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A Mother's Love (fan-fiction)
Volume 3.03
by **Sigh**, with assistance from Angharad
Copyright© 2020 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
BRIEF SYNOPSIS - or, PREVIOUSLY ON "A MOTHER'S LOVE",
In London, Steve and Mary are young lovers who meet and marry. Though their love is strong, there are complicating factors. Mary has HIV, contracted from a one night stand she had before she met Steve. She's also given birth to their daughter, who is free of HIV but did inherit the same severe intolerance to cow's milk that Steve has. The obvious answer is breastfeeding, but Mary's HIV+ status (not to mention all of the anti-HIV drugs she's on) makes her a poor candidate for that. So ... Steve volunteers for the duty. He takes hormones to grow his breasts and begin lactation.
All goes well, until ... complications!
**Steve's very prominent breasts and his breastfeeding his daughter produce uncomfortable public circumstances; he begins dressing as a woman for work, which eases the discomfort because he passes pretty well. TOO well ...
**Mary comes down with cancer; she leaves Steve and the children to stay with her mother because she feels she's a burden AND because she doesn't like to see her husband becoming more female; she stops HIV treatment and progresses to full-blown AIDS.
**Steve, who goes by Stephanie when dressed as a woman, meets a new Doctor who then talks to Mary and convinces her to restart treatment for both the AIDS and cancer; the AIDS holds in check and her cancer goes into remission!
**BUT on two or three occasions now, the new Dr. (Jonathan Brown) has kissed Stephanie - sending her into totally unexpected and unsettling throes of infatuation! (Mary is unaware of this)
**Despite all of this, Steve and Mary's life returns to some normalcy; in addition to daughter Bekka, the couple now have a young infant son, so Steve's breastfeeding (and time spent as Stephanie) must continue. Mary announces that Steve needs to wean baby Hugh off breast milk - and that Steve should get a bilateral mastectomy ASAP! Problem: the surgeon REFUSES.
Now - **whew** - without any further ado, here is the next part of the story. Stephanie is driving home from the plastic surgeon's office ...
I drove home with a sinking feeling in my tummy. I knew Mary wouldn’t be happy with the news I was bringing. At least I have time to change into my Steve clothes before she gets home, I thought. That eased the gut heaviness somewhat.
The slight respite vanished, though, when I saw Mary’s car in the driveway. I parked, but stayed in my own car as I phoned her.
“Steve! I wasn’t expecting your call. Are you on your way home?”
“Hello Mary. I’m actually parked right outside.”
“Well come in and tell me how things went today!”
“Love – I’m still dressed as Stephanie. I thought you’d be home at your usual time, a little later, so I hoped to change before you arrived. Let me turn into Steve and then I’ll tell you all about it.”
“All right, but hurry please; I’m on the edge of my seat!”
I wasn’t able to rush as fast as I’d hoped, because baby Hugh was overdue for a feeding and my breasts were uncomfortably full. I stayed in the bedroom with the door closed as he suckled me. Then I put him to rest in his bed; as I did so, Mary caught another glimpse of me and grimaced. Then came a quick shower and change, with application of men’s cologne and minimization of breast tissue with the sports bra. Finally, I emerged from the bedroom as Steve.
Mary was quite ebullient. “I finished work early. That soup you made two days ago? I took it out of the icebox and put it to reheat on the stove, so dinner should be ready in half an hour,” smiled Mary. “Now, when did the doctor schedule the surgery?”
“He … refused.”
“Refused? Refused what, exactly?”
“He won’t schedule any mastectomy until I’ve had a psychiatric evaluation. His quote was that he wouldn’t participate in an exercise of self-mutilation.”
“But – but you’re a man! This would return you to manhood!”
“I told him! He knows that, and yet he says he sees me as only an attractive woman.”
Mary’s eyes narrowed, and her lips pursed in vexation. “What did you do?” she hissed.
“Well – I left, and called a psychiatric specialist; but the cost will be quite a strain on this month’s budget – ”
“No. In the surgeon’s office. Did you act as if you didn’t want to give up your jubblies? Why did he use your attractiveness as a reason – were you acting like a tart? What the hell did you say to him?” Mary’s voice was intensifying in volume and venom. “That’s two hundred pounds down the drain, and all that’s been done is this marriage is even closer to tumbling off the cliff!”
I stood bolt still at that. “Our marriage is in trouble? Mary – why?”
“Because I cannot stay wedded to a WOMAN. I married a bloody man, for heaven’s sake! I need a husband, someone who will father our kids; not a wife, a second mother whom I have to compete with for the children’s affection!”
“Darling – this isn’t a competition! And you know very well why I developed breasts; our children’s milk intolerance, and the desire to give them the healthiest meal a baby can have. You were in agreement!”
“I agreed to you developing breasts for the feedings. Not for you living more than half of your waking hours as a woman!”
“But that’s only happened because …” I failed to finish the thought, realizing that any further arguing of this point was likely to make things only more heated.
That night, Mary retired early as I got Hugh and Bekka ready for bed. Hugh was fussy, but a late-night nursing had him near dozing.
As I entered our bed, Mary was positioned on the opposite side, her face turned towards the far wall. I touched her shoulder, but that caused her to pull away more severely; she now lay with her back towards me.
No words were spoken the next morning beyond an “I love you, Mary; have a nice day,” from me as I left for work, dressed yet again as Stephanie; there was no reciprocation.
It had been another difficult day at Adventure Travel. Putting together pricing that would entice customers yet still produce some profit for the agency was becoming increasingly difficult. I sighed as I ran some numbers one more time on my computer.
Something inside me said, check the clock. I did, and gasped.
“Blast it, I lost track of the afternoon – the crèche is about to close!”
I blew through the door of the care centre one minute before closing. “Made it,” I gasped. “Hello, Janis. Are Bekka and Hugh ready for me?”
Instead of responding with her usual polite demeanor, Janis appeared confused. “Stephanie – Mary picked them both up at noon. She told me you knew and just forgot to tell us this morning when you dropped them off.”
I gaped at Janis in disbelief. “What?”
The nursery worker now looked worried. “You … didn’t know about this?”
Panic started to rise in my chest. “Did she say where she was going? How did she appear to you? Why wasn’t I called?”
“She’s on the list of persons allowed to pick up Hugh and Bekka! And she looked her usual self, although maybe a little distracted? I just assumed they were all going back home!”
“Oh God,” I moaned. “Please, please no.”
“Did I do something wrong? Are the children in danger?” Janis was beginning to cry.
“I’m sorry, Janis. You did everything correctly. This is between Mary and me. I’m sure they all are fine,” I said as I trotted towards the exit, tears filling my eyes.
I sat in my car making repeated phone calls to Mary. All attempts went to voicemail. Texting proved equally futile. So I drove home, anxious, hoping against hope that there was a simple, innocuous explanation.
Upon entering, no-one appeared to be home; there was a sealed envelope on the entryway table. “STEVE” was written on the front. It was opened in a flash. It read:
Dear Steve – or really, Stephanie,
I meant what I said when I told you I cannot abide being married to a woman. And that’s how I see you now. The way you carry yourself, your speech, your more reserved nature – you seem more at home in a dress and makeup than you do in slacks and a tie. I need you to deal with this, one way or another. If you go back to being Steve, it needs to happen NOW. We can do the mastectomy later, but living in a woman’s role must stop.
Or, you can remain a false bird. If so, then I will stay apart from you. I’m not saying divorce yet, but it may get to that. I have Bekka and Hugh with me, and we’ll be staying at mother’s house. I am weaning the baby onto soya milk and baby food ‘cold turkey’, so you won’t need to get any of your breast milk to him.
Please make your decision by the end of this week, and let me know. I’m sorry it had to come to this. Mary.
I gripped the letter tight with both hands as I clenched my jaw. Don’t cry. That would prove her right – that I am more woman than man now.
Despite my best efforts, I began to sob quietly.
NOTICE TO READERS:
This is a fan-fiction story continuation of Alys's unfinished story, "A Mother's Love." As I have stated in my blog, Alys has given her permission for this work. This is not meant to alter or detract at all from her superb original story, merely to build upon it and achieve a resolution for these wonderful characters.
The setting of this story is Great Britain, and superstar Big Closet author Angharad graciously consented to help me retain a British "feel" for the narrative and dialogue. She is a godsend/lifesaver. I have now had the privilege of working with multiple stars here to bring my humble little indulgent tales to be published in BC. What a giving, loving community.
If you aren't familiar with Alys's story, I have typed a brief summary to set the stage (see the Brief Synopsis at the top). If you want to read Alys's part of this tale (all chapters are super quick reads and great stories!), then look into:
A Mother's Love by Alys
To be continued tomorrow.
If you've gotten this far, please leave me a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! Hugz - **Sigh**
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A Mother's Love (fan-fiction)
Volume 3.03
by **Sigh**, with assistance from Angharad
Copyright© 2020 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
BRIEF SYNOPSIS - or, PREVIOUSLY ON "A MOTHER'S LOVE",
In London, Steve and Mary are young lovers who meet and marry. Though their love is strong, there are complicating factors. Mary has HIV, contracted from a one night stand she had before she met Steve. She's also given birth to their daughter, who is free of HIV but did inherit the same severe intolerance to cow's milk that Steve has. The obvious answer is breastfeeding, but Mary's HIV+ status (not to mention all of the anti-HIV drugs she's on) makes her a poor candidate for that. So ... Steve volunteers for the duty. He takes hormones to grow his breasts and begin lactation.
All goes well, until ... complications!
**Steve's very prominent breasts and his breastfeeding his daughter produce uncomfortable public circumstances; he begins dressing as a woman for work, which eases the discomfort because he passes pretty well. TOO well ...
**Mary comes down with cancer; she leaves Steve and the children to stay with her mother because she feels she's a burden AND because she doesn't like to see her husband becoming more female; she stops HIV treatment and progresses to full-blown AIDS.
**Steve, who goes by Stephanie when dressed as a woman, meets a new Doctor who then talks to Mary and convinces her to restart treatment for both the AIDS and cancer; the AIDS holds in check and her cancer goes into remission!
**BUT on two or three occasions now, the new Dr. (Jonathan Brown) has kissed Stephanie - sending her into totally unexpected and unsettling throes of infatuation! (Mary is unaware of this)
**Despite all of this, Steve and Mary's life returns to some normalcy; in addition to daughter Bekka, the couple now have a young infant son, so Steve's breastfeeding (and time spent as Stephanie) must continue. Mary announces that Steve needs to wean baby Hugh off breast milk - and that Steve should get a bilateral mastectomy ASAP! Problem: the surgeon REFUSES.
YESTERDAY'S CHAPTER
Mary learns of the surgeon's refusal; blames Steve/Stephanie, and takes off to her mother's with both children in tow. She leaves an ultimatum: return to being a man full time now, or their marriage is essentially over. Steve/Stephanie is broken over this.
Now without further ado, here is today's continuation ...
After a restless night spent alone in the house, I awoke and prepared for the workday. I intended initially to go to the office in my male persona, which optimally meant minimizing my bosom; however, I required my nursing bra with extra padding as I was leaking milk from my tight, unsuckled breasts. For some reason I could not find the electric breast pump I used when needing relief from the pressure (or to build up a refrigerated supply of milk for Hugh).
To have a full female shape protruding from a man’s shirt and jacket would be unacceptable in public, I reasoned. Therefore it was Stephanie that stepped out the front door and into the car.
“So as you can see, I need to change back to working as Steven, for all of those reasons,” I said.
Susan Williams, the proprietor of Adventure Travel, sat and listened. She appeared stymied. “Let me look at something,” she finally muttered, tapping some keys on her laptop. “Ah, here. You’ve been presenting as Steffi here at the office constantly for almost the past year. In that time, many of our clients came to know you only as a female agent; in fact, two of the women’s groups assigned to you had specifically requested a woman to handle their travel affairs. And now, what you’re asking for may destroy those client relationships.”
“But Susan – you knew that my situation was temporary. That I’d be eventually be returning as Steve.”
“Perhaps in the beginning. But frankly, you’ve remained Stephanie for so long that I almost figured that you had decided to be her from now on.”
“Susan – I have to change back.”
“Are you sure you really want that? Look at you. You’re immensely good looking; haven’t you noticed how some guys in the office will twist their necks to get a gander as you walk by? You are naturally feminine in your speech, your actions, and what we call deportment. The ladies practically consider you a girlfriend, and they let you in on all the juicy gossip. Will you be able to be happy if you’re never Steffi again?”
“I … I …” Why was I struggling to answer? “I … honestly, I don’t know.”
“I won’t oppose your decision, whichever it is. Be advised, this office is under significant financial pressure; agents who lose clients will be at risk. Do you understand?”
“Yes, ma’am,” I sighed, feeling a little more burdened. My move back to Steve full-time was supposed to simplify things, not complicate them.
As I parked back at my house that evening, I felt horrid in almost every way. Hopping up the entry steps, my swollen breasts jiggled and reminded me that some of the misery was physical. Thank God I’m home, now Hugh can relieve me -
“Bollocks!” I spat, remembering that of course Hugh was gone with Bekka and Mary at my in-laws. Well, I’ll use the pump then. Wait – I couldn’t find it this morning! Where is it?
I searched the place from stem to stern; no breast pump was found. Did Mary take it with her, to force-wean ME from the breastfeedings as well? Multiple calls and texts to Mary’s number continued to go unanswered.
I tried to express milk using my fingers; it was messy and inefficient – after 10 minutes I experienced no relief. I was now having occasional fleeting sharp pains from the tight mammaries. I cannot go all night this way. Perhaps the chemist?
It was now after 8 pm; there were some late night chemists within driving range, but calls placed to them found that none had a breast pump. The attendant at Lloyd’s was especially helpful, searching the store until he came back on with the news that they’d sold their last one earlier today.
I gently cradled my painful bosom with one arm whilst dialing with my free hand. I do NOT want to visit the A&E … but perhaps they have a spare pump?
A call to the nearest hospital emergency department brought hope. “Yes, love, we have a pump here; can you get to us easily enough?”
“I’ll have to put my top and bra on, but carefully as I’m really hurting.”
“Wait one bit, ma’am; you said your name was Stephanie Jones?”
“Well, I’m registered as Steven Jones with the NHS. It’s a long story.”
“That’s all right, Stephanie – we deal with the transgendered quite often.” The nurse’s voice then suddenly got distant, as if she’d pulled the phone away from her face. I could make out a few words still: “Are you sure … you do know her? …”
I opened my mouth to tell the nurse that I wasn’t transgender; then thought better of it and just sighed. This was no time to quibble; I needed relief.
“Ms. Jones, hang on. One of our staff was leaving his shift, and he’s volunteered to bring the pump by your place. Please verify your address.”
“Oh thank you so much! Will they be by soon?”
“He’s leaving right now. Come out here if this doesn’t help. Goodbye.”
My current state of dress was topless, with a large towel draped over my breasts and lightly pressed against the nipples. I tossed the towel in the dirty hamper and reapplied the nursing bra, pulling a loose button-up sweater on over it; I attached enough buttons to be modest, then sat awaiting the doorbell.
I didn’t wait for long. A ring came through, and I stepped quickly to the entry. “Is this the worker from the A&E? With the pump?” I spoke through the door.
“Well, essentially, yes,” came the answer.
I opened the door. “Please come –“ no further words were spoken, as my tongue was frozen in surprise. I instantly recognized the hospital “staff” person.
“Hello, Stephanie,” smiled Dr. Jonathan Maurice Brown.
NOTICE TO READERS:
This is a fan-fiction story continuation of Alys's unfinished story, "A Mother's Love." As I have stated in my blog, Alys has given her permission for this work. This is not meant to alter or detract at all from her superb original story, merely to build upon it and achieve a resolution for these wonderful characters.
The setting of this story is Great Britain, and superstar Big Closet author Angharad graciously consented to help me retain a British "feel" for the narrative and dialogue. She is a godsend/lifesaver. I have now had the privilege of working with multiple stars here to bring my humble little indulgent tales to be published in BC. What a giving, loving community.
If you aren't familiar with Alys's story, I have typed a brief summary to set the stage (see the Brief Synopsis at the top). If you want to read Alys's part of this tale (all chapters are super quick reads and great stories!), then look into:
A Mother's Love - Prequel
A Mother's Love - Volume 1 (11 parts)
A Mother's Love - Volume 3 (2 parts)
To be continued tomorrow.
If you've gotten this far, please leave me a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! Hugz - **Sigh**
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A Mother's Love (fan-fiction)
Volume 3.05
by **Sigh**, with assistance from Angharad
Copyright© 2020 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
Previously on "A Mother's Love":
Mary has suddenly left for her mother's house in Manchester, four hours away (and she's taken the children with her!). Stephanie is trying to return to "Steve" mode full time but is meeting resistance at work. With suddenly no baby to suckle (and unable to find the breast pump), Stephanie is having significant breast pains. The hospital A&E has sent her a pump, delivered by ... Dr. Jonathan Brown, whom Stephanie has had unexpected attraction to in the past!
(for a more extensive recap - all the way back to the beginning - please check out the "Brief Synopsis" at the beginning of Chapter 3.04, posted yesterday)
And now, today's continuation ...
“Jonathan?!”
“I have your pump right here,” he said. “I saw the intake nurse write your name down as she was talking to you on the phone. I figured there probably aren’t that many lactating patients in this area named Stephanie Jones.”
“You’re not an A&E physician! You’re a cancer and HIV specialist. What were you doing down in emergency?”
“I had finished all of my inpatient work for the day; as the last task before I left for home, I did an initial consultation on a patient there with newly diagnosed acute leukemia. So I was writing my findings when I overheard the nurse on the phone.” He saw me wince a few times as he talked; this caused him to frown with concern. “You’re really suffering, aren’t you? Is the pain that bad?”
I had been holding back tears, but now let them loose. “Oh, Jonathan. This has been the worst day of my life.” My head hung towards the floor. “My marriage, my job, my children, my future, and now even my gender – it’s all up in the air, coming down for a huge crash. Then tonight there’s this bloody breast pain!”
“Well, much of that I can’t help with – except the last problem. Let’s get this pump assembled and relieve some of that pressure.”
He unboxed the pump with its tubing and suction cups. I was taken with the sight: a respected, learned man who seemed to hurt with every pang of pain I experienced. It seemed he actually, truly cared deeply for me. He removed his coat as he was starting to perspire some; his wiry, lean musculature could now be better seen through his shirt. I began to feel an unusual desire, a need for him to be closer.
This appeared to be his first time putting together this type of machine, as he fumbled with the components and held up the instructions, scanning them quickly with a scowl on his face. “I’m so sorry, Stephanie. I know you’re hurting. I’m doing this as quickly as I can; have you assembled one of these before?”
“Jonathan.” I began to unbutton my sweater. “Can you come over here?”
Jon walked to me, confused as to what I wanted. He stopped about a foot from me; I clasped his shirt collar and pulled his face to mine, delivering a warm soft kiss; after a few seconds, I broke it and pulled away slightly. Tugging the right side of the sweater from my chest, I then unlatched the nursing flap from that breast. The organ was full and tight, slightly leaking a drop of milk from the nipple. I spoke not a word but looked intently in his eyes with a visage that asked him to understand … and invited him to act.
He withdrew a bit and returned my gaze intently. His head tilted, as if incredulous of the request.
“Please,” I whispered between deep, shuddering breaths.
Jonathan looked at my breast, then back into my eyes. He then slowly lowered his head towards the nipple.
“Please. Hurry,” I whispered.
His lips wrapped around my nipple and areola, and he began to suck. Immediately a forceful burst of warm, thick milk hit the back of his throat; he pulled away coughing.
“Jon? Are you okay?”
“Wasn’t prepared for the force of that first squirt. Don’t worry, I’ve got it now.” He reapplied his mouth to the same area and began to suck with more gusto. I leaned my head back and breathed “Oooohh.”
Jonathan continued to nurse, but as he did he put his arms around me and lowered his hands to my skirt, which he pulled on until the hem was up around my hips. His hands now grabbed my buttocks, and he lifted me up off the floor. I hung onto the back of his head to keep from tipping over.
He carried me to the couch, then turned and sat down on it, all the while continuing the suckling. He pulled my legs to where they now rested, flexed, on either side of his torso. I could now feel a warm bulge from Jonathan’s groin pressing into my knickers.
The right breast was reducing in tightness and output. Jonathan came ‘up for air’. “Ready for the left?” he said with a sly grin. I just smiled and nodded my head.
He began to minister to the other side, and I began to get more vocal. At first, my sighs were from the relief of tightness; as time progressed, I began to moan in a more erotic response.
As the last of the milk finally emptied, Jonathan leaned his head back and looked into my eyes.
“Have you ever had a full drink of your breast milk? It’s quite good,” he asked.
“Just a drop or two; never a mouthful, and definitely not a meal’s worth like you just had.”
“Let me give you a taste,” he whispered. Then he brought his lips to mine, and we kissed long and deep. As we did, our hands wandered. He unclasped my bra. I unbuttoned his shirt. Both of us were topless in short order; but as he grasped for my panties, I grabbed his arm.
“I’m only a woman from waist-up. But I would still love to show you my gratitude.” With that, I snaked my arm down the inside of his trousers and began caressing his manhood.
Minutes later, we both lay on the couch, our heavy breathing gradually subsiding.
“Is your discomfort gone?” he queried.
“I am feeling no pain.” I pulled herself tighter against his body. “I know this won’t last, but I just want to enjoy it a little longer. Can you continue to lie here with me a while?”
“Your wish is my command, Madame,” he purred. “I wish you knew how long I have dreamed of being with you like this.”
“Me too,” I answered.
“So … all is right with the world, then,” he replied.
As we lay on the settee, he fell asleep. I could not; my mind was in a whirlwind of turmoil contemplating the previous 24 hours, especially the last one.
“Jonathan. Wake up.”
The doctor opened his eyes; he was still on the couch, naked from the waist up. I was clothed and sitting on a chair in the living room, holding out a cup towards him.
“It’s lemon herbal tea; if you prefer, I can get you something with caffeine – but it’s only eleven and I didn’t want you to be up all night.”
“Why did you get up? I was hoping to awaken beside you in the morning,” he yawned.
I grasped his hand but stayed in the chair. “Jonathan. I’ve been doing a lot of thinking, and I’ve come to some decisions that we need to talk about.
“Tonight was wonderful. I needed to be held, to be desired. It’s been so long since Mary has really wanted me sexually, due to how female my shape has become. Your loving has renewed my soul.
“And yet at the same time, tonight was horrible. I have cheated on my wife – something I am deeply ashamed of. Even if I make the changes she’s demanded, this one act could torpedo our marriage.”
“But you’re attracted to me,” the doctor replied. “Are you bisexual? Or are you staying in a loveless marriage just for the sake of it?”
I shook my head. “When first we met, I staunchly believed I was 100% male and fully heterosexual, and that I had only developed my breasts for the sole purpose of feeding my infant child. But our first kiss – it shook my whole world. And now it has culminated in what we did tonight. It came so … naturally to me. I’m beginning to think that perhaps my soul is really female. I am at home, at peace, being Stephanie. My Steve persona feels more and more alien.”
“So, then. Perhaps it’s time to make a clean break, and be Stephanie full time. You would lose your wife, but you’d gain me.”
“Jonathan – you aren’t suggesting we start a relationship, are you?” I gasped with alarm.
He hadn’t expected quite this reaction. “Well, um … would that be a problem?”
“Yes! I'm still married! In spite of how Mary's treated me recently, and even with what just happened tonight, it doesn't excuse more infidelity on my part!” I exclaimed. “Not to mention that I don't need to give her another reason to keep Hugh and Bekka from me! Then there’s the problem of your medical license.”
“What do you mean by that?”
“Even though you haven’t treated her in nearly two years, you’re still one of Mary’s physicians. And you’ve now had a sexual liaison with the spouse of one of your patients. As I understand it, that could result in you being sanctioned – if news of this got out, that is.”
“Damn,” he cursed, realizing the tangled knot this situation had become.
“So,” I continued, “Here’s what will happen. You’re going to quietly drive home from here. I am going to seek out a gender specialist to confirm what/who I truly am. I will try to come to an agreement with Mary for the children. And you and I will remember tonight fondly – but we won’t repeat it. Agreed?”
“And if I disagree?” he countered.
“Don’t,” I warned.
NOTICE TO READERS:
This is a fan-fiction story continuation of Alys's unfinished story, "A Mother's Love." As I have stated in my blog, Alys has given her permission for this work. This is not meant to alter or detract at all from her superb original story, merely to build upon it and achieve a resolution for these wonderful characters.
The setting of this story is Great Britain, and superstar Big Closet author Angharad graciously consented to help me retain a British "feel" for the narrative and dialogue. She is a godsend/lifesaver. I have now had the privilege of working with multiple stars here to bring my humble little indulgent tales to be published in BC. What a giving, loving community.
If you aren't familiar with Alys's story, I have typed a brief summary to set the stage (see the Brief Synopsis at the top). If you want to read Alys's part of this tale (all chapters are super quick reads and great stories!), then look into:
A Mother's Love - Prequel
A Mother's Love - Volume 1 (11 parts)
A Mother's Love - Volume 3 (2 parts)
To be continued tomorrow.
If you've gotten this far, please leave me a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! Hugz - **Sigh**
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A Mother's Love (fan-fiction)
Volume 3.06
by **Sigh**, with assistance from Angharad
Copyright© 2020 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
SIX MONTHS LATER
“My goodness.”
I paused after donning my knickers to assess the appearance of my nearly nude form, first from the front, and then turning to see a profile. My DD-cup breasts hung in large teardrop shapes, a genetic gift from my well-endowed mother. My slim waist expanded to modest hips before tapering to lithe legs below. The addition of testosterone blockers and electrolysis to the usual hormone therapy had produced stunning results; indeed, my groin contained the only evidence that I’d been born male.
Amazing. I never was thought of as effeminate when I was Steve; yet as Stephanie, I am near-unreadable, I mused, and shook my head in mild wonderment at my good fortune. A glance at the clock reminded me to return to the task at hand. I went to apply makeup before putting on the rest of the outfit.
“Steffie! Aren’t you supposed to be off today? I thought you were headed to Manchester to spend time with your tots?”
“And a proper hello to you too, Susan,” I laughed. “Have no fear; I’m just here to drop off the itineraries I worked on last night at home, then I’m off to Mary’s mother’s house.”
“Well take care of yourself – mentally, emotionally, physically. I worry about you having to interact with your ex-wife – ”
“You mean my eventual ex,” I corrected. “It won’t be official for a while, I’m afraid.”
“Either way, she’s still an ex. She has a knack of stirring the pot with your emotions and even your self-esteem. When that happens, it affects us too.”
“Well, I promise to be on my ‘A’ game when I return to work on Monday.”
“Psh! I’m not worried about that,” Susan snorted. “Ever since you committed to living life exclusively as a woman six months ago, you’ve been more focused and productive than ever, as your top sales status shows. No – what I mean is that I, and all the rest of us here, care for you as a person. Don’t let yourself be abused or manipulated by a vengeful wife.”
I smiled even as my eyes surely betrayed scars of emotional pain. “I appreciate that. But know that I will suffer whatever I have to in order to be in my kid’s lives. I really must be off, now; thank you for the kind words, Susan.” With that, I left the office.
To all appearances, I was an attractive young woman in a sleeveless sundress and strappy sandals walking up to the front door of a small house in Manchester. I took a big breath in, then rang the doorbell. My brown shoulder-length hair was parted on the right side, partially obscuring the left eye as it fell across my face. Red lips and a faux pearl necklace framed a nervous smile.
Mary opened the door and greeted me with a grimace. “God. You’re not even trying to hide it anymore, are you? Not even dressing neutrally. Come in, I guess.”
I followed her inside to find our children, Bekka and Hugh, playing on the floor with their maternal grandmother, Andrea James. The older woman smiled. “Hello there! Children – your Auntie Stephanie is here!”
“Auntie Stephanie!” yelled Bekka as she ran to me and latched onto my upper thigh. Hugh screamed as he ran and hugged the opposite leg.
“Oh my darlings, I’ve missed you so much!” I cried. I squatted down and grabbed them – one in each arm – then stood up with an ‘uff!’ and carried them to the sofa where all three of us landed in a laughing, hugging, tickling heap.
After a good hour of play, I took a kitchen break to drink some coffee that Andrea had made. Mary gave me my instructions.
“I want Mum to have the weekend off from the kids. She’s been doing most of their care while I establish at my new job here, and it’s nearly exhausted her. So it’s a good thing you’re here, as Koz and I have had this cycle regatta planned for a few weeks. It would really disappoint him if I had to cancel.”
“Mary – who is this ‘Cause,’ and how long have you known him?”
“That’s Koz, K-O-Z. He’s my boyfriend; we met at a pub here two months ago.”
“What does he do for a living?”
“Is this the Spanish Inquisition? He does on-site car repair and odd jobs. What he prefers to do is motorcycle the country – preferably with me hanging on his back. Is this interrogation over? Let’s change the subject.”
“Okay. Why is Bekka calling me ‘Auntie’? Her name for me was Mum-Stephanie.”
“Because I’M her mum. I’m her only mum! You were her Dad, but clearly you’re not anymore. So you can be an auntie. That’s what I’ve told her to call you.”
“Mary … this time and distance from my kids … it’s killing me. Are you sure there’s no equitable way we can work this out? You could even still seek your divorce from me yet we could live in the same house. I’d even be open to you dating men; we could live as roommates. I just need to be around the kids; and I’d love to still be around you, too.”
“Then you should have stayed a man! That’s what I married – a man named Steve, and he was a pretty good one! But when I look at you I’m reminded of how you rejected that life – you rejected ME – and it all disgusts me. No, it’s over. I’m rebuilding what’s left of my life and moving on, and the kids with me – except for court-ordered visitation, of course.”
The doorbell rang. “Ah. That’s probably him,” smiled Mary. She left to the door, then re-entered the kitchen with a man in tow. This man wore a white T-shirt with a sleeveless denim jacket above his holey jeans and leather boots. Copious tattoos adorned his arms with various skulls and partially naked women. A handlebar moustache seemed to give him a permanent glower; his long hair was pulled back into a low ponytail, quite a contrast to the receding hairline he had on his front scalp.
Mary made the introduction. “Stephanie, this is Koz. Koz, this is my ex.”
Koz’s left eyebrow arched high. “You’re the bloke? Or, rather, used to be?” He shook his head, then turned to Mary. “You ready to blow this burg, babe?”
“Let me get my backpack,” she squeaked eagerly and ran off to her bedroom.
“Where are you two motoring to?” I asked Koz.
“Big biker meeting in the countryside. Spending one or two nights there. Partying and good times.” Koz walked to the refrigerator and procured a beer, which he chugged down quite briskly; he glanced back towards me. “Mary never mentioned how lush you are. Have you taken that bod for a test run with a high-octane stud? ‘Cause I am one, ya know.”
I was gobsmacked. “You know that your girlfriend – my wife – is in the next room? And that I haven’t had surgery? Yet you are flirting with me. You’re either pissed or a pillock.”
“Pfft. Your loss, lass.” Koz now was quaffing his second beer.
“Um, aren’t you about to go on a motorcycle trip? Should you be drinking?” I fretted.
“If I go too long without one, I get the shakes – see?” Koz held out his hand to reveal a mild tremor. “These are my first brews today. I’ll be fine after a couple more.” With that, he started to gulp down another.
I turned and hopped to Mary’s bedroom and knocked on the door, then went in.
“Mary. Did you know that Koz is on his third or fourth beer out of the fridge? And he smells like skunk. Riding with a cyclist who’s drunk and high on marijuana is a bad idea, don’t you think?”
“Koz will be fine. You’d be amazed how well he holds his liquor.”
“Please tell me he doesn’t interact with the kids; he doesn’t smoke pot around them, does he? And why date a guy like him? You can do better; you deserve better.”
Mary suddenly looked furious. “I’m damaged goods! I’m HIV positive, and even though I’m stable on meds, to most guys that’s a deal-breaker. I’m also in remission from cancer – not cured, in remission – meaning there’s a chance it will come back. That makes me a burden to any partner. I can do better? I DID have better – you, while you were still Steve! But no, now you’ve ‘found your true self’ as a woman. So don’t you dare lecture me when you’re the cause of this current situation!” She walked past me in a huff, out to the kitchen.
“Koz, I’m ready. Let’s leave this mess.”
I watched in silence as they mounted the cycle together and sped off.
After supper (I made spaghetti with meat sauce for all of them; Hugh still got baby food) I rested with my two tots in the living room.
“Mum-Stephanie – oops, I mean Auntie-Stephanie,” Bekka corrected herself.
“Love, you can call me Mum-Stephanie when it’s just us two here,” I cooed.
“Okay. Why haven’t you visited us more often? I miss you so much; so does Hugh.”
“Well, Mum-Mary and I are having some disagreements about who you should be with and when. But know that I can’t stand being away from you; I would see you every day if I was allowed to.”
“I’m sorry, Mummie. I’m bad sometimes. But I’m trying to be good.”
“Darling! What’s happened between us Mums is NOT your fault! It’s our fault. And … probably mostly mine.” I started to dab my eyes.
“Please stay here with us. Please don’t go away again.”
My heart was breaking into a million little pieces. Nothing – NOTHING – is worth hurting my children like this! If I have to go back to being a man forever, so be it – as long as I can be with them. I need to tell Mary –
Those thoughts were interrupted by a ring of the doorbell.
“It’s nearly nine in the evening. Who could this be?” wondered Andrea as she walked to the entryway. “Hello? Who is it?” she yelled through the door.
“Police, ma’am,” came the answer.
The door swiftly opened, and there were two Bobbies standing there. Both were in uniform, holding their hats in their hands. “Is this the current residence of Mary Jones?” the closest one asked.
“It is; I’m her mother. Whatever is the problem?”
I stood at the back of the entryway, watching the officers interact with my mother-in-law. Suddenly my stomach felt as if weighted down with twenty pounds of lead. “Oh no,” I whispered faintly.
“Ma’am – I regret to tell you some bad news. There’s been an accident …”
NOTICE TO READERS:
This is a fan-fiction story continuation of Alys's unfinished story, "A Mother's Love." As I have stated in my blog, Alys has given her permission for this work. This is not meant to alter or detract at all from her superb original story, merely to build upon it and achieve a resolution for these wonderful characters.
The setting of this story is Great Britain, and superstar Big Closet author Angharad graciously consented to help me retain a British "feel" for the narrative and dialogue. She is a godsend/lifesaver. I have now had the privilege of working with multiple stars here to bring my humble little indulgent tales to be published in BC. What a giving, loving community.
If you aren't familiar with Alys's story, I have typed a brief summary to set the stage (see the Brief Synopsis at the top). If you want to read Alys's part of this tale (all chapters are super quick reads and great stories!), then look into:
A Mother's Love - Prequel
A Mother's Love - Volume 1 (11 parts)
A Mother's Love - Volume 3 (2 parts)
To be continued tomorrow.
If you've gotten this far, please leave me a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! Hugz - **Sigh**
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A Mother's Love (fan-fiction)
Volume 3.07 through 3.09
by **Sigh**, with assistance from Angharad
Copyright© 2020 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
NOTICE: FINAL POSTING TODAY
Hi there, reader - Sigh here.
I've been posting the continuation of this story in short bits (between 1K and 2K words per part, as was the original author's habit). However, these last 3 parts are SUPER short, so I've combined them into one post that will wrap up this tale in a neat little bow. One more time, huge kudos to Angharad for her invaluable British phrasing and charm! Kudos to Alys for the original story! And much thanks to anyone who took the time to read this flight of fancy. I owe you all big-time hugz!
Chapter 3.07
Bekka gazed into my floor length mirror and smiled. The three-year-old wore a bright red dress with petticoats; they swirled and fluffed as she spun ‘round.
“Mum-Stephanie! Do you like my dress? I think it’s so pretty!”
“It’s gorgeous, honey; YOU’RE gorgeous. I am so proud to call you my daughter. Mum-Mary will love it.”
Bekka frowned. “But how can she see me in my dress if she’s gone to heaven already?”
“I believe she can see you – and all of us – from heaven. And part of her is still with us here on earth; the part of her heart that is always living inside us.”
“Mummie, why aren’t you wearing red like me? Don’t you want us to match?”
“For this occasion, grown-ups wear black. We do it to … show how much we miss Mary.”
Bekka began to sob. “I miss her too. I still love her.” She rubbed her chest as if to ease a pain. “I’m … I’m sorry, Mum-Steph … Stephanie … I can’t stop it …”
“Don’t try to stop it, baby. It’s okay to cry; you’re supposed to. In fact, I’m about to join you,” I said, embracing my youngster and now leaking tears of my own. “I miss her and love her too. I’ve never stopped loving her.”
The service was being held at a crematorium in London, as this is where most of Mary’s friends and acquaintances lived. She had suffered severe head injuries in the crash and died quickly. I’d found a picture of her from before her illness and we included it on the front of the order of service.
At the chapel, I carried Hugh in my right arm while holding Bekka’s hand with the left. A familiar face from the crèche I used made me smile, and I walked to it to hand over my son.
“Janis, thank you so much for being here and agreeing to look after him.”
“You’re welcome, love. I’ll be in the back room where the young mothers take their children. I’m praying for you to get through this.”
I sat through the service; the vicar had encouraging words. My emotions were all over the map. With Mary’s death, she would no longer live another day feeling as if she was damaged goods; and of course, now I had both of my children living with me every day. These thoughts gave me comfort and yet also guilt for being relieved about the situation. There were bittersweet memories too; I had now permanently lost the woman who truly was my soul mate. I remembered our first meeting, our courtship, and early marriage; the loss of that bliss, especially my role in that loss, haunted me. If I only had rejected the idea of me nursing Bekka; she and our marriage might still exist.
The service came to the eulogies, where those who knew Mary were invited to share how Mary had affected their lives. I spoke for about ten minutes, remembering our best times. Andrea spoke highly of her daughter.
“Are there any more recollections?” the vicar asked. To my surprise, a tall man in the back stood up and approached the podium.
Dr. Jonathan Maurice Brown. He leaned towards the microphone and spoke:
“Mary was my patient for a short time. I was privileged to be her oncologist. We got her cancer into remission just 2 years ago. Now, many might shake their heads and remark about what a shame it is to elude death by malignancy only to receive it from a motorcycle accident. I assure you, Mary would disagree. She felt that each day was a gift, and living it fully was a success. Instead of moping that we only bought her two more years, I will rejoice in the fact that this woman got over seven hundred more days to experience her life, and love on those she loved. We who survive her would do well to emulate that attitude: live with what we have, and love who we have, today – while we still have them. God bless you all, and bless Mary’s soul.”
The ceremony was taped so that my children could watch it later when they were old enough to comprehend fully what was said. There was a wake of course, and to my happy surprise, Jonathan was there also. I approached him.
“What nice things you had to say about Mary. Thank you.”
“You’re welcome, Stephanie. I realize she wasn’t a total saint; but at times like this, one focuses on the positive.”
“I was thinking about the last thing you said – live and love with those we have while we still have them. That wasn’t a veiled message meant for me, was it?”
“That depends. Are you taking it that way, and are you offended if it was?”
“Not offended. Oh, I’m just going to say it. You still intrigue me.” I was beginning to blush.
Jonathan put on his trademark wry smile. “You know, those problems that you had with us pursuing a relationship – what you told me six months ago? It appears those are no longer are an issue. I know you just lost your wife, and you are probably not ready for a new lover –“
“No, I’m not,” I interrupted, “but I could definitely use a new friend. Why don’t we start from there and go ‘low and slow’ for a while? We can see where that takes us.”
Chapter 3.08
TWO YEARS LATER
“For the thousandth time, don’t worry! I’ve cared for my grandkids before. Even though this time it will be for a week, they are so well behaved that I think I can handle it. And if I need a break, I’ll use the Child Care Centre to help me for a few hours – as you’ve suggested. Now you go and have a fantastic honeymoon in Bermuda, please!”
Andrea was doing her best to reassure me, but since this was to be the longest time in two years that I’d be separated from my darlings – well, I was worrying. Jonathan came up to me from behind and laid his manly hands on my shoulders.
“Hey there, my sweet. I promise we’ll call back daily to check on Hugh and Bekka. You need to finish packing so we can head to the airport in time.”
I still needed to make sure. “Andrea – I’ve listed you as their carer for this week over at the crèche. Do use them – daily, if you need – so you can get a midday rest. And I’ve left all the emergency numbers –“
“On the refrigerator, yes, you’ve told me three times already. Now scoot to your closet and pack; oh, and one last thing …”
“What’s that?” I fretted.
“DON’T WORRY! That’s all.”
I looked out the window of the plane, seeing nothing but a distant ocean below. My previous fears of leaving the children for a week seemed more distant too. I turned to my new husband; he was reading a book, yet his arm was intertwined with mine, betraying our still vibrant infatuation with each other.
“I’m sorry for all the anxiety I had over Hugh and Bekka.”
“I took no offence, my love. Andrea might feel that you lack confidence in her, though.”
“Yes, I can see that. I’ll text her my apology when we land.”
“In the years I’ve known you, I’ve never seen you so fearful. Why do you think you were?”
“Hmm. Actually, the last time I went more than a day seeing the kids, they were gone for the better part of six months – the last time that Mary took them from me. I think I was having flashbacks to that time. I don’t know why – Andrea has been totally trustworthy.”
“A lot has happened since then. You’ve weaned Hugh off of breast milk completely, then finished your transition, despite the NHS dragging its feet on that. Then you planned and pulled off a most impressive wedding. Were you happy with it?”
“Oh yes. But if I could take a time machine to go back one year, I would beg my then-self to please elope,” I laughed. “It took so much time and energy! Perhaps with the pictures and a little time, I’ll appreciate it more. You’ve been quite busy too, Jonathan. Overseeing the new inpatient wing of the cancer ward, with the expansion of research capabilities? You and I have been burning our candles at both ends.”
“Right now I’m only burning at one end; you’re so sexy, sitting next to me,” he breathed in my ear.
“Soon, my love,” I whispered back. I wish it were sooner! I thought.
We had dropped our bags off at our beach condo unit and gone for dinner at a recommended local seafood grill. Now we were unpacked and changed into swimwear to hit the poolside Jacuzzi. Being virtually alone there for the last twenty minutes, we snuggled and made the hot tub a little hotter.
Back in the condo, we showered together. I dried off quickly and hopped out of the bath area, leaving Jonathan to finish towelling himself there. I grabbed one of the cuplets of coffee creamer on the minibar and turned off all the lights, whilst opening the shades to show the moonshine over the waves at the beach below.
My new husband stepped out of the brightly lit loo into the pitch dark of the bedroom, forced to stand still as his eyes adjusted. “Stephanie?”
“Jonathan. I’m over here. I’m having a problem,” I groaned. I now sat up on the side of the bed so that my silhouette was visible against the window.
“What’s the matter, darling?” He hurried to my side, vision already adjusting.
“I didn’t bring my pump. They’re so uncomfortably tight. And I’m leaking,” I said as I lifted one of my breasts into the moon glow. There was a drop of cream glistening on the nipple. “Please,” I breathed, recreating our first sexual escapade from two years prior.
My lover smiled, and then lowered his face to minister unspeakable joy to my bosom.
Chapter 3.09
“I’m so nervous. Are there complications? It’s been too long since we’ve heard anything. If she’d allowed me to be in the birthing suite –“
“But she didn’t. She wants us to remain as anonymous as possible. Just relax, Steph. Have you read the letter she wants us to hold on to?” Jonathan, as ever, was being a steady rock for me.
It had always been a goal for Jon to have a child that was naturally his. Of course, I could not provide him with an egg, so we looked into in vitro treatments with the use of a surrogate mother. However, in the preliminary tests Jon was found to have a genetic condition – testicular azoospermia, they called it – that made him untreatably impotent.
He put on a brave front having heard that news; he even said he was glad that I had no cause to feel guilty for an inability to carry his children. I took no such comfort because my husband was clearly devastated by this discovery.
Therefore two months ago Jonathan and I, after much discussion and contemplation, decided to apply for the adoption of a child. Bekka had been hinting at wanting a little sister, and I was hoping for a tot that my husband and I could raise from the start together. To his credit, he (along with me) kept Susan’s memory alive for Hugh and Bekka; yet this emphasized his role with them as more like a step-parent. Anyway, we were hoping for a baby of less than one year old. Then we got a phone call from the agency two weeks ago.
“Stephanie Brown? This is Alice from the adoption bureau. We have a pregnant girl who wants to surrender her child to a worthy couple, and for it to occur just after giving birth. Are you open to this?”
“Of course we are!”
The next we knew, there were papers and processes. We had an ‘audio only’ phone discussion with the girl.
“So, Emily; how did you come to the decision to give this baby up for adoption?” I asked.
“Because I waited too late to abort,” replied the girl. “To be honest, I’ve been stoned and high on heroin and other crap for most of the last year. Somewhere in that time, I got knocked up; it could have been any of a dozen different blokes. Now I’ve been in rehab treatment for six weeks, and have been clean for that time. I finally realised – after the fog lifted – that I needed to deal with this pregnancy, but I was already past 24 weeks, and in the UK they won’t do one this late unless there’s severe deformity (there isn’t – I got tested) or my life is in danger (it’s not). So I want to give her up. I understand that you already have two well-adjusted tykes?”
“Yes, we do. And since I’m now infertile, we can’t have any more naturally.”
“It sounds like I’ve found the folks for my foetus then.”
As we hung up, I looked at Jonathan. “We’re going to be parents of a newborn infant. I need to get in with my endocrinologist now!”
Sixty-three days later we are here in the obstetrical waiting area, and I’m looking for the letter. The letter that Emily wanted us to read, then seal and save to give to our newborn daughter 18 years from now. Ah! I’ve found it. I call my husband over and we start reading.
Hello, daughter.
This is your birth mother. Not your real mother. The real one is the one who’s committed to raising you these last 18 years. I imagine you wonder why I was willing to give you up. You probably think it’s because I didn’t love you.
Wrong. I’m giving you up BECAUSE I love you!
See, my mother was abused, molested, on drugs, and pregnant (with me) at age 16. She could not care for me adequately with all that baggage, and so now here I am, a victim of abuse, rape, hooked on drugs most of my life, and now pregnant with you at age 18. I’m just now getting clean; yet, I feel that to keep you would condemn you to repeat this pattern.
So I’m breaking the cycle. I’m giving you to people who are proven to be good parents, who love each other, and who really, really want a new child. I pray they will be as good as advertised; yet I KNOW they will be better than I would be.
Maybe someday I can pull it together enough to be a good mum for someone. But I am far from that at this point. Since you are an adult – this is to be given to you at your 18th – then if you want to seek me out, I’ll allow it now. I pray that I am clean and still alive. If not, then know that I do love you, and want the best for you. I always will.
Love, Emily
“What a letter!” exclaimed my husband.
“Jonathan. This is a sacred duty for us now. We must prove worthy of Emily’s trust by loving this new little girl just as much as we do Hugh and Bekka. I vow I will, at this moment and from now on,” I swore.
“Mr. and Mrs. Brown? I am proud to announce: here is your new daughter!” The OB nurse entered the room with a crying, swaddled baby.
“Britney. Her name’s Britney,” smiled Jonathan.
“Is she hungry?” I asked, receiving her from the nurse.
“Yes, I imagine – oh! You’ve come prepared, I see; I didn’t know that you were –“
I already had my new baby to my breast; she latched on and had begun feeding without a hitch. “Yes, I am.” My new nursing blouse allowed discretion even in a semi-public area.
“You two have bonded immediately. Impressive,” smiled the nurse.
“God, how I’ve missed this – this intimacy, this sense of connection with my baby,” I emoted. “It’s beyond physical; it’s spiritual.”
“There’s nothing more transcendent than A Mother’s Love,” replied the nurse.
NOTICE TO READERS:
This is a fan-fiction story continuation of Alys's unfinished story, "A Mother's Love." As I have stated in my blog, Alys has given her permission for this work. This is not meant to alter or detract at all from her superb original story, merely to build upon it and achieve a resolution for these wonderful characters.
The setting of this story is Great Britain, and superstar Big Closet author Angharad graciously consented to help me retain a British "feel" for the narrative and dialogue. She is a godsend/lifesaver. I have now had the privilege of working with multiple stars here to bring my humble little indulgent tales to be published in BC. What a giving, loving community.
If you aren't familiar with Alys's story, I have typed a brief summary to set the stage (see the Brief Synopsis at the top). If you want to read Alys's part of this tale (all chapters are super quick reads and great stories!), then look into:
A Mother's Love - Prequel
A Mother's Love - Volume 1 (11 parts)
A Mother's Love - Volume 3 (2 parts)
If you've gotten this far, please leave me a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! Hugz - **Sigh**
“Wwhatt’ss hhappennedd to uuusss?” gurgled Marjorie. “Iiimmm a mmonnssterrr!”
“You’re lucky, Hayden. At least you’re still completely human,” moaned goatboy Jocko.
“Yeah. A weak, cold, naked, female human. My life just rocks,” I spat.
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ALL IS LOST
Part 1 of 2
by **Sigh**
Copyright © 2013 plaintive sigh All Rights Reserved. |
“Everyone in the break room in 5 minutes. Mandatory inservice.”
P. J. looked up in panic. “But-! I’ve finally got this vendor on the phone — after waiting on hold for …” he looked at his phone timer, “… a quarter hour!”
Crowzen shot back an annoyed look. “Terminate the conversation. Tell him it’s a work emergency. And get a cell number you can call back on so you won’t wait next time. Come on, Peej. I don’t have to tell you everything, do I?”
Wow. I’d never seen Mr. C. so ticked off. And believe you me, he was. Red face, glaring eyes, set jaw. I notice those things. Being observant of body language is a skill that has saved my bacon on more than one occasion. Although it was useless to me just a few minutes ago.
Jocko — unwisely — opened his big mouth. “Hey, boss — what’s the deal? A surprise inser-“
“YES, Mr. Floydada. A ‘pop’ inservice. On sexual harassment. Anyone not attending gets a payroll penalty. And — you all now have 4 minutes.” He then strode quickly out of the common cubicle area.
Double wow. He just called Jocko by his last name. He is very, very peeved. And from the subject of the meeting, it’s about what just was happening here in the roobicle. He’s sticking up for me? I’m more impressed with my new boss everyday.
Except now, as I walk with the other 8 down to the break room — which also serves as the conference/naptime/whatever room — I’m more nervous than a redheaded nudist during a sunscreen shortage. Will this be a … discreet event, or will I be put on display? Will I be still known as Hayden Moss, or as ‘harassment victim alpha’, the guy who is so pathetic his boss had to do this to protect him fwom da biig, baad buwwies he works with?
It’s all in how he handles it. Come on, Mr. C. Don’t blow this. For either of us.
Well, crap. He ... tried, I guess. Started out talking generically about work environments, and how they should be free from any ridicule or oppression in regards to one's sexual preference, status, gender, desired gender, et cetera. How sexual talk is discouraged in the workplace; how, if directed specifically at one of your coworkers, it is absolutely not tolerated. Man, if he had just stopped there, that would have been perfect. But no.
He had to add, "Specifically, we should never ridicule someone who is a virgin." Cringe.
THEN, "Hayden has chosen to keep himself chaste, and that is a noble thing. Virgins are beautiful people, and special. They are to be celebrated. Hayden - I honor your decision to remain a virgin. If anyone gives you any more trouble about that, just come tell me." Triple cringe!
At that point, I was the color of Superman's cape. My cell vibrated - it was a stealth-text from Jocko…
“Say ‘yes, father dearest’. Brown-noser.”
So, you know what that means. I absolutely will be ridiculed even more. And will I report it? Hell no.
So, Mr. Crowzen. My evaluation of your third day as our new boss? E for effort, D minus for results.
"Hey there, Hay. You OK?" It was Leticia, one of the two women who worked here with me at Data Conversion Inc.
"I'll be fine, Tish. No worries." I gave her my best fake smile.
"You know what the shrinks say about 'fine'. It stands for fucked up, insecure, neurotic and emotional," she smirked. Yet her hand was on my shoulder. Good ol' Tish; she’s always good to try and cheer me up. "If you ever want to talk about it, I'll be there for you."
"Talk about being made fun of virtually every day, or about me being a ... v-word?" I was pretty pessimistic. Not about her caring, but about her ability to do anything to help me.
I should’ve paid more attention; Jocko had silently entered the room, and felt obliged to join the conversation. "V-word? As in vagina? You're a vag? So that's why you've never been laid - you're really a girl, just so ugly that you appear to be a dude!" He whispered in a low voice, keeping an eye out for Mr. C.
"Give it a rest, dickhead. Leave him alone."
All three of us turned to see who said that. It was the temp that had come to fill in for Stevens, our coder who called in sick today with a sudden tummy bug ("I'm puking up my toenails, sir" was what we heard him say over Crowzen's speakerphone). This temp, a little guy, was standing toe-to-toe (and face-to-chest) with big Jocko.
"This isn't your bee's-wax, new guy," the taller man snarled. "Butt out."
"I've whipped men twice as big and ten times as tough as you, ass. I will take your..." -he then began whispering so low, only they two could hear. As he did, Jock's face turned paler than a peeled potato. Then big J turned, and walked away without a further word.
The little dude turned to me with an outstretched hand. “Name’s Sheldon. Sorry for butting in, but bullying really torches my toast. I’m filling in for-“
“Our sick coder. Yeah, I know. Thanks for dealing with creepo Jocko. I’m Hayden, and this is Leticia.” We shook hands.
Sheldon the temp was shorter than anyone else in the office except for Tish. He had one of those pencil thin mustaches that stayed slim as it curled down around his chin, encircling his lower face with an oblong “O”. He couldn’t have been older than twenty five, yet the poor dude was already getting a bald patch on the crown of his head. He looked around the cubicle room — the “roobicle”, I like to call it — checking out the digs, then spoke. “How long ago did your boss, Mr. Crowzen, open up this business?”
Letty answered as she cleaned her glasses with one of those little lens wipes she kept in her purse. “He didn’t open it. He bought it. Another guy — Zack Perry - started us, eight months ago. Then last week all of a sudden Mr. C comes in and announces that he’s bought us out.”
“Yeah,” I cut in. “A lot of us here are Zack’s friends, so when we heard he was gone, we got ready to turn in our notices — until the new boss tells us he’ll give us each a 7K bonus to stay on for at least another month. Says he’s got huge plans for the company, and he’s gonna reveal them at the party tonight.”
Sheldon’s eyes popped open. “There’s a company party tonight? Halloween night?” Boy, all of a sudden he seemed real nervous.
“A mandatory party,” Tish sighed.
Sheldon’s jaw dropped. “Attendance at the party is mandatory for you guys?”
“Yeah. A Halloween costume party, held at Mr. C’s house. He’s got some huge mansion out in the Terrace Gardens district. Hey, buddy,” I say as I put my hand on Sheldon’s shivering shoulder, “what’s up? You look like you just saw a ghost or something.”
Our temp worker eyed the door. “I’ve gotten ill, suddenly. You guys need to call in a different temp — I’m sorry. I’ve got to go, now-“
“You’re not going anywhere, spy.”
That was Mr. C, walking towards us with an angry glare directed right at the little dude. “I called the temp agency. They say that there’s no ‘Sheldon’ who works for them. Furthermore, they just discovered that the actual temp they were sending here just called them from County Hospital Emergency. Seems he was suddenly struck with horrible nausea and vomiting, just like Stevens was.”
Crowzen grabbed Shel’s arm and got in his face. “What a coincidence. Your doing, I suspect. Who are you, and why are you spying on me?”
Suddenly Sheldon jerked his arm free, and made a bolt for the front door — running smack dab into the belly of a huge uniformed security guard. The guard wrapped his big ham hock of an arm around the neck of the imposter, and then grunted towards Crowzen.
“Take him away, as I’ve instructed,” snarled our boss.
Tish turned to me. “When the hell did our little firm hire a security force?”
I shrugged. This was as much excitement and confusion as I’ve seen since Y2K.
All of a sudden Crowzen was sweetness and light again. “Hayden, Leticia! I’m so excited about the party tonight. Please don’t be late! And remember, I’ll be providing all of the costumes, so wear clothes that you can change out of easily.”
Tish frowned. “Sir — my niece had been counting on me to take her trick or treating tonight. I can get a replacement, but it will be a huge disappointment for her. I might not be able to-“
Crowzen halted her speech by putting a finger to his lips in a shush gesture. He then whispered something in her ear. Her eyes lit up like a Jack-o-lantern’s. Mr. C. smiled, playfully tweaked her nose with his finger, and then walked off.
“Tish?” I said, as she stared past me with bewilderment.
She snapped out of it and looked at me — still bewildered, but smiling. “Sorry. I’ll definitely — definitely — be at the party tonight.”
I have got to get myself a GPS, ‘cause my tiny cell phone map just wasn’t cutting it. While trying to find Crowzen’s place, I made more wrong turns than Napoleon at Waterloo. It was 7:28 when I finally parked in the huge circle drive in front of the mansion where the big shindig was to commence. We had been told to be no later than 7:30, and everyone else’s cars were already here.
I ran up to the huge wooden doors and knocked furiously. It was exactly 7:30 now. The left door swung open revealing a smiling Alistair Crowzen. “Hayden! Gracious, man! You like to cut things close! Come in, come in!”
I walked into a huge receiving room. There was a staircase leading to the upper floors, a magnificent chandelier, but no other guests. “Where is everybody?” I wondered out loud.
“Some are still being outfitted into their costumes, but most are already dressed and in the grand ballroom. Come with me, to the den — that’s where we’ve set up the dressing areas. We need to get your costume on.”
“Er … what exactly is my costume, Sir?”
He smiled wryly at me as we briskly walked towards the den. “You’ll learn to arrive early next time. You’re getting the only one that’s left.”
Entering the next room, there were dividers set up blocking the room into segments, with curtains. Great — even at a party, I’m being put into a cubicle. All of them were drawn closed except the one to the far left, where there were two figures sitting on stools, twiddling their thumbs. They wore large robes with hoods over their heads, kind of like those medieval monks you see in the movies.
“Lars, Sven — our last straggler has arrived,” announced my boss.
The Hoods jumped to attention. “Ah! Our Lady Godiva — at last!”
“Your Whaty Whatmatta??” I choked.
Yes. I had heard correctly. My party costume was to be Lady Godiva. The nude chick riding on a horse. Technically, she was supposed to be a hero, that ride being done for a noble cause. I couldn’t care less. If I was to be Lady G, then (1) I’d be dressed up as a girl and/or (2) I wouldn’t be dressed at all! Like, how was that going to happen?
This is what I was thinking as I stood in my white briefs, my arms and legs being rapid-shaved by the Swedish goofballs. I assume they’re Swedish with names like Lars and Sven; I sure can’t see their faces in those oppressive hoods they have on.
They finished, then approached me with something that looked like a flesh tone padded wetsuit, except the arms and legs of it went only to the elbows and knees. “Step into it from the back,” said Len. I don’t know if it was Lars or Sven saying it, so I just combined ‘em into one name, and Len is easier to say than Svars.
I step into the thing, and put my arms into the sleeves as they zip me up in back. Okay, I see now. This is like a girl’s body, with hanging breasts, and a slit in the crotch. Thank God there’s a little room in the crotch, or else I’d be singing soprano. So now I kind of looked like my head is on a really curvy naked chick body. It’s so realistic I’d probably be turned on if I weren’t so embarrassed.
“So, I’m supposed to just walk around the party as a nude girl torso? Please tell me there’s some clothes I have to wear. Even a sheet. Just not in the buff, please.”
“Hang on, we’re not through,” Len says. Then the other one brings out this huge long blonde Rapunzel wig, and fits it on me. The hair hangs down to my calves; then with some type of adhesive they plaster my locks to certain parts of my front so that the strands strategically covet the nipples and the groin of the outfit. Body tape, they called the stickum.
“Done,” says the other one (Svars, I guess).
“Th — that’s it? No clothes? Please!”
“You’re Lady Godiva. You’re nude.”
“What about the butt? You didn’t cover it!”
“Don’t worry. The others are wearing extreme outfits too. You’ll blend right in,” Len and Svars say as they push me towards and through a side door …
Aaaand I’m in the ballroom.
Everyone is looking at me.
And I’m looking right back at all of them.
Extreme outfits? Len/Svars weren’t kidding. There is a guy in a wooly loincloth holding a club, wearing a mask that has one huge eye in the forehead area. I guess he’s supposed to be a Cyclops; the woodpecker tattoo on his wrist tells me that’s Skip, our accountant. Marjorie is wearing this thing attached to her waist and spreading behind her that makes it look like her girl’s upper body is attached to the thorax and abdomen of a giant spider.
And Jocko is a faun. Shirtless, with goat horns and furry legs, with shoes that look like giant hooves. He looks to be in a sour mood, until he gets a load of me. “Hayden! Or is it Haylee now? I don’t like my costume, but at least I’m male! Hahahahaha!”
“Bite me, goat boy,” I grumble.
PJ and Tom are over at the food bar — appropriate, for the two biggest guys in the room. PJ is wearing a horse head mask, with his legs acting as the front two legs of the horse, and the back of his suit is open. It’s pretty clear that Tom is the horse’s ass (totally inappropriate — he’s the nicest guy), wearing the other end of the suit.
“You better stop eating those mini burritos,” Tom says to PJ. “Remember, at nine, our halves are supposed to be joined together, and my face is gonna be near your butt.”
“No worries, buddy,” replies the horse head. “I took some Beano earlier, so I shouldn’t get any gas.”
I’m flabbergasted. Parties are supposed to be fun. I mean, the costumes are amazing in their detail, but the vibe here is just plain … weird.
“Hey there, Hay.”
I turn to see … Medusa. Yep, a snake-coiffured woman with a green face and special contacts that make her eyes look red. I smile at my friend. “Hi, Tish. Greeeeat party, eh?”
“Gee, you haven’t turned to stone. I guess my hair’s asleep. Wake up, snakies!” She half-laughs as she shakes her head, making her freaky wig dance like it almost really is alive.
“No need to try to turn me frozen. My costume is so embarrassing, it’s doing the job just fine.”
“You mean, they wouldn’t give you any clothes?”
“I’m Lady Godiva. And if I’m not mistaken, Tom and PJ are to be my horse. We’re supposed to stay until at least nine for the big announcement. I don’t think I can take being this way for another hour.”
“Didn’t Mr. C. tell you, Hay? There’s an extra 5k bonus, given as prepaid visa cards, if we wait it out. That’s the reason Jocko hasn’t left. That’s the only reason why I decided to definitely come to this freak show.”
“Another 5k! Why? … Okay, if he’s going to be fool enough to give it, then I’ll be a nude centerfold model for another hour. I’m not going to like it, though.”
“Just drink this.” She handed me a flute of champagne from one of the waiter’s trays. I slugged it down. “Now repeat five times. I guarantee you’ll feel less self conscious.”
“Yes, Dr. Tish,” I sighed as I grabbed another flute.
I’m on flute number four, and watching the clock. Five minutes ‘til nine. Then, finally, the boss joins the party.
He’s dressed funky too. I can’t really call it a costume, though; not like the ones the rest of us have on. He’s carrying a big staff or stick, and has a gold llame’ turban on his head. Big, flowy silken robes are draped around his neck and shoulders, cascading to the floor.
“Okay, everyone! Time for the big reveal! Gather ‘round, please,” he booms with his baritone voice.
“You all have played along with my eccentricities so well. I promise you, continue just a few minutes more. Then, you won’t care about what you’re wearing, because you will be amazed and excited at the future of our group here … not to mention the world.
“Margorie, Leticia, Jocko, Skip … look at the center of the room. See the circle there, with five red squares placed equidistant from each other on the circle’s perimeter? Each of you pick a square, and stand in it. Hayden, PJ, Tom — come to the center point of the circle, please.”
I don’t know why we all eagerly obeyed. Thinking about those visa cards, I guess.
“PJ, Tom — assemble your costume together to form one magnificent horse. Good, good — that’s perfect. Now, Hayden — our Lady Godiva — please get on the horse. Essentially, you’ll be on Tom’s back.”
“Dang, Tom, I hope I’m not too heavy for you,” I muttered as I mounted the “steed.” Tom just grunted as I sat in a side-saddle style on his broad back and shoulders. I turned to Mr. Crowzen and gave him a thumbs-up.
But Crowzen had a new look on his face — a maniacal grin with wild eyes. “Hold spell,” he screamed.
I couldn’t move, couldn’t speak. The only thing that worked were my eyes, and as I looked around with my limited vision, I saw that Marjorie and Jocko and horse-head PJ were standing bolt still also. Their eyes were also darting about. I could tell we were all confused, panicked.
“Turn on the floor lights,” said Crowzen.
Suddenly, a pattern of light lit up the floor. And I saw I was not placed in the center of a circle, but rather a pentagram — with each of the five points ending in a red square where my coworkers were standing.
“Bring out our final puzzle piece,” Mr. C. cackled.
One of the hooded guys — there were about ten of them in the room, now — carried a small stiff body into the room. It was attired in a female pixie outfit, complete with minidress and wings. As the hood guy placed the body on the last remaining red square, the blonde pixie wig fell off, disclosing a head of black hair with a bald spot on the crown.
Sheldon.
He was alive, for when they affixed his body in a standing position, I could see his eyes moving, surveying the sight around him. Those eyes looked even more frightened than anyone else’s. The hoodster sloppily slammed the wig back on Shel’s head.
Mr. C. — Mr. Crazy, I’m calling him now — began screaming again.
“LET THE MASTER OF EVIL AND DEATH COME FORTH!”
All of a sudden, I heard a brrrrrraaaapppp sound come from behind my horse’s head. Oh god. PJ just — farted? At a time like this??
“LET ALL APPEARANCES BECOME REALITY!”
Thank god for bean miniburritos. Because the smell of the fart was too much for Tom, whose head was placed just near PJ’s butt in this horse costume.
“LET THE SEPARATION BETWEEN HELL AND EARTH BE NO MORE!”
The odor was so strong, somehow it broke the paralysis Tom was in. He pulled back, separating the horse head from the rear. He was holding his neck, coughing, gasping. “Dammit, Peej!” he choked. As he stood, I began to tilt off his back, falling to the floor, still unable to move myself.
Crowzen hadn’t noticed this development, as he held the staff up, howling the last part of his incantation.
“LET THE REIGN OF DARKNESS — BEGIN!”
Lightning bolts and flame erupted suddenly around the room, then were gone. I hit the floor hard. I still couldn’t move. I could still see.
Marjorie was no longer in a spider-girl costume. She … she actually was a half spider, half woman. Three new pairs of eyes had arisen on her forehead, giving her eight in all. She looked like a picture I’d seen of that fantasy gamer goddess, Arachne. Jocko actually did have goat legs now, with small hooves and the ungulate bend of legs that could not be a mere costume. And Sheldon was gone. No, there he — or she — or it, was. A tiny pixie, standing still on it’s square. I couldn’t turn my head to check on Tish or Skip.
I couldn’t see myself, but I could feel. I could feel my huge right female breast being pinched under my torso. I could feel my huge right hip touching the cold floor. And I was lying on top of the back part of an actual horse.
A horse that was dead and hemorrhaging, because it was in two separate parts, as if it had been sawed in two.
Somehow, our costumes … had become reality, just as Crowzen had chanted.
And Crowzen was bowing … bowing before a shadowy huge hulking mass. Just a big dark shadow, with no other features save it’s piercing red eyes.
“My Under-father,” Mr. Crazy said, “I have done as you have asked. Take your rightful place; bring about the hellchild, and reign.”
The mass replied with a horrible gurgling, hissing blast. “I … did NOT … ask for a dead animal … to sacrifice. It must be ALIVE … for I alone … shall draw it’s blood!”
Crazy looked my direction, and for the first time say the remains of what had been my friends PJ and Tom. “U-underfather … it was together when I started the chant! And I had them in your hold spell! I don’t understand…”
“I can … restore it, if it just happened … now,” shrieked the mass. And immediately, the two horse halves began to draw together, the blood on the floor sucking back into the open belly; then the two halves joined together, and the horse started to breathe! Although, it still appeared held in thrall.
“Well done, underfather! I am honored to serve at your right hand,” bowed Crazy.
“Only … excellence … will serve by me … not incompetence. Your performance … today … is worthy only … of death.”
Suddenly Crazy’s body was suspended in mid-air, and it appeared his limbs were being pulled in all different directions. He screamed in pain. “Underfather! No! After all I have sacrificed to this point — please, have pity!”
“You seek … mercy and forgiveness … you’re asking … the wrong father,” the mass cackled.
Crowzen’s body was being pulled apart; I could hear bones and joints popping, separating as he continued to roar in pain. Then, in a last gasp of defiance, he looked out at me, at us, his victims/employees, and yelled “CANCEL HOLD!” — just before his body broke apart into a hundred pieces.
Suddenly, I could move. I jumped to my feet, and my horse did the same. All the other transformees became mobile, too.
“RUN OUT THE SIDE DOOR!” It was Sheldon the pixie, shooting a trail of sparkly dust towards a portal on the far left of the room. As the dust hit the door, it seemed to dissolve it and a good portion of the wall around it, leaving an open hole to escape through.
The mass hissed. “Hol-“
“VOW OF SILENCE,” Sheldon squeaked, and the mass seemed to be unable to speak. The hooded guys all pulled out knives and tried to rush us, but Marjorie sprayed a web out of her tail — yuck! — and trapped three of them. She bit a fourth one — she had these big mandibles dripping with venom now — and the guy fell to the ground, shaking violently as if having a seizure. Skip now was an eight foot one eyed giant, and he quickly dispatched the other hoodies with his club.
TomPeej, the horse, snorted at me and pointed it’s nose towards it’s back. It didn’t have to ask me twice — I jumped on and held onto it’s neck as it raced towards the hole in the room. My steed and I leapt through the opening, which delivered us directly outside. The rest came flying/crawling/running through, and we ran out into the night.
We came to a clearing just beyond the main grounds of the huge estate. “Stay here,” Sheldon peeped. “I’ve got to somehow get a cell phone. We need help.”
“I left my personal cell phone in my car, under the driver’s seat. It’s a red Nissan Sentra, parked in the circle drive in the front,” I volunteered.
“Are we safe here? We’re barely two hundred yards from the death mansion,” worried Jocko the satyr.
“You’ll be fine; just stay hidden. Because we interrupted the ceremony, that evil thing is still confined to that ballroom. Just keep an eye out for those hooded henchmen; they could still come for us,” said Shel the pixie.
“Who died and made you leader?” Jocko sneered.
“Can you tell the rest of us what’s going on, what’s just happened?” Shel replied.
“Of course not!”
“EXACTLY, Jocko. Well, I can! And I will — but I need to call for help first! Wait here, unless you want to try your luck in the city. They’ll either shoot you, or put you in a zoo — or a lab. Now — I’ll be right back!” And with that, TinkerSheldon flew off.
“Wwhatt’ss hhappennedd to uuusss?” gurgled Marjorie. “Iiimmm a mmonnssterrr!”
“You’re lucky, Hayden. At least you’re still completely human,” moaned goatboy Jocko.
“Yeah. A weak, cold, naked, female human. My life just rocks,” I spat.
“Pretty. You pretty. Me like,” drawled the Cyclops.
“Uh … Skip … that is still you in there, isn’t it? Well, I’m still me — Hayden — a guy — in here,” I said pointing to my head, while simultaneously trying to cover my breasts and groin. When I changed, the ‘body tape’ didn’t stay with me, although all of this long golden hair was mine, now.
Suddenly TomPeej snorted and stomped the ground, looking back towards the mansion. Jocko peeped from behind a bush in that direction. “Oh god — it’s one of the hoodies!”
“Nnnooo. Theyy werrre all mennn. Thisss isss a womannn … I cannn sssmelll hherr,” sputtered ArachnoMarjorie.
Jocko stood up, now more emboldened. “Stop right there, lady! We’re taking you captive, so don’t try any funny stuff.”
“Guysss,” hissed the hoodie. “It’ssss me.”
“Tish?!” Oh my god. Tish! In all the confusion, I had forgotten to make sure she was with us! I jumped up and ran to hug her —
“Sssstay away,” she warned, pulling her hood down so her face was unseeable.
“Tish? What’s wrong? Why can’t we … oh. My god. You … you’re Medusa, right?”
“Yesss,” she hissed with a sob.
We found out that Tish can indeed turn men to stone; that’s how she got the hoodie robe, from an unfortunate hooded thug who turned solid when he tried to apprehend her back at the mansion. She took his garment and placed it on her as soon as she got outside. The good thing is, she’s gonna wear the hood constantly, so she was able to go behind a tree and take her decorative dress off from under the robe. Now I’ve got a bit of clothes to wear. Not enough clothes, but some.
Back came Sheldon, carrying my phone using pixie dust to do so. I hooked up facetime so she could have a visual talk, dialed the number (s)he told me to dial, and we all listened as (s)he spoke on speakerphone. Even though the video was rolling, Sheldon stayed out of it’s view, instead parking down by the mike on the phone.
The ring was answered, but the phone screed stayed black. “Presto cleaners, your premium dry cleaners. Please call back during our business hours of-“
“Sharon. This is operative XJS-9377-Tango. I need to speak with brother Cassius.”
“Uh … honey, little girl, this is a dry cleaners. Is your mommy there?”
“SHARON. I know I don’t sound like myself! Let me recite my clearance code.”
Silence. Then, “proceed at will.”
“Clearance code one three niner niner Romeo four three zero Whiskey Zulu five seven.”
“My, what a fun little spy game you’re playing, child. Let me speak to your father.”
“Luke; I am your father.”
“CLEARANCE ACCEPTED.”
TinkerSheldon let out a huge sigh.
A man’s face appeared on the phone screen. “Brother Ignatz? Is that you? Why is your voice like a little girl’s? Let me see you!”
Sheldon flew up in front of the screen so the man could see him/her. “Hello, sir. From my appearance, it should be obvious that we have situation red.”
The man on the screen looked aghast. “Oh … oh no. How far have they gotten with the ceremony?”
“Sir, there’s been no sacrifice or impregnation. I managed to get all of the transformed out of there. The portal zone is confined to a building-“
“CUT TO THE CHASE, IGNATZ! HAS HE … IT… APPEARED?”
“Sir … yes. The Evil One is here, in semi- physical form.”
There was no further reply, only silence. The man on the screen held his face in his hands in anguish.
“Sir — I need help, backup. I need to know how to stop him since he’s come this far. It’s not midnight yet. We can still — “
“Ignatz! It’s … it’s too late. He’s too powerful. We had to prevent him from coming; now, global transformation is virtually unpreventable.”
“Sir! No! He doesn’t have what he needs! I got them out of there — “
“IGNATZ! Listen to me. He has power over them that will grow by the minute. He’ll call them back, and they won’t be able to resist. You won’t, either.”
“S-sir … what about the virgin and the sacrifice? He cannot call them back, can he? They are not under his power — by the rite of the ceremony, they are to be undefiled! He can’t take over without them to use in the ceremony!”
“He has his hooded followers spread world wide, Sheldon. They are rounding up other sacrifices and virgins as we speak, as well as others to make monsters of. That was always their plan, just in case something like you interfered with the primaries. It’s over, boy. He’s won. We will institute plan Omega and transport a small surviving pod of humans to another dimension. It’s A.I.L. here. I recommend that you and your rescues kill yourselves to at least avoid the hell on earth that’s about to commence. Over and out, forever.”
The screen went black, as my little pixie friend erupted in wails of sorrow.
I didn’t understand it all, but it sounded bad, like the apocalypse or something. I especially wanted to know — “Sheldon. What does ‘it’s A.I.L. here’ mean?”
Sheldon continued to wail for a half minute, then choked back her tears as she looked at me. “It — it means … All Is Lost.”
TO BE CONTINUED IN ONE OR TWO DAYS
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Oh hell! I’m halfway inside this, this horror — it burns my skin like acid and it’s pulling my legs apart as I continue to be drawn in, and now —
NO! NOOOOOO!
“TISH! SOMEBODY! HELP! HELP MEEE! SHELDO-“
With a horrid sucking sound, the mass pulls my head and arms inside it completely.
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ALL IS LOST
Part 2 of 2
by **Sigh**
Copyright © 2013 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
A small band of monsters as well as a horse and a voluptuous blonde woman — me — gathered around a small faerie/pixie as it explained what had all just happened.
“I belong to a worldwide organization known as Sacramento. We’re kind of like self appointed spiritual guardians for the planet, bound to protect it from evil.”
“You mean you’re the Men In Black,” gasped Jocko.
“Well … kind of. We deal with the supernatural, not aliens. I don’t even know if those Men In Black guys really exist. We do, though.”
“Well, missster guardian … you guysss really ssscrewed up your job tonight,” said Medusa/Tish from behind the hood that covered her head.
“Sacramento had Crowzen listed as dangerous years ago, but he’s been so inactive the last decade - he was hardly considered a threat anymore. I’m a low level operative, just barely cleared for fieldwork. Since it’s All Saint’s Eve, I was sent to nose around his new business, just to make sure he was still innocuous. The ‘mandatory Halloween party’ raised a red flag with me; I was trying to bolt out of the office this morning to warn my ‘brothers’ when Crowzen’s crony captured me.”
“So, that guy wasn’t really a security guard then,” I stated.
“Connngrrattulationnns, Ccappttainn Obbbviouss,” gargled Marjorie the Spider Goddess. Good to know she still has a sense of humor.
Sheldon continued. “Crowzen has obviously been super sneaky and patient. He hasn’t set off any alarms or engaged in obvious witchcraft in years — we would have detected it. He must have gotten everything he needed — all of the spells, artifacts, whatever — and carefully compiled them, waiting for tonight. Your company — rather, the company employees — were the last piece of the puzzle, evidently.”
“Hnngh,” grunted Giant Cyclops/Skip. “Why he need us? We not special … not when we still humans.”
“You all were about the right number of people,” the faerie said. “For the completion of the ceremony, which must occur by midnight on Halloween, he needed five mythological beings, a large animal to sacrifice — “
That caused Tom/Peej, the horse, to appear unsettled.
“— And most importantly, you.” Sheldon now pointed at me.
I went numb. “Me? What did he need me for? I definitely am no one special.”
“He needed an adult woman who — “
“NOW, WAIT A MINUTE! The only reason I got a woman’s costume is because that was the only one left! If he needed a female, there was Marjorie or Tish! Why did he need me to be a woman, me specifically, for this stupid ritual?”
“Hayden,” Sheldon wearily replied, “He needs a woman, an adult woman … who is a virgin. True virginity is the most important requirement, and cannot be magically manufactured. Somehow, Crowzen must have found out about your chasteness, and that’s probably when he targeted your company for takeover — and for the ceremony.”
My eyes were tearing up now. “Why didn’t he just raid a convent?”
“Probably because nuns can have significant spiritual strength. I don’t know for sure. I don’t know why he chose this town, this year, or you guys rather than the donut shop down the street. All I know is you all seem to meet the requirements, including the most important one — an adult virgin.”
Once again, everyone’s eyes — and judgment, it seemed — were all on me.
I was kind of nerdy growing up. I was in the math club, and the computer science club, but the only really social group I was in was my church’s youth club. And as a part of that club, I was taught that virginity was a virtue to be held close to your heart, all the way up to your wedding night. Girls respected guys who are virgins. Girls prefer to marry virgin guys. That’s what I was taught. That’s what all the girls in the church seemed to agree with.
By the time my views changed, it seemed too late. I was an adult, and dating was nerve wracking to me. My sexual inexperience, rather than being an asset, just made me fear embarrassing myself if I ever was to get intimate with a girl. It was less stressful just to remain eunuch-like. I lost myself in work, and restricted social interaction to that area of my life. I was lonely. But ‘doing it’ with a gal and failing miserably was too horrible to contemplate.
I recently had made up my mind to save up for a trip to Reno, Nevada, and hire a hooker to break the ice with me, to get me over this hang up. That plan — as well as any and all other life plans — seemed so irrelevant now.
Jocko broke my sad contemplation. “Hayden, you sap. If you’d just gotten laid once in your life, none of this would have happened!”
“It would have too, goat boy,” I snapped. “Maybe not with us, but with some other group. And then the world would still be screwed. I’m right, aren’t I, Sheldon? Something that happened back there has brought hell to earth — the whole earth!”
Tish spoke up too. “What issss that black presssenccce that killed Crowzen?”
“What do you think?” Shel moaned.
“Devil. Satan,” Skip said. “He really real, hmmph.”
“Close,” piped TinkerShel. “There are many myths and legends about what the ultimate source of evil in the universe is; ‘the devil’ is most well known. All of those stories contain some inaccuracies. But essentially, that black thing is the source of evil.”
“Wwwhhatttt iis iiitts nnnammme?” our spider goddess insisted.
“I’ve just always called it The Source of Evil,” Sheldon shrugged.
“Evil Incarnate,” whispered Jocko.
“NO. NOT evil incarnate. His form is present, but it is not completely physical. That’s why he’s limited to what he can do here. To get ultimate power over our reality, he needs his evil in a physical form. He needs a child — one with a human mother.” Shel looked at me. “A human, virgin mother.”
I blanched. “What … oh no. No. HELL no!” Now I was shaking. “This can’t be happening! I won’t let it happen! Sheldon — how do we stop this?”
Suddenly Jocko the faun had jumped onto me, knocking me to the ground. His little goat tail was wiggling furiously. “Hayden — let me take your virginity! That way you’ll be no good to the shadow! Besides, you’re sooo sexy! I’ve been drooling over you the last thirty minutes! I can’t wait to make your cherry — “
POP was the next sound heard, caused by Skip’s club knocking Jocko off of me. “Hmmph. Satyrs. Always horny,” the Cyclops grumbled.
The sad pixie was downcast, crying. “Hayden, you heard what brother Cassius told me. It’s too late. We can take your virginity, we can kill ourselves even, but The Evil will still find some unlucky souls to complete the ceremony.
“You guys are right; we were caught horribly off guard. This scenario is worst-case; what we all have feared, and tried to prevent. This is the End of All Good Things. All Is Lost.”
“DAMMIT, Sheldon! There has to be a way! The ceremony has to happen tonight, by midnight, right? There must be some way to interrupt it!”
“If there was, brother Cassius would have known of it. His message confirmed to me that all efforts to stop this would be futile.”
“Shel. Tell me the ceremony, step-by-step. You know what’s gonna happen, right?”
The floating faerie now looked angry. “Fool! The Master’s plan cannot be thwarted!” Then Shel shook his head, throwing off bits of pixie dust. “Oh no. I can feel the Evil One’s presence growing stronger in me … calling me back to the mansion …”
“I — I feel it too. Jussst ssslightly, but growing ever ssstronger,” Tish cried.
I approached TinkerShel with urgency. “The steps of the ceremony. Tell me!”
“First, you are impregnated by the Evil One. Then, after about a one-hour gestation, you deliver the foul offspring. The black presence has the child taste his black essence, turning the child fully evil. Then the animal is sacrificed, as the child’s first full meal. Then the Reign of Terror is officially in full swing.”
“Crosses? Holy Water?”
“They have no effect on the Evil One.”
“What if we all attacked him? You with your pixie dust, Skip with his club, Marj with her webs and venom … could Tish turn him to stone?”
“We all have these powers due to evil magics. They cannot be used directly to attack the Evil One — he has seen to that. I knew a few basic spells that were mine before all this, like the temporary silencing spell I used to get us out of there, but that’s it.”
“Hhhhooopppellesssssss,” choked Marjorie.
I turned to Skip. “Big guy … if there really is no hope … then please kill me. Crush my skull with your club. If we can’t stop it, don’t let me be a part of it.”
“Hmmph! No, no,” uttered the giant.
“I know you care about me and don’t want to hurt me. But please — it will hurt me more to be used in a plot to enslave the Earth.”
“Me no care about you, girl. Me want to kill you, then chew your bones. But Master want you alive for him.” The Cyclops then grabbed me around the waist and hoisted me over his shoulder. He simultaneously brought his club down on my faithful horse, TomPeej, stunning it. He put the stallion over his other shoulder, and then began lumbering back towards the mansion.
“Marjorie! Sheldon! Tish! Someone help me,” I screamed back towards the others.
“Yyyooou’rre ttthhe Mmasstterrr’s cchhattell nnnoww,” burbled the spider goddess, crawling behind us.
The others followed. It was too late. They all had been turned — turned completely evil. You could see it in their eyes, on their faces. Well, all except Tish’s face, covered by her hood, but she followed us nonetheless.
Shel had been right. All really was lost.
I was taken back to the mansion, back into the ballroom.
Back to my doom. To be the mother of annihilation.
I was placed back in the center of the pentagram, and some new hoodies that had arrived — I guess the Evil One drew them here just like my friends — they grabbed my dress that Tish had lent me, and poof, I was naked as a damned jaybird again.
They have TomPeej secured with a bridle and ropes that they attached while he was still woozy from the clubbing. He ‘came to’ just in time to kick the hell out of one of the new hoodies that dared walk just behind him. Now he’s struggling and stomping and whinnying, but to no avail.
What I don’t see is … oh, wait. There it is.
The Black Heap with burning red eyes.
“You show … much spirit … much fight … qualities that will … serve me well … in our son,” the Heap laughed. “And now … I will take you … and I warn you … I won’t be … gentle.”
Smoky, inky tendrils extended out from the base of the dark mass and slithered towards me. Fear has conquered me completely; I’m paralyzed by it, and all I can manage is to scream, scream, and scream.
The tentacles have me now, and are dragging me slowly back towards the giant mountain of evil in the room, feet first. As I get closer, I can see the skin of evil through the smoke covering it; it is oily, slimy, and smells of charred refuse. I finally break my body’s stupor and try in vain to wriggle free. As I turn over on my tummy, I dig my nails into the flooring, trying to stop my progress, but only put linear scratches in the wood as I continue to be sucked in. I haven’t stopped screaming.
Oh hell! I’m halfway inside this, this horror — it burns my skin like acid and it’s pulling my legs apart as I continue to be drawn in, and now —
NO! NOOOOOO!
“TISH! SOMEBODY! HELP! HELP MEEE! SHELDO-“
With a horrid sucking sound, the mass pulls my head and arms inside it completely.
Why.
Why didn’t it just kill me? Why torture me in unimaginably horrific ways, and leave me to remember them? Why not just end it instead of spitting me back out on the ballroom floor, violated, and covered in some foul mucus?
Oh yeah. I have to deliver the antichrist. That’s why.
That’s also why I’m having terrific pain in my lower belly. In the fifteen minutes since I exited the dark heap, I’m visibly enlarging. It’s like going through nine months of pregnancy in an hour, if it’s anything like Sheldon was saying.
The heap is giving marching orders to the hoodies, and the monsters who used to be my friends and coworkers. It sounds like they are going to be following little Damien into battle to subdue the rest of the people on earth.
Oh man. The little demon’s really growing now. My belly button just turned from an “innie” to an “outie”. I’m lying on my side in a fetal position because that’s the least painful way for me to be.
Seems that the E.O. (that’s short for Evil One) enjoyed taking me. More like he enjoyed seeing me suffer at his hands — or tentacles. So he’s planning on keeping me around as his main concubine. I am terrified.
And I’m angry, too. It’s one thing to use me as an evil tool; quite another to continue to use me just for the pure enjoyment of seeing me suffer. ‘Cause that’s what gets E.O.’s rocks off. Suffering. The sadistic bastard. At least grant me the dignity of death! But, no. I swear, if there is a way to undermine him, I will. But how do you fight evil? With more evil? Won’t that just make him laugh louder?
Aaagh! That … that hurts. It’s like there’s a tumor expanding in me by the minute. Aaah! Now … now my breasts are exploding?! …of course. Female breasts fill up and develop to give milk to feed baby after it’s born. Except my kid is going to be eating evil essence followed by horse meat.
OOH! I’m hemorrhaging between my legs! No, wait, it’s fairly clear fluid. Great. My water just broke.
E.O. is speaking towards me. “Prepare … for the … arrival.”
Now I’m being turned on my back — one hoodie has ahold of my right leg, another has my left, and they’re lifting them up and out. A third one is in between my legs, telling me to push. Okay, I’ll try.
AAAAIIIEEEAAAAGH!! AAAHHH! AAAAAAAAH!
The pain was unbelievable — but the delivery was over in seconds. I’m lying on my side again, panting, gasping, all but forgotten as the hoodies hold the baby up in the air with a triumphant yell; they’ve already tied off and cut his cord.
“Now put … the child down … and come to me.”
Just like that the hoodies put their future master and hero onto the cold hard floor about two yards away from me, and all go to minister to E.O. He’s giving them strict instructions.
“Take the sacred sword … and cut me … to extract my essence … for it’s first taste. Because my child … shall begin it’s life … having tasted only … pure evil.”
His child? It’s my child too, and I’m amazed as I look at it. My little demon baby has horns. And a tail. And an unnatural redness to it’s skin. I should be disgusted by it. But it’s lying on the hard floor, crying just like any baby would. With each cry, my breasts tense more.
“Bring the horse … to me … for when my child … has tasted my evil essence … he must then fill his belly … with bloody meat … I shall slay it … with my own hand.”
The hoodies drag an apoplectic TomPeej to stand right next to E.O.
“Now … cut me … for the essence.”
One of the hoodies shakingly approaches E.O. with this glowing red sword, then stabs it into the smoky oily skin of evil. The big dark heap howls in pain and anger, and a tentacle lashes out and breaks the neck of the stabbing hoodie. His roars dissolve into wicked laughter as a tarry, globby substance drips out of the wound. “Now bring … my son … to taste … my es — WHAT!?”
Everyone had been watching E.O., but now they’re looking at the baby. The demon baby that I’m now holding to my breast as it suckles away on it. As it takes in more and more of my milk, his skin color becomes more and more flesh tone.
“Looks like our son’s first taste will be of his mother’s love,” I yell defiantly. “And his first meal will be my milk — the milk of human kindness, not your evil.” I stroke my baby’s bald head, and kiss it. “I love you, little one. I always will. Never forget that.”
And that, I think, is how you fight evil. With love.
“YOU … FOOL … WHAT HAVE … YOU DONE?” E. O. is roaring, with anger — and with what sounds like panic. And that’s when my horse — my noble stallion, TomPeej — turns it’s rear towards the black blob and gives it a mighty two hooved kick right in the sword wound. The startled hoodies holding his bridle and ropes are knocked off balance, and the steed rockets away from them and away from the vengeful tendrils reaching for it from E.O. The heap looks like it’s actually been hurt.
Meanwhile, I’ve switched my beautiful baby to my other breast. And he’s growing fast — past infant size, past toddler size, to almost adolescent size. He’s so gorgeous. He may have his father’s horns (yuck) but he’s got my eyes. I continue to dote on him and tell him that his purpose in life is to love, not hate; for good, not evil.
E. O. is ticked off, and the tendrils are shooting towards me now. “DIE … WITCH,” he screeches. I get set for the fatal blows I know are coming. Then something cool happens.
My son detaches from me and turns and stands, all in a split second. With amazing strength and agility he intercepts the tentacles, all of them — and with a mighty yank, tears them away from their source. As he throws the severed appendages to the side, he growls at E.O. “Do not hurt my mother.”
“YOU … ARE MY … SON!” the heap screeches.
“I reject your heritage! I claim the heritage of my mother. Because … she loves me. When I was cold and alone, it was her arms that comforted me.”
“THEN I … REJECT YOU! … THRALLS … BRING ME … ANOTHER VIRGIN … FOR I WILL … HAVE MY TRIUMPH … OVER THIS WORLD … AND MY TRAITORIOUS … OFFSPRING!”
“It’s three minutes past midnight, Evil One. The time has come and gone. You have failed.” So said one of the hoodies, one who had been keeping in the background. He took off his hood, revealing a bald head wearing glasses. “I am brother Fidelio of the Sacramento. And I banish you back to the pit! BREAK ENTHRALLMENT!”
Suddenly the monsters were shaking their heads, and I could see in their eyes. They had their minds back again.
“Bonifa facum dispassionata!” Brother Fidelio was attempting to banish E.O., but the black heap wasn’t going quietly. The spectacled monk looked at the rest of us with a little frustration. “A little help here, people?”
In short order a giant club, a glob of web, a shot of pixie dust and a huge wooden table (the latter thrown by my son) were hurtling at the black blob. Each hit with effect, the blob becoming smaller, but still present. Fidelio continued his fervent chanting. Just then, a smaller hoodie shot past us and towards the blob while hissing-
“All you guysss, clossse your eyessss!”
We all obeyed. You don’t cross Medusa.
As our eyes were closed, a terrifying sound, like a sheet of metal being ripped in two, filled the ballroom.
“Okay. Ssssafe to look now.” Tish had replaced her hood around her head.
What was left of E.O. was just a big rock. He’d been turned to stone. Looks like once midnight had passed without the ritual completed, the old heap’s black magic could be used against him. Brother Fidelio banished the rock back to the pit with a simple “begone”.
Sheldon was questioning how brother Fidelio had come to be here. “I thought it was all over, and that Sacramento was in retreat. Brother Cassius-”
“Is too quick to give up and run,” smiled Fidelio. “When I heard what had happened, I determined to sneak in as a thrall and see if there was anything I could do. I had no power to interrupt the ritual, so I kept hoping for an opening, a miracle. And it happened, when this glorious girl decided to turn the demon child to good. A master stroke, young lady.”
“It’s Hayden, as in young man Hayden,” I laughed. However, I noticed that my demon boy looked at me with worry when I said it. “Fidelio — what about my friends? Can you make them normal again?”
“I can. With the Evil One’s power broken, it is a simple thing to restore your previous forms.”
“Me firsssst!” cried Medusa-Tish from inside her hood.
In short order, all of the so-called monsters became their normal selves. If you can call Jocko normal, that is. Fidelio at last looked at me, the only one left. “Your turn.”
But as I stepped towards him, my son screamed. “Momma! No! Please don’t leave me!” I looked at him. Physically, even intellectually, he was nearly adult; but his emotions seemed as fragile as any child’s.
“Honey, I’ll never leave you — I’ll just be a daddy instead of a mommy to you, see?” But I could tell — he didn’t see. He had fright and hysteria in his eyes.
And his skin began to turn from pink towards that hellish red hue.
Brother Fidelio frowned with concern. “Hayden,” he spoke, “you may have to make a sacrifice for the greater good.”
Ten years later, October 31.
I’m whipping up a good meal for the victory party. Every year that we get through without a recurrence of the Evil One is a victory. We’re not past danger yet, but hey, I’m thinking positive.
I now work for Sacramento. I’m a pretty valuable resource, having been one of the few who’ve come into contact with E.O. and remained alive.
Two years ago was the closest we’ve had to a recurrence. Some shaman in South America attempted the ceremony, but we found out in time and disrupted his plans an hour before he was scheduled to start the incantation.
My son, Daniel, is the superstar here. He’s like a real life Hellboy, only much more handsome. He has this incredible nose for sniffing out trouble, like he can feel worldwide shifts in the supernatural. He’s the one who found out about the shaman in time. And he only works for the good guys.
It took three more years of daily breastfeeding for the devil-red tones to disappear from his skin completely. Now, he can eat regular food, but just to be on the safe side, we avoid feeding him anything with a trace of blood in it — so that means no meat. In fact, he and we are all vegetarians now. And just in case I ever see the redness come back in the future, I had about ten gallons of my breast milk pasteurized and deep frozen in quart size containers.
My job is so easy. Mainly, it’s to make sure that my son is loved. And I do love him, even more than I love my husband, Sheldon. We’re a team, Shel and I. He teaches Daniel toughness, courage, conviction, and how to fight. I teach him courage, love, compassion, and more love.
Being a married woman with a demon-child was not my original plan in life. But I have come to enjoy being Haylee, a mother, wife, and world saver. Much more than I enjoyed Hayden, the lonely I.T. virgin. And speaking of virginity, I have come to enjoy my bedtime with Sheldon. It wasn’t easy, considering my first time was a demonic rape. But counseling and love got me past it, though it took a long time.
Ah. That text was from brother Fidelio. It’s three minutes past midnight. We’ve made it through another year. Let the party begin!
THE END
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Cruiser Lake
Part 1 of 5
by Sigh
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CHAPTER 1
It always started with nausea. Just a slight twinge of it in his upper stomach, accompanied by tightness in the back of his neck. If the situation continued, he could develop a full-blown headache and be unable to eat anything for fear of throwing up. This was Joseph’s body’s way of experiencing stress.
Usually he avoided this by action. He’d learned now to address most situations where things weren’t going right: find out what you can do to affect it, and then do it. Joseph was determined anymore not to just let life happen to him, but to address it, influence it, control it when possible.
But this. This situation was beyond him right now. Because he’d given away a measure of control when he agreed to carpool with Alan Sarkisian on this trip. Now they were going to be late getting off. All Joseph could do was wait in his idling PT Cruiser parked at the entrance to Alan’s apartment. Wait, and feel his stomach start to flip-flop in the cold Missoula, Montana morning.
It wouldn’t be such an issue, lateness. After all, it’s not like it was a workday. Both of them were on vacation. But the drive was going to be long, and both of them had people expecting them, and the forecast had predicted snow tonight. And it was Christmas Eve….
I should know better. Why does it seem like whenever I agree to go out of my way to help someone, I end up regretting it? Is everybody out there unreliable, or do I just choose the wrong people, Joseph thought. Maybe my “chooser” is broken.
Alan Sarkisian rushed around his apartment in a furtive dash to do some last minute packing. He really should have done it the night before, but he’d gotten in so late. Sleeping through his alarm didn’t help either. It was Joe’s cell phone call at 6:40 this morning that had awoken him — 10 minutes after their agreed upon departure time. Now it was 6:58.
“Stupid, stupid, stupid, stupid!” Alan cursed himself as he looked for his dental floss. He used to be able to get by fine on five hours of sleep. But he was fifty-one now, and knew better. He knew better. Always trying to get a little more done. It would be okay if his day were messed up by waking up late with too little rest — but now he was messing up his friend’s day too.
Well, actually, they weren’t friends. Joseph O’Donnell had just offered to give Alan a ride to where he was going for the Christmas holidays, since he was driving by there anyway. Alan needed to save money, and a solo drive to Helena was going to cost a bit. A mutual contact at the pharmaceutical firm Alan and Joseph worked at realized that their travel destinations were close together - why not ride together and split the gas money?
So Alan approached Joseph at work and proposed the trip. Joseph had been hesitant — he knew Sarkisian from passing in the hall and from company parties, but that was it. And he preferred to drive alone. But he saw that Alan needed his help, so he agreed.
The partnership was getting off to a bad start.
“Come on, come on, c’mon, c’mon” muttered Joseph, twiddling his fingers on the steering wheel. He stared up at the second floor door, hoping for any movement. As if glaring at it would cause it to open magically, with a readied and packed Alan exiting. He glanced at the console clock. 7:01. Time for a second phone call.
Alan’s cell phone rang. He saw the caller ID.
“Hey there — almost ready — I’m putting you on speakerphone so I can keep both hands free and finish up here — I’m really sorry, I’ll be out in less than 5 minutes.”
“Alan — is there something I can do to help? We really, really need to get on the road.”
Alan looked at the disaster zone that was his dwelling. If Joe saw this mess, then he would have an even lower opinion of him than currently. “NO. No, no — thanks, but I don’t know what you could do — really, just 3 minutes, Joe.”
Joseph sighed as he hung up. He really didn’t like the shortened version of his name. He had told Alan — like he told anyone on first meeting them — to call him Joseph, please. Most would comply, but this guy seemed to not get the message. “Joe” sounded too… rough. Plain. Too informal. Too macho.
“3 minutes. Riiight,” whispered Joseph; then he thought, never trust a salesman. Alan worked in sales, and was one of the better ones, per the office grapevine. Joseph much preferred the Information Technology department. You could trust I.T. people to tell the truth. He snickered at his thoughts — the “department”. He WAS the I.T. department. The company wasn’t that big.
Alan finally came through the door with his suitcase. He clip-clip-clipped down the stairs to show he was hurrying. Joseph clicked the rear hatchback button. Alan threw his bag in with a loud thump and reached to pull down the hatch.
“I got it — it closes automatically,” said Joseph, pushing the button. Alan came around and got in the front passenger seat, rubbing his hands and blowing into them.
“WHEW! Cold enough for you, Joe?”
“Alan. Please, call me Joseph. I don’t like the name Joe.”
“Right! Right. Yes, now I remember. Sorry, Joseph. Cold morning, huh?” Alan was smiling, but internally he grimaced. That was a faux pas. If this were a pharmacy or a doctor’s office, he would have already blown the sale.
Joseph didn’t immediately answer. He was focused on entering the street. Safe driving was a priority for him, because it was the correct thing to do. He wouldn’t use the phone behind the wheel, and preferred not to talk when doing things that required more concentration, like left turns or merging into traffic. It was good feng shui for his life, living in order and balance.
Alan looked at Joseph. Was he just ignoring him? No, it looked like he was concentrated on the road. He took a good long look at his driver. Joseph seemed a little odd in appearance. At work he looked thin, like a beanpole, though the last year at work it seemed that Joe wore more layers of baggy clothing, even indoors. Maybe he was become more “cold natured”. Kept his long brown hair in a low ponytail like those Gen X’ers tended to do. He had a really recessed chin. Pale skin; these I.T. guys, do they ever get out in the sun? His speech was focused, but soft. Brown studs, one in each ear. This guy would never make it in sales.
Alan caught himself. Sizing up people — it was a reflex. All good salesmen did it in assessing customers. It worked good to determine how to approach a deal. The problem was, if you did it outside of work, you could end up jumping to wrong conclusions about people. Everyday life and relationships were more than just a sales call.
Now they were on the road, headed out to the interstate. Joseph could finally reply. “Yes, it’s quite cold. Supposed to hit well below freezing tonight — there’s heavy snow being predicted. That’s one reason why we needed to leave early.”
Alan winced.
“But, that’s OK, Alan. I still think there’s plenty of time; we’ll need to get a fast food lunch, and eat on the way.” Joseph glanced a conciliatory smile to his passenger. They were going to be together all day; they ought to try to get along. Even though things started off lousy.
Stop light. Alan was talking on his cell phone, so Joseph took the opportunity to evaluate his passenger. He looked probably fifteen to twenty years older than Joseph’s age of thirty-three. A little overweight, probably by at least forty pounds, but his shoulders were so wide it hung on him fairly well. Black mustache, well trimmed, and thinning salt and pepper hair brushed straight back. A toothy smile. Probably six foot even — an inch taller than himself. He looked a little too slick, like a politician or a used car dealer.
Stop it. Joseph chided himself. You’re so into appearances, and for good reason. But you — especially you — should know not to judge a book by its cover. Keep an open mind.
Alan broke the silence. “So. Tell me about yourself”.
There it was. Joseph felt the slight nausea again.
“I do information tech at the firm.”
“Okay…knew that. Where did you go to school?”
“Are you always this inquisitive? I don’t like to talk a lot about myself. Why don’t you tell me about yourself instead?”
Alan was dumbstruck. Most people loved to talk about themselves. That’s how you got them to warm up to you in sales. Not that he was trying to sell anything right now, just trying to be friendly. Maybe if he opened up first, Joseph would feel more at ease.
“OK, about me. I was born in St. Augustine, Florida-”
“Florida! How did you end up here in Missoula, Montana?”
“Whoa there, sport. Haven’t gotten to that yet. I just got through with my birth, remember?” Alan chuckled. “But if you must know, the life of a salesman can take you far and wide. I’ve been in pharmaceutical sales for the last 18 years, most with Forza.”
“Forza? Third largest drug maker in the world Forza?”
“The same.”
“Why did you quit them?”
“Ah…. I didn’t quit. I was downsized.”
“Oop…oh, I’m so sorry. That was careless of me.” Joseph’s cheeks turned bright red.
“No problem. It happens. Their stock had dropped, and they needed to cull the herd. Sales necks are usually first on the chopping block. I was a good producer for them, I was just one of the older guys, I guess.”
“Too old? But you’re just...”
“Fifty-one. Old, for a drug salesman. But I’m a good fit with Marcam. I’ve really enjoyed the last 4 years here. My family’s had the hardest adjustment. San Diego was a lot bigger... and a LOT warmer… than Missoula is.”
He has a family? But he lives in a small apartment. From where I was, it didn’t look bigger than a one bedroom. Joseph wondered about that, but didn’t want to ask a second embarrassing question.
Maybe now that I’ve told him a little about me, he’ll open up a little, Alan figured. “Where were you born, Joseph?”
After a long pause: “Here in Missoula. I’m a lifer here, so far. Even went to U of M.” That was more than he’d planned to ever tell Alan. He figured he’d stop there.
After 3 more blocks of silence, Joseph spoke up again. “How is your family, Alan?”
“Last I heard, my wife Lacy and our twins are fine.” (Sigh) He saw that I live in an economy apartment. Might as well spill the beans. “We’re newly divorced. Lacy and the girls still live in the house, and I — well, you know where I live.”
“You’re there alone?”
“Yeah, I just said Lacy - oh, you mean do I have another woman living there with me? No. There was never another woman, and there is no other woman now.”
“I didn’t mean — I just was meaning, it sounded lonely.”
“Well, it can be. But it’s not impossible. You live alone, don’t you Joseph?”
“Yeah, but I’m used to it; I like it that way,” Joseph lied. “You’ve been married for a while, I’m assuming, and now — boom. Alone. And by the way, how did you find out I live alone? Who’s been talking to you about me?”
“No one.” Alan felt a little frustrated. “You always come stag to the Christmas party. And leave early. Look, I didn’t get enough sleep last night. You mind if I try shutting my eyes a little?”
It was a welcome suggestion. Both could feel the uneasy tension in the car. There was silence as they pulled onto Interstate 90, headed towards the intersection with I-15.
Joseph noticed the conditions. It hadn’t snowed in 3 weeks, and the road was dry and clear. The sky was blue and the sun was out. 34 degrees, per his smart phone earlier. He looked over at his passenger. He was asleep, his seat leaned back slightly, head against the side glass, a faint snore occasionally leaking out the back of his throat.
Maybe he’ll sleep most of the trip. That would be a relief. Joseph shook his head. He hadn’t meant to sound condescending or suspicious earlier. Yet he was sure he had. He’d refused to open up any of his own life, yet somehow had gotten into some embarrassing details of Alan’s. How had it gotten so weird so fast?
I can’t even achieve a normal, simple conversation. On top of everything else, I’m a social misfit too. I need to be exiled to the island of misfit people.
About seven miles after getting on I-90, trouble hit. As the PT Cruiser peaked over a rise in the road, huge pieces of shredded tire appeared on the asphalt. A trucker had likely blown one of his big tires, or a retread had come untreaded. Joseph was unable to adjust in time, and his left front hit the debris.
BLAM!
“WHOA! What happened??” spurted Alan, jarred awake.
“I think I blew a tire,” Joseph grunted through clenched teeth, fighting the steering wheel. The Cruiser was now a wild bronco, bucking to the left. It veered onto the white lane stripes, almost sideswiping a passing minivan. Joseph hit the brakes and fishtailed wildly while trying to force the beast to the right shoulder.
Finally, the car relented and came to rest. Both of the men’s hearts were racing. Joseph was still gripping the steering wheel tight, and Alan wiped his forehead.
“Whew! You know, the next time you need for me to wake up from a nap, just kick me.”
“I didn’t do that on purpose.”
“I’M KIDDING. Let’s get out and look at the damage.”
Alan whistled as he examined the shredded rubber hanging off the wheel. “Boy — it’s toast. Um… I hope you have a full size spare, and not one of those mini-tires.”
“No, it’s full size, although it’s not a snow tread like this one was. I still have three other snow tires on, though.”
“Well, let’s get to changing then. Where’s the jack stored on-”
“I’ll take care of it. My car, my responsibility.”
“I’d be happy to help.”
“I’ll take care of it.”
Nearly an hour later, Joseph was finally tightening the last nut on the spare. “There,” he puffed. “I (pant)… told you I’d (pant)… get it on.”
“I didn’t think you couldn’t. I just thought we’d get done faster if I… never mind.”
“Well (puff)…” said Joseph, lowering the jack, “we’re good to go, as they say.”
“Uhhh… are we?” Alan pointed to the spare as the car settled to the ground.
It was almost completely flat.
“Oh God,” Joseph flustered with embarrassment.
“I don’t believe in god. But if you do, maybe you should have been asking him for help before now. Or are you too proud to even do that?” Alan walked away, angrily.
Respite finally came in the form of a pickup truck that mercifully stopped. It was a local rancher who had an air pump that plugged into his power socket. Nearly three hours after the blowout, the PT Cruiser finally got back on the road.
There was more emotional friction now than ever, Joseph could sense. He glanced over at his travel companion, who sat silent, face turned away, looking out the side window.
“I’m sorry I blew out the tire.”
“No problem. Wasn’t your fault.”
“I’m also sorry about the spare being low on air. The oil change place is supposed to make sure the tires are aired, including the spare… I was just there last week.”
“No problem, Joseph. Stuff happens.”
“I made us get three hours behind. All that after me being frustrated with you this morning.”
“You also told me then that it was OK, so don’t worry about it.”
“I’m sorry that-”
“Joseph! Stop apologizing! We’re on our way, and that’s what matters! Let’s just get there.”
Joseph swallowed dryly. This is the stuff he was not great at. He hated conflict. But if the trip went on this way, he’d have a killer migraine and be vomiting before they got there.
“Alan. Please, hear me out. I was really rude to you, I feel, when you were trying to make conversation earlier. I didn’t want to tell you anything about me, so I deflected the conversation to you — and then, it got uncomfortable, and I didn’t mean for it to. I don’t know how it got there, but it did. And then I didn’t let you help me change tires, when it would have gone quicker if I had. Um… I acted like a jerk.”
Alan looked at his driver. “Yeah. Somewhat.”
“I’m uncomfortable with… I mean, when anyone wants to get to know me…” He sighed. Talking like this was hard. “I have trouble trusting people. Even a little.”
Alan’s interest was piqued. “Why do you think that is?”
“Stuff. That’s happened.”
“What kind of stuff? …You want to talk about it? I’m a great listener.”
“I… don’t know if I can talk about it.”
“Ah. Because you have trust issues with me?”
“With almost everybody. Except for one really good friend. That’s why I’m going to spend Christmas with her.”
“That sounds romantic.”
“She’s not a girlfriend. She’s a friend friend. Who’s a girl. (sigh) You know what I mean.”
“You know what you did just now?” Alan smiled.
“What?”
“You opened up to me about your life. That right there shows you’re taking a chance, trying to make a connection. Not too bad, for a guy with trust issues.”
“Huh… I guess so.”
“And by the way, apologies accepted.”
Alan looked at his smartphone. He loved map apps. “Okay, Joseph. As requested, I have our new arrival time.”
“What are we looking at?”
“We’ll hit Helena about 10 tonight, if we stop for nothing but gas.”
Joseph fretted. “It’ll have been snowing for a while by then, according to the forecast. I really wanted to avoid that.”
“You know, Highway 12 is coming up. That cuts straight through to Helena. We avoid that big loop south; it would cut more than three hours off our trip.”
“But… that takes us off the interstate.”
“I’ve traveled through there before. It’s a little hilly, but we should get through by six o’ clock. That’s when the snow starts, right?”
“But… I trust the interstate.”
Alan grinned his toothy grin. “Trust issues, huh?”
Joseph laughed. “Yeah. You know me — Paranoid Pete. You say you’ve traveled it?”
“Yes. Twice. Good road, no problems.”
“You’ve traveled it in winter?”
“YES. And there’s been no precip in this part of the state for weeks, so it should be clear. Now, there aren’t many places to get food or gas, but if you’ll fill up at the station near the intersection, we’ll be fine.”
“Hmmm. Well, OK. I’m TRUSTING you, now. That’s a big thing for me.”
“Your action of trust has been duly noted, sir, and entered into the record. Here comes the Highway 12 turn off up ahead.”
CHAPTER 2
Joseph filled up his gas tank at the truck stop by the intersection, while Alan went inside and bought a few refrigerated sandwiches and some beef jerky. The cashier was in a good mood, even though she was working on Christmas Eve. He gave one of the sandwiches to his young driver, checked the spare on the left front — it was still well inflated — and they took off on Highway 12.
They rose in elevation, and far off mountain peaks came in close. The road was clean as Alan had predicted, and the scenery was turning impressive. Tree lines nestled in the wrinkles of the hills. Snow from earlier in the month had lingered, and despite the car’s heater the men felt the dropping temperature seep through the windows and tickle their shoulders, then their arms.
Joseph stopped so he could get out and put his heavy coat on, and Alan did the same. “I apologize that the Cruiser seems to let the cold leak in,” said Joseph as he pulled a thick knit beanie down over his ears. “This is so beautiful up here!”
“See what you can experience when you go off the beaten track a bit?” Alan took a deep sniff of the biting air. “I can’t believe you’ve never been this way before. And you’ve lived here all your life!”
“I’ve been missing out. I just never have been a big outdoors guy.”
Both hopped back in the car and the ride resumed.
“I learned to love the outdoors when my family moved to Colorado when I was five,” reminisced Alan. “I joined the boy scouts, and we did a lot of camping and other trips. The badges — that was my obsession for a while. My favorite time ever was a winter scouting retreat where they taught us survival skills. We learned fire starting, smoke signaling, ice fishing… it was so cool. It made me dream of living like Jeremiah Johnson when I grew up.”
“Jerewho?”
“Old Robert Redford movie? A classic? Runs on the old movies channels from time to time?”
Joseph flashed him a bewildered smile as he shook his head and shrugged.
Alan faked a faint. “WHAT? We’ve got to get you cultured, boy!”
“I like older movies! I just haven’t seen that one. Is it really old, like black and white?”
“Ow! Speaking of old, you sure know how to make a guy feel that way. Yuh gol-durned whippersnapper.”
They both burst out laughing at that. Joseph guffawed until he had tears. It had been years since he’d done that.
“So,” said Joseph as he wiped his eyes, “ah…heh…you were a scout? Did you make it all the way to eagle?”
“Yes. Yes, I did.”
“Wow. You must have made your family proud. Do you do anything with the BSA today?”
Alan turned suddenly wistful. “No. Unfortunately. I haven’t even done any camping or hiking in decades. About the main wilderness experience I get these days is just driving through it. I’ve sunk most all my time and energy into my work for the last 25 — 30 years.” He drew a long sigh. “You know, I loved being an Eagle Scout. I knew I was going to live my life using all those skills and principles that I learned. It was who I was. I wish that still were so sometimes.”
Joseph grew surprised at Alan’s new demeanor. He sounded regretful.
“You mean… you still wish you were a boy scout?”
“Not that I wish I was a teenager. Acne, stupidity, and social cliques? No thanks, one puberty was enough. I mean that I wanted to take my scouting activities into adulthood.”
“And your work got in the way?”
“The type of work is fine — I love it, in fact. It’s the amount of time I invest in work that’s got me out of the groove. It’s not just work, either. It’s a whole bunch of other things, many related to the reasons I divorced Lacy. I just haven’t… lived my life the way I thought I would. It just got away from me.” He sighed. “I can’t even remember any of that survival stuff I learned. And I have a salesman’s photographic memory.”
After a little silence, Joseph cleared his throat. “You know, I was a scout for a little bit.”
“No kidding!” Alan was glad to shift the focus off him.
“Yeah. I barely started Webelos. But I quit.”
“You didn’t like scouting?”
“Actually, I did. The scouting part, that is. I still remember the knots and some of the other things I was taught. And I loved making my wooden racing car. I just didn’t like my fellow scouts.”
“Why?”
“I was ridiculed, and bullied a lot by the other guys. Especially one kid, bigger than the rest of us; he was the den mother’s son. So angelic when mom or dad was around; then when unsupervised, he became Hellboy. Like, a bad guy Hellboy. If Hellboy had become a regular demon instead of joining forces for good…”
“I have no idea what you’re talking about.”
Joseph glanced over. Alan had a joyful smirk.
“Yeah, you’re right. You ARE old,” Joseph needled.
“Whatever! Nerdy sci-fi lovin’ I.T. guy.”
“Black-and-white movie watchin’ slick sales dude!”
They both cracked up again.
The banter continued at a brisk pace. Joseph discovered that his passenger actually had been familiar with the Hellboy movies, and loved to watch good sci-fi / fantasy / superhero shows, just like him. Alan discovered that Joseph liked classic rock and pop from the 60’s through the 80’s, and even had a small collection of vinyl LP’s by the Beatles and Led Zeppelin, complete with turntable to play them.
Alan began to notice that he actually felt a kinship with his young companion. He’d not had a connection like this with another single person — definitely not with one this much younger than him — in a long time. All of his other friends were married, and getting with them seemed awkward after he’d filed for divorce; most couldn’t see why he had done it, and their wives seemed to now label Alan as a “leaver”. But this — this was nice. He felt energized. He felt… youthful.
Joseph realized something as they talked away: he had no tightness in his neck, and no hint of upset stomach. He was laughing out loud repeatedly. When was the last time… heck, had he ever done that? He surprisingly found he really liked Alan’s company. Even more amazing, Alan seemed to like him. Not since childhood had he had a good male friendship. He had acquaintances to be sure, but no bosom buddy. In fact, in his experience when any guy got to really know him they became indifferent, or worse, uncomfortable or disgusted. With this man, he sensed a strange, alien feeling starting to arise in him.
He was beginning to trust.
Time seemed to fly as they headed up Highway 12. Only one hour from Helena, though, their plan hit a major roadblock.
An actual roadblock.
A policeman had his car parked across the road, with orange cones in front spanning from shoulder to shoulder. He was motioning for them to… make a U-turn? Joseph rolled down his window as the car came to a halt.
“What’s up, officer?”
The cop walked up to them. “Sorry guys, you’ll have to turn back. We’ve had a tanker truck — a big 18-wheeler — overturn up ahead. Happened about 45 minutes ago. Toxic chlorine gas. We got a HAZMAT team coming, but we won’t open up this stretch here for at least one or two more days. We’re already closing the road in this direction all the way back to I-90.”
Both men in the PT were stunned. They would have to go all the way back to the interstate, nearer to Missoula than Helena!
Joseph turned around as instructed, then promptly pulled off on the shoulder to gather his thoughts. Don’t panic; attack the problem. Think. There’s a solution out there. Despite this brave logic, his stomach began twisting into more knots than he ever learned as a Webelos.
Alan was looking at the map app on his phone. He spoke softly and meekly. “There’s no way to make Helena tonight. We can find a motel back at the interstate… or just go back home, even. Buddy, I’m so sorry for suggesting this route. This has turned out horribly.”
“Alan, the coming snow is predicted to go on for all night. We may not be able to go very far or fast even on I-90 and I-15 tomorrow. It’s not like this car is a Jeep or a Hummer high off the ground with 4-wheel drive. This could threaten the whole trip happening at all!”
Joseph now felt a steel claw gripping his neck muscles and creeping up the back of his head. He pulled out his phone and looked on his own maps there. After a minute, he showed the screen to Alan. “See this winding road here? We passed that a few miles back. It looks like it twists around a bit, and it may add another two hours, but it would spit us out right on I-15 about twenty miles from Helena.”
“I’ve never driven that. It doesn’t look like a major road. And it might start snowing before we get off it.” Alan regarded the choices, and their consequences. He had to be in Helena on December 26th. Otherwise, that new job offer was lost. He hadn’t disclosed to anyone about that purpose for this trip, and he definitely wasn’t going to tell his coworker here. “But… if you’re up for it, I’m with you.”
Joseph put the Cruiser in gear. If this was the plan, they needed to get moving. “Okay — here we go.”
An hour into the new route, both men began having misgivings. This road not only was narrower and convoluted, but it ascended higher and higher in altitude. They had not seen another car since they started on it. Instead of just patches, the snow now coalesced into a steady layer all around, and at times stretched across their drive path. The cold was incredible — Alan felt his fingers stick to the window temporarily when he felt to test the temperature. And flakes were now falling from the darkening sky.
Joseph was driving slower; this swerving road had no shoulder. As he rounded a right curve, he saw that they were dipping into a tiny valley between hill peaks. What he then saw ahead to his left shocked him. “Look at that small lake — it’s frozen!”
He realized that this way was much more dangerous than he’d calculated. If it had been frigid deep and long enough up here to ice a pond over already, then that meant that ice could be covering major stretches of the road up ahead. Or snow banks blocking their way. Or — who knows what. The landscape, so beautiful most of the trip, now seemed threatening.
Alan was obviously fretting, chewing on the fringe of his mustache with his lower teeth. He reached down to make sure his seatbelt was indeed clicked in fully. He looked at his driver. “Do we need to consider waving the white flag and going back?”
Joseph began to obviously cry. So much for his Christmas plans. “DAMMIT!” He sniffed loud and wet. “I’ll turn around, just let me hit a wider stretch,” as he approached a right hairpin twist. “S-sorry. It’s this blasted headaAAAAAHH!-”
The huge bull elk in the road wasn’t visible until he’d entered the turn.
He slammed on the brake and the Cruiser went into a spin. Unbelievably, they whirled by the implacable beast without making contact. But then the car slipped off the left bank of the road and slid down the slope towards the frozen lake.
Joseph tried to steer and point the nose downhill to avoid going into a roll, but control was impossible. They hit the lake bank at a high speed, flipping then slamming the PT onto its side and they slid onto and over the ice, gliding sixty feet from the shore before grinding to a stop.
Alan shook his head. He was… alive. But what happened… where were they? He heard the ‘click-click’ of the turn signal, and the ‘ding-ding-ding’ of the check engine warning. Something was pressing in hard on his waist. He was trapped. Things didn’t look right. Where was he??
In just a few seconds, he reoriented. They were still in the car… it was turned on its left. He was held by his seat belt, with his head and torso hanging down towards the driver’s side. He turned… his head was about a foot from Joseph, who was wincing and slowly moaning as he lay on his door. Alan could see a blue-gray solid color out Joseph’s window. What was that?
Then a crack appeared on the color, and water seeped through and kissed the window. That was…
WE’RE OVER THE WATER!
Alan adrenalized with that. We’ve got to get out! What do I…
Suddenly in his mind appeared words on a page.
“Remove the occupant(s) from immediate danger.”
Alan moved quickly and with purpose. He unlatched his door and pushed it ajar, keeping it from closing by pushing with his right foot. He then unclicked Joseph’s seat belt and grabbed him by the shoulders.
“Wake up, buddy! I’m lifting you out of the car — we’re on the ice, and we’re falling through!”
“Okay.” That news focused the young man some.
With a mighty heave Alan lifted him towards the door. Once there, Joseph pushed it open and climbed out.
“Get off of the car and away from the cracks,” yelled Alan, now grabbing the roof of the Cruiser with his right hand while undoing his seat belt with the other, readying himself to exit.
He pulled himself out of the door and onto the right side of the car, which was essentially its top now. Joseph was on the ice, crawling to the rear of the PT, out towards the center of the small lake.
He turned his head back to Alan. “This way!”
As Alan quickly, gently, lowered himself to the ice, he glanced towards the front end of the car. Big fissures were developing there. He got on his stomach so to not focus all his weight on just two feet. He crawled the opposite direction from the cracks. As he shuffled he kept his head down, focusing on moving as fast as he could. After 30 feet he looked up towards Joseph-
But Joseph wasn’t there.
He looked back. The young one had stopped at the rear hatch and was pulling out their suitcases.
“Joseph! Drop and get over here! If you fall through that ice, you’re dead!”
“We’ll both be dead of exposure tonight if we don’t have more covering!” hissed Joseph.
The I.T. man shoved one bag towards Alan. It skittered across the frost. Then he grabbed the big suitcase he had packed last night. He braced his feet against the car, and with a loud “Gyaaah!” pushed it the same direction as the first case.
The effort made Joseph’s feet slide out from under him. He lost his balance and belly flopped on the ice, slamming his small chin on the surface.
Fissures suddenly appeared all around the PT Cruiser and Joseph. He was dazed, but not so much that he didn’t realize what was happening. A look of terror encased his face, as Alan watched helplessly. The Cruiser pitched towards its roof as water mixed with floating ice materialized in a split second over the whole area. And in that split second, Joseph was gone.
A hushed quiet came over the lake, as Alan was alone. He was screaming — or trying, but no sound would come out.
CHAPTER 3
Alan shuffled frenetically on his hands and knees towards the ice hole. The PT Cruiser, with hatch open, turn signal blinking, was taking on water and sinking rapidly. By the time the older man was to the edge, he figured 15 — 20 seconds had passed. Still no sign of Joseph. He looked into the dark water but couldn’t see a thing — there was scant daylight left.
He’s stuck under the ice, and can’t find the hole, Alan figured. He didn’t know what to do. So he silently did something he hadn’t done in decades.
God, if you are there, I know thirty-five years ago my last words to you were that I was through with you and you didn’t exist. I hope I was wrong, because Joseph needs you. Please be real, and please guide him to the hole. Don’t do it for me, do it for him. Please, save my friend. I’ll do whatever it takes. If someone has to die today, let it be me. But save my friend. Please. Please.
Joseph was still dazed some when he went under, and didn’t close his mouth. He inhaled ice-cold liquid, and reflexively spasmed multiple coughs to eject it. But now his lungs were empty, and he needed air. He swam up but promptly hit a solid wall. He realized he was trapped.
Please God, save him. Please.
Joseph punched the ice futilely. It was inky black. He started crawling along in one direction, hoping it was the right one. Visions of his life started passing through his mind…
Please. Alan was bawling openly. PLEASE!
Suddenly Joseph noticed off to his right — a blinking light, faintly. Just a few blinks, then it stopped. What was that… - the Cruiser! The hole is in that direction!
Please. Ple-
Joseph’s head emerged through the hole, gasping, and then heaving with wet, deep coughs.
“JOSEPH! Over here!” Alan was still choking back sobs, but he was overjoyed to see that skinny face.
Joseph, however, was not trying to get out. He was still choking and coughing. He looked too weak to swim. Alan thought he might have to jump in to get him. Then another page popped in his head.
“Extend a rope or pole or any similar device to the victim.”
Alan realized — his belt! He quickly unfastened it and pulled it out of his pant loops. Thank God I have a 44-inch waist, thought Alan for the first time ever. He then held on to one end, throwing the buckle end to his wet buddy. It fell right in front of Joseph.
“Get it!”
The young man did so, with one hand and then the other. Alan pulled him to the edge, all the way to where half of Joseph’s torso was out. Alan then grabbed his hands and pulled him most of the rest of the way out. While doing so, he noticed more cracks forming.
“Once out of the water, the victim should lie flat and roll away from the opening.”
“Joseph — stay flat on your belly and stretched out! Roll away from the hole!”
Joseph did so, slowly, continuing to cough mightily. Alan rolled away also. They stopped twenty feet from any further danger. Joseph was still coughing, so hard and deep that he had to throw up right there. Alan noticed his friend was drenched, and starting to shiver. The snow was coming down in thick clumps now, and the daylight was almost gone.
Okay, God, I’m going to ask you to save us both now. Help me find shelter, pronto. He looked towards the road. But going back there means going near the hole, no thanks. He turned to the opposite shore, looking for a tunnel, or a pipe, or a deep snow bank, or something he could use. But all he saw was low brush and trees. And more snow coming down. He looked through the tree line for a cave opening or an overhang. What’s that straight surface there? Too linear for an outcropping… is that…
A roof?!
He focused his eyes through the trees.
A roof.
“C’mon, Joseph… walk, man! Move! Get that body heat rising!”
Alan had his belt looped around the two suitcases and through the buckle, dragging them behind them with his left arm. With his right, he pulled a retching, still-barking Joseph, whose shivering was turning into jerking spasms. Between the coughing and the shaking, he was not making good walking progress.
“I’m…(kaff, kaff, wheeze)… t-trying…”
Alan saw the cabin outline before them, maybe 50 yards away now. He was breathing hard and deep; every inhalation of the freezing air felt like it burned his lungs. But he kept moving, one more step, one foot in front of the other. Almost there.
He then felt his friend’s hand pull out of his. He turned to see Joseph on the ground, in a fetal position. For a second it looked like the young one was having an epileptic seizure, but then Alan realized it was just the cold rigors worsening to a violent state.
“Jos… get up! Hey — can you hear me? Joseph?”
The fallen man made no attempt to speak or look at Alan. He just began to moan lowly, which sounded like rhythmic gulps due to the shakes.
He’s dying — dead in minutes if I can’t warm him up! This shocking realization gave Alan new energy. He picked up Joseph and laid him over his right shoulder. Leaving the bags and belt behind, he bounded towards the house. He got there with his trousers beginning to slip off of his butt and down to his thighs. If we survive, I’m not telling Reader’s Digest I lost my pants.
The solid wood door of the A-frame log cabin was locked tight. So were the windows, but Alan put on his gloves from his coat pockets and punched through a pane, then unlocked the latch. He pushed Joseph through, then ducked in and closed the window behind him.
It was now dark outside, and pitch black inside the cabin. Alan pulled up his pants and picked from his shirt pocket one of the combo penlight/pens marked “Marcam Pharmaceuticals” that he gave out as marketing freebies to doctors and pharmacists. Using the dim penlight glow, he quickly looked around. There was one main large room, with a fireplace and couch on one end, a kitchen area on the other. A loft spanned over one half of the room, above the kitchen. He found a light switch and flicked it on; there was no response. Likewise, the stove and refrigerator were both empty and powerless, and the thermostat did nothing when he turned it to “heat”.
No juice — dammit! Alan figured whoever owned the cabin had powered it down for the winter. He could search for a breaker box, but he was losing precious seconds as Joseph was dwindling. He ran through an open door and found a small bedroom with a king bed, bedcovers and blankets; an attached bathroom had two thick towels folded and on the counter. Bingo!
He grabbed Joseph and carried him to the bedroom, as he recalled pages from his Eagle Scout survival manual on how to treat hypothermia. He quickly laid out open as many blankets he could find over the bed. He put Joseph on the floor, grabbed the towels, and started to strip the wet clothing off. Holding his tiny light in his teeth, he took off his own gloves then unbuttoned Joseph’s coat, then flannel under jacket, then shirt, then pulled off his shoes and pants and underpants. He dried the young one’s skin as he disrobed him. Joseph still had a t-shirt on — Man, this guy really dresses in layers — so he pulled that off. There was still something yet underneath that — a stretchy Ace bandage wrapped around Joseph’s chest. Does he have a busted rib? He didn’t act like his chest hurt earlier on the trip.
The bandage was wet, so Alan undid the metallic clasps and off it came. Joseph was still shivering violently. Alan furiously dried his chest area, and as he did he felt yet something else attached there. He pulled the towel away and pointed his mouth-light to the area to see-
Breasts. Definite, rounded, full breasts.
He pointed the light downward. Hadn’t he dried some…? Yes, there was a penis and scrotum.
Alan stood stunned, nonplussed. What…?
Then, snapping back to the urgency of the situation, he finished drying Joseph. We’ll sort this out later, if he doesn’t die on me here. Joseph’s hair got wrapped up in a towel. Alan pulled the young man up and laid him across the foot of the bed that he had laid all the blankets on. He then disrobed himself down to his underwear and climbed on top of Joseph. Grabbing the blanket’s edges hanging off the foot, he then “logrolled” himself and Joseph towards the head of the bed, making a human burrito.
Alan, being overweight and having exerted himself, was very warm, in contrast to Joseph who felt like a giant ice cube. Alan willed his body heat into him, hugging him and rubbing his back. Please live. Please live.
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TO BE CONTINUED ON 11/28
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Thanks to Sephrena Lynn Miller for a quick first read!
Thanks to the "BCTS Closeteers" - especially Jana - for help with the pic!
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Cruiser Lake
Part 2 of 5
by Sigh
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CHAPTER 4
Jocelyn coughed yet again, as she had off and on all night. This cough woke her up, barely. Over the next few minutes, she became gradually aware that she was awakening in a foreign place. Foreign, yet she wasn’t alarmed. She if anything felt secure. And nice and warm, except for the cold biting her nose, forehead and the upper tips of her ears. She opened her eyes to see brown fabric right near her face. In a minute, she looked up and saw a mild light, like reflected morning glow, off of a wall. A log wall.
I wonder where I am. She also wondered slightly why she wasn’t alarmed, coming to in such a strange place. I feel… safe.
She took a deep breath. Then she heard another breath and felt her chest squeeze with it. But she hadn’t inhaled. She moved her head — and felt the unmistakable rub of skin on skin. Her left ear was scratching against a rough yet soft surface; a cheek with stubble.
Someone’s in bed with me. What did I do last night? Oh God — don’t tell me I got drunk and got with some stranger. That couldn’t have happened; I never go out drinking. I don’t even date. Think. I went home after work, then…no, wait. I drove in the car to pick up that guy to go to Helena…
Then she remembered the drive. And the narrow road. And the bull elk and the crash. And the fall through the ice…
I need to get up and figure this out. If I can do it without waking whomever this is.
She then tried to lift her arm and leg, but couldn’t. She twisted her torso, which was still difficult. Lifting her head, she was able to get a look at the face of her morning companion. He was asleep; an older guy, with a mustache, thinning hair.
Her heart stopped.
Alan!
She still couldn’t mobilize her arms fully, but by rubbing her arms against her chest by shrugging her shoulders she had a shocking realization.
It’s not there!
Alan said groggily, “Hey…you awake?”
“Y-yeah…. um (kaff), did you… undress me last night?”
“Yes. (yawn) You got hypothermic after you fell through the ice. Even delirious. I was afraid I was going to lose you. I had to warm you up with my body heat.”
Joseph considered that news. “Thank you, Alan. I (kaff, kaff) guess I owe you my life.”
“I’m glad you’re alive. Do you know how hard it is to replace a good I.T. guy?”
Joseph didn’t laugh. “Alan… did you remove the wrap I had around my chest?”
“Yes. It was wet. You got soaked through and through.”
He's acting so normal. Maybe he didn't see? How could he not notice? -“When you took it off did you… notice anything?”
“Um… yes.”
OH GOD! OHGODOHGODOHGODOHGOOOODDD!!
Joseph panicked. Sudden queasiness and migraine took hold. “Get... get AWAY from me… GOD DAMMIT, GET OFF OF ME!!”
Jocelyn now made no pretense of being male. She writhed and struggled to get out of the cocoon they were in.
“Whoa, whoa, hang on just a minute willya?” Alan reversed the log roll from the night before, but Jocelyn was pushing and yelling, and they rolled too far — off the end of the bed.
THUMP! Went two bodies, one nude and one nearly, on the floor. Jocelyn scooted to the far wall, sitting with her knees to her chest, crossed feet attempting to hide her groin, arms around her knees. She immediately felt the extreme cold hitting her all around, and started to quiver slightly.
Alan stood up and tossed her some blankets. They were still warm from their “burrito”. He then proceeded to put on his outfit from yesterday.
“DANG! I didn’t know clothes could freeze!” Adam got clad quickly and looked at his sleep partner. She was crying, scared, and furious all at the same time. He sat down on the floor and smiled.
“I’m sorry about the being in the buff together. You were dying — really. You were nearly frozen, and I couldn’t get you to speak or respond. I figured you’d be freaked out if you woke up with us like this. I was hoping I might wake up first-”
“You- you stay over there! Stay the hell away from me!”
“Joseph, I’m not going to-”
“SHUT UP! You got NAKED with me! And you sure don’t look like you minded it! Was this your plan all along? To get me somewhere alone with you so you could practically RAPE me? Are you some tranny chasing old pervert who somehow found out about me and decided to carpool with me to get me in bed-”
Jocelyn was now openly wailing and shedding tears, unable to talk further.
Meanwhile, Alan considered his situation carefully. He imagined what his sister Charlene would tell him to do.
"Alan, consider what she’s been through and experienced; try to put yourself in her shoes. Confront anger with gentleness. She's probably been hurt or abused before. She's not a freak; she's a woman in her soul, and trying to make her body conform to that soul. Although the old you - 'Old Alan' - was a bigot, you've changed, you've grown. You're a better man. Be that better man, for her sake."
Okay, Char, here goes nothing…
“Yes. You got me dead to rights. I used my mutant powers of persuasion to make you choose to take that curvy mountain road. I had the Air Force seed the clouds so it would snow heavily. I bribed forest rangers to put that trained big elk in the road, and had the highway patrol calculate the slide down the slope onto the lake. I manipulated you into staying by the car so you’d fall through the ice. I did all of that — just so I could get you into bed.”
“You had your arms wrapped around me!”
“To warm you up.”
“You probably tried to rape me.”
“Do you feel raped?”
Jocelyn squeezed her butt. No soreness. “No.”
“In any other circumstance, waking up like this would be totally inappropriate. But you were going into hypothermic shock. I had to get you warmed up. There was no other way. I am so, so sorry.”
Jocelyn was silent, frozen in confusion as she considered his words. She looked at the floor. Then she turned to Alan again, her face a mix of sorrow and bewilderment. A new tear began to trickle again down her right cheek.
“Why — Why are you being so nice to me? No one who knows about this-” she exposed one arm and motioned to her body “-is nice to me. Every one I’ve told — my family, friends, others — have left me for dead. Except my friend in Helena. So I know how to handle disgust and rejection; I’m used to it. But I can’t figure you out. That’s why I thought you must be a pervert with a fetish. Why don’t you hate me like everyone else?”
Alan raised one hand to explain. “Okay, just hear me out. My sister came out as a lesbian two years ago, and she is one of the finest people in my life. Long story short: she got me to be open-minded regarding gays and transgenders. Is that you? Are you a transgender?”
Jocelyn, tearful and a little suspicious still, nodded hesitantly.
Alan beamed reassuringly. “Then please forgive me, ma’am. We haven’t been properly introduced. My name is Alan Sarkisian, salesman and alleged old guy, and I consider myself to be your friend, even though I don’t know what to call you. May I have the pleasure of knowing your name?”
The woman huddling under the blankets sniffed, then coughed. She wiped her eyes, and then closed them as she said, “Jocelyn O’Donnell”.
Jocelyn shivered. The blankets were thick, but she could feel icy air tendrils around her neck and feet. They just weren’t form fitting enough to keep her naked body warm — not like when Alan had been next to her.
Alan came through the door triumphantly. “It took me a while to locate them under all that snow — man, it’s still coming down out there — but I found our bags!” And my belt, thankfully, he mused. “Hopefully you’ve packed some warm stuff you can change into.”
“It’s all female clothing,” said Jocelyn.
“Well I should hope so,” countered Alan. “I’d feel uncomfortable if you tried to dress like a man, Jocelyn. Cross-dressers make me nervous.” There was that toothy grin again.
“Don’t… don’t mock me.”
“I’m not. Look, I'm sorry - I joke a lot. Maybe too much, sometimes. But I’m fine with all…” he pointed at her and her bag, making a circle with his finger… “all this. And you waking up, thinking clearly, with all your fingers and toes still on — man, it’s got me in a good mood that no one can spoil!”
Alan caught himself. Maybe I shouldn’t say “man” so much when speaking to her.
“I really don’t disgust you? You don’t feel that I’m a freak? Or at least, ugly? (kaff, kaff) I’m sorry, I’ve met few people — and NO men — who are as accepting as you’re pretending to be.”
Alan pulled her snowy suitcase over by her and opened it up. “Somebody’s really hurt you over this, haven’t they?”
“A whole bunch of somebodies, actually.”
I need to sell her on the fact that I’m being truthful and accepting. Which shouldn’t be hard, because that’s really how I feel.
“Now it’s my turn to apologize, Jocelyn. I’m sorry for all the men — and boys — who have treated you with disgust. All the ones of my sex who have made you feel ugly. Because I have been one of those “somebodies” most of my life. But in the last two years, I’ve had to challenge most of my basic beliefs about life, and people, even” he sighed, thinking of his failed marriage, “about love.”
He looked off, suddenly wistful. “There is so much that I’ve done that I regret, so much carelessness and harm that I’ve caused to others without even fully realizing it. I’ve been treated badly too, but that’s no excuse for my actions. And I can never undo all of them. But with you — I have a chance to do some good, to maybe atone for some of the crap I caused. I’m trying to do right by you. Will you teach me how?”
There’s that strange feeling again, thought Jocelyn. Like I might be able to… trust him. “So,” she said with a faint smile, “I’m (kaff) just a way for you to relieve your guilt, huh?”
“Yep. I’m only keeping you around until my karma is adjusted, then you’re on your own, kid.”
Jocelyn laughed, as did Alan.
“So, why don’t you get dressed while I take a look around this place and see what we’ve got here.”
“Is there a heater? What about hot water? I could really use a shower — my hair feels grody, and I stink like pond scum. (kaff) It’s going to make me sick if I have to smell myself like this all day.”
“No heat, I checked last night. Let me see about the water, and somehow it feels like there’s cold outside air getting in here. I’ll be right back.”
Alan sealed the hole he punched in the window with some duct tape he discovered. That should take care of the air leak. Now he was taking inventory of the cabin. No food to be found except a can of hot chocolate mix and some peanut packets, handouts from one of those economy airlines. Some hurricane lamps, and a few jars of lamp oil. A Coleman 'dual fuel' camping stove gave him a bit of hope — where there’s a stove, there had to be some fuel, right?
Praying had worked yesterday. So he figured he’d try again.
Hey, God. It’s me. Alan. I need to find some fuel for this stove here, and a lighter. I mean, I still think I know how to start a fire, but a lighter sure would be easier. Or if you can arrange for an immediate miraculous rescue, that would be fine instead.
By the way, good job on saving my friend yesterday. That was great work. Thanks a million. Sorry that I’m not saying this stuff right; I’m out of practice talking to you. So… hallelujah and praise thy holiness. A lot. Amen.
Alan looked inside the kitchen oven to find various pots and pans. He pulled them all out in hopes of finding something else, but didn’t.
He then noticed a small door next to the pantry that he had missed. Opening it up, he discovered two whole gallon containers of liquid fuel for the stove. Later, he found a long nosed butane lighter on the fireplace mantle.
God… wow! I should’ve asked you for food too, before I found there wasn’t any. Okay, please, some food for us too. And anything else we might need that I can’t think of right now. Glory to you, and the sun, and the ghosts. Amen.
Alan knocked on the bedroom door. “Jocelyn? Are you decent? Can I come in?”
“I’m back on the bed under the blankets, come in (kaff).”
He walked in with the Coleman and lighter and a stew pot from the kitchen filled with snow from the outside. “It’s still coming down out there. I hope we don’t get snowed in. Anyway, good and bad news. Which do you want first?”
“Please — just good news. I can’t handle any more bad.”
“Sorry, you get both. OK, bad news: we don’t appear to have running water. There’s a ground level water tank out there, but no response when I turn on the faucet. The lines are either frozen, or they were disconnected and drained before the owners of this place last left here.”
Jocelyn’s eyes grew wide. “But… how do we wash? How do we flush after… you know?”
“Good news: I think I’ve figured out a way to get you some warm water to bathe with. Mediocre news: It’ll have to be a sponge bath.” With that, he walked into the bathroom. In a minute, he emerged empty handed, closing the door behind him.
“The bathroom’s pretty small, so give it an hour before you go in there. Hopefully it will be warmer — scratch that, let’s say less freezing — in there by then.”
He left to the kitchen area, and then came back with two coffee cups that were steaming.
“Before I set it up in the bathroom, I used that little stove to melt some snow and heat it up for some hot chocolate. I figured-”
“You figured correctly!” said Jocelyn. She tried to work out how she could stay warm under the covers and sit up to drink. Finally she sat up in bed, pulled the covers over her head and around her body with just her face showing through. “Um… I need my hands to keep the covers tight around me. Would you mind…?”
Alan nodded, and brought the cup of brown ambrosia to her lips. She blew on it, and then sipped. “Mm… so warm, and I’m so hungry.”
She drank all of her cup, and half of Alan’s; he offered it to her because he saw she was still cold.
“Oh, thank God. That’s better. And thank you too, Alan.”
“Think nothing of it, ma’am.”
She eyed him quizzically. “You know, I had you pegged as an older, schmoozy guy who rubbed shoulders with all of the other ‘good old boys’. I mean, I was pleasantly surprised with our talking on the drive — at least the latter part.” She stopped to cough a few times. “But there is no way on earth that I would have expected you to act so casual, so — normal — after learning my “secret”. How did you get so accepting of the transgendered?”
Alan smiled. “That voice you’re using today is higher. Very feminine. Is that your natural voice?”
“Oh. Thank you. It’s the voice of my true self, but it’s not really natural to me yet; I still have to concentrate a little while speaking this way.”
“Well. To answer your question. You remember I told you about my sister?”
“Just that she’s a lesbian.”
“Yeah. Charlene came out and made that announcement to Mom two years ago last August. So Mom calls me to go over to Seattle to talk some sense into her. I was supposed to cure her of temporary insanity — that was my attitude, anyway. I thought that she was just going through a man-hating phase.
“When I get there, she’s more fulfilled and peaceful than I’ve ever seen her. She asked me to hear her out fully. So I did, and at the end of a few hours I had decided that I’d prefer my sister to be happy than to be the depressed, angry person I’d known since childhood. Instead of just a phase, I found she’d been feeling attracted to women for most of her life.
“I also learned a little empathy for what she’d been going through. She’d been treated like dirt by some of her previously closest friends. It especially hurt when she told me that in the past, whenever I had told a joke about 'dykes' or 'lezbos', that it ripped her up inside. I still feel horrible about that. I'd never been a militant 'fag hater' - but I definitely wasn't sensitive to the plight and struggles of gays and lesbians. I had to face the fact that I was a bigot, even if a 'soft' one. Anyway, I swore to change, apologized to Charlene, and since then I've tried to be more open minded.
"Then my sister tells me about transsexuals, and how they face more crap and stigma and discrimination than anybody. Sooo… I made a vow that if I ever met a transgender, I was going to respect her and treat her like the lady she really was. Unless the transgender was a female to male, then I would treat her like the man she really was. I mean, treat him like the man he really was. Or is. Now. You know what I mean. I mean, do you know what I mean?”
A wide-eyed Jocelyn stared back at him. “Yes, except maybe for the last four sentences.”
“OK. And then last night happened, where I saw your… assets, and as I’m trying to warm you up, I think back to how many of your features and actions and speech are really more feminine than I’ve noticed before, and realized that you were probably transgender, and that here’s a chance for me to put my vow into practice. And that brings us to right now.”
“Wow… wow. I owe you a huge apology. Thank God for your sister, and thank you for your attitude with me. If you were someone else, I could be beaten up or even dead now.”
“Don’t thank me yet. If we’re snowed in all winter, I’ll probably have to eat you to survive.”
Jocelyn’s eyes got even wider.
Alan flashed his pearly whites at her. “KIDDING! I’m kidding.” He checked the bathroom. “Hey — this is probably as warm as it’s gonna get. If you’re to bathe, you might want to get started.”
“Thank you. Could you hand me those green sweat pants and top that are just inside my suitcase, and some socks too?”
Alan walked outside. He had crawled out the window because the snowdrifts forming all around the cabin blocked the doorway. The snow had come down all night, and was still doing so. He looked at the grey sky.
If someone even realizes we’re missing yet, they probably aren’t going to send out a search party while it’s snowing so heavily. And I’ve got to find a way to keep us from being trapped inside. Okay, God. I need some help again. Send a search party to RIGHT HERE, please. And I need a snow shovel. Please, our father Art in heaven, hello to thy name. Amen.
As he waded through the powder to the back of the cabin, he saw a small building.
A tool shed. With a padlock. I’ll bet these keys that were hanging in the kitchen unlock it. You really must be up there, Big Guy.
Jocelyn was in the bathroom. The stove had melted the ice in the pot to warm liquid, and the small area was a little warmer than the bedroom. She’d already done a quick washcloth bath with soap and water; she now squirted her shampoo into her hands while dipping her hair in the pot.
After finishing and wrapping up her hair in a towel, she looked at her face in the mirror using the dim stove fire glow. Let’s see if I can use some makeup in this dim light and not look like a clown.
Later, checking her work with her compact mirror while using the daylight at the window, she felt gratified. Not bad. I’m getting better at this.
She then got out panties, a bra, an extra sweat suit, t-shirts, 2 socks, a camisole, 2 pair of leggings, a sweater, 2 thick scarfs, her faux fur hat with the ear flaps and her big floor length padded coat, and put them all under the blankets on the bed. She then crawled in there with them and began dressing.
Alan came in the front door, heart pounding, face flushed, and gasping. He’d forgotten how exhausting it could be when shoveling snow. He’d had a snow blower at home. Now it was Lacy’s.
He rested for a few minutes, then began filling up the hurricane lamps with lamp oil.
“How’s (kaff) it going in here?” Jocelyn came in from the bedroom.
“Okay. Hey! You look pretty.”
“Pretty covered up, you mean. I feel almost Iranian — all you can see is my eyes.” She had thick scarves wrapping her low neck up to her nose.
“Don’t be culturally insensitive. I’m a secret operative for the PC police. I’ll have you prosecuted for hate speech.”
He then examined her face more closely. The eyelids were a smoky lavender hue, descending into lilting lashes. “Your eyes… they’re beautiful. Is the rest of your face made up too?”
She nodded yes.
“Could you take the hat and scarves off so I can see the whole effect?”
Jocelyn blushed some at this suggestion. “My hair’s not the greatest. It’s still damp, and I have no way to fix it without electricity.” She exposed her lower face and removed her head covering.
Alan was amazed. Although he knew this face belonged to the Joseph he knew yesterday, there was no ‘guy in drag’appearance. This visage belonged to a woman. Pink glistening lips were in a nervous smile. With her long straight darkish hair and small chin and slightly thin face, she appeared to resemble one of his childhood crushes — Cher Bono. Not the multiple facelifted tabloid queen of this century, but the Cher of the 70’s, the sleek goddess on TV that wowed the nation in her Bob Mackie gowns week after week.
She's smiling. I'd forgotten how good it feels to have a pretty girl smile at me. She's really quite fetching... Alan, stop. You know where infatuation leads to - attraction, then love, then pain and yelling and abuse. Never again. Remember - you're living a monk's life from now on.
Jocelyn's smile grew more nervous. He's just staring at me with an open mouth. "Well, what do you think?" Are you amazed? Disgusted? Disappointed? Having a stroke? Say something!
“Wow. You’re gorgeous. Stunning.” Alan caught himself — Was I staring? Yes. I only hope I wasn’t drooling. Time to change the subject. “Ah… I see you have another heavy coat, thank God.”
“Yes. Like it? This color is called creamy chiffon. I brought it to be fashionable; turns out it might be a life saver.”
“A pineapple lifesaver. Yum, my favorite.”
She blushed. Was he being… flirty? “By the way, Alan… did you just say ‘thank God’? I thought you said he didn’t exist.”
“Well… let’s just say, in our current situation, I’m looking for all the help I can get. And believe it or not, I think I’m getting some.”
He looked around. “We’ve got that camping stove with fuel here, but no food. At least it’s a heat source. But I’m going to try to start a fire in the fireplace. There are only a few pieces of wood in here, but it’s enough for maybe six hours of burn. And — check out the custom-made fireplace tools! They’re not flimsy like most; looks like they were specially welded. The poker’s the most impressive; it’s so thick and solid, it’s almost like a weapon.”
“That’s… nice.” Jocelyn wanted to direct the conversation to a more useful discussion. “Do you think smoke from the chimney will be a clue for any rescue team? Or would they be expecting people to be in here this time of year?”
“Smoke wouldn’t hurt. Hopefully your girlfriend — your friend who’s a girl — has alerted the authorities that you’re missing.”
“Yes, she should have. She worries about me. But I told her our route would be along the two interstates, and I failed to call her when we changed plans. Blast it — that’s not like me.”
“Speaking of phones, mine is still in the car, at the bottom of the pond. Yours?”
“Mine too. I keep it on the dashboard. It’s not like we’d get good reception up here anyway.” Jocelyn’s eyes got watery. “Are we going to make it out of here? Please tell me yes (kaff).”
Alan smiled and put his gloved hand on Jocelyn’s scarfed cheek. “Ma’am, I promise you, we’ll get back to normal boring Missoula life before you know it.”
Behind his brave front, he pondered. That was the diciest sales pitch I’ve delivered in a long time. God, back me up on this, please. I don’t need her to think I don’t keep my promises, okay?
Alan arranged the chopped logs in the fireplace. “This is all the wood I can see here. At least it looks good and ready to burn.” He crumpled up pages from an Edgar Allan Poe book he found nearby. “We don’t need any horror stories right now, anyway.” Placing them under the wood, he got the lighter out. “Well, here goes nothing.”
“Heat. Glorious heat. I can’t wait,” tittered Jocelyn.
Alan lit the pages. They caught well, and Alan stuffed more in with the huge thick fireplace poker. The wood eventually started to catch fire. “Oh yeah, baby. Make Papa some Fahrenheit!”
“Alan…”
“Look at that! Ain’t it beautiful?”
“Alan-”
“Almost as beautiful as your eyes, Jocelyn.”
“ALAN!”
What, she didn’t like the compliment?
“ALAN, THE SMOKE!”
Alan looked up. He had been focusing on stoking the base of the fire. Now he saw that all of the smoke, instead of going up the chimney, was billowing out into the room.
Immediately he realized - he’d forgotten to open the damper.
He tried to reach his hand in, but the fire was too intense by now. Grabbing the poker, he jabbed it in, but he couldn’t see the latch, and didn’t seem to be able to find it by passing back and forth. Meanwhile, smoke was really filling the room now; the top of the arched ceiling wasn’t visible anymore. He was going to need to put out the fire. How? Looking around frantically for an extinguisher, he began to panic.
FWOOSH!
A pot of fresh snow had been thrown on the fire. Jocelyn had a second potful in her other hand, and threw it on too. She ran back out the door to get more. It turned out the first two had done the trick.
Alan watched her, impressed and feeling sheepish.
“Alan (kaff, kaff), could you get up in the loft and open some windows up there to let this smoke out?”
“Sure… OK. But it’s going to get colder in here as a consequence. So you might want to get some blankets back over you, even with how you’re dressed.”
He climbed up the ladder on the side of the room to reach the upper level. The windows were opened just long enough to clear the majority of the smoke. Closing them and descending to the main floor, he noticed how much more frigid it had become.
“Jocelyn?” Where had she gone?
Then from under a mass of blankets on the couch, he saw a little gloved hand stick up and wave.
He sat down on the couch. “Are you okay in there? How are you breathing?”
“By inhaling (kaff) and exhaling,” came the muffled reply.
“Ha, ha. You’re a laugh riot.” Alan smiled weakly. His mistake had made things worse, not better. And all their firewood was wet.
“Stupid, stupid, stupid,” he mumbled.
“Hey! I know I’m not (kaff) as funny as you are (kaff)…”
“What? No, I mean myself. My stupidity just screwed things up. Sorry.”
“Your bravery saved my life yesterday, Eagle Scout. I thought you said (kaff) you didn’t remember any of that stuff?”
“I didn’t — at least not until we wrecked. Then at times, exactly when I needed it, I remembered the instructions from my handbook and the accessory handouts I got from the survival training. I mean, the words on the pages actually appeared in my brain. I’m amazed. Maybe it’s a God thing. You know I prayed to him for you not to die, and you didn’t? Plus he helped me find the stove fuel. Maybe he’s been putting all those scouting lessons in my head. Then again, maybe not. I sure couldn’t figure out how to put out a fire just now.”
“Or,” said the blanket pile, “maybe he provided someone to help you so you don’t have to try to save us by yourself.”
“Ah. So in Webelos, you were trained to put out fires with snow?”
“Sure. (kaff). Got my ‘cabin-fireplace-fire-putter-outer’ badge.”
Alan chuckled. He reached over and patted one of the lumps of the blanket, hoping that it was the head lump and not a breast lump.
The camping stove lit without the drama that had occurred in the fireplace. Alan took a plastic end table from the far side of the couch and placed it before his blanketed companion. He then placed the stove there.
“Careful — I’ve got the Coleman right in front of you. It’s on.”
As Jocelyn peeked out from her self made bunker, Alan went to try to open the damper. The handle was easy to find, but after multiple mighty tugs he couldn’t get it to budge. Saying “open, sesame” with a flourish was of course futile. He looked in with his penlight, but didn’t see a blockage or lock. Lying on his back and kicking it a number of good thwacks still produced nothing.
“Dammit!”
“S’okay, Alan. We don’t have anymore fresh firewood anyway.”
“I know, but I could have taken apart the couch, or broken some of the dining area chairs and used them to make a fire. Not if the flue’s blocked, though.”
“This stove here is helping me some.” She had her gloves off and was warming her hands over the burner.
“Here,” Alan brought over the peanut packs. “Getting some calories in you will warm you up a little.”
“I thought you said we had no food.”
“This isn’t food. It’s a small snack. Still, it’s calories. Now, Mama’s souvlaki, with some tiropita, hummus and stuffed grape leaves. That’s food.”
“Alan, split the nuts with me. I know you’re hungry.”
“Look at this,” he said, patting his belly. “I’m not gonna starve for another five months. Now please, ma’am. Eat them. I’ll feel guiltier if you don’t. Remember your job as my ‘guilt easer’.”
We could be stuck here for days, even weeks. She needs — we need — something more substantial. There were fishing supplies in the back closet. I could ice fish back at that lake and see if I could catch us something. If I only had some bait.
Another page appeared. “There are four types of ice fishing bait: grubs, minnows, lures, and meat.”
Okay — none of which I have. WAIT!
He pulled off a glove and reached in his inner pocket on his winter coat. There was the beef jerky he had bought at the gas station yesterday.
Don’t know if this qualifies as bait, but it’s what I’ve got. Alan rushed over to the back closet, emerging with a pole, lines, tackle box, and even an ice auger to drill a hole with. God, if this is you doing this, then please take it all the way — in other words, get me some fish, please. Hail Mary, Phil and Grace. Amen.
“Alan — where are you going?”
“Off to work, honey. Someone’s got to bring home the bacon. Or trout, or sturgeon. Sorry I can’t go with you to little Johnny’s parent-teacher night. Enjoy your junior league meeting. I’ll be back by or before sundown.”
Jocelyn shook her head, half smiling as she watched him leave. This guy is certifiably nuts. I like it, she thought.
It had taken nearly to dusk to get a bite, but when one came, it was a winner. A large trout, about five pounds, Alan figured. He wrestled it out of the hole, and then laid on his back in exhaustion for a few minutes while the fish flopped furiously on the ice. All of the physical activity from yesterday and today was catching up to him. He didn’t even regularly exercise, normally. Adrenaline and urgency had been powering him so far, but now it was time for his muscles to pay the piper, and they were aching. Especially after drilling that ice hole with the auger. He had packed some ibuprofen; he thought he’d better take some when back at the cabin.
“Luuu-cyyy, I’m hoo-ooome!”
“Oh, thank heaven. I was getting worried- OH! MY GOD! What a huge fish!”
“Bring the stove over to the sink so I can have some light. I’ll clean this sucker and then cook him up so we can have a little more on our stomachs.”
There were salt, pepper, and various seasonings in the cabinet by the kitchen oven. Alan cooked all the trout save for a portion set aside to use as future ice fishing bait. Both he and Jocelyn were extremely hungry after smelling the fresh fish cooking. They sat on the couch, huddled together under blankets, eating by hurricane lamp light.
“That was the best fish I’ve eaten in my life,” she said.
“It’s the ambience. The firelight, the sub-zero weather, the threat of death staring you in the face... makes the food taste better.” He took his last bite. “Mm. The company’s pretty awesome too.”
“Alan?”
“Mm-hm?”
“Merry Christmas.”
He looked at her and saw that she was starting to cry. He sat quietly by her, not knowing what to do as she began sobbing out loud. Eventually he carefully reached his arm around her shoulders, and she buried her face in his chest as she gushed more tears.
“…Merry Christmas, Jocelyn.”
They sat that way as the lamp fire flickered on.
After a while, Jocelyn was all cried out, and continued to rest on Alan’s chest. His eyes grew heavy, and he began to nod off to sleep. She raised a gloved hand and tickled his chin to wake him.
“You’re exhausted. Let’s get you lying down so you can get some proper rest.”
“Not yet. You get in bed now, so you can get warm. I’ll gather up the dinner mess. When I do lie down I feel like I’ll sleep for a month.”
The lamp Jocelyn had placed in the bedroom gave it enough light to walk around with, but was dim enough to allow sleep. When Alan finally came there, she had brushed her teeth and was already in bed, completely covered head to toe once more in blankets.
“Hellooo, in there. Are you warm enough?”
“I’ll live. I still have two pairs of sweats and socks on.”
“You know, I’ll bring the stove in here. We need to not use up the all the fuel, but if you get too cold, light it up.”
He looked at her form under the insulation. Should I even bring it up? Oh, well. Here goes. “You know, if you needed to use my body heat again, you could. This time it could be with our clothes on.”
She peeked out from under the covers. “Thank you… I’m just not ready to, yet. Thinking about how we were last night is still really embarrassing to me.”
“Okay. No pressure.”
“I’m sorry. You probably think I’m so hateful and ungrateful. I will be forever in your debt for all you’ve done. But I want to sleep alone tonight.”
“Did I do the wrong thing putting my arm around you earlier?”
“No! No, that was fine. I appreciated that. But I was awake. When I’m asleep, I’ll be… vulnerable. It’s just my stupid trust issues. But I’m asking you to please humor me.”
“Okay, but promise me something. If you need anything, please wake me up. I mean anything.”
“Deal.”
“Goodnight, Jocelyn.”
“Goodnight, Alan.”
Jocelyn awoke shivering. The room was severely cold, and very dark. Did the lamp already burn out? I didn’t check the oil level in it. I’m freezing, even under all these covers. She heard Alan cough - from the next room. Is he sleeping on the couch?
She reached for and found the stove and lighter. Firing it up, she lifted it and used the light to walk into the big room.
Alan was asleep in all his clothes and coat. Lying on the couch, he exhaled vapor with every breath. Is he cold? He doesn’t act or look like he is. Should I wake him and ask him to… warm me up?
After considering for a while, she decided against it. She took the stove into the small bathroom, balanced it on the sink and turned it up as high as it would go. Sitting on the toilet top swaddled in her blankets, she warmed her hands.
CHAPTER 6
Alan awoke gradually. He sensed he was sore all over. It was day, though only a pale glow came through the windows instead of bright sunlight. His body felt relatively lukewarm except for his feet — the cold was biting through his shoes and socks — and his face. He put his gloved hands to his mouth and directed his breath steam to his nose and cheeks.
Sheesh! If my schnozz were any colder, it’d fall off.
Stretching his arms and legs — OW, ow ow ow — he willed himself into a sitting position.
“Hoo boy. I’ll have a large coffee and a plate of ibuprofen, Rosie. What? No coffee, just hot chocolate? I gotta find a new diner.”
Looking now up at the windows, he faced an unwelcome sight.
It’s STILL snowing? Not good. That’ll slow any search effort.
“Jocelyn? You up?” There was no answer. If I’m feeling a little cold, she might be freezing. I left her with all the blankets, though.
Slowly, he forced himself to stand, then to start walking. As he got to the bedroom, he saw that the bed was empty. Maybe she was using the toilet. Speaking of which, my bladder’s pretty full.
He gently knocked on the closed bathroom door.
“Are you in there? You okay?” he asked in a low voice. No answer. Suddenly worried, he turned the doorknob and spoke louder. “Hey, if you’re in there, tell me and I won’t come in. But say something at least, to let me know you’re alright.” No answer.
“Okay — I’m coming in.” If you’re there, please be dressed. Or at least don’t think I’m trying to be a pervert.
An unusual scene greeted him. The camping stove was on the sink, the last vestiges of flame anemically licking the burner. It was somewhat less cold in here than the rest of the cabin, he noticed. On the floor, lying on top of and under a mess of covers, was a still sleeping Jocelyn. Her face was lying next to the base of the commode.
Waking up with your head next to the head. That’ll be unpleasant. He felt simultaneously sympathetic and amused. Until he realized that he’d either have to wake her, or pee outside.
If my pecker freezes off, I’ll give her such a guilt trip, he thought as he readied to go out in the weather. Hell, she might even be jealous of me at that point. She’s the one who wants a dickectomy.
“Shut up, ‘Old Alan’. Go back in your mental cave,” he muttered through gritted teeth while he made amber snow.
Jocelyn shuffled bleary-eyed into the big room, covers draped on her shoulders, and plopped on the couch beside Alan. He glanced at her.
“How did you sleep last night, ma’am?”
“Oh, it was… ROTTEN. I stayed cold, and I’m so achy right now.”
“That’s what sleeping on tile and porcelain will do to you.”
She looked at him meekly. “You saw.”
“We’re a couple of sad sacks, you know? Big king size bed in this place, and neither of us use it,” he shook his head and snickered.
“I saw you last night on the couch. I’ll bet you didn’t sleep good either.”
“My whole body is just one big ache. But I think it’s mostly from being so physically active. Most of my life I’m either on my butt in my car or standing around giving a pitch. Are you up for some hot chocolate?”
“Can you just make me a tub full and let me stay in it all day?” shivered Jocelyn.
“Bathing in chocolate. Hm. NOW who’s the fetishist?” shouted Alan as he got the stove from the bathroom.
“Watch it, mister. Don’t mess with a woman when she’s got PFS.”
“PFS?”
“Post-freezing syndrome (kaff, kaff).”
Alan laughed at the joke while simultaneously becoming concerned. “I thought that cough had resolved itself.”
“It’s almost gone. It’s getting better. I’m fine.”
“Okay. If you say so.” Why am I not convinced, he suspected.
After fixing multiple cups of hot chocolate from melted snow, Alan went outside. He shoveled the front doorway clean again, then contemplated as he caught his breath.
How can I signal to show someone that we’re here? The continued snowfall is a big problem. Makes it difficult to achieve a good outdoor fire, and if I laid that big red blanket out as a signal — I could cut a white cross out of the middle of it — the flurry would cover it up in minutes. Surely someone is out looking for us. But can a spotter plane fly in all this snow? I need some ‘words on a page’ for this situation, God. Help me out, here.
He waited for an answer.
…..okay…. any minute now would be fine…
After what he was sure was ten minutes, he still had nothing.
“Don’t tell me I was just imagining that I was getting supernatural help the last two days,” he grumbled.
He walked back in the cabin. Jocelyn perked up at his entrance.
“How’s Mr. Eagle Scout Hero?”
“Not feeling too heroic, sorry. I thought I’d try to catch some more fish.”
“I tried opening the damper myself. It’s really stuck.”
Alan grabbed the auger, fishing materials and the leftover raw trout to use as bait. “Wish me luck.”
