hey writers and readers of TBC,
after two long writing sessions today I am finally done with "A Tale Of Two Dolls".
It is the third story in my "undesirable classes" universe.
This time there will be more action again, but as the other two stories, it has a unique focus on itself.
Now I finished the raw version and edited it.
Meaning I checked for grammar and spelling mistakes to the best of my ability.
Usually, I post a story at this stage.
What was the saying? "Madness is if you try something over and over again and expecting a different outcome"?
Well, call me mad as I tried something that failed before.
To deliver the best I can to my readers I hope to have a few test/beta readers go through the story first.
If any of you are interested then simply write me a private message.
I reserve Monday and Tuesday looking for test readers.
Wednesday to Friday to give them time to read the story.
Saturday to polish the story based on feedback.
On the next Sunday, I plan to publish the story.
Meanwhile, I am transforming the rough draft for the fourth story in the "undesirable classes" universe to a detailed plot outline.
I'll start writing on it once I posted "A Tale Of Two Dolls."
That's all for now.
Thanks for reading.
Hugs and Kisses,
Cassy
Hey guys and gals,
some of you might have been wondering just where I vanished off to.
Well, that is a complicated question.
The truth is I have a kind of- I wouldn't say existential crisis, but sort of yeah.
I was working on the fourth entry in my "undesirable classes" universe when I got thinking. (Which is never a good sign.)
Was the genderbending aspect of my stories becoming a gimmick?
Sure, some I wrote for fun and the answer there is: yes.
But others I wrote because I wanted to explore complex themes.
Throw different characters at it and watch how they handle the outcome.
To explore their character development.
Just how the fourth story in my UC universe pans out was clear to me for over a year.
But only now I looked at the character development of the main person and noticed something.
Yep, a definite lack of personal development. Most of the story is going down in the span of a day.
Hardly the time for big jumps in character.
And the ones that occurred had the bitter question attached: how much is it due to the gender change?
So I looked at the other stories I was developing and it looked bleak.
Yes, they all contained gender-bending.
Yes, they probably would be liked by many readers.
Would they satisfy my need to write characters that matter? Sadly the answer is no.
For a while it made me step back.
Not from writing, but from writing in the genderbending genre.
For a while, I toyed with the idea to switch to other genres under a new pen name.
And I won't lie. I am still toying with the idea. Strongly.
Over the past month, I collected story ideas in those other genres.
With plenty of good ones. But it made me realize something else.
There wasn't a rush of ideas like I had with writing genderbending fiction.
To develop a story with genderbending was a limitation that quite spoke to me.
To circumvent established tropes was a big part of the motivation for me.
Without those limitations, my creative energy was a little- Unfocused.
So, maybe writing a little genderbending mayhem was good for me?
So, all that being said where does it leave me?
I will be picking up writing genderbending fiction again, but not to the extent I did before.
Those stories I will write will be carefully chosen.
For now, the UC universe is on hold until I can think of a way to alter the fourth stories plot to hold more value.
Meanwhile, I will work on stories outside of the genderbending genre.
My goal here is to write a book and self-publish it. Which is a tall task.
One I am actually looking forward to.
At last an apology.
A few might have waited for stories by me.
You will have to wait some more. Sorry.
The good thing to take away is that I intend to write again.
Maybe being more careful in my selection of stories to write will show in the resulting quality.
Hopefully.
Thanks for listening to my rambling.
Hugs and kisses,
Cassy
Over the last weeks, I started to upload the stories that I previously posted on Fictionmania.
I hoped that I would get a little more feedback from the community.
I can honestly say that you readers on TBC surpassed my expectations.
For that I thank you.
About the past stories and the immediate future:
I currently have three complete stories yet to post here that are already up on FM.
"Giving Birth To Pervy Ideas", "Miss Apocalypse", and "What A Troublesome Ghost".
To be released in the coming days on an every other day schedule.
(I withhold "What The Time Traveler Fears" for now as it needs some rewriting. Not my finest work.)
So what is next?:
I plan to release my first serial! Yes, it is finally happening and it was sort of the reason for coming to TBC.
Correct me if I am wrong, but to me, it appears that TBC is a little more vocal on feedback. Especially for serials.
Don't let me down TBC community. I am counting on you.
The serial is called "The Lokian Way" and as the name suggests there will be a lot of hijinks.
Each part of the serial will describe one day in the life of the main protagonist.
The good news is that I already have about two weeks done. That is about 1/5 to 1/4 of the overall plot.
According to the writing program I use, the overall average reading time is already above four hours.
I plan to release two parts per week. Why this slow? I hope to incorporate feedback "on the fly".
So please be generous with your comments. I will release more details in a Foreword soon.
Some of you frequenting FM and TBC might have noticed that I skipped a story when uploading my work to TBC.
While uploading stories to TBC I took time to edit each of the stories. Trying to squash some mistakes I did when I first uploaded them.
