I have just posted the latest segment of my story. I hope that you all enjoy it and add comments. Feedback from readers and other writers have been the missing ingredients in my writing formula. After so many abortive attempts, I am proud of what I have accomplished.
I realize that some people may be turned off by my subject matter and that others might find it overly predictable. I have struggled to walk the line between adult fiction and erotica. I have also struggled to keep my readers guessing about character motivations, plot developments, and the eventual denouement.
My goals were threefold.
I wanted to create characters with realistic lives, faults, dreams, fears, and feelings.
I wanted the dialogue to be both believable and compelling.
I wanted the story to have plot twists that kept my audience alert and attentive without confusing them.
I hope that I have been able to do so and that you have enjoyed the ride, at least as much as I have.
Hugs
waif