“I feel so useless. Can I help you? If we had two people fishing in two different holes, wouldn’t that be better?”
“No, no. You’re already constantly chilled as it is, and believe you me, it’s much colder outside. I don’t want you getting frostbite, or for that cough to get worse. If something happened to you… I just need you to stay here and try to keep warm. Please.”
Jocelyn was worried. Alan seemed preoccupied, distant; not jovial and joking like usual. I wonder if I’m irritating him in some way. Maybe he’s having second thoughts about accepting a transsexual. At the very least, I’m a burden to him right now. “Alan… is something wrong?”
Alan flashed his best imitation smile. “Absolutely not, dear lady. I’ll be back.” He trudged off towards the lake.
Since he had the fish flesh to use as bait now, Alan chewed the rest of the beef jerky for sustenance and warmth. The fishing so far wasn’t going as well this time. He had to take a while clearing snow off of the ice. With all the buildup he couldn’t find the hole he drilled yesterday, so he used his sore limbs to drill another. Now an hour into actual fishing, there was nary a bite. He pulled up his hook to find it stripped clean of bait.
“Danged sneaky sons of fishes,” he quipped. He pulled out the trout meat to bait the hook once more. Even with gloves, he had difficulty feeling his fingertips and it was hard to manipulate the flesh to pull off a piece. When it finally came apart, it did so suddenly, and the hook he was holding inadvertently jabbed into his finger.
“AGH!” he yelled, letting go of the hook — and the bait meat. Following Murphy’s law, it fell on the ice and bounced into the hole, vanishing.
Alan stood stunned for a second. Then he dropped to his knees and stuck his arm in to see if by chance he could save it. He pulled up nothing but icy water.
Leaning back on his heels, he slumped his head and shoulders down in shocking defeat. He ground his teeth together. All of the crap and frustration of the last two days and more bubbled to the surface as he slung his face skyward and screamed.
“fffFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU…….”
Jocelyn finished bundling up and grabbed the mug of hot chocolate she had made for Alan. She wanted to do something to help. He might not like her disobeying his wish for her to stay indoors, but she didn’t like the thought of him freezing his behind off out there with nothing to warm him up.
She stepped out of the doorway and started off in the direction she had seen him leave. But after about twenty steps, she heard his voice. She stopped and looked up.
Alan had his back to her, leaning against a pine tree, cradling his arms around his head.
“Stupid, stupid, stupid, STUPID! You damned fucking idiot! You’re nothing but a worthless, spineless piece of shit! Fucking failure! It’s always this way — whatever you do may start out good, but it usually ends as a pool of piss! This is why you’ll never amount to anything worthwhile… you’re an embarrassment to the human race!”
The raw emotion — and the severe language — rattled Jocelyn. She suddenly became very afraid, and quietly retreated back to the cabin.
A few minutes later, Alan walked back in through the door. His eyes were red, and cast down towards the floor.
“Hey. I’m back. No fish. Not now, or ever.”
He didn’t wait for a response as he flopped face down on the couch. Jocelyn didn’t want to give one. She was huddled in the corner of the big room by the fireplace, brandishing the thick poker in her hands to protect herself.
As Alan began weeping into the couch cushion, Jocelyn’s head and heart began an argument inside of her.
What have you done? You’ve allowed an unstable maniac into your life. All of the acceptance, the happy nature… it had to be too good to be true. First he screams at the tree; next he’ll be screaming — and beating — on you, warned her head.
Her heart countered. Look at him. See anything familiar? Maybe not with the yelling, but with the grief? Some of what he said outside has been said to you before, and it’s taken years of therapy to get you to just start not to believe it yourself. He’s suffering. Be brave, and try to help him.
Jocelyn swallowed hard, and decided to follow her heart. She laid down the poker and walked slowly to the couch. Kneeling by his head, she put her hand on his shoulder.
He pushed it away, face still in the cushion. “Leave me alone. I screw up everything, and I’ll screw your life up too,” he sniveled.
Her head warned that this might be a threat rather than self-pity, but Jocelyn stayed put. “Alan… who’s been saying this?”
He remained limp without moving. “Who’s been saying what?”
“This stuff about you. This evil stuff. That you screw up everything, that you’re worthless, spineless, a failure — all what you were saying to the pine tree out there.”
He lifted his head from the couch to look at her. “You heard what I was saying earlier? I thought I was far enough away from… Oh man. I’m sorry you had to listen to that.”
“I know those hateful words didn’t originate from you. I know they didn’t. Someone has been telling you a bunch of lies. Who is it?”
Alan’s face began to screw into a knot. He sunk it back into the couch and began to weep violently. Jocelyn threw her arms across his back and rested her head on him, while starting to tear up herself.
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TO BE CONTINUED 11/30
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of these characters to any actual person living or dead is coincidental.
Thanks to Sephrena Lynn Miller for a quick first read!
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Cruiser Lake
Part 3 of 5
by Sigh
Copyright © 2012 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
CHAPTER SEVEN
Eventually Alan’s blubbering deteriorated into deep breathing with intermittent snuffles. Jocelyn stroked the back of his head. After a minute, she tapped his shoulder.
“Hey, big guy. Sit up for me.”
He slowly pushed himself upright to where he was sitting in the middle of the couch. He was slumped forward, head and arms hanging down as if limp. Jocelyn climbed up beside him and sat down. She slid her arm inside his, and her gloved hands grasped his near arm.
“Talk to me,” she whispered.
The man next to her didn’t raise his gaze from the floor; he just shook his head slowly. “You don’t deserve to be bored by my crap.”
She leaned her head on his sagging shoulder. She breathed her words out quietly. “I want to hear it.”
He shook his head again, and remained silent.
She stroked the back of his glove. “Was it… your father?”
His head rose, and he looked at her with bloodshot eyes. “You mean, was it Dad who yelled at me? No. No, absolutely not. Not Mom either. They were great. I had an awesome childhood. Although you’d never guess it, with how screwed up I am now.”
Alan took a piece of cloth he’d packed for the fishing out of his coat pocket. He blew a bucket of snot out of his nose, then glanced, mortified, at Jocelyn. “Sorry — excuse me a minute.” He walked to the kitchen area and disposed of the cloth, then washed his hands sparingly with some leftover melted snow and dish soap there.
“When you’re dried, come sit next to me again,” she requested.
“Really, Jocelyn… I’m sorry I did this… this breakdown. I’ll be fine, I promise.”
“Please come sit by me. I’m getting cold being here by myself.” She rubbed her arms and made a shivering motion to emphasize her point.
The appeal to his chivalry hit the target. He came back to the couch and sat, but still stared forward, off into the distance. However, he picked up where he’d left off.
“At least, it was a great childhood until I was sixteen. Dad died that year in a highway accident with a truck. I was devastated. See, every night for as long as I could remember, I prayed to God before going to bed. You know, thanks for this, help me with that. And I always asked for protection for my family and me.
“When Dad died, I figured that God was a liar; or more likely, a fraud. I became an atheist, much to the chagrin of my Mom and Charlene. But they both still loved me, and treated me with kindness and respect — even when I left college after my junior year to take a full time sales position at an auto dealership.”
“I thought you were always a pharmaceutical sales rep.”
“Not at first. I sold cars during the summers between semesters. I was so good at it they begged me to do it year-round. The money was pretty terrific, so I did.”
Jocelyn tilted her head at him. “So if it wasn’t your family, then who…?”
Alan looked at her. “Jocelyn, I’ve already been more of a screw-up than a help to you today. You don’t want to know the bull I’ve had to live with. It’ll just depress us both more.”
“Alan … you’re not the only one, you know.”
“The only one … what?”
“The only one in the room here that’s lived with abuse. I… I’m going to…(sigh)… Alan, l-let me tell you more about myself.”
Jocelyn’s head screamed at her. Don’t open up your life to him! He’ll hurt you, just like everyone else!
Everyone except Cynthia, her heart countered. And so far, he’s proven as trustworthy as her. If you open yourself up, it may give him the courage to talk. And when a problem can be talked about, it can be dealt with.
“You said your childhood was great. Mine wasn’t. My Dad was an alcoholic and a drug addict, although a ‘high functioning’ one, at least for all the years I was living at home. He headed up his own business of dry cleaning stores, and franchised them regionally. And then at home he would get drunk and/or high. Sometimes under the influence he’d be happy and even manic; once he called the local paper and proposed to buy their whole operation just because my name ‘wasn’t printed large enough’ when they reported the usual list of honor students. Other times, he’d be depressed, and get out his revolver and stick it in his mouth — or at Mom — and wonder why it wasn’t loaded. We made sure every day before he came home that we hid all of his bullets.
“Basically, if you live with a substance abuser you get sick too. Emotionally, socially, relationally. So even though I’ve never taken drugs or overused alcohol, I was caught up in the sickness of it all. At school I was a great student, and an all-region pitcher for the baseball team. But at home I became the introvert, the ‘lost child’, the one who would come straight home and lose myself in my CD’s and fantasy paperbacks. I didn’t have friends come over, because they might find out our big secret. Heck it was easier just to have no friends. I was so wrapped up in that pathology, any gender issues took a back seat.
“When Dad was sober, he was a great father. Drunk, he’d get pretty violent, verbally. Funny… he never raised his fist against Mom or me; just threaten to shoot with the gun on occasion. But believe me, the words he spoke cut deep enough. Even knowing it was the booze and drugs talking, when the venom came out of his lips, it scarred permanently.
“Now he’s actually been clean and sober for the last eight years. He hasn’t spoken harshly to me anymore. He and Mom just won’t have anything to do with me because they so disagree with me changing genders. He’s called me a disappointment; that’s about as bad as it’s gotten from him, lately.”
“That’s bad enough, in my opinion,” said Alan.
“Oh, that’s nothing compared to what I’ve gotten from ‘friends’ and acquaintances the last few years. It’s been horrible.”
He spoke softly and with empathy. “What… have they said to you?”
Jocelyn covered her face with her hands. A half minute later, she sniffled moistly.
“Disgusting … ugly … mentally ill … faggot … gay … homo … pervert. An embarrassment to my family and community, not to mention mankind in general. A quitter, a failed man. Shit licking … ass fucked … cock … suck-” she wrapped her arms around her head and started to weep. “And I’ve never been promiscuous. I’ve never even been with a guy, yet!”
Alan placed his arm around her as she shed more and more tears.
Eventually Jocelyn calmed. She patted the arm that was across her back. “Thank you for the support, Alan.”
“Jocelyn, none of that crap they said about you is true.”
“Oh, I know. Therapy has really helped me to reject it. The memories still hurt, though.” She looked at him. “So… who told you your lies?”
“Guess.”
“Lacy.”
“We have a winner,” Alan muttered, nodding his head.
“Lacy’s my second wife. I got married at age 25 to Dana, a girl who worked at a car dealership in Anaheim. We met at a sales conference; I lived in San Diego at the time. We’d drive towards each other on Sundays and meet in Escondido, about midway between us. We talked every night; my long distance phone bills were killer.
“Then we married. Living together every day — what a day-and-night difference. It seemed everything I did irritated her greatly, from occasional chest and back hairs left on the shower floor to the way I ate salad; she especially hated the fact that I didn’t put the knives in the knife drawer back in the exact correct order after dishwashing. She also was constantly accusing me of infidelity; if I sold a car to a woman under the age of sixty, Dana was sure that I’d seduced the sale. Then she left me within a year for a guy back in Anaheim that she’d been maintaining contact with during our whole damn relationship.
“Okay. Three years later. I now was in pharmaceutical sales, and more successful than ever, pulling in 120K a year, not bad in ’89. I met Lacy, and we started dating. She wondered if I was ever going to pop the question because I waited two years to do it. I was gonna be sure I really knew the next woman I married; I didn’t want another Dana. Lacy was beautiful, and seemed sweet. She had three kids from her previous husband, but I loved them and was sure I could treat them as if they were mine.”
Jocelyn was surprised. “Two years of courtship. Did she show any sign of being abusive during that time?”
“Unbelievably, no. Or if she did, I was blind to it. In fact, after we got married, things went okay the first few years, and we had the twins. But problems were there, and got bigger. I couldn’t seem to keep her on a budget. She’d take out new credit cards in her name and I wouldn’t know it. We got $80,000 in credit card debt before she showed me the actual bills.
“On top of that, I soon learned she was ashamed to be the wife of a salesman. She avoided social functions with me and urged me to go back to SDSU to get a ‘respectable’ career. Yeah, like I can stop and go to school when we were putting the older 3 kids through college and had the 80k card debt. And she was a stay-at-home mom.”
“Alan, did she offer to go to work to help out?”
“No - and I didn’t mind her being a housewife, what with five kids to raise. But she didn’t do much besides watch them. She’d hire a cleaning service to keep the house up, and she only cooked on rare occasions. Most of the time when I came home for supper, she’d have ordered pizza or take out … all on credit cards. I was working extra to make ends meet. Then she’d accuse me of not being there as a husband and father.”
Jocelyn found herself getting a little angry with this woman. “That would be hard to live with.”
“That’s not even close to the worst of it,” shuddered Alan. “What damaged me the most was the manipulation and verbal abuse. When I tried to put my foot down, she’d threaten me with divorce and taking the twins. Over the simplest things, like what level of cable TV service to get! I wanted marriage counseling; she refused. How crazy is that — you usually hear of the husband being the one to avoid counseling.
“When I would stand my ground on a quarrel, she’d fight dirty. If she didn’t have a good logical position, she’d begin character assassination. Or bring up old wounds, or cut down my side of the family, or call me names — and swear at me. In public. And in front of the kids. Her screaming and yelling got bad. I even tried to go ‘toe to toe’ with her on it one time, but her lungpower was amazing. Finally I saw that the only way I’d have peace in my home was if I conceded every argument, every decision to her.
“I guess I heard all the crud coming out of her for so long that I started to believe it myself. I mean, I couldn’t have made a mistake and married a second woman who hated my guts, right? No, it really must mean that I was that rotten a person.
“Oh, Alan. I’m so sorry.”
“Work became my only escape, the only place where I seemed to do well and get respect and praise. So I spent more and more time there and less time at home. I got a lot of sales accomplished, but I was putting in 70-hour workweeks. If I came home when she was in bed and left before she woke, she couldn’t hurt me as much.
“The last straw was at last year’s Christmas party for Marcam. It was the first work party she had been with to me in eight years, because of her shame with my profession. Anyway, we’re at the table with the big brass, the owner-“
“Mr. Leibowicz?”
“Yep, the man himself. We’re all talking, and I tell a joke — maybe a little corny, but clean — and everyone at the table laughs, except Lacy, who’s shaking her head. She then yells that ‘it’s bad enough that you have to drag me to these stupid get-togethers with lousy food and boring people, but do you have to go and make a jackass out of yourself too?’ Everyone at the table got quiet; I apologized and excused us from the party, pulling Lacy with me, her hissing at me all the way.
“I didn’t know that happened.”
“You always leave the parties early, remember? Anyway, something inside me broke that night. I had sworn I would never ever get a second divorce, but at that point I didn’t care. I moved out, and Lacy got to play the role of the poor jilted spouse with all of our friends, except the few who saw her at that party.”
Jocelyn felt brokenhearted for Alan. “What do your twin girls think of all this?”
“The twins enter college this summer, but for the rest of this school year she has primary custody. I call them, but they won’t talk to me. I think they catch too much hell from her if they express any affection about me openly. Maybe once they graduate I can see them more than every other Saturday.
"And I’ve promised myself to stay out of romance from here on out. I get extremely lonely at times, but I can’t afford to even take a chance of going through that emotional and mental hell again. I mean, I know there must be non-abusive women out there — but it sure doesn’t seem like I pick that kind. I’d rather live single forever than risk it again."
He began to cry again. “I thought that leaving would get rid of the abuse — but I listened to her for nineteen years, and I can’t get her damned screaming out of my head! I don’t know how much of it is true and how much of it is lies. I don’t have the money for counseling, between debt and alimony. That’s why I have to leave Missoula. Maybe I can heal with more distance between me and her.”
“You’re leaving?”
“Yeah, and — Oh God. No one’s supposed to know that. It won’t happen anyway; the job interview in Helena was supposed to be today.”
“Your secret’s safe with me. Do you still hear Lacy’s voice in your head right now?”
“Ohhh, yeah. It’s always there on some level. It harps at me at day, and whispers accusations at night. When things don’t go right — like today — it’s louder than a jet engine.” Alan was now leaning forward, elbows on his knees, and gripping his skull. “This is killing me. I literally feel sometimes like it’s killing me on the inside. I’d never consider suicide… but sometimes, I wouldn’t mind if my life was over. At least I wouldn’t have to listen to this…”
Jocelyn held tight to Alan’s arm. She watched as tears started to dribble down his cheeks. His face was bright red as he tried to hold in his emotion. She contemplated what to do, how to help. Once more, her heart was her guide.
“Are your muscles sore, big guy?”
He continued to stare straight ahead, but nodded.
She got up and walked to the back of the couch, directly behind him. She pulled his coat to just off of his shoulders, and began massaging his neck, his trapezius muscles. She pushed deep, as there was a lot of tissue and flesh on this man.
“Jocelyn, you don’t have to… ohhh, that… that’s… that’s nice…”
As she rubbed, she bent down and whispered in his ear. “Alan Sarkisian… is one of the finest human beings on the planet.”
“That’s a laugh -”
“Shhhh. Just get quiet, and listen to me. Close your eyes. Relax.”
She pressed her palms on either side of his spine, and slowly moved them down the length of his back.
Another whisper. “Alan is smart, and funny. He gives people hope.”
He stayed quiet, as requested. Now with his coat off, she draped one of his arms over her shoulder and began working on his biceps and triceps.
“At almost fifty years of age, Alan did an amazing thing: he took a long, hard look at himself, and started to reach out to people different from him.”
She went to the front of the couch. Her fingers kneaded his calves, his thighs. “He’s an Eagle Scout, and he still remembers his training just when he needs to.”
She climbed behind him on the couch, and had him turn to the side slightly. She then lay down on the couch cushions, pulling his back to her chest so they spooned. She then pulled his coat over both of their bodies.
Alan felt her embrace him as he relaxed into her. Her gloved hands gently stroked his head, his cheeks, his hair. He felt her lay her cheek on his bald spot. Like the Sahara absorbing a rare rain, he soaked up the affection. He heard her voice continue in a soft, barely-there tone.
“The best sautéed fish in the history of the world was made by Alan.
“Alan saved my life. He saved my life! He is a bona fide hero.
“He has an unselfish, giving spirit. Alan’s smile is so bright, it lights up the deepest corners of the darkest soul. He is quick to forgive when someone treats him like a jerk. Alan is…”
On and on she talked. As she did, Lacy’s voice became just a little weaker in Alan’s head as the strong, loving voice of Jocelyn competed for space there.
CHAPTER EIGHT
They lay together on the couch all afternoon. Alan became so serene from Jocelyn’s ministrations that he fell into a deep sleep.
Jocelyn noticed something happen in herself while she spoke the affirmations to him. She saw that he needed her, that she was a help to him; she was of value to him. It was a nice feeling, to know that one has value. While combing her mind for all the positive virtues he possessed, she realized that all of them were true. She hadn’t needed to make any of them up. That led her to a conclusion.
This guy is a special guy. I’ve never known anyone else like him. So many great qualities — the best one, to me, is that he accepts me as a woman. Not only that, he has suffered some of the ways I have. I almost feel like… like he “gets” me.
Am I feeling attracted? Affectionate — that’s a better way of saying it. I’m beginning to feel affection for him. Maybe my “chooser” isn’t broken after all.
After a while, Alan opened his eyes. Jocelyn looked down into them from above, appearing upside down to him.
“Hello, handsome. Feel any better?”
“Like a trillion bucks worth.” He paused. “Did you mean even half of what you said to me?”
“I meant every word of it. It’s all true.”
“Make that a gazillion bucks, then.”
Alan sat up, then stood. “Hope I didn’t squish you flat, lying on you all that time.”
Jocelyn laughed. “I’m fine. WHOO-!”
She whooped in surprise as Alan grabbed both her hands and pulled her quickly to a standing position — and to him.
“That was one of the kindest, most loving things anyone has ever — ever — done for me.” His eyes were moist as he then kissed her on the cheek and embraced her in an all-encompassing, prolonged bear hug.
“Now I’m squished,” she giggled as he released her. “That was radical. I won’t need a chiropractic appointment for months.”
“I know you’re hungry,” he said with disappointment. “I lost the rest of the bait. There’s no way to catch a fish now.”
“I hear they’re having a hot chocolate special tonight at Chez O’Donnell. And the company’s pretty awesome, they say. Shall we?” She wrapped her gloved hands around the crook of his elbow.
A slow grin started to trickle across Alan’s lips. Finally he showed those high beam choppers Jocelyn had come to expect from him.
“There he is! Alan’s back,” she cheered.
They had three cups each and stopped. The mix in the can was getting low. Alan went out to get some snow to melt so they could have a pot to “flush” the toilet with after they were both finished in the bathroom tonight. Meanwhile Jocelyn went to brush her teeth and remove the modicum of makeup she had applied that morning. She then let Alan use the room.
Jocelyn was already under her covers in her sweats when Alan emerged from the bathroom.
“Hopefully all that hot chocolate will keep you warmer than last night. I took some ibuprofen, so I’m going to the couch. Goodnight, Jocelyn, and thank you, again. Thank you so much.”
“Will you be warm enough, Alan?”
“I’ll keep everything on, even my coat. I want you to have all the blankets — you’ll need them.”
“You shouldn’t sleep in that fishy coat. It’s fine for daytime, but it’ll be too stinky to wake up in.”
“Huh. I don’t notice it.” He looked down at the coat. “I mean, I know the trout brushed against me a few times while I brought it in, and then today I kept the bait in the pocket, but…”
“I could smell it when we were on the couch together.”
He was puzzled. “But tonight you’ll be in here. I’ll be on the couch, and if it doesn’t bother me, then why…?”
“What I mean,” she said meekly, “is it’ll be too smelly to wear it while lying with me.”
Alan was pleasantly shocked.
Jocelyn was blushing deep red. “So — unless you’re uncomfortable with it — I’m asking you to take off that coat, and your shoes, and bring that warm body of yours and get next to me.”
Alan grinned widely. “It would be the most thermal solution for both of us. Purely from a practical standpoint.”
“Uh-huh. Get over here.”
As Alan went under the covers, he put his arm around Jocelyn’s back and pulled her to him. She nestled her chin at the base of his neck and they pulled the blankets over and under them.
Jocelyn exhaled, and relaxed. She recalled how she had felt on first awakening the previous morning.
Safe.
As she had done on Christmas morning, Jocelyn awoke first.
She was aware of where she was. In bed, wrapped around Alan and he around her. Snug and toasty, with only a hint of cold air leaking through one of the edges of the blankets. She felt his chest rise and fall with each breath, sometimes accompanied with a slight snore on exhaling. His inhalations pushed into her breasts with a slight pleasant sensation. She comforted in his broad shoulders and big arms.
We’re stranded in a cabin on a mountain in a snowstorm. Nobody knows we’re here. No obvious car wreck for people to spot. No readily available food, no heat, no phone. Just me and my coworker, who has found out about my most guarded secret by accident. We’ll likely die here.
I wouldn’t be anywhere else in the world.
She nodded off back to sleep, a contented look on her face.
Alan awoke. He took a minute to get his bearings, and then remembered where he was. And who he was with.
Technically, I’m sleeping next to a man. That’s what most of the world would say. And that’s what I had her pegged as for the last four years. But she makes much more sense as a woman. Her gentle nature, her melodic voice, her way of walking and moving. She was born for this role. It’s hard to see her as anything else but female.
Maybe she could be “read”. Hands and feet aren’t big, but aren’t petite; but her breasts. Yes, those are very nice. And her soul sure can’t be read. Hell, she’s more feminine than many natural women I know.
And so far, she appreciates me. God, how I have longed for appreciation. Lacy always was disappointed with me. Right now, Jocelyn needs me. It’s nice to be needed. I sure need her right now. Her survival is what’s driving me to survive.
Jocelyn stirred.
“Good morning, ma’am.”
“Good morning, kind sir.”
“Are you uncomfortable?”
“Just a minute.” She adjusted herself to pull even tighter into his body. “Better.”
One of her legs was pushing into the crease between his two legs, against his groin. This plus a full bladder caused a reaction that had been a rarity these days for Alan.
She felt his erection against her leg.
Oh, she thought.
Oh no, he thought.
He pulled away from her. “I — I’m sorry,” he muttered.
She placed her head to face his. “I’m not,” she whispered barely audibly.
He looked in her eyes. Their faces were so close. With tantalizing slowness, he moved closer.
Jocelyn’s heart was beating like a bumblebee’s wings. She closed her eyes just before their lips made contact. When they did, she experienced a falling sensation, weightlessness. Every nerve ending in her skin tingled to life, and she felt transported to another world, one where time has no meaning and the only things in existence were the two of them and this kiss.
She felt his tongue lick her lips, and she opened her mouth. Her tongue touching his sent her to an even higher plane. Her nipples tingled and her skin felt flushed. He had a sour morning taste to his mouth. It was the most wonderful, awful taste in the world.
They finally broke, both breathing heavily.
“Sorry about our morning breath,” he whispered.
“Speak for yourself, trout mouth,” she giggled.
As she did, tears formed in her eyes. She eventually started to cry slightly and buried her face on his shoulder.
“What’s wrong?” he cooed in her ear.
“Nothing’s wrong. It’s so right…”
The crying continued as he held her close. Ah. So that’s what they mean by ‘happy tears’, he thought.
Eventually, she quieted, and they lay in close embrace, each with eyes closed. Alan eventually stirred.
“Hey, gorgeous. I’m afraid I have some bad news.”
“What is it, Alan?”
“I really, really have to pee.”
CHAPTER NINE
Alan returned from the bathroom. “I’ll melt some snow down later on the stove to flush it.”
“There’s some hand sanitizer that’s in my suitcase — use it if you’d like. Aaand… there’s some Tic-Tacs there too, if you don’t mind, for both of us. ”
“Thanks.” Alan rubbed the alcohol gel in and began to shiver. “DANG - it’s freezing this morning!”
“Well, get back under the covers with me then, mister.”
The snuggling resumed.
“I’d love to know more about you,” said Alan. “I know you have trouble opening up, and trusting. But I’d like a chance to prove worthy of your trust.”
“What do you want to know?”
“Your hopes and dreams. Where you see yourself in twenty years. The one place in the world you would go if you had one wish for it. What makes you tick. The good and bad things that have happened to make you who you are. I want to know more about what you’ve had to endure, you know, the “stuff” that’s happened that you mentioned on the drive. I want to know what made you take the incredibly brave step of changing — what do they call it…”
“What made me decide to transition?”
“That’s the word.”
She got quiet.
“Jocelyn? Are you okay? …Look, maybe that was a bad suggestion. I’m sorry, you don’t have-”
“I’m scared.”
Alan kissed her and whispered, “What are you scared of?”
“What if, after you find out more about me, you change your mind and decide that you’re disgusted with me?”
“Let’s see… do you like me, Jocelyn?”
“Yes.”
“Even though you learned that just two years ago I was a gender bigot?”
“You’ve changed. I like you for who you are right now.”
“Back atcha. I don’t care if you were a warthog with an odor problem…
“Boy, do you have a way with words.”
“…I love you for who you’ve become, who you are right now.”
Jocelyn’s heart jumped. “Wait! Did you just say… you love me?”
Alan looked away, his voice suddenly faltering a bit. “This scares me nearly to death. My two marriages left me gutted emotionally. I planned to never fall in love with anyone ever again. But… the way you spoke to me yesterday… your words… I have to have them… having experienced them now, I don't think I can live without them.
“I’ve been attracted to you since you first smiled at me with your makeup on. But when you whispered to me on the couch — I realized I’ve been hoping for, searching for, needing a woman who would love me with her words and actions the way you did. You fulfilled me in a way that even no sexual act ever has. And though the thought of another possible doomed relationship frightens the hell out of me — I’m afraid I’m hooked on you.”
Jocelyn’s head shouted. He barely knows you! It’s just the stress of the situation talking. He’s too old for you. He’s too good for you. He’ll hurt you. You’ll hurt him. This can’t work. Tell him. “Alan — have you thought about this? Saying those 3 powerful words? You don’t feel like you’re acting too hastily, do you?
“Hey, woman. I’m fifty-one years old. I can’t afford to hesitate. I love you. God help me, I’ve fallen for you hard.”
Jocelyn’s heart screamed: LOVE! He loves you! Love, with a man who accepts you and risked his life for yours! This chance may never come again! So if you love him too — TELL HIM!
Now she was giving him a bear hug, although it was more of a python squeeze around the neck. “Oh, Alan. I love you too! I love you, I love you IloveyouIloveyouIlooooove you!”
She couldn’t stop kissing his face, his nose, his eyes, his ears, and of course his lips and tongue. She wanted his kisses. She now wanted his body next to hers, naked, as it was on Christmas morning. She started to unbutton his shirt, taking a deep delicious breath while doing so. It made her cough.
She then began coughing uncontrollably.
Long, hard prolonged barking spasms that weren’t bringing any mucus up. Alan, alarmed, started to pat her back firmly with his palm, thinking maybe it would loosen any offending phlegm. So severe was this spell that she couldn’t get a word out edgewise.
Finally, in a few minutes, it calmed some. Alan had already gotten out of bed to quickly fix her something warm to drink; he thought maybe it would help.
“Ready for some hot chocolate?” Alan brought in two smoking cups with rapidity.
“Mm, yes.” Jocelyn took it and began sipping. “You made yourself one too, right?”
“Actually, it took the last of the powder mix to make yours. But don’t worry about me, I made myself some decoff coffee.”
“We had coffee? And don’t you mean decaf?”
“No. Decoff.” He meekly showed her his cup. “It’s just hot water. But it will warm me up.”
He refused to drink any of her cocoa even against her protests. “Jocelyn, what the heck do you think that coughing fit was from? I was worried a little earlier when you had a small cough, but then I haven’t heard you do it again until just now. You told me it was almost gone earlier.”
“It was! I’m not hiding anything from you, I swear. The first day after falling through the ice, I coughed a lot, but last night and today had been better. I’ve had no fever; I’m not bringing up mucus or anything. And I feel a lot better having sipped on the warm cocoa. I think it was Murph, again.”
“Who?”
“Murphy’s law. The more romantic the moment, the more likely a blasted interruption. Get back under the covers with me, Alan.”
“Careful… I might get the impression that you want to spend the whole day in bed.”
“Mm… sounds dreamy. Besides, I’m going to do what you asked. I’m going to tell you about my transition. But I need just a wee bit more courage… can you tell me you love me again?”
“Jocelyn O’Donnell, I am madly, truly, deeply in love with you.”
She closed her eyes and luxuriated in those words, letting them bounce around inside her brain. Eventually she looked at Alan and kissed him again, long and hard. Then, laying her head on his chest, she spoke.
“Once I got into college, I opened up to my assigned mentor and he directed me to Al-Anon, the group for people who lived with alkies. Boy, did they help me deal with the crud from my home life. But even with that assistance, I became further depressed and didn’t know why.
“I went to a psychiatrist — again, recommended by my mentor — and she administered a huge written screening test. When she told me the results, she asked, “Are you transgendered?” — that’s the first time I considered that as being my issue. I thought I was just screwed up being the kid of an alcoholic, that maybe I dreamed of being a girl just because I wanted to be someone else, and somewhere else, besides home.
“I didn’t want to be transgendered. I ran from that issue for years. All I could see is that it would take me into a new kind of abuse and suffering. But I started suffering even more the longer I tried to ignore it. I was nearly suicidal, at one point. So two years ago, with my therapist and doctor’s support, I decided to transition. I started hormones and medicines to block my testosterone. I also got facial, neck and chest electrolysis. The idea was for me to start living as a woman full time, the real life test; and then eventually have SRS.”
“SRS? Super Rack Supplements? They worked.”
“No, wise guy. Thanks for the compliment, though. Sex reassignment. The operation down there.”
“So, that was two years ago. How long do you have to wait before you can start living female all the time?”
“That’s… the sticking point. I’ve tried to gradually accomplish it — first go part time, then take the plunge — but the reactions I’ve gotten have… inhibited me. I came out to my Mom and Dad, and that went bad. Real bad. Basically, we haven’t talked in two years. They’re ashamed of me, especially Mom. I had only a few friends, and all of them dropped me like a hot potato when I told them. All except Cynthia, my girlfriend in Helena. I did try to say screw it all, and go full time anyway, but…”
“But?”
“Sorry. Th-this is the hard part for me. I went to Mr. Leibowicz and told him I’d like to transition at work. Showed him the letters from my therapist and psychiatrist, gave him printouts on how to manage transsexualism in the workplace, and so on. He did not agree with it. He felt like if I did, it would foster a ‘hostile work environment’ and lead to poor productivity. So, basically, it was stay as Joseph or be out of my job.”
“But that’s discrimination! Jocelyn, a half decent lawyer could have his head on a platter and a huge settlement for you.”
“I know. I know! But I… I don’t want to be a gender crusader. Leibowicz and Marcam are beloved figures in Missoula, and I would be the evil freak witch who destroyed them. With all the resentment I think I’d cause, I’d be a virtual leper. Even a new employer would be hesitant to take on a rabble-rouser. And right now, work is all I’ve got. It’s the only thing in my life I draw enjoyment out of, the only thing that fulfills me.”
She hugged him. “Well… it WAS the only thing.
“So, I was going to use the holidays to stay with Cyn and live as me, and look for a new job in Helena as Jocelyn … in a town where almost no one knows Joseph. So see, I had a hidden agenda for this trip too.”
Alan pondered. “So you and I both were going to Helena to start over, basically. A fresh life. For each of us. And maybe, now… together?”
He sat up in bed. “Dammit, we are NOT going to die here! We are getting out! I - we both - now have something not just to run from, but also to run towards! We are going to survive, you hear me? I’ve got to find us some food, and somehow signal for a rescue!”
“Alan… I’ve been thinking… this sounds really gross, but I may have something you could eat.”
He looked at her, befuddled. “Why is that gross?”
“Because… it’s dog food.”
She jumped out of the covers, and pulled a gift-wrapped box from her suitcase.
“These are dog treats. They were to be Sissy’s Christmas present. Cyn has a shih tzu.”
Alan unwrapped it. “Hm. Not a lot of them here, but it would be something…”
“Something for you, maybe. I don’t think I could keep them down. But I got the cocoa this morning, and you didn’t.”
Alan was reading the label. “Hey… these treats are meat-based! ‘Made from real cuts of beef’!”
“That’s good, right? You need some protein.”
He grabbed Jocelyn and spun her around, laughing. “Baby — you just got me some new fishing bait!”
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TO BE CONTINUED ON 12/03
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of these characters to any actual person living or dead is coincidental.
Thanks to Sephrena Lynn Miller for a quick first read!
Thanks to Holly H. Hart for beta reading and editing!
Thanks to the "BCTS Closeteers" - expecially Jana - for help with the pic!
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Cruiser Lake
Part 4 of 5
by Sigh
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CHAPTER 10
It was still snowing intermittently, more “on” than “off”. Alan re-shoveled the front door, but the piles of snow all around the cabin were getting higher. The lower floor windows were becoming mostly covered. The sky remained overcast with grey haze.
Alan rested when done, puffing deeply. He pointed to the clouds. “Go ahead! Do your worst! It won’t matter — come hell or high drifts, we will live, and we will get out!
He walked to the pine tree he had verbally abused yesterday and shoveled powder away from the base; he eventually found the fishing supplies he had thrown there in disgust.
I was talking to the clouds, God, not you, he prayed. He didn’t want to offend his only other source of help. We sure could use a rescue. Until it comes, we sure could use a fish. You know, I gave up on you — on everything — yesterday. And then, you sent an angel into my life. She had to come from you, from heaven, because she gave me a spiritual healing like I never had. I now want to live — and I want her to live — more than I’ve ever wanted anything. Thank you for her. Thank you for giving me a reason to live.
Oh, and thanks for this bait too. May the force be with you. Amen.
He waded through the deepening snow towards the lake.
After a few hours of fishing, Alan was getting chilled more than usual. The lack of food not only kept him from producing heat from digestion, but he was chewing up body fat. Any other time in his life he would have welcomed that, but now he needed the insulation.
“Hey there!” chirped a familiar voice.
Alan turned. “Jocelyn?! What are you doing out here? It’s cold even for me, so you must be freezing!”
“Not as much as you’d think. Open your coat.”
He did so, still confused as to what was going on. She came up to him, bumping her chest against his. Then she unbuttoned her creamy chiffon coat, and transferred a plastic garbage bag filled with — something? — to him.
“Now button your coat around that.”
As he did so, he felt warmth come from the lump against his torso. “Wow — what…?”
“A big towel, dipped in hot water, inside a tied garbage bag. Poor college student’s hot water bottle. Now I’ve got to run back before I get shivery.”
He watched in thankful amazement as she hopped away. Yep. An angel. My snow angel.
Jocelyn ran through the cabin door and shut it quickly. “BRRRrrrrr!” She clicked on the camping stove and warmed her hands, then melted some snow for some hot water to sip. Finally warming up some, she explored the cabin. She felt she had more motivation to survive now too, and if she could find a way to help, then that would improve their chances.
Most of the search was futile. Alan had already combed the cabin the first morning there. Climbing up to the loft, she looked in some boxes, and a closet. Nothing useful. Then she saw a large box shoved to the back of the top closet shelf. Once opened, it revealed over two hundred tea light candles. They were small aluminum cups of wax with wicks, probably no more than four to five hours worth of tiny flame apiece. Not really a heat source, but good for a nightlight.
An hour later she had found nothing more, so she was a little discouraged. She flounced on the bed. She decided to do something she rarely did. She prayed.
God, I know that I have ignored you for the longest time. I’ve never been an atheist like Alan is — or was — but I guess I’ve been hurt by too many people who claim that they are your followers. I do believe that you’re there, and I never thought that you were as spiteful as many of your “people” have been. And Alan says you’ve been helping him. So I’m asking you. Please help us. Please get us out of here, healthy and intact. Please keep Alan warm and give him good luck fishing. And show me what I can do to help him, to support him. I feel like I’m useless, sitting here, but I don’t know what else to do. Thank you for listening. Love, Jocelyn.
As she ended her plea, a thought popped in Jocelyn’s mind: Look under the bed. She did. There was nothing there — except, one of the floorboards was obviously not sitting flush with the rest.
She pushed the bed away enough to access the board. Sure enough, it was loose — and she pulled it away. Deep down in a hole, going into the dirt underneath the cabin, was a medium size lockbox. It was too deep for her to reach; but using the fireplace poker, she was able to snag the handle on the box and pull it out.
She was thrilled. Could it be food? A radio? So her disappointment was understandable when all it held were two small wine bottles, one a quarter full, one empty.
More useless stuff, she sighed. Then an idea took hold in her mind. A way to be of service to Alan. She got up, replaced the board and bed. There was a lot to get done.
“SUCCESS!” Alan came in the door with two 3 pounders. He didn’t see Jocelyn in the big room.
“Hallelujah!” she said, sticking her head out the bedroom door. “I’m busy with something in here. Why don’t you clean those and start frying them up?” She pulled her head back in and closed the door.
Alan had hoped for a hug and a kiss. Then he remembered his odorous coat, now more fishy than ever. She might be avoiding this smelly thing. Trout is good food, but it’s taking a toll on my love life. He pulled out a knife, fired up the stove, and got cooking.
The sun was going down when he put the fish on the skillet. Jocelyn came up beside him in her coat, hat, and scarves to where only her eyes were visible. “Why don’t you go clean up for supper and I’ll finish your frying for you.”
Alan smiled while looking sideways at her. “Clean up?”
“Go in the bathroom and take off your clothes. I’ve got a pot of warm water and a washcloth in there for you to bathe with, and I laid out a set of clean clothes from your suitcase. You’ve been wearing these for-”
“For the last 2 days, yeah. It’s bound to be cold in there, though. Remember, I used the stove to heat it up when you last bathed on Christmas day.”
“Actually, I last bathed an hour ago. And I did fine. Go. You’ll see.”
Alan walked into the bedroom, and gasped. There were scores of little candles lit. They were mostly gathered on the plastic end tables brought in from the big room, kept away from the walls and any fabrics. He went into the bathroom and there was the promised pot of warm water, vapor arising from it. In the bathtub, there were multiple lit tea light candles, almost filling the whole floor of the tub. With all of these little flames, it definitely felt less chilly.
He undressed and bathed with the washcloth and soap in front of the sink. His razor and toothbrush with paste had been placed on the sink, so he had a quick shave and cleaned his mouth. He then used the balance of the water to wash his hair. After towel drying and cleaning the wet floor, he picked up the folded clothes she had laid out for him on the toilet. On top of the clothes lay his deodorant and cologne from his shave kit.
He emerged from the bathroom dressed, dapper, and smelling good. “Man… I feel great.” Even the bedroom was noticeably less frigid with all the candles burning.
Before he could walk out of the bedroom, Jocelyn came walking in with two plates of cooked fish. She had taken her coat, hat, and scarves off. Her face was freshly and fully made up, with soft eyelids, long eyelashes and liner; light blush on her cheeks with shimmering cherry lips. Large red and black polished stone earrings framed her face, with matching necklace draping across her sweater. The bright red Merino turtleneck had an interlacing diamond knit patterning, and matched the bright red polish that made her nails a brilliant contrast to her pale hands. A hint of leggings at the knees peeked between her black satin colored business length skirt and black leather go-go boots. Alan gazed at her, mouth agape. He could smell her perfume. Her hair was clean and straight, and her smile and sparkling eyes lit up his soul.
“Ready for dinner?” she crooned.
“Yes — but I think I’ll want some dessert,” he growled mischievously.
“Down, boy!” she laughed.
Alan, for once, was at a loss for words. He ate the fish hungrily, but could not take his eyes off the pretty vision sitting beside him on the edge of the bed. As he finished, Jocelyn reached under the pillow and produced the wine bottle with a little left in it, and two wine glasses.
“I found these while searching this place today.”
There was just enough wine for a few sips worth in each glass.
“Sorry, it’s red. I don’t think that goes with fish,” she said.
“But I do think it goes with hot fox,” said he.
“And beefcake,” she whispered back.
Suddenly Alan lifted his head, as if having an epiphany. He put his plate and glass down on the ground near the wall, and stood up. He walked over to the closet where he had folded his dirty clothes earlier. Reaching into the pants pocket, he pulled out a tiny mp3 player and a pair of ear buds.
“I’d forgotten about this. I’m still not in the habit of using this little thing,” he said as he pulled up “70’s mix” and scrolled to a song. He then slipped the mp3 into his shirt pocket and extended his arm to Jocelyn.
“May I have this dance, Madame?”
Jocelyn took his hand and stood, not sure where this was going. Then Alan put one of the ear buds in his right ear, and the other in her left ear. “This song is me speaking to you,” he whispered to her as he pressed a button on the player.
She heard a piano playing, followed by Joe Cocker’s voice.
“You are so beautiful… to me…”
She looked into his eyes as her own got waterlogged. As she lay her head on his shoulder, he grasped one of her hands and put his other arm around her waist. They swayed slowly in the light of a hundred little flickering flames.
When they stopped, they kissed sweet and long.
“Come to bed with me, Eagle Scout. Let’s make some fire.”
She then disrobed. How I wish I could do this slowly and seductively, but it’s still a little too chilly to be exposed too long. In less than a minute, she was down to a red lace teddy. Alan drooled.
“Sweet ever-lovin’ heaven! You’re hot! …but you’re gonna be freezing in seconds, even under the covers. You should-”
As if in anticipation, Jocelyn lifted the bedcovers to expose some ‘poor college student hot water bottles’. Pulling them onto the floor, she hopped under the blankets. “Mm-mm-mm, toasty. Needs more meat, though.”
Alan had his clothes off in twenty seconds.
As he pulled in beside her, she whispered “Let me take care of you down there. I’m not comfortable yet doing anything below my waist until SRS.”
“Jocelyn, I love you. But I might not be able to do this.”
Her face fell. “I-I’m sorry. This is too much too fast, isn’t it? And with me still having my… this was a bad idea. Forget-”
“Jocelyn! No! I’m… I’m impotent.”
She had her mouth agape now. “But… this morning… I felt you.”
“Look, - God, this is embarrassing — I can very occasionally get an erection. But for the last four years, they’ve been lasting shorter, and sometimes won’t come at all. This is one of the many things that Lacy said I was a failure at.”
He looked away. “What you really need is some younger guy who can satisfy you, not an old has been like me.”
“Be quiet, Lacy’s voice. Alan, have you seen a doctor?”
“Yes. He saw no medical issue. No disease, testosterone level fine. Even the pills didn’t help much. He said it might be mental or emotional. But I wasn’t ready to see a shrink.”
“Have you… been with a woman since Lacy?”
“After my last two marriages? Remember, I was gonna be a monk for the rest of my life. Until you came along.”
Jocelyn kissed him. “Alan, do you remember that old show ‘Married With Children’?”
“Yeah. Al Bundy?”
“That’s the one. Did you think that Al’s wife, Peggy, was physically attractive?”
“Absolutely.”
“Yet Al was always avoiding having sex with her. Why do you think that was?”
“Probably because she was a ditzy lady who took all his money and continually ridiculed him.”
“Sound familiar?”
Alan thought. “Huh. And my name’s even Al. Are you saying that my problems getting it up might have something to do with Lacy cutting me down all the time?”
“Maybe. I’m no doctor. And I love you whether you can or can’t ‘get there’. But I wonder what would happen if we tried some positive reinforcement.”
“Positive…?”
“Shhhhh. Just listen to me. Alan is a great provider. He’s a sexy man who knows just the right song to pick to slow dance to. He’s so romantic. He is a hard worker, and brave enough to get out on the ice that I fell through to get us food. I love his big broad shoulders. They make me feel so safe. Alan’s a good man, a type of good man that’s hard to find…”
He pulled her close and she felt a familiar bulge pressing into her hip.
“…and it’s good to find that he’s still a hard man.”
CHAPTER 11
They lay entwined.
Alan after the best sexual level he’d performed at in at least eight years. Jocelyn after her first intimate experience as a woman.
“You were great,” she kissed into his ear. “And twice!”
“My God, woman, you turn me on so much. First a hand job, then the best blow job ever. I never thought I’d experience that level of intensity ever again. I wish you could have felt the same.”
“Oh, I did. Did I ever. I arrived.”
“What? How? I didn’t really touch you down there.”
“Those vacuum treatments you performed on my breasts? They did the trick. God! That was heavenly.”
“Huh. I’m saying ‘God’ — and talking TO God — more than I have in decades, lately.”
“I know. I even prayed today, for the first time in a long time.”
“I think God’s okay with what just happened. I’ve heard God is love.”
“Yes. That’s what I think too.”
“You know, I’d love to make you orgasm when you get your vagina. When do you go to get that?”
“I’ll need about a year of living as a woman before they’ll approve it. Unless I go to Thailand. But either way, it’ll take money, and that may take the longest to build up.”
“I’m a patient man. I can wait.”
Jocelyn pulled back some so she could see his face. “Alan — I know that you told me you love me — but are you implying that you want a long term relationship?”
“Yes.”
“Like… permanent?”
“Yes. Absolutely.”
“Are you sure? You know what they say about relationships begun under intense, life-and-death circumstances.”
“That the sex rocks?”
“Well… I’ll bet they do say that. But they also say that those relationships tend to fail over time.”
“Jos, yes, I’ve heard that. By the way, do you mind me calling you Jos?”
“Ah… no, actually. Jos is cute.”
“Anyway, I’ve heard about Christie Brinkley and the guy she met at that helicopter crash. Their marriage plopped in under a year. And then there’s Sandra Bullock and Keanu Reaves. They were so great together in ‘Speed’, but broke up before ‘Speed 2’.”
“I never saw ‘Speed 2’.”
“Yeah, like most of America.”
“Alan — they weren’t dating in real life.”
“Exactly. It was just a movie.”
“So… what point are you trying to make, again?”
“Listen, I know the odds are a romance that starts like this will tank. That doesn’t mean that it always happens, and it doesn’t mean it would happen to us. I just know that I have never met a woman who has loved me with her words the way you do. When you say that stuff, it’s like concentrated life force to me. Not to mention that I love your face, your breasts, your shape, your voice, your smarts, your heart… I know that we still barely know each other; I just don’t want you to slip through my fingers.”
Jocelyn looked at him with an intense glare. She was afraid to breathe too loudly. “Alan…what exactly are you saying?” Oh God. I don’t believe this. It’s too good to be true… that’s why I can’t trust it to be real.
“Just this. I want to have you as my wife. If you’ll have a guy almost old enough to be your father. Jocelyn O’Donnell… will you marry me?”
She covered her face with her hands and began to sniffle.
“Yes.”
He pulled her to himself. There are the happy tears again, he thought.
He was wrong.
They both had started to get cold, so they changed into layers of clothing again and got back in bed together. Pretty soon, sleep overtook Alan. Jocelyn remained awake, in deep contemplation. She had Alan’s head against her breasts. He was lightly snoring every third breath or so. She looked down, and kissed his forehead.
“Alan?” she whispered. “Are you awake?”
She received no reply, just the occasional snore. She asked again, a little louder. Still no response.
She relaxed and began to talk, still under her breath.
“Alan, these last four days have been the most horrible and most wonderful of my life. I gladly accept the horrors that have occurred, since without them I would never have come to know you and your love the way I do now. You are so special. Did you know that? I really don’t think you do. God, what that woman did to your soul, to your head.
“I would love to be your wife. Even knowing the odds of a relationship starting out this way. I know that I could treat you better than Dana and Lacy did. See, there are very few men — good quality men, that is — that would be interested in a transgirl like me. I would never take that for granted. A man like you — you really are a dream.
“And that’s the problem. This love we share, I’m afraid it’s just that. A dream. A pipe dream. A man of your quality — your caliber — really deserves more than what I can give you. See, I knew — at least in part — what trouble I was getting into when I decided to transition. I knew that was part of the deal. You, on the other hand, kind of fell into this relationship when we got stranded here. If you are with me, you will suffer. With your family, work, any other acquaintances. Marrying me would make you a social outcast, which is the kiss of death in your profession. I can’t let you do that to yourself. It would destroy me to know that I had ruined your life. That’s why we really cannot be a couple.
“It may be a moot point anyway. The chances of both of us making it out of here alive get slimmer every day. And while you might could survive a long walk back down to highway 12, I absolutely wouldn’t. I’m weighing you down.
“I actually kind of hope I don’t make it out of here. I don’t think I’ll ever match this kind of bliss — the heaven of loving you — again. The rest of life would be a disappointment. Best to “go out on top”, as they say. And it would crush me to see you with someone else. Although I’d know that you would be happier with a good quality genetic girl than someone like me; that would be the only consolation. You’d be better off with some five-foot-two blond blue-eyed D cup girl than a former male who will not pass perfectly ever.
“I know you would fight me if I said all this while you’re awake. So I’m speaking to your subconscious, and I hope it will make your conscious self see my reasoning. At the very least, I’m getting some practice in for when I do have to tell your awakened self.
“But know this, Alan: I love you. Just like you said, truly, madly, deeply. I will always love you, more than anything else in my life. And you have blessed this life of mine these last four days, these days of paradise. You’ve stolen my heart, and you may gladly keep it. I love you, Alan…
…Goodbye.”
She worked to stifle her sobs so she wouldn’t wake him, as Alan continued to softly snore.
Jocelyn awoke. It was dark. The candles had all burnt out. And she was alone in the bed. Alan… no! Don’t go away yet, I’m not ready! Just one more kiss…
She jumped out, and ran to the bathroom. He wasn’t there. Running to the big main room, she saw it was empty too.
The room… didn’t look right. It looked like daytime, but night too. What was happening?
“ALAN!” she screamed, shaking with dread.
The front door opened, with Alan coming through, snow shovel in hand. “Jocelyn? What the… what’s wrong, baby?”
She virtually tackled him, wailing. “I… I thought you’d already left me!”
He held her tight and kissed her over and over. “I’m right here. Right here. All I did was go to shovel the doorway. Hang onto me. I’m never going to leave you.”
She still shook. “Wh-why does the light look so weird in here?”
“It’s the snow. It’s slowed, but still coming down. It has all the ground floor windows totally covered now. But light still is coming in through the loft windows.”
“We’re almost snowed in completely. We’re not going to make it.”
“HEY! Hey, none of that talk now! We will make it out of here. We WILL. You just see. I — and God — are not gonna let either of us die out here.”
He held her and rocked her until her shaking stopped.
“Well, wish me luck. I’m off to catch trout.”
“Why are you taking the fireplace poker with you?”
“I need a tool. Yesterday, I hooked a huge one — I’m guessing twelve, fifteen pounds? — but he fought so hard, the line snapped once I had him halfway out of the hole. If I get him today, as soon as his gills are out, I’m gonna spear him. And then, my dear, maybe we’ll finally have enough fish for a couple of meals.”
Jocelyn looked concerned. “I… I feel like the cabin’s going to cave in… it’s claustrophobic, not being able to see out the windows.”
“Hm. Follow me.” Alan climbed the ladder to the loft. She did the same. “See, you still have a great view out of the loft windows. In fact, you can kind of see where I’ll be fishing, through those trees, down at the lake.” He pulled out the mp3 player and buds. “Listen to some good music. And they have a few paperbacks up here… a Louis L’amour, a Tom Clancy, and — oh, here we go. Romance novels!”
“Thank you. It does feel better up here,” Jocelyn agreed. At least not like I’m suffocating.
She stayed in the loft while Alan went out to fish. Looking at the books, she tossed away the romance novels. The last thing I want to do is read about ‘true love’ when mine is doomed. She read through the mp3 playlist. Forget it; too many love songs. Lying on her back on the floor of the loft, her eyes started to leak. She couldn’t remember another five-day span where she had wept so much.
Her tears stopped eventually, not so much from achieving relief, but because further crying seemed futile. She felt dull and lifeless, except for the acute ache in her chest, the cramp in her throat, and her old friends queasy belly and pounding skull. It all sucks. Everything sucks. Love. Life. Why did I have to fall for him?
She got to her knees and dusted her full length creamy chiffon coat off with disappointment. I’ve had to live in this day and night, and it’s getting ruined. Standing, she walked to the window to see if she could see Alan out at the lake from there. He wasn’t readily visible in the area where he told her he’d be.
Then, she saw him. He was only about a hundred feet away from the cabin! He wasn’t at the lake yet, but still heading towards it - crawling on his hands and knees. What had happened?
Suddenly extremely alarmed, Jocelyn quickly unlatched one of the loft windows and pulled it open part way.
“Alan! What’s wrong?” she yelled, cupping her gloved hands around the outline of her mouth.
He stopped and looked back at her just for a second before going on.
Jocelyn’s blood froze with panic. She’d been mistaken.
That wasn’t Alan.
CHAPTER 12
Jocelyn was frantic. Alan was in deep trouble, dead if they decided to attack him. She didn’t know what to do.
“God, help!” she choked out, fear stemming her speech. “There’s no hope, I’m helpless and useless to him, my God it can’t end this way, he can’t die he CAN’T DIE-“
“Stop it.”
She halted, and went quiet in her mouth and head. She’d heard that voice before internally, although this time it came so loudly she could have sworn it was spoken out loud. It was her strong inner dilemma-solving persona, used in her information technology job. It spoke again:
“This is just a problem. All problems have solutions. A solution exists for you. Think. What’s the problem?”
“Alan’s about to be dead meat!” she yelled impatiently.
“No. Focus. That’s not the problem; it’s the outcome, if the problem is not addressed. What do you need to change the outcome?”
“I… I need a gun.”
“None available. Restate the problem.”
“I need a weapon. A big one.”
“THAT’S the problem. Look around the room. Find a solution.”
She scanned the room quickly, analytically. Couch, 2 wood chairs, fireplace shovel/broom, 2 wine bottles, pots, pans, long nose lighter, dishrags, camping stove, 2 hurricane lamps, lamp oil, funnel for stove fuel, liquid stove fuel-
And she had her solution.
Alan finally caught the monster. The biggest trout he’d ever seen or even heard of. When it hit, it pulled so hard that he was sure it was the same whopper that he’d lost yesterday. It fought like a demon, but when he finally coaxed it out of the hole it received the big poker through the gills, just like Alan had planned. It was still flapping more than an F. Scott Fitzgerald socialite until he speared it through the brain.
He caught his breath; that had been quite a struggle. Then he whooped. “WAA-HOO! A fanny-slapping blue ribbon pinch-me-I-must-be-dreaming trophy fish! Boy, what I wouldn’t give for a camera!”
He stopped, and then added, “-accompanied by a quick warm ride for us out of here.”
Pausing again with a smirk, “And, as long as I’m wishing - Jos, naked, in a tub of hot chocolate.” Don't blame me, God. She's the one who wanted that.
He picked up his gear and his catch, and began the trek back to the cabin. He’d walked it enough this week that he knew the distance, roughly: 140 yards, more or less. An hour or so of daylight left. I could fish a little more, but I’d best not push my luck. Don’t want anything to jinx this day-
As if on cue, his concern materialized into reality. There, trotting towards him from the trees into the tiny clearing he was in.
A wolf. A huge wolf.
It slowed down and began to show its teeth as its eyes locked with Alan’s. Alan immediately looked slightly away. His scout survival manual was shouting at him.
“Avoid direct eye contact with the wolf as it will be interpreted as a challenge.”
He quickly stuffed the trout down the front neck of his coat. I’ve got the poker. I can keep him at bay. Dammit, one wild pooch is NOT gonna get Jocelyn’s food.
“A lone wolf will not threaten a full grown human, unless rabid. Packs of wolves will do so, rarely. Wolves hunt in packs of four to seven.”
That’s when he noticed the others trickling out of the trees. Four more, all between him and the cabin.
They began to spread out slowly, and then with more speed began to encircle him. The first wolf was the biggest, and was the chief aggressor, approaching him with fangs bared and beginning to snarl. Alan responded by slowly backing away, poker drawn, arms and shoulders spread out to increase his size to them. He had no other instruction about how to deal with five wolves.
As they flanked him, he darted his head back and forth in a desperate effort to keep track of each. Retreating, he noticed a tree to his right, about ten feet away. Maybe I should dart to the tree and climb it — if for nothing else than to buy time. He glanced to his left and then prepared to break for the pine. But as he looked back right, he saw the big one — he must be the leader, the alpha wolf — had seemingly anticipated his thoughts. It was standing right next to the trunk, effectively blocking his plan. What now — what do I — God help me —
Suddenly there was a small crash of glass on the tree trunk. A fireball exploded above the wolf as liquid fire rained down on it. It’s coat was now aflame, and it yelped/screamed as it jumped forward, rightward, then in a circle and then helter-skelter in a zigzag off through the woods, howling in pain and fright. The others now looked a little tenuous, almost spooked, yet they held their ground. Alan thought for a second, fire from heaven?
He was nearly correct. Jocelyn, his angel, stepped out into the clearing. She had no gloves on as she pulled the second small wine bottle from her coat. Using the lighter, she flared up the rag stuffed in the opening, secured with the bottle cork. Alan’s resolve sparked back to life along with it. With her in his corner, he felt he could fight off a pride of lions. He glanced back at his rear quadrant to see where the wolves now stood-
They were gone. Had they all tucked tail and left?
Then turning to the front, he saw the horrifying answer. They were doing what wolves do, attacking the smallest and weakest available prey. Jocelyn.
She backed up, quickly realizing how the tables had turned; she’d hoped the others would have run with the first explosion. Throwing her last firebomb at the closest wolf, she saw it sink into the snow unexploded as the carnivore nimbly dodged the missile. It jumped for her neck and she blocked it with her forearm, nearly being knocked off balance. But it now had ahold of the sleeve of her creamy chiffon coat, as a second wolf clamped down on the lower hem in a futile attempt to bite her leg. She saw the other two wolves closing fast. They jumped towards her torso, and confusingly only got mouthfuls of polyester.
Jocelyn had ducked down and slid out of the bottom of her coat. In her sweater and sweats, she broke in a run for the cabin.
The pack quickly recovered and took off towards her. As they did, the second wine bottle, fuse still burning, hit a tree in front of the last two trailing wolves. A line of flame four feet across suddenly blocked their path. The face of one of them was now on fire, and it screeched as it ran away. The wolf next to it was startled enough that it ran too. Alan ran up to and over the fire line as fast as his legs would pump.
Jocelyn screamed as the remaining two creatures caught up to her.
“JOS! COVER YOUR NECK! I’M COMING,” yelled Alan.
As the wolves jumped her back, she fell forward into the deep snow, now guarding the back of her neck with her arms as instructed. One bit deep into her right forearm and attempted to pull it away. The other dug its teeth into her left leg just above her knee. They now attempted to tug in opposite directions, as if trying to split her like a wishbone.
Poker in his left hand, Alan ran towards the closest beast. It kept pulling on Jocelyn’s arm but had her rescuer in the corner of its eye. Alan pulled the huge trout out of his coat and launched it just to the right of the animal, causing it to instinctively jump to it’s left. Which sealed its doom.
Alan had already left his feet, jumping towards his target’s anticipated arrival spot. He landed on the wolf like a pole-vaulter, impaling it through the chest with the poker. It’s ribs cracked and snapped as the steel spike with the big man behind it bisected its heart.
Alan jumped back up as his victim took its rapid, agonal last breaths. The last one still had ahold of Jocelyn’s leg. Her blood was staining the snow red in two spots. The wolf was hungry, and with the taste of hemoglobin it was not willing to give in, despite the fate of its friends.
“HYEAAAH” yelled Alan, waving his arms threateningly as he bounded towards the remaining canine. It released Jos’ leg but would not run, snarling and growling at the impatient man approaching it. Dammit, run off. I don’t have time to fight you. I’ve got to stop her from bleeding to death.
“If you have food, throw it to the wolf. It may be distracted enough to leave you alone.”
Alan sidestepped to grab the trout. It was bloody from the head wound he’d given it. Throwing it just over the head of the wolf, it landed three feet behind the furry tail.
The red-mouthed animal glanced back at the fish, then back at Jocelyn, with Alan standing over her in a protective pose. It stared at Alan for a few seconds, and then lowered its head in a deferential motion. The huge catch was in its jaws seconds later as it trotted out of sight.
Alan ran like a man possessed to the cabin, with his limp lover in his arms.
He burst through the door of the cabin, already honed in on his next task. He had to be successful. Failure would assuredly mean death for her.
He entered the bedroom and laid her gently but quickly on the bed. He grabbed one of the few unworn shirts from his suitcase — his white long sleeved dress shirt he’d packed for the interview — and with his hands assisted by his teeth, tore a few wide strips of cloth from it. He stripped off her sweats down to her t-shirt and underwear and rapidly scanned her body for other wounds. Only finding the two on her arm and leg, he looked quickly. Her leg was oozing blood fairly steadily, but not with a pulsing motion. Her forearm was also just oozing, and not as severely; combined, however, she’d likely lost a lot, Alan figured. Using thick strips of shirt cloth and some butter knives from the kitchen, he fashioned tourniquets and applied them on both limbs, placing them between the wounds and her heart. Then quickly covered her with blankets.
“Alan… that hurts…”
“I’m so sorry sweetheart, I’ve got to stop your bleeding, if it works I’ll release them in just a little bit,” he blurted out rapidly. He wasn’t near done. He folded up what little clean fabric he had left and stuffed them into the wounds, then wrapped them tightly with more strips, making modified “pressure dressings”. He then elevated the wounds, packed snow around them to help stop the bleeding, and pressed hard on the leg wound to try to help it coagulate. I’ve never heard of using all of these techniques together, but hey, I’m trying to save a life, here.
Unable to think of anything more to do, he stayed beside her and held pressure on her leg. He looked at her face. Jocelyn’s eyes were shut, and she was grimacing from pain constantly, although the expression was more intense some moments than others. She was so pale. And she was taking deep heaving breaths, like she couldn’t get enough air.
“Baby, are you having any trouble breathing? Do you feel weak?”
“Yes… to both… nnngh,” she grunted through clenched teeth. “And… it hurts.”
He checked his watch. Twenty minutes since the tourniquets were applied. If they stayed on too long, she could have limb loss; he wasn’t sure how long “too long” was. He let the arm one loose, then the leg. Now the trick was to wait and watch to see if blood oozed into or around the dressings. Waiting. I hate this part. I need to be DOING something for her, not just sitting here.
“Alan…”
“Yeah, honey? Don’t be moving yet. Just be still. You can’t start bleeding again.”
“I feel… so cold… “
He got rid of the snow packing. That was probably a stupid thing to do. Stupid, stupid…
“Alan… you are not stupid…”
Oh God — I said that out loud?
“You saved my life… again. My hero, my Eagle Scout. You were… so awesome out there… I’m so proud of you…”
“No.” He was crying now. “Baby, I don’t deserve that. God, if I had just stayed here instead of trying to catch a rotten fish… you actually saved my life. I’d be shredded to bits if you hadn’t come along. You’re a life saver.”
“A… pineapple lifesaver?” She curled her right lip into a mild grin.
“Nope. Not today. Lime,” he smiled through his tears. “With those light green sweats you had on.”
“They’re… ‘Sweet Chartreuse’…”
“I swear I’ll never understand girl colors.”
“It’s part… of the feminine mystique…”
“So where did you learn to make Molotov cocktails? Don’t tell me Webelos.”
“Got my… anarchy badge,” she grinned, eyes closed.
Alan laughed while his heart broke. She was in trouble. And it was dark now. God. I’ve done all I know to do. She’s in your hands right now. Please don’t let us down.
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TO BE CONCLUDED ON 12/05
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of these characters to any actual person living or dead is coincidental
Thanks to Sephrena Lynn Miller for a quick first read!
Thanks to the "BCTS Closeteers" - especially Jana - for help with the pic!
Thanks to Tels for special help!
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Cruiser Lake
Part 5 of 5
by Sigh
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CHAPTER 13
Night had fallen. Alan held a bedside vigil, constantly listening to make sure Jocelyn was breathing regularly.
At one-fifteen a.m. she awoke. “Alan… “
“What is it, love. Are you hurting?”
“Less. Alan… I can't leave you.”
“Huh?”
“I thought I could be strong enough… but I’m not. I’m not able to stand… a minute apart from you… even if it’s for your own good... please don't leave.”
“Baby, I’m never leaving. Never. I think you’re having a bad dream. Just know I’ve been right here by you all the time.” He lightly kissed her on the lips, the cheeks, the forehead, and repeated all multiple times, as she weakly wept.
Feeling her pulse become thready, he figured her blood pressure was low. He heated up some snow and had her drink as much as she could tolerate.
Four forty-two a.m. She whispered, “Alan.” Her breathing was more labored.
“HUH. Unnph. Ah, I’m awake… yes. What, darling.”
“Alan… please listen. I think… I’m dying… and,”
“Sh-sh-sh, babe. No. No you’re not. I won’t let you. I won’t let it happen. Please stop talking like that.”
“Please, Alan… just listen… to me. Please?”
He gritted his molars to keep from sobbing. “N’kay.”
“Alan… if I die… please leave me… and live… don’t stay here… and die too… promise me.”
He stayed quiet, shoulders moving up and down in spasms of slow, rhythmic jerks. Then, in a quavering voice through tight teeth, “I’m… nvr… lving… yu.”
“Promise me… Alan.”
“Nu.”
“Alan…” she was weeping now, “please… promise me!”
He broke into open wailing, holding his face in his hands.
“Please… Alan…”
He couldn’t answer verbally. He continued to cover his face and bawl, but he nodded his head.
“Thank you… Alan… I love you… my whole life… of hell was… worth it… for these past days… with you…”
He choked back some tears, and whispered, “Pleeease… don’t leave, Jos… please don’t leave me… please, fight…” and then, his wailing resumed.
Alan checked his watch. Six fifty-nine a.m.
Jocelyn was still breathing, but he had not been able to get her to speak for the last half hour or so. She’d still open her eyes and look at him for a second, but then they’d close again. She was dying. And he didn’t want to continue to live without her.
Why did I agree to try to live after she was gone? Now I have to honor that. But I don’t want to. My life is unlivable without her. What the hell will I have to live for?
He turned his red, now angry eyes skyward as he began a silent prayer. God! Why let her die now? Why not let us both die in the crash, at the bottom of the lake? Why allow her — and me — all this pain? I think I still believe that you’re really there, but I’m guessing that you’re a sadistic bastard. You heard me. Letting me get hope — not just for our rescue, but also for our future life — just to snatch it away. Helping me with the little requests, like for fish bait and stove fuel, but not sending a rescue? Hey, how many times have I asked for that now? I’m giving you one more chance to prove you’re not an ass. KEEP JOS ALIVE — SAVE HER, AND SEND HELP NOW. Or are you too busy snowing us in further?
He laid his head down on the bed next to Jocelyn, stroking her unbitten arm. He listened to her breathing, the only noise in this silent place. Except for the faint hum.
Alan’s head shot up. A hum?
He jumped to his feet. What was it — a snowmobile? A sick bird, or a sick joke from God, again? As he leapt into the big room, he noticed the rays of light streaming in the loft windows, the first bright sunbeams he’d seen since they’d been stuck here. He flew up the ladder to the loft, as the humming got suddenly louder. He opened up a window, and knew what was causing the noise.
Plane!
It suddenly appeared straight overhead, maybe only thirty feet from the roof, and flew away from Alan and the window. He now only saw the rear tail becoming more distant with each second. His body was nearly completely over the ledge, with arms waving wildly.
“HEY! HEEEEYYYY!”
Gone, dammit! He had to be Search and Rescue. He was flying low to look for signs of us — or someone.
His heart sank. Who knows when the plane would come over again, or if it would at all? He was probably combing a vast area, since no one knows exactly where we traveled. And I had no signal of any kind out ‘cause I thought it was still snowing. I’m a laughable failure. Now my screw up has doomed Jocelyn. I’ve killed her, as good as if I’d shot her through-
Be quiet, Lacy.
He heard Jocelyn’s strong, loving voice. Drowning out Lacy’s, and all others.
Alan, no matter what happens, you are a success, a hero. And I know that while I am still breathing, you will try with all of your might to save me — to save us. Because that’s who you really are. You never give up. You never quit. I can always count on you to fight as long as there’s hope. That’s the Alan I know.
Hearing her voice — in his soul, it came as clear as if she was talking into his ear — did something to Alan. Despite his lack of sleep, his achy muscles, the seeming hopelessness of the situation, he felt as if he had touched a live light socket. Thoughts began racing through his mind as his body straightened and vision became laser focused.
I need a signal. One he’ll see from miles away, if he doesn’t fly right by here again.
More words from a page came — the exact ones he needed.
He knew what to do. But first, the stuck damper needed to get open.
Fireplace is the only reliable spot. There’s too much deep snow outside to build one there. So, damper — you WILL become unstuck, and NOW.
He grabbed the handle at the top of the fireplace inside the burn area. Pulling with more might than he’d pulled anything in recent years, there was no budge. He reached into the hearth, then after pulling out the wood grate, crouched into it. Using his legs and back, he pushed up on the stuck metal plate of the old damper. Nothing happened. He squatted low, then exploded into the plate with his shoulders and shoulder blades. His legs burned as he pushed. He was sure his face was crimson as he exerted every muscle he knew he had, and a few he’d just become aware of, to put pressure on the stuck device.
“NNNNGGHH… MOVE, DAMMIT… OPEN, SAYS ME!”
CRACK!
The sound was so loud that for a second Alan wondered if his back had broken. Then the damper fell apart all around him, and clanged at his feet in a couple of broken metal plates plus a handle.
Works for me. Flue’s open.
He used the axe he’d brought in from the woodshed to cut up the wooden dining room chairs in one minute. He piled the pieces into the fireplace; then set more quickly ripped out book pages under the wood, and doused it all lightly with liquid camping stove fuel for good measure. The fire immediately caught. It produced heat, but he needed thicker smoke. He put the somewhat wet wood logs from the first aborted fire attempt days ago on too; now there was some white smoke. A dash outside to get some fresh pine branches with needles (shaking the snow off first of course) proved to do the trick. Once the branches went on the fire, plenty of white smoke was going up the chimney.
A quick check of Jocelyn showed she was still breathing. Hang in there, baby.
The A-frame house wasn’t as visible from the outside as usual. That’s because of the snow that had built up this week — the first floor was covered in drifts. The only two windows visible were the ones at the front on the second level, looking out from the loft. And now one of the windows was opening.
Alan climbed out onto the ledge, a drawstring from the first floor curtains tied around his waist and leading back inside the windowsill. Standing on the sill, he could almost just reach the metal roof of the A-frame with his fingertips. He squatted slightly, then jumped. Grabbing ahold of the roof ledge now, he grunted as he pulled himself up onto the structure, defiantly undeterred by the snow buildup. Now straddling the rooftop with one foot on each steeply pitched side, he started reeling in the curtain drawstring. Coming through the window now were two blankets rolled together, with the other end of the drawstring tied around them.
Cyrus “Hawkeye” Thatchett flew low and solo over the trees, scanning for any sign of human life, especially distress. This was his thirty-sixth year of working with Montana Search and Rescue, and this routine was old hat to him. He didn’t hold out much hope for this search though. Looking for two men, both reported to have left Missoula for Helena on December 24th, five days ago. The HiPat search along the interstate route had been fruitless. So now in his trusty single engine Cessna Skylane, he was flying over the smattering of little winding high altitude roads connecting highway 12 to Helena in alternate routes. Five days was a long time to be stranded in the snow. And still be alive, that is. So much had piled up recently; they could be covered in feet of it. If they were really in these hills and mountains, their bodies might not be found ‘til spring.
“Eagle base to two three foxtrot, can you read me, over,” came a monotone voice. It was Richard, the new director of MS&R for this region. He was an import from the east coast. Cyrus hadn’t warmed to him yet, to put it diplomatically.
“Eagle, this is 23 Foxtrot.”
“23 Foxtrot, we may have you abort this search for a fresher one north of here. A man drove off into the night after getting drunk and fighting with his wife early this morning. Have you had any luck with current search yet, over.”
“No luck yet, Eagle.”
Richard Sponn, new director of Eagle base operations, sighed. When were these country hicks going to learn to speak correctly with aviation language? Cyrus hadn’t ended with an ‘over’. “23 Foxtrot, how’s your fuel, over.”
“Eagle base: pretty good. At least 3 hours left… over,” then releasing the com so he wouldn’t be heard, “you just can’t stand me not saying ‘over’ every time, can you, y’ greenhorn.” Cy wore a passive-aggressive sneer.
“23 Foxtrot, stand by while we arrange new mission parameters, over.”
Cyrus sighed. He understood the reasoning for abandoning the current search; he just didn’t like giving up on anyone. When he had to turn north, he’d fly over some of the terrain he’d already covered one last time.
Something caught the corner of his eye. He pulled out his binoculars. Sure enough, there was a smoke trail, originating in one of the multiple small valleys. That could mean any number of things, most of them unremarkable-
He held his breath. The smoke was no longer in a continuous flume near the ground line. There now appeared big interrupted puffs…
“23 Foxtrot to Eagle base. Mobilize rescue to just north of Red Mountain. We have a distress signal coming from there. Will get you exact GPS coordinates in a minute, over.”
Richard’s response sounded skeptical. “Foxtrot, Base here. Please confirm with visual first. What type of distress signal, over.”
“Smoke, Eagle.”
There’s no way I’m ringing the bell for a wild goose chase over someone’s campfire, thought Richard. Now if Cy saw other signs of distress, then fine. “Foxtrot, confirm visually please, over.”
I’m visualizin’ the smoke, dagnabbit, fumed Cy. “Eagle base. MOBILIZE THE RESPONSE TEAM. The smoke is coming in three definite puffs followed by a prolonged stream, then is being repeated. It’s smoke signal for mayday, OVER.”
Richard was getting irritated. He was about to — civilly — read Cyrus the riot act. Then he noticed the stares of three of the base personnel. “Boss… that’s the Boy Scout / Native American S.O.S. - three puffs,” said Brian, Richard’s #2 man.
“Eagle base to 23 Foxtrot. We are mobilizing the team. Please respond with GPS coordinates ASAP. Over.”
“THANK you,” spat Cyrus, then picked the com back up and said “Roger that.” Three puffs. Any cub scout worth his salt would know that.
Please, God. Let him see. Let someone see, prayed Alan, working the chimney smoke with his brown blanket.
Then, he heard the plane again. Looking behind him, he saw it making a beeline for the cabin.
“HEEEEYYY!” - He said, flailing. He then motioned wildly towards the red blanket he had cut in half, folded into a pattern and laid on the roof.
Cyrus saw a man on the roof of a cabin, standing next to the smoking chimney. He was gesticulating about something-
“What in tarnation... !” He grabbed the com.
“Eagle base. Recommend we send the AirEvac ‘copter. I have made visual contact with a man on a roof; he’s laid out cloth in the shape of a red cross, and he looks like he’s havin’ a conniption fit. Strongly suspect a medical emergency. If these are the two we’re looking for, I don’t see the other one. Over.”
For a second, Alan was terrified as it seemed the plane was beginning to dip it’s right wing to bank away. But no, it started alternately dipping both its wings. It looked like it was waving at him. It then passed directly over him and through the white plume, making swirly smoke rings in the air.
He saw. He saw! OK, God. This isn’t over yet. You’re still in the doghouse with me until Jocelyn lives, and recovers intact. Thanks, though. Alan made his way to hop back inside the window.
The rescue helicopter had made a textbook deep snow landing in a small clearing near the cabin. It was now yawing towards its nose, but was steady and stable. Alan had run out at the noise and motioned wildly to the cabin entrance. Jocelyn’s breathing had been getting shallower. The EMTs were thankful that the front door entrance had been kept relatively shoveled — it was much easier and faster to transport their patient out that way than try to feed the stretcher through one of the loft windows.
“Is she going to be OK?” Alan shouted, following them as they rushed her to the ‘copter.
They gave no answer, intently evaluating the pale woman they were loading through the side door. There was enough room for Alan, so he boarded too. He warned the crew about Jocelyn’s transitioning status. The warning part was actually to emphasize that although they were to look up her old records and insurance info under the name Joseph O’Donnell, they were to refer to her as a woman named Jocelyn. Alan found himself wishing that they would show some reaction — any kind — to that news; the fact that it seemed to not faze them as they tried to save her emphasized how serious her condition had become.
As the airship took off for Helena, the two EMTs began to work even more furiously on her. One of them slipped a breathing tube down her throat as the other one prepared to do chest compressions. Alan could only watch terrified as they performed CPR on his reason for living.
CHAPTER 14
Darkness.
Tied down. Imprisoned.
I'm being... held captive... no, tortured... experimented on...
"Take a deep breath, sir. Now hold it, now blow it out."
Jocelyn coughed, and the cough startled her to consciousness. She was gradually aware of awakening in a foreign place. And unlike Christmas morning with Alan, she did NOT feel safe. She was trapped.
She was unable to talk. A gag was in her mouth, and stuffed down her throat. Her arms and legs were tied down at the wrists and ankles. There were tubes and wires and beeping monitors all around. She wasn’t at home, or in the cabin, but in… a laboratory of some sort? Was she part of some science fiction/horror experiment? She started to writhe around in a desperate attempt to get free.
“Hey there, buddy. Relax. Just breathe,” said a detached voice. Jocelyn turned her neck — ow! That scraped my throat to do that — and saw a man in maroon scrubs, patting her on the shoulder, but watching a monitor. He didn’t care about her; he was just doing the dirty deeds for whichever mad scientist ran this place.
“Max! I told you to alert me when you started to do this!” A blonde woman in blue scrubs and a stethoscope around her neck sped into the room. “Hey there, honey. My name is Sasha. I’m your nurse; you’re in the hospital, and in the intensive care unit. Max here is the respiratory therapist, and he’s testing your lung strength so we can see if we can finally take you off of the ventilator.”
“He’s got good inspiratory force,” yawned Max. “Should be OK to extubate.”
Sasha walked over and grabbed his arm, pulling him to the side. “Didn’t you get the full report on this patient when you came on duty? She’s to be called her female name and referred to as ‘she’.”
“But it’s a guy.”
Sasha’s nails dug into his bicep, and he winced. “SHE is not an ‘IT’. Dr. Rast gave specific instructions regarding this. Shall I tell him you don’t want to comply?”
Max shook his head. He liked his butt. He didn’t need Rast biting it off. “I-I’m sorry, miss. I haven’t had my coffee yet this morning. I’ll call Dr. Ingram — he’s your pulmonologist-”
“That’s lung specialist, hon,” explained Sasha.
“- and if he wants, I’ll be back to pull that tube out. Then you’ll be able to talk.”
Sasha stayed with Jocelyn, holding her hand and telling her what had been going on. It was January 4th. She was starting her 6th consecutive day in the ICU at St. Peter’s hospital in Helena, arriving there via Montana Search and Rescue. There were two episodes where her heart stopped due to critical blood loss— one en route, and one just after arrival. She’d developed fluid in her lungs and has a mild pneumonia, necessitating the ventilator. Not to mention the six pints of blood transfusions, two operations to repair her wounds as well as beginning a series of rabies shots. It was a miracle that she was alive.
Sasha searched Jocelyn’s face for signs of comprehension. They had no way of knowing yet if she had suffered brain damage from the cardiac arrests, and if so, how much. Her patient seemed to nod her head appropriately as she talked. That’s encouraging, she hoped.
Jocelyn made a writing-with-pen-like motion with her right hand. Sasha smiled brightly. She wanted to write a note! That’s super encouraging. The nurse brought a notepad with a big pencil, and untied Jocelyn’s wrist restraints. She scribbled out a fast message and showed it to Sasha.
“Why haven’t I been awake for any of this until now?”
“Oh! Sorry honey, I forgot to tell you. You had such pain, and you were fighting the ventilator so much, that your docs thought it would be best to keep you sedated with medicine until you healed enough. And today, they thought you had. I turned off your sedatives about fifteen minutes before Max did his stuff with you this morning.”
Jocelyn wrote more. “Alan…?”
“Aahhh… your special friend,” Sasha said with twinkly eyes. “He caused quite a ruckus here. Insisted on staying with you around the clock, and we have strict visiting hours. He went toe-to-toe with Dr. Rast about it, brave soul. We finally agreed for him to stay in the ICU waiting area and even sleep there. We’ve rarely allowed that. He’s probably out there now, waiting for us to get your tube out so we can let him back in here.
“Or, possibly, he could be at work. Did you know that he went and interviewed for a job here in Helena two days ago, and got it? I tell you, he seems like an impressive guy. You are one lucky girl.”
Jocelyn was already thinking otherwise. He’s started his job. Getting on with his life. As he should. He deserves the best out of life. And I… I am not the best. She looked at Sasha. Her nurse was gorgeous. Long wavy blonde hair, pixie face, under 5’6”, curvy and huge breasts that would be cannons if she wore the right bra. And no ring on her left hand.
Jocelyn wrote again. “Do you like him? You and he would make a good couple.”
Sasha read this with confusion and a little dismay. Then, raising one eyebrow, she smiled slightly. She came towards Jocelyn’s face and whispered in her ear.
“Sorry… I like girls, hon.”
Jocelyn now wore the look of dismay. Darn. She would have been so right for him. Yay!... calm down, Jos. Remember: this love was a pipe dream. A pipe dream.
“Okay, we’re ready to take your breathing tube out.” Max had returned. The procedure was mercifully quick. She was given breathing medicine in a mist right after, and put on an oxygen mask, which they were quickly able to convert to a small two pronged nose tube. Thankfully, the foot restraints were also taken off.
Sasha was standing by. “Now, missy. Can you try talking some?”
“I — kkk!” Jocelyn grabbed her neck and grimaced in discomfort.
“Oooo-kay… sometimes after having that tube in for a while your vocal chords are really sore. Don’t talk and hurt yourself. Sipping some hot fluid and giving your voice a rest will be best. You’ll probably be lots better tomorrow. Let’s just use the pad and pencil until then.”
“Well, hello there, sleeping beauty!” The booming welcome came from a portly man in the room. He was mostly bald with wisps of gray hair, a wide smile framed with a white handlebar mustache plus short white beard, and small glasses perched on his nose. The name on his crisp buttoned white coat said “B.J. RAST, M.D., SURGERY”. Behind him stood another doctor, this one thin, clean-shaven and appearing more reserved than the big one, but still smiling. His ID tag said “Ingram, M.D.”.
Both doctors walked to the bed. Rast continued to talk. “About time you healed up enough to wake up. Usually all it takes is one kiss from Prince Charming to do the trick. Your prince has been lavishing you with smooches multiple times every day… he’s got a thing or two to learn about breaking spells, I guess. How are you feeling?”
Jocelyn wrote on her pad while Sasha pointed to her throat and shook her head. Dr. Ingram grunted, and nodded his. Jos turned the pad to Dr. Rast. “A little sore in the throat, otherwise OK.”
Both docs examined her and asked questions, including questions meant to test her brain function. She passed with flying colors according to Dr. Rast. They also answered her questions to them regarding her physical condition.
“I like how things are looking. Don’t get me wrong; you’re not out of the woods yet. But at least you’re out of the quicksand,” chuckled Rast.
“Thank you, Santa,” wrote Jocelyn, smiling and tearing with appreciation.
“I get that a lot, miss,” returned Rast. “By the way, your boyfriend was very insistent that you be referred to in the female gender. You have a real keeper there, if you ask me.” The two doctors then left.
All of this activity after nearly a week of bedrest left Jocelyn exhausted, and Sasha let her sleep. In 30 minutes, she awoke again, this time to two voices just outside her door.
“She can’t talk just yet, Mr. S, but she can write notes.” “Okay.”
Sasha, and… Alan!
Oh God, no. I’m not ready to see him yet. I’m going to have to tell him that we’re through. I just can’t do it now, especially not being able to talk. And especially since I can’t bear the thought of living without him. Maybe if he thinks I’m still asleep he’ll leave.
Alan and Sasha walked in. “Oh, she’s still snoozing. If you want to go out in the waiting area, I can call you as soon as she wakes, Mr. S.” whispered the nurse.
“Can’t I just stay in here quietly and be with her?” he breathed back.
“Sure. Just be aware she needs her rest.” Jocelyn heard the soft falls of Sasha’s footsteps leaving the room.
Jocelyn lay motionless. She could hear Alan breathe on occasion. In a minute, she heard his chair scoot on the floor, pulling up to her bed. Then she felt that he was grasping her hand gently. And heard him start to whisper.
“Jocelyn. I’m so happy that you’re recovering. If you had died, I don’t know what I would have done. I’ve wanted to talk to you so badly; I just can’t wait any longer. So I hope you can hear me on some level, maybe even in your soul.
“We had an intense experience together. I will always treasure it — except the ‘you almost dying’ part. And I know that I asked you to marry me. After getting back to real life, I can say that I was wrong to do that; I acted too hastily. I’m so sorry, baby. You see, I… I just can’t marry you.”
He then paused. Jocelyn felt as if she was starting to die all over again. But I can’t cry; I can’t let on I hear him. That would destroy me even more. God, Alan, get it over with and leave so I can suffer alone.
But he stayed, and began whispering again. “The main reason is because even though to me you’re all woman, your documents still have you listed as male, and two men marrying still isn’t legal in Montana. So until that law — or your documents — change, we’re just going to have to shack up together. I've been looking in the paper for an apartment for us. Besides, I’ve already tried the five-two, blond blue-eyed D-cup genetic girl. Or have you never seen a picture of Lacy?”
Jocelyn’s eyes opened as big as saucers. She raised her head to look at Alan, who was sporting his glorious toothy smile with just a hint of devilishness in his eyes.
“And baby, I’m way, way better at faking being asleep than you are.”
Jocelyn was pouring tears of relief, joy, and release. She sat up and reached for Alan.
“Watch your right forearm, Jos. It’s still pretty fresh from surgery.”
Like she could care. She wrapped her right arm around him as best she could, and grabbed him in a tight squeeze around his shoulders with her left. They hugged and rocked for what seemed like twenty minutes. Alan whispered into her ear.
“I love you. I love you so much. I want to spend the rest of my life loving you back for what you’ve done for me. I know I will face judgment and hate and discrimination, but it’s worth it to me, as long as I get to be with you. I want to stand beside you and be strong for you when others try to treat you — us — with disgust. So see — I am going into this eyes wide open. It’s my choice.
“And as soon as it’s feasible, I will marry you; again, if you’ll have an old guy like me.” Jocelyn nodded as vigorously as she could so he would understand. They kissed each other’s necks, cheeks, foreheads; Jocelyn avoided open mouth, until Alan thoughtfully produced some Tic-Tacs. After she’d had five of them, she allowed their tongues to mingle.
Eventually, they broke, and Alan turned serious. “I’m not going to have this romance fail. I’d like us both to start counseling, both as a couple and individually, as soon as you get out of here. I know I’ll have to scrimp and save to do so, and we may have to pool our resources. But we don’t need our past emotional baggage screwing this up. Would you be okay with that?” He got two ‘thumbs up’ from his mute sweetheart, followed by another long kiss.
When their osculation paused, Jocelyn wrote on her pad. “So you heard everything I whispered to you that night in the cabin? You weren’t asleep?”
“I’ll have to say, when I heard you saying that stuff, I wanted to tell you how wrong you were. You were trying to be sneaky there, ‘speaking to my subconscious’ and all. So I wanted to get you back in a sneaky but loving way. I was going to do it the next night, then the wolves and everything happened. But this was a pretty sweet revenge, wouldn’t you say?” He was grinning again.
She looked lovingly into his eyes. Then she began unbuttoning his shirt, a fog of sudden lust on her face. Alan whispered, “Honey, we’re here in the hospital…” as she reached inside to stroke his bare chest.
She then found his nipple and pinched the hell out of it.
“OW OW OW- okay, okay, are we even now?” he whimpered.
CHAPTER 15
Jocelyn looked in the mirror.
Her wedding dress sparkled in the reflection. Her long, waist length hair had been dyed to look it’s full sleek natural black again, rather than showing the gray that had crept in the last few years. Cynthia — her best friend and maid of honor — and Alan’s sister Charlene were fussing over her, helping perfect her makeup and getting everything in order. The ceremony was ten minutes away.
“I can’t believe this is happening. It’s like a dream come true,” she whispered.
“About time, too. You’re forty-four, Alan’s sixty-two and your Dad is seventy,” Cynthia muttered. “What took him so long?”
“Cyn, you can bring up all the negatives you want,” Jos sang. “Nothing can spoil the joy of this day for me.”
A knock came on the door. “All you hens decent in there?” It was Jocelyn’s father.
“As long as the groom’s not with you, come in.”
“Hi there, daughter. Got a surprise for ya.” Her father walked in followed by an unexpected figure.
“Mom?... MOM! Oh my God! I thought…”
“Hello… ah… ‘Jocelyn’.” She blushed as she said her daughter’s name. “Goodness me, you really look lovely.”
Seamus O’Donnell hugged his wife. “This is still a hard thing for her. But a big part of her wants to have you in her life again. I’ve been telling her what an impressive child you are. And she finally read the book.”
The book. Is there no end to the good that it will accomplish? Jocelyn thought.
“Mom… thank you so much for coming.”
Katie O’Donnell stammered. “Honey… can I call you “JoJo” like your father does? I think that would be easiest for me…”
“Absolutely.” Jocelyn smiled. She knew “JoJo” was similar to the “Joe” she had despised for so long. But “JoJo” was feminine, and fine. Especially if it meant being a part of her parent’s lives again.
“Mom… can I have a hug?”
Both women embraced and began to weep. Everyone in the room wept.
Cyn dialed a number on her cell phone. “Tell that organist to keep playing hymns for at least ten minutes more (sniff). Major makeup damage control is about to commence.”
Finally the group arrived into the church foyer.
“Mom, the usher will seat you at the front. Let’s talk more at the reception, OK? I love you so much.”
“I love you too, JoJo. And… your father has another surprise for you, I think.”
Jocelyn turned to the man whose arm she held. “Dad?”
He looked at his daughter’s eyes. “Why don’t you call me… Daddy.”
Cyn mouthed to the front of the sanctuary, “MORE ORGAN HYMNS!”
Seventeen minutes late, the ceremony began. Charlene was one of the bridesmaids, as was young Haley O’Donnell, all sixteen years of her. Aleisha and Alexis, Alan's twins, were also in the procession. Jake O’Donnell was a little old for the classic ring bearer role at nine, but he was so unfocused at times that it was wisely decided that he wouldn’t be a young groomsman. A mostly bald Alan Sarkisian stood at the front of the room with the minister. As the wedding march started to play, old Seamus O’Donnell escorted a vision in white lace and satin down the aisle.
An angel, thought Alan. My snow angel.
When the music stopped, the minister spoke. “Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to celebrate…
“…the tenth anniversary of Alan and Jocelyn Sarkisian, with a renewal of their vows, and a recreation of their ceremony, except this time with the actual father of the bride giving away his daughter.”
The ceremony was fairly similar to their marriage ten years ago. Jocelyn still fit perfectly into her original wedding gown. However, Seamus did get to say “her mother and I” when the question “who gives this woman’s hand in marriage?” was stated. And when the “bride” and “groom” said their vows, they embellished it with “I truly, madly, deeply do”. By the end, there was nary a dry eye in the place (except for Jake, who was counting the seconds until they could get to the food).
Finally Alan and Jocelyn walked down the aisle as a commemoration of their 10 years as man and wife. Then pictures were taken — getting Jake to smile while simultaneously keeping Haley from sending/reading texts was a challenge — and the whole group left for the reception hall.
Jocelyn got the two children together. “Are you two really wanting to do this? You know you don’t have to. Dad and I love both of you whether you do or not.”
Haley said, “Mom — I want to. I’ve practiced this, I want to be part of this.”
“If she gets to then I get to!” spouted Jake.
Dingdingdingdingding, rang a glass at the head table of the reception.
Alan’s “best man”, his business partner at Jocelyn marketing consultants, gave a speech. So did various others. But the most anticipated speakers were saved till last.
Beginning with Jason Alambrus Barney, the area LGBT champion.
“Jocelyn and I have not always been friends. I approached her in hopes that she would help us with our activism her after her and Alan’s story hit the news. Her response to me was classic Jocelyn: ‘I don’t want to be a gender crusader.’ So I filed her under ‘lacks the courage to influence change’. Oh, how wrong I was.
“Jocelyn’s style has never been to be part of a march, or filing a lawsuit, or doing TV interviews. She just wanted to be a woman… a full expression of womanhood. A woman who visited her neighbors down the block when they were hospitalized, and made sure their mail and papers were picked up, and their pets taken care of. One who volunteered at the women’s shelter, and made regular visits to the local retirement centers to help them deal with the digital age. She has made service part of her everyday life, while not shying from the fact that she is a transgendered female. As a result, she has reached people that I would never be able to reach, softening their hearts towards the rest of us.
“She will tell you that her courage to love ferociously comes from the love and support of her husband, the man she calls her hero. He has supported her emotionally and morally, and is a place of refuge she can run to when life gets tough. The funny thing is, when you talk to him, that’s what he says about her — she’s his angel, and she transformed his life, by helping him overcome verbal abuse that just about did him in. To first hear her talk, she sounds like the antithesis of the modern liberated woman; she idolizes her husband. Yet what has happened is their love for each other liberated each of them from their own personal prisons.
“Then there’s their story, the book “Cruiser Lake”. Not only did it spend a little time on the NYT bestseller list, but also many credit this book as one of the catalysts that led to the Boy Scouts of America dropping their policies against LGBT members and leaders early this year.
“One of the most unique ways they have served my community is their aggressive search for and adoption of children who are not only without a family, but are transgendered or intersexed. I understand that the kids will be speaking later, so I won’t steal their thunder.
“Just one more thing: we all need to say a big “thank you” to Alan’s sister Charlene, who turned his heart to be open to our people. Without her, Alan and Jocelyn never would have happened.”
“I just planted the seed, Alan kept it nurtured and Jocelyn added moisture and nutrition,” Charlene yelled.
“Are you saying I gave Alan a load of manure?” Jocelyn laughed, and everyone else did too.
Then, Seamus O’Donnell spoke.
“Well, hello everyone. Thanks for giving an old goat a chance to bleat.
“I was very angry and disappointed to hear about Joseph’s decision to change sex. I blamed it on a lot of things. On his mother, for babying him too much as a child. On new-fangled new-age perversion. And of course, I blamed myself for being a drunkard instead of a proper father. Nevertheless, my wife and I considered Joseph dead to us when he told us he was changing into a girl. (That’s what I called what he was doin’.)
“Then one day, I got a phone call from this salesman who wants to take me out to a steak dinner. Well, I never met a piece of dead cow I didn’t like. He meets with me and tells me who he is, and that he’s marrying my Joseph, who now goes by Jocelyn. Well, I almost walked out on him then and there. But Alan, blast it, has this smile that would make a Jew eat bacon. He tells me he wants nothing of me but a chance to take me out to a great restaurant every two months or so. I shouldn’t have agreed to it. But he could sell ice to Eskimos, this guy.
“Then I get a copy of this book, this “Cruiser Lake”. It tells the tale of Alan and JoJo and how they got started. A great story. Those of you who were invited to this exclusive night got a complimentary copy, and if you didn’t read it yet, shame on you. Well, I read it. I laughed at the part where Alan’s pants fell down in the snow because he had no belt.”
Alan smiled and shook his head. I can’t believe I included that part in the book.
“And although it took years — and a lot of great steak dinners — my heart started to melt from its deep freeze. It took a while; too long, dang it. Nine months ago I finally agree to meet JoJo. I didn’t want to love her. She took my Joe away from me. But I couldn’t help to fall in love with her. And now my wife — JoJo’s mother — is reconciling to our daughter too. I told JoJo that I was sorry I wasn’t there for her for so long, even made a comment about how I wish I could have given her away to Alan. And from that comment, here we all are.
“I offered to use some of my dry cleaning riches to bless them. I found the owner of that cabin up by Red Mountain, and proposed to JoJo and Alan that I buy it and give it to them as a gift — you know, so they can go there whenever they want to and reminisce. I’ll let them tell you their answer.”
Both Alan and Jocelyn cupped their palms to frame their lips and yelled, “Hell no!” Laughter filled the hall.
“Lastly, Alan, JoJo: I want to thank you for the gifts of Haley and Jake. We had only one child; with that child being female now and taking on Alan’s name, our dream of grandchildren — and someone to carry on the family name — seemed lost. With their adoption, we have grandkids. With their adopted name of O’Donnell, we continue to have a legacy…” At this point, Seamus had to stop and compose himself.
Haley’s was short and sweet. “My name is Haley O’Donnell. I am a transgender female. I am proud of who I am, and I know my Mom and Dad will always love me and always be proud of me. Thank you all for accepting me and my family.”
Jake’s was even shorter. “I’m Jake O’Donnell. I’m inter… intersix? But I’m all boy, and I like baseball and sausage pizza and the Colorado Rockies. Go Rockies!”
Then the dancing started. Jocelyn cried when her father danced with her. Alan swept Katie O’Donnell off her feet. And the anniversary couple danced to their signature song: Joe Cocker’s “You Are So Beautiful”.
The deejay continued to play songs, and people continued to dance. Alan and Jocelyn were now sitting down in a warped circle of chairs, surrounded by family members. Many significant conversations occurred simultaneously….
Katie O’ Donnell watched Seamus dance with Haley. She then felt a tap on her shoulder.
“Mrs. O’Donnell? Jocelyn’s mother? I’m Phoebe Sarkisian, Alan’s mother.”
“Oh! Pleased to meet you, Phoebe! Seamus has told me so much about Alan. And I feel like I know him so much, reading ‘Cruiser Lake’. You did a good job of raising that young man; you’re obviously a good mother. I’m hoping to get to know him better; I’m kind of the ‘last straggler’ to come around and join the family.”
“How’s that going for you, by the way?” Phoebe never was one to mince words.
“It’s… oh… I’m sorry. You wouldn’t understand.”
“Try me, dear. I’ll bet we have more in common than you think.”
“Oh… it’s…” She sighed. “Everyone here treats all of this so normal, as if they’re not bothered by it at all. They all know JoJo used to be a man. It’s as if her now being female is the most natural thing.”
“They only asked people who are accepting of them. This whole shindig is an ‘invitation only’ affair.”
“Why can’t I feel the same way? I want a relationship with her… why does my heart still ache about this?”
“Just because you gained a fantastic daughter doesn’t mean that you didn’t lose a son. You sound like you’re still grieving.”
“I think I’ve still been holding on to hope that one day Joseph will ‘see the light’ and come to his senses… this ceremony kind of seals it for me; that day will never happen.”
Phoebe smiled. “Is that really such a bad thing? Look how happy she is. I know my Alan has never been happier; definitely not with Zelda and Brunhilda.”
“Who…?”
“The two witches he was married to previously.”
Katie laughed. “I know my child is happier than she’s ever been. I know it. And there’s no way I would magically make her male again if it meant being as unhappy as he was then. It’s just… sex changing goes against what I’ve been taught, what I believe.”
“Are you a Christian? I am.”
“Yes. ….You are? How did you deal with this? Does your church believe that homosexuality and transsexualism is okay with God?”
“No. They don’t. And believe you me, when I go to church every week there’s always someone who’s praying that my son will “repent” and avoid hell.”
“That’s what scares me to death,” Katie shook. “I’m afraid Joseph — JoJo — will go to hell if she stays this way. That’s what my pastor teaches.”
“Hm. I’ve done some reading of the good book, and I’ve drawn a different conclusion. Do you ever sin, Katie?”
“Every day, Phoebe. If getting angry, or getting fearful, or oversleeping is sin — and often they are, I believe — then I do daily. But I pray for God to forgive me.”
“Gluttony is a sin, per the Bible. Yet, despite my repeated trials to avoid it, here I am, a fatso at eighty-four. And I pray for forgiveness daily, and for grace. Yet still this is so. So are we going to hell?”
“No! The whole deal with forgiveness is that we all need it! There’s only one sin that I’ve heard is unforgivable — the ‘blaspheming of the Spirit’, whatever that is.”
“That’s where you take something God did, and say the devil did it. That’s not what Jocelyn’s done. And both she and Alan have been daily praying people since that frozen lake episode. Is changing your sex sinning? I don’t think so, not anymore. But even if it is, since it’s not ‘unforgivable’, then I think JoJo’s graveyard elevator is going up, not down. It’s not our job to police our kid’s virtues and sins, anyway. Our job, ‘ccording to the book, is to love. Love thy neighbor as thyself. So that’s what I do with Alan and Jocelyn and my grandkids.”
“I… I think I could do that! I could look at it that way! I can just love her, no matter what I’ve believed about her ‘condition’. Love her - unconditionally, as they say.”
“You sure are your daughter’s Momma, ‘as they say’,” Phoebe laughed. “My job is to love. And I do love my job, especially when I get to take care of Haley and Jake, like I’m doing this week.”
“I would love to start being a part of their lives,” yearned Katie.
“Hmm… I have a proposal,” twinkled Phoebe.
“Mom,” Haley gloomed, “I think Marco’s gonna break up with me. Ashley just texted me that he was with another girl at the theater tonight.”
“Oh, baby. I’m so sorry,” cooed Jocelyn. “Are you worried that he’s leaving because of your past?”
“You mean, me being born a boy? No. I think it’s because I… I wouldn’t…”
“…You wouldn’t give him a blow job?”
“MOM!... Yeah. Something like that.”
“Haley. You deserve better than a guy who would drop you just because you won’t ‘put out’. I’m proud of you for standing your ground there.”
“Mom, I don’t think I’ll ever find the right guy. I don’t know if guys like Dad exist anymore. I hear all the things you say about him, and they’re all true. You are so lucky.”
“Oh honey. At sixteen, every thing seems so earth-shatteringly important and final. You know I didn’t find love until I was thirty-three. And you’re right, your Dad is all those things I say… and part of the reason he is, is because I say them.”
“Huh?”
“Haley, your Dad lives and dies with the words told to him. That’s why I’m so insistent that you and Jake speak only with respect to him. When I tell him how good he is, it gives him the strength to actually be that good. That’s why I do so every day, whether I feel like it or not. Words of caring and affirmation are his ‘love language’ — how I can best show my love to him. And you know what? When I take care of that need for him, he more than takes care of my needs.”
“So… the best way for me to fall in love is to talk to guys about how good they are?”
“Um, no. But it may be a way you can keep a guy who you find is ‘the one’. But everyone has a different love language. Don’t worry about what to do to attract a boyfriend. Focus on being loving, giving, kind, and compassionate — and happy, in spite of not having a steady. You should attract more boys — quality ones — than sugar does ants.”
Jake stomped over to his father and plopped on the chair next to him, arms folded, scowling-faced. Alan had seen this before.
“What’s gotten under your skin, sport?”
“Dad… WHY didn’t you take that cabin from Grandpa Seamus? We could ‘a gone ice fishing, and wolf killin’, like you and Mom did!”
“Jake… your Mom almost died in that cabin, twice. No thanks, that’s a memory I won’t return to. But… now that we have our own scout troop, I see no reason why we can’t arrange a winter ice fishing trip; maybe even a survival course, when you’re older.”
“REALLY? Cool! When do we leave?”
“Whoa there, young Jeremiah Johnson! First things first. How are you on your knots?”
“Oh. Um… I need lots more practice.”
“First things first. Get your knots down.”
Haley was sitting alone, still upset about Marco. Mom sure is encouraging ... but I don't think she knows how kids are, or how dating is, right now in the modern world.
"Hey there, lil' sis" two voices rang in unison.
"Alexis! Aleisha! I thought you guys had already left!"
"Nope," smiled Aleisha. "We kinda heard that our young step-sister was being mistreated by a boy, so we went into 'crisis recovery' mode."
"Boys are our specialty. We've both been through good and bad relationships. You want to talk about it? We got an extra large caramel frozen latte; your favorite, right? And three straws," chirped Alexis.
Haley's spirits started to rise a little. "That ... sounds exactly like what I need right now."
“Jocelyn, Alan,” announced Phoebe Sarkisian, “with your permission, I’m going to have Seamus and Katie over for a few days, during the week I’m taking care of Haley and Jake. That way they can start a grandparent — grandchild relationship together. It was Katie’s idea.”
The anniversary couple looked at each other with surprise. “Sure. Both the kids have been eager, yet nervous, about getting to know them,” said Jocelyn.
“I’ll be there to make sure it goes smoothly. There’s plenty of room in the old house for all of us.”
“We’ll run it by Jake and Haley, but I’m betting there will be no problem. Mom — thanks. You’re my favorite mother, did you know that?” Alan smiled the famous Sarkisian smile.
“You only say that because you like my stuffed grape leaves and souvlaki, you little rascal,” Phoebe beamed back.
Towards the end of the evening, when most of the guests had left, Alan and Jocelyn talked with their kids before leaving them with Seamus, Katie and Phoebe.
“Jake, you behave at Grandma’s, OK? We’ll be back in seven days.”
“Okaaay, Mom.”
“Jake, now, I mean it! Obey each of your grandparents, or there will be punishment when we get back!”
“Like, I’ll have ta chop firewood?” Jake would love that. Anything outdoors.
“No. I was thinking more along the lines of… book reports.”
“WHAT? Like, on top of my school stuff?”
“Yes. And if it’s not good, you’ll read another, and do another report, until it’s satisfactory.”
“No way! I promise I’ll be good!”
“We’ll see. I love you, my little man.”
Five feet away:
“Haley, you honor your grandparents like you honor us, got it?”
“Yea, Dad. No problem.”
“No talking back, and pay attention to them; don’t be rude and read your texts when they’re talking to you.”
“I don’t do that anyway.”
“Honey… yes you do.”
“Dad, that’s just the way girls my age are.”
“I know. That’s why I’ve been considering dropping texting from your phone plan.”
“WHA… no. You wouldn’t!”
“I will. Unless your grandparents say that you obeyed them and always — ALWAYS — listened to them when they talked to you.”
“Dad… maybe we better put up my phone while you’re gone. I don’t think I’m strong enough.”
“Not a bad idea, kiddo. Remember I love you so much, okay?”
Alan and Jocelyn finally got back up to their suite at the Marriott.
“Oh GOD, Alan! What a dream of a day!”
“It was pretty great, wasn’t it? Your dad did so well in his speech.”
“You mean Daddy.” She sighed. “He let me call him Daddy.” She took off her dress.
“Wow. Big step for him. Big dream come true for you, huh?” He untied his shoes.
“Alan, of all the big sales awards you’ve won, of all the accounts you’ve landed, winning my father over is the most impressive — and most meaningful to me — job you’ve ever done,” as she removed her makeup.
“You are the key to my success. Wherever I go, whatever I do, I hear your voice encouraging me, reminding me of what I’ve done, of who I can be, and that you love me no matter what. Do you know that your words are still like concentrated life to me?”
“Well for my part, I still find myself amazed at the man who loved me when all others rejected me… and who risked his life for mine,” she yelled from the bathroom.
“Honey, face it. We were made for each other.” He took off his cummerbund and tie, and started to unbutton his shirt.
She walked back in to the bedroom in the white bathrobe supplied by the hotel. “If we’re going to make it on the flight to Cancun in the morning, we better get to sleep.”
“Aw,” he replied. “I know we’re both tired, but I was still kinda hoping…”
“See, that’s the problem, Alan. Today was so exciting for me I won’t be able to get to sleep. Not without something to… relax me…” she slid the bathrobe off, showing all of her glorious post-op womanhood, wearing nothing but a little perfume. “Come to bed with me, my Eagle Scout hero. Let’s start a fire.”
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of these characters to any actual person living or dead is coincidental.
Thanks to Sephrena Lynn Miller for a quick first read!
Thanks to the "BCTS Closeteers" - especially Jana - for help with the pic!
If you've gotten this far, please leave a comment! (Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!)
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
My entry in the double dip contest.
"My God. A criminal. She’s a damn criminal! What am I, a magnet for psychos?"
Cassie Brock sat in her living room staring at her computer, at the results of her google search. It told of Vanessa M, who'd been sent to jail for stealing from - and abusing - a frail Alzheimer's patient she'd been hired to care for. That was 3 years ago; a 2.5-year sentence means she just got out of prison recently. Cassie shook her head as she contemplated what could have happened if she’d not done this online background check. Does her probation officer know she’s been looking for caregiving work again?
Now she rubbed her eyelids and groaned. She'd completed four interviews today looking for someone to care for JImbo, and none would do. Two were oddballs that just left her uneasy; her gut said "keep away". One looked competent, but wanted way too much money. This last lady seemed secretive and insincere, and her google search just showed why.
Ms. Brock felt like crying. She couldn't afford to do Jimbo's care herself, not and work a full time job too. So that meant possibly going jobless. I have some savings, maybe enough for only four months - then it's the poorhouse. She sighed and shook her head. Okay, that's enough of this for one day. The sun will be down in the next hour. Time to pack it in for the night. She went to the front of her apartment to lock the bolt. As soon as she got there, a sharp rap-rap-rap-rap on the door made her jump and squeak in surprise. The peephole revealed a young woman waiting on the front stoop; there was something off about her appearance, something Cassie couldn't put her finger on. She opened the door. "Hello, can I help you?"
The girl smiled nervously. "Hi. Is this ... Are you the lady who put the ad on Craigslist? About needing a caregiver? I wanted to inquire about it, unless you've already filled the position."
Cassie frowned. "I asked persons interested to call. Like, on the phone. NOT to just show up at my place! How did you get my home address?"
"Um," the girl stammered, "I ... I hope I come off a little ... a little better in person. I thought you'd hang up on me if I called. So I did a search for your address based on your phone number, and got this place."
"You're pretty young! What are you, 15?"
"No, ma'am. I'm 18. I just graduated from Roosevelt High. I'm Leesa ... Leesa Kazda. "
The older woman sighed. She was so tired, and ready to call it a night. But this girl seemed sincere, and maybe a little desperate. Probably the last thing she needed was a door shut in her face. "Hello, Leesa. I'm Cassie; call me Ms. Brock. Okay. Come in." I'll let her down easily, give her a consolation hug and send her on her way.
Cassie sat on the recliner in the living room, trying to assess this young girl; she wore jeans and a pretty pink blouse. Her blonde hair was big in volume, more so than most young women wore these days. Anxiously sitting on the edge of the couch cushion, she seemed to hold her breath, waiting for Cassie to break the silence.
"So, Leesa. I suspect you've never had any professional caregiving experience before. I need -"
"I have - excuse my interruption, Ms. Brock - I have a lot of practical experience. For the last 2 years I helped my family take care of my grandma who had advanced heart failure. She was bedridden the last 5 months of her life, so she needed around the clock care. I took the mid-evening to morning shift, so to speak, and my Mom and my Aunt Linda took her during the day. We kept her in pretty good shape until she caught pneumonia this spring; she passed at home with hospice helping us keep her out of distress. Does that help?"
Cassie looked at Leesa with a raised eyebrow. "Okay - but still, that's not necessarily the same as professional training. You're not bonded, right?"
Leesa turned deep red in her face. "I don't know exactly what that means?"
"Never mind. I need help with my ex-husband. He has terminal brain cancer - you know, like the Governor was just diagnosed with? Hospice is on his case too. They provide nurse visits, medicines, equipment and even bathing once a week. But the rest of his care is up to me. He's almost at that bedridden state you mentioned. He's getting more confused, but worsening head pain seems to be the biggest issue. Have you handled a person with severe pain before?"
"N -no," the girl replied. "But I can give medicines. Can he ... um ... swallow?"
"So far; though his doc says he may lose even that ability before he dies. He's got less than 3 months, probably."
"Oh, I'm so sorry. Can he still use a toilet, or is he in diaper briefs?"
Wow, thought Cassie. She's asking questions like she really knows her way around a dying-person-situation. "He can still tell when he needs to go, but getting to the toilet is becoming an issue. Hospice is bringing over a bedside commode to help."
"How big is he, if I can ask? I - I mean, how much -"
"6 feet tall; about 150 pounds. He's lost a lot of weight recently as his appetite has dropped. Leesa - do you have references?"
"Just my Mom and Aunt. But they'll be happy to vouch for my work."
"I can't pay for a full time position; money is tight. I'd need you half a day for 6 days a week; or maybe if my work will be flexible, I could schedule you for 3 full days a week. And the first two weeks would be probationary; I'd let you go if your work wasn't up to par. Do you have any special talents or abilities that might help your work?"
Leesa's face lit up with a hopeful smile. "I play the guitar and sing. I was doing it two Fridays a month this last year at that new coffeehouse downtown. They liked me, but thought my material was too upbeat and serene for all the pseudo-goths and emo types that frequent there. Has he - I mean your ex-husband - had any music therapy?"
"I'm still smiling about you using the term 'pseudo-goth'. That's a new one for me," Cassie laughed.
"Um, Ms. Brock. There's another special thing about me that may be helpful for you. Instead of working for just 24 hours a week and paying me money, how about if I did the work full time for 6 days a week, and you reimbursed me by allowing me to have ... um ... room and board here in your house? I mean, for as long as he's still with us."
Cassie sat with her mouth agape, while Leesa sat still with a pensive face and holding her breath.
"Wow, Leesa. That is quite an offer, but one that would require a super huge amount of trust on my part. I'm not sure I'm comfortable with that suggestion. Why in the world would you work that much just for food? Don't you have a place you live already?"
Leesa was now visibly flushed, with red eyes. "No ma'am. Not as of yesterday. I'm officially homeless."
Okay, Cassie mused. I knew this sounded too good to be true. Let's see the other shoe drop now. "Where were you living before yesterday?"
"Um. With Mom and Dad ... um ... I mean my step-dad."
"So, step-dad kicked you out, I presume. Drugs? Partying all night? Bringing strange boys home? You might as well tell me, because if you were to work for me I'd find out beforehand."
"No ma'am! I have been a saint. No drugs ever, no smoking ever, no sleeping around. I haven't even been properly kissed."
"Have you been in jail? In juvie?"
"No ma'am." Leesa now hung her head to look at the floor. Her next words came out in a whisper. "It's something completely legal, but ... it may be a deal-breaker for you. It sure was for my step-dad. It even was for Uncle Walt, which is why I can't live at Aunt Linda's."
Leesa went silent then. Almost a minute passed before Cassie blurted "Out with it, kiddo! What is this horrible secret?"
"I'm like ... Caitlyn. Jenner."
Cassie's eyes squinted. "You're transsexual?"
"I, um, prefer transgender," replied Leesa, still staring at the floor. "This is going to be ... unacceptable, I can tell. I need to just leave, probably ..."
"How long have you been this way?"
"Since I was a little kid. I've always known. But I didn't come out to anyone until I was 16. Mom wasn't super happy about it, and still isn't. But she didn't reject me. Frank - my step-dad - he's another story. I was forbidden to dress or do anything feminine while I still lived under his roof." Leesa huffed with frustration. "His roof. It was Mom's house too, but he refused to budge and she wouldn't oppose him. Finally after graduation, I said I was going to live my life my way. His answer was the usual -"
"Not under my roof?" offered Cassie.
Leesa nodded. "So now I'm out of there, with a few outfits I've secretly accumulated over the months. I'm living in my Ford Fiesta, with no job and accessing the internet at the library. That's where I was skimming through Craigslist and found your post. I can't tell you the hope it raised in my heart; I can't do many things, but I know I can do this! You need help, and more than just 3 days a week. I need a new roof over my head. Please, please consider giving me a chance!"
Cassie stared at Leesa through a persistent squint, and remained quiet except for an occasional "Hmmm ..."
The teenager's hopeful smile slowly fell into a slight frown. "You're worried about me being transgender, aren't you."
"I don't know, honey. I've never been around one - a transgender - before. Not knowingly, anyway. Are you, like, a militant one? Am I going to be expected to host pride meetings in my house, put rainbow flags in my yard? Are you dating anyone? I can't open up my home to anyone right now, unless they're here to help me and Jimbo. You'll need more than just a few outfits, too. Do you see doctors? Do you even have essentials to live like a toothbrush, a hairbrush, or - WAIT. That's it!"
"What?" Leesa whispered. "What's what?"
"Your hair. It's a wig, isn't it?"
The girl sadly nodded her head. Just another reminder of her inauthenticy as a woman.
"Hey, honey. Don't be sad. It's a really good one; took me a while to realize it. Something – one thing - was bugging me about you, and that's it. Now that I’ve found that one thing, I think I can relax, ‘cause I don’t feel anything else “off” about you. Wearing a wig is a lot better than me finding your picture on the Crimestoppers website."
"Ms. Brock - I think I can contact my Mom and have her sneak me some money to buy some basic scrubs to work in. I've got my toiletries in a bag in my Fiesta. I don't date anyone; the few friends I have are all on social media, and I'll not make you or your home here accessible on that. In all the questions you've had, you haven't mentioned my 'Trans' status. Are ... are you OK with me being ... this way?"
Cassie slightly smiled. "That's of no concern to me, honey. I just need someone who is honest, smart, willing to work, willing to actually care with her heart and hands and her soul, willing to sacrifice a portion of her life just like I am. Jimbo really needs this."
"I can work hard to try to do all of that!" said Leesa. "So ... you're considering me?"
"Yes, kiddo. Considering. Not committing yet. Let's have you meet Jimbo and see what he thinks."
Cassie walked to the first door past her master bedroom and carefully grasped the doorknob. She turned towards Leesa and put one finger to her lips in a silent "shhh" sign. She turned the knob ever so carefully, and the two entered. The room was dark except for a glow from a tiny night light in the corner. A black shroud – or was it a blanket? – had been attached to the wall. Leesa realized the fabric was there to cover a window, so no outside sun could get in. There was a queen size bed in the corner; it held a thin bald man whose eyes were squinted shut. Biker tattoos graced his arms and neck, though they appeared less powerful on his loose-hanging skin. He kept one palm on his forehead as his face seemed stuck in an uncomfortable grimace.
“Jimbo. Are you awake? Jimbo – wake up. There’s someone here to see you,” whispered Cassie as she approached the bed.
“I don’t wanna see n’body. No.”
“His speech is starting to get a little slurred. That’s from the tumor,” Cassie side-spoke to Leesa.
“He’s so skinny – but why is his face so swollen?” the teenager asked.
“Side effect of the steroids. He has to take them or he’d be in even more pain, and likely having uncontrolled seizures – at least, that’s what the doc tells me.”
“I said, no. I dun wanna see n’body!”
Cassie set her jaw. “Sorry, buddy. I cannot take care of you alone anymore. I need help. Now here’s someone who’s applying for the position. You and I talked about this a few days ago. Now just give this girl a chance. Her name is Leesa.”
“Hello, Mr. -?” Leesa glanced at Cassie.
“Just call him Jimbo, honey.”
“Mr. Jimbo, sir. It’s a pleasure to meet you. I’m Leesa. Are you needing anything right now?”
The man in the bed growled, “Need you to leave me ‘lone. Both o’ you. Unless y’ got something to kill me so I can die ‘n get this ov’r with.”
“Do you need some pain medicine again, Jimbo?” asked Cassie.
“No. I’m a 3 right now. It’s not th’ pain. It’s the waiting to die. Tired of it. Ready for it to be over. Nothin’ t’ live for. Life holds no pleasure. Just pain, ‘r boring, ‘r both. Now leave, plz.”
Cassie turned towards Leesa with a look of forlorn, and a tear welling in one eye. “Okay. We’re going.” She turned and led her young ingénue out into the hall, closing the door behind her. Then she shook her head. “I’m sorry, honey. He’s –“
“He likes classic country music, doesn’t he?” Leesa interrupted. “He has a Waylon and Willie poster on his wall, and I noticed the room was decorated with some spurs, leather, boots, and wood accessories.”
“Yes, he does. Or did, before he got so withdrawn.” Cassie shook her head and stared at the ceiling. “He started on antidepressants last week, but they say it takes 4 to 6 weeks for them to kick in completely. I haven’t noticed a diff - … hello? Where … ?” She now realized that as she’d been talking, the young girl had left the area.
She walked to her front door, which was partially opened – and met Leesa coming back in from the outside She held a scratched- but-intact acoustic guitar in her left hand.
“Let me try something,” the teen whispered as she walked past Cassie and back into Jimbo’s room. There was no seat in the room, so she sat on the floor in a lotus pose as she held her guitar in her lap. “Hey there, Mr. Jimbo. You’re a cowboy, aren’t you?” she breathed.
Jimbo sighed. “Always w’nted t’ be one. Nev’r did it. Failed again. Why hvn’t you left?”
Instead of speaking, Leeza quietly began strumming on her instrument. After a couple of strums, she began to sing , barely audibly.
Mommas, don’t let your babies grow up to be cowboys
Don’t let ‘em pick guitars or drive them old trucks
Let ‘em be doctors and lawyers and such
Mommas, don’t let your babies grow up to be cowboys
‘Cause they’ll never stay home and they’re always alone
Even with someone they love.
Leesa then changed chords to prepare for the first verse, but before she could sing, Jimbo chimed in!
Cowboys ain’t easy t’ love and they’re harder t’ hold
They’d rather give y’ a song than diamonds ‘r gold
Lonestar belt buckles and old faded Levi’s
And each night begins a new day.
If he – if he …
The man in the bed grimaced again. Was he hurting, or just trying to remember the words? Leesa now sang to complete the verse:
If you don’t understand him, and he don’t die young
Jimbo now rejoined her for the last part
He’ll prob’ly just ride away.
Jimbo and Leesa now both sang the chorus again, this time with more gusto. He still had slurred enunciation, but he obviously didn’t care as he stumbled through the melody. Leesa added harmony as best she could.
Finally the girl on the floor played the last strum of the song. That chord rang and quivered as it slowly faded, leaving nothing but silence. Cassie stood in the doorway, stunned. Jimbo had a trace of a smile on his lips!
“Y’ know any more?” he asked Leesa.
“Sure do,” she smiled.
Just shy of an hour later, Jimbo was exhausted and feel asleep. His hands were now down by his sides, and his face looked more peaceful than his 2nd ex-wife had ever seen, at least in recent weeks.
“How did I do?” Leesa whispered to Cassie.
“Great! Just great.”
“Do I get the job?”
Cassie pursed her lips and squinted. “Come back in the morning and let me see you assist him up in the bed and transferring to the wheelchair. Then I’ll decide.”
“Okay,” Leesa sighed. “Do you mind if I leave my Fiesta in your driveway while I sleep in it?”
“Oops,” Cassie grunted as she slapped her forehead. “I forgot. You live in your car. Just sleep on the couch. I’ll do an internet search on you before I go to bed, and if I find any unsavory thing you’ve lied about or left out, then you’ll leave here ASAP. Understood?”
“Yes ma’am,” the teen nodded enthusiastically.
Cassie’s cell phone rang, jolting her out of deep sleep. She looked at the screen. Don’t recognize that number. Wait, it’s asking if I will accept a video call. A video call at 12:39 AM??
She punched the red phone icon to answer. Now she was looking at two women, both appearing her age or a little older. They were on a split screen, both calling from different locations.
One of the women asked, “Cassie Brock?”
Cassie’s just-opened eyes squinted in distrust. “Who wants to know?”
“I’m Brenda Frazier, Matthew’s mother. I mean, Leesa’s mother. And this is his Aunt Linda, my sister, on the other screen. We’re so sorry to wake you at this ungodly hour, but we couldn’t call earlier.”
“Wait – you mean you got my text earlier, but couldn’t call until now?” Cassie groaned. “Why didn’t you wait until the morning?”
“Both of us have to be secretive about this,” Aunt Linda replied. “Our husbands would get angry – soooo angry! – if they knew we were trying to help him. My Walt is sleeping now; I’m making this call from my coat closet.“
“And I’m out in my garage,” added Brenda. “Frank’s asleep, but he wakes up easy.”
“Okay, wait,” Cassie mumbled, still trying to get fully awake. “We’re all talking about Leesa Kazda, right? A young transsex- dang it, transgender – girl?”
“That’s how he chooses to refer to himself now, yes,” replied Brenda. “His legal name is Matthew Kazda. I had him with my first husband. It’s a bit complicated. Are you following all of this so far?”
“Yeah, I think … well, I’m awake now. Might as well have this conversation. How is she – Leesa – as a caregiver?”
Cassie listened as both women on the phone practically gushed about Leesa’s work ethic, professionalism, skill, and caring heart when it came to helping the infirm. They both only had the experience with her grandmother to point to, but they were sure that would translate into Cassie’s present situation. One thing really bugged Cassie, though; they kept referring to her as “Matt” and “him”.
“Ladies, forgive my suspicions,” she finally replied. “If you guys think Leesa – or Matt, or Matthew – is so great, why isn’t she welcome in your homes? I mean, she could be just a toxic rebellious teen that you’re trying to shut out of your lives, and I would help that by having her as a boarder over at my place. Or is it that you’re so disgusted by her being a transgender that you can’t bear to be around her?”
Both women on Cassie’s phone screen were visibly starting to cry now. Brenda, the mother, choked out an answer. “I don’t agree with Matt’s choice, but I’ve wanted to have him and us in family therapy to resolve it. I don’t want him out on the street. But Frank can’t be reasoned with. Neither can my brother-in-law. Both of them have refused even the suggestion of therapy, and neither want Matt in their homes.”
“Brenda. Linda. These homes aren’t ‘their’ homes. They’re your homes too! These guys are driving your kid – your kid – away from you! Why don’t you stand strong? Are they abusing you? What’s this hold that they have over you that you would give up your own flesh and blood?”
For a minute there was nothing but silence as both Brenda and Linda fought away tears. Finally, the aunt spoke. “Please hire him, Cassie. He’s an excellent caregiver. And it will help us to know that he has a place to stay. I’m sorry we can’t be the strong women we ought to be in this situation. But it would mean possibly losing our marriages.”
“Yeah, well … I’ve lost a marriage over standing for my principles before. And you know what? Good riddance.” Cassie rolled her eyes at the irony. Yet even though I kicked Jimbo out, here I am taking care of him again.
“I’ll have Leesa – Leesa, not Matt – call you guys with my decision later today. Right now, I have GOT to get some sleep. Goodnight.” Cassie turned off her phone – and muted the ringer.
Less than 5 hours after the video call, Cassie and Leesa were up tending to Jimbo. Cassie mainly watched as her young potential hire gave him an in-bed washcloth bath. Then Leesa changed the bed linens while Jimbo was still in bed – a difficult task that she pulled off with gentleness and efficiency. Finally, she prepared and slowly fed the dying man some oatmeal, using small portions and encouraging him to swallow carefully. Cassie smiled.
“I approve. Now, I typed up a basic contract last night. 6 days/48 hours a week, and you can stay in the 3rd bedroom. Meals included. Your specific duties are lined out in the contract, but I may need your help with new ones as Jimbo gets worse.”
“YAY!!” cried Leesa. “Thank you so much, Ms. Brock. I swear I’ll do right by you and Jimbo.”
Cassie's face suddenly turned stern and serious. “Leesa, I guarantee you’ll do us right, or there will be hell to pay. The morphine drops he sometimes needs? You will keep a strict diary of when and how much you gave him, like I showed you. If I have a good suspicion you’ve dipped into it yourself, then you’re outta here. You will agree to give me a urine sample any time I request, and if there are narcotics in your pee, I’ll call the cops. You will attend to him promptly when he calls; if there’s a problem, you call me ASAP. I have security cameras all around the house; don’t worry, I’ve turned them off in your bedroom and the guest bath. Other than that, I’ll be watching. No others allowed inside, and no leaving the apartment during the day unless I specifically allow it. No exceptions; it’s my way or the highway. Do you agree, or not?”
Sobered but resolute, Leesa nodded with vigor. “Yes ma’am. I will follow the rules to the letter.”
With that, Cassie left for her work.
Later that morning Leesa called Cassie.
“Ms. Brock – you said no one allowed inside. But this guy is at the door saying he had an appointment to see Jimbo, and that you have approved it?! He says his name is Reverend Phillips, and-“
“OOPS! Well, nuts,” said Cassie. “Yeah, he’s the chaplain from hospice, here to make a one-time visit. I forgot, you WILL need to let the hospice people in – even the ‘spiritual support’ staff. He’s okay to enter, Leesa. I don’t know if he’ll be okay after meeting with our ‘patient’ – Jimbo always hated church types.”
Leesa opened the door for the middle aged man with a salt-and-pepper beard and balding head. He had kind eyes and a smile as wide as the Mississippi river. His name tag said “Chaplain” but he wore no religious garb – he had on a golf shirt and jeans. “It’s good to meet you, Miss … ?”
“Leesa.” She stood with arms crossed, refusing to shake his outstretched hand.
“Miss Leesa. I know that Ms. Brock was looking for a part-time caregiver; are you the one she hired?”
“Yes.”
“That’s great!” Rev. Phillips sensed the cold shoulder she was giving him. “You can call me Trevor, by the way. Ah … how are things with Jimbo?”
“Sir, just do whatever you came to do, please. You want to see him, so follow me.”
“Okay,” said the disappointed chaplain. He trailed Leesa as she walked down the hall, her eyes narrow with suspicion, and arms still folded. I’ve learned to hate church types too, she thought.
She approached the bed and touched her patient’s arm. “Hey, Jimbo. There’s someone here to see you. He’s a Reverend from the hospice.”
Rev. Phillips appeared beside Leesa at the bedside. “Hey there, sir. You can call me Trevor. How are you feeling?”
Jimbo was lying on his side, facing the far wall, back turned towards them. He made no attempt to face his new visitor, but he did respond with a gruff voice. “Rev’rnd, huh? You here t’ preach t’ me? Try’n t’ save my soul, put anoth’r notch on your belt? Or are y’ here to read me th’ last rites?”
Rev. Phillips laughed slightly as he knelt by the bed, coming down to Jimbo’s level. “I’m not catholic, so I don’t do “last rites”. If you want them, I can get a priest to visit you. And I’m not here to proselytize. I’m here if you have any questions, or we can just shoot the breeze, if you’d like.”
“Questions? What kinda questions would I have f’r a preacher?”
“Spiritual questions. About God, or anything. Do you believe in a god? And by the way, if the answer is 'no', that’s OK with me.”
“It is? What kinda stupid preacher are you?” Jimbo spat. “Of course I b’lieve in God! Not that it does me any good!”
“Why do you say that?”
Jimbo still refused to turn towards Trevor. “Look. I have lied, ‘n stole, ‘n cheated all my life. Drove away all good people ‘n family. Pretty sure that’s why God allowed me to get cancer. So I deserve t’ die, and I will, at just 48 years old. And I know my ship ain’t comin’ in.”
“You mean, you think you’re –“
“Goin’ t’ hell. I’m GOIN’ T’ HELL. An’ there ain’t no way outta it.”
Leesa stood silent in the corner, eyes beginning to fill with tears. She had never seen someone so forlorn, so emotionally lost as the man on the bed.
Trevor carefully placed his hand on Jimbo’s shoulder. “Well, if there’s no way out of it, then you’ll have company because I’ll be going to hell with you.”
“And why th’ hell would you say that.”
“Look, Jimbo. I was a wild child until age 26. I did some crap that was horrible. Now, I turned around 19 years ago … but I can’t undo all the harm I did before then. So if there’s a hell, I deserve it as much as you. But let me ask: do you think God can forgive you?”
“Doesn’t matter. He shouldn’t f’rgive me, not the way I turned out.”
“Jimbo … I think He will. I think He wants to. I believe He forgave me. That’s the only reason I’ve been able to go on. Do you think you can forgive yourself?”
“I … D’SERVE … T’ GO … T’ HELL. Now that’s the long ‘n short of it!”
“Well … can you at least forgive me?” Trevor whispered.
This caused Jimbo to finally turn over in bed. He stared at Trevor with a look of confusion mixed with a little.anger.
The Rev continued. “I’m betting that you’ve been judged, rejected, condemned, and looked down on by religious folks like me. And I’m sorry, Jimbo. I’m sorry for the way that we holier-than-thou hypocrites have treated you. I ask you to forgive me – to forgive us – for all the crap we put you through. Can you find it in your heart to tell me you forgive me?”
There was silence in the room for what seemed like forever as the two men held each other’s gaze intently. Jimbo still looked confused and angry … but finally choked out “Okay. I forgive you. Only ‘cause y’ said y’ were sorry.”
“Thank you, sir,” said the Reverend with a kind smile. “Jimbo. God knows you’re sorry too. Ask him to forgive you. He’ll do it.”
Jimbo was shaking. “God … f’rgive me, please. Please f’rgive me. I’m sorry. So so sorry. F’r all of it.” He then began to weep. So did Trevor and Leesa, just more quietly.
“Now, buddy,” Trevor whispered, “Forgive yourself.”
“Thanks, Reverend. That – what you did in there – seemed to really help him,” Leesa said with an open smile.
“Just doing my job, Miss,” said Trevor, smiling back. “You know, if there are any issues that you or Ms. Cassie are dealing with over this – or about anything – I’ll be happy to be an open ear.”
“Aw, and just when I was starting to trust you a little,” smirked Leesa. “You’re here to help Jimbo, remember? Not to counsel - or seduce - the caregivers.”
This jab fazed Trevor not one iota. “If I take care of you, then I’m helping take care of him. Without you two, everything falls apart. So let Cassie know that. And call if any of the three of you have any issues to talk over. If I can’t help, I can get you someone who will.”
The chaplain left, and Leesa went back to check on her charge. “Need anything, Jimbo?”
“No. Maybe. Don’t know. Can … y’ just play some guitar f’r me?”
She did so right away, and for the next hour.
The hospice equipment manager brought a bedside commode later that day. Ninety minutes later, Jimbo asked Leesa to help him get to it from the bed; for the first time in 2 days, he felt the need to have a bowel movement.
Leesa pulled him to where he was sitting on the side of the bed. She positioned the commode seat right next to him. Then doing as her mother taught her, she leaned into Jimbo with a frontal hug, pulled him towards her until their center of balance was leaning her way, and stood. He held onto her as best he could.
“Now pivot,,” she said. “Turn to your left. Put your left foot forward … that’s it … and your right one behind you … “
“I’m slipp’n … gonna fall!” he cried.
“Hang on, I’ve got you – we’re there! Now just sit down slowly –“
But Jimbo panicked, and started flailing and grabbing at her shirt and arms. She grunted, and guided him down as best she could; he landed with a THUMP on the toilet seat.
She exhaled and whistled to note the close call with disaster. “Hey, Mr. Jim. Are you hurt?”
“Wha … what th’ hell is this?”
In Jimbo’s right hand was a huge mass of long blonde hair.
Leesa reached up to her scalp, and felt the near military cut of brown bristles her stepfather always insisted on. “OMIGOD!”
Jimbo held the coif up weakly and pointed at her. “Who – or what th’ hell are y’? Are y’ a man??”
She grabbed her wig from him and ran out of the room bawling.
Leesa returned in a few minutes, wig back in place – and with guitar in hand. She was visibly tremulous and upset, but appeared to be back to help. “A-are you done, J-Jimbo? Were you able to have a number 2?”
“Tried, but no. I piss’d, tho. Worried. Thought you left f’r good, and I’d be stuck on th’ pot. Tired; need t’ lie down.”
Leesa transferred him back into bed; it went off without a hitch this time. He lay still, looking at her as she stood silently, waiting for him to speak. Finally he did: “Does Cass know?”
“Um … about me, you mean? Yes. I told her last night when she interviewed me.”
“You gay? Do I have t’ worry ‘bout you when y’ cleanin’ my junk?”
“N-no! Absolutely not! I’m only here to help take care of you! That is … if-if you still will allow me to …”
Jimbo coughed a few times; he winced with discomfort as he did so. Then he resumed his stare at his caregiver. “So, y’r a tranny then.”
“I’m a woman, Jimbo. In every way but physically. And one day, that’ll be changed.”
“I need help. Cass needs y’ too. So … even tho trannies ‘r disgustin’ to me, y’ need t’ stay. Ain’t callin’ y’ Leesa no more. What’s y’r real name?
Leesa dropped to her lotus position on the floor, head hanging downward. She appeared to be in deep thought. After less than a minute, she pulled her guitar to her lap and began to strum.
“Mr. Jimbo – are you familiar with Jessie Colter and her biggest hit?”
“Hm. Jess’ Colt’r. Waylon’s wife. Pretty country voice. Sang I’m Not Lisa.”
“Right. Well, I’m going to play that, but I changed the lyrics so listen closely, please.”
She tenderly plucked the guitar strings as she began the ballad.
I’m not Leesa
My name is Matthew
That’s what it says
On my I.D.
But Leesa is me
Leesa cares for you
And I won’t leave you
Unless you send me away.
“Stop. ‘Kay?” Jimbo interrupted.
Leesa halted her playing and singing. This is it; he’s throwing me out, she thought.
“Hey … ah … I f’rgive y’. F’r misleadin’ me. Might as well, I’ve f’rgiven ev’rybody and their dog t’day anyway. So pleaz stay. I’ll still call y’ Leesa.”
Leesa jumped to her feet and grasped his thin hand in both of hers. “Thank you! Thank you so much, Jimbo!”
“Wow. Just … wow, you two.”
Cassie shook her head in wonderment as she talked to Leesa and Jimbo in his bedroom She had come home from work with a little anxiety as to how their day might have gone; this report was a pleasant surprise.
“Not in a million years would I have guessed that you would accept Leesa as a caregiver if you knew she was transgender," Cassie said to her ex-spouse. "Thank God, because the other options were pretty slim.”
“I bet I’m slimmer," Jimbo snorted. "But don’t want any supper. Feel like I’d throw it up. Just want t’ call it a day and go t’ sleep. G’night,” he said, closing his eyes. It was only 6:15 pm.
The two women left the room and walked to the den.
“My God! That was such a huge smile on his face just now,” raved Cassie. “I haven’t seen him beam his choppers like that since our honeymoon, and that was decades ago.”
“I’ve been meaning to ask you about that,” said Leesa. “You two have been divorced – for how long, now?”
“Nineteen years. Our marriage lasted less than two.”
“Do you still love him?”
Cassie glanced a wry sideways smile towards the young girl. “As in, IN love with him? NO. Absolutely not. He slept around, spent all of our money, and was an alcoholic. Still is, in fact; he only cut down on the drinking because he started having trouble swallowing in the last few months. I wouldn’t get back in a romance with him if you held a pistol to my head. He’s long moved on from me, too; he’s had 3 more marriages since I divorced him. Wife #5 just left him in March, right after he got diagnosed with the cancer.”
Leesa’s jaw hung open in bewilderment. “Then … why are YOU … ex-wife #2 … the one who’s taking care of him?”
“Because, honey, no one else would.” Cassie shook her head and sighed. “When Jimbo’s daughter called me to let me know about his condition, I asked if she was going to help him; there was no way he could make it on his own, getting worse every day. She backed off. I also called the more recent ex-wives, his brother, his so-called good friends. No one volunteered, not a bit.
“I know Jimbo’s burned a lot of bridges – and people – in his life. But nobody deserves to die alone, unable to wipe themselves or get to medicine. So I told him I would help. I don’t have the time nor enough money to do it right. But I couldn’t face myself in the mirror each morning knowing I had let him die suffering when I could have given aid.” Ms. Brock laughed. “Go ahead. Tell me I’m a fool, a bleeding-hearted sap for doing this.”
Leesa’s eyes were leaking tears yet again today. “No. You’re an angel sent from heaven. A one in a million. And I am so honored to be helping you now.” She pulled Cassie into a tight hug and kissed her on the cheek.
It was now Saturday morning of Leesa’s first week. She and Cassie had taken care of Jimbo’s needs. Now they were in a home tutoring session:: Cassie was teaching her ingénue the basics of makeup.
“See? Understatement is the way to go. Do too much, and you’re a clown or worse, a drag queen. But right now you look like an attractive girl-next-door type,” Cassie encouraged as they stood at the bathroom mirror.
“Wowww … I never imagined in my deepest hopes that I could be this pretty,” replied Leesa.
The doorbell rang. “How about that, 10:00, right on time,” said Cassie. “Come with me, Leesa; this involves you.”
They went to the front door and Cassie opened it. A balding man with salt-and-pepper beard stood there smiling. “Hello there, Cassie. We meet in person at last!”
“Chaplain / Reverend Trevor Phillips, I presume. That’s way too much name for me; I’ll just call you chap.”
“Call me Trevor, ma’am.” He turned to Leesa. “Hey there, my young troubadour/caregiver. I’ve heard about your calming musical super powers. I’m here because I have a present for you. Do you remember me saying that if I take care of you, then I’m taking care of Jimbo?”
“Yes sir,” Leesa muttered warily.
Cassie put her arm on Leesa’s shoulder. “I had a discussion with your Mom and Aunt the night before I hired you. They needed help. You needed them to get help, in my opinion. Trevor here told me to contact him if I needed anything, so I told him about their dilemma.”
“I usually only counsel our patients and their direct caregivers,” resumed Trevor, “but in this case I was happy to make an exception. I met with both your mother and aunt. And now, your mom is here with me; she wants to talk to you.”
Stepping out from behind Trevor now was Brenda Frazier. She waved. “Hello, Leesa! I’ve missed you.”
“Mom! You – you called me Leesa!"
Mother and daughter embraced with joyful tears of release.
The four of them sat in the den.
Brenda did the majority of the talking at the start. “After your Aunt Linda and I talked with Trevor, we knew what we had to do. I guess we’ve really known what to do before now; I think we were just too scared to put it into action. So Thursday night we both told our husbands that our houses needed to be open to you, and you should be a welcome and loved part of the family once more.”
Leesa’s eyes were wide open; she’d never seen this much resolve in her mother. “How did THAT go over?”
“Not so well with your stepdad, I’m afraid,” the mother sighed. “He’s now kicked ME out, and I believe divorce is unavoidable. But your Uncle Walt? He’s come around. You’re welcome at he and Linda’s now. You can stay there, if you’d like! We could be roommates – she’s taken me in since Frank ejected me.”
“That creep! HE should be the one kicked out!” Leesa fumed.
“Don’t worry; I’m getting a family lawyer on it. I meet with her on Monday. So what do you say? Are we going to stay together at your Aunt’s?”
Leesa looked at Cassie, who smiled back. “Do what you need to, honey. I can tear up the contract and somehow, I’ll find someone else to help.”
“Don’t you dare,” whispered Leesa. She turned to Brenda. “Mom, I can’t wait to be with you again, especially without both of us living in fear of Frank. But I’m badly needed here. I have to help Cassie and Jimbo,“ she turned to her employer and grinned, “or I won’t be able to face myself in the mirror each morning.”
Jimbo’s ex-wife #2 and Leesa were at his bedside. “Time for your medicine drops, mister,” the girl said.
“Wait,” choked out the man on the bed. “Got t’ tell Cass. Need t’ tell her.”
“Tell me what?” said Cassie.
Jimbo’s eyes squinted and he began to weep. Finally he choked out. “Two th’ngs. Thank y’ – so much. Thank y’ for carin’ f’r me. Showin’ me love; tak’n care of me so good. Bring’n me Leesa, and her songs. An’ … an’ …” the weeping started again, but he controlled it once more. “An’ pleaz f’rgive me. I’m sorry I hurt you. Don’ d’serve you. Pleaz f’rgive me – for your sake ‘n mine.”
Cassie’s eyes were wet as she smiled at him. “I already did, dear. A long time ago. But it’s nice to hear you ask me, after 19 years. So, yes – I forgive you, Jimbo. For anything and everything. Forgive me too, because I’m sure I hurt you too.”
Jimbo exhaled. “Whoo. Th’s f’rgivness stuff is ‘xhaustin’. Need’ to go back t’ sleep. Wish I had a Reba song t’ help me snooze …”
“I get the hint, you scalawag,” laughed Leesa as she sat on the floor and positioned her guitar.
You’re gonna see, that sometimes bad is good
We just have to believe, things work out like they should
Life has no guarantees, but always loved by me, you’re gonna be.
If you've gotten this far, please leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the computer screen and tweak your nose!
I have not written in a while. Health and life issues. This idea, though, got in my head and wouldn't let go until I typed it out. Didn't have an editor or a beta reader, so please forgive me for glaring flaws; point them out and I'll correct them.
Thank you for reading!
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INVENTORY
While taking inventory
Of my huge Big Closet
I'm in awe at the volume
Of what I have not read yet
There're so many ensembles
I've tried on and adored
Inspiration strikes: and so I
Take pen in hand (or keyboard)
I wish to honor those who wove
My fav'rite (stories) dresses,
So let me rave a bit 'bout those
Designers (authoresses).
My Brown outfits by Melanie
I cling to with a passion;
"Office" wear for "Reluctant" girls:
It's never out of fashion.
The swimming wear of Elrod
Are always kept in reach;
Just wish he'd give directions
How to get to Bikini Beach!
I use my winged pixie outfit
For Tinkerbell cosplay,
Made by Anesidora U.
(As seen on Last of Fey).
My Bailey's Summer dresses
I wear when weather's steamy.
My favorites are the ones
With the labels "Sweet" and "Dream"y
Silk panties by Angaharad
Are my daily expression,
Each morn when opening the drawer
I always have a fresh one!
Some fitted skirts - oh, so petite!
Producer: Canada's Tels
(I wonder what her full name is;
I'm sure it'd ring a Belle's.)
The brand new shorts by EoF
Have hues greeny and lemony
I dig it so, makes me wonder:
Is Fun really her Enemy?
"Comment" girdles by Stanman
Never fail to give support,
And wear a pink "Team Dot" T-shirt
If you're the giving sort.
A pair of "Andrea Dimaggio's"
Will rock your point of view
If you don't like Italian clothes
Well, wassamatta you?
Wearing too much Lily Langtree
May cause overelatement!
My lilac gown from Nina A.
Should make a strong prom statement.
"In the arms of Morpheus"
THAT'S where I long to be-
I get such an endorphy rush
Donning that hosiery!
Victorian Elsbeth Corsets-
Loved Always and Forever!
Some think that they're Beyond the Pale;
I say, "A Sacrifice? Never!"
My babydolls and nightgowns
Of satin & silk so fine
Karin B. and Tanya A.-
Queens of lingerie design.
If you're a fashion mogul
Whose name i failed to mention,
It doesn't mean your garments failed to
Garner my attention.
So before you wish five octopi
Would crush me with their tentacles,
Please realize I've many faves
Among my unmentionables!
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INCOMPLETE
Please hear me out on this subject
That gets my face quite heated
About those stories partially writ,
Then left long uncompleted.
When verbal "foreplay" gets one's gaze
And to a "passion" draws
Then just before the tale's "climax"
The author then "withdraws"!
When one invests one's time and gaze
It can then quite disgust us
When we realize we're victims of
a "storyius interruptus"!
But cooling off, I realize
That NO writer intends
To only start a right good yarn
Then prematurely end.
A lack of time, a lack of dough,
Work schedules quite absurd
And it's not like we're getting paid
For posting all these words
Our reads and writes must be discreet
And only for our eyes
'Cos if wife/kids/church/boss found out
It'd ruin our personal lives
So when I think of those authors
Humility behooves.
Who's to say I'd done different
If I'd been in their shoes?
There's only one guaranteed way
To avoid a similar fate
It means as I write my next tale
Everyone just has to wait
Until the story's completely writ
Then post en bloc or serially
'Cos if done, even chaptering one by one
Should matter immaterially.
So if it's long between my posts
Your thoughts of me don't diminish
'Cos even though I'm russian
You'll see nothing till I'm finnish.
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INSANE
I know you must be thinking,
"MORE fluffy fluff by **Sigh**?
Where's good stuff like we saw in that
'Hospital' tale - and why
Waste time on junk? Howcome
Do limericks and satire-work
Flow from the same cerebrum
That made 'Visit' (a real tear-jerk)?"
I'll tell ya, gals, one month past,
When I first registered,
T'was to tell one "stuck" story, fast,
And then leave, unperturbed.
Then on a whim I entered in
To "Reconciliation";
And I am floored from what arose
From my imagination!
I ne'er expected that writing here
Would more than just amuse me;
I'm now beset by tales in head
And passions that have "mused" me!
And NOW... I yearn to create more
than sophomoric pap
If my stories are "meh, just OK"
I'll appreciate (feel like) crap.
So boning up, I am, on
My P.O.V.'s and grammars
In hopes my future novelettes
Might be some real handslammers!
And lately I've become impressed
(Advice that I've been heeding),
In order to write with success
I should do much more READING!
Well read I have, reading I am,
And reading I'll BE doing,
So one day I may on your brain
Pleasure be imbuing.
Meanwhiles, I write these dippy things
To keep you all a-sufferin'
I know, they make you moan and groan
And reach to take some Bufferin.
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All the above property of Sigh. Please do not reproduce without her permission. Poor preparation is a perfect path to panic. Peace out.
My entry in the Reader Retention contest.
Just Friends?
by **Sigh**
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My entry in the Reader Retention contest.
Just Friends? Part 1
by **Sigh**
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Meghan sat at an empty table in Pizzagogo, her second favorite Italian joint. It was Derek’s first favorite, so meeting here was a concession to him, something to make him more comfortable. And she needed him to be comfortable for this date
At least, he would probably think of it as a date. She was sure he had no idea of the blow she was about to give him. Would it be a blow? People were more open minded and forward thinking these days. Perhaps there was more than a distant chance he would shrug his shoulders, smile, let the news roll away like water off a duck’s back, then say “I only love you more now.”
Riiiiight, Meghan thought, sipping on her cola and gripping her cell phone like a sprinter’s baton. I halfway believed my little fantasy there until I imagined he ‘said’ that. Don’t get your hopes up, Meg; in fact, the plan is to anticipate the worst scenario, remember? Then you can never be let down, and in fact you might even be pleasantly surprised.
She closed her eyes. Please, please let me be pleasantly surprised.
“Hey, Meggie! Are you falling asleep? Don’t tell me you got bored while waiting for me – I’m only 3 minutes late.” This statement came from a pair of lips that then kissed Meghan on the cheek.
Meg’s eyes opened and lit up with joy mixed with a little dread. Her lips, though, burst into an unconflicted beaming smile. “Derek! Hey there, lover!”
Simultaneously, at the Pizzagogo bar - 15 feet from Meg’s table - sat a large man. He was bulky and wide, especially at the shoulders, overweight but not obese . He sipped on a club soda; it was his Tuesday lunch break, so alcohol was a no-go. Besides, he needed to be alert and vigilant. As stealthily as he could, he glanced repeatedly at Meg and Derek. He couldn’t hear their conversation; instead he was monitoring their body language, especially Meg’s eyes. His silenced cell phone was in his left hand; he gripped it tight, so as to not miss any vibration.
A waiter promptly brought Derek a hot slice of double pepperoni Neapolitan pie. “I ordered for you so it’d be ready when you came in. That’s what you always get anyway,” Meg said.
“You amaze me as always, Meggie. So giving, and you anticipate my every need. I have never known a girl with the combinations of love, intelligence, and sexiness like I see in you.” Derek blew on his steaming lunch slice, then took a amall bite before continuing. “That’s why I asked if you could go with me to Shreveport this weekend. Speaking of which, are you able to go?”
Meghan took a deep breath. “You mean go there – to meet your parents.” Her face now took on a clearly anguished, uncertain look. “You know, Derek, that’s what a guy does with a girl when he’s thinking about marriage. Is that how serious you see us getting?”
“Well … yeah. Don’t you?”
Meg shook her head, then stopped, then slowly nodded. “Yes. God help me, yes I do. But it wasn’t supposed to get this far. I mean, we started as an exclusively sexual relationship. That’s all I wanted, someone to –“
“Fuck your brains out,” Derek whispered with a sly grin.
“Yeah,” Meg half smiled (she couldn’t help it). “I came to the club that night hunting for Big Stud Game and you were there – the biggest stud in the room. I walked right up to you and said …”
“If I don’t have you in my bed in the next 20 minutes I will die. Please save my life,” he finished. He laughed devilishly at the memory.
“That was so corny of me,” she blushed.
“But effective!” he replied. “Yeah, you were – you ARE – a wet dream come true. Always ready for sex! But after a while I began to want you with me outside the bedroom. So I asked you to the movies, to that jazz concert –“
“I remembered how pleasantly surprised I was to see you were a refined, cultured soul,” Meg sighed.
Derek went on – “the day at the lake, and camping that night under the stars. I’m in love with you, Meggie. I have never wanted to spend my life with any other girl; you are the fulfillment of my search for completeness. Yes, I was going to propose if Shreveport went well. So there goes that surprise. But I can tell by the way you look that you aren’t happy with all of this. What’s wrong?”
Meghan didn’t reply immediately. She was lost in rapt appreciation of this man she’d fallen in love with. He was gorgeous – 6 foot 1 inch high, his arm muscles all ripply and defined as was the rest of his body. A sexy, sparse amount of golden chest hair peeked through his partially unbuttoned work shirt. Clean shaven face, with an honest-to-goodness Kirk Douglas dimple on his chin. Piercing blue eyes. Blonde hair in a stylish undercut - short on the sides, long and combed back on the top. These were all the qualities that made her choose him as her sexual conquest three months ago in that club. And god, did he ever deliver in bed. He was the pinnacle of erotic desire. Except now she’d also fallen for his companionship, his soul, his personality, his tenderness, his sense of humor, his –
“Uhh … Earth to Meggie, come in Meggie,” Derek whispered. He looked quizzically at his date. She jumped slightly at being jolted out of her reverie; then, her face fell into a frown as she realized it was time to put it all on the table.
“Derek. Baby. We need to have a serious talk. So I need you to just listen to me for a few minutes, without interruption. Is that okay?”
Derek’s countenance became very serious. “Meggie - wouldn’t this be more appropriate where we have more privacy, like my place? The lunch crowd here is going to be deafening in a few minutes.”
“No. I need to do this in a public place. I’m afraid of your possible reaction; I’m afraid you’ll be so angry that you could even get… violent.”
Derek sat agape, his jaw hitting the floor. He had never threatened her – or any girl he’d been with.
“Honey,” she continued, “do you remember how I told you explicitly many times that I just wanted a physical relationship? The reason for that is I wouldn’t have to bring up my past. My past … well, most guys would feel it’s a deal-breaker for any potential relationship. I can’t believe I let myself fall in love with you, because now I must have this discussion that I never wanted to have with you.”
“Babe, “ he interrupted despite her earlier admonition, “it doesn’t matter. I don’t care what happened in your past. If you’re a convicted felon, or were a hooker, or a drug addict or axe murderer – none of that matters, because you aren’t any of those things now. ”
“It’s none of those things. It’s … worse. Not to me, and not to a lot of people, especially these days. But it will be with you, I’m afraid.”
“What could be worse than being an axe murderer?” Derek laughed. “I mean, are you an alien from Mars here with orders to abduct me? Even that would be okay as long as you were my personal abductor.”
Meghan was quiet, pursing her lips, waiting for his mental gears to grind more.
He continued to laugh. “I know you aren’t a transsexual. I’ve known some trannies; I can read all of ‘em – Adam’s apple, big shoulders, tall – maybe except for those Thai or Brazilian freaks that they start on hormones when they’re kids. I’ve seen every inch of your body, and you are an all natural born bona fide woman.”
Meghan remained still, silent and staring at Derek. Her brow furrowed. Her lip started to quiver. A tear ran down her cheek.
Her beau saw this, and ever so slowly his mood turned from jovial to shocked. Ever so slightly, his eyes narrowed in a clearly wounded appearance.
“Derek,” Megan choked out, “I have always been female in the places it really counts to me – my head and my heart. And for the last half-year, I’ve been female in all the places it should count to you. I’m one of the lucky ones – I pass without question, even though I’m Irish and not Thai or Brazilian. I know I could be a great wife to you, better than a lot of ‘natural born bona fide’ women. All you have to do is accept me, baby.”
Derek now looked sad yet irritated, shaking his head emphatically. “Meggie … if you want to break up with me, just tell me. Don’t give me a lie to make me leave you. I know you absolutely aren’t a tranny. I’ve seen you, every bit of you. You’re not full of silicone and implants; your voice is high and feminine. You’re 5’6” or something thereabouts, for Pete’s sake. Why are you wanting to split up?”
Meghan hung her head and shook it emphatically. “I don’t want to break up with you, Derek! I want to stay with you – and yes, I want to marry you! But I am a transgender woman – born with male parts, but female in my heart and mind!” She reached into her purse and pulled out her smartphone. “I thought this might be hard for you to accept. So – God, how I’m dreading this – here are some photos of myself before I started living full time as Meghan. These are from when I was living as a boy named Milton.”
The stunned beau flipped through the photos on her phone, his jaw rapidly dropping,
The bulky man at the bar held his breath. Derek’s face was turned away from him, but the young man’s body language obviously changed – arms and legs tense, torso arched backwards. The watcher’s body tensed also, readying.
Derek was now clearly angry. “You … lied … to me!”
“I didn’t tell you the truth about me. We were just supposed to have sex, then move on. I should have told you about me by the second date, at least.”
“You should have told me that first night before we left the club! I would have dropped you like a hot potato. Now I’ve lost three months of my life and you’ve torn my heart out!”
“Baby – let’s take 48 hours apart, and then connect by phone. Just please calm down, and think about this with a cooler head – “
“You think that will protect you, freak? In fact, do you still think that being in a public pizza joint will prevent me from slapping the hell out of you?” He raised his right hand and stood up suddenly, leaning across the table at Meghan. His right arm surged with power to give a stunning blow – yet the limb failed to move.
“Whoa there, buddy.” The voice came from behind Derek, as a large hand now held onto Derek’s wrist, rendering it ineffective. A second large hand gripped Derek’s left shoulder, and pushed down with strength, forcing him back into his seat. The angry auto mechanic twisted his neck around to see how many were restraining him.
It was only one guy, a big-shouldered refrigerator of a man. He continued to hold Derek captive in his chair. “I’ll let you go if you promise to control yourself.”
“Let the f*** go of me and mind your own f***ing business! I have an issue with this fag–” Derek pointed towards Meghan, but her seat was now empty.
“She’s gone, buddy. Did you a favor. Assault and battery ain’t chump change.” The big stranger leaned over and whispered in Derek’s ear. “For what it’s worth, you have a right to be angry. She didn’t intend to deceive you, but deceive you she did. So be angry. But leave her alone, or you’ll have me to deal with. Got it?”
Derek was still mad but a little more in control. “What, are you friends with that piece of sh-“
“GOT IT? … I require an answer to my question, bub,” the bigger man growled lowly while simultaneously squeezing his grips to the point of pain.
“Ow! Shit! Okay, okay, I got it! Now lemme go!”
In a remarkably quick motion for someone of his size, the stranger released Derek while simultaneously pulling a chair up next to him. He sat and faced his thinner companion. “Deep breaths. That’s it. Yes, I’m Meg’s friend, but I want the best for you too – and that means helping you keep your cool.”
Derek glared at him in a sideways glance. “So you obviously know what she – or what HE, what IT – is. Are you a lover she’s kept on the side? Or maybe a pimp? Or just a bleeding heart snowflake that thinks she ought to have her own special pronouns and piss in whatever public bathroom she wants? Meggie’s a freak, and so are you for protecting her.”
The big stranger sat there with calmness, patiently listening as Derek spewed his insults. Then he replied. “Yes, I know she is a transgender woman. No, I’m not a lover or a pimp or a snowflake. I’m just a friend. I’ve known Meg since junior high, when she was a pre-teen boy. She was unhappy as a boy even back then, but couldn’t get her folks to help her in any way.
“She’s a high quality, amazing human being who screwed up by not trusting you with her past from the start. So take some days or weeks to cool off and think it through. If you find you want her in spite of her past, go tell her and renew the special thing you guys had. If not, drop it, let her go and both of you get on with your lives separately.”
Derek shook his head in confusion. “She looks so real. How old was she when she started to change her body? I would guess - way before puberty, right?”
“Nope. She started her official transition 2-and-a-half years ago. Got her sex change surgery 6 months ago.”
“No way! I don’t believe you. She was an adult male? There is no way. Her body is too authentic! I know plastic surgery can do wonders, but not …!”
“The best I can explain it is that Meghan’s lucky. There are a few guys out there who, if they wanted to, would make great women physically. Most of those guys aren’t transgendered. I’m talking like, Elijah Wood – you know, Frodo. From the Lord of the Rings. Guys that are short and look like tweenagers when they’re really young adults. That was Meg’s blessing. And when she started hormones, her body just blossomed into the sexy knockout you know her as.”
Derek shook his head. “She’s not sexy to me anymore. You obviously think she is. You can have her.”
“Sorry, buddy. I’m happily married. She’s just a friend; I was here today to prevent her being beaten, in case you decided to get angry and physical. Which you did, unfortunately. So I had to step in.
“Now as far as bathrooms go, she obviously should go to the women’s room, right? But I feel you on the pronouns; I stick with he, she, them. The others confuse me, and I know I’ll mess it up if I try to use ‘em. By the way …”
The stranger extended his hand to a calmer, cooler Derek –
“- my name’s Rick. Good to meet you. Are you copascetic with my suggestions?”
Derek tilted his head. “What suggestions?”
Rick’s voice became subtly deeper. “Cool off for a few days or weeks. Then get back with her, or let her go. No stalking. No revenge.. Be angry all you want, but take it out on your pillow at home. No trolling on social media. Or else …”
“Or else I’ll have to deal with you, right?”
Rick smiled. “Glad we understand each other. Have a nice day now.”
With that, both men got up and left the joint, headed in separate directions.
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Just Friends? Part 2
by **Sigh**
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Rick stood at the apartment door, checking his phone to make sure he had the right unit number. He then knocked as he had been instructed to prior; four rapid beats, repeated two times.
Meghan opened the door. She nervously looked past the big man – not an easy feat – and then quickly motioned him to come in. “Did he follow you?” she whispered.
Now Rick’s left eyebrow rose. “Uh, Meg – he knows where you live, right? He doesn’t have to follow me. Still, I like the fact that you’re cautious – you’ll need to be that way for a while, I’m betting.”
“Oh Rick,” Meghan choked. She burst into hard sobs and buried her face in her hands. Her friend placed a big arm around her and produced a clean hanky, which she grabbed feebly.
Men are often uncomfortable around women experiencing intense sorrow; Rick was no exception in this situation.
“Hey,” he whispered, “do you have any girlfriends I could call to come be with you right now? I’m sure they could do a better job helping you.” And I didn’t tell Beth I was going to be here, and I need to be back to work in 17 minutes, he thought.
“Macie and I are on the outs right now. She didn’t like me leading Derek on either, even though she doesn’t know him from Adam,” Meg sniffed. “And all the other girls in our social group have sided with her. So I’m alone right now. This is so horrible; I almost wish …” She looked up at Rick with a needy, puppy-dog face. “Can you stay a little longer – wait. No. You need to go. I’ll be fine.”
Rick’s eyebrow rose higher. “You said you wish … what? Meg ... are you feeling like you wished you were dead?” he whispered.
Meghan hung her head and plopped down on the couch behind her. She whispered her answer to Rick without looking towards him. “Yes. Exactly. Right now I wish I was dead.”
“How would you accomplish that?”
“Getting dead?” She lifted her face as she rolled her eyes. “The car. I have an old vacuum hose in the closet that’s perfect. Slip it on the exhaust, funnel it into the inside, start the motor, come back inside, close the doors and lay back and go to sleep. No more pain.” Her weeping began to intensify.
Rick now was dialing a number on his phone. Then he put it to his ear and said “Hello. I need you guys to evaluate my friend. I’m afraid she’s considering killing herself.”
Meghan gasped and hissed at her friend. “What the hell – WHAT ARE YOU DOING?”
He turned to the shocked girl. “You’re right, Meg. I do need to go. But first, the Suicide Hotline folks need to evaluate you.” He then gave the person on his phone a quick synopsis of the situation as Meg sat still, feeling perplexed and a little betrayed.
Rick turned and extended his phone to her. “She wants to talk to you.” Meg shook her head. “Look,” he sighed, “it’s either this or I take you to the emergency room.”
He now listened to his friend talk to the counselor. It sounded like she was open and honest about her feelings and plans; then, suddenly, Meg handed the phone back to him. “They want to talk to you again,” she said.
“Hmm. Yeah, I can do that. OK, I’ll call if there’s any trouble.” Rick hung up. “Well, Meghan, they feel okay letting you check in with a counselor by phone a few more times today and tonight, then seeing one in person tomorrow AM. And … I’m gonna need to take that hose. And you’re also gonna promise me - on a stack o’ bibles - that you will not hurt yourself. Not in any way. At least to tomorrow noon, when I’ll check on you again. Kapeesh?”