Some stories got a little extra. Here a new word. There a new sentence.
"Strange Attraction" got a little more. So far two new extensive scenes. I also plan to do some rewriting of the last scene. The one where Serina confesses her love. Rereading it I found it rushed and not as fleshed out as I would have liked.
As soon as I am done I'll upload it here. Promise.
There is also "Last Regrets". My next installment in my "Undesirable Classes" universe. (The first story was "Natural Affection".)
I am in the next to last chapter and I hope to finish the story by end of september.
Pending some hunting for errors and mistakes I hope for an October release.
Not many test or beta readers have looked upon it.
So if you don't mind reading an unedited raw version and you are interested to give it a once over please write me a PM.
More blog entries?:
Well, I hope so. Depends on the feedback to this one I guess.
One thing I would like to do is to share some story ideas with you guys and gals.
And I have a lot. Like seriously a lot.
My "general" story ideas folder boasts 162 entries. And there are the many ideas I have for shared universes.
What I would like to do is to write down five story ideas (they are currently only in my shortened "remember-this-idea" form) and post them in a blog entry. Hoping that the TBC community will help me what to write next based on feedback.
So are you game? I hope so.
Wow that was a long first blog entry. Or I think it is.
Thanks for reading.
xoxo
Cassy
Hello everyone,
I hoped I would be more active the last two weeks. As always life gets in the way. Or to be more specific books and stories of authors.
My progress is already slow as I usually only write on my daily commute (by train mind you). That time is contested by books to read and the last two weeks they have won. Which I don't mind as they are a great way to inspire yourself.
For those who are curious, the books I am reading are from the "The School for good and evil" series by Soman Chainani. I also spend a lot of time reading short stories by dkfenger (https://dkfenger.deviantart.com/gallery/). An author specialized in TF stories that occasionally feature TG as well.
So now that I talked about what hindered my own progress let me tell you how far I am in my current projects.
The rewriting of "Strange Attraction" is nearly done. A sci-fi short about a pilot who thinks she can handle working for a succubus. I currently try to add some small details based on feedback from beta readers. Then the story will finally land on TBC.
"Last Regrets" (in my "undesirable classes" universe) is still stuck in the next to last chapter. Right in the middle of a sex scene. One of my biggest enemies. Damn you sexy time! However, I do plan to push ahead there soon.
There is also "The Lokian Way". The serial I wanted to start posting here on TBC. Most of my writing time I spend here. The closer I come to post a story the more nervously I fiddle around with it. Still, I think this weekend part one will land on TBC.
There also was some progress on various other stories. About 10k words written scattered about a half dozen unfinished stories.
With progress update done it is time for another thing I mentioned in my first blog entry: the story ideas.
Each blog entry I want to write down four or five story ideas I had in the past and gather feedback. So I might know what you guys and gals want to read. Think of them as a short synopsis on the back of a book. Which one would you pick up to read based on those few sentences? So please comment freely. Keep in mind that the first ones are some of my oldest ideas and maybe not as mature as my later ideas. I also don't mind if someone else wants to take a knack on any of these. Just please send me a courtesy PM in that case.
Without much further delay here are the first ones:
1. A New Hobby
A guy collects trades, skills, and hobbies. By now he has gone through a lot. As he slowly runs out of ideas what he might learn next he starts a "piggy-bank of ideas". One filled by his friends. Once he is done learning a skill or hobby he picks a new one out of said piggy-bank at random. Though the last draw poses an unexpected challenge. Who of his friends put "Disguise as a convincing woman" into it anyways and will he get through with it? After all his parents raised no quitter.
2. In the wrong body at the wrong time
The main character is one of a few who can bodyswap with other people. He uses it in his current job. He temporarily uses his gift to swap with other men who undergo surgeries. However, his last client is not a man. Despite his insistence that he only switches with males his agent pushed him to take on a female one. The offered money had been just too much to reject it. Waking up from the surgery he is informed by a police officer that there had been a murder. His client is dead along with his original body. It had been a mob hit. Now he fears for his life as maybe the mafia wants back what they put into his client's body. His new female ones.
3. Pearls of wisdom
A teenager (male) stumbles upon a case of pearls in a magic shop. The owner is surprised as the case usually chooses a woman as its bearer. He explains that each pearl contains wisdom and knowledge of a previous bearer and their lives. The owner only rents out the case and always for ten years. Once returned the case would have one more pearl, with the wisdom of the last bearer. After some convincing, the teenager takes the case home and proceeds to test each pearl for a week. While each pearl he tackles challenges in his life a different way, but he also notices a side effect. Slowly the pearls change his body to match the previous bearers of the case. All of them girls. With new challenges on the horizon can he tackle them without relapsing and using the pearls?
4. Wings of change
High up in the skies is the small flying aircraft-carrier of a mercenary unit. On the return flight from a mission to their usual home port, they notice a small aircraft chased by bandits. The mercenaries decide to help. Just in time, they rescue a beautiful girl, the pilot of the busted aircraft. She explains she is a newly born goddess on the run. She is still weak in her godly powers, but she says if the mercenary unit fulfills some challenges in her name her power might grow. Power she would use for them. They agree. A goddess on their side just too tempting. But they fail to ask just what kind of goddess she might be and if she has some kind of hidden agenda.
5 HR's offer
Young male researchers in a prestigious company are offered a special option. If they help the company to achieve the mandatory women's employment rate - issued by the government - by going through a new process making them women they would receive a bonus and a promotion. However, the offer is a ruse. The employment rate already fulfilled. The company found out that one of the side effects of the process is heightened intelligence. They want to exploit this to their max. As more and more volunteer go through the process other side effects eventually surface.
Hey folks,
I know the title is a little clickbaity sounding, but I honestly can say that these categories eluded me for over a year. Resulting in frustration and even asshole behavior on my part. I am especially pissed of because the categories are appearing so obvious. Yet I somehow I took ages to figure them out and react to stories accordingly.
So what are they:
1. Smut/porn
The obvious first choice and one that gave me a bit of a headache. Some stories are not meant to be deep in plot and story. Sex plays the main part and the TG potion is rather an added bonus.
Less common on FM and TBC the pure smut stories normally find their main outlet on TG related Tumblr caption sites. As with everything that values action (sex in this case) over plot the potential for serials are rather limited.
2. Stories as a fulfillment of a specific fetish.
Those gave me the most headache and brought out my inner asshole critic until I learned to recognize this category. This category has a lot in common with the first one except the action that is valued is not sex, but centers around a specific fetish. Whatever that might be. More often than not the plot takes here a backseat too. Bending it in shape to fit the requirements of the particular fetish. The result is often enough not quite typical-porno-logic, but close enough. One of the more annoying traits of this category is the limited potential for serials. The set up for most fetishes requires some plot (even if set up haphazardly). That plot can be extended to a serial. There lies not the problem. Soon or later a serial with a focus on a specific fetish will fulfill said fetish. If the author doesn't recognize this point they have the trouble to continue a plot that is based on said fetish. That can kill motivation of a writer and I think led to dozens of abandoned serials.
3. Concept-based stories.
The third category has the biggest potential for serials. Why? Concept-based stories put plot and setup first. They may borrow from many fetishes and may contain sex. But neither of those make up the foundation of the story. In fact, if a borrowed fetish loses its attractiveness it can be replaced as not the whole story hinges on it. Because concept-based stories have such great potential for serials they often anger or annoy people if they are used in short solo stories. I wholly admit I think I am a big offender in that area.
I recommend to other writers to keep these categories in mind when planning a story. Be it a solo or serial. In my opinion, each one has an ideal length to bring out the best possible outcome. Number one is best kept short. Two should be medium length and three ... well, go nuts in length.
I wonder what you all think of these categories? Too obvious? Did you overlook them yourself? Let me know.
On to another topic. I promised that I would write down story ideas in each my blog posts. Last week I was too busy to write one so this week I try to make up by posting ten instead of five story ideas. For those of you who aren't familiar why I write those down here let me explain again. I do have a big collection of story ideas. (Reached 175 yesterday -.-). Finding the story idea to write most readers want to read can be tricky. So I post them here to find out if one idea stands out so I can write that one. So if you see a concept you like please let me know.
6. The Coven Of Seven
There is a coven living in a big mansion. Lead always by seven witches. They collect people who have the potential to use magic - if they want to or not - and make them their apprentices. While these people are apprentices they are also expected to fulfill a servant role in the household. The seven witches aren't secure in their position. An apprentice can challenge a witch to a fight. Whoever wins is a witch in the coven and whoever loses will be an apprentice. Many apprentices strife to escape the mansion as the manor has a particular rule: no men. If a magically inclined man is found he will be made a woman first before being gang-pressed into being an apprentice. The question is can they become powerful enough to change themselves back and flee before they succumb to the feeling of being a woman or being drawn into the powerplay of striving for a witch spot in the coven?
7. The Recruiter
There is a woman known as the legendary recruiter. No matter who you need or for what job she can find the right person. Be it for domestic tasks or war. Her method to find these individuals is a carefully hedged secret. But I will tell you.
First, she finds a person who has the knowledge required. She will steal their soul and binds it to her. Making it undyingly loyal. Then she looks for a suitable host body. She switches the souls. The conditioned soul still has all the old memories and skills of their previous life. They also can access the memories and skills of their new body. A combination of both they see themselves as a new person and are rented out to the client as the requested specialist.
The recruiter still has the soul of the second person. This one she reshapes into a loyal whisp. A servant to roam the earth in search for new candidates. But what happens if the recruiter fails to bind the loyalty of a soul to her?