“I’m trying to get mad at you about this, Rick,” sniffed Meghan. “But somehow I feel really cared for. Thank you – I guess – for looking out for me.” She walked to the coat closet. “Here’s the hose. Take it.”
Rick did so, and smiled. “Now all we need are a stack o’ bibles.”
“Here,” Meghan said. “A couple of mini-bibles, well … tracts, really. I don’t know why I keep them around. They are the closest I have to the real thing.”
Rick opened her front door and turned to her. “Keep that promise. Promise?”
“Promise.”
“Okay. I gotta get back to work now, so-“
“Rick. Thank you so much for coming today. I’m at a bad point, socially, in my life. No one else would help me.”
“So, you called me last? I’m so honored,” he smiled.
“I would have been interacting with you all along, except I thought your wife would be against it. I don’t want to give you trouble in your home. Is she going to be mad at you for helping me?”
“Not if she doesn’t know about it. Our relationship right now is … complicated. We’re still committed to each other, but – um – separated. I’m living in an apartment for now.”
Meg’s jaw dropped. “Oh Rick. I’m so sorry.”
“Yeah. It sucks. Whatever. I really gotta go. Check on you by phone tomorrow, ‘kay?”
Rick closed Megan’s door and turned to walk down the hallway of her apartment complex - and suddenly was face to face with someone else he knew.
“Ricky!? Hey, do you live here now?”
“Oh – hey there. It’s Lizzie, right?” Eliza Farner was one of his wife’s close friends ; Beth and she shared the same hair stylist. Rick had met her a few times casually, usually hanging out with his spouse after a girl’s night out – or that’s how Lizzie and Beth described their times together. “Is it Liz or Lizzie?”
“Either one’s OK, Ricky. I’m here attending my niece’s 1st birthday party. Had to step out in the hall for a sec – with all of us chicks in there, it’s like a perfume bomb went off. I was afraid we’d explode when striking the match for the cake candles.”
“Ha-ha! I love your sense of humor, Lizzie. Beth always seems happier after spending a little time with you; I can see why.”
“Speaking of Beth …” Lizzie’s face turned serious suddenly. “I know about the sitch. Just know I’m praying for both of you. She told me you had moved out to an apartment. Is this your place now?” she asked, pointing to the door he’d just exited.
“Ah, no,” he grumbled. Now the fact that he was in a strange place was going to get back to Beth. Oh well. Might as well as be honest. “My new place is five miles away, off Thomason road. I’m here visiting with an old friend from back in middle school – helping him out with a situation.” That’s honest enough; after all, back in middle school Meg was a “he”. Not a lie, technically.
Rick’s mistake was forgetting one of the universe’s basic rules: Murphy’s law. For just as he finished that sentence, Meghan opened her door and stepped out in that sexy black sheath dress she had worn for the meeting with Derek. She waved a cell phone at Rick. “Hey big guy – you forgot this!”
Rick saw Lizzie’s face go pale. She pointed to Meghan – “Your middle school friend – is that ‘him’??”
Meg’s face now fell, and scrunched up in pain at being called ‘him’. “Rick! You, of all people – outing me to a random stranger??”
“I’m no random stranger. I’m the best friend of his wife!” Lizzie snarled. “She has no idea that her husband is hanging out with” – she gave an angry glance towards Rick, as if to imply I’m too polite to say 'fucking' – “a piece of dung like you!”
Meghan still had the impression she was being shamed for her trans history. “Listen, missy – I’m damn proud of who and what I am. And small minded people like you had better get used to me and my kind, or –“
“STOP!” barked the large man in the center of this verbal melee. “Both of you.” Now his voice dropped back to indoor volume. “Neither of you are going to believe what I’m about to say, but just for the record, you both have mistaken ideas about what just happened and what is happening now. Liz, I am not cheating on my wife. Meg is my middle school friend. And she indeed used to be a he, a male. She transitioned to female as an adult.”
“Rick!” protested Meghan.
“Aw, Meg – you were already mad at me ‘cause you thought I outed you earlier. Which I did NOT do, until just now.”
“Then why did she call me ‘him’?”
“See? I said you wouldn’t believe me. If I could do this over, I’d change what I said – but not what actions I’ve taken.” He then turned to his wife’s friend. “Lizzie, I love Beth. We are separated legally, but we both have agreed to remain monogamous, faithful to each other, as we work things out. Now today, Meghan asked me essentially to be her bodyguard as she broke up with her boyfriend. He tried to hit her when she found out about her trans history.”
Rick looked quickly back and forth at the two women flanking him. Both wore doubting smirks with narrowed eyes. But Lizzie then looked at Meg with a more relaxed visage. “So you’re a trans woman? God, you’re beautiful. I wouldn’t have guessed in a million years.”
“Yes,” said Meg with a slightly bowed head. “It’s a little embarrassing to admit.”
“Why? You just got through saying that you were proud of who you are. And frankly, if I could have your body, I might want to switch places with you.”
“No, your situation is better. You won’t have men rejecting you because you were born anatomically male. And you can give your man a child.”
“That’s probably the only advantage to having a uterus. The rest of the time, my reproductive system is a major pain. Every month since age 12-and-a-half. I only keep my womb around for the eventual prospect of children. After I’ve had mine, I plan to get the damn thing yanked out.”
Meghan smiled slightly. “What’s your name?”
“My friends call me Liz. Big clumsy lugs like this guy call me Lizzie.” She winked at Rick and elbowed him in the ribs as she said that.
“Would you like to come in for a cup of coffee, Liz? I’m Meghan, by the way; you can call me Meg, like my non-lover male friend here does.”
“Let me get a few selfies of me and my niece – it’s her birthday. But after that, I’ll knock on your door, OK?”
Rick exhaled, finally. He’d been holding his breath for the last two minutes. “Ladies, I’m late in getting back to work. I have to go. It was a pleasure.” Now THAT was a lie. He jogged to his car.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Just Friends? Part 3
by **Sigh**
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Rick was driving back to work, talking hands-free on the phone with his boss. “Thanks, Jerry. I appreciate it, and I’ll stay an hour after closing to make sure I’m all caught up. You’re the best.” He hung up, and whistled with relief. Another bullet dodged.
Only one last thing bugged him. Beth, his wife. She would surely now hear that he had been over to Meghan’s apartment. Though he was fairly confident that Lizzie would assure Beth that his visit was innocent, he still needed to be the first to tell her about what he did for Meg today. Then he could apologize for not letting her know what he was about to do beforehand. This would be best done in person, not over the phone and definitely not via text. Maybe he was being over-cautious; but with his marriage being on some thin ice, he needed to be as open and careful as possible. His house – where Beth lived by herself, now – was 2 blocks off of his current route back to his work. He pointed his Ford Expedition in that direction.
Beth’s Toyota Supra was in the right driveway – per usual, as she worked only the mornings on Wednesdays. But the Mercedes convertible in the left drive was an unexpected sight for Rick. This had an innocent explanation, he was sure. He kept telling himself that as a knot formed in his gut. Approaching the front door, he quietly entered the unlock code into the keypad. He turned the knob carefully and stealthily entered. An empty foyer greeted him, but no voices or noise was audible. The living room and kitchen were equally silent.
He now stood in the doorway to his bedroom, watching two post-coital lovers sleeping in each other’s arms. Beth’s head and long hair lay on the chest of some guy from her work, a supervisor or something-or-other. Someone Rick seemed to remember from Beth’s company Christmas party last year. For the first time since the night they agreed to separate, Rick began to cry. He took a few pictures of the scene, capturing their snoozing and state of undress; The both of their torsos were open to air, and it appeared the thin coversheet was the only thing adorning their lower bodies. Rick quietly left as they continued their illicit slumber.
Rick was lousy at work that afternoon – distracted, and obviously suffering and despondent. Boss Jerry noticed, and gave him the rest of the day off after 2:30. Rick drove to his apartment. I'm gonna find my booze and get ... As he put his car in park, his cell rang.
It was Beth.
Rick punched the answer icon. “Hey,” he choked out.
“Hi. I see you came over at about 1:03. The doorbell camera caught you. I know you saw me and Michael.”
“So tha’s his name,” Rick said through clenched teeth. “What ‘bout, you know, you an’ me, monogamous?”
“Rick. You know why this happened. We’ve talked about it. Your … problem. The fact that you can’t give me that thing I really, really need.”
“I can give you ev’ry othr dam thng!” he spurted out in locked-jaw speech.
“And that’s why I said everything would be fine if you just agreed to let me have another man to satisfy my needs from time to time! If you could allow that, we wouldn’t have had to change a thing!”
“Th’ counsel’r – he told you not to –“
“Screw the counselor. Or maybe I should? He’s only 5 foot 10, but I bet he doesn’t have your problem.”
“So yu fckd Mike. Do yu feel any regret? Was it worth it, baby?”
“Rick … this is going to hurt you, but I’m being totally honest here. My only regret is that I didn’t sleep with him sooner. It was – God, it was magnificent. I never want to be without it. And because you can’t handle that, it probably means I need to start divorce proceedings. I’m so, so sorry to hurt you this way. But if we go back to the way we were going, it will hurt you even more in the long run. Not to mention I’ll be miserable too.”
She listened for a response, but heard only repressed sobs. Finally –
“Beth. Do yu still love me?”
“I … I have a love for you, Rick. Let’s leave it at that.”
“Um … ‘kay. Go ‘head. File for the d’vorce. I’ll get a lawyr. God help me. Someone help me, help me God.”
“Rick. You’re worrying me.”
“G’bye, Beth.”
Rick hung up.
Rick unlocked his dark little apartment, took two steps in – and stopped.
He stood like stone, every muscle in his body tensing as he tried to fight off the tears. Don’t lose it, man. Don’t … But his strong, mountain like shadow began to shake. Those tree trunk legs of his began to buckle. He fell forward on his knees and began to cry and roar in emotional torment.
The sobbing continued off and on for the rest of the afternoon. Now it was just past 9:30 pm. He’d had nothing to eat or drink, save more than half of the bottle of bourbon he’d pulled from the pantry. All the effort I put into my marriage - for nothin’. She told me it wouldn’t matter, that she’d love me and stay with me in spite of it. I was so careful to pick someone who’d love me unconditionally – and she couldn’t do it. If Beth couldn’t, then no woman will.
Rick looked around the apartment from his vantage point on the living room couch. Despite the bourbon the pain was unrelenting, and everything was getting darker. Everything. The lights in the place, the lights outside, his mood, his future. That future was dead – killed by the one person he had invested his all - time, heart, energy, trust, love – in. Not to mention that damned quack of a doctor back in ’93. He desperately searched his mental files for hope, but found absolutely none. Now, a foreign thought crept into his mind.
I wish I were dead.
Immediately the devilish idea sprouted. Pistol in my bedside drawer. One shot, in the mouth, aiming towards the base of the skull at the back. No note or explanation needed; anyone could figure out why. Just stop the pain. Stop the horrible pain.
He looked at the door to his bedroom. A countering thought emerged in his brain – Hypocrite! You just prevented your friend Meg from taking this way out earlier today! – but he brushed that off. One more reason for me to end this. The world will have one less hypocrite. He stood, and readied himself to walk to where he kept the gun. As he took his first step -
A knock at his front door.
Rick frowned as he glanced at the wall clock. Fifteen 'til ten. Who - ?
The knock came again, this time a loud, fast prolonged rapping.
He cleared his throat as he approached the door. All he saw through the peephole was the opposite was the hallway, and two tufts of hair – one red, the other blonde. “Who is it? You’ve got the wrong apartment. Go away,” he barked.
But no response came, save the same urgent, rapid knocking.
“No solicitations!” Rick growled. But the knocking was constant now, not taking any breaks.
He looked in the living room mirror. He was a mess – drunk, disheveled, with bloodshot eyes and puffy lids, a bourbon stained dress shirt. Oh well. When I answer the door, this mess – and me – will scare ‘em off. Then I can get back to .... He went to the door and unlocked the bolt. Grabbing the knob, he yanked the door open. “What??” he roared.
Standing there were two short women – Lizzie and Meghan – in jeans and sneakers. Meghan had on a knit top; Lizzie wore a T-shirt, and carried a thick heavy steel briefcase. Meg returned Rick’s gaze, and her eyes filled with tears. She reached around his trunk and began to squeeze him. “Oh Rick. My buddy, my friend. I’m so sorry this has happened.”
“I called Beth to let her know I ran into you today,” Lizzie said. “She ended up admitting to me everything that took place. She said she was worried about you. Not enough to come over and check on you herself, mind you. I never knew she could be such a heartless witch. So I called Meghan – we became fast friends over coffee today – and we came to check on you.”
“Hey, uh, thanks,” he replied. “But I’ll be okay.”
“Ahem,” said Meghan. “We’re not asking you to let us in. We’re coming in.”
And just like that, Rick was walked back to his couch and sat down between the two women. He tried – weakly - to get them to leave him alone.
“I’ll really be … ah … OK,” he whispered.
His statement was ignored. “I’m so thankful for you Rick. You saved my life today,” whispered Meg as she wrapped her arms around his neck and buried her face in his shoulder. “You showed me more love – true, sacrificial love – than any one ever has. I love you, like a sister loves her older hero brother. And I think you need some appreciation, and loving words and hugs.”
“Doctor Lizzie here. That’s my prescription for you, bubba. Hugs and loving words, applied constantly, for at least the next few hours – longer, if necessary. To be administered by Nurse Meg.”
“Rick,” whispered Meg. “Tell me the truth. Have you wished you were dead at any time today?”
The big man sighed. Busted. “Yes. I planned to use my gun in my bedside drawer.”
“Be right back,” said Lizzie as she hopped towards Rick’s bedroom with her heavy briefcase .
“Beth told Liz you owned a gun,” Meg said. “I had a hunch you might be this desperate. Lizzie brought her portable safe, just in case; I’ll bet she’s locking your piece in there now. And I brought my stack o’ bibles – my little pamphlets – for you to swear on. So agree to swear on them that you won’t hurt yourself. Or should I dial the hotline? Let’s see, 1-800-S-U-“ – she tapped out numbers on her phone.
“Give me the pamphlets. I’ll swear to it … as long as … as … “ Rick started to choke up.
“As long as what, Rick?” Meghan breathed ever so quietly.
“God … this sounds like a line … but I don’t think I can stand to be alone right now, Meg. Things just got so … so dark …”
“Are things dark right now?”
“Not as bad as before.” Rick looked into Meghan’s face and half smiled. “Not with you here.”
“Then I’m here,” Meghan said. “I’m here as long as you need me.”
She laid her head on his chest as she stroked his shirt, then his neck, as Rick laid his right hand on the stack o’ pamphlets and promised he wouldn’t harm himself.
Rick lifted up his head. Where am I? Then he quickly realized: he had fallen asleep on the couch. The lights were all off except for a small lamp, and it gave off adequate light for him to see the wall clock. 2:36 am.. I need to get to my bed, and hit the bathroom along the way. Wonder why –
Then he remembered. Beth and “Michael”. He sat up, and felt some arms from behind him fall away as he did so.
“Hey, sleepyhead! You finally got some Z’s in,” Meghan’s voice came from behind him. “I need you to change out of your duds into the sweats we placed at your bathroom sink. Lizzie and I raided your closet. And swish some Listerine for your gums and teeth. Then come back into this living room.”
“Where’s Lizzie?” mumbled the big guy.
“I sent her home; I think we got this, you and I. Now get changed and get back here, cowboy.”
Rick did as ordered. He was in no mood to argue. Here was someone who wanted to give him affection and appreciation, and he desperately needed both.
On arriving back in the living room, he noticed a bed sheet had been laid across the leather couch, with 2 pillows from the master bedroom placed at one end. Meghan had taken off her shoes, but still had her socks/jeans/shirt on.
“We’ll stay on the couch. To avoid even the appearance of impropriety,” said Meghan.
“Like sex isn’t possible on a couch,” Rick weakly smirked.
Meg got on the sofa on her side, her back snug against the back cushion. “Lie down on your side in front of me.”
As Rick did so, he felt Meg’s arms once again wrap around his neck and shoulders. “You’re like a huge, huggable bear,” he heard whispered into his ear. “A protecting bear, and yet a squeezy teddy bear. Big Bear – that’s my new nickname for you. Honorable, noble, protective – yet tender enough to be vulnerable. And some bad ol’ she-cougar ripped you open in your tender belly. We need to heal that with the balm of loving truth. And the truth is, is that she doesn’t deserve you.
“You are an amazing man, a great human being. You will survive this. Don’t give up. Don’t you dare give up. You are loved. I’m proud of who you are. You have people who love you, who cherish you. There’s no reason to be ashamed. I don't know why Beth left; but somewhere out there is the woman who will cherish you as you deserve. And some day you will find each other. And on that day I will jump and cheer as you seal your wedding vows to live as you should, happily ever after.”
Meg began to choke back a tear again.
“Tell me you’re not going to give up, Rick. Say it out loud for me.”
Meg heard nothing but a peaceful, slight snore from the man she held to.
“That’ll do. Sleep tight, Big Bear.”
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Just Friends? Part 4
by **Sigh**
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Internist Hitesh Choi M.D. knit his brow with concern as he looked directly into his patient’s eyes. “Have you ever considered doing something like this at any prior time in your life, Richard?”
“No, Doc. It was a bad, bad day – one of the worst I can ever remember having. Okay, actually, it WAS the worst day in my life. I guess the booze didn’t help my mood either. But I ended up not going through with it, so things are OK, right?”
“Because a couple of angels showed up and took the gun away as an option. Thank god for them. I think I’m more worried about this than you appear to be.” The physician rubbed the sparse goatee on his chin as his eyes arched upward while he thought. “I’ll be right back,” he said as he suddenly rose and left the exam room.
Rick sighed, and glanced at the pretty redheaded woman seated to his side. She had not gotten farther than 30 feet from him since she showed up at his door last night. Her green eyes looked up at his. “Thanks for letting me be in here during your visit, Rick.”
“I’m having second thoughts about agreeing to that, Meg. The way you described me to him almost made me sound like a nuthouse candidate. There’s no way I looked that desperate.”
Meg smirked and pursed her lips. “Typical guy. You don’t like doctors, and tend to underplay any symptoms and problems. I just told what I saw, plain and simple. I’ll let him make the diagnosis. But he needed an accurate picture of how you were last night.”
“And I appreciate having all the information I can about my patients, ma’am,” said Dr. Choi, having walked back into the room. “ I wish more patients would bring their spouses or friends to give me a full picture of the problem. Now, Rick. Let’s talk frankly.”
“OK, Doc. Shoot.”
“I think you had a major depressive episode. It all seems exogenous – meaning due to the extreme trauma you experienced – but I’m worried that you could still be at risk for self-harm, especially if you get alone. I’m giving you two options: inpatient treatment at the local psychiatric facility –“
“WHAT?!”
“- Hang on, Rick – OR you can go visit a psychiatrist, today at 2 - that’s in 30 minutes - with Dr. Ramanathan. I called and worked you in.”
Rick stood up. “No, thanks. I don’t want to see a shrink. We’re done here.”
Choi stood also, and set his jaw. He was half the size of his huge patient, but his white coat allowed him to pull rank. “Richard. If you refuse either of these, I will notify the county mental health department, and they will send an evaluator quickly over to where you are–“
Rick’s shoulders slumped, and he grit his jaw. He looked down at Meg with tears in his eyes. “See, Meg? I’m being treated like a lunatic. I hope you’re happy.” Then turning to Choi, “OK, Doc. I’ll see the shrink. But I’m doing so under protest.”
Meghan sat in the psychiatrist’s waiting room. Unlike the visit at Dr. Choi’s, Rick had refused to allow her to be present while this specialist evaluated him. That’s why she was surprised when, after about an hour, the receptionist told her that she was now needed in the consultation room.
“It was my understanding that Rick – the patient – didn’t want me back there,” Meg stammered.
“It’s the doctor that’s asking for you, ma’am,” replied the receptionist.
Meg now knocked on the door of the room she’d been led to. “Come in,” a male voice with a foreign accent said.
She entered and saw her friend with the psychiatrist; both pointed to an open seat for her to take. “Rick – are you sure you’re OK with me being here? I thought –“
“It’s fine, Meg. This experience has been so much better than I thought it would be. He’s gonna let me go home; since you are the one who’s looking after me, he just wants to talk with you a bit.”
“Wow, that’s great! Did he make you make a promise not to hurt yourself, like the suicide counselor made me do?”
The doctor had been writing on his pad computer, but he lifted his head – and his right eyebrow – when Meghan said that. He said nothing, however.
“Yeah, this is Dr Ramanathan – he says call him Dr. Rama for short. He did make me sign an agreement that I wouldn’t harm myself, and is starting me on some high powered antidepressant. I have to stay on it at least 6 months, then he’ll consider weaning it off. He’s also called my work and had them excuse me for the rest of the week. Evidently he thinks I need therapy with a counselor and group meetings pretty intensely for the next few days.
“I would normally be fighting this, but this shrink is a prince of a guy – he really cares. He’s not a weird ‘Sigmund Freud’ type, he’s more like a regular guy. Told me I wasn’t weird for feeling this way. Evidently males commit suicide more than females, and use guns more too. So he was glad that I came in. He wants to personally tell you thank you for … for …” Rick suddenly appeared choked up.
“For what, Rick?” said Meghan.
“For coming to his rescue,” Dr. Rama inserted. “When you and your friend confiscated his gun, you saved him, I’m sure of it. I wish you had called the suicide hotline for him last night, but that’s the only thing I would have done differently. “
Rick’s tears made him sputter as he spoke. “You told me last night that I’d saved your life. It took you less than a day to return the favor. Thank you, Meg. Thanks for saving my life.”
Meghan reached over and squeezed his hand. “I owed you, Big Bear. It’s all going to be okay now.”
Doctor Rama addressed Meghan. “Ma’am, you said something earlier that intrigues me. Have you called a suicide counselor for yourself recently?”
Meg was surprised, and suddenly wary. “Yes … but I’m not here as your patient, so why are you asking?”
“I’m asking as Rick’s doctor. You are committed to overseeing him for the next few days, I understand?”
“Yes. I made some calls and adjusted my work schedule. My new friend Lizzie will cover the late afternoons and evenings, and I’ll be there the rest of the time.”
Dr. Rama’s brow was now knit with concern. “Can you tell me when and why you called the hotline for yourself?”
“Actually,” Meg said, “Rick called them for me. Yesterday early afternoon.” She then quickly recounted the lunch meeting with Derek, and Rick’s actions at her apartment just after.
Dr. Rama took all of this in. When Meg finished, he seemed in deep thought; then he pointed to both of them as he asked: “Is there any romantic attraction between you two?”
“Doc, I’m still in love with my wife,” Rick protested.
“And I’m not over Derek yet either!” Meg replied
“I believe both of you; yet, it’s possible for all that to be true and still be desirable to each other.” The doctor looked at Rick and pointed towards Meg. “Are you telling me that you are not attracted in any way to this beautiful woman here?”
Rick started to flatly deny the charge, but his eyes met Meg’s. He took in the lovely vision of his friend sitting there in the leather chair. Long wavy auburn hair that flowed waterfall-like from her head to her breasts. Those breasts were large and complemented her curvy butt. Not model thin, but not overweight. She was in a black tube top with a green jacket, and painted-on green capri pants.
Rick suddenly became aware of where his eyes had wandered, and forced them to gaze at her face. At her pretty green eyes and pale, porcelain skin. His mind now drifted to the past. Before yesterday, it had been nearly 2 years since he’d last seen her. She was 23 years old then, and just beginning her full time transition to a female life. Though at that time just starting hormone therapy and “pre-op everything”, she still was a very passable woman. Now she’s unreadable; more than that - immaculately sexy, thought the big man. He was aware that he was getting turned on.
“Rick – did you hear my question?” Dr. Rama spoke and interrupted the big man’s reverie.
Rick’s cheeks, already slightly flushed, became beet red. “Doc – if I’m honest, I have to admit that she’s one of the sexiest women I’ve ever known.”
Now Meghan’s face was flushed, and she began to perspire slightly. This admission from her friend not only shocked her; it brought an eruption of conflicting emotions in her chest. Both hands covered her mouth.
“And you, ma’am,” Dr. Rama spoke to her, “Do you feel attracted to Rick?”
“Ah … um …” she quavered, and pointed an open hand towards her friend. “Just look at him.” Meg now did just that. This man was massive and strong, and stood somewhere north of 6’1”. His wavy black hair was only just beginning to recede at the forehead. He had no beard or mustache, but always appeared to have a stubble shadow even after his daily smooth shave. His dark eyes and deep voice made her weak in the pit of her stomach.
Meg turned towards the psychiatrist. “Doc - he’s a man’s man – a big, fantastic hunk of masculinity. What woman wouldn’t be infatuated?”
The doc shook his head. “Okay. I have serious concerns about you two looking after each other. Both of you are emotionally fragile and recently suicidal. Rick, especially with the problem you disclosed to me, you can’t risk a romantic relationship right now. Neither of you can, in my opinion. You need to find someone else – preferably a male relative or friend – to watch over you while you get the counseling and medication you need. Either that, or I need to admit you to Passages, the local psychiatric inpatient center.”
“Nope.” Rick shook his head. “That’s not gonna happen. I’ll find someone else besides Meg. It has to be a guy, huh?”
“I could accept another woman, such as your mother or sister. But not your friend here. I need you to assure me that you will comply with my order on this, Rick.”
“I promise, Doc. I promise.” Rick stood up. “Am I done here?”
“Okay, I liked that doctor until he got the impression that we were going to have a sex orgy as soon as we got out of there,” Meghan grumbled as she drove Rick back to his apartment. “After all, we spent last night together and all that happened was therapeutic snuggling.” But I had no idea he thought I was sexy, she silently thought. One of the sexiest he's ever known. That's what he said. Meg could feel her heart start to race.
“I don’t have many male friends. Only one that I think I could trust to be discreet about all this – Phil, from work - and he’s on vacation in Florida ‘til the end of the week,” Rick fretted.
“Rick, what about your mom or sis-“
“NOPE. No. I am not involving my family in this. You should know why, Meg – the ‘family business’ is why I moved from New Jersey.”
Meg frowned. “Lizzie’s got the rest of today with you, but she can’t stay overnight. Who can we get to be with you then? The doc didn’t want you alone.”
“Just let me be alone, Meg. We don’t need to tell the doc about it. My buddy may be back from Fort Lauderdale in two days.”
“Now it’s my turn to say NOPE, Rick,” Meg stated. “If we’re going to disobey the doc’s orders, then we’ll do it by me staying with you tonight. You being alone sounds like the worst option. So I’ll stay, we’ll interact as just friends, and tomorrow you start your counseling. And tonight you start your antidepressant,” she said as she pulled into the drive-through window at Rick’s pharmacy.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Just Friends? Part 5
by **Sigh**
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Rick was now back at his apartment with Meghan. He had barely relaxed onto the couch when the doorbell rang. “Right on time,” chirped Meg as she hopped to the door. It was Lizzie. She still wore her work clothes, a power skirt and blazer with a pink blouse; her blonde hair cascaded in ringlets around her shoulders.
“I was able to take off early, as we discussed. Most of my accounts are up to date, and I came in early this morning to do paperwork so it was no problem. Tag me,” she said to Meg. Both women tapped palms together like a wrestling team changing turns in the ring, right in front of Rick.
Meghan turned to him. “Now I have to go work. I got my schedule adjusted this week to where I can be here during the day, and Lizzie can be here for the evening. Then I’ll be back for the late night until Liz comes back tomorrow. We’ll do this until you’re safe being alone.”
Rick fretted. “So basically I’m being a huge burden on you guys.”
“You don’t have anyone else to do this, right? You told me that your family was not an option,” Meg replied. “And shush with that ‘being a burden’ talk. I’m happy to be of help. I know Lizzie feels the same way.”
“You’ll be getting a huge bill from me when you’re better, though,” Liz cracked. “Just kidding!” she then smiled
Meg looked at the time on her phone. “Sorry – I really have to go and change before I show up at the restaurant. Love you, Lizzie – and you too, Big Bear.” She then sped out the door.
“I brought some stuff for dinner. Let me whip it up for you. I chose food that I thought you’d like.” said Lizzie.
“A nice steak and baked potato?” Rick said, hopeful.
“Romaine salad with turkey, walnuts and cranberries it is, then.” Lizzie laughed. “I should clarify: I chose food I thought you’d like off of a Foods that Fight Depression article on the internet.”
“Lizzie – I don’t really feel worthy of all this loving attention you guys are giving me.”
“Hey, big guy – anyone in your sitch deserves TLC. Now don’t mention that again. You’ve got more self-esteem than that. Give me 10 minutes and our meal will be ready.”
“That really was tasty. Thanks, Liz. You sure have been a friend to me through this. Don’t want to think about what would’ve happened without you and Meg.”
“Glad to help. And glad you liked the salad. Did you get full enough?”
Rick smiled. “It takes a lot to fill me up. But this was fine. I need to cut back and lose a few pounds, anyway.” His countenance then turned more sober. “Have you talked with Beth since … since the ‘intervention’ last night? Does she know what you and Meg have been doing?”
Lizzie rolled her eyes. “Your wife called me during my lunch hour today. I told her how devastated you were, and what Meg and I were doing. Her response? “You ought to have them put him in the psych hospital; don’t get in trouble with your work trying to take care of him.” I was flabbergasted, I tell you. This doesn’t seem like the same ‘bestie’ I’ve known for the last year and a half. I can’t fathom why she is so cold to you. What happened between you two? This can’t be just a simple one-off affair.”
Rick shook his head and gazed at the ground. “This is my fault. I can’t give her what she needs.”
“So – you’re not beating her, or abusing in any way?”
“NO! No way, not ever. Would you even be here alone with me if you thought that was a possibility?”
Lizzie pulled a small black box out of her purse. “Didn’t think so. But I always carry Sparky here with me just in case.” She pressed a button on the box and produced a visible crackle of electricity between 2 small metal points on the front.
Lizzie replaced the device in her purse and looked back at Rick with concern. “Now what do you mean – you can’t give her what she needs? She never mentioned anything like this to me.”
“That’s because she was respecting my wishes – I didn’t want her discussing this with anybody. And sorry, Liz – I don’t feel comfortable talking about it with you. Just suffice to say that I have a problem that caused the death of my marriage. And it’s the reason why I basically need to avoid sex for the rest of my life now. I’ve already said too much. Let’s change the subject, please.”
“Okay – we won’t talk about sex. Let’s talk about love in general. A new romance. I usually think “rebound “ relationships are a bad idea – but a new lady in your life who loves you might really help you through this. Maybe not. I’m no psychologist. But love is available to you, right now. In fact, I can’t believe you can’t see it.”
Rick’s eyes got wide. “Liz – let me get this straight – are you coming on to me?”
Lizzie slapped her forehead. “No, no. I mean, not that you aren’t a catch-and-a-half. And I am single, and you’re a big handsome … “ She shook her head as if to clear it. “NO. Besides, I don’t move in on a girlfriend’s guy.”
Rick sighed. “She’s filing for divorce. I don’t think she considers me her guy.”
Lizzie laughed. “I’m not talking about Beth, doofus. I’m talking about Meg.”
“Meg?!” Rick was nonplussed.
“Yes. Meg. She loves you like a sister, she says – but anyone can see she’s infatuated. Sure, she just broke up with that other guy – Derek, I think his name is? – but her eyes light up when she’s around you. I’m just saying, you guys already have a long history of friendship; maybe this is the universe’s way of working things out for the best.”
“The psychiatrist disagrees. He thinks I’m too emotionally fragile to have a romance now – especially with Meg. He’s ordered –” Wait a minute, Rick thought. I don’t need Lizzie knowing that Meg’s not supposed to be here tonight. – “Ahh … ordered me not to get in a new relationship now.” So Meg’s infatuated with me, he mused
Eliza looked flustered, then walked to the refrigerator. She looked in the freezer, and then pulled out a pint of premium chocolate almond ice cream. “Okay, he’s a shrink, not a cardiologist,” she yelled from the kitchen. “I know he didn’t forbid you to indulge in Haagen-Dazs!”
Rick fell asleep on the couch at 10:30 pm, with Liz watching him while she did some make up work on her computer from the dining table. When he woke up there in the morning, he could feel a softness pressing into his front. He looked down and saw a head of auburn hair underneath his chin. Meg, he knew.
Meghan had “tagged” back in at midnight, and changed into her pink sweats and carefully spooned into Rick from the front, trying not to wake him. But she did not have a restful night. Her head was filled with dreams – wet ones. Specifically, in her mind, she and Rick made love all night.
Now, she sighed and slowly squirmed, pressing her butt into Rick’s groin. He felt arousal beginning all over his body. Still sleepy, he put an arm around Meg’s waist and squeezed her tighter to his torso. She smiled and sighed, fully in dreamland.
“MMmmmm … like that,” she sighed.
“Good morning, sleepyhead,” Rick said
“Don’t … don’ stop,” she mumbled
Rick took a deep breath. “Meg. We need to...”
At that moment his hug-partner rolled over to face him. She pressed her ample bosom into his chest, and wrapped her left leg around his right. “Need … you …”
Rick had planned on telling Meghan to disengage from him, but in the face of the physical stimulation he lost all focus. His right arm had been ready to gently push her away, but now it grabbed ahold of her buttock and squeezed.
“Mmmm,” she sighed. Her face was now at his Adam’s apple. She still was only barely waking up, and did what felt natural for her – she kissed his neck. Just as she dreamed she’d been doing all night. Something nagged at her conscience – isn’t this wrong? No, no – how can it be? It feels so good.
Rick’s drowsy mind was now disengaged, and his lust was in control. He craned his head down and pulled Meg’s face up to his, planting a wet kiss there. Their tongues intermingled, and his hands were now inside her sweats, caressing her back and butt.
She was in rapturous bliss; half-awake but in full heat. She pulled her sweatshirt off in a quick motion, and pressed her unadorned breasts into Rick. In that moment, she suddenly remembered Dr. Rama’s warning.
Meghan’s eyes grew wide as she was now fully awake. “Rick! We can’t - ” Just as she said this, Rick lifted her right breast up to his mouth, and he began tonguing the nipple and areola. Meg gasped, and a visible shiver encompassed her whole body – otherwise, she was frozen in place by his oral ministrations. He began alternating from right to left breast and back, sucking and licking, as her shivers progressed to shaking tremors with moans and squeals.
Rick paused, his face buried between her two breasts. He now remembered Rama’s order – but he was so turned on. “The doc,” he croaked.
“Screw him,” Meghan groaned. Screw me, she thought.
Rick then took two fingers on his right hand and placed them in his mouth, lubricating them with saliva. Then he took his thumb and reached down; he slid Meg’s sweat pants down to her mid thighs, exposing her lilac panty. His hand dipped inside the front of the panty, searching for the groove he knew was there.
Meghan moaned and kissed his face as he began working his fingers. She seemed to enjoy this, though the shudders had stopped. So he paused long enough to pull her panty off and shift his position, putting his face at her groin level.
“Ohhhhh baby,” Meg moaned as the shivering returned. Rick’s tongue was doing somersaults in her vagina, and she began to spasm, pushing her pelvis against his face as he continued to lick.
She suddenly sat up. “I can’t stand it – I have to have you in me!” Meghan pushed Rick’s face away from her crotch and she began to tug his pants down. But Rick pulled away completely and stood up straight.
“What did you just say, Meg?”
“I have to have you in me, Rick! Please fuck me, now!”
Rick’s face fell. “No, Meg. God knows I want it. But you can’t have me. Not the way you need. It was the same with Beth. I’m sorry, Meg - I shouldn't have allowed us to get this far. But I can’t give you what you want.” He then walked down the hall into the bathroom and shut the door.
Meghan sat naked on the couch, her mind a jumble of surprise, hurt and rejection.
She remained that way for nearly a full minute – then she became concerned for Rick. Pulling her sweats back on, she ran to the bathroom and knocked hard. “Rick? What are you doing in there? I don’t hear any water running. Are you okay?”
“Leave me alone, Meg. You can’t help me. No one can help me.”
“What are you doing??” She twisted the doorknob, but it was locked.
“That’s no concern of yours. It’s only my problem. And it needs to be ended.”
“Rick. You open this door right now!” Meghan shouted.
He didn’t respond.
She grabbed her phone and dialed 911.
When the police arrived, they kicked the bathroom door in. Inside they found Rick, sitting on the toilet, looking down at an opened pocket knife he held in both hands. There was no blood or obvious injury – yet.
“Drop it!” yelled a young officer, pistol drawn.
“You could help me out,” mumbled Rick. “A bullet would be a lot more effective than a cut. Right here.” – he pointed to his forehead.
“Jenkins, let me handle this,” said an older cop whose nametag said MILLER. “Go get a statement from the lady.” Officer Miller holstered his weapon and squatted so as to be at eye level with the knife man. “Talk to me, Rick. That’s your name, right?”
The cop and the big man talked in the bathroom for twenty minutes until finally an empty-handed Rick emerged followed by Officer Miller. The EMT’s had arrived, and they put Rick in restrictive constraints and took him to the hospital emergency room. Soon after that, he was transported to Passages psychiatric hospital.
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Just Friends? Part 6
by **Sigh**
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Meghan arrived at Passages at the start of afternoon visiting hours. Dr. Rama stepped out of the locked unit doors to greet her. “I have some questions about what happened last night,” he said to her. Meg swallowed hard and confessed to her role in what happened.
“Thank you for being honest and open, Ms. Meghan. I have to ask you: have your previous thoughts of suicide returned, considering all the problems that happened this morning?”
“Umm … maybe a little. I was stupid and selfish; I put Rick’s life in danger by disobeying your order.”
“Would you mind if one of our counselors spoke with you right now to insure your safety?”
“Sure. Why not, I guess.” Then a thought hit Meghan. “Hey, doc. Are you saying I might need to be in here too? If – if I was admitted to Passages, could I get treatment along with Rick, side-by-side, so to speak?”
Rama frowned. “No. In fact, if you do need a psychiatric inpatient stay, I’m going to recommend St. Francis, in the next county. You and Rick are not to be together for now.” A nurse stepped in and gave Dr. Rama a packet of papers as he spoke.
“I can’t even visit him while he’s in here?” Meg moaned.
Dr. Rama glanced at the papers, then offered them to Meg. “For you.”
She took the packet. “What is this?”
“It’s a restraining order. You are not to get within 500 feet of Rick until I deem it safe to do so. Judge DeShanna Jefferson is a friend of mine, and she put a rush on this at my request.”
“You think I’m a threat to him – that I would harm him? I mean … “ she began to produce tears. “Oh God … I have harmed him, haven’t I? Can … can he recover from what I’ve done?”
“I’m not letting Rick off the hook; he disobeyed my order along with you. So in my opinion, you both hurt each other. Yet, recovery is absolutely possible. But to get well - both of you - you must be separated for now. Ah, here’s the counselor I called for. He’ll take you to a consultation room and check you out.”
Although the counselor did feel that Meghan was clinically depressed, there was no obvious suicide threat. Meg feared – correctly – that any harm she brought on herself would hurt Rick more, and she could not allow that to happen. Outpatient counseling was set up for her; daily for the rest of the week, and then adjusted depending on her progress. An antidepressant was prescribed.
Meghan went to Eliza’s house that evening; she told her new friend about the last 24 eventful hours – in between sobs and bawls.
“God, I’m a horrible person. I can’t believe how bad I screwed up,” sniffled Meg.
“Honey, I agree with the last part,” said Lizzie as she fed tissues to her pal. “You really messed up royally. If I had known the doc ordered you to be apart, there’s no way I would have let you stay the night. I could have done that; I’d have put him to his bed while I crashed on the couch, then taken work off for the next day. Or I could’ve hired my older brother Sammy to sit with him; he’s level-headed and in need of cash.
“But you need to shush that talk about how horrible you are. You have a great soul, and you’re really sorry about what happened. I still think you have a heart of gold. You just needed to follow orders.”
“At least Rick’s getting the help he needs,” Meg sighed. “Lizzie, I’m so bad at love. I should have told Derek about me on day one. And now I’ve lost Rick, due to disobedience and stupidity.”
“You’re still learning, girl. And that’s the key. LEARN from your mistakes. You got a late start on love as a woman – you’re in your mid-twenties. I did most of my stupid ass mistakes during my teenage dating years.”
“Rick has some sort of sex secret, something he’s desperately ashamed of,” Meg wondered. “Maybe ED? But people aren’t so embarrassed to talk about that these days – and the treatments they have are pretty effective, I’ve heard. What could it be?”
“Damned if I know,” replied Lizzie. “Yesterday he told me that Beth left him over it, and he was gonna have to give up on sex – and maybe love altogether – because of it. But he refused to elaborate further.”
“It hurts, Lizzie. Right here,” Meg placed a hand over her breastbone. “Make it stop, please.”
“Just cry it out, honey. I’ve got you,” Liz responded with a hug and a forehead kiss. And if that doesn’t work, I’m consulting Dr. Haagen-Dazs.
Meghan was in better spirits as she left Lizzie’s house. Oh, she was still down, but did not feel totally forlorn. There was at least one person who still loved her in spite of her mess: Lizzie. As long as she had just one friend, there was hope. She entered her apartment, which seemed a little cold and stale. Maybe I should have asked Liz if I could stay the night with her.
She closed the front door behind her as she stepped inside. Five seconds later the doorbell rang. What!? Who… ? Meg looked through the peephole.
Derek?!
She opened the door. Her original beau stood there with a bouquet of roses.
“Hi, Meggie. I’ve missed you. Here’s a peace offering,” he said, extending the flowers to her. “Can I come in – to talk?”
“Oh, ye-“ Meghan halted her response as she remembered his attempt to slap her their last time together. “Um … I’ll take these; but let’s talk at Pizzagogo. I’ll meet you there in 15 minutes.”
There they sat, at the same table they’d been at earlier in the week. Derek munched on a double pepperoni slice as Meg nibbled on a breadstick. This evening there was live music; on the makeshift stage, a lone guitarist played oldies from the 90’s.
“I see the big guy’s not around this time,” said Derek, scanning the room.
“No,” Meg replied. “You’re not planning on hitting me, are you?”
“Oh, Meggie,” he said as he hung his head. “I’m so sorry. I didn’t know that I had that anger in me – or rather, that I would ever use it against you. Please forgive me. I promise it will never happen again.”
“Are you harboring any more resentment towards me?”
“No, I’m not. I fell in love with what I thought was a woman; and I’ve come to realize that you are a woman. You’re a better woman – in looks, in personality, in your heart – than most real women out there.”
“Uh, Derek … I consider myself a real woman.”
“I’m sorry! You know what I mean, though, right? I can get over the part about you not being able to bear my children. What I can’t get over is being apart from you.
“Also, I think I know why I reacted the way I did. I’ve never told you about my cousin Denny. He and I were so close over the years, best buds whenever our families got together. He announced last year that he had always wished he’d been a girl, and started on medicines to make him curvy. I felt pretty betrayed, and begged him to reconsider; his family and friends did too. Now he’s living as a woman full time, but he’s obviously not a natural one. Tall, square jaw, deep voice. All I can see when I’m around him-“
“Her,” Meghan corrected. “When you’re around HER.”
“Okay. HER,” Derek mumbled. “All I can see is a shadow of the buddy I lost. She wants to be friends with me, but I’m nervous just being around her. So that frustration may have fed into how I acted the other day. Whatever. I’ve come to terms with your reality, though, and I realize I’m madly in love with you; I plan on making you my wife one day soon.”
Meghan’s heart skipped a beat; she still had feelings for this man. “Tell me, lover. Tell me what you love about me.”
“Your eyes. Green like a field of Ireland grass. Your sexy body – I’m not going to elaborate much on that, or I won’t be able to walk out of here without a hard-on limp. Your femininity. Your long red hair and the way it smells of flowers. The fact that you’re completely passable, and know how to keep a secret.”
“Hmm?” Meg’s eyes narrowed. “What secret?”
“You know,” Derek whispered, leaning over to speak into her ear. “That you’re a transsexual.”
“I’d need to keep that a secret from…”
“From everyone!” he breathed. “Or you’ll be an outcast; I’ll be an outcast too! None of my family and friends would have anything to do with us. But you’re so completely female in your looks; no one will ever suspect. All we need to do is keep it that way.”
“So you’re ashamed of my … trans status.”
“Well I’m definitely not proud of it! It’s not something to be proud of.”
“Derek. Your family will find out eventually. My parents know.”
“Well, we just have to make sure that your parents and mine never meet.”
She put her breadstick down, and swallowed hard. Water welled in her eyes as she spoke: “Goodbye, Derek.” She stood up.
“Wait – wait, wait Meggie!” Derek hissed, his face flushing. “Okay, okay; maybe I can learn to live with people knowing about you. Just – just bear with me, okay? Give me a chance, alright?”
Meg looked up at the guitar player, who was just ending his current song. Gazing back at Derek now, she said “Okay. Here’s your chance.” She walked up to the stage where the musician was, and told him “excuse me” as she grabbed the microphone.
“I’m sorry to interrupt, ladies and gentlemen. I have an important announcement to make.”
Meg could see Derek’s face from the stage; it was now white as a sheet.
She continued. “I am a girl, but I was born a boy. I am a transgender woman. Anyone who wants to be my friend should not be ashamed of me, or afraid of what others think. Thank you.”
There was one “get off the stage” – but many more positive, like “You go girl” and “Hey beautiful, what’s your number?” As she stepped back down to the restaurant floor, she looked for Derek again. But he was long gone.
“And that, mister, was your chance. Your last one,” she muttered quietly.
Rick was undergoing intense therapy at Passages. On the fourth day of his stay, Dr. Rama approached him with news.
“Rick, there’s someone who has called and asked for permission to visit you. Your wife, Beth.”
Rick had been sitting in one of the communal room high backed chairs, eyes closed. This news snapped him to full attention. “What – what does she want?”
“I don’t know. I’ll ask her. If I feel that she intends to harm you verbally, I won’t allow it. But your divorce is just barely filed, and you are going to have to interact with her eventually. If the meeting occurs here, then we can manage any bad reaction you may have.”
The next day, Rick sat facing Beth in a small meeting room. The main nurse station had a security camera view to monitor the interaction by video but not audio.
Both spouses sat silently, waiting for the other to begin. Finally one spoke.
“Hello, Rick.”
“Beth.”
“Are you okay, now? Still want to kill yourself?”
Rick sighed and ran his fingers through his thick hair. “Why are you here, Beth? Did you come to mock me? To give me an update on ‘Michael’? Maybe to gloat about how many times he’s fu-“
“That’s over, Rick. As soon as he hit me – for not wanting to get into bondage and domination play. It’s taking a lot of makeup to hide the bruise he gave me.”
“That’s too bad. He was so good in bed; what a waste,” Rick sneered.
“Yeah, he was… “ Beth squinted her eyes and shook her head. “No, dammit – I’m not here to talk about him. I was worried about you. I figured you’d be down when I left, but I had no idea you’d go suicidal. Now I feel guilty; I should have softened the blow somehow.”
“Beth. I walked in on you two in bed. How were you gonna soften that?”
“Rick. I need to get back together with you. I feel scared; that hit from Michael has me worried he’s going to come and try to do worse. He won’t if you’re around. I’ve lost my best friend over this – Lizzie resents me for breaking up with you. I feel so alone. It would be a comfort to have you back – once you get out of here, of course.”
“So you need my presence and protection. What do I get out of it?”
“Why, you get me, Rick. I’m your wife. I know you still love me. I can kiss you and hug you, and love you as best I can.”
“As best you can?” Rick’s eyes narrowed. “Yes I still love you, Beth. I think I always will. Do you love me? Are you in love with me?”
“I … sure. Yes. Yes I am.”
“As long as I allow you to get dick somewhere, right?”
Beth had a pained expression on her face. “Please, Rick. It would only be a once in a while thing.. “
“Beth. File for the divorce. I’ll be generous. You can use the money to buy you a bodyguard. But I’ll never be yours – ever again. Goodbye to you, now and forever. Now get out of my sight,” he said as tears began to pour from his eyes.
The declaration Meg made at Pizzagogo seemed to do wonders for her resolve, and her psyche. Her counselor noted her new attitude, which showed more strength and less fear. The antidepressants may have been helping some, but they hadn’t had time to fully kick in; Lizzie took note of her personal growth too.
At work, Meghan “came out” to her boss for the first time. It went well. She then informed the office staff. Though her counselor had said this disclosure was not necessary, Meg felt the need to address the issue and take pride in who she was, who she’d become – a rite of passage, a conquering of her fears.
Then one day she received a phone call from an unknown number. “Hello?” she answered.
“Hello, Miss Meghan. This is Dr. Rama from Passages hospital. How are you today?”
“Doctor Rama! Is Rick okay? It’s been a week since he was put in there!”
“Yes – he’s shown quite a lot of improvement. I need for you to come down here so he can talk to you; he has some things to tell you. Can you come this afternoon?”
“I’m at work and won’t get off until 6 pm – I can come right over at that time!”
“No; I need you to come during full staffing hours. Is tomorrow morning possible?”
“Yes. Ah … does this mean the restraining order is cancelled?”
“No, it’s still in effect; I’m suspending it for this meeting, because it is necessary for Rick’s recovery. That’s all I’m prepared to tell you; he’ll get into the rest. Be here at 9 am promptly, please.”
Meghan parked her car in the Passages parking lot at 8:39 am. She walked briskly through the main entrance into the lobby, then straight into the women’s bathroom there.
She checked her appearance in the mirror. Most of her outfits, even for work, emphasized her considerable assets, especially her breasts and legs. The ensemble she had on today purposely did not do that. A loose fitting white blouse covered by a sweater jacket; black slacks and flats. This was especially to show Dr. Rama that she wasn’t here to try to stimulate Rick.
Satisfied with her look, she walked out to the reception desk. “Hi. I’m Meghan McConnell. Dr. Rama is expecting me?”
The woman at the desk made a quick call then put the phone down. “They’re almost ready for you. Dr. Rama will come and escort you to the meeting room in a few minutes. Feel free to have a seat.”
Meg turned to pick out a chair, but suddenly heard behind her “Hello, Miss Meghan.” It was the doctor. “I appreciate your being here on time – even a little early. We’re all ready, so follow me please.” He held open the locking door to the inpatient area.
The meeting room was well appointed with framed art, soft furniture and plenty of boxes of tissues. Meghan entered to see Rick sitting in a big chair; he wore a blue T-shirt and gray sweat pants. His face looked a little weathered; he smiled slightly at Meg, yet she thought she could see pain in his eyes as she sat down. Dr. Rama took a seat also, and cleared his throat.
“I’m going to be here to make sure the conversation stays therapeutic; otherwise, I’ll be silent. You may proceed, Rick.”
Rick coughed, then smiled. “Hello, Meg. You look great.”
She blushed. “It’s so good to see you again Rick. I’ve been praying for you multiple times a day while you’ve been here. It’s my fault you’re in here anyway.”
He shook his head. “No, both of us –“
“This was all my fault!” she cried, grabbing a tissue box. “I wasn’t supposed to get physical with you. I should have told Lizzie about Dr. Rama’s order. At the very least I should have slept on the floor; should've realized we’d be vulnerable if we were lying together. Because of me you felt like killing yourself. Now you’ve been locked up here for a week. Because of me.” She buried her head in her Kleenex-filled hands and began to sob uncontrollably. “I’m so … so sor- … sorry!!”
Rick sat silently. He wanted to go and embrace his friend, reassure her that all was okay. But Dr. Rama had forbidden physical contact in today’s meeting. So words would have to do.
“Meg. I forgive you. I screwed up too. And you’re still my friend – my best friend, right now.”
“I … *sob* … don’t deserve your friendship, Rick.”
“Well that’s just tough because I need your friendship, Meg. I need all the friends I can find. So I’m not letting go of you. Also, I haven’t been ‘locked up’ here for the last 3 days; I’ve stayed here voluntarily at doc’s request, to get intensive therapy. I really feel it’s helping me.”
Meghan’s tears had slowed some. “Dr. Rama said that you had ... something you wanted to discuss with me?”
“Yeah.” Now Rick looked uncomfortable. “You need to know why I pushed you away and locked myself in the bathroom that morning. The same reason Beth left me. The reason why I’m no good for any girl. I promised myself after Beth that I’d never tell another woman about this; but the doc thinks I need to open up to you.”
Meghan’s eyes grew wide as she realized the importance of the moment.
Rick looked away from her as he started to talk. “God, this is such a horror story. I’m dreading how you’re gonna react.”
Meghan’s eyes were drying as she wanted to show courage for her friend. “Rick. I love you. There, I’ve said it. I love you with every fiber of my being. I promise never again to hurt you; and I will never, ever reject you. Tell me this secret that seems too horrible to talk about. Because if you tell me about it, then you – we – can start to deal with it. If you don’t, it will get even worse as time goes on.”
Rick sighed. “Sounds like you’ve been watching too much Dr. Phil.”
“Actually, it was Mr. Rogers who said that. I’ll take his advice over Dr. Phil’s any day.”
Rick smiled at his friend. "So you love me, huh?"
Meg smiled back. "This much, Bear," she spread her arms as wide as they could go.
Rick kept smiling, but his face otherwise turned sad. "Before you commit to saying that, you better hear me out." Rick looked out the window. "Okay, here goes," he whispered. Meghan quieted her breathing so as to not miss a word.
“When I was born, it was in a rural New Jersey hospital. The delivery went fine; then, my parents requested the obstetrician perform a circumcision. The doc decided to use an electric cautery to do it. I found out later that technique had been discredited and was no longer approved for circumcision; but the doc had continued to do them that way for years. Well, the voltage may have been turned up too high, or maybe the electricity arc got away from him; in any event, half of my penis ended up black and charred.”
“Oh my god,” Meg exclaimed as she covered her mouth with both hands.
Rick continued to speak in a low volume monotone. “The head of my dick is still mostly, there, and still has sensation. But half of the shaft – especially the parts that balloon up and make a ‘hard on’ – were mostly destroyed. The pee canal got scarred some; I have to see the urologist 2 or 3 times a year to get it dilated.with probes so I can still pass urine. But although I can feel turned on by rubbing my dick, I can’t use it for intercourse.
“My dick is scarred, and pulls to the right really abnormally. Most of the skin on it is tight from the scarring, not loose and stretchy like most guys’ dicks. And it’s really, really small; I have to grasp it using only two fingers. There’s not much more to handle.
“I’ve had multiple surgical procedures since, most of them to keep my pee-hole open; if that closes up, I’m in major trouble. There’s nothing they could do to save my dick for sex, though. I’ve been left with what they call a nonfunctioning micropenis – meaning I can’t accomplish an erection. Man, the desire is there – my testicles are still functional and healthy – but nothing happens. I can achieve a climax if I rub and press deeply enough, but it takes a lot of rubbing to get me there.”
Meghan was dabbing away tears once more. She felt she could feel his anguish. Dr Rama stayed silent, closely observing both friends as Rick continued.
“That means when it comes to love, I can’t give a woman the feel of a real penis in her vagina. And I can’t give her the satisfaction of knowing that she made her man come. Beth told me before we married that her love for me would overcome my shortcomings, and we tried so many things – dildos, oral, anal - but two years later she had to admit that she needed more. She wanted an open marriage; I said no, and then all this separation and adultery happened.
“I know, now ... most all women have to feel a real, warm, thick human dick inside them. No matter what else they say. Beth taught me that.
“Rick … my heart aches so badly for you right now,” Meg moaned. “My god, this is a burden you’ve been carrying all of your life! Why didn’t you tell me when we were friends back in middle school? Were you afraid I was going to reject you as a friend? I opened my soul to you then about me being trans. Your support during that time kept me going even when I felt like giving up.”
“Maybe it would have helped me if I’d told you, Meg; maybe not. Opening up wouldn’t have changed the fact that I’m damaged goods. I went to extreme lengths to hide my defect; I changed clothes for gym in the bathroom stall, not in the general locker areas.”
“What about after gym? I remember – we had one open communal shower room.”
Rick half smiled for the first time this morning. “My folks always arranged my schedule with the schools so I had gym as last class of the day. That way I could bike home and shower there. So I found ways to hide this.”
“Did your family help you bear this burden?”
“Meg. You remember me talking about my family, don’t you?”
“Just that you didn’t want to work with them.”
“Think about it. My name, Rick Russo – that’s Italian. I’m from Jersey. I got a family that does shady business. Put 2 and 2 together.”
Meg’s mind finally clicked. “You mean … ?” She mouthed the word “Mafia”.
“Pretty much. In any event, the Doc who disfigured me wasn’t sued because he ‘went missing’ in the months after my injury, and hasn’t been heard from since. Since than my family’s told me to “be tough and don’t complain about your problem”. Once I was 18 they tried to get me to join the family biz as an enforcer. They said I should take any anger I had towards the doc who scarred me and use it to deal with ‘problem people’.
“I never did want to be a ‘goodfella’ though – my plan was to move away as soon as I turned adult age, and get a legit career. I came to Baton Rouge to take a courier job, and was able to work up to middle management.”
Meghan smiled. “And I moved here for college, and to transition without my family giving me grief. What a surprise when I was reading our high school alumni newsletter and found you now lived here too!” Her face now turned serious again. “Your family - do they know about Beth leaving?”
“NO. And they don’t need to! I don’t need her ‘disappearing ‘ like that doc did 25 years ago. My folks could do it, then use that to try to draw me into their web of criminal activity.
“But I am still left with the fact that I’m about as useful to a woman as a eunuch. And I can’t take the possibility of my heart being ripped out again because my girl can’t be fulfilled by me. I think that’s the reason I got so severely depressed – I not only lost Beth, but I feel I don’t have any chance for love in the future. Then when you told me you had to have me inside you, I realized I would even fail you completely. And that, to make a long story longer, is what happened that morning.”
Meghan rose and stood in front of Rick’s face, to look him straight in his eyes. “So you didn’t reject me because I used to be a boy?”
“Absolutely not, Meg. To me you are a woman, period, end of story. Not only that, you are a true friend. You came to my rescue, and showed me true love in my desperate need. In fact, I was falling in love with you, Meg. But I can’t let that happen. I talked with Derek after you left us at Pizzagogo. He remarked about how much you enjoy making love. And I know that getting penis is probably a big part of that for you. So we’d better keep things at the ‘just friends’ level before our hearts get too involved.”
Meghan sat back down. Both of them remained silent for the a few seconds.
Finally, Meghan cleared her throat. “You know, I’m damaged goods too. I can never bear children. And I’m transgender, which in many people’s eyes still makes me an unnatural freak. So these are burdens I will carry the rest of my life. If we ever considered being more than ‘just friends’, then we could help each other with those burdens.” She turned to Dr. Rama. “Unless the doctor feels that we are bad for each other.”
Rama smiled. “I only forbade you two having intimate contact during this critical time. I am impressed with the maturity and care you have given each other during this sensitive discussion. So Rick, once you're discharged, I see no problem with a healthy romance - so long as you keep it non-physical. No sexual stimulation for at least the next sixty days.”
“And the restraining order?” Meghan inquired, hopeful.
“I’m cancelling it,” smiled Rama.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Just Friends? Part 7 (Conclusion)
by **Sigh**
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Dr. Rama discharged Rick from Passages two days later.. He still was to return for counseling on a less intense scale. Now Rick was waiting for Meghan to pick him up and take him home.
“Your ride is here, Mr. Russo,” the intake nurse said. He picked up his bags and headed towards the doors. Dr. Rama intercepted him.
“Let me walk with you, Rick. I’ll officially hand you off to your friend. I don’t always do this, but you’ve been an exceptional patient. I want to see you two leaving here together, like a ‘happily ever after’ scene in a movie. Just remember, unlike romance films, a lot of work is necessary to have successful happiness.”
“Got it, doc,” Rick replied. “Don’t worry. I know I’m better, but I’m not so cocky as to think I’m finished healing. I’ll keep the appointment with you on Friday.” He then smiled wide; Rama noticed
“I can’t wait to see Meg again, even though we’ll just be shaking hands for now,” the big man said. Rama punched the unlock code for the facility doors, and they walked through. But Meghan wasn’t there.
“Surprise, big guy” said a wavy haired blonde girl in a skirted power suit; Lizzie. “Meg had to work the full day, and she was already on shaky ground with her boss over the schedule changes and a missed shift or two. So you got me taking you home. I borrowed my brother Sammy’s truck; my little Miata wasn’t built for giants.”
“Lizzie – this is Dr. Rama,” Rick said. “He’s been my shrin – uh, psychiatrist - here.”
Liz’s eyes narrowed. “You’re Dr. Ramanathan? You’re nothing like your picture. I did a search on your name and Passages … and the impression I got was of a middle aged, chunky guy. But you … “ Liz stared at the doc. He was trim, fit, dark skinned, and had a hint of stylish stubble on his face. Early thirties, Lizzie guessed. No ring on left hand.
“Ah. I’ll bet you pulled up my cousin," the doc answered. "He’s also a Dr. Ramanathan – psychiatrist, same as me – and he heads up the Passages hospital in Kissimmee, Florida. In fact, his recommendation helped me get the position at this Passages facility.”
“I hope you’ve been doing right by my friends Rick and Meg. If not, I’ll have to come and teach you a thing or two,” Lizzie said with a slight grin.
“Ah … “ Dr. Rama looked suddenly flustered “Well, If you feel you have to, I wouldn’t mind.” He then glanced down to this right holding his gaze maybe a little too long.
Omigod. He just did a wedding ring check on me! Liz thought. She pulled out a business card and wrote on the back of it. She then handed it to Rama. “if you need any help with investments, please contact me. It was really nice to meet you.” She and Rick then walked out to the truck.
“Didja write your cell number on the back?” said Rick as they got in.
“Yes,” Liz smiled. “Along with two words.”
Rick grinned and nodded. “CALL ME. Right?”
Meg tasted the pasta dish she’d whipped up. “Perfect,” she said, smacking her lips. “Tasty, but not too filling. Leaving plenty of energy for later.” She removed her apron and walked into the living area to view how she looked. Her low cut green spaghetti strap blouse needed something; she put on the petite gold jacket she’d pulled out. “There we go.” The black miniskirt with dark hose and green pumps were the perfect complement. Her red hair was in an attractive “up-do” to keep it out of the way while she cooked … and for another reason too. She reviewed her mental checklist: “Candles lit … lights dim … soft guitar music … wine – wait, WINE? Omigod, don’t tell me I forgot the wine!”
The doorbell rang. Too late to get wine now, dammit. Oh well. She hopped eagerly to the door and opened it.
There stood Rick in a jacket and tie. His eyes lit up upon seeing Meg, and he broke into a huge smile. “Wow. Just … wow,” he said. He extended a bouquet of huge red roses to her. “I tried to get some blooms that would match your beauty, but that’s just impossible; these were the closest I could come. I also brought the vino, as promised.” He produced a bottle of Sauvignon blanc in his other hand.
“Whew!” Meghan exhaled. “That’s right, you said you’d bring the booze. Pretty classy booze, too.”
“Are you impressed?”
“You’re doing good, buster. Keep it up!” she laughed. “Are you ready for dinner? Because it’s ready for us.”
“MMmmm, Meg. Are you sure you’re Irish? Because you can cook a great Italian supper.”
“This is my 3rd and best attempt at it. I’ve been practicing all week. Be thankful you didn’t have to eat my first go-round with that recipe. How was work today?”
“You’re interested in my work?”
“I’m interested in YOU. I want to be a part of your life – ah, I mean, since we’re dating now, I want to experience every aspect of you – the mundane and the exciting, the ups and the downs. I want to be the best friend I can to you, Rick.”
“I see. What about being more than just friends?”
“Well … you know what today is, right?”
“Oh yes. How could I forget?”
“Almost nine weeks ago, we promised Dr. Rama we’d have no intimate contact for sixty days. And we kept our promise this time. I’m so proud of us!”
Rick lifted his wine glass. “A toast, to completion of the 60 days.”
Meg clinked her glass to his. “And a toast to us.”
Now Rick was sitting on the couch in the den, sipping the remaining drops of his glass of wine. Meg had excused herself to use the restroom. She now entered the den.
“I felt a little stuffy so I took my jacket off. Can I take yours from you?”
Rick complied. Meg reached for his Windsor knot, and loosened his tie. “Let’s get you comfy.” She then pulled the pins from her hair, and it cascaded sexily down her shoulders as Rick watched. She slid onto the couch, snuggling up under his right arm and pressing her bosom into his chest. He ran his fingers through her flowing auburn locks as she lay her head on his shoulder. Gently, he lifted her chin with his left arm, and met her face with a warm, open-mouthed kiss. They continued kissing for many minutes.
Now Rick’s shirt was mostly unbuttoned, with Meg’s right arm massaging his hairy chest. His right hand massaged her breast, then her butt.
“Are you ready to move into the bedroom?” she breathed.
“I am. Still worried about disappointing you.”
“Don’t you be. I’m halfway about to orgasm just right now. I know you can make me come without penetration; you did that when we got intimate that first time.”
“Yeah. But I can’t get you that filled-up sensation.”
“If I need that, we can use the brand new sex toy I showed you. I’m worried about you getting satisfied, though.”
“Well, about that. Why don’t we try you sucking on me. If that doesn’t work, well. I’ve been researching that ‘prostate stimulation’ technique you told me about … and … I might be open to you trying that. Just take it slow, okay?”
“Really! Oh, I’m excited to try it. You know, Rick – I think we’re going to be fine. OOOH!”
Meg gasped in surprise as the big man stood up and hoisted her in his arms like a groom taking his wife across the threshold.. He then proceeded to the bedroom.
Hours later:
The couple lay naked in bed, entwined together.
“How are you doing, Rick? Emotionally? Are you upset or disappointed at all?” Meghan queried, afraid to outright ask about the S word – suicide.
“Meg – I’m feeling great. Don’t worry. No despair, no hopelessness, nothing anywhere near the state I was in when the Doc committed me.”
“Good. Because I’m still floating in the stratosphere. This was the best lovemaking I’ve ever had.”
Rick craned his neck to look at her. “The best? Come on – I know Derek and you had a pretty physical connection, and his dick –“
“Lovemaking to a woman is more than just penis, Big Bear – and you did all the right things. Foreplay, loving sexy words, rubbing and squeezing and assuring me that you’re super attracted to me. You put my needs first, and you trusted me to put yours first. “
“Meg … I could tell you were putting my needs as your priority. Thank you so much for that. It was amazing,” whispered Rick. “Better than I ever hoped. I came with more intensity than I ever have. You’re a miracle, baby.”
“I lost count of how many times I came! Six … seven? God,” Meghan sighed. “Your magic fingers and mouth - you played me like a violin. I love how you started off gentle and caressing, and then progressed to a hard pounding fuck with the tool. Every sex fantasy I ever had – you made them come true.”
Rick fretted. “How are our future lovemaking sessions ever going to match up to this one?”
“Hahaha! Don’t worry, I won’t expect this intensity every time. But it’s thrilling to know this bliss is possible for us.”
“Meg.”
“Yes, Big Bear?”
“I love you. You are the best friend – and now the best lover – I’ve ever had.”
“I feel the same way, Rick. Every day with you is a dream come true.”
“So … would you be opposed to making this permanent?”
“Um … what are you –“ Meg sat up as Rick moved off the bed. Reaching into the pocket of his pants hung on the bedroom chair, he turned to her and dropped to one knee, presenting her a small box. He opened it, saying “Save my life one more time, Meg. Please marry me.”
She squeaked and screamed as he put the ring on her finger. Then she tackled him to the floor and smothered him with kisses.
One year later.
“Hello, Mr. and Mrs. Russo. Richard and Meghan, correct? I’m Dr Ivanovich. Your urologist referred you here, right? I’m sorry, we can’t find the referral form he faxed to my office. We’re having them re-fax it now. Can you tell me why he sent you to me?"
Rick sighed. “I’m here because I promised my new urologist – Dr. Sawyer – I’d see you once. I always follow doctor’s orders; I learned that the hard way.”
Dr. Ivanovich furrowed his brow. “You know, I’m a plastic surgeon who specializes in transgender confirmation surgery, especially female-to-male cases. Are you a male who was born female?”
Ricks face twisted in confusion, as did Meghan’s.
“Doctor, I’m a transgender female, and I’m married to Rick, a genetic male. Neither of us wants to change our current gender. There must be a mistake?!”
Rick spoke. “My urologist said I might need removal of the rest of my penis. It was severely injured during a botched circumcision when I was a baby, and I had a bad motorcycle accident last month that damaged it further. The pee-tunnel is having trouble staying open, and it will lead to bladder and kidney damage unless we remove the obstructed part of my dick.
“I’m not looking forward to having it amputated totally. I guess I felt like I at least had a dick, even if it was deformed. My old urologist – Dr. Hill – always told me nothing could be done to help it.”
The plastic surgeon now was nodding. “Oh, okay. I think I understand. I’ve heard of Dr. Hill; he retired at what, 85? That may explain a lot. Sometimes as we docs get older, we don’t keep up with new developments. Your new urologist – Sawyer – is at state-of-the-art surgeon; I've worked with him on many cases.”
Rick and Meghan looked at each other, then back at Dr. Ivanovich. “Are you saying that Rick wasn’t getting the most up to date advice from his previous urologist?”
Ivanovich sidestepped Meg’s question by asking one of his own. “What about sensation and function in your penis – as in, erections and stimulation?”
“I can’t get anything like a hard-on. The head of my penis can still feel, though, and I get a lot of pleasure when Meg pays attention to it.”
Meghan nodded, with just a hint of blushing. Discussing their sex life with doctors – especially a new one – was still a little uncomfortable.
The doctor examined Rick’s groin area, then sat down to talk to the couple again.
“Have you been disappointed in your lack of a fully functional penis, Rick?”
“I – um – nearly killed myself over it. But I got help from a good psychiatrist. And the unconditional love and affection of my wife here has made life and sex enjoyable in spite of my defect. I just worry that it’ll be even harder for me to get an orgasm if it’s totally cut off.”
“Well, you absolutely must be able to empty your bladder; if it’s getting obstructed from scarring, that’s a problem. But tell me – have you ever heard of phalloplasty?”
Rick shook his head.
“It’s the creation of a functional penis – one that you can pee through and have intercourse with – in a person who doesn’t have one. I create them for transgender males, and for men with penises amputated due to trauma or cancer. I’ve developed new techniques that can salvage any stimulatory tissue and use it to give yourself pleasure as well as your partner. It’s not as good as a natural penis, but I’ll bet I can give you more than you’ve ever had. Interested?”
Rick looked at Meghan with an inquisitive face.
She replied “I’m going to love you – and make love to you – penis or not, Bear. I’ll stand by whatever you choose.”
Rick turned back to the doctor. “Hell yes. I’m interested!”
THE END
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Looney Limerick
The wolf said "Take heart; you'll survive,"
When Red Riding Hood at Granny's arrived
"Since I put on this dress,
I've (I must confess)
Never felt more complete and alive."
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This is an initial post, just to make sure I'm doing this right.
Who says limericks are barely more sophisticated than puns? Oops - I just did!
2.
"I PASSED MY POLICE BOARDS!" screamed LaMarque,
The T-girl who's stolen my heart.
"So from now on, Emile,
When you cop a feel,
You'll be feeling a cop!" she remarked
3.
"I'm a crossdresser, sir," stated Ted,
"-not a robber!" to police chief Ned.
"I bought these pantyhose
In nude, white, and rose,
To wear on my legs, not my head!"
4.
"When Jack won the lotto," said Weemes,
"He chose to fulfill all his dreams.
Left the country for the city,
Changed his Audi to a Mini,
And his 'outie' to an 'innie', it seems"
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Written in fun and meant to be taken that way:)
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Magical Kingdom Princess Nightmare
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2020 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
My entry for the Reluctant Princess contest.
Ah, to be a Magical Kingdom Princess. It's the dream of every little girl. But what if you're not little; what if you're not a girl?
These are the first and only words I can remember hearing in quite a while. They come from the lips of a svelte and beautiful woman who appears to be … dabbing something on my face?!
“Wha … uh, where … ?”
“Where is your big secret date with that gorgeous human, Prince Derric? Remember,” - the woman’s voice fell to a whisper - ”you’re going to sneak off to the Coral Caves after you finish this concert for your father. But back to my question. I don’t know if landbound lads can get mermaids like us pregnant. But better safe than sorry, don’t you think?”
“Mermaids??” She’s close to my face, but now I push her away to see her and my surroundings.
She is a fish from the waist down! No legs, just a scaled tail with fins!
And we both appear to be – underwater! How the hell am I breathing?? And yet, I am.
“Mariel, please.” The fish-girl now appears a little frustrated with me. “You look great without any makeup, but you need to be SPECTACULAR tonight. I’ve got your squid-ink liner on, but I need to apply krill dye to your cheeks and lips to get you there. You may have caught that guy’s eye by just swishing your tail, but your father King Trident is not so easily impressed. Um, stay perfectly still. One of your push-up pads is showing.”
She grabs towards my chest and readjusts my shirt – wait, not a shirt but a restraint, or something like one?. Her hand sticks inside it and – YIKES! My nipple – it’s super sensitive! And squishy?! I look down to see – I have two generous scallop shells on my chest. What the heck??
“Why am I wearing seashells?” My voice tone is high and squeaky. Foreign to me.
The mermaid girl’s name is Anemone, at least according to a little electric name bar now appearing under her chin. She tilts her head and looks back at me with a confused grimace.
“Because B shells are too small and D shells are still way too big for you, princess. But don’t worry, you’re still growing.”
I sit, flummoxed, not knowing what to say or ask next. Annie (she says that’s her nickname) works at light speed, with hands flashing over my lips, my eyelids, my hair. In just seconds she backs away, smiling big while her undulating dorsal fin makes her hover in mid-air. I mean mid-water.
“Ta-daa! Look in the mother-of-pearl mirror. What do you think?”
I do look, hoping for answers or clarity. Those hopes explode into dust. I can’t recall what my natural face looks like exactly, but I see glimmers of it in the glassy reflection – just with a rounder and made-up face, billowing red hair, green eyes, and a mermaid’s bod, just like Annie. Except more voluptuous. I am amazed, confounded, and paralyzed mentally (and therefore physically too).
“I know, I know. I am after all an ar-teest,” brags Annie. “But with you as a canvas, I can do no wrong. Now out onto that stage, girl! The music for your song is starting!”
In a mere moment that seems more like a TV show than real life, I am out on a stage, looking out at an underground Carnegie Hall full of mermen and maids. In the center sits the guy who has to be King Trident – ‘cause he’s holding one. A trident, that is. By that I mean a monstrous spear-fork, not a piece of sugar free gum. The music swells and everyone turns to me in anticipation. I can’t sing. Never could. So they’re gonna be really disapp-
What is happening?? My mouth is moving, forming words I don’t remember learning or rehearsing. It’s musical, and it’s beautiful, if a little too sappy and romantic for my tastes. So I’ve decided, I’m just gonna relax and let this wild ride take me where it will; I don’t seem to be in control anyway.
Which of course is a cue for everything to go to hell.
Black smoky ink starts to flood in from the corners of the stage, and all at once a devilish woman – half obese hag, half black octopus – storms onto stage, approaching me with rage dripping from her face. Trident stands, but he’s moving too slowly to stop her. I’m a dead man. Woman. Fish-woman. Whatever, I’m as good as dead. Wait! This is jogging memories in me now. I have to be in a dream. This is like the plot of that animated classic, the little … the little swimmer? Why can’t I think?
Here comes Simone – that’s what octo-lady’s electric name badge says – but now instead of anger, I see tears and pain in her eyes. She grabs me by the shoulders and shakes me as she bawls –
“This! Jackson, switch me into this NOW!”
A harpoon shoots into the stage floor, barely missing Simone. We all look up. It’s a man – a really handsome dude – not a half fish. He’s holding his breath as he points toward the octo-gal and then swims off quickly.
Simone intently looks into my eyes. “I have to follow him – I can’t fight the program. If you can, then do so – look for the grotto, and dive into the treasure chest. I’ll meet you in the next scenario. As soon as you can!” She then swims off to follow the dude, sobbing all the way.
“Shut down the show! Everyone to safe quarters – that means YOU, Mariel!” booms King Trident. “Guards! Follow me – we must apprehend Simone!” He then blows a hole in the roof of the theater with his magic superfork, and swims out to follow the villain.
I am swimming out of the stage area, wondering where my safe quarter is. Then I feel a tapping on my shoulder; it’s Annie.
“Honey, now’s the time to scoot to the Coral Caves. There’s a huge air pocket bedroom there, and Prince Derric is waiting for you!”
My head is spinning. “But didn’t he just lead that crying evil octopus woman out?”
“Yes; he’s already beaten her! Now hurry; his bed ready and waiting! Don’t your loins ache for his fullness?”
“Um … no? Look – I don’t know why everyone’s calling me princess. I didn’t ask for this; I don’t want this. I think that I’m supposed to be a ‘loin-filler’, not a ‘fillee’.
Annie is smiling at me as if she hasn’t listened to a word. “Hurry, princess! He awaits!”
I have my hand up in a “STOP” gesture. “Forget this. Someone show me where the grotto is!”
Okay.
I’m thinking that I’m in the “next scenario”. Because I did the dive into the treasure chest in that underwater cave, and now I’m lying on my back in a four-poster bed. Sitting bolt upright, I reach for my bod with my hands – dammit, there’s boobs and no junk and so obviously I’m still a chick. And I’m wearing – a tiara and a gauzy, near-sheer thing that a girl might call a nightie but really is a pre-sex wrapping. At least there’s no one else here to see me in this. No one but that tall green-skinned hell goddess with large curly horns standing on my left – I’m just noticing her now. And again there’s that feeling: I’m a dead ma – er, princess.
Instead of killing me, the green lady sighs. “At last you’re awake, Aurosa; looks like my kiss did the trick.”
“What? You mean you kissed me while I was –“
“Sleeping. Yes. Haven’t you figured this out yet? All of these scenes are from the classic animated films by Waaault Di- kkk!!
“Walt Dick??”
Millicent – that’s her name on the ‘lectric tag – coughs hard three times, then catches her breath. “The program obviously won’t let me say his name right. The creators didn’t get official copyrights before making this adventure; that’s why even our names are a little – or a lot – off.”
“Hey … I think I remember this one. A handsome prince kisses the Sleeping Beau – kkk!!”
“See? It won’t let you say the title.”
“So … I’m not into kissing guys, since I am one usually in real life, I guess. I’m having trouble remembering that life. But the women I like to kiss are horny in a much different way from you. So why isn’t this like the movie?”
“Actually, it is the way that the live action movie went; the witch kisses the girl, and it’s her kiss that breaks the eternal sleep. The prince tried to wake you, but it takes a true love kiss, and his didn’t work. After you got pricked –“
“He put his prick into me?? While I was asleep?”
“No! Your finger got pricked by a cursed spindle; that’s what put you to sleep.”
“Okay; so his kiss didn’t work, but yours did. Does that mean that you’re a lesbian? Why was your kiss a ‘true love’ one, instead of just foreplay?”
Millie smirks. “Everything’s about sex, right? I can see why you paid your fare for this fantasy. I’ll bet you’re supposed to be the hero guy in each scene, who gets to plow the princess; somehow you got placed into the ‘bottom’ role. And I got the bad guy parts – I don’t even get to have ‘top’ sex. What a screw-up! Definitely asking for a refund. As for ‘true love’ – well, I do love you. I love your character. I wanted to be her so bad …” She’s getting wet eyes now, just like when she was Simone.
I shake my head as I cover my breasts and groin with my hands. “Still wrapping my head around this – but I don’t need to understand this as much as I need an extraction. Get me out of this nightmare!”
Millie frets. “Can’t find an abort code. But if we get to the transfer points, we can speed through the rest of the tales quickly and be done. The point for us now is … there! In the thicket of thorns, see?” She points out the window towards a shimmering oval in the middle of a forest of pointy sharp plants.
Next thing I know the witch is flying me – yes, I said she flies, with big giant raven wings – to the transfer point, and we both dive in.
The first thing I do when the bright lights fade is search for a mirror of some sort. There’s one there, on the wall. I’m still female, but with jet black hair, a poofy-shouldered gown, and I swear the palest skin I’ve ever seen. A real porcelain princess. And now a gruesome face fills the mirror, and speaks to me?!
“Hello, fairest of them all.”
Another voice now comes from the doorway of this room I’m in. “Hi-ho. We’re off to work now, Bleach.” It’s a short dude, with about six other short dudes behind him, all carrying pick-axes. I check out their names. Medic, Shy, Sniffy, Joy, Grouchy, Yawny, and DD.
“DD?” I ask.
“Short for Developmentally Delayed. Don’t be insensitive, Bleach,” scolds Medic.
Craning my neck down, I see my own name tag: Bleach White. Oh come on. Copyrights may have forced someone’s hand, but that’s just lazy. Looking back up, the little dudes are already gone out the door.
So what now? Do I look by myself for the next transfer point, or try to find the old hag who’s supposed to be the bad guy? I sit down to decide, and something (I guess the program) starts me whistling. Suddenly a throng of birds and critters are in the room – making the bed, sweeping the floor, dusting the cabinets. Now THIS I wish I could take back with me to my regular life. Whatever that is/was.
“HELP!! PRINCESS FAIREST-OF-ALL, HELP ME!!”
That screaming is coming from the front yard, which I’ve now rushed out into. I do see an old hag, tied to a tree; a ruggedly good-looking hombre is holding a knife to her throat and snarling. There’s a dark, shiny apple lying on the ground between them.
Old Hag sees me now, and winces as the tip of the blade dents the skin of her neck. “I can’t die in this simulation! Stop him!”
The “handsome prince” turns, and his visage changes from fury to relief as he runs to me. “Oh, milady! I feared this sorceress had already poisoned you, and I meant to kill her and then kiss you to awaken you!”
“No killing of anybody today, okay buddy?” I look at his hand. “Umm … you’re still holding your knife. How come?”
“Why, so we can play, my sweet.” Now he looks like he’s lust personified, drooling and grinning with an evil leer. In a flash the knife has cut my dress ties, and I’m in medieval undies only as the rest of my clothes fall to my feet. He holds the knife to my neck now. “A little danger makes the mating that much more exciting, yes?”
Suddenly two gnarled and bent fingers dripping with some sort of liquid wipe across my assaulter’s lips. His head jerks back and he chokes out only one word: “WHAT?”
“Poison apple juice. I scraped some under my fingernails. Only takes a drop,” cackles the old hag, now coming out from behind Prince Rape. He begins convulsing and quickly drops to the ground, as still as death. Hag shakes her head. “Sorry. I was waiting in the bushes until the dwarves left. This guy seems like he showed up way too early in the story. Something’s wrong with this whole set up, something beyond just us being in the wrong roles.”
“Speaking of roles … you wanted to be the princess, right?”
“I wanted to be ALL of them – and to make love to each handsome prince. I’m a divorced 35-year-old woman in regular life. I wanted the ultimate adult experience, where I could sow some wild oats and not have to worry about emotional entanglements or STD’s later. And they said there was a guy my age who was signing up to be the prince – er, princes. The computer would provide the other characters.”
I have a realization. “I think I’m the guy who was supposed to be in the prince roles. I remember making that choice. So – if you’re the villains, and I’m the princesses, who is this guy?” I say as I point to the comatose dude at my feet.
“I dunno. An NPC? He sure seemed sinister, though. I never signed up for a BDSM or rape scenario. Too bad – he’s actually pretty hot.”
“Yeah, he is,” I hear myself whisper. I mean, he is. Chiseled chin with a Kirk Douglas dimple in the middle, ripped arm and torso muscles pulling at his way-too-tight shirt, and a generous bulge below his belt buckle. God, what love we would have made if he just wasn’t a psycho.
WHAT THE HELL DID I JUST THINK??
“We’ve got to get out of here,” I say to Hag. “I think this role mistake is having a very wrong effect on me.”
“Okay. Is there a mirror anywhere? Per the pre-induction pamphlet I read, those usually make good portals.”
“Back in the cabin.” I turn one last glance to my would-be molester. “Have fun waiting for anyone to come and give you a true love kiss, buddy. Maybe Grouchy will take a shine to you after a while.” I then run inside to the mirror.
And in an instant I’m dancing – like ballroom style. Me and the Prince – a new one – are cutting a rug in the middle of a palace, surrounded by partygoers all dressed to the nines. I know this movie. Let’s cut to the chase; I pull away from my partner and yell:
“STEPMOTHER! WHERE ARE YOU?”
“Over here, Rindercella!” comes a woman’s voice from the entrance.
I break in a run towards her; she pushes through the crowd and grabs my hand. Dammit, my slipper just came off. Like in the story. We run out the entrance and towards my personal coach with driver and horses. I hear the great clock of the palace starting to ring; it’s seconds from midnight. I’m frustrated and desperate for all this to be over. “Where’s the portal?”
“Milady, will you not be consorting with Prince Hank this evening? You cannot leave until one minute after midnight,” queries my coachman.
“Over here,” says Stepmom. “This puddle of water should serve as a mirror; let’s see if it starts to glow.”
The clock hits the twelfth ring, and my entourage turns to mice and a big gourd.
“The glow’s starting. Should be able to jump in any second now,” says I.
Stepmom grins. “Your character right now is lousy at sports.”
“Huh? Why is that?”
“Because her coach is a pumpkin, and she’s always running away from the ball.”
“Ouch,” I groan as we jump into the glowing portal puddle.
The next place we come to in is a great cave full of treasure. What, no mirror? I look down - I’m wearing a billowing outfit that covers all except head, hands, feet and midriff. With me is a cute little monkey on my right shoulder; on my left, a loud and blaring parrot that starts to talk. “Aw, you gotta be kidding me! Now I’m not even the bad guy; I’m the bad guy’s sidekick!” His nametag says Inigo. “And not only that, but it’s – oh, wow. Princess Jazz. You’re the sexiest ‘you’ yet,” he squawks.
“Keep your head in the game, bird. Where’s the way out?”
“Beats me. This is all wrong. The parrot and the princess were never in this place in the movie! Where’s Alad – kkk! **koff koff** - ow, that hurt. And where’s the monkey?”
“Right here, on my other shoul – wait, where’d he go?”
“Oh no. He’s reaching for that forbidden gem over there!”
“MONKEY! DON’T TOUCH THAT!”
Inigo flies off, then flies back with an ancient lamp in his claws. He drops it into my hands. “Jazz! Rub it! Hurry!”
I do. The next words I hear are “Oy! Ten thousand years will give you such a crick in the neck!”
The monkey has grabbed the stupid gem, and a wave of lava is heading towards us; meanwhile, the Genie has begun to explain the provisos, the quid pro quos of wishes.
“SAVE IT! GENIE I WISH ME AND THE PARROT TO BE TRANSFERRED TO THE NEXT SCENARIO NOW NOW NOW!”
“God. That was close. How many more damn scenarios are there?” I’m in a yellow ball gown, inside a huge room in what I assume is a huger mansion.
“Hullo, Princess Bella,” growls a huge monstrous beast, a cross between a wolf and a bull. In fact, the nameplate says Bullwolf. “It’s me, your villain. Sheesh. At least I still got to be a girl in the first three scenes. Now I’m a male – and extremely ugly. I’m ready for this to be over.”
“Wait,” I object. “Isn’t the guy from the village – the big bully – the true villain of this tale?”
“For most of the movie, I’m the bully, the enemy. Who knows. This is the role the program assigned for me. We’re at the whim of that stupid computer, while our bodies lie in water-filled sensory deprivation tanks, and they manipulate us with pheromones, light, smells and so forth. God, I am so gonna sue Jackson and his whole team when this is over. Until then I get to be a monster.” My friend the beast now starts to cry.
“Hey. Heyyyy.” I come over and stroke his hairy arm. “Hang in there. You’ve been my only friend in all of this, and I so appreciate what you’ve done for me. If not for you, I would have endured a nightmare of unwanted penetrations, and at least one guy who threatened to cut me. We’re gonna make it out of here. And we’ll make Jackson – whoever that is – pay for this awful day. Now let’s go find that last portal.”
“30 rooms in this damn mansion and not one mirror – even in the bathrooms. What’s the deal?” I’m really fuming as I head back to the library to meet Bullwolf as we agreed.
“I had a convo with the computer,” the beast says. “This is the final scenario. Seems it won’t release us until we go completely through this script, since neither of us have achieved the goal of actual sexual activity with orgasm, which was the stated reason we both gave for doing this.”
My mental gears are whirring. “So I’m gonna have to come before it lets me out? Could I just do myself in the bathroom?”
“Hey! I didn’t think of that. Try it. See if it works!”
“Umm … I know how to do it with my penis. With my current equipment, I’ve never done it.”
“Come on. You’ve given a girl a finger job in the real world, right?”
“Yeah, of course. But I’ve never given myself one. It creeps me out a little bit that I’m gonna reach down there and not feel any of my usual junk. And … to be totally honest, I’m scared.”
“Scared? Of touching a vagina? If you’d been put in the right role, you’d have been doing that all day today – just on the princesses, not yourself.”
“EXACTLY. I’m scared that if I do myself like this … that I’ll like it too much!”
Bullwolf’s jaw drops; this news is just as stunning to him as it is to me. He deserves to hear about what’s going on in my head now. “I’ve been turned on since the Bleach White scene. Maybe – probably – it’s all due to the programming or the pheromones or whatever. I just know that right now it’s all I can do NOT to touch myself. I’m dreaming of touching it … and I’m starting to dream of what it could feel like with someone else’s finger or even (god help me) a prick! What if I do and find I can’t live without it? What if I turn into a tranny?”
“My god. This screw up is really messing with you in a huge way. Let’s just go through the script to the end except for the sex and see if we can leave at that point.”
An animated candlestick with a face – named Luminari – hops in to the room, and looks panicked. “Master,” he says in a thick French accent, “ze gates – zey are being stormed; we are attacked!”
I can see through the window; a lynch mob from the town is marching down the front grounds, and a big-muscled brute named “Garcon” looks to be leading it. “Bullwolf – what do we do now?”
He looks at me with the saddest blue eyes I’ve ever seen. “Go find a safe room to take cover, Bella. I’ll face this dude and deal with him. Shouldn’t be too hard for a hideous freak monster like me.”
I hide in the adjoining bedroom as I hear Bullwolf and Garcon tangle in a mighty battle. Glass and wood is shattering, and the conflict spills out onto the roof. Meanwhile the mansion’s servants (cursed to live as furniture and kitchenware) are engaging the rest of the mob downstairs; our troops are winning, per the noise and cheers.
Bullwolf’s not faring as well – he’s struggling halfheartedly against his blowhard foe. I remember now what he said when she was the Old Hag: something about how she can’t die in this game. My god! Does dying in the game mean dying in real life?? He’s risking everything – for me! I have to stop this, now!
I climb out a window and struggle to lift myself onto an eave of the roof. There they are, Garcon with a bow and knife and my guy with his teeth and claws. But he looks so sad, and slow – this day has drained the life and hope out of him, I think. I have to do something, but I’m fifty yards away.
“BULLWOLF! FIGHT BACK, BABY! I KNOW YOU CAN DO THIS! YOU CAN’T DIE ON ME, NOW; I NEED YOU TO FIGHT, TO WIN! RIGHT NOW YOU’RE EVERYTHING TO ME!”
The monster looks over at me, and seems to draw life from my words; he suddenly grows taller and bigger, with a face now filled with resolve and confidence. That is until one second later, when Garcon stabs him in the side. Just like in the movie, the human cad then loses his footing and falls to his death. My big beast just slumps over on the roof and lies still.
“NOOO!” I step carefully and quickly to the roof where Bullwolf is lying. There’s an open window just to the side of him; I pull him with all my might, but can’t budge him to it. He opens his eyes and gives one last surge to help us get there. I recognize this room; there’s a magical dying flower with just one petal hanging on, representing the time left before the beast and castle curse is irreversible. But it’s all a moot point, because my lovely beast is dying. I bury my face into his shirt, and bawl. “Don’t … don’t leave me … I love you!”
I continue to weep on my dead hero’s chest for a few eternal minutes when I realize that HE’s glowing, and levitating now. Has he become a portal? But no – he slowly loses his beastly shape, and transforms into a young man – a gorgeous, cut hunk of a man. Looks well hung, too (of course my current hormone rage made me look there). The last of the changes include healing of the stab wound and opening of his eyes. “B – Bella? You … you broke the curse, you brought me back!”
“Oh baby – I thought I’d lost you!” I look into his blue eyes; I’ve never wanted a kiss so bad in my life. He nears his lips towards mine, and we merge – first cautiously, then with passionate hunger. I can feel his fullness pushing against my tiny waist.
Luminari – now with the curse broken he’s a manservant again – rushes in to check on us, assesses the situation in a half second, then turns back to the hallway. “Ev’ree one out! Leeve zem alone! Go to your quarters – except you, Babette. YOU meet me in my room, he he he!” he snickers as he shuts our door.
“God, I want you so bad,” whispers my beast-man. “Does that scare you?”
“Shut up and take me,” I breathe.
I’m walking into Industrial Row here near the Houston ship channel. Back to where I had my Magical Kingdom Sensual Experience; it’s been two months since that fateful day. I felt I was in a nightmare rather than a dream then, until the very end. Oh my, what an ending it was. Now here I am, holding Eloise’s hand as we enter the office.
Eloise – that’s the real-life name of the girl who was my friend through all those scenarios. We’re a couple now; we moved in together six weeks ago, and how glorious life has been since then. We both love sex (duh – that’s why we originally signed up for the Experience) and love on each other daily; but more than that, she’s my soulmate. So why are we back here at MKSE? Well …
“John and Eloise! Right on time. We’re all ready for you.”
“Hello, Jackson,” my lover replies. “So, will Newman be involved with any part of our scenario today?”
“Ahem. Mr. Newman no longer works for us here at MKSE. After his horrible mistake of miscasting you two, I threw him out on his ear. Again, I’m so sorry about that. And I’m so thankful that you agreed to let us give you more experiences here to recompense you for your trauma, rather than – ahem – getting lawyers involved.”
“Just make sure we get exactly what we’re asking for from here on out, Jackson,” says I. “And hey; a question. What happens if the villain kills either one of us in the simulation? If someone dies in the game, do they die in real life?”
“Why, no. If you die in the simulation, it ends the experience and you exit without completing the other stages. Dying in real life? Whatever gave you that idea?”
I turn and give Ellie a stankface look even while I’m grinning wide.
“Hey,” she replies with a blush, “When I said I can’t die, I meant I wanted to stay in the game, get my money’s worth. Guess I should have explained that better.”
Jackson pulls back a curtain. “Over here are your two sensory deprivation flotation tanks. As before, we need all clothes off; you’ll wear a temporary gown while we attach the video visors and start the intravenous drips, then disrobe fully after you’re in the tank. Any questions?”
We both shake our heads “no”.
“Good. Let’s go over who has which role, just to make sure we get it right this time. Eloise, you’ll do the princess roles, while John does the hero/prince roles. Correct?”
Ellie holds up a finger. “Umm … “
I’m standing in a small circular room, near a lone window. Something is pulling on my hair. “Ow! That hurts!”
See, now that Ellie and I are together, we satisfy each other nearly totally when it comes to intimacy. No simulation can come close where we can take each other – she as my girl, me as her guy. Except there’s one twist that we miss; one big reason we’re back getting another day at the MKSE here.
“Ow! What the hell?”
“Rapunstel,” I hear a voice yell from outside, “Look out the window!”
I do, and when I look down I see I must be in the top of a tall castle tower. My long blonde hair must be hanging down at least forty feet towards the ground – and a handsome knave is using it as a rope to climb to me?!
“Ellie! That’s you down there, right?”
“Shh! Come on, Rapunstel, stay in character! Yes, it’s me, but my name is Flynnt!”
“Hurry and climb up here; this is hurting my scalp!”
“Babe – didn’t you see the movie? You have magic hair – just lift me up to you!”
Well, whaddaya know. I do have magic hair. In a second I have my beau in my boudoir. I release my tresses from him, then put my hands on my hips and smirk. “You’re lucky you came when you did, my prince. I was considering getting a bob cut.”
He’s already panting. “Milady – you’re stunning.”
I’ve glanced at my body in the mirror; he’s right. “And you’re super handsome. But I have good looks AND magic hair. What else are you bringing to the table?”
I can tell Flynnt likes to meet a challenge. He strides towards me with a swagger and grabs me by the shoulders, pulling my face to him. “I,” he whispers, “have the magic to turn a dry crevasse into a lush, moist valley.” He then touches his lips to mine; I feel his rippling muscles on his back and arms, and sense that glorious bulge of his again pressing into my waist. And I feel a response in my nether region.
**GASP**! “Ohhh, prince Flynnt … you do have that magic!”
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Sacrificial Alter
by **Sigh**
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A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 1 of 13
by **Sigh**
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Jacoby Jesse Evarist woke up.
It was a strange awakening, this. Not the fact that it appeared to be a gradual lifting of the night’s fog; after all, he could not expect to spring suddenly out of bed to full fresh consciousness every dawn. It was another thing – no, actually multiple other things this morning. Beginning with the fact that it didn’t appear to be morning. The bright sunbeams were coming in through the windows nearly straight down onto the floor … that would be more in keeping with noontime, right?
Huh. That’s odd. I never oversleep this badly. When did I get to bed last night? J.J. tried to concentrate, but last night seemed blank to him. Weird. I’m only 14 years old; that’s way too young to start getting memory loss, right?
The next oddity was the room. As his vision cleared, it became obvious that he wasn’t in his bedroom. The walls were darkly stained natural wood, accented with shelves of books with names like Jungian Thought in the 21st century. The book next to that one had print too small on the spine to read, but the next one said DSM 5TH EDITION. After that was Dr. Seuss’ One Fish, Two Fish, Red Fish, Blue Fish.
That’s a funny sequence, J.J. thought, and smiled. The smile vanished when he realized Wait a minute – I’m waking up at noon, in a strange room, and I’m not looking at the ceiling. I usually am when I first open my-
That’s when J.J. realized he wasn’t in a bed: he was sitting upright. Bolt upright. He leaned back, slower than he intended – sheesh, it’s like my body is in slow motion – and felt a thin cushion over a hard immovable surface as if he was in a high backed chair. He then proceeded to try to stand – but he couldn’t move his feet. Nor his arms. The thought came that he was tangled up in his blanket, but then reasoned he wouldn’t be in a blanket while sitting. He weakly tried a few more times to move his limbs; nothing.
He wondered about calling for assistance, and then realized: there were other voices in the room already talking. In low volumes, but they were there. J.J. held his breath as he tried to hear the discussion.
A stocky man with glasses and a suit was sitting in a shadowed part of the room; only his silhouette was discernable. J.J. had not noticed him until the man just now spoke. “Ma’am. I need your patience. The injection is in him, working; as soon as the sedation wears off, we’ll see if he returns to us. Don’t give up. I know how horrible this must-“
“Shut up. No. No you don’t. You DON’T know,” wailed a woman’s pained voice. “Unless you’ve been in my position – our position – you have NO idea about what we are feeling. And we’re not even the main victims here! Jacoby – my sweet J.J. – God, what horrors he’s gone through! I’m sorry; forgive my rudeness, doctor –“
A third voice, gruff, male, interrupted. “Don’t apologize to the quack. He doesn’t deserve it.”
J.J.’s eyes shifted to the right edge of the room, towards the latter voices. There they were, a man and woman together on a settee. The woman was leaning forward, elbows on her knees, face buried in her open palms. She occasionally shook and sniffled. The man was hugely obese, and the little couch seemed to strain to hold their combined weight. He had his big heavy arm across her back, alternately petting and rubbing it.
J.J. squinted his half-awake eyes. Somehow, in a strange way, he knew these people. They were familiar yet alien at the same time. The woman had a small crude flower tattoo on her left wrist. Just like the one Aunt Faye gave to Mom when they were kids. But this woman was not his mother. Mom was always bright, positive and joyous; and this woman’s hands and voice indicated she was years older than Becky Evarist. And this balding fat man must be her husband; J.J. was quite sure he’d never seen him before. My mom would have my athletic, svelte father near her, not this big blob.
The woman cleared her throat. “Doctor … I must have J.J. back. I need my son.” While saying this, she raised up her sad, haggard face. J.J.’s soul froze.
Mom!? What … what-what-what-what-WHAT THE HECK’S HAPPENED??!! MY GOD is that REALLY HER? And can that – that man really be Dad?’
J.J.’s mother continued. “Bob needs him too. We are living in hell right now, with J.J. being so close that we can touch him, yet this – this girl –“
“This IMPOSTER,” inserted the fat man –
Omigod. That voice. It’s Dad. The speech tone had changed, with a slightly muffled quality; but there was now no mistaking that this was his father.
His mom resumed her plea to the bespectacled man. “This stranger has taken over, and I don’t know her, and she refuses to leave! Doctor, put yourself in our position and tell us that we shouldn’t be hurting and fearful and angry and – and -” She stopped as she broke into tears.
Jacoby was now fully alert, not to mention confused and near panic. The strange surroundings, his changed parents, the nonsense conversation – he had to get answers. He attempted again to stand, putting all of his might into it. Still, nothing budged. He was – tied down?!
A glance downward showed his torso, arms, and legs, all secured with heavy-duty cotton garments that had thick straps at intervals pulled across and buckled. Like a straitjacket, except this covered his whole body. J.J. now mightily heaved his whole body in an effort to break free. He remained bound; all he accomplished was just to shift the chair he was in, and it rasped loudly as the legs scraped across the hard wood floor.
This produced a temporary scowl on J.J.’s face – until he realized that now, all three adults in the room now sat gaping at him.
J.J. looked at the woman; he felt suddenly awkward and at a loss for any words. That rarely happened; he was known as a chatterbox. Rebecca – his mom – was staring back with wary intensity, holding her breath.
“J.J.?” she finally squeaked.
“M-Mom? What’s going on?”
“WAIT,” shouted the father, springing to his feet. “She’s trying to trick us!”
The mother looked wary again. “What’s your full name, child?”
J.J. was incredulous. “You know my name, Mom! Jacoby Jesse Evarist! And your full name is Rebecca Evarist! What’s happened to you? You look so –“
His speech was interrupted by a flying tackle and bear hug from his mother. “My son! My boy! My BOY, my baby boy who remembers me! My child, my best friend! Oh God, I’d just about given up hope! I love you I love you I LOVE YOU and I’m never ever letting you go!”
Dad was dumbfounded. “J.J. – Jake? Buddy, is it really you?”
The boy in the belted chair nodded his head. “Dad – why am I tied down?”
“Not for long!” sang Mom as she furiously worked on unbuckling the shackles. This was more like the mother J.J. was used to, all smiles and joy.
The bespectacled man in the suit held his hand up. “I need to ask him some questions quickly, or he may forget what happened to him.”
“You will get to, Doctor,” stated J.J.’s mom. “I want to find out too. But I’m getting this damn restraining suit off him NOW. And I am not leaving his side. Not ever again.”
“Jacoby, I am Dr. Ramanathan,” said the physician; he rolled his desk chair out to where the sunlight made his appearance clearer. “You have a million questions, I’ll bet. I will answer all of them to the best of my ability. But first, I must ask you some; just a few, then we can get to yours.”
“Wait. What kind of doctor are you?” ventured J.J.
“My specialty is psychiatry.”
“OH. A doc for loonie-toonies . Hey - I’m not crazy. At least I hope not. I feel normal right now; I mean, outside of the fact I don’t know where I am or how I got here or why Mom and Dad are so … different … oh God. Something really bad has happened to me, hasn’t it?”
“Yes, it has. Exactly what, we don’t completely know. That’s what we’re all here to find out, honey,” cooed J.J.’s mom as she stroked his hair.
The doctor cleared his throat. “Jacoby. I need you to think hard for me. What is the last thing you remember happening – the last place you can remember being – before waking up just now?”
The boy, now free from his restraints and clothed in a hospital gown, tried to think. He had to close his eyes. After a minute, his brow began to furrow. “I – I’m having trouble remembering exactly what happened last night!”
His parents looked at each other with that. “Son,” rumbled his father, “you’ve been asleep for longer than one night.”
“I’m sorry, I must resume questioning Jacoby,” interrupted the doc. “Do you remember the last football game you attended at your high school?”
“Of course I do; I’m the freshman boy on the cheer squad. It was – homecoming! Yeah, we beat Armstrong High School 24 – 21 with a last second field goal! That’s the last – wait, no, I remember going to the homecoming dance after that! Missy and I were the hit of the dance – we had some ballroom moves we’d been practicing and boy, did we ever steal the spotlight!“
“Do you remember anything AFTER the dance, Jacoby?” The doctor had turned on a voice recorder.
“Yeah. Umm.” J.J.’s face turned red.
“No condemnation, son. We need your complete honesty. Tell me everything that happened. No matter how bad it was,” reassured his mother.
“Oh, it wasn’t bad. It was … GREAT,” sighed J.J. with a sudden far-off look. “Missy was … so perfect.” He lifted his head towards his parents. “Mom and Dad. I’m sorry. I broke a house rule; I brought Missy inside while you guys were gone. And, well, she was so beautiful – things just got out of hand. I could have had her back at her house before you got home; but I’m assuming – we fell asleep and you caught us, or…?” He wrinkled his face and closed his eyes, as if his memory were now failing.
The doctor spoke. “J.J. – this is really important – what do you remember next?”
J.J. sat still. He closed his eyes again. After a half minute, he opened them. “Nothing. Heck, I don’t remember even getting up to use the bathroom. So, I’ve been asleep – for more than one night? How long have I –” and J.J. suddenly stopped talking. His head had inadvertently turned to the far right, and now it was fixed in that position, staring at the structure affixed to the wall. His mouth slowly began to open in a gape, until his chin was nearly on his chest.
His mother became concerned. “J.J.?”
The father glanced around and figured out what was happening. “Doc, he sees himself! In your damned mirror!” The couple had hardly noticed the huge mirror on the side of the office wall before; its presence seemed inconsequential until now.
“Blast!” muttered the doctor as he flew to the mirror. He grabbed it with the intent to take it off the wall and turn it away.
“STOP! DON’T TAKE IT DOWN!” yelled the boy. “What … WHAT’S HAPPENED TO ME??”
Rebecca became the haggard, sorrow filled woman from minutes earlier, crying as she held her child’s head against her. “Son,” she whispered, “there is no easy way to say this. So get ready; this is some shocking, bad news.”
J.J. grabbed his mom’s waist and held on for dear life, even as his father came up and placed his rock steady hands on his son’s shoulders.
“Yes, Momma?” the boy whispered.
“Your body … is no longer a boy’s body. Someone changed you into a girl – with the body of one, fully. You have girl parts in your undershorts. You have the bones and breasts of a girl. You even became one in your mind. It’s like the boy ‘you’ – the REAL ‘you’ – went to sleep, and this girl took your place in your head. That’s the way it was until just now, when you woke up and came back to us.”
The room was silent for minutes, save for the sound of parents squeezing and kissing a bewildered, weeping child.
J.J. muttered something barely audible.
“What’s that, son?’ proffered his father.
“How long have I been … gone?”
The doctor gave the reply. “As best as I can tell, you – Jacoby – have been ‘asleep’ for two years and eight months. Roughly. It is now August of what should have been the summer before your senior year in high school. You turn seventeen years old in two weeks. It appears your memories as J.J. have been on ‘pause’ since age fourteen. And –"
“Stop,” chided Rebecca. “He’s fainted.”
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
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A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 2 of 13
by **Sigh**
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TWO WEEKS EARLIER
“Holy sheep-dip! Finny, come look at what the feed popped up!”
Marcus Finlandt smirked and rolled his eyes as he sat at his desk. “Sheep-dip? Tom, just say ‘shit’ like any other person not living in the 1800’s.” He then realized his assistant was trying to tell him about urgent information. “What feed are you talking about?”
“The parallel feed for Interpol. It’s a positive fingerprint match on a youth they processed as part of a roundup after a nightclub fight. Looks like they’ve found the Evarist kid … and he’s living in Rio.”
“Rio de Janeiro?” Marcus needed to know exactly. “And – are the authorities still holding him?”
Tom shook his head. “Doesn’t look like it. This info just – I mean just – came through this minute. And knowing the Policia Federal down there, this fugitive won’t be at the top of their ‘most wanted’ list. He’s not done anything to get in big trouble down there, that we know of. It’s just the U.S. that wants extradition. We may have 24 – 48 hours to get him before they do.”
“Do we have a positive photo ID?”
“No pic available right now on the feed. Got a name, though; Luisa Blanco.”
Marcus – “Finny”, to those who worked with him – raised an eyebrow. “But we’re looking for a boy named J.J. Are we sure it’s a match?”
His partner/employee shrugged. “The prints are perfect - I mean a completely exact duplicate. Age reported seems in the ballpark too. Finger analysis is not as foolproof as we used to believe, but these prints are the same on all fingers and in every detail. They compared them to the baseline ones we have here in the States.”
“Thank God for school safety and security programs; every kid in America ought to have prints on file.” Finny gave a low whistle. “Luisa, huh? Wow. This kid went to a lot of trouble to avoid justice.”
“Finny. We don’t know if the kid is guilty. He’s not convicted; he’s just a fugitive. His folks are sure he’s innocent. For all we know he got abducted instead of running away.”
“Yeah, sure. Innocent ‘til proven guilty. A bounty hunter like me has to reverse that thinking to do my job well.” Finny scowled as he looked at the computer. “I am stunned that he goes by a girl’s name. You know … Brazil IS the trans capital of South America; do you think he made any … physical changes? With help, he could have; he looked pretty sweet for a 14 year old boy ...”
Finny ceased talking and seemed lost in thought for a second, as if formulating a plan. He then looked up at Tom. “You’d best switch off this feed tap before we get traced. Interpol will look for any info leaks when they can’t find him. We’re gonna go and pick him up before they get a chance to. Do we have clear weather?”
“Checking …” Tom was now on his iPad. It was an essential flying tool, the tablet computer.
“Mr. Evarist?” Finny was on the phone. “Brace yourself for good and bad news. The good is, we think we found Jacob. Brazil. Bad news is, the police know where he is too; if we’re going to do an extraction, it has to be NOW. My partner’s jet is what we’ll take. So, just to confirm, you will owe your final amount immediately upon my return with your son. Cash, yes, just like the deposit. I need to hear you tell me the amount we agreed to. Now, please.”
Finny knew he had to be a hardass when it came to being paid in this case. This op was not technically legal, and no written contracts would be used; he had to be prepared to not deliver the kid if his father didn’t ante up.
“One last time, sir, to confirm: do you want us to go through with this? Because if you still do, we need to get in the air.”
Tom the pilot finished his flight plan online. He then turned to his boss/partner with a raised eyebrow that silently asked the obvious question.
Finny smiled. “He says he’s mobilizing the funds now. Can we be in the airborne in the next 45 minutes?”
12 hours later, Finny was walking through a very seedy part of Rio; a run down, red light district. This is where being a tough guy really paid off, especially looking the part. A big jet-black handlebar mustache framed his stubbled chin and square jaw; his thick, coarse mane was in a low ponytail. Letting it fly free would look more dangerous, but he wanted to blend in at least some with his surroundings. Dark sunglasses, steel toed boots, jeans, a gray sleeveless t-shirt with a leather vest and a “don’t mess with this” sneer mostly completed the look. What pushed it over the top was a slight noticeable bulge under his vest; he was packing heat.
All he’d been able to pin down before he left the States was a general neighborhood where his target lived. So he had taken the provided car and parked it just outside of the bad district he was about to enter; now he looked for a place to get information.
A dive bar. Cliché, but it will do, he thought as he approached a hole in the wall with a ‘cerveza’ painted sign to the side.
His Portuguese was rusty, but sufficient for the job at hand. He couldn’t believe his luck; the bartender pointed to a derelict figure in the corner of the bar, a man named Eusto, short for Eustaquio. And Eusto sang like a bird when presented with cash. Yes, he knew Luisa Blanco, the prettiest young travesti in the neighborhood, though there was speculation that she had recently become fully transexual. She mostly kept to herself; she lived with Sabio, an adult man in his 20’s.
Finny asked about Sabio’s status – boyfriend, or pimp?
Eusto shrugged. But then added he’d heard she would sleep with a man for enough “dollars – MUCHO dollars”, as he rubbed his fingers together. That gesture may have seemed to refer to ‘trick’ money, but Eusto was mainly eyeing the five $20 bills Finny was unrolling for his payment.
Shit, that went well. It’s barely noon and I’ve located her address. Let’s hope she’s home.
There were indeed people at home in the small shack Finny sought out. Voices were coming from inside, audible not because of yelling but due to the hut having multiple cracks and gaps. The hunter planted a tiny remote microphone into one of the cracks, and then sat down in an alley using a pile of rubbish for cover. His earpiece was in, and he hoped for just a little more info confirming he was indeed about to grab the right person. The voices spoke in a Portuguese a little, but mostly in English. Finny felt that was a good sign.
“Nova – I’m telling you, no one from your past knows you are here. They don’t even know to look for a chica. The policia let you go. Why are you so preacupado with this?” spoke a male voice.
“Sabio. They got my fingerprints. If those get out, I can be tracked down. And yes, even from North America,” said a young and unmistakeably female voice.
Nova? wondered Finny. I wonder if that’s another alias. I’m looking for a J.J. or a Luisa.
The male voice inside the shack sighed. “We can not run all of your life.”
Now the girl turned snappy. “I’m NOT going to keep running my whole life! When I turn 18, I can’t be forced to do anything! But I’m still just 16 right now. And I would rather die at age 16 than go back to the hell hole I lived in back in Kissimmee.”
JACKPOT! SHE’S GOT TO BE THE EVARIST KID! 16, KISSIMMEE, AND FINGERPRINTS VERIFIED ON INTERPOL! screamed Finny internally. He arose carefully and texted Tom – “arriving with target in 15 or less. Be ready for immediate takeoff.” He then began a jog back to his car.
Quietly parking in the back alley behind the shack, Finny exited leaving the engine off but the trunk and driver’s door slightly ajar. He moved silently to the front and knocked on the door. The voices inside went silent. Finny put his mouth near to the biggest crack in the door.
The English translation of what Finny said was this: He was looking for a pretty girl to have a good time with, preferably a tranny. Was Luisa in?
The door opened just wide enough to reveal the face of an angry young Brazilian man staring back. “She no longer does that! Go away!” he yelled in Portuguese. Stepping into view behind him was a young, pale girl with blonde hair … whose face went from disgust to suspicion, then suddenly to panic.
“Sabio – close the door! CLOSE IT!” The girl jumped back. Before Sabio could take half a breath, Finny had reached in with a Cobratek stun gun and shocked the young man into a moaning heap on the floor. As the girl turned to run, the bounty hunter lunged, grabbing her by the ankle. She began to scream, so he stunned her, and chased that with a quick shot of high dose valium into her upper thigh.
“For your own good, kid,” he mumbled.
She was still moaning but not fighting as he ran out the back door with his quarry carried over his shoulder. He dumped her unceremoniously into the trunk; Finny was in a hurry, as there were a few male neighbors running out into the alley to check out the fuss. One of them had a baseball bat. Finny jumped into the driver’s seat, started then gunned the engine, and threatened another type of gunning with his left hand – it held the Glock pistol he’d pulled out of his “belly band” concealed/carry garment covered by his shirt. As he pointed the weapon out of his window at the bat wielder, the latter suddenly lost interest and dropped the wood. The car kicked up dust as it left the alleyway.
“Last call for Bodysnatcher Airlines flight 101 from Rio to Orlando,” joked Tom as Finny pulled up the car to the edge of the jet. The off-the-grid airstrip they were at required no customs or passports, just lots of cash to the proprietor for the privilege of surreptitious arrival and departure, as well as a car to ‘borrow’ (it couldn’t rightly be called a formal ‘rental’).
Finney kept lookout as Tom carefully and nonchalantly loaded a sedated teenager into the jet. What a great team we make thought the bounty hunter; Tom was an airman and a tech whiz, but looked externally like a pasty-faced balding middle school math teacher. He certainly didn’t give off any vibe of being a jet pilot, much less a people smuggler. Which was great for staying inconspicuous.
“Are you up for another 10 hours of flying, buddy?” fretted Finny. “I found the kid so fast you didn’t get to nap at all, I’ll bet.”
Tom held up his thermos. “Brazilian coffee. Best drowsiness cure on the planet. Now buckle up,” he yelled as he taxied down the runway.
“Screw that,” replied his partner. “I thought I heard sirens in the distance, and I’m not through securing her yet. Get us out of here!”
Finny did the quickest restraint job he’d ever done, then slid into a seat just as the plane left the ground. He perused his catch, lying in the reclined seat next to him.
Got her on the foam overlay; head’s supported on 3 sides; arms to sides; legs at heart level. The girl’s safe, secure, and snoozing.
He looked at her through squinted eyes.
The girl. Girl. I’ve been looking for a male for the last year. But this is their kid, the Evarist kid. We’re sure of it. I’m sure of it.
I’m sure of it.
DAMMIT. I DO HAVE THE RIGHT KID. RIGHT? RIGHT?? OH GOD.
Tom was still in the cockpit climbing the jet to cruising altitude when he noticed something in the corner of his vision – his partner’s hand dipping into the flight briefcase and snatching the IPad. “Hey, buddy – I’m going to need that in a few minutes!” yelled the pilot.
“Just need it for TWO DAMNED SECONDS, ASSHOLE.” Finny was stressed. He pulled up the file on J.J. Evarist, with the color portrait pic he’d had in the 8th grade. Finny’s left thumb carefully peeled back the child’s left eyelid.
“Yeah, same deep blue eyes …”
Then he saw the bridge of the nose. Two freckle like marks on the J.J. photo. This girl didn’t have them.
OH SHIT! Wait - is she wearing concealer there? She doesn’t have much of any face paint at all on, but maybe …
He pulled a wet wipe out of his own briefcase and began to rub the girl’s nose. It wasn’t the greatest of makeup remover tools, but it did uncover two marks – unmistakeably identical to the photo.
Finny put the IPad next to the girl’s face for a side-to-side comparison.
This is the same face. A little more rounded – feminine – now, but this is J.J. Evarist. WHEW!
He fell to his knees in sudden relief. After some deep breaths, he took in the total picture of the former boy.
Because she was definitely female now. The outfit she had on left nothing to the imagination - hip hugger shorts and a tank top, no bra - and disclosed no "falsies" anywhere of any kind.Her hair was blonde and hung down to collarbone level; it was in fairly good condition for someone living in a shack. The face - her eyes had gotten bigger and doe-like, but the chin had stayed small. The hips were definitely flared, and the waist naturally drew in.. The breasts - they looked B or C from his view - rippled with every bump of turbulence the plane encountered.
I've seen enough tits in my lifetime - natural, implants, and fake - to know these look like the real deal, he internally bragged.
Finny finally joined Tom up in the cockpit, dropping into the co-pilot’s seat – to talk, not to help operate the airship. That was definitely not his department.
“Got him/her all tied up?” asked Tom.
“Yep. She’s still asleep, thankfully. She was NOT a willing rescue. I sure hope I’m doing the right thing here, Tom. When I was confirming the ID I overheard her say that Kissimmee was a hellhole.”
Tom wrinkled his face. “What the hoo-hah does she mean by that? Kissimmee is a slice of paradise. Heck, the whole state of Florida is.”
“Unless the people you live with are devils; then, even paradise can be hell,” mused Finny. “What if her parents were abusing her? Shit, what if the father did the murder? They aren’t planning on notifying the law when we get her back there; we were told that was for the kid’s protection. What if it’s to protect daddy instead? I think we need to keep an eye on them after this return goes down.”
“Holy horse hockey, Finny. I’ve never ever seen you so conflicted about a case. This op went so smooth, I figured you’d be thrilled.”
“Well, this family reunion we’re about to enable is gonna be hairy. For one, they’re still expecting a teenage boy. And from all appearances, they’re getting a girl – or a transvestite with really impressive prosthetics.”
“Have you checked her thoroughly head to toe to see if they are prosthetics or not?”
Finny tilted his head at Tom. “NO. That would be disrespectful and perverted. How is it that you can’t use a curse word but can think of something that wrong?”
Tom took offense to that. “Hey, I wasn’t saying to undress the kid!”
“How do you propose I check for prosthetics then, Tom?”
“Well, you could touch her groin and squeeze her brea … er …”
Finny’s eyebrows raised high. He spoke slow and clear. “PER. VER. TED.”
“Yeah, yeah. Yes, it was. Sorry. Son of a biscuit-eater! Where in my head did those thoughts come from?”
Finny smirked once more. “Everybody produces mental shit. I expel mine by using foul language. You refuse to talk that way, so the shit constipates in your brain and produces evil babies. You keep this up and you’ll be a serial killer one day, with me having to hunt you down.”
“Ha ha ha, Finny. You’re so humorous. NOT.”
“Come on, Tom. You can do this. Let’s start with the mild stuff. Say ‘crap’. I know you can.”
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 3 of 13
by **Sigh**
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“So that’s the skinny. We’re as sure as we can be that this teenager who appears female is really your son, Jacob.”
Robert and Rebecca Evarist sat in stunned disbelief at the info coming through the speakerphone. Neither could muster a word through their shock.
“Uh … are you guys still there?”
“Yeah, still here, Finlandt,” Robert finally croaked out. “I … I paid you a lot of money to fetch my son. And you’re bringing back a girl? Are you crazy? Or do you think I’m that stupid? There’s no way – I mean no way – Jake would dress like a girl. He wouldn’t let anyone else do it to him, either! My God, do you know what you’ve done to us – raised our hopes, and now ripping them to – “
“Mr. E. – I’m texting you his face. Look at it.”
The parents looked at the face, bereft of any make up.
“That’s not him,” muttered Robert. “I mean, there are similarities, but this is obviously a girl.”
Rebecca gasped. “Oh my God, Bobby. Look at the bridge of the nose! Those two closely spaced spots! It IS him! Yes, the eyebrows are plucked – but this is J.J.!”
“We’ll see,” growled the father, still clinging fitfully to denial. “When’s your ETA to our house, Finlandt?”
“Damn. Damn and hell. How … what happened to him?”
“Don’t know, Mr. E. You paid me to find and return him, not for a detailed history of the last 2 ½ years. I’ve told you everything I know, and everything that happened from the Interpol report ‘til now. Sorry.” Finny was sympathetic towards the father’s plight; he looked forlorn, lost. Even being hugely obese, this man usually looked ‘together’, in control. Not so much now.
Bob stared off through the window as he stood in the hall outside the bedroom, where J.J. now continued her drug-induced sleep. Finny leaned against the wall, listening to the big guy.
"Our son had suddenly disappeared - off the face of the earth, almost. Searching for him to be more difficult than any of us anticipated. But I could wrap my head around that simple premise - find him, get him back. This? I - I don't even know where to start. Do I be angry? Sad? Quiet and accepting? Or just support him and Becky as they muddle through this? Those two have always had a special bond; like they were joined at the soul and welded together at the heart.
"Jake's never shown any hint of being interested in girly things. Toys, friends, clothes - he was 'all boy'. The only reason he was a cheerleader instead of on the football team is that he was so small, he was afraid he'd just ride the bench all game. You know, he refused to be ridiculed about cheering; "while you dudes are getting sweaty with each other on the field, I'll be picking up the prettiest girls in school" - that was his comeback, and boy was it effective."
Finny looked through the door of the bedroom they were next to, at J.J. "Is this the room where Missy Renquist was found murdered?"
"NO," said Bob. "I moved all of J.J.'s stuff into this room, and got a new bed for him as well. None of us know what exactly happened that night; but I don't want my son in his original bedroom again. That's where our lives got derailed. I use it for old storage, nothing else."
Mrs. Evarist emerged from a bedroom to confront her husband as well as Finlandt and Tom. “J.J. is still asleep like a log. When will that shot wear off?”
“It probably will last anywhere from 2 – 8 hours more, ma’am,” replied Finny. “Even then, it may take a full 24 hours for all of it to leave his system. Depends. Different for each person.”
Rebecca Evarist frowned. “I hope it’s sooner rather than later. She needs to start drinking fluids; I don’t want her getting dehydrated.”
“Becky,” interjected Robert Evarist. “It’s HIM. We don’t want HIM getting dehydrated. This is still our son, no matter what clothes and appliances he has on.”
“No, Bob,” Becky whispered. “I undressed our child and did a head to toe look. Don’t tell me I shouldn’t have, now – I’m the mother, and I’ve seen J.J. naked from day one. And what I saw now … oh God, Bobby. He’s no longer a ‘he’, not in any way. Those breasts are real; not even any implants, and they’re a small C cup. And down below … “ -she paused as she choked up.
“What, baby. Tell me,” whispered her husband.
She shook her head as the tears flowed. “No penis, no testicles, no nothing except a vagina. It looks almost totally natural – almost.”
Bobby shook his head. “No. This can’t be our son. This is all a huge mista-“
“His two groin scars, from his right and left hernia repairs he had when he was 3? They’re there. Remember the doctor told us that girls almost never get hernias there, especially on both sides. Boys do because of the weak spots left when the testicles are descending. Plus, the appendix scar is there. The eyes are absolutely J.J.’s. This IS our child. Except she’s our daughter now. If this was her wish, then we should support her; if it was done to her against her will, we’ll love her and help her in any way we still can.”
She cleared her throat and continued. “It no longer matters to me what happened. Whatever has, we’ll deal with it. We have our child back. And I’m never losing her again. Will you stand with me on this, Bobby? Because I’m going to stand, with or without you.”
A moan came from the bedroom. Becky jumped, turned, and sped back through the door. In the next second, she yelled out “Bob! She’s waking up! Bring some cool water! Get cold water from the fridge and mix it with a non-refrigerated one, remember her sensitive molar! – J.J., Momma’s here baby …”
“I know how to make water,” Bob mumbled. He waddled from the kitchen to the bedroom with a glass and a straw. He then stuck his head back out in the hallway to address Finlandt and Tom. “You guys have your money. We should be square. Give me just a minute and I’ll walk you to the door.”
“No need. We’ll let ourselves out, and activate your electronic door lock as we leave. If you need us you know how to get us. Good luck,” replied Tom. He turned to look at his partner, expecting a wave and a “ditto” at least. But Finny was already gone. Tom found him outside, on the side of the house. He was pulling on something – a thin, tiny string? – at one of the exterior windows.
His covert ops friend was obviously operating on something covertly, and likely illegally. Tom scanned the area quickly for cameras or passersby, and found none. “I thought we were through here,” he whispered.
“Planted my tiniest remote unit on the inside, just at the top corner of this window,” breathed Finny. “Drilled a gnat-hole through the glass while they were fussing over the kid waking up. This is … the power cord.”
He pulled the tiny wire coming out of that pinpoint window hole and began using super glue to tack it to the house bricks. The electricity meter was located just next to this window, and was unlocked. “Hot-wiring into the meter as a power source. They won’t find it unless they are looking for it, or lucky. But we’ve got video and to a lesser extent, sound. That main hallway should carry voices from the bedrooms and living areas,” Finny whispered. “Done. Let’s boogie out of here.”
“Tell me how we’re gonna get paid for that,” mumbled Tom.
“You? You won’t. I’ll get paid every morning, when I have to face myself in the mirror. Something doesn’t add up. That kid’s in danger. I can feel it.”
The teenage girl lying in J.J.’s bed was gradually rousing from her drug-induced slumber. At first, her eyelids opened into little slits, and she stared straight ahead. Then after a while her eyes started roaming, slowly absorbing her surroundings, though she remained silent and still, just a hint of drool dripping from the corner of her mouth.
Becky Evarist sat on the bed beside the girl, stroking her hair, rubbing her shoulder, and singing songs that she’d sung to Jacoby when he was a baby. She recounted her favorite memories with him, such as the time he cried all day for “keemwee” and she finally realized he wanted Cream of Wheat. She had kept J.J.’s room the same as it was just before he disappeared; she had never given up hope that he’d be back.
This moment in time; if I could freeze it, I would. My youngest, letting me love on him – well, her – like I haven’t been able to for a decade and a half. This will pass as soon as she wakes up, I’m sure; so I’ll enjoy it while I can.
J.J. suddenly said “Huh. Huhhh. Huh?” and awkwardly pushed her body up to where she was halfway propped up by her arms. She forced her eyes open more, and with a wobbly head spanned her surroundings. Then she looked at Becky, who smiled.
“Good morning, sleepyhead. Well, I guess it’s good middle-of-the-night really; it’s 1:30 am now. Remember me, your mommy? How are you feeling, honey?”
The girl’s eyes squinted. Finally she spoke. “Mmm … Mmmuhh?”
“Yes, dear. It’s Mom. You're back with us in Kissimmee. What’s do you call yourself now? J.J., or is it Luisa Blanco?”
The girl glanced around the room. “I’m … back?”
“Yes you are, back home. Back safe with Mom and Dad.”
“I’m, I’m in Kissimmee?? I’m IN KISSIMMEE!! God – NO!”
Robert walked in with a fresh water glass and straw. “Hey, you’re awake! Welcome back, kiddo!”
The teen snapped her head towards Bob’s voice, and more confusion with some new panic filled her face. “Who are you – you aren’t – “
“Yeah, I’m Dad. I look a lot different - gained about 130 pounds since you last saw me.”
The girl’s eyes popped open as round as saucers as a scream exploded from her lungs. “GET AWAY FROM ME! DON’T YOU TOUCH ME YOU FUCKING RAPIST PIECE OF SHIT! GET OUT! GET OUT!”
Becky was agape. “J.J. – what?!”
Bobby stepped back. “Kiddo! What the hell-“
“GET OUT!” The girl had jumped to the far side of the room, which placed the bed between her and her father. She began grabbing anything she could – the alarm clock, books off the bookshelf, a signed baseball – and heaved them in rapid succession at the large man.
“GEEEEEETTT OOOOOOOUUTTTT!”
The bewildered father shielded his head against the onslaught.
“Bobby! Go out in the hall!” Becky urged as she saw multiple projectiles bouncing off of her husband. Something about his presence was agitating J.J. She’s still disoriented from the rescue, and from that damned sedative. I’ll calm her.
“Shhh, baby. It’s OK. He’s gone. I’m here. Just hang on to me-“
“DON’T touch me, bitch,” sneered the girl.
“J.J.! Don’t speak to me that way! I’m your mother! Don’t you recognize me?”
“Oh, I know who you are, lady. And you may have been a mother to the other guy, but you are NOT my mother. And what you let happen to him – you don’t deserve to be anyone’s mother. You evil, evil slut! You STAYED with that rapist pervert, after knowing what he did!”
Becky Evarist was in shock. What was she talking about? Why was she so angry? And who was she, this alien in her son’s transformed body? J.J. was never remotely like this, in action or speech.
The girl’s eyes were now on the floor, looking at an object there. She turned her head towards Becky. “That’s your purse?”
The mother, still stunned, nodded her head.
In a flash, the girl grabbed the bag and bolted out into the hall. Becky alarmed out of her daze and yelled “BOB! STOP HER! SHE’S RUNNING AWAY!”
The teen ran down the hall and out into a living area. This was not totally familiar to her – and yet it was? She stopped for a few hair-raising seconds, trying to decide where to go to get out the front. She turned into one hall – no, that led to a kitchen – then turned down another hall and ran directly into the bulk of Bob Evarist. He grabbed her arm as she attempted to pull away; she began to scream.
“No! No no no no no no NOOOO! NOT AGAIN! RAPE! RAAAAAPE!”
Bob held tight to her, but he was obviously shocked, upset. Becky ran in, her face showing the same condition.
The girl started crying now, and blubbering. “Please – please. Please don’t hurt me again. I’m sorry for yelling. I’ll be good; I’ll do whatever you want just please, please don’t hurt me …” and broke down into sobs.
“Bobby – what is she talking about?” queried Becky, with just a hint of doubt emerging about her husband.
“Honey – I have absolutely no idea. I don’t know where these accusations are coming from. I can guarantee you they are not true, though.”
“Well, she certainly made some false accusations towards me, too. Bob! What are we going to do? If we take our eyes off her, she’ll run away! We can’t let that happen, not after just finding our child again!”
Bob thought. “Actually, we can’t let it happen because she’s 16, and we’re legally responsible for her, and she – CLEARLY – is mentally ill. She needs to be taken to a psychiatric hospital for evaluation.”
“We can’t do that! There’s still a warrant out for J.J.’s arrest! If the hospital clears her, she’ll go to jail! Nobody else besides us needs to know she’s here!”
Both parents were shedding tears now. Bob choked his own back long enough to reply. “Honey. I can see no other way. If J.J. goes to trial for murder, we’ll fight it with the best lawyers we can afford. But our kid is sick, and needs help. Please – PLEASE – let me send her to the hospital.”
Becky buried her face in her hands, gushing more tears as Bob used his free hand to pull out his smartphone. “I don’t think we can control her adequately to drive her there ourselves. I’m calling 911.”
To be continued tomorrow.
If the Sheep-dip in the title of this chapter seems totally random, read the first 4-5 sentences in chapter 2. ;)
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 4 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 by plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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Robert and Rebecca Evarist sat on two chairs in a rather large office / consultation room at Passages Psychiatric Hospital located just outside of Orlando, Florida. Their night had been lousy; J.J. didn’t get fully checked in until 6 a.m., and after that they went home and slept. Even with their extreme tiredness the sleep was not restful, especially for Becky. Now it was 4 p.m., and they were to meet with the doctor who had evaluated their child.
They were so absorbed in distressed thoughts that they barely noticed the physician enter. “Ahem,” said the doc; both parents raised their heads and immediately stood up.
“I’m Dr. Kapil Ramamurthy, Chief Medical Director of this facility,” said the Hindu man in a fairly thick accent. He wore glasses, and was slightly overweight. “Many call me Dr. Rama as it’s easier to say. You’re the Evarists? – I hope I pronounced that correctly.”
“Yes,” said the mother. “I’m Rebecca – you may call me Becky. This is Bob.”
“Unless she’s angry; then I’m Robert,” teased the father.
Dr. Rama smiled back at him. “Is there a reason for her to be angry with you today?”
That question took both parents by surprise. Bob thought Oh no, one of these analysts that reads deep hidden meaning into every little thing you say. Forget any joking around, then.
Becky's response was verbal. “No! I have no reason to be angry with him – not that I’m aware of – I mean, J.J. said some things …” She paused and squinted her eyes and gritted her teeth. “Did … did you find a reason that I SHOULD be angry with my husband?”
“No ma’am – but I am nowhere near through evaluating your daughter.”
“Son,” interjected Bob. “Or at least that’s who he was until he disappeared nearly 3 years ago.”
“Right. Before I go any further, I need to ask you two some questions.”
The questions were many, and somewhat confusing. About any history of mental disease prior to now (“No”), and about any drastic personality changes seen in youth (“No”), and any traumatic experiences.
The mother sighed. “Trauma - yes, but we don’t know exactly what happened.” She looked at her husband; both seemed unsure about how to start.
“I’m listening,” encouraged Dr. Rama.
Bob responded. “Two and a half years ago, our son was an honor student, a freshman cheerleader. The night of the homecoming football game that year, he was set to cheer for the team and was going to attend the after-game homecoming dance with his girlfriend Missy Renquist. The plan was, after the dance J.J. would walk Missy home – she lived just 3 blocks from the school gym, and only one street away from our house - then he’d walk back home alone. With that understanding, Becky and I went to the game, and afterwards I took her to a late dinner and even later movie.”
Mrs. Evarist took the story from there. “I was the one who walked in on the scene. Missy was lying dead in J.J.’s bed, totally naked and with multiple stab wounds. Blood was everywhere. And J.J. was gone, without any hint of where he’d left to. They found his semen inside Missy. The police put out an APB and did the biggest manhunt of the last 5 years – but J.J. was nowhere to be found. He didn’t contact anyone – not us, not his school friends, not his favorite aunt June nor Grandpa E. Not even his brother Dustin.”
“So he has a brother. Any other siblings? Does Dustin still live at home?”
“Nope,” replied Bob. “He lives in Tampa; he’s a truck driver, and works all the time. We’re lucky to even see him on holidays. J.J. always talked to him on the phone, though – just like he did with his aunt and grandpa. ”
Dr. Rama clicked his retractable pen as was his habit when in deep thought. “So, Mom and Dad. The police, I assume, are still looking for J.J. And now he is here. Do you feel he committed this murder?”
“We don’t know what to think,” emoted Becky. “All of the evidence seems to indicate he’s at fault. But he’d never shown any sign of cruelty or temper! His only flaw was that he tended to be a procrastinator. And he adored Missy – he was head over heels for her. J.J. was one of the most happy, positive, well-adjusted humans alive. Even with all the appearance of guilt, I cannot see him committing this crime.”
Now Bob cut in. “After a year and a half, I decided to hire a detective – bounty hunter, really – to try to find our son. And they did find him – living as a woman, in a shack in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. I, too, want to believe J.J. is innocent; but it sure appears that he went to extremes to avoid being found. That doesn’t prove he’s guilty, but you have to admit it makes it look that way.”
The couple went on to describe the events of the last 24 hours to the doctor.
“Well, this has been informative,” said Dr. Rama finally. “I can now tell you what I think. My opinion, I warn you, may be a shock for you – so get ready.”
The couple grabbed each other’s hands.
“Have either of you ever heard of - Dissociative Identity Disorder? We call it D.I.D. ... previously known as Multiple Personality Disorder. That’s what J.J. appears to have. It turns out ‘Luisa Blanco’ was a cover name that she used to hide herself from the authorities. The person who threw a fit in your house calls herself Nova Liberte’. This Nova is a separate consciousness from the personality you knew as your son.”
The couple did indeed appear shocked. After a pause, the doctor continued. “I don’t know if this condition has been there since birth, with Nova – and perhaps even other personalities we aren’t aware of – just being hidden until now, or if “J.J.” was the complete personality, and something just fractured it. The theory is, sometimes a huge trauma can lead to a split of the psyche. And this homecoming date murder certainly would qualify.”
“My J.J. is not a murderer! That case is still officially unsolved!” snapped Becky.
“Wait … I didn’t say he murdered that girl. I’m not even saying another personality of his did this. I did use the word ‘murder’ because it sounded like no matter who did it, someone killed her. Whatever what happened back then, our challenge now is to try to ‘re-integrate’ the Nova personality – and any others – back into one personality.”
“How do we do that, doc?” queried Bob.
“Well … it will be a difficult task. We can try drug therapy, though that alone will likely not work. We can also try intense psychoanalysis. And understanding what happened that homecoming night will be essential. But it will be easier said than done. I wish I could guarantee you success – but frankly, many D.I.D. patients never get back to a normal life.”
“Why does this ‘Nova’ personality hate us so much?” asked Becky.
“That’s another unfortunate twist here,” sighed the psychiatrist. “Nova is claiming she was raped, and… um … puts the blame on you, Bob.”
“So. She continues to say I actually raped her. My son says I raped him.” Bob shook his head.
“It’s actually more complicated than that. I questioned Nova very carefully. When we get right down to it, she knows somehow she was raped by you, but cannot remember the actual act happening. She just knows it happened, and for some reason is sure you did it – or maybe allowed it. That’s as specific as I’ve gotten so far. Still, Mr. Evarist, I need to ask you the question,” – the doctor looked deadly serious now.
“No. I did not rape my son. Or ‘Nova’. I did not rape or even inappropriately touch my child, nor his brother, nor his cousins, nor the neighborhood kids or old ladies or the next-door neighbor’s dog! I’ve never raped or molested anyone in my life, and the thought of doing so would disgust me!” Bobby was obviously distressed that this even needed to be in question.
“Can we see her? If she won’t meet with Bob, what about just me seeing her?” proposed Becky.
“I don’t recommend it. She has very negative reactions to both of you. She’s going to need some intense therapy; and it needs to be inpatient, since she’s a flight risk. In other words, I need to keep her here in the locked unit for now. She’ll have interaction with the staff and be free to roam around the unit – but she won’t be able to leave, of course. I would consider her a danger to herself, and perhaps to others.
I’ll also let the law authorities know she’s here -“
“Doctor – must you? Can’t we keep her here confidentially?” pled the mother.
“Yes ma’am, I must report this. I risk forfeiting my license if I don’t. But I will recommend against jail, or prison, or even a trial right now; her treatment is essential to her, and will even be essential to figuring out her guilt or innocence in that girl’s death. And Mr. Evarist, I’m also required to report her accusations against you. So be prepared for a police visit soon, for questioning.”
The couple left the doctors office with the promise of an in-person update in four days, and phone call updates daily until then. Even those assurances could not lift their mood.
Halfway to the car, Becky stopped and buried her face in Bob’s big chest. “I had him back. For an hour. I got to love on my son for one stinking hour. And now he’s ripped from me again.” She bawled and pounded her fist softly into her husband.
Three days later, Dr. Rama sat in his office, sipping a bottle of cold water from his mini-refrigerator. He was sweating slightly, as he’d just come inside out of the humid hot day; there was another reason to perspire, also.
Two p.m. already. My, the morning went by quickly. I can tell I’m apprehensive about Nova finally interacting with one of her parents.
Nova had been somewhat tight-lipped during multiple attempted interviews with the Doctor so far. He hoped that getting the mother in the room would at least make the girl talk more in some way, even if just out of anger. Rama reviewed the ground he wanted to cover today, and made sure the office was set just right. He called out to his assistant, who ushered Rebecca Evarist in.
“Are you nervous, Becky?” asked the physician.
She forced a grin back as she furrowed her brow, confirming Rama’s guess.
“I’m afraid that I’m going to want to run over to her and hug her, which might upset her.”
Becky was making a point to refer to her child as female, as the doctor had said that the ‘Nova’ alter was still in control, and insisting that people address her as a woman. ‘Alter’ was a new word the Evarists had learned; it was short for ‘alternate personality’.
An orderly brought in a young woman dressed in a drab set of cotton pants and shirt. Even with no makeup or fashion, it was clear that this person was 100% female. Not just in her obvious post pubertal body development, either; her walk, the slight sway of her hips, the muted swing of her arms at the elbows showed a feminine lilt. Her face was more than just feminine, however; it was clearly angry. Wary. Defiant. The girl sat down in the chair offered to her; she made no sound other than breathing, and gave Becky an icy stare.
“Nova, right?” Becky said, smiling with obvious nervousness. “I’ve been counting the minutes until I got to see you again.”
Nova looked away, but answered. “I’m here against my will.”
The mother persisted. “I, uh, I’m told that you don’t like me. “
“Really? What gave you that impression, bitch?”
“Nova. Speak as we discussed, or don’t speak at all,” admonished Dr. Rama.
“That’s the way you feel, Nova. Thank you for being honest with me,” Becky replied. “I’d like a chance to change your opinion – or at least understand why.”
Nova continued to look to the side, at the plate glass window that showed the beautiful garden on the hospital grounds. The second floor office had quite a view, with a stately oak tree growing just near the wall.
“I didn’t mince words when you had me back in your house. You stayed married to a rapist. You’re an evil woman just for that alone.”
“Nova – if you were raped, I didn’t know it. I’ve never known Bob to be a rapist, or anything close to it. If I knew he was one, I would definitely leave him. What exactly happened to you?”
Nova rose from her chair and meandered around the room. “It’s hard to talk about.” She rubbed her hand over a brass bust of Sigmund Freud.
“Nova. Sit back down, please,” Dr. Rama ordered.
Instead, Nova grabbed the bust and heaved it with all her might at the window. It exploded through the glass with a BOOSH! leaving a gaping hole right near the side where the oak was. She ran and dove at the hole, scraping her arms and scalp on the sharp edges as she went through. Her hands grabbed the big tree limb nearest the window; for a second she seemed to have it, but then she emitted a quick shriek of surprise as she lost her grip in a mess of breaking bark. Her body slammed into the ground belly first from twelve feet up.
“CODE INDIGO, OUTER GARDEN!” Dr. Rama screamed into his desk phone.
Becky ran to the hole in the glass and stuck her head through, looking down as she heard a woman's voice repeat "Code indigo, outer garden; code indigo, outer garden" over the intercom.
"J.J!" she screamed. The girl's body seemed horrifically motionless for a few seconds. Then, she could be seen heaving with her chest as she began to cough and gasp for air; a moan soon could be heard coming from her lips, followed by sobs. Otherwise she remained fairly motionless.
"J.J. - crap - NOVA! Don't try to move! You could be badly hurt! Stay still - I'll be right there!" Becky scanned the area and looked down, to judge the distance. She lifted up her right leg and put it through the glass hole; then withdrew it, and prepared just to leap through -
"NO YOU ABSOLUTELY WILL NOT, MS. EVARIST," shouted Dr. Rama as he grabbed her waist and pulled her back. "We'll take the stairs!"
The orderlies had no need to immediately restrain the escaped girl; she was still gasping and moaning from having the wind knocked out of her. They knelt by her and made sure her head and neck were secured as the EMT's arrived. She’d sustained various cuts from the window edge and from falling on glass shards. An ambulance prepared to take her to the nearest emergency room for stitches and to make sure there were no internal injuries.
Becky watched with forlorn as they carried Nova off in restraints to the hospital. She turned to Dr. Rama. “I’ll go with her to the E.R., if it’s okay?”
“That's fine - just drive there, don't go in the ambulance. At the E.R., just remain in the waiting area. I don’t recommend you stay in the room with her. She obviously acts up in your presence. If she is okay physically we’ll try again later this week, Becky. Unfortunately, I think I will have to keep her restrained for all meetings in the future.”
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 5 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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WARNING: This chapter deals with memories of explicit physical and sexual abuse.
Two days later, Bob and Becky were sitting together in Dr. Rama’s office in front of a large television screen. They’d been both asked to come – but not for a meeting with their child. So both were getting impatient to see why they were there.
“Sorry to have kept you waiting,” they heard from the opening door; in walked Rama. “I wanted to show you two something we recorded this morning.” He grabbed a remote control handset off of his desk, and pointed it at the TV. “Nova doesn’t trust me – or anyone here – fully yet; but she opened up quite a bit about her past during our session today.” After clicking through a few menus, a video started to play.
Nova was sitting in a room with pictures and white walls, a chair and a table; little else. She was unrestrained, but obviously the room appeared fairly escape-proof. Dr. Rama was in the room with her.
Becky broke in. “Pause the recording, please. Doctor? Why is her hair so short all of a sudden?”
“Oh – forgive me for not preparing you two. After her failed attempted escape the other day, she was severely depressed and felt to be likely suicidal. So we had to cut her hair. Long hair can hang a person as effectively as a noose, if one is inventive enough; and I felt your daughter was at risk,” said Rama.
“Into a pixie cut – it’s almost a boy cut. Is this somehow supposed to make Nova cooperate more with us? It seems like it could do the opposite!” Becky fumed. “She’s still a minor. Shouldn’t you have called us for permission before this was done?”
“I like it,” reasoned Bob. “He looks more like J.J. now.”
Rama attempted to put out this unintended little fire. “She actually has been rather silent about her new hairstyle. And it didn’t keep her from opening up this morning in therapy. Now, please, let me play this for you.” He dimmed the lights and pressed ‘play’, and the two figures on the screen - Nova and Dr. Rama – became unfrozen.
“So. Tell me your earliest memory, Nova,” said the doc.
Nova sat and twiddled her thumbs, sighing. “Okay. The earliest thing I can remember is also a horrible thing. I remember coming awake, and it being totally dark; I then realized I had some kind of blindfold on. I didn’t recall where I was, or who I was even. What I did know, somehow, is that I was a girl.”
“Hmm. Nova - that was definite and unmistakable, this feeling of being female?”
“Yes. I’ve never been surer of anything in my life. I was a girl – a strong one – and I had to survive.”
“Survive what?”
Nova tilted her head at the doctor. “Being raped and held against my will, of course. When I awoke that first time, my hands were tied behind my back and someone was entering me – my ass – from behind. And my mouth was gagged. See? I told you it was horrible.”
“That’s extremely horrible. Who was doing this to you?”
The girl shrugged. “All I ever knew them as were Bolivar and Fausto. Don’t even know if those were their real names; they were my owners. They raped me regularly, and pimped me out to other men who came looking for young boy sex. I had no formal interaction with them except when they yelled orders at me; most of the time they kept me chained up in a closed room that looked like a basement. That’s where all the raping happened, too.”
Dr. Rama looked visibly pained. “My God. You’ve been through hell.”
“I’m back there, doc.”
Rama was puzzled. “You’re back there? Do you mean in your thoughts?”
“No,” Nova sighed. “I’m back in HELL. Locked up in this place with a bunch of lunatics, away from my guy back in Rio.” She looked away as an angry tear trailed down her cheek. “I mean, I’m not being forced to have sex – not yet, at least. Who knows what goes on in these psycho wards, though, right?” ‘
“The sooner we help you get better, the closer you will come to leaving here, Nova,” replied Rama. “Is Rio where this abuse took place?”
“No; I lived in a basement, so I couldn’t get a bearing on my surroundings really. But I could hear my owner’s conversations. Once they mentioned Fortaleza, Brazil as the city we lived in. I can understand Portuguese pretty well.”
Dr. Rama held up his pen. “That may be because J.J. – your other personality – is fluent in Spanish and German. Much Portuguese is not that far removed from Spanish. I’ll bet if you heard some German, you’d understand it too.”
Nova sighed. “My ‘other personality’. As crazy as that sounds to me – I mean, I feel like THIS is who I am – it does explain why I can’t remember any of my life before that damn basement.”
Dr. Rama rubbed his eyes with his thumb and forefinger under his glasses. “I’m sorry, I diverted us. You have claimed your father abused you; how did you arrive at that conclusion?”
“Over the next year, I overheard Fausto and Bolivar talking enough to put some things together: they had bought me on the black market, to use as a sex toy and to pimp out to bring in money for them - evidently I was a ‘sweet looking gringo boy’ who some perverts prefer to women - and it was my dad who had sold me to them. They also remarked that they got me at a discount because I wasn’t a ‘virgin’; seems Daddy made sure to take that from me before selling me.”
Brenda snapped her head sideways to stare wide-eyed at her husband. Bob shook his head emphatically, denying the accusation.
“They started to give me shots to make me more curvy, like a girl; they didn’t want me to start looking like a hairy hombre as I got older. They thought I’d make more money for them as a travesti. Oh, and they thought up a really cheap and fun way to castrate me; it involved a zip tie. I’ll let you fill in the blanks. I almost died from bleeding when my scrotum finally fell off.”
Dr. Rama shook his head. “Nova – I’m so sorry this happened to you. You were enslaved, tortured, abused and made into a woman against your will. How terrible.”
“Actually, I wanted to become a physical female. I didn’t tell my ‘owners’ that; somehow in their sick minds I think they would have stopped the shots just because I desired them. Anyway, I like the changes it made in my body; Sabio thinks I’m pretty sexy. After I was rescued, I made some friends in the transsexual community in Rio; I have a friend who scores a hormone shot for me from the free clinic every few weeks or so.”
Dr. Rama looked at the ceiling and began clicking his pen. “Getting hormonal treatment as a young teenager who appeared late for his male puberty – that likely produced the look that you have. All the secondary sex characteristics of a normal female appear to be present, except of course for reproductive organs.”
Nova smirked. “Is that your ‘fancy psychiatrist’ way of saying you think I’m hot?”
Rama ignored that and continued. “In fact, I would venture to say that your development is at extreme top of the range for a 16 year old – I would expect this look more from a woman in her mid-20’s. It makes me concerned that you might have been given dangerously high doses of estrogen. It doesn’t sound like you were under a doctor’s care with those shots. Nova – that could have killed you.”
Nova looked suddenly depressed. “You’re going to stop my hormone treatments, aren’t you. It figures. This place smells more like hell every day.”
“No, I’m not going to stop them. I’m going to get a consultant on your case – an endocrinologist who specializes in transgender treatment. If she says to continue the therapy then I will do so without hesitation. But you will be doctor-supervised in this."
Rama eased his verbal tone from scolding back to inquisitive. “So, did you have mixed feelings about your ‘owners’ then? At least with the feminizing process, it sounds like they did some things you appreciated them for.”
The young girl’s eyes became fiery with anger. “You misogynistic bastard – there is NO WAY IN HELL I owe them any appreciation! Whatever they did for me, it wasn’t worth the shit I went through. To even suggest that shows how screwed up you are!
“On some occasions I'd hear Fausto and Bolivar talk to each other about when they should just get rid of me. I felt that if I became too much trouble for them – if I opposed them enough – they would just kill me and be done with it. On the occasion when I did fight or resist the sex, they beat me and denied me food and water. So I did what I had to do to survive. I just disengaged my brain as much as I could while those monsters used me. And I bided my time, waiting for an opening, a chance to escape. And one finally came, in the blessed form of a boy named Sabio.”
Dr. Rama wrote with his pen onto a pad. “Does Sabio have a last name?”
The girl’s eyes narrowed. “Yes, and it’s rather long. It’s I’M-NOT-TELLING-YOU-SO-GO-TO-HELL.”
The doc kept his composure. “That’s fine. How did this Sabio help you escape?”
“Sabio had an old pervert uncle who liked to fuck she-males, and the wrinkly asshole paid Bolivar for some time with me. He needed to see me to be convinced to ante up, so they paraded me out of the basement into the hall – without the usual bag over my head, for some reason. Sabio was there, to help his uncle get up and down the stairs. It was the first time I’d seen anyone who wasn’t there to personally use me. I looked at him while the others talked, and mouthed “ayudame” – Spanish for 'help me' – to him.”
Nova began to sniffle, and wiped her eyes with her sleeve. “I felt like a fool, especially when he stood there and did nothing. I went back into my room and his old uncle had his way with me. But then two days later, both Bolivar and Fausto were out and I was chained as usual in the basement. I hear the front door and then the basement door being forced open. It was Sabio – with a chain cutter. He got me out of there, and out of town. I was a little worried he was going to chain me up too; every man I’d ever met to that point was an evil son-of-a-bitch, after all.”
She raised her head up high for the first time, and smiled through her tears. “But no. Sabio loved me. Even after he found out I wasn’t a regular woman. For the last year, I’ve been living with him, and we wanted to get married. I refused to, though, until I had some things settled.”
“What things?”
“When he rescued me, I still had no identification or any way of verifying who I was. I didn’t even have a name, except escravo – ‘slave’. I chose my own name, Nova for new and Liberte’ for freedom. Because that’s how I feel with Sabio – new and free. Since I wasn’t technically an adult yet, I went by Luisa Blanco, figuring I could stay hidden with that until age 18. That plan obviously failed, ‘cause I’m here.
“Also, I wanted to be as complete a woman as I could be; that meant getting rid of that damn penis. I ended up prostituting myself for the money – boy, was Sabio against that, but we had no other way and I insisted I had to. Besides, this time I was the one in control of the situation. In April of this year we found a surgeon who would bypass the usual needed counselor visits and didn’t ask about my age; and I became a functional female. Not that I got to use my new assets very long before I got enslaved again.”
Dr. Rama raised his head. “Enslaved again?”
“YES! HERE, you dickhead!”
“Nova. I know you don’t like being here, but you need help.”
“What I NEED is to GET AWAY from my abusive Mom and Dad and back to Sabio! Hell, I don’t even remember this couple that call themselves my parents! I don’t remember my home, or that room they had me in! I have nothing tying me down here! I need to get back to Rio de Janeiro!”
“You – you don’t remember your past life – years zero through 14 – at all?”
“The only thing I had in my head was a name – Evarist. In the public library in Rio I did searches under that name, and found out about an Evarist boy who went missing in Kissimmee, Florida. He was supposed to have killed a girl. His picture – it was me. Me as a boy, but unmistakably me. I saw the pictures of the boy’s parents and burned them into my skull – my father the rapist who sold me into sex slavery, and the mother who let him. That’s the only way I knew ‘mom’; she looks like she’s aged a lot, and ‘dad’ - well, he's become the Goodyear blimp.
“See, here’s the thing, doctor. I’m not this J.J. boy. I’m Nova Liberte’. This ‘J.J.’ person may have murdered this girl, but I didn't, because I’m not him. There is nothing for me here. I have a life back in Rio. Not a rich one, but it’s MINE. I have a lover there too, and he needs me. J.J. is not coming back; he’s not welcome to. I have no parents – I don’t know these fuckers. Please don’t keep me here; please, please let me go!”
Dr. Rama pulled a large folder from his briefcase and put it on the table. “I have a lot of information and pictures of your life for the 14 years you lived before you ‘awoke’ as Nova. I think you’ll find some of this fascinating; with your permission, I’ll show it to you.”
“No.”
The doc raised his head. “Beg your pardon?”
“No. “
The physician was at a loss for words; he thought she’d have some curiosity about her past.
Nova craned her neck forward. “Earth to Doc. Are you deaf, or just dense? No. NO. I DON’T WANT ANY OF MY OLD LIFE, KNOWLEDGE OR OTHERWISE. Look where it got me! Let me go so I can enjoy my new life, please!”
“Nova …”
“I’ll do anything else you say, or want; just let me go. Is there anything I can do?” She started to choke up, and then reached a hand across the table, touching the doctor’s lapel. Suddenly she glanced up directly into the camera, and pulled her arm back. Covering her mouth with her hand, she whispered something inaudible; then sat back, silent except for a furtive look towards Rama.
The recording stopped. Bob shook his head as Becky leaked a few silent tears.
“What she whispered to me,” said Dr. Rama, “was basically an offer for a sexual favor. I don’t get the feeling she was being devious; just desperate. If even half of what she told me was true, then sex is probably the only thing she feels she can offer a man to get something.
“She has agreed to meet with Becky tomorrow. She refuses to talk if you, Bob, are in the room. I’m sorry,” Rama finished.
Bob looked weary, and defensive. “Doc – you don’t believe her, do you? That crap about me raping her and selling her to slavery? I don’t know about all the other stuff, but I can guarantee you the part about me is false.”
“Robert. Nothing about you suggests you are an abuser. Having said that, I take all accusations with at least some validity until I’m sure that they are not true. Even if it is all false, I can tell you we will get nowhere right now with you and her in the same room.”
Bob sighed. “And if she changes her mind and is ‘okay’ with me being there?”
Rama’s expression hardened. “You would not be allowed to see her unless I personally determined that she is not in danger around you.” He paused for emphasis. “Now to both of you: good night. I shall see you tomorrow at around 10 a.m., Becky?”
“I’ll be there, sir,” she replied.
Bob looked at his wife. “We’re okay, right?”
Becky didn’t return his gaze. “Yeah … yes. We’re still okay. I believe you, Bobby. But know this: if I ever – ever – find out you’ve lied, about any part of this …” she walked on ahead without continuing her thought.
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 6 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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The next morning, Becky showed up 30 minutes early to the consultation room at the psychiatric hospital. That surprised Dr. Rama slightly. What surprised him more was that Bob was there too.
“Don’t worry, Doc. I’m not here to try to be in the meeting with J.J., or Nova, or whoever the hell he is. I’m here to talk to you,” Bob growled.
“Before you two get started, I’ll just say my piece about this,” injected Becky. “I believe your view on this, Doctor. I just wish you had told me how controversial this still is. I guess I feel I was led to believe it was all established science.”
“Let’s sit down. I think I know where this is going,” replied Dr. Rama. “Go ahead, Bob.”
Bob obliged. “Multiple personality disorder – dissociative identity disorder – D.I.D. I read up on it. There are no set diagnostic criterions – critecals –“
“Criteria,” said Rama.
“Yeah. That. There’s no evidence that it is actually a real ‘thing’! Hell, every other psych problem – schizophrenia, bipolar, depression – is proven by research, and they have set standards that a person has to show before you can label them with those diagnoses. This D.I.D. doesn’t! It seems to be a mainly North America problem, kind of like ADHD* used to be –"
“Except there are definite criteria for ADHD now. We just needed time to define them.”
Bob’s eyes flared with anger. “Many psychiatrists seem to feel that your profession causes this D.I.D. with hypnosis and over-diagnosis. Others say that patients make up these ‘alters’ because they’ve seen that old TV show ‘Sybil’ and too many other horror movies; these ‘alters’ make it possible to do horrible things, and then blame it on one of the ‘bad personalities’. Meanwhile, you shrinks just lament about how treatment may not work, but you keep on treating – and keep on charging for your treatments. Sounds like a huge scam to me!”
“Bob. I am usually one of those doubting psychiatrists,” replied Rama. “I have been involved in a few cases back when I worked at the University of Florida Medical School where I felt that some people labeled as D.I.D. patients were actually malingering – ‘faking it’. But I have indeed seen cases of true splitting of the psyche, where no other illness was present to explain the symptoms. So it is with J.J./Nova. The only reason I have diagnosed your child with D.I.D. is that no other diagnosis comes remotely close to fitting.
“It could very well be that Nova is malingering – but I doubt it. To fake it this well, she would need to have a medical diploma and acting degree from a distinguished fine arts school. Now, I’m not perfect – far from it – but I’m doing the best I know how to do with her. I am NOT trying to bleed money from you for her case. If I had wanted the big bucks, I would have gone into surgery. Or dermatology. I hope that clears things up for you. Does it?” Rama asked hopefully.
Bob’s brow was still knit with suspicion. “It makes this clear for me: you’re a quack. And I’m going to want a second opinion and different treatment center unless we see a breakthrough, and I mean quickly.”
Dr. Rama pursed his lips as he absorbed that information. “Understood. I would like to have another 48 hours with her – and with you two – before you decide to move her. Is that acceptable?”
“No promises, Doc. I’ll take this day-by-day, or hour-by-hour, if necessary. Becky, text me as soon as you’re through with the meeting, ok?” Bob turned and walked away.
“I’ll call you,” yelled Becky.
“Do you have any questions for me, ma’am?” queried Rama.
“Let’s just do this meeting,” Becky sighed.
Dr. Rama, Becky and Nova sat once more in the psychiatrists’ office at Passages Psychiatric Hospital. The window had already been repaired, and Nova was in restraints to make sure there would not be a repeat of the last meeting.
“I still don’t want to be here. And I don’t really want to talk to this bitch,” Nova snarked to Dr. Rama.
Becky replied. “Nova – I’m in the room. You can call me a bitch to my face. It won’t make –“
“Good morning then, bitch,” Nova interrupted.
Becky resumed without hesitation, “Good morning to you, Nova. As I was saying, it won’t make me leave. I’m here to help you.”
The teen gave Becky a huge eye roll. “You saw the tape. Rama told me he showed it to you. By the way, doc, thanks for doing that WITHOUT my permission. Really swell of you. So, you want to help me? Good. You know what I need. I need to get out of here, and back to Rio – and my Sabio. You have the power to do that, don’t you, lady? But I know you’re not going to. So what do we have left to talk about?”
“No, Nova – I’m not going to just let you go back to Rio. Number one, you’re still wanted for murder here, and once the hospital lets you go, the law will take you.”
“J.J. did that murder, not me!”
“Wait,” inserted Dr. Rama, “you said J.J. did the murder. Do you remember that? Are you sure of it? If so, we all need to know.”
Nova squinted her eyes shut in frustration. “No, of course I don’t remember it. I already told you – I just remember from after I woke up in Fortaleza. But I read the news reports when I did the ‘Evarist’ search in the library. Seems pretty clear-cut, pardon the pun – the girl got stabbed to death after sex. J.J. seems like the killer to me – or to anyone with a brain.”
“Well, there’s another reason I don’t want you to leave,” resumed Becky. “You are not the only one who owns this body. Somewhere inside you is J.J. – the sweet boy, my precious son. His personality still exists in you. It would be wrong not to let him back out.”
That got a leer and raised eyebrows from Nova. “You want J.J. the murderer back out?”
“My son. Is not. A murderer. Nothing has been proven. And even if he did do that, there has to be some circumstance – some extreme occurrence – that caused it. Maybe there are even more than two personalities in your body? God – maybe a horrible, murderous one that took over? I don’t know. But we’ve GOT to know. We must find out, and for that, J.J. needs to come back out!”
“Everybody wants this J.J. back,” the girl sighed. “No love for Nova, though, right? After all, it’s my body too.”
Becky looked back at the girl with affection. “That’s where you’re wrong, Nova. You’re part of J.J. So I do love you! Now, sometimes I don’t LIKE you – like when you call me a bitch, or call my husband a rapist without definite proof. All parents have times they don’t like their kids. But I absolutely do love you. I LOVE you. I don’t want to lose J.J. – but you’re part of him, so I don’t want to lose you either!”
Nova’s eye’s narrowed with hurt and anger. “That’s … a … LIE. Do you know how many times in that shitty basement in Fortaleza I would curl up in a ball and pray that someone would want me enough to rescue me? Hoped against hope that someone loved me enough to be looking for me? After half a year, I had resigned myself to this fact: NO ONE CARED. Or surely they would have found me!
“My dad sold me away! My mom had to be aware of it, right? So you had to have some idea of where to look for me. If it hadn’t been for divine intervention – Sabio – I’d still be in chains! So don’t tell me you ‘don’t want to lose me’. You LOST me two and a half years ago, and you DIDN’T FIND ME!”
Becky was weeping now, with wracking sobs that made a reply impossible.
Dr. Rama held his breath. This was a critical point in the therapy. It could blow up and the whole session devolve into screaming and yelling, and the patient would lose all progress she’d made so far. Or, as is the case with strong emotions, a breakthrough could be near. It all depended on the mother’s response; he silently rooted for her to give the right one.
Becky still cried, but forced herself to speak. “You’re absolutely right. I failed. Both Bob and I did. We looked for you ourselves, we organized family, took leaves of absence from work and our other commitments. We pushed the police to continue to search for you. I … I didn’t know where to look. Even the detective we hired – it took him over a year to find you, and even then he said it was by pure luck. In a million years I would not have guessed you were in Brazil.
“Every day and every night since you disappeared – I have wailed to God, hoping against hope that you were still alive and not suffering. I prayed for Him to take me if that would bring you back safe. Now, knowing what horrors you had to live through – I want to die. I failed you. God, I COMPLETELY failed you! The only reason I have to go on living is the hope that somehow I can help you heal. Because I love you.
“I love you so much! I LOVE you. YOU, Nova. Not just J.J. I love your passion, your eyes, and your soul. J.J. is my son; but I accept you as a daughter. You are a beautiful young woman, and I am proud to be your mother. Always remember that fact: I LOVE you, Nova. More than life itself.”
That passionate statement from Becky surprised Nova. For a minute there was an uncomfortable silence as the teen’s face was motionless. But her eyes began to fill, and then overflow with tears. “But … b-but … you CAN’T love me … why did you let Daddy rape me and sell me?”