8. Timeshare Bodies
Two decades into the future a devastating plague strikes the earth. Contrary to other plagues this one takes years till it always ends in death. The small glimmer of hope: one-third of humanity seems to be immune.
When a company announces that they can scan and digitalize the human brain into a small chip the government takes action. Every citizen gets their brain scanned and the healthy bodies are to be shared between three people implanted into the body. Each person controls the body for a day before giving control to the next person. Inactive persons can still feel the body and chat with the active person (As well as access internet and such).
The story revolves around a small family. The sister of a boy will share the body of her best friend. Unwilling to be split the sister and friend invite the boy to share the same body with them. A female one. He accepts.
9. The Curse Of The Teenage White Girl
- Claimed by crazypagangirl -
10 Nano-Mayhem
A company is developing nano-tech for plastic(+genetic) surgery. Once a nano-mod is ingested it transforms not only the target area but changes the DNA of the person so the mod is even on a genetic level stable. Then the mod goes to a passive mode for a month. Checking then in if it needs to adjust more or deactivates itself permanently. To fulfill this target the nano-mod can replicate itself by using food the host ingests or even waste products.
One night a group of activists storms the lab. They think these mods are against nature. They want to destroy them all. The servers are easily destroyed. The data lost. However, they run into trouble on how to dispose of the already manufactured mods. Simply pouring them out might be dangerous.
They turn onto the two poor nightguards that got caught up in the raid. Both are made to drink all the nano-mods. The first mod immediately goes to work and changes their body. Leaving the other mods inactive because they lack resources. To go active once they gathered enough. Worse is that the mods block each other. Once one goes active it destroys the work of another mod.
Because the emergency about codes got destroyed the two guards now have to live their lives with constantly changing bodies. They also have a choice to make. Go on a diet to maybe starve out the mods for a time to slow down the changes or eat ravenously to speed over unwanted changes?
11. Copy And Paste
One boy is the successor in a long line of special mages. Those mages can trap (and later release) people in paintings. When they have someone trapped they can repaint them how they like. However, this boy sucks at drawing.
Everything changes when he finds out that opened pictures on his PC count as a canvas. He can't draw for shit, but copy and paste he can do easily. Time to get some revenge on some people.
12. Duel of changes
A powerful being grants two people certain powers to change people. Both have to decide each on a specific stereotype they want to see. The goal: change as many people to be their chosen stereotype.
Of course, both chose different stereotypes and starting powers. If they think a person is ready they can try claiming them. If it works the person is locked into the stereotype for good and can't be changed by the opponent. Each claimed person strengthen the powers they have or grant new ones. Trouble finds them both when they find out they can cheat as powers work on the opponent as well.
Stereotypes could be: sixties-housewife; rocker/punk-girl; goth; bimbo; slut; cosplayer; bdsm (sub or domina); playboy-bunny; and so on ....
13. Dressing up for the government
A man finds out he has a special gift. If he wears clothes of another person he slowly learns things about that person. Skills and knowledge. Even memories. Of course, the government learns about him and he is "hired". Soon he finds out that not every suspected serial killer or terrorist is male. Throw in some co-workers who think it is funny to throw in some red-herrings of the female gender and the dilemma for him is complete.
14. The fifth child
In a fantasy world, a villainess has five children. Four are known for their own evil deeds.
When heroes storm the palace of the villainess they are in for a surprise. Hidden a prison cell they find a fifth child.
She rebelled at her mother because the mother wanted warriors and aged her daughter against her will. While looking like sixteen, in mind she is six. As every child of the villainess, she has a special ability. In her case, it is to control blobs and slimes.
Her ability goes beyond giving them directions. She can make them change shape or color. Even let them camouflage themselves.
Thinking they have found a willing traitor and inside woman the heroes decide to "rescue" her.
However, soon doubt start to blossom. Not only if she is as innocent as she claims, but also if she is female at all.
16. Tricking a witch
A boy desperately wants to be a girl. When he finds out there is a teenage witch (think Sabrina) hiding at his school he comes up with a plan. He goes to her and tells a tall tale. He was a girl but one of the witches enemies changed 'her' into him and the reality along. First, he succeeds. The teenage witch believes him and he is changed into a girl. Success! But what happens when the truth comes out?
Hey there,
this Sunday I'll post the ninth part of "The Lokian Way". As it is the last part I have written before coming to TBC and my first serial in general, I thought it is time for a little reflection.
1. Losing readers.
It is a no-brainer. Serials lose readers as they go along. I see it more as a refinement of readers who are really into the story. My target audience. So the reader count of the first three can be pretty much ignored. Parts four to six are more interesting. There the reader count stabilizes around one thousand readers. Was this my target audience? Maybe I was too quick to assume so as seven and eight had both two hundred readers less. Was this due to the normal bleed off or was it due to something I wrote in part six? Sadly commenters tend only to write something when they liked something and not when something was written that turned them away from reading it. That leaves me speculating and maybe a little worrying. Hopefully, I won't grow grey hair over it.
2. Unexpectedly gaining readers.
This was a little surprising to me. There are a few bumps in reader counts. More read part six than part five and the same for part eight and seven. Did those readers simply skip a part? Or are those new readers who popped in to check out the writing mid serial. Were those parts simply refreshed often and this raised the read count?
A mystery I'll probably never solve.
3. Inspired comments
As I hoped I did get some creative feedback about Mercy's (main character) special spells. As comments and as PMs. My take away: apparently I write too tame stuff. *grins* Not that I am very likely to change that. I have to write from the characters point of view and Mercy grew up as a boring goody two shoes. It might take a while for her to break out of the mold.
Still, the creativity is amazing and I even got schooled in my own in-universe logic. (Well done miss Brooke Erickson. Well done.)
While I won't take any suggestion as is it inspired me for some other hijinks Mercy could be up to.
4. The future
As I said in a previous blog post and in my foreword with part nine the prewritten parts end. That means now I have to pump out each part to a schedule on the run. Thankfully I have the overall plot laid out and a few sub-plots ready. But I don't think I can do a schedule with two parts per week. More realistic is a weekly schedule with a fixed release day. Probably Sunday. Keeping up to the schedule will be a challenge. One I am looking forward to.
Story Ideas:
Yes, here are some new story ideas. If you are a writer who tries to not be influenced please stop reading now. As I was previously asked nicely to do here is a disclaimer:
I do not claim copyright for any these story ideas as long as they are included in my blog posts and can be viewed publically!
On the flip side, there is some good news. While I post these mainly to judge which story to write in the future one writer snatched a story idea away.
Please have a look out for crazypagangirl and her take on "9. The Curse Of The Teenage White Girl". (100% chance she will find a better title though XD)
17. How to brother a witch
The brother of a witch mocks her and all women by belittling the difficulties they face when wearing certain things. The witch (sister) challenges him to wear all those for a day. She will cast a greater spell that for one day no matter what he does everyone will think it is normal. For that day the reality is changed. The brother agrees to the dare as he can't back down.
On the said day he wears all the stuff and to explain he tells everyone that he is transgender. Responding to a bully he replies (mockingly) that he will be a sexy she within a month and totally like it. That he/she will be a lesbian but both, men and women will drool after her.
After the day is done both, brother and sister/witch, think the reality will snap back and undo that day. However, the witch messed up.
Not only continues this reality, but the spell tries to make every claim by the brother of that day true. He remembers how he mocked the bully. One month to total girlhood. Can he fight the enchantment or will it take him over?
18. Gatcha (Suggested by my test-reader Aisling)
The main character is obsessed with a particular mobile game. As it is closed down he hears of a beta for the sequel circulating the dark web. After some digging, he gets a copy. One altered by a nefarious entity. Once he starts the app he is sucked into the game!
Not only is he now stuck in a game with collectible companions, but he himself is one. He also has to complete the tutorial. As part of it, he has to fusion two companions of the same grade. But he only has himself and one other companion. Sighing he initiates the fusion as to get it over with. As the fusion starts he recalls a little detail about the game. The main draw to the game was that every companion is a female and now he will be ...
19. All about risk:
Six friends play a game of risk ( the real boardgame) but with a twist. The game is enchanted. Each player can (hidden) assign players and continents and a new body. For each region, they conquer the associated player changes gradually to match the linked body. The only way to undo it is to recapture the region. This game raises the stakes and threatens the friendship of them all as they have to risk it all.
20. Action figures? (Title WIP)
Skipped since I definitely want to write this but want to do it in Morpheus Legacy universe or the superhero universe of Jenny North. Both are closed so who knows when. XD
21. This is why I hate soap operas:
The main character is a normal boy with parents and big sister. Said big sister is totally into a soap opera that was canceled mid-season. One day the sister gets her hands on a genie and wishes herself and her family into the canceled tv show with her in the role of the big sister of the shows main character. The parents become the show's parents. And our story main character becomes the show's main character. A growing up young woman who chases each episode after another man! Our story main character is magically bound to act out all the scenes the tv series dictates. Between scenes, he/she is left to her own devices. Now he/she tries to fight the plot. Will they win?
22. Sole survivor (short)
A pilot of a colony ship wakes up from cryogenic sleep only to find out he is suddenly a woman. The ships' A.I. explains that all other crewmember and colonists were killed in an explosion. As its highest priority is to ensure the success of the future colony it had to resort to drastic measures. The ship carries sperm and eggs of humans to ensure genetic diversity. Now every womb is needed to give birth to the new colonists. Artifical or not. The A.I. reasoned higher chances of success if the pilot was a woman. Therefore she not only changed the pilot but also impregnated her. Our pilot now has the daunting objective to give birth and raise the first generations of the colony.