“Honey. I really don’t think that happened. You’re going on the word of two monstrous abusive slavers. I’ve known your dad for years. He stains his shirts and his back is way too hairy and he has an occasional road rage issue; but he LOVES his kids. He’d give his life for you. When you disappeared, he was inconsolable – that’s why he packed on 130 pounds. Thank God he turned to food and not drugs or alcohol, but still. I’m not saying I can’t be fooled, but if your Daddy had anything to do with your horrific slave experience, I will eat my wedding dress. And I had the biggest, poofiest wedding dress ever made.”
That made Nova snicker a snerk in spite of her ongoing tears. Then she got serious again. “But … if Daddy didn’t do that to me … who did?”
Rama leaned forward. “Nova, maybe there are more than two alters in you. Another one could have done this, or may at least have information. Perhaps even J.J. will know. If you let me give you medicine and try hypnosis, we might find out.”
The young girl tied in restraints let her head flop forward and began to bawl. Becky started to rise out of her chair to go comfort her child. Dr. Rama held his hand up and shook his head.
“Let her process this,” he whispered.
So Becky sat on the edge of her seat, nails digging into the armrests, legs warding off the urge to kick the doctor in the nuts, and her own eyes again gushing. Then Nova choked out a word.
“…Okay.”
Tom the pilot saw his friend Finny watching a remote video feed. “Still spying on the Evarists, buddy?”
“Aaah, only now and then, to see if the kid is back. No trace of her since they called the ambulance to take her away that first night. Maybe she’s still in the loony bin.”
Tom sighed. “Breaking health privacy laws is a felony, isn’t it? How, pray tell, did you find out the kid was in a psych hospital?”
“A hunter has his sources,” Finny mumbled as he adjusted the frequencies on the video signal.
“Oh yeah, I forgot. You’re ‘The Hunter’. You are so full of POOP!”
Finny was stunned to silence. That was the closest thing to a swear word he’d ever heard his friend say. He looked up at Tom, and saw a scowling, beet red angry face staring back at him.
“Look, Finny,” growled the pilot, “I’m up for doing illegal stuff, as long as it’s both morally right and profitable. This obsession with that kid is neither. And you’re going to risk everything you have – WE have – just to satisfy your curiosity? Well, I sure don’t want you taking me down with you. I’m making myself scarce until you stop all this foolishness. You can find me down at the airport doing rides-by-hire. Let me know if you come to your senses.” Tom turned on his heel and stomped out of the room, then out the front door of the office.
“Shit. Shit, shit, shit,” mumbled Finny. What the hell am I doing? I need all the friends I can get, and without Tom my buddy count is – let’s see – ZERO. I just wish I could get that J.J. kid outta my head. Something’s still not right.
*ADHD: Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder.
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 7 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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Dr. Ramanathan – ‘Rama’, as he requested to be called – was sitting the next morning in the interview room with Nova.
“I’m ready to start the induction, Nova. Are you? You appear to be tense.”
“Ah, no. I’m not tense. That’s not the phrase for it; what would be more fitting? OH. I know – I’m SCARED SHITLESS. I can’t believe I’m submitting to this. You could really hurt me, you know?”
Rama’s left eyebrow raised high. “Explain.”
“You’re going to hypnotize me, right? How do I know you won’t put thoughts in my head like “forget Rio, forget Sabio, forget being a woman – you’ve got to become a boy named J.J. and spend your life in jail.” How do I know you won’t brainwash me? Or somehow put ME to ‘sleep’, like J.J. has been for nearly 3 years? Forgive me, but there’s only one male I trust – and since your name isn’t Sabio, then you aren’t him.”
“Let me allay your fears some, Nova.” Dr. Rama walked to the intercom. “Ask Mrs. Walsh to come in to this interview room, please.”
In two minutes, a woman in her mid-30’s walked in. She had striking red hair in a butch cut, and was dressed rough – army green T-shirt, fatigue pants, full arm tattoos, roughed-up cowboy boots and fingerless gloves. Yet on her lapel was an ID tag showing her as a staff member of the hospital. She came to the desk where the doctor and patient were and pulled up a chair, then plopped down into it.
Nova stared, confused. “Who are you? The hospital bouncer?”
“HA! I like you,” laughed the woman. “Name’s Nicki Walsh. I’m one of the two patient advocates here – that means I make sure all these other mooks here treat you right. Including the Chief Mook,” – she pointed to Dr. Rama.
“Oh yeah? Where were you when they tied me up for my last session with my Mom? Is that ‘treating me right’?”
“Damn straight, honey. Can’t have you jumping out of any more buildings. So, why was I called, Doc?”
“Hello, Mrs. Walsh. Nova is about to have her first hypnotherapy session. She’s worried that I’ll take advantage of her during that time. Perhaps you can reassure her that you’ll be on her side in this.”
“Sure. Tell me what specifically you’re afraid of, girlfriend.”
Nova repeated her concerns.
“I gotcha,” said Nicki. “Here’s what we’ll do. This session is gonna be taped and timed. After it’s over, they’ll give me the recording; I’ll check it for any sign that you were mistreated or given suggestions to brainwash you. If I see any, there will be hell to pay. And I’ll do a visit with you afterwards no matter what, to tell you what I did and didn’t see on the recording.”
Nova rolled her eyes. “You work here with Dr. Rama. You wouldn’t get him in trouble; you’ll just look the other way.”
“Tell that to Dr. Cunningham, the old medical director from 5 years ago. I caught him making sexual advances towards a patient; turned him in, got his license revoked. I’ve gotten a bad nurse’s aide and an LVN kicked out for harmful or unprofessional behavior. The staff knows not to do wrong to my patients, and corporate wants to keep me around because JCHAO – the national hospital accrediting company – likes my work here.”
“Everybody knows: you don’t mess around with Nicki,” Dr. Rama said.
“Okay. I feel better about this,” Nova sighed.
“Catch you later today, kid,” said Nicki as she exited.
Nova was soon a deep trance.. She sat in the small closed interview room. Dr. Rama was guiding her, and was video-recording the session.
“Nova, can you still hear me?”
“Yes.”
“Nova, I want you to try to rest. Sleep, if you can. I’m going to probe your consciousness to see if anyone else is there. I’ll give you a minute to relax.”
A minute passed. Rama resumed.
“I’m looking for J.J. Evarist. J.J., I’m a doctor. Please respond,”
Nothing.
“Okay. Is there anyone else living with J.J. and Nova? If so, please come out. I’d like to meet you. This is a safe place for you.”
Again, nothing – until half a minute had passed, then the young girl in the room began to pull up her knees to her chest, and wrapped her arms around her head. Her face contorted into a grimace, and she began a grunting, humming chant: “NNNnnnNNNnnnNNNnnnNNNnnnNNNnnnNNNnnn…”
Dr. Rama pushed a button, a silent signal for a nurse to come assist. Sue Holden RN arrived quickly.
“Come help me calm her,” Rama urged in a hushed tone.
The nurse gently stroked Nova’s arm as the doctor sat to the side, talking. “It’s going to be okay. You are in no danger. I’m a doctor, but I will only have women touching you. Do you have a name?”
The girl stopped chanting, but kept her eyes squeezed shut. Yet, there was another response: a slow, definite nodding of the head.
“You have a name. Can you tell me your name?”
A barely audible whisper came from the girl’s lips, not clear enough to comprehend.
“I’m so sorry, I could not understand that,” said Rama. “Can you repeat it, louder?”
The whisper answered, slightly stronger. “Meow.”
“Your name is … Meow?”
The girl’s head shook back and forth in a clear ‘no’.
“You sound like a kitty cat,” remarked nurse Holden. “Are you … a cat?”
Again, a ‘no’ response.
Dr. Rama ventured a guess. “Is your name Kitty?”
The head nodded emphatically.
Rama smiled. “It’s nice to meet you, Kitty. You’re not much of a talker, are you?”
Head shake, ‘no’.
"How old are you, Kitty?" Rama was guessing that he might be dealing with a preschool aged alter. "Can you hold up your fingers to show me how many years?"
'Kitty' held up her ring, middle and pointer fingers on her right hand.
I don’t know how long we’ll have her with us, so I might as well jump into the deep questions, Rama mused. “Kitty. I have to ask you some hard questions now. Some of them may remind you of really bad things, and you not want to remember them. I need you to be very brave, and answer them if you can. Do you understand?"
Kitty nodded her head.
"I need to know the answers because other people may get hurt if I don't know them. I promise you will be safe here, and nothing bad will happen when you answer. Nurse Holden will be right with you, and we are going to protect you here. Will you help us, Kitty?"
There was no response at first; then, one single but firm nod of the head.
"Good girl. Okay, Kitty. Here we go. Do you remember a girl named Missy Renquist?'
Nod.
"Tell me: is Missy still alive?"
The head shook "no".
"Did someone kill Missy?"
Nod.
"Did you ... see them kill her?"
Nod.
"Can you tell me - or show me - what you saw?"
Kitty opened her eyes - they had been mostly closed since she'd appeared - and reached over to Rama's hand that held his ball point Mont Blanc he was writing with. She wrapped her fingers around the pen and tugged. Rama had mixed feelings about letting a patient have a sharp device, but allowed her to take it.
"Be careful not to hurt yourself, Kitty." Or us, he thought.
Kitty held the big pen in her hand as one would hold an icepick. She raised her arm, and then slammed the pen down onto the desktop, ball point first. She rapidly repeated this action over and over. Dr. Rama nodded to the nurse, who squeezed Kitty's upper arm, and rubbed it.
"That's good, Kitty. You can stop now."
Rama felt numb in realization of what they had just been told by the alter. He glanced up at the video monitor to make triple-sure that the red RECORD light was still on; of course, it was. He turned back to his patient.
"Kitty. Did YOU do that to Missy?"
Vigorous head shaking no.
"So it was someone else. Did you see who stabbed Missy?"
There was a long pause; then a nod.
"Do you know this person? Do you know their name?"
Nod.
The doctor and nurse glanced at each other, both aware of the gravity of what they were hearing.
"Please tell me that person's name, Kitty."
There was no response to that, even after patient waiting and repeating the question.
Blast. I’ll just stick to yes/no questions, thought Rama.
"Kitty. When Missy was stabbed, did something bad happen to you - your body - right before or after?"
The girl nodded; then pointed to her buttocks with her left hand.
"Someone touched you in a bad place, then. Missy - do you know what a 'rape' is?"
Multiple head nods.
"Are you saying - that someone raped you when Missy got murdered?"
Kitty's head nodded slowly, as a tear began running down her cheek.
"Is the person who raped you the same person who killed Missy?"
She started sobbing as she clearly nodded her head yet again.
The nurse held her breath in shock.
Hang in there, child. Just answer one more question, and I'll stop. “Kitty – can you whisper the name of that person to me?”
Kitty did not respond with a word or head movement. She was still and silent for a moment, then the humming came back –
“NNnnnNNNnnnNNNnnnNNNnnn…” – except it got louder and louder until it was almost a guttural scream, accompanied by increasing thrashing, so severe that Nurse Holden could barely maintain her in the chair.
Dr. Rama punched the intercom – “Bring me one of the shots!”
Becky and Bob Evarist arrived separately at Passages. Both had been called there urgently, so Becky came from a luncheon she’d been attending and Bob took off work. Bob walked up to his wife who was sitting on one of the waiting couches just outside of Dr. Rama’s office. Then the door to that office opened, and Dr. Rama stepped out.
“You’re both here! Excellent. Please come inside – I have significant news to report on your child’s case.”
“I hope it’s good news,” replied Becky. “Despite the progress you and I had with Nova yesterday, I’m starting to despair. I miss my J.J.”
“Come in, please, and sit down,” urged Rama.
Both parents entered, to an unexpected sight. There was Nova, sitting in a chair. She was in full head to toe restraints, though, and she was asleep, with her head leaning up against the back of the chair.
“What’s this?” barked Bob. “I thought I wasn’t allowed to be in her presence?”
“She’s currently sedated. I want to play the recording of this morning’s session for both of you.” Rama turned on the big monitor in the room.
Fifteen minutes later, the video ended.
Becky was agape. “Doctor – will we be able to find out more from her? From this Kitty alter?”
“I think it’s not only possible, I think it’s likely. And since we had a breakthrough with producing an alter other than Nova, it makes me hopeful that we can see J.J. soon. I had to sedate Kitty at the end there – you saw how she got – but sometimes an antipsychotic shot can stimulate the emergence of other alters. Maybe even the main personality – J.J.”
Bob snorted. “Forgive me for remaining a skeptic, but this is all pretty convenient for you, isn’t it? I put my foot down demanding results and voila’, major breakthrough! Why couldn’t you achieve this a week ago? And this Kitty ‘alter’ – she is fingering someone else for the murder, but that doesn’t prove anything. A good prosecutor is going to claim that J.J. is doing a hell of an acting job, all to garner sympathy and create reasonable doubt. Are we really any closer to J.J. coming back? It just seems like you’re producing more and more alters, and they’re getting weirder and weirder.”
Dr. Rama was crestfallen. “I thought you would be happy to see the progress.”
“Oh, don’t get me wrong,” said Bob. “I’m happy to see anything happen at this point. I just don’t trust that it’s all real yet. I don’t trust this – this Nova person. If she really is a person, and not just some perverted imaginary thing. Hell, I don’t know what to believe anymore. Except this: I still think you, doctor, are a quack.”
“I’m sorry to hear that, Bob,” said Rama, shaking his head.
Rebecca broke in. “Doctor – I’m so heartbroken today. That person over there is my son. My missing son! Yet, he’s somebody else. I miss my son. I miss him so much. When will I get my son back? Will I ever get him back?”
“Ma’am. I need your patience,” pled Rama. “This injection is in him, working; as soon as the sedation wears off, we’ll see if he returns to us. Don’t give up. I know how horrible this must-“
“Shut up. No. No you don’t. You DON’T know,” wailed Becky. “Unless you’ve been in my position – our position – you have NO idea about what we are feeling. And we’re not even the main victims here! Jacoby – my sweet J.J. – God, what horrors he’s gone through! I’m sorry; forgive my rudeness, doctor –“
Bob jumped in. “Don’t apologize to the quack. He doesn’t deserve it.”
Becky held her face in her hands. “Doctor … I must have J.J. back. I need my son.”
She then raised her head up. “Bob needs him too. We are living in hell right now, with J.J. being so close that we can touch him, yet this – this girl –“
“This IMPOSTER,” snarled Bob.
His wife resumed. “This stranger has taken over, and I don’t know her, and she refuses to leave! Doctor, put yourself in our position and tell us that we shouldn’t be hurting and fearful and angry and – and -” She stopped as she broke into tears.
Suddenly there was a scraping on the floor, a loud one, coming from the direction of the chair that Nova was in. The doctor and the parents all fell silent as they saw the child’s eyes open, and scanning the room. There was a new look on Nova’s face – one of bewilderment, disorientation. Yet, there was something familiar in that face; something Becky had not seen in nearly 3 years.
The mother’s heart jumped into her throat. “J.J.?”
The child looked at her, still confused and a little panicked. “M - Mom? What’s going on?”
Jacoby Jesse Evarist woke up.
Please refer to the last half of chapter 1 to see what happened immediately after this point in the story.
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 8 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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J.J. was usually a non-stop talker. He lay in the treatment room at Passages Psychiatric Hospital where a nurse could constantly attend to him. Since awakening from his fainting spell, he just lay still and sobbed, his arms crossing his chest to keep his breasts out of his immediate vision. Dr. Rama now came to visit him.
As he approached his patient, the doctor said nothing. What he did do was pull up a chair next to the gurney and sit down there. He had a box of tissues, and he started doling them out to the teen.
Finally J.J. choked out a sentence. “What (sob) do you need?”
“I myself don’t need anything; I’m here so you won’t feel alone. So you know that I care about you, and so does every one else here.”
“Don’t you (sob) have more important things (sob) to do? You’re a doctor.”
“Right now, nothing is more important than me being here.”
J.J. took a bit to bawl out long and loud. In a few seconds he spoke again.
“I need my momma. If (sob, sniff) you want me comforted, she’s who I need.”
“I wish I could allow it. I cannot. This is even more complicated than you realize, J.J.; the local law is involved, and they have a say in where you stay. If I broke the rules for you, they might not look favorably on your case.”
“My (sniff) case? You mean my medical case?”
“No, unfortunately. Your court case.”
“I’m in trouble … with the law?? (sniff, sob) – my God, how much more worse does this nightmare get?”
“Worse than this, I’m afraid. We need to have a sit down visit where I go over what happened that night at homecoming, and what has happened since. You also need a physical hygiene primer for your new body; I’ll have our head clinical nurse do that with you. But you’re pretty upset now. I won’t proceed with these until you’re ready –“
“I’m ready.”
Rama was taken aback. “I don’t think you really are, Jacoby.”
“Doc. Let’s get the bad stuff out of the way. Otherwise the dread of what’s to come will be worse than going through it (sniff). Please.”
Rama sighed. “Okay – starting in the morning. You’ve been through enough today. I’m going to start you on a medicine to deal with depression and PTSD; the nurse will bring your first dose tonight.”
“Forget that. I don’t want to be a doped up zombie.”
“That’s not what this med does. It won’t dope you up or even make you artificially happy; it just helps keep the black cloud overhead from being quite as big and dark as it could be. It takes at least 2 weeks to work, so we should get started now. If you need help getting you to sleep tonight, I’ll give you a sleeping pill too; they should be safe to take for a short time until your other med kicks in. Tomorrow morning, you’ll meet with the clinical nurse – unless you change your mind, which is OK.”
The next morning J.J. was mute again through much of the visit with the clinical nurse.
“We won’t go over bras, hose or makeup; this is mainly learning about basic female body maintenance,” Nurse Fredrickson said. “Here’s how you do a breast self exam.”
J.J. was very careful and slow doing feeling for lumps in his bosom. Especially his nipples; they were hyper-touchy, and he jumped when he pressed on them to make sure they weren’t oozing any abnormal liquid. Next came adjusting to a new center of gravity, what with his new chest and hips; when he tried bending over in his usual 14-year-old boy way, he nearly toppled forward.
“Take shorter steps, J.J. – at least until you get more familiar with your hips. A fall and injury is the last thing you need.”
“Okay, remember, you must sit every time you use the toilet now. And you will always need some paper of some type. So check for it when you choose a stall. If you don’t have paper after urinating, you’ll be left with the decision to stain your pants or to sit there and air dry.”
Jacoby finally spoke up. “Air dry? I’ve never heard … is this what normal girls talk about?”
“Welcome to the glamorous joy of being a woman,” the nurse empathized. “Okay. We saved the toughest for last: care of your vagina.”
Jacoby wondered why applying a simple thing like a panty liner was so difficult to get right. Maybe I’m just nervous about having to PREPARE MY PANTIES. I WEAR PANTIES NOW. GOD.
Now Jacoby lay on his back, knees flexed and feet together on the bed. And nothing on from the waist down.
“Put the lubricant on your finger; now, apply it into the opening down there. Oops! A little more to the center – there you go.” Nurse Fredrickson gave him two thumbs up.
J.J. moved to a sitting position on the table, covering his girlish groin with his hands. “Ah, nurse – I just realized – I’m putting lubricant INTO MY VAGINA. There’s only one reason I’d be doing that – and I am NOT having sex with another dude!”
“Honey, you're 'lubing' down there for another reason. For general vaginal health – whether you ever have sex there or not – you need to keep your vagina dilated. We’re going to go over that; you’re overdue for it, likely.” She held up four items of different color and size, but all the same shape.
“Dildos?”
“No, honey. Dilators.”
“DILDOS??” J.J. suddenly looked pale and woozy. The nurse laid him back down on the exam table until the color was back in his face.
Then, like a trooper, J.J. grit his teeth and performed his first vaginal dilation.
The afternoon session was much more traumatic than the morning. J.J. saw the recordings of Nova’s sessions, jaw agape at seeing him in his female form, acting in ways and talking with language that he never would have thought he’d do or say.
He almost passed out once more when he heard of Missy’s murder. He sat on the floor in the corner of Dr. Rama’s office and bawled for an hour straight. Then he stared dumbfounded as Rama eventually told him that he was the chief suspect.
He had no recollection of his father ever hurting him. Rama suspected that some of J.J.’s memories somehow were being repressed, but he could not prove it. The doctor did not show the video of Kitty to J.J., but rather told him the gist of it.
Dr. Rama let the staff know to watch out for any suicidal behavior or speech from the unfortunate young man; he’d not shown any tendency for that, but Rama felt it was better to be safe than sorry.
In a few more days, there was a very positive breakthrough.
J.J. was meeting once more with the doctor and both of his parents (Bob was now allowed to be present, as his presence actually seemed to produce calm in J.J. rather than agitation). The boy sat up and made an announcement.
“I’ve been contemplating my life, and what’s happened to me. I don’t like any of it. In fact, I HATE my current condition. I mean, I’m suddenly a female, and my girlfriend is DEAD, and I’M wanted for murdering her! What in God’s name did I do to have all of this happen to me? Speaking of God, how could He have let this happen? Does He hate me, or is He dead, or what? What … why –”
J.J. began weeping hard, his body jerking with sobs. Becky started to rise out of her chair, but caught herself and turned her head quickly to stare at Dr. Rama.
Rama was trained to interpret body language, but a toddler could have read Becky’s look. It said allow me to comfort my son or I will hurt you. He nodded his head and waved Becky towards her child; she was at his side in a millisecond with a box of tissues.
The tears gushed for a good minute. Then, J.J. pulled himself together and blew his nose clean, wiped his eyes, and set a look of determination in his doe-like eyes and tiny chin.
“So, yeah; this sucks. But I am not a quitter. Mom, Dad – you taught me never to give up, and to make the best I could of any situation. So: I’m going to do that. I don’t know what “the best” of this looks like; but that’s the one choice I have, so that’s what I’m going to do. I believe that in spite of all this, there has to be some purpose for my life. I can still accomplish something.”
That statement produced more tears, but mainly from his mother and father.
J.J. now appeared worried. “But, I’m afraid … I’m going to need a TON of help. And I’ve already been such a burden on you two.”
“The only burden was when you weren’t around, son,” Becky smiled. “Together, somehow, we’ll all get through it.”
“Amen, J.J. I’m right with you, buddy,” chimed Bob.
Becky turned to the doctor. “Is there any chance that he can come stay at home while he continues his therapy with you? He might do better there, now that he’s ‘himself’ again.” An unmistakable yearning could be heard in her voice.
Rama rubbed his eyes underneath his glasses. “Not yet. You, Bob and I need to talk after J.J. goes back to his room here.”
Once J.J. was gone, Rama didn’t beat around the bush. “The district attorney called me to get an update on his progress. I am working closely with your defense lawyer to make sure I disclose only what I legally am required to. Still, the D.A. feels that it’s time to schedule your son’s murder trial. He told me it would be on the docket as early as possible, unfortunately.”
Bob growled with anger. “That grandstanding bastard is up for re-election, and wants to be in the headlines with a ‘big win for the people’s justice’. Our son being sex-changed will only make this a juicier story for him and the papers.”
“Also,” added Rama, “they demand J.J. be kept under lock and key. They already feel he has been a fugitive from justice; if I discharge him from the hospital, he will be sent to jail without bond while awaiting trial.”
Becky was pale as a ghost. “Doctor – then you must keep him here, please! As long as possible! This place is not home, but I shudder to think what would happen to my son in jail! Oh god – please tell me you won’t release him!” She looked at her husband. “Bob – what if he’s sent to prison? What if he’s sent to men’s prison? More torture and then death! I – I don’t want to continue living if that happens!”
“Shh –shh, baby. This isn’t over yet,” Bob whispered as he pulled his wife’s head to his shoulder, and then looked to Dr. Rama. “Until the trial at least, can he stay here?”
“I don’t think our work is done here,” Rama answered with a nod. “We are so close to finding out what Kitty knows. That may or may not help J.J.’s case.”
Bob whistled with relief. “Thanks, Doc. Have you seen any sign of Nova since J.J.’s come back?”
“No.”
“Well, great. Good riddance.”
“Bob … Nova is part of your son’s personality, whether you like her or not. She likely will return, sooner or later. I suggest treating her with love, even if she doesn’t reciprocate.”
The father suddenly was clenching his jaw; his face was red and his eyes were leaking. “God … I was so stupid! I knew, I knew what happens on prom nights! That’s when half the girls at school get knocked up! I should’ve given them an earlier curfew; I should’ve stayed home to enforce it; I should’ve chaperoned them; I should’ve done something more, or different! Maybe all of our lives would still be going boringly normal still. God, what I wouldn’t give to go back …”
Now it was Becky who was comforting her spouse, with whispers and light brushes on his cheek with the soft tips of her fingers.
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 9 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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The next day, J.J. had another hypnotherapy session. For this one, his mother was now allowed to be present.
“Our goal today is to bring Kitty back for a visit. I’m hoping we can get the identity of the person who raped her/you, and killed Missy,” said the doctor.
The patient wasn’t too enthusiastic about that. “I just got control back. I’m not too sure I want to chance giving it up again.”
“While I cannot guarantee you – J.J. – will always be the alter in control, I can assure you that this therapy today is essential for your health and possibly your freedom.”
They began with a mild antipsychotic shot. Dr. Rama and nurse Holden were there as before, with Becky seated next to them. Rama had something new with him this session: a large poster board with pictures attached. Pictures of Bob Evarist, Becky Evarist, some next-door neighbors, and various photos from newspapers and magazines were arranged in a random fashion on the board.
J.J. was in a deep trance state.
“This is Dr. Rama. I need to speak with Kitty, please.”
Nothing happened for 30 seconds. Then J.J.’s arms and legs drew up, and he started rocking his head, humming “NNNnnnNNNnnnnNNNnnnNNNnnn.”
“Kitty, is that you?”
Head nod.
“Good afternoon, Kitty. I have some more questions for you. All of them will be ‘yes or no’ questions that you can answer with shaking or nodding your head. Except for one question where I’m going to ask you to point with your finger. Is that okay?”
There was no response.
“Kitty – do you remember who raped you and killed Missy?”
Head nod.
“Can you look at this poster board and tell me – is that person’s picture on here?”
Kitty’s eyes opened, then shut. And her head nodded.
Becky had goose bumps as Rama asked, “Can you point to the person who did this?”
Unfortunately, there was no response to that. In fact, Kitty responded to no other questions or instructions the rest of the time.
The physician decided to finally end the session for today. He fretted over Bob Evarist’s last comment to him. “Good riddance” to Nova.
The last time I put Nova under hypnosis, it was Jacoby who emerged afterwards. Now I’ve put Jacoby under; will it be Nova re-emerging? She is a valid person, and has issues to work through; but right now I need the father’s cooperation, and I’m not likely to get it if it is she who returns. This is all chance; I have no direct control over which alter presents or when they do. Even Nova and Jacoby don’t have that power. May Lord Shiva protect me from bad karma for this – but I pray it is the boy who comes back.
He brought the teen out of the trance.
“Jacoby? Are you back with me?”
“Yeah, doc. It’s me, J.J.”
Dr. Rama breathed a sigh of relief.
"Did it work, doc?" asked J.J. "Did you get Kitty back?"
"Yes we did, Jacoby. Unfortunately, I could not get much more information from her, even using this poster of photographs. She did indicate that the culprit is in one of these pictures. But there must be thirty people on here."
"Ahem," Becky cleared her throat. "Maybe next time, I could ask her? Kitty might be more comfortable with a woman's voice - especially if that woman is her mother."
Rama nodded. "I think that's a good idea, but I'm not sure it will be enough. I think we need to put Kitty at 'ground zero' - where all of this started - and ask her there."
Becky and J.J. had some time as Dr. Rama finished inputting information in the computer. It had been years since they ‘d had a chance to just ‘shoot the breeze’ together, and they took advantage of this opportunity. J.J. began with an apology.
“I’m sorry, Mom. I wish I had been able to be ‘awake’ along with Kitty. Maybe I could have made her point to the picture she saw. It still seems so strange to me to talk about these other people – Kitty, Nova and maybe more, who knows? – living in my brain.”
“You did fine, son. And if Kitty shows up again, maybe I can get her to point to the picture she means. After all, I’m her mom, not some stuffy old doctor.” She glanced a reassuring smile at her kid. A change to a less serious subject was needed, so that’s what Becky did.
“You should try to reconnect with some of your friends and family; I know they wont let you call, but you can write. You can start with grandparents. I’ve been keeping both sets updated on you. They want to help in any way they can; Grandma Liz says she’d be happy to teach you how to find a rich husband.”
“Ha ha ha! Funny as ever! I love Grandma Lizzy’s sense of humor,” J.J. smiled, and then appeared worried. “She WAS just joking, right?”
“Yes she was, Jakey Jamers.”
“Mom! You haven’t called me that in a long time.”
“Well, you haven’t called me Mommaboo in a long time either. Remember that?”
“Oh brother,” J.J. rolled his eyes while smiling.
“Speaking of your brother,” Becky said, “we need to update him on your status.”
“Dustin doesn’t know that I’m back in control and Nova’s gone?”
“Honey, Dustin doesn’t even know we found you and brought you back. He’s always been a busy guy, but after you disappeared – he didn’t take it well. He’ll go for months without calling us, and won’t always return our calls and texts. It breaks my heart, but I can’t make him stay in touch. I think he still operates his big trucking rig independently, so he could be in Minnesota, Boston or back at his home in Tampa an hour and a half from here.
“You know, he always talked with you more than us though. Maybe if you wrote him a letter, he’d read it?”
“Sure thing! Boy, I bet he’ll be surprised to hear what’s happened.”
Becky smiled. “What about your buds from school?”
J.J. got quiet. “Mom … I don’t know. Matt, Josh and I used to watch the pretty girls at school, and discuss their boobs, and butts, and … and now I’m one of the ones they’d do that to. Not to mention they’ll think I’m a murdering, sicko self-mutilating freak!”
Becky looked sympathetically at her son. “Don’t underestimate your buddies. I bet at least some of them would be willing to treat you just as before.”
“Mom – no offense, but you don’t know most teenage guys. I saw how they treated gays and even “less beautiful” people. They would turn on me even more viciously than that, just to distance themselves from me,” J.J. said with a somber voice.
“Heck, I remember how I used to ridicule others right along with them. Last night in bed, I realized - that’s why all this has happened to me. It’s the universe’s way of paying me back. I deserve all this, I guess. Especially if … if somehow I really killed Missy.” The boy in a girl’s body buried his face in his hands and began to sob.
After all this time – I’m finally going to be able to close the Missy Renquist file.
At the Kissimmee Police Department, Detective Ray Castro organized the information on Jacoby Jesse Evarist on his work PC. There had been a frustrating lack of new data on this fugitive for years – but now he’d popped up out of nowhere. And to top it off, he’s going to cop an insanity defense; multiple personalities, or so his family and shrink were claiming.
Yeah, how convenient. "It wasn't me, it was my alter ego, Freddy Krueger."
The icing on this freaky cake: this murderous boy was now a girl, at least surgically and hormonally. Castro was itching at the bit to interview the suspect; he just needed the psychiatrist’s green light. Which was frustratingly slow in coming. Still, any day now, he hoped for a call –
DIDDLE-DIDDLE-DIDDLE-DIDDLE went Ray’s desk phone. Sigh. Wimpy electronic ring, he thought as he grabbed the receiver.
“Castro here. Oh? HEY, Doc Ramalamajama – sorry, I keep screwing that up; I forgot, just use ‘Rama’ like you said. I hope this is the call I’m expecting, allowing me to come interview the Evarist boy?”
Rama laughed half-heartedly at the other end. Detective Castro was always making a point to initially butcher his name; it had happened so often that he was sure it was on purpose. “No, officer; this is not that call. I’m calling to request a special favor regarding that child. I need to do a therapy session with J.J. in his home, in the room where the murder occurred.”
There was silence on the other end for a few seconds; then – “Well. That is an unusual request, especially for a suspect considered a high flight risk. There’s a great reason for it, I assume?”
“Yes; I feel like that location may be able to spur some memories that may allow him – or rather, one of the alternate personalities – to remember the identity of the murderer.”
“OH, COME ON – “ The detective bit off his sentence and counted to ten, breathing deeply as his work counselor had instructed. He then tapped his fingers hard on his desk as he resumed in a calmer tone: “Doc. Let’s be honest. We both know who did that murder. This kid is playing you – playing the whole system – like we’re a cello and he’s Yo-Yo Ma. Surely you can see that?”
“Detective. I am a physician; you’re the lawman. You search for justice; I search for healing. And whether you like it or not, you will end up granting my request.”
“Oh, really? Why will I, pray tell?”
“Because during the trial, I will be on the stand. And I can either say that I was allowed to fully explore my patient’s psyche or not. See, if I can do this, then we may find that we have the wrong conclusion, and that the real killer is still out there. Or, I may find that somehow J.J.’s story does not fit; in that case I will testify that likely he or one of his alters committed the act.
“On the other hand, if I cannot fully evaluate my patient, then I will testify my belief that enough reasonable doubt exists that the D.A. will lose the case; and then you will be under the microscope, Detective Fidel – Oh, sorry, Detective Castro – I keep screwing that up.”
For twenty seconds, Dr. Rama heard nothing but the sound of deep breathing coming from the lawman. He knew that Ray Castro, son of a Cuban political refugee, hated the late Fidel Castro. Eventually, a low, measured voice came from the receiver.
“He’ll be cuffed hand and foot, and I’ll have myself or a deputy in the room.”
“NO. He will be with his mother and me only. You may post a guard at the front and back doors. And, no to hand or feet cuffs also. Restraints and strangers in the room may inhibit the therapy.”
More silence. “… Only one session. That’s it.”
“Hopefully I will need only one. Can we schedule it for tomorrow?” Rama was pleased with himself. He had ‘won’ this negotiation.
“Now here’s my warning to you, good doctor,” Castro growled. “If this suspect escapes, or commits suicide, or harms someone else as a result of this special treatment, then I can guarantee you will be the one in jail. I will personally lock you in myself. You got me?”
Rama grumbled. “Understood, Fidel.”
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 10 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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The next day, Becky was back at her house preparing for the special home session that Dr. Rama had arranged with Detective Castro. They were all to arrive within the hour. She and Bob had spent half the night readying J.J.'s room for the session; moving all the storage out and replacing the bed and shelves and posters as it had been when the boy had gone missing. Now Becky was exhausted, and her feelings ran the emotional gamut – exhilaration and hope at what they might be close to learning, and trepidation that the truth would destroy her child and by extension her family.
She needed someone to talk to. Bob was in the middle of his workday. Most of her friends sympathized with her, but not with J.J.; everyone in town pegged him for Missy’s murder. She was going crazy. She called Grandma Lizzy, but got only her voicemail.
Grandpa E – voicemail. Same with her sister. She decided to call J.J.’s older brother Dustin, even though she knew she’d get voicemail – and he’d never respond, as usual. She dialed the number despite the futility of the action.
Then, amazingly, he answered. “Yo, Mom. What do you need?”
“Dustin! Thank you for answering. I miss talking to you-“
“Sorry Mom, I’m in a pretty big traffic snarl. I won’t be able to stay on long.”
“Dustin, just listen for a second. J.J.’s back.”
There was a moment of stunned silence, then “WHAT! OH MY GOD! J.J.? That’s GREAT! When? Is he okay? Where was he? Did the police finally track him down? Where is he staying?”
“It’s a long, complicated, twisted tale, honey. There’s no way I could cover it all in a quick phone call. He was … mentally ill, pretty badly. We had to put him in the psychiatric hospital here.”
“Oh God! That’s - that’s horrible! Is he getting better?”
“Yes, son – but there’s been things done to him that – well, let’s just say his life is changed forever. I wish you were here in person. He could really use a visit from you.”
“Mom, believe it or not, right now I’m about 30 minutes away from Kissimmee! I dropped a load off at Port Canaveral and was headed back to Tampa; I’m entering Orlando’s outskirts in a few minutes. How about I take a detour and come over; then, if visiting hours are still in effect, maybe I can see him in the hospital?”
“Oh! Dustin, that’s fantastic! Just come to the house, honey! The doctor is bringing him here for a special one-time session in his bedroom where all of the bad stuff happened, to see if we can stimulate his memory. We all need to know what really happened the night he disappeared. The police will have a car or two outside, but maybe we can have them bend the rules so you two can share a hug. Heck, Bob’s even trying to get off work early for this, so we would have our whole family back here for the first time in years!”
There was prolonged silence from Dustin’s phone. “MOM – J.J.’s going to be in the house – and Dad’s going to have access to him? And the cops are going to be there, but not right inside with him?”
“Well, that’s the plan, as I understand it. Why are you sounding so concerned?”
“Mom. Just listen to me with an open mind. J.J.’s in danger. Don’t let him physically be around Dad!”
Becky’s mouth dropped. “What? W-what do you mean?”
“Mom, there is stuff that Dad does – and has done. He did it to me, and I’m sure that he’s done it to J.J. Why do you think I hardly show my face over there anymore?”
“What – what do you mean, son? What kind of ‘stuff’?”
“GOD, Mom – SEX STUFF. It’s hard to even talk about it, okay? Just KEEP J.J. AWAY FROM DAD.”
“Son, if this is so, why haven’t you told me before?”
“You don’t think that after J.J. disappeared I didn’t kick myself every day, knowing I should have done more to protect him? I left as soon as I turned 17; J.J. was still 12. I guess I thought he was safe, since Dad only seemed to target me. Then when that Missy girl was found stabbed, and J.J. gone, I knew Dad was the cause – he probably screwed J.J. over – literally – so much that something snapped. Dad knows J.J. can finger him for part of this – and who knows what Dad will do to make sure that doesn’t happen?”
“I – I find this hard to believe. I’m going to confront your father!”
“MOM, NO – aw, nuts – Mom, that will just put you in danger too! Tell the police what I said, and then you just protect J.J., ok?”
“Dustin … what do I do? They are probably on their way over here with J.J. already. Bob may be on his way too!”
“I’m about 25 minutes from you now. If I can get there before Dad does, I’ll handle him. Believe me, I’m big enough now that I can stop him. But if the police get there with J.J., tell them to be on the lookout for that creep I used to call “father”. If Dad gets there before the cops do – Mom, do you still know how to use the shotgun you guys keep in the gun safe?”
Becky’s head was spinning like a cyclone. “I – I haven’t used it since the firearm classes we took ten years ago.”
“Well, if I were you, I’d re-acquaint myself with it ASAP. Be there in 20. God keep y’all safe.”
Marcus Finlandt, detective and bounty hunter, was frustrated. For the last 24 hours the feed from the Evarist house was nothing but snow on the screen.
I’ll bet it’s a faulty relay unit; the primary transmitter I used is super-reliable. Unless they found it and got rid of it or snapped the power cord. If it’s just the relay, I’ll be able to pick it up if I get within 100 yards of the home. But I’ve been monitoring the conversation in the home, and it’s all benign. The parents seem clean. I’ll chalk up my gut feeling to paranoia and quit this little side adventure. I just need to discretely retrieve my unit. The wife is probably home alone; I can ask her if I can come in, and when she’s not looking I’ll snag my transmitter.
He brushed the remnants of some potato chips from his chin, grabbed his laptop computer/monitor, and trotted out to his black GMC SUV. As usual, he was packing his Glock pistol and stun gun. He jumped in, started the engine, and screeched off down the 11-mile trip to the Evarist house.
Unnoticed by the hunter was a man straddling a motorcycle on the side of the road. This person wore jeans and a buttoned denim jacket; fairly hot attire for Florida in the summer. Peeking out from the lower edge of the jacket was the handle of a baseball bat; the rest of the bat was hidden. This man watched with binoculars as Finlandt came out of the house and entered the SUV. He made note of the long coarse hair pulled into a low ponytail, the handlebar mustache, and the dark sunglasses.
As Finlandt took off down the road, the motorcyclist fired up his hog and followed.
Found you, thought the biker. Now you give me what I want or you’re a dead man.
Ten minutes later, a patrol car rolled up to the Evarist house and parked in the front. Detective Castro, Doctor Ramamurthy, and patient J.J. Evarist exited the cruiser. Castro had a firm grip on the child’s thin, feminine upper arm as they approached the front door. Becky opened the door as the trio approached; her eyes focused in on her offspring.
“Welcome home, son of mine,” she stated in spite of J.J.’s lithe girlish appearance. “Even if it is just for an hour.” She tried her best to hide the panic building in her.
Castro barked out the rules. “I’ll keep an eye on you guys from my car. After 60 minutes I need a phone call for an update. No one – NONE of you – leave the house by any opening except this front door, and even then not without calling me first.
“I’ve got a unit with police lieutenant Mike Chan parked in back just to make sure we’re watching you from as many angles as we can. Believe me, you don’t want to get caught by Chan; he will take you down hard. I get suspicious about anything, and I am calling this off and you go back to the locked unit at the psych ward,” he said glaring at J.J.
“Roger that, sir,” smiled J.J.
Becky whispered in Detective Castro’s ear. “I need to speak to you and Dr. Rama right now – and out of earshot of J.J.”
Castro shook his head. “That would mean leaving this fugitive,” he pointed to J.J., “alone. No can do, even for a second. Tell the doc here, and I’ll stand in the far corner of the room with the suspect. Then we’ll switch places and you can tell me.”
Becky gave Dr. Rama the quick run through of what Dustin had just told her. The doctor was shocked.
“Becky. I am stunned. Do you believe Dustin?”
“I – I don’t know what to believe anymore. I feel totally lost right now. I’m looking to you, Doctor. What should we do?”
Rama frowned in concentration. “We’ll take all accusations with a grain of salt – but also, take them seriously. At least until we’ve proven that they are false. I will tell Detective Castro; he’ll take care of this. Thank God the police are here. Now you take J.J. from the detective and stand in the far corner where we both can see you while I relay this information to him.”
Becky watched the two men talk, and saw Det. Castro’s eyes grow wide with disbelief. She felt a tapping on her shoulder. It was her beautiful son/daughter, J.J., with a look of concern on his/her face.
“Mom? What’s going on?”
Becky saw no alternative but to confront the new concerns.
“Sweetheart, I’ve got to know something. I’ve just talked to Dustin, and he’s told me some horrible information. He’ll be here in less than half an hour to be with us and help me protect you. He also told me that your father probably … molested you when you lived with us before you disappeared. Please be honest with me. Has anything bad ever happened between you and your father?”
J.J.’s eyes were closed, and his chin was on his chest. He did not respond – until about 30 seconds later. He began humming: “NNNnnnNNNNnnNNNnnnNNNnnn…”
Becky gasped. Oh my God! He’s switched to Kitty!
She looked around the living room they were in; yes, Dr. Rama had brought the poster board from yesterday’s session. Running and grabbing it, she returned to Kitty’s side. Dr. Rama, seeing what was going on, now silently approached the two women and nodded to Becky to proceed as they had discussed.
“Kitty, this is Mommy. I love you, and am here to protect you. But I need you to help me. You told Dr. Rama that on this board was a picture of the person who raped you and killed Missy. I need you to point that person out to me. Would you do that for me, please?”
Kitty opened her eyes and looked at the pictures on the poster board. Her arms were contracted, and her hands balled up like fists under her chin. But a finger uncurled from her right hand and pointed towards the big picture in the upper right hand corner of the poster.
Dr. Rama silently gasped. Becky started to weep. She pointed her own hand to the picture, touching it, to make sure she understood Kitty.
“K-Kitty (sob) is the bad man in this picture?”
Kitty nodded her head emphatically.
It was a 5-year-old photo of her husband Bob, standing out in their front yard.
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 11 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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Detective Castro walked back out to his car and got in quickly, not even bothering to close the door in the thick Florida heat. He kept an eye on the roads he could see around him as he picked up his car radio unit.
“This is Detective Ray Castro. I need an APB for Bob Evarist. Large overweight man driving a silver Buick Legac-“
Suddenly Castro was fighting for his breath, his very life. His vision was covered by something thick and sopping wet being pressed hard into his lips and nostrils. Noxious smelling liquid streamed into his nose, mouth and lungs. He dropped the radio and grabbed towards his face; his fingers felt the outline of a huge, gloved hand holding a wet cloth there. Castro grabbed the attacking limb by the wrist and attempted to pull it away, and he tried to squirm – but he quickly felt his strength dissolving, followed by his consciousness. He now was no longer awake enough to feel the finality of death overtake him.
Castro’s final earthly thought was Chan - Help!
He had no way of knowing that the Lieutenant stationed at the back door was dead. Chan had gotten the same treatment as Castro, one minute earlier.
Dr. Rama was inside on his cell phone relaying information on Bob Evarist to another detective at the police station when he saw Becky re-enter the living room where he and J.J. were.
She had a huge shotgun with her.
“Becky – I’m not comfortable with you bringing that in here.”
“To hell with your comfort, doctor. I’m protecting my child.”
“Becky, the police are outside. They will give us all the protection we need. See? I’m pulling back the blinds; there’s Detective Castro – “
Castro was indeed there. Sitting in his car, door closed, and head leaned back as if asleep. The physician noted a darkening blue tint on the lawman’s face as the sun reflected off of it; he also noted the total absence of any movement. Was he even breathing?
“Ma’am, keep J.J. here. I’m going to … talk to the detective. I’ll be right back.” Rama didn’t want to unduly upset Becky further, not with a firearm in her grasp. He exited the front door and quickly began to approach the cruiser, carefully scanning all of his surroundings.
All of his surroundings except directly behind him. That’s where the big arm came from, grasping his neck and choking him furiously and silently until he passed out.
Finny fretted as he drove up towards the Evarist house and saw the police cruiser in front.
So much for getting my transmitter back today. Too much heat. Wait. What in the hell?
The officer in the cruiser looked to be asleep. Then Finny saw through one of the hedge lines to see the outline of someone lying on their back ‘spread eagle’ and motionless on the lawn. He scanned the rest of the grounds but saw no one else; the outside front doorway was excluded from his vision by a huge citrus tree in the yard.
Finny quickly opened up his laptop and engaged his transmitter; he got a quality sound and video signal from inside the main hallway of the house. He turned the volume on high and hit the RECORD function.
Becky had just checked the shotgun; it was full with shells, so she pulled up on the barrel until it clicked in place. She reviewed in her head: Loaded. Safety off. When ready, pull back on this part to ‘cock’ it. Aim and shoot.
“Mom? What’s going on?” said a girl’s voice to her side.
“J.J.! Is that you?”
He smiled. “Who else would it be?”
“Kitty was present just a few minutes ago.”
“REALLY? I just changed to her? I don’t remember it at all. I hate that. What’s the gun for? And – have you been crying?”
“Yes, I have. And the gun is for our protection. Honey, this is too convoluted to explain right now, and I don’t know that we have time for me to go into it because I’m so confused. I just know I want you safe, and you need to trust me, OK?”
“Okay,” said J.J. with a worried look.
Suddenly, Becky heard the unmistakable rumble of a large diesel engine outside of their door. She looked out the window – there was a big gray truck cab, without a trailer attached. DTT was printed on the side – Becky recognized that as short for “Dustin’s Tampa Trucking”.
“He’s here,” she mumbled to herself.
“Who’s here, Mom?” J.J. asked, walking up behind her.
Becky looked back at J.J. foggily. “I didn’t tell you?”
Suddenly there was a knock on the door. Becky opened it to see her older son, Dustin. He was rippled with muscles and tanned; clean shaven, and with a close-cropped buzz cut on his scalp. He wore a sleeveless tee that was stained with sweat.
“I’m here. And it looks like Dad is too.” Dustin said with alarm.
“B-Bob’s here?” Becky gasped.
“I haven’t seen him, but I see his work in the police cruiser and the dude on the lawn.” Dustin could see from Becky’s bewilderment that she knew nothing about what he’d just mentioned. “Look – I’ll explain later. Let’s get inside and set up a safe room; I’ll stand guard.”
Becky looked over at J.J. “Jacob, look who it is! Your brother, Dust-“ she stopped in mid-sentence.
Kitty was back. She sat on the floor, knees pulled up under her chin, and arms wrapped around her legs. “NNNnnnNNNnnnNNNnnnNNNnnn…”
“What the hell – who is this girl?” gaped Dustin.
“This girl is your brother. She was changed into a female by kidnappers. And as a result of all her trauma, she now has multiple personalities. This is one of them; her name is Kitty, and she appears to be a young child.”
“What the – is this for real or are we in the twilight zone? J.J. is a transsexual freak?”
“Careful how you speak around your brother – or, sister right now,” admonished Becky. “Kitty has been essential in understanding what’s gone on. She’s the only personality who remembers who really killed Missy Renquist; the same person who raped J.J.’s body.”
Dustin turned pale. “Dad, right?”
Becky began to cry once more. “Yes. Bob. You were right. I’m married to a monster.”
Dustin’s face glared with urgency. “Speaking of that monster – there’s two dead guys out front. Dad’s here, somewhere. We need to get y’all out of this hallway NOW, to an interior room, where I can hold him off with your gun.”
Becky was near total meltdown. “Dustin! Can we make a run for your truck? I’m not staying here one more second in this horrible place! Take J.J. and me in somewhere safe, and I’ll get the law involved after we’re there. Will you stay with us and protect us for right now?”
“Ah,” Dustin thought – “OK. Yeah. Let me look out the front door to make sure the coast is – ”
“NNN! NNN-NNN-NNN!” Kitty’s humming got violently loud suddenly.
Becky put her arm around Kitty. “Baby, I need you to stand up. We need to-“
Kitty suddenly straightened and extended her whole right arm, and reached over to the poster board with the pictures on it. Becky had it with her to take it to the police for evidence. Kitty now pointed her finger to the same big picture of Bob standing in the yard from five years ago.
Becky sighed. “Yes honey, that’s the bad man. Your Da-“ … she stopped talking as her blood froze in her veins.
Kitty’s finger was now actually touching that picture, but not on Bob’s form. Instead, it rested on a partially obscured person sitting on the porch behind Bob.
Dustin.
Becky looked up at her oldest. She couldn’t fully mobilize all of her faculties in the midst of the sudden new shock and horror flooding her brain. “D … Dustin??”
The older brother wore a new look of disgust and inconvenience. “Well, shit,” he remarked as he brought his fist down on his mother’s face in rapid multiple punches.
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 12 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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“HOLY SHIT!”
Finny was sitting in his SUV, watching and listening to the goings on via electronic feed. He had been on high alert when he saw the scene outside – but this new man’s vicious attack suddenly sent his brain into five-alarm panic. He furiously dialed 911 on his cell phone and began to don his Kevlar vest.
Dustin dragged the limp, unconscious body of his mother away from the front doorway and down the hall. He dropped her at the window area, and then closed the louvers. He then glanced at the girlish person he once knew as his brother; she was still Kitty, going “NNNnnnNNNNnnn.”
“Man, J.J. You really got screwed up, didn’t you? That’s freakin’ hilarious.” He walked back and closed the front door. “Unfortunately, what I needed was for you to get dead. Now, this is a mess … and unlike last time, I’m not sure how to cover it up.”
Dustin mused for a minute over the heap he had made of his mom and Kitty, lying together in the hallway. ““Okay, I think this is the best thing I can figure. Hopefully my prior talk with Mom has the PD looking out for Dad, not me. That buys me a small piece of time. I’ll take both of you, drop you deep in the ‘glades, and then start over in Mexico.” He shook his head. “Mexico. Lousy roads for trucking.”
“Why?”
Dustin looked up. “Who said that?”
“Me. Down here. J.J.” Kitty’s alter was gone, and Dustin’s younger sibling was back. “Why, Dustin? I heard what you said. You said you ‘covered it up last time’. You were the one who killed Missy and sold me into slavery, weren’t you? You’re my brother. Why did you do that? Did you go crazy like I did?”
Dustin smirked. “You want the truth?”
“Yes.”
“YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE TRUTH! Jack Nicholson, A Few Good Men. Ha! – this is my new hobby, quoting my favorite movie scenes. Okay, so you’re not impressed. I thought it was funny. Let’s see, where were we – oh yeah, you asked if I was crazy. NO. NOT crazy like you. I mean, you are one hell of a basket case. Kitty? Weird.
“I do have a diagnosis, though – a severe case of antisocial personality disorder. A shrink said I have a ‘disturbing absence of a conscience’; I prefer to see it as wonderful freedom from any sort of guilt. I can do anything I want, as long as I plan well so I don’t get caught. Does that answer your question?”
J.J. swallowed hard. “What did Missy Renquist ever do to you?”
“Not Missy. Missy’s older sister, Pam,” Dustin barked. “You ever see Pam? Biggest boobs in school? Get a boner just coming within 50 feet of her? Well, at least I did. Pam refused every attempt I made to have her go out with me when we were in high school. That was bad enough, but then years later I hear that my brother got Pam’s younger sister to go to the homecoming dance. I mean, that was humiliating, you showing me up like that. Even though I was out of school and into trucking by then, it burned me up to think ol’ Dustin was being out-done by his skinny younger bro.
“So I drove down from Tampa that night to get some revenge. I had planned on just scaring you guys with a knife and ski mask, but when I get here and snuck in – you had bedded her! Both of you, snoozing away under the covers, all post-coital. You fucking prick. If I couldn’t get a Renquist in bed, you had no right to. I felt a huge release – a lot better, I’ll tell you – when I had stabbed her in her sleep. You, I put a sack around your head, zip tied your hands and feet, and popped you with some sedatives I had on me; then I butt-fucked you. So only your DNA was on Missy, and I still got my rocks off. Genius, right?
“Then I took you in my truck to Tampa – I know, I know, this is long, I’m wrapping it up – kept you drugged up, and had you ‘dolled up’ by a reliable whore I know. Advertised you on the black market, and sold you to two guys in Brazil looking for a young white boy to enslave. It was perfect: they would use you until you got too ugly or old, and then kill you. You’d be the one pegged for the girl’s death. And I made a lot of cash by your sale. Worked out good all around. Then Mom calls me to say you’re back. Damn. So … here we are. And over there, how convenient … is Mom’s shotgun.”
“SHIT! SHIT-SHIT-SHIT!”
Finny jumped out of his Tahoe. The cops were supposed to be on their way, but unless they arrived in the next thirty seconds or so they would be too late. He ran towards the Evarist house, Glock in his right hand.
Meanwhile, the man in the denim jacket had parked his motorcycle half a block behind the black Tahoe. He was walking up towards the big vehicle from the back; he was finally going to confront this bounty hunter. Then he saw Finny emerge and run towards a home straight ahead.
The biker decided not to follow his target into a strange house, so he waited by the SUV for Finny’s return. As he removed the baseball bat from underneath his jacket, he heard the laptop computer in the truck seat broadcasting voices.
Suddenly, unexpectedly, he realized: he knew one of those voices.
The teenager kissed his unconscious mother, and then stood to face Dustin.
“I’m going to stop you.”
“You? Heh,” laughed the psychopath. “Buddy, even when you were still male, you never were able to fight me. And now, like this? You definitely can’t beat me. But I’ll tell you what: since you’ve become a fine piece of ass, you can let me fuck you – how about that?”
He grabbed his younger brother by the neck and jerked him close, forcing a kiss for a few disgusting seconds. Then Dustin grabbed both of his sibling’s forearms so the hands were pointed up. “Want to fight me, J.J.? Go ahead; make my day. Clint Eastwood, Sudden Impact.”
The teen responded by quickly twisting the left arm inward then down and out, surprisingly breaking the trucker’s grip. Left elbow now pointing up, it slammed mightily into Dustin’s face, causing him to let go of the right arm. Now the teen’s right palm base popped the throat of her attacker, while her slender left leg looped behind Dustin’s; her hand grabbed the scruff of his shirt collar and yanked it back and down. Dustin smacked to the floor on his back and hit his head. “J.J.??” he urked.
The girlish figure had jumped high off the floor above the stunned man; she now shouted –
“No, dickhead! NOVA!”
– then landed with a mighty one-footed stomp directly in Dustin’s groin. “I know how to fight, you FUCKING RAPIST PIECE OF SHIT!”
As the trucker yelled out in agony, Nova quickly scanned the room. Where is it now? Ah! Over there by the wall. She ran and picked up her mother’s shotgun. She turned and pointed it at Dustin. “Freeze, or I’ll blow you to hell!”
“Nah, you won’t, ‘Nova’, or whoever you are now. You’re a no-nonsense bitch, I can tell. If you knew how to shoot that thing, you would’ve already killed me.” Dustin jumped up. “That’s the cool thing about having dope in your system; you recover quicker from pain.” He lunged and grabbed the weapon from Nova, and cocked it properly, then aimed at the girl. “Time to go nite-nite forever – huh? What’s that?”
Dustin had caught something out of the corner of his eye as he stood by the hall window. Between the drawn mini-blinds and the window edge, the front yard was partially visible; and he saw a man with a handlebar mustache, sunglasses and a pistol running up to the front entry.
Dustin raced to the front door and hid behind the hinged edge.
The doorknob turned quickly but silently, and Finny stepped in with gun drawn in classic two-handed grip. But despite all his training he could not overcome the element of surprise, for as soon as he turned –
BLAMM!
A shotgun blast exploded into his chest. He flew backwards through the air and slammed down on his back, sliding a little more down the hall before stopping.
“Time to wrap this up. The door was open, so someone else probably heard that.” Dustin walked to where his new kill was. As he did so, Nova attempted to tackle him from behind; however, he was ready for her. He shook her off and used the shotgun like a club to pound on her head until she tumbled to the floor.
Finney moaned. Dustin marveled. “You’re still alive? INCONCEIVABLE! Princess Bride, I forget the actor. Oh, here’s why. Damn boy, you’ve got on the thickest bulletproof vest I’ve ever seen! Too bad it’s mush now, or I’d take it. Oh my … but I WILL take THIS jewel … “ He lifted a stun gun out of the bounty hunter’s pant pocket. “A Cobratek! You could take down a gorilla with one of these!”
“Okay, how to do this,” Dustin thought out loud. “I dunno who this dude is, but I’ll blow his head off with another shotgun blast, then plug Mom and J.J. with his Glock. Wipe my prints off, plant the Glock on him and the shotgun on J.J., and we have an unfortunate home invasion where everyone killed each other. And no one alive to peg me with anything, including Missy Renquist’s murder. I love it when a plan comes together! – Liam Neeson, The A-Team.”
“Mom and Dad,” Nova moaned on the floor as she bled from her head, “I’m sorry. I’m sorry, J.J. and Kitty. And Sabio, my love; I’m so, so sorry.”
Dustin sneered as he aimed the pistol at her skull. “Love means never having to say you’re sorry; Ryan O’ Neal, Love Sto-“
WHOPP!
Dustin fell to the ground, neutralized. He’d been hit in the head from behind, and hit hard. His brain struggled to keep conscious as he tried in vain to pick himself up; then he noticed a man stooping over him. This man had a baseball bat, and wore a blue jean jacket. A denim-clad arm reached down to the floor to pick up something Dustin had dropped: the Cobratek.
This angry young newcomer – he looked to be Latino – jammed the electric leads of the stun gun to Dustin’s neck; his finger was on the button, ready to press.
“You like movies, filho de puta (son of a whore)? Here is one: My name is Sabio Santiago!”
ZAP!
“You try to kill my Nova!”
ZAP!
“Prepare to die!”
ZAP ZAP ZAP ZAP ZAP!
To be continued tomorrow.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
If you've gotten this far, leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
A story based in the real world. For some reason, a high school boy named J.J. went to sleep and didn't wake up for nearly 3 years. Someone else was awake in his place ...
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Sacrificial Alter
Chapter 13 of 13
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2017 plaintive sigh All Rights Reserved. |
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NOTICE: This final chapter of Sacrificial Alter is a long one. There is a lot that I wanted to resolve in these character's lives; much of it not possible until we learned the facts we heard in the last chapter. I'm not going to resolve everything; in real life (and especially with D.I.D.) resolution of problems is a lifelong endeavor. Still, I had a lot of ground left to cover that felt wrong if I didn't address it. So this chapter is like at least 3x as long as previous ones. Overkill? Not working? Of course I have those concerns; but I'm gonna go for it, and then you, dear reader, can decide. When you do, let me know in the comments, OK? All input, positive and negative, accepted. And as with all my posts, my 'nose tweaking' hand is ready to assault your schnozz if you DON'T comment! ;))) Thanks so much for reading! On with the tale ...
The EMT’s were amazed that Dustin did not, in fact, die. Even after that many shots to the neck by the mightiest electric shocker on the market. In fact, he wasn't even admitted to the hospital; they evaluated him thoroughly, and felt he could be monitored as an 'outpatient' rather than an 'inpatient'. It was a tribute to the man’s overall bulk and size, and maybe a little good luck. However, being jailed with enough evidence to qualify for Florida’s death penalty was definitely not good luck.
“It’s been a bad, bad day for the Kissimmee Police Force,” said Chief Art Jefferson to a slew of reporters and microphones. “We’ve had two officers – Detective Ray Castro and Lieutenant Michael Chan – assassinated by a cold, calculating psychopathic killer named Dustin Evarist. This is the same person who has now been recorded bragging about killing Missy Renquist over 2 years ago. It seems he set up his younger brother to be framed for that murder. Dustin Evarist is being held without bond in the Osceola county jail where he will await trial.
“A raid on the suspect’s home in Tampa has disclosed a lab with multiple illegal substances, including the high powered anesthetics used to overdose and kill our officers. He had a small stash of those in his truck when we searched it. We also found signs of obsession with murder, torture and rape; and belongings that appear to be souvenirs of other people he’s victimized. We now are working with the Florida Highway Patrol to reopen various ‘cold cases’ along the trucking routes he often traveled to see if he could be the culprit in those.
“Meanwhile, it should be noted that Jacoby Jesse Evarist has been officially cleared of any suspicion in the Renquist death.”
Nova Liberte’ woke up.
It was an odd awakening, this; she was in a room she’d never seen before. The sun coming through the big plate glass window was dipping low in the sky. She looked to the right, and saw a metal pole with a bag of clear IV fluid hung on it; it was dripping into some tubing.
What is this, she thought.
Her eyes followed the tubing from the bag; it led to a boxy little machine on the pole that sounded like it was purring. Then the tubing came out the bottom of the machine, over the silver bed rail – wait a minute, my bed has rails? – and into the inside of her forearm.
I have an IV. I’m in the hospital. Did I have to go back for another surgery? I thought I was through with SRS.
Wait. No, I’m in that damned looney bin. They must have kept me in the clinic room. What did I do now? Don’t remember jumping through another window. I –
Then she remembered. She had ‘awoken’ as this man was bragging about killing that Missy girl. She recognized him as Dustin Evarist; she’d seen his picture while doing her online search about her Evarist family while at the Rio de Janeiro library. She fought him, she lost, he began slamming her head – then her memory was fuzzy after that, until now.
I’m in a hospital. A regular one, not the psych one.
“Well hello, sunshine,” said a rail-thin, redheaded, way-too-energetic woman in blue scrubs entering the room. “I’m Tammi, your nurse. You’re here at Kissimmee Memorial Hospital. And I’ve been doing your neuro checks every hour. Dr. Wolski’s gonna be thrilled that you woke up.”
Nova sat up. “Mom! Is she okay –“
“Yes, dear. We have her in a room 2 doors down from yours. I’ve been doing her neuro checks too – you two are keeping me pretty busy here. She woke up an hour and a half ago. Your father has been in and out of both of your rooms all day, except now he’s down at the police station getting interviewed."
Nova’s face twisted with worry. “Our attacker – that Dustin guy. What happened to him?”
“In jail. He got checked out in our ER, and though I hear he was in pain and sore all over, he didn’t require hospitalization."
“Thank God. For a second there I was afraid he’d be in the same building.”
“Now, does your head hurt? How’s your vision? Any hallucinations?”
Nova smirked as she rubbed the gauze wrapped around her skull. “Yeah, I had one. I hallucinated that my boyfriend came to rescue me, right at the end as Dustin was beating me. Funny how the mind plays tricks.” Like giving me multiple personalities, she thought.
“Boyfriend, eh?” said Tammi with a sly raised eyebrow. “Cuban? Just under 6 foot, dreamy brown skin and jet black hair, with a six pack that you can – sigh – see beneath that tight t-shirt? I’ve seen that guy. He just came to the nurse’s station, and they’re calling your Dad to see if he’s allowed to visit. Evidently he’s been getting debriefed at the police station all afternoon, and ICE even checked him out as clean.”
“No. My guy is not from Cuba; he lives in Rio, and is too poor to travel internationally.”
“I said he’s Cuban just presuming. This is Florida, y’know. He said his name was – what was it? – Sammy-O?”
“Nova?” Said a handsome, clean-shaven smiling Latino face peeking through the doorway.
“SABIO!!”
Nova pivoted to hop right out of bed. Nurse Tammi was quickly there, blocking her.
“Honey, you haven’t been cleared to walk just yet! You’ve had a concussion!”
Sabio solved that dilemma, showing up quickly at the bedside. He and Nova wrapped around each other like two wrestling starfish.
Nurse Tammi interrupted. “Sir, I’m assuming that her father gave the OK to let you visit her?”
“Yes, ma’am. I would like to stay in the room tonight with her. Is it OK? I promise I stay out of your way.”
“Be our guest, sir. That special recliner there lays back into a full flat single bed. I’ll even get you a blanket. And I hate to have to say this, but she’s 16 years old; age of consent in Florida is 18. So if I see any hanky-panky, you’ll be in big trouble with the law, Mr. Rio. Still I’ll give you two a few minutes, then I need to complete her neuro check, OK?” Tammi then stepped out of the room.
Nova was squealing and weeping intermittently. “Baby! What … how did you … ?
“Remember I told you,” he whispered, “that if you needed me, I would move the sky and the ground to get to you? It just took me some time, because I not know where you are.”
She pulled her head back to gaze on his face.
“So you looked for me. And found me. And came for me. Of course you did.” She smiled big and bright through her tears. “Sabio, my protector. Of course you did!”
The couple kissed as if the world were about to end.
It was now after midnight. Nova had been sleeping, but awoke when she shifted her head and lightly bumped it on the railing.
“Ouch!” she whispered, and pulled her left hand up to feel that part of her scalp. It was bandaged, but definitely tender when she pressed on one certain spot. She attempted to now use her right arm to feel it too, but someone had ahold of her hand.
It was Sabio, sitting by her bed on the right, his fingers entwined in hers. He’d fallen asleep in the chair; it was partially reclined.
Oh my God. How precious!
Unexpectedly, her room door slightly opened, and a big head came through. She couldn’t make out who it was, until he spoke.
“Nova? You’re awake? “
“Yes, Bob. Come in if you want. Let’s just whisper, though; my guy’s sleeping.”
The big man slid in and shut the door. “How are you feeling?”
Nova pointed to the tender spot on her head. “That’s pretty sore.”
Bob nodded. “Your scalp got busted open. Took 10 staples to fix. It’ll be sore for a while.”
“Great. A big scar. Just what I always wanted.”
“It’s behind your hairline. It won’t be noticeable once your hair grows in more. Hey, I’ve been trying off and on all day to talk to you – but you were in the CAT scan, or asleep, or being bathed; then I spent a while at the police station being questioned. I know it’s the middle of the night, but I have to talk to you.”
Nova suddenly was apprehensive. “Ooo-kay … about what?”
“I need you to know – I’m glad you’re here.”
She was now puzzled. “Here in the hospital?”
“No. I mean, yes, you NEED to be in the hospital – what I’m saying is, I’m glad you exist. I didn’t always feel this way. In fact, since I first met ‘Nova’ after we got you from Brazil, I wished you would go away forever and just let J.J. be present. We didn’t interact much the last 2 weeks – you didn’t want to see me – but if you picked up on my attitude somehow, you might be thinking I hated you.”
Nova stayed mum. How the hell do I respond to that?
Bob looked nervous, and changed the subject. “That your boyfriend from Brazil?”
The girl just nodded her head.
Bob smiled. “That guy’s a hero. He stopped Dustin and saved everyone. Do you know or remember all that happened earlier today?”
Nova perked up. “Just that Dustin turned out to be all that I had been accusing you of being these past few years. And he planned to kill Mom and me. Things are a little fuzzy after that.”
Bob smiled. “It was all taped, believe it or not. Video and audio. The police showed me the recording; and you, girl, were amazing. You almost took him down. You would have, if you had been able to cock that gun. Either way, you’re impressive.”
“So … do you still hate me?”
Bob’s face fell. “NO. No! Dammit, what I really came to tell you … it’s just hard. I’m sorry, Nova. Sorry for not loving you from the first. Sorry for not finding you and rescuing you – even though we scoured everywhere, or so we thought. I’m sorry for failing to protect you. I now realize – you are my child. You are spunky and passionate and unafraid – traits seen in the best people on earth. I know you’re a woman, and I accept you as that. In thinking over the last 12 hours, I’ve realized that I finally have something in my life I’ve always yearned for: a daughter. And right now more than anything else in the world, I want to have a relationship with you.”
Nova was getting choked up. “I’M sorry too – I treated you like dirt, calling you a rapist and accusing you of selling me. I was stupid and believed what I was told. But in my heart of hearts, I have needed a Dad. I have ACHED for a loving Daddy. I would love to start over with you. Can I have permission to call you that – Daddy?”
Bob covered his head with his hand and started to jerk with sobs. Nova reached around his neck and drew her head beside his, joining in the weeping. All the while, Sabio snoozed away like a log.
The next morning, Becky picked through her breakfast in bed – the hospital bed, that is. Her headache was better after the pain pill, but it was still pretty ferocious. Not to mention her right scalp was swollen, bruised and mighty tender.
Ouch. That hurts pretty badly to the touch. But on the bright side, I have so much to be thankful for this morning. Hopefully after the neurologist makes her rounds, I can add ‘being discharged from the hospital’ to that list.
A young woman walked into her hospital room as Becky rubbed her eyes.
“Hey there, Mom. You feeling any better?”
The older woman looked up and smiled. “I am now that you’re here, J.J.”
“Ahhhh … sorry. No J.J. at the moment. This is Nova.” The girl silently prepared herself. Now comes the big look of disappointment that it’s me, not her son.
“Nova.” Becky’s smile stayed. “How is my beautiful daughter today?”
Nova’s eyes got slightly wet. “A hell of a lot better, hearing you say that to me.”
“Come give me a hug, baby.” Both women squeezed each other long and tight.
“I heard your boyfriend stayed in the room with you. I want to meet him. Where is he now?”
“Asleep on the recliner. He stayed up most of the night watching over me, holding my hand. He’s sooo sweet!” Nova’s face now got serious. “I heard they did a CAT scan on your head, just like me. Did it come out okay? Are you going to be all right?”
“Yes, I’m fine. I had a concussion, but there was no significant internal brain damage or bleeding. Same as you. Yes, I get to know your test results – you’re still a minor.”
“I don’t mind you knowing, Mom. What I DO mind are these stupid hospital gowns. They ought to call them Moon Suits, ‘cause you moon most of the people you pass down the hall. My nurse’s aide nicknamed me ‘Moonie’. Ugh!”
“Try wearing it open to the front then, honey. Your new nickname will be ‘Flashie’.”
Both women giggled quite a bit over that.
“Nova, Nova. I am so thankful for you. They showed me the video of you fighting back against Dustin, buying precious seconds until more help arrived. And I don’t know if J.J. would have survived the enslavement in Brazil without your toughness. I am proud to call you my daughter.”
“Will you still call me a daughter when J.J. is in charge up here?” Nova fretted as she tapped her temple.
“I’ll call J.J. what J.J. wants to be called. Bob said something funny earlier today, and I agree with this: if you had an alter that identified as a Peruvian llama, then whenever that alter was in charge, I’d be the happiest llama mama there was. I just want to be part of your life.”
“Ah, good. Both of my patients are here together,” chirped neurologist Daisy Wolski as she entered the room. “Let me examine you two; I need to check your pupils and test your thinking, okay?”
A few minutes later she was through. “Would you ladies like to be discharged home later this AM?”
Nova sighed. “Mom gets to go home. As for me, they probably want me to go back to the insane asylum.”
Dr. Wolski’s smile got bigger. “Girl, do I have good news for you!”
Bob Evarist was checking in on Dr. Ramanathan in a different part of the hospital.
“So you’re gonna be okay, Doc?”
“Yes. Hmmm-MMM,” Rama cleared his throat yet again. “I have some swelling around the neck, and it’s pretty sore. But as Dustin was choking me, he pressed on a nerve plexus near my carotid artery that dropped my blood pressure and caused me to faint before I became asphyxiated, and he dropped me. Thank God, or otherwise I would be as dead as those two poor police officers.”
“No kidding – thank God, indeed. Are you getting to go home soon?”
“Yes; I’ll be needing to wear a protective neck collar, but I should be discharged this afternoon. And I plan on being back at work in Passages tomorrow.”
“Great, Doc! Great. Well … not to change the subject or anything, but I – oh hell, I’ll admit it: I need to change the subject. Um, you texted me that you needed to ask me a question?”
“Yes, Bob. If I clear your child, including all of the alters – Hmmm-MMM – do you think you feel up to taking care of J.J., Nova and Kitty at your house, rather than me putting her back out at Passages? With Nova more at peace with you and Becky, I think she’s probably not a flight risk now. I just want to do one more interview with her to make sure; since she’s in the hospital also, we can do it in this room, with a nurse chaperone of course.”
Bob beamed a fresh, wide grin. “No joke? Have my kiddo back home? You mean it? ABSOLUTELY I’m up for doing it!”
“Good. Hmm-MMM. We’ll determine that this morning. I already spoke to Dr. Wolski – “
“Becky and Nova’s neurologist. And?”
“ – And told her of my plan. She’s going to let Nova know.”
Bob dropped his gaze humbly. “Uh, Dr. Rama – I owe you an apology. I gave you so much grief over Jake. Turns out you were right – in his case, this D.I.D. was actually a real thing. And your treatments have brought J.J. back, and even Nova is more loving with us. I wish I could take back some of those things I said about you. You are NOT a quack; you’re a great doc.”
“No problem, Bob. You may yet call me a quack; you will want to duck when you get my bill; it may give you a fowl opinion of me.”
Bob stared for the longest time at Rama before replying. “Hey, Doc.”
“Yes, Bob?”
“Don’t quit your day job.”
Bob wasn’t through with his “hospital rounds” that morning. He next checked in on private eye / bounty hunter Marcus Finlandt, who was in the Intensive Care Unit. He was lying in bed with his eyes closed, and with a huge bandage around his neck. He still had a breathing tube down his throat, attached to a ventilator. His pilot friend and business associate, Tom, sat in a chair by the bed, reading a book.
“Hey, Tom. How’s Finlandt doing today?” Bob whispered from the door.
Tom looked up and returned a weary smile. “Hey there, Mr. Evarist.”
“Tom. Please call me Bob. You guys are our friends; especially what your partner did for my wife and child yesterday.”
“Well in that case ‘Bob’, go ahead and call my buddy here ‘Finny’. That’s what his friends call him.”
Bob stepped closer to the sleeping shotgun victim. “Did the surgery go well yesterday? When I last checked at 9:30 PM, he was still in the operating room.”
“The surgeon said his neck was really damaged from the blast; the vest protected his torso great, but there was nerve damage and internal bleeding from his chin down to the top of the chest. In fact, the MRI this morning shows more bleeding happening; they’re going to take him to surgery again in about an hour to try to shore that up. They say he’s lucky, and a fighter; but he’s not ‘in the clear’ by any means yet.”
Bob’s brow furrowed with worry. “Tom. I need to tell him something. I don’t need a response; I just need to say this. Don’t worry, I’m not angry. Can I see if he’ll wake up?”
Tom was about to reply when the person being discussed responded first. Finny rapped his knuckles on the bedrail; Bob turned and saw the wounded man with his eyes open, staring straight at him.
“Hey there, buddy,” said Tom. “Need another pain shot?”
Finny glanced at his friend and shook his head; he was unable to talk with the tube down his throat. He then looked straight into Bob’s eyes and raised one eyebrow high, as if expecting a response.
Bob smiled. “Thanks, Finny. I wanted to tell you that in any other situation, I would be livid that you put a video/audio recorder in my house without my permission. But Tom says you did it because you thought J.J. might be in danger. And you turned out to be absolutely right. With that recording, both I and J.J. were shown to be innocent; and you knew to come rescue my wife and child in the nick of time.”
With that, Finny gave an eye roll and a sad shake of the head.
“Yes, yes you did rescue them. You drew fire away from them. And J.J.’s – uh, let’s call him Nova’s – Brazilian boyfriend followed you, and finished Dustin off. None of that would have happened without you and your little spy-cam. I am eternally grateful.”
A nurse with scrubs, a lab jacket, and a surgical bonnet came in. “I’m here to take you down to surgery, Mr. Finlandt.”
Bob turned to Tom, handing him a business card. “I wrote my cell number on the back. Let me know how this operation goes. I plan on coming back to check on him daily as long as he’s here.”
That night, four people - Bob, Becky, Nova and Sabio – sat in the Denny’s restaurant across from the police station, having a late supper. After their release from the hospital, the rest of the afternoon had been spent being interviewed by detectives; they were all exhausted emotionally, mentally and physically.
“Dustin. Dustin, what happened to you,” sighed Becky. She looked at her husband. “I mean, I knew he was always a distant boy – and rebellious – but after he got out on his own I thought he was flying straight. He just wouldn’t keep in touch with me. How did he go from a troublemaker as a teen to a monster as an adult? Was it drug use, or have I just been blind this whole time?”
Bob shook his head. “Crap. I was blinder than you were, honey. I blew off his avoidance of us as workaholic behavior; then after J.J. disappeared, I thought he was staying away because of deep distress from his brother being gone. Turns out he was indeed distressed, but psychologically, not emotionally.”
She grabbed Bob’s hand. “What did we do wrong, to have him turn so evil?”
“I posed that question to Dr. Rama today,” replied Bob. “He says – get this – that parenting is like car safety belts. Wearing one improves your odds of living through a crash – but cannot guarantee your survival. Likewise, good parenting greatly improves the odds of a child growing to a responsible adulthood – but cannot guarantee that he won’t turn to the dark side.”
Becky shook her head. “I try to reassure myself with that, but to be honest, seeing what Dustin has become has shaken me to my core with shock and grief.”
“I’ll bet that’s how you felt when you saw me for the first time two weeks ago,” added Nova. “New gender, no memory of you, and treating you like shit? I’m pretty ashamed of how I acted.”
Becky smiled at her daughter. “Nova, that’s still ‘you’ speaking right now?”
“Yes, Mom. Is that ... okay?”
“Nova, you’re calling me ‘Mom’. It’s more than okay, it’s wonderful. And considering what you'd been through and the lies you were told, 'treating us like shit” was totally appropriate. I'm just glad you are treating us as your parents now."
The beautiful girl gave her parents a fond look. “Seeing as I know now that I was so wrong about you two, I have no trouble calling you guys Mom and Dad.”
“That,” Bob beamed, “is a great thing to hear after these horrible last two weeks. Another great thing is finally getting to know this young hero, Mr. – ?”
Nova blushed as she realized her lapse. “Oh! Mom, Dad, I would like to officially introduce you to the love of my life, the boy who saved my life – twice, now: Sabio Santiago.”
Sabio stuttered. “Ah – this – this is, how you say, uncomfortable? I’m sorry, but ever since I know Nova, she tells me you are our enemies. I thought I never meet you. I did not want to meet you. I know now we have had wrong knowledge, that it was her brother that was the bad one. Forgive me for not giving you open arms right away.”
Becky reached and took his hand, and squeezed it. “No matter how you feel about us, Sabio, I can assure you we feel nothing but warm feelings for you. Without you, our child would be dead, or still enslaved. Now she’s back in our lives, and for that Bob and I both will be eternally grateful. You will always have a place in our hearts, and in our home if you’d like.”
Bob nodded his agreement. “Where are you staying?”
The young man blushed with embarrassment. “You mean, where do I sleep since coming to Florida three days ago? Um … on the street. ”
Both parent’s eyes got as round as saucers. “THAT is changing RIGHT NOW, dear! You are staying with us starting tonight!” insisted Becky, with Bob nodding vigorously.
“Obrigado – thank you! I accept your offer,” said Sabio; then he looked at Nova. “Will you come back with me to Rio – when I get some money to get us there?”
Nova frowned and began to tear up in her eyes. “I – I still need help. Mental help. I probably won’t always be present, Sabio. There will be times J.J. will be out, and maybe even Kitty. And J.J.’s life is here; but being close to Dr. Rama is the main reason I need to stay. I need to get better.”
This made Sabio sad. “I don’t understand all this. In Rio, I do not see J.J. or this Kitty girl; I only see Nova!”
“But I couldn’t remember more than a few years ago. J.J. can remember all the rest of my life. He’s a part of me, Sabio. And I need to become him, and him become me; we all need to become one person again, if possible.”
“That means,” moaned the Brazilian, “I lose you.”
“Not necessarily. Let’s wait and see. And I’m going to ask – will you wait with me?”
“I do not want to be apart from you, Nova.”
Bob cut in. “We don’t want you to be apart from our child either, Sabio. So I’m asking you - will you let us sponsor you to move here? Apply for U.S. citizenship?”
The young man’s eyebrows rose. “But I was only allowed to come on a travel visa. You don’t know what I had to do just to get here. I found that Fin-landt man on the web – I look for detectives in Kissimmee, and recognize his picture, then borrow money for the plane, and for rent a motorcycle, and buy a bat at the pawn store. All that, just to visit. I am out of money. So I don’t think they will let me stay.”
Bob smiled reassuringly. “Like Becky said, you can stay with us. And I’m convinced now that your presence is absolutely required – therapeutically – to allow our child to get well. I know Dr. Rama would vouch for that. So I’ll bet we can get you a green card or something. Let’s see what kind of strings we can pull.”
Sabio took a few more bites of flapjack. “Maybe living here is not too bad if I can have more pancequas like this. I wonder, however, if I would start missing South American food.”
Bob’s eyes lit up. “If you do, just tell me – and I’ll take you to Fogo de Chao.”
The Evarist child was in Dr. Rama’s office, in a deep trance aided with a mild antipsychotic in effect. This was a special session. Rama’s voice could be heard in the child’s mind, though the eyes were closed.
“This is still Dr. Rama. I need J.J. present. Please affirm if you are.”
“I’m here, Dr. Rama. This is J.J.”
“J.J., please remain with us. I ask for Nova to be present also, now.
“Nova here, doc.”
“Kitty?”
“This is J.J, again, doctor. Kitty’s here; we can see her. Actually, we can all see each other.”
“Very, very good – excellent, you three! I shall now stay available if you need me. Nova, please start the discussion that you wanted to have. Rama ‘out’.”
In the child’s consciousness, three people sat in three chairs, arranged like an equilateral triangle facing each other. They saw each other clearly and fully formed for the first time.
J.J. was a young boy with close shorn yellow hair, still not aged past 14 and mostly pre-pubertal. He wore his cheer jacket and white slacks from the squad. Nova was a pixie-headed blonde beauty in her late teens sporting a thin braid from her right temple hanging down to tease her neck, and with curves and proportions befitting a bikini model. She wore a white sundress with strappy white sandals. Kitty was a preschooler with a flyaway mop of hair, in a neck-to-toe footed ‘onesie’ pajama with a pattern of random unicorns; she held a teddy bear tight in her right arm as she chewed and sucked her left thumb.
J.J. broke the ice. “Dr. Rama says most D.I.D. patients have many more than just 3 personalities. I wonder if over time we’re going to meet more of us.”
“I guess if that happens, we’ll play it by ear. God – I hope there’s no one even close to Dustin’s personality hidden deep in us,” Nova fretted.
“Dr. Rama also said that he thinks we’re the exception – that we 3 are all that’s here. So that’s good news,” J.J. reassured. “Now: lets talk about what we want.”
Nova kicked the rug in defeat. “Don’t bother. I know what I want – to be with Sabio. And I know you want to live your life as a male. Since you’ve been in control of this body longer – and because we were barely making it in Brazil – you’re going to win. You’ll get back to being a guy, and I will have to go away forever.”
“That’s not true, Nova.”
“Oh, it’s not? Give me a break, J.J. You’re going to stop being a boy and live as a girl the rest of your life? That’s not happening.”
“Um … maybe … maybe I will.”
Nova was flabbergasted. “What? What do you mean by that? You never had wanted to be a girl before, not at all according to Mom and Dad!”
“But yet now, I am a girl. An infertile girl, but in every other way, our body is clearly female. Maybe it would be right to live as a woman from now on.”
“J.J., that’s inviting failure. If you try to live as a girl but you’re clearly a boy in your head, it doesn’t work.”
J. J. stood up from his chair and started to pace around it. “Okay, I’ve thought about this a lot – and I mean a LOT – for the last few days. If I try to transition with surgery and medicines back into a man, I won’t end up with the body I want. I mean, we have wide hips and narrow shoulders. They could try to reconstruct a penis on me, but not one I can ‘feel’ with. I can’t have kids naturally, either way. I’m kind of stuck.”
Nova hung her head. “I got the surgery ‘down below’. You must hate me for that.”
J.J. walked to Nova and placed his hand reassuringly on her arm. “The only one at fault is Dustin. You did what you had to do to survive. And now, that’s what we all need to do. Survive, together.”
He continued. “One thing that Dad always taught me was I had to be tough, and I had to be flexible. ‘Like a Michelin tire’ he’d say. If I lost both arms and legs as a soldier, I’d have to adapt. So that’s what I’m going to try to do: adapt to being a woman. I mean, we’re completely passable as female. So how hard could it be?”
Nova stared incredulously. “You’re kidding with that last statement, right?”
J.J. laughed. “Yeah, I am. I just wanted to see you smile.”
“Mission accomplished,” grinned Nova. “What about Sabio? You like girls. And if Sabio and I are kissing – or in the future doing something more than kissing – and you switch places with me – you will go bat-shit crazy. I don’t want to see you OR him hurt like that.”
“I didn’t freak out when we kissed Sabio together in the hospital,” J.J. replied.
“That’s because I was kissing him, not you.” Then Nova’s eyes got big. “Hey, waitaminit. ‘We’? Whaddaya mean, we?”
“I mean I woke up with you when we were in the hospital. You were in control, but I was definitely there. I heard and saw and felt everything – especially that kiss.”
“We were both awake?! How come I didn’t know you were there, J.J.?”
“I don’t know, Nova. I did stay silent; it was pretty strange, me being awake and aware but not in control. You started talking, and I just stayed mute so I wouldn’t freak you out – not to mention freaking Sabio and that nurse. Even if I had spoken up, I didn't know if you could hear me.”
Nova eyed her alter with suspicion now. “Okay. What did Sabio say to me when we reunited in that hospital room?”
“Something like, ‘I told you I’d move heaven and earth to find you’, and that he didn’t know where you were.”
“OH my God – you were definitely there! And you felt our kiss! It didn’t gross you out that we were kissing a guy?”
“NO! I was surprised! I kind of … thought it was nice. I felt our body relax, and happy – like an endorphine rush, you know? Then I felt our body getting turned on … whew! The feeling in the breasts – the groin – the hair on the back of our neck – was pretty awesome. I still think you were getting a lot more benefit out of it than I was, but I wasn’t ‘grossed out’ by any means.”
Nova was still a little skeptical. “J.J., how is it possible for you to ‘turn’ so quickly?”
“I don’t really understand it myself, Nova. The hormones? The fact that you’ve been in control for almost three years, up until the last two weeks? I mean, your very existence shows that I’ve had a strong willed feminine side within me. This development has even made me wonder if I might have been ’bi’ my whole life and just realized it? But -”
“Bi? Shit, I hope not,” injected Nova. “The last thing we need is to be bipolar on top of our D.I.D.”
“Nova, I meant bisexu – “
“It was a joke, dummy! Sorry. Resume, please,” she said with a hand wave.
“Okay. Even if I am bi, I don’t think I’ve been that way my whole life, ‘cause I’m just feeling this since I now live in a girl’s body. I think there’s a deeper explanation.
“I’ve always loved the look of a man with a woman. Polar opposites coming together to merge into one. The combined masculine and feminine, hard and soft – it’s so sexy, at least to me. I’m not being homophobic, that’s just ‘how I roll’.”
J.J. took a deep breath. “And I must confess; now that I’m a ‘soft’ one, I find myself staring at Sabio and …” He began to blush. “… I want him to hold me close to him, like he did with us that night in the hospital. I felt so good, so loved! And maybe just a little … “ J.J. was beet red in the face now – “ahh … horny?”
Nova’s mouth was agape in stunned wonder.
J.J. exhaled, and fanned himself. “Yeah, he’s pretty hot. So I don’t know; I’m not saying I’ve totally changed teams yet. But I definitely want to explore and maybe experiment with these feelings. I’ll just be open-minded. Tough but flexible. Would that work for you, Nova?”
“Oh my God, absolutely! This is much more than I expected to hear from you. I thought I’d be fighting you for my right to simply exist today. Out of the three of us ‘alters’, YOU are making the biggest sacrifice. I – I almost don’t feel worthy of this gift you’re giving me.” Nova’s eyes were getting wet. “J.J. – you’ve answered my deepest prayers. Is there something I can do for you? What do you want?”
J.J. got quiet, as if hesitant to say. Then finally: “I want to have a close relationship with Mom and Dad. I want to live near them, know them, talk to them daily, and take care of them when they get older. I love them so much, and they never gave up on finding me, and didn’t reject me when everyone else had me pegged as a murderer. I know that you’ve hated them-“
Nova broke in. “No, J.J. – not anymore. That’s what you want? You got it. I will commit to loving them the rest of their lives, and anyone we marry will have to realize that.”
A humming came from the third chair; Kitty. But this wasn’t the “NNNnnnNNNnnn” hum she had always done in the past; this was melodic, as if from a song. She rocked pleasantly in her chair as she hummed, and was looking at Nova and J.J. with the biggest smile on her face.
Nova glanced at J.J. with a grin. “You recognize that tune?”
“Sure do,” laughed J.J. “Three blind mice. Yeah, Kitty, I guess we three are going to have to stumble our way through this like blind mice. But at least we’ll do it together.”
Nova picked Kitty up and squeezed her. “My brave, brave Kitty. Without you, we never would have learned who the bad guy in this tale really was.” J.J. came and put his arms around both of them. “Kitty the courageous,” he said. Then, Kitty mumbled something inaudible.
“What’s that, K?” asked J.J.
Kitty spoke louder. “Gwoup hug.”
“Group hug! Kitty – your first ‘non-meow’ words!”
Sabio Santiago had finished his day as a roofer in west Kissimmee, Florida. He mused about his work as he bicycled home.
This company has given me a good job; but they try to save money by using cheaper materials. And some of the slower workers hold us back from finishing quicker. One day I will start my own roofing company here, and run it the way it should be run; we will be known for the best quality and fastest work. People will pay a little more, but they will be much more satisfied.
Bob had followed through on his pledge to help Sabio with his legal status, and though not yet a U.S. citizen officially, he was here on a worker’s visa; that meant legal employment, and even medical benefits. He lived in a converted attic bedroom at the Evarist household. He looked forward to the day that he could afford his own place, and to a future with Nova. In fact, he had a date with Nova tonight – supper at Lorenzo’s Italian Ristorante.
He knocked on her door. “I am ready when you are – take time if you need it, and I will be down the stairs.” Sabio then went to wait at the chair at the base of the staircase.
His date descended the steps as a vision of beauty. She had on a black mini-skirt with black hose, and a crimson spaghetti strap top that showed a generous amount of cleavage along with a hint of a strapless black bra. Her blonde hair combined with the palette perfectly. Makeup and earrings complemented the fabrics, and her red lips were so moist that he had to resist the urge to kiss them right there. Scarlet pumps completed the look.
Sabio was mesmerized by the sight before him. He’d been studying up on some new special English words, and now put them to use. “Nova. You are so gor-geous. I never see someone so beautiful, so fetching, and so lovely as you. My heart is melting.”
The girl blushed deeply. “WOW! What compliments! Thank you sir. You’re rather bonito e viril yourself! But, I’m not Nova right now. I’m J.J.”
Sabio was crestfallen. “Oh. You’re the boy. I guess that means no date.”
J.J. touched him on the arm. “I still would like to go.”
“Eh? But, but you’re the boy? I think you don’t like other boys? Only Nova is in love with me, yes?
“Sabio … let’s talk.” J.J. took the young man’s arm and led him into the den, and to sit on the love seat. They grasped both hands now, gazing into each other’s eyes.
“Sabio … Nova is part of me, an essential part. We are friends now, and we actually can both be ‘awake’ in this mind at the same time. She’s awake right now, giving me advice on how to act with you! Right now, I – J.J. – am in the ‘driver’s seat’ in here,” – J.J. tapped his temple – “but she’s there too, just in the back seat.”
Sabio looked hopeful. “So, can you put Nova in the driver’s seat for this date?”
J.J. shook his head. “If I could, I would, Sabio. Sorry – it doesn’t work that way, at least not yet. None of us in this brain get to decide who’s driving or when.“
“So if I ever kiss you – I could be kissing a boy? Or a 3 year old child?”
“Pretty sure you won’t be kissing Kitty. She’s rarely in the driver’s seat anymore; in fact she’s in bed sleeping right now, as she is most of the time. Knowing that my brother will never get out of jail seems to have resolved most of her issues. And as for kissing a boy: you knew that Nova was a travesti when you met her. And you didn’t have a problem with that, right?”
“No, I did not. Nova is more woman than most who are born women. To me, at least.”
“Well, Nova is here with us right now. Nova helped me choose this outfit! She guided me when I applied my makeup tonight. Mom helped with that too, by the way. We are starting to share each other’s dreams, visions and feelings. Even … um … even each other’s attractions.”
Sabio raised an eyebrow. “J.J.? You – are starting to be attracted to me?”
“Just hear me out a little further. When Nova fell in love with you, part of me was falling in love with you. She sees you not just as a lover, but a best friend too. She trusted you with her secrets, and you proved worthy of that trust. You’re tender and kind with us, and you listen to us; you work hard; you’re honest; we feel safe with you. I don’t know any other boyfriend who would sacrifice what you did to find his girl again. It doesn’t take a genius to see that you’re a keeper,” J.J. emphasized with a manicured index finger pointing into Sabio’s chest.
“And, in case you haven’t noticed, I’m a woman in body. The hormones I’m taking seem to make me feel more and more girlish every day. Even though in my head I’m still mainly a boy right now, you are … shall we say … really ‘growing’ on me. And I need you tonight in a very specific way.”
Sabio cocked his head to the side. “Eh? What do you need?”
J.J. blushed again. “I need you to teach me how to dance. They’ll have a band at Lorenzo’s tonight, and I want to dance with you. Nova has danced with you as a girl, and I’ve danced before as a boy … but I want to dance with you tonight as your girl.”
In the living room, music played from a Bluetooth speaker linked to a smartphone. Sabio guided his ingénue through some steps. “That’s good, J.J. You are what is called a natural. You know … J.J. can be a girl’s name as well as a boy’s. I did a Google on it.”
The next song was slow and sultry. Sabio pulled his date close. J.J. felt his partner’s bulging arm muscles; the back and waist were hard and chiseled. Sabio’s voice was velvet, and J.J. suddenly felt so cared for, so protected, so right in this moment.
“Nova likes it when I hold her this way. Do you?” whispered Sabio.
“Oh yes, please,” J.J. breathed. She was in a bit of heaven, she thought.
She thought. She. Wait a minute. Wait a minute!
I’m … I’m a SHE! – She smiled silently.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental.
Thanks to cyclist, whose advise and editorial skills have elevated this tale to 100x better than it was when I submitted it to her. She is one of the shining stars of our community!
Thanks to JenaJumbled for the awesome picture.
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Dear BC readers: most of my output has been dramas, with action and romance mixed in. I do have a love of humor, though, and I warn you, it is fairly unsophisticated (puns, limericks, etc.) I ran across these names at the CAR TALK website. I laughed so much, I had to share some with you. To make it appropriate for BC, I have added a Transgender theme. So if you enjoy this type of stuff, enjoy! If not, toss those rotten eggs - I'm tough enough to take it!
You are what you do. So said Socrates. Well, meet a city that takes that literally.
(AT/Reiters) - Welcome to Transname, Tennessee, one of the most transgender friendly towns on earth. The founder and mayor is a male to female transsexual, and founded the town five years ago just after her SRS. Because of the TG-friendly policies here, the place has grown by leaps and bounds — it now is home to more than 50,000 people, all either transgendered or transgender-friendly. Both MTF and FTMs feel equally at home here. There is, however, one city law that has everyone a little surprised: The need for a ‘work name’.
“Dammit, I’m getting too old to remember who you are AND what exactly you do,” insists city founder/current mayor Hedda State. “So since we made it so easy here for citizens to change their names to reflect their birth genders, I require that they also have a name that reflects what their individual jobs are. Take me, for example. My final term as mayor expires in three years. Then I’m changing my name to Gladys Overwith, and retiring.”
A look through the town’s work name phone book is quite revealing. Sometimes the work name will reveal other things also, such as a persons’ nationality; the name also reflects the person’s new gender. What follows is a partial list.
ATTORNEYS
Oldest Law Firm in Town …………………………. Dewey, Cheatham, and Howe
Specialist in Appealing Convictions …………. E. Shelby Released
Mediation law ………………..……………………..….Sue Phirst
Tax law …………………………………………..……….Lou Pole
Criminal Defense Attorney ………………………. Donatella Dicoppas
Appeals specialist………………………………….….Bud Uronner
BUSINESS PEOPLE
Payroll administrator………………………………..Imelda Czechs
Self-assertiveness trainer …………………..……. Lois Steem
Complaints ………………………………………..……. Kurt Reply
Staff disciplinarian …………………………………… Joaquin D’ Planque
Accountant ……………………………………………… Candace B. Rittenoff
Senior staff advisors ………………………………... Ben Thayer, Don Thatt
Idea man ………………………………………….…….. Drew A. Blank
Employee loyalty expert ………………………….. Upton Leftus
Switchboard operater ……………………………… Levon Hold
Director of Purchasing ………………………..…… Lois Bidder
Appropriator of Bonuses …………………….…… H. I. “Lee” Unlikely
In charge of Promotions…………………………… Wendy Pigsfly
Spanish translation checker …………………….. C. S. Verdad
Financial outlook predictor ……………………… Hugh Don Wannano
Layoff counselors ……………………………………. Harry Verderchi, Oscar LaVista
SECURITY SERVICES
Security guard monitoring cameras ……….…. Constance Noring
Perimeter security ……………………………………. Barb Dwyer
Personal bodyguard …………………………………. C. Howie Runn
Security helicopter pilot……………………………….Yulanda U. Lucky
CITY AND STATE EMPLOYEES
Animal control ………………………………………….. Turner Luce
Police chief ……………………………………………..… Amanda B. Reckonwith
Mailman …………………………………………………… Alfredo D. Rottweiler
Voting administrator ……………………….………… Emanuel Recount
SCHOOL OFFICIALS AND COACHES
Prom chaperone……………………………………..……Theresa Crowd
Cheerleading coach ……………………………………. Hugo Girli
Bungee Jump Instructor …………………………….. Hugo First
Hockey coach ……………………………………….……. Miss Inga Tooth
Beginners ice skating coach ……………………….. Landon McKeester
Bowling coach (Israeli) …………………………..….. Menachem Down
Self defense instructor …………………………….… Anita DeGroin
High School Lunchroom Quality Assurance…. Howard M. Taters
Machine shop instructor…………………………...….Les Fingers
CHURCH MINISTRIES
Prophet ………………………………………………….….. Vera Lee Isay
Preacher …………………………………………….……… Boris Tadeff
Church soundboard operator (sits through all 3 of Boris’ sermons on Sunday mornings) ………….……….. Diana Boredom
Prayer warrior.............................................................. Denise Hurt
Points the bathrooms out to first time visitors…. Trudy Door and Donna Hall
Swedish evangelist …………………………………….. Bjorn A. Gain
Spiritual guidance counselors ……………….……. Zeke and Ewell Find
Morality enforcer………………………………..………. Phyllis Steen
AUTO SALES, SERVICE, TRAINING AND INSPECTION
Family vehicle specialist ………………………..…… Minnie Van Driver
Used car salesperson …………………………………. Alexis Itznot
Alexis’ latest customer ……………………………….. Iona Heap
Alignment repairman ………………………………… Lou Segusi
Guarantor of repeat repair business ………..….. Lucien DeBolts
Inspector of 18-wheelers …………………………… Zbignew Rigg
Inspector of used cars ………………………….……. Ewell B. Hoofinett
Russian courtesy van driver ………………………. Pikop Andropov
Voice of your GPS ……………………………………… Mischa Turnov
Auto seat tester ………………………………..……….. Fitz Matusch
Auto body repair …………………………….………… Denton Fender
Classic car restoration ……………………….………. Orson Buggy
Defensive driving instructor ………………………. Faye Tality
Senior citizen driving instructor ……...…………. Tanya Blinkeroff
MEDICINE
Infection specialist……………………………………….Sal Monella
Geneticist……………………………………………………..Jean Poole
Ophthalmologists……………………………………..….Ike and Zeke Leerly
Neurologist…………………………………………………Sarah Bellum
Psychiatrist………………………………………………….U. Nita Schrinck
Proctologist…………………………………….…………..Ben Dover
Urologist……………………………………………………. I. P. Freighly
Acne specialist ………………………………………….. Don Pickett
FTM Transgender surgical specialist………….…Ben Hur
VARIOUS
Computer repair …………………………….…………… Dot Matrix
Code writer …………………………………………..……. C. Colon Backslash
Marriage counselor ……………………………………… Stan Beyerman
Supplier of beef to troops in Afghanistan ……. Sandy Berger
Toupee’ specialist ………………………………….…….. Hedda Harrigan
Tuxedo Rental …………………………………..……….. Euripides Ibreakauface
Protein shake salesman ………………………………. Emile Initzelf
Most of these were taken from the 'credits' at the CAR TALK website. If you're still here, please leave a comment! Thanks for reading - **Sigh**
Just wanted to pass along some frustration - about frustration in passing.
What follows is a song parody. It should be sung to the tune of "Bad Moon Rising" by Creedence Clearwater Revival.
I see a bad moon a-risin'
I see me being read today
Image, in mirror is so frightenin'
Foam pads no help, so I say
"I won't go out tonight
For it's bound to risk my life,
My bare bum's, a bad moon on the rise."
For 12 months, I've had those hormones flowin'
I hoped my end'd be growin' soon
But I'm still thin hipped so I'm knowin'
Wearing a bikini would mean ruin
When winds blow tonight
And my skirt shoots up, the sight
Will be, a bad moon on the rise.
Hope your experience is different
When the transition you do try
Looks like I'm due for nasty comments
One look, they'll know I was a guy
I won't bend over tight
Or they'll see the sorry blight
Of my bad moon on the rise.
THE END
Thanks to Andrea DiMaggio for encouraging me to post this!
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Thanks for reading! Hugz - **Sigh**
Si(gh)lliness: Send In The Clones
"When one creates a song, one should remember to get one's song copyrighted" he mused, "-wait! Is 'copyrighted' a word? And does one damage oneself's credibility when one uses 'one' too often?"
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**Sigh** sighed the sighing songwriter. Alas and alack, after aimless attempts to avoid alliteration, he sat despondent. Writing words and music - pouring out the emotions of his aching heart like clotted clabbered one month old milk pouring out of the carton - and not one of those plastic environmentally unfriendly cartons, but a cardboard carton, which breaks down to helpful mulch in a few short decades - yechh, I hate the thought of sour milk - but I like sour cream, isn't that odd - he reminded himself to avoid run on sentences and tangential thought processes.
He had just received depressing news from his wife who just happened to be a brilliant genetics researcher. Well actually, her being a BGR (that's brilliant genetics researcher for short, so I won't have to keep typing out 'brilliant genetics researcher') didn't just happen; she earned that position after years of hard work, bribes and industrial espionage. But I digress, tigress.
"Honeybunch," said BGR, "I've got depressing news". She went on to remind him of his stated desire to transition into womanhood. Why did he desire this? Because that's the kind of story that gets posted here, that's why. Anyway, she had tried to clone, from his stem cells, that she scraped off his stem, ouch, -she had tried to clone him a uterus and ovaries and mammaries. So he could have eventually fully implantable and functional female parts funkily planted in his funny places. So that he could have a full, complete transition to womanhood, with pregnancy, delivery, breast feeding, diaper changing, daycare, balancing motherhood and a career, being driven crazy by teenagers, and raising her own grandchildren while her offspring served their 20 year sentences for selling crack.
I implore you, gentle reader, to stop changing the subject and let me get on with the story. "Honeybunch," she said to remind us all that it's still BGR speaking, "I am able to clone almost any organ from your cells - but since your chromy stones are XY and not Dos Equis, alack and alas" (this made him look around the room for Alec and a lass) "I cannot yet make a cloned uterus and ovaries or breasts for you. Nor can I make a penis for me yet, and I'll have to have that because you aren't gonna leave me high and dry after you get a vagina. I apologize for this snugglelumps, as I apologize for the sentence just prior because it adds little to the plot. But I have strong hopes that next year, I can successfully do this. At least the penis for me. So please be patient, gummypumps."
With these dire tidings, the songwriter did what songwriters are wont to do, (which appears to the uncultured mind like I'm misspelling either "want" or "won't", but wont is a word used in refined writing, look it up) that is, to convert his anguish and emotion into art. Or song. Which is a type of art. He then wrote this classic: Send In The Clones. The lyrics are as follows: (actually 'as follows' is NOT in the lyrics):
Isn't it rich?
I want a pair
Not pointing down to the ground
But up in the air
Where are the clones?
Wouldn't it be bliss?
Wouldn't you approve?
You banging me o'er and o'er
Till I can't move?
Where are the clones?
Send in the clones.
Just when I had - my therapist implores -
Finally figured out the organs I wanted were yours,
Making your entrance in my vagina fair
When I feel my groin
My twig is still there
Don't you love farce?
It's my fault, I fear
You know that I want what you've got
Sorry, my dear!
And where are the clones
Send in the clones
I want them - right here.
Wish we were rich.
I am not queer.
This would be such a big boost
To your career
So where are the clones?
There ought to be clones.
Well maybe... next year.
Before the songwriter could get this song under ASCAP or BMI he was sued for libel and plagiarism by Stephen Strongheim with an assist from Judy Callins.
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The lyrics should be sung or lipsynched to the tune of the song "Send In The Clowns". This story is the copyright of Sigh and reproduction permission must be obtained from her. This was also a product of frustrated flights of fancy as I slowly attempt to do more serious writing in the future. Really, I'm not kidding.
******Randi was prepared for the worst. She didn't expect the H-Bomb.****************
"Well I guess that's that, young Randi with an "I"; we're as prepared as we know how to be, and-"
Ms. Daniels broke in, "but I'm still worried to death about the possibility of you being abused."
Randi smiled as Principal Jeffington rolled his eyes and seeped out a barely audible sigh. He hated being interrupted. Hated it. And her math teacher Suzie Daniels was aware of that too; she just was one of those people that when they thought of something to say, had to say it right then. So, Randi surmised, let's deal quickly with Ms. D's concern.
"Ms. Suzie, it's not a possibility. It's guaranteed. I've already been ridiculed most of my school life for not being as macho, as athletic and gruff as boys are. I know I'm going to catch heck-"
"Thank you for not cursing," mumbled English Teacher Benson.
"-for the - you're welcome, Mr. Benson - uh, I'm going to catch a lot of flak for announcing this. I've been called names before. I've learned how to let them roll off of me. And as long as I've got the faculty's support, I think things will get better after tomorrow."
"You have the faculty's support - all but a few of us. And those few know to be quiet if they cannot be supportive," said Jeffington.
"Look, I obviously wasn't clear," Ms. Daniels fretted. She was furrowing her brow and had her open hands pressed together with her index fingertips touching her lips, like she was praying. "I'm not talking about verbal abuse. Your confidence has calmed me on that issue. I'm worried about you getting beaten up. This will all be for naught if you get the "shit kicked out" of you!" She said the last part drawing quotation marks with her fingers.
Mr. Benson sighed and grabbed a plastic jar off of the faculty bookcase, then tossed it to Ms. Daniels. She looked back at him with disdain. "Hey, I did the marks!", making the gesture again. "I was quoting Stu Pawelsky-"
"Yet the words came out of your mouth this time. Pay $2 into the curse jar," mumbled Benson.
"What? Since when was "shit" - she made the finger marks in the air again - "worth more than $1?"
"Now you put in $2 more!" said Benson, this time with crisp, clear enunciation. "Unless you'd like to try for six total?"
Stu Pawelsky. Now that name indeed troubled Randi. He was a bully and a bigot, but not the kind who would tease you in class or make you hand over the lunch money. No, Stu lived up to his name: he stewed. If something got him mad, then he would wait - wait until school was over, and bust somebody's nose. Or wait in the alley between buildings C and D and grab the object of his ire as they walked to gym period, and do a few wrestling pile-drivers into the dirt with the unlucky schmuck. He was calculating, discreet, premeditating. And he was one of the few bad boys that could make Randi's courage faint.
"Ms. D? You overheard Stu saying that he would kick the ... you-know-what out of me?"
"Not directly, honey," the math teacher answered. "But there's some talk on the grapevine, if you know what I mean. I have some good "sources" in the student body. I don't get the impression he knows about your plan to 'come out' tomorrow, but by school's end the whole class will. That may give him or one of his flunkies the last straw that they need to attack," she said, a frown of concern framing her face.
"What ... what can I do? I have no idea what to do with this. I mean, I can't live in fear of him - or anybody else out there who wants to hurt me. But I don't want to end up in the obituary section. What can I do? I'm open to suggestions."
Mr. Hoang cleared his throat. "I know you want to stay here because you have some friends here, child," he said in his thick Vietnamese accent, "but wouldn't it be much safer if you transferred to Churchill, on the west side of town? No one knows you as a boy named Randy there; you can start fresh as a girl. You already can pass so well-"
"Coward!" spat Ms. Daniels. "You just don't want Randi and her 'problem' here in Collins High School! You don't think there are murderous haters on west side? That they won't eventually hear of Randi's past? At least here, we are here and know her, and have some control."
English teacher Benson hung his head some. "Unfortunately, I agree with Minh. Every year since the housing market collapsed, our community and our students have become worse in their thuggishness and rebellion. Control? I feel we used to have it; now it is only the bare illusion of control. We teachers can barely manage our classrooms, much less the halls and outside."
Randi turned to Principal Jeffington. "Sir? What do you think? " - but the stocky man was no longer in the room. Wait, now he was re-entering; through the side door that led from the general administration cubicles. How had the big guy slipped out so unnoticed, Randi wondered. As he rejoined the student and her current (for this semester) teachers, he was plinking his mobile phone. Then looking up, he smiled. "Problem solved!"
The rest of the group sat, surprised, waiting for the other shoe to drop.
The school boss then set his jaw as he turned to Randi. "Miss Toomey. I know you had your own outline for how tomorrow would happen. For your own good, I have altered that plan a bit. Please remain open minded as I explain."
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Randi's stomach did The Twist as she walked in from the school parking lot. She was dressed less unisex than usual - she had on jeans, cowboy boots, and a checkered flannel lumberjack shirt with the sleeves halfway rolled up the arm. Her long hair was pulled back into a low tight bun so that from the front she appeared to have a close cropped boy's hairstyle. A schizophrenic ensemble, yet one that at least yelled "masculine". Which was her plan for today. She stopped at the flagpole in the courtyard and waited there as instructed by her Principal. Nine minutes to the bell, she thought. Whoever he is, better hurry. I still need to get to my locker.
A finger tapped her on the shoulder from behind. Well! That was a quick wish answer. She turned to see -
Stu Pawelsky.
Randi's blood drained from her face. She felt as if she might pass out. He stood a good 3 inches over her small frame.
"Hey there, limp wrist. You finally look like a boy. A fifth grade boy. I figured for "opposite day" you'd be in a tutu. What kind of fag stunt are you trying' to pull?" He then spat on the ground, hitting Randi's left boot.
That act lit a little fire of anger in Randi - enough to force some words out. "I'm dressed for opposite day. Today you dress as the opposite of who you really are, so I dressed as a man. And starting tomorrow, Stu, I will be dressing as my real self - a woman. Why are you dressed as a man for today? Same reason?" Oh God. Shut up, shut up, that last part will get me killed for sure.
Stu's eyes narrowed. "Opposite day is for fags and hags, that's why I don't do it. So, you're a girl, eh? You f***ing freak, I'll be waiting for you today, some place and time that you least expect it," he growled / whispered. "Then if you haven't already cut your dick and nuts off, I'll stomp 'em into mushnnnNNNNNGG!"
Stu found it hard to talk with a huge ham hock of a hand wrapped around his throat. The hand was attached to the biggest boy in school - 6 foot 3 inch, 270 pound Bob Harris. "H-Bomb" was his gridiron nickname, due to all the carnage he left opposing teams in. His shadow completely covered Stu's. And he was wearing - a Muumuu?! And a wig! And a pretty amateur makeup job.
"Waaaall, hello theah, Stuart," Bob said in a fake southern accent and a falsetto that was still more baritone than soprano. "Are you bein' mean to mah boyfriend? Yew know, thaht makes me all flustered. I might have to throw a hissy fit and pound yoah face in. Don't that sound lovely?" He then released Stu with a shove that carried the thug 3 feet back before his feet touched ground.
The ruffian broke into a jog, away from Bob and Randi. "F-freaks!" he hissed as he turned the corner.
The boy-mountain watched Stu slink away, then turned his head towards the nonplussed person beside him. He now spoke in his normal bass voice. "Hey there," he smiled. "I'm -"
"I know who you are, H-Bomb. Bob. EVERYONE knows who you are. A-are you ... are you here to meet me?"
"You're Randi with an "I", right? You've been Randy with a "y" till now, and today is your official coming out?"
"Yes sir," Randi whispered.
"Well, I'm your protection. Bodyguard for the day."
Randi looked around; some of the kids were gawking at the tiny lumberjack with the 'big momma'. "Sorry you got roped into this. Even a dude like you has a reputation to keep; hanging around me might harm it."
"Aw, don't you worry about that. Happy to do it. Been looking for a reason to take Stu down a notch, anyway. The way he treats people really sticks in my craw." Bob took a big breath, as if to calm himself. "So, here's the plan. The teachers will handle their rooms for you and I'll take care of you in between periods. I'm to be allowed to leave early and arrive late for each of my classes today. I'll be waiting outside your door after the bell rings, for every class you have."
"Okay, okay ... you aren't ashamed to be seen with me?"
Bob smiled. "Naw. My oldest brother is gay, and most kids knew it and gave him hell for it. He hated high school. I was still in elementary then, so I couldn't do nothin' about it. Helping you, though, is like avenging him in a way."
"How much are they paying you to do this?"
Bob chuckled. "I'm not doing this for money ..."
Randi's head started to explode. He's doing this out of the kindness of his heart? This is unbelievable! I wonder if he's got a steady girl? I wonder what his kiss would be like? Would I feel an H-Bomb blow up in my heart? kraka-THHOOOOOOMMMM!
"... I'm getting extra credit in a few classes for this, as well as community service credits."
OH. Okay. Kindness of his heart. That was a silly thought. He's essentially still "getting paid" to do this.
The big boy's face started to fall, and he suddenly looked uncomfortable. "I - I'm doing pretty bad in a lot of courses, and it may affect my eligibility for the game next week. Not to mention maybe preventing me from getting a college scholarship for next year. I try hard and all, but learning seems to be hard for me. I'll take all the extra credit I can get."
Immediately Randi felt shame for her previous judgmental thoughts. Then she glanced at her watch.
"We'd better get in or we'll both be late for class. H-B ... er, Bob ... ah, what do I call you?"
"Honey child, to-day you all call me Lo-retta Peachfuzz. Ah'm from Hot-lanta, Gawgia and lookin' foah a ma-yun jest like you. Will you be my escort today, yew tiny lil' hunk?"
"I'll be happy to, Lo-retta. I'll be Randi. So we're going to play Opposite Day to the hilt, eh?"
"Shoah we are, mah lil' tree-cuttin' stud. Be a right gentleman and carry my backpack as we walk together, sugah. It has mah books an' lunch."
"OOF!" grunted Randi as she took the huge pack. What's for lunch, a couple of pot roasts??
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The day went smoothly. As she'd told each of her teachers last night, Randi took 5 minutes at the start of all her freshman classes to announce herself. The questions were always the same, as were the answers: "I started Estrogen last week, but I've been on testosterone blockers for over a year. No surgery, not 'till way later. I like guys for romance - not that I've ever had one - and girls for just friends. No, Bob and I are just playing boyfriend/girlfriend for opposite day - it's an act, people."
Bob and Randi hit it off as friends, especially when she explained the Pythagorean theorem in a way that he finally understood it. So they made a deal: he would continue to let it be known that she was under his protection, and she would tutor him 3-4 times a week in the subjects he struggled with. He seemed so accepting of her, something that she never would have expected from a macho football player. He lost a few "friends" over Randi ... and she gained more and more friends as she was now no longer a pariah.
All of this occurred between "Opposite Day" Tuesday and Friday's football contest; now the big district championship with Churchill was on the line in just nine more hours.
Randi was ecstatic. She had always wanted to wear this ensemble to school: patchwork jeans covered by a V-neck blouse/dress with white shirt underneath, and pulled together with a wide leather belt and ankle boots. The compliments had been coming in, and she was floating on a cloud. Then, from behind her: "Come to the game tonight, Randi. Sit with us!" a blonde pretty girl said, her two attractive companions nodding their heads. There were still 4 minutes till the 3rd period bell rang.
"Wow, Britt. You don't mind me being with you and Steffi and Courtney? I mean, you guys are the girlfriends of the stars of the team!"
"And you're H-Bomb's girl!" Courtney tittered.
"Wait ... no, I'm not. We're just -"
"Girl, you so blind," clucked Steffi. "He's totally head over heels for you. We can all see it. He's kinda gun-shy, after the way that Tessa dumped him last year. So you may have to take the first step. Now, are you gonna sit with us or what?"
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Saturday morning, Randi went to Bob's house. The team had defeated Churchill in a tough game. H-bomb was double and even triple-ganged by the opposing team's linemen; however, that left other Collins High players unguarded, and they were able to stymie the opposing quarterback enough to turn the game. Randi saw how beat up Bob was afterwards - like a walking bruise - and wished him well as he left for home. Now she knocked on his door. It opened, and a woman's head emerged. "Hello?"
"Hello, Mrs. Harris. I'm Randi Toomey. I was supposed to come by later and study with Bob. But I saw how hurt he was last night, and ... is he okay?"
The woman smiled. "Randi with an "i", right? Bobby's talked quite a bit about you. Yes, he's okay - stretched out on the couch with all of the ice packs I own packed around him. This is our Saturday post-game ritual. I hate it - he's good at football, but I'm afraid he's going to be frozen with arthritis by age 30 at this rate." She turned her head; then sniffed, and composed herself. "He's not in any shape to study yet, but would you like to come in and keep him company?"
Randi sat on an ottoman next to the couch that contained Bob. He was on his back, with swollen bruises on all but his face. She lightly rubbed his shoulders, stroked his hand. "I - I brought some organic green iced tea for you, H-Bomb. Lots of antioxidants; good for damaged tissue."
Mrs. Davis watched them from the kitchen, reporting the scene to her husband. She spoke low so the kids wouldn't hear. "Yes, dear. I've been worried too. But this person ... she's a girl. I don't care what she was born with between her legs - she's a girl if I ever saw one. And she's the only girl who's come to check on Bobby after a game. That makes her A-1 in my book."
The big boy on the couch moaned. "God, what a struggle. I'm hurting as bad as I ever have before. We won, though."
Randi held the straw to his mouth as he sipped the tea with gusto, then smacked his lips with satisfaction. "Aaah, that was good. Honey?"
"Yes!" she smiled. "I used Orange Blossom Honey from Florida. It has a unique-"
"No, Randi. Honey. I'm talk'n to you. When I say Honey, I mean you. I need you t' do sumthin', kay?"
Randi was flushed and silent for a second, not believing at first what she heard. Then - "Yes, darling. What do you need?"
"Pleez take th' ice pack on my forehead off. Way too cold."
She did so. Then she glanced towards the kitchen; Mrs. Harris' back was turned while cooking something on the stove. Taking advantage, Randi anointed Bob's forehead with a tender,warm kiss. "Does that feel better, baby?"
"Ummmmmm ... my lips are cold all uffa sudden."
"Okay," Randi whispered, again glancing at the kitchen. Ohmigod. Here goes ... !
krakaTHOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMM!
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They say it's never too late to make amends as long as the person you need to make amends to is still living. But what if they are unconscious and dying?
The hospital parking lot was pretty full; too damn full for such a rainy day. And I had no umbrella or raincoat; I had left my home in Flagstaff, Arizona and had driven to Albuquerque nonstop (excepting stopping for gas). I didn't have time to check the weather or even grab more than a quick change of clothes. I just prayed I had arrived in time.
A sales flyer from last Sunday's paper was still in my car and the closest thing to an umbrella I had. By the time I got to the lobby it was wet pulp coming apart and I was drenched. A quick duck into a bathroom and use of some paper towels turned me from dripping wet to just wet. Great. So much for making a good first impression on Ronald's family. Nuts. Not Ronald, Veronica. That's what her mom told me her legal name was, and had been for the last 25 years.
I got off the 3rd floor elevator and followed the signs... 3 central, general medical floor, rooms 301-338. Huh? I'm sure she told me room 343. I went to the nurse's desk to ask about it. The man behind the desk didn't look up from his computer as he told me "343. Dat's in da hospice inpatient unit. Downa hall an' tru de doors".
So I leave in that direction looking for Donna Hall and Trudie Doors. Sorry. I make lousy jokes, even in my head, when I'm nervous. And walking into a hospice unit makes me real nervous. I find the nurses desk there. "Uh, I'm here to visit with... Ralston, room 343?"
"Are you family?" said the unit coordinator.
"No. I'm an old aquaintance; I called his family this morning and asked if I could-"
"Are you... the John Banks who I talked to today?" A voice to my right called out from down the corridor. I turned to see a older woman with a look of weariness - and wariness - in her eyes. She slowly ambled down towards the desk.
"Yes, yes I am. I-"
"You're drenched. You look like a drowned rat."
"It's pouring out there. You're Mrs. Ralston, Ronald's" -DAMN- *sigh* - "I mean, Veronica's mother?" If she's over 4 foot 9, I'm Santa Claus. No wonder Ron was short.
"That's me. I need to update you on VERONICA'S condition" The emphasis was said with an icy tone. Great, just great. You're here to try to heal old wounds you inflicted, John - not open up new ones. "Things have changed since we last spoke. And I have some more questions for you. And If I don't like the answers, then you will leave immediately, do you understand?"
The UC suddenly looked worried. "Mrs. Ralston - is this man upsetting you? Do you want me to ask him to leave?"
"That depends on his reply, Frances. Well, Mr. Banks? I said, DO YOU UNDERSTAND?"
I adopted the meekest body language and vocal tone I could muster. "Yes ma'am, absolutely. I will abide by your wishes. I just appreciate you being open to hearing me out:"
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She led me to a door that said "family consultation room". "Let's have a seat in here so we can talk. Then I'll decide if I'll let you see Ronnie. That's what she's called - that or Veronica. Not Ron, or Ronald. You said that you knew her when she was still in high school, so you would have known her only as a boy named Ronald." She squinted her eyes at me. "Almost all of the high school kids treated my Ronnie terribly. It was horrible for her - well, at the time, him. He was called so many things... he would come home and cry in his bedroom nightly. So why - nearly 30 years later - are you here? What was she to you, that made you come all this way after all this time? And especially, why - why are you here NOW? Ronnie's dying. DYING. She should have only her closest, trusted loved ones around her. That's really just me and her cousin, who is still in the room with Ronnie. So I don't think you should be here. But still, I want to know - WHY?"
Well, now I have some more questions of my own, I'm thinking. But I'm in no position to be requesting information; Ron's - RONNIE'S -mom is hurting. And angry. If I were in her shoes, I probably would be too. So, here goes... God help me. "Mrs. Ralston, I know how Ronnie was treated. I saw it every day. We had 2 classes together in freshman year, Spanish and Algebra. We were even friends for a whi-"
Her hand shot up in a "stop" gesture. "Ronnie, back in Eisenhower High School, didn't have any friends. None that I knew about. He was treated like a leper, especially after that incident at that volleyball party. So you're lying."
Ah yes. The infamous "incident" at Sherry Hauser's place. Our Spanish club had met there after we had worked the booth at the Cinco de Mayo fair that year. Sherry's mom was talking with Mrs. Salgado, and her dad was grilling dogs and burgers. We were having a good time laughing and playing volleyball in the back yard when I heard a scream from inside the house. Sherry ran out bawling "MOM! RONALD RALSTON IS IN MY ROOM and he's WEARING MY PROM DRESS!" Her parents rushed in while Sherry's girlfriends surrounded her as she screamed out everything she had seen in rapid fire high detail. A mixture of rage, disgust and violation was on her face. I could only think "Ron - what have you done? Everyone was already calling you a freak - and now they will feel they have proof. And they will call me one too, 'cause I hang around with you". Thank God, the police were not called, but Ron's dad was, and boy did he look angry and ashamed with his kid.
Big breath. Sigh. I run my fingers through my thinning hair. "No, Mrs. Ralston. I'm not lying. I actually would eat lunch with Ron at school. In fact, I tried to talk with him about how to act more "normal", so he wouldn't get teased so much. I got teased for letting him be around me - I was a guy on the football squad, hanging around with Ron, who everyone called queer (when they weren't saying worse things). I tried to stand up for him a few times. And then - after that "incident" - I did something really, really, bad to him. I have tried to put it out of my mind; I have asked forgiveness from God; yet the guilt has stayed with me. A counselor I'm working with has impressed on me that I needed to try to make amends to Ron - Ronnie - personally. And that's why I'm here."
She was still squinting. "So let me get this straight. You're saying that you were Ron's friend, even though you never showed up at our house, or to my knowledge had Ron over to yours. You were trying to get him to be "normal". Some self righteous guy from the popular crowd who "lowered" himself to try to help a "queer". And now you are trying to prove doubly how good and benevolent you are by coming to apologize for your failure to convert him to normal. All so you can feel better about yourself. Well let me tell you something, kiddo. The last thing Veronica needs right now is to be reminded of the horror of that freshman year. So you can take your smug request and put it where you put any other suppository." Now shaking with anger, she burst into tears.
I sat silently with my head hung down as she cried hurking sobs into her tissues.
Then... not moving my head - I whispered "I am anything but righteous. I know about Veronica. I found out about her life when I was trying to find Ron online to do this. What I discovered was a person who overcame more crap than I ever had to face. I am not worthy to be in her presence, and I mean that. Yes, making these amends will help me. But the main reason I want to do this is not for me. It's for her. If I thought doing so would hurt her more than heal her, I wouldn't be here. If you don't want me to, I will abide by your wishes. But I am asking you - as a man who deeply regrets his past - for permission to tell her that I am so sorry that I hurt her."
I continued to look down as she finished dabbing her eyes and nose. They have plenty of tissue dispensers in this room, fortunately.
Finally she spoke again, in a whisper. "What?"
"Um....I'm sorry, I didn't quite catch-"
"What did you do to her?"
Oh boy. Here goes. "I... betrayed his trust. I abandoned him in a public fashion.
"I know I'm saying 'him' instead of 'her', but when all this still happened he was still Ron. In freshman year, we sat next to each other. Ron was a short, small guy, and I was already varsity football size. It was my first time to meet him as we attended different junior highs. I remarked about his She-Hulk T shirt, as I was into comics; I found out he was too. We sat and ate lunch together that day, and that's the first time I saw him being picked on - some of the other football guys who knew Ron from before called him "fag" and "queer" and then jeered at me for sitting with him. I told them to blow it out their ear; I figured they were picking on him mainly because of his size. Then he told me that I would probably be unpopular if I hung around him. I asked why, but he wouldn't elaborate.
"The rest of the semester we would bring comics to school and trade them and read them. After school I would practice football for 3 hours, then go home, eat supper, do homework, and crash into bed. So I didn't have much of a social life. Even though I was on the football team, I was horribly shy around others. Really socially inept. 'Only dweebs still read comic books' the other football guys told me. But I loved them. Ron did too, and I felt a kinship with him even though I caught hell for it. We would always spend the lunch hour together. Sometimes he called me at night and we would talk about what we would do if we had super powers.
"Then one night he called me and asked if I could be trusted with a secret. 'Sure' I said. He then told me why people called him gay slurs. He told me about how he enjoyed dressing like a girl; that he had always wished he was a girl. That every halloween he had a different female costume. That he caught hell from his dad for getting into his mom's clothes. He told me he wished he had some real modern girl clothes to try on instead of just his mom's clothes. I think that's why he got into that dress at that girl's house, you know, at the volleyball party, later."
"He told you?" his mother said. A woman about my age came in and sat down next to her. "Are you OK in here, Auntie?" This must be Veronica's cousin. Mrs. Ralston nodded her head but kept those eyes boring right into mine. "What did you do when he told you?"
"I asked him how long he had felt this way; he said as long as he could remember. Then he asked me if I was disgusted with him and would stop being his friend because he told me this. I told him I would not, but that this secret should remain between him and me. I encouraged him to act more 'normal' in school so he would get picked on less, and to quit the halloween crossdressing. I told myself that I was telling him this for his own survival, but looking back, I was also scared to death that he would embarrass both of us."
"So, you were ashamed of Ronnie. Doesn't sound much like a friend to me."
I felt numb inside from what I was about to say. "I was ashamed of both of us." Now both women in the room looked at me like I was nuts. "Huh?"
"When Ron told me his feelings.... the first thing I said was 'I can't believe that I found someone else like me!"
Now their mouths were agape.
"I had been dressing in my mothers clothes off and on since age 7. I had daydreams about what it would be like to be female. But I was horrified of being found out (even though later Mom told me she had figured it out early). I told Ron no one could ever find out, and I hoped I would stop having those feelings so I could be just a normal guy. But Ron told me he was tired of denying who he was; that if he wanted to wear pink tees and dress for halloween, he would. He said he didn't know how, but he WAS going to be a girl one day. This scared the hell out of me, for his sake as well as mine."
"Wait, wait, wait", Mrs. Ralston shook her head and waved her arms like she was declaring a pass incomplete. "YOU are transgendered???"
"No. I'm not. By senior year, I had grown big and tall, was a football star, and discovered how much I liked being the male in a male-female relationship. I have no more deep urges to be a woman... although I find transgendered women unusually attractive. That's about it. But back in freshman year, I felt I had that compulsion in common with Ron, though he was more committed to it. I spent time covering for him, and encouraging him to lay low with this behavior, so we could survive high school without being pariahs. He invited me over to his place a few times after football season ended, but each time I said I was too busy studying - I was afraid to be seen as too close to him. In spite of that treatment, he still considered me his friend.
"Then the incident at Sherry's house happened. The next day at lunch, Ron got confronted by some of Sherry's friends and some football players about what a freak he was. Ron snapped. He started yelling back at them, standing up on the lunchroom chair so he could look them in the eye. I was just coming out of the lunch line, headed towards our table, when I saw him jump on the chair. I stopped and stood there with my heart dropping to my feet. Ron was yelling 'I am not a faggot! I'm not a queer! I'm a GIRL! In my heart, I am a girl! And I'm not alone - I'm not the only one who has these feelings! I'm NOT! - am I, John?' - Ron turned his head towards me. Every other head in the cafeteria did too.
"I stood there, holding my tray, facing a now silent group of staring classmates, half of them stopped in mid-chew. I felt like I was going to pass out. Then, suddenly, I felt a little anger towards Ron. He had betrayed me in public. So... I betrayed him. I laughed at him, called him a freak and a fairy, and told him that since I had seen what had happened at Sherry's there was no way I would be sitting, or eating, or associating with him ever again. I walked to the far side of the room to the jock's tables and said "Boy! You spend most of the year trying to reform a freak, but I'm through playing missionary!" That got a good laugh out of the cool kids, and started me on the road to being accepted into their world. I didn't speak to Ron for the whole rest of the month, and then school was out. By next fall, I heard he had moved away. I liked my new status in the jock clique... but whenever I thought of Ron I felt like.."
"The traitor," Mrs. Ralston whispered. "You're the traitor that Ronnie told me about! She never gave me your name or any other details, just that there was one person in her past who had betrayed her in a way no one else had - humiliated her publicly, broken her trust... she said you were the reason she found it hard to trust anyone!" Oddly, she spoke those words not so much in anger, more with a wonder of discovery. "After freshman year Ronnie begged to be allowed to move away. His aunt in California offered to take him in. Turns out she enrolled him in a school that accepted transgendered children - Harvey Milk academy. So Ron started living full time as Veronica and never looked back. My husband, Harold, wanted to disown him; I didn't know what to think, but I did want my child back in my life, male or female. She started hormones through a doctor there. After graduation, she became a pornography star until she collected enough money, then had her - you know - surgery "down there". One day I get a phone call from my new daughter. I was so excited - I just wanted Ronnie back in my life. Harold didn't feel the same, and we split up over it eventually. For the last 14 years or so, we've - Ronnie and me - been living in the same town, though she insists on having her own place. She got trained and then worked as a herbologist - that's what I call those natural healers - and something called Reiki. When she started having blood in her stool, well, that's the first sign that she had that something was wrong inside, and we found that she had colon cancer spreading everywhere. It was stage 4- and voila, here we are, with cancer eating up the body she worked so hard to get. The pain got so bad that she finally allowed me to put her here where they could deal with it. But she's gotten weak, so weak.... She hasn't been talking or even waking up for the last 4 hours now. So, I'm afraid you're a little too late for her to forgive you. I don't even know if she hears us anymore."
Oh God. I'm too late. By four hours, I'm too late.
Now with a look more of frustration than malice, she opined "Why did you wait so long to try to make this right?"
*Sigh*. Do I go into that swamp? Do I tell them about the alcohol problem that finally became full blown alcoholism? About the 3 failed marriages? The estranged kids who will have nothing to do with me?The near loss of my career? How I've been sober for only 20 months now? How each unresolved offense or anything that causes me guilt, or shame, or anger - brings up the urge to drink again? That this is part of my work to clean up my past so I can stay sober? That I would cut off my arm if that's what it took to bring healing to all the wounds I've inflicted on others? Do I really want to tell all that?
No. No, I don't.
"I've... only recently realized that no matter what, I have to make amends for my past behavior. I believe as long as a person is living, I still have a chance to make amends." Lame.
But it's enough. "Okay. I think I understand. But seeing as Ronnie is unconscious, I don't see how you can do it now."
"Mrs. Ralston... are you sure that she's totally in a coma? Is there a chance she could still hear someone talking to her?"
She shrugged. "Who knows? .... Are you saying you'd like to try anyway?" My head nods vigorously. "Okay then," she says with one eyebrow raised, "but I'm gonna be in there with you. And If I don't like what you say, you leave immediately. Agreed?"
"Yes, ma;am."
The younger woman speaks up. "By the way, I'm Tina, Veronica's cousin." "Nice to meet you, Tina. John Banks."
"I'm sorry Tina, how rude of me" Mrs. Ralston says, then turns back to me."Before you see her, realize that you'll be looking at the shell of her body that cancer has ravaged. She started off and on bleeding from her bottom pretty bad 2 days ago, and she's been getting worse - weaker by the hour, it seems. The aide cleaned her up again just before you came, but if she's bled again, it won't smell very nice in there." She pulled a pad computer from her large purse. "THIS is how my Veronica looked last year-"
I saw a picture of a woman with long, dark, curly hair; wearing a floppy hat, and a slight Mona Lisa type smile. A red knit shirt. Those deep blue eyes I remember from 1985. She was beautiful. Radiant. It was more gorgeous than the photo I found of her in my online search. I felt myself attracted to this woman. I wonder what it would have been like to hold her... FOCUS, John. You have a mission to accomplish, not a fantasy romance to get lost in.
"-and to me, that embodies who she is. Her soul is still as beautiful as that photo - and always will be." Mrs. R is tearing up again.
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We arrive at the room, and Mrs. Ralston goes in. I follow, then Tina. I look at the figure in the bed. She looks nothing like the picture I saw online, nor the one just showed to me. Lying on her back, asleep; eyes closed, with a slight look of... discomfort?... in her face (at least, with her brow furrowed, that's what it looks like to me). Pale as a sheet. Cheeks, temples sunken in. Belly slightly swollen on her otherwise gaunt frame. Only the sparsest of hair on her head - chemo side effect, I'm guessing. Mrs. R. is rapidly lighting some scented candles, but there is a thick odor of - how do I describe it? A mustiness? Whatever it is, I've never smelled it before and it's unpleasant. But I didn't travel all this way, and go through that confessional with her mom, to be turned back by a smell. I step forward to the side of the bed and carefully, gently pick up her thin hand. It's cool and limp. "Veronica?" I say softly; then repeat it, louder. No response. I see her chest heave with each breath, so she's still alive. But can she hear me? Whether she can or not, here I go. God please help me speak words that will heal and not rip an old scar open.
"Veronica. This is John Banks. We were friends for most of freshman year at Eisenhower High. I'm here to.... what I've been needing to..." "......." I rehearsed this. But I can't remember a thing!
"Ronnie, I'm right here in the room too. Don't be afraid of him, honey; he's not here to hurt you, and anyway if he tried, I'd beat him up and throw him out." Thank you, Ronnie's mom, for breaking the uncomfortable silence. She turns to me and gives a thin smile. "Go on, John,"
Okay. "Ronnie. I've been living with the memory of the things I said to you that day in the lunchroom - the last things I ever said to you. I think that that was one of the worst things I've ever done to anybody. I was a coward that day - too scared to stand up for my friend - and moreover, I was a monster for ridiculing you and abandoning you. You expected that of everyone else, but I know you never expected it from me. And I have continued to be cowardly, running from the responsibility of coming to you to apologize and make amends. And now, I don't even know if you can hear me. But if you can, or if your soul or spirit still can, I want you to know something. I apologize to you for that terrible behavior. It was totally my fault, and I feel so horribly guilty about what I've done. I don't deserve your forgiveness... but I humbly am asking for it, anyway. Again, I am so sorry.
"Ronnie - I looked for you online to try to find you. In the process, I found you and your bio and picture on that Trahssexual Women's Successes site. I want you to know, I am so proud of you. You followed your dream and made it real - you became a woman, an absolutely gorgeous and beautiful woman, and made a life for yourself, made a difference. I feel special just knowing that I knew you for that short time. I wish I had taken the opportunity to do this earlier and tell you this before... before all this happened with you.... but to be honest, I figured you probably hated my guts and that I deserved it.
"Thank you for listening to me, Ronnie." Said with false hope. I saw no response. I got through it. How about that. I thank Mrs. Ralston and Tina. I gently let go of Veronica's hand-
But she has ahold of my hand now. A faint squeezing!
I look at Ronnie's face - her eyelids slowly open! Not all the way, but enough for me to see those blue eyes - and for the first time since coming in the room, I see my friend Ron. And the Veronica from the pictures. In those unmistakable, beautiful blue eyes. And she's opening her mouth to speak?!
"Book.... bag" a raspy voice emanates from those wonderful lips.
At that, Tina (who, along with Mrs. R, had a look of amazement) jumped up and grabbed a huge canvas bag off the floor. It was loaded with books - hardbacks, paperbacks, and... comics! I broke out in a wide smile. You never lose that love of 'em.
Veronica spoke again, a little louder. "Yearbook," she says, pointing to the bag, and looking at me.
Huh? I look in the bag, and rummage... what? In there is... the yearbook from our freshman year at 'Hower! Why would she carry... wait. There's something in it keeping it from being closed tightly, like some papers near the back... I open it up to that area.
On the 2 pages of the open yearbook are multiple yellow sticky notes. They cover both pages completely, except for a small rectangular picture - my individual yearbook photo .
With bewilderment, I show this to Tina and Mrs. Ralston. "There's writing all over the notes!" says Tina. There is. Lines of writing that stretch across both pages, over the notes like graffiti on a wall. I'm still in a bit of shock when Mrs. R. - she's come up beside me and is looking at the book - says: "John. It's a letter to you." "To...me??" "John - please, read it. Out loud, if you don't mind." Mrs. R. is looking up at me with eyes full of water and a quivering smile on her lips. "O-okay" I say. My brain is still spinning.
It's dated 7 months ago. I begin to read....
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Dear Jonathan. Oh my - I just realized I'm writing a 'Dear John' letter:). I am quite sure this letter will never be read by you. I'm writing because I need to. I have to finally deal with this.
I remember every word you said to me on May 6, 1985. Those words destroyed me that day. The one person in this world who understood me had just rejected me publicly. I was humiliated. I even wondered for a half second if suicide would be an answer - but only for a half second. Because then, a determination to somehow make my dream come true took over. Damn you and the world and everyone else all to hell, I was going to live my life true to myself! It arose slowly, but steadily, and that combined with an understanding mother and aunt, and a bit of good luck, culminated to make me who I am today.
Now I have a cancer, and the outlook is probably not good. The doctors tell me it has been growing silently in me, probably for years. But there is even another cancer that I have carried around for decades. It's the huge grudge I have had about you and that day. I have hated you fiercely at times when I remembered that day, and vowed I would never forget it. As if I was punishing you. But the only one who I punished with this is myself. I have used "May 6" as an excuse to never get close to anyone but a few family members; I have had dates, even lovers, but kicked them away as soon as I saw the possibility of real heartfelt love - in them or me. I have carried that day like a cross, and thrown massive one woman pity parties with wine and tears. What a fool I've been.
I also must confess, it was mostly my fault. If I hadn't put on Sherry's prom dress that night, May 6 never would have happened. I had gone in the house to use the potty and Sherry's bedroom door was open, and on it hung her dress for the prom that Saturday. OH! It was gorgeous - I dreamed for a second what I would look like in it - and the next thing I knew, world war 3 had started. I literally don't even remember putting it on. Furthermore, the next day at school, at lunch, when I had my full of those bigots - in my rant, I effectively "outed" you, or almost did. And I know that being discovered as a crossdresser was the one thing in the world you were most afraid of. So see, I'm mostly to blame for all this.
So, John. I forgive you. From the bottom of my heart (and telling the chip on my shoulder to shut up), I forgive you. I release you from that guilt. And I will release the John of May 6 as an aberration. Because the John of all the days leading up to that - THAT John - is still dear to me. You made my life livable. When you opened up to me - I knew I wasn't crazy, I wasn't alone! You didn't destroy me on May 6, John. You saved me, every day that year leading up to that. That's the John I will hold in my heart - until the day I die. I love you, John. -Veronica Bernice Ralston
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I realized that I had finished the last 3 sentences reading them silently. Because I couldn't talk. A softball size lump had lodged in my throat. Mrs. R. and Tina were sobbing into their tissues. Something strange was... welling up in me. I turned to those beautiful, lovely blue eyes. I didn't deserve that letter. Not a washed up heel like me. I tried to speak, but nothing came - then finally bursting out. "Oh God! Veronica! *sob* Ronnie! I'm so sor-" I began bawling, standing there, holding on to her hand, using my other arm to shield my face, my shame. The smelly mess of decades of that guilt came bursting out of me as I cried like I had never, ever done before. It felt awful. Then .... it began to feel... strangely peaceful?
I felt a weak squeeze on my hand. I looked up at Ronnie again... she's saying something. It was too soft for me to hear. "Please, say again," I say. God, she looks so weak. Again, I can barely hear her - I try to read her lips. Did she say "come closer?" "Veronica, I'm sorry - one more time -please say it again." I put my ear up right next to her mouth.
And that's when - as her final act on this earth - Veronica slightly lifted her head, and kissed me on the cheek.
The End
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The House of Sighs
Demon's Deception
by **Sigh**
Copyright © 2013 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
Hello and Welcome to the House of Sighs. Sigh couldn’t be here, so she left me in charge. You can call me … Moan. The House is the new repository for any and all stories by Sigh that are creepy … or eerie … or horrific. No romance here, nor humor. See, Sigh used to read comic anthologies like the “House of Mystery” and “The Witching Hour”, and she loved the stories. This one, for example, is a TG adaptation of one of those stories — a “fanfeast”, if you will. I mean, “fanfiction”. Sorry, I’m getting a little hungry. So please read the story, and afterwards, I’d love to have you for dinner … heh heh heh …
“What?” The daemon’s five eyes opened wide, then narrowed with rage — the infuriation that a behemoth might have when being ordered about by a shrew. “You want me to … to …” It’s eight rows of teeth gnashed and ground in a horrible screeching racket. “FOOL! GREEDY IMBECILE! You do NOT call out the ruler of the sub-seventh level to do PARLOR TRICKS!”
“I can ask anything I want of you,” said the short, squat man with a snide grin. “It says so in the tome.”
“Insolent maggot, you think that some rotting book can rule me? Can predict what I will do to you? DIE!” A tentacle of living fire shot out from the specter towards the human’s neck — only to be sliced in two by a shard of red light blazing up from the floor of the dank basement. A roar/shriek of otherworld agony filled the tiny room.
Shaking his head, the man cackled an evil laugh. “I’ve learned from other’s mistakes, Gzalnur. I’m encircled in the sphere of Bildad. While here in this room, I cannot be touched. And after you answer my request, you’ll be bound back to She-ol, where you’ll be too far removed to affect me. Accept your fate, and fulfill my wish.”
“I am to be called,” howled the shadow, “to accomplish the impossible. What you ask for is something that is done daily by mere mortals. A man changing to a woman’s form? Why, that is something for your chemical brews and knives to perform. Why do you not seek out those methods, mealworm?”
“What, and take years of expensive therapy and shit, along with the pain and embarrassment of public transitioning? No, thanks. That’s for losers. I’m gonna use you to make me into a hottie instantly; my old life erased, no one ever knowing I used to be a stubby hockey puck of a guy. No repro organs, please; I can’t stand kids.” The oily, hunched male held up a poster with pictures of ten women spread across it, each with one or two particular body parts circled. Below the portraits was writing and numerals. “Here are the specs I want for my new body. You’ll find I left no stone unturned.”
The daemon snarled. “I shall have my revenge. I may not be able to touch you now, but when you eventually die, your soul will be mine to torture and consume, over and over again, for all eternity.”
This set the man to guffawing. “You must really think I’m a doofus, right? I have prepared for that contingency. In the summoning spell, I have bound my soul from hell; at worst, I’ll have purgatory. Safe from you and your threats. In exchange, you get to take one small, unnoticeable talent from me — nothing major, like my ability to speak, or hear, or orgasm; it must be something I won’t miss, like, no ability to learn the violin.” He held up the rune that contained the spell.
The daemon seethed with frustration as he read it. He had never beheld a summons so protective, so foolproof. Then he raised three of his five eyebrows. “This spell … it’s for your own personal gain, is it not? Not to help anyone else, but just to satisfy your own desire? Using majiks because you’re too slothful to do it the hard way.”
“I’m not a bad guy, dammit! I just never got any breaks, like most people do! I’m telling ya, Karma owes me this!” blurted the short man, losing his cool for the first time.
“Funny you should talk about Karma. For everything you do, there is a price to pay, little man. And just taking ‘some talent I won’t miss’ is too small a price for this. I declare an additional penalty, of my choosing.” Now the spirit was doing the cackling. “Your first spell, is it not? You may read all the cookbooks you want, insect, but your initial French soufflé will still be amateurish. You missed something.”
The man saw the sudden look of glee on the specter’s horrific face. Could the devil be correct? He suddenly dropped all but the book and frantically flipped the pages.
“I DECLARE,” the daemon boomed, “THAT ONCE THE WISH IS COMPLETED, THAT YOU WILL BE A SPECTACULAR FEMALE SPECIMEN… BUT I SHALL LIMIT YOU TO LIVING THE REST OF YOUR LIFE IN THIS SMALL BASEMENT ROO-“
“BALTHAGAST ROM TIGLIANO! SUM SCIPID!”
The daemon stood still, rendered temporarily mute and paralyzed by the man’s latest spell. The novice sorcerer swallowed hard; just a moment slower and the fiend would have trapped him. “I was too late to fully cancel your declaration, evil spirit; but I can modify it. You attempted to limit my mobility; that I cannot stop. But I can make it a limit of MY choosing.” But what do I choose? he thought. Hmmm… well, I hate the color red, so …
The man cleared his throat. “I SHALL FINISH THE DECLARATION. I SHALL LIMIT MYSELF FROM BEING ABLE TO PASS THROUGH A PORTAL WITH A SOLID RED DOOR. ANYWHERE ELSE, I MAY PASS WITHOUT CARE. SO I DECLARE.”
At once the daemon was mobile and verbal. “You disrespectful, interrupting cad! How dare you humiliate me like that!”
“Fulfill the wish,” ordered the man.
“FINE!” yelled the spirit. “YOU ARE NOW THE MOST DESIRABLE FEMALE ON THE FACE OF THE EARTH!”
Instantly, painlessly, the woman beheld her new body. She was indeed a goddess in human form, with a pixie face, long curly blond hair, heaving breasts and curvy hips, slender legs going down to tiny feet and toes. She screamed with ecstasy. “At last … AT LAST! America’s Top Model, here I come! Oh, and Mr. Evil Spirit: please take away my ability to play the violin.”
“You speak too slow, human. I’ve already taken your unnoticeable talent. Have a rotten life. I hope you hate womanhood. And remember — if you break your restriction, you lose all of your protection — and you are mine.”
“Wait! What talent did you take?”
The daemon smirked. “Your spell did not say I had to disclose that. I’m sure you’ll never find out; after all, you said you were not to miss it. Good riddance to you, now.” And in a puff of acrid mist, it was gone.
The local M2F transgender support group was meeting the next night. A gorgeous blonde, buxom woman walked into the meeting room five minutes late.
The others in the group all looked up at the striking beauty. The moderator smiled. “Ma’am, feel free to sit down. Would you like to tell us your first name?”
The goddess continued to stand, answering with a question of her own. “Do any of you know who I am? Anyone recognize me?” All shook their heads.
“Well, then, how about this. Do I look like a “cis” girl?” All heads nodded strongly.
A leery smile grew across the blonde’s lips. “That’s because I am one. A true girl, not a bunch of fake loser girls like you. You will never measure up to me. I am superior in every way to you, posers!” With that, the blonde turned on her heel and walked away, laughing. I can’t believe I used to be one of them, she smugly mused.
The blonde, who now called herself Tawny, had made appointments to meet with the modeling studio. She already had five thousand dollars made doing high end escort work over the last week. It was time to spend some of this dough. She chose Nordstrom’s. Parking her car, she walked towards the store, checking the door color as was her new habit. Green door. Safe. She walked through to the inside —
And found herself in hell.
“Hello, my delicate morsel. You’re just in time. I’m very hungry.” It was the daemon Gzalnur, spiked club in one hand, various blades in the other three.
“NOOO! This is impossible! I — I didn’t break my restriction, ever! The door I just walked through was green,” screamed Tawny, scared out of her wits.
“Aaah, my little forever appetizer — it was red. You see, that hidden talent I took? The one you didn’t notice? I took away your ability to distinguish red from green — I made you colorblind. Fool! Welcome to your eternal torment!”
I guess young Tawny got her just desserts, eh? Or, rather, she IS dessert! Haw haw haw! Oh my goodness, I kill myself. In fact, I was about to do just that. Want to join me? Of course, I never stay dead - silly old rule about the undead rising again, unless you use a wooden stake. That's why we frisked you for wooden objects when you came in. Um ... excuse me ... you have something on your neck. Here, let me get rid of it for you.....THE END
Thanks to Erin and the Closeteers for their help!
If you've gotten this far, please leave a comment! Don't make me sic Moan on you!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
Stepping towards the phantom as it enveloped him, he swung in a motion that would have split any physical entity into three pieces - yet he hit nothing but air. 'Twas not air that clawed through his cloak, however; deep gashes appeared on his chest, and he was thrown ten paces from where he stood.
This is an adaptation of the Robert E. Howard short story, Skulls In The Stars. The adaptation has a TG twist. Please check out Howard's original story (to see the story told by the master!) at en.wikisource.org.
Ah, hello there. 'Moan' here again. I'm the keeper of the House of Sighs, the place for Sigh's eerie/spooky/weird tales. Boy, do we have tale for you today. A fantasy story, set sometime in the early 1700's, at a mythical place. Ladies, you've heard to watch out for strange men when you're out alone at night? Well, this yarn turns the tables on the guys ... heh heh heh...
There are two roads to Foxshire.
One is a short, straightforward path leading through a moor, a fieldland with scattered trees and brush. The other is a winding, treacherous path leading through a swamp. The former trek shall speed one to his destination within a few hours; the latter takes most of a day.
Elijah Stone knew this from his old maps, and thus set foot roughly an hour before dusk to walk through the misty moor. The moon would be full tonight, and allow enough of a shine to set one's boot on sure enough footing by that route. Bereft of horse or carriage, the evangel traveled lightly; a change of clothes, a small monied purse, two dragoons, and his father's rapier.
Thus it was that he proceeded with nary a stray thought other than a successful journey, when he heard the cries of a desperate youth approaching him from behind - from the small village whose tavern he had refresh'd himself in prior to setting off.
"Kind sir - please!" shouted the boy. "Stay thy feet before ye go any further!"
Stone looked back, with a shade of vexation. "What is it, boy? I asked in the town square if there be any need that I could attend to, being a soldier of right and justice. I left assured that things were well there, and I have business to attend to in Foxshire early in the morn."
"Sir," said the youth as he struggled for his breath, "Ye mustn't go through the marsh. If ye yearn to arrive whole by the end of your walking, ye have to proceed into the swamp."
The man standing before the child was no longer ired, but mystified. "The ... swamp? Surely ye jest, young one. That way is unwalkable by night, and over twice as long. I shall miss my engagement."
"Ye speak the truth, noble sir. If thou attempted to walk into the bog as darkness falls, a quagmire would surely claim thee, unless the asps or swamp-lizards did prior. 'Tis best to start through it in the day's first light. That way you could reach the cabin of the hermit - old man Cockrey - and give him money to allow you a resting cot with some meat to eat. Then after a half hour's respite, you can continue and reach through the other end of the bog before evening falls again. You can make Foxshire just before midnight from that point."
The youth spoke with a tremor. Elijah Stone at his full pace was a humbling sight, a tall pale gaunt man with a broad brimmed hat, thick overcoat and a two-holstered belt. Most unnerving was his countenance; his jaw set firm atop his long neck, with piercing blue eyes that rarely seemed to blink. It would be enough to make nervous any child or man, and surely that was what had this young one quaking. Or was it something else?
"Blast it, boy! I have no time for games! What you suggest would not only slow me by a full day, but make me poorer and more wearied as well. It reckons to me," said the frowning, grim knight, "that old man Cockrey has put you up to this, to earn him a little money. I imagine that he has no room for a resting traveler if he truly lives in a hermit shack. So if-"
"Kind lord, he has a spare room," cut in the child. "He's a widower of ten years, and he had a son - an effete, foppish son, who fancied himself a girl, causing untold shame to his father; but the boy ran away from home a while past, and Cockrey rents the room to resters. I get no pity nor penny from the old man; the men at the tavern at the village, they sent me to stop you."
Elijah's eyes were fiery, but he straightaway closed them and inhaled deeply, then exhaled slowly. He then with calm strode towards the young man, coming within a foot of him, then suddenly dropped to his knee. "Tell me, son. What is your name?"
"Roger, sir; but in the village I'm known as Stub."
"Well, noble Stub. I will hear thee out. Pray tell, why do the men of the village wish me to brave the swamp?"
"It not be the swamp, sir. It's the moors. We ... we dare not speak aloud of it. It is bad luck; I wish not to bring it from the field to my home by telling of it."
"Stub ... speak it in mine ear. I doubt the moors can hear a boy's muffled whisper from this point."
The youth's throat quavered as he breathed the warning at Stone's sideburn. "There is a phantom, a monster that haunts that way, for the last year. If any one traverses the fields at night - or even at day, in the deep fog - they do not emerge alive. It shrieks and laughs with a horrible evil. We can hear the unfortunate's screams and death pangs as it tortures them before delivering them to the reaper. When the day is clear with no fog, we can run in and retrieve their bodies, covered in blood and punctured through as with sharp swords, as well as claw marks over their bodies. None have prevailed against it. Now you see why you must turn - for that way, waits death."
Stone's heart quickened - but not with fear. Indeed, he felt a purpose in his tiresome existence once more. A bedeviling evil was about, and fighting wickedness such as this was his life's breath. Stub had no hint of reckoning that he stood in the presence of the man who had thrown out the conjurers of East Baden, who had slain the man-wolves of the Burnside manor murders, and had cast out the demons that occupied the devil's priest at the Spanish border. Indeed, Elijah was only truly alive when in battle against the darkness; all the rest of life seemed drudgery. And here, here was such an evil.
"Young Roger, tell the townspeople that you did a great work in thy warning tonight. I believe thee. Yet, still, I shall proceed to the moors, for if the specter be there, then 'tis my life's work to banish it, or perish in the effort. Either way, my fate does not fall on thee - the choice is mine alone." With that, the tall figure strode towards the patchy fog rising in the dreaded moors. The boy began to shed tears of sorrow, then ran back to the safety of the village.
Elijah walked into the first cloud of mist, senses honed to the point, his breathing slow and silent. He proceeded through the patch to a clear area, illuminated now by the rising moon. On and on he stepped, straining to see a glimpse of shadow, listening for any trace of movement other than his own. In mist, then in the clear, then into the mist again.
A scream halted his progress, and he drew his pistol. The origin was near, but the direction it arose from could not be discerned. It came again - a horrid, human, blood-curdling yell born of unimaginable dread. The crusader squinted; was that a shadow ahead? Nay, was it two? The damned shifting of the vapors confounded his sight. The screaming returned, ever closer, but this time with a gurgling base, and accompanied by a second voice - a hellish laughter. Not one of joy, but of malevolence.
The fiend had beset upon someone else traveling through the moors!
Now with some credence as to the direction of the battle, Stone broke into a run. He prepared to fire his pistol into the air to distract the hellhound from it's victim until he could arrive on the scene. He broke through a cloud of mist - and saw a sight that made him halt as if turned to ice.There at the base of a dead tree lay something that once was human, just seconds prior. It was now bloodied and disemboweled, lying sprawled on the sparse grass. Squatting over the carcass was a pale, wan, beautiful lady. Her hair was golden flax falling about her shoulders and down her back, and her apple face with a button nose would have once won a young man's heart. Once - but now, her fairness was marred by streams of blood pouring from her ear-holes, and there were two charred, black empty holes where her eyes should have been. She felt along the corpse's body with her hands, climbing up until they reached the dead man's head; then they held it still while the wraith's mouth opened. Out shot a long, forked tongue, and it licked the face of the victim on the left cheek, once, twice, yet a third time.
Then, the tongue retracted, and the ghost girl began to wail a long, mournful moan, betraying anguish, shame, and ... regret?
"Away from him, foul spirit!" Stone readied into a fighting stance. The ghost woman's head lifted as she sniffed the air; and it twisted suddenly to face his direction. The delicate nose sniffed long and hard again, as if catching hold of a scent. Then the lovely mouth deformed as it expansed into a demonic grin, stretching her face and exposing long, daggered teeth. The feminine hands grew into horrible claws, and the whole being rose into the air in a mix of tattered gown and mist. It lurched suddenly into flight with an otherworldly howling cackle, straight at Elijah Stone.
The people's protector fired his dragoon directly at the beast's head, yet it flew through it as if it were a cloud. He gripped his other pistol and shot, with effect of equal futility. He pulled his ancestral rapier that had bested many a monster. Stepping towards the phantom as it enveloped him, he swung in a motion that would have split any physical entity into three pieces - yet he hit nothing but air. 'Twas not air that clawed through his cloak, however; deep gashes appeared on his chest, and he was thrown ten paces from where he stood.
Elijah picked himself up. Another few strikes of similar malice would surely send him to his final reward. If I am to meet my end, he reasoned, it shall be from the front - facing my foe, rather than fleeing. As the banshee screeched on her resumed attack, he had no advantage save one: unflinching courage in the face of death. He swung with his fists, as the talons ripped into his flesh once more. He continued bravely to press, and to punch at the vision. And with one of the blows, finally, he felt an impact. All of his strength and will focused in on the righteousness of his cause, and his fists hit with more and more solidity.
Faced for the first time with a man who would not run, the apparition began to suffer from the blows, and began to give way. Stone could tell that he was beginning to subdue the creature, and alit upon it, taking it to the ground. As he whaled away at it with his hands, the creature began babbling in a tongue that would seem gibberish to the casual listener. But it spoke to Elijah's soul, and he could understand in his spirit the desperate cries emanating from the fiend.
And at once, the mystery of the monster became clear to him.
The next day, the sun was at high peak over the swampland that surrounded old man Cockrey's hermit shack. The owner of the shack walked outside to survey the sky for the weather's sake. He squinted his eyes and rubbed the huge scar on his left cheek as was his habit.
Then astounding sight greeted him, as a procession of male village-folk led by a tall, gaunt man in a black overcoat and great rimmed hat approached his cabin.
"Ye be Cockrey?" spoke the hollow-cheeked stranger.
"Aye. What of it? I have only enough room for one, mayhaps two, resters. The rest o' ye shall have to stand in the sun. But I still must have payment from all of ye, as fee for passing o'er my land."
"We are not here to rest, hermit. Pray tell, where be thy son?"
The old man spat. "I have no son."
"Aye, but ye did," answered Stone. "What became of him?"
"The boy - if ye could call him a boy, shameful wretch - took his leave from me a month after his mother died, ten years past. He was but nine years old. I know not if he lives; the bogs may have claimed him, or he may be thieving in a city. He did not want to live here, so I gave him no chase. Good riddance, I say."
"I see. And why have thou not remarried? Do ye not feel loneliness at times?"
"Bah! Yea, I sometimes yearn for a woman's breast. But ye cannot trust them. All one would want me for is my money, and land. Even my wife - God rest her - would not obey me fully; she allowed my accursed boy to dress and live as her daughter, just because he whined for it. Her death of consumption was therefore a curse, yet a blessing to me; I no longer must endure her rebellion. Now - why dost thou pry into mine own life? Pay me, or begone!"
Elijah stepped to the miser and grabbed his shirt collar. "You lie, Cockrey. You are evil, and guilty of the murders committed on the moors outside of the nearby village."
"Madness! I live here, an old man! Thou hast lost thy sanity, stranger! Who are you to accuse me?"
"I fought the demon of the moors last night; observe the claw marks on my shirt, my neck. I barely survived, yet overcame the beast." Stone pulled back his overcoat to prove the claim. "I could not banish her, though. Only one act can do that."
"Her?!" gasped old man Cockrey.
"Aye, her," said the crusader with a grim smile. "Thy surprise doth self-accuse thee, murderer. Your son did not leave you after your wife's death. Instead, you encouraged him in his effeminate actions, and he was relieved that you did so - until you soon decided that he should also take your dead wife's place in your bed."
The hermit's face became sheet-white.
"When thy son would not willingly acquiesce to your whims, you kept him hidden, chained and gagged, as a prisoner for you to despoil with regularity. You told any inquiries that he had run away, and since most folk hate the effete, no search was launched. Your torture continued up to a year ago, when the boy had grown enough to try to resist your invasions. So you killed him."
"How ... dost thou know these things? They are all lies," stammered the accused.
"The demon told me when I overcame her. That monster is the ghost of your son. She appears as a woman because her soul has always been so, no matter what her material form was," snarled Stone. "You burned the eyes and stabbed through the ears of your offspring as death overtook her. Then, knowing how ghosts yearn for revenge, you carried the body to the moors in the cover of night. Her ghost, deaf and blind, has been searching for you, for retribution; it kills everyone it comes across in an attempt to achieve it. However, when she can taste the left side of their face and find no identifying scar, she screams in regret - for an innocent life taken, and in frustration that you still live."
"Lies! Lies! All of it!"
The village blacksmith appeared from behind the shack, walking around to the front. In his hands, he held manacles, chains, cloths for gagging, and a torn dress spattered with old blood. Shaking his head at Elijah, he sobbed, "M'lord ... I found all this in the shack out behind the cabin, just like you said I would. It were a dungeon, sir. God, it look't and smelt horrible."
"Just as she told it was," whispered Elijah at Cockrey.
"He ... he was evil. An abomination. He deserved to be punished," blabbered the old hermit. "Ye are a man of the cloth - I can see by the cross hanging from thy wrist! You know that abominations must be punished!"
"I have fought wickedness in more forms than I care to count. I know good from evil. The commandments I follow begin and end with 'Love Thy Neighbor As Thou Wouldst Thyself'. What you acted on was out of pure, magnified hate. That, old man, is the abomination. Your offspring needed thee to love him - her - and got the opposing extreme. You not only tortured and murdered your true daughter, you used the ghost and the murders to drive people through the swamp, for your profit. And now, it is time for an end to it."
The procession was now in the Moors, as it was a rare clear day, though the night was coming soon. As the villagers tied old man Cockrey to a tree in that field, he begged for mercy.
"The horror must come to an end. When the fiend finds you and kills you, she will know her torture is over, her justice accomplished," spoke Elijah Stone in a somber tone. "You remember this tree. For in it, you stuffed the body of your child." Stone reached in through a rotted hole in the tree and pulled out a skull with the neck attached, with burned, charred skin still sticking to the eye sockets. "When you are dead, we shall return and bury your corpse with the swamp-lizards. We shall bury your daughter's bones in the village cemetary."As the procession speedily left the moors - for the sun was setting - they could hear the old man yelling.
"Death! Death comes tonight! O help - there is death in the trees!"
The boy Roger stuck beside Elijah as he trotted with the others back to the village. "You have done a great thing tonight, kind sir - for me, for my loved ones, and for the murdered child."
The knight smiled, sadly. "I suppose so, Stub. Yet, to accomplish it, someone else still has to die. And I can take no personal joy in that."
From afar off, a shrieking, angry laughter was heard. It grew louder and louder, and was soon joined by the maniacal screaming of an old man. As the moon shone and the mists descended on the moors, one could make out a low flying cloudlet with what appeared to be talons extended outward, approaching a great dead tree. The two sounds hit a crescendo, then fell silent. And from then on, the moors remained silent, night after night.
Well, well, well. As that old hermit discovered, your sins will find you out. I have to hand it to the ghost lady; I like her style! Hunts alone, guts and dresses her kills - after she UNdresses them, that is. And the way she used her tongue? She could kiss me with that any day. Oh! Did you hear that shriek? I think I just made one too many jokes at her expense ... now, phantom lady (may I call you phanny?), please, have a sense of humo- OW! Hey, that hurts! Yikes! Gotta run - NOW! -Moan.