Another Sunday and another update of "The Lokian Way". I was a bit worried I might not make it in time. Especially as I had been plagued by distractions the last two weeks. Turns out I shouldn't have been worried. This part was done on Wednesday. I could have kept my old schedule. Except not, as part 11 will be a little bigger I think.
Those distractions proved to be very interesting. For one an very old story idea wormed itself into my mind again. "Doll Rebirth" was about someone who needed a whole-body-prosthetic in a world that was dominated by magic. What drew me in was that I had, for this story, lots of background details. So when I looked for a story idea to use to practice pacing of feeding the reader world details it was an ideal match. It also got quickly out of hand. I finished the raw version today and I gave it to my many many test readers. Who am I kidding? My two test readers. (Still looking for more ;P )
But "Doll Rebirth" wasn't my only distraction. "Arti Vaino and the hunt for the lady of the lake" is another writing exercise gone ballistic. Here the focus was for me to learn to learn writing conversations with more than two person. Something I've been struggling with in the past. Thankfully the main protagonist is never alone as he soon gets two buddies stuck to him. Namely two sentient breasts. Fun times. The story is at around 7000 words and I think about half done. It would have second highest priority - right after "The Lokian Way" - if it wasn't for ...
Yet another distraction. "Royal Jelly" is a silly little story idea I came up with to incorporate the lessons learned from "Doll Rebirth" and "Arti Vaino and the too long title". The setup is quite simple and thankfully very spoiler free. In a medieval world, many exotic races exist thanks to an artifact. One hundred people gather for a new start. The artifact then chooses one of them at random who creates a new race from scratch. Our main protagonist was expecting a new race but is surprised that he also gained a new gender. The story is already at 11000 words and I think about two-thirds done.
Despite all these distractions I have already a got a good portion of the next "The Lokian Way" installment done. It had been two very productive weeks. Even if it had been spread out over four stories.
In other news, I decided to split the "short story" category in my author profile into two. Some short stories are done and complete. Their story told. Others are more like the pilot episode of a series or serial. Those I want to move into their own category. Who knows. Maybe I'll pick one of them as the next serial after "The Lokian Way" is done.
I also have made a new category of small and silly stuff last week. The first two entries you could shake your head over in disbelief last week too. Let's see if I come up with other silly stuff soon.
As always I'll finish my blog post with another round of story ideas. As before here a small disclaimer:
I do not claim copyright for any these story ideas as long as they are included in my blog posts and can be viewed publically!
23. Jokes gone too far?
Omitted because started by myself.
24. Focus!
Omitted because started by myself.
25. Error 404 - Reality not found:
The male protagonist is surprised when one of the hottest and most popular girls at school asks him out. First, few days are like a dream come true. Then he notices changes about his body. He slowly gets more feminine. The only one who notices the changes besides him is his hot girlfriend. She explains that it is probably the doing of her ex-boyfriend. He is a demi-god and can bend reality. The changes in reality can only be noticed by the victim and other demi-gods. She too is a demi-god, but a weaker one. She tells him that she can become strong enough to protect him only if he helps her. The demi-gods grow stronger by the emotions released by the victim. In order for her to grow in strength, he has to live through many temporary reality changes while steadily his body by the jealous ex-boyfriend.
26. A panties life
A mage tries to pull a deviant spell on a sorceress. The sorceress is furious. Before the mage can react he is transformed by the sorceress into lacy panties. He is also cut off from most of his magical power. The sorceress places him in a lingerie shop and heads off. The mage is angry but comes up with a plan to break the transformation. If he would be worn long enough by a person he could slowly enchant the person with a spell-breaker to free him. In order to get there, he needs to be worn. He slowly enchants himself that the first person to touch him would be drawn to purchase and wear him. The plan works till he realizes his mistake. The first person to touch him is a man who looked for a gift. Now every day he is worn by him. And the mage hates it. In the end, he pushes the spell-breaking enchantment off in favor of another spell. One to make the wearer a woman. Because if he has to be worn it should be by a woman. The story then revolves around the slow TF of the wearer from man to woman from the panties/mages perspective.
27. Please use all holes:
The story is about a curse. Those affected are transformed into a busty sex doll. The curse is broken once every hole/orifice was used 6 times (or more). The one who (so to speak) breaks the curse gets the curse. Those freed find themselves back in a body made of flesh, but still very much modeled after the doll they had been.
28. Shift by shift:
A young man is kidnapped by a sorceress. She transforms him into clothing. Each day another piece. Except for Saturdays where he is made a body part of her. The catch is that each time he is a body part his original body changes accordingly. On Sundays, he is in his normal body (but still trapped in the sorceress mansion) so he can witness his body changing.
29. In the eye of the beholder:
A man gets a gift from a friend: a ring. Soon after an old gypsy warns him. He wears something cursed and the curse will change him accordingly how he is perceived. His 'friend' meanwhile works on how he is perceived: first as a sissy, then tomboy and finally complete big-breasted bimbo.
I hadn't planned to write a blog post today till I noticed something.