THE END
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The Pact
by **Sigh**
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Epoxy.
An appropriately enigmatic name for a downtown bar, set in the basement of a building just east of downtown in Oklahoma City (OKC). This area was known as The Brickyard, an old warehouse district that had been renovated into a hip urban hangout filled with upscale eateries, hopping nightspots, a minor league baseball park, a cineplex, and select apartment dwellings. The Epoxy bar was probably as close to NYC or LA that you could get in this town; full of neon, low lights, some dry ice fog for ambiance, and avant-garde piano music trickling out of the hidden speakers. It catered to adults, especially singles, who wanted to be in a muted, sophisticated atmosphere. There was no cigarette smoke any more, not since a statewide anti-tobacco ordinance took effect a few years ago. Still, to some, it was the place to be.
A man, 30 years old, approached the street entrance of this bar. He was 6’1” and mostly fit, except for a slight paunch developing just at the beltline. A well-groomed mane of brown hair spilled down the sides of his face merging with a tightly tamed beard and mustache. He wore a blue shirt with a tie, sports jacket, slacks, and loafers. And a hidden pistol in a shoulder harness underneath the jacket.
Jack Rockwell, the man in question, smiled at the familiar neon sign. Epoxy was his hangout; he’d met some stunning women here over the past few years. He was not on the hunt tonight though, just killing time until he was to meet his best bud for a late supper at Oscar’s, a steak joint across the street. He glanced around, then descended the steps and walked through the door.
Upon entering, Jack did a quick scan and eval of the room. He couldn’t help it; his years as a detective in the local PD had ingrained this habit into his DNA.
New bartender girl; she looks nervous. Good looking redhead at the bar, drinking wine – that’s attractive – and she’s glued to her phone screen – that’s unattractive. Woozy looking older dude at a near table, with 5 empty shot glasses – he’ll need a ride. Aaaand … a weird-looking hombre sitting at the far table. One glass, nearly full, and he’s not sipping on it. His stare … too much white in the eyes. I’ll need to keep him on my radar.
He chuckled to himself. Damn. Can’t turn my work brain off, even when I’m off work. He bellied up to the counter.
“Hi what’ll it be,” said the thin, slightly hyper girl working the bar. She wore glasses, and her long stringy blonde hair seemed too thin, as if she had unlucky genes or maybe had a habit of pulling on it. Her speech seemed pressurized, as it flowed out of her mouth rapidly without pausing. She smiled, but her forehead and eyes appeared to be permanently wincing.
“A shot of bourbon,” Jack replied. “Just one; I’m meeting up with my best bud later. You’re new here. Got a name?”
“JC. Hey you aren’t a cop by chance or are you?”
“Why do you ask?” Admitting to being on the force was a liability these days, what with all the talk of de-funding the police.
JC evidently took that as a ‘yes’. “You see the creepy guy in the corner at the far table?”
“Don’t look at him. Yeah, I saw him when I came in. What’s he done?”
“Nothing yet he just looks creepy he’s got a stare and he hasn’t touched his martini.”
Jack smiled at her. “You’re pretty dang observant. If you ever stop bartending, you ought to try out detective work. I’m off-duty, but I’ll keep watch.”
“Thanks here’s your bourbon,” she spouted and then left towards another order.
Jack glanced towards the redhead again. My god. She has the sweetest face, the sexiest lips and the curviest bod I’ve seen in a looooong time. If I weren’t meeting Brian tonight, I’d be talking her up to take her home. Well, I would if I could abide her obsession with her cellphone. Disappointing.
Bzzz-bzzz – the vibration was from the cell phone in Jack’s pocket. He looked at the screen to see a text notification; it was from his bud.
Hey, Jack. Sorry you’re having to wait for me. Be there in another 60 minutes. My rideshare left Tulsa half an hour ago.
No prob, Brian. You explained that earlier. Brian had flown into Oklahoma from Pittsburgh earlier today – but to Tulsa, to do some business with a client. He now was coming the last 100 miles via auto to OKC. Hey, we can talk on the phone; it’ll be quicker –
Actually can we just text? Don’t want this Uber guy to overhear the convo. I know, I’m paranoid.
Sure – why didn’t you just rent a car to come?
Rental rates are sky-high – believe it or not, this was cheaper. And I’m already on my way whereas otherwise I’d likely still be at rental counter.
OK. Just can’t wait to meet up with you again. 4 years – way too long. Don’t even know what u look like now.
Jack’s mind went back to high school, just over 10 years ago. Brian had just moved to OKC and was starting his junior year at Kennedy High, just like Jack. The two met in English Lit and bonded together over a love of horror/monster flicks. Brian thought Freddy Krueger was the ultimate slasher while Jack staunchly stuck with Jason Voorhees. Despite this serious disagreement, the two became fast friends.
Over the next 2 years, the best buds did movies, camping and fishing trips, and even family vacations together (Brian went to Nashville with Jack and his family, then Jack returned the favor going to the Florida west coast with Brian’s). They double-dated, shared anguish over cheating girlfriends, and sweated advanced calculus. Jack had never had anyone else in his life before or since who had understood him as Brian did; they had a real soul connection.
After graduation, Brian went to the east coast while Jack stayed in OKC. They saw each other about once a year, and did video calls; but after a while, work schedules and other life pressures just eroded their communication. They promised to keep in touch better, but somehow in the last 4 years neither had contacted the other much more than once yearly for “hey, happy b-day”. So, that promise had been broken.
Then there was the pact. The stupid, embarrassing pact. Jack was now 30 years old, like Brian, and so in a year the pact would be broken also. Good. Good riddance. I can’t believe I proposed that idiotic agreement in the first place, Jack mused.
Hey Jack. U free 2 text some more til I get there?
Sure Bri. ‘bout what?
How’s your love life, dude?
Jack sighed. Ugh. What’s a love life? Since we last really talked, Carrie left me – for an ex-con I put away 8 years ago! So that’s 2 marriages in the garbage now. Now, I do manage to hook up with some fine female specimens – usually find em in the Epoxy bar, where I am rite now. But no one I see that I want to settle with. Been burned too badly. Probly stayin single from now on.
Well, if that’s what you want.
OF COURSE IT’S NOT WHAT I WANT. It’s what I’m left with. This subject is spoiling my mood so I’m turning it on u. How’s YOUR love life.
Not much better I’m afraid. Every – and I mean EVERY – girl I’ve ever dated has friend-zoned me. Been told I’ve got a “beta” personality with a “beta” body. My last 2 relationships were abusive, including one that just ended 4 months ago.
Sorry 2 hear that bud. We’re a couple of sad sacks aren’t we?
Yeah. At this point, we might have to activate THE PACT.
Jack’s blood froze. “Shit!” he said out loud, then returned a text.
You actually remember the pact? I thought u were drunk – thot we BOTH were.
I remember every word of it. Do u?
After a long pause, Jack replied – Yes. Every word. His mind drifted back to that fateful night 12 years ago …
Two friends were laying on the hood of a Ford Mustang parked on the banks of Lake Thunderbird. It was late at night. Both had on prom tuxes – Brian’s was black, Jack’s was baby blue – and both had a couple of beers in them.
“What’s the matter with us?” Jack yelled into the dark sky. “Are we both just colossal losers? I mean, for both our prom dates to ditch us for other guys!”
“OLDER guys,” corrected Brian. “They had to have come from OU, down in Norman. Where're the shitty chaperones when you need them?? How could they just crash our party and take off with the best girls? What a disaster.”
“Maybe it wasn’t a total disaster for you, Bri. Amanda has never treated you well, in my opinion. She believed she was ‘settling’ by being with you; like if a more hunky guy showed interest she’d drop you faster than a greased cue ball.”
“Yeah, I could kind of tell that too. I guess I just stuck with her in hopes she’d one day fall in love once she got to know the real me. But your ex-date was even worse. She never cared about you – just felt entitled to your time and your money. She hated your family and friends – boy did she ever detest me! – and wanted you to ignore us so she could have you to herself.”
“I know, I know. It’s easier to see that now that she’s left. Good God, Bri. At this rate, will we ever find our soul mates? I don’t wanna just sleep around all my life; I want what my mom and dad have. The closest thing to what I desire in a wife is – now, don’t take this the wrong way buddy – YOU. I mean, I’m not gay. But – crap, this isn’t coming out right –“
“I think I feel you, Jack,” laughed Brian. “If you could take my personality and have it in a pretty girl’s body, that’d be ideal, right? Believe it or not, I’ve made that futile wish myself at times – just with you being the chick.”
“No offense buddy, but you’d make a better female than I would. But this is stupid talk.”
“Nah – it’s drastic talk. But you know, if ten years from now I haven’t found my one and only, I’d consider something drastic.”
“We ought to make a pact, just in case,” Jack laughed. If we get to 30, and neither of us has found true love, then one of us gets a sex change and we get married.”
“Ha ha ha! Yeah, that’s a plan! Who gets the surgery?”
“I dunno. We flip a coin.”
“Okay, bro. That’s what we’ll do. It’s a pact then!” chuckled Brian.
“It’s a PACT!!” yelled Jack.
A pithy, throwaway idea, made under the influence of alcohol. It should have been forgotten by the next morning. But Jack never forgot it. In times of dissatisfaction or loneliness, he would fantasize about Brian keeping the pact with him. They would flip a coin, Bri would choose heads but it would come down tails, so he would have to be the woman. A beautiful woman whose soul was as gorgeous as her body. Jack’s perfect match, his perfect mate. Sometimes he let the daydream linger, proceeding to engagement, then marriage, then the honeymoon … oh, the honeymoon …
Jack shook his head. “No, I’m not going there. Not tonight. Not when he’s meeting with me in less than an hour,” he told himself silently.
“Hey Mr. bourbon Mr. police guy,” a voice urgently whispered into Jack’s ear. The bartender. “The creepo’s about to do something and I’m freaking out so stop him.”
Jack shook away the mental cobwebs and looked towards the far back table. The man with the crazy stare was standing up; he was reaching under his jacket towards the back of his belt.
“Drop a bottle – distract him,” Jack fervently hissed at the ‘tender. He then moved away from the bar, headed towards the starer. 40 feet away. Almost there.
But the unbalanced man suddenly broke into a run towards the front of the bar, passing only ten feet in front of Jack on his way there. Jack pulled his pistol. “POLICE! FREEZE, OR I’LL SHOOT!”
The man didn’t freeze. Instead he arrived at the bar and grabbed the cell-phone-obsessed redhead around the neck; he pulled his own pistol out and pointed it at her temple. “DROP YER GUN, PIG COP! OR I’LL SPLATTER HER BRAINS ALL OVER!”
Jack put his free hand up in a “stop” gesture. “Whoa, man. Just calm down.”
“I SAID, DROP. YOUR. GUN!!!” The lunatic’s thumb cocked the hammer on his piece.
“Okay! Okay. I’m putting it down, see? Just work with me here. No one has to get hurt.” He carefully lowered his gun to the floor.
“Everyone put their cash and purses into this bag,” snarled the man. “If I don’t see enough here, I’ll shoot!” He produced a large trash bag, and most of the people in the place started to slowly comply.
“Girl behind the bar – empty the till in there!” Shaking and sniffling, she opened the cash drawer and poured it in.
Satisfied – or antsy, or both – the man grabbed the sack and began sidestepping towards the exit, dragging the shrieking redhead with him. “You’re coming with me as an insurance policy, bitch. The cops won’t shoot with you as my shield.”
The redhead and bartender both looked in Jack’s direction with pleading eyes.
Jack squinted a glance at the maniac. “You’re a damn idiot. Badass? Yes. But smart? No. You are the dumbest shithead I’ve seen all year.”
The maniac’s stare grew even wider. “That’s not the thing to say to THE MAN WITH THE GUN.”
“She’s not a shield, moron. She’s a whore, a high-end prostitute. Anyone with a lick of sense can look at her and see that. Hell, if they shoot at you they get two scumbags for the price of one. If you had any brain at all you’d choose a different hostage. Me. I’m a cop. They won’t dare fire a bullet if there’s a chance they’ll hit me.” He took off his jacket and his shoulder harness and put both hands in the air. “Don’t be a dumbass. Take me and let her go.”
The crook stood still for a few seconds as his mental gears ground slowly; the only sounds besides the music were the sobbing of the barkeep and the ginger hostage. Suddenly the man released the auburn-haired girl and shoved her away. He pointed his weapon at Jack as he briskly walked up to him. “You wanna be a hero, huh? Well after we’re safely gone, I’m going to make you suffer for all the shit cops have ever put me through. You’ll beg for death,” he half snarled/smiled. He held the gun to the back of Jack’s head as they walked to the exit.
“Sure wish that someone had dropped a bottle,” Jack sighed loudly.
Something clicked in bartender girl’s brain, and she grabbed the half-empty bottle of bourbon and heaved it with all her strength into the huge mirror behind the bar, diving to the floor as she did so. The CRASH was so loud the crazy man pointed his pistol in that general direction and fired.
Jack moved quicker than hot mercury. He grabbed the lunatic’s pistol arm and kept it extended, pointing it towards the ceiling as the criminal pulled the trigger over and over. The cop then pulled that arm down, hitting the wrist on a table edge; the gun came out of the hand and hit the floor. The would-be robber hit the floor also, on his back. Jack landed butt-first on the man’s chest and began whaling away with his fists on his foe’s head until the man was unconscious.
The commanding officer at the crime scene shook his head and laughed. “That sounds like the full story; all the other witnesses corroborate it. Boy, Jack. Don’t you know that it’s your night off?”
“Yeah, yeah. Trouble follows me like cats chasing a tuna truck,” Jack sneered. “Hey, if we’re done, I need to talk to two ladies over there.”
“Hey, JC,” the detective yelled. “Thank you. You saved my life by smashing that mirror.”
“There were like at least 15 more shots in that bourbon bottle I threw so I expect you to recompense me for each one just kidding,” she nervously laughed.
Jack next walked towards the Redheaded Cell Phone Woman, who was just ending her report to the police present. “Are you okay, ma’am? Were you hurt?”
“Not physically.” She sniffed, and dabbed a kleenex at her eyes. “but you called me –“
“A whore, a high-end prostitute. I am so, so sorry. I had to get that creep to release you, and that’s the first thing that came to mind. You don’t have anything close to the appearance of a prostitute. Will you please forgive me?”
The girl smiled. “I might … if you take me out to dinner sometime.”
Jack began to politely decline. Nope. I don’t need failed marriage #3. But there was something intriguing about this girl, and he couldn’t put his finger on it.
Bzzz-bzzz went his phone. He pulled it out. A text from Brian again. Brian! In all the hullaballoo he’d forgotten about the dinner at Oscar’s! I need to get there pronto.
Jack turned towards the redhead. “Hey, I’m sorry but I’ve got to go –“ he bit his tongue. The girl was engrossed in her cell screen once more. Okay. I just need to leave.
Bzzz-bzzz! Brian again. Jack looked at the screen, expecting a frustrated “where are you”. Instead, it read:
You were so awesome just now. Taking down that crook.
Jack did a double-take. He examined the screen again. Yes, that text was from Brian.
Saving my life! Even though you did call me a whore.
Jack’s chin hit the floor. He looked towards the redhead. She was waving at him.
“Hi, Jack. It’s me, Brianna. I'm here to fulfill the pact.”
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![]() Trans. Plant. Heart. Chapter 1
by **Sigh**
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Bambi Johnson argued with her thoughts as she paced in her one bedroom apartment. Really, it was just one room with a tiny bathroom housing a mini sink, toilet, and stand up shower. The bed area was separated from the kitchenette by a ledge that really couldn’t be called a bar. It was close to her work; in fact, downstairs was the phone bank where Fish ran the escort service.
“But if I quit, where will I live? Fish and Mamie will kick me out. Go back home? HA. ‘Hi Mom and Dad, guess what? No, no, I still want to be a girl. Yes, I still have my penis and testicles. Still can’t figure out the surprise? I’ve been a whore for the last two years! Yep, slept with over four hundred men — and at least twenty women — since I last saw you guys! By the way, is my old bedroom still available?’ … THAT ought to win them over.”
I could go solo.
“Not without a place to live. And a pimp. That would be like going from the frying pan to the fire.”
Then I’ll go legit. Get a regular job. Get two. I know how to work my tail off. I’ll bring in enough to get by.
“Yeah — and where will I live until the first month’s paycheck comes?”
Then … then … then I’m screwed.
“Yeah. Some nights, multiple times. I’m trapped here. I literally have no way out. Unless …”
She thought of the revolver in Fish’s desk drawer.
“No. NO! Never. Never.”
Well … not yet, anyway. But if things can’t get any better ...
Bambi shook to realize she was actually considering it.
Levi “Fish” Morgenstern was apoplectic. If verbally abusing a cell phone were a crime, what he was doing would get him locked up for months.
“You WHAT? How did … HOW DID YOU FUCKIN’ BREAK YOUR FUCKIN’ LEG? Put the fuckin’ doctor on the phone!!”
Bambi plodded down the stairs into the phone bank room. “Fish … you really have to expand your vocabulary.”
He looked up at his boarder. “Fuck you, Bamb.”
“See what I mean, Boss?” She then walked outside to check the mail.
“Don’t screw with me right now, Dickgirl. I gotta crisis here.”
A voice came through the cell phone. “This is Julie, ER Charge Nurse. Doctor Rajesh is in an emergency right now. How can I help you?”
“Yeah, Levi Morgenstern here. You got one of my esco —er, extremely good friends in there right now, Sherryl Phlost. I understand her leg is broke?”
Julie’s voice was distant, talking to someone else; then she came back on. “Okay, sorry, I just had to confirm with the patient that she allows me to give you medical information. Yes, her femur — her thigh bone — was broken in an automobile accident.”
“Okay. So, how long will it take to get a cast on and get her out of there? Will she have to be on crutches? Can she still … um … be sexually active?”
There was a long pause. “You said … you’re her friend? As in boyfriend?”
“Yeah, sure. Whatever. That’s me. So?”
“Sir … she’s going to be in surgery in an hour. This is not a simple fracture. The bone was crushed into multiple shards. This is serious, even potentially life threatening; she won’t be leaving the hospital this week.”
“FUCK! I need to fuckin’ find somebody else then…”
“Wha — Excuse me, sir? You need to get here and be with your girlfriend!”
Bambi walked back in with the mail, filing through the bills.
“Later, Nursie. G’bye.”
He pushed the end call button and looked up at Bambi with panicked eyes. “We are so fucked.”
The view from the executive suite at The Venetian was one of the better ones on the Las Vegas strip. But Grant wasn’t enjoying it. The spectacular perks of being well off did little to fill the void in his heart. Was this endeavor going to help?
I desperately hope so. But I can’t get my hopes up too high. That will almost guarantee disappointment. I’ve tried most everything else I can think of; I might as well try this. If it doesn’t help, there’s always booze. Or a bullet.
The bedside phone buzzing broke his sad mulling.
“Hello?”
Bambi watched Levi’s legs shake and fingers tap nervously as he attempted to be a cool cucumber on the phone. At least this little drama was taking her mind off her troubles temporarily.
“Ah, yes. Mr. B? Grant B, at the Venetian? We have had a slight hiccup in trying to fill your request. You called last week to book Cherry for tonight - yes, sir, she does have very high ratings on our online site … yes sir, she is our top requested escort, but - sir, I hate to interrupt, but there has been a terrible automobile accident, and she is in surgery as we speak.”
Bambi’s jaw dropped. That’s who had the broken leg? Sherryl? In the hospital? In surgery?
“Yes sir. I will let her know you are praying for her. Will you be in town tomorrow, sir? I know I could find you an excellent replacement … oh. Just tonight? No, sir, I’m sorry.”
A handwritten note was dropped on the desk in front of Levi — “WHICH HOSPITAL??” He looked up at Bambi’s face. Her brow was knit in worry. “Valley,” he mouthed at her. She ran out the door as he concentrated back on the phone.
“I’m sorry sir; it’s Valentine’s Day, and on top of that there are three huge conventions in town. I’m afraid all of the she-male escorts that fit the requirements you are looking for are already on assignment. I’ll bet you’ll find that is true with all the other services around.” Levi said that last part with his fingers crossed.
“Yes, sir.” Now Fish looked like he was about to cry. “We will refund your two thousand dollar deposit, first thing Monday. Monday, yes. What? Tonight? But, sir … sir. Look. Let me see if I can pull another of our stars off of assignment. If I can’t have one over there in an hour, I’ll get your deposit to you in hopes that you will consider us in the future.”
Bambi got off of her scooter in the Valley Hospital Medical Center parking lot and ran in. Arriving in the surgery waiting area, she went to the candy striper at the desk.
“Actually, Ms. Phlost is still in the pre-surgical holding area, waiting for the next operating room to open up. Would you like to stay with her until it’s time? And oh - are you part of her family?”
“For all intents and purposes, yes.”
Sherryl Phlost — Cherry Popp, professionally — lay on her gurney, still grimacing in spite of the pain shot she’d gotten. The curtain shielding her from the other patients opened.
“Hey — Bamb! You came to see me! How sweet.”
“Oh, Sherryl. Are you all right? What happened?”
“I pissed myself up royally this time. I’m gonna be here for a week, then in rehab for at least three more. That’s if everything goes smoothly! And I won’t be off of crutches for a while longer. But knowing Vegas, there’s probably a John out there who gets off on that.”
“How have they handled your gender issue? Everyone here seems to be referring to you as a woman.”
“Well they sure as hell ought to. All my records now say ‘female’. But it’s amazing; they must run into trannies all the time. In the ER, the nurse went to put a catheter in me, took my panties down, and without batting an eye grabbed my prick and shoved the tube in!”
“Sherryl — I know you and I aren’t the best of friends. But I want you to know; I care about you, as a fellow trans-woman, and as a coworker. I pray this goes smoothly and that you get well quick.”
“Yeah, I guess I haven’t treated you very humanely at work. I just want you to know, it’s not because I see you as competition for my clients.”
“Okay …”
“Because you aren’t. You aren’t competitive compared to me. In looks, in online reviews —“
“How do you know? Nobody ever gives me reviews on our website.”
“Honey. That’s because your reviews suck. That’s the only reason Fish won’t put them up.”
Bambi teared up angrily. “Blast it, Sherryl! I came over to help! Be nice to me for once, huh?”
The injured T-girl shook her head. “I could be nice, but that wouldn’t help you. Honey, get out of the escort business. You’re no good at it. And it’s eating you up. You’ve changed in the last two years; I’m worried I’m gonna see you hanging from a rope one morning. Don’t tell me you haven’t thought about ending it all. I see it in your face.”
“I’ve never thought about anything like that,” Bambi lied. “You’re delirious.”
“Yeah, well, they aren’t giving me near enough pain medicine to make me loopy, much less get me out of pain. Dammit,” Sherryl flopped her head back on the small pillow, “I had a whale lined up for tonight, too.”
“That’s what I’m here to talk to you two about,” whispered a mouth and big nose pushing through the gap in the curtain.
“Ah, Fishy,” sighed Sherryl with a roll of her eyes. “How nice to know you care about me.”
“Hey, I had to come; SEEING AS I’M YOUR BOYFRIEND, AND ALL,” Fish emphasized for anyone around to hear. “Besides, I knew Bamb had come here, and I need to talk to her about being ‘Jonah’ for said whale.”
Sherryl gave him a smirk. “Wonder what your wife will think about you sayin’ you’re my boyfriend.”
“Fu … funny girl,” he caught himself. “Mamie knows I pose as a John for you guys at times to do things — like getting me allowed back here to talk to you two.”
“Boss — what about the whale guy?” Bambi queried.
Fish eyed her. “This John is disappointed. He reserved Cherry tonight, for the whole night. Called a few weeks ago to set it up; was very exact. He wanted a T-girl, pretty with a nice body, who was empathetic and a good listener. Those four things specifically. Now I need a replacement, and every tranny I got is already out on assignment. Except you, Bambs.”
“Fish. Is it really wise to send her out to a guy with such high expectations?” muttered Sherryl under her breath.
Bambi was feeling even more unappreciated than usual. “You don’t think I meet those requirements, ‘Cherry’? Well, Fish must, if he’s asking me. You think I’ve got a pretty body, right, Boss?”
Fish looked her up and down. He sighed. “I hope you’re a good listener.”
Maybe at a younger age — say, even six months ago — Bambi would have flashed with anger at this treatment. But her battered ego could not muster the strength tonight. With hollow eyes streaming tears, she whispered, “Where’s the address?”
Once she had all necessary information, she readied to leave. “Sherryl, have a good operation. See you back at the place, Fish.” As she left the pre-op holding area, she breathed “And may you both rot in hell.”
Bambi got back to the two-story building she called home and work. Mamie was at the phone bank. As the young escort climbed the stairs, her female boss yelled out to her.
“Fish called me about what’s happening. Bam-Bam, this is a super high roller — and we want his return business. Be classy. Don’t screw this up for us.”
“I won’t let you down, Mamie.” And thanks, I love you too.
She picked out her classiest duds — thank heaven I haven’t gained weight since I bought this; I finally get to use it — and put them on. A pink and black accented business outfit that had a generous neckline plunge and a skirt that came to the knees but had a high cut on the side. After getting that on, she completed her look with a layer that would help her go more “incognito”.
Her boss had called a cab for her, and it had already honked. The meter was now running, and any further delay would cause Mamie’s shrill voice to start honking, too. Bambi ran down the stairs and out the door, into the back seat of the yellow Lincoln.
On the way over, Bambi considered the words spoken to her today. She would like to write them off to just pure meanness by a competitive Cherry and a loutish Fish, but she knew better. She did a rapid self-evaluation.
Five foot ten inches — not too tall, but I could be shorter. My biggest problem is my shape. I have a straight tube for a torso; hormones haven’t done a thing for my hips or butt, not noticeably anyway. My two breast implants look like alien tumors — thanks for nothing, Dr. Wells — protruding out of my barrel chest — thank you, Dad’s genes. My face is a lump of dough with a masculine jaw. What was really depressing was the FFS consultation with Doc Wells. When he showed me the computer model of what my best result could be, even with multiple surgeries — God, what a letdown. I know I’ll never be Elle MacPherson, but I’d at least take looking like Ricki Lake; what he showed me looked like Al Franken in drag. Let’s face it: I’ll always be ugly, and I’ll never be a great passer.
The hormones have made it difficult to use my penis; I can’t get it hard enough anymore, even with high dose Viagra. Kind of limits my usefulness as a she-male whore. I can do a great blowjob, though. Ah, the blowjob. Where would ugly chicks be without it? Guys can just close their eyes and dream of Kim K. while the crypt keeper could be down below, and it works.
The entrance to the Venetian was massive; the lobby itself seemed at least thirty feet tall. The influx of traffic from the airport had slowed down, as it was 10 p.m. Bambi’s cab was able to pull up to the lane closest to the entrance.
Her heart was beating faster than George Kollias’ drum kit when she got out of the cab. She rarely got sent to the five star resorts, and this was her first time to step foot in this one.
God … I’m usually lucky to rate the Riviera or Circus Circus. I’ve spent so many hours at Motel 6 I should get a frequent flyer discount. What the hell am I doing here? Sherryl was right; on our menu, I’m the liver with onions, not the prime rib. What if this guy is, like, a kinky foreign billionaire who wants me to mate with his Great Dane? Or some guy attached to the Mob? I should no-show.
Right. Riiiiight. And then guarantee that I’ll be homeless by midnight once Mamie hears. Okay. Time to “suck it up” and go in to “suck it down”. Crap. Fish’s pistol is sounding more attractive by the minute.
It was mid-February; winter was still not completely gone, weather-wise. The air was cool tonight, at least for Vegas. That gave her a good reason to wear a full-length black trench coat, which in the summer would scream “hooker”. She probably still would get “read” as such by the hotel staff, just not as obvious to out-of-towners. She had worn understated makeup, big sunglasses, gloves, black hose and heels. Originally she’d put her blonde hair back in a conservative bun, then thought better of it and let it down; full exposure of her neck and jawline could enable her to be more easily “read” as a transsexual, which would be potentially worse than the hooker label.
She walked up to the registration desk as instructed. This would be the first time she would have to use her “first class” fake ID.
“I’m Lenorah Scott,” said Bambi, showing the card to the clerk. “Mr. Brisbane in the Executive Suites is expecting me.”
“Yes, Ms. Scott. Mr. Brisbane called us regarding you. We just were notified about Ms. Phlost’s cancellation.” The clerk was so casual. He obviously knew what was going on, but treated it as business as usual. Hotels want to keep their whales happy, too. “Here’s a key card; you’ll need it to activate the elevator to gain access to the top floors, as well as to get in the room. Will you be going directly to the suite, I assume?”
“Yes.” I realize you’ve got to ask me that question, but we both know I’m not here to visit your Starbucks.
“Elevators are through the casino, in that far hallway. I’ll call ahead to inform Mr. Brisbane of your impending arrival. Enjoy your stay.”
Bambi walked through the casino area as sophisticated as she could. Since she was a bundle of nerves in this place, she was sure that she stuck out like a sore thumb, though no one shot her an apparent frown or sneer. It’s probably so obvious that I’m out of my element here.
She arrived at the top floor. The hallways were elegant. Good Lord, this is even fancier than the lobby — and the lobby looked like Windsor Castle on steroids. The suite she arrived at was the corner one. Of course. Okay, final instructions were to knock five times and let myself in. Here I go.
As she opened the door, she saw a tall, broad, rugged man standing just on the other side. He was dressed formally in a three piece suit with a thin black tie. His mustachioed face wore a scowl that belied his happy curly hair, and his arms were crossed. Bambi swallowed hard.
“Uh … Mr. Brisbane? I’m — “
“Not what he was expecting,” he interrupted. “I’m Jace Carter, Mr. Brisbane’s personal assistant / bodyguard. You can’t see him until I clear you. Take off the coat and give it to me.”
Bambi was mute and open-mouthed, still unsure as whether to comply or to turn and run from this hulking, malevolent figure.
“Jace!” A hoarse voice barked from beyond the small atrium they were standing in.
The curly coiffed man jumped slightly at the rebuke, and his countenance immediately changed. As if someone had pushed a button at the back of his skull labeled “ACTIVATE HUMAN PERSONALITY”, he now spoke in velvet tones. “Forgive me, madam. I just need to screen you for weapons; can’t be too careful these days, you know.”
Bambi took off her coat and held it out to Mr. Curlyhead. He took out an electric wand — one she’d seen used before by airport screeners — and “wanded” the coat up and down. It squawked, but closer inspection revealed only pocket change as the offending substance. He then had Bambi hold her arms straight out to her side and he “wanded” her, too. She passed.
He leaned forward, placing his mouth near Bambi’s ear. “I’m not a fan of hookers, much less tranny ones,” he whispered. “I don’t like what’s going down here. But he’s the boss. And if you so much as leave a scratch on him, or steal from him, I’ll make it my life’s aim to inflict suffering and pain on your hide. Is that clear?”
“Crystal clear,” quivered the young blonde.
“Here’s your coat back,” he said back in his normal volume. “Mr. B, I’m going to be in the bedroom at the far side of the suite, as you instructed. I’ll have the hot box on; if you need me, just press the button, sir. Goodnight.” With that, he turned and walked briskly to the left. With his huge mass no longer obstructing her view, Bambi beheld the presidential suite.
“Mr. Brisbane? Lenorah Scott. I …”
She was once again made speechless, this time by the glory of the setting. The whole opposite wall was floor to ceiling glass panels, with a postcard nighttime view of the strip. The lights were off except for some moody glow from selected lamps. A fire was burning in the fireplace — this has a fireplace!? — and soft jazzy music was playing in the ceiling speakers.
My God. I have never seen a room like this. Wait, yes I have. “Pretty Woman”. Now, if I only looked like Julia Roberts. Maybe he’ll look like Richard Gere? Hope not, or they’ll be calling 911 to revive me.
“Mr. Brisbane? Ah … I … I believe you’re expecting me?” Where is he? Good grief, how many rooms are in this hotel room?
“In here, Ms. Scott. The bar area, to your right. I took the liberty of pouring some wine for us. Come, please, have a seat.”
Sitting on the couch by the wet bar, fully clothed in an immaculate grey wool suit and blue silk tie, was a middle-aged man. He was thin and extremely well groomed, as if ready for a board of directors meeting. Shined leather shoes and a gold watch completed his look — at least from the neck down. A pleasant but tired smile creased his face, and eyes with bags that seemed older than the rest of his features scanned Bambi up and down.
“Forgive me for not rising to meet you. I’m starting to feel particularly tired tonight. Please, come over here into the light where I can see you. Take a seat, and have some wine.”
Bambi took her coat off and came to sit. “I’m just twenty. I’m going to decline the wine. We probably should break as few laws as possible, for both our sakes.”
Brisbane’s smile had vanished. He was getting a good look at Bambi.
“Mr. Morgenstern told me he was getting another one of their ‘stars’… I don’t recognize you from the website.”
“I’m … not one of the featured escorts. But I have been with them for two years.”
He remained unsmiling. He sighed, and looked more and more disgruntled each second.
Bambi’s ego was getting flatter and flatter. “You look disappointed.”
“Forgive me. I just was expecting … hoping for … someone who appeared, well, more truly female.”
She gazed at the floor in hot embarrassment. “I know you said you were looking for someone pretty, a good body, empathetic, and a good listener. I can meet some of those requirements. I’m not the best. I’m what was left. And tonight, I’m pretty much what you’ve got available, if you still want someone all night. If that is unacceptable, then I can leave, and I’m told you can get a partial refund. Since Mr. Morgenstern did make an honest attempt at a replacement, he’s told me to tell you that it would only be a 50% return.”
The suited man became suddenly angry. “That … that snake! That lying, cheating, unprofessional … I knew it. I’ve never done anything like this before, and I was too embarrassed to have someone else with more experience arrange it for me. So I spend all this money and get not a transsexual, but an obvious gay drag queen! What an idiot I’ve been. Just leave, please, sir. And tell Morgenstern that I’m coming after him with lawyers.”
Bambi got up, crying, crushed. The words he said bounced over and over in her ears.
“Gay drag queen … hoping for someone more female … sir.”
Sir. Sir! SIR.
Something then snapped in Bambi’s soul. Her ego, shredded to bits, started oozing pure fire.
“Okay, Mr. Brisbane. Just realize that what you’re doing there affects more than just you and him. I’m probably going to be fired and then homeless because of my failure here tonight. But that’s no consequence to you; I’m just a slutty whore, right? Well, just know this: I may be as ugly as sin, but in my heart, I am a woman. Not a gay drag queen. A woman! I have done this shit for two years to try to complete my journey to womanhood, and I have nothing to show for it except an asshole with 100,000 miles on it, and a body that has all the sexiness of a tube of toothpaste. I am a failure on so many levels. I’ve failed at life, basically. But I am NOT a man. I AM A WOMAN — in here,” pointing to her heart, “and in here!” — pointing to her head.
“A transsexual woman, but a woman nonetheless. NOT a gay male. No matter what you or anyone else says. I have nothing else in life, but dammit, I have that truth. Do you understand what I’m saying?”
Brisbane sat silent, staring intently at her.
Bambi was now in a flood of tears. “Answer me, dammit! Yes or no? DO YOU UNDERSTAND?”
“Yes. Yes, madam. I understand, and I believe you,” he said in a low, steady tone.
“Peachy.” She grabbed her coat and stepped towards the door. Fish’s pistol, here I come.
“Madam? Lenorah! Please — wait.”
She turned to him one last time. “As dear ‘Mr. Morgenstern’ says to me daily: fuck you.”
“BAMBI — please don’t leave!”
She froze. Then without moving a muscle to even look his direction, she choked out a question.
“Who — How do you know my name?”
“Please, please don’t leave. I apologize. I’ve been a monster — I was so wrapped up in my own feelings that I’ve hurt you. Please forgive me, and please come sit back down,” Grant Brisbane pled.
The woman with her hand on the doorknob and ready to leave refused to meet his eyes, instead staring straight at the door. “Why? I obviously disgust you. And you referring to me as a man disgusts me right back. So I think I should leave. But before I do, I repeat my question. The agency told you to expect me as Lenorah Scott. How do you know my other name - Bambi?”
“If you just come sit back down, I’ll tell you all you want to know. I’ll make it worth your while. But please do not leave — for my sake.”
That made her spin back around. Her mascara was a mess, dripping down her cheeks from her angry, hurt eyes. “For your sake? My God, what are you, bipolar? You just got through telling me to leave! For your sake? Look at this place! You’re obviously loaded. Just buy ten hot girls to spend the whole night pleasuring you — or each other, while you watch. What could I ever do ‘for your sake’ that couldn’t be done a hundred times better by some other hooker, straight or tranny?
“Unless …” she mumbled with a look of discovery, “unless this is part of what you like to do! Are you a kink? The kind that gets off on humiliation of his women, breaking them down? If so, you should know: I’m not into that BDSM stuff, even verbally. So. I’m still looking for a good reason why I should stay.”
Grant was now leaning forward, elbows on his knees, hands cradling his tired head. “Because … I’m dying. I don’t know how much longer I’ve got to live. And I need someone like you. I misjudged you before, and jumped to conclusions. Again, I am so sorry. Please don’t leave. Please stay and help me.”
The room fell silent. While Grant wearily held his head, eyes gazing at his feet, Bambi pondered this revelation.
“Like, are you dying right now? Do I need to call 911?”
“No. I’m not about to die right this second — at least, I don’t think so. I’ve been getting sicker over the last few years; the last 3 months, much more noticeably so. And before we leave the subject; what you just said a minute ago, about you being a woman … I see that I was horribly wrong to call you a drag queen, and sir instead of madam. You indeed have the soul of a woman, and that’s the most important thing I was looking for in my companion tonight.”
Bambi was no longer so angry, but was definitely confused. “Ah … okay. You know, most people call an escort for — ”
“Sex. Yes. I’m quite aware of that,” he said. “But that’s not what I am wanting. Well actually, I would love to have sex, but my heart is too weak for that; the strain could damage it further, and shorten my life. That doesn’t mean I don’t wish I could, though.”
“What were you wanting tonight, then? Perhaps, a striptease?”
“No. Nothing stimulating. I need … touch. Companionship. Someone to listen to me as I talk, and at least show a modicum of interest. A woman to sleep next to me, press her warm body next to mine, and stay there.”
“A woman with a penis?”
“No. Not necessarily. In fact, I prefer my women to have vaginas.”
“So. You wanted a feminine presence, someone to talk to, someone to listen, and lie with you all night, and you don’t necessarily want her to have a penis, and you’re not planning on intercourse. Not even a blowjob or hand job. Is there a reason you called a she-male escort service instead of a regular one?”
“Yes, madam. Empathy.”
“You wanted a transsexual … to feel sorry for you?”
Grant looked a little irritated at that. “Not sympathy; empathy. The capacity to understand another person’s feelings. Gracious, just explaining all this is tiring me out. I’m having a bad night with my heart failure; I’m getting weaker with just talking, and in dealing with the emotion of the last fifteen minutes.”
“You called a tranny escort service … looking for empathy … ‘cause they’d understand how you feel,” - Bambi was mumbling, trying to figure out what he was hinting at.
Her eyes widened as the truth became slowly but definitely obvious.
“Mr. Brisbane — have you ever wished you were born female?”
He smiled a tired smile. “Many times, my dear.”
“So … you will stay?”
Bambi actually smiled a little. He wants someone to connect to, someone who knows the hell of growing up in a body you grow to hate; who knows the potential for shame and rejection; someone to commiserate with.
I think I’m better suited for this assignment than any I’ve ever been on.
“Yes, I will, Mr. Brisbane.”
“Please, call me Grant.” He was breathing was a little labored. “Excuse me, but I must take at least a short nap, on my oxygen. I am almost totally worn out. Can you help me to the bedroom?”
Good God - he's looking paler and weaker by the second, she thought.
She took his hands and aided him in getting to a standing position, then walked beside him, supporting his back as they stepped. When they got to the bed, he sat down on the side, then tried to pivot so as to lay down on the pillow; being so weak, he ended up with his torso on the mattress and his legs (all of the right, and part of the left) still hanging off the side. She grabbed his legs and gently lifted them onto the mattress, then took his Oxford wingtip shoes off and put them against the wall.
He looked exhausted, and was really breathing hard now. Bambi’s gut was tied in twenty knots. She had handled so many freaky situations — young studs, fat sweaty slobs, and perverts with custom made “toys” — but she’d never dealt with someone who looked so … frail. If he starts looking any worse, then I’m calling 911, lost fee or not.
“I’ll be … fine; just … hand me my oxygen tube,” he said as if sensing her thoughts.
There was a green metal cylinder next to the bed, with some sort of meter device attached on top and clear tubing wound around it. She unwound the tube and handed it to him.
“Thank you … please … turn it on … to level 2.”
Oh God. Great. How do I do that? She looked at the tank. There was a gauge on top; no buttons … to the side and under the gauge there was a green cap — wait, it was a knob! She carefully twisted it — lefty, loosey — and heard a hiss of air flowing as it activated. The gauge had numbers ranging from 0 to 6, and the needle was sitting just below 1, so she kept twisting until it reached 2.
“There! Is that helping? I think I did it right,” she hoped; but upon looking at him again, he was weakly — and unsuccessfully — trying to attach the tube to his face.
“Grant, let me try to get it on you.” She picked up the end of the tube. It was a loop, about a foot in diameter, with two tiny prongs sticking out at the farthest point. Now how the heck does this go? She felt the oxygen coming out of the ends of the prongs. “Do these little things go …?”
“In … my nose,” he croaked.
She took them and put them to where one was blowing in each of his nostrils. But how do I get them to stay there? After looking at it, she thought she might have figured it out. She spread the loop into an oblong shape and hooked it around the backs of his ears; then fit the bottom under his chin.
“That’s … correct … Thank you.”
His shoulders slumped and his head tilted slightly to the side as he went limp except for the movement of labored breathing. Bambi thought she had never seen someone look so overwhelmingly exhausted.
“Hey, Mr. Brisbane,” she whispered, “you doing any better?”
This time, he gave no response; just continued breathing heavily.
“Mr. B? Grant? Can you hear me? Are you OK?” Oh no — he’s not responding! Where’s the phone —
Then she noticed a little metal chain around his collar — not jewelry, but more like a military dog tag chain. She tugged on it, and sure enough — there was one of those “emergency alert” boxes with a button on it. It emerged from its hiding place behind his vest, outside of his shirt. She pressed the button. Now, aren’t the ambulances supposed to come?
Instead within 30 seconds curly-haired Jace came bounding into the room, in a T-shirt, sweat pants, and sandals. He was holding a huge handgun.
“Okay, Missy. Back away from him, and get against the wall.” He then looked at his boss in the bed. “My God — what the hell happened? What did you do? I told you, if you’ve hurt him —”
“I haven’t done anything but walk him to the bed and help him in! He said he’s having a bad spell, or something. Please point that thing somewhere else,” she said while motioning to Jace’s pistol.
The bodyguard was now down on his knees with an ear to Grant’s chest. Then he stood up. “So — he didn’t exert himself? You didn’t stimulate him at all? Did he get emotional?”
“Just barely, but really he started looking more and more tired from the first minute I saw him. Where the hell are the EMT’s? I pushed his button!”
“That’s the button he uses to call me,” Jace said. “And he doesn’t want EMT’s. No ambulances, no emergency room trips. Unless they finally find a matching heart donor. But if they don’t — and they probably won’t, not in time, anyway — then my instructions are to allow him to die in peace, with medicine to dull the pain and the shortness of breath. He’s made me his medical power of attorney, and I will follow his wishes.”
“Wait — you aren’t going to help him?”
Jace snarled back at her. “There’s nothing more we can do to help! He’s already on the maximum medicine dosages, had all the available procedures, and seen the best specialists. They say his prognosis is supposed to be less than six months. We just got him signed up on hospice. He’s told me that if he does die, he wants no CPR, no chest shocks, and definitely no machines to artificially keep him alive. He’s had these bad spells before. So far, he’s always come through them eventually, but one of these days he’s not going to.
“About all I can do now is wait here with him through the night, and hope he once more will recover with rest and oxygen. I’ll take care of it from here. You go back to your red light district.”
Jace pulled up a chair and sat down next to the bed. He mumbled a quick prayer under his breath, all the while never taking his eyes off the heaving chest and tired face of the man lying there. He listened for Bambi’s leaving footsteps, but heard none. Glancing to the side, he saw her still there.
“Hey, hooker — your pimp has been pre-paid for your ‘services’. And I’m not giving you a tip. So leave already — don’t force me to drag you to the door and throw you out.”
She ignored the threat. “Hey, Curly-top. All you’re going to do is just sit there beside him? And if he dies, all you’ll do is keep him comfortable?”
“His wishes, not mine. And I intend to honor them.”
“Well, heck! If that’s all he wants, then I can do that. And I can give him some of what he asked me for, too — contact, companionship, someone to empathize with him — and do it with a woman’s touch. I understand him in a way I’ll bet you don’t.”
Jace looked at her with irritation on his face. “I’m his caregiver. I know he likes to dress up in ladies’ things now and then; I don’t get it, but I don’t judge him for it either. His secrets will remain secret with me. You’re just someone who’s pretending to care so you can get your money.”
Bambi persisted. “And you’re telling me you don’t get a salary, Mr. Bodyguard? Listen, I could just leave now and claim my share of the fee he’s paid. But like you said, when it comes to wanting to be like a woman, you don’t get it. And I do. Let me give him the gift of camaraderie, of someone who knows how he’s felt. Even if — especially if — it’s his last hours. I promise I won’t hurt him.”
Jace stood to face her. “The only way I’d allow that is if I heard from his lips that it was what he wanted,” he growled. “And I’m not going to wake —”
“It’s what … I want,” came a weak but firm voice from the bed.
The bodyguard and the call girl abruptly stopped and looked at their employer. Grant was still lying limp, but his breathing seemed a little more even and less strained. He looked at both of them through partially open eyes.
With perplexion wrinkling his brow, Jace once again spoke in his submissive, velvet servant’s voice. “Yes, sir. Madam, if he needs any medicine for pain or problems breathing, press the alert button once more. I give you my leave.” He walked away briskly back to his room, pistol in hand.
Grant spoke again, this time to Bambi. “You’re more intelligent … than you let on, my dear … ‘camaraderie’ is a quite … sophisticated word; ... I’m starting … to feel a little better.”
She sighed in relief and sat down on the chair next to the bed, as he shut his lids and relaxed. He then opened one eye, and winked at her before closing it again.
“Are you going to be okay?” — she whispered with concern, and put her fingertips to his.
“Give me … thirty minutes … I should be fine … as long as … you hold on to my hand.”
Bambi sat and stroked his hand and arm as he fell into exhausted sleep.
To be continued this evening.
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
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**Sigh**
"Bambi, why would you say that? You're 'living the dream', so to speak."
She looked up at him with tear-striped cheeks. "I'm living a nightmare!
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Chapter 2
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Grant Brisbane opened his eyes to see Bambi Johnson looking at him, at first with worry but then transforming into relief.
“You’re awake! Finally — that was no thirty minutes, buster. You slept for two hours. Are you feeling any better?”
“Much, actually. No longer short of breath. Still very tired though.”
“Boy, did you have me worried. I’ve never been around a dying man before. That is what you said is happening to you, right?”
“Yes, unfortunately.”
She continued to stroke his right hand with both her hands. “I know you paid to have me with you all night. But I’m worried about you; you look so weak, still. I feel like I’m cheating you by not doing more, but you don’t look up to it.”
“Remember, I said I wanted no sex.”
“Right. So, then … what specifically do you want me to do for you?”
“Just be with me, and talk to me. And when I get energy to talk, then listen, please.”
“Can do, and will. What do you want me to talk about? And more to the point, are you in any condition to even do that? Would it be better if you got some more sleep?”
“Probably, but … then I’ll miss out completely on what I came for.” He closed his eyes and sighed. “This really stinks to high heaven. Not you, my dear; my condition. Some days and nights I have so much more energy; then occasionally a bad spell comes along where I just feel washed out. Just my continued poor luck to have a bad spell tonight, of all nights.”
“Tell you what, Grant. Technically, I’m supposed to leave at or before 6 AM, unless you pay more. But I’m not due back to formally be available for work tomorrow until 6 pm. Just sleep now, and I’ll catch some Z’s too. When you wake up, I can hang around until check out time; I’ll just phone Fish and tell him that I’m out shopping with some mad money you gave me as a tip. So we can do all this ‘talking and listening’ in the morning if need be. Without you having to pay more. My treat. How does that sound?”
“Madam … I’m nearly speechless. That’s going above and beyond what you’re obligated. I would feel that I’m taking advantage of you.”
Bambi put the back of her hand to her forehead, feigning distress. “Oh dear! Forced to stay in the presidential suite of a five star resort for a few hours more! The horror!” — she then laughed.
“Bambi - who is this ‘Fish’, by the way?”
“Oh. That’s what all of us escorts call Mr. Morgenstern.”
“Why the name ‘Fish’?”
“Trust me. You really, really don’t want to know. It’s twisted and perverted. And hey — you never told me — how did you learn my name was Bambi? Did Fish tell you?”
“I made an assumption, madam, after seeing that,” - Grant pointed towards the high slit in her skirt. Just at the top, on her thigh, a tattoo of Walt Disney’s cartoon Bambi peeked through the gap in the clothing.
“What?! I thought this skirt covered that totally. That was a pretty good guess, smart guy. So — what do you say to my offer?”
“I graciously accept it. I still feel exhausted, and going back to sleep sounds wonderful, if you can meet two conditions.”
“Oh?”
“One: please help me get this suit off. Two: lie beside me, and hold me. Let me feel your body touching mine, your breasts against my back. Can you do that, please?”
“I will if you say you’ll be my Valentine tonight.”
“Of course, you romantic fool.”
“Then your wish is my command … baby,” she whispered close to his face, and then kissed him lightly on the forehead.
Bambi and Grant slept on their sides, with her spooning into his back. She wore only her panties — she had remembered his comment about preferring vaginas — and she was pressed up against him. Suddenly, a sound woke her.
It was Grant — moaning. At first she wondered: is he getting sicker? Is he in pain? Then she heard him speak.
“No … no! Please! Just … just leave me be! Let me alone!”
“Are you tired of me being this close?” she said.
He ignored the question. “Stop it! Stop saying that! I am not!”
Oh! He's having a bad dream.
Hugging him closer, she stroked his chest. “I’ve got you, baby. It’s okay,” she said, but it had no effect; he still cried out. I could wake him up, but would he be able to get back to his rest? Yet I can’t leave him like this — emotions affect his heart, he said.
She decided to try something. Projecting her head forward and resting her chin on his shoulder, she firmly said “Leave Grant alone! You have no business being here! Be silent, and go away — now!”
With that, her bed partner quieted. His tensed muscles relaxed, and his breathing became even and unstrained, as he remained asleep. Bambi noted that his body seemed much cooler than other men she’d been with. Must be the heart failure, she thought.
Usually when the “John” is asleep, it’s time for an escort to take a break from the false intimacy. Yet Bambi found herself snuggling closer to - and kissing the neck of - this poor, needy, rich man.
Bambi woke up very gradually; her eyes were still closed as she realized she was awakening.
Wow, this is nice. My bed feels great. Did I get a new mattress?
Then her eyes opened.
Suddenly she remembered where she was. She’d just slept in the prettiest, classiest place she had ever been in. With a rich, older, sickly man lying right in front —
No. He wasn’t there. He was … gone. The oxygen tank was turned off — there was no air hissing sound — and the tubing lay on his pillow. He was too weak to get himself out of bed; so where is he? Oh, my God — did he crawl off into the bathroom to die? Did Curly-head come pick him up and take him away, and I slept through it?
“Grant? Mr. Brisbane?” She warily called his name out as she ran to the master bath, her heart in her throat. He wasn’t there. She scurried over to the closet — not there — then out of the bedroom …
“Ah, you’re awake at last. Good morning, Bambi.” He had on pajamas now, with a brown masculine silk robe, and men’s lounging slippers adorning his feet. He looked like he was feeling better — a lot better. At the small dining table where he was seated, there were cereals, plates of eggs and bacon, breads and butter, along with milk, coffee, and orange juice.
“I took the liberty of ordering us some room service for breakfast. They just delivered it. It will be just us two; I had Jace’s delivered to his bedroom. Join me, won’t you? After you put something on to warm yourself up, that is,” he said with a broad smile.
Bambi was suddenly aware of her mostly naked state, wearing nothing but the panties from last night. And her nipples were indeed broadcasting that they were slightly chilled from being so exposed.
As she turned back towards the bedroom, she heard him call “There is a white terry cloth robe hanging in the bathroom, if that will do for you.”
She walked back in to the dining area, wrapped in the large hotel robe with a large golden embroidered “V” on the pocket. “Wow, you look like a new man this morning, Mr. B.” she said.
“Call me Grant, madam. Yes. I told you, I have good times and bad times. And especially in the last year, the bad times are getting more severe when they do happen; I just seem to lose all energy. And then, I get better eventually. The good times do seem to be coming less often, and are less ‘good’ when they do come. Would you like some jelly on your toast?”
“Why yes, thank you. Strawberry jam, if you have it, please. Such a gentleman!”
“You deserve it, my goddess.”
Bambi raised an eyebrow. “Goddess? Laying it on a little thick there, aren’t we? I mean with the compliments, not the jam.” What’s his angle? There’s a catch here, somewhere. We both know I’m not pretty, much less a ‘goddess’.
Grant responded, looking at the toast he was spreading strawberries on. “Oh, I beg to differ. You see, I had a most dreadful vision early this morning. My adversaries from all of my lifetime surrounded me — bullies from junior high, preening athletes from high school, the stuck-up cliques from college, and my hateful in-laws. Forgive me — ex in-laws, now. Anyway, they were hurling all of their horrible epithets at me. I told them to stop, but of course they wouldn’t. Suddenly a voice — authoritative, yet soft and feminine — rebuked them to silence. It came from an invisible presence just behind my left shoulder.”
He smiled at Bambi, passing her the jammed toast. “I recognized it instantly. It was your voice, my dear. You were watching over me like a guardian angel, a protective goddess. And when I awoke this morn and glanced back to my left, there was your face. It felt so nice to be held in your embrace, to feel you pressed into my back. I lay there and cherished the moment for a good thirty minutes before arising.”
Bambi could feel her face flushing. No one had ever used the word “cherish” when describing how he or she felt about her. She didn’t feel she had done anything that special; she’d just tried to take care of someone in trouble. “So; you really needed me, huh?”
Grant smiled and nodded.
She sensed a slight tightness forming in the back of her throat. “Thanks. It’s nice to be needed — for something besides sex. Nice to be appreciated for it, too.” Water began welling up in her eyelids. Then without warning, she began to sob, shaking, her hands still grasping her toast and coffee.
Grant stood slowly and walked to her side, putting an arm around her shoulder. “My dear, what’s wrong?”
“Hg … hgg,” she struggled to form words. “It’s … hgg … been so long since I felt like … hgg hgg … I was worth … hgg … anything … anything as a human being,” she blubbered.
“Bambi, why on earth would you say that? Look at you; you have the courage to pursue your goal of transitioning. Many before you have had to resort to the skin trade to get the money to do so. You’re ‘living the dream’, so to speak.”
She looked up at him with tear-striped cheeks. “I’m living a nightmare!” The anguish in her now broke forth like a tidal wave as she bawled, sinking her face into his robe-covered belly.
Grant stood still, stroking the back of Bambi’s head as she cried. The pain inside came bubbling out and over her whole being like an overfull pot of oatmeal left on the fire too long. He made no attempt to stop her; just continuing to hold her at the shoulder, silently absorbing her sorrow and tears.
She eventually calmed some, and pulled back. The first thing she saw was his robe drenched with tears and mascara stains.
“OMIGOD!” —she covered her mouth.
“Tut tut, my dear. Think nothing of it. I have a most miraculous dry cleaning service at home.”
“I’m sorry, Grant. For the robe, and especially for breaking down like this. After all, I’m supposed to be here serving you, not the other way around.”
He pulled his chair around and sat down just next to her. “To paraphrase you, milady: It’s nice to be needed — for something besides my money or my lawyering skills. By allowing me to comfort you as one would a friend or a lover, you have given me a rare gift. So, I will accept no apologies for that. And if you want to serve me more, I kindly request that you talk to me about it.”
“About what?”
“About your feelings as a transgendered female. What you had to endure for it. How you decided to transition. And why you consider your current life a nightmare. I need to know. Hearing it from you — it may help me.”
“Boy, diving into the deep end, aren’t we? Find me some tissues, please — unless you want to sacrifice the rest of that silk robe to the Gods of Running Makeup.
“Okay,” Bambi began. “I first began to dress up at age nine. My folks had left me with the babysitter, and she put me to bed early at 8 pm, which meant she wanted to spend the rest of the night on the couch with her boyfriend downstairs. All of our bedrooms were upstairs, so I felt pretty safe. I got into Mom’s drawers and began to put stuff on like I had seen her do through the years. I then pranced in front of the mirror and pretended like I was walking down the catwalk on those modeling shows. God, I looked so girly then, before puberty hit. If only …”
“Go on,” Grant encouraged. “If only … what?”
“Mom found out, and confronted me. Stupid me, I didn’t know she’d be able to tell that a boy had put on her clean clothes. Well, I had been searching on the internet to see if anyone else felt the way I did — and discovered the terms transvestite and transsexual. After reading, I realized that I was the latter. I had, from as early as I can recall, wished I had been born a girl. Then I read that I could actually become one! So when Mom talked to me, I told her I was a transsexual, and what I needed to do to become truly female.”
“Oh! So brave. And did she accept this revelation?”
Bambi sighed, and began to tear up. “Unfortunately, no. Absolutely not. She said that I had been warped by the ‘perversion of the modern day’ and that I needed to be turned around. They got me into a counselor who was more a religious scripture-spouter than a true mental therapist. He basically tried to get me to see the error of my ways. Meanwhile, I could see puberty coming like a freight train, threatening to turn me manly and hairy. God, how I pleaded for estrogen — or if nothing else, at least spiro.
“But no one listened. And as I watched in horror, I developed a deeper voice, facial and body hair, big hands, a thick chest and shoulders, and a square jaw. I lost my one chance at ever being beautiful because I was a coward.”
“Dear — you were just a child.”
“A child who should have known better! If I had really been courageous, I would have run away, at least to my Aunt Millie’s; she and Uncle Oliver were more open minded, and I’ll bet they would have taken me in. If only I could go back in time.”
“There are surgeries that can help —”
“Nope. Not really. Number 1, I don’t near have the money to have even one surgery, much less twenty. Number 2, I’ve been to a plastic surgeon. He showed me the best my surgical results could be — and it was pretty depressing.”
“Who sent you to this surgeon?”
“Fish. He paid for it, since I don’t have the funds. The doc’s one who does body work for a lot of our escorts.”
She looked at her rich date. “I know how ugly I am. You’ve been super nice to me since I threatened to walk out — and just you listening to my story helps me feel valued — but I still recall the disappointment in your face when you got your first good look at me. I’m ruined beyond repair. Sometimes it takes all I’ve got to not consider ending it all.”
They sat in silence for a minute, neither knowing exactly what to say after that.
He cleared his throat. “I’m so sorry I acted that way.”
“Don’t apologize for an honest reaction. It’s not like I haven’t seen that look a hundred times before. God, this is so depressing — let’s change the subject. Tell me about yourself, Grant. When did you realize you were different?”
“Oh, my dear. I’ve been ‘different’ since I was born. My parents were well off, and I went only to private schools. I learned the violin rather than electric guitar, and I played lacrosse instead of tackle football. I loved to read, and loved classical music as well as progressive rock - many of those groups, such as Yes and Gentle Giant, had many classical elements. So, even without my gender issues, I would still have been an odd duck. I never really got into heavy metal rock, getting drunk or stoned, or bedding as many girls as I could. And I was smart; valedictorian of the class with a perfect 4.0. My last “B” grade was in Physical Education at age 8; I have loathed dodge-ball ever since.”
“Dodge-ball! Aaack! I HATED dodge-ball,” Bambi laughed.
“Anyway, you can see why I was considered a ‘nerd’. However, my family accepted me — until they found out about my secret urges to cross-dress.”
“Did your mom find you out?”
“Oh, I wish it had been so. No, I had an older sister who had outfits that fit me quite well, and they were of the modern style; I could look like a fashionable teen girl in them, not an adult woman. I was so careful, but one day she caught me. She confronted me with a pair of her panties that had a pubic hair in them — a black one, and she was naturally blonde. It was a horrible outing, done in the living room with my parents and a visitor — the president of the local Junior League — present.”
“Oh no,” gasped Bambi.
“Well, from that point on, I was kept out of the public eye for fear of shaming the family. I too was sent to a psychologist to try to get me to be a ‘normal’ boy. I submerged my desires and studied even harder; graduated from law school Magna Cum Laude; and established my own law firm. I now have grown our family fortune larger than it was when I was a child. I even got married to a beautiful raven-haired trophy wife and had a son. He’s now 18 and a freshman at Yale.”
“Wow. What a charmed life. Yet you sounded so … unfulfilled when we talked last night.”
“Yes. I have battled depression my whole adult life. I’ve never considered suicide seriously enough to attempt it — yet. I finally opened up with my psychiatrist about my gender confusion, and after testing he said he felt I had transgender attributes. As my wife has divorced me a year ago, I knew I had to take the opportunity to talk to someone who had these same issues. I don’t trust chat rooms; I still have a business that would likely collapse if I were found to be in a major scandal. I shudder at the likely headlines: ‘Respected Tax Attorney is a Sexual Pervert.’ So, I came to Vegas, where ‘what happens here, stays here.’ And here you and I are.”
“Did your wife leave you because of the trans issues?”
“No; she didn’t know. She enjoyed my money, but when my heart became damaged, she found she didn’t like being tied down to a near invalid. She cited ‘loss of consortium’ — the fact I could no longer satisfy her sexually — as the main reason for the divorce. And sex was the only thing that she and I seemed to ever connect with; I would never classify her as a great friend or confidante. So the split was for the best, really. Especially since we had a prenuptial agreement that the court honored. One benefit of her leaving — after decades of abstinence, I was able to start dressing in women’s clothing again.”
Sheesh! The poor guy was hitched to a shallow bitch, thought Bambi. She looked at the clock. “Grant, is this conversation giving you what you came for? How am I doing?”
“Just fine, Bambi my dear. I wish we had more time to talk, and to cuddle. I feel such a bond with you; sisterly, and possibly even romantically. I think it’s because you are the first person in my life who hasn’t acted with disgust over what I’ve told you.” He looked at her with true appreciation, and gave her hand a squeeze.
“Well, sir, we have still two hours left. Why don’t you keep on talking to me while I minister to your body as you lie in bed? Not sex; no exertion. Let me show you what I mean.”
Grant was lying on the bed in just his boxers, with a blanket covering him. Underneath him was a panel of towels laid out to separate him from the bed sheets. He wondered what Bambi was up to. She had put his oxygen tube back in his nostrils, and he had to admit that he felt better while wearing it, even if he wasn’t currently in a “bad spell”.
Bambi walked in from the bathroom with a stack of steaming washcloths. “There’s a trick to getting these this hot in the bathroom sink without getting burned. You haven’t showered, so I figured you would like a washing with some warm cotton.”
She uncovered his feet, and began to scrub them gently with a steamy damp cloth. Working in the soles, between the toes. Grant found the sensation wonderful. Then, before the feet could get chilly, she dried them with a towel.
Then she repeated the process working up his legs, using a new fresh hot washcloth for each individual body part she went over.
“While I’m doing this, talk to me. What kind of a lawyer are you?” she queried with a kind smile.
“A very good one. Ohhh … that feels divine.”
“Ha ha ha ha! That was funny. Come on, you know what I mean.”
“I do tax law. Basically, people in deep trouble with the IRS come to me for help.”
“Yeah — you’re like those guys in the TV ads? ‘Don’t fight the IRS on your own.’ That kind?”
“Actually, those lawyers mostly deal with private individuals with less than a million dollars of back taxes or penalties owed. I deal with corporations and individuals who owe multiple millions of dollars.”
“Soooo … you let rich fat cats get out of paying taxes?”
“No. I help rich fat cats keep themselves from going bankrupt over their tax debt. That way they can stay in business to pay more taxes, year after year. They may get off a little easier one time with my help … but they never do again. Uncle Sam has a permanent evil eye on them from that point on.”
“Okay, that sounds better. Hey, may I clean you in your private areas? It’ll feel great. I promise I won’t get ‘freaky’ there, but I’ll only do it with your permission.”
“Ah … all right; if I say stop, please do so.”
She pulled down his boxers and went to work, quickly but gently. She even had him roll to his side as she discreetly cleaned in his butt crease. Then covering him up, she quickly washed her hands in the bathroom sink and came back to finish with the rest of his body.
As she did, Grant explained his health condition. He did not have regular heart disease from artery blockages and high cholesterol; rather, he contracted a virus that settled in his heart muscles, mostly destroying the organ. “Viral myocarditis”, his doctors called it. The only effective cure for him would be a transplant; however, he had so many antibodies in his blood, finding a good match was like finding a needle in a five-story haystack. His body would likely reject a usual heart available for transplant within the first year after he received it. The odds were that he would die long before any appropriate donor match could be found. As Bambi listened, her own heart began to ache for this unfortunate man.
When she finished cleaning the grooves of his ears, her final hot cloth was folded and placed on his forehead. “There you go. I’m not done yet; I’ll be right back.”
She returned with a bottle of hotel lotion — presidential suite quality — that she had left submerged in a sink full of hot water. With the exception of his groin and butt, she lotioned him with the warm cream from toes to neck, rubbing it in with the effect of a massage. Afterwards, she helped him back into the silk robe.
“Wonderful, milady, wondrous. Oh how I needed that, and I didn’t even realize it. What a pleasure that was; about as close to intimacy as I can get these days.”
“We still have 75 minutes left. Why don’t you continue resting before you have to pack up and go? I figure we can talk until the last half hour, then get you dressed and ready to go.”
Mr. Brisbane nodded. “That sounds like a good plan. Why don’t we get back to the nightmare you said you were living? Were you talking about not being as physically feminine as you wanted?”
Bambi sighed. “That’s not the nightmare. It’s the situation I’m living in; I’m trapped into this job, this lifestyle, and I can’t break free. I feel trapped, like I’m suffocating. One of my coworkers says she’s worried I’ll commit suicide … and she may be right.”
“Bambi — have you actually been considering ending your life?”
She looked straight into his eyes with a piercing blue gaze. “Grant. Haven’t you ever considered it?”
“Why, I …” his words stopped in his throat. He considered his thoughts from yesterday afternoon: There’s always booze. Or a bullet.
“Yes,” he whispered. “Yes I have. But I no longer feel that way — not after being able to open up to you.”
She shook her head. “After we leave, I’ll go back to the 400 square foot room I rent from Fish, and do more tricks. And have nothing to show for it. I had been trying to squirrel away some savings under my mattress, but when I checked yesterday, it’s all gone. Everyone there swears they knew nothing of it. Any money I make, Fish skims the rent, my hormone costs, and my share of the food and utilities from it. At least that’s what he says; I’ve never seen a sheet showing how much I made and how much I owe. He’ll hand me a couple of twenties every other week, and claim that’s all I have left after bills.
“I’d leave, but I don’t have any money to do that. I have no friends, not even with the other escorts; we see each other as competition. Who’s going to take in a poorly passing tranny whore they don’t know? And I wouldn’t be accepted back home, I’m pretty sure. I just can’t see a way out … except maybe the final way.”
“Bambi — how did you come to be in this situation?”
She was crying once more. “Can — can we change the subject please?”
“All right. How about your name: ‘Bambi’. Surely that’s just your working moniker. What is your legal name?”
“My legal name is still David … David Johnson,” she said with a mix of contempt and despair. “My true name was to be Aubrey, but I don’t have the cash to get it changed. And everyone where I work always calls me Bambi. Fish christened me with that. God, how I’ve grown weary of that name. It makes me sound like a bimbo — ‘Bambi the bimbo’. But I live at work, and only interact with others from the agency, so I’m stuck with it for now.
“I’m changing for the worse. Did you know I used to play the viola, and loved classical music, fusion jazz, Shakespeare and musicals? The past two years all I’ve been exposed to is hip-hop and the Kardashians, with liberal doses of Jerry Springer. I used to speak with intelligence and refinement; now I’m deteriorating to ‘Hey, buddy, ya wanna get sucked or pulled, or poke my butt?’ Maybe it would be worth it, if I was any closer to paying for transition, but I’m further away it seems.” She groaned and covered her face with her palms. “I thought you were going to change the subject. Tell me what you want to do. Now that you’re divorced, are you wanting to transition?”
He shook his head. “No. I do have things I like about being male; I just would like to express my female side at times. Even if I felt compelled to transition, there’s no way my heart could even tolerate hormone therapy, much less a major surgery — unless the surgery was to get a heart transplant.”
She dabbed her eyes. “Well, transition is never a piece of cake; in my case, it’s been a piece of moldy bread. I did it because I had to. My mistake was in how I chose to pursue it. Dammit! We’re back to me again. Why do I keep doing that?”
“Because you needed someone away from work to talk to, Aubrey.”
She picked up her head. “Say that again, please?”
“Because you nee —”
“No — the name.”
“Aubrey. Hello, Aubrey. It’s a pleasure to say that name; a beautiful, haunting song by the 70’s group Bread, if I recall.”
“Really?” She began to choke up. “I want to be Aubrey so badly.”
“You have a beautiful name, Aubrey. Almost as beautiful as your soul, and your smile. You’re beautiful, Aubrey — no matter what you think about your looks. My ex-wife is proof that exterior beauty doesn’t necessarily count for anything. I’d take your soul, your smile, your tenderness, and your caring heart — yes, I would take them any day over some gorgeous body. You are wonderful and beautiful, and don’t you ever forget that … Aubrey.”
Aubrey didn’t respond. She was too busy baptizing Grant’s robe with more tears and the last hints of her mascara. They held on to each other as if for dear life.
Aubrey sat in the back of Grant’s limousine, with Jace at the wheel, driving. She had changed into a white T-shirt with “I (heart) Vegas” writing, a denim jacket and skirt set with pink highlights, pink tights, and her everyday pink and white tennis shoes.
“You really didn’t have to do this, Grant. I was prepared to have a cab take me back to Fish and Mamie’s place. But it’ll be so cool to be dropped off there by a stretch limo. All the girls will be jealous.”
Grant looked out the window. He responded as if he hadn’t heard her. “Do you really wish you could leave from there?”
“Oh God, yes. But like I said, I have nowh —”
“How desperate is your desire to leave? Enough to work harder than you have ever worked before? Enough to give up prostitution and porn?”
“Yes … what are you talking about?”
“If you want, I can give you a fresh start. I can get you out of there.”
“Grant … are you asking me to … move in with you??” Aubrey was numb.
“No, Aubrey. Not that. You’d be living alone; but with a new start. Just a start; you’d have to take control of your life and make it work after the first three months. But I need to know, do you really want it? I will not throw money at you for you to waste it. Do not misunderstand me: I meant everything I said about your soul and inner beauty. But to make this work for you, it will take more than beauty. You will need courage, persistence, blood, sweat, and tears. If I make this investment in you, will you be willing to do that?”
Aubrey remained stunned. But she knew opportunity — and maybe her salvation — was presenting itself, and unless she acted, it would be gone.
“Yes, Grant. Please give me a new start. I will succeed with it, or die trying.”
The lawyer looked up at his driver’s eyes in the rear view mirror. “Jace?”
“Yes sir, Mr. Brisbane. I heard. We’ll do as we planned.”
The limo stopped at the two-story building in a run-down part of town.
“This is the place?” Jace yelled.
“Yes. Wh — what do I need to do?” stammered Aubrey.
Grant spoke with hushed speed. “Go inside to your room, and take this box and these trash bags with you. Put all of your essentials and regular clothes in them, and come back out to the limousine. Just do that, and we will be on our way.”
“Fish won’t allow me to leave with anything. I know him.”
“Jace will take care of Mr. Morgenstern. You just be fast about getting packed and back here. Go quickly, or the element of surprise will be lost.”
Aubrey ran in to whoops of approval by two escorts sitting downstairs. She waved to them but kept moving, up the stairs past the phone bank where Fish sat. He looked up and yelled after her.
“Hey, Bambs! Get your fuckin’ ass back down here! I need your tip money to pay for all the food you eat here, Miss Piggy!”
He heard the sound of drawers opening and closing, and hangars being taken out of a closet. “Ah, sounds like our ugly duckling is tryin’ to run.” He glanced out and noticed the limo was still parked outside. “Don’t tell me that whale fell for her! What, is the world going psycho? Well, I think she — or sugar daddy — owes me some ‘severance pay’.” He opened the drawer where he kept his pistol.
“I’ll bet there’s a gun in that drawer,” said a growling voice. “Mine’s bigger.” Jace stood at Fish’s desk, pulling back his coat lapel to display his Magnum hand cannon.
Fish swallowed hard, and bristled at the same time. “She owes me money!”
“I doubt it.”
“You know, fucker, if you shoot me in my place with that, you’re going to jail.”
“Correction. If I shoot you in your place with this, you’re going to die.”
“I’ve already got my hand on my piece. I bet I could plug you before you get yours out of the shoulder holster, you fuckin’ fucker.”
“You need to expand your vocabulary, pea-brain. And as for who will win a quick draw? Who knows? You might. I might. But seeing as this is a .44 Magnum — one of the most powerful handguns ever made, and could blow your head clean off — you’ve got to ask yourself one question: do I feel lucky? Well? Do you, punk?”
Fish looked at Jace as if he’d gone completely loony. But he let go of his pistol and closed the drawer up.
Aubrey came back down the stairs holding on to a box and two large trash bags. “Got what I needed, Jace. I’m ready to go.” She ran out the door to the limo.
“The fuckin’ … bitch … owes … me … money!” Fish howled in protest.
Jace reached in his pocket and threw four $100 dollar bills at Fish. “Will that cover it?”
Fish sniffed. “Naw. Double it.”
Suddenly he was nose to nose with the barrel of Jace’s Magnum. “I can add .44 if you want.”
“This’ll do fine,” said Fish in a quivery, meek voice.
Jace hopped in the limo just as Aubrey finished shoving her moped in the back. The black stretch car briskly took off and headed out of town.
Aubrey was shaking and leaking a few tears, but smiling. “Thank you, Grant, thank you. Thank you so much.” Then yelling to the driver, “Thank you, Jace.”
“WOOOO!” Jace screamed, causing his female passenger to jump. “The Dirty Harry speech! I’ve always wanted to use that!”
The limo raced down highway 93, passing signs indicating a tourist/historical site ahead.
Aubrey sat up. “Hey! We’ll be passing beside that?”
“Yes. We’re going to my estate in Flagstaff, and this way takes us by Hoover Dam,” said Grant.
“I’ve never seen it, and I’ve lived in Vegas for two years! Can we stop there and look around just for a second, please?”
“Jace …”
“We’ll take the exit, sir,” grumbled the chauffeur. “We shouldn’t dawdle there too long, Boss.”
When they parked, Aubrey jumped out of the limousine and ran to the lookout areas. She liked the massive Lake Mead, but she really fawned over the grandeur of the views over the Black Canyon. As she drank in the beauty, she felt as she might as well be drinking soul ambrosia. These beautiful vistas — I can’t remember ever being this exhilarated. Even today’s wispy vapors in the stratosphere beam with a majesty I’ve rarely beheld.
She stopped with amazement at her thoughts. My - my sophisticated, poetic voice! Lord, it’s been so long since I’ve thought that way — it’s like I’m finding my true self again!
It’s all due to my liberation — my rescue from the hell I fell into back in Vegas. Lord in heaven, I feel so vibrant — so vitally alive!
She felt a tap on her shoulder, and turned around to see a fidgety Jace.
“Sorry, Miss Aubrey, but we really need toOOOULPH,” he heaved as she jumped into his chest and hugged him tight. She kissed him on the cheek and ran back to hop into the limo.
“When the hell did she decide that I was huggable instead of intimidating? I must be losing my touch, dammit,” Jace grumbled and scratched his curly head as he loped back to the vehicle.
When the giddy young trans-girl climbed in the door of the elongated Lincoln, she fully intended to give Grant an equally vigorous squeeze, hug and kiss. But her mood sobered instantly when she saw him lying down on the seat, wearing his oxygen tube attached to another tank; she heard a faint hiss, and knew it was turned on. He was talking on his cell phone.
“Yes, Carlotta. I realize I’ve given you special projects before. I think this one will put even your considerable skills to the test. But it’s quite important to me. So, are you available and willing?”
Aubrey sat on the floor in front of Grant’s seat and stroked his arm. He turned his eyes her direction and gave her a wink as he continued his conversation.
“Yes, dear. I know you’re not exactly Henry Higgins, but she’s not Eliza Doolittle either. She likes Shakespeare, and plays the viola. She just made a bad choice two years ago, and needs a little help. Well, yes, maybe more than a little.”
A psychic lightning bolt hit Aubrey’s chest as she realized that she was the “special project” Grant was giving to this Carlotta person.
“Wonderful, darling. Get to work, and Jace will call you with the flight arrival time.” He hung up the phone and turned his eyes to his young charge. If he was expecting gratitude, he was sorely mistaken.
The blonde girl’s eyes were wide with shock and fear. “What the hell is this?” she whispered in new desperation while edging away from the reclining man. Her query was clarified in a near-scream. “WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU PLANNING TO DO TO ME?”
She grabbed for the rear door handle of the limo only to have it open just as her fingers swiped for it. A hulking presence filled the doorway, and a mustachioed face framed by curly ringlets poked in. “Boss? Aubrey? What’s the yelling —”
Jace gave an almost inaudible grunt as a pink sole struck his groin. Aubrey tried to use full advantage of her surprise kick by squeezing by him in an attempt to escape, but the bodyguard’s mass still blocked her way. She landed a punch into the big man’s jaw and threw her shoulders and head into his chest. For all of her moxie, she might as well have tried to push through a cinderblock wall.
Big paws grabbed her shoulders and shoved her back into the rear limo seat. “You hit like a girl,” Jace grumbled. “Nice nut shot, though. Someone wanna tell me what the crap is going on?”
Both men looked at Aubrey. She was trembling as she shrunk back from them, her hands pressed together covering her nose and mouth. Her tear-laden eyes darted to and fro, as if looking for better shelter than under her knitted brow.
“Oh, my goodness — I’m afraid this is my fault. Aubrey, dear, please don’t be afraid. Everything you just heard is something I was hoping to set up to help you, not ‘planning to do’ to you. And you will not be forced to do any of it — you may opt in or out freely. Please allow me to explain.”
Grant continued to lie on the side bench, but had a look of genuine concern and regret to accompany his soothing voice. Jace, hunching in the doorway, looked befuddled still. Aubrey took deep breaths, gradually realizing that she may have misinterpreted her benefactor’s intentions.
“Okay … I’ll listen. But first: Grant … are you all right, or are you starting to have another ‘bad spell’ with your heart?”
“I’m just fine, madam. The oxygen and reclining are more to help prevent a potential spell than in reaction to one. I do this when I’m still, such as riding in the car or listening to Beethoven at home.” The tired gentleman’s face twinkled with a fresh smile. “See, Jace? Even when scared to death, one of her first concerns is another’s welfare. I knew she would prove well worth the effort.”
“The effort to do what?” said the young woman dabbing her eyes with a tissue. Her emotions were awhirl, and alarm bells were ringing in her head. She felt on one hand that she could trust these men; on the other hand, she remembered feeling the same about Fish when she first met him two years prior.
*To be continued tomorrow*
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to any situation or person, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
Thanks to Cassie Nicol for a first read!
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"Fish! God, no! Not that, not again! Please don't! What will your wife think?"
"Hell, Honey. I'm filming this. This gets my own rocks off," laughed Mamie.
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Chapter 3
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Aubrey tried in vain to mash out some of the worst lumps in her old mattress. She heard a familiar clomping sound coming up the stairs; she rushed to lock the door. Futile. There was sound of a key on the other side unlocking it again. Fish opened the door and walked in with his greasy leer. “I own the place, remember? I got keys for every door in here, ‘specially yours, Bambs.”
“What’s up, boss,” Bambi nervously asked. Wait! Wasn’t she Aubrey now?
“That whale was mad, mad, mad. He said you refused to lay him!”
“B — boss, he had a bad heart! He said he couldn’t have sex!”
“Are you lubed up, Bambs?”
“Oh no, Fish. Please. Please don’t. If he wants, I’ll let him screw me now. Where is he?”
“Sounds like I need to give you another one of my personal lessons on how to properly fuck a john. Today’s lesson: always be lubed. If not, it feels like this. TURN AROUND, AND BEND OVER.”
“Fish! God, no! Not that, not again! Please don’t! What will your wife think?”
“Hell, Honey. I’m filming this. This gets my own rocks off,” laughed Mamie with her smartphone aimed at Bambi’s butt.
She tried to struggle but her arms were made of lead. Fish shoved her by the shoulder blades into a bent over position. Bambi could see out the window, and there was Francine, with some rich movie star in a Lamborghini. As they drove by, she heard Francine say, “my roomie was such a loser”. Then suddenly she felt a hairy hand pull her panties down.
“FishfishfishfishnononononoNONONOAAAAAAHH!
Aubrey jerked awake.
Her face bloomed bright red even through her makeup as she realized many of her co-passengers were staring at her. The flight attendant walked up.
“Are you okay, ma’am?”
“Bad dream. Sorry. Um … what exactly did people hear me saying?”
The concerned old man sitting next to her smiled. “It sounded like someone was trying to force you to eat fish, and you didn’t want to.”
“That’s actually a fairly close interpretation of my dream,” she laughed nervously.
“It’s good for you, you know. What don’t you like about fish?”
“The smell. He — ah, it … stinks.”
What a whirlwind of a day. Her ride in Grant’s limo had ended at the Flagstaff airport, where a last minute ticket for a flight to Phoenix had been purchased. Two cheap zip up bags were bought along the way, and all of her essentials were placed in them. Jace had indicated that the moped would be shipped to her new temporary address there. Twenty-eight hours ago she had been in her dumpy room contemplating the possibility of suicide. So much had happened since. Aubrey closed her eyes, but did not want to return to her nightmare. Instead, she recalled how life had started to go wrong.
As a teenager named David Johnson, desperation and frustration seemed to build daily. With every deepening vocal tone, every new whisker popping up on his face, he was becoming something he didn’t want to be: a man. A big, husky, manly man. At least in body. His parents loved and supported him fantastically in every way, except for the desire that he needed to be a girl. And that desire, blocked and countermanded, made him more miserable each day.
The religious “counselor” kept refusing to write him a recommendation or even a referral to get hormones, and his parents wouldn’t send him to anyone else. “Just wait — you’re going to love being a man. That testosterone will kick in, and those girls will start to look irresistible. Then you’ll look back and be so glad you didn’t follow this childish whim. Lots of kids experiment with gender and grow out of it; you will too, just give it time.” Like a good boy, he obeyed and gave it time. And the advice betrayed him.
He met Frank — whose femme name was “Francine” — online in a support group chat room. She was in the same position, and lived in Boise just like him! They were the same age — 16 — and went to different high schools. They hit it off and became friends, finally meeting in front of the JC Penney’s entrance at the mall. David was sure that God must have been involved in them finding each other.
The plan they came up with was to leave just after graduation and go to a big city. To find doctors, get on hormones, and transition. They were a team. They could do this, together. They chose Las Vegas.
It went as they had hoped for the first 6 months. Both had jobs in the food service industry; both took on second jobs, David (now calling herself Aubrey) delivering pizzas, Francine delivering papers. The hormones started to work. Francine’s body seemed to soak them up and she became gorgeous in short order. She applied for and got a job in a drag show on the strip; it was there that she met her boyfriend. She moved in with him without telling Aubrey, who found herself now responsible for all the rent and bills of their lease. The sudden burden was so great that she had no more money to pay for hormones or doctor visits.
Frustrated, she decided to get money the quick way: prostitution. She was introduced to Levi by a street hooker. His offer sounded like a fair deal. She’d live upstairs in a room in his house; he would take care of building up her bank account. She figured 2-3 years tops, and she’d have the money for SRS and new breasts, then get a real job — as a woman.
She sighed as she looked at the night sky from the plane window. Levi had seemed like a stand up guy — until she took the deal. Then she found that her bank account never got over $200 total, there were lots of “hidden” fees, and sleeping with strangers — god, what soul draining work. Levi did send her to his plastic surgeon, but it seemed that even with surgery Aubrey — now “Bambi” — would never be a beauty. Levi — now known as “Fish” — did pay for a quick breast enhancement; but it was a bad piece of work, leaving her with unnatural, alien baseballs that protruded strangely from her manly chest.
And there were Fish’s occasional “lessons”. He said they were for instruction, but Bambi knew they were just his sick abuses inflicted on a trapped transgirl.
Aubrey realized she was weeping. The poor old man next to her was going to think she was traumatizing over tilapia if she didn’t start thinking happy thoughts. Picking up the airline magazine in front of her, she ended her sad remembrances with one caution: her bad choices, and trusting the wrong people, had ruined her life. She hoped beyond hope that she wasn’t now making those same mistakes again.
Disembarking from the plane, she walked through the terminal and down to the luggage area. Going down the escalator, she saw a short, middle-aged woman in a pinstriped power blazer and skirt with high black pumps waiting at the exit. In her hands, she held a small sign that spelled “Aubrey from Las Vegas”.
She walked up to the woman. “Carlotta?”
Carlotta smiled. “Aubrey! How so very nice to meet you. Come along, dear; did you check a bag?”
“No, I don’t have much — just these carry ons.”
“Excellent. Follow me.” Carlotta began walking towards the parking garage. “How was your flight?”
“Smooth.” Except for the bumpy turbulence of my memories, she added silently. “Uh, where are we going — and exactly what are we doing?”
“All will be explained, dear, but it’s going to take some time. It’s nearly midnight, and I don’t know about you, but I’m about to turn into a pumpkin. That’s why I’m dropping you off at the Hyatt for tonight. Get some good sleep and meet me for a late breakfast at 10 am in the lobby restaurant, the Terrace Café. Then we’ll figure out the next 3 months. Is that acceptable for you?”
“It sounds fabulous! Wow — last night the Venetian, tonight the Hyatt! I could get used to this treatment!”
“Enjoy it fully, but don’t get ‘used’ to it,” said the older woman with a wry look. “For this next chapter in your life to be a success, you’ll likely need to work harder than you ever have before.” With that, she turned on the car stereo, and a playlist of fusion jazz began to trickle through the speakers. “I’m not a huge fan of this music, but I know you are. Realize that successful people are great listeners. Mr. Brisbane heard you mention that you loved this style, and asked that I procure some for your enjoyment on the drive.”
Aubrey was impressed. She had only mentioned the jazz in the middle of a grand emotive statement. Grant didn’t miss a thing. Successful people are great listeners. She wrote that fact down in her mental tablet.
8:30 am. Aubrey viewed the clock wishing that she could stop time for a full day — this bed was so glorious. At least another hour in it couldn’t hurt. She could do a rush job and still not get to breakfast too much after ten —
She sat bolt upright. No. No more sloppy living. Time to prove to Grant that his investment in her — whatever the heck it consisted of — was not going to waste. She hopped out of bed and headed towards the shower.
At 9:54, Aubrey got off the elevator at the atrium level. As she passed by a mirror she checked out her outfit; a purple long sleeved shirt with butterflies outlined in rhinestones, hip hugger blue jeans with a gold belt with matching sandals. Walking into the restaurant, she saw a smiling Carlotta in a smart business outfit.
“Oh, no. I was hoping I wouldn’t keep you waiting —“
“You didn’t, sweetie. I just walked in myself.”
“I’m sorry I don’t have something more formal to wear. You dress so classy.”
“I can define ‘class’ in a number of ways. Nothing is classier than arriving on time,” she beamed. “It makes a great first impression.”
“So, you obviously have talked to Grant. How much do you know about me?” Aubrey took a bite of waffle.
“Everything he knows, plus a little more. I ‘googled’ yesterday to learn more about transgenderism, et cetera. By the way, you should call him Mr. Brisbane.”
“He told me to call him Grant …”
“That was when you were his date. Now he is your benefactor, and unless that status changes, out of respect you should address him formally. That’s my advice, by the way — not his demand.”
Carlotta sipped her hot tea. “Before we go further, I have some questions for you,” she said, pulling out a notepad computer.
Twenty minutes of interrogation later, Aubrey whistled. “Wow. That was thorough. I felt like I was being screened as if I were applying for the Secret Service.”
“Let’s see …” the businesswoman muttered as she moved some data around on her pad. “I’m going to sum up my impression of you. Be prepared, as much of the news is not good. But I’m sure you want me to be honest with you.”
“Just don’t be mean,” said a worried girl in a purple shirt.
“The truth may be mean, but I myself intend not to be,” Carlotta reassured.
“First, the raw data. You are a transgendered female. You have gone through male puberty and therefore have many male attributes physically. Hormones have been given to you, but not closely monitored by a physician. You’ve spent the last two years in prostitution, and during that time have suffered verbal and sexual abuse. You have had some love and cultural training in your life, but have abandoned both since high school to try to complete your physical transition to womanhood.”
“Now the bad. Little experience with budgeting, saving, and bank accounts; you deferred those tasks to others. Your views and experiences with romantic love and intimacy have been horribly warped by your sex work and the abuse. No marketable skills; your dream was to become a concert violist, and that died when you ‘ran away’ from home. By my BMI calculations, you’re overweight by probably 35 pounds. You are ‘read’ as a male rather easily. The breast augmentation … well, it did you no favors, I agree. Likely clinically depressed, and have been suicidal. You’ve burned all your bridges with your loved ones and friends, in your view. So, in short, you are in dire straits, sister.”
Aubrey had the fine cloth napkin to her eyes as she silently nodded her head. Carlotta paused to let her young charge finish crying.
Finally the young transgirl looked up. “I’m hopeless, aren’t I?”
“I saved the best for last, dear.” The older woman gave an empathetic look and squeezed Aubrey’s shaking hand. “Here’s what you have going for you. You have a knack for caring for people, and possess a gentle touch. Yes, Mr. Brisbane told me about how you ministered to him with hot cloths. You have courage to stand up for what is right; I heard how you confronted Jace to allow you to stay and be with Mr. B. Although you’ve been around cultural crudeness the last 24 months, there is still the spark of a refined soul in you, one who wants to engage her mind before her mouth, who is meek and humble. That’s what I see in you worth salvaging, and developing.”
“In ninety days?” Aubrey was skeptical.
“As I have told you, you’ll have to work harder than you ever have. But yes. I believe it can be done.”
Carlotta dropped off Aubrey at an apartment complex.
“You’ll be in unit 1213. Go into the office and introduce yourself, dear. When you show them ID, they’ll give you the key.”
“That may be a problem. Legally, I’m still — ”
“David Johnson. Yes, I know, dear. And so do they. I’ve been assured by the management that they will be respectful of your transitioning status. You do have your male ID, don’t you?”
Aubrey nodded her head, her mouth agape. This woman knows — and has thought of — everything!
“Wow, Carlotta. Furniture? Electricity? Phone?”
“Yes, dear. Adequately furnished and power’s on. There is a prepaid cell phone in there — use your minutes wisely. You also have a computer, internet access and a stereo — but no television.”
“Huh? Why?”
“All will be explained, child. Please count your blessings before you complain about it, though. I shall return tonight at 7, and then I will answer the mysteries of your new universe. I’ll bring supper, too. See you then,” as she took off in her BMW.
The two women ate a supper of romaine salad with chicken breast and raspberry vinaigrette dressing.
“This stuff tastes great, Carlotta!”
“Thank you. I know it’s not the most filling of meals, but we both need to be mindful of our figures, dear.”
“I just wish I had a figure.”
“Hmm. You never know; some eventual weight loss might disclose the semblance of curves on you. So, is this apartment sufficient? It’s just a small one-bedroom, but it should be livable.”
“You should have seen where I was living before. This is definitely an upgrade.”
“One skill that we may need to work on is eating gently with good manners rather than inhaling the meal.” Aubrey flushed with embarrassment to see that her plate was cleaned while her dinner companion was barely half way through her food.
Carlotta wiped her mouth after her eventual last bite. She then put her plate aside and placed a stack of forms and papers on the table. Her eyes suddenly took on a serious tone as she looked intently at Aubrey.
“All right. I’ve had the afternoon to work on searching out resources for you. Let’s call this project Fresh Start 2.0.
“First: Employable skill. Your care of Mr. Brisbane on Valentine’s Day shows an aptitude for handling frail, sickly bodies. In his opinion — and mine — you would make a fantastic personal care attendant, also known as a nurses’ aide or home health care aide. It is a job that will make you some basic money, as well as give you a foundation for continuing an education towards nursing if you so desire. There is a nurses’ aide training program here, and it just happens to be twelve weeks long. Classes begin Monday. Here’s the application form and information packet. I called, and they do have an opening for another trainee. If you apply and are accepted, Mr. B. will pay your tuition.
“Second: Money savvy. You may have heard of a “Financial Peace University” course that is being taught once a week at many churches and civic centers. They will talk about budgeting, basic money habits, and progress to investing. Classes are once a week. There’s one starting in two weeks at the nearby city library branch.” She passed a flyer to Aubrey. “Again, your fee will be covered.
“Third: Exercise. Taking care of your body is part of being successful. There is a park with lit walking/jogging trails just next to the complex. You should start with walking, at least 20 minutes a day. I have a handout here on how to safely begin a physical activity regimen. Please read it tonight.
“Fourth: Medical Care. I have you set up with appointments with an endocrinologist and a general internal medicine specialist for this week. Tomorrow you start your first session with a gender therapist, 10 am. You’ll need all of these if you are to have a successful transition.
“Fifth: Recovery from abuse, and sexual addiction.”
Aubrey’s neck bristled. “Sex addiction? I did sex as a job, not out of pleasure. I wasn’t a nymphomaniac.”
“Can you say that your experiences with sex have set you up for a healthy, romantic sexual relationship whenever you do meet that ‘special someone’?”
The young blonde sighed. “No.”
“Two groups: SARP — Sexual Abuse Recovery Program, and Sexaholics Anonymous. There are meetings of both, multiple times a week; usually in the evenings. I will require you attend one of each weekly.
“Sixth: Cooking. You told me you only know how to make pop tarts and hot dogs. You must expand your skills in this, or losing weight — and keeping on a budget — will be impossible. I’ve stocked your refrigerator with food to tide you through this week, but on Saturdays I will personally come over and we will focus on preparing meals that you can refrigerate, then grab and reheat throughout the week. This will be in addition to our thrice-weekly face to face meetings and daily phone contact regarding how things are going with this whole program.
“Seventh — ”
“Seventh?! How many more points to this project are there?” Aubrey held her spinning head.
“This is the last one, dear,” Carlotta said with a slight grin. “R and R. Rest and Relaxation. Do try to get at least 8 hours of sleep nightly. And you may use the Internet to watch an occasional Hulu program, or play a game or two. You’ll need the ‘net to complete your nurse aide training, anyway. No TV set or cable, though; in my view, that tends to cause insomnia and waste time. Doing without the boob tube for three months shouldn’t kill you. If you find yourself bored, you may listen to the stereo, radio, or play the viola that I tucked away in your coat closet.”
“There’s a viola in the coat closet?!”
“I thought that would bring a smile to you … and I can see it has. I found it at a pawnshop yesterday after Mr. Brisbane first called me. It’s not in the best shape, and it may need new strings, but it should be playable.
“And that, Ms. Johnson, is your proposed life for the next three months.”
Aubrey was without words. Her brain was trying to process the huge agenda laid before her. Finally questions started to form in her head, and she allowed them escape through her mouth.
“I’ll need clothes … and gas money for my scooter … I have no cash on me.”
“Oh! I knew I forgot some details. You will have an allowance to be able to buy the needed scrubs and school attire, as well as food, gas, et cetera. It won’t be a huge amount, ergo the need to know how to budget. I’ll help you get an initial budget down tonight until you learn how to do your own.”
“Carlotta … you said my ‘proposed’ life? What does that mean?”
The older woman folded her hands. “It means that this plan is voluntary, Aubrey. You will not be forced to follow it; frankly, you can walk away from it all now. The apartment has been leased on a month-to-month basis, so you could refuse this offer and still have the place to live in for the next few weeks, and you have all the food in the ‘fridge. But Mr. B. and I would not give you additional funding. The rest of your future would be in your hands. If you agree to the plan though, you get all the benefits. But you would be required to do all of the seven points I outlined to continue to get them.”
“Understood. Why is he doing this for me? Why are you?”
“Honey … I get paid for this. I am a life coach, among other things. You aren’t the first ‘project’ that he’s had me assigned to. See, Mr. B. is a rich man, and a very charitable one. He loves giving money to help people — but he wants to make sure he’s truly making a difference. That’s why he doesn’t donate to any but the most effective charities, the ones who operate with integrity and can show that they really are producing results.
“You, my girl, are someone who needed help that no available organization could provide. So when he learned of your predicament, he decided to do your rescuing personally. He only does something like this when no other help is available, and when he thinks the person he’s investing in will not just take the money and use it to buy drugs, or alcohol, or a big screen TV. He obviously saw something in you that said you were worth the risk.”
What the hell did he see in me? I’m a living screw-up, thought Aubrey. “Carlotta, do you see something in me worth saving?”
“Absolutely, my dear. The first sign of it was you showing up to our breakfast meeting on time — a few minutes early, even.”
“Okay … this is going to take a lot of money. How much is this costing Gra- uh, Mr. Brisbane?”
“The three month total, including my substantial fee, will be somewhere around twenty-five thousand dollars.”
“TWENTY-FIVE THOUSAND!” Aubrey stood up so rapidly from the table that it knocked her chair over. “Twenty-five thousand …” She covered her face with her hands and ran to the bedroom.
“Hm?” Carlotta had not expected this exact reaction. She rose and straightened her skirt, then followed her protégé’s path.
Aubrey was on her knees in front of the furnished queen bed. Her face lay weeping on top of her crossed arms so as not to drip mascara directly onto the comforter. A visible tremor encompassed her whole body, even making her sobs quiver.
Carlotta gently knelt by the girl and stroked her back lightly with her hand. Aubrey felt her presence, but was not consoled.
“Twenty-five…! There’s … there’s no way I can even begin to pay him back! Not while he’s still alive! ‘Cause he said he’s only got (sob) months until his heart …” She continued to weep face down.
The businesswoman smiled and felt her own eyes moistening. Grant’s instincts about this one had been spot on; her soul was indeed golden. “He’s not expecting a monetary return, honey,” she whispered. “You, living a good successful life — saving yourself, in other words — will be his reward, whether he sees it in person or from heaven’s grandstands.”
“I’m scared, Carlotta. I’m scared I’ll fail — fail myself, and him. There’s so much to do. I’m overwhelmed.”
“There is quite a lot to do, yes. A daunting task. But you will not be alone; I’ll be with you every step of the way. My phone will be on 24/7 if you need to talk urgently, and you’ll be seeing me often. And I am encouraged that you’re scared to fail.”
“You are?”
“So long as it doesn’t paralyze you from attempting to succeed, that fear can be a tool. We will use it to spur you on, to keep trying even when you don’t feel like it.” She then squeezed the trans-girl in a full embrace.
Aubrey was still trembling, but was fully aware of the grace of her situation. And on top of it, Carlotta had referred to her as a female throughout — unconditional acceptance into the sorority of womanhood. She could not refuse this offer.
“Okay. I’m all in. Just hold me a minute more, please?”
“Of course.”
The young one cleared her throat. “Louie,” she said in a low drawl.
Carlotta raised an eyebrow. “Louie …?”
“Louie, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship,” Aubrey stated in a faux Bogart impression.
*To be continued tomorrow*
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual situation or person is purely coincidental.
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The nurse took the CNA’s hand. “It’s basically a big, strong magnet,” she said. “It will stop the defibrillator from shocking him and restarting his heart.”
Aubrey felt her chest grow numb, and her arms and legs suddenly chilled. “Why the hell does he need something like that?” she whispered almost inaudibly.
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Trans. Plant. Heart.
Chapter 4
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(Author's note: Chapter 3 was posted last night near midnight. I'm posting Chapter 4 now, about 5pm. Be sure you've read chapter 3 first; because when I post this one [Chap. 4] then Chap. 3 will disappear from the front page. Sorry for any confusion! **Sigh**)
Wow. I’m far from the biggest built girl here — and I wasn’t even born a girl.
Aubrey looked around the room. She and the others were waiting to be introduced to their course administrator. All of them were there to become CNA’s, certified nurse’s aides. Two of the others present were male, but the other thirty or so were female. They were women of all sizes, but the majority (it seemed) were tall and big framed. Not illogical, since much of the work they were applying for would involve lifting and turning other human beings. Some of the patients were bound to be big and heavy, so the work might come easier for a “Helga” than a “Twiggy”. Still, it relieved Aubrey to see that she might actually pass for a woman a little easier than expected in this crowd.
One of Grant’s unexpected gifts to her was her impending official name change to Aubrey Johnson. She’d still be listed as male until she got approval from her therapy, but at least she could use her female name and not be accused of misrepresenting herself. He had called in a favor owed by one of his lawyer friends, and the papers were expected within weeks. In time for her CNA certificate to read “Aubrey”.
In walked an older lady with an authoritative air. “Hello, students. My name is Mrs. Stoltz.”
“Hello. My name is Sharon, and I am a compulsive sex addict.”
It was a statement that would have sounded comical to Aubrey even a week ago. She was listening to the meeting leader at the SA — “Sexaholics Anonymous” — gathering. This was the one part of her three-month project that she felt was humiliating and unnecessary. At least, she felt that way until last night.
Cloud nine. That’s how high Aubrey’s spirits were on a date with Mike, one of the two men in her CNA class. His invitation to go for a coffee after training that day was unexpected and flattering; as far as she knew, he was unaware of her “trans” status. Their time together was perfect, until he drove her home and said he wanted to get to know her better.
Why had she taken that as a cue that he wanted sex? Before she knew it, she was going down on him in the car. She could still see his face afterwards — more embarrassed awkwardness than enjoyment. “Wow … I really wasn’t expecting that,” was all he said. No “thanks,” or “that was great,” or “when can I see you again.” Not even a goodbye. He just drove off slowly as she ran red-faced to her apartment door.
Once inside, she reviewed what happened. She realized with disdain that during their date she’d been fantasizing more about his possible penis size than his engaging personality. I guess I really am screwed up when it comes to sex. So she looked through Carlotta’s handouts and found the one for SA.
After the meeting adjourned, Aubrey approached Sharon. “Out of all the folks who spoke tonight, you’re the one whose past I identify with the most — and whose present I want to have in my future. How do I get what you’ve got, and can you help me get it?”
Sharon sighed. “I don’t know that I have time to ‘sponsor’ another person in our program right now —” Then she saw the pleading earnestness, the desperate need in Aubrey’s eyes. She could not turn away someone who was so willing to fight to get better. “Okay, kid. Here’s my phone number. Buy the two big books on the table, and call me tonight with a pen and paper at the ready. I’ll hold out 9 to 9:30 for you; ring me promptly at 9.” We’ll find out how serious she is; let’s see if she can follow that basic instruction.
Aubrey didn’t disappoint.
Two women, one middle-aged and one young transitioning girl, sat at a Starbucks.
“Well, my little sponsee. You’ve made quite a lot of progress in working through the assignments I’ve given you. Journalling, reading, phone calls, meeting attendance — I saw that you were serious about recovery from that first night we met. And now you have your 30 day abstinence button.”
“Thank you so much, Sharon. I’ve loved being your ‘sponsee’ — is that even a word? You’ve taught me so much. I was pretty relieved to hear that being “abstinent” doesn’t mean being a nun the rest of my life; just abstaining from casual sex. Do you think I’ve recovered enough that I can start accepting dates now?”
Sharon didn’t answer, but rather perked her head up with wide eyes. “Oh … my … god. That guy who just came in. What a hottie-hot! Behind you to your right, girlfriend.”
Aubrey turned discreetly. Yes indeed, that boy was a stud. His six pack could be seen through his tight t-shirt, and he had nice bulging arm muscles with just enough face stubble to look cute. Scratch that, smoking hot. I’ll bet he could go for hours in the sack. I wonder how big…
“Are you thinking about his penis about now, honey?” Sharon’s low voice broke up the young one’s fantasizing.
“Oh, God,” blushed Aubrey. “And I went there so quickly. I — I haven’t made a bit of progress, have I? Am I ever going to get beyond throwing myself at every guy who takes me out for a coffee?”
“Thirty days is a good start, but remember you had two years of loveless physical intimacy with hundreds of different partners. ‘Aubrey’ is surfacing, but you’ve still just barely stopped being ‘Bambi’. It’s going to take time, not to mention a lot more work, to stop thinking that way. But don’t worry — you’ve been very committed so far. Just don’t slack up, and I see you having healthy love in your life as a definite possibility for the future.”
“I hate my ‘Bambi’ persona. Being horny is not a huge problem yet, as I’ve been avoiding dating; my life is so full of other things at the moment,” said Aubrey, remembering all the things she yet had to do today to fulfill Carlotta’s requirements of her. “I’m a little worried of how I’m going to react when I do start dating again, though.”
Sharon nodded. “A relationship built on friendship that builds into commitment is then ready for sex, in my opinion — at least for addicts like us. But you have to care for and nurture the relationship carefully to bring it to that point. Kind of like caring for a plant. So that’s my gift to you for your 30 day point. A plant. Take care of the plant like you would a relationship, say for about 6 months. You keep this plant alive for that long, and I’ll know you have the discipline to do that with a loving relationship. As your sponsor, I’m requesting you remain abstinent and continue working this program full swing until you prove that, by showing this plant to me healthy and intact, in September.”
Okay. I can do six months of abstinence; she’s right, I’ve had enough cheap sex to cover a hundred lifetimes. And I’ve heard of sponsors giving their charges ivy plants for this purpose. An ivy plant shouldn’t be too hard to keep alive, right? I see those everywhere, Aubrey mused.
Then her jaw went slack as Sharon unboxed a small tree onto the table.
A bonsai tree.
“These suckers are super sensitive. Can’t overwater or underwater them, or they’ll die. Gotta get the right amount of sunlight. Feed, but don’t dare overfeed. Bonsais don’t usually do well in the dry Phoenix climate. This will be a challenge for you, girl. Let’s see how nurturing you really are.”
“You’re sadistic,” replied a narrow-eyed Aubrey.
“Don’cha know,” chortled Sharon.
Mrs. Stoltz made it a point to personally observe all of the CNA students in the program multiple times during their training. As usual, a few were bad apples; she tossed them from the basket within the first month. Most of the rest were competent, and a few were outstanding. One in particular seemed to rise above the rest: Aubrey Johnson.
That girl — well, transitioning girl; she was aware of Aubrey’s status — had everything a great aide needed, and more. She soaked up knowledge and instruction, and asked intelligent questions. If it was taught once, Aubrey had it down. Her technique with patients was flawless, and she had a natural way of putting them at ease — crucial, for someone who was going to see them naked. But Aubrey treated the elderly and infirm as real people with real feelings, not as old farts with body odor and bad memory. Patient Hastings wasn’t a crotchety oldster; he was a Korean War hero, and Purple Heart recipient. Aubrey treated and addressed him as such.
Patient Maya Gutierrez was demented to the point where she could not speak or even move her twisted, contracted limbs; yet Aubrey recognized her as a mother to eleven, grandmother to twenty, great-grandmother to thirty-seven. She even called Maya “Mi Mamacita” as she carefully washed her personal areas. The pattern was repeated with each patient, from the loveable to the spiteful. As a result, many patients were clamoring for this girl to be their main aide as soon as she graduated.
However, Mrs. Stoltz had another idea for her superstar pupil, if Aubrey was willing. And now, with one week until certificates, it was time to disclose it. That’s why the student was now sitting in her office at her personal request.
“Aubrey Johnson. An aide-in-training like you comes along only once every couple of years. You are a plum of a student … and you deserve a plum of a job.” She punched on her desk computer. “This is a position that has opened up for a full time, live-in aide. This request has been sent discreetly to only the top CNA employers in the state. They have not asked any of the training programs; I found out about the request through my friend who operates her agency here in Phoenix.
“They are looking for the whole package: Smart, caring, energetic, discreet, and trustworthy. That is you in a nutshell, student. Your lack of work experience is trumped by your other qualities, and I would be happy to vouch for that fact in a letter. To have one of our graduates working for one of the most prestigious lawyers in the state would be quite a feather in our cap.”
“Lawyer?” That word grabbed Aubrey’s attention.
“Oops; speaking of discrete, I think that bit of information was to be kept private, unless you applied for the job.”
“Does he by any chance live in Flagstaff?” she whispered, wide-eyed.
Mrs. Stoltz’s eyes narrowed. “Did you get wind of this offer already? How?”
“Oh, my God,” said Aubrey, hand covering her mouth. “Grant Brisbane!”
Carlotta Brando was concerned. “I don’t like it. If you want the job, just fax the application in. This ‘showing up at the door’ business is too brazen, if you ask me.”
“Think about it,” replied Aubrey. “Once they read my name on the application, they will throw it in the trash. They won’t read any further. This way, I get an audience with him — or at least with Jace.”
“Hm. I suppose. You’ll still need a lot of pluck to pull this off. And Jace can be quite intimidating.”
“Carlotta — can’t you come with me? It would help.”
“Conflict of interest, child. You indeed are my protégé, but he is my employer, at least where you’re concerned. No, I think this is your time to fly, baby eagle. I just worry you’ve chosen to fly into a mighty gale.”
Aubrey straightened her blouse and slacks. “How do I look?”
“You’re starting to show some curves,” Carlotta smiled. “Losing fifteen pounds has really helped. My, how far you’ve come in 3 short months. You’ve fulfilled every point of the project I’ve set before you. I’m so proud of you. If they say no to your proposal, you have multiple job offers waiting for you back here in Phoenix, and I’ll help you with turning the lease and utilities over to your name.”
“And my bonsai? I have to keep it healthy.”
“As soon as you call me that you’ve truly got the job, I’ll ship it to you overnight. I know an exotic plant nursery here who assured me they could accomplish that safely.”
“Thank you, Carlotta. You’ve been more than a mentor — you’ve been a true friend, the first one I’ve had since high school. Thank you for cheering me on.”
“Ah-ah, I’m your life coach, not cheerleader.”
“Okay, coach. How about a pep talk before I jump into the game?”
Carlotta came close and whispered some words into Aubrey’s ear. The young girl nodded her head vigorously. “Right. Great advice! Goodbye, my mentor/friend/coach! I love you!”
The businesswoman misted in her eyes as her disciple snapped on her helmet, hopped on her scooter and rode away. “Goodbye, my most rewarding pupil. Despite my attempts to remain purely professional, I love you too.” She rounded and walked toward her BMW. Stopping just short of the door, she turned back to look wistfully at Aubrey puttering into the distance. Her fists were clenched, and she was shaking.
“Oh, fiddlesticks. I can cheer if I want to. GIVE ‘EM HELL, AUBREY!”
A tall, walking brick of a man knocked on a bedroom door.
“Boss? It’s me, Jace. I’m coming in.”
The bodyguard walked over to his employer’s bed. The figure in it looked weak. He seemed to be weakening every day, except for an occasional good one. His wan face forced a smile. “How are you, my friend?”
“I’m fine. Jeez, boss, I’m supposed to be asking you that question. How’s the breathing? Any angina spells?”
“I’m having a so-so day, Jace. What brings you here right now?”
“Just letting you know I’ve narrowed down the applicants for the live-in aide. There are three outstanding candidates — and a fourth that sounds terrific, if I knew who she was. She wants to apply ‘in person’ with an interview, and her fax says she’ll be arriving at 3. That’s kind of a grandstand play, if you ask me. I plan to refuse her.”
“So — of the three remaining, have you chosen?”
“They all sound great. I think the clincher will be whoever can start soonest — like, today, even. We need someone here ASAP, especially since you nearly fell trying to just get in your wheelchair when I wasn’t around.”
“I trust your judgment, Jace. I’m going to go back to sleep, if I can.”
I wish I trusted my judgment as much as he does. He’s always been the expert at making decisions; I just carry them out, Jace thought as he trotted down the stairs. A ring at the door interrupted his mulling. Who’s that? We aren’t expecting anyone. It can’t be the applicant; it’s only 2 pm.
He opened the door to a young girl with a somewhat familiar face. “Hello, Jace. Can I come in?”
Jace’s furrowed brow finally relaxed in recognition. “Las Vegas! Lenor- no, BAMBI — wait, AUBREY! What the hell are you doin’ here? You look good!” Then he soured a little. “Wait. What the hell ARE you doin’ here?”
“I’m that applicant,” she said pointing to the fax he still grasped in his left hand.
“You? You’re the superstar aide that just graduated from Phoenix? Aw, hell.”
“What’s wrong?” Aubrey asked.
“Aubrey,” whined Jace, “Mr. B gave you a lot of money to turn things around. That was all he was gonna give you. If you’re here looking for more, you’re gonna be disappointed. The best thing you can do for him is to go make something of yourself. But not here. It’s against his policy. I know you and he had a ‘connection’ back in Vegas, but it’s over. I’m not going to let anyone take advantage of him — and there’s no way I can be sure that’s not what you’re here to do.”
“I understand, Jace, I really do. I expected this to be your response to me. Just please, read these, and then hear me out for five minutes. After that, if you want, you’ll never see me again.”
She handed some papers to Jace and he read over them. Sparkling letters of recommendation, multiple urine screens showing her free of illicit drugs, teacher evaluations littered with praise.
“Yeah. I believe you; this all sounds legit. But Aubrey, he was fond of you. And in his weakened state, he can be manipulated. So, the answer is no.”
“Read this; it’s a rider that I would demand added to the contract, should I be hired.”
Jace grumbled as he took the legal appearing form and scanned over it. Gradually his mouth went agape. “This says … that if you are employed by him, it would be on the condition that he never be allowed to give you any extra benefits or money, via bonuses, will, gifts, etc. etc.?”
“Right. So according to that, if I get — or even ask for — more money, or any favors, or anything that’s not outlined in the basic employment contract — it’s prohibited, and I’m fired.”
“It sounds like you’ve covered all the bases, but I dunno …”
“Jace. I need to be able to give something back to him, something more than just me living a good life. He’s dying, and I know how to take care of him — I’m one of the best there is. The best in my class, and according to my administrator, better than most working aides already out there. If you don’t like my work for any reason, fire me. You’ve got others you can replace me with. But he needs me, and I need to do this for him. And - I’m here ready to start right now. He saved my life. Let me make his more comfortable.”
Jace stared at her for an uncomfortable minute. “Let me talk with Mr. B,” he finally said, and headed up the stairs.
He came back down. “You’re hired, on a probationary basis. But I’ll be watching you. Let me show you to your quarters.”
“He’s agreed to let me be his CNA?” she squeaked with excitement.
“No, he’s still asleep. I’m hiring you. God help me if I’ve chosen wrong. God help you, too,” Jace muttered as he led her down the hall.
Grant Brisbane felt tired. And greasy. He was used to bathing every day, but it had been 48 hours since his in-bed bath by the visiting aide. This was one reason he wanted a live-in aide — daily bathing. Also helping with dressing, toileting … and maybe having someone nice to talk to. Jace was fine, but not the greatest conversationalist.
As he lay there with his eyes closed, he remembered his favorite “bath” ever. It was a hot washcloth washing from head to toe, administered by a transsexual named Bambi. Well, really Aubrey, but she was Bambi to him at that moment. If he concentrated enough, he could almost recall the hot moist towelettes wrapping around his feet, his ankles …
Goodness, my memory is really vivid today. It's almost as if I actually feel her bathing me again. Wait. That feels too real. It ... it IS real?
He opened his eyes. There was a blonde woman down at his feet, working his limbs in a familiar way with hot, steamy white washcloths.
“Madam? Are you my new aide?”
The blonde head turned, and he saw her face. “Hello, Mr. Brisbane. I remembered how much you liked this.”
“Aubrey! What … How?”
“I’m the aide that Jace hired. Top of my class, the best there is. And it’s all happened because of you, and your generous gift you sowed into my life. I thank God that I get to show you my gratitude in person. Just lay back, close your eyes, and let me minister to your body.”
“Madam — gladly. And please, call me Grant.”
“Sorry, sir. I am now your employee, and I should address you with respect, as the rest of your hires do.”
He felt gradually, gloriously fresh as she worked her way up his body. As she got to his chest, she stopped. “Mr. Brisbane — what is this lump here? I don’t remember seeing that on Valentine’s Day.”
“My combination pacemaker / defibrillator. It was implanted in early March. If my heart beats too slowly, the pacemaker speeds it up. If my heart stops — or goes into fibrillation — the defibrillator shocks me, just like those electric paddles that you see used in CPR.”
“Wow. That sounds painful, sir.”
“It hurts. But it keeps me alive. If you can call my current existence ‘living’, that is. Sometimes I’ll go days without a shock; on a really bad day, I’ll have multiple shocks.”
“Sir … is there any chance they could find a matching heart in time?”
“Oh, I suppose there’s always hope, theoretically,” Brisbane sighed. “But realistically, a heart like the one I would need may come along once every ten years or so. It’s not going to happen, Aubrey; I’ve had to accept that.”
Grant looked up to see his aide’s head turned away from him; she had a tissue and was obviously dabbing her eyes. She took a minute to compose herself, then she turned to him again, her eyes red but with a forced smile on her lips.
“Well, then. Whatever time you have, let’s make it as comfortable, and relaxing, and enjoyable as possible for you.” She resumed the washing with the cloths while they still were somewhat warm.
“Boss, I’m turning in for the night. Anything I can get you?” Jace stated with a stifled yawn.
“How about a live in-person performance by the Phoenix Symphony? I do so miss good, live music,” Grant sighed.
The big bodyguard’s voice actually started to crack a little. “Boss … I’m sorry. I … I don’t know what to do to help. I feel so useless to you.”
“Please, Jace. You are the best employee I’ve ever had. Where would I be without your help? I’m … I’m just feeling a little lonely is all. Go to bed, my friend. I’ll be fine.”
“Um … Mr. Brisbane? Can I come in? I have something for you.” It was Aubrey’s voice speaking through the slightly cracked bedroom door. She opened it, and stuck her head in timidly.
“Hey, Aub. You’re off duty, aren’t you?” said Jace.
“You know I am, Jace — you wrote up my contract.” Aubrey was to work tending personally to Mr. Brisbane’s personal needs for four hours in the morning and four more in the afternoon, as well as being “on call” for any emergencies that might arise after hours. For that, she got a modest salary, room and board, and medical insurance. Her evenings were free for the most part, though it was recommended she stay available in the estate unless she was at one of her SA or SARP meetings. “I’m here on my own time. I thought Mr. Brisbane would enjoy some music.”
Grant saw a blonde thick chested girl in a black satin blouse and black dress slacks with matching pumps walk in. She carried a music stand and a case with a handle. Sitting down, she placed some sheet music on the stand, lifted her viola to her neck and began playing an easy but beautiful piece, Bach’s Jesu, Joy of Man’s Desiring. She followed that with a selection from Mozart’s Eine Kleine Nachtmusik.
Jace watched, impressed. She was no virtuoso, but she wasn’t bad. How did she know that the boss had wanted something like this tonight?
Grant clapped as she finished, blushing. “I’m sorry I don’t have more for you — these are the two that I started practicing down in Phoenix. They’ve always made me feel relaxed. And as I cleaned the room today, I saw you wistfully watching the Mahler concert on PBS, and say that you wished you weren’t just listening to a recorded show.”
“Wow, Aub. You picked that up from just a random wish Mr. B made?” Jace said.
“Successful people are great listeners,” smiled Aubrey.
Two days later, as Aubrey was in her lavender scrubs giving Mr. Brisbane a pedicure, a strange woman walked in. Strange, because she wore a stethoscope around her neck indicating she was a healthcare worker, but yet she had on a tie-dye T-shirt and some jeans with peace symbol patterns “bedazzled” onto them.
“Hello, Grant!” Her eyes beamed through her auburn bangs, and her straightened red hair tickled her shoulder tops.
Aubrey sat up. “Hello … who are you?”
“I’m Jeannette Baumgartner, Grant’s hospice nurse. And I’ll bet you are his new live-in aide! Good to meet you!”
“Yes. I’m Aubrey.”
“Hello, Jeannette,” croaked a weak patient from his bed. “Sorry that I didn’t introduce you two.”
“We’re two grown women, Grant. We know how to meet each other, and you sound like you need to save your breath anyway.”
“You should address him as Mr. Brisbane,” Aubrey whispered to her.
Grant caught that. “Jeannette is not my direct employee, my dear. And I have requested that she call me by my first name. I still wish you would, too; at the very least, in the evenings. I consider you a friend who is also my hired CNA; so when the CNA is ‘off duty’, just address me as Grant, friend.”
“Jace never calls you that.”
“The stick-in-the-mud,” Grant sighed.
“Okay, my turn,” crooned Jeannette. “I’m going to call your doc with an update after I leave here, so dish. Any worsening of the chest pains or shortness of breath in the last few days? Are you being ‘zapped’ more by your defibrillator?”
Jeannette worked smoothly and quickly, taking a listen to his heart and lungs and feeling his limbs for swelling. As she did, she was cheerful and joking, and Grant responded to her attitude with a huge smile and even a laugh or two.
Aubrey was impressed. I guess I thought a ‘hospice’ nurse would be somber and depressed, like a funeral director in scrubs. But she’s lifting his spirits and making him feel better — which I guess would mean she’s doing her job well.
As if on cue, though, Jeannette’s demeanor suddenly became more serious. “I brought what you asked for, sir.” From her nurses’ bag she pulled out what appeared to be a large plastic “O” — about the size of a donut — and laid it on the bedside table with a heavy “CLUNK”.
“Ah — the deactivator.” Grant sighed again, and looked away.
“The what?” Aubrey didn’t like the sound of that.
The nurse took the CNA’s hand. “It’s basically a big, strong magnet,” she said. “It will stop the defibrillator from shocking him and restarting his heart.”
Aubrey felt her chest grow numb, and her arms and legs suddenly chilled. “Why the hell does he need something like that?” she whispered almost inaudibly.
“Dear. Don’t curse at Jeannette,” chided Grant weakly.
“It’s okay, Grant. I think she was saying it to the situation, not to me,” intervened the red haired woman. “It’s only to be used at the very end. When his heart is irreversibly stopping, then his defibrillator will shock him repeatedly to try to start it up again. If the heart still won’t respond — and when it’s really the end, it won’t — then he’ll be shocked over and over until the battery runs out, and that will be the last sensation he feels in life: shocks. This magnet will prevent that; all that has to be done is to lay it over the pacer / defibrillator and keep it there. It has to be placed directly over that lump on his left chest to work; and if it’s taken off, then the defibrillator re-activates and the shocks start again.”
“The jolts are quite unpleasant,” remarked Grant. “If they start to happen more frequently, I may apply it early.”
Jeannette looked so sad now. “That’s … that’s up to you, sir.”
Aubrey was shaking, tears streaming down her cheeks. She opened her mouth as if to interject her opinion, but only jerking sobs came out. Covering her face with her hands, she ran from the room.
“Jeannette — go catch her, please, and explain. I’m not trying to kill myself. I’m just so tired of the shocks,” moaned Mr. Brisbane.
The nurse took off to find the distraught aide.
Aubrey ran outside the front door of the estate and sprinted to the garage. As she approached the open bay, she choked out a “hello”; when no one answered, she let loose. Loud wails, that bent her body and threatened to tip her over into a fall, tore loose from her throat.
An agony unlike she had ever known had gripped her; not worse than the hell of the abuse in Vegas, just different. All she knew was that her savior was dying. He was suffering so badly that he didn’t want to live anymore, and she was helpless to stop it. “I’m useless! Worthless! A cheap, lousy whore-”
“No, you’re not,” said a firm but gentle voice, accompanied by a soft hand on Aubrey’s shoulder. “You’ve made a difference in his life. A huge difference. HUU-UUGE. You’ve brought a joy to him like none of the rest of us have been able to. What a wonderful gift to give to a man in his position, his condition.” Jeannette’s voice was reassuring, if a little breathy from running in pursuit of the girl.
The young girl shook her head as she continued to shed tears. “You don’t even know me — we just met. You’re telling pretty lies to make me feel better.”
“Yeah, I just met you face-to-face. But I contact Jace daily about Grant, and I’ve been nosy enough to inquire about the new aide taking care of him. You’re getting rave reviews, and all who know Mr. B have said he’s actually brightened since you came on. The mini-concert with the viola really touched him. There’s obviously some kind of connection you two have — not necessarily infatuation, but you seem to ‘get’ each other in some way. I could see that from the little bit I saw today.”
“Even if you’re right, Jeannette, it’s not enough. It tears me apart to hear him say that he’s suffering. And what are you doing? Giving him something so he can commit suicide? I thought euthanasia was illegal in Arizona!”
“Like I said, I brought it at his request, and it’s only to be used at the end, when the repeated shocks are doing nothing but torturing him. Used that way, it’s not even close to being euthanasia. I didn’t expect him to suggest he would use it before that point, though.”
“We need to hide it, then, so he won’t be tempted to use it too early.” Aubrey sniffed loud and wet. “Dammit. DAMMIT! It’s just so wrong. He’s only … only,” —she paused, realizing that she didn’t know Grant’s age.
“Forty-two,” Jeannette finished.
“My god. He looks at least ten years older!”
“That’s what a bad heart can make you look like. It’s aged his face as much as anything else.”
“Poor Grant. I feel so helpless. SHIT! … Sorry. Don’t you ever want to cuss over this situation?”
Jeannette smiled. “I don’t curse, sweetie. I pray, I cry, I punch my pillow, I moan, but I don’t curse. The closest I come is “darn”. If you EVER heard me curse, it would be as a last resort to get someone’s attention in an emergency. It’s just a personal conviction; I don’t judge you for doing so, though.”
Aubrey was red cheeked. “Sorry for cussing around you, anyway. I didn’t know.”
“Pshaw! Think nothing of it, sweetheart. Tell you what: let’s exchange cell phone numbers. That way I have another contact here, and you can call me if you have any questions or concerns — about anything, hear me? And now — if you’re ready, let’s go back and show Grant that you’re going to be okay.”
The two walked back to the house, holding onto — and leaning into — each other.
To be continued tomorrow
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to a real situation or person is purely coincidental.
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Chapter 5
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Aubrey was determined to make the best of her remaining time with Grant. She even temporarily put on hold her attendance at SARS and SA meetings so that she could spend each evening with him. More and more nights he had no energy to do anything but to lie in bed. At those times, Aubrey would just sit at his side and hold his hand, or read to him poems from his favorite poets, like Shelley and Yeats. But when Grant had an occasional time where he had more energy, Aubrey would engage him in conversation.
They talked about many things, but transgender feelings and fears were frequently discussed. Grant felt finally safe opening up about these things because he knew she had experienced the same.
“Ah, my dear. When I hear about what an awful time you have had transitioning, especially earlier, it makes me a little less regretful that I didn’t pursue it. After all, for all the difficulty in ‘taking the plunge’ that there is today, it’s nothing like the anathema that existed when I was young. I do not regret missing out on that.”
“Grant, if there had been a guy like yourself around to accept and help you, I’ll bet that you could have made a go of it. You have blessed my life so much; did you know that? I’m still nowhere near repaying you for your kindness.”
“You, being happy and successful, are my reward.” He looked melancholy. “One of the most frustrating things about my cross-dressing was the privacy I had to do it in. I mean, Jace knew, and he is nothing if not discreet and loyal, but I knew he didn’t like me doing it. It would have been fun having a girl like you to do dress up with during those days.”
“Grant … why couldn’t we still do it? Look, it’s late tonight, but if you have another ‘good day’ … watch out, sister!”
“Nooo. It’s very impractical. Wouldn’t work.”
“Yes it cooo — ould,” Aubrey cooed with a musical flirt.
“I ‘purged’ 4 months ago. I have nothing to wear.”
“Give me a clothing allowance for you; I’ll get you something nice.”
“If anyone found out…”
“We could have ‘Jace The Discreet and Loyal’ guard the room for 3 hours while we play dress up. Give me $400 to buy you some outfits, and I’ll be ready the next time your heart is.”
Grant sighed, and closed his eyes without responding for a whole minute more. Then he opened them with an intense stare. “NO.”
“Aw, Grant. No? Really?”
“No — to the suggestion of $400. Take $1000.”
Aubrey jumped up and down on her toes as she squealed.
“Hello. My name is Aubrey, and I have a compulsive sex problem.”
As she spoke into the screen on her computer, the others on the group Skype video call replied “Hello, Aubrey,” and nodded their heads. Video meetings of my support groups sure are a lifesaver, she thought. I can still deal with and work through my issues without having to be physically away from the estate, and Grant. Still not quite as good as being face to face — it’s harder to comfort or hug through the computer screen — but much better than nothing.
“I’m almost to 100 days since my last compulsive sexual act. I have still been working with my sponsor from Phoenix, calling her at least 3 times a week and emailing her on the days in between. I’m still journaling, and working the steps; I try to skype individually with one of my Sexaholics Anonymous friends every day.
“You guys can also see my bonsai tree sitting behind me. It’s still alive, thank God! I’ve had to care for this plant so meticulously; every day I have to “mist” the leaves with water multiple times, because Arizona is so dry. I’ve pruned it by pinching off much of the new growth; girl, that was actually painful, because I felt like I was hurting it. But having seen pictures of Bonsai that are never pruned, I’m glad I did it. When it grows unfettered in every which direction, it can outgrow it’s root structure, and get unhealthy.
“And I have had to apply that principle to my life as well. If I indulge in every longing or whim, I end up doing multiple things and finishing few of them. I’d rather do a few things in my life with high quality than do a ton of things in a mediocre way. So I play the viola, read, do my support group work and my job, exercise, and interact with … a friend, after hours. I don’t have room right now for reality TV, or clubbing, or much shopping. Some might call me too sheltered; but I call it living in balance, for now.”
After multiple other people took turns sharing their experience, strength, and hope, the meeting was over. Aubrey was about to turn off the computer when she noticed her SA sponsor, Sharon, was trying to call her back via Skype.
“Hey there, sponsee. You had some good stuff to share at the meeting tonight. And that tree does look healthy. I’m impressed. Usually by this point, half of my sponsees tend to have to buy a new ivy plant.”
“IVY plant? You don’t mean I’m the only one who had to take care of a bonsai, do you?”
“Honey, you’re the only one who slept with nearly five hundred different partners in two years. You had the most crap to overcome, and therefore I gave you the hardest work to do. But — you’re doing it!”
“Thanks, Sharon. It means a lot that you’d call me to encourage me like this.”
“Uh — uh, girl. That’s not the main reason I called. During the meeting you talked about interacting with a friend in the evenings. You want to tell me about it?”
“Oh, yeah. That’s really nothing, definitely not a romance. It’s my boss, the one who’s dying … I try to spend time with him so he’s not lonely. It’s my small way of trying to pay him back for what he’s done for me.”
“Sounds like quite a sacrifice you’re making.”
“It’s not a sacrifice at all. I enjoy our time together. He and I … well, we understand each other.”
“So … he’s transgendered?”
“NO! I mean, he’d never … all he did was just …”
“Sounds like he is, then.”
“No! No, he, um ... Blast it! No one’s supposed to know that he deals with that issue. God, Sharon — you can’t tell anybody!”
“Remember, honey, what’s said here, stays here. I’m not trying to ‘out’ anybody. I’m just seeing what kind of a relationship you have. So, is he a good friend?”
“Oh, Sharon. He’s the best. So kind, and sweet, and intelligent. He loves music — good music — and gracious to a fault. I laugh so much when we’re together; and I cry so much when I think about what’s about to happen to him.”
“Uhhhh, hon? That sounds a lot more serious than just being buddies.”
“Sharon, that’s crazy. He’s old enough to be my dad.”
“Hmm. I see. So, when he finally dies, it will hurt, but you’ll carry on, right?”
Aubrey didn’t answer right away, as she had begun weeping suddenly. She tried to pull it together a few times, but when she then tried to talk she just started to cry again. After a few minutes, she had gained a little more control, though she still leaked at the corners of her eyes. Those eyes grew wider and wider as an unexpected revelation hit her.
“Oh my God. I’m in love with him!”
This caused more sobbing, with Sharon waiting patiently on the screen.
Finally, with red eyes and more tissues at the ready, Aubrey voiced her newfound fears. “I — I can’t be in love with him! He’s my boss, for Pete’s sake! I made a vow to you to not be in a relationship until after September! He’s a famous, successful lawyer, and I’m just a nurses’ aide who four months ago was a whore. And he’s going to die soon. And I don’t want to live without him! I wish I could take his place, and die instead of him! … Sharon, I — I can’t talk right now. I’ll call you tomor-”
“Don’t you dare turn this session off, Aubrey! Just cry, hon. I’m right here.”
Sharon hummed lullabies and other comforting tunes as her young sponsee fell apart.
Aubrey had her head resting on it’s side on the desk in front of her computer. Sharon was still onscreen, whispering affirming phrases to her. The young girl finally looked up towards her sponsor’s face in the monitor.
“I wish you were here, Sharon. I could really use a thirty minute hug right now.”
“I’m huggin’ you in my heart. I asked Scotty to beam me over but he says the transistors are down ‘cause the dilibrium crystals are cracked.”
“Ha ha ha! Said like a true faux-trekkie.”
“Hey, hon. Have you had sex with him? Or, do you find yourself wanting to?”
“No. The thought of even just stimulating him turns me off — way off. Because his heart would give out, and I’d have killed him. You know, if we were officially boyfriend and girlfriend, it would be perfect for me right now — because sex would be out of the picture. I’d be forced, essentially, to develop a relationship with him as purely a friend first, before we got physical. If it were ever possible.”
“You use the words ‘if’ and ‘would’ like this relationship wasn’t already happenin’. It really sounds like you two are already dating, in a way. Does he love you? And whether he does or not, should he go to his grave not knowing how you feel about him?”
“I don’t know. God help me, I don’t know what to do.”
“Well, let me straighten you out. I didn’t ask you to not get into a relationship before September; just no casual sex before then. If your positions were changed and it was you on the deathbed, would you want him to tell you if he carried a torch for you?”
“His ex-wife just wanted him for sex, Sharon. And because he’s rich, so many others have wanted him just to eventually get something from him. I don’t want him thinking that I’m like that. I have no idea how to tell him … that I love him.”
“Actions still speak louder than words, grasshopper. These activities in the evenings that you’re doing with him? They’ll do the talking for you. That’s probably the best way to show him your love now. In my humble opinion, at least.”
Grant Brisbane had not had a ‘good’ day in over a week, but thankfully today was an exception. He even had Jace roll him in a wheelchair out to the garden in the back, and he read the paper and had some herbal tea. Now he was back in his bedroom, and he had put on his oxygen and tried to get a nap so he could be rested up to talk with Aubrey tonight.
Before he fell asleep, he thought about how essential the young transgirl’s nightly visits had become to him. She and he shared confidences, laughs, and occasionally tears; they confided in each other their hopes, fears, frustrations, and dreams. His daydreams lately consisted of him running into her when he was twenty-two, entering law school; she was magically his age, and they would fall in love and marry. That’s the fantasy he was entertaining when he went to sleep for his nap just now.
He gradually awoke to his body being moved. He recognized Aubrey’s style and touch as she gave him a change in underwear; that meant (he realized embarrassedly) that he likely had soiled the pair he had on earlier.
“Hello, Aubrey. I hope we can talk tonight,” he said as he opened his eyes.
“Not talk — gossip, girlfriend. And honey, do I have some juicy slices of secrets to share with you!”
Grant’s jaw went slack as he saw Aubrey in a see-through negligee’ with sexy lingerie — a lacy black bra and panties — and a fully made up face with false eyelashes, glossy red lips, and sultry eyeshade. Her hair was in pigtails, and she continued to speak.
“I’m soooo happy we’re having this slumber party, Gracie! I’ve needed some girl time with someone — y’know, so we can talk about makeup, clothes, periods, and growing up. And B-O-Y-S! And stupid parents, and — ”
Grant chuckled at her silliness while raising his hand to show he wanted to interrupt, to find out what the heck she was doing. But as he did so, he noticed that his nails were painted — a rose coating with sparkles!
“SURPRISE! I did your fingernails while you slept. I shaved your legs, and did your toes, too. You’re a really sound sleeper, girl. While doing your legs, I got to see your new satin panties — OH, you look so hot in them!”
Aubrey held up a hand mirror, and he got a good look at the underwear that had just been put on him. Yes indeed, they were gorgeous red satin panties with a lace border. His legs were hairless, and as he pulled one out from under the covers, he noticed his toenails matched his fingers.
“And now for the piece de resistance — this goes with your panties.” Aubrey pulled out a flowing, shimmering red satin nightgown from a shopping bag. “We girls can go topless around each other, but you need this on just in case your nosy butler walks in.”
Grant raised an eyebrow. “So, Jace …?”
“Is outside the door, standing guard for the rest of the evening,” Aubrey whispered with a wink. She then temporarily took the oxygen off of Grant’s nose while quickly slipping the gown over his head, and then she put the tube back on his face immediately. Grant knew he was relatively light because of so much weight loss from being sickly; still, he was amazed at how quickly yet gently his live-in CNA moved his body around to let the gown flow all the way down to his knees.
“Let me fix your hair real quick, girlfriend.” Aubrey produced a black bob wig and deftly placed it on his head. She then sat back on her heels, next to Grant in the bed.
“So, Gracie, I’m still waiting for someone to invite me to the senior prom. I heard a rumor that hunky Jack Greenfield wanted to ask you! OOOoooohh … wouldn’t that be so dreamy?”
Grant didn’t answer; he was looking at himself with the large hand mirror. The bob wig actually framed his face very well; if he was less gaunt in his cheeks and had less of a worn, wrinkled look, he thought he would have appeared quite fetching. The gown was stunning; the satin felt like melted butter on his skin, and a heretofore-unnoticed pattern of roses emerged through the light reflecting off of it as he slightly moved around. His nails and legs — he had never gone this far before, at least not as an adult.
Aubrey’s heart rate was increasing, due to nervousness. Grant still had not responded to her last question, and now he looked at her with a raised eyebrow and … suspicion? Fear? Anger or hesitancy? She couldn’t get a good read on his reaction. I really swung for the fences here; I just hope I didn’t strike out. This all may be too much for him to take in. I should have gotten his permission to do this instead of surprising him. He’s probably embarrassed and uncomfortable; I’d better break “out of character” and call this off.
He put the mirror down, and a look of disgust came on his face. Tossing his nose into the air, he finally replied in a falsetto.
“Jack Greenfield? He eats like a pig, and all he ever does with me is try to look down my blouse or up my skirt. I’d rather go to the prom with a pimply-faced freshman!”
Aubrey laughed and clapped with glee.
Gracie and Aubrey were now in matching cheerleader uniforms. Aubrey made sure she got cell phone pictures of each of them in all of their different modes of dress, both separately and together. As Gracie reclined propped up by pillows, Aubrey laid on her stomach next to her on the king size bed.
“Sooo, Grace,” said the blonde as she clacked her tennis shoes together in the air. “Don’t you just love being a girl? I sure do. What do you like most about it?”
“Aubrey, It just feels so natural, so fulfilling. You know, I really feel like I could live life as a guy — as long as I got to experience being a girl, too.”
“Be a GUY? BLEECCHHH! I mean, don’t get me wrong, I love guys — I just never want to be one. Speaking of guys, you know your brother, Grant? He’s kinda cute. I think I might be crushing on him. Don’t you dare tell him!”
“Really? But he’s so much older than you. And, don’t you work for him? How would that work, you dating your boss? Many would think it’s a horrible idea; you don’t work together as equals, but then have an ‘equal’ relationship as soon as it hits five o’clock?”
“I haven’t figured any of that stuff out. Love is foolish and unreasonable, silly! Okay, changing the subject. Time for our last outfits of the day … prom dresses!”
“Oh … my … god … no … way,” gasped Gracie.
The gowns were a dream of taffeta and satin. Aubrey’s was a mint green number with spaghetti straps; Gracie, out of bed for the first time all night, was in a peach shimmer with a matching boa.
“Look at you. You’re going to melt every boy’s head when you walk into the ballroom. Natural beauty — you have it,” said Aubrey with a whistle. She clicked more pictures.
“You’re not too shabby yourself, Miss Mint Julep,” replied Gracie. “I’m so lucky to have a BFF like you, did you realize that?”
Aubrey stopped clicking pictures, and gave a wobbly smile with misty eyes. “I’m way more lucky than you. NYAAAH,” she stuck out her tongue. “Oh, wait! I thought I heard truck tires in the front — that’s my prom date. Yours will be here in five minutes. Let me help you into bed, and you can wait for him.”
“The prom’s tonight?” The older girl looked surprised at this, as Aubrey eased her on top of the covers.
“Yes, dodo-brain! Where would you be without me to remind you of these things? Now just wait patiently, and David will be right up to get you.”
Gracie was left in bed, baffled, as Aubrey hopped off into the master bath.
Aubrey did the most rapid quick change she could muster. She was sure that Grant was getting fatigued by now, and there was no telling how much more he could endure before needing to call it a night.
As she wiped the makeup off her face and readied the false facial hair, she was surprised. I thought I’d feel much more disgust with this part. But doing it to help Grant experience Gracie — it doesn’t bother me much at all.
Gracie was sitting in bed, looking at her nails, half wishing that she could have applied a peach coat to go with her dress. They were still so pretty, though.
The door to the master bath opened with a click, and she looked up. “So, Aubrey! How was the prom? Did he kiss you goodni-”
It wasn’t Aubrey who walked through the door. Well, it was, but in a male persona. A man with a blonde beard and mustache, and his hair pulled back in a low ponytail. He wore a black and grey tux with peach accents to match his date’s gown, and a fedora hat tilted slightly to one side. A strained lower voice emanated from his lips.
“Hey there, baby. Are you ready to go cut a rug?”
Gracie was speechless with an open mouth that slowly transformed into the widest smile.
“On the other hand, you look too delicious for me to share you with anyone else tonight. My sister Aubrey warned me to treat you like a lady or else she’d get even with me the way only a sibling can. Why don’t we sit and talk in the candlelight?” With that, "David" produced a match and candles in candlesticks. Lighting them and putting them on the bedside table, he turned the other room lights off. Then he slowly slid beside Gracie and put his arm around her.
“You are so gorgeous, my sweet. A rare combination of outer hotness and inner beauty. I’m so honored to be your prom date. Mike and the guys couldn’t believe it when I told them you said “yes”. They said I must have hypnotized you or something, ‘cause the only boy worthy of taking you anywhere is, like, a prince or an emperor’s kid.” Dang it! Blew it at the end; that was supposed to be “an angel from heaven.”
Gracie was still impressed. “Oh David,” she cooed. “You’re such a smooth talker. I’ll bet you are just trying to win me over so you can have your way with me.”
“Hey babe — you’re the one who looks like an overdue library book.”
“Huh?”
“Because you’ve got ‘fine’ written aaaall over you.”
“HA HA HA HA,” guffawed Gracie. “That — HA, HA — was sooo cheesy!”
“David” was gratified. That was the heartiest “he” had ever seen “Gracie” laugh.
“Oh, HA HA — oh my goodness — hee, hee! Ohh, David. Do you want to hear a secret about your sister?”
“Huh? What secret?” David had not expected for Gracie to take the reigns with this role play.
“The secret is,” Gracie said in a suddenly hushed tone, “my brother Grant. He’s in love with her. Madly. She is his reason for wanting to hang on one more day, every day. He doesn’t know what he would do without her in his life. I know — bosses shouldn’t fall in love with their employees. But as a wise girl once said, love is foolish and unreasonable.”
David looked at Gracie. His heart was bursting, and a huge lump in his throat had muted him. As they grasped each other’s hands, their eyes locked. In each other’s gaze, the play-roles fell away and they were Aubrey and Grant, sharing and baring their souls. Grant, head resting back on his pillow, eked out a whisper.
“Kiss me, you unreasonable fool.”
Aubrey moved her face slowly towards his. Their lips, then their tongues, met. They didn’t move for what felt to her like sixteen hours.
Finally, Aubrey pulled back. “Grant — your heart! Is it okay? Any trouble breathing?”
Grant was visibly breathing harder, but smiling. He touched one of his pretty nails to Aubrey’s lips, and then pointed to his.
Aubrey’s heart broke. “Grant — my love — God, I want to, but you must rest now. Rest, and I’ll carefully get you out of this gown.”
All at once, there was a shrill woman’s voice outside the bedroom door. The voice was yelling, and was opposed by the low growl of Jace’s unique speech.
Grant’s eyes opened wide with fear. “Oh no — not her, not with me like this! Aubrey — get me back to maleness,” he was huffing and puffing hard, suddenly, “-NOW!”
Aubrey went to work double time. She wiped the makeup off his face, deftly moved him around to remove the gown, and grabbed the wig. With her free hand, she turned the oxygen level to 6, as Jeannette had told her could be done when Grant was in major distress.
Jace stuck his head in. “You guys, she’s throwing a major hissy fit. Threatened to call the police. I can turn ‘em away, but it’ll be easier for all of us if I can let her in. I’ll hold her off as long as you need me to, but she’s about to pop.” He pulled his head back and closed the door.
As Aubrey cleaned the nail polish off his hands furtively, her mood blackened. This had to be his ex-wife. Just what right does she have to be here, anyway? Jace should give her a big shoe print on her backside and launch her out of the second story window!
No time to do the toenails, and no quick way to hide the legs. Aubrey pulled the panties off and replaced them with boxers, slipped a loose men’s pajama top on him, then threw the comforter over him and pulled it up to his chest. He looked like he was calming some; thank God.
She grabbed every possible insinuating item and ran full tilt to the closet, throwing them in and shutting the door. Flying then into the bathroom, she did a quick Houdini out of the tux and faux beard and ‘stache. Grabbing a pair of work scrubs, she donned them and did a quick look in the mirror. No makeup, but not too bad for a nurse’s aide.
She trotted back into the bedroom. Grant looked exhausted, but not as severe as five minutes ago. Then walking to the door and mentally composing herself, she opened it. “I’ve was bathing him, but I’m finished. He’s decent now. Who are —”
A blonde, long-haired woman shoved Aubrey aside with surprising ease. As she walked towards the bed, Aubrey recovered and stomped towards her enemy, rage in her eyes. The aide was stopped by a big paw on her shoulder; looking back, she saw Jace shaking his head and wagging his finger. Then she looked back to the woman approaching Grant’s bed.
The woman had stopped, four feet from the bed, and had a shocked look on her face. The cause was the comforter; it had partially slid off of Grant, exposing a shaved leg and painted toenails.
“Oh, Grant. No. Not this again. Not now. My God, how do you live with yourself knowing how you embarrass all of us with this crap? Didn’t you learn your lesson when we were teenagers?”
A sad Grant looked past the woman to Aubrey. “Gail, this is Aubrey, my in-house personal care aide. Aubrey, this is Gail …
"... my sister."
To be continued tomorrow
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Chapter 6 (conclusion)
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Gail Murphree, Grant’s sister, had decided to pay him a visit. She didn’t visit too often; after all, she had her husband Grayson and her kids to take care of. They lived in a 5 bedroom, 6-bath mini-castle in the posh part of Phoenix. She did keep an eye on Grant’s condition by calling Jeannette, his hospice nurse. Upon hearing how debilitated he’d become — enough to hire a live in aide — she’d driven up to check on him, and make sure he wasn’t doing anything foolish, like donating the estate to some charity or similar thing. After all, it was partly her inheritance, too.
“Grant. Grant, Grant, Grant.” Gail shook her head as she took his hand and found a telltale trace of polish on one nail. “No wonder Vanessa wanted to divorce you. Have you been doing this all your adult life under our noses? I thought exposing you to Mom and Dad almost thirty years ago would have made you swear off this queer habit for good.”
Aubrey’s memory kicked in then. His sister — the one who had outed him publicly! Well, in front of his parents and the junior league president. Oh God. I was thinking this was his ex-wife. In fact, maybe his ex visiting would be less traumatic than this witch.
Grant’s sibling continued. “Please, brother … please don’t do things like this. If you keep it up, somehow it will become public knowledge — and will defile the Brisbane name that our parents worked so hard to establish. Don’t dishonor their memory.”
Jace was watching his boss for any hint, any signal, that would allow him to remove this woman. Just a nod of the head, or even a sign of distress. But Grant just lay there with his sad face looking off to the side, as if he was trying to tune out of this harsh moment.
Gail turned to the aide and the bodyguard. “And you two-! You are complicit in this shameful behavior! Jace, I know you had to be aware of this. And you-”
She looked at Aubrey with eyes that at first just showed anger, but then morphed into realization and shock also. “You’re a man, aren’t you? Oh, my God. The aide is a transvestite! Or transsexual, or whatever you’re calling yourself. I can tell by your big ugly shoulders, your hideous jaw. You’re the cause of this, I’ll wager! How did you find out about my brother, you freakish excuse for protoplasm?”
With that comment, three sets of eyes came alive.
Aubrey’s eyes were filled with anger and verging tears. She wanted to rip into this woman, but held back because of her relation to Grant.
Grant’s eyes, hazy and dull just a second ago, now flashed with fire and ire. He looked at Jace and gave a nod as he clenched his teeth.
Jace’s eyes now narrowed with the focus and intensity of a pit bull finally set free from its leash. He grabbed Gail’s upper arm with gentleness, then gave it a moderate squeeze to let her know he meant business. His velvet servant’s voice had an undercurrent of steel to it.
“You’re leaving the room, Miss Gail.”
“You can’t ask me to leave my br-“
“I’m not asking. I’m telling. So, madam, will you be walking out the door, or should I carry you there?”
Gail was inwardly furious at being told to leave — by a servant! Yet her common sense knew not to mess with an angry man-mountain. She walked in a huff, stamping down her high heels as she headed to the bedroom door. She heard Jace shut it firmly and lock it behind her the split-second she exited. She stopped, turned, and yelled at the door. “I am not leaving this house until I get to talk more with Grant!”
Jace and Aubrey ran to gasping, sweating lawyer.
“Boss, you okay? Breathing? Angina?”
Jace saw him nod, and got the nitroglycerine and morphine out. Approaching his employer’s mouth, he popped the first in (a pill), then dropped the second in (a liquid) with an eye dropper.
Aubrey had her lips to Grant’s ear, and gently stroked his chest with her hand. “It’s okay, Grant,” she breathed. “She can’t hurt me. Don’t be upset about it, please. Just calm yourself. I’ve heard tons worse. Think happy thoughts.” She then hummed the tune to the second movement of Beethoven’s ‘Pathetique’ sonata.
Grant, breathing heavy still, somehow mustered up the energy to turn his head to the side and brush his lips against Aubrey’s. “I’m happy … anytime you’re … by my side … my love.”
Jace’s eyebrows reared back like two bucking broncos. “Anything happen in here I should know about?” he mumbled.
Grant was finally breathing easier, but the emotion and the activity of the evening had exhausted him. Now he was sleeping with the oxygen still turned on to the max of 6, and Aubrey and Jace stepped out of his room to let him snooze.
They walked down the hall and the stairs together, silently. “I think we’re out of range from the bedroom now. Let’s talk,” Jace said in his calm voice.
It suddenly turned raging. “Aubrey! What the hell? I thought you told me you weren’t going to take advantage of him! And now he says that you two love each other?
“I — I didn’t plan it. It just happened,” said the aide.
“I’d like to believe that, I really would. But it’s just too convenient. You’re here for two weeks, and suddenly you’re not just his personal care aide, you’re his lover. Those nights I allowed you in to read to him — what was really going on? You know physical activity and emotions make his heart more strained!”
“I know, I know. I never should have allowed it to get this far. But it only happened tonight.”
“What happened? Did you use one of your old hooker tricks? Did you take him with your hand, or did he come in your mouth?”
“Jace! No! It never went more than a kiss, and just tonight!” Aubrey was tearing up. “I’d never do anything that would hurt him,” then remembering how exhausted Grant looked after the kiss, “I — I mean, not on purpose …”
Jace’s face was a snarl. “Did you get him to give you money? Or put you in his will?”
“No, Jace. I know that would break my contract.”
“Forget your contract. You’re fired. I’m firing you for cause. You have betrayed me — and him, in my opinion. I’ll call an emergency service to get me an aide for tomorrow, and call one of the other applicants for the future — as much future as he has left, that is.
“I want you packed and out of here by 12 noon tomorrow. Since it’s almost midnight tonight, I’ll allow you to sleep in your room, provided you stay there. Don’t come anywhere near Mr. Brisbane’s room, or I’ll call the cops. You’ll need them, to protect you from me.”
“J — Jace,” Aubrey sobbed, “I deserve to be fired. I’ll not work a day more. But please let me still visit him. Please, Jace. Please.”
The big man turned around. For the first time Aubrey could remember, he actually had tears in his eyes. “You come near him again,” he said through gritted teeth, “and I’ll break your neck.”
He walked away, as Aubrey collapsed on the floor in a heap.
Aubrey sobbed uncontrollably. She felt emotionally like she was falling into a bottomless pit. Her pain encompassed her whole existence, and nothing could break through — except, a faint clapping noise.
A slow clap, and it grew louder, but not faster. Then a voice spoke with the clapping.
“Bravo, bravo,” Gail sneered with dripping sarcasm. “An Oscar worthy performance. Where did you learn your method acting? Julliard? Carnegie Mellon? Sunset Boulevard?”
Aubrey tried to look for a spark, adrenaline to fight her with. She could find none. She slowly picked herself up, still dripping pain and despair from her face. Turning to Gail, she at last replied with a hoarse wisp of a voice. “Not acting. You don’t know the situation.”
“Oh, I know this situation inside and out,” Gail spat. “When you’re well off, everybody wants a piece of you. Everyone has an angle, and all they want is the green. Almost everyone Grant meets wants him for his influence or his money. Even Vanessa, that vain bitch he was married to — she loved the prestige more than anything. She was a fool to leave him; if she’d stayed, she’d be rich beyond her wildest dreams when he died. But she wanted sex, so she left — thank heaven for that.
“You are obviously a little — punk? Slut? Hell, what are you? — who somehow found out about my brother’s old ‘compulsion’ and schemed your way in here to take full advantage of it. Lunk-head Jace finally saw through it, no doubt due to my intervention. God, people are vultures — trying to take advantage of his giving spirit right up to the last breath!”
The newly fired girl aide was too defeated to raise her gaze from the floor. “I care for him. But Jace is right … I screwed up. And now I’m paying the price. All I ask of you is, don’t let him be alone. He gets so … so lonely, especially at night. And please don’t yell at him, or make fun of him. I haven’t seen you once in the last 2 weeks, and he looks like he’s got days left, if that.”
“I’m not the best sister. Screw that — I’ve been a lousy sister. But I’m not going to let parasites attach themselves to him at his weakest. You’d better go now, and get packing.”
Aubrey looked up. “Promise me you won’t leave him alone to die in the dark.”
“I don’t have to promise YOU anyth-”
“I’m not leaving ‘till you promise me,” Aubrey trembled with new tears rolling down her chin. “I don’t care if Jace breaks my neck.”
Gail looked at this broken thing in front of her with suspicion, and a little confusion. Could he/she have really developed true feelings for her brother?
“I won’t leave him. Yes, I’ll promise. But you will leave at or before noon, just like Jace said.”
Aubrey nodded her head and walked off to her room, her arms wrapped around her weeping head.
Gail knocked on Grant’s bedroom door.
The knob turned, and a big curly head popped out. “Oh, it’s you,” Jace said, sighing.
“I come in peace, big fellow. And I sincerely apologize for my part in making the situation so stressful earlier. No matter what was and wasn’t right to say, I shouldn’t have done it in front of my brother. Is he feeling better?”
Jace looked at her with red, sad eyes. “No. He’s worse.”
Aubrey took stock of her life as she packed what she could fit on her moped.
Fired, from my first job, within 2 weeks of starting. For crossing professional lines and falling in love with the patient. No matter how good my school evaluations were, that’s a fatal blow to my career as an aide.
Now I’m homeless, and have very little saved up with just 13 days of work. Wasn’t I just in this position on Valentine’s Day? No — I still had that stinking room at Fish’s. And I was able at least to TALK to Grant that night in the Venetian — now I can’t. That means I’ve officially dropped to the lowest point I’ve ever been in my life. And no access to Fish’s pistol to take the easy way out. Maybe I can just swerve in front of an oncoming semi truck on the highway — that should do it.
But before that, I have one phone call to make.
A redheaded nurse who looked a little like a refugee from Woodstock grunted to reach her cell phone. Of course, someone would call just when she’s cutting strips of tape for a dressing change on Mr. Syed.
“Hello, Jeannette, Desert Hospice. How can I — Aubrey! Sorry, I didn’t look at caller ID — kinda got my hands full. What’s up, sweet one?”
Her face fell. “WHAT? Why? How — okay, okay, I won’t push you to tell me.” My God, she sounds devastated!
“He was looking that bad when you left? Okay, soon as I’m done here, I’ll be right over to check him.
“Of course, honey. I will give you a call when it happens. Look … I don’t know what went on down there, but I’m so sorry it ended like this for you. I’m going to get this done quick and get to the estate. Yes, I love you too. Goodbye.”
She ended the call. Whatever happened, darn it? For once, Jeannette felt like breaking her rule and cursing in frustration and sorrow. No. Not going to compromise my integrity. Only in true emergencies, as a last resort, will I swear.
She looked up at the clock. One minute after noon. She could be there in — Darn it! I forgot, I'm at Syed's ranch, 45 miles east of town - it'll be 35 - 45 minutes to drive to the estate. I'd better call them.
Jace hung up the phone. “That was the hospice nurse. She’s on her way, but may not be here for 45 minutes. That’s okay — I’ve got the nitro and the morphine.” He was standing by Grant’s bed along with Gail. “Look!” said Gail in horror, “his eyes!”
Grant’s pupils had rolled back under his eyelids, which were fluttering. His whole body got limp — then jerked mightily.
“Ooooohhh dear heaven,” Grant, suddenly conscious again, moaned. “That was a bad one.”
“What just happened?” fretted Gail.
Jace shook his head. “His heart has stopped 4 times in the last hour; each time, the defib-whatever shocks him to get it started again. Jeannette told us that at the very end, the shocks would start to get almost constant; when that happens, we’re to consider that big deactivator — the ‘O’ looking thing — and, if we decide to, put it on his chest so he can die out of pain.”
Gail took Jace to the side and whispered, “Has that horrid aide tried to call you?”
“No. And if she knows what’s good for her, she’ll not call.”
“Shouldn’t you ‘block’ her number, just in case?”
“My phone’s over by you on the bedside table. Be my guest.”
Gail picked Jace’s phone up. It was a model she hadn’t seen. Now how do I block a number … oh, forget it. I’m pushing the “off” switch. That will do the trick. The nurse is already on her way, anyway, so I don’t know who else we’d need a call from. Gail turned Jace’s phone off, and hers too, for good measure. Then to make triple sure they wouldn’t be disturbed at this sensitive time, she discreetly unplugged the bedside phone from it’s cord.
To further keep the room calm and sedate, she pulled all the curtains together and turned off the lights save for two small table lamps.
Aubrey had put six miles between her and the estate when her phone rang. She looked at the display. It was from Jeannette. She pulled over, but didn’t answer the call. She knew the only reason for it.
“Oh God. He’s gone. No. NOOOooooo…” she wailed long and loud. Her shoulders shook in big heaving jerks as sorrow became her.
Passing motorists wondered what kind of distress or bad trip the girl on the scooter was having, but then drove on. Nobody cared. Not anymore; the one man who had cared for her above all others was dead. And she felt like this would be a perfect time for her to die, too. She raised her head to look across to the other side of the highway. There — a fast moving cement truck about a half-mile away. Perfect.
Her phone buzzed again, this time with a reveille horn blast. That meant a text. Aubrey glanced halfheartedly at the display.
Jeannette?
Yes, the display said “from: Jeannette.” Then below, it read:
DAMNHELLSHITFUCK!!!! EMERGENCY!!!
WHERE IS EVERYBODY???? CALLME NOW NOW
Aubrey’s brain woke up, just a little. Jeannette never curses — unless …
She punched the Call Back button.
Grant had just had another shock; that made six today.
“Goodness, I loathe these … I want to put that deactivator on, but I’m going to wait for Aubrey to get back and hold my hand … where is she?”
“She left. She’s not coming back. But we’ll never leave you, Grant,” Gail said.
Jace frowned at her. “Boss, the truth is, I had to fire her. She broke the rules; she was unprofessional. I couldn’t trust her anymore. I’m sorry.”
“She … she’s never coming back?” Grant was crying. “No. Nooo.”
Jace couldn’t watch his boss cry. This was the most horrible time he’d ever experienced. He loped into the master bath, sat down on the toilet, and bawled.
Gail was crying, holding on to her brother’s hand.
“Please … put the deactivator on me. I have nothing left to live for,” Grant cried.
She reached for the big blue plastic-covered magnet. “This? Wh-what will it do?”
“Put it right here.” Grant’s weak hand reached up and tapped the lump where his pacemaker / defibrillator was.
She placed the magnet over the lump. “What happens now?”
“Now,” Grant said with hollow eyes, “the next time my heart stops, no shock will be there to bring me back.”
The stoplight turned green, finally, for east-west traffic to flow across Callaway Boulevard. As the idling cars started to breach the gap, a little moped zipped late through the intersection going north, running the red light. “Crap!” said a bearded man in his jeep, hitting his brakes to keep from flattening the two-wheeler. “Stupid girl! Where ‘r the cops when ya need ‘em?”
Aubrey was taking risks in traffic she’d never ever taken before. She didn’t care. She had a life-or-death mission; if she slowed at all from full throttle, she knew she’d fail. And if she failed, she’d rather be dead anyway.
She turned down the driveway to the estate, finally. The six mile backtrack had been covered in record time, but it felt to her like it was taking a year. She “floored it” in a beeline for the front door. Thirty feet away, she dismounted while still in motion, slowing enough only to make sure she wouldn’t fall as she hit the ground running.
The scooter veered off and smashed into the side fountain as the young girl flew up the steps, desperately praying that Jace had not changed the code on the entry keypad by the doorway.
Jace had composed himself a little and walked up to his boss lying in bed. He immediately noticed the deactivator lying on the heaving chest.
“He told me to put it on,” Gail said through sniffs. “The next time his heart stops, that will be it.”
At that moment, Grant’s eyes rolled back in his head, and his shoulders went limp.
“Boss,” Jace choked.
Suddenly sunlight flooded the room as both double doors to the bedroom flew open. Aubrey exploded through, and ran towards the bed.
Jace stepped forward to stop her, but was squinting due the brightness coming in. She made a rush straight towards him; he went to grab her, but she suddenly made a head first dive-and-slide through his wide stance legs. Jumping to her feet before he could turn around, she found herself right at Grant’s bedside. Seeing the deactivator, she grabbed it and flung it quickly to the opposite side of the room; it hit the floor on its side and continued to roll to some unseen destination inside the master bath.
Aubrey looked at Grant, limp and lifeless. “Come on — reactivate. REACTIVATE! SHOCK HIM!”
A familiar big hand grabbed her shoulder; she wrapped her arms around the bedpost, never taking her eyes off of her love. “SHOCK HIM, DAMMIT!”
Grant’s shoulders jerked slightly, but he gave no response. Then another shoulder jerk, this time with his head jerking too. His eyes opened slightly, with a moan — “Ohhh God.”
Jace pried Aubrey’s arms off of the bedpost, with Gail gone to look for the deactivator. The big bodyguard flopped the young aide over his shoulder and walked briskly towards the door.
“Jace — his heart —” Aubrey yelled.
“His heart was finally at rest, until you showed up,” said the giant man as he prepared to throw her out.
But she clung tightly to his neck now, resisting his efforts to eject her.
“JACELISTENTOME! FIVESECONDS!”
In almost any other circumstance, Jace would have been deaf to the cries of an opponent. But something inside him now told him to hesitate. “Five seconds. Go.”
“Jace! Jeannette’s been trying to call you! They found a match! They found his heart!”
Four people sat in the surgery waiting room at the Mayo Clinic Transplant Center in Phoenix. Grant had been given a Lifestar helicopter ride directly from his estate — they landed in the huge back lawn — to here. The donor heart was from Tucson, so it was virtually there by the time Grant got prepped for surgery. Now the long wait for some kind of news was afoot.
They weren’t given a good prognosis. Grant’s condition was extremely poor, and the surgeons would have liked to have time to stabilize him, but upon hearing how often the shocks were coming, they felt they had little choice but immediate surgery. It would be hours before they would know if they were successful — unless he died quickly on the table.
Jace looked around. Gail was quiet, finally. Despite her objections, there was no way he was going to ask Aubrey to leave the waiting room. Not after she had possibly saved Mr. Brisbane’s life. Jeannette had arranged for another nurse to cover her patients, and had taken off in her car to cover the 150 miles from Flagstaff to Phoenix as quick as possible.
He got up from his chair and went to sit by Aubrey. She looked up.
“What’s going on, Big J? Have you heard anything?”
“Nope. I know as much as you. Uh … you called me what?”
“Come on. Now that you no longer employ me, I can call you an affectionate nickname, right?”
“Okay. Just don’t shorten it to BJ.”
“My old name was Bambi Johnson, remember? I know what BJ means, unfortunately.”
“Yeah. I forgot that. I remember Bambi, now. I thought she was another cheap floozy out to scam my boss. It appears that I’m not the best judge of character.” Jace frowned. “Aubrey … I’m so sorry. Sorry about the firing, about the threat to physically hurt you, about-”
“Jace — you were right to fire me. I crossed a professional line; I got romantically involved with a patient. It was unethical behavior — I learned that the first week of classes. I’m sorry I betrayed your trust in me. I really don’t deserve to ever work there again.” Aubrey scanned the room, and focused on Gail. “How’s Grant’s sister doing?”
“A mix of emotions. Happy that they found a heart. Not happy that her bone-headed move of turning off all the phones almost killed her brother. She really doesn’t know what to think about you; she appreciates what you did, saving his life, but she still sees you-”
“As a perverted freak; yeah, I get that from her face when she looks at me.” Aubrey laughed lightly. I've already cried a lifetime over how people treat me. Laughing about it is all that's left to do.
Jace put his hand on her shoulder. “Aub, I need to tell you-”
He stopped talking, and stood up. The transplant surgeon, Dr. Hinkle, had just walked into the room. The four gathered around him like steel filings to a magnet.
“Well, he made it through the operation. He’s still critically ill; the next 48 hours are going to be ‘touch and go’. There’s about a one in three chance that he’ll make it, to eventually leave the hospital — in my opinion. So don’t stop praying. The great news is that the donor heart is working fantastically — pumping like a little locomotive. He was just so ill by the time he got here — I’m worried his kidneys or his liver or brain might sustain some damage.”
“Oh God, no,” gasped Aubrey as she closed her eyes. Jeannette put her arm around her.
“I said I’m worried about it happening, not that it has happened. We won’t really know until he fully recovers — if he does, that is. I give you my word; we’ll do everything we can to give him the best chance of making it.
“He’ll be in ‘reverse isolation’ in the surgical ICU. Only one or two of you will be allowed in at one time, and you’ll have to wear masks and gloves; he’s on anti-rejection drugs now, and they suppress the immune system, so it’s critical that he avoids an infection. We’ll let you know as soon as we have him in the room.” The doctor stayed to answer questions; then having done so, walked back into the surgery area.
Aubrey turned to Jace. “When they allow him visitors, can I see him?”
Gail whipped her head around. “You’re not family.”
Jace’s voice boomed with authority. “I’m making her an honorary family member. I’m his medical power of attorney. In this situation, that puts me in charge. The matter is now closed.”
Three days later, Aubrey stood at Grant’s bedside, in full isolation gear. She grasped his hand with her gloved hand. All Grant could see above her mask was her eyes. Even with just that view of her, he had the biggest smile on his face she had ever seen. The sedatives had finally been weaned down; this was the first day he had his full mental faculties available.
Her trembling voice spoke. “Hello, stranger. Long time no see.”
“Too long, my dear. Last I remember, I was told I’d never see you again.”
“Tough luck. We bad pennies keep on rolling back.”
“Jace has informed me of all the goings-on the day I almost died. You at one time called me your ‘savior’, and said that you could never pay me back. How the tables have turned; you truly saved my life, in the most literal sense. So, you have paid me back … almost. There are still a few things I would ask of you, if I may.”
Aubrey’s eyebrows knitted together in mild confusion. “Mr. Brisbane … I can’t go back to work for you. Even if you forgave my lapse in professionalism, I’m still …” she choked for a minute, “… I’m still in love. With you. I can’t put those feelings back in the box. And that means I can’t objectively be your aide.”
“Oh no, my dear. I quite agree. I will not employ you again. I am generous to my employees, and in return I require the highest standards of ethics. No, that is not what I will require of you.”
Aubrey cocked her head. “Then, what …?”
“Two things. Firstly, I want you to do what Jace tells you to do when you end this visit. I’ve talked to him. He will explain in detail.
“Secondly. I require your solemn promise — promise me — that you will never, ever leave me again. I never want to experience the emptiness of soul I had when I thought you were gone forever. Legal papers ensuring your promise are being drawn up as we speak. Do not refuse me, dear. I’m a cutthroat lawyer, after all — I can make your life very uncomfortable if you do.” Grant said the last part with a wink towards her, ensuring that he meant no true malevolence.
She was still in a fog. “You want me to sign a legal contract?”
“Forgive my obtuseness. Aubrey — I’m asking you to marry me, please.”
The question hit her like a wrecking ball. She felt as if she was going to pass out, and her heart was beating faster than it had when she walked through the lobby at the Venetian months ago. Shaking tremendously, unable to speak, she nodded her head vigorously and squeezed his hand tight.
“Thank you, my dear,” Grant said with his face still enveloped in that big smile. “Do that, and your debt to me will be considered paid in full.”
“Where are we going, Jace? What’s this big thing you’re supposed to tell me about?” Aubrey sat in the front seat of the limo the bodyguard/chauffeur was driving.
“Well, Aub, it’s this. You have spoken to the Boss and others about how disappointed you are in your looks. Seeing as you are so beautiful on the inside, it’s a shame you aren’t more happy with your outside. So, we’re going to go and see if something can be done about that.”
“I already consulted with a surgeon in Vegas, Jace. There wasn’t much he could offer me.”
“Aub, plastic surgeons are like steakhouses. There are lousy ones, and great ones. I checked into this “Dr. Wells” guy through my contacts.”
Wells. The one who did my lousy breast job, and gave me that disappointing opinion of facial feminization, she thought.
Jace continued. “There’s a reason Fish uses that guy. He’s cheap. And he’s cheap because he’s lousy. At least in online patient reviews. And we know some other plastic surgeons; they don’t hold him in high opinion.”
Aubrey was in thought. “How do you know any plastic surgeons?”
“Docs amaze me. They are so brilliant when it comes to medicine, yet many don’t know beans about money,” Jace laughed. “At least not when they first get out of training. So a lot of ‘em get in debt, and a few get in trouble with the IRS. Then they come to Boss, pleading for help. That’s what happened to Doc Kriker.”
“Dr. Allen Kriker? Jeannette told me about him. She said he did a good nose job on her. Her nose is really pretty.”
“Yeah. She’s just pretty all over,” Jace sighed.
Ooh! Is that infatuation I pick up in his voice? Sounds like a job for Aubrey Johnson, matchmaker extraordinaire, she silently tittered.
“Anyway, Aub, this guy is a supposed miracle worker with a scalpel. Just four years out of training, and already a world-class rep. But last year the feds were ready to take him to jail, his taxes were so screwed up. We got them to back off, and he ended up paying a fraction of what they were coming after him for.”
“I’ll bet they keep him under their thumb from now on,” she said.
“You better believe it. He still hasn’t paid his bill with us, and it’s a big one. He’s barely gotten through paying off the IRS, and he still has most of his student loans to deal with. He offered to do Mr. Brisbane some free surgery, but the Boss needed a heart, not a facelift. But, if he can help you like what you see in the mirror more, then he can pay his debt off that way.”
“Jace,” Aubrey whispered, “I can’t take advantage of Grant like that!”
“Ahem,” he replied, “I do believe you entered into a verbal contract with Mr. Brisbane to do what I tell you in this matter. At least the initial consultation. It’s part of the repayment of the debt you owe him, I understand.”
“O — Okay,” she said with a spinning head.
Aubrey went through surgery while Grant was doing inpatient cardiac rehabilitation. They Skyped together for the week that she couldn’t get out of bed to go to him. She had a lot of pain recovering from the huge all-in-one operation; FFS, with breast implant revision, shaving of her Adam’s apple, rhinoplasty and some liposuction for body sculpting. But within three months, she looked like a new person.
Still big shoulders, large hands, and a big head, she thought as she looked in the mirror, but my face looks so much better. The shape and size of the breasts actually draw attention away from my big chest. And now that I’m down to my goal weight, the curves I got with lipo are even more accentuated. I’m still no Naomi Campbell, but I’m NOT Al Franken in drag. I think I’m actually prettier than Ricki Lake! I’m sure I’ll still get ‘read’, but for the most part, I’m so much more confident in my femininity. Just one more surgery to get, she said as she patted her groin.
It was Valentine’s day of the next year. Aubrey was now fully female, both legally and gynecologically, save for uterus and ovaries. Grant had strengthened to where he could walk and be active; he likely would never be an extreme hiker or skier, but could do many things a normal adult could do. Including sexual relations, as long as he used Viagra and had Aubrey on top doing most of the work. She had insisted on living in her old aide’s quarters rather than moving in to Grant’s bedroom — at least until September, when Sharon gave her the go-ahead to start having sex.
Aubrey now stood at the wedding altar alongside Grant, making it official. Sharon, Jeannette and even Carlotta Brando, Aubrey’s old mentor, were part of the procession. Jace was there, but doing his official bodyguard duties, standing to the side watching over the crowd for any suspicious characters or goof-offs.
Gail was present; ever since Grant had officially sold off half of the family’s assets and deeded them to her, she had become much easier to live with. “Money issues tend to cause strife even in close familes; so I’m going to settle it with her now” Grant had said.
Even Aubrey’s parents were here. Although they were still coming to terms with her gender, both were glad that she had decided to renew relations with them. The PI they had hired was able to trace their son to Las Vegas, but then the trail had gone cold. Aubrey had not yet told them about the two years of prostitution. At least they were accepting of her and Grant. She wondered how much him being rich eased that process.
As they pledged their love that day, both recited their custom made vow simultaneously. They faced each other, both holding Aubrey’s bonsai tree between them. “I vow to cherish you and care for you as I would this tree,” they said, “for you are indeed as beautiful, unique, precious and tender to me, as this tree is to all who see it.”
The reception was customized to their story. The ice sculpture of a bonsai was amazing, although it melted a little too quickly in the central heating. A huge heart shaped cake was nothing you’d see on Cake Wars, but it represented their story.
The bouquet toss and garter throw seemed rigged. At least the bouquet; when Aubrey threw it backwards, she did so with a mighty heave so that it flew over the heads of the crowd of women reaching for it. It landed towards the back wall, into the hands of a bridesmaid standing all alone — Jeannette. “Well, lookee here,” she beamed. By contrast, when Grant flung the garter back, the crowd of men parted like the Red Sea to make room for a snarling Goliath — Jace — who stomped forward and plucked it out of the air. He held it over his head like he’d caught the last out of the World Series, turning and smiling at Jeannette, who was laughing and waving back.
As the festivities continued, Aubrey was sitting — finally — watching Grant dance with his sister. She was so happy with the sight that she didn’t notice the sexy woman in a revealing dress come and sit down by her.
“Hey there, Bambs.”
Aubrey turned, and her eyes immediately narrowed. “Sherryl Phlost. ‘Cherry Pop’. What the hell are you doing here? And my name is not, and never will be again, ‘Bambs’ or ‘Bambi’. How did you crash my wedding?”
“Wasn’t easy, with King Kong over there scanning everybody,” Sherryl pointed to Jace.
“If you came for money, forget it. Tell me why I shouldn’t throw you out right now.”
“Peace, baby, time out,” the glam she-male said with her hands up, palms bent back in a show of submission. “You don’t owe me nothin’, except maybe a kick in the nuts for being blind to what Fish was doin’ to you. Come to find out, he employs all of us, but there’s always one escort that he’ll keep under his control, and that’s who he puts in that upstairs bedroom. Since you left, he’s found another pigeon to cage up there; he’s takin’ her money, and her cherry. That’s what he was doin’ to you, wasn’t it?”
Aubrey nodded, her eyes wet with the horrible memory.
“I’m so sorry, Ba- uh, Aubrey. He was killin’ you slowly, and I was a putz for not seeing it. I just thought you were an escort who couldn’t make the grade. Please, you gotta forgive me,” Sherryl said. Aubrey was surprised; she’d never seen her cry before. But her interest now was in Fish’s new captive.
“Tell me who he’s got in that room now.”
“THAT’S why I’m here. I wanna take that scumball down, and save Trixie at the same time. But I can’t do it alone. I’m gonna need help. The cops look at me and just think I’m a lousy hooker who wants to screw her pimp.”
Trixie Dicksy — god, how she hated that name Fish had given her — was nervous. She’d never had an assignment at Caesar’s Palace before — she was used to being sent to the local Econo-Lodge. And this john had requested her specifically. Something’s up. On our menu, I’m the burnt toast, not the Eggs Hollandaise. Maybe this guy wants something kinky, like animalism. I should no-show. Except then I’d be out on the street, and I’d survive maybe thirty minutes.
She knocked on the suite door. A huge truck of a man opened the door. After he wanded her to make sure she had no weapons, she walked in to see a genteel man in a classy suit, and a woman dressed smartly in a red dress.
“Oh, God. I — I’m not very experienced at three-ways,” Trixie stammered.
“We’re not interested in sex, or in using you in any way,” the woman in red replied. “My name is Aubrey — but it used to be Bambi. I was the girl who lived the nightmare you’re living. Fish abused me the way he’s abusing you. We’re here to help.”
“The famous Bambi? Who actually got rescued like Julia Roberts in ‘Pretty Woman’? God, yes. My life is a nightmare. I’ve been real close to ending it. Fish has a gun-”
“In his drawer,” said the man-truck. “Yeah, we know.”
“My dear,” said the man in the suit, “how desperate is your desire to escape? Enough to work harder than you ever have before? Enough to give up prostitution and porn?”
Trixie’s heart pounded like a triphammer. It was illogical, unbelievable, but she was apparently being offered a way out. She had to chance it. “Yes. Please help me. I need a new start. I’ll work as hard as I can, or die trying.”
“Will you help us help the police in catching Fish? It will require you wearing a wire, and going back to that stinky room. But the law will be right outside in a van.”
“And I’ll be right inside, down the hall. Cherry Pop’s gonna smuggle me in when Fish is on the phone,” man-truck said. “Me and my trusty .44 have won a stare-down with him before.”
Trixie’s eyes lit up. A chance to put her abuser behind bars. With the ones who had thwarted him before. “Let’s do it,” she smiled.
Aubrey came and put her arm around Trixie, patting her on the shoulder. “Louie,” she said in a low voice.
“Louie …?”
“Louie, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.”
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual situation or person is purely coincidental
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Ultimate Empathy Therapy
Part 1 of 8
by **Sigh**
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(Author's note: Thanks for being patient with me; it's been a long time since even my last comment on the site. Big time RL issues, still not fully resolved. But, I had the urge to write, so I decided to obey my moose (Mousse? Mouse? MUSE!) and put this up. A couple of items: Although there are no TG elements in this first part, they will play a big time role in all the rest of the parts. This first part is essential to the story, though. AND, even though I love to read magical and Sci-fi stories, I usually don't write them (On my own, that is). Well, this story arc will have a small unreal element. I tried not to make it the crux of the story; I just couldn't figure out how to get the exact emotional conflict I needed without it. Ah, emotional conflict. There's some of that in this first chapter. But for all of you who stay away from "unreal" elements in stories, I urge you to hang in there with this one, since the major basis is empathy/emotional issues. Plus, if you stick with it, I'll give you a genuine Stan Lee inspired "no-prize"! Thank you guys in advance for your readership, comments, and kudos! HUGZ! **Sigh**)
CHAPTER ONE
The twin-engine turboprop lurched its way through the late morning sky. These hot Caribbean spring days weren’t as bad as the summer ones when it came to turbulence, but it was still enough to have half of the 21 passengers on board holding on to their vomit sacks. A few had to ask the attendant for an extra one.
“I am soooo loving this vacation so far,” a teenage girl mumbled with sarcasm, and barely audibly. It was enough for her father to hear, though, and he tensed up with a scowl twisting his mustache and beard. As he was about to reply, his wife’s hand on his forearm gave him pause.
“Let it go, dear. This is a rough flight. She’s not the only one complaining,” his love said. Other passengers were moaning and groaning too, so it was wise advice. He really should have followed it. But it was too late; his daughter had pushed his “button”, and he couldn’t let her disrespect go unanswered.
“It’s tough enough enduring the bumps and the smell of puke. Don’t force me to listen to your childish whining too. Stuff like this happens; take it like the brand new 18 year old you are rather than the bedwetting toddler you sound like!” It was spoken in a whisper, yet it hissed loudly enough that the girl was sure half the plane heard it.
As her mother shook her head and leaned her forehead into her palm, the girl began a slow burn that bubbled out of her chest and up into her head. She held her tongue (thankfully), but the hurt and hatred she had for her jailer — that was what she had begun referring to her father as — came out through her pupils as she tried to stare a hole through him. I wish I could shoot laser beams from my eyes, she thought. Then maybe I could make him feel just a fraction of the hurt he’s caused me.
It was a good thing that the aisle separated her from her father. She was on the left of the plane where the single seats were; the double seats on the other side were where her parents sat. Three seats wide were all this small plane could fit, and ten rows deep. Behind the girl sat her younger sister, all 17 years of her, popping her gum as she listened to her tunes on her smartphone. “Zoning out” was little Janis’ way of dealing with the war zone that her family had become this last year. She was also a fashion devotee; it occupied her consciousness and dulled the acuteness of the family stress. She was the most stylishly dressed member of her family.
The wife tried to intervene again on her oldest daughter’s behalf. “Kent — not here, not now, not in public. Please. We’ll deal with it on the ground, after we check in to the cabana. Don’t embarrass her, and me, and yourself.”
“She embarrasses me,” he fumed. “I’ve had it up to here with the rebellion, the attitude, the lies and sneaking around. And now she’s flying to a tropical paradise for a dream of a spring break trip — one she didn’t have to pay a penny for, mind you — and all she can do is spout that sarcasm, that smarmy attitude, that …” he ground his teeth together as his face turned redder and redder.
“Shh, shh, cool it, honey. Close your eyes. Imagine the butterfly conservatory.” Marlene prayed that this would once again work. It was a place they had visited years ago as a couple, and he said he’d never felt so peaceful as they watched both the common and the rare species flutter around from flower to flower.
Marlene’s voice competed in Kent’s thoughts with his fatherly pride. “There are times that you shouldn’t stay silent, that you should not compromise,” she softly suggested.
ABSOLUTELY, thought Kent.
“-but this is not one of those times. Trust me. Relax. Think of the blue morpho.”
Ahh. The blue morpho. His favorite. When resting on a leaf or twig, it kept its wings together so that one could only see the brown underside, a rather plain and drab appearance. But when they took flight … that was when their wings would flash a magical cobalt blue. Kent had viewed his first one on the cover of an old record album, of all things. He figured it was faked, a painted image for Santana’s Borboletta. Only upon their visit to the preserve had he discovered that they actually existed. So serenely beautiful …
The mother next looked across the small aisle at her daughter. Tina was still fuming, looking as if she was thinking up a new verbal barb to launch towards her father’s neck. Marlene shook her head, catching her oldest offspring’s eye. PLEASE, she mouthed, and pointed to the magazine lying on Tina’s lap. The girl remained scowling, but thankfully picked up the periodical and began reading it.
Marlene finally exhaled. Her spouse, eyelids closed, still looked lost in the reverie of memory. Another Kent/Tina battle averted — for now. Hope this truce lasts for more than just 3 minutes. God, please help us. Help my family. Protect my daughter from her heart; protect my husband from his pride and anger; protect Janis and me while you’re at it. And please, please, PLEASE — have this trip and the therapy work.
Just … just fix this mess, please. And while you’re at it, if it’s not too much trouble, could you make this airplane stop bouncing?
A quick glance back at Janis showed she was still popping her gum, listening to her “pod”, and reading GLAMOUR. No sign of queasiness seen. Good.
Marlene pulled out the brochures she had received for this trip. Basically, it was a small, privately owned island in the Caribbean; it had been turned into a retreat of sorts, with highly trained family counselors and mediators. The cost for the weeklong stay was astronomical, but her husband was a CEO making $1.2 million a year, so they could manage it.
It was amazing to her how Kent Braxton, a man of authority and power in his job — men and women by the hundreds following his every whim — seemed to be flummoxed by the disobedience of an 18 year old child. Well, after all, it’s not like he can fire her. Still, the fatherly “putting the foot down” that had worked so well for him the first 16 years had suddenly grown ineffective. No, not just ineffective — inflammatory.
Marlene actually agreed with Kent’s position; she just disagreed with the way he laid down the law and tried to force Tina to comply with their rules and wishes. There was way too much yelling, and stomping, and anger. From both father and daughter.
Though she knew Tina’s actions were wrong, she could identify with the hurt and pain that her daughter had when Kent would throw his angry words around, like little ninja stars. Some would miss, some would merely graze her soul, but others would draw blood, leaving psychic wounds with permanent scars. Why couldn’t her husband see that none of them had the effect he wanted — producing understanding and obedience from her?
No. Instead, the bad behaviors fed each other. The angrier Kent got, the more stubborn and rebellious Tina became, and vice versa. Marlene prayed nightly for an answer.
Then this mailer caught her eye. It was mixed in with all the other junk mail and almost went into the trash. The words “crisis counseling” and “tropical island” on the postcard stopped her from tossing it. Both her husband and daughter had steadfastly refused any suggestion of therapy; but if linked to an island getaway, maybe they’d bite.
And they did, amazingly.
Marlene leaned back on the head support and wondered if the postcard was an answer to her prayer. Hopefully the counselors were good; hopefully not quacks selling snake oil or weird Freudian therapists or ghost channelers or anything. Her research for this place had turned up frustratingly little, even though it had been in existence for 40 years, per the mailer.
So hopefully this is an answer to my desperate prayer. I sometimes wonder if God still answers prayers. Then she became aware of something. For the last few minutes the plane ride had been blessedly smooth.
CHAPTER TWO
A young Scottish woman sat in a lotus position, the midday sun brilliantly enlivening her pixie cut of red hair.
Next, I focus on th’ Hibiscus flower. Such a perfect appearance; bright red petals rotatin’ aroond a pink stamen bearin’ brilliant yellow pollen. It is whole, complete, in balance, and I invite its balance intae my existence. Indeed, I have been made in balance, and ordered tae cause that property tae bloom in others. I hae no rough ridges or deep dangerous ravines; my soul is even. My heart is peace. My throat is …
… dry.
Rahne Ruiz broke from her deep meditation before her cotton mouth could cause her to cough. She reached for her cup of deep red herbal tea and took a sip. Hibiscus also makes a calming beverage, she thought and smiled. How lang hae I been in a mild trance? Nae lang enough tae get dehydrated, surely. The tea was the only substance she had taken — Rahne was completely drug-free.
Then her body — having waited patiently all morning — let her know of another need. She stood up and quickly hopped towards the water closet. I shude hae remembered; th’ hibiscus is also a natural diuretic.
Four minutes later, she sat at her desk. She took another quick look at the seven cases that were arriving on the small island. Each with a different challenge. Most were couples, married or otherwise; one was a threesome in a love triangle (THA’ will be interestin’, she thought), and the last was a family.
The policy of IEB was adults only. But the two kids here were 17 and 18; essentially adult, by their standards. Wha’ tool would be best used t’ help in this situation …
A booming bass voice came over the intercom speaker on her phone. “Ms. Ruiz, please —“; the speech cut off as the phone speaker turned into a crackling, sputtering mess.
Rahne jumped up and ran to the director’s office. Knocking twice on the door then cracking it open, she peeked in. “Sorry, Mr. B. My phone is still goosed. What did ye say tae me?”
A huge black man in a dress shirt, vest and slacks was standing and putting on his business jacket. He glanced Rahne’s direction and raised an eyebrow at her yoga outfit. “Plane’s landing.”
“OCH! Is it noon already? Yikes! I’ll be richt oot.” She ran back to her office and shut the door and drew the blinds. In three minutes she reemerged, miraculously attired in a white pant and coat ensemble with a tropical shirt and accented sandals.
“Wow! Cool! This is, like, how the President gets off Air Force One on TV,” chirped Janis, finally acknowledging something besides her phone. The family was disembarking on a wheeled staircase that had been rolled up to the plane. They descended one by one onto the tarmac along with the rest of the passengers.
There was no large terminal building to go to, so all the luggage was unloaded right there and presented to the passengers. It looked like all of the people there were pairing up, except for the Williams family and a trio consisting of a man, a woman, and an androgynous person who couldn’t be pigeonholed as one or the other sex. He was a feminine man, or perhaps she was a boyish woman.
Three long limousines drove up, and three chauffeurs got out and divided the passengers into three groups. Kent and his family got put into the limo with the trio, which made him more than a little uncomfortable. Especially when the androgyne ended up sitting next to him on his left.
Marlene picked up on her husband’s sudden tension. “Blue morpho, blue morpho,” she whispered into Kent’s right ear.
The androgyne turned to the other two (s)he was with. “This guy to my right makes me nervous. I think he’s into drugs. His wife keeps whispering about morphine to him,” (s)he muttered.
Suddenly the flat screen television behind the front seats turned on, revealing a pre-taped message. A large, tall black man was standing, flanked by a redheaded woman; he began to talk.
“Hello and welcome. I am Dr. Mark Brand, counselor and COO of this therapeutic retreat and resort, Isla Empatio Bonita — the ‘Island of Beautiful Empathy’.
“We specialize in relationship therapy. Our reputation is impeccable, and our waiting list is so long that we have taken to picking our attendees on the basis of urgent need. So, the fact that you have been chosen to attend our program is good and bad news. Good, because this island is truly unique and beautiful. Bad, because it means your relationship is likely in deep, deep trouble.”
Kent looked at his wife with a raised eyebrow. His unspoken look communicated clearly: “Deep, deep trouble? Are things between me and Tina that bad?” Marlene answered with a quick firm nod.
The TV continued. “You will find plenty of activities to do in your spare time, including snorkeling, swimming, fishing, horseback riding, and sunning on the beach. We have a jogging trail and a workout room near the main office. But your free time will be limited; you will be in anywhere from 3 to 5 hours of therapy daily.
“The evenings will mostly be unscheduled. Meals in our gourmet restaurant have been covered as part of your prepaid fee. We have a late night snack bar that has tasty items available for purchase, while alcohol and specialty drinks can be bought at mealtimes as well as at the evening poolside bar. Also, there is an extensive paperback library, jogging trails, and a meditation room. Unfortunately — or fortunately, depending on how you look at it — there is no cell phone service or internet access on this island.”
Tina looked at her smartphone displaying no bars. Perfect. Just ... great. This completes the disaster this week is going to be.
On the screen, the fire haired female took the podium from Dr. Brand. “I’m Dr. Rahne Ruiz. I’ll be in charge o’ most o’ th’ counselin’ that takes place. This can be a place o’ great healing, if ye will open yuir mind an' soften yuir heart. Ye may be thinkin’ that it is the other party that needs tae change, but I want ye tae open yuir mind to th’ possibility tha’ it's ye tha' needs renewal.”
I hope Tina heard that point, thought Kent.
I sure hope Dad was listening to that, thought Tina.
“Cool! Her name sounds like ‘rain’, “ giggled Janis to her mom.
“There are eight counselors on staff, including Dr. Brand ‘n’ I. We also hae a staff o’ fifty people all dedicated tae yuir relaxation and healing, 24 hours a day. In a few minutes, we will be greeting ye personally when ye arrive at th’ office; please enjoy a complimentary fruit drink with us. Ye’ll also receive yuir counseling schedule for th’ week. Meanwhile, yuir bags will be taken tae th’ private cabana that ye’ve been assigned. When you go tae yuir room, relax for a little; each o’ the groups will have a session scheduled for either 2 or 4 pm. Thank ye, and enjoy yuir stay at th’ Isla.”
As if on cue, all the limos stopped in front of a gorgeous building framed by tall palm trees and tropical plants. There were Drs. Brand and Ruiz, flanked by eight other counselors, all of them walking out to meet the guests/patients.
CHAPTER THREE
“Oh, this is a little slice of heaven here on earth!”
Marlene spun around in the cabana bedroom, to take in the three sided window views as fully as possible. She then fell on the bed, back first, arms spread out, laughing, then sighing. Deep, cleansing sighs that felt like all of the cares of the recent months were leaving her body with each exhalation. “Don’t you just love this, Kent?”
“It sure is pretty all right,” smiled her husband. Yet as Marlene looked over at him, she saw that there was still a wrinkle in his brow.
“Kent, don’t worry about the girls not being with us in the same room. They’re just in the next cabana over — a hundred feet away. And we’re on an island, one that pretty much shuts down after 9pm. What trouble could they get into?”
Before he could answer, there was a loud knock at the cabana door. Kent went to open it. Probably a staff member; neither of the girls can knock that forcefully.
The door opened to show a short, thick man with a big smile on his face. He was thick as in big shouldered, big chested, and big mitts dangling off the end of muscular arms. Even at his stunted height — If he’s taller than 5 foot 6, then I’m a monkey’s uncle, Kent thought — the man was obviously powerful. And obviously hairy all over, except for the top of his head. A curled mustache and a “Fred Flintstone” beard shadow completed the look.
“Buongiorno, signore,” the man said.
“Umm … sorry; I don’t know Italian. That is ‘italiano’ you’re speaking, right?”
Marlene came up behind her husband to see who was there. Her jaw dropped, and a slow smile crept onto her lips. “Honey — he looks like a real life Mario! You know, of Super Mario Bros?”
“Mario” let out a chuckle. “I gets dat alla di time, signora. You wanna know sometin’? I really do got a brother name Luigi! But, my name is Angelo. I am your personal assistente. You guys need sometin’ — anytin’ — and I does my best to help you. I do a lotta other jobs on di Isla, but I always am wearing my pager. Dial 400 from any land phone, an’ den 299 — dat’s my number — after you hears di beeps. For anytin’ at all, hokay?”
“Good to meet you, Angelo. Put ‘er there.” Kent reached his hand out to shake the Italian’s. Good Lord, what a powerful grip he’s got, thought the impressed businessman.
“Grazie, signore e signora. You both look lik-a nice people. The last ones assigned to me here had a rough-a time; there was a bigamist. It all turn out A-OK in di end.”
“Someone with two wives?” Marlene elbowed Kent, and whispered in his ear — “And we thought we had problems.”
“No, signora, just one wife. But on second day, a grande fog rolled in. Let-a me tell you guys — dat was a BIG-A MIST!” Angelo walked off, bellowing with laughter at his own joke.
“What a congenial fellow,” said Marlene.
Kent smirked. “Yeah, for a guy built like an orangutan. Hope his help is better than his humor.”
CHAPTER FOUR
The Braxton girls, Tina and Janis, were unpacking in their cabana. As they did, they had a conversation with attitudes that mirrored their parents.
“No cell phone or internet access. No 4G, not to mention 3 or 2 or 1 or even 0.01G! What kind of a stone age place is this? I mean, everywhere — anywhere — has at least one of those services! This smells like a Dad plan; he hates me, and knows that being out of touch is my worst nightmare.” Tina was fuming.
Janis smiled, with a trace of gloating. “Yeah, this is sooo horrible. The flowers, the beach with the crystal clear light blue waters, the three hunky guys doing the gardening as we came in — oh, what torture!”
“YOU don’t have the love of your life back home, with no way to talk to him, or text, or skype. I don’t want to lose him to some other girl while I’m gone. And as for those three guys — ugh, disgusting. One of them kept flickering his tongue at me as we were registering; another was wiggling his fingers, pointing towards my crotch. What girl wants to be treated that way?”
“One who gets no attention from boys because her sister is so much hotter than she is,” Janis mumbled.
Tina countered. “Janis. There are a number of boys that like you — “
“LOSER boys! Nerds, dweebs, and a couple of stoners. The hot guys — the jocks, the studs — only go for girls shaped like you. You’re more curvy than a roller coaster, and your boobies are huge. I take more after Aunt Glenda, a stick with a couple of bee stings. It’s so unfair!” Janis began to tear up even as she continued unpacking.
Tina spoke softly. “At least Dad still loves you.”
Her sister’s eyes suddenly flashed with ire. “He’s never stopped loving you, you idiot! He’s just angry with you because you became a slutty whore. Mitch is a pervert, and since you two started dating you’ve changed. I don’t even know you anymore!”
This caused Tina to turn her head away in shame. She didn’t like the things she had allowed Mitch to talk her into; she especially felt guilty about all the sneaking around they had done. It felt wrong to her, but at the same time the feeling she had for him — intense, white hot, obsessive emotion — was so right; it was love. It had to be love. And while he had his faults (pretty big ones, actually), she was sure that this love she shared with Mitch would cause him to change, to become the person she knew he could be.
If people could just let her and Mitch be. Everyone has faults. Who are they — Janis, especially — to criticize? Tina’s eyes narrowed as she responded to her younger sister.
“The difference between you and me, Janis, is that Mom and Dad know about my stuff. If they ever found out about your — “
“They never will find out,” Janis interrupted. “I’ve never been caught. The only way they’d know is if you told them. And we both know why that’s not gonna happen, right? Or should I remind you?”
Tina’s shoulders slumped, and she turned away again, unable to reply verbally. Her head faintly nodded, though.
Janis scowled at her with her eyes, as a triumphant leer arose from her lips. “That’s right. So, let’s drop the whining. I’m going to enjoy the sun here. If you’re smart, you’ll do whatever it takes to get back into Dad’s good graces. But even if you don’t, just stop complaining. I’m sick of it.”
The rest of the unpacking proceeded in silence.
The Braxtons assembled outside in the space between their two cabanas. “They have a late lunch buffet at the reception building, and then we start our first therapy session,” Marlene said as she scanned their personal itinerary given to them. “Is everyone hungry? Any leftover flight sickness?”
All agreed that they were fine, and hungry.
As they walked to eat, Janis tapped her mother’s shoulder. “Mom — did you guys meet Angelo? He’s like our personal assistant. He almost looks like Super Mario!”
“I thought the exact same thing,” Marlene laughed.
“Except he has these super long arms, and he’s a little bald,” added Tina.
At the buffet, the family sat at their own table. The restaurant bar was open, so Kent went to procure a drink or two.
“What shall it be, sir?” The young bartender seemed barely old enough to drink alcohol, much less serve it.
“One light beer, and a margarita for my wife. Do you mind me asking — how old are you, Mr.…”
The young man smiled. “Call me James. I’m twenty-one, almost twenty-two. I graduated college in December — BS in mechanical engineering. I wanted to take a sabbatical for a few months before entering the job market; so I took a bartending course, and here I am. For about three months, that is.”
He seems level headed, and confident but not cocky. A nice guy, mused Kent.
When the drinks were ready, Kent popped two $20 bills on the bar. “James, please make two virgin pina coladas for my girls.”
“Yes sir, Mr. Braxton.” Kent’s eyebrow rose, and James laughed at his surprise. “I know your name from the passenger list. You guys are the only family with kids here. Which one is Tina, and which is Janis?”
“Tina is the one I’m sending back to pick up the coladas,” Kent winked at James. “She’s kind of lovesick right now. Wish there was something — or someone — that could take her mind off of that,” he said as he walked away. A vacation fling with a quality guy might just help break Mitch’s spell over her.
A minute later, a curvy brunette with long, straight hair walked up to the bar, a slight glower on her face. James retained his smile. “Hello, miss. You must be Tina.”
“Don’t get any ideas, buddy. I know when my Dad’s playing matchmaker. I’m not available.” She grabbed the drinks while looking at the barkeep. She couldn’t help noticing that James was attractive, though. Not really muscular, but friendly, confident, mature … Stop it! I’m Mitch’s girl! I want him to be faithful while I’m gone, so I must be also! Maybe I could get this guy together with Janis, though.
“Enjoy your virgin PC’s,” James said as she walked away.
“My sister will. I’m more of an espresso girl,” Tina replied.
Kent and Marlene eyed their eldest as she returned with the frozen drinks. “That bartender seems like a hunk,” Marlene tittered.
“Not my type. He sounded like he was interested in Janis, though.”
“REALLY?” Janis sat up straight, jutting her chest out, and stole a look at the man behind the bar.
James waved to the table with a smile as he wiped the counter clean. “Hi, Janis,” he lightly yelled.
Janis lightly squealed.
Tina smirked in satisfaction as she looked at Kent, who was suddenly grumbling.
Marlene rolled her eyes.
TO BE CONTINUED MONDAY, JULY 8
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to a real situation or person is purely coincidental.
Tremendous thanks to Cyclist for beta reading and help!
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"You mean there's not an escape clause in that waiver? I don't like this. I demand to be returned to my normal state of mind!"
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Ultimate Empathy Therapy
Part 2 of 8
by **Sigh**
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CHAPTER FIVE
Sufficiently full, the family went to the Counseling Centre for their session. The Centre was a separate building from the Reception/Registration area, and had multiple rooms for different sessions. The rooms all had huge windows with one-way glass to show the surrounding tropical views and vegetation. The Braxtons were led to the biggest room.
Once inside, Drs. Mark Brand and Rahne Ruiz met them. Dr. Brand greeted the family. “Mr. and Mrs. Braxton, Tina, Janis — welcome.”
“Wow — we get the two head honchos to be our counselors? How did we rate that?” wondered Marlene.
Dr. Brand explained. “We have evaluated all of the problems that each of the patients have come to deal with this week, and have concluded that this family requires the most intensive and urgent intervention. We will have a brief session with all of you, then break off into two groups: mother/Janis, and father/Tina.”
Kent was somewhat surprised. He had thought the reason the head counselors were there was because he was a Very Important Person, not because their situation was so serious. “Are we that bad? As far as I can see, the only thing about our situation is that my daughter refuses to follow by the house rules. Fix that, and we’ll all be fine.”
Dr. Brand turned to Kent, making direct eye contact. “Mr. Braxton. Your family’s condition appears serious. To have any hope of saving it, I will require some things from you. One, have an open mind. If you contest all of our observations, you will waste everyone’s time here. Two, I require you to submit to a level where you are the equal of your spouse and children. The counselor you are with will be the authority in the room for your sessions.”
Kent emitted a light laugh. “With all due respect, sir, I paid for your services. Your job here is to serve me. That’s how I see it.”
“What you paid me for, Mr. Braxton, is to try to get your family to healing. So that’s what I’m going to do. And that means today I take the leadership position in this room.”
Brand spoke with such authority that it temporarily made Kent go mute. He wasn’t used to someone else telling him what to do.
The tall counselor’s face softened. “I’m going to do you a huge favor, Kent. I’m going to confront you with the truth when you’re messing up. I will not humiliate; just confront. You are surrounded at work by people who will not speak against any of your decisions or opinions, because they fear for their jobs. In your home, your family fears punishment. It’s a rare blessing for a leader to have someone in his life who’s brave enough to point out his bullshit to him. I’ll be that blessing for you, this week. Will you submit to that?”
The father of the foursome was silent, looking at the floor, rubbing his hands tightly together. His daughters held their breath. Marlene prayed. Please, Kent. Show some humility, for our sake.
Kent’s head came back up. His eyes were misty, and slowly his authoritative posture lost its tension — his shoulders sunk slightly, his face and hands relaxed. “Okay, Dr. Brand. You’re the boss. I will submit to your instruction, listen with an open mind, and … yes, I will see my daughter as an equal. For this week.”
Dr. Brand smiled. “Thank you.”
The three females were amazed and impressed. Especially Tina. I’ve NEVER seen Dad that way. He always has to be the big chief, the driver of the car. Dare I hope that Dad will finally stop and really listen to my side of the story?
Some more questions, and then they split into groups of three. Brand took Kent and Tina, while Rahne took Marlene and Janis.
“Ground rules. When one of you is talking, the other one will not interrupt. PERIOD. No moans, groans, loud sighs, or other intrusive nonverbal acts. When you’re not talking, LISTEN to what the other is saying; DO NOT be preparing your rebuttal in your head. Lastly, your thoughts and opinions are just that: opinions. Not irrefutable facts. Speak them out as ‘I feel that …’ or ‘I think …’, please. Talk about how you feel. And be kind to each other in your speech. Do you both agree?”
Even though Dr. Brand spoke in a normal volume, his basso profundo voice shook Kent’s chest and made Tina shrink in her seat. “Yes sir,” they both said in near unison.
“Good. Now, the questionnaire that Mrs. Braxton returned to us gave me the bare bones of the conflict between you two. I’d like to hear you two elaborate on that; I’ll hear out both sides. Tina, would you like to go first?”
A half smile curled the left side of Tina’s mouth. “You mean, I get to start? Cool.”
Before Dr. Rahne Ruiz could begin her session, Janis blurted her a question. “What country is your last name from? It sounds Hispanic.”
“Aye, wee one. Me great grandfather was half Spaniard, and I got th’ Ruiz from him. Th’ rest o’ my clan is from Scotland. ‘Rahne’ is a scots name. Its roots mean stubborn, passionate, and lovin’.”
Marlene had a query also. “Why are Janis and I having a session? It seems to me the biggest problem is with my husband and older daughter.”
“A hot flame burns all wha’ are near it. In a family, just one person gettin’ sick — emotionally — tends tae make all th’ others sick too. Tell me, Janis. This war atween yuir faither ‘n’ sister — how do ye see it affecting ye ‘n’ yuir mother?”
Janis teared up, squirmed, then spoke. “It’s all Tina’s fault!”
CHAPTER SIX
Dr. Mark Brand had his elbows on his desk, hands intertwined, and chin resting on his fingers. Tina was sobbing. Kent looked away through the window, a mixture of anger and anguish on his countenance. After a minute more of tense silence, the black counselor finally spoke.
“Let me see if I heard correctly. You both enjoyed a good father-daughter relationship until about a year ago. That’s when Kent and Marlene found out about Tina’s relationship with a boy named Mitch. Mitch is - how much older than you, Tina?”
She silently held up three fingers.
“Three years. So you were barely seventeen, and he was twenty. How did he meet you?”
Tina blew her nose. “He goes to our church — our huge, 2,500 member church. He attended the college age classes. When he saw me sitting on the other side of the sanctuary, it was love at first sight — that’s what he says. So he asked me out. He came by the high school at my lunchtime and took to me get some lunch. He told me to keep it secret — he said my big shot dad intimidated him.” She shot a mean look at Kent.
Brand pushed on. “And did you fall in love with him?”
“After that first lunch date, yes. I knew he had to be the one.”
“And your father disapproves.”
“Yessssss,” she hissed, again glaring at her dad.
“Why does he disapprove, in your opinion?”
“He thinks I’m too young to fall in love, to make my own decisions. He wants me to be his baby girl forever, and to have no other man but him in my life. Sick.”
The doctor raised an eyebrow. “That’s what your dad told you?”
Tina lowered her head. “No. But that’s what he thinks, I know it. All of my girlfriends say that’s how their fathers think.”
“Hmmmm …”
Uh — oh. The shrink is saying a long ‘hmmmm.’ That can’t be good, thought Tina.
“… mmm. Let’s change the subject some. Where did Mitch take you out to eat on that first lunch date?”
Tina’s face turned red. “He … took me to his room. At his parent’s house.”
“What did you have to eat?”
The teen girl sat silent, her mouth open, but unable to produce a sound.
“Tina … did you have lunch with Mitch, or sex?”
Her hung head told the answer.
“It’s okay, Tina. Lots of teenage girls have sex. It’s a normal part of childhood.”
“Not for me, doctor. It was my first time. And with him sneaking around and swearing me to secrecy, it felt like we were doing something wrong. But why was it wrong? Why did I have to hide the fact that I’m head over heels for my Mitch? Why can’t we make love if that’s what we choose to do? I’m a legal adult! Sure I still live at home until I graduate, but I have the right to live my life any way I want! And what I want is to get married to Mitch!” Tina was now standing, a new righteous indignation fueling her plea. Her father looked at the wall with a numb, dull look, faintly shaking his head.
“That’s true, Tina,” said the doc. “An adult can make her own decisions — as long as she is willing to live with the consequences. How many times did you have sex dates with Mitch until your folks found out?”
“Uh … it was most every school day last year from March ‘till school ended.”
“Thirty or more times?”
“Probably,” she whispered.
“Any birth control?”
“He … he promises me that he always pulls out in time.”
“Condoms?”
“He said he’s clean. A lab test said so. He swore it to me.”
“You sound like you’re fully committed to him. Is he true to you? Does he sleep with any other girls?”
Tina’s face began to come undone. “He … he’s getting better about that. He’s just so hot that these junior high sluts just throw themselves at him. He’s a guy — it’s hard for him to be strong all of the time.”
Dr. Brand spoke deeply and gently. “Tina. Your college age boyfriend is sleeping with junior high girls from your church?”
Tina’s tears were flowing freely again. Her reply was a mix of pain and anger. “If HE,” she pointed to Kent, “would just let me date Mitch as much as I need to, I could keep him faithful!”
Kent’s voice came forth quietly. “From what we’ve found out, Mitch has had occasional intimate contact with multiple underage girls. Most remain infatuated with him, and are loath to testify against him or press charges. He’s not been taken to court by anyone yet, though he has lost his ability to take any kind of leadership role at church. He was also a volunteer at a Boy’s and Girl’s club, and they now have banned him from their center.”
The girl’s rebuttal came rapidly. “Dad spied on Mitch with a private eye to get that information. Half of it is probably not true! And MY dad accuses ME of sneaking around?!”
Brand looked concerned. “Tina — even if only one tenth of all this is true, doesn’t it worry you?”
“Mitch is so sweet at heart, though. He doesn’t like this part of himself. He says he thinks he can change if I help him. But I’ve got to be able to see him, to fill his needs — to keep him satisfied.”
“Tina, listen to me carefully,” said the black counselor. “From what I’m hearing, the only way you could satisfy Mitch is if you could forever be a 13 year old virgin.”
She was bawling again. “I c-can’t help it *sob* … I love him!”
Dr. Rahne Ruiz was digging further with her two patients. Janis was stating her view.
“It is all my sister’s fault! First she has to go and let that Mitch creep sex her up — and in so many disgusting ways! He did her back door! You know what that means, right? UGH! Disgusting! Then she argues with Dad about it — I mean, she never used to talk back to him. Then Dad is in a bad mood, and I can’t relax with him like that. Everyone walks around on egg whites!”
“I think ye mean egg shells, lassie,” smiled Rahne. “Do ye feel overlooked fer all o’ th’ attention Tina gets, even if most o’ it is negative?”
“No. Mom and Dad are perfect to me.”
“Janis has been our trouble free child through all of this,” said Marlene as she put an arm around her daughter. “She gets good grades, is always sweet and agreeable, keeps to herself mostly, and never gets in trouble. She’s my calm in this storm.”
The redheaded therapist scribbled on her pad. “Are ye jealous o’ Tina in any way, Janis?”
“Maybe I wish the boys flocked to me at least half as much as they do her. She literally has her pick of any boy around. And then she chooses a loser! It’s … it’s not fair. But anyway, if most guys are like Mitch, I’ll join a convent before I go steady with any of them. I’m happy just being a daughter to two wonderful parents.” As she said the last sentence, she laid her head on her mother’s shoulder.
“Aye, lass. To listen tae ye ‘n’ yuir mother, it seems that if yuir sister would just shape up, th’ rest o’ th’ family would hae a perfect, peaceful, lovin’ existence.”
“EXACTLY!” said the mother and daughter in unison.
Rahne watched this interaction closely, with concern. They’re tryin’ too hard tae look idyllic. At least Janis is. There’s somethin’ that she — or they — ‘r hidin’.
Kent spoke with regret tingeing his voice. “If I could do this over, I’d let the girls start dating earlier. I subscribed to the notion that dating should start no earlier than age 16. Then when Tina approached that age, I changed it to 17. As a result, when Mitch approached her, she’d really never dated anyone. All out of obedience to my rules. That boy was her first boyfriend, her first sexual experience, and she’s infatuated. When Marlene and I first learned about her and Mitch, Tina was already acting and thinking as if she and he were married. She hasn’t even finished high school yet.
“I’m not against young love — hell, I married Marlene when we both were 19 — but this guy is trouble. He’s got a fetish with underage girls. There’s no reason to think that will change if he marries Tina. I half think he’s pursuing her to get access to our rich family and lifestyle. If Tina could just at least date around a little — experience attraction to other boys — the spell that Mitch has over her might be broken.”
As he spoke, Tina sat slumped over in her chair, covering her ears and shedding tears.
“While Tina is still in school, legally I’m her parent and somewhat responsible for her. So I feel she should live by my rules. Yet starting this school year — her senior year — she began rebelling. One afternoon when she and Janis were home from school, Marlene stepped out to go to the store to get supper. Tina called Mitch, who came over and had sex with Tina in her bed while Janis stayed in her own room with the door locked. Mitch threatened Janis with bodily harm if she told anyone he had been there; we found out anyway, as Marlene came back home early to get her wallet. So now, Janis is scared to death of Mitch, and we have a restraining order against him.
“I have grounded Tina for the year — “
“For the YEAR?” Brand was a little shocked.
“Yes,” said Kent as if he were talking about stock options. “We keep a constant eye on her. Either Marlene or I keep her with us at all times. At school, she no longer has privileges to leave school grounds. Yet Tina persists in her obsession with Mitch, and has become spiteful and disrespectful — with me, mainly. I put my foot down, but she persists. I demand respect. Her mother says I should try a softer approach, but I don’t see how that would work.”
Then, in an extremely low volume voice, Kent added: “And … I don’t know how to do soft discipline. I know my way isn’t working. But I don’t know what else to do.”
There was about a minute of silence as Kent and Tina sat at opposite ends of the couch, both hanging their heads. Kent began to snort back phlegm, betraying his near tears.
Dr. Brand broke the silence. “What is the worst outcome that could happen in this situation, Kent?”
“The worst? That she gets married to and/or pregnant from this creep, and ruins her life.”
“Wrong. The worst outcome is that you lose your relationship with your daughter forever. That’s what you’re risking by acting this way.”
Kent’s head shot up, a look of surprise and dread on his face. He hadn’t considered that could happen.
Dr. Rahne was complimenting Janis on her looks in an attempt to build her self-esteem. “I must say, lassie, ye are th’ most elegant and glamorous woman on th’ island. Yuir jewelry, yuir look, yuir clothes, yuir shoes … ye even outdo yuir sister an’ mother. No offense intended, Mom.”
“None taken. It’s true, she dresses like a model,” laughed Marlene.
“Thank you, both of you,” chirped Janis without a trace of embarrassment.
“How do ye get th’ money tae look like that?”
“Well, I get an allowance — the same amount that Tina does — but I’m just great at finding deals.”
Marlene added, “She’s also friends with another schoolgirl who comes from a wealthy family. I mean BILLIONAIRE wealthy. Chloe Margolis’ dad is an international stockbroker, and she is always dressed to the nines. Janis will come back from a weekend at Chloe’s with clothes and accessories — Gucci, Donna Karan, you name it — all gifts from Chloe.”
“We go to private school,” said Janis. “Chloe likes to hang with me, and she wants me to dress the part.”
“OCH! What a blessin’ tae have such a generous friend! Does she also come o’er tae yuir house to spend th’ night?”
Janis’ face turned white. “Oh god no! I couldn’t stand for her to come to our dumpy house! It wouldn’t do for her to be seen in our neighborhood!”
“Honey … we live in a 2 million dollar mansion in a gated community,” murmured Marlene.
“Mom. You don’t know what ‘rich’ is. I mean, Chloe lives in a palace. A castle. I would die of embarrassment if she came over.”
Rahne tapped her fingers on her pad. “Hmmm…”
CHAPTER SEVEN
Dr. Mark Brand had heard both sides of the story. He now was eager to start resolving the conflict.
“Kent, Tina. Have you — either of you — ever tried to ‘walk a mile’ in each other’s shoes? Imagine what the other is feeling and experiencing, in an attempt to understand why you both act the way you do?” Both patients looked up, but Tina responded first.
“I know why Dad does what he does. Like I said, he doesn’t want to give up control over my life. He wants to be the #1 man in his ‘little girl’s’ life forever.”
Kent grunted with irritation. “She has no idea where I’m coming from. But I know what’s in her teenage head. She’ll look back one day and thank me that I kept her from a stupid decision — if she ever grows up.”
“Time out!” said Brand. “Developing empathy for each other is the first step in trying to heal your relationship. I’d like to start with a course of guided imagery for both of you, starting in the morning —“
“Guided imagery? That doesn’t work for me. I’ve done it as part of stress reduction at work. I actually got more stressed because of all the damn time it wasted,” Kent spat.
“I’d be willing — but only if he’ll do it too,” remarked Tina.
“I knew this damn therapy would be a failure,” mumbled her father below his breath.
“Again — time out!” Dr. Mark Brand spoke in his deepest, most authoritative tone. “Okay. There is another therapy we can use that will guarantee the development of empathy. It’s fairly extreme so we use it only as a last resort here. In fact, before we use it, I have to clear it with the CEO; so please excuse me for a minute. Can I request that you two speak only with kindness while I’m gone?”
Kent was curious. “Who’s your CEO? Is he or she on the island?”
“No. ‘He or she’ resides elsewhere. Now, will you both be courteous — or if you cannot, remain silent?”
“Yes,” grumbled Kent.
“Yes sir,” smiled Tina, still pleased that her father was now taking orders instead of barking them.
Dr. Rahne Ruiz felt she’d reached a blockage to further therapy with Marlene and especially Janis. The combination of lack of complete openness along with denial of any problem made progress virtually impossible, at least for the rest of today. “Both o’ ye; I get th’ feelin’ that there’s some problem or shame that’s not bein’ talked about. I shan’t force it out o’ ye. But I suspect one or both of ye aren’t bein’ totally honest.”
Marlene’s jaw dropped. “Really? I … I thought I’d been completely forthright with you. I don’t think I’m hiding anything.”
The teen was pale as a sheet as a trickle of sweat ran down her back. “Yeah … me too. Mom, I’m getting tired. Are we almost through?”
“We’re done, wee one. Why don’t we meet one more time at least, in 2 days? If either of ye want tae talk t’ me afore then, just call me or th’ office. You two are free tae go; I have a feelin’ that Dr. Brand still has a while yet with Dad ‘n’ Tina.”
Tina sat across from her father in uncomfortable silence. Her thoughts reflected her yearnings.
God, what I would give to hear him say that he still loves me. I want to tell him I’m sorry — sorry for hurting him and Mom, for lying, for falling for a guy with issues. If he would just forgive me and hold me. But no, I can hear him now: ‘If you’re so sorry, then stop seeing Mitch!’ GYAAH! I do love Dad — but I hate him, too. He probably thinks I’m a failure as a daughter, as a Braxton. I’ll bet he’s ashamed of me — at least, that’s how he acts.
In Kent’s head, turmoil was brewing. I’m screwing this up. I’m screwing everything up. But do I sacrifice my principles — hell, do I sacrifice my DAUGHTER — just to make nice and get peace back in the house? I truly don’t know what to do. Kent Braxton, company big shot, savior of failing businesses — and as a father, I’m a pile of crap. Someone tell me what to do. I truly don't know what action to take next. Please, tell me what to do.
“Hello! I’m comin’ in on yuir session,” said a cheerful Dr. Ruiz as she entered the room. “Whenever we do UET, it usually requires Dr. Brand ‘n’ me t’gether.”
“UET?” both patients said.
“Ultimate Empathy Therapy,” said Brand as he returned. “The extreme treatment I mentioned before. We believe that if you two truly understand each other, your conflict has a good chance of being resolved successfully.”
Kent was skeptical. “What kind of ‘extreme’ are we talking about? Hypnotizing me to think I’m a teenage girl?”
Drs. Brand and Ruiz looked at each other with a surprised look. Rahne responded with a wry grin. “Not exactly … but tha’s aboot as close an explanation as I c’n give, sir.”
“The CEO has approved this for you two. I need both of you to sign these waivers,” said Brand as he handed papers out.
Kent scanned the form with his executive eye. “Hmmm … treatment lasts for 60 hours … can be prolonged or permanent if one of the parties so desires … I do not hold the Isla responsible for any consequences brought about from any actions I take while undergoing the treatment …” He put the paper down. “What are we signing up for, human experimentation? The language in this waiver sounds a little ominous!”
“I assure you Mr. Braxton, in spite of the language in the contract, we have used this therapy on over 130 clients in the past. Every one of them found it superbly successful. But I won’t force you into it.”
“Please, Dad? I’ll do it if you will.” Tina hoped she still had the ability to pull on her Father’s heartstrings.
Kent sighed. “Fine. Let’s get this over with.” He signed the waiver.
“If ye both would sit yuirselves over here, please.”
Rahne pointed to a small square table with two chairs facing each other. A large plate of glass bisected the table, so it was possible to be seated and see the other seated person through the glass pane. Kent and Tina sat themselves; they faced each other.
“Now, if both o’ ye would lean forward, reach yuir hands aroond th’ glass on either side o’ it, ‘n’ grasp th’ hands o’ the other person. Good! Just lik’ that. Now look through th’ glass at the other person’s face. Fix that face in yuir eyes.”
Kent felt silly going through this rigmarole. Yet he and Tina gazed intently into each other’s faces.
Dr. Brand grabbed a hidden tab on the glass pane and pulled it out of the wooden frame with a SHHHHK. He then placed a whiteboard of equal size up to the pane and inserted it. On both sides of the whiteboard there was writing, in large dry-erase marker print.
“Now, both o’ ye: read th’ words ye see, silently, to yourself. Mean them with as much o’ yuir will as ye can muster. Don’t speak a word or make a sound, except for th’ very last word on the board. Say tha’ word oot loud, then close yuir eyes, and keep ‘em closed.”
Tina felt a warm tingle in her throat as she said the phrase in her head. “PLEASE GRANT ME THE EXPERIENCE OF MY FATHER. MAY I KNOW WHAT HE SEES, WHAT HE FEELS; HIS JOYS, HIS PAINS, HIS STRENGTHS, HIS WEAKNESSES, SO THAT I MAY UNDERSTAND HIM MORE COMPLETELY. MAY I SEE MYSELF THROUGH HIS EYES, AS HE SEES ME. AMEN.” Kent’s writing was the same, except his said “DAUGHTER” and “HERS”.
Tina said her “amen” and closed her eyes. Kent had reached the last word, but hesitated to say it.
I can truly say that I have no interest in understanding what a teenage girl thinks or feels. Frankly, it feels a little creepy praying this. That’s what this is, right? A prayer? I don’t even go to church with Marlene and the girls, much less talk to God. If he or she even exists, that is. But … I promised I would submit, for Tina’s sake. So, here goes.
“Amen.” Kent then shut his eyes as instructed.
Both Kent and Tina heard a SHHHHHK — SHHHHUNK. It sounded like the whiteboard had been taken out and the glass reinserted.
“Okay, ye two. Open yuir eyes and look a’ th’ glass.”
Kent opened his eyes and once again stared into his daughter’s face. “Well? Now wha —“
He choked in mid-sentence. As he had spoken, his daughter’s mouth had moved, forming the exact words he was saying, and in her voice. Except her voice was coming from his throat. He then heard his familiar baritone sound — but it came from the other side of the table, and said “OH … MY … GOD… NO… WAY!”
Kent saw a head — his head — rise up over the glass and look at him. “Dad,” — his head said to him — “is that you over there?
“Yeah.” Dammit, there was Tina’s voice coming out again when he tried to talk. He looked at his head, peering over the frame of the glass at him. He looked into the glass itself and saw only Tina. As he tilted his head, Tina exactly mimicked his movements. How was she doing that? What was his head doing looking over the glass at him?
Mark Brand squatted beside Kent and hugged him around the shoulders as if to steady him. “Mr. Braxton, you are no longer looking through a clear glass pane. You’re looking in a mirror.”
Tina’s eyes — no, his eyes now?! — grew saucer size as they saw Tina’s body being steadied at the shoulders by Dr. Brand. He heard the counselor’s words in his left ear, but in the glass the Dr. was speaking into Tina’s ear.
Kent shot up out of the chair. He noticed Tina’s brunette hair shifting in and out of the periphery of his vision as he looked furtively around the room to get his bearings. Looking down, he saw his — Tina’s — no, now his — tiny hands with bangles on both wrists and pretty painted nails. He couldn’t see his lower body because of Tina’s — his — ample bosom.
“WHAT IN FUCKING HELL?!” he squeaked in a shrill female voice.
Kent saw his body laughing at him. Then his body said to him, “What have I told you about using the f—word, little girl? You are so grounded!” Then the baritone guffaws started again.
CHAPTER EIGHT
Tina was smiling wide with amazement. “This is a pretty awesome bit of hypnotism! I actually look and feel like I’m in my Dad’s big body!” She walked around, stomping her feet. “I feel so strong! And it looks like I’m a foot taller!”
Kent was huddled in a corner of the room, his dainty arms wrapped around himself. He was shaking — a little from being suddenly chilled in this small body, but mostly from being on the verge of a nervous breakdown. “Stop it. Make it stop. Undo this. Unhypnotize me. Just — just wake me up, PLEASE.” He felt more vulnerable, more weak and unprotected, than at any other time in his life.
Rahne approached Kent. “Sir — I’m sorry, but now that yuir intae th’ therapy, ye have to let it run its course. 60 hours — two ‘n’ a half days.”
Kent resorted to his fail-safe emotion: anger. “What do you mean, I have to let it run its course? You mean there’s not an escape clause in that waiver? I don’t like this. I demand to be returned to my normal state of mind! If not, I will lawyerize all your asses until you lose everything! And — “
“Stop it.”
Kent looked to his side. That order didn’t come from one of the counselors — it came from his old body, the body that Tina now seemed to inhabit. She had talked back to him before, but hearing his booming male voice scolding him knocked him mute.
“You’re embarrassing yourself, and you’re embarrassing me. You may be disoriented and scared, but that gives you no right to take it out on these helpful people. So cool it, and let’s work together to get the most out of this. Okay?”
The teenage girl body (and the man’s mind now inhabiting it) completely lost its cool. “Tina — how DARE you order me around? Don’t forget whom you’re talking to! Now back off and shut up while I try to get us out of this.”
Tina stepped forward and spoke intensely. “Young lady — you will not speak to me in that tone again.”
“I’ll speak to you in any way I choose! No matter how I look to me — or you — I am your father.”
“Yes you are — but here on this island, you agreed to be my equal. Right now, I’m more than your equal. You will not be rude or disrespectful again.”
Kent tried a move that usually worked with his kids, and his employees. He stomped towards Tina in a slow bull rush in an attempt to put his face in hers. “Why? Who’s going to stop me, Ti … na …”
He faltered as he realized that instead of towering over his daughter as usual, he was now looking in her male chest. He looked up and saw a sad but frustrated visage — formerly his, now Tina’s.
“That, young lady, crossed the line,” she said. Her thick manly hand grabbed Kent’s tiny arm, and she pulled him along with her back to her seat. She laid Kent down over her knee.
“Tina — what are you doing?”
“Remember last thanksgiving, father? Where you paddled me in front of the rest of the family for talking back to you? I was seventeen years old. Seventeen. Well, it’s time for a taste of your own medicine.”
She raised her hand and brought it down on Kent’s bottom. Again and again. Kent initially was indignant, though held in place by Tina’s overwhelming strength advantage. But as he felt the repeated slaps, his demeanor changed. His brow began to twist up, and tears rushed out freely. Finally he said, “Stop! Please! I’m sorry — please, please, forgive me.” Tina halted the spanking.
“Are both of you sufficiently done with ‘acting out’?” Brand cut in. “Because we have some recommendations for you to consider during the next fifty-nine hours and forty-four minutes.”
“Go ahead, sir. We’re listening,” said Tina, remarkably poised and relaxed. Kent was still sniffling, but nodded his teen girl’s head.
“First: treat the body you’re in with respect. In less than three days you’ll have to return it.”
“Second: Treat each other with respect. Tina, we didn’t intervene in that spanking episode; given what you said about last Thanksgiving, it was probably appropriate. But you’ve made your point. The goal of this therapy is not revenge, or taking advantage of your new situation; it is to achieve an understanding of each other.”
“Third: everyone else around you will see you as the person who’s body you now inherit. Try not to embarrass each other, as you will still have three days left on the Isla when this special therapy is over.”
Tina whistled — well, she tried to, but her new mustache tickled her nose as she attempted it. Rubbing her nostrils, she had a question. “Everyone on the island? Including Mom and Janis?”
“Yes, Tina.”
“How does that work? Did you hypnotize them too? And everyone else here?”
“Lassie, ye aren’t hypnotized,” Rahne cut in. “When yuir father asked earlier, I responded that hypnotism was close tae what would happen.”
Kent, still shaking, knew what was being hinted at. The sensations, the reality was just too authentic to be a trance state. He looked up with red eyes at his huge, now former anatomy. “Tina — we’re actually in each other’s bodies. I don’t know how they did it, but that’s what has happened.”
Tina’s cheeks turned pale. “No. No, it’s not. You’re wrong.” She looked at Rahne. “Tell him that he’s wrong!”
“Child — he’s tellin’ th’ truth.”
“B-but I don’t want to be stuck in my Dad’s hairy body! And I definitely don’t want my Dad in my body! I mean, when he takes a shower, or changes clothes, I don’t want him seeing my … ooohh God!” It was now the daughter who appeared to be close to “losing it”.
Drs. Brand and Ruiz looked at each other. Rahne whispered to her boss’ ear. “They’re takin’ this harder than most, Mark. We usually do UET between spouses, or lovers. This is the first parent — child we’ve done. Mayhaps they weren’t appropriate for th’ treatment.”
“I see that. But there’s not much we can do about it now. Tell their attendant to keep a very close watch on both of them. Who is their attendant, by the way? Demetrius? Shannon?”
Rahne pulled out a folder and opened it up to the tab stating “Braxton”. She smiled and breathed a sigh of relief. “It’s Angelo.”
Brand’s face relaxed. “Oh, thank heaven. Rahne, I think this is going to turn out OK.”
TO BE CONTINUED THURSDAY, JULY 11
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to a real situation or person is purely coincidental
Tremendous thanks to Cyclist for beta reading and help!
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Ultimate Empathy Therapy
Part 3 of 8
by **Sigh**
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CHAPTER NINE
After anguishing together about their fate (and being continually reassured by their counselors that this would be for their good), Kent and Tina were finally dismissed from their session.
“Any chance we could disappear for 60 hours — hide somewhere and wait this out?” quivered Man-Tina.
“I’ve already thought that through. Not unless we find a hidden cave, and avoided any search parties. Dammit — if we weren’t on a fucking island, we could find a chain motel and cloister ourselves there,” muttered girl-Kent.
“Stop that.”
“Huh? Stop what?”
“Cursing. You always police our speech — Janis and me. You maintain that it’s inappropriate for a lady to use foul language. Well, you’re a lady now. I’m going to continue to enforce your rule. And you also have stated that it’s OK for you to curse because you’re a dude. Well, I’m the dude now. So quit your damn shitty curse words, asshole — got it?”
Kent opened ‘her’ petite mouth, but no sound came out. ‘His’ logic was too airtight.
After about twenty seconds of awkward quiet, Tina cleared ‘his’ throat and resumed the conversation. “So, we’re going to have to break the news to Mom and Janis about our situation.”
Kent looked up. “Do you really think they’ll buy it? I’m worried they’ll think that those quacks drugged us. In two days they will be more freaked out than we are. This is our mess; let’s keep it to ourselves.”
The girl’s soul in the man’s frame sighed. “Actually, I agree with you. So that means you go to the girl’s cabana with Janis, and I go to sleep with Mom.” The bearded face turned white. “OH GOD. Is Mom going to expect me to sleep sleep with her? This is a romantic place, after all. OH … MY … GOD …”
“Just tell her that as a result of this therapy, you’re way too worried and upset to make love with her - that excuse may hold her off for two days. And even better, it’s not a lie.”
“Hold HER off? You mean she gets horny and comes on to you? I figured you were always the aggressor …”
“Can we not talk about this now?”
“Aaah … okay. Let’s talk about our naked bodies. I don’t want you to see mine. And no exploring with your hands!”
“My God, Tina. This is your — my daughter’s — form. I’m not a pervert.”
“No, but you’re a guy. I mean, you still have the mind of a guy. You think I didn’t notice you glancing at my chest when we went to Cocoa Beach that summer— when I first wore my yellow bikini?”
Kent’s jaw dropped. “WHAT? I — I did? I don’t remember ever ogling you!”
“Don’t worry; you didn’t leer in a prolonged way, just a second or two. I’ve come to realize it’s just the way you guys are wired. Now, if 10 seconds later you were still examining my chest, and with a hard on, then I’d be creeped out. So, while you’re in my body, I don’t worry that you will purposely fondle it. But because you have the mind of a guy, your hands might subconsciously wander to my boobies or my groin. Just don’t let it happen, okay?”
“Yes ma’am — er, sir.”
“Now — let’s talk about the bathroom, and getting naked in the shower.”
“Sheesh. Let’s not.”
“Dad! I’m serious! When toileting, sit down and let it go. Then wipe yourself dry front to back. DO NOT TOUCH ME with your fingers — just with toilet paper. When bathing, do not touch me with your hands, except when you shampoo your hair. Use the pouf I packed in my makeup kit. Keep your face turned upwards, or if looking down, please close your eyes. And DO NOT LOOK IN THE MIRROR until you’re clothed! It sounds like a lot of trouble, but please — I don’t want you to see me naked.”
“Okay. Got it.”
“Now — what do I do with yours? I’ve seen your bare chest before, so no problem there. But how do I deal with … with your ‘thing’?”
“You can say penis, Tina. I’m sure that’s what you call Mitch’s ‘thing’.”
“Mitch has a penis. But to think of my Dad … uh, you’ve got a ‘thing’.”
“If you don’t want to touch it —“
“OF COURSE I DON’T!”
“- Just listen. When bathing, just use a soapy washcloth to clean around there, then rinse the cloth and use that to help rinse it off. When you use the toilet, just sit on the pot and let it hang down into the bowl, then let go. That way you never have to touch it. I’d rather you not see my … ‘thing’ … either, so just follow your rules for me. Don’t look down at it, and no looking in the mirror without at least undershorts on.”
“That sounds do-able.”
“Tina — I don’t know how to dress in girl clothes. I don’t color coordinate — that’s why for years I’ve only black slacks. I’m worried about the bra … and makeup, and dealing with long hair. How do I handle all that?”
The thick manly brows of Tina’s face furrowed together as she thought of how to deal with the problem. “Breakfast is at 8 AM, right? Be showered and dressed by 7:15, and meet me at the gazebo down the road by 7:30. Bring the makeup kit. I’ll do a quickie on your face and hair. It won’t be up to my usual standards, but it’ll do, and we won’t be gone long enough to arouse suspicions. Thank God we don’t know anyone else on this rock except for Mom and Sis. As for the bra, here’s a sneaky and easy way to get one on …”
In ten more minutes, both had finished a crash course on how to deal with each other’s physical shell.
“It’s supper time,” Kent said. “We’ve been together over 5 hours now, and we haven’t had one screaming fit. I think that hasn’t happened since a year ago.”
“I did have to spank you, though,” Tina laughed.
“And boy, am I sore. You hit me hard! I’m pretty sure I’ve never hit you …”
Tina nodded “his” head.
“… that …”
“He” nodded much more vigorously.
“… hard …?” Kent whispered that last word. The color slowly drained out of “her” face as “she” realized the truth. “Oh Tina. I am so, so sorry. That was wrong of me. I … I abused you!”
“Wow,” Tina said. “I think this ‘UET’ is working!”
“Please forgive me, honey. I feel awful —“
“You’re forgiven. Just — never again, OK?”
“I promise — from the bottom of my heart.”
Tina looked down the slope towards the restaurant. “There go Mom and Janis in to eat. Hey, they see us. Wave back.”
“Hey Honey,” Kent yelled.
“Dad! It’s ‘hey MOM’ for the next two days! And I’m Dad to you when we’re in public!”
“Sorry about that, ‘Dad’. Are you ready to try to do this?”
“Umm - ’Daughter’, I am sooooo not ready,” boomed Tina’s baritone voice.
“Same here. Well, here goes nothing,” said Kent.
They both walked down the hill towards supper, and the other half of their family.
CHAPTER TEN
The supper special was broiled mahi-mahi with rice and steamed squash. The only Braxton who didn’t choose it was Janis, with her usual order of chicken tenders.
Marlene scanned the faces of her husband and her firstborn. “So, you two, how was your session? Goodness, you both were in there for the whole afternoon!”
“It was shocking, uh, ‘Mom’,” replied her daughter (Kent).
“You’re not kidding, ‘Tina’. I felt so nervous. They really did a good job of getting us to see from each other’s viewpoint.” Tina so far was sailing smooth in her Dad act.
“Would you like some dessert?” asked their waiter.
“I’ll have the ‘Isla mango—pineapple sundae’,” said Kent, licking her lips.
“No, you won’t,” scolded Tina in ‘his’ most authoritative voice. “You have your girlish figure to consider. Remember what Dr. Brand said about respecting our bodies.”
“Sis — want to split a virgin strawberry daiquiri with me?” Janis intervened in an attempt to stave off another Kent/Tina battle. Kent nodded her head. Then she stuck her tongue out at her ‘father’.
“Wow. That’s mature. Not,” said Tina in a mocking tone. Then he felt the sensation of fingernails digging into his forearm. It was Marlene — with a clenched face and water welling to the verge of overflowing in her eyelids.
“Kent. Please. Not now,” she pleadingly whispered.
Tina was ready to explain that she was just kidding, that there was no need to worry, but the look on her mother’s visage gave her pause. “I’m sorry Mo … Marlene.” Turning to Kent, Tina said, “I’m sorry for being rude to you, my daughter.”
Marlene’s lids opened so wide it seemed her eyeballs might pop out. She leaned over and embraced her husband’s body in a tight hug, and kissed his face. “You apologized! You’ve never done that so immediately before — it usually takes a day, or a week! I’m so proud of you!” She smooched his cheek again.
Girl-Kent couldn’t believe her eyes. Who would have guessed that a simple prompt apology would mean so much? She realized that ‘her’ fatherly pride had been hurting her wife, her daughter. And although she had already cried today more than he had in the past five years, tears inexplicably began to form again.
Marlene whispered into her husband’s ear. “See? It’s even choking Tina up. Keep this going. I’m so happy with what you did.”
“Ahem,” the waiter coughed uncomfortably. “I’m sorry. This is an obvious personal time. Will there be any more dessert orders?”
“Bring me an espresso,” Man-Tina said with a wide grin.
Janis gasped. Marlene’s mouth opened in surprise. “Honey? Espresso? You hate all types of coffee. That’s why you always order tea. Espresso is Tina’s thing!”
Tina began to sweat. Stupid! I forgot that. I’m blowing this! “Uh, I’m actually getting it for her. For Tina. To make up for being rude to her earlier.”
Kent’s jaw was the next one to go slack. To cover for that slip, she was going to have to drink espresso now? I hate coffee! “Um, ‘Dad’, I think you should drink it. You know, part of the empathy therapy? Experiencing what each other experiences? Walking a mile in each other’s shoes?”
“Excellent suggestion, ‘daughter’. It’s about time I took some risks, for the sake of our relationship,” Tina sighed in relief. Crisis averted, and he still would get his espresso.
When the meal was done, a movie was shown in the outdoor theater: Freaky Friday, starring Lindsey Lohan and Jamie Lee Curtis. Janis and Marlene seemed to enjoy it much more than Tina and Kent. Afterwards, the Braxtons went to their respective cabanas.
Kent was perplexed. He was looking in the suitcase that Tina had packed, and it was empty. Meaning she had previously unpacked and put everything up. But where? “Uhhh … Janis? Where did I put all my clothes, and makeup, and my … bathroom stuff? I … I can’t seem to remember.”
Kent’s “sister” made a face reflecting irritation. “Girl, that therapy must have really screwed you and Dad up royally. You’ve been acting strange since you got out. Dad is too, but you’re worse.”
“Janis — are you going to help me or not?”
“It’s just like usual, like what we do in hotels, Tina. You take the drawers on the left; I take the ones on the right. Same way in the closet, I take the right half, you take the left.” Janis walked up close to Kent, and held up her hand. “How many fingers am I holding up?”
“Four.”
“At least you can still see straight. Hurry up and finish getting ready for bed. I’m super tired, and I’m almost ready to turn the lights off.”
“Let me just find my toothbrush and stuff.” Kent grabbed what looked like a nightshirt out of the drawer; holding it up, she could see it was a hip-length nightgown. Oh God. I’m wearing satin and lace to bed. I hope this experience doesn’t turn me into a transvestite.
Kent turned around, just in time to see Janis taking off her shirt and bra. She squinted her eyes shut and turned back the other direction. “Janis! I’m in the room!”
As Kent ran into the lavatory, a befuddled Janis wondered what the heck her sister was talking about. “Yeah — and now you’re in the bathroom! So what?” she yelled.
As Kent took off her makeup with remover pads — after years of watching Marlene get ready for bed, she had at least picked up a few things — she looked at the clock. It said 10:01. Just 53 hours to go, she grumbled in her head.
Tina and Marlene, at the latter’s request, were walking hand and hand under the moonlit sky. “This is so romantic. It kind of gets me in the mood, you know? How about it, darling — feeling the same?” Marlene cooed.
Tina quickly pecked a kiss on Marlene’s cheek. “There. I was in the mood for that, too. Thanks for suggesting it, honey.” Please let that satisfy her for this evening, hoped Tina.
“Don’t be coy, mister. That’s my job.” Marlene spun around to the front of her husband. “I really am proud of what you did today. Now let me tell you what I’m going to do tonight.”
She began to whisper into her husband’s ear. Tina’s face went red, then white, at the sweet and naughty nothings that came out of Mom’s mouth. He pulled away. “Not tonight, Marlene.”
The mother was stunned. Kent never refused an offer of sex from her. “Honey? What’s wrong?”
“It’s the therapy earlier. It has me so confused, so upset — I’ll be lucky if I can even get to sleep. I’m sorry.”
Marlene looked concerned, and a little disappointed. “Can we at least cuddle?”
Tina looked up with a smile. “I really, really need to be held. I’d love that.”
Late that night, as Janis slept in the adjoining bed, Kent was thinking. Reasoning furiously about what had happened this day.
Okay, it’s not hypnotism. That’s established. Some new advanced technology? But there was no machine, no wires, nothing in the room to suggest that. Witches — magic? I don’t believe in that; besides, no spell was chanted, no cauldron or pointy hats with belt buckles. No blood sacrifice or pentagram, so I guess this isn’t a result of a satanic ritual. What the hell — look how I’m thinking. Next I’ll be considering leprechauns and Norse deities.
Think. All we did was silently read a phrase on a whiteboard, and then said “Amen”, then closed our eyes. The phrase was not a wish; more of a request. A prayer. To who? God? I don’t believe in God. That’s Marlene and the girl’s thing. Even if there is a God, I don’t believe he’d honor a skeptic’s request. But Tina … she’s not a skeptic, and she made the request too.
Hey God — if you really are there — could you please switch us back, so we can wake up in our own bodies in the morning?
Kent’s eyelids were now droopy. But she opened them up for one last time. “Oh yeah — Amen,” she whispered.
CHAPTER ELEVEN
Tina gradually became aware that it was morning. Things didn’t seem right; the bed was huge, for a twin size. And she felt someone spooning behind her. Mitch? Well, who else could it be? Oh, how she’d dreamed about actually waking up with him, having spent the whole night together. Finally!
She reached up to wipe the sleep from her eyes, and then gasped in shock at the hand in her vision. It was big and hairy. Yet it moved any way she commanded it. She inadvertently felt her cheek, and noticed a thick field of coarse hairs there. What the heck?
The events of the previous afternoon and evening came rushing back into Tina’s brain. In response, his heart quickened, his inhalations deepened, and his arms and feet started to tremor faintly. A classic adrenaline reaction.
OMG! OMG, OMG. Get ahold of yourself, girl. Uh, guy. Less than 48 hours left. Calm down; you can do this. Slow down that breathing. It’s going to be OK.
The self-lecture seemed to work. Tina calmed, and took stock of his situation. That had to be Mom he felt snuggling up next to his back, with her arm over his torso. True to her word, Marlene had stuck by him all night. Mommy hasn’t held me like this since grade school. It’s nice. Although, she feels so small — Dad’s body is massive compared to the rest of us. If I was in my own form, I could scrunch up and have her nearly surround me like I did as a little girl. Right now she almost feels like a small person I’m giving a piggyback ride to.
He also became aware of a few more sensations. One, he needed to pee pretty badly; that wasn’t a foreign feeling. What was very unfamiliar was tightness in his groin area, as if his boxer shorts were suddenly too small. He looked down, and saw …
O-M-G!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!! That’s … that’s an erection! Morning wood! How? Why? I’m not horny! Assuming I even know how a guy feels when he’s horny. Okay — go down. Go down! Why isn’t it going down? Think unromantic thoughts. Having to pick up Dixie’s dog poop in the back yard, yuck. Math. In any right triangle, the area of the square whose side is the hypotenuse is equal to the sum of …
Tina heard Marlene yawn, and the mother’s arm moved involuntarily downward, her fingers grazing Tina’s hardened penis. “Mmmmh … you weren’t in the mood last night, but it sure feels like you are right now,” came a drowsy yet unmistakably sensuous voice. Marlene reached to stroke the engorged organ …
She never got the chance. Tina shot straight up out of bed, and ran to the bathroom.
“SORRY SORRY HONEY I REALLY HAVE TO TINKLE REALLY BAD,” Tina yelled as she shut and locked the door.
Marlene was wide-awake now, wondering at her husband’s behavior. He seemed … repulsed by my touch. And did my husband really just say he had to ‘tinkle’?
Kent’s full bladder urged him to consciousness. Well, half conscious. He felt as if he could use a few more winks. Which he would get, as soon as he “drained the snake”.
He sleepily shifted into a sitting position and tried to put his feet on the floor, except they wouldn’t touch. Forcing his eyelids to crack open a little, he was reminded of his surroundings. Ah, that’s right. We’re on a tropical vacation. I can sleep as long as I want. This mattress is wonderful, even if it is too damn high off the floor.
He slid down until his feet hit ground, then looked through his bleary peepers to see the way to the john. Shuffling to the pot, he thumb-pulled his shorts down. Why did I wear briefs to bed instead of my sleep boxers? Oh well. He lifted the toilet lid, then assumed the position he had assumed every a.m. for the past three decades: leaning forward, both hands on the wall, dick hanging straight down towards the center of the bowl. He had perfected this technique; it never missed. He could do it with his eyes closed, and so this bright morn he did just that. He relaxed and let go-
A spray of urine bathed his inner thighs, drenching his briefs and puddled rapidly on the floor. In surprise (and suddenly fully awake) he tightened his groin to shut off the flow. Looking down to see what the hell just happened, his view was obstructed by a nightgown-clad large pair of breasts.
After processing the shock of remembering the previous day’s events, Kent furiously used wads of toilet paper to dry herself, half-dry her panties, and sop the floor up. Dammit dammit dammit. Come on, scrapper. Just two days left of this shit. How I will welcome the return of the ability to pee while standing.
She quickly turned to sit in order to finish urinating. Only after immersing her bottom in cold toilet water did she remember: she hadn’t put the lid back down.
Janis stuck her head inside the doorway. “Are you all right in here? What’s all the splashing — Oh, HA! HA HA HA HA HA! Earth to Tina — THAT’S NOT A SWIMMING POOL! HA HA HA HA HA!”
Kent struggled with flailing legs, clenched teeth, and surprising tears, eventually extracting herself from the bowl. Oh well. This day can’t get any worse, that’s for sure. Wait — King’s X on that thought. I did not mean that. Murphy’s law, if you’re listening, I did not mean that.
Tina was in the bathroom, trying to figure out how to get rid of his erection.
God, that was close — my own Mom was gonna give me a hand job! I gotta get limp! How do guys deal with this?? I mean, I know they get it gone by having sex or masturbating, but NO WAY am I doing those! Girl, I really gotta tinkle! And maybe if I relieve that bladder pressure, it’ll relieve the pressure on Dad’s — I mean, my — “thing”. That’s it! I’ll pee, and then my “thing” will go down. Oh God, I can’t believe I’m having to deal with a penis — I mean, MY OWN penis-thing.
He made sure the toilet seat was down, then pulled down his boxers and sat on the seat. He immediately perceived a problem when his sensitive “thing” poked him in the lower belly as he sat down. If he peed now, he’d spray his face. Quickly wrapping his right hand in a wad of toilet paper, he tried to push the penis down, force it into the bowl.
OW! OW — OW — OW!! O! M! G! Did I break it? That really hurt. Please tell me I didn’t break off Dad’s thingie.
Tina still refused to look at it, but felt with the wrapped hand — the thingie was still there, and still as erect.
God, it feels stiffer than ever! I gotta stop touching it! It’s like it’s so sensitive that being touched by anything makes it more rock hard! It did feel amazing when I touched the tip, though. I wonder if I touched it again OMG NONONO WHAT THE HELL AM I THINKING?? Just figure out a way to pee! Wait — guys pee standing up all the time.
He stood up quickly and turned to face the porcelain throne.
OK, problem. Most guys are limp when they pee, right? They’d have to be, because then the pee goes downward. If I let go now, though, it’s gonna go up! Maybe I can aim and “arc” it into the toilet. How far back do I stand? So much pressure — it feels like if I release now, I’ll hit the ceiling! Please, please don’t let me hit the ceiling.
He backed up a little, hoping it was enough to hit a bullseye with a rainbow shaped stream of pee — that is, if it didn’t shoot a hole in the plaster above her head.
OK, here goes. Please, no ceiling.
His prayer was answered; no urine hit the ceiling. Tina did manage to baptize the bathroom wall just above and behind the toilet, though. He frantically used his wrapped right hand to try to grab the male fire hose and redirect its aim, but he only succeeded in now getting pee onto the toilet paper roll and toilet base. He tightened and shut the flow off, but the damage was done.
Cleaning the mess as quickly and thoroughly as he could with an extra bath towel, Tina began to silently panic.
God — I still have to urinate! I can’t do that safely until the hard on’s gone! I can’t get rid of the hard on until I can empty my bladder! Maybe … maybe I can pee in the shower; it is all tiled, after all. Yeah, but YUCK and EWWW! Maybe if I peed into the shower stream, with the water running … WAITAMINUTE!
A COLD SHOWER!! THAT’S WHAT GUYS DO TO GET UNHORNY!
Tina jumped in the shower (sleeping undershirt still on), grabbed the water knob with the “C” on it, and turned it on full blast.
Marlene heard a “WAAAAUGH!” from the bathroom. She got out of bed and ran to the bathroom door, but found it locked.
Ten minutes later she saw her husband emerge from the bathroom, shivering, undershirt sopping wet and translucent, a towel wrapped around his midsection a little higher than usual.
“What in heaven’s name happened in there, Kent?” she said, confused.
“I told you; I had to tink — er, pee.”
“You had to ‘tinkerpee’? What is that, another way of saying you had to masturbate? You locked the door; that had to be what you were doing, right? “ Marlene was now crying. “I’m right here, baby — ready and willing — but maybe I can’t pleasure you as well anymore as you can by yourself? It must have been great for you — I’ve never made you say ‘WAAAAUGH’ before!” She ran sobbing into the bathroom and this time, Tina was the one locked out of it.
It took fifteen minutes of pleading through the door, explaining about the urine accident and difficulty aiming, to get Marlene calmed and back into the bedroom. Tina had taken off the wet nightshirt and dried his chest so that he could wrap his arms around a snuffling Marlene; Tina had seen Kent hug this way before when his wife needed comforting. As Marlene sunk her face into her man’s neck and pressed her chest into his, Tina embraced her for a straight couple of minutes. The whole time he prayed: please, no more erections … not for two more days, at least.
CHAPTER TWELVE
Tina trudged towards the gazebo, eight minutes late. He was surprised at the effort it took to walk his huge body up the sloping road; yet, equally astounding was the raw strength in his arms, trunk, and legs. The tallness added to the feeling of power. THIS part I could get used to; as a girl, I always had to be aware of my surroundings. Nobody’s gonna mess with the 6’2’’ burly guy with the black hair, beard, and mustache.
Kent was sitting at the gazebo with her makeup kit. “What took you? Breakfast is in 20 minutes,” she scolded Tina. Tina scowled back.
“After the morning I had, I suggest you treat me with care,” he spat.
“Wow — your day started lousy too? Sorry.” Kent pulled up a bag that was laid near her feet. “Here’s the makeup and a hairbrush.”
“Plenty of time. It’s not a wedding or a prom we need to attend; at a place like this a girl can get by on minimal paint.” Tina began rapidly applying a powder to her old face, realizing it was strange to be doing it from this new angle.
“Umh — Tina,” Kent said (trying not to interfere with the face work), “is Janis angry with you for any reason?”
The male face twitched and raised an eyebrow. “Before I answer, tell me why you asked.”
“She’s been very rude to me — I mean to you, because she thinks I’m you. Both last night and this morning. I’ve never seen her be this way. What did you do to make her so spiteful?”
“Dad. There’s a lot of stuff you don’t know about Janis. Around you guys she’s petite miss perfect, but away from your eyes — and around me — her dark side comes out.”
“You’re one to be talking, Tina! Don’t start pointing your finger at her and think that it will distract from what you’ve done this last year! You —“
“I know, I know, Dad. I’ve got your lecture memorized. Let me condense it: you think I’m a slut.”
“Tina! I do not.”
“You’ve said as much — when you first found out about Mitch and me. ‘Tina, you’re acting like a slut’. Your exact words, Dad.”
Kent remembered saying them. She coughed mildly, and then quietly spoke. “I didn’t say you were a slut — just acting like one. There’s a difference.”
“Not much of one, in my opinion,” Tina growled. “New subject. After breakfast you need to change your shirt, or shorts, or both.”
Kent looked at her shirt and shorts. “What? Both are blue.”
Tina grabbed the hem of the shorts Kent wore. “Neon Pacific Blue. Your shirt is Turquoise. Clash. Get the white skirt with the pinkish belt; change into that, please. Daddy’s orders.”
“Don’t push me, Tina. Remember, I go back in that body soon.”
Man-Tina sighed. “Yeah, I know. But at this moment, we’re playing roles — both to keep Mom and Janis from freaking out, and to get empathetic about each other. And furthermore, ‘little girl’, I did give you an order — but I said it without yelling. And it still rubbed you the wrong way. So how do you think I feel when you’ve barked your commands at me, so loud that the walls shake? Wait — don’t answer yet. Hold your lips still while I apply this.”
Janis looked dreamily out the full-wall window of the Isla’s restaurant. They had been assigned a window table, and the sunlight illuminated the blue-green waters at the bay; the room showcased the beach area. “So romantic. So classy. So jealous, Chloe will be,” she muttered.
Marlene looked at her family. What a great looking bunch. Janis with her elegant long lines and rich brown hair, hanging down her back nearly to the chair seat. Tina’s black tresses stopped at her shoulders, and framed her porcelain face elegantly. Not that most people looked long at her face — her body was a guy’s wet dream. She had tried modeling at age 16, but was often passed over because she was actually too curvy; when certain “niche” agencies said they could get her work, they turned out to be porn pushers. The tip-off was the “call us the day you turn 18” line.
Kent was strikingly handsome even at 42. He had a full head of hair that was greying some (especially at the temples), and had a rich deepish voice that (when used correctly) could make you believe that you’d be okay even if the apocalypse was happening. 6’2’’, a little chubby at 235 pounds, but he made her feel safe, as well as secure. Loved.
Marlene then looked at herself; unfortunately, the mirror at the maá®tre d’s stand gave her a full side view of her body. Though others constantly complimented her on her great looks, all she could see in the mirror were blemishes and wrinkles; a new one every other day it seemed. And her breasts had seemed to get much more saggy over the last year.
It didn’t help that Kent seemed to be avoiding her last night and this morning. The prospect of sex had made him seem … afraid? No, it can’t be that. He’s fearless. It must be that I’m less attractive to him. I can’t blame him, with some of the little hotties that are here for their therapy. A rich, handsome man; beyond the ring on his finger, there’s nothing to stop him from having his pick of gorgeous women.
Why am I feeling so insecure? He’s never cheated, to my knowledge. But since we arrived here, he’s been embarrassed to get close to me. He says it’s the ‘traumatic’ therapy. God, I hope so. I hope I’m not starting to lose my husband.
The waitress interrupted everyone’s distant thoughts. “What would each of you like to drink?”
A minute later she left with their orders. Marlene smiled with wonder at her husband. “Another espresso? And you, Tina — hot tea? You guys are really taking this ‘walking in each other’s shoes’ to heart. Just don’t start dressing like each other,” she laughed.
“Actually, I’m wearing a pair of your panties right now, honey,” Man-Tina said while kissing Marlene’s forehead.
Girl-Kent’s brain exploded. “YOU ARE?”
Tina laughed. “You’re so gullible, daughter.”
“Hello, Braxtons!”
It was the bartender from yesterday afternoon walking up to their table. “James! You’re looking dapper this morning,” stated Kent. How about this. I now have a way to get him and Tina together for a little fling. Just have to act interested.
“I made the espresso with a special Kona reserve, Tina. You told me yesterday that you’re an espresso … hey, why did they give you the tea?” James was scratching his head.
Kent was preparing a response when she noticed she was giggling. Giggling like a schoolgirl at this good-looking guy. Finally she gained control of her mouth again. “Dad and I are ‘walking in each other’s shoes’. I’m sure the ‘spresso’s fantastic. Maybe in a day or two I’ll be back to coffee again. I’d looooove to try it then.” Kent batted her eyes at James, who responded: “Then I’ll plan on it, beautiful one!” He walked off with a huge smile on his face.
Tina did a slow burn watching Kent flirt with the bartender. Dad, you creep. You’re trying to make me — or, my body - act unfaithful to my Mitch.
“I’m going to have the fruit plate,” Janis said as she scanned the menu. “Same here, I guess — have to maintain my ‘girlish figure’,” Kent said. Marlene nodded that she would go all fruit too. Have to try to keep some of my attractiveness.
Fruit plate for me, thought Tina. Although, I want so much more. Whew — I am so hungry! WAIT. I’ve got Dad’s big body and metabolism! I’ve got to take advantage of this! “I’m getting the “Grand Breakfast” — 3 eggs, sausage, bacon, with two pancakes and hash browns.”
Kent, across the table, looked as if she was going to cry.
The waitress returned. “Have you all decided what you’d like?”
Tina turned towards their server and spoke. “I’ll have the Grand … the Grand …” He was eye level with the waitress’ breasts. They were huge, and perfect. A slight hint of cleavage was present above the button of her outfit. Tina had checked out other girl’s assets before (what girl doesn’t, for comparative purposes?), but he had never felt this unusual when doing so. In fact, he felt mesmerized. What was his order? Grand something? Sausage, bacon, and 3 … or 2 … perfect eggs … plump, round, tasty, sunny side up eggs …
Suddenly Tina noticed that the server had just covered her chest with one of the menus, and her cheeks were slightly flushed. OMG! Was I … LEERING at her BOOBS?? He looked at his family. Marlene’s head was turned away, and she was sniffing wet and rapidly. Kent, though, had her teeth clenched and grimacing with an angry glare right back at her ‘father’.
Marlene got up from the table. “I’m not hungry. I’m going *sniff* back to the cabana.” She walked off briskly.
Janis arose. “What was that, Dad? I’m going to catch up to her. Mom! Wait up,” she yelled as she bolted away.
Tina turned back quickly to the waitress. “Can you get me three fruit plates to go? And some humble pie for me, please. By the way, I’m sorry, ma’am.”
“There’s someone else you probably need to apologize to more urgently,” smiled the waitress. “I’ll get those plates ASAP.”
“I’d better go to try to explain myself,” said Tina, scooting his chair back. “Can you get the food and bring it to the cabanas?”
“What the hell — er, heck just happened, Tina? I haven’t seen you look at anyone — not even Mitch — so lustily!” Kent was pretty upset.
“I … I don’t know, Dad. I’ve never experienced that before. OMG. Mom looked so hurt. I’ll see you in therapy at 9:30.” Tina took his big body and left in a loping run.
TO BE CONTINUED SATURDAY, JULY 13
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to a real situation or person is purely coincidental.
Tremendous thanks to Cyclist for beta reading and help!
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Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
"Let me explain your predicament clearly: We'll let you out of this tree grove without harm. All you have to do is give each of us a quick favor. For me, I just want to kiss - your exposed left nipple."
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Ultimate Empathy Therapy
Part 4 of 8
by **Sigh**
Copyright © 2013 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
CHAPTER THIRTEEN
"I demand to know exactly what you did to us! And I mean in excruciating detail! Waiver or no waiver - you get us back to normal, NOW, or so help me I will litigate you into oblivion!"
Kent stomped in to the midmorning therapy session with Tina in tow. This bellowing/bullying entrance was very effective for an important, powerful adult man. Somehow, though, when a 97 pound 5’5’’ teenage girl with a squeaky soprano voice said it, it just came across as humorously bitchy.
Dr. Mark Brand listened calmly to the diatribe, then spoke - but not with a reply to Kent. Instead, he looked at Tina. "Mr. Braxton, I have a question for you."
Tina's brow wrinkled. "You - you're talking to me? Dr. Brand, you remember that I'm Tina, right? I'm not 'Mr. Braxton'. At least, I think so ... I hope," as she remembered this morning's breakfast event.
"Right now, Tina, you are the only 'Mr." in the Braxton family. So: Mr. Braxton, your 'daughter', is yelling at me, and threatening me. Do you feel that is appropriate?"
"Oh, so I'm just a child to you now? You fucking quack! How dare you ignore me,” seethed Kent.
The beard and mustache on Tina's face tightened with a mix of anger and dread. Turning to Kent, she spoke in a normal volume but with unmistakable resolve. "No, doctor. It is not appropriate at all. She should speak in a civilized manner, even when expressing disagreement. Daughter - because for today and tomorrow, you are my daughter - apologize to Dr. Brand."
Kent was incredulous at this development. "What?! I am a MAN - just stuck in your body right now, but still your father, with authority over you!"
"Except, Dad, you agreed that while in counseling sessions I would be your equal."
"Yes. Yes, I did. But even with that promise, it's not the child's duty to discipline the parent."
Tina smiled. "I completely agree, 'child'. That’s who you are right now, your role that you agreed to play. Yet you are acting like you think you’re still a 42-year-old man — assuming that the tantrum you just threw is acceptable behavior for an adult.”
Kent had an epiphany with that. It was obvious that she’d just thrown a juvenile hissy fit. Had she thrown that fit as her male self, it would have inspired fear and obedience — not because of great leadership, but rather fear of tyrannical reprisal. Was it really possible that he acted like a spoiled brat at times in her adult male life?
Tina continued. “'It is not proper for a lady to yell, or threaten, or curse'. Remember saying that? Well, you have just yelled and cursed, and threatened. Not proper - for anyone, not just a lady. So apologize in the next 5 seconds, or there will be punishment."
Kent stood, speechless, transfixed. She thought of a hundred comebacks, but could not see any of them having effect with this screeching high-pitched voice of hers. Finally, she said in a whisper: "I'm sorry for yelling, cursing and threatening you, Dr. Brand. Please forgive me."
"You are quite forgiven, child. Thank you for owning up to your actions," a smiling Brand said.
Tina was smiling also. "I forgive you too, daughter. However, it did take more than a minute for you to respond. So I'm giving you consequences after the session.”
“Wait a minute — you’re grounding me?”
“You wish! No, you’ll find out. Heck, if you stayed a girl for longer, you’d actually desire this ‘punishment’ I’m planning. Just be patient; you’ll see.”
Kent shook her head and looked at the clock on the wall. 9:12 in the morning. A little under 42 hours left ... dammit. "Can we get to the problems that happened this morning?" she whined.
"So those are the morning's events. How do they make both of you feel?"
The teenage girl's eyes rolled. The doc had to say the classic, clichéd psychologist's line. She wondered if the next question would be about why she hated her mother. "Feel? I feel like this therapy - the UET - is helping Tina and me very little, and meanwhile it's screwing up my marriage. Not to mention it's turning Tina gay! Why else would she ogle a pair of female breasts like a teen boy whose puberty just kicked in?"
Tina had to respond to that. "Hey - it's not like I planned that! I still like guys - why that happened, I have no idea. It's like my body took over and put my mind to the side. And you, daughter - you were giggling at that bartender like a poodle in heat. The weird thing is, I don't think you were faking it."
"Allow me to explain,” Brand broke in. "Your minds - your souls, in essence - are in each other's bodies. Bodies that still have all the hormones and cerebral configurations that they always have had. What's different is your souls are not used to these new brains and chemicals. Tina - morning erections are completely involuntary. And the male brain is configured to be attracted to curves. To keep from hurting Marlene further, you will need to be aware of your new tendencies and control them. Same with you, Kent. Tina's brain is female with heterosexual tendencies - in other words, you may find your body responding to men.
"Since the body's anatomy and chemicals influence thinking, you both will have to keep close watch on your thoughts. You two could probably help each other adjust."
Father and daughter sat together on the leather couch in the counseling room. Brand had left the room to give them some alone time; he left the door half open so that if the conversation deteriorated, he could intervene.
Kent started. "Okay, 'daddy', let's talk about how to look at other women the right way. You've already realized that men are 'wired' to look at breasts and behinds. So when you look in a certain direction and there are curves there, the vision tends to zero in on them."
"But Mom always said that you only have eyes for her - that it was one of the ways that you showed her you love her," countered Tina.
"That's true for the most part. Marlene would get really insecure if I stared for a long time - say, five or more seconds - at other girls' assets. Like you did this morning. However, she knows that I sometimes may unintentionally linger for one second. The key is, know that the male brain tends to do that. When it happens, nip it in the bud. Look somewhere else. When talking to a girl, quickly rise to the eyes. You know what it feels like to have an unwanted ogle from a stranger, right?"
"Yeah."
"And you hate it, right?"
"Yes. I mean, - **ahem** - usually. Sometimes if it's a good-looking young guy, even if it's not Mitch, it can be cool. Like I can control them with my body; it can make me feel sexy."
"Okay, let's try a different tack, Tina. How would you feel if Mitch leered at other women?"
The male form hung his head. "I hate it when he does it. Especially with the young girls."
"Right. So for your mom's sake at least, remember: either look at the girl's eyes, or turn and focus on Marlene."
"Dad ... do you ever get really horny anymore, at your age? Please, please say no. I don't want to have to deal with another erection."
The girl frowned. "Hey! My body's early middle age; it's not dead! But as for the 'horny' issue, usually I deal with it by having se - um, relations with Marlene every 2-3 days or so. Of course I'm not suggesting that you-"
"OMG. NOT GONNA HAPPEN."
"And when I have to go off on a trip, I ... uh ... just take care of it. Not with anyone else - just by myself."
"SO NOT GONNA HAPPEN. I AM NOT TOUCHING YOUR THING. How long has it been since you and Mom ... y'know?"
"About a week, honey. Sorry."
Tina exhaled a huge, plaintive sigh. "Then I plan to have a cold iced drink in my hands at all times. I'm going to pour it down my shorts if I feel the hot dog plumping up."
Kent started to laugh at that; at first a little snickering, then full throated guffawing. It infected Tina too, and soon he was doubled over with mirth. Kent leaned over on the couch - she was unable to sit upright due to the giggle fit.
Janis huffed loud enough for her mother to hear. "How long will they be in that stupid session? I want to get to the beach!"
"Let them take all the time they need," answered Marlene. "That stuff is the real reason that we're here; the beach and everything else is just the icing on the cake."
"Well, I'm bored. Can't I go down to the ocean and get a head start on tanning?"
"Sure, I guess. Take the main walkways. And don't go anywhere else without letting us know, please."
"MOM. This is me you're talking to. I'm the good one, remember?"
Marlene laughed. "Don't you start getting a big head over it, sweetie. I'm going to wait for Kent and Tina. Sure, go get into your suit and have fun."
"Done!" Janis quickly stripped off her T-shirt and shorts to show her bikini underneath. Thirty seconds later the youngest Braxton was skipping down the hill towards the sand, towel and lotion in tow. Great! Maybe I'll catch a lifeguard's eye before Tina steals the spotlight. And maybe there's some poorly guarded bling around, too.
The gaiety had been a blessed respite. When the laughter finally died down, man-Tina spoke in a hushed tone towards girl-Kent. "Dad - you're fairly handsome, and kinda rich and powerful. A real man's man. Do you ever have other women ... come on to you?"
"Hoo boy, Tina. All of the time. It's not so bad at the office - "
"Really? None of the women at your work come on to you?"
"Not any more. Not since a woman named Jodee tried to. She was a young clerk at the company, and very pretty. One morning when I walked into my office, I found her laying on my desk - on her side, wearing nothing but a smile."
"Oh god! What did you do?"
"It's all about being prepared. I had worked with a consultant for CEO's, and he covered avoiding seduction in my training. I basically must be aware, at all times, that women will try to draw me in with their beauty in order to eventually become my new wife. So when I picked my jaw off the floor, I did a one-eighty and walked straight out. I told my assistant to call security and have a nude intruder taken out of my office. Jodee was fired, of course, and we shipped the contents of her desk to her home."
"What did Mom think?"
"She knows that women come on to me, some of them barely older than you. I do my best to reassure her that she is number one in my heart; I do that with daily phone calls from work, pictures of her all over my office, and mentioning her fondly and often in conversation. Also, I have a male buddy - an accountability partner - who grills me after every conference about my activity. Knowing that I'll have to be honest with my pal helps keep me from getting into any circumstance when I could be alone with another woman - it even keeps me from using any of the porn channels in a hotel room."
"Why do you have to go to all that trouble? Shouldn't your love for Mom keep you faithful?"
"That's what I would hope. But I've seen too many of my colleagues fall in a single moment of temptation; they get lonely, maybe they're having an argument with the wife, and then this goddess with a dress cut down to the navel starts flattering them. If they've had a drink or two, their judgment may be a little impaired. In a single moment's indiscretion, they lose their family. I can't take even the slightest chance of that happening to me."
Tina fretted. "So, you have to do lot to make sure you never slip. I never heard of any other men doing all that paranoid stuff."
"Honey - if more guys took precautions like I do, then maybe less of them would find themselves in an accidental affair and divorce. The fantasy of sexual infidelity with another woman is something that is, unfortunately, a lifelong issue for most of us." Girl-Kent looked down at her curvy body. "Well - maybe not for me right now, in this condition."
Man-Tina shook his head. "You make all guys sound like sex addicts - interested in nothing but boobs and butts. I was hoping all that excess horniness wore off when a boy got into his twenties." Does that mean Mitch is going to have a wandering eye for another couple of decades - or more?
"Tina - didn't that waitress incident this morning give you a hint of what males deal with?"
There was no response. Just a smoldering, growing expression of anger from the hairy male face Tina was now behind. "Dammit!" he said, slamming his fist down on the coffee table.
Dr. Rahne Ruiz entered the room rapidly. "Wha' was that racket? Are ye two all right? May haps it's time to end yuir discussion-"
"I - I have no idea why I did that," said Tina, cheeks reddening. "I mean, I never punch anything - anything."
"It wasn't directed at me. I'm fine. I'd like to continue talking," said Kent. Tina nodded.
"Male brains and hormones tend to respond with a degree of anger whenever there's stress. Not an absolute rule, just a tendency. Girls under stress tend to cry more than boys do. Now ye both are experiencing new and strange emotions as a result of the therapy; ye will have to learn how to control the anger," pointing to Tina, "and the tears," glancing at Kent. Dr. Ruiz then slowly exited, gazing back with a concerned look.
The "daughter" looked at her "father". "Tina - outside of no giggling at boys, is there anything else I need to worry about?"
Tina's eyes looked off into the distance. "I can feel it, Dad. The anger Dr. Ruiz talked about. I'm so nervous that I could cry - which is what I usually end up doing. But instead of tears, I feel a pressure building - like my head and chest might explode. It's scaring the hell out of me."
"Hold it together, honey. It's going to be okay." Kent realized she needed to change the subject. "I think I'm doing pretty good at being you, correct?"
"Not necessarily. Stand up, please."
Kent arose.
"Now, touch your fingers to the floor - like you did when you dropped your sunglasses in the restaurant at breakfast."
She shrugged, and bent over at the waist to reach the carpet.
"Hold that pose right there!" Tina got up and ran to look at the back of her former body. He squatted until his head was at the same level as Kent's hips. "Oh no. I had no idea that it looked THAT embarrassing. God."
"What?" Kent strained her neck.
"Stand up, now. You should never bend over that way in those white shorts. They get tight in the crotch, and a little see-through. Not to mention, major camel toe. Always bend at the knee in them - in other words, squat down, get your dropped item quickly, then stand back up. If not, everyone will think you're a dumb floozy, except for the gross guys who think you're coming on to them."
"Wow - I had no idea. I'm sorry." Now it was Kent's cheeks that were red.
"And be careful where you walk. You're a small, attractive, girl now. When you were 'big Daddy" there was no need to worry about being molested. It's always a possibility; don't get isolated, or out of the light, if you can."
"Of course. I know that." Even if I had forgotten to apply it the last 12 hours. "Okay - is that it?"
"Oh no, my 'daughter'. You have learned much, young Skywalker, but you are not a Jedi yet."
Tina's instruction continued for another ten minutes. Then, as promised, he took Kent for her consequences.
CHAPTER FOURTEEN
The rest of the Braxton clan walked together to join Janis at the beach. Marlene had ahold of her mate's bicep, acting as if the waitress incident had never happened. "Sweetheart - how did the therapy go? Are you and Tina still fighting?"
Her husband (Tina) gave a half-frown. "I'm afraid we're having to depend heavily on each other just to survive this empathy therapy we're on."
"But that's a good thing, right? Or is it not? You haven't been ... yourself, not since yesterday's therapy session. I know we're here to get you and Tina better. Do you think things are getting better?"
"Jury's still out on that, Marl - uh, Mom," Kent muttered, walking behind them.
Marlene craned her neck backwards. "Tina - are you feeling all right, honey? Do you feel chilled? Why are you all wrapped up like that?"
Kent had on the least revealing bikini that she'd been able to find among Tina's clothes. She still felt scandalously exposed, so she'd worn the complimentary Isla bathrobe and Tina's pink ball cap for her trip to the beach. "I'm fine, Mom. Just avoiding the sun's harmful radiation. Don't want to get skin cancer when I'm older."
"I’ve heard your father talk that way, but never you. Why are you walking funny?"
"Uh — consequences..."
Tina cut in and explained. “She behaved so well in therapy this morning. Therefore I took our daughter to the Isla spa to get a bikini wax, and went ahead and paid for them to do the works down there — a, what do you call it?”
“A Brazilian?” gasped Marlene.
“I prefer to call it ripping my soul in two,” Kent volunteered.
“That’s … kind of an odd father-daughter gift,” the mother postulated. “Still, Tina, how exciting! It sounds like your father is really trying to get in touch with your likes, your feelings! Isn’t that great?”
“Yep!” Kent lied.
Tina loved this moment. “Yes, honey, and believe it or not there was a man down there getting a wax also. That’s when I had an idea — in three days, we have some free time on the schedule. How do you think I’d look being hairless from the neck down — a full body wax?”
Kent had goosebumps as she realized that she would be back in that male body when that occurred. “MOM — he’s crazy! I’ll bet he changes his mind at the last second; please allow him to!”
Marlene shook her head. I'm not sure I like how all this is going. They're not getting better; they're getting weirder.
Janis was lapping up the attention she was getting from some of the men at the beach. Even after the arrival of her family, she was still the star of the sand. Well, at least the youngest star. A voluptuous redhead in a revealing two-piece was attracting more than her share of attention. She was the female in the threesome, the man / woman / androgyne group. While the auburn beauty cavorted in shallow waves, her other two partners lay under their umbrella in close embrace.
Girl/Kent attracted little attention, but mainly because she remained bundled up like a Hollywood actress just after plastic surgery. Man/Tina was lying out in the sun. Marlene was flustered. "What is it with you two? Tina - you're usually the tanning queen, and Kent likes staying in the shade. What in the world is happening?"
"It's the empathy treatment," both responded.
Marlene held her head as if it was trying to burst. "I - I'm going to get something cold to drink," she quivered as she walked off.
Kent scowled at Tina. "If I get a melanoma later, I'm blaming you."
Tina smirked. "Hey, 'daughter', this is my body for now. You could use some vitamin D anyway."
"I take D supplements. You should too, you know. Hey - you ought to try the water! My body knows how to swim. I'll bet you could be successful!"
"Okay, wait. This big male body may be used to swimming, but this 18-year-old girl mind inside the body still remembers nearly drowning at age 6. No way."
"Hmm. By that logic, then this teenage girl's body I now have should be able to swim - because my mind still knows how!"
The tanning man turned over to look at the girl. "Dad. No. Remember Dr. Brand said we had to respect each other's bodies. If you go out into the water, you're disrespecting my wishes."
"Well, I'm at least going wading in the surf. I'll be ba-"
"Ask politely, 'daughter'. In this family, children will act with respect and obedience towards their parents."
Kent recognized that; it was his saying, his rule. But now 'he' was 'she', and felt a little humiliated by the order. "Um - 'Dad', may I please go wade in the water?"
Tina smiled. "It's not a good feeling, is it? Being treated as if you were a five-year-old? Yes, little one, you may play in the water. Not beyond waist deep, okay?"
"Okay, 'Daddy'. Thanks ever so much," Kent dripped acidly. Then standing, she perceived another challenge.
Oh boy. I'm going to have to walk in front of everyone in this teeny weeny bikini. If I can just quickly get out there, I can squat to where the water comes to my neck. Yeah, that's the ticket. She looked up and down the small beach. Let's see ... there's Angelo, our Italian attendant, busy making repairs to the surf shop; James the bartender dropping off some drinks for a couple; the lifeguard is one of the groundskeepers, and right now he's yapping with the other two lawn men; and the busty redhead is occupying most of the other male attention. Time to make a run for the ocean!
Kent shed the bathrobe and cap and took off in a sprint towards the waves. Her butt was jiggling all the way, as were her breasts; they were barely reigned in by her top. Hell, this feels so weird. Come on, come on. Almost there....
Then, upon reaching the water's edge, disaster struck. Kent's foot slipped and she flopped head first into an oncoming wave. She came up coughing and sputtering and stood up in the knee deep saline. Clearing the hair and salt from her eyes, she became aware of someone clapping. Janis, I'll bet. But then multiple other hands — accompanied by wolf whistles and whoops, mostly from the men present — joined the clapping. She opened her eyes, to see —
Marlene was running towards her out into the surf, a look of panic gripping her face. Kent put up her hands. "Mom, I'm okay."
"Honey, cover your chest and turn around," Marlene barked as she bent over to pick up something out of the water. It was Kent's bikini top. Kent shrieked in horrible realization at her nakedness, and squatted down so the water covered her to her shoulders.
Marlene retied the top onto her 'daughter'. "There. Oh honey, I'm so sorry; this can happen to anyone. Ready to go tan, or do you want to go back to the cabana?"
"Uh ... " Kent was holding it together externally, but the quiver in her voice betrayed the frustration building up in her. There had to be something she could do to salvage this lousy morning. To hell with it. I'm going to show my daughter that she can achieve things if she'll just believe she can. "Neither, Mom. I'm going to swim." She then turned and dove into the oncoming wave, emerging on the other side doing a stroking action towards the open sea.
"B - but you don't know how ... you can’t...” Marlene's mouth went agape as she saw her daughter swimming. Not treading water, but freestyling in a practiced motion. Oh dear Lord! She can, and she is! But she shouldn't - didn't she see the flags they just put up, that she's the only one in the water now?
Kent could hear Marlene yelling something, but didn't stop stroking. She knew everyone would be amazed; after all, ‘Tina’ had a deathly fear of the water. Well, I'm going to show her she has this capability. She'll thank me later. The water seemed to be getting colder, but it was barely noticeable through the sheer bliss of finally being isolated. No people around that she had to "act like a girl" for.
Tina — still lying on the sand, sunning — had seen the bikini top debacle, and chose to ignore it. Serves Dad right; he now knows one more of the trials of girlhood. Although I'm going to resent that incident being attributed to me, when it was his carelessness that caused it. Then he heard Marlene screaming frantically, and looked up to see what was the matter.
He ran up to his 'wife'. "What's the matter? Where's Da - ah, Tina?"
"Out there!" She pointed to a small flesh colored speck in the water - almost eighty yards away, and getting smaller. "How - when did she learn to swim? When did she overcome her fear of swimming?"
"I told her to go no farther than waist deep!" Tina spat angrily. "That hypocritical, rebellious -"
"Disobedience is not the issue here," Marlene shot back. "She's in danger! See the red flags that they just put out? The announcement they had over the loudspeaker two minutes ago? Nobody's supposed to be out there because of the rip tide!" She turned towards the lifeguard tower chair. "Hey! Our daughter's out there! Wake up, dammit!"
Marlene's anger was well deserved, because the so-called lifeguard was still yukking it up with his other two lawn maintenance buddies. His head snapped up at the word 'dammit'. He quickly saw the situation and jumped from the high chair onto the ground - promptly straining his ankle. He screamed in pain and grabbed his foot, writhing on the sand as his friends Tweedle-dum and Tweedle-dumber stood by mutely, frozen with indecision.
Marlene twisted rapidly to her 'husband'. "Kent - it's up to you. Please - get out there and save our baby!"
Tina felt suddenly unable to breathe, as if he was about to pass out. Oh no ... I'm going to have to swim?!
Kent was in glorious solitude. How about if I just stay out here until the "therapy" is over? Although I'm getting pretty cold; I guess my girl metabolism just doesn't keep me as warm as a guy's. I heard Marlene freaking out; I better wave back to her to show her I'm okay. She paddled her arms to do a 180, and the view shocked her.
The beach was just a tiny strip, the people just ants. How had she swum so far in such a short time? In fact, even though now she was just treading water, she could tell she was getting drawn farther away - out to sea.
Kent pointed towards shore, put her head down, and swam with all her might. After two minutes, she stopped and gasped, out of breath. Evidently Tina didn't work on keeping her body in shape as Kent had with his. More dismaying was the realization that she was not closer to the island, but even further away. A fear unlike any she had ever known gripped her brain. She waved and began to scream, "Help! HEELLLP!"
"Kent! Go! Go get her!" Marlene was jumping up and down, pleading. What was wrong with her husband? Why did he stand there, unmoving? Then suddenly, unbelievably, he broke into a run - away from the water. His wife was stunned. She turned and ran into the surf, choking back sobs; she might fail to save Tina, but she had to try.
It was hard for Marlene, running into the waves; one nearly knocked her over, and she was not the strongest swimmer. When she hit waist deep water, she felt a big hand on her shoulder - her spouse's. He was wearing a life jacket, and had a second one tied onto the first, trailing behind him. "Go on back, honey; I'll get her," he reassured in his deepest voice. OMG, thought Tina, I hope I can - it looks impossible! Focus on Dad, not the water; this body can swim, this body can swim … He ran as far into the surf as he could, saving his arm strength for the deep water; he was just about to jump in and start to attempt a “dog paddle” when he heard another man yell right behind him.
"Signore! Let-a me get her!". A flash of flesh and orange shot by Tina's left side. It was Angelo, their assigned attendant. He was in a fiberglass kayak, his long apelike arms twisting like a windmill in a gale as his double-paddled oar briskly hit the water. Tina had never seen a one-manned boat move so fast.
Kent could no longer see the shore except at the top of swells. She was treading water but didn't know how long she could. What a magnificent screw-up I've been. Tina - please forgive me...
A circular life preserver landed right in front of her. "Buongiorno, miss Tina! Can you getta holda di float?". Kent looked up; she’d never ever been so thankful to see another human being, especially the burly Italian attendant. Gasping, she grabbed the ring.
"Now, put-a you head an’ arms tru di hole. Keepa di rope behinda you head, an' hang on." Next thing she knew, Kent was being pulled steadily through the surf back to the shore. Angelo kept glancing back every few seconds to check on her; halfway back, he urged for the girl to verify she was okay. Kent croaked "I'm alive ... so tired," and Angelo kept paddling in, not quite as fast as he had gone out so as to not lose his passenger.
Coming to shore, James the bartender ran past everyone out to the exhausted girl. He scooped her up in his arms, took off the safety ring and took her up onto the sand where he gently placed her down. "Tina - are you with me? Did you inhale any seawater? Talk to me," he implored. Marlene and her husband were now kneeling at the girl's side.
"I'm okay ... just exhausted ... if Angelo had been ... one minute later ... I'd be a goner," Kent gasped.
"Nuts. I was hoping to give you mouth-to-mouth," James grinned.
"Back off, Romeo. She needs her family now," Tina growled. James retreated.
Janis ran up. "I saw the whole thing! Super Mario, you're awesome! I never saw anyone row so fast."
"Adrenaline help me," Angelo shrugged humbly. "Bambina - before you swim again, you needa lesson in how to escape a ripa-tide."
Kent looked towards her savior, who was pulling his kayak towards the shed he'd been working on. The bow of the boat read "AMB ANGELO". "Hey, hero," she said, "what does the AMB stand for? Water ambulance? Something Italian?"
The hairy man smiled. "It'sa my ‘espressione di possesso’. It mean, ATSA' MY BOAT!" He roared with laughter as he left the scene. Kent chuckled even as she rolled her eyes at the groaner.
Marlene continued questioning her daughter. "Honey - when did you learn to swim? And why did you disobey your Dad? Are you really okay?"
"I'm fine, Mom. I just need to rest. I think I'll skip lunch, and rest in bed, if you guys don't mind."
"All right. We'll bring you back some food; at least, you need to drink fluids," said her father (Tina). "Then, later ... you and I need to talk. Alone." The tone of the last few words was unmistakably ominous.
Drs. Brand and Ruiz showed up, having been notified of the incident. So did the nurse from the first aid desk. Being assured that the girl was fine, Brand walked over to the lifeguard tower, where the nurse was now wrapping a severely strained ankle. As Mr. and Mrs. Braxton carried their daughter up towards the cabana, they could hear a tongue-lashing being unloaded on the lifeguard and his two pals.
"Stuart, when you are on duty, your job is to remain focused on the beach. You failed in that; I was told how you allowed yourself to be distracted by Freddy and Ronald. Then instead of taking a few seconds to climb down off the chair, you jumped and rendered yourself unable to help. You are hereby disqualified from further lifeguard duty; I'll have to add it to Angelo's already-overloaded schedule. Fred, Ron: you two will have to do the maintenance and gardening work that all three of you previously did. Any more goofing off, and you're done here." Brand spoke in normal volume, but his biting pronunciation and steady glare clearly showed his anger.
Tina smiled in partial satisfaction. Serves those creeps right. I wonder if I should tell Dr. Brand how they leered and gestured at Janis and me when we first arrived.
CHAPTER FIFTEEN
Kent promptly fell asleep after being placed in bed. She arose an hour later with a scream, right as Janis was walking in.
"YIKES! Sis, are you okay?"
Kent rubbed her eyes. "I-I just had a nightmare. I was back out in the ocean again, except this time no one saw me … I was about to suffocate underwater.” So that’s how Tina feels about swimming. No wonder she won’t try it again.
"Lookee what I got," tittered Janis, holding a necklace with a diamond pendant.
Kent marveled. "It's beautiful. It must have cost a fortune. Where did you get it?"
"From the big-boobed redhead who was busy flirting with the guys at the beach. She had her purse in her beach bag, and this was right inside. So easy, and no one saw me. Won't it look great with my black leather blazer back home?"
"You mean ... you STOLE it?!"
Janis rolled her eyes and smirked. "Don't act dumb, missy. You know very well that I did. I don't think of it as stealing, though; anyone stupid enough to leave precious stuff like this unguarded doesn't deserve to keep it."
Kent suddenly realized she needed to play the part of Tina expertly if she was to find out more about this hidden part of Janis. "Yeah ... I remember the first time I found out you do this. How long ago was that, again?"
"Heck, I had been doing it a year before you ever found out. I took a bottle of shampoo from Wal-Mart 3 years ago; they didn't miss it, they even calculate into their equation that some stuff they have is gonna be lifted."
"Chee! Lil' sis, I'll never understand why you did that; after all, you know we get plenty of allowance to buy shampoo and stuff."
"Yeah - but I had to start somewhere! I could care less about plucking shampoo now. It's Gucci, and Coach purses, and The Limited - they have LOUSY security - and Chloe's closet! With Chloe, it's not stealing. That chick has so many clothes she just can't wear them all. So I help her out, and relieve her of some now and then."
"I thought you said she gave you all the clothes you got from her...”
"She lets me borrow her clothes at times when we're together. When I go into her closet to return them, I just take something else I know she hasn't worn in a while. She never misses it - or if she does, she doesn't say anything. To make sure, I try not to wear the ones I took when I know she’s gonna be around, like at school. But at church, on some weekends, and at home - I be stylin', sistah!"
Kent frowned. "Don't go all 'ghetto' talking like that, Janis. It comes across as fake. It's not you."
Janis turned, with an odd look on her face. "Weird. You sounded just like Dad when you said that."
"And yet Mom and Dad think you're the 'good one'. Why don't you remind me again why I haven't told them," Kent pushed.
"My god! You know very well why, you bitch! Maybe you've forgotten just how gross, how embarrassing they are." Janis pulled out her smartphone and punched in her lock code, and then pulled up a picture file. "This ought to refresh your memory," as she turned the display to her ‘sister’.
Kent’s mouth dropped along with her spirit. These were pictures of Tina's body - the body Kent now inhabited - in various states of undress, most of them naked. Extremely explicit photos, with close-ups of her groin and other unmentionable areas, as well as whole body shots of her 'doing' herself. Kent was so hurt, so broken by his daughter's self-exploitation; this is usually the point that a fatherly rage would erupt.
But there was no explosion. Instead, there were just tears. Ones that ran like rivers down her face and evolved into sobs.
"Serves you right, idiot," dripped Janis. "You are so stupid - sexting to Mitch in hopes that he'd stop being attracted to other girls. It shouldn't have surprised you when he posted them on his Facebook. And you should have known that I'd find some insurance against you squealing to the folks about me. It was simple to figure out your lock code.
"Now, big sis, let's go over this - one last time. Are you gonna keep quiet about me, or will I have to send these in an e-mail to Mom?"
The answer came in a snuffling whisper. "No. Don't send it, please. I won't tell." Kent wondered how he would ever break the news to Marlene without breaking her heart.
“Tina, you ought to work with me. It’s so fun living the high fashion life. And I can teach you how to do it like me, so you never get caught.” Janis patted her ‘sister’ on the shoulder. “We’re running late for supper. Clean your face up — your eyes are bloodshot, use some of my drops — and meet us at the dining area.” With that, the younger sister left the cabana.
Kent flopped her body onto her bed, face first into her pillow. “My kids are so screwed up! I’m screwed up! How did they get this way right under my nose? Someone — something — help me. I literally don’t know how to make this right. Help me. Help us. Please … help,” she wailed to no one in particular.
Kent used the eye clearing drops and put some lip-gloss on as she had seen Janis do. Supper was already being served, she was sure; having slept through lunch after the beach incident, hunger was really tickling her lower ribs.
Shadows were growing longer as the sun was setting. Kent walked the trail from the cabana to the dining area as it meandered around different groves of trees. This is taking too long. I can see the lights of the restaurant flickering through the trees. So she decided to take a short cut through them, and left the trail.
The pod of trees was pretty thick, but she could still make out and avoid most of the trunks in the dying light. Then suddenly, her foot hit something thick and she fell forward — into someone’s lap.
“Shit! What the — well, look who we have here,” said a boy’s voice. Kent recognized it; it belonged to one of the gardeners. Her nose detected the smell of marijuana in the air. The boy spoke again. “You already caused me to turn my ankle. Now I guess you’re trying to bruise my thigh too? Sounds like you need to be taught a lesson, cunt.”
“You’re Stuart,” Kent said. “The lifeguard. I heard Dr. Brand 'dressing you down' at the beach. Does he allow pot smoking on the island?” she jeered as she tried to regain her footing.
Before she could, she felt a big mitt grab her arm as a husky voice spoke. “Hold it, baby. Don’t leave so rudely. If you want, I’ve got a joint for you. The price: one blowjob. What d’ya say?” She noticed the voice belonged to the shadowy outline of a chunky, big guy; he stood between Kent and the path she’d taken into the trees.
A third boy’s form — this one tall and lanky — stepped out from behind a tree trunk. “You’ll have to excuse my pal Freddy there. He can be quite crude. My name’s Ron. Let me explain your predicament clearly: We’ll let you out of this tree grove without harm. All you have to do is give each of us a quick favor. For me, I just want to kiss — your exposed left nipple.”
“And I get to lick your twat,” bellowed Stuart.
“Mine’s the same as before. Suck me,” hissed Freddy.
“How about I just beat the hell out of all three of you?”
Kent and the three hoodlums turned in the low light to see the massive bulk of Mr. Braxton silhouetted against the sundowning sky. He was holding something — the outline looked like a big shovel. “Daughter — run down to the restaurant. I’ll be a minute; I have to kill some toads.”
Kent jumped out of Freddy’s grasp and bounded back towards the path. Tina and the gardeners stood facing each other silently. Stuart blurted out something about “she was coming on to us” and “we were just playing”.
“Shut up,” said Tina. “and walk away. Or I’ll kick your asses.”
“Oh, you will, old man?” Freddy — the big chunk of the three — stepped towards Tina. “You’ll beat all of us?”
Tina tensed inside. She had seen her Dad get tough with bad guys before. Usually when confronted with possible harm, a bully would retreat. This one was calling her bluff, and she wasn’t sure she could fight as well as she knew Kent could. Time to up the ante, she gambled.
“You’ll be first, pudge. Come and get it,” Tina said with a twisted, malevolent smile. Freddy didn’t move forward or backward.
“WELL? DON’T KEEP ME WAITING, SWEETHEART!” Tina shouted, simultaneously slamming the back of the huge shovel against a tree trunk. It rang with a clash. The loud sound finally broke the trio’s resolve; two ran (and one limped) away.
Man-Tina briskly walked down the path back to the eating area. Standing right at the door was girl-Kent, who was smiling. “Tina — I’m so impressed. Thank you for saving my neck. How did you know I was in trouble?”
“Mom,” Tina replied. “She has always had a pretty good sixth sense about her daughters. She told me all of a sudden that she thought I should go check on you, to make sure you were okay. I’m glad those gardeners are sloppy — they left that shovel laying right next to the tree grove. I heard one of them yelling something about a twat, so I went in and there all of you were.”
Kent wrapped her hands around Tina’s right bicep. “I’m sorry I went in the tree grove. I was trying a short cut.”
“Don’t you remember our talk last night? You’re vulnerable now. You cannot put yourself in a dangerous position. And you did it twice in one day! I hope I have a body left to go back to when this is over.”
CHAPTER SIXTEEN
Supper featured fusion cuisine with Korean and Mexican influences. Afterwards, Tina and Kent had to go to yet another session. Monitoring at least twice daily was the rule with UET, per Dr. Rahne Ruiz, who was running this session.
“So, tha’s what happened at th’ beach today. Sounds like neither o’ ye are followin’ the rule aboot respectin’ each other’s body.
“Huh? What did I do? Dad’s the one who went swimming when he — uh, she — God, this is so confusing — well, anyway, all I did was get a tan,” huffed Tina.
“Ye laid oot in the sun — against Kent’s wishes. And with his body.”
“At least I didn’t almost drown,” Tina whisper-mumbled.
“Do either o’ ye think yuir gainin’ empathy for th’ other?”
“All I see Tina doing is enjoying the power and authority that comes with my body. I don’t see any appreciation in her about what I have to do as her father, much less as a husband and CEO,” Kent volunteered.
“Dad, you’re one to talk! You’re still trying to act like a huge grown man instead of realizing you’re in a teenage girl’s body! I sure don’t see any insight developing in you, either!”
“Time oot,” spoke Rahne forcefully. “My question was, do either o’ ye see empathy growin’ — in yuirselves. I need each o’ ye tae tell me aboot yuir own understandin’, not how ye felt th’ other was doin’.”
The therapist was pleading, emphatic. “Dinnae ye see yet? Tina, ye cannae correct yuir dad’s faults — ye can only work on yuir own. Kent, ye are not responsible for Tina’s misbehavior — but ye are totally responsible for yuir own! “
“Now, wait a minute.” Kent stood up. “Even now, in this body, I am Tina’s father. I am responsible for her — “
“She’s eighteen, Kent. Eighteen. She’s an adult, ‘n’ in a few months when she graduates, she’ll be ultimately responsible for her life ‘n’ decisions. Yuir role now needs t’ be one of influencer, counselor, friend — not dictator.”
For a moment there was no sound in the room except for the audible inhaling and exhaling of Dr. Ruiz; she was doing deep breathing in an attempt to calm her own frustration over these two stubborn combatants. After some further thought, she made a decision. “I think it best tha’ we separate ye two for th’ remainder o’ this session. Kent, I’m calling Dr. Brand t’ take ye t’ th’ other room. I’ll stay with Tina here.”
“Tell me what you’re feeling right now.”
Kent shook her head. She’d had quite enough of this therapy nonsense. Looking at Dr. Brand, she decided to imply a threat. “Gee, doc. I wonder if it’s appropriate for a big, strong guy like you to be alone in a room with a hot little thing like me. If I wanted to charge you with molestation, it would be just your word against mine.”
“Nice try, Kent. That’s why I left the door part open; you are in the chair next to the door, while I’m further from it; and finally, see the tiny camera emerging from the ceiling? We have security monitoring these sessions — just video, no audio — for both of our safety.”
The girl in the room slumped her shoulders. “What is the point of this therapy? To humiliate me, to make me feel like I’m totally inadequate? Because if that’s the goal, it’s working. I can’t believe I actually paid thousands of dollars for the ‘privilege’ of this!” Angry tears began to well in her eyes. “Do you know that before I came here, I thought I had two well adjusted kids? Except for the oldest having an inappropriate crush. Now, I find that one of them is doing home porno, and the other is a thief!”
“The truth does two things,” nodded Brand. “It hurts; and it sets you free.”
“That’s *sniff* half right, at least.”
“How does it feel, being a teenage girl?”
“I don’t like it. I’m … I’m frail. Instead of being feared, I have to fear others. And instead of being my family’s leader, I have to follow Marlene’s — and Tina’s — orders. Like being low man on the totem pole. That’s not what I have worked for years to attain.”
“Believe it or not, Kent, that’s a good thing. Humility is an essential part of being a successful adult. Not humiliation; humbleness. All the greatest leaders — Washington, Lincoln, Jesus, MLK — had it. It helps you grow, and eliminates blind spots — like missing what was happening with your children. If there’s one phrase you should take away from this week, it’s this: The Humble Improve.”
“The humble improve,” Kent repeated in a whisper.
“So, isn’t there anything that you’re enjoying about being a girl?”
“Nothing that I should be enjoying,” Kent continued whispering.
“Explain that to me, please.”
The teen girl’s head hung down now, her brunette tresses lightly brushing her thighs. “I … I don’t like not being the leader, yet at the same time, the relief from obligation is surprisingly exhilarating. You know, the strain of being responsible both for a family and for the livelihood of 15,000 employees — not to mention the quarterly reports for thousands of demanding stockholders — it all can be such a crushing burden.”
“Lack of obligation is one of the benefits of childhood that many children take for granted,” Brand agreed.
“There’s another thing. I seem to … enjoy the attention that I’m getting from boys. Especially James, your barkeep. I still am in love with Marlene, I know I am — but I feel funny in my chest when he calls me beautiful. And seeing that red haired bombshell at the beach today did nothing for me. Does that mean I’m turning gay?”
“No. Not that it’s even possible to ‘turn’ gay. Remember, right now you have the brain makeup and chemistry of an 18-year-old heterosexual female. As soon as you switch back bodies, that attraction will fade.”
“So, Tina. I have a question for ye. Ye resent yuir daddy for keepin’ you from Mitch. Yuir eighteen, lass. Why don’t ye just move oot?”
“I thought of that. I don’t have anywhere to go. None of my friends understand — they don’t like Mitch, and so they won’t take me in. Even if I took on a part time job, it wouldn’t be enough to pay the bills living on my own. When I graduate, I can get a full time job and move out.”
“Full time. So, yuir not goin’ t’ university, then?”
“I — I want college … but I want Mitch more.”
“Could ye move in with him?”
Tina looked away. “He lives with his parents, still. They aren’t too keen with me moving in with him. He’d be able to pay for an apartment if he didn’t have such lousy luck with the job market.”
“Go on.”
“He’s gotten fired a lot because wherever he works, a woman will come on to him, and then when he rejects her, she plays like he sexually harassed her, and he gets kicked out. It’s happened like, five times. He’s just too hot for his own good.”
Rahne raised an eyebrow. “Mitch has told ye all this?”
“Yes.”
“And ye believe him?”
“What motivation would he have to lie to me?”
“Ye know tha’ as well as I, Lassie.”
“I … I’m so confused. My brain keeps telling me to leave him, but my heart won’t — can’t — let go. Rahne, you wouldn’t advise me to follow my head and ignore my heart, would you?”
“Wee one, the best kind o’ love is one where yuir head and yuir heart are in full agreement. Whether ye believe it or nae, yuir heart will be able to love again should ye leave Mitch.”
Tina’s fists clenched in anger. “Whenever my friends at home would talk to me about Mitch this way, it would make me cry. But right now I can’t seem to cry. Instead, I … I feel like knocking his fool head off!” Her fist slammed against the wall.
“Temper, temper, Tina. This rage is th’ way yuir father’s body reacts tae stress. Ye must learn tae control it.”
“Dr. Rahne, the anger builds up so quickly, and is so strong. I’m amazed at how Dad is able to deal with it.” Tina shook her head. “Well, actually ... since he found out about Mitch, he doesn’t hold in his ire around me.”
“So ye don’t like the anger part aboot yuir papa. Is there anythin’ else ye don’t like aboot bein’ in his body?”
“The erections. I had one this morning, another at the beach today — that’s why my back is more tanned than my chest — and, to be honest, I’m hornier than a big game hunter’s trophy room! Have you noticed I’m avoiding looking at you?”
“Yes…”
“It’s because I’m attracted to boobies and butts now! All types of female parts! And there’s no way — NO way — that I’m jerking off or sleeping with my own mom to get release! But I’m actually fantasizing about how it would feel to have sex with the redhead! This treatment has turned me into a lesbian sex fiend!”
“Tina, ye hae been experiencing wha’ most males fight with all o’ their lives. It’s not perversion unless they fail to control it. I think that in yuir father’s case, his sex urge is higher than even most men’s are.”
“OMG. I think I respect him a little more now — for how he controls it.”
“Is there anything you like aboot bein’ a grown man?”
“Oh yeah. I like the power. I mean, most other guys give way to me when I’m walking down the trail. The respect they give me, just because of how big and strong I am, is awesome. When I speak deeply, my family stops and pays heed. And my strength! When I picked up a shovel earlier tonight, it was like picking up a twig. That part I wish I could keep.”
Rahne kept a clinical posture, but mentally was squirming a little. She's rather enthusiastic aboot liking th' strength o' bein' male. I hope she doesn't get too enamored o' it.
TO BE CONTINUED MONDAY, JUNE 15
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual situation or person is purely coincidental.
Tremendous thanks to Cyclist for beta reading and help!
If you've gotten this far, please leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! **Sigh**
Kent's face drained of all color. "Tina ... you wouldn't ..."
"Try me," Tina growled. "Now, will you let me be with Mitch when we go home, or do I have to keep you in that short, weak, vulnerable girl's body?"
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Ultimate Empathy Therapy
Part 5 of 8
by **Sigh**
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CHAPTER SEVENTEEN
Both sessions ended around nine in the evening. Tina and Kent walked out of their respective rooms, then exited the counseling center together.
Tina looked down at her Dad, now her ‘daughter’. “Hey. How did your session go?”
“Fine.” Kent didn’t feel like opening up any more tonight.
“Did you talk about Mitch and me, how you feel about us?”
Kent turned to her ‘father’. “Tina. You need to realize this fact. I will never, ever change my mind about you and Mitch. As long as you live at home, I forbid you to see or talk to him. And when you eventually leave home, I will do any and every thing in my power to keep you two from getting together. Until you come to your senses, that’s what I will do.”
Tina’s mouth fell open. “You — you intend to continue to make my life miserable? You’re going to antagonize Mitch until he gives up on me?” Tina knew that Kent could very well accomplish that.
“Sorry, honey. It’s for your own good. Now: in about 30 hours, when we return to our own bodies — “
“Wait. ‘When’ we return to our bodies? Don’t you mean, ‘IF’?”
Kent looked up. “Huh?”
“IF,” Tina boomed, “IF, IF, IF. IF I allow it. You read the waiver we both signed? Well, I did too. I remember it saying that BOTH of us had to be willing to change back; if not, we stay this way for as long as it takes for both of us to agree. And since we’re talking about you and I, that may mean ‘never’. Frankly, my existence as your daughter has been horrible for the last year. If you keep sabotaging Mitch and me, then why should I go back? I kind of like being big and tough, and in charge. Especially in charge over you — ‘daughter’.”
Kent stood stunned. She’d remembered that provision in the papers, yet she never thought that Tina might want to not change back. Being small and vulnerable was already unnerving; the threat of this becoming a permanent situation scared the hell out of her. She said nothing more for fear of inflaming Tina more. Silently, both of them walked together.
Tina entered the cabana where Mr. and Mrs. Braxton slept. Marlene was brushing her teeth, readying herself for bed. Her ‘husband’ quickly changed into his sleepwear while his wife was in the bathroom.
As they settled into bed, Tina turned on his left side, facing his side of the mattress.
“Can I at least get a kiss goodnight?” whispered Marlene.
“Oh! Sure, ‘honey’. Sorry.” Tina turned over to give Marlene a kiss. Just a quick peck, and it would be over; at least that was Tina’s plan. Instead, Marlene grabbed his shoulders and pressed her body up against him as they engaged in a long, warm, wet smooch. That’s when Tina felt it happen.
OMG no no no! Not another hard-on, not now!
Marlene felt it also, pressing against her stomach. Without a word, she placed her right leg over her husbands’ legs. She next pulled his shirt up, exposing his bare chest. She began to pull up her nightgown…
“No! Marlene — NO!” Tina pulled suddenly away, and turned his back to her while sitting up.
“Wh — what? Kent … what’s the matter?”
“I can’t … not while we’re doing this … special therapy,” Tina gasped. His body’s urges had almost led to the unthinkable. “I do love you, and I want you so bad, (OMG I can’t believe I just said that to my mom) but I can’t. If I do, it will screw up the treatment. It just lasts a little more than a day, now. The morning after tomorrow, things will be fine. I’m sorry.”
“Kent … I don’t understand. What does intimacy between us have to do with you and Tina? You look so worried lately — you aren’t yourself. Sex has always been one of the ways you’ve been able to relax, and rethink any problems later. I’ve never heard of a father-child treatment that required the parents to be abstinent from each other.
“And right now, my husband, I need us to make love. I need it perhaps even more than you. I need to be reassured that I can still bring you to ecstasy, to know that even if the world falls apart, we won’t. I need the fulfillment, the peace it gives me. I’ve never refused you before. Please don’t refuse me now.”
Tina had never heard Marlene sound so desperate. His heart broke as he replied. “NOT … UNTIL … THERAPY’S … OVER!” With that, he stood up and walked out of the front door. He didn’t stop until he got to the ice machine located between the cabanas and the main complex. Oh dear god … I’m destroying Mom and Dad’s relationship! Dispensing some ice into his cupped hands, he then placed it on his groin as he began to sob.
Kent lay in bed, distraught. The threat delivered to her tonight had rocked her world. She had been hanging on in this hurricane of strange feelings, clinging to the knowledge that all would be back to normal in just hours. But the prospect of staying this way, for weeks or months or forever? That was breaking all of her resolve; she feared she was even losing her grip on reality.
She needed someone. In the past, she would have made passionate love to Marlene; that usually helped calm her storm. Right now, she didn’t need sex so much as someone to listen, and comfort. Janis? No … her ‘sister’ was a bully. Best to let the bully sleep. Marlene? Yes … except then Tina would get involved too, likely; and facing ‘him’ again right now made her shiver. Who?
She started to smile, and her eyes brightened. Perfect! I’ll get to talk to someone, and I’ll help break Mitch’s hold on Tina at the same time!
Kent quietly got out of bed, taking care not to wake Janis. She picked up the clothes she’d worn earlier and carefully put them on — bra, shorts, tank top, and sandals — and slinked out of the cabana. In the darkness, she hoped the hoodlums were in bed already as she walked down the trail to the pool. Only two couples were lingering there, talking under the light of the nearly full moon. And then she gladly saw her objective, tending the poolside bar.
James.
“So, gorgeous one, what brings you here so late?”
“I need one of your virgin PC’s, please. And an open ear, if you care to give it.”
“Coming right up.” James smiled as he pulled out the necessary ingredients from his bar fridge. “You sure you don’t want an espresso?”
“Ah, nope,” Kent replied. While in this teenage girl’s body, she had the rep of being the coffee queen. Kent, though, detested coffee — too bitter, and adding sugar and cream helped little. “It’s too late; the caffeine will just keep me up.”
The blender whirred and produced the creamy smoothie. “I was just about to close up shop; it’s almost 11,” James said. “We stay open later — ‘til 1 a.m. — on Friday and Saturday, because there’s no formal therapy on the weekend. Then we get a new set of clients flying in on Sunday, and the week starts over again.”
“So, you work seven days a week? That sounds rough,” exclaimed Kent.
“One of the line cooks tends bar for me about five days a month. It’s not so bad. I have fun, and meet some of the nicest people. Like you,” he grinned. “And when I do have a day off, I get to spend it in this paradise.”
What a great guy, thought Kent. And if I can get him interested in me, I don’t see any way that Tina can resist his charms when — er, make that ‘if’ (gulp) — we switch back.
Kent slurped the last of the colada. “Delicious. But now I’m a little chilly.”
“Hang on.” James closed down the bar, grabbed some of the thick pool towels next to the bar, and led the girl to a covered bench swing. Sitting her down, covering her with the towels, he then sat next to her and put his arm around her. “Better?”
“Much!” cooed Kent. Have I got this flirting business down, or what?
“So, Tina. What do you need to talk about?”
“Can’t give specifics. The person I usually open up to — “
“Isn’t here, I know. You told me you were spoken for the first day I met you. I’m assuming that’s a boyfriend, not a fiancé, right?”
“I sure hope not,” mused Kent.
“Hm? Sounds like there’s trouble in the romance area of your life. I hope I’m not making you feel like you’re cheating on your guy.”
Let’s reassure him that Tina finds him attractive, Kent thought, so she snuggled her head into the crook of James’ neck. “I need someone right now. You’re here. Mitch isn’t.”
“Hooray,” James said.
Kent spilled her thoughts. “I feel like nobody likes me now; like, in spite of everything I’ve done for my family, that no one appreciates it. I’m not perfect, by any means. But I feel like I’m better than 99% of the other fa- er, daughters out there. Do you understand what I’m getting at?”
“I think so, Tina. Heck, I keep this smile plastered on whether or not people appreciate my efforts. I make a mean margarita, a beautiful bloody mary, and a fantastic fuzzy navel. Yet I rarely get a word of thanks, much less a great tip. People seem too absorbed in their hang-ups, especially here. But it still doesn’t mean that they don’t deserve my best. Heck, I owe it to myself to do my best — in my smile, and my work.”
“My, what a great attitude you have,” breathed Kent.
James laughed. “The better to woo you with, my dear.”
“So, you admit you’re trying to woo — mph!“
Kent couldn’t finish her sentence. James had craned his neck over and was planting the tenderest of kisses to her lips. Kent froze; her male brain was protesting, yet not wanting to push James away for Tina’s sake. Kent’s current body, however, was responding at 100,000 RPM. Her skin tingled, her heart beat like a trip hammer, her pupils dilated, and goose bumps rose on her neck, her legs, and groin. Also, her left butt cheek felt warm. And compressed. And massaged.
Wh … that’s James’ hand!
“Hey — stop! Please,” Kent gasped.
James looked crestfallen. “Really? Oh — I’m sorry. Nuts. I got carried away. Forgive me.”
“Hey — no apologies needed. I’m just not looking for that out of you — not tonight, at least.” But feel free to explore that with Tina when we’re back to normal, Kent schemed. “James, you’ve been great. You listened to me, and that kiss … wow. But I better get back before someone in my family notices I’m gone.”
“I’m already missing you,” James said with mock distress.
“James … listen closely. In a day or two, I may be acting strange; like I’m not attracted to you, like tonight never happened. If that occurs, don’t be put off. Keep pursuing me. Just be your gallant, sweet, handsome self. You will reach me again. Please remember that, OK?” Kent hoped that Tina would be open to this dream of a boy.
“Okay, Tina. That sounds kind of weird … but I’ll bet it has something to do with that secret therapy that some of the couples here go through. I’m right, aren’t I?”
“Gee. You’re smart, too. *sigh*,” Kent faked a swoon, then got up and walked towards the cabana path. “Night, James. Sleep tight.”
“Sweet dreams, gorgeous. Make one of them about me,” called James.
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN
Morning came, and girl-Kent walked to the gazebo to meet man-Tina. This is the last day … the last morning I have to get make-up applied. Yee-haw! As of about 3 a.m. tomorrow, I get to be me again! Lost in her reverie, Kent was almost at the stairs to the gazebo before she noticed Tina was already there, waiting.
“Well, aren’t you up early,” said Kent. “Did you rest well?”
“No. I slept horribly. Mom’s hurting badly because I won’t get affectionate with her, and this … thingie of yours keeps coming to life with the slightest movement. I woke up at four and couldn’t get back to sleep because I was afraid of yesterday morning happening again,” Tina moaned.
“Don’t worry, honey. See, this is why we should definitely change back when the 60 hours is up.”
“You think you’re pretty slick, don’t you, Dad. As miserable as I am now, I’ll be just as doomed if I lose Mitch because of you. So, even though it’s killing Mom, she might just have to get over losing her husband if I am forced to have to get over Mitch.” Tina was so angry now, he was saying anything that he thought would hurt Kent.
Kent’s face drained of all color. “Tina … you wouldn’t …”
“Try me,” Tina growled. “Now, will you let me be with Mitch when we go home, or do I have to keep you in that short, weak, vulnerable girl’s body?”
Kent stood, and started to leave the gazebo. She turned back to Tina at the edge of the stairs. “Forget the make-up. My eyes are too wet for mascara anyway.” She then ran away, crying.
Breakfast was a somber affair. Tina angrily poked at his eggs. Marlene didn’t touch her food; she did sip her coffee, but it did nothing for her reddened eyes. Kent was bloodshot in her peepers also, just nibbling on a berry or two from her fruit plate. Not a word was said. Janis, who could sense the tension but had no clue where it was coming from, finally broke the ice.
“What the heck is wrong with everybody?”
Kent and Tina glared at her, while Marlene continued to sip her coffee and look out the window at the flora.
“Okaaay … I withdraw the question,” Janis mumbled as she slumped down in her chair.
After breakfast, the family walked out and sat in shaded chairs on the verandah. The silence held until Tina spoke.
“Let’s skip therapy today, “daughter”. I don’t want to go.”
“Fine with me. It’s just making things worse, anyway,” answered Kent.
“Now, wait a minute, you two,” Marlene cut in. “I’m suffering from this ‘special treatment’ of yours also. Today is the last day of it, right? So, see it through. I’m damned ready for it to be over.”
“Where did you go last night, Tina?” chirped Janis.
Man-Tina barked, “Janis, don’t change the subj — wait. What?”
“I said,” Janis looked directly towards girl-Kent, “where did you go last night, Tina? You left at around ten till eleven and didn’t come back until nearly midnight.”
Kent was mute, and flushing bright red from chest to crown.
“You should remember how light a sleeper I am,” Janis continued. “I saw you sneak out. I would have left to go make sure you were okay, but then I would have been disobeying Daddy’s rule of walking alone after dark. And I always obey Daddy’s — “
“Janis, shut up,” both Kent and Tina said in near unison.
Then Tina turned to Kent. “So … where did you go?”
“Nowhere.”
“LIAR! You’re lying!”
“Now that’s the pot calling the kettle.”
Tina stood up. “That’s it! I have had it with you! You will no longer be allowed to be alone! You must be with your mother or me at all times! You will sleep on the floor in our cabana so we can monitor you constantly! If you continue to act like a delinquent, then I’ll treat you like a criminal!”
Kent rose in reply. “Oh yeah? Well, after the threat you leveled at me last night — and again this morning - I realize I may have to live the rest of my life this way. So I will live it in spite of you, not under you! And I’m 18, ‘Daddy’. Less than three months, and you’ll never see me again if you don’t want to,” Kent hissed.
“I’ll never see you again? Oh please — promise me that!” roared Tina.
“Kent! Tina! Stop this! Please,” Marlene implored.
“You want to know where I was last night, ‘Daddy’,” Kent said, ignoring Marlene. “I was with James. I poured out my heart to him because I couldn’t do it with anyone in this screwed up family!”
“James the bartender? You don’t really know him, do you? He could be a smooth talking liar, trying to just bed you!” Tina countered.
“Yeah — like Mitch,” smirked girl-Kent.
“YOU LEAVE HIM OUT OF THIS! MITCH IS PRECIOUS TO ME!” shouted man-Tina.
At this point, Janis and Marlene were totally confused.
“Go ahead, ‘Dad’. Make good on your threat. You will be a failure of a man. I will be successful no matter what, because that’s what I am — a success. Unlike you,” Kent said with all the venom she could muster. She was five feet from her 'father', arms crossed.
Tina lost all control. He screamed at the top of his lungs: “HOW … DARE … YOU … SPEAK TO ME THAT WAY!” As he said it, he closed the space between him and Kent in two giant strides, slamming his fist down on the side table near them. The punch was so hard that it destroyed the wooden bench with a loud KRAK — AKK.
Kent was suddenly scared to death. The scream had shaken her whole body to the spine, and the table smash left her ear ringing. She had never seen this look on what used to be her face. Tina was like a raging monster, well able to crush her with his bare hands; a hulk, with more clothes and flesh colored skin. A high-pitched squeal of fear escaped from Kent’s lips, and she turned and ran away into the trees.
Tina stood still, numb from the realization of just how crazy he had just acted. Marlene was out of her chair, holding onto a frightened Janis.
“Kent … what … what’s happened to you?” Marlene sobbed.
Tina looked at his ‘wife’. “Marlene …”
“Just … just stay away from us!” -She continued backing farther and farther away.
CHAPTER NINETEEN
Dr. Brand tapped his pad computer. “You’re a little late for the session, Tina, so we’re going to have to make it a forty minute one. By the way, where’s Kent?”
“Doc,” man-Tina sniffed, “everything’s going to hell. I’m screwing it all up. I didn’t want to come here this morning, but there was had nowhere else to go, no one to talk to.” He then relayed the events of the morning to Brand.
The psychologist’s brow furrowed with worry. “We’ve never had to end a UET early, but I think it’s time to make an exception. Let me clear it with the CEO.”
Tina was exasperated. “To hell with the CEO! You’re the boss here! I’m sure you have the authority — now do it, please!”
“I cannot do this without the CEO’s permission, nor without his capacity,” Brand replied deeply. “Stay here. I’ll call; if she approves, then we can proceed as soon as we find Kent. I’ll get Angelo on that as soon as I get off the phone.”
Dr. Brand stepped out. Tina stayed in the counseling room, head in hands.
“Uh, Mr. Braxton?”
Tina looked up. It was an Isla employee, one he’d not really seen before … she had the official shirt and nametag, though. “Uh, yeah. That’s me.”
“Sorry to bother you, but I notice you’re alone in here. Sir, we’ve received an urgent call for you. It’s from your company; whoever called said he had to speak to you urgently. He’s holding on line 3.”
“Uh — hello?” Tina was nervous; he knew next to nothing about being a CEO.
“Mr. Braxton! Thank God I found you. I know you’re on vacation, sir, but this is an issue that just came up, and it’s pretty serious. In fact, the whole survival of Hannegill Enterprises is at stake.”
“Uh — okay,” hemmed Tina.
“A corporate raider is actively trying to buy us out. He started yesterday; he means to divide us up into dozens of smaller divisions and sell us off. Evidently he’s already sold half of our shareholders on the idea. They’re calling a special meeting this Friday. I know you’re not due back until Monday — but this is too serious for you not to be here, leading the opposition to this guy. When shall I send the corporate jet to pick you up?”
“Uh — what?!” hawed Tina.
“Sir — snap out of vacation mode. I need you here with me right now. We’ll reimburse you with an extra week of vacation.”
“Uh — who is this I’m talking to?”
“Kent — this is Robert. You know, the COO? The guy you left in charge of the company while you went on this vacation?”
“Why, of course I know you, Robert. The phone service here is awful; I can barely hear you. Robert, hang on for thirty seconds.”
Tina put the phone in his lap. Dad’s not here to help me. And if we can’t find him, I can’t switch him back to his body. If I say the wrong thing, Dad could lose his company. Oh My God — what do I tell this guy? What would Dad say?
In thirty seconds, Tina lifted her head, and raised the phone handle to her head. “Robert — you there?”
“Yes, sir. I never left.”
“Robert. I am in a critical moment with my family. If I leave them now, I might lose them. And when it comes to choosing between Hannegill and my family — well, there’s no contest. I left you in charge because I trust you can do the job. Now, if you need me to speak to the board or the shareholders, I can do it via Skype, or some other videolink. Make it Friday when that happens, if at all possible. Until then, Robert, know this: you can deal with this. I have given you all the tools necessary for this, and I wouldn’t have chosen you if you couldn’t handle it. Repeat after me: I CAN HANDLE THIS.”
“I — I can handle this,” said the voice through the phone.
“With conviction!”
“I CAN HANDLE THIS!”
“Good man. Now get out there and handle it.” Tina hung up. Well, I hope I didn’t screw up things even more badly. I don’t know what else I should have said, though — that was the absolute best I could think to say in the situation. I hope dad doesn’t freak out when he hears.
Tina didn’t have to wait long to find out. Angelo walked in the door, with a fretful, nervous Kent in tow.
“Angelo — don’t leave me alone with him. I won’t feel safe,” Kent whispered to her attendant.
“Hokay, signorina,” reassured the Italian. “I’ma right here.”
Tina breathed a sigh of relief. “Thank God you’re here, ‘daughter’. Dr. Brand has decided to end the therapy now, and get us back to normal. He’s just getting all the things in order, like talking to his boss.”
Kent appeared suspicious. “So … you’re fine with that? What about your threat to not agree to the switch back?”
“Dad, I’m not meant to be a man. I’m a girl. I just wanted to make you suffer … to abuse you like I felt you had been abusing me.”
Kent was silent for the longest time before responding. “Tina … abuse is the right word.”
Tina shook his head in shame. “I know, I know. I wanted to make you feel my hurt, to get even with you. But when I did it, it made me feel horrible — like I can’t live with myself. I’m such a hypocrite — complaining about how you treat me, and then I turn around and do even worse back to you.”
“That’s not what I meant,” said Kent, eyes welling. “I’m not talking about your behavior. I’m talking about mine.”
The young girl walked over to the big man and sat next to him, grabbing ahold of his hand.
“Tina … what just happened frightened the hell out of me twice. The first time was seeing the raw fury in your face, the craziness in your eyes. I really thought you were going to hurt me. So, I ran off into the trees. While there, I realized a terrible truth: In this past year, I have made you feel that way. The times that I have ‘lost it’ and raged, and made you tremble and back away? I thought I was forcing obedience out of you. But what I was really doing was scaring you to near death. That’s true, isn’t it?”
Tina nodded her head. He ... he’s beginning to see — finally!
Kent was now openly weeping. “That’s child abuse, Tina. I don’t deserve to be your father. I should be locked away in a prison somewhere. Oh God … baby … I’m a monster … I feel so horrible … I’m so, so, so sorry …” Kent broke down, holding her face in her hands, sobbing loudly.
Tina watched Kent for a minute, searching for any signs of insincerity. Finding none, he put his arm around the weeping girl. “Dad … look at me.”
Kent suppressed the sobs enough to raise her face; she lowered her fingertips enough so her eyes could peek at Tina.
“Dad … we have to change how we act towards each other. We have a long way to go — but this is a start. I’m sorry too, for my behavior this past year — boy, I’ve learned how horrible it feels to have a disobedient daughter. I’ve treated you with such disrespect. I’m willing to work on changing. I just pray that I won't have to give up ... M-m …” Tina was faltering.
Mitch?! realized Kent with awe. This was the first time that she had even shown a hint of weakening her stance regarding her lover.
“… Because no matter what happens in life, I love you. You’re my Daddy.” Tina’s tears were freely falling now. “Please forgive me for how I’ve hurt you. And Daddy — I forgive you, too. For all of it.”
Both father and daughter now dissolved together in a rush of wails and tears, hugging each other tightly.
The next hour was one of peace and bliss for both of them. They reminisced about the good times of past years; they complimented each other on the best qualities they saw in each other. Kent spoke of what an honor it was to be in Tina’s beautiful body, to possess her gleaming smile. Tina remarked about how proud she was of his accomplishments. When Tina recounted the phone call with Robert from Hannegill, Kent was amazed at the wisdom of his daughter’s response.
And Kent spoke to Tina about Janis’ blackmail of her. Tina was embarrassed severely to find that Kent had seen the explicit photos, and readied herself for a lecture. None came.
“The only thing wrong with what you did there, Tina, was trusting those photos to someone who wasn’t trustworthy. By posting it to his friends, he betrayed you. But tantalizing each other is what lovers do; and if you were married to a responsible partner, I’d have no trouble with what you did.”
Tina was stunned. “Really?!”
“I’ll let you in on a secret — you cannot tell anyone else. Your mom knows, but she should not know that I told you this, okay?”
“Okay …”
Kent pointed to the smartphone located in Tina’s left back pocket. “In the pictures section is a hidden file, secured by three passwords. That’s where I keep your Mother’s Victoria’s Secret photo shoot.”
“Mom … did a lingerie photo shoot?!”
“Yes, about five years ago. It was a Valentine’s gift to me. And when I’m gone on a weeklong trip, feeling lonely, I get to a private place, call your Mom on speakerphone and pull up that file. If I ever get ‘horny’ I like to focus all that sexual tension on her body, no one else’s. And now you know another secret I use to make sure I’m faithful to your mother.”
“Dad … I’ve been so ashamed of those nude pics … I can’t believe you aren’t yelling at me over it.”
“Daughter,” Kent said, “Look at me. I … forgive … you. For all of it. Everything. I want you to know something: even though I may not agree with you — even if you do things that I can’t be proud of — you will always be my beloved daughter. I will love you forever, and nothing, no one will ever change that.”
“You forgive me? For all of it?”
“Yes, honey.”
More tears and hugs followed. After fifteen more minutes, they calmed enough to resume talking.
“Tina,” Kent said. “We have to do something about Janis. She
can’t continue to shoplift and steal — she’s hurting other people, and she’ll ruin her life.”
“I know, Dad. But what do we do?”
“Ahem,” spoke a rough voice with a heavy Mediterranean accent. “I have a suggestione.”
Both Tina and Kent suddenly realized that Angelo had been in the room the whole time. Tina tried to cover up: “Ah … Angelo; you’re probably wondering why I’m calling my daughter ‘Kent’, and why she’s calling me ‘Tina’. See, we’re-“
“Is di ‘minda — swap’, no?” the hairy man grinned. “You donna work here for twenny years witout learning a few tings. Don’ worryaboutit. Dottore Brand, Dottore Ruiz, anda me are di only ones who know. Now, about Signorina Janis …”
CHAPTER TWENTY
Marlene lay on the bed in her cabana. Janis laid with her. They had ahold of each other, both sniffling from the morning’s events. “I curse the day I decided to look at the mailer for this awful place,” the mother said.
She heard a tap-tap-tap at the door. “Kent — leave me alone. I don’t want to see you right now.”
“Mom — it’s me, Tina,” Kent spoke in his daughter’s voice.
Marlene sat up. “Tina? Come in, honey! Are you all right? Janis and I looked for you for nearly an hour!”
Girl-Kent walked in. “Mom. Something wonderful has happened between me and Dad.”
“What?” “Really?” For both Marlene and Janis, those were the words they least expected to hear.
“Yes, really. We both had a breakthrough. I know you said you didn’t want to see Dad right now, but can I bring him in? We both have some amends to make with you guys.”
It was a little unusual, what with Kent apologizing for Tina’s wrongs and Tina confessing Kent’s. Neither father nor daughter thought that disclosing the mind/body swap was a wise thing to do yet, if ever.
There were many tears, admissions of wrongs, apologies, confessions of love, and promises made. Fresh soul wounds still existed in all four Braxtons, but the balms of humility and forgiveness started the slow healing process on most of them. Evil words spoken in the past were addressed, confessed, and absolved. For the moment, all was well.
The four of them ended up sprawled together on the king size bed, hugging, intertwining fingers, and stroking one another’s hair.
Marlene finally interrupted this fantasy-come-true. “I’m hungry. I’ve been so upset that I haven’t really eaten much since the first meal we had here. I’m starving!”
Man-Tina laughed. “You must be feeling better, then. Lunch is still forty minutes away. How about we all get up and go for a stroll — have any of you visited the gift shop yet?”
“Oh, I want to go there!” cried Janis. “All I’ve gotten to do is just stick my head in for a few minutes.” And there are a few items there I’d love to have, if the right opportunity presents itself.
“You go on, Janis. We’ll catch up with you,” her ‘father’ said.
Janis had been in the gift shop for about twenty minutes when the rest of her family showed up. The youngest Braxton had already scouted the place; no security camera, one employee behind the counter. It was a small shop; even with no electronic surveillance it would be hard to get away with something. I’ll stick around; who knows what could happen.
She saw Kent looking around at the coffee cups and shot glasses; he collected the latter. Tina seemed to be advising her father on which shot glass to get. Weird, thought Janis. Marlene went straight to the jewelry case, and asked to see some of the earrings and bangles. They were mixtures of pearls, diamonds, and gold; some had seashells or exotic coral. Pretty, pretty — Janis salivated while watching from the corner of her eye.
“Honey, come on,” Mr. Braxton urged. “They’re opening up the dining area.”
“Ooh! I can’t wait. I’m so hungry!” Marlene turned and walked away, leaving the jewels on top of the display case. The clerk, who appeared to be Asian, started to place the items back under lock when the walkie-talkie on his hip began to squawk.
“Chaoxiang! Pick uppa di phone!” It was Angelo’s voice.
The clerk stopped everything and grabbed his radio. “Chao here. What’s up?”
“Coda red inna di equipament shack! Comma help, NOW NOW NOW!!”
“Fire,” Chao whispered. He looked up. The store was now empty; the youngest daughter of that family was just now stepping out. It would take him precious minutes to lock up — minutes the shack might not have. He left the jewelry on the countertop. Quickly closing the shop door and turning the sign to “CLOSED”, he bolted out the back door, running to the equipment shed.
Two minutes later, the left-unlocked front door opened, and a svelte young girl tiptoed briskly inside.
Lunch for the family tasted better than any meal had in a long time. Without the underlying acid of conflict, everything seemed improved. Also, the special was conch salad, with broiled Chilean sea bass and asparagus.
Marlene leaned towards Janis. “Honey, were you able to find a fresh tampon?”
“Yeah, Mom. Thanks for letting me go back to my cabana to get it,” Janis whispered back. I’m not quite on my period yet; I’ll have to remember this little lie and not contradict it later.
“The only way this meal could get better is to top it off with an espresso,” man-Tina sighed.
“Or a hot black tea,” gushed girl-Kent.
“This sudden taste change in you two still amazes me,” laughed Marlene.
“Mr. Braxton?” a tenor voice bellowed.