Exactly one year ago I published "A Jar Full Of Pixie". (Back then on Fictionmania)
My first story to be published.
And I must admit it feels a little special. Which is also strange.
I am at an age were birthdays lost their special meaning and today I have an anniversary I am actually proud of.
Over the last year, I wrote a lot.
Maybe less than I hoped for but also more than I thought I actually would manage.
What helped me to stay motivated was feedback from readers. Be it here or on Fictionmania.
I just wanted to say that I am thankful for each and every reader who in the last year read one of my stories.
I am also grateful for the many comments and encouragements I got.
That's all. Now go on about your day. ;P
Kisses,
Cassy
An invisible update? Oh yes. I managed to sneak quite a few things past the update stream on the main page. Of course, there is a reason for it.
A few months back - when I had been mostly active on Fictionmania - was bold enough to publish some author notes and background information to my stories. I wanted to bring this to BigCloset. Posting it as blog content would probably mean that if someone looked for it later it would be hard to find. Posting it as fiction would have appeared in the update stream. I'd imagine that could have annoyed some people.
A month back I made a mistake and notice that organizational pages don't show up in the update stream. Perfect for my purposes. Only those who look on my TBC author page will find the content. How do people know it is there? Well, I wanted to write a blog post about that ... ;P
So why do I publish this? I mean I am a starting out author who barely anyone knows. Do I have fans? I don't think so. The reason is that I hope that others - more established writers - do the same. And if you want something you should be willing to do the first step. (By the way, Tigger is currently posting a string of blog posts highlighting his writing past. Very interesting. Give it a read.)
What to expect? I have one essay up on why I write and how my writing style and method changed in the past two years. Besides that, you can find fun facts and background information to nearly every story I posted. "Natural Affection" even has a chapter by chapter commentary from me. Explaining what each chapter was supposed to accomplish and how.
For the very brave there is also something very frightening: unfinished stories. Two stories that I had invested a lot of time into, but couldn't hold my interest. I decided to cut my losses. However, since the stories aren't small and have some meat on their rips it would be a shame to just let them go to waste. I've put them up for those willing to explore a little. Just be warned: they will likely remain unfinished!
All of it can be found here: https://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/book-page/69857/cassy-bee
As always I'll finish my blog post with another round of story ideas. As before here a small disclaimer:
I do not claim copyright for any these story ideas as long as they are included in my blog posts and can be viewed publically!
30. Sleeping beauty redux:
The NYPD uses often a consultant. One day he is called to a place of a double homicide. A forty-something man and a woman in her early twenties are dead. The consultant quickly deducts that the woman is in fact not dead. A drug simulates it. Shortly after the consultant notices a woman in the spectators that argues with a policeman to be let through. Turns out she is the owner of an agency where young people rent out their body while under a drug that makes them appear dead. She also confirms a theory the consultant had. The woman was originally a man. One client was into men who undergo transitioning into women. After the young woman wakes up more questions arise.
31. Djinn-pocolapse:
In a world where 10 Million Djinn exist it’s awfully easy to summon one by accident. Worse. Most are of the devious kind.
32. Race For Satisfaction:
In a fantasy world with many races, one man doesn’t feel like he belongs to his own race. There is a powerful artifact from the gods that help people like him. It gives them a new race based on what they are looking for. The man switched three times before and now at the forth he transforms back to his original race. However as a woman. He realizes that the previous changes all highlighted things the woman of his own race had.
33. The Attic:
A young man is happy to be chosen as a butler for a wealthy sorceress. He is happy because now he can support his younger sisters. But arriving at the mansion is not how he imagined it would be. There are plenty of other butlers and maids. And they all have a hidden agenda. The butlers hope to charm their way into the sorceress' heart. With a marriage to her, a man would be set up for life. The maids however all compete to become the next sorceress apprentice. However, they all have one fear in common: the attic. The attic is not just a collection of dust and cobwebs. In it are plenty of old curiosities and cursed objects. Rumors about how haunted it is are well founded. If you enter it there is a good chance that you ain’t coming out again. One day the sorceress needs something from the attic. All butlers and maids hesitate. Finally our protagonist volunteers. Entering the attic he fights the allure of various objects and finds what the sorceress needed. He had to admit he didn’t found the attic that bad. Over time he needs a refuge against the harassment of the other butlers. So he starts to go into the attic just to get a quiet place. Over time he resists temptations and objects but slowly turns into a girl. (Spoiler: the attic is a testing ground for finding an apprentice)
34. World Dance 2:
A guy gets some special psychedelic shrooms from a friend. Later the day he tries them. Suddenly he passes out. Waking up he finds he traveled to the past. To the second world war. But not the one he knew of. This one is different. Fought over and with are matters of fashion and dancing. As both have magical abilities to them. Of course, females are the dominant gender. What do men know about fashion and dancing anyways?
(This might be a delicate subject and could lead to protest about the use of the particular historic area.)
To those now screaming: Oh no!!! Don't worry. It won't end yet. But Looking at my current timetable of plot points the end will be after around five to six more parts. With now fifteen parts published one could say that about three-quarter of the story is done. That means there are some consequences.
For one most of the plot points of the daily life as a girl are resolved for Mercy. The last one was obviously her period and her very disastrous attempt to avoid it.
So what does that mean? Well, I have to scatter the last few clues and hope that everything culminates in the underwhelming ending I waited so long to write. It also means I have to think about what to do next.
I have some spin-offs in mind for Mercy's universe. But those will be probably short stories. I write more about them when "The Lokian Way" actually ends.
As I had a very positive experience so far with writing a serial I intend to do another.
The question is what story idea will I develop next. Maybe there is something to help me with that. Oh, right! I have a whole category in TBC filled with pilot stories. Ready to be spun out into full-blown serials.
So here is my plan:
I try to post a few more pilot stories until the end of "The Lokian Way" arrives. Then I do a straw poll. Have my readers decide what I write next. I am under no illusion here. Maybe seventy people read my blog posts in total. Maybe half will take the time to cast a vote.
Well, we will see how it fares.
So I guess I have a few busy weeks ahead. Now if I only could go to my boss and say: "Hey. I need two weeks off to write TG stories."
Anyway. Thanks for reading. And also thanks to all who speculate about "The Lokian Way". I can't wait to disappoint you all with the actual ending. ;P
As always I'll finish my blog post with another round of story ideas. Those who aren't interested in them can stop now reading. As before here a small disclaimer:
I do not claim copyright for any these story ideas as long as they are included in my blog posts and can be viewed publically!
35. Miss-calculation:
A powerful and wealthy woman has two hidden conflicting desires. On one side she has the strong urge and desire to be totally submissive to a strong man. So she often hires one to fulfill that role. However, these men never last long against her second hidden desire. To make a strong man into a submissive sissy. Her second desire always ruins her first and by now she had a dozen victims. However, her newest master has a few secrets himself. For one he knows her tendencies. On the other hand, he is poor and wants to be a girl. Can he let the woman feminize him without him losing his dominance? Time for a cat and mouse game where both sides think they are the cat.
36. The last priestess:
A man stumbles on a badly bleeding woman in an ally. He tries to help, but it looks like she won’t make it. Suddenly the woman touches him and he faints. When he wakes up he is the badly bleeding woman. The woman now in his old body explains to him that she is the last priestess of the old gods and she needs to survive. She apologizes and runs away. Her hunters find him. They quickly deduce that he isn’t the real priestess. However, they think they can use him as a compass. So they save his life … for now.
37. Sissy Fortress:
A diary of a disgraced noble heir who was sent to a remote castle. To oversee it and the five other disgraced heirs there. Turns out those five are women (sissies really) and quite ditzy and so on. Over the course of the year, we witness the fall of the said heir and his downfall into sissydom. Vacating the seat for the next disgraced heir. (Inspired by dwarf fortress and "boat murdered")
38. Self-help:
A (female) CEO invites a junior associate into her office. She tells him that she sees great potential in him, but he lacks confidence and a few other things. She is willing to mentor him, but she tells him she needs a foundation to start with. She confides to him that she used to have the same problems: shyness and no confidence. Till she found a self-help program. She is willing to lend her self-help bundle to him. He eagerly agrees. The only problem is that the audio bundle is geared towards women. Of course, the CEO says all he has to do is adjust what the program wants to a male perspective. He agrees to try it.
But what is when his subconscious can’t translate the program's teachings to a male perspective. What if it takes to the female suggestions?
39. Witch road to take?:
There is a motorcycle gang composed of witches. They are the bane of dive bars. Their arrival usually means the mass genderbending of male chauvinists into slutty bimbos.
The car of four friends breaks down in the middle of nowhere. After walking a few miles they come upon a dive bar. They seemingly good luck turns bad as a certain gang of witches arrives. Can they prove their innocence before they lose their sex and intelligence?
Hey everyone,
here a quick update:
Silly me forgot that this Sunday and the Sunday after it will be right around the holidays.
As I come from Germany celebration takes place on the Christmas Eve and the 25th and 26th are more for visiting friends and family.
Therefore the next part of "The Lokian Way" will (probably) arrive on Wednesday the 27th.
Since Silvester night and new years are on Sunday and Monday part 17 will be out (probably) on the 2nd of January.
By the way, how come that "The Summer Job" constantly draws five to ten readers daily?
I mean it is nice to see people reading stuff from me.
But the story is unfinished. I didn't think there would be such a draw to the story.
I thought it would more behave like "About Thorns And Sleeping Beauties".
Which means maybe one read a week.
Very curious about this phenomenon.
Anyway.
Thanks for reading.
Not just this blog post, but also for reading my stories.
Wish you all Merry Christmas.
xoxo
Cassy