The whole table looked up at a huge Scandinavian woman in a security uniform. She had a frown on her face. “I need to speak to you and your daughter — now.”
“Me?” said girl-Kent with fear.
“No. Her.” She pointed with her big white finger at Janis.
“I want to be included,” Marlene remarked with alarm.
“Can I be there also?” urged Janis’ sister.
“Yes, please let her be there too,” Janis pleaded. If this is about the gift shop, Tina may be my alibi. Or maybe I can pin it on her.
Janis sat bewildered. There on the black and white screen, it clearly showed her entering the empty store and swiping the jewelry. A quick frisk by the female officer showed the items were stashed inside her underwear.
“People think we don’t have cameras in there,” remarked security chief Brita. “Our equipment is state of the art. This shot is from a device so tiny, it’s hidden in the pupil of the eye of one of the mannequins.”
Janis moaned. “I was caught by a dummy.”
“So, little one. Is this your first offense?” Brita thundered.
“Yes. I’ve never done anything like this ever before. I — I don’t know what got into me. I promise,” Janis cried. She was shedding actual tears, although out of fear, not repentance.
“Um … that’s not true.” The quiet admission came from the back of the room. Janis turned her head towards its origin. Tina! That little bitch is squealing on me! “Sis, remember the pix,” Janis growled.
Marlene took charge. “It’s too late, Janis. Tina just showed me the shots from her phone — the ones you’ve been threatening her with. And although she’ll face consequences, it does not excuse your behavior in the least. You’ve been stealing from multiple stores and people. Your closet is full of Chloe’s clothes; I’ll bet that’s why you never want to invite her over. When Tina told us about you — right after you left for the gift shop — I didn’t want to believe it; but it makes too much sense. You really aren’t that great at finding bargain priced fashion and accessories, are you? You’ve just been great at stealing. Do you deny it?”
Janis looked at the assembled accusers before her and considered the evidence against her. Her shoulders slumped in defeat. “No.”
Brita picked up her radio. “Congrats to Angelo and Chaoxiang. The sting was successful. Repeat, successful sting.”
“Wait! This was a SET UP?” squeaked Janis.
“Your blackmailing of me came out in therapy, Janis,” her ‘sister’ casually remarked. “I let Dad here know about it, and he and Angelo figured out a plan to expose you. To help you. You have a problem, sister. You need help. We did let Mom in on it at the last, when you left for the gift shop. She needed to ask for the jewelry case to be opened.”
Janis’ head hung low. “So, what happens now?”
Man-Tina laid down the law. Janis would start counseling here for kleptomania, and continue it upon arriving home. All stolen items would be returned to the stores and people as much as possible, and a lawyer would argue that she in good faith is trying to change her life. If Janis refused any of the above terms, she’d be at the mercy of prosecution without the assistance of the family lawyer; she’d have to find her own.
Janis, trembling, agreed to the terms.
Later, Marlene sat beside a weeping Janis. She didn’t overly comfort, as she felt her daughter needed to feel the fear and stress of her coming consequences so as to motivate her to change. She did feed Janis a fresh tissue every so often, though.
Tina and Kent took a walk. “Well, that went as good as it could, I think,” Tina said.
Kent looked up at him. “You were pretty awesome in there, daughter. You’re going to make a great parent. A real chip off of Marlene’s block.”
“I never would have had the courage to come clean about those pictures without you, Dad. Thank you for loving me through this.”
“It’s time for our afternoon therapy, honey. Ready to get your body back?”
“You know it! And you’re just as eager too, I’ll bet.”
TO BE CONTINUED WEDNESDAY, JULY 17
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual situation or person is purely coincidental.
Tremendous thanks to Cyclist for beta reading and help!
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No, no! This shouldn't happen! It CANNOT happen! STOP!
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Ultimate Empathy Therapy
Part 6 of 8
by **Sigh**
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CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE
“What do you mean, he won’t let us do it early?” Kent was upset.
“Just that,” exclaimed Dr. Brand. “The CEO has mandated that no matter what, the treatment must last at least for a full sixty hours. I have no authority to overrule the CEO.”
“Why?” blurted Tina.
“Because he’s the CEO,” Brand said. “I have to do what she says. No other reason was given to me, and no other reason is needed. I apologize for falsely raising your hopes. I was sure it would be okay.”
Kent started to cry. Tina just looked mildly infuriated.
“Look. There are some other issues that we can use this time for. Why don’t we address them? It’s almost 2:30 p.m. — we have time to do that. Then tomorrow morning after breakfast we can meet to accomplish the reversal of the therapy. Or, if you’re extremely eager, I can meet you both here at 3 a.m. and revert you both exactly when the time is up.”
“Sorry, doc. I’m saying ‘no’ to any more talking right now. I’ve been through the emotional wringer today enough already,” Tina said. “We will be back here at 3 a.m. though — right, Dad?”
“Absolutely,” affirmed Kent. With that, father and daughter got up and left the session.
Supper was … different. Janis was wordless as she picked at her meal. Kent and Tina were both upbeat, though not as much as if they had already returned each other’s forms. Marlene was a mixed bag: thrilled over her husband and older daughter, but distraught over the one she had considered her rock in the storm.
Emotional workouts can be almost as exhausting as physical ones. After supper, all agreed that going to bed would be wise.
The parents readied to retire for the night. Marlene came out of the bathroom; her husband (Tina) was already in bed, lying on his left side, facing the wall.
“I’m going to be blunt. Are we making love tonight?” Marlene asked.
“Honey — wait until after 3 a.m. The therapy ends then. As soon as I get back from that counseling office, I’ll make passionate love to you.” I have to remember to tell Dad to do that, Tina thought.
“That doesn’t make sense. Very little of this does, you know. I can tell you that I don’t want to sleep tonight beside a man that avoids me. So until you’re allowed to be intimate with me again, I’m sleeping in the hammock outside.” She grabbed her pillow and a blanket.
Tina arose. “Honey — no. If anyone deserves to give up the bed, it’s me. Let me sleep on the hammock.” After a few minutes of arguing, Marlene begrudgingly got back in bed and Tina went outside to sleep.
“What’s that you’re taking, Janis?”
“Over-the-counter sleep pills; they’re essentially Benadryl. I told Mom I wouldn’t be able to sleep tonight, so she gave me some of these. She told me to take one, but I want to escape the world for a while.” With that, she popped two pills in her mouth and chased it with a glass of water.
Wow. Two pills knocked me out for hours when I took them on occasion as a big grown man. Janis will be in la—la land until at least the morning, Kent thought.
Sure enough, she heard Janis snoring loudly fifteen minutes later. The sawing of logs was so high decibel that Kent had to stuff cotton in her ears. That measure helped little. It didn’t help that Kent felt invigorated, not sleepy. Perhaps from the excitement of seeing how disaster had turned to triumph in her family.
I bet I stay awake until 3 a.m., when we’re due to switch back. I don’t want to listen to snoring for 6 to 7 more hours. I’m going for a walk. Janis sure won’t be sleeping light tonight; I should be able to get away with it.
Maybe I can remind and encourage James to pursue Tina tomorrow night, in spite of the dismissive attitude I know she’ll have towards him.
Once again, she arose and carefully clothed. This time she added some lip gloss and a few whiffs of perfume. She stepped out the front door, and glanced towards the parent’s cabana. In the full moon light, she gasped as she saw the hulking form of her former body lying in a hammock outside. He appeared asleep.
What? Man, I’m going to have to do some major repair work with Marlene when we get back to normal, she thought. She carefully padded her way down to the poolside bar.
“Hi James!” Kent chirped.
“Hey there, beautiful,” James returned.
“I just came to remind you about tomorrow, so you’d remember — wait, what are you doing sitting by the pool? I thought you’d still be working.”
“Already finished. My line cook buddy took over thirty minutes ago. I asked him because I was hoping you’d show up.”
“HMMmmm! Methinks the gentleman is crushing on me a little!”
“That obvious, am I? Then let me greet you with a gentlemanly embrace.”
“Look, I’m not here to snuggle. I just want to make sure that tomorrow you —“
James came to her despite her protestations. Instead of just hugging her, he picked her up by the back and the legs, and walked her over to one of the poolside lounge chairs. He sat down on the chair, placing Kent on his lap.
Kent was surprised at how fast her sexual motor came to life this night. She felt … dampness? … in her crotch, and her heart and breathing rate were suddenly elevated. The goosebumps from last night were all at attention. And James hadn’t even kissed her.
That deficiency was addressed in the next two seconds.
Tina awoke with a major backache. This hammock was not made for a 6’2’’ man to sleep in. He struggled to get out of it, and almost fell. Stumbling, he considered his options. He peeked in on Marlene. She was sleeping, but fitfully. He walked to the adjoining cabana to checked on the girls.
Janis was there, sleeping like a rock, but her sister’s bed was empty.
Oh no. Don’t tell me Dad went to see James again.
Tina put on some sweat pants that he’d taken outside to get into if it got too cold. He grabbed his slippers that he’d taken outside to the hammock. He then went down the trail approaching the pool.
James had rounded first base and was heading to second with Kent. His hands had slid inside her panties as he massaged her butt, he withdrew one of them and reached inside her shirt to grasp her bra cup.
Kent pulled back, panting. “James! No! We need to … to …” As Kent pulled her head away from the handsome bartender’s, she got a glance at the path heading back to the cabana. Her eyes widened.
“We need to keep on going?” hinted James, hopefully.
“We need to get out of here! Now!” Kent urgently whispered. “I think my Dad is coming!” If Tina sees this, there’s no way she’ll be open to James.
James face turned to one of resolve. “Roll off of me to your right. Stay low; the hedge will shield us. Stay on the grass; the lights are trained on the cement. Then follow me.”
Both of them briskly slinked out of the area. James caught the eye of his replacement barkeep. “Cover for me, bro,” he breathed. The cook gave thumbs up.
“Did you see my daughter — a teenage girl, long brunette hair, very curvy — down here? And, where’s James? I thought he was the bartender,” Tina inquired of the man who was polishing a glass.
“It’s James’ night off.”
“Where does he bunk? Where would he be tonight? I really am worried that my daughter is with him,” man-Tina implored.
“I dunno. I pretty much keep to myself. And no, I haven’t seen no teenager ‘round here tonight.”
Nuts. Where could Dad have gone? I really don’t feel like combing the island in a wild goose chase, Tina fretted.
The replacement bartender looked at the big man. “It’s pretty slow right now, just you and me. You wanna drink?”
“No,” Tina sighed. “I’m under-” Wait a minute. I am not underage tonight. I’m forty-two! How about that. I’m gonna have a drink. “Something not too strong. How about a light beer.”
“Comin’ up.”
CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO
James opened a door and walked in, girl-Kent right behind him. They were in a sparsely equipped metal shack. A bed, a small desk, a phone on a bedside table, and a wooden chair. Concrete floor. The window mounted AC unit completed the accoutrements. Oh, there was a tiny bathroom, and a tiny kitchenette room. But that was it.
“So this is where you live? Looks pretty Spartan,” said Kent. “Not even a picture on the wall.”
“I leave this summer once I secure an engineering job, so why dress it up if it’s temporary?” James responded. “Now, where were we? I think you had your lips pressed on mine …”
“Umm … I’m not going to resume the cuddling. I’ll be honest with you, James. I didn’t come with you to your room to go ‘all the way’. I just wanted not to get caught by my Dad. So, sorry to disappoint you, but physically we’re going no further. Not tonight. Maybe tomorrow night? Who knows?” Kent knew he couldn’t guarantee Tina’s actions when she was back in this body.
James had a look on his face as if he had heard this many times before. “It’s okay, Tina. I know that some girls come to the Isla looking for a temporary fling, and that’s fine with me. But if you really don’t want to be here — if you’re just doing this so as to not hurt my feelings — please, don’t. We’ll wait until the coast is clear and then we can sneak you back to your cabana. But please don’t lead me on. Not you. Please.”
“Lead you on? Why would you think that?” Listen to the earnestness in his voice. Oh, this guy will be so perfect for my daughter.
“Because,” James said in a quavering voice, “Unlike all of those other flings, I … I’m developing feelings for you. I think I’m fall- … oh, forget it.”
“What? No, please — finish,” Kent’s voice was now trembling too. He has feelings for her! And by the way this body is feeling, I know Tina will have attraction for him too!
James shook his head and turned away. Kent put a hand on the boy’s arm to reassure him.
“James. You are a special guy. I’ve only known you for a few days and I can tell that. It really is this therapy I’m going through that has me hesitant. But by tomorrow morning, it will be over. I may forget how I felt tonight — you will have to woo me all over again — but I want you to do that. Please?”
The young man continued to avoid Kent’s gaze. “You think I haven’t had experience with women taking that secret therapy? They fall in love with me, and then in two or three days act like they don’t know me. Not that it mattered much, because … because I wasn’t really in love with them. But you …”
Kent held her breath. He’s … he’s saying he … Oh my god.
“I can’t afford to get too involved with you, Tina. Because when you leave — it’s gonna break my heart.” James turned to her, and drew near.
“J — James.” Kent tried to speak more, but her body’s feelings overwhelmed her. She felt hot, so hot, as if her blood was boiling. Emotions of a type and intensity she had never sensed before were roiling inside, taking over her body, her senses, her brain. Her mind — her male mind — became alarmed, and fought desperately for control, but like a novice surfer trying to ride a twenty foot wave, it was easily overmatched. She stood bolt still as James put his hand gently behind her neck and pulled her into his kiss.
All sense of space and time, all orientation was suddenly lost. She couldn’t tell if she was still standing or if she was now lying under him on the bed. Her breasts and nipples were on fire — or was he licking them? She closed her eyes in an attempt to focus, but that just removed any visual competition for the unbelievable sensations coming from her lips, her body.
“No, no! This shouldn’t happen! It CANNOT happen! STOP,” Kent’s male mind screamed.
SHUT UP shouted the female body and brain anatomy. Kent was both terrified and exhilarated, as her body became a holy temple being ministered to by the high priest James. Every inch was quivering, on fire, being made clean of clothes. Not yet her nether regions between her thighs, at least-
James slid his fingers down inside the front of her panties.
“JAMES! Wait! D-don’t …”
But the young man’s face was lost in glorious bliss. “Tina,” he breathed, “I love you. I love you so much.”
The “L” word sealed it. That twenty-foot wave of desire and emotion broke and pounded the old male Kent into the background, into submission. All that was left to be sensed was a glorious rush of fulfillment. Heaven. Utopia. Life more alive than any felt before.
“Ohh, my James. I love you!”
All resistance fell away as she allowed him to finish undressing her. She opened up wide and gasped, then moaned as he made their two bodies one.
They lay in bed together. James had come twice, and Kent had done so more times than she could count. The bartender was now asleep, with his arms wrapped around her. His lover was still wide-awake, a hurricane of thoughts swirling her brain and mind. She was terrified. She was electrified. Or more specifically, her female brain and emotions were claiming victory over Kent’s male soul…
Oh God. What perfection this is. I’m lying in bed with the most wonderful guy in the world, and he loves me. He completely loves me! And I love him! James and me. Me and James. Forever.
‘Oh God’ is an understatement!. Sweet merciful heaven, what have I done? I have betrayed my daughter — and my wonderful wife! They can never, ever find out! I’ve got to get out of here, get back to the cabana, and try to forget this ever happened!
How can you forget? Don’t you remember the rush of emotion we felt? Tell me that you’ve ever felt that way before. You haven’t. And if we stay in this form — if we stay in this teenage body, together — then it solves a number of problems. We all get to experience this bliss every day for the rest of our life, and Tina never gets with Mitch!
What!? No! That means that Tina …
She’ll be stuck as a man, yes. Wasn’t she saying just earlier today how she planned to do just that? And the way she handled that phone call from Robert. Excellent. Even if she loses your job, the severance pay will be more than enough to retire on. Why, pretty soon that sex drive she has now will have her thinking of Marlene as a lover, not a mother. She will be fine, eventually.
But I still love my wife! Marlene …
Will survive. What we have here with James is rare. It is truly love. It must be love. And love conquers all. Having found it, we must sacrifice everything for it. Everything! Didn’t you love the way we felt?
Yes. God forgive me, I liked it. But I didn’t want to…
See? We can do this! We can live in the glorious heaven that few share! Oh! Our prince is awakening!
“Mmmm. Hey there, Tina. Can’t sleep, huh?”
She was trembling. She looked at him with infatuation and fear. “I’m afraid not. This fire you started in me — it’s out of control. I don’t like being out of control. It won’t let me sleep.”
“Mmmm.” He climbed on top of her. “Let me inject a little more ‘lighter fluid’ on that fire.”
“Ooooh my Gooooo….”
Tina sat at the pool bar, comtemplating. The four light beers were starting to have an effect, but not a good one. He was feeling worse and worse about how Marlene was rejecting him. Not that he wanted to be with her — gross! To make love to your own Mother? Blechh! — but he felt horrible about hurting her so. Yet, until the therapy was over, he couldn’t think of anything else to do.
“Boy — you sure look like you’ve got the weight of the world on your shoulders.”
Tina looked up. Sitting on the stool next to him was The Redhead, the busty beauty from the beach. She had on a buttoned shirt top that was undone halfway down her torso and tied up to expose her midriff. Short shorts below that left little to the imagination.
“Bet my situation’s worse than yours,” she sniffed.
“I can’t get into specifics about mine. Suffice it to say that my body wants my wife badly, but I can’t make love to her.” Did I just admit that to a stranger? Girl, this booze must have loosened my tongue.
“Ah. The old cold shoulder. What a shame. It’s too bad — you look like a hunk. Heck, if I were your wife, I’d sleep with you.”
“It’s not that she’s — oh, forget it. It’s too complicated.” Tina turned the other direction.
“My situation is still worse. It’s the old ‘double cold shoulder’.”
Tina looked back at her. “Hey — you’re part of that threesome that’s here, aren’t you? You, and the guy, and the … the…”
“The transsexual. He’s/she’s not gotten the operation, so a lot of people would call her a she-male. A chick with a dick. By the way: hi, my name’s Tawny.”
“Uh … hi, I’m Kent. How … how does your relationship work?” wondered Tina.
“It doesn’t, not any more. See, my husband and I wanted to do something to reinvigorate our love life. So we searched around and even interviewed; and eventually chose to have this male-to-female transsexual come to live with us. She had something to offer both of us, you know? A penis for me, and a butthole for him.”
“Man oh man, it was fantastic for the first two years. All three of us in bed, and occasionally different combinations of two. But then something started to happen. My husband started forming a stronger bond with the dick-chick than he had with me. It’s gotten to the point where the tranny is contemplating a full sex change surgery so my husband can divorce me and they can get married, and go off and leave me high and dry.”
“I’m sure that you flirting at the beach with every guy in sight didn’t help things,” Tina snapped sarcastically.
“Hey! I’m desperate. I was trying to make Jack jealous,” bit back Tawny.
“I must admit, that’s pretty weird,” Tina agreed. “But you don’t look like you’re as depressed as I feel.” He got up from the bar and walked over to the bench seat positioned near the wall of the bar.
Tawny followed. “Hey, you! I don’t look like I’m depressed? That’s because I’m good at faking a smile! If I get down in the mouth, that makes the happy tranny look even more appealing to Jack!”
She stood in front of him, bending over at the waist so they could see eye to eye. Except Tina couldn’t focus on Tawny’s face; her breasts, with that magnificent crevasse separating them, were all his eyes were plastered on.
The redhead started to mist up in her eyes. “No matter how hard I try, it’s all slipping through my fingers.” She sat down on the bench next to him. “I love both of them … but I don’t get any love back … I’m starving!” She began weeping loudly.
Tina looked at her. She was obviously in pain. And painfully hot. He was starting to feel sorry for her. He put his hand on her shoulder to comfort her. With that, she continued boo — hooing and slowly melted towards him, putting her face on his shoulder.
This is inappropriate. At least, it looks that way, I’m sure. But what do I do? Leave her to cry all by herself? That seems cruel, thought Tina.
Tawny looked up. “I mean, why won’t they love me? Am I that ugly? Do you think I’m ugly?” She sat up and opened her arms, inviting Tina to evaluate her body.
Tina obliged. The curvy hips. The inviting butt. The world class breasts. And a face like Taylor Swift. “You are definitely not ugly. You’re beautiful.”
“Thank you. Thank you so much.” She leaned over and pressed her chest into Tina as she hugged him tight. That’s when Tina felt his biggest erection yet, tenting his sweat pants, threatening to burst the seam.
Tawny must have felt it too. “Let me thank you in a special way,” she exhaled lightly into his ear. Her hand dipped inside his sweats, grasping his penis tightly. She began rubbing up and down.
Tina was agog in new sensations. Her girl mind screamed for her to push this slut away, to run for the ice machine. Her male body was already too far gone, having needed sex for days and now getting the illicit thrill of a hand job from a woman who was centerfold-worthy. The internal conflict produced a paralysis — he didn’t embrace Tawny, but he couldn’t run from her either. She continued pumping away with her fingers.
Suddenly Mount Vesuvius erupted in Tina’s groin. “NNNNGH … AAAH!” he choked out. OMG. O. M. G. OMGOMGOMGGGG!!!
“Let’s go somewhere else, where we can do this with … adequate exposure, hmm?” Tawny purred.
“KENT!”
Tina opened his eyes; he hadn’t realized that they had been squinted shut.
There, ten feet away, stood Marlene. One hand covered her mouth; another clutched at her suddenly nauseated stomach.
Her body jerked twice, as if attempting a convulsion; then she wailed - a long, mournful wail of horror. Turning, she ran out of the bar and pool area.
Tina, at once fully sober, jumped up out of Tawny’s grasp. He ran with his dying erection pointing out the damp spot on his sweat pants. Not that he cared a bit. “MARLENE! WAIT!”
Tawny sat with a wet hand and a sour facial expression. “Dammit,” she said. “Cockblocked again.”
CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE
Kent awoke in the middle of the night. She was alone in bed. “James? Baby?” There was no answer. Then she heard the humming of a machine coming from the kitchenette area. James stuck his head through the door. “Hey, gorgeous.”
“Come back to bed with me, baby,” Kent cooed. “I need to feel your arms around me. I need your tender kisses. Make love to me again.” She was addicted; she could think of nothing else.
“I was hungry — and a little thirsty — so I made something special for the both of us,” he shouted from the ‘nette. He emerged from the door carrying a large coffee mug and a small espresso cup. “This is primo stuff, imported from Brazil. Decaf, so it won’t keep you up. A latte for me, and an espresso for my espresso girl.”
BLECCHH! Coffee. How sweet, he made it special for me. But I’ll throw up if I drink that sour stuff. “Thanks so much, baby,” she said, trying to mask her insincerity.
“Well? Taste it and tell me what you think,” James said. At that point, James’ walkie-talkie chirped. “Hey James, you there?”
James looked mildly irritated. “Excuse me, sweetheart. I’m gonna answer that.” He set down his latte, grabbed the handset and walked into the bathroom, shutting the door.
Kent was sitting there, holding the espresso. She didn’t want to disappoint her love — he’d gone to the trouble to make it. But she just couldn’t bring herself to even taste the nasty stuff. A way out presented itself. She leaned over and poured the tiny shotglass of espresso into James’ latte. Surely he wouldn’t notice the difference.
Just then, James emerged from the bathroom. “Hey! You drank that fast. How did you like it?”
“It was fabulous,” Kent lied. “But tasteless when compared to your sweet kiss.”
James faux-pouted. “Awww. I was hoping we could sip our drinks side-by-side, together.” He started sipping his latte. Then he turned to his lover to find her yawning.
“Getting sleepy again already? Maybe I shouldn’t have made the drinks unleaded.”
“Oh, I can’t sleep long with the best boy in the world touching me. It’s a dream come true.” She stifled another yawn.
James smiled upon seeing that. He lifted the w/t handset to his mouth and pressed the button. “Okay, guys. NOW you can come over.”
Kent raised an eyebrow. “Baby, who are you talking to?”
James’ smile was wider than she’d ever seen it. Wide, and … a little malicious? “My, my. You are one sweet piece of ass. I would keep you all to myself, but I have monetary and chemical needs, you know?” He drank deep from his latte.
Suddenly there was an urgent knocking on the door. James opened it. In walked the three groundskeeper hoodlums — Freddy, Stuart and Ron. Stuart was still limping from his ankle strain.
“Hey! She’s still awake,” Freddy protested.
“Not for long,” said James. “I put a ton of rohypnol in her drink. It will block her memory even back to thirty minutes ago, so she’ll just remember her night with me, not what’s about to happen now.”
“You’re a prince, dude. Here’s our part of the bargain,” said Stuart. He handed James a clear freezer bag partially filled with multiple little bags of white powder.
James opened one of the little bags and tasted it with a finger. “Oh man. I am gonna get so jacked up on this stuff”. He yawned, then took another long gulp of his latte.
“Wh — what’s going on? James … baby? What are you doing?” Kent’s male soul knew very well what was happening, but couldn’t figure a way out.
Big Freddy shed his shirt and pants and crawled up onto the bed, straddling Kent. “What’s gonna happen in a minute, when you’re zonked, is this: I’m gonna fuck your brains out. Then my buds will. We’ll repeat and repeat until we’re satisfied. And you won’t remember a thing. Ain’t that thoughtful of us?”
Kent clung to the thin bedsheet that separated Freddy from her nakedness. “No … **sob** … it can’t be true!”
Ron scratched his head. “Hey, James. Shouldn’t she be looking at least a little sleepy now?”
THUNK — CLUNK! That was the sound of James, and then his big coffee mug, hitting the floor. He was unarousable.
The hoodlums looked at him. Ron, the smartest, realized what had happened. “Oh, James. You colossal fuck-up. Guys, this is over. James drugged himself, not the chick.”
“To hell with that!” yelled Freddy. “I came over here for some pussy, and I’m not leaving ‘til I get some!”
“Dude,” Stuart said. “She’s not drugged. She’ll remember and charge you with rape.”
Kent, meanwhile, had stealthily grabbed for the phone. She lifted the handle and prepared to dial 911. Wait - they don't have 911 services on this island. Oh, god. Who can I call? Then she remembered. She dialed 400, waited a second, and then punched 299. That was probably a worthless attempt. It’s early a.m. — he’s not going to wake-“
Kent felt a hard punch to her right face. “What are ya doing, bitch? Keep away from the phone!” Freddy roared, still straddling her. “No, guys. I’ll tell you how we do this. We tape her mouth shut, then get our rocks off with her. Then we take her out in the skiff, to deep water. Her hands and feet will be tied, and we attach that 50-pound anchor to her, and drop her down. Next day, James talks about how his lover went out for a midnight swim, and got caught in the riptide again. See? Perfect story.”
“Dude, that’s ludicrous. Get off of her.”
“Stu!” Freddy cried. “C’mon, man!”
Kent used the moment to put all of the strength she had in a knee thrust into Freddy as he straddled her. He grabbed his groin with an "ARRGH!" and fell to his side. She jumped out of the bed the opposite way and ran to the far wall, to the side door of the shack, fully naked. She grabbed for the doorknob — it was locked. She looked desperately for a latch, but then realized: this lock had to be key-opened from both sides. Gasping, she realized she was trapped, cornered.
Freddy was limping towards her, rage in his eyes. “You shouldn’t have done that, cunt.”
Ron yelled to his bud. “Freddy, you’re on your own on this one. I’m leaving. Come on, Stu.”
Suddenly the locked knob on the side door next to Kent shook, as if being keyed from outside. Then it turned, and came open. Stumpy Angelo came in, his tool belt around his waist. He scanned and evaluated the situation in a split second.
“What the hell are YOU doing here, monkey man?” bellowed Freddy.
“I gotsa call from dis-a phone,” replied Angelo. “I see what’sa goin’ on. Now keepa way from di Signorina. Alla you guys in biga trouble.”
“GYAAAH!” Freddy, now delirious with anger, bull rushed the Italian.
Angelo at once set his feet and leaned forward towards the charging chunk, simultaneously twisting his torso so that his left shoulder pointed to the floor as his right one arched upwards. As big Fred closed in, Angelo’s lanky right arm lashed out and grabbed him by the throat, pushing Fred’s head upward and stopping his momentum. Then the lower arm looped a blinding roundhouse punch into Fred’s abused crotch. The blow lifted the the youngster’s feet off the floor.
“HUKKK!” the big tough gasped, and fell onto the cement curled in a fetal position.
“Angelo,” Ron sniffed, “This was all Freddy and James. Stu and I had nothing to do with this.”
“You were-a leaving di scene offa crime witout doin’ notting to stop it,” accused Angelo.
Ron sighed, and pulled out a knife. “Please don’t force me to do this the hard way.”
Angelo pulled out a claw hammer from his belt. “Mano!” he yelled, and fast as lightning unleashed it at Ron. It hit exactly at the base of Ron’s palm with a POK, knocking the knife out of his hand.
“Stomacao!” A pipe wrench rocketed into Ron’s stomach, WHUDD. He doubled over in pain. He and Stu looked back at Angelo.
Angelo was now twirling two extremely long ice picks, one in each hand. “Testicoli,” he said menacingly.
Ron’s eyes widened. Stu’s upper lip quivered. Neither knew a lick of Italian, but it wasn’t hard to determine the next shots would be aimed at their testicles. Both of them dove out the front door, one running, one hopping away.
Freddy was still incapacitated, moaning and rocking. Angelo turned to Kent, with his eyes shielded so as to not see her nakedness. He whispered, “Hey dere, Signore Kent. You A-OK?”
“Thanks to you, Angelo. I’m amazed … how did you get here so fast?”
“Grabba you clothes and puta dem on, quick. I will make sure Frederico stay down.”
She got dressed in less than a minute. She and Angelo left the shack quickly.
“Angelo, what time is it?”
“Alamost 3 inna di morning.”
“I need to get to the Counseling Centre. Oh, Angelo. I have blown it big time. Just hours ago, my family was healed. Now I’ve destroyed us again.” She began to weep so hard it became difficult to walk. Angelo gently picked her up in his arms, and then trotted towards the complex.
He dropped her off inside Counseling Room One. “Remember, you need anyting at all — you aska me.”
“M-Marlene … what are you doing?” quivered Tina.
“I’m leaving, Kent. Leaving here, then leaving you. I’ll use the phones at the main complex to set up a private jet to pick up me, Tina, and Janis, and we’re getting out of here.” She spoke through anger and pain as she packed her bag.
“But Marlene — Mom. I just told you. I’m not your husband. I’m your daughter. I got seduced, because I was stupid and didn’t recognize it, and the beers didn’t help eith-“
“SHUT UP! That is the most asinine story I’ve ever heard! Not only do you cheat on me, but then you lie about it? That’s why I know — it’s over!”
“Please, Mom. Just come with me to the Centre. It’s 3 o’clock, and they’re gonna change us back. You’ll see it for yourself!”
“LIAR! GET OUT!” Marlene shut the door and locked the deadbolt, stranding Tina outside. “I’m contacting an attorney to draw up divorce papers as soon as I get home,” she shouted through the wood.
Tina felt lost. He sat down, nauseated. “OMG. I just killed Mom and Dad’s marriage.”
“Miss Tina,” came a whisper.
“Angelo?”
“Yes, itsa me. They all waiting for you atta di Centre.”
“Angelo … I’ve screwed up big time. Mom’s leaving Dad, and it’s all my fault.”
“Signorina — comma to di Centre. Hava som faith.” Angelo reached for Tina’s hand, and pulled him up. He then pulled him to the counseling center.
CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR
Girl-Kent was sitting on a couch as Man-Tina came into the room. Both were silent. Both had tortured, anguished visages. Kent knew she would have to tell her daughter what happened with James, but feared losing Tina forever. Tina meanwhile held his face in his hands, knowing he would forever live with the guilt of causing the imminent divorce of his parents.
“Are you both ready to undo the therapy?” Dr. Brand yawned as he entered, Dr. Rahne Ruiz behind him.
“Fine,” mumbled Tina.
“Yeah **sniff** I guess,” whispered Kent.
Rahne snapped to attention. “What’s happened? Just twelve hours afore, ye both were havin’ major positive breakthroughs. Tell me what’s wrong.”
Kent looked up, tears streaming down her face. “I can’t. It’s too horrible … too embarrassing. I’m so ashamed.”
“Wee one,” said Rahne stroking Kent’s cheek, “Yuir in a safe place. C’mon, blether it oot to me.”
“I’ll tell you guys what I did,” Tina volunteered. “I just drove Mom to divorce me — uh, you, Dad. And I feel like a piece of crap.”
Dr. Brand was now fully awake too, eyes wide as saucers. “Tina — how did that happen?”
The large form of Mr. Braxton started to shake as he -Tina - recounted the last few hours. By the end of the tale, tears were dripping down his cheeks and off of his generous nose, making his mustache and beard a matted mess.
“Daad,” he howled, “I’m — I’m so sorry. I’m so, so sorry. I’ve ruined everything. I wish I were dead!”
Kent sat silently. Then she stood, and slowly walked over to Tina. She took his huge head and wrapped her arms around it, cradling it against her right shoulder. This caused Tina to wail loudly, with jerking sobs; never had this male form looked so broken. The girl then began to whisper into the grown man’s ear.
“You’re forgiven, daughter. Shhh. Don’t worry. It will turn out all right — you’ll see. Thank you for being honest right now. I’m so proud of you for that. I love you, my sweet Tina, my firstborn. Don’t you ever wish you were dead. You are my cherished little girl — nothing anyone ever does can change that fact. Hold on to me. Let it out.”
Dr. Brand was standing back against the wall, smiling. Rahne was rapidly using up the nearby box of tissues.
Tina lifted his head, still sobbing. “Dad. You should have seen her, heard her voice. There’s nothing that will put this right. The only thing that could is if I could go back in time 6 hours or so — God, I would make sure that never happened.”
Kent laughed as she stroked Tina's head. “Yeah … I could use a 6 hour reboot myself. Maybe we can ask Angelo — he’s always saying “call me for anytin’!”
“What a great guy he is,” Tina sniffed, then chuckled. “Even if he is a little weird looking with those gorilla arms.”
“I’ve called them orangutan arms, they’re so long,” Kent nodded. “And as for being a great guy … Tina, you have no idea. He literally saved my life — again — tonight.”
Dr. Brand spoke up. “Kent. Talk about that. What went on with you this evening and early morning?”
“Excuse me, sir,” Tina interjected. “Do you mind switching us back first? I’ve had all I can handle living as a man. I’m a girl in my soul, and always will be. I want my body back!”
“Ditto for me! The sooner the better,” affirmed Kent.
Rahne and Brand looked at each other, and nodded simultaneously. The Scot lady produced two sheets of paper from a folder, and gave one to each Braxton in the room.
Tina looked around. “What about the table with the glass / mirror thing? Don’t we need that?”
“Nae this time,” Rahne answered. “Both o’ ye, like afore: read wha’ has been given ye, silently. Mean th’ words wi’ every fiber o’ yuir being. Then say th’ last word oot loud, wi’ yuir eyes closed.”
Tina looked at his paper. “I PRAY SINCERELY THAT I MAY RETURN TO MY FORMER LIFE, AND RETAIN THE LESSONS I HAVE LEARNED WALKING IN MY FATHER’S SHOES. AMEN.”
Kent had a similar paper. She had no trouble meaning every word with all the earnestness she could muster. “Amen,” she said with eyes closed.
“Amen,” said Tina, squinting his eyes shut.
“You may open your eyes, now.”
Kent opened his eyes. Yes, he was back in his manly form. Tall, muscular — he felt the power in his limbs that he was used to, that he’d taken for granted. Okay. One last crucial test. He thought of James. Nope, no lingering attraction. “I’ve got my heterosexual male brain back again. Hurray!”
Tina was similarly ecstatic. She imagined The Redhead, her breasts, her butt. Nothing happened inside her. “Yay! I’m back to normal too!”
Father and daughter, each as they should be, embraced. Then Kent joyfully twirled in a circle, swinging a laughing and squealing Tina with him.
“Now, you two,” Brand stated soberly, “We have some work to do. Kent, we need to salvage your marriage. It should not end based on a misunderstanding. And I haven’t forgotten that you need to open up about your night.”
Kent grabbed the male counselor by the shoulders. “Doc, can you and Rahne go to Marlene and explain the treatment to her? You’re the only ones she might listen to.”
“Kent. I am forbidden by the CEO to discuss this treatment with anyone except the involved patients, Dr. Ruiz, Angelo, and the CEO himself — “
“ATTENZIONE, tutti per favore,” bellowed a familiar voice.
All stopped talking as a breathless Angelo hopped into the counseling room.
“Mi scusi, mi perdoni, boss,” he heaved in big breaths, “but I gotsa news urgenti for di signore e signora.” Putting his big mitts onto his knees, the attendant took a few seconds to catch his air.
“Hokay,” Angelo suddenly stood. “I really hadda call ina my markers on dis. Itsa di most grande ting I ever ask di CEO for. But he approve it.”
Kent and Tina were blank-faced. “The CEO approved what?”
“Why, di goin’ back six hour in time,” he said. “You did indeed aska for dat, si, Signore Kent?”
“I — I guess I did? But Angelo — you weren’t even in this room,” Kent sputtered.
“I gotsa good orecchie,” he said, pointing to his ears. “Now: you guys areddy? Ifa you do dis, it must be righta now! It happen when I snappa my finger.” Angelo raised his hand.
“This — this is impossible,” Kent gasped.
“Dad,” said Tina, “we just traded bodies. Is anything impossible?”
“I guess not. Angelo! Will we be swapped again, or in our right-“
SNAP!
TO BE CONTINUED FRIDAY, JULY 19
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental
Tremendous thanks to Cyclist for beta reading and help!
If you've gotten this far, please leave a comment! Don't make me reach through the screen and tweak your nose!
Thanks for reading! Hugz - **Sigh**
"Oh darling ... I love you. I love you so much." James then opened one eye. "Erm ... how was that?"
Kent's eyes were red, and tearing. He had an anguished look on his face. "Yeah. That ... that's damn good," he whispered. "James, you want to know a secret?"
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Ultimate Empathy Therapy
Part 7 of 8
by **Sigh**
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CHAPTER TWENTY-FIVE
Tina found herself outside. She was in a shirt, shorts and shoes. Wait a minute. I’m still me — in my girl body. But if I really went back in time, wouldn’t I be back in Dad’s form?
She saw the pool area about a hundred feet in front of her. Walking down to it, she looked at the large decorative dial clock etched into the opposite wall of the pool. The arms on it showed the time.
9:25 p.m.; yeah, that would be about six hours before we got “sent back.” She grinned widely. My god — I lived in a man’s body for a few days, and now I’m a time traveler! This is so cool! I mean, it’s cool especially now that Mom’s not trying to divorce Dad, yet; now that I have a chance to set some things right.
“Hey there, beautiful.”
She turned to see James approaching her. He had his usual charmer smile on. “I took tonight off early in hopes you’d show up. Sam is covering for me at the bar. Shall we take up where we left off yesterday?”
Tina’s eyes narrowed as she cocked her head sideways. “Remind me. Where exactly did we leave off yesterday?” Dad … what were you up to?
James drew closer. “As I recall, we were at this point.” He pulled her into a passionate kiss before she could say WTF.
“MMmmph!” Tina finally broke away. “BACK OFF, Mister tongue! I told you the first day, I’m spoken for!”
James looked at her with a little confusion. “You seem a lot different. I thought they weren’t going to end that secret therapy until tomorrow — that’s what you told me. Looks like they did it a little early.”
I’m glad I stopped him when I did, thought Tina. Mercy, he can kiss. I almost got lost in it. “James … whatever I did with you the last few days, I need you to know that it’s over. I’m sorry, but this therapy may have caused me to, um, ‘lead you on’. I don’t want to interact with you any more this week unless it’s about you getting me an espresso.”
James sighed, still beaming his sexy grin. “Yes, ma’am. I won’t bug you again, unless you initiate it. But speaking of espresso — why don’t you let me fix you one of my ‘special reserve’ ones as a nightcap before you leave, my treat? I’ll make it decaf if you want.”
Hmmmm, Tina thought. What harm could just one espresso do? Then I’m going straight back to the cabana, into my bed and out of any potential trouble. “Okay. If you can make it quick.”
“Lightning fast, milady,” he replied as he hopped to the supply room behind the bar.
Tina kicked at the concrete of the pool area as she considered just telling her ‘wannabe’ paramour to forget it, and leaving. Then she lifted her head, and the bitter taste of gall filled her soul.
There, coming into the bar area, was The Redhead. The cause of all of her troubles tonight. Dressed just as Tina had remembered — “slut seductive.”
Tina walked with cold purpose to the bar. Sam, tending, started to tell her that he didn’t think she was of age for alcohol. Before he said a word, she spoke. “A big container of ice water, quickly, please.” She didn’t even look at him; her eyes were focused on the object of her enmity. Sam gave her a hurricane glass filled as she’d requested.
Tawny Bristol was disappointed. She’d come to the bar area because she was bored, and wanted some illicit fun. But there was not a man in sight. There was the older, stinky, dude behind the bar, but even she had standards. I wish that business exec guy was here; he looks like a stud.
“I have a theory about you,” a voice to Tawny’s side spoke. The auburn beauty looked up to see a teenaged girl sipping a cold drink. Looking closer, Tawny recognized who she was. “Hey — aren’t you that girl who almost drowned the other day? You look better,” The Redhead quipped.
Tina ignored the comment. “My theory goes like this. You married your hubby, but you got bored and started having affairs. Your physical beauty is so stunning, you can’t help but attract men, and you love it. Hubby tries to compromise in an attempt to keep you faithful; he even allows a third person into your marriage bed. But it’s not enough for you; you still sleep around. Eventually the two people at home who you’re cheating on begin to console each other and you start to lose both of them. Is that accurate, more or less?”
Miss Red-Hot squinted her eyes. “Where are you getting this information?”
Tina still didn’t acknowledge her; she just pointed to her ice water glass. “Oh, how I wish I’d had this to pour on my crotch when you seduced me earlier. But now, it’s of no use to me — “
“I seduced you? Baby girl, you need to cut down the amount of crack you’re snorting,” sneered Tawny.
“ — so I’m giving it to you.” With that, Tina emptied the tanker of icy fluid into Tawny’s cleavage. The bra continued to hold most of the ice there as the water continued down to drench her short shorts.
“HUUUAGH,” Tawny gasped.
So, I’m not the only one who says that when they’re doused with cold water, Tina mused.
“YOU FUCKING PSYCHO WITCH,” the drenched woman said as she stood and then walked quickly out of the pool area. “IF YOU WEREN’T A SCHOOLGIRL AND DIDN’T HAVE A HOT FATHER, I’D KICK YOUR ASS!”
“You STAY the HELL AWAY from MY DAD,” returned Tina as she watched her enemy leave.
James emerged from the supply room with a demitasse, spoon, and creamer/sugar/sweetener pods. “Well, here you go. I don’t know if you like it black, or what.”
Tina grabbed the espresso and the sugar. “I like it like I like my revenge: sweet,” she smiled.
“Well? What do you think?” James was eager for an evaluation of his work.
Tina licked her teeth and palate to savor the aftertaste. “Not bad, not bad at all. On a scale of 0 — 10, I give it a solid 6.”
“Just a 6?! That stuff is like liquid happiness — and really expensive, to boot!”
“I’m sorry, James,” Tina meekly answered, cheeks slightly red. “ It’s no cut down on you. I mean, it was perfectly prepared. I’m kind of an espresso snob, I guess — it takes a lot to impress me.”
“Wow. I guess I’m going to have to ‘up’ my java game a notch.”
“You want a secret? Go online and order some ‘Barefeet’ brand espresso beans. Your high-end customers will be impressed. That’s one of my favorites,” she offered. “Now …” Tina had to stop and yawn. “… whew! As I was saying, I’m leaving to go to my cabana and sleep, like a good little girl.”
“You do look a little tired all of a sudden,” he agreed. “If you want to take a nap on one of the lounge chairs, I’ll watch you.”
Her eyes narrowed. “Goodbye, James. Quit flirting. Others may get fooled by you, but you smell like a ‘playa’ to me. **yawn** If you approach me again — unless it’s to deliver me my ‘spresso — I’ll complain to the management and my Dad - **yawn** … got that?”
“Loud and clear, miss.”
“Good.” Tina started for the pool area gate. Once through, she started on the path back to her cabana. The way was intermittently lit by lights, so she shouldn’t have had much trouble negotiating it. It was an uphill trek, slightly. But for some reason, Tina had more and more trouble with each successive step. Her legs felt unbelievably heavy, and she was yawning every five seconds or so now.
God, I need to just sit down and rest for a second. I’m so tired. She tried to sit ladylike on the grass next to the trail, but instead went down on her butt — and then her back — with an awkward plop. My god — I’m acting like I’m drunk or something! But all I had was a mediocre espresso.
Her last fading thoughts were fueled by a horrid realization. No. No! It couldn’t have been … help!
The last thing she saw was James’ face over her, barely illuminated by the moonlight. “Hey there, hot thing,” he whispered. “I suspected you’d be needing a lift right about now. Let me give you one.”
CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX
It began as an irritated tickle in the lumbar area, barely noticeable. However, the tickle intensified over the next ten minutes into an ache. Finally, still mostly asleep, he tried to turn over in bed; perhaps changing positions would help.
FWUMP! Kent’s body hit face down on the underlying grass. Immediately he was fully awake, and rolled over quickly to get his bearings. Directly above him, partially silhouetted against the moon, a hammock twisted and shook as if laughing at his clumsiness.
Brushing grass and dirt out of his facial hair, he took a minute to orient himself. He didn’t need the full sixty seconds before he had adequately assessed the situation. He jumped up and ran to the girl’s cabana. Opening the door quietly, he looked at the beds his girls should have been occupying. Janis was there, but Tina …
He glanced around rapidly — there were some sweat pants on the chair next to the hammock. He put them on over his shorts. There were also some slippers. Forget them, I need my sneakers. He carefully entered his cabana and grabbed them, taking care not to wake Marlene. Back outside, furiously slapping on and tying the footwear, he formulated his plan.
Okay, so when I got sent back, I arrived in my male form. And when I arrived, I was asleep in that cursed hammock. How long have I been dozing? He checked his watch. Roughly 25 — 30 minutes have passed since I was due to get back, if the travel was six hours exactly. Since Tina’s not here, I need to make sure those creeps haven’t gotten her. Damn me to hell for not thinking — there were only seconds from the time we learned we’d be sent back and it happening, but I still should have thought to warn her about James, about the espresso!
He didn’t change out of the short sleeve undershirt he had on; breaking into a run down the path, he raced to the pool area.
Kent got to his goal. The water and bar was slow tonight, with one solitary couple embracing and kissing in one of the corners of the pool. The only other persons there were at the bar - the bartender, and an auburn haired woman with four empty shot glasses lined up in front of her.
Kent realized the woman as the voluptuous redhead he’d seen at the beach a few days ago. The one who had seduced Tina — somewhat — earlier tonight, before they switched back, before they were sent back 6 hours. She was wearing tight, white jeans, and a floral bikini top with an unbuttoned white blouse draping around it. The white clothes were bright and clean, as if she had perhaps put them on very recently.
Kent looked at the man behind the bar again; he recognized him as James’ line cook buddy.
“You,” Kent barked as he strode to the bar. “I think my 18 year old daughter was here within the last half-hour. Longhaired brunette, beautiful. Did you see where she went?”
The line cook, wearing a “Hi, I’m SAM” name tag, replied. “No, I ain’t seen no teenager ‘round here tonight. It’s pretty slow right now, just you and me and her,” as he thumbed over to the The Redhead. “You wanna drink?”
“What about James. Have you seen him?”
“It’s his night off.”
Kent towered over the ‘tender by at least six inches; it was time to cut to the chase. He leaned over the bar, grabbed Sam by the lapels and pulled him off of his feet, halfway over the bar. He grabbed the corkscrew off of the bar’s work counter and held it with his left hand in front of the cook’s vision, while suspending him half elevated by the collar with a strong right hand.
“Look. Let’s be real with each other. I know that you’re lying and covering for your friend, James. So instead of wasting more time, here’s how it’s going to go. I will ask you questions; for every evasion or lie, I will remove a cork-sized chunk from your body. We’ll start with your neck.” Kent put the point of the corkscrew against the barkeep’s jugular.
The smaller man was sweating profusely now. James was his buddy, kind of — but not worth being beaten up over. “N-no problem, sir. I’m sorry for lying. Here’s what happened.”
Kent found out that Tina was given an espresso, started to look sleepy, left for bed, and that James had followed her.
“Thank you for your cooperation,” Kent said through clenched teeth. “One more thing you need to know. I’m going to go get my daughter; if you call and warn James — if you interfere in any way — I will come for you. With a bigger corkscrew.”
“I won’t warn. This is between you and him. Just leave me out of it,” Sam quavered.
Kent let go of him. But before he could turn and leave, he felt some lithe arms wrap around him from the behind. Who …? Aw crap. The redhead; and she’s ‘well lubricated’, per all the empty shots on the bar.
“Hey, hannsome. I need someone to talk to, like really badly. Care to help out a damsel in distressss?” She pressed her huge breasts into Kent’s back from behind.
“NO. Get off me, lady.”
“Awww, c’monnn.”
“Hey, drunk chick. I said, GET OFF.”
“NOPE. Nope, I won’t,” she giggled. “Not until you siddown and talk to me. Or, kiss me. Those ‘r yer two choices.”
What do I do now? I can’t hurt her, like with an elbow shot to the ribs; she’s not assaulting me, she’s just slowing me down. And I HAVE to LEAVE! I HAVE TO FIND TINA NOW! GRAAAAAH!” — he could feel his rage taking him over.
No! Gain control! Blue Morpho, Blue Morpho. Kent felt his heart rate drop, and an idea sprouted in his new calm. If I can’t beat her, I’ll pretend to join her.
“Okay, Miss Sexy. Let’s talk.”
“Oh, yay! Thank you, Mister Hunnky.”
She loosened her grip, and he turned around to face her with a gentle smile. In one swift motion, he picked her up by the legs and back, as if carrying her like a bride over the threshold. He then walked towards the pool lounge chairs. “There’s two things I’m dying to tell you, Miss …?”
“Call me Tawny, hunny,” she said, with as much sensuality as her inebriated self could muster.
“Okay, Tawny. Two things. One, I’ve seen you in your full bikini; you really are one of the most physically stunning women I’ve ever met.”
“Wait ‘til you see me without my ‘kini,” she breathed.
“And two,” Kent ignored her while turning at a right angle, “You need to know this …”
“What, lover,” Tawny whispered.
“You don’t hold a candle to my wife in her Victoria’s Secret.” And with that, he dropped her. Into the pool, which he now stood at the edge of.
He took two steps back, watching to make sure that she broke the surface again. She did, cursing and splashing, her wet red hair covering her whole face like ‘Cousin It’ from the Addams Family. “BASTARD! SONUVABISH! FUCK YOU!”
Kent smiled. That’s for Tina, you shameless hussy. Now, to find my daughter.
Just then a different female voice sounded, from behind him.
“KENT!”
He turned to see a shocked Marlene. She had one hand covering her mouth, the other wrapping with her arm holding her stomach. But despite her attempts at self-restraint, she began smiling, then laughing, then guffawing.
Kent approached her, relieved; he’d worried at first that she’d misunderstood what was happening.
“You don’t think that was a little extreme?” Marlene giggled.
“Actually, no, I don’t, honey.”
“Me neither,” Kent’s wife whispered to him, grinning widely.
Kent held his spouse in his arms. “I love you so much. I want to show you how much. As soon as — “
Marlene’s brow fretted. “But the therapy …”
“Is over, honey. And I can’t wait to make passionate love to you. But first, I have to find Tina and get her to safety.”
She frowned. “What’s going on with our oldest?”
“I think that she’s in trouble; I think James has her.”
“But Kent — isn’t that what we wanted to happen? To maybe have a fling with James or some other boy here, to break Mitch’s spell?”
“Honey, I’ve just found out tonight — James is worse than Mitch, even. He drugs his girls and date rapes them. But I think I know where they are, and I’m going there.”
“I want to come with you, to help.”
“No, Marlene. James has friends that like to get violent — the three groundskeepers. It’s too dangerous. Just go back to our cabana, and call Angelo and tell him to get himself and security to James’ shack right away. Then wait for our return.”
“Honey — you may be going up against four young, strong men by yourself!”
“Mar — this is our daughter we’re talking about. If I fail, she gets hurt, or worse. So I’m NOT going to fail. Not with that to motivate me. Please believe me — I’ve got to go, now!”
The worried wife and mother quickly assessed her husband, the resolve in his eyes, the desperation in his voice, the strength of his body. She’d never known him to not succeed when he was this focused. He could defeat a small army with the force of his will.
She smiled. “Okay. I’ll call Super Mario. Go get her, honey.”
That was all he needed. As they bounded out the exit of the pool area, she broke in a run to the cabana, praying silently as she ran. God, protect our daughter. Protect my husband. And thank you for reminding me to pack my Victoria’s Secret lingerie.
Kent ran the path he’d remembered James taking him down earlier when he’d been in Tina’s form. He was trying to formulate a plan of attack as he did so. Being slightly distracted, and without much light to guide him, he didn’t notice an object just to his left. His shoulder grazed it, and he almost fell from being thrown off balance.
He glanced back to see what the object was. From this angle, it was more visible; the golf cart that the three landscapers used to carry them — and their tools — around. One of the tools in it was a big shovel. Kent went to grab that, and while doing so noticed the keys lying on the seat of the cart.
Seconds later, the cart was bounding over the manicured landscape, its electric motor barely making a sound. Kent had his plan now. He had seen how these punks fought, their strengths and weaknesses. He had seen them beaten by a funny looking Italian. Like Tina said yesterday: Time to kill some toads, he thought. Please let me get there in time.
CHAPTER TWENTY-SEVEN
Freddie, Ron and Stuart sat inside the small shack.
“Where is he? I’ll bet he screwed up. She probably just blew him off,” Freddie grumbled.
Ron was lying on the bed; he replied with his eyes closed. “Patience, my friend. James is the slickest con man I’ve seen when it comes to women. You can’t rush these things.”
On cue, the shack door shook as if being knocked. Except it was being kicked. All three hoodlums jumped to their feet; Stuart hopped to the door on his good foot, and cracked it open, peeking to see who it was.
“James! Finally, dude!”
In walked the Isla’s bartender, carrying a comatose young girl over his shoulder. He was gasping for breath. “Man … that half mile walk’s … a lot harder … with a load like this.”
“You wimp,” sneered Fred as he took the young woman’s limp body from James. Transferring her to the bed, he added, “You shoulda let me go with you and carry her. She don’t weigh nothin’ to me.”
“Except you’re about as quiet and discreet as a drunken elephant,” sighed Ron. “No, this was James’s job, all the way. Since he’s out of breath, we’ll let him go last.”
“Hold it …” James gasped. “First … where’s my … payment?”
“Right here,” Stuart said, shaking a big freezer baggy filled with smaller ones. “I’ll leave it on your window sill for the moment.”
Freddy was already shedding his clothes. “Hot damn! Whatta set of tits! I can’t wait to feel ‘em.”
“Dude,” said Stuart. “All you gotta do is get your dick in her, not get nekkid.”
“Fuck you! I want the full feeling of her raw bod next to mine.” Fred was now fully nude. He rubbed his hands together as he stood at the foot of the bed. “First, these.” He grabbed her sandals and pulled them off. “Now, the good stuff,” he drooled as he began to unbutton her shorts.
KRAK!
All four boys turned to the front door and saw that it had been kicked in. Standing there was big Kent, wielding a shovel as he had been the last time they had seen him.
“Back away from her and let me take her home, and I won’t kill you. This is your only warning,” he roared.
Stuart looked to their leader, Ron, for direction. Ron pulled out a knife. But before he even had it securely grasped, the sharp edge of the shovel came down blindingly fast on his hand, shearing the skin and producing blood. Ron dropped the knife and was about to yell in pain when the back of the spade slammed into his face, flattening his nose with a WHUNGCH.
As Ron fell unconscious to the floor, Stu dove for the dropped knife. He saw from the corner of his eye — the shovel was being swung like a baseball bat, down towards him. He put up his arm to protect his head and block the blow; before the big tool could be redeployed, he would stab the old man and end this.
But the shovel didn’t hit at the head, or the torso. Instead it tore into Stuart’s swollen ankle. The boy screamed and rolled around on the concrete floor, clutching his foot, essentially neutralized.
“GYAAAAH!” Kent turned at that sound; sure enough, it was Freddy, charging like a rhino. Predictable. The older man dropped the shovel, set his feet, and turned his shoulders perpendicular to the ground, Angelo-style.
In the next second the nude thug felt his neck grasped and hyperextended, blunting his charge; followed by a knockout punch to his nuts. “HUKKK!” he gasped, dropping to the floor in a fetal position.
“Don’t move. Don’t come near me, or I’ll slice her.” It was James. He had picked up that knife that Ron and Stu had failed to use, and he held it against Tina’s neck. The bartender now held the upper hand — yet he looked scared to death as he and Kent locked eyes.
If you can’t beat him, pretend to join him, Kent thought. He sat down on the solitary chair in the place, and kicked his shovel to the side. “Actually, I wasn’t planning on pounding you, James. Unlike these three thugs, you look to me like a lover, not a fighter. I’m not angry with you so much as impressed. Tina doesn’t fall for just anyone. How do you do it?”
“How d-do I do what?”
“How do you win girls over? I’ve heard they fall for you by the dozens. You’re a real Don Juan. It’s got to be more than just the words you use; how do you get them to believe that you’re sincere?”
James was agape. Out of all the possible interactions he could be having with Tina’s dad right now, this was the last he would have expected. “What? Why do you want to know?”
Kent remained sitting but leaned forward. “Come on, James. I am a businessman, and successful; every out of town trip I take, I have women throwing themselves at me. But I’m tired of those easy lays. I want to snag the very top women, the ones who turn their nose up even at me,” he lied. “The supermodel. The happily married ‘uber-MILF’. The wife of a head of state. I want that thrill, but I need to know your gift, and see how you use it. Teach me how you act out ‘being in love’ so convincingly.” He then leaned back in the chair, an expectant look on his face.
James looked bewildered. “Ah … well … the main-“
“Oh, by the way, you probably ought to take that knife away from my daughter’s throat. Because if you do hurt her, even accidentally, then I will have to kill you. Just sayin’.”
James carefully put the knife on the floor.
“Thank you,” Kent said. “Now please, go on.”
“W — well,” the boy stammered, “I think back to my first crush, and first kiss, how I felt I was in love. It really was just lust and infatuation, but it felt so true. I imagine I’m ‘in love’ again, and say the right words. And then when I kiss her, I’ve usually got her. It took a lot of practice to perfect the technique, but I think I can seduce most girls. Is that what you needed from me?”
“Almost. I need one more thing.” With that, Kent exploded out of the chair, tackling James before the knife could be picked up again. Kent now had him pinned up against the back wall. “You should have just run,” Kent snarled. “I wouldn’t have followed you. All I wanted was my daughter. But no, you had to put a knife to her neck.”
“Let me go, man!” James struggled to get free.
“Tell me you love me, James,” Kent proffered in a low voice.
“WHAT?!”
“Close your eyes and pretend like I’m a girl you’re trying to seduce. Give me your best stuff.”
“YOU’RE CRAZY! I-I’M NOT GAY!”
“Oh, I know that very well. But I’m not letting you down on the ground ‘til you do it. Pretend that I’m a hottie, and you want to seduce me. I know you can.” Kent pressed James’s back into the wall even harder.
James swallowed hard, and closed his eyes. His face relaxed, and a slight smile arose on his lips. “Baby,” he whispered, “I’m afraid. I’m afraid to hold you, to kiss you; because I’m at the precipice. I feel like I’ll fall in love so deep, I’ll be lost. I don’t know how you got to me, but you did; I don’t know how I can live without you. Oh darling … I love you. I love you so much.” James then opened one eye. “Erm … how was that?”
Kent’s eyes were red, and tearing. He had an anguished look on his face. “Yeah. That … that’s damn good,” he whispered. “James, you want to know a secret?”
“Wh-what’s that?”
“YOU BROKE MY HEART, YOU SON OF A BITCH!” Kent buried a punch deep into James’s solar plexus — the blow made the boy pass out. The bearded man, sobbing with raw emotional pain, then turned and walked back to his sleeping daughter. After a few seconds he composed himself; gently picking up Tina, he walked through the human flotsam on the shack floor, and outside.
As he walked out, Angelo trotted to him from the side, three large Scandinavian female security officers in tow. “Signore Kent. You and di bambina hokay?”
“I sure could have used you a few minutes ago,” Kent replied as the guards entered the shack, restraint devices in their hands. “You weren’t as quick as the last time I called. Wait, - you DO remember ‘last time’, right?”
Angelo’s eyes twinkled. “Sure do. Di first time was when you wassa here in you daughter’s form. Nottin’ big gets done here on di Isla witout me an’ di dottores are in on it.
“So. Using last time as a guide, you probably could have figured out that James was going to go after my daughter. Want to tell me why you didn’t just stop it at the pool, before Tina could be drugged by this creep?”
“Drogare? He usa that?” Super Mario seemed surprised.
“Yes, he does. I’m amazed you didn’t know that, Angelo. I’ve come to expect that around here, you know it all.”
“Ima sorry, signore. I did not know James usa di farmaci stuff. I know a lotsa tings, but not everytin’. I thoughta you daughter would just — how it said? ‘Blow offa’ — di creep atta di pool, an’ all be hokay. But it looka like you no need me after all, si?” The Italian smiled wide and slapped Kent’s back, knocking the breath out of him. “BEL LAVORO! Atta mean ‘good job’, amico!”
TO BE CONTINUED SUNDAY, JULY 21
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is completely coincidental.
Tremendous thanks to Cyclist for beta-reading and help!
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"That's quite a coincidence," Tina wondered with increasing alarm. "Mom? Please tell me that it's just a coincidence!"
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Ultimate Empathy Therapy
Part 8 of 8 (conclusion)
by **Sigh**
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CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT
Marlene and Kent didn’t spend any time together in bed that night after all. Mom stayed right by her daughter’s side in the medical clinic, making sure there were no problems; the RN observed her closely too. Dad spent the night trekking between the girl’s cabana (to check on Janis) and the clinic. It was 5 p.m. the next day before Tina began to awaken; thankfully, there were no apparent lingering effects of the ‘roofies’.
That evening, Dr. Brand spoke with shock and regret about what had occurred — in both the initial and the "6 hour do-over" rounds of the previous evening’s events.
“I’m so sorry for what happened, Mr. and Mrs. Braxton. Everyone here is praying for Tina, and for all of you. I want to offer you a full refund for your family’s stay here, and to pay for any subsequent treatments that are needed to check on Tina. Dr. Rahne Ruiz and I feel horrible about this. Although we’ve had ‘incidents’ the last forty years, none have come close to what happened just now.
“We hired James two months ago, and did the background checks; he turned out clean. About a month after the time he came on, our grounds crew — a family — all took off for greener pastures. We got Fred, Ron and Stuart off of a tip from James, who had known them previously. All four are the worst hiring decisions we’ve ever made. Although (as you’ve found out) we are powerful, we are obviously not infallible.”
Kent smiled. “I was waiting to see how you would respond to what happened, and I’m thankful to see you really care. You know, Dr. Brand, I’m the CEO of a large company. I’m aware of how the behavior of one or two hires can sink the largest ship. Also, the counseling and this ‘UET’ — even with all of this bad crap from last night — has indeed helped me, and my relationship with Tina. So forget the refund for the stay; I want to see this place continue to exist, to help others like us. I will take you up on the offer to pay for Tina’s medical follow-up, though.”
Although the Isla was privately owned, in governmental matters it was under the umbrella of the Bahamas. The four bad boys were sent there for holding and eventual trial, an overwhelming bevy of evidence against them. A fifth man, Sam, had also been charged initially, but he plea-bargained with the government; he would go free in exchange for his damning testimony about James. New groundskeepers — Nguyen, Ashley, and N’kundu — were quickly hired, and a new bartender — Isaac — was found.
Except for Janis and her kleptomania sessions, the Braxton family was given a reduced formal counseling schedule. Drs. Brand and Ruiz just asked them to attend one session a day, followed by an “exit interview” on Saturday,. “The rest of the time,” Brand had told them, “should be ‘vacation’ therapy.” Marlene and Janis were still “in the dark” about the mind switch; after Tina’s reveal of it to Marlene was rejected on that horrible night, it was felt to be better left alone.
The Thursday session of counseling featured Kent getting with Dr. Brand, and Marlene with Dr. Rahne.
“Anything you think you’ll take away positive from this place, Kent? I hope that the negative that’s happened will fade into the background,” hoped Brand.
“Positive? Absolutely. Tina and I seem closer than ever. And I’m trying to remember your instruction about humility — it’s a lot easier to be 'meek' since the UET experience. That really blew a hole in my pretentiousness ... it hurt, but I needed to be brought down a peg.”
“Besides having to be a daughter and obey parents, and being in a smaller weaker body, how specifically did you feel humbled?”
Kent shook his head at the memory. “That night when I got seduced by James — I thought only a ditsy bimbo could fall for a the lines I fell for. I mean, I swallowed them hook, line and sinker. And Tina didn’t get fooled by his tricks on the “re-boot” — except for the drugged coffee, and that was my fault for failing to warn her.”
“I’m proud of you, Kent. It takes a big man to admit a mistake like that. And admitting a failing is the first step to making sure it never happens again. Is there anything else good you’ve gained here?”
“Well, I have actually enjoyed having someone — you — to call me on my bullshit. I’m going to miss that when I leave here. I need a 'peer-mentor' in my life for that, to be a ‘third eye’ that sees what I cannot see that easily. I don’t know a good person to do that with — it would take a brave soul. After all, I can be pretty intimidating, even without realizing it.”
“May I make a suggestion for someone to fill that role?” Brand picked up the phone in the counseling room, and punched three numbers. He put the handset down in its’ cradle.
Rahne entered the room, with Marlene in tow. Brand pointed towards Mrs. Braxton. “Kent, may I present to you the best candidate for your ‘third eye’, your ‘external conscience’. Rahne has been talking with her about this, and we both feel your spouse has the prerequisite qualities to make a good ‘peer mentor’.”
“I haven’t been too keen on giving you advice, honey, because you haven’t been too keen on listening to it,” spoke Marlene as she stroked his hand. “But I feel I have a lot to offer you, both for our family and even your work.”
Kent considered this. “But Mar — you aren’t really involved in the complicated business strategies I deal with every day.”
“I’m far from an expert in business, honey. But I feel I’m the world’s best expert on Kent Braxton. I can see when your thinking is influenced by stress, anxiety or anger. I’ve noticed also that when you have someone to just listen to you and hear you as you talk out a problem, that you are eventually able to figure out the solution. I’d like a chance to be all of those things to you.”
Kent appeared just a hint skeptical … but as he examined the look on his wife’s face, he remembered her qualities. Her ability to calm his anger, her ‘sixth sense’ about her family, her wisdom in even setting up this trip and therapy in the first place. “I can’t believe it. So much help for my life has been right in front of my face for years, and I’ve not seen it. Please forgive me, Marlene. Would you give me the honor of being my advisor?”
Marlene was hugging his neck before he even finished the sentence. “Honey — it would be a dream come true for me!”
Kent hugged his wife tightly as he turned his head to the two counselors. “Can you guide us in how to get started?”
Rahne replied. “Kent, t’would be our honor and pleasure.”
CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE
‘Vacation therapy’ seemed to relax the Braxton family, and they actually opened up to each other more.
Friday was a calm day at the Isla’s beach; no riptide warnings. Marlene and Janis frolicked in the waves. Tina was sunning, while Kent relaxed in the shade under an umbrella on the sand. He was perusing a John le Carre spy thriller. What a treat, he thought. The last few years I’ve been so work-focused that all I’ve been reading are the latest business gurus.
He heard the sand shifting beside him. Looking to his right he saw Tina, who was relocating her towel to just outside the shadow of the umbrella.
“Mind if I sun here, sir?”
“I’d be honored if you did, young lady.”
“Can we talk while I tan? I mean, I don’t want to interrupt if you’re in a suspenseful part of your novel.”
Kent put the book down. His daughter — estranged to him for most of the last year — wanted to talk to him. Nothing else in the world right now was more precious. “What’s on your mind, honey?”
“A few things. First — does Mom ever call you bad names? Like, Mo-Fo?”
“What?? This is Marlene we’re talking about here,” he said. “She gets red-faced if she says ‘damn’ when she jams her toe.”
Tina continued. “When Mario was saving you from drowning, she called me a blue Mo-Fo about five times. She said she did it because I was getting angry about you disobeying.”
Kent reared his head back in guffaws. “Blue MORPHO,” he snickered. “It’s a butterfly she reminds me of to calm me down.”
“OH. Well, that had a simple answer. Well, on to topic two.” She remained on her back, facing the sky, appearing calm; yet, her voice hesitated. “I need to know what happened.”
“You mean, when James drugged you. I got there just before any of them could — “
“No, no. Not that. You got to hear the dreadful thing that happened between that redhead and me — when I was still in your body. But I never got to hear about what you did — the thing you said was horrible, that you were too ashamed to talk about. I need to know what happened. Fair is fair.”
“Oh, no,” Kent sighed. “Honey, I’m so afraid to tell you. Yes, it was terrible — a terribly wrong thing for me to do. I’m afraid that when you know, you’ll never want to be around me or speak to me again. And that would destroy my heart.”
“Daddy.” Tina’s left arm reached out and took hold of Kent’s hand. “Nothing that ever happens will change the fact that I love you, and will always be your daughter. I will always love you, even if you hurt me, even if I hurt you. It’s called unconditional love. I learned it from my mother, and more recently, from my father.” She smiled from beneath her sunglasses. “I’ve got some pretty cool parents, y’know.”
Kent was broken by his daughter’s loving gesture. He awkwardly confessed what had happened between James and him before the mind switch was reversed. The petting at the pool, the multiple sexual acts, all of it. He didn’t get graphic with his descriptions, but he left no sin hidden.
Tina was silent for a minute after he finished. She then cleared her throat, betraying the fact that she’d been slightly crying. “Ah … Dad. Are you still in love with him? I mean, even after the switch back?”
“Tina … it was never ‘love’. Not love like your mom and I have, one where we trust each other, where we’re each other’s safe place, as well as being each other’s passion partner. What it was, was the most intense emotional infatuation I have ever felt. Feelings like that won’t last, for anyone. But I confess I wasn’t prepared for the overwhelming rush. It overcame my rules, my common sense, my loyalty to my wife and daughter; it completely fulfilled me — temporarily — and at the same time it destroyed me.
“No, I don’t feel any love or even attraction to him, not after the switch back to this body. But believe it or not, his betrayal of me still aches my heart — in a small way.”
Tina nodded. “That’s what I felt — and still feel — with Mitch. I am hurt by his cheating, but the love I feel for him … I can’t get over it … I can’t live without it. Do you understand me now?”
Kent looked at his daughter. “Yes, honey. Yes, I think I do. I judged you harshly for falling prey to your emotions, but I think your brain and body feel emotions much more intensely than I ever imagined. I’ve been thinking about the ‘Mitch Sitch’, and I’m going to have a talk with Mom later today. Then, we’ll talk with you. But know this: the war between you and me is over. I surrender.”
“I do too. I think that makes us both winners.” She applied some more SPF lip-gloss. “Dad, do you think that pain — of James betraying you — will ever get better?”
“Every time I get intimate with your mother, it gets smaller, honey. One day soon I expect it to be totally gone.”
“Intimate with Mom. TMI,” laughed Tina. “So. I have another really shameful question to ask. This has to stay just between me and you.”
“Fire away, daughter. I doubt I can be more embarrassed than when I had to tell you about James.”
Tina took a big breath. “How … how was it, for you? Sex as a woman, with James. Did you … you know? Was it better than it is as a man? I’ll tell you what I think if you tell me.”
Kent swallowed hard. “I stand corrected. This is a LOT more embarrassing. I can’t believe that this is even an appropriate father-daughter topic.”
“Dad. You are the only person in the world I can talk to about this. And after what we’ve been through, what’s inappropriate?” Tina was laughing again.
Kent gave in. “Okay. As a girl it was … different. It built, and built, and built until it then tumbled over me, pulse after pulse. It was fantastic. But it’s fantastic to me as a man, too; just over a lot quicker. The thing I hated was being out of control, of being at the mercy of this guy. I like being in control.”
“Really? Just surrendering, letting myself be taken, is one of the things I like about being a girl.” Tina looked at her father; his cheeks looked sunburnt. “Uh-oh,” she whispered. “TMI?”
“Uh, yeah,” Kent admitted. “How — um — did you feel about what The Redhead did to you?”
“I was overtaken. Not with emotion, but with raw bodily lust. I tried to leave, but your body and hormones wouldn’t let me. The climax was — well, the most intense five seconds of my life. I think if it could last for thirty minutes, I’d like guy sex more. But five seconds? SO not worth it.”
“I see, I see, honey. Interesting. So, anything else you want to tell me?”
“Nope, Dad. That’s pretty much it.”
“So, this topic is over and done with for all time, then?”
“Yep.”
“Thank God.”
CHAPTER THIRTY
Later that night, Tina prepped for bed. Janis was already asleep. Tina spat out her toothpaste and rinsed her mouth. She pulled out her nightgown, and got ready to take her top and skirt off. The cabana door cracked open at that minute.
“Tina honey,” Marlene breathed. “Are you still up? Can your father and I talk to you out here for a minute?”
In the balmy evening breeze, daughter and parents sat on the grass. The father started the discussion. “Tina. From our conversation earlier today, you still feel you love Mitch, right?”
“I don’t feel like I love him; I do love him.”
“And your plan is to graduate, then get a job and move out from under us, and have Mitch move in with you, right?”
“That’s the plan.”
“What about college?”
“I guess it’ll just have to wait. If I have to work full time to live with Mitch, I’ll have to sacrifice college. In reality, I’ll have to probably work one and a half jobs just to make ends meet, until Mitch can get steady work. Mom, Dad: why can’t you just let me live at home, and have Mitch move in to my room?”
“Mitch and Janis,” Marlene cut in, “are like oil and water. Don’t forget that we still have that restraining order on him at our property; that’s because he threatened your sister. She’s scared to death of him. That’s the main reason we can’t allow it.”
Kent took it from there. “We know that you’re an adult now, Tina. So we’re going to start treating you like one; you make your life choices, and we will help you all we can. We will only refuse help if we think it will hurt you. So consider this proposal.
“When we get back home, I will find and rent an apartment for you to move into. You may have Mitch move in if you so desire. I’ll pay the rent — until you graduate from college, or turn 25, or get married. Whichever occurs first.”
Tina gasped. “REALLY?”
“There are some conditions you should know about. One is, you use birth control — unless you get married, then you can do what you want with that. We’ll pay for your contraception as long as you’re single. Another is, any damage done to the apartment — by you or Mitch — you will be liable for. You will need to sign a contract with us in that regard. And thirdly, after you graduate in a few months, we’ll pay for your college tuition and expenses — but if you choose not to go to college, you will need to find work to pay for your lights, food, etc. We’ll still pay your rent, as I said earlier.”
“Okay …” Tina looked suspiciously at her father. “You’ll support me, unless I get married. That sounds like an incentive for Mitch to never marry me. Is that what you’re trying to accomplish?”
“No, honey,” Kent implored. “I just feel that if a man and woman marry, it’s up to them primarily to support themselves. Marriage is an adult decision, and carries adult responsibilities. That’s always been my stand, with both you and Janis.
“However, I do feel it would be more appropriate for you and Mitch to live together for a while before marrying, just to make sure things work out. You don’t have to do that, of course; you can get married anytime you wish. But I am going to sweeten the pot a little. If you wait at least one full year to marry Mitch — a year starting from the time we get back home — then I will give you the princess wedding of your dreams. It will put all of those wedding divas on TV to shame. If you choose to marry him before then, I’ll give you $10,000 to do it with, that’s all. You still can have a nice, small, simple ceremony with that. No manipulation here, we just don’t want you to rush into things. And no matter what, we will love you, and accept whomever you choose. What do you say?”
Tina’s hand shot out to shake her parent’s. “Deal.”
The counseling had been completed. It was time for the “exit interview”. Only Tina and Kent showed to meet with Drs. Brand and Ruiz for this.
“We heard tha’ ye had tae do a conference call to th’ states on Friday regardin’ yuir company, Kent,” remarked Rahne Ruiz. “Did th’ discussion go well?”
“Yes. Robert, my second-in-command, had brushed back most of the takeover threat by the time I spoke with the shareholders. He told me that my ‘pep talk’ I gave him a few days earlier gave him the confidence he needed to handle most of the problem,” he said with a fond glance at Tina. “My conference call sealed the deal. I just have to do some mop up work when I get back … you know, kill a few toads.”
“Excellent! Now, do ye have any suggestions aboot wha’ we can do better as a therapeutic experience?” asked Rahne Ruiz.
Tina coughed. “Um — Dad and I have a theory about this place. Can we discuss it with you two?”
“Mayhaps,” Dr. Rahne Ruiz frowned. “Wha’ is it?”
Kent smiled. “We were hoping you could tell us that … Mr. Roarke.”
Mark Brand and Rahne glanced at each other with a knowing look.
Tina saw that look, and jumped up and down. “I knew it! I knew it! This has to be Fantasy Island, right? Mark Brand — two words that are synonyms for ‘Tattoo’. Except you’re the tall boss, not the short underling. And Rahne, you’re a Scottish woman with a Hispanic surname instead of a Hispanic — Ricardo Montalban — with a Scottish-Irish type name. I still don’t know how Angelo fits in with the TV show, but we’re right about this place, aren’t we?”
“Angelo’s been here only twenty years; when he came, the TV show had long ended,” said Brand.
“Okay, ye two,” sighed Rahne. “Wha’s said here, stays here. Just open yuir mind, and imagine. Imagine tha’ angels really exist, and tha’ there’s really a God tha’ they work for. Now suppose tha’ two angels forty years back came tae God with a proposal. This angel pair had a desire to heal human relationships, mainly. So they set up a place tae get tha’ done, all with the okay o’ God — he’s the CEO. It had been set so th’ wealthy pay full price, th’ less wealthy pay less, and the poor get in free on scholarship. They set aboot to find some o’ the worst relationship crises around, an’ then send out information tae attract ‘em tae comin’.
“Now supposin’ that one o’ th’ first clients o’ this place was a television producer. Th’ angels didn’t want sensationalism associated with th’ place. If he later wanted to make a show aboot it, how could he do so discreetly? He’d have tae change some o’ the facts, as ye’ve discovered.”
“You both don’t look anywhere near forty years old, much less sixty,” Kent wondered.
“Angels tend to age very slowly,” Brand replied.
“Anyway,” Rahne continued, “both Mark and I continue tae operate this Isla. For a time, we remained th’ only two angels here; the rest o’ th’ staff are hired humans. Tis getting’ more pernickety, though — th’ world’s getting’ tae be rougher ‘n’ tougher, in my opinion. ‘Tis hard tae find good help, as all o’ us found oot th’ hard way. Th’ CEO, bless her, did send us a third, special celestial being — Mr. Angelo Giordano — twenty years ago tae assist us, though.”
“I notice you call your CEO — um, God — both ‘he’ and ‘she’,” Kent remarked. “Which is it?”
Brand smiled. “Everyone down here has imagined the boss as male, due to presupposed prejudices. The truth is, he/she is closer to both sexes mixed in one.”
“So God represents both sexes,” chuckled Kent while scratching his head. “On the way over from the airport, I had the androgynous person labeled as a weirdo, when actually he — or she, or she/he — is more representative of God than any of the rest of us!”
“Has Angelo been a huge help to you?” said Tina.
“He’s been an angel,” Brand shrugged.
“More than that, Mark!” scolded Rahne. “Angelo’s one o’ a special type, more powerful and privileged than us, even though technically we’re his bosses here. We — ‘n’ our guests — are blessed tae have him.”
Kent rubbed his beard. “Angelo Giordano. Angel … Guardian?”
“Guardian Angel,” Tina gasped.
“This place won’t last f’rever,” Rahne shrugged. “Still, we help who we can. We cannae save every starfish tha’ washes up on shore, but we throw as many back intae th’ sea as possible.. So — we need ye two tae be mum aboot th’ supernatural aspect o’ the Isla, as well as th’ Ultimate Empathy Therapy. Will ye?”
Father and daughter looked at each other, smiling. “Yes. We promise.”
“Thank you both so much for that,” said Brand. “To show our gratitude, consider both of yourselves eligible for a future free week here, with a free round of UET for each of you, to be performed with anyone else you wish — eh?”
Kent and Tina ran as fast as they could from that suggestion. They had blown out the door before Brand even realized it.
CHAPTER THIRTY-ONE
Most of the people on the cruise ship were up top on the main deck, waving goodbye as the ship pulled out of port. Marlene and Kent Braxton found that to be old hat. That’s why they were in the jazz bar, sipping on mixed drinks that their waitress just brought them. Keeping them company were Tina and Joe Willis, relative newlyweds, having married 10 months prior. Joe was Kent’s new son-in-law.
“I’m so excited”, said Marlene. “This is going to be such a great cruise. Four days at sea, then Oahu, Maui, Kauai, and the Big Island. What a piece of heaven it will be!”
“Honey, I don’t know how you keep finding these dream vacations, but you do,” admired Kent.
“Thanks for inviting us to come along, Mr. and Mrs. B,” said Joe. “I wish I could have helped out more with the expenses.”
“Joe, no worries,” replied his father-in-law. “You treat my daughter so well, and make her so happy. In that way alone, you’ve paid me more than I could ever reimburse you. I’m so glad it’s you that she married, and not Mitch.”
“Boy, me too,” agreed Tina. “Dad — allowing me to be able to live together with Mitch was the best move you could have made. It was hard to remain infatuated with him when I saw that all he did was eat, sleep, and avoid job-hunting as well as housework. Not to mention all of the porn watching, in spite of my attempts to keep him satisfied. God, how hard he tried to get me to bring in another girl for a threesome. When I came home from college freshman midterms and he had another freshman — a HIGH SCHOOL freshman — with him in our bed … well, that was the last straw.”
“His loss. My gain. Every day I wake up next to you, I’m amazed at how lucky I am to have you,” Joe said as he kissed Tina’s cheek.
“It’s too bad Janis couldn’t come,” sighed Marlene.
Tina took her mother’s hand. “I’m actually proud of her decision to stay home. She’s been through a lot the last four years — therapy for her kleptomania, remission, relapse, twelve months of jail. She said that coming on board a ship that has tons of jewelry, clothes, cameras, and drunken revelers with open purses — it would be too much of a temptation. She’s still required by her probation officer to attend three twelve-step sessions a week, anyway.”
“I agree, Tina,” added her father. “In the fall, I’m taking her hiking in the Adirondacks. Nothing to steal there but a breath of fresh air as one enjoys the magnificent scenery.”
Marlene nodded her head. “Just look at you two. Father and daughter. Speaking with love, respect, and understanding. Ever since you had that special therapy at the Isla, you have an outstanding relationship. It’s also made each of you a better person. Tina, you are much more mature, and less swayed by pure emotion while still passionate about your beliefs. Kent, you actually found some meekness, some humility, in your character. It has curbed that anger you once had, and has made you a much better father, husband — even businessman. Hannegill Enterprises has taken off like a rocket; I suspect it’s because your new management style reflects that humility.”
“The humble improve,” whispered Kent. "And don't forget, I have the best peer advisor in the world."
“Darling … it makes me a little envious of you and Tina,” Marlene confessed.
“What?” Kent’s head rose. “Honey — Tina and I are close, but no one is nearer to my heart than you are! You act as my third eye — I have gained so much insight into myself, and made so many more wise decisions since I learned to stop and seek your input.”
“But what if we could be even closer? What if we had gone back to the Isla and taken that special therapy, just you and me? Think of what bliss life could be, knowing that we would be as connected as it’s possible for two lives to be! Isn’t it worth just three to four hours of counseling a day for that?”
Kent fretted while trying to think of a response that wouldn’t hurt his wife’s feelings. Neither he nor Tina had ever told Marlene or anyone else about the true nature of the Ultimate Empathy Therapy, per Dr. Brand’s and Dr. Rahne’s request.
“Mom, you don’t understand what you’re wishing for,” Tina inserted. “Yes, the therapy helped me and Dad, but it literally almost killed us too. Neither of us would volunteer to go through it again — right, Daddy?”
“AMEN,” said Kent, making Tina suppress a giggle with a snerk.
Joe spoke up. “I don’t know, babe. I sure wouldn’t mind going through something like that with you. Your mom has told me about the radical improvement between you and your Dad. Why couldn’t it work for us? It’s just counseling, after all.”
Tina put a finger on her husband’s lips. “Lover — not a word more. You know not of the forces of which you speak.”
“Well, another Isla vacation isn’t possible anymore, anyway,” Marlene sighed. “I checked. The island was bought out from under them by a huge corporation; Isla Empatio Bonita no longer officially exists.”
“Aw no,” Kent groaned. “That’s too bad. That place was doing some good in the world.”
Marlene nodded again. “Well, it wasn’t a total loss. They just moved to a different base of operations.“
Kent tensed. “Which island did they move to? Honey — please, they aren’t now on a Hawaiian island, are they?”
“No, my husband. Not a Hawaiian island, nor any other stop on this cruise.” Kent and Tina both exhaled with relief at Marlene’s response.
Tina glanced to her right, where the drinks were being made. She cocked her head and smiled. “Everyone, look up at who’s tending bar! Isn’t that — what was his name, again — Oh! - Isaac?”
“Who’s Isaac?” said her mom.
Kent focused on the smiling black man with the handlebar mustache and the afro hairstyle. “Why, yes it is. Isaac was the man who took over bartending duties on the Isla when James got arrested. Well, how about that. I’ll walk over and say hello when it’s time for a refill.”
“Cool,” said Joe. “He kinda looks like Isaac the bartender from The Love Boat. I used to watch that on TV retro channels growing up.”
“I remember watching that show as a kid during its first run,” reminisced Kent. “It came on Saturday nights at 8 p.m., followed by Fantasy Is-“ the words caught in Kent’s throat. Suddenly suspicion and fear arose in his chest as he choked out a question. “What’s an ex-Isla employee doing working on this ship?”
“That’s quite a coincidence,” Tina wondered with increasing alarm. “Mom? Please tell me that it’s just a coincidence.”
Marlene smiled as wide as Texas. “SURPRISE!! They moved the Isla therapy team, not to another island, but to a cruise ship — this ship!” She clapped with excitement. “Kent, I signed you and me up for that treatment! They even said that there would be no cost for the therapy portion, because Dr. Brand had offered you a free round of — what is it — UET! Oh, honey!” She hugged her love. “Aren’t you excited?”
“I’m … I’m speechless,” mumbled her husband. He looked shocked, numb.
Tina had her hand over her mouth. “Mom — please tell me that you and Dad are the only ones you enrolled in the therapy. You didn’t sign me up too, did you?” Before Marlene could reply, Tina felt a tapping on her shoulder.
It was Joe. “They told your mom that you also had been offered a free week of that UET when you left. When I heard that, I thought it would be great to sign you and me up for it. So I did.”
“Babe — you WHAT!?”
“I’ve been hiding the surprise for four months now,” he cooed. “It’s such a relief to tell you. I can’t wait for us to develop more empathy. I want to know you inside and out, what makes you tick.”
Tina looked pissed. “Oh, you’ll find out all right,” she breathed in his ear. “Remember how, when we make love, I’m always telling you I want it rougher — and you keep saying you wish I could show you what I mean? Well, I’m REALLY gonna show you. You’ll learn to be careful what you wish for, and to let me in on all ‘surprises’ in the future.”
A rich bass voice broke into their conversation. “Here you all are! We only have four days at sea, so the UET begins this afternoon.” All four family members looked up to see a tall, huge black man in a sailing uniform indicating officer status. Beside him, also uniformed, was a woman with striking red hair in a pixie cut and a stumpy hirsute man with long arms and a curly mustache.
“Dr. Brand! Dr. Rahne! Angelo! It’s so great to see you all again,” squealed Marlene.
“Or is it Captain Stubing, Julie, and Gopher now?” mumbled Kent, head in his hands. “I’m not signing the waiver this time, so you all can go-“
“Ye don’t need t’ sign another waiver, Kent. Th’ ones ye and Tina signed four years ago are good for life. It’s in th’ fine print.”
Kent looked woefully at Marlene. “Honey, what kind of swimsuits did you pack?”
“Since I’ve been body sculpting for the last half year to get ready for the cruise, it made me want to show off a little. I’ve got three new string bikinis for the trip; I left all of those dumpy one pieces at home. I packed for the sun; halter tops, miniskirts, short shorts. Why?”
“I can tell I’m gonna be wearing the complimentary bathrobe a lot, “ the blushing man mumbled.
“Cheer up, Signore Kent. Puta a smile ona you face. I lika di look ofa string bikine.” Angelo was chuckling.
“Then you can wear it,” sighed the father.
“I don’t understand what you’re so dour about,” wondered Marlene. “We’ll only be in counseling for a few hours a day, and then the rest of the time we just enjoy the cruise. No work, no chores. We just relax and be ourselves.”
“In a minute, sweetheart, you’re going to find out how wrong you are. We’ll be anything but ourselves.”
Marlene cocked her head to the side, looking dumbfounded at Kent. “What?”
“Marlene and Joe pre-signed their waivers as part of the cruise paperwork,” Dr. Brand said. “Everybody, here’s your individual sheets of paper, with what you have to read and what you have to say out loud.”
“W-wait!” Tina cried. “This is all so fast — don’t we have to have that desk-with-a-mirror-in-the-middle thingie?”
“Tha’ was always joost for show, Lassie,” said Rahne.
Tina growled at her husband. “I’m on my period. Serves you right.” Joe looked perplexed, wondering what that meant.
“Mar,” pleaded Kent, “give some thought to us just staying in our room for the next 60 hours.”
“MMMmmm,” purred Marlene. “Are you saying you want to ravage me for three days straight?”
“Well,” he replied feebly, “Yeah. Or, you could ravage me.” Kent’s wife raised one eyebrow high in confusion.
“Everyone read all the words on your paper to yourself, silently,” thundered Brand. “Mean them with all of your heart.” He waited thirty seconds. “Now, on the count of three, all of you speak aloud the last word on your paper, with your eyes closed. One … two …”
THE END
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to an actual person or situation is purely coincidental
Tremendous thanks to Cyclist for beta-reading and help! Without you this would have been a piece of hack work!
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Weeping Willow
by **Sigh**
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15-year-old Bill is unable. Unable to obey, unable to live in peace with others, and ... unable to cry.
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Weeping Willow
Part 1
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2019 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
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15-year-old Bill is unable. Unable to obey, unable to live in peace with others, and ... unable to cry.
A 1975 burnt orange El Camino carefully wound its way through the well-kept roads of North Montanas, the “new money” area of El Paso. The old car seemed out of place in this part of town; it even moved like it felt anxious, hesitantly turning at forks, going only 21 to 24 miles per hour in a speed zone of 30.
“Please, God, don’t let me get pulled over,” the driver muttered. He’d already seen two North Montanas police cars, each idling at different spots. He was sure that the cops would find a reason to stop him – not signaling a turn, going too fast, going too slow, driving while latino – but amazingly both cruisers let him pass without any problem.
The houses here were big and pretty, all in the $1 – 2 million range; that provided for a nice home, though not enough for large acreage or huge fences and gates. The neighborhood had been erected over the last 5 years and its newest school, Montclair Senior High, was operational in its 3rd year now. They had an aggressive security and police force; gang activity had yet to gain much of a foothold here. The upper-middle-class denizens here hoped that this would always be so. El Camino boy was not in a gang, yet he knew his appearance might stereotype him as a member. Or at least it would if he was noticed by anyone; all of the yards were empty. Do these yuppies hate the outdoors? he wondered.,
Finally, he reached his destination – 4701 Las Hongas. This place was an exception to its neighbors; it sat in the middle of 10 acres, with an 8-foot wall around it. The driveway to the house was accessible only by a gate with an electronic code.
The Camino drove up to the keypad/voice speaker box. An arm extended out the driver’s window and punched the ‘call operator’ button. The speaker crackled, and a woman’s voice came on: “Hello? May I help you?”
The driver stuck his head out the side window to speak into the box. “Ah, Mrs. Eiken? I’m Bernard. Bernard Andujar. We’ve never met; I’m a friend of Willie’s. Can I see him?”
The box was silent for a few seconds, then: “You don’t mean William, my husband, right? By ‘Willy’ you mean my 15-year-old son Bill, correct?”
“Uh, yea. Willy – I mean, Bill –we know each other from Montclair High. When he went there, we were best buddies. That is, before –“
“I know very well what happened, Bernard. I remember hearing about you now. Bill is here, but we don’t allow him to interact with any of his friends who were involved in the trouble he had with the drugs and the law. I’m sure you know all of this already. So I’m sorry but no, you cannot talk to him.”
“Okay; um, can I give you something to give to him, then? I have a birthday present for him. I know his 15th birthday was last month, so it’s kind of late …”
Gwendolyn Eiken sighed as she stood in the foyer of her house, listening to Bernard through the speaker. She still looked far younger than her 38 years suggested, with a thin fit body and a long, layered blonde hairdo. The only things that betrayed her overall presentation were the eyes, framed with multiple wrinkles from the stress of the last few years. They squinted once more as she struggled with this new decision.
A present?! No. He simply needs to leave. Can’t he just take a hint?
“Hey, Mom. Who’s that?”
Gwen turned her head to see the second of her three children, a short muscular boy named Bill. For some reason, his school friends the last few years had taken to calling him "Willy". He’d walked up behind her undetected. “It’s no one, Bill. Get back to your reading, please.”
The crackly voice came through the speaker by her head. “Uh … Mrs. Eiken? You still there?”
Bill’s face lit up with recognition. “That’s … that’s Bernard! Mom, let me speak to him, please? He’s my best bud! Hey, Bern!” – he reached for the intercom panel.
“NO.” Gwen’s hand blocked the transmit button. “Now you know the rules! Go to your room while I finish telling him to leave.” She pointed down the hall.
Bill’s face screwed up in anger, yet also defeat. “My life is SHIT! THIS HOUSE, THESE RULES, THIS FAMILY – THEY ALL SUCK,” he shouted as he turned and stomped towards the bedroom wing of the huge house.
Gwendolyn turned back to the intercom and again pressed the speak button. “Bernard, I’m still here. Leave your gift right outside the gate. I’m coming down in the golf cart and I’ll get it right away. If I don’t approve of the gift, Bill won’t get it. Please leave before I get there.”
“Um, OK. Hey Mrs. Eiken; I’m sorry for my part in what happened. Helping him break the law and all. I’ve tried to go the straight and narrow since then. But I wanted to ask you to … um … forgive me?”
Out at the gate, the intercom box remained silent for almost 30 seconds, then: “I’m sorry too, Bernard. And I forgive you.”
Bernie’s voice rose in anticipation. “You … you do? Does that mean I can talk to him sometime?”
“No, it does not.” The steel in Gwen’s voice returned. “Forgiveness means I am not going to sic the police on you with that confession you just gave me. Nothing more. Goodbye, Bernard.”
When Gwen arrived at the front gate in her golf cart, Bernard and his El Camino were gone as requested.
Bill (“Willy” to all of his ‘playa’ friends) Ramos sat in his room and fumed. He needed to destroy something, but couldn’t figure out how to do so and not make his own life more miserable.
Shit I need to kick a hole in the wall or break out a window. Something so Mom knows not to diss my friends ever again. He grit his teeth and growled with futility. Yeah, right. And then get my axe taken so I can’t even jam on it. And she’ll STILL diss me or my friends whenever she feels like it.
As an alternative to carnage, Willy picked up his guitar – his “axe” – and turned on the power. He put his headphones on, as the speaker amp had been disabled. No matter. He turned the volume on the ‘phones up as loud as they’d go and started to riff in rapid, angry chords.
Gwen knocked on Bill’s door, but he didn’t hear it over the jamming. She carefully opened the door and took in the sight.
Her son had his back turned towards the doorway; he thrashed at his guitar as if it were a prisoner that he was torturing with rapid-fire strikes from a whip. His young adolescent body was muscular and defined, a result of lifting weights (he had dumbbells in the garage) and possibly also some over-the-counter “men’s supplements” that he’d taken without her knowledge when he was 13 ½. His arrest 12 months ago, the stay in juvie and his severe home grounding had eliminated any access to anything like that in the past year. Still, Gwen wondered if those nutrition store supplements had contributed to her middle child’s aggressive personality. Worse every year since age 13, she mused. Also, his 5 foot 4-inch height may have caused him to act more macho to compensate.
He continued to thrash as he played, then turned and saw his mother. He stopped bolt-still and angrily glared at Gwen, grunting and growling as he tried to show her how much he hated her right now.
The stare shook the blonde woman internally, but on the outside she remained implacable. Then she smiled slightly and produced a large plastic sack, which she extended towards her son. “Bernard got you some late birthday presents. I looked at them, and I’ll allow you to have them.”
The glare became a confused look for about a second, then morphed into cautious optimism. “My birthday? What would he … OH DUDE! COOL!”
He pulled some model car kits out of the sack, each still boxed and sealed. There was a Dodge Viper and a NASCAR racer, Dale Earnhardt Jr.’s original DEI No. 8. Bill liked the challenge of gluing, painting and faithfully decorating a plastic model; he wasn’t into ready-made die-cast cars. At the bottom of the sack laid the coup de grace: an Aurora Godzilla model kit that had the big lizard stomping through the wreckage of a city.
“Mom! Do you realize how much money Bernie spent getting these? The ‘Zilla is over $100 at least – a collector’s edition!”
Gwen took a deep relaxed breath, a rarity when around Bill these days. “You really like it, eh?”
“No shit, Sherlock!”
Gwen tensed a little more. “But you’re happy, right?”
Bill peered back at her through narrow eyes. “Let’s not go that far. Maybe, if I could get some old-style model glue instead of that non-toxic crap you make me use.”
Gwen sighed. “Nope. Nothing that can be abused or sniffed, you know that. Have fun with these, but not before daily schoolwork is done, and night curfew is still in effect of course. I’ll call you when supper’s ready.” She walked away headed to the kitchen. Well, I enjoyed seeing him smile. For a split second.
Gwen’s other two children – Angela, the oldest at 17, and 13-year-old Malachi – had now arrived home from school, so she was fixing supper. They all lived in a mansion that could have included servants, maids and groundskeepers; but with only one parent producing income now, the budget didn’t have the room for those. Gwen had quit her job as manager of an orthodontic office earlier this year to try to homeschool young Bill, to save his life and future.
“Oh boy! Chicken spaghetti! Cheesy like I like it!” exulted Mal when they sat down to the dining table.
“Meh,” said Bill. He actually liked this dish but was unwilling to give his Mother the satisfaction of having pleased him.
They said grace and dug in. Angie swallowed her first bite, then turned to her mother. “Where’s Dad?”
“Don’t call him that, buttface! He’s just a stepdad. STEPdad, get it?” growled Bill. “Call him that, or his name, but NOT ‘Dad’. “
Gwen spoke calmly. “She can call William ‘Dad’ if she wants to.”
Bill grumbled and stabbed at a chicken chunk with his fork. “Well then, I want to call him ‘Satan’. Can I?”
“Your stepfather’s name is William. That’s what you all will call him,” announced Gwen. She turned to her daughter. “Honey, because this is such a sensitive subject, maybe avoid calling him Dad for now.”
Angie got sad, shaking off a tear as she twirled some noodles. “It’s not fair.”
“What’s not fair?” said an adult baritone voice from the entryway. “I can smell chicken spaghetti! Be there in two seconds!”
“One … two … three … four. See? Barely home and he’s lying already,’ snorted young Bill.
“Hello, people,” smiled a handsome man of 40 years now sitting down at the table. He was trim and fit with styled dusty brown hair, and had a perfect bright smile, apropos for his profession.
“How goes the orthodontist practice, William?” said Gwen with a happy/weary smile.
“Never as smooth as when you were my manager. I think Mike is still there straightening out tomorrow’s scheduling snafus.” William shook his head. After closing his eyes and whispering a thank-you prayer for his food, he then looked up at his makeshift family. “So, what did everyone do today?”
“I’ve been chosen to design our class float for the homecoming parade next month,” said Angie “It will take a lot of work to do right, but it will blow everyone’s mind if I can pull it off. Can I show you my ideas after supper, Da – I mean, William?”
“I’m in a run-off for the cross country team tomorrow,” chirped Mal. “Me and 5 other guys are racing to fill the last 2 slots.”
“So, a literal run-off,” said William, smiling at his stepchild’s use of language.
“I’m not hungry anymore,” said Bill. “Hearing about what everyone else here is allowed to do – it makes me sick.” He rose from his chair.
“Bill,” Gwen said, “do you want me to bring you something to your room later?” She was talking about food.
“Yeah. Stepdad’s rifle, from the gun safe. So I can do a quadruple-murder/suicide.” Bill then stomped out of the dining room.
The rest paused their conversation and ate in silence for a few minutes before continuing with small talk in a much more somber tone until the meal was finished.
There was a sharp knock on Bill’s door twenty minutes later.
“Piss off, whoever it is,” the youth snarled.
“Bill, decent or not, I’m coming in,” said stepdad William. The door opened to reveal a frowning stepfather with a folding chair.
The teenager rolled his eyes and sighed. “Whadda you want?”
“I ignore most of your ugly comments, Bill. You had to know that I wasn’t going to let that murder/suicide remark go, though. What crawled up your butt and died today? Your mom told me about your awesome birthday present from your friend; I was hoping you’d be in a better mood.”
“I don’t wanna talk about it, William.”
“Want to or not, I’m not leaving this room ‘til we – ‘til YOU – get this settled.” William unfolded his chair and sat down facing his stepson.
“Oh Gaaahd,” Bill moaned. “NOT more TALKING!! Gawd, can’t you just spank me or beat me and then leave me alone? But these ‘heart-to-heart’ talks – they’re like TORTURE!”
William ignored Bill’s complaint and pressed on. “I’m grounding you off the TV for the week. Unless you sincerely apologize for what you said at supper. The apology should be done to all of the family. And it had better be a good one.”
“Well, that idea can go to hell, stepdad.”
“Okay. No TV for a week it is, then.”
Bill’s face scrunched up with anger like a “Chucky” doll. “Why do you and Mom pick on me all the time? The other two are always treated as the favorites, and you punish me worse than you would a criminal! If I ever leave the house it has to be with you or Mom present at all times. You took my phone and my computer; I’m cut off from all my friends. This should be illegal. Are you sure it isn’t child abuse?”
William glanced askance at his young charge. “Come on now, Bill. I do see good and bad in all 3 of you kids. Angie is well behaved but hates to study, so I’m always pushing her to get serious about her grades. Mal loves to try to get you into trouble; I know he likes to painfully flick your ear, or continue bugging you with spit wads or elbows to your ribs, then you haul off and hit him, and he acts all innocent while you get the blame.”
“Mal hasn’t done that to me in a while. Guess he got tired of me slugging him.”
“Maybe that was it, Bill. Or maybe it was the fact that I confronted him about his behavior and threatened to ground him for a month and cancel his cross country tryouts.
“Also, your restrictions don’t just affect you, kiddo,” William continued. “Your brother and sister have to share the same computer as you, the one in the living room. We keep an eye on what sites each of you visit. And yes, when you’re outside the house you must be accompanied by a parent. So your grounding essentially grounds your Mom and me too!”
Bill hit his scalp with his fists, he was so frustrated. “But WHY?? I only did one wrong thing – one little wrong thing! Yes, I got caught taking Lortabs. But I did my time – 5 months in that hell they call Juvenile Detention. But in the 6 months since I got out, I’ve been on “Stepdad” detention! Are you never going to forgive me or trust me ever again?”
William stared at the teen in what appeared to be disbelief, then said: “Really? That’s the only thing that led to your extreme grounding? You don’t remember anything else?”
“I liked to joke around. That’s it. Nothing worth all this crap.”
“Bill. Let me refresh your memory.”
“When I first met you – that night 6 years ago, after bringing your Mom home from our first date – you seemed mischievous, but you otherwise were a happy, smiling kid. You liked to wrestle, and we tussled on the floor for a minute, remember? Your mother was horrified, but we were both laughing our heads off.
“After I married Gwen, you seemed to grow a bit distant from me. I got that a little from your brother and sister too, just not as much.”
Bill snerked out a sarcastic laugh. “Yeah, probably because your true colors came out after Mom said ‘I do’.”
“Think about it, buddy,” William persisted. “After the wedding, I stopped being just an adult friend; I automatically became one of your parents. That meant I had to step up with rules and discipline. I bent over backwards to go easy, and that seemed to work with Mal and Angie – but not you. You loved to test my boundaries, and started rebelling. It almost seemed you wanted to push the limits, like you were daring me to discipline you. Then you howled with complaints if I did so.”
“And Mom backed you every time!” Bill yelled. “She used to have us kids as her #1 priority – like all mothers should! But YOU come along, and she practically ignores us – especially when there are things I wanna do that go against your RULES. I can’t wait to get out of this place and be on my own!”
“Bill. First of all, the rules aren’t just from me. Your Mom and I worked together to come up with them. Second, I’d love to have good times with you – wrestling, or fishing, or a lot of other things – but you are so insistent on hating me that you refuse every opportunity. Thirdly, you’re fifteen. What do you think you’d be doing if you were on your own?”
“I’d be living my life the way I want! Free and easy. I know how to get money, so that’s no prob. And I could stay with Bernard; his dad works all the time and would hardly notice I was there. No more shitty school work, no more stupid rules. Man, I’d be so happy. You and Mom would be happier without me. And I could find me a chica and start getting some pussy. I know you understand that need in a guy. That’s practically the reason you married Mom – she’s a MILF.”
William’s eyes narrowed in surprised offense. “Wait. You think that –“
“Why else would you marry her?” said Bill. “A single lady with 3 kids and a lot of expenses. We weren’t starving, but we weren’t rolling in money either. An ortho- dentist? Dontist? whatever - like you could score any hot single chick he wanted. So why choose Mom, even though she’s a brick house? I bet it was because she was guaranteed to not sleep around on you – she can’t afford to mess all this up,” he waved his hand in a circle over his head, indicating the mansion they were in.
William slowly shook his head in sad realization of his stepson’s deluded thoughts. “First of all, Bill, your mother is incredibly attractive, yes. But I did not marry her because of her looks; that was just wonderful icing on the cake. She is the most loving, most determined, most courageous woman I’ve ever met. She treats me like a king and lets me treat her like a goddess. She’s my best friend, my soul mate; the one I’ve been looking for all of my life.”
“Gaaahd, gimme a barf bag,” Bill replied, rolling his eyes.
William continued. “And as for what you would do on your own – you’re just fifteen. The laws mandate that you continue your schooling until you graduate or turn seventeen, the state age of adulthood. If you aren’t doing some type of schooling, then you’re called a truant, and you go to juvie. Not only that, but your Mom and I get into trouble – what you do as a minor is my legal responsibility. We could even go to jail if we don’t keep you out of trouble.
“This statement you made earlier, about ‘I know how to get money’ – I suspect you were talking about some type of drug dealing. Am I wrong?”
“Hey, hold on! When they caught me with the Lortabs? I – uh – got those only for my personal use. I never sold nobody nothing.”
“And yet, Bill, around that time you came into some obvious money somehow. You bought an electric guitar, some gold gangster bling jewelry, and got that big tattoo of a dragon on your arm – all without consulting us or getting anything more than your usual allowance.”
“See, STEPdad? I’m always guilty in your eyes. I got good friends who like to give me things; so what? You got no proof that I’ve done anything illegal.”
“I’ve got proof that you lie,” William whispered. “Your blood sample at your arrest showed more than just the Lortab. You screened positive for cocaine and pot., too.”
“WHAT?” Bill gasped. “No one ever told me that! You’re making it up!”
“It’s true. I never told you because I’ve been waiting for you to confess it on your own, to finally get honest with me. So you got into multiple drug use, and to pay for that I assume you got into the drug trade. You’re pretty amazing if you did; this school and neighborhood have prided themselves on preventing any dope dealers from getting a foothold. Oh, the addicts still get their stuff – but they’ve had to go to the scummy parts of El Paso to do so. Until you found a way to slip through all the barriers here in North Montanas. That’s my theory. Am I right?”
Bill looked shaken. “I’m sick of all this TALK TALK TALK. Just leave me alone, OK? I’m done. I’m going to sleep.” He flopped down on his bed and pulled the covers over his head. “Turn the lights out when you leave, WILLIAM,” he barked.
William had one more thing to say. “I don’t think you’re a lost cause, Bill. But I have to give you consequences for your bad behavior. This trouble might be all due to the drugs, and/or to hanging around with the wrong crowd. But maybe there’s something else? There seems to be a deep … what can I call it? … a dissatisfaction in you, somehow; some conflict that isn’t getting addressed. I wish you would open up to the counselor we’ve sent you to; maybe he could figure it out. Just know this: all of these rules, all of this so-called crap that I’m putting you through – it’s because I love you and care about you, bud.”
William sat there for another minute to see if Bill would respond. Then he got up, folded his chair, and left the room. He turned the light off and closed the door as he did so.
Bill lay in his bed after William left. He thought of the things that had been said.
There has to be a way out of here. It’s almost 2 years until my 17th birthday – I think I’d rather be dead than wait that long. I could run away, but if I get caught, it means juvie detention again.
Bill physically shuddered at the thought.
Juvie. The only thing worse than THIS hell is THAT. I don’t know how other counties run their JD, but I’ve never been beaten up and beaten down – by the other kids AND the guards – as bad as there. At least here I get to go outside and into town, although I have to have Mom or stepdevil with me. So running away, or tearing up my house or terrorizing my family to the point it becomes a crime – that’s out.
I could claim to be abused, right? Then Child Protective Services would have to put me with a foster family; that’s a roll of the dice. My parole officer wouldn’t approve of me staying with Bernard or any of my old band of buddies. I’d have to show signs or prove the abuse; that’s a challenge because no one believes me against my parents. Everyone sees me as a liar. I mean, I am, but it’s still unfair that I get typed that way.
What about those rich actors or music star kids that leave their families because they spend all their money, like that Charlie’s Angels star? What was it called … EMANCIPATION OF A MINOR. Is there any way I could apply for that? I could look it up on the computer, but snoopy stepdad with his tracker would see what I’d been reading.
He sat up on the side of the bed and saw the big birthday sack from Bernard.
What a great gift. Bernie knows I love cars, monsters and model kits. But as cool as they are, I’d trade them all right now for a way out of here.
Bill took each cellophane-wrapped box out to look over the specs of the kits, first the cars and then the large Godzilla set.
Funny. The ‘Zilla box is bigger so it will be heavier, but somehow it seems … TOO heavy? And the shrink wrap on it is looser like it’s an amateur job. This obviously has been repackaged. Wait, what’s this?
Printed in black marker on the bottom of the Godzilla box were the words: FILE INSIDE.
Bill puzzled over this for a minute, and then a flash of memory came to him. It was the last time he’d seen Bernard face to face, before going into Juvenile Detention almost a year ago.
What did he say to me? He just asked if there were anything he could do. And I joked back at him, “bake me a cake with a file in it” – like, so I could file through the bars and escape … !
Bill tore off the cellophane from the ‘Zilla kit. Inside were the actual parts for the model, but taped to the bottom of the box …
… was a slim smartphone.
Bill punched the “on” button and after a few eternal seconds the screen lit up; it was almost fully charged, 97%. The text icon on the phone had a little red “1” on it, indicating one unread message. He tapped it. It said:
Text back when u get this. Bernard.
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Weeping Willow
Part 2
by **Sigh**
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Bill spent the next hour in bed, cover over his head, pretending to sleep. He actually was texting back and forth to his friend Bernard the whole time.
(Bill) Dude! That was awesome, how u slipped this phone 2 me! Is it prepaid, or what?
(Bernard) Pop got a ‘buy 4 phones cheap’ plan last week. So He, Mom, sis and me all get one. Jan’s on a exchange program til Xmas, so he put hers away. I just ‘borrowed’ it. It’s activated. Need it back B4 Dec. 21.
Awesome! So, I can text and make calls? Internet too?
Don’t call on the phone. If ur mom hears u whispering – busted. Safer 2 just text. Keep phone hidden good or we both in big trouble
Way ahead of u bro. How’s the rest of my old posse?
Man. We all broke up. None active in chemical biz now. Most don’t ask about u.
Shit. Cancel those posers.
Been tryin 2 contact u but ur keepers too strict.
Anyone else set up new pipeline 2 deliver product 2 our users?
Not yet. Gangs from south want in, but haven’t been able. Remember Rodrico Santos? He’s a junior now. Trying to take ur spot as the playa at Montclair HS but he don’t have connections u made. He might sign up with a south town gang, be their little puppet here. That’s what I liked bout u, Willy. U always your own man.
Yeah. Til I screwed up, got caught popping lortabs behind 7-11. Now my rents won’t let me even piss in private.
They watch you pee?? Awk!
KIDDING, doofus. But it’s almost as bad. NE way, I got a plan. With ur phone I
can surf internet 4G & not be detected! Dude ur awesome. I’m gonna get out of home jail w/o doing anything to get me back in juvie..
How?
Leave that 2 me. Then u + I r gonna run sweetest black market pipeline El Paso’s evr seen.
Dude. U need 2 kno. I still ur bud, want 2 help you get free, but I’m out of the drug business and staying out. I changed. I don’t want 2 be sideways with the law, u kno? Uh oh. Pop calling 4 me. Don’t sound happy.
DUDE! WHAT, DON’T TELL ME U FOUND JESUS OR BUDDHA OR SOME SHIT LIKE THAT! WHAT THE HELL?
CD9 bye! *
[* CD9 = parent(s) here]
Bill spent the rest of the night reading on the internet using his new smartphone. Finally, at 3 AM the battery ran to zero, and Bill hooked it up to the charger cord Bernard had also put in the box. He made sure to use the wall socket behind his dresser, and he hid the silenced phone on the floor under it. A plan was starting to form in his brain, one that could get him what he wanted most: freedom. However, he needed a lot more knowledge to work out all the details.
Gwen noticed Bill had overslept the next morning. She decided to avoid waking him until nearly lunchtime, mainly because of how that “murder/suicide” comment had shaken her. She decided to fix him a hamburger with mushrooms and Swiss cheese, one of his favorites.
Bill lumbered out of his room, the smells from the kitchen and his rumbly tummy pushing him onward. He sat down at the breakfast nook in his T-shirt and gym shorts and inhaled the food without a word.
“Did you enjoy your meal, son?” Gwen asked. She felt she was taking a risk by asking a question; his silence today so far wasn’t enjoyable, but it was more peaceful than the bile he spewed yesterday.
Bill blinked his eyes and lifted his head out of the deep thoughts he was in. “Hm? Oh. Yeah, it was really good. Thanks, Mom.” He then returned to his musings.
Gwen put her foot down so he’d start his homeschooling assignments on schedule. He actually did so with no resistance; this amazed her. For the rest of the day and into the evening Bill was quiet and preoccupied in thought. His siblings, after getting home from school, noticed it too; Mal was about to ask his brother what was going on, but Angie took him aside to say something along the lines of letting sleeping dogs lie. Bill went to bed at 9:07, nearly a full hour before his curfew. Again, instead of really going right to sleep, he texted some with Bernie and then surfed the internet on his little phone. Always under the covers.
This pattern repeated for the next four days. On day five, Saturday, Gwen and William confronted Bill in his room.
The matriarch started. “What’s going on, Bill? You’ve been quiet – more than you’ve ever been. You aren’t yelling or starting arguments. The schoolwork is getting done on time and you aren’t antagonizing Angie and Mal. I should be overjoyed, but I’m wondering if something’s wrong.”
Bill just shrugged his shoulders as he faced her. “I’m just tired of fighting. I can’t live in turmoil every day. I’ve finally decided to give in and be obedient.”
William was suspicious. “Wait a minute. You indulge in turmoil – you live for conflict! You get joy out of rebelling, out of fighting! Tell us what’s really happening.”
“Fine. Choose not to believe me, William. I’m not going to yell with you over it. I have to get peace in my life.” Both parents stood silent as Bill lay back on his bed, closed his eyes and folded his hands over his belly in an almost meditative pose.
William walked out and returned in seconds carrying a plastic cup with a lid to fasten over it. “Bill. Get up and pee in this. Now.”
Bill opened his eyes – and smiled pleasantly. “Sure, William.” He took the cup and walked to his toilet, producing the sample for his stepdad in less than a minute.
Hmm, William thought as he left Bill’s room. He really gave me actual urine. It’s warm, yellow, and I didn’t hear the sink running. He couldn’t have produced a fake sample like this in that short a time. Well, let’s get this to my pal at the lab and we’ll make sure.
At the end of the day, the two parents lay in their bed discussing their middle child.
“The sample showed no trace of illicit drugs,” said William.
“Then what’s caused this drastic change?” muttered Gwen.
“I don’t know, honey.”
“William … maybe this is a real thing? Maybe Bill decided to just quit resisting and try to get along with all the rest of us. Maybe all of the grounding and restrictions have suddenly paid off!”
“Boy, wouldn’t that be wonderful?” the husband sighed. “But I really doubt it. I mean, people can have a huge life shift suddenly; it’s just rare as hen’s teeth. Especially without something transformative like a spiritual experience or huge tragedy. So my gut feeling is that there’s an ulterior motive to all of this, something he’s doing to break out of the life pattern we’re forcing him to live.”
“Well. Whatever it is, I’m going to enjoy it while it lasts. Who knows? If he shows more obedience, maybe we could trust him to be at home alone while you and I go on an actual date?”
“Let’s not ease up on the rules yet; that may be just the thing he’s shooting for.”
“GYAAAAH!” moaned the wife in frustration. “If this goes on much longer I’m going to forget what it feels like to be romanced.”
“Well … you wanna fool around?”
Gwen sighed. “I was hoping for some dancing and wine, flowers and chocolate. That would REALLY get me in the mood. But sure, if you need me to, let’s have sex.”
William proceeded with foreplay, but couldn’t help but start to wonder if his marriage would survive this issue with his stepson.
Down the hall, Bill lay in his bed. He’d just finished texting with Bernard; tonight they hadn’t discussed the ‘escape plan’, just girls and music and dreams each had for the future. Bernard didn’t seem to have any focused structure for his destiny, while Bill had planned out at least the next 5 years of his. It all hinged on getting out on his own, and soon.
Man, stepdad and Mom sure looked freaked during their ‘talk’ to me. Perfect, Bill thought. This just needs to get researched and thought through a little more – just a few more days, I think. I need to write it all down to organize it in my head, then burn the writing and get it started.
They wonder how and why I’m being this way. Even I’m amazed at how I’m chillaxin’. I finally have a plan, and I’m totally focused on it; I can finally see a light at the end of this shitty tunnel, and I’m floating above it all finally. Just a few more days of research. Then I need to write – get it on paper so I can think straight, iron out any rough spots and freeze it all in my memory. Then shred the paper evidence and crank this mother up. Yeah. I like it. Snatched!*
*looks good
The next morning, Bill knocked on his parent’s bedroom door. William answered, not opening the door more than the space required to show his face. “Hey Bill. What do you need? Your mom’s getting dressed for church.”
“Yeah, William. Why don’t you get ready and go with her? I’m sure she’d like that.”
“Uh-uh. Nope. Nice try, buddy. You know one of us has to stay here to make sure you don’t get into trouble. Is that what your model behavior this last week was about? To get some alone time without a parent around? Sorry. Didn’t work.”
“No sir; that’s not it. I was suggesting we all go to services as a family – including me. I’ve shaved, and I’ve got my dress slacks ready. I’ll need to use the iron on my long sleeved white shirt though.”
William stood stunned. First, Bill had called him “sir” for the first time in maybe forever. Second, if he’d heard right, this boy had just said he wanted to go to church.
“Church!? You … want to … wait. You HATE church! We had to drag you kicking and screaming the last time you went, and that was a year and a half ago. You made such a ruckus that we agreed to not force you anymore. And now you WANT to? What’s this game you’re trying to pull?”
Bill shook his head. “Sir, why are you fighting me like this? I’m getting more grief from you now, trying to live right, than I did when I rebelled against everything.”
Now a manicured female hand slid inside the door edge and pulled it open, showing Gwen. She was buttoning the top of her dress, and had a big astonished smile that she shone at Bill. “Honey, if you want to go to church then you can go! William, stop giving him a hard time and get yourself dressed! You two had better hurry – we need to leave in 20 minutes!”
Chula Vista Episcopal Church was an old fashioned congregation that still played hymns with an organ while everyone stood and sang along. People still dressed in their Sunday Finest, too. Wearing a dress shirt with no tie was about as casual as it got here. An occasional jeans-and-T-shirt person might attend, usually a visitor or out-of-towner; but others would stare, some with disapproval.
Head-turning and stares were happening today, but not for unwritten clothing violations. The Eikens were, for the first time in over a year, attending services as a complete family – husband, wife, and three teenage children. Gwen beamed a thousand-watt smile. She loved church, and had dreamt of the day the whole household would willingly come here again.
William trailed all of them, keeping a hawk’s-eye on Bill.
Some older to teenage boys waved for Bill to come sit with them, but he waved them to come to where he was, next to his Mom. He otherwise was eyeing the teen girls, and maybe even the more attractive young adult women.
He’s checking out the hotties, thought William. But that’s to be expected of a teen boy, especially when we’ve kept him from dating. I’ll have to tap him on the shoulder if he starts to obviously leer.
The young man indeed was checking out the collection of curves. He was doing more, though; he was taking mental notes of these women. Who was wearing what outfits, what colors were combined, accessories, etc. He studied how they moved, how they walked, talked, sat down, stood up, used their arms and hands. He’d never paid that much attention to these details before. I’ve got to absorb as much as I can so that the Plan works, he thought.
Bill was so lost in his analysis that he forgot to be bored (his usual reaction) during the sermon, prayers, and collection. As they got up to leave, both his parents marveled about how well behaved and calm he seemed. They decided to chance Furr’s Cafeteria for lunch as a family.
Halfway into their meal, Gwen turned and whispered in her husband’s ear. “Look at how Bill’s eating. Small bites, closed mouth, no smacking, even properly using the napkin and utensils!”
She’s right. That boy usually devours food like a wild beast. Okay; we must be in the Twilight Zone now. What’s next? William wondered.
Neither realized that for the last week, Bill had been observing his mother Gwen and sister Angie’s habits. Not just eating, but living in general. He could tell his family – especially the parents – were confused with his behavior.
Bill was pleased. So far so good. I think I even sense a little tension going on between Mom and Stepdevil. That’ll help.
Bill covertly texted his friend Bernard that night after bedtime curfew.
Dude. RU up?
There u are, Bill. Almost went 2 bed. Pretty tired; Pop had me mow and clean gutters when I got home frm church. Saw u there BTW.
WHAT? You were there? Chula Vista Episcopal? How come I didn’t see you?
I work their ancient sound board from the balcony. I just stayed there. Your Mom don’t want me seein u. Thought I keep us both outa trouble.
But dude? U NEVER gone to church in your life! U told me a while back!
Hey I told u - I changed.
I don’t want u 2 change; I NEED u NOT 2 change. May need u for my escape plan. What the hell kind of change??
Not gonna tell u rite now. Ur 2 angry.
DAMMIT BERN TELL ME
Look. Need 2 sleep. Will tell u when ur more chill. Nite.
BERNARD U ASSHOLE
…
BERN?
…
Bern. Sorry. I’m sorry. Treating u like shit after all u done. Im a lousy friend. Next time I shut up n listen 2u. Sleep good bruh.
Two days later, Bill finally felt ready to map out the Escape Plan. He made sure that all of his homeschool homework was done, as well as any chores he’d been scheduled for. Gwen had rented an on-demand movie for the family to watch – Disney/Pixar’s latest animated offering. Bill watched it for about ten minutes then asked to be allowed to retire early, claiming the movie didn’t interest him (which was true).
In his room with a legal pad and a pen, he diagrammed the Plan with possible deviations and appropriate actions. No stone was left unturned, none that he could see. He’d planned for every eventuality. Except for one big thing: Bernard. He might need his best bruh if the plan was to work. How would Bern’s “change” affect his willingness to help?
What if he’s super religious now? If so, he won’t agree to some of the things I may need him to do. Dammit, I need to know. I haven’t texted him since he brushed me off two nights ago. What if he won’t talk to me now? Only one way to know.
.....
Hey Bernard. U there bud?
There was no response for a few minutes; then
Hey Bill. Saw the last part of ur last text. Apology accepted. How come u no text for 2 days?
Thought you might be mad at me. U never stood up 2 me like that B4.
Just setting a boundary. That’s a pop word with my new crowd
New crowd?
Yeah. See I changed. I attend 12 step grp 4 drug addicts. NA. A group of them also attend Chula Vista church, so I started early summer, and now I run sound board.
But u nevr were an addict! U nevr used our products!
Yeah I did – u just not kno about it. When u got caught, I try 2 stop but no luck. So I went to NA w/a friend. They – and HP - have me clean.
Whats NA and HP?
Narcotics Anonamous and Highr Power
Anonymous. Ur spelling still atrocious Bern haha. So, ru clean / sober now?
Yeah 8 mos. But 2 keep it I avoid illegal drugs, even selling. I don’t like how strict ur grounding is, so I help w/ that – but not getting back in chemicals. So, u have plan 4 getting out of ur sitch?
Yes. It may seem xtreme; freak you out. But trust me. Here it is in nutshell …
The next morning,
Gwen Eiken was wondering what she’d lost: her mind, or just parts of her wardrobe.
I know I washed my lilac blouse last week and I swear I haven’t worn it since. So where is it? And I know I have 4 black skirts, so how come I only see 3 here? In fact, my whole closet seems a little too thin … and I did all of my laundry yesterday. Could Angela be … ?
As she checked her daughter’s closet, she found none of her own attire there. That was a futile search. Angie’s still too petite compared to me size-wise, anyway.
She was only mildly concerned about this riddle. After all she had plenty of other clothes to wear. Surely these missing ones would show up eventually. Nothing to worry about. As long as no more items start disappearing.
Little did she know the answer to the riddle would be solved in about 9 hours.
Suppertime, that same day.
Gwen was placing the beef and noodles on each plate, along with potatoes, carrots, and green beans.
“Mom, I’m starving to death! When’s he gonna get here? The food’s getting cold!” urged Malcolm.
“Sit down, son,” laughed Gwen. “William texted me seventeen minutes ago that he was getting on the highway. Unless there was a traffic jam, he should be here in –“
“Hello, family!” Williams voice boomed from the hallway garage entrance. “Ooh, and hello beef stroganoff, from the smells. My favorite!”
“Have a seat, Dad! We’re all here and ready – except for Bill,” said Angie. Then in a whisper she added, “when Bill’s not around I can call you ‘Dad’, right?”
“Where is our middle son?” Gwen frowned. “I called him on his room intercom that dinner was ready. Mal, can you go get him?”
“If I don’t die of hunger on the way, sure,” fretted Mal. He got up and sprinted to the bedroom wing.
William gave Gwen a kiss on the cheek as they waited. “How did Bill do during his homeschool sessions today, honey?”
“Oh, he was well behaved, as usual – the new usual, I mean. Got all his work done, and then said he would be in his room until supper.”
“Hmm, so he’s been in that room for all the afternoon? Did you check and make sure he wasn’t into any mischief?”
Gwen’s mood soured suddenly. “William – I am so tired of us always having to suspect the worst from him. No, I let him be. He’s been so good lately. Why can’t I trust him for a few hours? Why can’t you?”
Just then Mal returned to the table, his face white as a sheet. “Uhhh … all you guys better hang on to your seats.”
In walked Bill to the dining area. At least the head was Bill’s. He was dressed in Gwen’s lilac blouse, with an obvious bra underneath. There were two modest protrusions in the bra cups simulating breasts. A black midi skirt adorned his lower body; his bare legs appeared to be shaved (!) and women’s flats were on his feet. His eyebrows appeared to have been plucked (by an amateur; there was an obvious imbalance from left to right). A lightly colored lip gloss had been applied around his mouth. His closed mouth. All other mouths at the table were gaping wide, and speechless. Bill did speak, though; in a light, high pitched voice.
“Hi Momma. Hi Poppa. Hi, Mal and Angie. It’s good to meet you. My name is …
Willow.”
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Weeping Willow
Part 3
by **Sigh**
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“Willow” waited for her family to say something. Not a word was uttered, however. Just slack-jawed staring, combined with confused glances at the others at the table. William and Gwen especially looked at each other, but neither could utter a coherent syllable.
The newest female at the table then shrugged, pulled out her chair, sat down and proceeded to eat.
Gwen finally found her voice. “Bill!? You –“
“Willow, Momma. I’m Willow please.”
William cleared his throat and spoke in a low register to emphasize his authority and displeasure. “Bill. What the –“
“Willow! It’s Willow, Poppa. Please respect my decision.”
The male parent’s face showed even more perplexion. “He … called me Poppa.”
“She called you Poppa. I think she wants to be referred to as a she. And by the way, if she gets to call you Poppa, then I get to call you Dad,” Angie reasoned with a look of triumph.
“Angie,” Gwen whispered. “Did you have anything to do with this?”
“Nope, Mom. But I figured all of ‘her’ recent sweet disposition was leading up to something. I’ve learned to expect anything when it comes to Bill – OOPS! So sorry, I meant Willow.”
“No apology needed, Sis. Thank you for correcting yourself. I never want to be called ‘Bill’ ever again.”
“No problem,” said Mal. “I’ll only call you retarded from now on, OK?”
Mal then tore into his grub with the urgency of any young teen male. Willow ate her meal slowly and gracefully. The rest of the plated food got cooler as the other family members carefully addressed the former ‘Bill’.
“When did you get yourself ready like this? Just this morning you were your usual appearance,” asked Gwen.
“I shaved my legs and plucked my brows in my bathroom earlier in the afternoon; I used the rest of the time to dress. I’m still new to this, so it took me a while to get everything as good as I could.”
William whispered towards his wife. “Still willing to trust him to be left alone?”
Gwen snapped her head around to give him an angry stare. “You are NOT being helpful,” she growled.
“Momma,” Willow spoke. “I do need more practice and guidance with dressing, makeup, and – when it grows longer – hair. Would you help me?”
The mother shook her head emphatically. “No. Bill, you-“
“Momma! Please. It’s Willow now.”
Gwen clenched her teeth, and her eyes became wet. “No! No, it’s not. You are Bill. And this is all just an elaborate stunt, like William had been telling me. I was a fool to get my hopes up that you were sincere in your changing. And if this is real – if it’s not just a stunt – then it’s wrong. It’s morally wrong, and I cannot accept it or endorse it!”
“Momma. The Episcopal Church has officially accepted gays and transgenders as legitimate people. I read it on Wikipedia, after completing my other computer assignments.”
“Not all Episcopal congregations, Bill! The church we attend has broken away from the national leadership on this issue. The bible says that men are not to dress in women’s clothing. Now that is that. And you are going to change out of my clothes – hey, wait. How did you get ahold of my clothes?”
“Two days ago, Momma. You left your bedroom door unlocked while you were in the master bath showering. I got into your closet to get what I needed. It just took me a few days to build up the courage to present in front of you as Willow.”
“Bill. You will go to your room and take my things off – NOW. You may come back and finish your supper when you are in male attire. And never, ever dress in women’s clothes again.”
Willow’s face fell. “Okay, Momma.” She slowly stood up.
“Aw, the retarded sissy’s gonna cry,” laughed Mal.
“NO,” Willow snapped back at her brother. “I won’t. I haven’t wept since I was in kindergarten. Dad – our birth dad – spanked me, and I vowed no one would make me cry again. I’ve forgotten how to do it; don’t think I could if I wanted to. But even without tears, this really hurts, Momma.”
She then walked back to her bedroom. Gwen noticed that her child didn’t walk off in his usual angry stomp.
“Okay, everyone,” Gwen barked to the rest at the table. “I need all of us on board with this. I will not tolerate Bill being a drag queen or transvestite or whatever you call them. It’s wrong, and we’re going to resist this and reject it. We agree, right?”
“Oh yeah. I’m gonna have so much fun with this,” chuckled Malachi.
Angela sighed. “Mom, I’m going to leave this to you and Dad. I’ll be Switzerland, okay? The way I’ve survived this war with Bill these last few years is by staying out of the line of fire; I’d rather continue that way.”
Gwen looked at William. “You agree with me, right?”
“Um …. Not 100%.”
“WHAT??”
“Now, hang on. I mean you and I hold different opinions about transgender people. I think they are real, and have a right to exist and live their lives how they want – despite what our local church leaders think. But in Bill’s case, I don’t believe for one second that this is real. I think he’s angling for a way out of the current restrictions, or maybe he’s trying to find a way to leave the family. So yes, I think he shouldn’t be allowed to dress as a girl. We agree on the end strategy, we just get there in different ways.”
Gwen sighed. “That’s not the answer I was hoping for, but I’ll take what I can get. Let me heat up everyone’s plates in the microwave; I’m sure the food’s as cold as ice.”
Thirty minutes later, Gwen knocked on Bill’s bedroom door while holding the half eaten plate of food she’d left at the table.
“Bill. Have you changed into boy clothes?”
“Willow, Momma. I took off all of your stuff; it’s folded on top of my bedside table.”
“Good, son! I’m coming in with your supper, ‘kay?”
“WAIT! I’m not decent! Um … okay, you can come in now.”
His mother walked in to find Willow sitting on the bed, her blanket wrapping her and covering her from ankles to neck.
Gwen’s eyes narrowed. “You don’t have ANYTHING on?”
“Momma; I have to return your clothes – they’re not mine. I have some more in my closet and drawers that you can take back too. I can’t force you to let me use them. And you can’t force me to wear boy stuff. I refuse to live a lie one second longer. So until I can wear what’s right for me, I’ll go naked. I am hungry still; can I finish my plate?”
The adult woman stood there shaking her head silently. She picked up the stack of clothes and sat the plate down on the spot they had been. “Bill, get me the rest of my clothes out of your closet and drawers and I’ll pick them up in the morning. I’ll talk further with you then.” She turned to leave the room.
“Momma?”
She stopped and turned her head back to her child. “Call me ‘Mom’ like you used to, not ‘Momma’. Now what did you need?”
“Just reminding you. It’s Willow, please. Not Bill.”
The next morning Gwen knocked on Willow’s door once more. She decided to crack it open just slightly and speak through the opening.
“Honey? I need you to get up. I got us in to see your counselor this morning. The appointment is for 10 AM so you need to get dressed.”
Great; even sooner than I hoped! Thought Willow. “Good morning, Momma. Can I wear a blouse and skirt?”
“NO. Things have not changed since we talked last night!”
Gwen drove both of them to the appointment; she smiled at her son. “See? Jeans and a T-shirt looks fine on you.”
Willow sat in the passenger seat, arms crossed. “These are okay for a girl to wear on a casual indoor day, or to work around the house in. But it’s way too sloppy to wear out in public.”
“Okay, honey.” Honey was a useful term; it was unisex, and wouldn’t draw a “Willow, please,” from her son. “Honey, when we see the counselor, I need you to be open with your feelings. I know you hate him –“
“No I don’t, Momma. In fact, I’m looking forward to it. I’m hoping he’ll understand me in a way that you can’t right now.”
“I want to warn you: I’m sitting in on this session. Your stepdad will also; he cancelled a few appointments to be part of this. What happens this morning may have huge effects on how we treat you from here on out.”
I’m counting on it, Bill thought silently, hiding under Willow’s persona.
Andrew Kaplan, LCC, just finished his first patients of the day, another rebellious teen vs. overstrict parent scenario. The rift between the father and son seemed huge, but it was their first session so he was nowhere near giving up hope. However this next case, an urgent work-in, was one he had called nearly intractable when he last saw them three months ago. William and Gwen Eiken, and Gwen’s son Bill. The mother was open to discussion, but her husband’s mind was set in stone. And the son – he just wouldn’t open up, not a word. After 8 weekly sessions of getting nowhere, Andrew had recommended a different therapist or none at all.
So I wonder what has changed, he thought.
Fifteen minutes later his mind was blown. Bill declaring as a transgender was the last thing on earth he would have suspected. Gwen and William had given their observations and opinions on Bill’s new revelations. For the first time that the counselor had ever seen, Bill’s parents seemed to disagree somewhat about what was going on. Their child sat patiently in a separate chair, staying silent. Until both parents finished – then he said “Mr. Kaplan, may I give you my side of the story?”
“Why of course, Bill. Would you prefer I call you Willow?”
Willow burst into a smile. “YES, please!”
“I’m sure I will have some questions of you, but why don’t you say whatever you want to say right now?”
Willow took a deep breath. “I know it’s hard for Momma and Poppa to understand how I could show no feminine traits at all for fifteen years, then come out as Willow. All I can say is that I’ve been really restless and unhappy for all my life and couldn’t figure out why. You even told me, Poppa. You said there was a deep dissatisfaction in me – and I realized you were right. The source of it is that I was born in the wrong body.”
“Wait,” said William, massaging his forehead furiously. “How did you come upon that theory?”
“I started thinking, meditating, after you told me that. I realized when I looked at girls, it was with envy, not lust. And when I thought about living my life as a woman, I felt an overwhelming peace come over me – I didn’t want to do any more fighting or rebelling. I don’t want the macho; I don’t want to be a “playa” in the drug game. I want to dress with grace and beauty; I want to be a soft body who gets held by a hard body every night; I even dream about having a vagina and being filled by a _”
“No more detail is needed Willow,” coughed Mr. Kaplan rather loudly. “It sounds like you only came to this conclusion in the last few weeks. How can you be so sure that this really is the right path for you?”
“I – I don’t know. How CAN I know? If I’m not allowed to live as a woman, I’ll never find out if this is the actual truth for me or not. And Momma and Poppa won’t let me.”
Andrew looked at the parents. “How would you feel about a trial period of letting Willow dress as she feels?”
“You cannot be serious,” said William with a violent shake of the head. “Can’t you see that he’s playing you? Bill is a master manipulator, and you’re taking it hook, line and sinker.”
“That’s a possibility. One of my main jobs is to sniff out truth-twisters, and I can’t tell yet if your son is or isn’t in this case. But even if he is, consider this: if you give in to this demand and only this demand, then you’re likely to see if Bill/Willow is really serious about this or not. Give it anywhere from one to six months.” Andrew now turned to Willow. “Would that satisfy you for now?”
Six months of dressing in dresses and still being under my parent’s thumb? NO WAY. “No, Mr. Kaplan. It’s, um … too little of a change, because … Think! Because what? … ah! … because puberty has started. If I don’t block it I’ll get a deeper voice, chest and beard hairs … my life will be ruined!”
“That’s a valid concern. Going on testosterone blockers is not too drastic if it’s only for a few months. I could refer you to an endocrinologist to do so.”
“You,” said William, rising, “are a gullible quack. We are not doing this.”
That’s it. Ignore the professional recommendation; that will be good ammo for me to use in court, Bill thought with glee. “Mr. Kaplan – can I speak to you without my parents around? Just for a minute,” Willow asked.
“Sure, Willow. Mr. and Mrs. Eiken, would you mind stepping out to the waiting room for this?
“Yes, I would mind. I need to hear what Bill has to say,” William asserted.
Counselor Andrew looked back at William with authority of his own. “If Willow tells me anything that you absolutely must know, I’ll relay it to you. But she deserves to open up in a safe, comfortable environment. Which is not what we have right now.”
Stung by the rebuke, William left the room – grumbling. Gwen followed.
Andrew exhaled as the door shut. “Now, Willow. What do you need to say?”
“Mr. Kaplan – thanks for hearing me out. I know Momma and Poppa are not going to let me live as a woman; look how she forced me to dress to meet you today! What needs to happen is legal action. I’ve been consulting with Lawzip, an online legal source, and have filled out the initial paperwork to be declared an emancipated minor. What I need is your strong recommendation supporting that, because it’s the only way I can live my true life – as a female. Could you do that for me today, if possible?”
Andrew sat and peered at Willow, scratching his chin. He remained silent for an eternal minute, looking into the child’s eyes then staring at the ceiling. Back and forth went his gaze as he contemplated.
He suddenly sat up straight. “No, Willow. If you need to take that drastic step, you should have someone besides a ‘general practitioner’ counselor. We need to get you to a specialist. You should pull him aside, as you did with me, and see if he’ll give you that recommendation; it’ll carry more weight coming from him. Let’s get your parents back in here.”
“Please don’t tell them what I just told you! They’ll ground me ‘til summer!”
“Don’t worry, Willow. I’ll be discreet,” Andrew smiled. He called her parents to re-enter the room.
Andrew addressed William and Gwen. “As I told Willow, I’m a general family counselor. If you don’t agree with my assessment, why not get a second opinion from a gender specialist? If he agrees with you two, then the matter’s settled. Try Dr. Philip Estrada; he’s an MD who also does his own gender counseling. There’s really no one else like him. I’ll make a call and see if he can squeeze you in this week.”
Later that week.
The trio were in Dr. Estrada’s office. The main body of the consultation was similar to the appointment with Andrew Kaplan a few days prior. Willow waited until the hour was almost up to ask for a private moment with the doctor; she explained her intentions as she had with Mr. Kaplan
“So that’s what I need – your recommendation that I be allowed to be emancipated as a minor. That’s the only way I’ll be able to be complete. Please,” she entreated.
Dr. Estrada tapped his pen on the desk in the therapy room. “That breaks up your family. I get the sense they really care about your well-being; they just oppose you in this one issue. Don’t worry, Willow. I’m going to take care of this for you. Mary, call the Eikens back into this room,” he spoke into his office phone.
“Doc, don’t tell them what I told you – about the legal stuff!” said an alarmed Willow.
“Trust me, young one.” The doc winked at Willow to reassure her.
The doctor’s tone became firm when William and Gwen were once again present. “I know you are determined to not allow Willow to dress or live as a female, despite my strong recommendation to the contrary. Just know this: she’s likely to suffer emotionally and psychologically as a result. I cannot overemphasize how important it is that she be allowed to be who she sees herself as. If you don’t allow it, there may be consequences.”
William was taken aback. “Consequences?”
“CPS – Child Protective Services – might need to intervene. They could place Willow in the correct environment; it might be a foster home, but she would be allowed to dress. And I would testify as to her absolute need to live as a woman; that would authorize them to take whatever action they needed to. Or, you could just allow Willow to live as a female, and none of that will be needed.”
No, no, no, no, Willow thought. Let me do this plan my way – don’t force their hand now!
“Doctor – give me and my wife a minute, please,” said William as he arose and pulled Gwen out into the hall. He walked with her to the far end, where they could talk.
“This was a huge mistake, seeing this ‘gender specialist’ doc!” he muttered. “It’s like he had his mind made up as soon as Bill spoke. Then he comes down hard on us! Our opinion was tossed out like trash.”
Gwen agreed. “He’s insinuating that any bad outcome would be our fault; suggesting that he could have CPS take us to court. What if they decided to call it child abuse!?”
“I don’t know. Would they really go that far?”
Gwen was panicked. “Honey! What are we going to do? That doctor/counselor just told us to allow Bill to be ‘Willow’ for up to half a year. He told Bill to file a court case against us if we didn’t, and said he’d testify on Bill’s behalf! We’d be seen as bigoted transphobic child abusers. Maybe … maybe we should just end all the grounding on Bill and let him go back to school; let him see his friends and stay out late as much as he wants.”
“No, baby. We’re still responsible and accountable for him until age 17. What if he sells drugs to some kid who gets behind the wheel while high? If that kid kills someone, they’ll come after us. Because we’re ultimately liable for anything he does. Better for him to dress as a female than for that to happen.”
“William!”
“I know, I know. I can’t believe I’m saying it either.”
“It’s immoral! It’s a sin!”
“So is dealing drugs. God help me, I don’t see any other path to take. If Bill is faking this – and I still believe he is – then he won’t be too thrilled about us letting him stay and ‘allowing’ him to dress as a girl; I’ll bet he won’t last a week. But who knows? He’s so stubborn, he might go longer.”
“So … so that’s it, then. That’s what we’re doing. Oh God.” Gwen’s face drained of color.
“You want to tell him now or later?”
“Now. I’ll do it. No use in prolonging this.” Gwen marched back to the room, William in tow.
“Um, Willow,” Gwen said. “We’re going to allow you to dress as a girl for up to 6 months. I’ll give you a stipend and take you shopping for clothes, makeup and accessories. We want to do right by you, and by Dr. Estrada. We’re not allowing you to get on any testosterone blockers; just dressing.” She then turned away, dabbing her eyes with tissues as she did.
Dr. Estrada smiled. “What do you think about that, Willow?”
The child in question was numb, shocked. “You … you’re actually going to let me live as a girl? This is actually happening?”
William raised an eyebrow. “Yes. Aren’t you happy?”
She shook herself out of her daze. Keep acting! Don’t blow it! “Oh Momma, Poppa – thank you so much! Thank you thank you thank you!” She hugged her parents with a huge smile on her face and - if one looked closely enough – a bit of panic in her eyes.
Bernard. U there?
Yeah. How did visit 2 tranny counselor go?
BAD. He was gr8 at 1st, telling ‘rents they had 2 let me dress as girl. Should have left it there; they would have said no, and I could quickly sue for emancipation. But then he started TALKING ABOUT me suing, and it scared Mom, so now they r gonna let me dress as girl 4 trial period. I still have 2 stay @ home!
Bummer. How long is trial period
6 MONTHS!!!
Yikes
Ain’t waitin that long. Going w/ addendum to plan
Uh-oh. What’s that?
Bill got up early enough to catch a quick breakfast with the rest of his family. They were hustling to make it to work and school. He was in a T-shirt and gym shorts, amusedly watching the morning chaos.
“Willow!” barked his mother. The loudness made Bill jump. “Wake up, little missy! That’s the 3rd time I called you just now; did you forget your name?”
Bill belatedly switched his mind into Willow mode. “I’m sorry, Momma. I need to drink some coffee I guess; must still be sleepy.”
“Well, you’ll need to be alert; it’s a big day ahead of us. I’m taking you shopping for what you’ll need to dress and present fully as a female.”
“Yay!” Willow feigned with all of the fake enthusiasm she could muster.
“I pulled some of my clothes out that should fit you. They’re stacked in a little pile on the table in the hallway. Can you get dressed and be ready to go in say, half an hour? I’ll help you with some basic makeup before we leave. Realize since we’re just getting started, you probably won’t ‘pass’ as a woman very well today.”
Willow did indeed need to focus – on keeping up her female persona as she and Gwen hit store after store. She set her mind on acting thrilled with this new reality, one where she was to occupy the outward appearance of a woman as realistically as possible.
The mother/daughter combo hit the mall first. “Don’t get your hopes up about high fashion just yet,” Gwen warned. “We’re just getting started, and this will be an unexpected hit to this month’s budget. So JC Penney will have to do.”
Willow got all of her basics – panties, Wonderbras, hose, slips, Spanx – first. Then to the shoe department for some flats, multiple types of sandals, and one pair of 3 inch heels “for training in high heel walking” per Gwen. Following this were enough clothes that Willow wondered if she’d ever leave the dressing area. She ended up with four blouses, two sweaters, three skirts (one flowy midi, one pleated, one skater skirt “to show off your legs”), two pair each of slacks and jeans (women’s) and one semiformal dress that would be appropriate for church, if it came to that.
The next stop was Elle’s salon, in the same mall wing. Willow got her first facial makeover there, and from that her makeup needs were determined. Her hair wasn’t long enough to do much with; it was still in a short boy’s cut, not a buzz but too close to style. “I’ll do your nails at home; let’s get your ears pierced,” said Gwen.
The day was topped off – literally – with the purchase of a wig. “You’ll have times when you need to blend in; it’ll take nearly half a year to grow your own to a passable length, I’m guessing,” advised Willow’s mom. The piece was a brunette long bob that fell just short of the shoulders.
“Shopping is exhausting,” puffed Willow while laid out on the back seat of the car.
“The day’s not done yet. We need to open those packages of panties, hose and bras. I ‘guesstimated’ the size for you, but you need to try them on. I’m turning onto Las Hongas steet now – almost home.”
Gwen yelled through Willow’s bathroom door. “Willow. Do the panties fit?”
“Just a minute, Momma.”
“It’s been five minutes, honey.”
“I’ve – I’ve got a situation, here. Give me just two more minutes!”
Finally Willow let Gwen in. The Mom sniffed twice and shook her head at her new daughter.
“Did you deal with the ‘situation’ Willow?”
“Yes, Momma.”
“I’ll bet your panties cover your crotch a lot better since you took care of your erection.”
Willow’s face flushed deep red. “What! I didn’t – I mean, how did you –“ her voice dropped to a whisper. “God, just let me die now.”
“The musky smell in here made it pretty obvious. If you had used some deodorizer and washed your hands –“
“Momma that’s enough! I – I’ve never felt tight smooth fabric down there before, OK? I didn’t expect to react to it! How am I ever going to pass with a constant groin bulge?
“Hmmm … we should have gotten you a bubble skirt.”
“That doesn’t sound like a solution! I may have to research on the computer, to see how other trans girls deal with this. Do I have your permission to do so?”
“Momma, please come here – I’ve found what I need. Can you order some for me with next day delivery?”
“Okay, Willow; let me see what you pulled up on the screen. Hmmm. A “gaffe”, eh? That keeps you … “pulled back”? Ooo-kayyyy … let’s order you a few. I wonder why they have women modeling them when they’re for men who are trying to –“
“Momma. Those models are men. They just have good makeup and prostheses, or maybe some are on hormones.”
**URK!** - “Good God. Let’s get this ordered and get off of this page. I’m looking at scantily clad men? This is practically a porno site!”
“Momma, you wouldn’t say that about a regular women’s lingerie catalog.”
“Honey – I’ve submitted the order. And I’m closing the page. And those things better last you, because I don’t ever want to go to that site – or one like it – again.”
“Get ready, Momma; there’s a lot more things like this you may have to get used to.” Although I hope you freak out, try to force me to live as a guy, and then maybe I can sue for emancipation, Willow silently reasoned.
Willow dressed exclusively as a female for the next 7 days. She developed a daily routine to keep the ruse going – and to keep her sane.
First, Bill got up at 5:30 AM to meditate, or (as he called it) focus.
I am Bill Ramos. Street handle Willy the Dude. I am the baddest 15 year old SOB on the planet; I am running the biggest one man sting operation in M****F**** recorded history. The acting I pull off will win an Oscar next February. Today I will become a sweet little teenage girl named Willow. I will eat gently, walk and speak softly, say please and thank you and Momma and Poppa and OMG that’s so cute!! And I will drive my folks crazy and win my freedom, fully and legally. Then after age 17 I will come back and show my stupid family how I duped them all just before I say good f**** riddance for the very last time.
Now: I am Willow. Calm. Gentle. Quiet. Caring (that one’s tough). Obedient (tougher!). And in love with frilly clothes and make-up.
Next she showered, shaved (legs and pits, as well as a few that would pop up on her chin), and lotioned. She applied deodorant and got dressed in her lingerie. Outfits were easier than expected; she had discovered a talent for pairing clothes. Then Gwen would enter and help apply makeup. Finally, she’d be ready for the day at home.
Thus Willow’s plan to gain freedom from her parents and rules was in full swing. The shock over her first appearance at dinner had been perfect. The conflict between Gwen, William and the gender specialist was promising at first. But now the plan seemed to be stuck; her folks were allowing her to wear skirts and dresses. Their consent was grudging at first, but now it seemed that the whole family was more accepting of Willow than they’d ever been with Bill – well, at least in Bill’s last 2-3 years. So as she had told Bernard, it was time to throw an addendum into the plan.
“Momma, I need something different for my boobies. The socks aren’t cutting it.”
“Really? I’ve heard about bags of bird seed …”
“No thanks. I’d be afraid to walk through the park and the tons of pigeons there; can you imagine the feeding frenzy around my bosom? I need something more realistic.”
Gwen sighed. “I told you, our budget is stretched thin. Good breast prostheses are pretty expensive.”
“That’s not what I mean. I need my own breasts, Momma. I need to get on woman hormones. I need the man blockers, too. So I will stop developing ugly man hairs and shapes, and make female curves.”
“Wha … Willow. I told you last time you brought this up – these are major steps you’re asking for. The effects are permanent, I think!”
No they aren’t, not for at least a few months. But you don’t need to know that yet, thought Willow.
Gwen shook her head. “NO. No, Willow. You need more time to experience living as a girl before you decide to actually change into one!”
“Momma! I AM a girl already in my mind, in my soul! I – I need this so badly! I can’t STAND being a boy. I want it all – the hormones, the sex change surgery, the face and throat surgeries. I want boob and butt implants too. I can’t afford to get any more manly than I already have!”
“Honey – look in the mirror. You’re more girl than boy in your appearance; isn’t that enough for now? Your muscles are getting thinner because you’re not lifting weights, and you have no facial hair!”
“That’s because I shaved my chin this morning. And I’m starting to get chest hairs! We’ve got to do something, NOW! My voice is just starting to crack and change; maybe blockers and hormones could stop that. If not, in a few months I’ll sound like Darth Vader! Pleeeease, Momma!”
I wish I knew how to cry; a few tears would really frost the cake. ‘Momma’ looks like she’s about to explode, Willow mused.
The “new girl” may not have been able to cry, but her mother now was doing enough weeping for both of them. Gwen’s face was flushed, and she grimaced through her sobs. Her hands covered her ears tightly. “NO! I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS! I WON’T ALLOW YOU TO CHEMICALLY MUTILATE YOURSELF! GO – GO TO YOUR ROOM, BILL!”
“Willow, Momma. It's Willow.” The teenager turned and walked to her room. With her back to her mother now, she allowed a smug grin to erupt on her face.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 4
by **Sigh**
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Later that day, in the Eiken’s master bedroom (with the door locked):
“Allowing him to dress up – full time, no less! – was a huge mistake. We need to put our foot down and force him to act and dress as what he really is – a BOY.”
Gwen had been ranting for the last twelve minutes. William listened without saying anything; now, though, he needed to respond. “Force him? How? At gunpoint? He’s already shown us he’d rather be nude than do clothes he doesn’t want.”
“Why is he acting like this, William? His personality changed two weeks ago, and he’s been in skirts for the last week. If this is not real, it’s lasting longer than I would have ever thought possible! I mean, who can fake it that long?”
“I know. It has me flabbergasted, as your Dad would say. Gwen … I think we need to consider that this could be a real thing. Bill could … I can’t believe I’m saying this … really be transgendered.”
“I know you believe in all that trans stuff. I don’t. It’s a mental illness at best. And you don’t treat mental illness by saying ‘just live that way’. That wouldn’t work with a schizophrenic!”
“No matter which one of us is right, in less than 2 years Bill will be a legal adult. How will our relationship be with him if he still chooses to become a woman? Do we shut him out? Say he’s dead to us? Or endure uncomfortable holidays together for the rest of our lives? At some point, would you accept him?”
Gwen glared at her spouse with anger. “Whose f**ing side are you on, you bastard? If you don’t support me on this, then Satan wins – perversion wins! And if that happens, I will hold you responsible because you didn’t stand with me!”
William’s face felt numb. He’d never heard Gwen so angry, nor so foul-mouthed. “Honey … you’re talking about being godly, fighting evil, and then swearing like a sailor. Do you see the contradiction?”
“DON’T TALK TO ME ABOUT GODLY, YOU HYPOCRITE! GET THE F*** OUT OF MY BEDROOM! OUT OF MY HOUSE! GO SLEEP IN A MOTEL TONIGHT BECAUSE I CAN’T STAND HOW YOU’RE TALKING; I CAN’T STAND YOU!” Gwen threw socks, briefs, and other items for him to grab to show she meant business.
William had never seen his wife come unhinged like this. She was bawling heavily while continuing to grab some of his clothes from the closet. He decided to swing for the fences as a last gasp effort to salvage this situation. Walking into the closet, he grabbed Gwen and held her firmly against his chest, not hard enough to cause pain or restrict breathing, but definitely preventing her from using her arms.
“LET ME GO! I WILL CALL THE COPS ON YOU, YOU …”
“Baby, it’s going to be okay,” William whispered into her ear. “Don’t do this. I love you, and I am always on your side. We may disagree on some things, but we are a team and I will never break us up. Please just breathe. Don’t talk, just breathe. I love you.”
Gwen twisted a few more times. “NO … LET ME … LET …” She gave up and suddenly went limp, continuing to bawl. William eased both of them down to the floor of the closet; he knelt there, still holding her, still whispering encouragement in her ear.
Willow and her older sister Angie stood in the hallway outside their parent’s bedroom; they’d been there ever since the loud yelling had started. Angie was visibly scared and crying; her Mom and Dad had never fought like this. Willow’s eyes looked distressed, and she kept her mouth covered with both hands. That was necessary to hide the fact that she was smiling widely.
Looks like Mom and Stepdevil’s marriage is on the rocks. That helps the plan. If I can split them up, mom won’t have the energy to keep me grounded here at home. And I’ll never have to put up with Stepshit’s rules ever again. This “addendum” is working better than I hoped. Freedom, here I come!
Dude I did it – told Mom I wanted hormones
And?
TOTAL FREAK OUT. Said I had to stop dressing. Stepdad came home, they got into huge fight. They might break up! Good news totally!
So you going to take hormones?
NO dude. It should not even get that far. I WILL demand them even more, and the folks will either fight more and break up or they will let me go to save marriage. Win-win.
U sure dude. I mean, HORMONES. What if they decide to have u take them?
There is NO WAY they will let me take them. Chill dude.
Worried. B careful.
Aw Bernard. U so sweet. U best boyfriend a chick like me could ask 4.
BILL WHAT
Psych, dude! ROFLMAO!
The next night, Gwen received a call on the home phone in the living room. She looked at the caller ID: Roberto Ramos. She sighed and answered. “What do you need, Robby?”
“Well, hello to you too,” said the voice on the receiver. “That’s a rude way to answer the phone, even for your ex-husband.”
“You only call if you’re in need. It would be great if you called regularly just to shoot the breeze with one of your three kids. But no, it’s only once or twice a year, and then it’s for a favor, or money, or something. So …?”
“I’m going to make you a liar, Gwen. See, I AM calling to see if I can come over and talk to one of our kids.”
“Only one? Let me guess. Bill.”
“Yeah. Is it true what I heard? That he’s a pansy little sissy now?”
“Where did you hear that?”
“Malachi told me. Sometimes I call him on his cell. He still speaks to me nice, like a son should treat his father.”
That’s because I divorced you when he was 5; too young to remember how horrible you were, Gwen fumed silently. “Malachi described Bill as a pansy sissy? Those words?”
“No. He said his bro was wearing dresses. How in the hell are you letting him do that? What did you do to him? l bet the problem is that damn homeschooling; all he does is hang around with ‘Mommy’ all day, and now he wants to be you.”
She ignored the verbal insults. “Robby. If ‘Willow’ wants to talk with you on the phone, then I’ll let her. But if you get abusive or threatening, then the conversation’s over.”
“You mean I can’t come over in person?”
“Did you hear the words ‘abusive’ and ‘threatening’? You were a hair’s breadth from assaulting me the last time we met in person. This talk happens on the phone or not at all.”
“Fine. Get the faggot on the line.”
Gwen went to the home intercom. “Willow – please come out to the living room. Your dad – Roberto – is on the phone and wants to talk.”
Willow came, wearing a spaghetti strap top and a denim mini skirt along with some make up and her wig. “Talk? About what?”
“He heard about your dressing, and he’s not happy. You don’t have to talk to him if you don’t want.”
“No, I’ll have to some time. Might as well get it over with.” She reached for the phone.
“Honey, do it via speaker. If he gets bad, I need to hear it.” Willow nodded and punched the SPEAKERPHONE button on the phone base.
“Hello, Dad.”
“Bill? What’s this-“
“Dad. It’s Willow now.”
“SON. What’s this I hear about you wanting to be a girl?”
“I don’t want to be; I am one. I should have been one from the start,”
“Uh, Bill –“
“Willow.”
“SON! You were never a girl. You, of all my kids, were the most boyish of boys. I dreamed of us cruising the strip someday with some hookers and a bottle of tequila, father and son. What the hell happened?”
Willow decided to turn the sugar and spice up to 200%. “Daddy. Can I call you that? I really want to. Anyway, Daddy – I’ve been living a lie all my life, and I just didn’t realize it until this month. I’m not your son, Daddy; I’m your daughter.”
“So do you rent chick flicks and cry a river watching them?”
Willow’s tone became suddenly harsh. “No, Daddy. I may be a girl now, but I still don’t cry. I can’t cry; it doesn’t ‘happen’ for me. Not since –“
“Yeah, yeah, you’ve told me. Not since I spanked you so hard as a little kid that I left welts on your butt. That was good for you, SON. It hardened you up. Until you decided to do this girly act. I have to tell you, this is a huge disappointment for me, you being like this. I need to let people know that whatever made you do this, it ain’t from me. None of your freaky faggot flamin’ tranny tendencies are from my side of the family, got it? In fact, just don’t consider me your Dad until you come to your senses. And I better not ever hear you call me ‘Daddy’ one goddamn time more. Do you hear me, you piece of shit?”
Gwen gasped and reached out for the END CALL button, but Willow’s left hand blocked her. The girl glanced at her mother and did a quick shake of the head. She remained silent; her eyes were wide open, her breathing slow and measured, with just a slight tremor in her clenched, white knuckled right hand. In her head, a savage conflict was occurring.
Don’t lose it, don’t lose it, don’t blow it, don’t blow your top THAT SON OF A BITCH I’LL SHOVE HIS no, no, no, NO, no I won’t! If I revert to Bill now I blow the plan! That bastard doesn’t deserve to have me throw away my freedom for him. There’s another way to get him. Yes, that’s it. Breathe. In. Out. Ahhh. Now … what would Willow say?
“Hey – I said, do you hear me, you piece of-“
“YES. Yes I heard you, loud and clear. Look, sir. You may hate my guts. Fine; I still need to be who I need to be. And no matter how much hate you give me, I’m going to always have a love for you. ‘Cause you’re my Daddy. But I won’t allow you to see me or talk to me ever again.
“I’ll have a successful life without you, Daddy. I’m going to wear bikinis at the beach and have boys want me. I’m going to get married someday in a huge white dress, and have my husband take me to Tahiti for our honeymoon. He’ll be making love to me under the stars. As he does, I’ll be thanking you, Daddy.
“See, I’m a girl because of you. I grew up with you as the man in my life. I saw you hitting your wife and kids. I saw you ignore us and steal from us, and stay drunk all weekend every weekend. So a few weeks ago I realized: If you are the example I have to follow to be a man, then I’d rather not be one. Being a girl is so much better than risking growing up to be like you.
“Now you have a nice life, Daddy. Goodbye.”
Willow punched the end call button and turned to her stunned mother. She took a big breath then exhaled it.
“Momma, I – I need something to cool me down.”
“You and me both, Willow. There’s some Blue Bell ice cream in the freezer; I’ll scoop us some. And by the way, daughter – I’m so proud of you.”
The tension in the Eiken’s Cadillac Escalade was high. Willliam was driving; he’d rescheduled two patients and drove home so he, Gwen and Willow could go to Dr. Estrada’s office for their appointment. Willow had forced the issue, demanding to get started on testosterone blockers and hormones. She refused to let the subject drop and had been pleading day and night for most of the week to get her way.
Gwen held her husband’s right hand from her spot in the front passenger seat. The couple had talked about how to deal with these demands. William was pretty sure that she couldn’t get a hormone prescription at the age of 15; he’d done some internet research regarding transgender estrogen therapy. Gwen explained that to Willow, but she refused to accept the information from her parents. So today Dr. Estrada would give Willow the news and she’d have to accept it. It seemed a simple thing to accomplish.
So why is my stomach doing flip-flops, wondered Gwen.
Willow continued to act cool, but inside she was determined and just a little concerned. Things were never supposed to have gotten this far. She’d been sure that her demands would have had her kicked out for being a biblical abomination; either that, or her Mom and Stepdad would have fought so bad they’d have split up, weakening their resolve on her perpetual grounding. Either way, there was no way that her parents would consider allowing her to take chemicals to change her sex. Except now the three of them were going to the gender specialist to discuss that very thing.
The teenager had dressed up in her most girly presentation so far: a bright yellow sundress with a floral sash, strappy sandals on her feet, large hoops dangling from her ears. Her skills in dressing and makeup had really blossomed over the last two weeks. Finger and toenails were painted yellow, eyebrows were evenly thin and arched, eyes were gorgeously adorned with shadow, liner and mascara. Her long bob wig was framed perfectly around her face. A light spritz of Chloe’ perfume topped off this ultra-feminine cupcake.
Maybe as the folks see me like this it will push them further towards the edge. Maybe the Professor will think I’m doing too much to fast, and will tell me to back off. Either way, I can’t let any of them know this is just a sting. Don’t abandon the plan. Except as a last resort. What would a “last resort’ situation be? Willow wondered.
“Hello, Eiken family. Is everyone comfortable?” Dr. Estrada entered the therapy room where Willow and her folks had been waiting. He was a heavy-set fellow with some moderate male pattern baldness; his hair was black with grey mixed in. Thick glasses sat on his nose, and his brown jacket squeezed a little too tight around his shoulders as he sat down and leaned towards his clients.
"Well, I was comfortable," replied Willow, "until your nurse poked me with a needle to draw blood as soon as I got here. What was that for?"
“It has everything to do with the reason that you are here; I need to check your baseline levels if we consider therapy. After all," Estrada stated, "I was told by my assistant that you, young lady, want to start on medication?”
Willow spoke up. “Yes sir, please. I can’t stand the thought of puberty changing me into a man; that grosses me out.”
“You are in the midst of male puberty right now, Willow. Your voice seems a little more masculine than the average child’s, but not really drastically low in tone. Your muscles have some definition, and your shoulders appear to be getting wide. Hair growth is starting on your chin, though I didn’t see any on your torso during my first exam. It’s impossible to tell how much more masculine you’ll get, but I suspect you have a lot more to come – unless we intervene.”
“Ugh! I hate my chin hair! We’ve got to do something. Starting hormones now is my best chance to become as real a girl as I can, right?”
“But wasn’t it just a few months ago that you were doing many macho things of your own volition? Lifting weights and getting all those muscles; talking with your stepfather about ‘getting a chica so I can get some pussy’?”
“Well, I still would like a pussy – but I want to own it,” she smiled. “I think I acted macho to try to drown out any girl urges.” At least that’s what all those online transgender testimonials say, Willow thought. “I muscled up and joined the army because I was …” what’s the word they used?
“So you think you were overcompensating?” offered Estrada.
THAT’S the word! “Yes – I think that’s why. But I am so much calmer; life is so much sweeter now that I’m living my true life. It will be ruined if I get all hairy and deep-voiced, though! But my parents – ESPECIALLY my Momma – won’t allow it! I think William disagrees with her on this, and they have been fighting – hooo boy, have they ever!. The stress level is getting worse and worse. I don’t know if I can continue to live this way.”
“Oh? Willow – have you been considering ending your life?”
“What? NO!” Wait a minute – if I was, would that help my plan? “Uh … I mean, I don’t know - maybe?”
Estrada turned towards the parents. “Has Willow continued to be pleasant and obedient, or has she relapsed into the rebelliousness and anger that she had when she was Bill?”
The mother replied. “Actually, she is an absolute joy. She listens, she minds, she opens up and talks to me at times. And the other day she handled a difficult phone conversation with her birth father with such aplomb and restraint! I have to confess – I absolutely love her as my daughter.” Gwen’s voice started to falter. “The problem is, she isn’t my daughter. She’s my son. I still believe it is morally wrong for my son to change his sex.” Now tears were running down her face.
Prof. Estrada nodded and pursed his lips; then proceeded to a different subject. “You remember that on our first visit I said most transgender girls will want to have hormone therapy; that it’s something you’d eventually have to deal with.”
William’s eyes widened. “But the key word is ‘eventually’, right? Willow’s barely had two weeks of living and dressing like this full time.”
“Yes. However, my theory is that she is highly overdue for her transition; her dysphoria was probably the driving factor behind all of her rebellion and lawbreaking behavior. Further delaying her transition could lead to a relapse of that, I fear. It is absolutely imperative that we start testosterone blockers. And it’s probably advisable to start estrogen as well.”
Gwen now was bawling; William looked as if he was in shock. He finally recovered his voice: “Hey! Everything I’ve read on transgender females and hormone therapy says they usually wait ‘til a child is 18 to start estrogen!”
“That was true. However, the thinking on that is changing. I am one of the ones who believe 15 years old is not too young to start hormone therapy. There are a number of cases around the country now where this has been done.”
“But what if Willow changes her mind later – decides after eight months or so that she really doesn’t want this? These drugs will give her irreversible side effects by then!”
“Probably not completely irreversible. She might want to have her sperm frozen just in case. If she decided to detransition, any effects that lingered probably could be dealt with by surgery. But these are all moot points; I’m nearly 100% confident that she will be fulfilled, happy and more socially and psychologically stable with this medical treatment.”
“But … I don’t feel right about this. I’m a man of science, a professional like you, but this is too fast, too soon, and we’re still too uncertain about Willow’s motives.”
Estrada shrugged. “I don’t sense any deception in her.”
Boy, do I have him fooled, Willow thought. I’m so damn good at this. Too good, maybe. This dude wants to start me on hormone pills! But Mom and William won’t let it happen; then we go to court. This is it, my moment of freedom.
Estrada now frowned at William. “You have valid concerns. But I feel the danger of delaying transition outweighs the dangers of starting now. If you don’t agree, I think you could be putting your own fears above the welfare of your child.”
William paled as he contemplated those words. There it is – the implicit threat of legal action. The doc mentioned Child Protective Services in the previous visit. If I resist, they take Bill away and start the therapy. If I agree, he stays with us and gets the therapy. Either way he gets hormone therapy. My God. It has come to this.
William grabbed Gwen’s hand and squeezed it. “Okay, Doctor. If this is really medically sound, and if Willow really wants it, she can have the blockers.”
“I do recommend the estrogen also,” Estrada added.
“Dammit. Why can’t we …” William’s shoulders were slumped in defeat. “Okay, that too.”
Willow’s jaw hit the floor and her mind went blank.
Estrada smiled. “Excellent. Now, Willow, this is a big decision. Are you sure this is what you want?”
The girl finished scraping her chin off the ceramic tile and responded. “Oh yes! This is my dream come true!” … No problem. I’ll just flush the pills down the john daily. It’ll look like I’m taking them, and I’ll be one of those trannies that the estrogen just doesn’t seem to work on. There are trannies like that, right?
“All right. William, please sign these forms and slips – there are a lot of them. Willow, read through these warnings and what to expect. I’ll be back with your medicines.”
“Hey, wait!” William was looking for a way out of this madness. “Don’t we have to have a second opinion from like an endocrinologist to start this?”
Estrada tilted his head. “Did I not give you my card last time? I’m dual board certified, in psychiatry and endocrinology. A full service gender specialist physician, able to do all but the surgeries. I’ll be back with your shots, young lady.”
When he returned, Willow spoke up. “Shots? Uh, Doctor - can’t I take pills?”
“These injections are what I prefer to use with my patients, Willow. It ensures compliance. They’ll need to go in your buttocks, one for each side. Your mother can act as our female chaperone. Bend over, please.”
And just like that, Willow was on estrogen and blocker therapy.
Estrada gathered up the signed forms. “Included in the consent forms were forms to apply for a legal name and gender change. I’ll get my staff to work on them, but it will take weeks for it all to go through. Meanwhile, Willow, I’ll see you back here every 2 weeks for your shots and your required counseling.” He then left the therapy room.
William stood up unsteadily, still reeling from what had taken place. “I feel like we all just tried to take a quick peek into a sausage machine, got sucked in and spat out the other side, a trio of weenies roasting on the grill.”
Gwen still was sniffling; she walked to Willow and pulled the child’s head to her shoulder. “God, honey … I hope this isn’t a huge mistake … but you’re happy at least, right?”
Willow could manage only a whisper. “Yeah, Momma. Like I said, it’s a dream come true.” She tried to pull up The Plan in her head, but couldn’t find herself on the diagram. She’d gone off the paper, over the edge.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 5
by **Sigh**
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The main evidence of hormonal treatment in the first week was nausea, vomiting and hot flushes. They all began when Willow awoke the next morning after her shots. She had never worshipped at the porcelain throne so much before.
Willow’s attitude began to worsen some. She obviously had trouble reining in her emotions; angry moments began to erupt, though they never progressed to foul language and threats as Bill would have done. Often she felt morose, and could be seen lying on the couch in the living area, pillow pulled over her head. Gwen twice checked on her to see if she might actually be weeping – she never was; just sad and retreating from the world. She also began eating a little more at meals and in between.
A week after the doctor visit, Willow confronted her mother. “MOMMA! Did you dry my clothes on the hot cycle? They seem to be shrinking!”
“No, honey. I mostly cool dry your stuff, since it’s all still fairly new. I think the problem is … you’re growing,” said Gwen, and she softly pushed a finger into Willow’s tummy, hip, deltoid and cheek. “There’s a little more fat on you, all over.”
“How can that be?? Am I eating more than I did as Bill?”
“A little, and you’ve been less active too. But a big reason may be the estrogen, honey. It slows the metabolism; makes it hard to keep weight off. You’ll have to eat a lot less and get some aerobic exercise in. Welcome to our world; Angie and I struggle with this all the time.”
Willow rolled her eyes. “Great. Just great.”
Bernard u there
…
Bernard, come in bruh
BILL! Where u been? No text 4 a week now!
Sorry dude. Been down. Don’t kno what 2 do
Uh oh what happened
Should have listened 2u. doctor put me on hormone shots! 1st one last Tuesday
U let Dr give u hormone shot?
Didn’t want 2, folks were there, felt trapped. Mainly stupid Dr’s fault. Mom & stepdad didn’t want me 2 have it either.
DUDE U SHOULDA RAN
NO then Mom & W kno all this was an act, & still on house arrest for almost 2 yrs more. They can’t find out this was all a lie. If u think my grounding strict now – sh**, after that I’ll be a virtual missing person!
So what r u growing tits now
NOT FUNNY
Wasn’t joking, ru?
No. not yet NE way
U any closer to freedom?
Not that I can f*** tell.
Dude. U have another “addendum” 2 ur plan you can use?
No. have 2 think. U think 2, ok? I don’t know what to do next!
Ur the planning genius, buddy. I try tho. Hey, can u send me pic of you as Willow?
WHAT THE F*** FOR DUDE, SO U CAN LAUGH AT ME? NO
Tryin to help u, dude.
I hate my life
Don’t give up. Repeet after me: I will not give up.
Okay. Keep misspelling – makes me laugh
Awr yew macking phun ov mei?
Now ur doing on purpose. Still funny. ROFLMAO!
Gwen Eiken was on the phone with her minister from Chula Vista Episcopal.
“Father Wilson, I have a question for you; I’m trying to settle a disagreement that I have with one of my children. It’s about transsexuals and cross-dressers. I’ve been taught that those behaviors are sinful, but I can’t seem to find where Jesus says so in the Bible.”
“Ah," sighed the minister. "I’m getting this more and more from our members as the years go by. I suspect it’s due to the LGBT agendas being pushed by the schools. The book of Deuteronomy clearly states cross-dressing to be an abomination.”
“Yes, I saw those scriptures,” said Gwen. “But Deuteronomy is an Old Testament book of rules; right after that ‘abomination’ passage, it says you can’t wear clothes made of wool and linen woven together; you can’t plant 2 different types of grapes in your vineyard, and adulterers should be put to death. We don’t believe or do any of those things – why should we consider cross-dressing an abomination then?”
Father Wilson sidestepped that question to offer another point. “Well, the apostle Paul says the effeminate will not inherit the Kingdom of Heaven; that means they’re going to hell unless they repent and stop being that way. That’s in the New Testament.”
“Yes, I found that too. 1st Corinthians chapter six. It also says that adulterers and drunkards are going to hell. Forgive me, but wouldn’t that disqualify half of our eldership?
“Ms. Eiken. Insults are not becoming of a Christian lady such as yourself.”
“And hypocrisy is not becoming of my church leaders. For years I have been taking what you said as the gospel truth, without researching it myself. Well, never again. The one guy I trust in this Bible is Jesus. He condemns hypocrites. But nowhere does he condemn gays, transsexuals or crossdressers. He’s the example you keep saying we should follow.. So I’m going to do just that.”
“Ma’am … are you quitting the church?”
“No. I still love church – worshipping, singing, fellowship with my friends. But I will no longer sit and absorb every word I’m told. I’ll be listening, researching, cross-checking. Watching for hypocrisy. And when I see it I will not be silent. You have been warned.” She hung up the phone.
Okay God, she prayed silently. I’m sorry for how I’ve rejected my daughter. I repent; please forgive me. Help me to change. Help me to treat her right, no matter what sex she chooses to be.
The only strategy that Willow had was to try yet again to get Dr. Estrada to consider recommending “emancipated minor” status; perhaps he would wear down with repeated requests. Her next appointment was in the morning; the biweekly shots were due. Willow tossed and turned, yet could not get to sleep. She didn’t like the thought of more chemicals entering her body. Maybe the doc would stop the injections if she really emphasized the hot flashes and nausea?
She looked at the clock; 3:37 AM. Tired of lying in bed, she got up and proceeded to the kitchen. She was trying to diet, but maybe some of the gelatin Momma had made – with a little whipped cream on top, just a touch – would make her satisfied enough that she could sleep.
On the way, she passed the wet bar; a non-event, as her folks always left it locked. Willow stopped. She spun around to look at the bar again. For the first time she could remember, one of the cabinet doors to the alcohol had been left open. William may have forgotten to close and lock it after his nightcap earlier.
Man, how long has it been since I’ve had a beer? Since just before I got thrown in Juvie. Now THAT would help me sleep. Let’s see, what’s in this cabinet? No beer … lots of pretty bottles … what’s this one … vodka! Man, I haven’t even had wine before, much less liquor. Surely the ‘rents won’t miss a little of this?
Willow found a wine glass and poured some vodka into it. She noted that before the pour, the level in the bottle was above the “A” in the word ABSOLUT; after, the level was nearly down at the bottom of the A. Okay; that should be at least one beer’s worth. She replaced the bottle and attempted to gulp down the glass in one big long swallow. She got not half of it down before choking and spewing the rest on the carpet.
OOH CRAPCRAPCRAP!! Grabbing the paper towels at the bar sink, she cleaned all she could – including the wine glass, which she slipped back into the cupboard – and sprayed the whole area with the bottle of deodorizer she’d found below the sink. What a major screw-up. I can’t believe Momma didn’t wake up and catch me. Willow was already feeling woozy-headed when she got back into her room and fell into bed.
The next day Gwen drove Willow to Estrada’s office. The mother looked over at her child in the passenger seat. “You look like you feel awful, honey. What’s going on with the big sunglasses?”
“Momma, you don’t have to yell. It’s … ah, the hot flashes from the shots. Really bad today.”
“Hmm. Let’s tell Dr. Estrada that. Maybe he needs to cut back on the hormone dosage."
The meeting went quick. The doctor heard the complaints about the flashes, emotions, nausea. He dismissed those concerns, saying that she’d get a tolerance to those symptoms with more time on the hormones. “I do need blood work from you before I give you your shots, Willow.”
“What for?”
“To determine blood levels of the drugs you’re on.”
Willow misinterpreted this as a request for an illicit drug screen, not the estrogen level test that the doctor meant.
HE WANTS TO DO A DRUG SCREEN ON ME?? Wait, that’s fine – I haven’t used any since before I was in juvie. OH GOD, WAIT – I GOT INTO THE VODKA 6 HOURS AGO. IF I GET BUSTED, IT’S ALL OVER. What makes him suspicious? My bloodshot eyes? I can’t let them test my blood.
“Doc … I’m already getting 2 shots, and I hate needles. Now you’re going to stick another in me. Can’t we just skip it?”
Dr Ramos smiled. “We’ve just developed urinalysis technology that approximates serum levels; I have one of the first machines here in my office.”
The nurse in the room turned to Willow and Gwen. “He means a urine sample will do, Hon.”
Willow walked with the urine cup to the bathroom. This is no better. I’ll bet there’s some alcohol in my urine. She went in the toilet room and hiked her skirt up, pulled her panties down and filled the cup with yellow pee. After she pulled herself back together, she poured at least ¾ of the cup into the toilet. Have to have a little pee in there for the color, right? Then she filled it back to the brim using warm water from the tap. God, I hope that dilutes the vodka enough.
“Done,” she said exiting the bathroom, handing the sample to a gloved nurse.
The doctor came back in Willow’s room fifteen minutes later with the shots.
“Sir,” Gwen urged, “Is there any way we can cut down on her dosage? She had a lot of hot flashes even just this morning. This is all new to her, and she’s struggling a bit.”
“Cut down? I’m having to increase it. Her drug levels are almost nonexistent. I’m guessing her liver or kidneys chew up and eliminate the drugs more aggressively than most. She needs more, not less,” he said, waving the very full syringes in his right hand. "I'll give her a nausea medicine shot also, and send you home with a prescription for antinausea suppositories."
Willow really didn’t catch on the whole meaning of this conversation between her mother and the physician. Her head was still pounding, yet she was relieved that no drugs were found in her urine. When prompted, she “assumed the position” and received her shots. And in her hung-over state, she forgot to pull him aside and ask for the emancipation letter she wanted.
Gwen drove them home where Willow once again collapsed in her bed.
Three days later.
“How are you today, Willow?” Gwen asked as her newest daughter walked into the kitchen. “Feel like eating this morning?”
The girl was wearing her skater skirt, pink sneakers and a long sleeved purple tee. Her wig was now always on her head unless showering or asleep; she had some eyeliner and minimal makeup, with simple studs in her ears.
“Yeah, finally. I’m hungry; after broth for the last 2 days, I hope I can tolerate real food. The nausea was so intense after those latest shots! I think I lost a little weight – which is the only good thing about all this.”
“Getting thinner via bulimia is NOT a good thing, daughter. I’ve already been on the phone with Dr. Estrada’s office this morning. Your blood sample we gave them yesterday – you know, the one they requested when I called about your severe reactions – it showed way too much estrogen in your system. Evidently that urine estrogen level they did at the office was inaccurate in your case, so you got an extra high dose this last shot. They’re lowering the dose next time. I’m pretty angry at them; you really have suffered.” Gwen handed a small plate of buttered toast to Willow, who started nibbling eagerly.
“Momma – you’re saying the pee I gave them was to check for a hormone level, not anything else?”
“Yes. Why, what were you thinking it was for?”
“Nothing. Just wondering,” the teen lied. STUPID! Stupid stupid stupid idiot! I’m already messing up my body with hormones, and I just tricked him into giving me MORE?! Okay. No more alcohol, no more distractions. It’s all on hold until I gain my freedom. Speaking of …
“I was wondering, Momma – oh boy, this toast is so good – how am I behaving? I know I’ve been more emotional since the shots. You said that time at Dr. Estrada’s that I was being obedient and polite; am I still that way?”
“Oh, you’ve been a little more difficult after starting the shots, but I think that’s due to those estrogen side effects. Some of us women become emotional wrecks when our ovaries first start firing up. So you could have been worse. Maybe you would have been, if you’d had to deal with bleeding and periods too.”
“Am I better than I was when I was Bill?” When you say yes, I’ll push to end my grounding.
Gwen tilted her head as she looked back at Willow. “Behaving better? Absolutely. But let’s not say you’re ‘better’ than Bill as a person. Bill had a lot of rough edges, but I loved him and always will. Just like I love you, daughter. Now if you start doing the things Bill was doing, you’ll find your Poppa and I can be just as harsh with our rules. But no matter what, we’ll still love you.”
“I know you love me, Momma. But I’ve always thought Poppa didn’t. ‘Cause he’s a stepfather. And stepdads abuse their children. Stepparents can’t love their stepkids because - they aren’t really their kids.”
“Willow,” gasped Gwen, “who told you that?”
“It’s common knowledge, Momma. Half the kids at school – when I actually went to public school - are stepkids. We talked about our folks. Most all of us wished we could have our original two parents back together. Not me! I know how rotten my ‘sperm donor’ father is. But William married you for you; we kids are just the baggage you brought along. That’s how most everyone thinks of their stepdads and moms.”
Gwen stroked her daughter’s cheek with the back of her fingers. “Oh Willow. Maybe that’s true for some stepparents. It’s true for some original parents too; there are plenty of Moms and Dads that have their natural kids and treat them like garbage. Again, exhibit one: your natural father. But when it comes to me, you are so, so wrong.”
“Momma – I wasn’t talking about you.“
“In a way, you were. See, after my divorce, I vowed to never get involved with any man who would treat my kids as second-class citizens. If some guy wanted me, he needed to treat me as the love of his life, and treat my kids as his own – better than his own. I frankly thought I had set the bar too high, that no man out there could meet my strict requirements. And then God plopped William into my life.
“As we were dating, I kept a keen eye on how he treated you. When he proposed, I demanded a yearlong engagement just so I could see if he loved you guys like you should be. He knew that becoming a stepparent would be rough, and that one or all of you would rebel against him. And he took you on anyway. So I married him. And he’s stayed true to his promise to me – and to you.
“So see, when you say William’s going to treat you as ‘baggage’, that means you don’t trust me as your Mom. I would never marry a man who does wrong by my kids. Rules? Yes. It’s frankly easier to enforce the rules when I have a husband to help me; that may be why it feels like things are stricter with him around. But abuse? Absolutely not. If I saw any, I’d take you three and be gone in a heartbeat, even if it meant living in a mobile home again. But me and you and your siblings, we got lucky. We got the best guy on the planet, and he’s sticking with us despite all our mess.”
Willow shook her head. “I’ll buy that he loves you, Mal and Angie. But the only reason he’s being affectionate to me right now is that I’m behaving. He never loved me when I was Bill. If I’m honest, Momma, I want a father who loves me for who I am, no matter how I act, no matter if I’m a boy or a girl. My real dad never did, and you can’t convince me that William does. Why should he? Even I wouldn’t love me if I was my own father.”
“Oh baby – what a thing to say!” Gwen’s eyes became moist. “You have more love in you than you know. We just need to bring it to the surface, past all that hurt and anger. You are worthy of love – ESPECIALLY from yourself. And how can you believe that William doesn’t love you after what he did while you were in Juvenile Detention?”
Willow tilted her head. “What are you talking about?”
Gwen’s eyes widened. “Don’t you – didn’t you ever hear about his speech in Juvie court?”
Her daughter shook her head, intrigued. For the moment, she’d forgotten all about asking for the grounding to be stopped.
“Oh, baby. I thought he’d told you,” Gwen sighed. “When you got put in detention, William and I came to visit you, remember? Seeing you there, obviously scared out of your wits – that shook us. Then that week we were told that the Judge in your case wanted to meet with us without you present. I had the impression it was to be an informal affair, maybe just to have us answer some questions.
However, they began to proceed with your case! In the court, police and your school counselors laid out their opinion that you were a rebellious, out of control child who was probably introducing drugs into their pristine utopia of Montclair High and North Montanas. All they had was second-hand testimony that you were dealing drugs, no definite proof; but they were ready to incarcerate you for the next 3 years. We were taken aback – there was no attorney there to speak for you; we weren’t aware you’d need one.
“Then William stood up and told the court that although you were rebellious and disobedient, there was too little evidence to support their decision. He said if you were in juvie detention for that long, you would surely emerge damaged; that they should reduce the sentence to time served, then let us keep you in home detention until you turned around. When they tried to blow him off, William promised he'd return that day with an army of lawyers. The court ended up shortening your detention to 5 months.
“Your Poppa made some enemies that day; he put his reputation and community standing on the line for you. Then he prayed every day, along with me, for your protection and survival while you were in detention. So he’s proven to me that he loves you, and I love him so much for it.”
Willow was amazed. “He did all of that for me?”
“Yes. That’s why I know he loves you. He really, really loves you. As Willow, or as Bill; doesn’t matter. Now, LIKE? I think he LIKES Willow better, and I do too. Sorry, Bill, if you’re in there somewhere,” she smiled as she poked her daughter on the noggin. “But we LOVE you just as much, no matter which one you are.”
Willow sat bolt still. “He … he really loves me,” she eked out in a whisper.
“Yes, and – honey? Willow, are you okay?” Gwen suddenly was concerned.
Willow was experiencing distress she’d never felt before. A severe cramp squeezed her upper chest and spread to the base of her neck. Her jaw locked shut, and her facial muscles spasmed to form a grimace. God! What’s happening? Am I having a heart attack?? Now the cramp rose up to her voice box and the back of her throat; it was painful! Her vision blurred, and she could feel water drenching her face. Am I dying? She attempted to call for help.
“Mmm … mmMomm … wha … wha’s … WHA’S HAPPENIN’ TO MEEE??”
Willow dissolved into a weeping, sobbing heap there at the kitchen table. She was crying for the first time in over a decade. Gwen ran and embraced her daughter, hugging and rocking her as her own tears now fell.
“Go ahead, baby. Let it out. I’ve got you.”
William walked in from the garage that late afternoon carrying two large flat square boxes.
“I come bearing gifts – the gift of pizza. One meat, one veggie. Putting them on the kitchen counter. Uh … hello?”
Gwen’s voice came through the intercom. “Hi, honey. Come on back to Willow’s room, okay?”
He did so. His wife was standing at the door to meet him; they shared a quick heartfelt kiss.
“Pizza’s in the kitchen like you asked. How’s Willow?”
“Still weepy, off and on. It’s like she’s making up for years and years of not crying. But she does want to see you. Go on in; I’ll be here in the doorway.”
William walked in. The overhead light to the bedroom was off, but two lamps and the sunlight from the window was sufficient. Willow was sitting on the side of her bed in the same outfit from this morning; her eyes were red, and any vestige of makeup had long ago been washed away by tears. A trash can with a small hill of wadded tissues was off to her left.
Willow looked up at the man in her room and smiled. “Hi, Poppa.”
“Hey, Willow. You wanted to talk to me?”
“Yeah.” She rose to stand like a perfect lady, legs together, with a smooth gradual ascension. “Um …”
Suddenly she ran the few steps to where he stood. She embraced him around his neck and kissed his cheek. “I … I love you too, Poppa. Love you too!” Now her tears were flowing again. William returned her embrace with his big arms around her back.
Her mother looked around for a fresh tissue box as the one in Willow’s room was now empty. Gwen felt a tap from behind on her shoulder blade; it was her daughter Angela to the rescue with another box.
“Thought it might be time for a new one,” whispered Angie.
Gwen kissed her oldest, then grabbed a handful of the paper and walked up behind William. She dabbed at Willow’s eyes with a few pieces and stuffed the rest into the girl’s right hand. Then she took a step back and took in the sight of these two former enemies holding on to each other.
Malachi’s voice crackled through the intercom. “OH my GOD!! Can we EAT already? I’m STARVING out here!”
Bernard u there?
Yep. How u? quit hurling yet?
Yes kept down slice of veggie pizza tonite!
Veggie? U a carnyvore dude
On a diet. Was getting fat
Okaaaay; whtevr. How goes the Plan
Um; reworking it; not finished yet.
Better do it B4 ur next shot!
Yeah. Hey Bern. Got serious question
Uh oh. Ok shoot
Ok. Ur my friend, right? We still best buds?
Yes
Would we still be best buds if I stayed this way 4 a little while?
Stay what way?
Just say yes or no
I cant. Don’t kno what ur talkin bout. Stay … ?
The way I am right now
Which is?
Um, a girl.
…
If I stayed living like a girl. Would u b disgusted, hate me?
…
Bern u still there? Plz. Plz b there.
Srry, just stunned. Yes dude. Still besties. No matter what.
Really!!
Yes unless I get a girlfriend. Jealusy probs, right?
LOL!
SO when did this happen – r u considering really turnin into a chick??
I been thinking hard about this. I don’t know when I’ll get Dr. to help me with legal action; feels like I’m in limbo. Until then keeping up with this act. But u kno … I don’t think I totally hate being a girl. In some ways.
What ways are those?
Relationship with parents much better – they treat me with love and respect. I learned today that William loves me as if I was his natural kid. And I think they may start relaxing rules soon? So maybe I get more freedom finally?
Well at least that’s happening - good
I feel more peace in life and heart, especially today. Anger not constantly burning in chest. Don’t kno if that is from being a girl or not; if not, it’s a huge coincidence.
Hello – R U sure this is Bill im talking 2?
Actually, ur talking to Willow. I’m still Bill, but Willow is becoming like a real person now, not just an act. She likes to get dressed up and look pretty, too. With my wig, I fool most people – don’t get tagged too often as guy in public.
Dude u even sound like a chick. So u happy?
I think maybe a little – more than I was.
Then Im happy 4 u. Glad u told me
Scary though. Thought I’d lose u as a friend.
Hey, Im always in ur corner. Dude/chick/whatever.
U don’t kno how much I appreciate that ☺
R u into guys now?
No. but looking at girls different – their style and clothes – and not as much their T&A. Not getting boners much – but hormones may be doin that
I M worried bout u. Rite now u in sheltered life. Tougher when out in real world as tranny.
Yeah, thass true probably. So next goal in “Plan” is allowing me some freedom in real world. Will have doc recommend to folks
Maybe u and I could finally hang out some again. I kno ur mom hates me 4 the drug stuff – but clean/sober for almost 10 months, attending 12 step program.
Man, I miss hangin w/u. I’ll talk 2 Poppa 1st; he might convince Momma
U call him Poppa? Not Stepshit? OK mind blown. So what do u look like as girl?
Texting u a pic of me. Lousy light srry. I haven’t seen u in over a year – text me a pic of u please?
Ok I sent pic; just got urs. Dude u r kinda hot
Why thank u Bernard. I C U R kind of a stud yrself
OK DUDE; FREAKING OUT.
U started it! ROFLMAO!
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Weeping Willow
Part 6
by **Sigh**
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“This will kill any love they had for me … I’ll have to go back to being angry Bill! All the good things in my life – I’m going to lose them all! I’m so scared!”
Willow was in Dr. Estrada’s office for the required counseling and yet another set of hormone shots. Mother Gwen was there, but out in the waiting room. The doc had requested a one-on-one session with his teenage patient. They sat in his consultation room on opposite facing lounge chairs.
“I’m encouraged about your breakthrough with your family, Willow. And you now can experience the emotional release that a good cry can give you. These are both positive developments, genuine ones. It’s about time, too.”
The girl tilted her head at that last sentence. “What did you mean by that, Doc?”
“How do I say this,” muttered the counselor/physician. “You’ve been giving me perfect answers to my questions for the last few sessions. Too perfect. Like you got them out of a manual or off a website. Absolute textbook responses as if you were the ideal, complete transgender patient. Frankly, I've begun to doubt your sincerity.
“I do think you were truthful in our first few sessions, but I’m not sure about the ones since. The exception is today’s report - your joy in how your family is treating you, and how much peace you have. That has the ring of truth. But I’m wondering if, in our first meeting, I might have been fooled. You were so enthusiastic, and I took that as evidence that your story was factual.
“So I need to ask you a question. And I want to be able to know that your answer is genuine. I’m not perfect; I can’t always tell when a patient is deceiving me. But I can tell certain times when I absolutely feel the truth and sincerity of what I’m being told. That’s what I need you to do. Convince me that you are absolutely being real when you answer this …
“Did you first come to me purely because you feel you are female, a girl, or was there some ulterior reason? Say, wanting to get out from under your parent’s oppressive grounding and rules?”
Willow immediately opened her mouth to give her rehearsed answer, but Dr. Estrada held up his palm in a “STOP” gesture.
“Do not answer me right away. I’m going to step out for about ten minutes; use that time to figure out how you’re going to convince me. And if it’s not the truth, there’s no way I’ll be convinced. Willow, if you have lied previously, here’s your chance to set it straight without any penalty or condemnation from me. Choose well. I’ll be back in ten.” He stepped out of the room.
Willow’s mouth was dry, and the tightness in her throat came back. She reached for some tissues. Deceiving everyone with The Plan had become a huge psychological burden, and she felt the need to come clean.
If I do that, will everything fall apart? Will my family hate me, and the doctor reject me as a patient? Wait, he said no penalty. What does that mean? Keeping this secret – it’s been eating away at my soul. God, what do I do?
When Estrada returned, it was to a contrite Willow. “I’m – I’m sorry, sir. I was trying anything to get out from under my stepfather’s thumb. I wanted to be an emancipated minor, or bust up my folk’s marriage, or both. Saying I was transgender seemed like a perfect way to get those done. When it didn’t happen, I found myself trapped in my own lie.
“But I discovered something – I really, really like being a girl. I’ve started to wish I had been born one! All the good things I reported today – they are due to my transition. Even though I started this for the wrong reasons, I think I want this for all the right reasons now.”
Estrada’s gaze into Willow’s eyes was intense. “And you discovered this when?”
“Um, when I had my crying breakthrough.”
“So you were deceiving me and your parents for eight weeks, then less than 14 days ago you realized you were –“
“Deceiving myself,” Willow inserted. “I found out I really like these changes in my life. I don’t want to stop my transition.”
“Being a woman encompasses so much more than getting along with your family during your teenage years. If you stay this course you’ll be living public life as a female. Have you thought about that? Having to be aware of men, and their intentions towards you? Not walking alone in the dark? Physically being weaker than you would have been? And discrimination – in the job force, politically, and so many other ways. I doubt you’ve thought about all this in just 2 week’s time.”
“Well, I just did your thingie on the internet," Willow replied. "It sure made me think hard about a lot of those issues."
Dr. Estrada blinked twice in mild confusion. "My ... 'thingie?' What ..."
"It's like a big online test. You should know, you wrote it! Like a huge questionnaire; it was called "So You Think You Might-"
"So You Think You’re Transgendered?, a pre-transition self-evaluation for prospective transgender patients," finished Estrada. "A set of worksheets that aim to help people determine where they are on the trans spectrum. They also force a person to consider the serious changes involved in transition. Yes, I co-authored that with the psychiatric division of the UTMB* medical school. Willow, this has been on the internet for not yet 3 weeks. How did you find it?”
"A google search, DUH!" she laughed. "I was looking for information to see if I really am a girl in my soul, to prove to myself that this - being Willow - is really real. Then that popped up, with your name on it no less. It made me wonder why you didn't have me do it - that survey - before I started on hormones."
Estrada looked sheepish. "It wasn't ready yet. And when it was, just a month ago, you were already in transition, not preparing for it. Have you filled the forms out totally, including the essay questions?”
"Yes," Willow nodded. "And I submitted all of it online just 2 days ago. I haven't heard back from you guys as to my results, though."
“I can score you right now – I just have to run your submission through the program tool and read your essay answers!” Estrada opened the laptop computer he kept at his side table.
(*UTMB = University of Texas Medical Branch in Galveston, TX)
“Well, Willow. Your score correlation was 86%. Not in the 90’s like the most assuredly transgender psyches are, but pretty darn close.”
“So, that proves I’m a real trans girl, right?”
The doc waved his finger in a “wait a minute” gesture. “This is a brand new tool; it’s going to take years to validate it. However, it strongly suggests that you are truly a transgender woman. Your written responses to the essay questions impress me the most; they’re full of hope along with a healthy dose of doubt, like an authentic transgender woman would have.”
“Good. I love how my family and I are right now, especially Poppa and me. I don’t want to do anything to upset it.”
“Willow, what if you feel differently after your next disagreement with your stepfather? You’ll have conflict again eventually – every parent and child does.”
“Doc, I don’t think I’m going to change my mind. But if I do, stop my transition then. I don’t want you to stop it now, please.”
Estrada half-smiled. “Okay, Willow. You have indeed convinced me you’re telling the truth. And I will allow you to continue this therapy, with one condition.”
“What’s that?”
“You need to come clean with your parents; tell them what you told me. About your original deception when you announced yourself as trans.”
Willow’s face drained of color. “Oh … oh no. I … things are so good with me and my family. If I tell them … I might lose it all. Please don’t force me to do this! Not yet!”
“Willow, there is a truth about exposing a lie: the sooner, the less worse. Not ‘the sooner the better’; the sooner, the less worse. Telling the truth will hurt, and cause some damage – but the longer you wait, the bigger that damage will be.”
“What if they never found out? What if we keep this just our little secret?”
“Willow … I can almost guarantee that sooner or later they will find out. Most secrets come out into the light eventually. It’s always best if you confess it rather than them stumbling onto the truth later.” Dr. Estrada then noticed his patient looking quite different than usual. “Willow? Are you alright?”
The girl was shaking visibly, to where the tremors could be heard in every exhalation. Her eyes were wide open and wet, with tears about to be birthed from them. Panicked, they darted around the room and then met the doctor’s eyes again.
“Talk to me, young one,” said Estrada in a calm, low voice. “Let’s do the feelings exercise again. What emotion are you sensing most?”
“I … I don’t know! I don’t know what this is!”
“Then describe what your body is feeling; we’ll start there.”
“My heart is racing a thousand miles an hour! And I feel like the chair and the floor are going to collapse – I don’t have anything to hold on to!”
“Any tunnel vision?”
“What’s that? … Uhh, no, I don’t think so! God this is horrible!”
“Willow. You look like you’re terrified. Is that the emotion – fear?”
She buried her head in her hands and began to bawl, choking out some words in between sobs. “This will kill any love they had for me … I’ll have to go back to being angry Bill! All the good things in my life – I’m going to lose them all! I’m so scared!”
Dr. Estrada extended an open palm to the suffering teen. “Willow, give me your hand.” She weakly placed her trembling fingers in his. “I know your parents, and I doubt they will love you less. If you’d like, you can use your next counseling session a week from now to tell them both; that way, I can be here to support you.”
“Okay, Doc. Let’s do that, please.” She exhaled deeply and fanned her face. She gradually relaxed, eventually going nearly limp as she leaned back onto the chair.
“Whew! So that’s fear, huh? I really hate that one. How do I handle it in the future, when you aren’t around to help me?”
“First realize that it’s a feeling, and feelings pass. Then courageously face what you’re afraid of. Brave people feel scared all the time; they just don’t let it paralyze them. Remember this: when you’re walking through a Valley of Fear – keep walking.”
“Sounds like good advice. I’ve never dealt with all these emotions before.”
Dr. Estrada raised an eyebrow. “Don’t you remember being afraid before? Any time in your life?”
“You know, I think as Bill I took every uncomfortable feeling and made it into anger,” Willow contemplated. “Then I took it out on whatever or whoever was closest to me. Having to deal with feelings without just getting angry? It’s new, and it’s hard. But I think it’s better for me.”
“Your eyes are red. Everything OK?” queried Gwen to her child as they drove home. “You were in there for quite a while.”
Willow smiled and leaned across the passenger seat to hug her mother. “I love you, Momma. So much.”
“I can’t get enough of you saying that to me, daughter. I love you more than you’ll ever know.”
Willow was silent for a minute, then spoke again. “Momma? You know how – when we checked out at the doc today - they asked you and Poppa to be there for the next counseling session?”
“Yes. Next week is super busy for William but he’ll find a way to get there, I’m sure. What’s it about?”
“I was going to tell you and Poppa something, with the doc there to support me. But I don’t think I should wait; I need to talk to you two tonight, if possible.”
“Okay … are you sure you want to do this without Dr. Estrada?”
“Yeah. I’m walking through a valley, and I just need to keep walking.”
Gwen Eiken looked at the alarm clock. It was 12:33 AM. She sighed and went back to reading her book using the bedside table lamp as light.
“Hey. I’m back,” announced William quietly, walking into the bedroom.
“About time, buster. I was about to file a missing persons report. So … how are you feeling, what are you thinking?” said the wife, patting her hand on his side of the mattress as an invitation.
He took off his sneakers and slid onto the comforter beside Gwen. “You know, when Willow confessed all of that to us tonight – especially how she was trying to deceive us in the beginning – my overwhelming urge was to extend the grounding, tighten the restrictions, start calling her Bill again and get rid of all the female clothes and makeup and stuff. I realized I needed to cool off.”
“So you said you were going for a drive to clear your head - and stayed gone 3 hours. Where’d you drive to?”
“Las Cruces.”
“You went all the way to New Mexico?? Good Lord! Las Cruces is like, 40 miles away! Honey, you can’t do things like that without letting me know!”
“I know; I’m sorry. It won’t happen again. I just wasn’t emotionally prepared to hear this today. Afraid if I hung around I’d lose control of my mouth, and regret it later.”
“I felt betrayed too, honey. But you’ve always felt that Willow – Bill – was trying to scam us with this transgender business, right? Why were you so surprised when it turned out to be true?”
“Because in the last few weeks I had really bought in to it all – that Willow was real from the start. I’m angry that I got fooled. I’m disappointed in Willow. And probably most of all, I feared that I’d lost her.”
Gwen was surprised. “You feared you’d lost Willow?”
“Yes. I have to confess – I adore Willow. I love Bill, but come on, he was tough to handle in recent years. In Willow, I had a second daughter; and she’s been a pure joy, just as Angie is. I suddenly realized tonight: If Bill came back full time, I’d miss Willow terribly. It was all too much. So I went on a drive to sort things out. It took over eighty miles to do it, but I think I’m better now.”
“Well, relax. Our middle child has asked that she still be allowed to live as Willow. She wants to continue with hormone treatments too.”
“I still have worries, Gwen. How will she do in public, when she’s ‘read’ as a transsexual and ridiculed? When she faces the difficulty of being a female in today’s society? I think we’re going to need to allow her to have a little independence … and pray that she doesn’t get back into trouble or drugs like when she was Bill.”
Gwen began to fret. “We were deceived in the beginning; do you think she’s still fooling us now, just to get around the rules? Do you think she’s really Willow, or just pretending to be?”
William shrugged. “I sensed tonight she was being as honest as she’s ever been. But there’s no way to be sure until we see what she does with a little more freedom. Let’s discuss the details tomorrow; then we’ll present it to her.”
“Okay. And next time you get a wild hair to go to New Mexico, you better take me with you.”
“Found a little coffee spot in L.C. where they let you sit on the roof and look at the mountains. I’ll bet under a full moon it would be romantic.”
“Let me show you something else that’s romantic,” Gwen whispered as she slid off her negligee.
Willow’s stomach was doing flip-flops, and she found it hard to concentrate on today’s homeschool readings. She had stopped earlier to analyze these sensations, and she was pretty sure it was the emotion of fear again. Last night she had come clean with her folks, and Poppa had left in his car without saying goodbye; no reassuring hug, but no angry outburst either. Her Momma had told her to expect an “important talk” after supper today; until then, she had to wait and feel her feelings. Keep walking, she thought to herself. Keep walking.
William came home just as the evening meal was put on the table; the family had lighthearted small talk as they ate. Malachi had joked about his newest sister being a unicorn, due to her powder blue cotton top with a pink-and-blue sweater she had on. Even Willow laughed at that; it was a rare non-derogatory comment from Mal. As the meal finished, Angie and Mal were excused from the room. Willow sat across the table from her parents. William cleared his throat.
“Willow; your Momma and I have talked about your confessions from last night. We’ve made some decisions about you regarding rules, restrictions, and who you live your life as.”
The teenager felt a shiver intensifying inside her. It’s just a feeling; it will pass. Be brave. Keep walking.
“I’m sorry I left so suddenly last night, without saying anything to you. Let me reassure you, I still love you. So does your Momma. That love will always be there, okay? Take comfort in that.”
Willow felt her eyes get a little wet, and the shiver disappeared.
“However, both of us were disappointed in you. We finally had come to believe you; then to find that this started out as a ruse - it really hurt, Willow.”
“At the same time,” interjected Gwen, “we are proud of you for telling us the truth now. In recent years, you’ve never admitted to a lie unless we confronted you with overwhelming evidence. This shows us you’re growing up. Thank you for that, sweetie.”
“Now,” resumed her Poppa, “as to who you should live your life as, Bill or Willow. I know you are sure you want to be Willow. But you have a whole world of challenges if you continue to live as a girl. Anti-trans and anti-woman hate are tough to deal with. Some other women will not accept you as one of them. You can never bear children unless medical science takes a few amazing leaps soon. If you keep your penis, it may not work well; if you have sex-change surgery, your vagina may not work as well as a genetic female vagina. There’s no guarantee you’ll be able to … um … come. Orgasm. You know what that is, right?”
Willow rolled her eyes and smiled a goofy smile. “Duh! Of course, Poppa.”
William’s face was suddenly flushed; he glanced at his wife. “Passing to you, honey.”
Gwen rubbed his shoulder as she laughed. “Poor Poppa. Dads get so uptight discussing sex with their daughters. But those challenges he mentioned? They are real. You will have difficulties if you decided to become Bill again, but not as severe. The main issue would be taking your newfound maturity into your Bill persona; if you did, that might be your easiest route to a successful future.”
“Momma – are you saying you want me to stop being Willow?”
“No, honey. What we want is for you to live how you want. But to really know what you want, you need to experience life on the outside more. Interact with other people; run into problems and learn how to solve them. Then before you get past the point of no return with your body, you can choose whether you really want a woman’s life or not.”
“Hey!” Willow gasped with excitement. “Are you dropping my groundings and rules?”
“Not dropping. Loosening,” replied Gwen. “First, allowing you to go out and do things with Angie instead of one of us. Let’s see how you function as a sister duo. If that goes well, we’ll loosen a little more.”
The Poppa rejoined the conversation. “You still will be homeschooled for the immediate future, and expect us to demand spit or urine to test for drugs. That will be another temptation you’ll have to overcome – illicit substances. I worry about that the most, to be honest. You’ll need to avoid friends who use drugs, and hang around ones that don’t.”
“Maybe I should attend Narcotics Anonymous,” offered Willow.
William and Gwen glanced at each other in surprise. “You’d be open to doing that?” said the mother.
“Sure! Maybe I can make a friend or two there.” Like Bernard! she tittered internally. I’ll text him.
Willow and her older sister Angela were at the Thursday night North El Paso Narcotics Anonymous meeting. It was an “open” meeting, meaning non-addict friends were allowed to attend. People were gathering and sitting down in the chairs; it was less than 5 minutes until start time.
“Angie – does it look like I’m passing? Is anyone looking at me funny?” fretted Willow. She was dressed in her embroidered jeans with her mother's lilac blouse and a denim jacket.
“Girl, chill. You move like a natural lady now, and you’re so short no one suspects anything. That and your immaculate makeup job, courtesy of your awesome sister.”
Angie took in the appearance of the gathering group. “Yikes. Some of these people look pretty rough,” she whispered. “And then there are some normal people, like you’d see at any mall.”
“Everyone’s a former addict or trying to get clean. A mix of all types. What would you expect?” replied Willow. “Oh hey! I know that guy over there!” She started waving frantically at a tall young Latino man with short-but-thick brown hair. He noticed the waving and walked over to where the two girls were.
“Bernard!” Willow winked so only he could see. “Remember me? I used to be your best bud, Bill Ramos. My name is Willow now.”
“No way! Wow, you’re a girl? That is a definite surprise. I am definitely shocked. Definitely. It’s cool, though. Can I sit by you two?”
Willow rolled her eyes mentally. God, Bern. Could you be any worse an actor? Just be quiet and I’ll take it from here. “Hey, Angie – this is my old friend Bernard. I know him from Montclair High; he’s a senior there like you. We hung together when I went there.”
“Bernard … “ thought Angie. “Mom talked about a Bernard who did drugs with my brother Bill. I don’t think she’d approve of you hanging out with us. Willow, let’s go to the car please.”
“I’m sober and clean,” inserted Bernard. “For nearly a year now. I come to these meetings to keep that way. If Bill – or Willow – wanted to do drugs, I’d have to drop him – ah, her – as a friend. Staying abstinent is the most important thing in my life.”
Angie still looked wary. She stared at Bernard and was silent for a little bit. Then: “Okay. We can stay, and you can sit with us – but start acting sneaky and I’m gone, taking her with me.”
Willow raised an eyebrow as she turned her head to Bernard. “Abstinent? You're not allowed to have sex?” she whispered.
“Dudette, you got a lot to learn,” laughed Bern.
Yo Bern u there
Hey Willow
Wow. Sounds funny, saying my girl name in text. I kind of like it tho.
How u like NA mtg?
Shocked. So many of my former drug customers there!
Yep. See that junk we were dealing was ruining a lotta lives.
And I didn’t think I needed to b there personally. But by the end, I realize I was abusing all the time I was dealing. Used 2 say I only did lortabs, and only once. But truth is I got CAUGHT only once.
You ought to continue doing NA. Gets u sober friendships, and forces u to be honest. Everyone there has lied 2 use drugs. They kno what BS sounds like. So it’s hard to fool them – they call u out on it. NA not just good 4 stayin clean, but 4 life in general.
Yeah living honestly is better. I been totally honest with folks since confessing 2 them the other nite.
Totally honest?
Yes
Willow.
What
Willow we R secretly texting on a phone u r not supposed 2 have.
Oh. Poop!
Haha bruh u even curse like girl now
Bern
Yeah?
Come 2 next thurs NA mtg again; I’ll slip ur sister’s phone back 2u. Until then let’s not use it. Maybe allowed 2 have own phone if my rules loosen further.
Ok. Glad u came 2 mtg. Missed seeing u
Missed u 2. U best friend I could ever have.
Willow typed “love u” at the end of the last text, but deleted it before sending it.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 7
by **Sigh**
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"Honey – look at Willow. She looks like your Mother did back in the 60’s!”
“Oh my God,” Gwen whispered. “You’re right!”
“Susan! Why won’t you come here and kiss me?” cried Grandpa.
“Momma – what do I do?” urged Willow.
A quick note to my readers. If you've been reading the comment sections of this serial, you may have noticed me saying that this whole story hads 13 parts. Well, I discovered last night that I had miscounted. There are only 12 parts to this story (unless I get an idea to add more). Sorry about that! And thank you for your readership and all of your wonderful comments! - **Sigh**
“And so that’s all I can think of that I haven’t told you guys. I’m sorry.”
Willow sat with her parents at yet another after-supper talk. She had initiated this one; confessing the lie of the illicit phone from Bernard.
“Are you sure there are no more secrets, Willow?” sighed William, taking the device his daughter was handing him. “I’m glad you’re coming clean, but I think I want all the rest on the table rather than getting them gradually trickling out.” As he said this, he began scrolling through the total text history between Bill/Willow and Bern.
“Unfortunately, this drops my opinion of your ‘friend’ back to zero,” Gwen fumed. “Maybe he isn’t doing drugs anymore, but he was helping you in your rebellion against us.”
William now shoved the phone screen near Willow’s face. “See anything else here you want to own up to?” Part of Bill and Bernard’s initial text had been pulled up. It read:
How’s the rest of my old posse?
Man. We all broke up. None active in chemical biz now. Most don’t ask about u.
Shit. Cancel those posers.
Been tryin 2 contact u but ur keepers too strict.
Anyone else set up new pipeline 2 deliver product 2 our users?
"Well?" grilled William.
“Oh … yeah.” Willow hung her head. “Your suspicions were right, Poppa. Before I got put in juvie, I was indeed dealing drugs to the Montclair High kids and some other users in the neighborhood.”
“One more time,” William growled. “Any more lies we should know about?”
“I don’t think so – but that’s what I thought after confessing to you guys after the doc appointment. I – I guess I’ve been lying about so many things for so long that I can’t keep track of them all. So I’m not gonna promise there won’t be more. Please forgive me - I’m so sorry I’ve hurt you guys again.”
The Poppa stood up. “I’m going out.”
“Oh William, please not another 3-hour trip,” Gwen pled. “I need you here with me. I’m kind of shaken by this too, you know.”
“I’m just taking a walk in the front acreage. I’ll be back in 10 – 15 minutes. Then I’ll finish looking at that phone. Willow, you’re grounded to your room for the rest of the night.”
The girl nodded silently as she dabbed tears away from her eyes. She walked, head still hanging down, to her room.
As she sat on the side of her bed, Willow felt free to weep a little harder. Seeing the hurt and disappointment in her parent’s faces really stung her. I wonder when they’ll get tired of putting up with me. If I were them I’d probably have disowned me by now.
There was an unexpected knock at the door. It opened slowly, and her sister Angie’s head came peering around the edge. “Can I come in?”
“I don’t know? They grounded me to my room for the night.”
“Well, they didn’t ground ME from your room. You look like you need a sister right now. I’ve got some tissues, anyway. I was in the hallway during your ‘meeting’, and I want you to know I still love you. And I know they do, too.”
Angie sat down beside her sibling and fed her tissues as Willow had a good cry.
Later that evening.
Willow was now preparing to sleep. She’d brushed and flossed and removed her makeup. Now in a long, frilly, sleeveless cotton nightgown, she pulled her covers back to get into bed.
A quick knock on her door startled her. Her Momma stuck her head in. “Hey, honey. Can you put on a robe? Poppa and I want to talk to you before you hit the sack. And don’t worry – we’re not angry.”
Willow sat on the bed with her mother; William had brought in his folding chair. He noted how much this room had changed since his last big talk in here, after Bill’s murder/suicide comment. The posters of thrash metal bands and demonic monsters were put away. In their place were posters of a few sci-fi movies and a large one of a beachside sunset, with a silhouette of a boy and a girl holding hands as they walked along the sand. There were no dirty clothes on the floor, and a fluffy pink comforter covered Willow’s bed instead of Bill’s old scratchy blanket.
“Ahem. William,” Gwen nudged, “did you want to start this?”
“Oh! Yes, sorry. Well, Willow, I expected the worst as I looked at your phone. But your texts to Bernard seem to show an evolution from the rebellious boy you were to a girl who wants to get better and improve her life. And Bernard seems to support you and even keep you honest. When he confronted you last night on your continued use of the phone, you promptly admitted it to us today. I get the sense from these texts that your recent change is indeed real.
“It doesn’t look like you used the phone for calling yet. And you’ve texted no one besides Bernard, correct?”
“Yes sir. I also did ‘net searches on it; at first to find out how to deceive you two, but then more recently to confirm that I am who I believe I am – a woman. I haven’t used that phone for anything else.”
“We were ready to ground you so hard,” Gwen stated, “but the progression of those texts encouraged us. We think you’re trying to learn from your mistakes.”
“So my grounding for this is …” Willow muttered hesitantly.
“Nothing. We’re letting you off with a warning, Ma’am,” said William in a faux police officer voice. “I do want to meet this Bernard myself and discuss his support of your rebelliousness. I can’t very well bar you from seeing him. That would mean you couldn’t go to NA meetings; he’s at a lot of them. But one more strike and he’s out, got it?”
“We’ll keep this phone until your next NA visit, then we’ll have Angie turn it back over to Bernard there,” said Gwen. “Any questions?”
Willow smiled hopefully. “So … you guys still love me?”
Both parent’s eyes widened in surprise. “Honey!” Gwen sputtered. “That was never in question –“
The girl grabbed her mother around the neck and kissed her cheek multiple times, then repeated the action with her father. “Thank you, Momma and Poppa. Thank you for still loving me.”
Two days later.
Willow was out of the shower and drying off. Turning her head to get behind her ears, she noticed her profile in the bathroom mirror. She stopped and took stock of the reflection.
It had been two months now since she had started the hormone and blocker injections. She knew it was probably too early to see breast and hip development. The problem was, she was swelling slightly all over. Her weight had risen 18 pounds since starting hormones; her eating was still too much like Bill’s diet had been, and she hadn’t really committed to an exercise regimen.
My old workout was all weights. But I want to be sleek and slender now, not all bulgy with muscles. I can’t wear any of my shorts, and even some of my skirts are too tight. Critical! I need some help. Angie’s had issues with weight a few years ago, but not now. Maybe she’ll give me some guidance.
Her scalp hair was growing to where her ears were mostly covered if she just let it hang straight. Bill had worn a short haircut, and she figured she’d need her wig for most of the next year before she was comfortable going with just her natural coiffure.
Willow fingered her nipples. They definitely were getting swollen; her mom had marched her back to her room the other day when she tried wearing a T-shirt sans bra. I’m starting to get my breasts. This is scary and exciting at the same time.
She leaned forward poking her chest out and her butt back, and pursed her lips. “Hey, boys. You like whatcha see?” she whispered. Then she frowned. “No? You don’t? Nah – I don’t either. Not yet.” She sighed and started to lotion her skin. Just then from her bedroom, she heard her Momma over the intercom.
“Everybody assemble in the living room. Now, please!”
The three Eiken kids and their mother convened as she’d requested; it was still early this Saturday morning, 8:45. William came in from trimming the hedges, glistening with sweat. “Hey, I saw you waving, honey. What’s up?”
Gwen handed him a glass of ice water. “I just got a call from the Presbyterian Hospital emergency room. Dad’s there; he fell, and is in a lot of pain.”
“Grandpa John? In Albuquerque?” Angie was alarmed. She and her Grandpa enjoyed a close relationship.
“So, I assume they’re admitting him. Is he going to need surgery?” queried William.
“No. That’s the problem. They AREN’T admitting him! There’s no broken bone; just a severe hip and back strain, to where he can’t get around by himself without help. He needs pain medicine, and someone to help him into and out of a wheelchair. That’s not enough to justify a hospital stay, so the nurse says. But Dad lives alone; there’s no way he can do it. They can send home health nurses to check on him once a day, but that lasts for 15-30 minutes and then he’s alone the rest of the time.”
“Maybe we could hire around-the-clock nurses?”
“Honey – this could worsen his Alzheimer’s disease; it’s been mild up to now, but with this …? We’ve discussed this possibility plenty of times, you and me. It’s time.”
“You’re right. Okay. I’ll go get ready.”
“It’s time? Time for what?” wondered Mal.
“For Grandpa to move in with us,” said Gwen. “Everybody’s going to need to pitch in and help once he gets here.”
“Whoa. Grandpa’s never met me as Willow,” said the newest Eiken girl.
“I wouldn’t worry about that. One thing my Dad never lacked in was love for his grandkids,” Gwen smiled. “Let’s talk logistics. William and I will drive there and get him; we’ll need to spend the night at his place, and then pack his essentials and drive him here tomorrow.”
“Malachi, you need to stay overnight with one of your friends. Maybe Mitch, or Clay?”
“That’s fine, Mom. I was gonna hang with Clay most of the day anyway,” said Mal.
“Get his mother on the phone so I can ask her if it’s okay. Now: Angela and Willow.” Her gaze turned serious. “I need to know if I can trust you to fend for yourselves and not get into trouble. I’m okay with leaving you both here alone in the house – as long as you don’t have any company, and you abide by the usual rules and curfew. I don’t want Willow left alone; both of you must stick together. I consider this a huge test for both of you, and if either of you mess it up there will be big consequences.”
“Yes ma’am,” Angie and Willow said in near-unison.
Both girls waved as their parents drove away north to the New Mexico city of Albuquerque.
“So, it’s mainly you and me today. Got anything you’d like to do?” asked Angie.
“I’m sorry you’re stuck with me today, sis. I know you probably had plans to get with your friends,” fretted Willow.
Angela laughed and shook her head. “OMG, you are SO different from my brother Bill! He couldn’t have cared less about me or my plans. Don’t worry; we’ve been overdue for a sisters-only day. I wanted to hit the mall for some clothes; I know! Let’s catch the matinee of A Star Is Born – I’ve been dying to see that – then go shopping afterwards. Then we can have a chick flick evening with popcorn and maybe some truth-or-dare. How’s that?”
“Sounds great; wow, that’s a full day.”
“Hey, since it’s just you and me, I have a question. How did you choose your name? I mean your female name – Willow.”
“It’s linked to Poppa. Before he came, I was the only William around here. Mom called me Bill but would go full ‘William’ if I was in trouble. The thing is, that name was all mine. Then our stepdad came, and I had to share my name with him. One more reason to hate him, right? But as Willow, I keep the ‘Will’ part, but there’s no way he’s sharing my current name with me. It keeps me more separated from him – and less reason to be angry.”
Angie laughed. “That’s pretty creative, sis! I was wondering why you chose that. There sure aren’t any willow trees out here in the desert to give you inspiration.”
“If I’d chosen my name by the local flora, I’d be Yucca. Bleccch!”
“OMG, that movie was so beautiful – and so sad! Why did he have to die?” Willow was still leaking tears. “I can’t believe how easily I cry these days. At least I wasn’t the only one this time!”
“Yeah, I was bawling right along with you sis. But I agree, you’ve been pretty weepy this last month. Female hormones – they’re a wild ride, right?” sniffed Angie.
“Is it ever going to get better? Or am I always going to cry at the drop of a hat?”
“You’ll get more control. Until then you need a nickname. I hereby dub thee: Weeping Willow.”
Angie laughed and ducked as Willow threw her empty diet cola cup at her.
“Cheer up, Willow. You needed some clothes, after all.”
“Yeah – because I’ve gotten too big for a lot of what I already have! God, this is embarrassing. I HAVE to lose weight. What do you do to keep slim?”
“First, cut out the snacks. I was going to pop some corn for our movie night, but maybe we need to just have celery and carrot sticks. Second, aerobic exercise.”
“Running? But I’ve never seen you go on jogs.”
“Nope, not jogs or walks. Don’t you remember what I got for my 17th birthday?”
“I wasn’t paying attention; I was still Angry Bill, wrapped up in my own stuff. Oh hey – didn’t you get your car for your present?”
“That was on birthday 16. This year, my dear, I got a Peloton!”
“A pellowhat?”
“Peloton. It’s in the corner of my bedroom. We’ll open up an account for you on it. I’m warning you, it’ll transform your life. Want to start today?”
“God, that was intense – I’m so tired!” exhaled Willow.
“You really pushed yourself, girl – probably too much for a first session.”
“So that’s a Peloton. An exercise bike with a real-time instructor. That was kind of fun, even though I’m exhausted.”
“Wait ‘til tomorrow morning; your muscles will be so stiff! You might need some ibuprofen when you first get up. But then, get back in the saddle, literally – and do this every day. While you were cycling, I fixed our supper – a couple of salads with chicken breasts and raspberry vinaigrette. Need me to help pull you up off the floor?”
“Give me a minute,” puffed Willow.
The two sisters were in the den watching their movie finish. Willow was in pink sweats accented with a yellow daisy pattern. Angie had a long sleep T-shirt on that said COFFEE FIRST; THEN I DOES THE STUFF. Willow was stunned as the credits started to roll on the screen.
“WHAT?? He was a ghost the whole time??”
“See? What a twist! I can’t believe you never saw this movie, Willow. It was M. Night Shyamalan’s first. See, not all chick flicks are just about boys and girls breaking up. This didn’t have a lot of action, but it was tense, emotional and exciting just the same.”
Willow turned to her sister. “I’m having fun with you, Angie. I never knew what a cool person you were.”
Angela smiled. “I kept away from ‘Bill’. Frankly, you were so mean, angry and selfish – sorry, that’s what I saw – that I couldn’t bear being close to you. But I like hanging with my new sister; I used to dream of having one, you know? And now – I do!”
“I hope I don’t disappoint you – I’ve still got a lot to learn about being a sister – or a woman, for that matter.”
“in that case, let’s further your education with a classic girl sleepover game: truth or dare. Have you ever played? No? Okay, here’s the rules …”
“I’ll ask you first,” said Angie. “Truth or dare?”
“Truth,” said Willow. “I’ve got nothing to hide.”
“Okay I’ll start easy though. Have you ever posed sexy poses in the bathroom mirror after bathing?”
“Errr …! Ah, yes. Just this morning. “ She blushed, surprising herself. “Okay, your turn Ang. Truth or dare?”
“Truth.”
“Have you ever kissed a girl – on the lips?”
“Yes. Back in junior high during a sleepover. We did a game called “mystery date” and I played the boyfriend role once; Me and Stephanie Mackover kissed really quick. Truth or dare?”
“Dare.”
“Lick the floor.”
Willow did so. “BLECCH! So that’s what Pine-sol tastes like,” she shuddered. “Truth or dare?”
“Truth.”
“Are you still a virgin?”
“Yes. Sheesh! I don’t know why I’m blushing; nothing to be ashamed of,” murmured Angie. “Truth or dare?”
“Truth.”
“Are YOU a virgin?”
“Are you asking me as Bill, or Willow?”
“Well … both, I guess.”
“Willow is a virgin. I’ve never even dated. Now as Bill, I lost my virginity at age 13, with a girl from my math class.”
**GASP** “Wow, Willow! So young!”
“Yeah. Drugs were involved. I had some pot, she wanted a joint, and my price was that we get it on in the back gym bathroom. That was so wrong … now that I look back, I’m ashamed of what I did.”
“You didn’t. Bill did. You’re Willow.”
“As much as I try to believe that’s so, the truth is that I’m both. Bill still lives in me … even some of the bad parts. They just aren’t controlling me like before.”
“Are you OK, Willow? Do we need to stop the game?”
“No way – especially because it’s your turn! Truth or dare?”
“Dare.”
“Sit still, close your eyes and let me give you a wet willie.”
Angie tensed and grimaced while Willow approached her ever so slowly – then jammed her wet tongue into her sister’s earhole.
“AAAUUUGG, gross gross GROSS!” Angie shivered. “You sneaky little …! Okay, missy! Truth or dare?”
“Truth.”
“Are you starting to like boys, and if so, who are you crushing on the most?”
Willow gasped slightly, and her face paled due to a stark realization.
“No … I don’t like boys. Boys, plural. I like ‘a’ boy. And I’m starting to dream about him; his eyes, his lips, how it would feel to be held by him …”
“Let me take a wild guess before you tell me. Bernard.”
“Yes,” Willow answered breathily.
The girls continued their truth or dare game for twenty more minutes. But Willow’s attention from this point on was divided between the game and daydreams about her best friend Bern.
At 10 pm Gwen called to check on her daughters. She hung up reassured that things were okay so far.
The next morning Angie’s cell phone rang. It woke both girls up; they had snoozed in the den, in separate sleeping bags. Angie answered just before the call kicked into voicemail.
“Hello daughter – it’s Mom again. I’m calling with news, and an assignment for you and Willow.”
Angie clicked the call onto speakerphone. “We’re here, Mom. What’s up?”
“We’re about to leave Albuquerque with Grandpa in the next few hours. He’ll be staying in the spare guest bedroom. I’ll need you two do give the room a good cleaning – dust, vacuum, new bed linens.”
“No problem. Consider it done,” said Angie. “Drive safe, Momma,” added Willow.
“Girls; get ready for a different Grandpa. His Alzheimer’s has gotten a lot worse; he doesn't recognize me. He might not remember any of his grandchildren. It’s the fall and pain that caused this rapid decline; dementia can suddenly worsen if there’s a severe stress of any kind.”
“He might not remember me? But Grandpa John and I … we had a special relationship.” Angie’s eyes began to fill with water.
“I’m grieving too, honey,” Gwen’s voice quavered over the speaker. “I’ve known for quite a while that this day was coming; but that doesn’t make things any easier. We plan on being there about 5 pm. You can call Vito’s to get a pizza or salads or whatever delivered for some lunch. I love you both, and will see you soon.”
The call ended. Angie looked at Willow with tears streaming down her eyes. “He used to call me his ‘Angie-baby’ and held me while I rested my head on his shoulder. Just this last summer. Just 5 months ago,” she sputtered.
“Thank you girls – the room is immaculate,” beamed Gwen as she pulled suitcases into the spare bedroom. “William and Malachi are getting Grandpa into a wheelchair; that’s how he’ll have to get around until he heals up more from the fall.”
“Does he know he’s in El Paso?” asked Willow.
“No. In his mind, he’s living in Tulsa, Oklahoma; probably sometime in the 1960’s. He thinks he’s newly married to Grandma Susan, and that they haven’t even had kids yet.”
“Should we tell him that Grandma Susan’s been dead for the last 4 years?” asked Angie.
“NO! No, don’t tell him! It will hit him as if he’s hearing it for the first time, and he’ll grieve horribly. Any and every time he’s told that, he’ll react as if it’s the first time. What we’re going to do is not challenge his reality, but deflect. If he says he’s in Tulsa, agree with him. If he asks where Susan is, say she’s gone to the salon and will be back shortly. He usually accepts those answers; he did in the car on the way back down here.”
There was the sound of the front door closing, and William entered into the bedroom wing hallway of the huge home; he pushed an elderly gentleman in a wheelchair. The old man had sparse white hair and wore thick glasses; his khaki pants had a small stain from a meal or a drink. He wore a tan sweater over his black button up shirt, and his face was void of emotion.
Gwen trotted over to him and kissed him on the cheek. “Your bedroom is straight ahead, Dad.”
The old face suddenly showed alarm. “Excuse me, young lady – I’m happily married, and don’t accept kisses from strange women!”
Angie approached him. “Hi, Grandpa. Do you remember me? Your Angie-baby?”
He responded with silence and a vacant stare. William resumed pushing him towards the bedroom, past a visibly hurt Angela. When the wheelchair pushed into the bedroom, Willow was in there, pulling back the covers. Grandpa John looked at her, and gasped.
“Susan! There you are! Come give me a kiss, honey!”
Willow’s eyes got as big as saucers. Gwen tried to speak, but found no words. William realized what was happening.
“Honey – I never noticed before, but look at Willow. She looks like your Mother did back in the 60’s! That wig – her face. Like the picture he kept at his bedside; like the ones in their old photobook!”
“Oh my God,” Gwen whispered. “You’re right! That long bob kind of looks similar to the ‘That Girl’ style Mom used to wear!”
“Susan! Why won’t you come here and kiss me?” cried Grandpa.
“Momma – what do I do?” urged Willow.
Gwen walked to the wheelchair and knelt by the side of it, facing her father. “John, Susan’s going to give you a hug and kiss, but then she needs to go grocery shopping; she’ll be back later.” She looked at Willow, waving her to come close.
Oh my god. Oh my god, thought Willow. She took rapid steps to the wheelchair. Bending over, she hugged her Grandpa and kissed him quickly on the cheek. “I’ll be back, John. Let these nice people get you into the bed so you can take a nap.” She then walked briskly out of the room. Grandpa yelled “Love you, sweetheart,” as she exited.
Now out in the hall, Willow fell back against the wall and shook her head. Then she saw Angie on the opposing wall, weeping. “It’s not f-fair,” her sister sobbed, then ran down to her room and slammed the door.
That evening after feeding him some thick soup, Gwen tucked her father into bed for the night. The door to the bedroom was open, but a slender arm reached in to knock on it anyway. Then Willow appeared in the doorway, holding a hand with Angela. “Can we come in?”
Before Gwen could answer, Grandpa John did. “Susan! Come to bed, sweetheart!”
Willow walked up to him and kissed him again on the cheek. “I still have laundry to do, John. But I have someone here who needs help. This poor young girl has lost her Grandpa; she doesn’t know where he is.” She pulled Angie into view.
“Lost her Grandpa? That’s sad,” he responded.
“She needs you to hold her and say that it’s all going to be okay,” Willow continued. “You’re the only one who can help her now. I’ll be back later; I love you, John.” She hugged him and left the bedroom.
“I’ll see you, sweetheart,” John yelled, then he looked at Angie, who had laid her head on his chest. He put his arm around her shoulders.
“There there, young one,” he cooed. “We’ll find your Grandfather. I’m sure he’s all right, and loves you too much to leave you.” Angie just sniffled and held tightly to him. Gwen grabbed two handfuls of tissue, one hand for Angie and one for her.
It was now the Thanksgiving holiday. A full 3 months had passed since Willow had first introduced herself to her family. Now that family – 2 parents, 3 children, and 1 Grandpa – were gathered around a traditional thanksgiving feast.
“Oh boy, this smells so tasty. And I’d been doing so well on my diet!” fretted Willow.
“It’s all about portion control, sis,” smiled Angela. “Watch what I do, and follow.”
William led them in a prayer, then everyone dug in. Gwen tapped her fork to her glass of iced tea. “Let’s go around the table and say what we’re thankful for. I’m thankful for all of you here at this table; I’m especially thankful that I have a chance to take care of my father, to pay him back for all of the times he took care of me. Willow, why don’t you go next?”
The middle Eiken child had just taken a bite of turkey; she looked to the ceiling in contemplation as she chewed, then swallowed. “Wow. So many things. Old ‘angry Bill’ would have said he was not thankful, but resentful – of this house, this family, of life in general. But now, I am so thankful for all of those things! I never knew how awesome my family is; you have been a blessing in my life, each and every one of you. Even Mal.”
“Mmglph!” was the best reply Malachi could give, seeing as he’d stuffed a whole dinner roll in his mouth.
“Hmm. Willow - you aren’t thankful for your cell phone?” queried William.
“Huh – what?” Willow's stomach started to twist. Angie gave it back to Bernard last night! Is there something else that happened I don’t know about?
“Your new cell phone. The latest android phone, with text and data; the one your Momma and I got for you yesterday. We thought it was time to loosen the rules a little more, seeing as you’ve acted so trustworthy. You aren’t thankful for that?” William grinned an impish smile as he produced a small metal-and-glass rectangle and handed it to her.
Willow could barely stay in her seat as the wonderful little thing lit up to her touch, opening up a new window of freedom. “Oh yes, yes, yes-yes-yes-yes-YES, Momma and Poppa! I’m SO thankful for my phone!”
Hey Bernard u there
Who is this – don’t recognize #
Oh right. It’s me, Willow! M&D got me a new phone!
Hey Willow wow that’s great
Plan is working, getting more freedom
Haha rite the plan hahaha
??
Dude ur plan totally backfired. Was supposed to break ur folks up or allow u 2 sue them 4 emansipation and instead you are becoming actual girl rite? And getting ur freedom, just not way u planned.
R u trying 2 humiliate me? I called u 2 celebrate; u pointing out my mistakes
Happy mistakes. U seem happy with changes; I am happy 4 u. Think this is better than original plan.
Really? Good. Was about 2 cry.
U cry now?
Oh let me tell u. Should own stock in Kleenex.
So can u leave house without a parent or sister with u yet?
I should ask if I can. Would have to walk or bicycle 2 get anywhere; no driving til I turn 16
You think ur Mom would let me pick u up? Like to go to NA mtg, or coffee? Or will she still bar me from seeing u.
It’s Poppa who wants to c u now – in person. He didn’t like that u snuck a phone 2 me. But he promised me he’ll b open-minded when meeting u.
Okay. Is he really mad? Scarier than ur mom? She can b intimidating.
Just B U, Bern. The new, changed u – clean, sober, stands by his principles, won’t let his friend (me) get away with crap. Poppa knows good when he sees it – he’ll C it in U. Angie can vouch 4 ur character too.
Okay. Give “poppa” my # and have him call me 2 set up time.
Yes will do. Would love 2 go out with u Bern
…
I mean – oh poop u kno what I mean
Do I?
WOULD LIKE TO HANG WITH YOU AGAIN. Nothing more
Aw nothing more really?
NOW I KNO U R TEASING ME.
Yeah. Kind of?
?? Um, maybe we can discuss what u mean in person :)
If ur Momma and Poppa approve. Hey Dad wants me-
OK! Happy thanksgiving Bernard I am thankful ur my friend
Ditto Willow
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Weeping Willow
Part 8
by **Sigh**
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“Bernard, I’m barely holding it together,” she quavered. “I … I need to get calmed down. I need something to take the edge off. I … I need … oh god ..”
“Willow – are you asking for … ?” Bernard was afraid to say what he was thinking.
“A couple of Lortabs would really help,” Willow whispered.
The next morning Willow was ready to propose that she be allowed a little more freedom. She looked all around the huge house but saw no trace of Gwen.
The teenager tried the intercom. “Momma? Where are you?”
“Hey Willow – I’m in Grandpa’s room. Come on down – I just helped him onto the toilet, so he’ll be in his bathroom for a bit.”
Willow found her unloading one of the many boxes they’d brought from Grandpa’s old apartment. This one seemed to have military things – a combat helmet, boots, and camo gear.
“It’s his old Vietnam souvenirs; he was in the Army in the mid-’60s there. I thought I’d try to make this room as much like home as possible to see if it would help stabilize his memory. Want to help?”
Willow knelt and dug through the box. She pulled out a jacket and noticed the arm. “Mom – what do these stripes mean?”
“He was a Sergeant First Class. That’s about all I know of his service; he never talked about the war.”
“MOM. LOOK,” Willow pulled out two lemon-shaped spheroids with handles and pins. “Are these still live? The pins are still in!”
“Dad told us kids these grenades were just shells, no explosive. They feel too light to me to be active. But don’t pull the pins out, okay?”
Suddenly the door to the guest bath opened. Grandpa John stood there with his pants down around his ankles; he started to step out into the room.
“DAD! NO!” Gwen ran and grabbed him by the chest before he could complete the attempted step. “Willow, help! Pull his pants up!”
Willow jumped into action. As she fastened his trousers around his waist, she felt his hand patting her on the head. “I love you, Susan,” Grandpa croaked.
The two women walked the elderly man back to his bed and guided him into it. “That was a close one,” Gwen whistled. “The last thing he needs is another fall.”
“Momma – when did he start being able to walk? I thought he was bound to the wheelchair.”
“We’ve been giving him heat and massage treatments to his back and hip; it looks like they’ve been working. I saw him get up out of bed by himself last night when I did my bedtime check on him.”
“So he can walk again! That’s good, right?”
“Yes – and no. If he walks, he might fall again unless someone’s here with him. Or he could get into trouble with his confusion – turn a stove burner on, walk out the back door get lost in the desert brush. I think we’ll have to be more alert; it’s going to take all of us staying here to keep him safe.”
“Oh. Okay. That may make my question moot.”
“Oh dear – you were seeking me out to ask me something, right? I’m so sorry, honey – what do you need?”
“I’m just asking: Has Dad talked with Bernard yet? I’d like to be able to go to some NA meetings more often; I feel I’m being a burden to Angie, she’s taken me to 3 already this week. Bernard goes, so he could take me.”
“Willow, your Poppa and I both will be meeting Bernard. I’m skeptical of this friend of yours, more so than your Poppa is. If I get any hint that he’s not on the straight and narrow, then I won’t approve. You dealt drugs with him and he slipped you a phone on the sly. God, as I say that I can’t believe that I’m not just saying “no” outright.”
BERNARD!
Yo Willow
MY FOLKS SAY I CAN GO UNSUPERVISED FOR SHORT PERIODS; THEY ARE OK WITH YOU TAKING ME TO N.A. MTGS! YAAAAY!
Awesome! Congrats dudette
U made good impression on Momma & Poppa yesterday. Thanks 4 coming over! She feels good about the new U, and your change 4 the better
U can thank NA and my sponsor 4 that change
So, when r u next going to mtg?
One today at 7pm. Wanna go?
YES, can u pick me up?
B there @ 6:30 ok?
C U then. Life so Gucci* now!
* good, cool
Bernard’s El Camino came through the gates of 4701 Las Hongas and drove up to the house.
Willow stood outside waiting for her ride. She wore a white sleeveless button-up blouse, a pleated skirt, clogs and a big smile. Hopping to the curb, she opened the passenger door and jumped in.
“So this is your car? Seems kinda gangsta,” commented the girl.
“It’s a kinda hand-me-down, take-what-i-can-get car,” Bernard replied. “It is a classic, though; a 1975 model. I had to rework the engine, and do a lot of other stuff on it. Caminos are odd cars – car in front, short truck bed in back. Ever ridden in one before?”
“No,” said Willow. “Bernard. You live in North Montanas. Yet you get a tiny allowance and drive a 40-year-old car. Why are your folks so bad to you? Don’t you have the balls to stand up to them?”
“Part of it is Dad’s beliefs. He was born poor; he had to work really hard to get to where he is today. Thinks I need to work as hard as he did to be successful. He wants me to be in business, but all I want to do is work on cars – that’s what turns me on. The other part is that when they caught me using drugs last year, dad reduced my allowance. I don’t disagree with what they did. So the state of my balls shouldn’t be in question.”
“Umm … what I said was harsh. Sorry. I’m still not as polished a girl as I’d like to be.” I’m nervous, she thought. Stop saying stupid stuff, Willow!
“No prob, and no offense taken dudette. We still can jab each other verbally for fun, can’t we?” – he glanced at her, flashing a huge smile. “Hey, here we are.”
Willow gasped. “Chula Vista Episcopal! Our church! This is where the NA meeting is tonight?”
“Yep. Every Saturday at this time. Like I said, a lot of recovered/recovering addicts come to services here; they have an outreach for people like us. And they host a couple of different NA meetings throughout the week.”
75 minutes later.
Bernard and Willow waited for their drinks at a local expresso shop, Java Casa. He got coffee with cream; she, herbal tea. They discussed the meeting.
“Okay, Momma just texted back. She’s ok as long as you get me back by 9:00.”
“Great, will do. So what did you think about the meeting, Willow? And hey, are you shivering?”
“Should’ve checked the weather and brought my sweater. The temperature’s really dropped since 7.”
“Here. Wear my coat, I’m fine. You’ll be better once you sip more of that hot tea.” He took off his jacket and slipped it on his female companion.
“Those meetings seem really helpful for you, and for those other addicts there. They don’t really apply to me so much,” Willow said. “ I – hey, Bern. What’s wrong?”
“Keep your head down, Willow,” Bernard urged in hushed tones. “And don’t say a word!”
She did as requested. Bernard looked concerned; Willow eyed him with curiosity and nervousness. Then she heard a new voice from behind her, off to the left.
“Heyyy, Bernie. Howzit hanging? OOPS – sorry. I forgot, you actually got to HAVE cojones to be able to ‘hang’, right?” So spoke a young man with a buzz haircut and a devious smile. He had a black leather jacket covering a black tee, and a big gold chain hung around his neck.
Bernard’s eyes were narrow with suspicion. “Well hi there, Rodrico Santos. What the hell brings you here? Just want to ruin my coffee time?”
Willow’s mental gears whirled furiously. Rodrico Santos. Where have I heard that name? - !! – THAT’S the guy, the junior at Montclair High, who’s been trying to take my place as drug supplier – Bernard told me about him in that first text back in August!
“Not gonna take long, chumpo,” said Rodrico. “You ever see your friend Willy? Or is he still under his stepfather’s thumb?”
“I wouldn’t know, Rico. His Mom won’t let me talk to him.”
“If you ever do, let him know I’m holding out a position as second lieutenant in my little supply chain I’m setting up; all I need are his contacts. He had such an organization, and I don’t wanna reinvent the wheel, ya know? If he don’t get back to me by the end of the year, the deal’s off. He’s a has-been anyway; I just want his damn name recognition.”
“Rico. Even if I could talk to him, I’m clean now. I don’t do drugs or have anything to do with them.”
“Suit yourself, buttwipe. Say, who’s this sweet piece of ass you got here? She any good in the sack?” Rico slipped into the booth seat Willow was in, forcing her to scoot over. “You ought to hang with me instead of this loser, sweets. I got something in my chinos that’ll make you scream; then after, I got something in my jacket that’ll get you higher than the moon.”
“Screw you, pendejo,” Willow spat.
“That wasn’t very nice, bitch,” growled Rico.
Bernard bolted to a standing stance, fists tight. “Keep away from her or they’ll take you out of here in an ambulance, Rico.”
Rico laughed big and long. “I just love getting under your skin, Bernie. You make it so easy.” He then got up and sauntered off.
Bernard was looking at his companion. “Willow … are you okay?”
The girl’s fingernails dug into the table, and her face was flushed red. She spoke in a low volume hiss. “That … BASTARD! A has-been, huh? He’ll ‘let’ me be a second lieutenant – just some f*** flunky to do the dirty work? F****** ASSHOLE! I ought to start getting the network back together – just to rub his damn nose in it!”
“Willow.”
“I know, I know, what about Mom and Stepdevil and my rules? Well F*** them! I’m not gonna stand by while some puke drags my name and rep through the dirt-“
“Willow.”
“WHAT??” she yelled, so loudly that everyone in the shop – including the baristas – turned and looked in their direction. Noticing, she became sheepish. “Uh, sorry everyone. Sorry. Um … ‘What’, Bernard?”
“You’re out of control with your anger. You need to get a grip.”
“Bernard, I’m barely holding it together,” she quavered. “I … I need to get calmed down. I need something to take the edge off. I … I need … oh god ..”
“Willow – are you asking for … ?” Bernard was afraid to say what he was thinking.
“A couple of Lortabs would really help,” Willow whispered.
Bernard silently stared into his friend’s eyes for the next few seconds, then:
“Girl. You know I can’t help you with that.”
“Bern, this is the worst anger I’ve felt since before I became Willow. My chest is about to explode; I want to scream, to kick out that plate glass window over there. Look at my hands – they won’t stop shaking! I can’t lose it – I’ll go to jail, or juvie! Please, please help me!”
“I’m not helping you get lortabs, or any chemical – you know that.”
“I know, I know! I can’t believe I’m hearing myself ask for them! But I can’t be like this either! God - someone help me!”
Bernard slipped out of his booth seat and slid onto Willow’s, next to her. He put his arm around her and gently nudged her head to lean on his shoulder.
“It’s going to be all right, Willow. Relax. Don’t hold on to your anger, let it go. He’s not worth it; he’s not worth your peace, your serenity, your sobriety. You’re gonna be okay, girl.”
“Don’t stop holding me, Bern. Don’t let go.”
Bernard didn’t let go; but he also took his left hand and pulled out his phone, and punched the speaker-dial option.
“Call Joe T.”
In half a minute, a voice emerged from the phone. “Yo, Bernard?”
“Joe. I’m at the Java Casa on Lamesa Street; I’ve got a friend here in crisis. I need an intervention. Can you come, like now?”
“Who’s that?” asked a still trembling Willow.
“My NA sponsor,” reassured Bern. “He said he’s on his way. He can help us.”
“You’re not gonna let go of me, are you, Bern?”
“Not a chance, Willow.”
Willow, Bernard and Joe T. sat sipping their drinks. Willow’s shaking had reduced to where she could hold her tea without spilling it. Bernard had just given Joe a quick rundown of the situation.
“So, you’re Bernard’s sponsor,” Willow spoke lowly. “Why are you helping me; do you get reimbursed some way for this?”
“Not with money. Service to the addict who still suffers – when I give it, it keeps me clean and sober,” Joe replied.
“So you’re saying I’m an addict?”
“You had a lortab use problem that put you in teenage jail. And tonight when you needed control of your anger, you had a huge craving for drugs. Sounds like an addict to me.”
Willow winced at the characterization. “But some of those guys and girls in the NA meeting tonight – they had been into really heavy drugs, and lost their jobs, or their marriages, or their kids due to it. Compared to them, my problem is tiny. I’m already feeling calmer – not normal, but better than twenty minutes ago.”
Joe tilted his head towards the cashier at the shop. “See that girl at the register? What do you notice about her?”
“Duh,” said Willow. “She’s pregnant. VERY pregnant. Like, any day now, I’ll bet.”
“Right. Now look at the curly headed barista girl making coffee. She’s thin. But she could be pregnant, too. Let’s say that she is – like one month pregnant. If she is, what’s the difference between her and cashier lady?”
“Eight months?”
“TIME. Time is the only difference. In 8 months curly-head could be just as big as cashier girl. Right now her baby might be tiny compared to a 9 month fetus, but it will get there. Because babies grow; that’s what they do.
“That’s what addiction is like. It grows. If you don’t ‘abort’ your addiction, with time it will be as big a problem as some of the toughest cases you saw at the meeting tonight. If you work on it now, you’ll save yourself the heartache those advanced cases have.”
“But I went to the meeting tonight,” Willow argued. “Yet it didn’t help keep me out of trouble!”
“Sure it did. It got you to be here with Bernard. What if you had gone through this alone? But you’ll need to do more than just attend meetings to keep clean. You need to jump into this recovery program with both feet, like your friend here.”
“Hey, dudette,” Bernard inserted. “When you got stressed, it didn’t take long for you to look for some dope to deal with your problems. You said that this NA stuff was for addicts, and that it didn’t apply to you. But like Joe said, you are an addict, with a small case – one that will grow bigger if you don’t do somethin’.
“And did you see how, once your anger got ahold, you were willing to throw everything away – all that you’ve earned in the last few months? You may think your life is going great, but you’re just one step – one conversation with an asshole – from losing it all. So you have more than addict issues; if you can’t prevent your anger, it will get you killed one day.”
“Yeah,” Willow replied, looking down and shaking her head. “Angry Bill came back tonight, with a vengeance. I thought I was rid of him, Bern. But he was just as strong, as mad, as violent as ever. I was actually talking about trying to deal again! This scares the hell out of me!”
“Dudette, you need a sponsor – someone with experience who can guide you through this program.”
“I agree, Bern. Would you do it? Can you be my sponsor?”
“You really ought to have another woman sponsor you, Willow,” Joe said. “Sponsors can develop intense relationships with their sponsees, and if it accidentally turns into a romance, it screws with their sobriety.” Joe’s eyes opened wide; he had an idea. “Bernard. You know who would be a great sponsor for her? Julia.”
“Yeah, that’s who I was thinking of.” replied Bern. “Willow – I’ll call and see if she can’t see you tomorrow, okay?” He checked his watch. “I’ve got eight minutes to get you home.”
“Okay. What am I going to do about tonight? I’m a little afraid to be alone with my thoughts.”
“Can you get your mom or your sister to help you?”
“We’ll see,” Willow sighed. “Maybe this talk was all I needed. Maybe I can make it through the night now.”
Despite her assurance to Bernard and Joe T. hours earlier, Willow was NOT making it through the night – at least not very well. Sleep was hard to come by; her mind was a jumble of thoughts, her emotions an out-of-control roller coaster.
Boy it didn’t take long for old “Willy the Dude” to emerge, did it? I thought like my old aggressive, competetive male self. There was nothing feminine in that meltdown at the café’. So do I really want to be female, or have I been fooling myself this whole time?
Bernard was so sweet, holding me and whispering loving words in my ear. Was it just to get me calmed down, or does he like me? Am I attractive to him as a girl? How can I be – he knows what’s between my legs, and there isn’t one bit of gayness in him (I think?).
That anger I felt! It came without warning, and took over – I had NO control. Tried to do some of the things that Doc taught me with my other emotions, but they failed completely to cool the fire in my chest. How do I control that? All it would take is one horrible anger fit to make me do something to get killed or put in jail. How can I make sure it never happens again? CAN I EVEN believe that I could live my whole life with it never happening again?
My emotions. Sheesh! Anger, fear, sorrow – I’ve been experiencing them all so intensely these last few crazy months. I sure hope they cool off – I can’t live the rest of my life being controlled by my feelings like this, can I?
She found no answers to her questions as she tossed all night.
In the morning Willow staggered into the kitchen to make some coffee. Her mother walked into the kitchen wearing a chaste black dress with a green jacket that complemented her blonde hair. “Willow, this morning will be a big test for you, like I told you yesterday. We’re leaving you here to take care of Grandpa while the rest of us go to church. So I’m really trusting you to behave -“ Gwen stopped and saw her daughter’s face. “Honey, what’s wrong?”
“It’s a long story,” Willow answered. “Momma, I’m sorry - I really, really need someone to be with me right now; I don’t want to be alone. I felt so horrible all night.”
“Why didn’t you wake me, honey? I would have been glad to help. If you need me to stay home with you I will.”
“Momma. You hate to miss church. I’d feel guilty.”
“Well, don’t! In my heart, you are way more important than a church service.” She stepped to the intercom. “William? Can you to drive Malachi and Angela to services; I need to stay here with Willow and Grandpa.” She then turned to her daughter. “Let me get some sweats on, and I’ll be right back.”
Most of the rest of the morning, Willow lay in her mother’s lap. She related the happenings of the previous night as Gwen stroked her face and hummed gentle tunes to her daughter.
A few hours later.
“Feeling any better?” Gwen asked.
“Yes, Momma. Still a little shaken, but better. Thank you.”
“I need to get Grandpa fed. I’ll make some oatmeal really quick; can you go and wake him up?”
“Will do.”
Gwen was microwaving a bowl of instant oats when a panicked Willow ran into the kitchen.
“Momma! Grandpa’s not in his bed, or his bathroom! I don’t know where he went to!”
“John, where are you? Yell out so we can find you,” Gwen spoke into the intercom as Willow ran to check other parts of the house.
“Momma! The front door’s wide open!”
Gwen ran out the door to the circle driveway; Willow was already there. Most of the 10 acres of the estate were in the front of the house. The yard was xeriscaped so there were no real trees, but plenty of cacti and huge yucca plants. The women frantically scanned the whole area visually.
Gwen finally spied him. “The front gate!”
Far in the distance stood Grandpa John at the entry gate. He was in his pajamas, and yanking at the gate bars in a futile attempt to open them.
“Wait here Willow – I’ll get the golf cart and we’ll ride over.”
“No, Momma – I have to get to him as quick as I can – you meet us there!” The girl took off on foot towards the gate.
The work Willow had done on Angie’s Peloton paid off; her feet tapped the ground in rapid, long strokes as she raced the quarter mile between her and her Grandpa.
The elderly man shook the bars of the entry gate in frustration. As he did, he lost his grip; he stumbled and staggered backwards, heading straight for a nest of cactus plants. His arms swung wild as he vainly tried to recover his balance, then he tipped backwards …
… and was caught just in time by Willow. Grandfather and grandchild were already too ‘tipped’ to stay upright together, so she slowed and guided their descent to the bare ground off to the side of the cactus clump.
“Grandpa! Are you all right?”
“Susan! How are you, my love. I was looking for you!”
Willow once again donned the persona of her Grandma. “I’m fine, John. I was just in another part of the house. You scared the poop out of me, honey!”
Gwen arrived in the golf cart. “John, let’s get you back to the house; it’s too cold to be out here in PJ’s. And ‘Susan’ – great work. That name’s just your secret identity; you’re really Supergirl, I’m sure of it!”
William, Mal and Angie had just gotten home from church; William brought in a few spit-roasted chickens and side dishes from the nearby grocery. Gwen was telling him about the morning’s excitement.
“You should have seen Willow, honey – jumping into action without having to be told. She saved Dad from another fall. I told her she’s a little Supergirl.”
“Good job, daughter,” William smiled. “You’re a chip off the old block. Your mom’s block. Her old block … boy, this isn’t coming out the way I meant at all. I shall now deftly change the subject. What do we need to do to prevent this in the future?”
“I’m looking online for a GPS tracker made especially for wandering dementia patients,” replied Gwen, “and I think I’ve found one. It’s got a 10 mile detection radius, and you just use your phone to locate; or you can have the police help by giving them the tracker frequency. It costs a pretty penny, mind you.”
“I’ll work on some things to make the house safer, like disabling the oven and stove knobs when they’re not in use,” added William.
“Mom, what if Grandpa gets worse? Like starting to walk around half-naked, dropping and breaking glasses and plates? I know there’s five of us and one of him, but I can feel us all getting more stretched and stressed over this,” worried Angie.
“Well .. there are special nursing homes that deal with Alzheimer’s patients in the stage he’s in. I was really hoping to avoid that. But if he’d be safer there, then we may need to consider it. Those types of facilities are REALLY expensive, though. Like ‘we’d-have-to-downsize-to-a-smaller-house’ expensive,” Gwen fretted.
“Or, instead of downsizing, you could come back to work for me,” her husband suggested. “That could solve a lot of money problems.”
“Honey – even if Dad was in a facility, I still need to be here to homeschool Willow.”
“Not if we let Willow go back to Montclair High.”
The whole family stopped and looked at William, amazed at this statement from “Mr. Strict Rules”.
“REALLY?” squeaked Willow in excitement. “I could go back to where all my friends are? COOL! – Oh, wait a minute. All my friends know me as a rough boy named Bill. This is gonna be complicated. But it’s still cool!”
“Time out,” announced Gwen, making a “T” sign with her hands like an NFL referee. “Willow, have you forgotten what happened yesterday? I’m not sure you’re ready for public school yet.”
“What happened?” inquired William.
Gwen turned towards her newest daughter. “Why don’t you tell him?”
Willow’s eyes got red, and her voice choked. She just knew this was going to disappoint her Poppa so much. “Umm …
… Angry Bill came back.”
To be continued tomorrow
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Weeping Willow
Part 9
by **Sigh**
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“Hooo –eee, “ Bernard exclaimed. “That’s the hottest kiss I’ve ever had – and I’ve had my share.”
“I loved it!” exulted Willow. “I love you! – Oh, wait. Omigod! I – I didn’t mean - ”
Thanks to everyone for bearing with me. I missed posting yesterday (see my blog post from them). My arm is not broken! Just bruised as "all get-out", as my gramma would have said. Anyway, on with the story.
It was 2pm that same Sunday as Willow approached her Momma. “Bernard’s on the phone; he’s asked to speak with you.”
Gwen put Willow’s cell to her ear. “Hello, Bernard.”
The mother listened for a short while, then said “Yes. Now will be fine. I’ll meet you at the front door, and I want to talk to her before you both get with my daughter. And Bernard – thank you for helping Willow yesterday, for standing with her and supporting her in that crisis. I’m so glad you were there. See you within the hour.” She then handed the phone back to Willow. “Bernard’s bringing someone over to help you – a mentor, I suppose.”
“I think they call them sponsors, Momma. Did he say who he’s bringing?”
“No. He said “she”, so I think it’s a woman.”
Willow waited expectantly on the living room sofa as she heard the sounds from the entryway. Her mother was interviewing Bernard and the mystery girl he’d brought with him. Finally, the talking stopped and Gwen led the other two to where her daughter was.
“Willow, you know Bernard here; and his friend is Julia. I’ll leave you three alone in here; I have laundry to do.”
“Hi, Willow. Good to meet you. I’m Julia, like she said.” These words came from a statuesque black woman wearing a cobalt blue dress; she had long straightened hair down to her breasts. “Okay if I sit down next to you?” She sat on the sofa while Bernard took a high backed chair.
“So you’re the ‘help’ Bernard promised,” said Willow. “I assume you know my situation. How are you going to try to fix me?”
Julia leaned towards the teen. “I thought you might want to use me as a sponsor in NA. I’m specially equipped to help someone like you.”
“What does THAT mean?”
“Well, I’ve had addiction problems with drugs and alcohol; I’ve overcome – and am still overcoming - severe emotional issues, including anger; I’ve been clean and sober for 3 years; and I’m a trans woman.”
“OMG! Those are all my issues! Are you for real?”
“Yeah, last time I checked.”
“Wait. So let me get this straight. You want to be my Narcotics Anonymous sponsor, right?”
“I only want to if you want to. I’m not here to pressure you; just letting you know I’m available.”
“She’s good, Willow,” added Bernard. “She’s not my sponsor, but she’s talked me through some rough spots this last year.”
“But …” Willow appeared a little confused. “Drugs are only a part of my issues – and not even the biggest part. How is having an NA sponsor going to help my anger when it’s out of control?”
“Honey. NA doesn’t focus mainly on staying off drugs, though that is a requirement. It teaches you how to deal with LIFE, so that you don’t turn to drugs, or food, or anger, or gambling, or alcohol whenever the stress gets high. This is the basis for all 12 step programs. The principles apply universally. And it helps to have a mentor – or as we say, a sponsor – around to help you through the steps. I want to hear your story, Willow; and after that, I’ll tell you mine.”
Julia listened intently to Willow’s story, grinning at how the teen started out to fool her parents and ended up discovering her true self. Willow was amazed at what Julia had been through; it made her own struggles seem like a piece of cake. At the end of their meeting, the young girl formally asked the older woman to be her sponsor in Narcotics anonymous.
“Now,” said Julia, “I’m writing out an accelerated schedule for you to work through the 12 steps. It will take a lot of time and energy, so your Mom needs to be OK with it. Let’s call her back in here.”
Bernard looked over Julia’s shoulder as she wrote down the action plan on a legal pad. “Wow, Jules – that’s really intense! It took eight months working with Joe T. for me to get to step 12. You’re planning on getting Willow there in 4 to 6 weeks?”
“Bernard, with the intensity of her emotions, we don’t need to dawdle. She needs to get into the fast lane of recovery. If it’s too much, I’ll tap the brakes – she’ll be talking with me daily.”
“So, I’ll be done with this in less than 2 months?” queried Willow.
Julia and Bernard both smiled wistfully at her response. “Unfortunately, girl, you’re never done,” said the sponsor. “Once you get to the advanced steps, you still have to keep practicing them every day. Reading, writing, meditation, meetings, phone calls – they’ll need to be a part of your sober life from now on, to keep your recovery going. Working through the steps intensely just gets you to recovery faster.
It was now December 20.
Willow and her Momma were at Dr. Estrada’s for counseling and shots. He was proud of her. “You’ve done very well with your weight loss, Willow; 12 pounds in the last 4 weeks!”
“Yes, I’ve lost every place on my body – except my thighs and hips. They keep bloating in spite of everything I try. Should I consider lipo?”
“You’re only 15, Willow. I wouldn’t recommend plastic surgery of any kind – even lipo – until you’re closer to 18 or 20. But let me check those areas.”
The doctor felt the outer crests of the hips and measured all around them, including the upper thighs; then he stepped back. “That isn’t fat, Willow. Your pelvic bones have widened. It’s a result of the hormones, although the high level of development you’re showing is a lot more than most trans females get. It appears that you’re building an extremely feminine pelvic outlet.”
“Outlet? What kind of outlet … I don’t understand,” fretted Willow. “Is that bad? Are there side effects I need to watch for?”
“I’m talking about your pelvic girdle – it has a more oval, widened proportion.”
“But I’m not wearing a girdle,” said the girl, head whirling in confusion.
Dr. Estrada sighed and scratched his head.
Gwen laughed. “Relax, doc; I speak teenager. Honey – he means you’re getting a “J. Lo” butt. The only negative effect is having to buy new clothes that fit it.”
“A Jennifer Lopez Butt! Doc - you told me not to expect much hip development, right?”
“As I said, yours is an extreme case. Most trans women would give an eyetooth to get what you’re getting.
So, it looks good then?” Willow wore a goofy grin. “Hey, I can think of some side effects. May cause whiplash in boy’s necks as I walk by. An uncontrollable urge to twerk …” The young girl stood and started to shake her rear end right there in the exam room. “Woo hoo!”
“That’s quite enough, daughter,” said Gwen as she pointed sharply to Willow’s chair seat. “Ah, to be a hot young teen girl. Sometimes I miss those days. But when I remember the cliques, emotions, acne, and advanced calculus, I get over it quick.”
Willow’s joy ebbed a little as the doctor examined her chest. “Am I getting ANY boobie growth, doc?”
“There’s not much tissue yet, but it’s still early – give them time. Your nipples are well developed at least. And your face is more rounded and softer. Your overall physical feminization is proceeding at a steady, acceptable pace. Now, let’s talk about your feminine socialization.”
Hey Bernard
Hey Willow
Do u remember this text a few weeks ago:
[[ Would love 2 go out with u again Bern
…
I mean – oh poop u kno what I mean
Do I?
WOULD LIKE TO HANG WITH YOU AGAIN. Nothing more
Aw nothing more really?
NOW I KNO U R TEASING ME.
Yeah. Kind of?
?? Um, maybe we can discuss what u mean in person ☺]]
Yes Willow I remember that text.
Well the Doc thinks I need to be doing more things socially with other people, more than just NA mtgs. – Like dates.
How did ur Mom take that advice
She’s OK with it! Especially OK with the person I told her I want to date.
Who’s that?
Give u 3 guesses
OK Justin Bieber?
NO
Dwayne “the Rock” Johnson?
No
I give up
IT’S YOU, DUM DUM! I want 2 go out on date with u. And folks OK with it. Do u want to?
Yes. Feel a little funny; I’m the guy, I should be asking u, not vise versa
Hey it’s the 21st century. Girls can ask guys.
Willow only prob is I’m low on funds rite now
No prob, I can pay
Or we could make it a cheap date.
What would we do on a cheap date
Short cheap date – take scenic drive to Overlook park and watch sunset while sipping hot choc 2 keep us warm
Ooh sounds nice
Longer cheap date – hike through Mckinney state park to El Capitan, sleep in sleeping bags under the stars. Can’t do that til weather warms up, maybe April.
Oooo sounds romantic!
Sorry I’m not able 2 take u 2 dinner and dancing at Hilton
Bernard I’d b happy sharing a coke in ur car at Sonic as long as it was with u
Really? ☺
Um I like u, if u can’t tell. There I said it.
So Overlook Park next Friday? Pick u up @ 5
I’ll b ready. (EEEEEEEEEE!!!!) (That’s me happy about our DATE!!)
Willow sat with Bernard at the Thursday night NA meeting; this one convened in a Jewish synagogue. It was a few minutes until the start.
“I’m looking forward to our date tomorrow night, Willow,” Bern whispered into her left ear.
“Oh Bern, I am too! But tonight? I’m so not looking forward to what I need to do!”
“Hang in there. I’ll be in the room here with you.”
“So will I,” said a just-arrived Julia as she sat down on Willow’s right. “This will be tough; even harder than your 4th step last week. But I know you got this, girl.”
The meeting started with announcements and a Serenity Prayer. A designated speaker talked for twenty minutes, then the floor was opened up for general sharing. Julia prompted Willow with a mild elbow nudge. The girl stayed seated, but spoke up.
“H – hi, I’m Willow. I’m a recovering addict,” she blurted.
“Hello, Willow,” the room replied in unison.
“It’s been two months or so since I used anything – some vodka from my parent’s liquor cabinet. But I haven’t been working the program until 3 weeks ago. I’m a transgender girl; some of you may remember me as Willy the Dude. As Willy, I dealt drugs in the North Montanas area over a year ago. Some of you in this room were my customers. And to you, I say: I am so sorry. I’m sorry for the part I played in getting you or keeping you addicted. I ask your forgiveness, please. If you’d like, I plan on hanging around this room once the meeting is over, and if there’s anything I can do to make it up to you, I will.
“It’s really scary trying to live life and handle my emotions without drugs to cool me down. I need to be able to call you guys for support when I need it, and I can’t do it if I haven’t made amends to you.. That’s the step I’m on – number 9, making direct amends. There’s so many in here –” she had to stop and do a quick sob and dab her tears – “so many here I need to do that with, I thought I’d try to get you done in one night.”
Willow stopped talking and wept as quietly as she could, face in her hands.
“Thank you, Willow,” said the meeting’s leader.
“That’s my girl,” whispered Julia, smiling.
13-year-old Malachi Eiken was still in bed at 9:45 am this Friday, two days before Christmas. A knock on his door woke him up; Willow stuck her head in.
“Hey, Mal. Momma says get up or William will come here and play Reveille on his old army bugle until you do.”
“Oh! No, no – I’m getting up. I got that treatment once last year. Never again.”
“Well if you’re ready, I’ve got breakfast for you – pancakes and eggs.” Willow entered with a food tray containing the fresh warm offerings. She carried a TV dinner table with her other hand; she set it all up in front of her brother who sat on the side of his bed, incredulous at the actions of his sibling.
Mal was in gym shorts and a holey cotton undershirt, his usual sleepwear. Willow wore a peasant shirt with girl’s embroidered jeans that held her womanly pelvis quite adequately. She sat cross-legged on her brother’s bedroom floor to wait for him to finish his meal.
To his credit, Mal said grace (it took 1.4 seconds) before inhaling the food in his typical teen male athlete fashion. “MMmmm – pancakes. Sooo good. Okay, what’s the catch Willow? Breakfast in bed – I never get that unless I’m sick. You need a favor or something?”
“Yes Mal, a favor. I need you to let me make some amends to you.”
“What the heck is an amend? Did you mean amen? Are we gonna pray or what?”
“No – an amend is when I take something wrong that I did, and try to make it right.”
“Oh …” said Mal, still wondering what was going on. “OH. This is something to do with your drug therapy group, isn’t it? I noticed you and Angie had a talk in her room last night. You guys finally came out, crying but smiling. Ever since you got with that woman Bernard brought over you’ve been, like, all about ‘relationships’. Ugh. You’re not gonna try to get me to cry, right?”
“No,” Willow laughed. “Not unless you really want to!”
“So when did you do something wrong to me? As Willow, you’ve just let me be.”
“Maybe – but as Bill, I did some nasty things. Like slugging you when you teased or bugged me.”
“Come on – that’s just stuff guys do.”
“Not when the slug is so hard that it leaves a fist sized bruise, or puts you in a sling. Remember that one time?”
“Yeah. But Mom and William grounded you, so you paid your dues for it.”
“But I never said I was sorry. Mal – I’m sorry for that.”
“Okay, fine. We done now?”
“Just a minute more, please. I’m also sorry about the air.”
“O-kaayyyy … ?”
“These last few years as Bill I was so rebellious that Momma and Poppa’s focus was on reining me in; they had to spend so much time and energy on me that you and Angie got shortchanged. I kind of sucked all the air out of the room.”
“And it’s the same now that you’re Willow,” Mal added. “Everyone just loves you; you’re the star of the show. William especially is dazzled by your complete turnaround. I’m still pushed to the back of everyone’s attention. But that’s life, I guess.“
“And I’ve just been soaking up that attention and still ignoring you. I’m sorry for that too. I’d like to change that. Maybe we can spend more time together?”
“It’s a little late for that, ain’t it? It would have been so cool to hang with my older brother. Now he wants to spend time with me, except he’s become a girl. I’m not into shopping or fashion or chick flicks, and you suddenly are.”
Willow looked at the floor and shook her head. “I can’t remember a time that I was ever a good brother to you. I’ve been so selfish, so focused on me, me, me; if – “
“Third grade. When I was in third grade and you were in fifth, at Hoyt Elementary. Some of the other fifth graders – led by that jerk Freddie Janeway – were punching and kicking me in the corner of the yard during recess. You broke in, slugged Freddie in the gut, and stood in front of me like a shield. I still remember how pale those guy’s faces got when you described what you’d do to them if they ever touched me again. That day you were an awesome brother. I’ll never forget it.”
“Huh. I do remember that, now. I’m afraid I couldn’t be as intimidating these days.”
“I’d be open to doing things with you, Willow – if we just had more in common.”
“Do you still like cars? I haven’t put together my Dodge Viper model yet; nor my Godzilla.”
Mal’s eyes grew wide. “Dude – you never let me help you put a kit together before!”
Willow smiled for the first time in the conversation. “How about we do that, tonight or tomorrow morning?”
“Consider it a done deal, bro! Er … sis!”
Christmas day this year had been the most drama-free yule the Eikens had seen in a while. Presents were opened, songs were sung, and feasts were eaten. Willow even allowed herself a small slice of her mother’s chess pie; it was made from scratch only once a year, so indulging could be forgiven.
Instead of clothes, Angie got a hefty gift card to Macy’s and a golden retriever puppy, something she’d requested for the last year. Mal got the latest Nike Air rides and a package of new cotton undershirts with a plea from his Mom to throw away his old holey ones. Willow got Dillard’s gift card, and a fine gold chain with a sweetheart pendant. “For your date tomorrow,” her Momma whispered in her ear.
“So this is what Christmas feels like. I can’t believe I spent the last 3 locked in my room, sulking and jamming on the guitar all day,” Willow sighed. “At least I’m enjoying my family this time.”
December 26, 4:55 pm
The gate to the Eiken estate opened, and an old El Camino drove through it and onto the grounds. It pulled up to the front of the mansion and stopped. A tall boy with a brown mop of hair got out, leaving the car running so the interior stayed heated. He wore jeans, his least worn pair of sneakers, a ribbed pullover sweater and a jacket on top of that; it was chilly out tonight.
Before he could ring the bell, the door opened. William Eiken stood blocking the entrance, arms folded and scowl-faced. “Hello Bernard. Willow’s almost ready; she’s in the kitchen. Now, you do remember our phone conversation earlier?”
“Yes sir. I promise you I’ll abide by your wishes.”
William smiled big. “Come on in then, young man.” He then spoke into the intercom: “Willow, he’s here.”
Willow came around the corner into the entryway where the two males stood. She was snugly covered head to foot in black wool, with a sweater top, a loose midiskirt with leggings and go-go boots. A wide patent leather belt crossed her midsection; a chunky wool beanie with a cute pompom on top and thick winter coat ensured she wouldn’t get chilled. She carried two insulated mugs.
“I’ve got our hot chocolate,” she beamed with a million watt smile.
“Uhh, wow. WOW. Willow, you’re gorgeous.”
“Thanks,” she blushed. “You’re really handsome tonight.”
“Have her home by 10, please,” remarked Willow’s Poppa. “Stay out of trouble.”
“Yes sir, Robocop Pop,” Willow laughed as they trotted to the Camino.
Overlook park was not as crowded as it usually would have been due to the cold front that blew in last night; but Bernard still had to do a little searching for a good parking spot with a view. Once he found it, he parked the car and turned off the engine; both he and Willow were pretty toasty warm at the present.
“I’m going to take this coat off, if it’s OK with you,” Willow said as she slid out of it.
“I’m taking mine off too,” said Bernard. “But now I’ve got a problem: an emptiness between my right arm and my chest. Can you help with that?”
“Yeah, I can,” she whispered as she slid across the bench seat and nestled next to him.
Bernard squeezed her around her shoulders. “You sure have become comfortable being a chick, even to where you’re snuggling with a dude. For someone who was, like, an uber-alpha male just a few months ago. When did you start liking guys?”
“Like I told my sister, I’m not really guy-crazy, except over one guy. I started dreaming about kissing you a few weeks after I started the hormones. I already appreciated your faithfulness as a good bud; the attraction just started to morph into where I kinda thought you were … um … really hot.” She blushed with that.
“Maybe it’s because when I decided to become Willow, I committed to the role as full as I could. Like jumping head first into a feminine river. I didn’t expect for the current to be so strong; it’s taking me downstream with it, and I’ve found I’m loving the ride.”
They watched the sunset over the cities of El Paso, Texas, and Juarez, Mexico. As the light in the sky turned from yellow to orange to red, the city lights began flickering on. Finally, the sky was dark except for a lingering blue where the sun had last been, and the many urban lights gave the impression of a huge, flat Christmas tree as they hugged to the valley.
“This is so amazingly pretty,” breathed Willow in between sips of her cocoa. “I can’t believe I’ve lived here all my life and am just seeing this for the first time.”
“A vista bonita for a chica bonita,” Bernard said. “The most beautiful thing here is sitting right next to me.”
She craned her neck up to look in his eyes. “You really mean that?”
“With all my heart, girl.” He looked down at her. Then his eyelids started to droop as his face approached hers.
Willow’s heart palpitated wildly as she realized her first kiss as a girl was seconds away. She held her breath, not wanting to interrupt the moment. His lips touched hers, and her whole world exploded.
Their tongues mingled, then their lips pulled apart for a split second before meeting again with more ardor. The kiss grew in desperation and intensity, as their mouths wrestled, each searching for more and more release.
Finally, the buss ended. “Hooo –eee, “ Bernard exclaimed. “That’s the hottest kiss I’ve ever had – and I’ve had my share.”
“I loved it!” exulted Willow. “I love you! – Oh, wait. Omigod! I – I didn’t mean - ”
Except for breathing, there was dead silence for a second. Willow’s mind twisted in agony. Oh no, nononono! Stupid, stupid! I’ve ruined it – the date, my love, my life! I said it too soon, he’ll be scared away, why o why did I -
Then Bernard spoke.
“It’s okay, Willow. I love you too.”
Willow resumed the kiss with desperation. They hugged and smooched; she pulled her body as close to his as their clothes would allow. Both their hands started roaming the outside of each other’s clothes; their torsos were rubbed and squeezed. Bernie’s hands migrated downward a number of times toward’s Willow’s butt, but rose up to her back as quickly as they’d descended. Willow’s hands rubbed Bernard’s back and chest mainly. Then her right hand carefully, slowly descended to his groin; it carefully felt the outline of his crotch outside of his jeans without grabbing or squeezing.
“Willow,” gasped Bernard.
“Sorry! Sorry, I just … I just wanted to see if I was getting you … you know!”
“You absolutely were. But unless you want to go a lot further you’d better stop,” Bernard said with heaving breaths.
“I do. I do want to go a lot further. I want to go all the way, dammit!” Willow cursed. “But Momma had a long talk with me earlier today, and I promised her I wouldn’t go too far. And if I break my promise, I set myself up for emotional screw-ups later.”
“Same here. Your dad called me on the phone earlier today, and extracted the same promise out of me that your mom did with you.”
“Why do they have to be such prudes? It’s almost the mid-21st century!”
“Willow, I think they’re trying to keep all your feelings with an even keel. I think they want the best for you.”
“Bernard … did you want to go further?”
“Well, yeah. You felt my hard on, right?”
“What if we went all the way and just didn’t tell them?” Willow whispered in his ear.
Bernard squinted at Willow. “You don’t have a vag. What do you consider all the way?”
“Hmm. I guess, one of us – or both of us – coming, in some way? Or part of your body inside part of mine? I don’t know – but I know right now we’re nowhere near all the way, whatever it is.”
“Well, we’re not doing that, Willow. Your dad, among other things, reminded me of the statutory rape laws in Texas. I’m 17, you’re 15; If I sleep with you, or the equivalent thereof, I could go to jail. Even if you promise to keep it secret, I can’t risk that.”
“OMG, you’re kidding! He threatened that? Well I don’t know about you, but I’m starting to get seriously ticked off at my folks.”
“Willow. Don’t joke about anger. They’re doing it because they love you, whether we agree with them or not.”
“I know, I know. You’re right, as usual,” she sighed. “How much more could we do without it being sex?”
“Hmm,” thought Bern. “If we didn’t take any clothes off, and didn’t touch each other’s crotches or tits with our hands …”
“Or mouths,” Willow added.
“Then – we could get a little friskier, without calling it sex. Want to try?”
Both of them resumed kissing, barely coming up for air. Willow had an idea, and broke the kiss.
“Scoot over to the middle of the bench seat,” Willow whispered with urgency. After Bernard did so, she pulled her right leg over and straddled his lap facing him. She wriggled her hips to settle in fully onto her new setting. “Now, where were we…?”
The smooching returned to it’s previous fervency. It was accompanied by a pelvic grinding, with both boy and girl pushing and rubbing with equal participation. Bernard’s hands roamed all over Willow’s wool coverings; they eventually dropped down to her buttocks, and he felt the outline of her thighs, her butt, her waist. He gasped in amazement.
“Baby! Your ass – how – when – “
“You like? No pads, no implants. It’s all me. And it’s all yours.”
Bernard moaned as the grinding resumed – he realized he was moments from coming into his pants. Willow sensed it too, and she began to almost bounce up and down as her groin rubbed into his. Though she wasn’t getting hard, she was definitely getting aroused.
“oh god oh god oh OOOUUUNNGGHH!” Bernard finally groaned.
Willow was satisfied at pleasing her lover even as she felt a little frustrated at not being able to share a climax. But before she could utter a remark, Bernard’s mouth went to her neck and started kissing, licking and sucking. “OOOoooh!” Willow said with a shiver of ecstasy; she could feel her nipples hardening. She started massaging them through her sweater and bra, using her fingertips.
Willow was intoxicated with these new sensations coming from her chest and neck. Bern’s hands, meanwhile, grabbed her rear and pulled it towards him to resume the grinding in earnest.
Now the girl was the one being heavily stimulated, and she shook and rocked with her lover. She’d never had an orgasm without an erection, and was unsure about what this building feeling inside of her was. She didn’t wonder for long.
“**pant, pant** Hhuuuhh, oohh … hah …**gasp, gasp, GASPGASP** ohh ffffaaAA ..HAHhh!”
Both teens didn’t move for a long minute; all that could be heard was the gradual slowing of heavy breathing. Gradually, words came.
“Willow. Oh girl, you’re great. Are you okay?”
“Yeah. I think I’m pregnant.”
“Hahaha. Good one.”
“Oh god, I want a vagina so bad right now! A vagina and a hotel room with you.”
“Don’t worry, baby. One day. One day soon.”
Willow arched back to look him in the eye. “You mean one day I’ll have a vagina? Or one day I’ll be with you in a hotel room? Or … both?”
“Who knows, Willow? Maybe. To both. I wouldn’t mind having both.”
She leaned forward into him, laying her head on his shoulder. “I wouldn’t mind it either.”
“Not much of a view anymore.”
Willow looked. All of the Camino’s windows were steamed up fully.
Suddenly there was a tap at the driver’s side window. Red and blue flashing lights were glowing through the steam on the glass.
“Move along, please,” came a muffled voice outside the car, “or we’ll ticket you.”
To be continued tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 10
by **Sigh**
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“Welcome back, honey. How was it?” came Gwen’s voice over the intercom.
“It was great! Sooo much fun; the sunset was gorgeous.”
“I’ll be there after a while to get more details. Jax just pooped on our oriental rug, and I’m trying to get it up before it stains.” Willow sensed just a little irritation from the intercom; Angie’s new puppy was not housebroken, and not learning very well.
Angie walked into the front entry holding her puppy. “Hey Willow, how was the date?”
“Great! But hey, shouldn’t you be helping Momma clean up after Jax? You told her that you’d deal with any –“
“I tried but she shoo’d me away! She’s pretty upset about it so I didn’t argue with her. Jax is on really thin ice with Mom, and that means I am too. But enough about my errant pup. Let’s go to my room and talk about the date!”
“How romantic – you just sipped hot chocolate and watched the sunset? So sweet – but you guys were gone nearly 3 hours. Didn’t it get kind of boring?”
“Oh no. Umm … it wasn’t boring at all. Nope. Not at all.”
“I thought not! Okay, dish it sis. Tell me all the steamy details! You kissed at the park, right?”
“Well first I just sat next to him and snuggled. Then I looked up at him and he was looking back down, and getting closer. When our lips touched … ! I’ve had a first kiss as a boy before, but this one was waaay better.”
“Oh Willow, that’s so cool – I’m so happy for you.” Then Angie leaned close and whispered. “Did things get any hotter than just kissing?”
“Um, yeah … is it cool for sisters to talk about this stuff? I’m a little worried about what you’re going to think.”
“I guess it depends on how far you went, if you catch my drift. You didn’t have sex, did you?”
“No, we didn’t. We kept all of our clothes on.”
“There’s a lot you can do with clothes on. Speaking from experience.”
Willow tilted her head at her older sis. “Angie! You’re a virgin, right?”
“Yes ma’am, absolutely! But I’ve done heavy petting, if you catch my drift. So did you - ahem – stimulate his penis in any way?”
“Ang – I already said we kept our clothes on. His fly stayed zipped. I made no contact with his penis. No direct contact.”
Angie's eyes narrowed. “Indirect contact?”
“Um, kind of a lap dance. You’re not telling Momma any of this, right?”
“Nope. I’m Switzerland, remember? I stay out of any conflict between you and our parents. Now. Did you finish him off – make him come?”
“Angie! I’m done with this.”
“So you did, then. Otherwise you’d deny it.”
Willow groaned. “Okay, so we did some heavy petting. Some REALLY heavy petting. Do you think less of me now?”
Angie laughed. “Nope! I’m happy for you. And maybe a little jealous? I need a boyfriend again. Here comes Mom, by the way. Don’t tell her about the lap dance and it’ll be okay.”
“Thank you for the advice, Angie. I owe you.”
When I told Ang “I owe you one” I didn’t think she’d ask for the repayment so quickly, thought Willow. It was the morning after her date; she had just walked little Jax 1.5 miles to the North Montanas Veterinary Clinic to get some vaccinations. Angie was back home helping Momma “dog-proof” the house as much as possible with water-repelling sprays and such. The weather had warmed significantly; Willow got by fine with a thick maroon sweater and jeans.
She handed the puppy to the vet tech at the counter. He wore a UTEP (U. of Texas at El Paso) cap and a matching T-shirt under his long sleeved white clinician’s coat. His voice was so hoarse Willow wondered if he was ill with laryngitis. “No, this is just my normal sound,” he rasped. “I’ll have your dog done in 5 minutes.”
She sat in the waiting area reminiscing about last night’s date. Her heart was so full of good feelings: joy, excitement, fulfillment, a little lust and especially love. I’m in love, I’m sure of it. Oh, I’m crushing on him really hard; but underneath there’s a deep affection. Our long friendship gives us a solid foundation to build on. I wonder if we’ll get married someday. Then I’d be Willow Andujar. Bernard and Willow Andujar. That sounds so cool!
There was one more person she wanted to dish about her date with: Julia, her sponsor. However, she still had some writing and meditation to do before she made that phone call. Oh, and I need to make that amend to the English teacher I terrorized freshman year. Better get on that as soon as she gets out of school. Sponsors, parents, siblings, talking, honesty, apologies and affirmations – achieving a healthy relational and emotional life balance sure took a lot of work.
“Here he is,” announced the gravel-voiced tech. “Unless you’re going to breed him, you ought to think about getting him neutered soon. We do that here. Have a nice day.”
“Not yet, Jax, not yet,” Willow spoke in goo-goo language to the dog as they walked home. “Only one sex change at a time in this family, isn’t that right pup-pup?”
Hey Willow you there sweetie?
Hi Bernard!
Wanna go out tonight?
Sure! Let me ask permission but I’ll bet it’s ok. What do you want to do?
Let’s go out to eat. I have some cash on me. Do you like Denny’s?
Denny’s is great. Especially with U.
Got an idea I want 2 run by u.
Sure, what?
Tonight. Will discuss then
Can u give me a hint?
Um … no, want 2 tell u in person
Uh oh! Should I B worried? Bad news?
No. Good news. Hopefully to u it will B great news.
OMG now I will be useless until the date – can’t stop thinking about what this news will B!
Uh, sorry. I should have kept it to myself until tonight.
Let me ask Momma’s permission real quick. I’ve finished all my homework. And after Denny’s maybe we can have some dessert? Sweet kisses in ur car?
If I can have some of ur hot honey buns too
HOT HONEY BUNS IT IS, THEN! CAN’T WAIT!!! EEE!!!
Bernard and Willow slid into a booth at Denny’s that evening, Dec. 2. The sun was already down. The supper rush wasn’t too bad, so they didn’t have to wait to be seated. Scattered throughout the place was the eclectic mix of characters Denny’s was known for; a hardscrabble loner here and there, various couples (one inebriated from an early bar run), and a family or two.
“Thanks for letting me take you here, Willow. It’s not high class, but the food is good and the price is right.”
“Don’t worry Bernard; Denny’s or Starbucks, hoofing it or limousine – I’m flexible. But I’m also on the edge of my seat in anticipation. What’s this thing you want to talk about?”
He smiled and reached across the table to take her hands in his. “I’ve been thinking about our date at Overlook park.”
“Oh! Me too,” smiled Willow. “It was sooo much fun – romantic and hot!”
“Yes it definitely was. And I thought about the things you said, you know, about wanting a hotel room and a vag –“
“SHH! Babe – we’re in public! We need to watch what we say,” Willow scolded.
“Okay, sorry. But you remember that, right? And do you also remember what you accidentally said?
“I said I love you,” Willow blushed. “And you told me you loved me too. Do you still feel that way?”
“One hundred percent, baby. So I’ve been thinking … do you see a future with us being, like, living together permanently? Because I do, and I haven’t been able to stop thinking about it since the date. I can’t work, I can’t sleep – all I do is think of you and me.”
“Oh Bernard, I’ve been dreaming about us and our future since our last kiss that night. I dream of us having our own home someday, raising some kids, going to sleep in your arms each night and waking up in them each morning.” She now dropped her volume to the barest whisper. “And wondering how it would be if we could do … you know … whenever we wanted to.”
Bernard whispered just as quietly. “Making love to you is almost all I can think about. Getting just a taste of you the other night; it’s driving me wild. I’ve got to have you, babe.”
“Um,” Willow mumbled. “Maybe we can go, like, a little further tonight? Would that help?”
“Baby – I need you. I need it all, all you have to give. But I know about all of the obstacles that we discussed – they’re still there. So, we need to talk about marriage.”
Willow’s head got light, and her goofy smile popped on her face. “You want to marry me? I know we’ve been talking around that word, but to hear it … so cool!”
“I need to marry you, Willow.”
Then the impossible happened. Bernard got out of his booth seat, pulled something out of his shirt pocket, and kneeled on one knee in front of his date. He held out now a ring of sorts, and said:
“Willow Ramos. Will you marry me?”
Willow was confused. This can’t be real; it’s a joke, surely. That ring, even – it looks like it’s plastic, and it has a gap in it. Yes, this is a huge prank. Okay.
“Where’d you get that toy?” she whispered with a smile.
“Out of the 25 cent vending machines at Wal-Mart. Best I could do at short notice.”
Other diners had taken notice of what Bern was doing, and were looking at Willow for a response.
“Oh my, sir,” Willow played along. “What a momentous occasion! Are you sure in your heart that you want to spend the rest of your life with little ol’ me?”
“Say yes!” urged one old man at the counter.
“Nothing would make me happier, baby. Please be my wife!” urged Bernard.
“Say yes, say yes, say yes,” some other diners chanted.
“Well, sir, seeing as you’ve acquired a five carat diamond, and have wined and dined me at this fine French restaurant –“
“French?” Bernard asked.
“French fries, French toast,” Willow winked. “Ahem, since you’ve been so romantic tonight, I have no choice but to say yes to your wonderfully generous proposal!”
“She said yes!” Bernard announced to the dining area.
“YAAY!” the audience responded, with clapping and whistles.
“Oh Willow, I love you so much. This is a dream come true!” said Bern as he hugged his date.
“You’re such a nut, Bern. This was fun!” she replied.
Bernard sat back down on his side of the booth. “Okay. So the next thing to do, since you’re only 15, is to get consent from your parents.”
“Consent for what?”
“For me to marry you, Willow.”
“Bernard – when I’m old enough to marry you, I won’t need their approval. I mean, I really want them to be happy for me when it happens, but the final decision will be mine.”
“Not while you’re younger than 17, baby. To get married now, legally we need their consent.”
“Who said anything about getting married now?”
“You did, Willow. I just proposed to you, and you said yes.”
“But that – that was just a prank. It was an act, right?”
Bernard didn’t reply right away; instead his face began to fill with hurt and confusion.
Willow’s chest became chilled as if she’d swallowed a whole slush drink at once. “Bern. My god. Tell me that you were just joking. There’s no way you were serious.”
“I’m as serious as a heart attack, babe.”
Willow’s heart was racing, and her world seemed shaky and unstable. She recognized fear was taking hold. Face it. “What – how – God, what’s happening? Why would you do this? What for?”
“Because I can’t stand to not have you, Willow. I want you, all the way. And I don’t want to wait 2 or more years. I’m so obsessed with you – you dominate my thoughts. I’ll only get relief if we can be together every day.”
“So … this is about sex??
“That’s part of it. But I’m ready to be married, to share our lives together.”
“And so you actually proposed to me at Denny’s with a vending machine ring.”
“Yes. Spontaneous. I’m following my heart.”
“I really need you to follow your head right now, Bern. You have to know this won’t work! For one, there’s no way Momma and Poppa will agree to it!”
“Well if they don’t, sue them for that emancipation of a minor thing.“
“So you want me to destroy my relationship with my family.”
“Right!” Bernard answered not having fully heard her question. “And then we can go before a JP and get hitched – and voila, we can love each other as fully and as often as we want!”
“Bernard. Where would we live?”
“You could move in with me and my folks. I could convince Mom to allow it, and dad spends most of his time working.”
“How would we earn a living?”
“Well, I could quit school – it’s my senior year and there’s not much left of it anyway. I think I can get a job at the auto shop near MLK Avenue and Decatur. We’ll find a way to survive.”
“And my medical treatments and therapy?”
“Huh … I haven’t thought about that yet … maybe Medicaid?”
“You’ve thought this through? You’re ready right now to commit to me for the rest of your life – a girl, who used to be a boy, who can’t give you natural children?”
“Babe – all of that stuff – can’t we just deal with those problems as they come up? We love each other, and that’s enough to make this work. I’ve found the girl I want to spend the rest of my life with, and I don’t want to wait for that life to start. You … you haven’t changed your mind, have you? Are you saying ‘no’ now, after you said ‘yes’ earlier?”
“Not ‘no’ forever! Just ‘no’ for right now! Why can’t we just be like we are for a while?”
“Baby. I need to be married to you, now. Or as soon as possible. So I’m asking one more time: will you marry me?”
Willow’s eyes burst into tears. “No, Bernard. I can’t marry you now. I won’t do it! You’re not ready. I’m REALLY not ready. I want to date you, do fun things and make out because I really like you. And I love you too! But I’m not ready to commit to marriage yet. Not mentally or emotionally.” She furiously pulled napkins out of the table dispenser, as her eyes were leaking badly.
Bernard’s face looked hollow and limp. “This is my worst nightmare,” he whispered.
“You’re telling me!” Willow sobbed.
“I never dreamed you’d reject me like this. I – I may need some time to figure things out,” said Bernard in a continued whisper.
“Omigod. Bern. Are you … are you breaking up with me?”
“Willow. If I can’t have all of you, I don’t know if I can be around you. It’s … it’s too much. Too much pain. I don’t know. Does that sound like I’m breaking up with you?”
Willow’s crying got harder to control. “Y – yes … yes it does! … Now please … take me h-home.” She jumped out of the booth and ran outside to the car.
“Awww,” said the old man at the counter.
The next days were rough for Willow. The first day after the breakup it seemed she cried constantly. Her mother and sister took turns sitting with her, feeding her tissues. Eventually the tears became less frequent, but the anguish gave way to a cold emptiness of spirit; nothing gave her pleasure, nothing diverted her from the hopelessness she now had regarding her life and future. Intellectually she knew there could and would be other romances, but her heart couldn’t see past Bernard. She had not only lost a lover, but her long-time friend.
Julia was a huge help; she committed extra time and energy into helping Willow handle the broken emotions that surfaced. She also coordinated with Bernard to make sure he wouldn’t be attending the same NA meetings as Willow for the next few weeks at least.
Dr. Estrada prescribed an antidepressant, but cautioned that it might take a month or more to “kick in”. Gwen started to see her daughter have short-lived angry outbursts – always followed by apologies, but still unsettling nonetheless.
New Year’s Eve came. Willow prepared to go to bed early; having no boyfriend to kiss at midnight seemed way too depressing to be awake for. Angie was giving her sister a goodnight hug when Willow’s cell rang. The caller ID read “Bernard”. Angie grabbed the device.
“Willow’s phone – but this is Angela speaking. Hello Bernard.”
“Uh, hi Angie – is Willow there?”
“Why yes, she is. I’m glad I could answer your question. Have a good evening!”
“WAIT – wait! Can I talk to her?”
“I don’t see the rush, seeing as it ‘s taken you four days to make a phone call. Four days to work up the courage to apologize or make up, or maybe you had to figure out if you even wanted to make up?”
“Angie – you don’t know all sides of the story –“
“Your side isn’t too hard to figure out. You want full-on sex with my sister and when you can’t get it – when she refuses to marry you AT AGE 15 – you drop her like a hot potato! I’m sure by now you’ve found someone else who doesn’t mind spreading wide open for you whenever you get an itch.”
“Angie, OMG. Can I just talk to her, please? Please!”
Angie looked at her sister. “You don’t have to talk if you don’t want to, “ she mouthed. Willow put her hand up to request the phone.
“Hey, Bern. It’s me.”
“Willow! Willow – I’m sorry. I’m sorry for not calling earlier; sorry for putting you on the spot there at Denny’s – sorry for the harebrained marriage idea. I’m sorry for making you feel that sex was the only thing I needed you for. I felt like your rejection of my proposal was a rejection of ME, so I thought it meant we had to break up.
“I told my sponsor what happened expecting sympathy, but instead he showed me how I had screwed up. I was a fool, Willow. I probably still am a fool; it worries me that I could be so lunk-headed and not see it. So I am probably not done doing stupid shit in my life. I vow to learn from that screw-up, though. I want to see you again. Is there any chance we could get back together?”
“Bern, I forgive you; thanks for apologizing. As far as getting back together: I prayed for you to ask me that for two days straight. But now – I think we need some time apart; I’m too emotionally raw to risk getting hurt again. If we’re meant to be, then you’ll wait for me to heal. Can we talk on the phone again in, say, 3-4 days from now?”
“Willow. Please. I need you.”
“3 to 4 days Bern. Okay?”
**sigh** - “Okay.”
January 3rd.
Angie and Willow were having some sister time together on one of the last days before Angies senior year classes resumed. They went to a movie matinee – the latest Lego animated feature (purposely avoiding weepy girls’ fare). Now they were browsing Megabooks, a chain store that dealt with all types of printed and electronic media. In the bean bag chair reading area, Angie perused a gossip mag while Willow read parts of a graphic novel. Then they decided to have a cup of java at one of the booths in the adjoining café.
Angie sipped her latte’ with a little relief – Willow was actually smiling some. It seemed her emotions were under better control; perhaps time does heal all wounds, Angela mused. Suddenly something at the barista counter caught her eye, and she froze at the sight.
Bernard was there, ordering two coffees – one for him and one for an impressive blonde girl at his side. They spoke to each other with smiles and a laugh. The order placed, the couple stood back awaiting their to-go cups.
Angie quickly pulled her eyes back to Willow and asked “so what was the graphic novel about?” Distract, distract! Don’t let her look over there –
It was too late. Willow stared numbly at the happy couple for a few seconds; then pulled her head down to stare at the table. Her body began to tremor just barely. “I want to go over there, to ask what the hell’s going on – but I can’t let him see me cry. Not over him,” she mumbled.
“I’ll go. I’ll give him a piece of my mind and a piece of my boot up his butt!” growled Angela.
“No, sis! Just … just let them leave.”
Both girls sat there silently sipping their drinks. It seemed like it took forever for Bernie and his date to get their order; finally they did, and walked out of the store. Angie waited for a few minutes before speaking. “They should be long gone now. Do you want to leave or do you need some more time?”
Before Willow could answer, a young man forcibly slid into her side of the booth, making her scoot to the wall. He had a buzz cut hairstyle, dark shades, and a sneering smile. He turned to face Willow. “Well, hello there sweets. Remember me?”
Angie, alarmed, kicked the intruder from under the table. “Hey! Beat it, buttface! Get away from my sister, whoever you are!”
“Rodrico Santos,” grumbled Willow. “That’s his name. And yes, he is a buttface.”
“Call me Rico, girl. And I’m a lucky dude. I was drinking my espresso when I spot you sitting over here. I remembered the last time I saw you – at the Java Casa with Bernard. You guys looked like a tight couple. Then I see Mr. B come and leave here with a new chica! So I’m assuming you got dumped, right?”
“Leave me alone, Rico.”
“Have no fear, girl. I got something here that’ll make you feel a lot better.” He produced a small packet of white powder from his pants pocket, and slid it in front of Willow. “Just snort or swallow,” he said.
In the next few seconds a million thoughts went through Willow’s mind.
What is that? Coke? It’d be nice to feel – NO! I’m not giving in to a chemical temptation! This f***** creep, I should scratch his eyes out!! – NO. No. I’m not giving in to anger either. Release the mad. Let it go. Let him be disgusting and a creep. Ask him to leave, and then Angie and I will go home. Crisis averted.
“Use it when you want, sweet ass,” Rico remarked. “You know I got more when you need it. Just call me. How ‘bout you, sister?”
“You better leave us alone, and now!” Angie barked.
“Suit yourself,” he shrugged . He started to leave the booth.
Let him leave. Let him leave. Wait, no. This asshole needs to get taken down a notch.
“Hey, sweetie. Don’t be in such a hurry to go.” The sultry words came from Willow.
Angie was shocked. Rico was surprised, but began to smile really wide.
“Come on. You like me, don’t you?” Willow cooed.
“I like your look, baby. I’d love it like crazy with a little more exposure, you know?”
“I’ll bet you’re packing a huge weapon behind that zipper, huh?”
“Too much for most chicks to handle, baby. You wanna try?”
“Let me tell you what I’m going to do to you – then we’ll see who can handle who.” Willow then leaned over to his ear and began to whisper. Rico’s eyes got wider and wider, and an obvious erection began in his pants.
The buzzhead suddenly stood up, exiting the booth and pulling Willow out so she stood with him. “Let’s go to my crib, babe. Let’s go now.”
Willow reached up to drape her arms around his neck as she snugged her front to his side, lifting up her right leg slightly to rub against his groin. “It’s so good to find a real stud, someone who doesn’t mind that I was born a man.”
“My truck’s outside, and – wait. What. WHAT?”
“Yeah. And I haven’t had surgery. You don’t mind dicks, do you?”
“What the ffff – who the HELL ARE YOU?”
“Why, I’m Willy. Willy Ramos. You know – the guy who ran the drugs op in Montclair High. You wanted to take my place? Wanted me as a – what did you call it – ‘second lieutenant’? I make a pretty good girl, don’t you think? Truth is, I’m just dressing like this until my parents kick me out. Then Willy the Dude is coming back, and I’ll put your second-rate op in the graveyard. Because you’re nothing. You got that? I’m the kingpin around these parts.”
Wait, what? Willow thought. Why did I talk like Willy was coming back??
Rico shook his head as if clearing cobwebs. “Wait – you can’t be Willy. I’ve seen him. You’re too curvy.”
Willow took her big jacket off and snuggled up again to Rico. She showed him the big, unique dragon tattoo on her left upper arm. “Remember this? Only Willy has this tat. You couldn’t see it at Java Casa ‘cause I had a jacket on. Convinced now?”
Rico shook Willow off of him in disgust. “You’re gonna regret this, Willy.” He then stomped out of the café.
Willow laughed out loud so Rico could hear her as he left. “Well, I’ll bet he learned his lesson, huh, Ang?” She then turned to see her sister.
Angela had wet eyes, and a hurt expression on her face. “We’re going home – NOW,” the older sister proclaimed. She got up and ran out of the shop to her car; Willow had to sprint to keep up.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 11
by **Sigh**
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Willow now sat in the living room. It might as well have been called the interrogation room because that’s what was taking place. Willow sat in the middle of the couch; Gwen had pulled a sitting chair up to face her. Standing next to the chair was Angela, arms crossed, face frowning. William had just finished with patients at his satellite office in far east El Paso but was present via video call on the cell Gwen held.
“Is it true, daughter? What Angie said happened at the bookstore coffee shop?”
“Poppa, I was pulling his chain – I was lying to him to get him uptight. I’m not living as Willow just for you to kick me out so I can go back to dealing drugs.”
“So you were lying to him. How can I be sure you’re not lying to us?”
Angie nodded. “What you told that Rico guy – it sure sounded like you meant it, sis. Every word.”
Gwen frowned in concern. “Honey, why did you feel the need to antagonize this boy? If he’s dealing drugs, he could be violent. Why didn’t you just drop it?”
“Did you take, or keep, that little packet of powder he gave you?” William asked.
“No!” cried Willow. “I didn’t take it – didn’t put it into my purse – didn’t slip it into my jacket. See?” She emptied her purse onto the coffee table. She reached for the pockets of her jacket – then realized she didn’t have it on.
Angie noticed. “Oh, sis. Don’t tell me you left your jacket at that cafe’.”
“Can you call and see if they still have it, Ang?”
“Yeah. I’ll go get it for you if they do,” Angela replied, punching her phone keypad.
William’s voice was getting more irate. "You identified yourself as ‘Willy’ to that boy. Do you see yourself as Willow, or are you secretly Willy – a male teenage drug lord? Have we all been living a lie for the last 3 months?”
“Everybody – I was wrong. What I did was stupid. I did it out of anger and aggression, and a sense that I needed to win – that I needed to humiliate this Rico guy. I keep making these huge mistakes. Maybe seeing Bernard with that girl made me more likely to go over the edge this time. But that’s not a good excuse. I’m so sorry. I will submit to whatever punishment you think is necessary.”
William appeared to be in thought. “Gwen, honey; what do you think?”
“I think we go back to the full grounding. No phone, and she stays around one of her parents every waking moment,” Willow’s momma said.
“That’s what I was thinking,” replied William. “And I’ll get some pee from her when I get home, to send to the lab.
“Yes, ma’am; yes sir.” Willow sighed and closed her eyes.
Angie arrived back at the Megabooks café. I wonder what happened to that little drug packet Rico slid to Willow. Did she put it in her jacket? I’ll check out the pockets when I pick it up, and if it’s there, I’ll just toss it into the trash; she’s in enough trouble with Mom and Dad already.
She approached the coffee counter and spoke to the . “Hi, I’m Angela Eiken. I called a few minutes ago. You’re holding my sister’s coat for me to pick up. It’s green and gold, kind of metallic.”
A tall barista with a big 5 o’clock shadow heard her and came to the counter. “Yes, I’m the one you spoke to. It’s right under this - wha? Hey, did someone move that coat I put here?”
“Yeah,” said the other barista. He walked up to Angie. “I gave it to that dude who was sitting with you – he said he’d take it to you.”
Stupid idiots! Angie thought as she stomped out of the café. I told them specifically to hold it for ME. Now that Rico guy -
“Hey, girl.” That voice came from “that Rico guy”, sitting in an idling, pimped-out extended-cab Chevy truck parked towards the far end of the parking lot. The truck now moved up to the pavement where Angie stood. “Did Willy lose his coat? I got it right here; I was waiting for him to come back and get it. Is he with you?”
“Sorry to disappoint you, Mr. Drug-pusher. I left her at home. Now give me her jacket.”
“It’s in the back seat. Why don’t you hop in, and talk with me for a while? You’re a nice lookin’ chica.”
“No thanks! Now I’m taking the jacket and leaving.”
Angie opened the rear truck door and grabbed the jacket. Immediately four hands grabbed her from behind and shoved her into the cab.
“I said hop in, bitch. It ain’t polite to turn me down.”
Why? Why did I lapse back into “Bill” mode with Rico? Or really – back into “Willy the Drug Dealer” mode? Do I really want to be male deep inside? Or do I do these things because I just want to irritate certain people? One thing’s for sure; when I’m hurt or threatened by someone, I want to hurt them right back. Like revenge is the most important thing. What did Julia tell me? “Revenge is a dish that’s best thrown in the trash.”
Willow continued to sit on the couch in the living room long after the grilling session with her parents had ended. She was trying to manage the jumble of thoughts flooding her brain.
All of my freedoms – lost again. And who knows how long it will take to win them back. Was that episode with Rico this afternoon really that bad? I didn’t hurt anyone but him – and he’s such a sleazeball, he deserves to be hurt. Willow snickered at the memory of Rico realizing that he was being turned on by a “tranny”. He’s so transphobic and bigoted. He deserved what he got. So what’s the big deal – why am I being grounded if it didn’t hurt anyone else besides that lowlife?
“Willow, remember you need to turn your phone over to me,” her Momma said on the intercom. “I’m in the kitchen.”
“Coming, Momma.” Willow dug the cell out of her purse. As she did, it rang; the screen said “Angie”.
“Hey Ang. Did you find my coat?”
“Hey, you piece of shit. Your sister Angie can’t come to the phone. She’s a little tied up, know what I mean?”
Willow froze. That was Rico’s voice. Transmitting from Angie’s cell phone.
“Don’t believe me? Punch the video call button on your phone,” Rico continued.
She did. The screen showed Rico sitting in the front seat of a car, or truck; sitting in the back was a big guy with a bandana hiding all but his eyes. Next to him was a teenage girl with her hands pulled behind her back, and bandanas wrapped around her head – one as a gag, the other as a blindfold. Even with all of that, the girl was clearly Willow’s sister.
“Rico! Let her go! If you hurt her, I’ll –“
“You’ll do what? Seduce me again? No, let me tell you what you’ll do. I don’t want your ugly piece of trash sister. I want you. You need to be taught a lesson. So we’re going to do an exchange: You, for your sister. Come down to the south side, to the intersection of Uvalde and Challo; walk down the alleyway between the two abandoned buildings on the northwest corner. I’ll be there with your sis and some friends of mine, ‘kay? Just you, no one else. No policia either, comprende? Or your sister gets hurt. She says she’s a virgin; one of my amigos here really wants to pop her cherry, make her all preggy. I can’t hold him back forever. You got twenty minutes. Drive fast. Bye-bye now.” The screen went blank.
Willow furiously tried to call back, but there was no answer; finally it rolled over to Angie’s voicemail. “Rico, I can’t drive! I’m only 15 – I don’t have a license or car!” she screamed, knowing that Rico wouldn’t check that message.
Willow realized with horror - her actions earlier today had now indeed hurt someone she cared for.
God help! What do I do? Police? No – Rico will rape Angie. Mom? Dad? I’ve got 19 minutes now! Who can I –
She frantically opened her phone to favorites and punched a name.
“Hey, Willow. Can I call you back? I'm - ”
“BERNARD! GET IN YOUR CAR AND COME TO MY HOUSE TO GET ME! NOW, PLEASE!”
“Uh, Willow – right now I’m with someon-“
“I KNOW – YOU’RE WITH A BLONDE GIRL. I DON’T CARE. BERNARD, RICARDO SANTOS HAS KIDNAPPED ANGIE AND I’VE GOT BARELY 18 MINUTES TO GET TO HER AND SAVE HER! I NEED A RIDE, AND A FRIEND. I’LL NEVER MESS WITH YOUR PERSONAL LIFE AGAIN, I’LL NEVER ASK FOR ANOTHER FAVOR. PLEASE, BERNARD. PLEASE!”
There were 5 seconds of silence. Then:
“I’m on my way.”
Willow hung up and ran into the bedroom wing, headed to her Grandpa’s room. She turned the lights on; Grandpa was still in bed, and the lights on didn’t seem to wake him right now. She headed to the box that held his Vietnam memorabilia. Taking out the two dummy grenades, she looked for a place to put them.
Damn – I don’t have my coat!
She looked around the room; she saw Grandpa had on his green Sergeant First Class jacket. Willow quickly slid him out of it and donned it; it nearly swallowed the girl, it was so oversized for her. She jammed the grenades into the pockets and took off for the garage. In there, she grabbed a big camping spotlight that hung on the wall shelves. Now Willow ran for the front door. She reached the entryway at the same time her Momma did.
“Willow! What was with all the yelling? Why do you have Dad’s army jacket on?”
Willow was at the keypad, punching the code for the gate to open and stay open. She grabbed the front doorknob and turned to face Gwen.
“Momma, I’m about to disobey you. It’s because Angie is in trouble. I have to go get her, and you can’t be there – neither can the police. I love you.”
“Willow, stop. Let me help-“
“MOMMA! There’s no time!”
“Willow, if you leave, I’m warning you - I’ll call 911 and we’ll track you–“
“No, you won’t,” said the girl as she dropped her phone on the floor. She then took off on foot, running toward the front gate. As she ran in the fading daylight, she saw Bernard’s El Camino drive up and through the entry.
Her mother ran to the front drive; she saw the silhouette of her daughter enter a car. It screeched on the asphalt as it jackrabbited back out of the estate grounds. Gwen’s stomach was in knots; something extremely horrible was happening, and she didn’t know what it was or what to do. Helplessness overtook her – until she realized she had one more thing she could do. She opened her cell phone and touched a number she’d recently put into its digital phonebook.
“Bernard! 9 minutes - we won’t get there in time!”
“Yes we will. Hang on – I’m gonna take some risks here.”
They zoomed through a red light barely missing a FedEx van; finally they reached the interstate. Bernard floored the accelerator and passed cars doing 70 mph as if they were parked. He reached the Uvalde exit and suddenly they were a block from the meeting alley.
“Okay Bernard. Remember, no matter what happens, you get Angie out of here. Even if it means leaving me behind. Get her out of here and back home safe.”
“Willow. You know he’s not going to let Angie go, right? You go in there and he’s got you both – you can’t trust him!”
“I’m not trusting him; I’m trusting you. Here’s the plan. Watch when I enter the alleyway; then wait 60 seconds, and …”
Willow ran down Uvalde street to the Challo intersection, a poorly lit and poorly populated area; if it could speak, it would have said “beware, all those who enter.” She found the alley she needed. There was a split second of hesitation as she turned into the blackened sliver of street; it was so dark, she could hardly see. Then she intrepidly ran in.
“Rico! I’m here. Show yourself! Give me my sister!”
Twenty feet in front of her, dark human forms emerged from the walls of the alley. One of them clicked a flashlight on, and Willow squinted as it shone in her face.
“Two can play that game, jerk,” she cried, as she clicked on the big camping spotlight from the garage. The crevasse was now illuminated, and Willow saw Rico, two of his amigos/goons, and - Angie. She was bound only by the mouth gag and one of the goons who stood behind her holding her arms.
“Let her go, Rico. Let her go and you can have me.”
“Change in plans, freak. We keeping both of you.” Rico extracted a small pistol from the back of his trousers; he wiggled it as he held it to his shoulder.
“I got no gun; I got something better,” replied Willow as she put the spotlight on the ground and pulled both grenades out of the pockets of the army jacket. Using her mouth, she pulled both pins out while holding the handles down. “In this narrow space, these take us all out.”
“Shit, dude,” one of Rico’s accomplices gasped. “Grenades, dude! Where’d she find-”
“My contacts,” Willow barked. “They have shit you guys can’t even imagine. I had these tucked away just for a time like this. Angie, walk over to me.”
The flunky holding Angie let go, and the freed sister walked shakily but rapidly to Willow’s side. “Did they violate you?” Willow muttered. Angie shook her head.
“We’re going to back out of here. You guys take one step and I throw ‘em.” Willow lay the camp spotlight on the ground with the beam still shining in the hood’s faces. She began to walk backwards with Angie, all the while holding the grenades in front of her.
Rico’s buds still looked spooked by the hand bombs, but Rico was angry and suspicious. “There’s no way those are real!” he yelled.
“You want to find out the hard way, asshole?” Willow yelled, still walking backwards. Bernard, where are you?
Rico suddenly pointed the gun at Willow. “Stop, bitch!”
Immediately the bright lights of an auto turned on from behind the three hoods. It had crept down the backstreet from the other end undetected, idling in DRIVE. Now the engine gunned and it rocketed towards the men.
Rico’s two buddies screamed; one flattened himself against a wall, as did Rico. The car, an El Camino, barely grazed them as it passed by. The last thug wasn’t so lucky; he got clipped by the front bumper and hit the pavement along the opposite wall of the alley. Luckily for him, the wheels didn’t run over him. The car kept going towards the other opening of the alley, where two girls now waited. Rico already was running down that way to try to get them.
The Camino’s tailgate had been lowered previously. “Get in!” Willow yelled at her sister, shoving her into the bed of the car/truck. Then Willow jumped in. “Go go go, Bern!” she screamed through the back glass.
Bernard gunned the engine as both girls held on in the bed. A successful escape. That is, it would have been if the left rear tire hadn’t hit an unseeable pothole. The Camino bounced heavily, throwing the two girls into the air. Angie came back down in the bed. Willow glanced off the left rim of the bed and onto the asphalt.
Bernard hit the brakes when he realized what had happened. He stuck his head out of the driver side window and looked back. “WILLOW!” he bellowed. He saw he was 30 feet ahead of her.
She was lying in the road, still conscious but stunned. Rico ran up to where she was; his pistol was pointed at the El Camino, though. He fired two shots at it; both hit metal, but none hit flesh.
“Willow!” screamed Angela.
“Bernard! You’ve got Angie! GO! GO-GO-GO!!” yelled Willow.
“Say goodbye to your ugly ass sister,” sneered Rico as he took careful aim at Angie. But Willow rolled to her side and kicked him in the knee. Losing his balance, the bullet that left his gun went into the sky.
“WILLOW, GET UP!” yelled Bernard as he started to turn the car back towards her.
Rico was on hands and knees, quickly rising up from his fall. He resumed shooting wildly at Angie and Bernard. Willow grabbed his leg and twisted her body, taking him down once more.
“BERNARD, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, GO-GO-GO!!”
The El Camino hesitated for a second, then burned rubber as it took off, with Angie holding on for dear life in the back.
“Bernard! You left her behind! Damn you! Damn you to hell!” Angie cried in the car’s bed.
“Oh god … Willow. Willow!” Bernard wept as he sped away.
“Where the hell have you taken me?”
In the dark street after the attempted rescue, Willow had been blindfolded with her wrists tied behind her. She then was put in the back of some vehicle, and transported at high speeds over bumpy roads to a new location. Now she walked carefully to avoid stumbling, unable to see and being pushed and kicked as she stepped.
“Quiet, tranny faggot piece of shit,” one of Rico’s goons said. Willow noticed how much braver these guys sounded when they weren’t facing fake grenades and an El Camino.
“Stop. Now turn around.” Willow felt rough hands grab her shoulders and twist her so suddenly that she almost fell. “Stay still; if you kick me I will cut you, freako.” That was Rico’s voice, she realized. Someone grabbed the collar of her grandpa’s army jacket and yanked it off of her. Now hands fumbled with the top button and zipper of her jeans. In short order, both her pants and panties were pulled down to her ankles.
Her heart beat like a triphammer, and a numb sensation encompassed her mouth and fingers. That’s fear, she thought. Face it, Willow. Feel it, but keep walking through it.
“Damn, that ass,” one voice said. “That ain’t no man’s ass.”
“Look at his junk, stupido,” barked Rico. “He’s a man – for now.”
“Sorry, nothing to f*** here,” said Willow. “No front door. Now, if any of you is gay, then … ?”
“Yeah, Emilio. You can have him – you were admiring his ass.”
“Man, I ain’t no homo!”
“Hey assholes,” Rico’s voice chastised, “stop messing around and let’s do this.”
Now Willow was pushed backwards – her buttocks hit an edge of a counter or table. The pushing continued until she was lying back on a hard, flat surface.
“Everybody ready? Here goes,” she heard Rico say. Then her blindfold was ripped off. She blinked her eyes to take in her surroundings.
She was lying flat on a table or something, on her back. Her arms were held by someone standing behind her head, and another guy stood at her feet holding her legs down. All present wore bandanas over their faces and scalps, except for Rico. A dim overhead light flickered and showed that they were in a small room that opened into another room, possibly a kitchen.
“So I’m on a dinner table. Does that mean one of you is gonna be eating me out?” snarked Willow.
“SHUT THE F*** UP, FAG!” The guy holding her hands slugged her in the face.
“No hits to the head, dummy! I want him awake for this!” ordered Rico, who stood at Willow’s left.
“She’s seriously pissing me off,” said the hitter.
“Don’t call him ‘she’. Say ‘him’ or ‘it’.” Now Rico spoke to his captive on the table. “I bet you thought I was just gonna off you, huh?”
“If you’re going to, stop wasting time and do it,” snapped Willow.
“Nope. That’s too easy for you. You die saving your sister, and then you’re this famous tranny martyr, a hero, while I have to leave town to avoid a murder rap. No, see. I want you to suffer. That’s why I brought in a specialist here.” Rico pointed across the table; there was another person with a bandana- wrapped face there, starting an intravenous line in her right arm.
“This dude is with the Southside Lobos. I’m gonna be partnering with them once you’re out of the way. This, tonight, is gonna count as my initiation into their gang. Through me, they’ll have a way into North Montanas – I’ll be the drug king of the north. But I couldn’t do it with everyone waiting for Willy the Dude to come back. So I gotta make sure you ain’t coming back. ‘Cause the Lobos are gonna –“
“HMM – MMT,” growled the specialist. He’d gotten the IV in, and now he glared angrily at Rico, pulling his hand across his mouth bandana in a “zip it!” gesture.
“So you’re not gonna kill me, but I’ll be off the streets? What, you gonna keep me as a prisoner?”
“No.” Rico began to grin, then smile, then laugh out loud. “Willy, I’m gonna de-nut you.”
Willow’s face showed confusion at first, then shock as she comprehended what he’d said.
Rico clarified. “Castration. I’m gonna neuter you, you ugly dog. Gonna make you a eunuch. And I’m gonna keep your dead cojones in a jar in my crib; everyone will know I’m the badass that made Willy into a Wilma. And no chica can run a Lobo drug op, see? You won’t be able to be a man again. You gonna remember me every time you wanna get a hard-on or make kids, and realize you can’t.”
“J – Joke’s on you, Rico,” said Willow, trying fiercely to put on a brave face. “See, I was lying before. I’ve been living like a girl because I really, really want to be a girl. So I was going to have this done eventually anyway.”
“Now I know you lying,” Rico snorted. “You’re scared to death. And you should be, because we’re not gonna use any numbing juice. You’re gonna feel every cut of the knife, every stitch. That’s my present to you, you sorry – hey!”
Rico looked at the specialist, who was attaching a small syringe of yellow fluid to the IV port. “Hey bro, what is that? Valium?” asked the future North Montanas drug king. “I want him awake when you cut his ballsack open!”
The specialist peered at Rico with disdain. “I’ll only use it if you dipshits can’t hold him still. I ain’t gonna have him bleeding all over me,” he said in a gravelly, raspy tone.
Willows mind clicked with recognition. “Hey! I know that voice! You’re the tech from North Montanas Vet Clinic!”
The “specialist’s” eyes suddenly widened in panic. He grabbed the syringe of Valium and pushed it rapidly into the IV line. Within seconds Willow felt fuzzy. “No, no,” she croaked, desperately trying to stay awake. The last thing she heard before unconsciousness was a sharp knocking on the door to the room.
To be continued tomorrow in the final, concluding Part 12.
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Weeping Willow
Part 12
by **Sigh**
Copyright© 2019 plaintivesigh All Rights Reserved. |
Angie laughed. “It’s your first prom. You’re supposed to be nervous!”
As I have been saying all along, this story was written fully before I started to post it. The full length was 12 parts (earlier I had said 13, but I miscounted). However, as I have gone along, more has been added to Willow's story. So much, in fact, that part 12 would have to be twice as long as the other parts to bring Willow's story to a conclusion. That seems unwieldy ... so, I'm now announcing that there WILL be a Part 13 tomorrow. And I'm certain that will be all. Pretty certain. We'll see. Sorry for the confusion, if I caused any. Now, on with today's episode!
The person in bed 204 was waking up. The eyes opened to a fuzzy glare of light; then focused with more blinking. A quick turn of the head showed that this was a hospital room; there was a heart monitor with lines and numbers, and an IV pole with clear liquid dripping down a tube and into the person’s arm.
The patient tried to sit up and felt pain all over, as if they had been beaten up in a fight or a car wreck. Different visages flooded the mind of this person; they were confused about … well, about everything.
A female in blue scrubs walked into the room. “Well, look who decided to wake up,” she said with a smile. “Good morning, sleepyhead. Who are you?”
The person fretted, further perplexed. “What – what kind of question is that? I’m a patient, in a hospital, and you look like a nurse – don’t you know who I am?”
“No, I don’t,” the nurse answered cheerily. “I’m not even sure if you’re male, or female, or maybe gender fluid. Your groin anatomy is male, but so much more of your body is female. Who do you see yourself as?”
“This is crazy. I need to know who I am! I’m not just who I “see myself as”, okay?”
“Oh, you absolutely are. You are who you see yourself as. Now – who do you see here?“ The nurse held a face mirror up to the patient.
The reflection showed a young head with natural brown hair that perhaps needed a slight trim to shore up some split ends. The face seemed familiar, yet needed some work, or – perhaps makeup? – to look right. The cheeks were rounded but not chubby; the eyes were brown, and the earlobes had obviously been pierced, though no earrings were currently present. As the patient contemplated, a name formed in the mind and worked it’s way out of the mouth.
“Willow. I’m Willow. Willow Ramos.”
“Well hello then, Willow. Are you a boy, or girl, or…?”
“I’m a transgender female. Pre-op. Going through my life test. But … I’m a young woman, definitely.”
“And so you are,” spoke a smooth-voiced male entering the room. “Hello Willow.”
“Dr. Estrada! Hey – what’s going on?”
“You still may be fuzzy about what happened yesterday; it was quite a full one for you,” said the doc. “You were sedated against your will; actually, you were overdosed on a sedative, and we’ve had you here to monitor you as your body slept it off.”
“Did – did those guys … cut me?”
“No. The police arrived just as they gave you the sedation.”
“Was I damaged by the overdose?”
“No, thank god. Help arrived just after you got the drug, so we were able to manage it. And when it became evident that you were going to likely wake up this morning, I decided to do an experiment of sorts with you. Don’t worry, not a drug or surgical trial – more of a psychological observation.”
“O – okay … “ stammered Willow, still unsure as to what he meant.
“See, some of your recent words and behavior have caused your family to wonder if you really see yourself as female, or if you were a male masquerading as a girl to achieve some other goal. As you awoke out of the fog of sedation, I had a unique opportunity to find out who you really see yourself as. I needed someone to ask you these questions – someone you’d never seen before, like Nurse Jennings here.”
“You can call me Alice, honey,” inserted the nurse.
Estrada resumed his explanation. “Knowing you really identify as Willow keeps us on solid ground as you proceed with your transition. Alice, could you tell Willow’s family they can come in now?”
In the next minute, they entered. Gwen and Angie ran straight to her, hugging and kissing her through their tears. William stood behind them, smiling at the happy sight. Malachi stood by him, munching on an apple.
“Girls. Sheesh. Am I right, Dad?” Mal said with a full mouth.
“Thank God for ‘em, Mal. You’ll appreciate this as you get older,” William replied.
“Doctor,” Gwen sniffed as she turned to Estrada, “what did you find out?”
“She sees herself as Willow, a female. She is truly your daughter.”
“Oh Willow, my little girl,” Gwen breathed as she turned back. “I love you so much.”
“I love you too, Momma,” Willow blubbered. “And you, Angie.”
“The cops came just in time,” Angie reported. “Those hoodlums didn’t get a chance to cut you.”
Willow remembered more and more about last night with each second. “How did the police find me so fast?”
“You wore your Grandpa’s coat,” Gwen smiled. “Remember how I told you I was going to get him a GPS tracker for him, one that had a ten mile radius? I did get it, but he wouldn’t keep it on as a neck chain; he kept removing it. He always wears his coat. So I slipped it inside his jacket lining and sewed it in place. When you left last night, I saw you were wearing the jacket, so I activated the locator service. They were able to find you, and sent the police. I just had to emphasize that they weren’t looking for a senior citizen, but a young girl in deep trouble.”
Angie jumped in the conversation. “I called Mom on Bernard’s phone as soon as we got to a place where I could jump into the front seat. She relayed the info on who and what went down to the police. El Paso DEA* got involved, too – evidently Rico’s been on their radar ‘cause he can’t keep his mouth shut. So when the law arrived they were loaded for bear.”
“Are you okay, Angie? Is Bernard? All those gunshots fired at you!”
“It appears Rico can’t hit the broad side of a barn. We’re all OK. Bernard’s gonna come see you a little later; we wanted this time with you as just family. I love you, sis,” said Angie as she kissed Willow’s cheek.
“Ahem. Willow,” said William, “Your mom and I need to talk to you – about Bernard, and your grounding. We aren’t going to revert to the full restrictions you had as Bill; we changed our mind about that. But we do feel the need to address you and your friend. It’s lousy timing, I know, but we need to do this before he gets here.”
*Drug Enforcement Administration
That afternoon Bernard visited Willow; Gwen stepped out so they could talk alone.
“Willow – I’m so glad you’re alright. And –“ Bernard had to stop talking as he breathed slowly, and his face screwed into a knot. Tears began spilling down his cheeks; Willow had never seen Bernard cry before.
“Bern – what’s wrong?”
“I,” – he choked, then tried once more. “I left - I left you there!”
Willow wrapped her arms around his neck, and pulled his sobbing face to her shoulder. “You did just what I asked you to. You saved my sister. There was no way you could have come back without getting Angie and yourself shot. So I thank God that you left. You’re my hero, Bernard.”
“And you’re mine, Willow. You’re so brave; you have no fear. And you always know what to do. Except for that stupid pothole, your plan went perfect.”
Willow shook her head. “I feel fear all the time, Bern. I just face it and keep walking through it. It didn’t come naturally; I’ve had to learn how.”
They held each other silently for a long time.
Willow cleared her throat. “Ah, Bern. Who was that blonde? You know, from yesterday?”
“She’s a girl in my geometry class. I’m sorry about that too, Willow. You told me you didn’t want to talk about us for 3-4 more days; I guess I took that as we were taking a ‘break’. Now looking back, I should have made sure it was OK with you before I took her for coffee. I’m such a screw-up.”
“Oh, let me tell you what a screw-up is. It’s announcing to a whole coffee shop that you’re transgender – and adding little details, like I’m pre-op and still have a penis. It’s taking a criminal like Rico and embarrassing him to the point that he kidnaps your sister and tries to mutilate you. THAT’S a screw-up.”
“Yeah, I heard Rico planned to remove your ‘nads without anesthesia. But aren’t you planning on getting that done anyway, just with numbing?”
“Yes I am, Bern. I’m planning to have intercourse one day, too. But NOT have it FORCED on me – that would be rape! Same principle applies with the testicle removal.”
“Yeah, I see that. Of course,” Bernard nodded.
“Um. Since I brought up the sex subject,” stammered Willow. “I know you felt like you needed me ‘all the way’ – that’s the biggest reason behind your proposal last week. Now that you’re dating other girls, you probably will want to sleep with them at some point, right? So if – ”
“Willow, I don’t have to-“
“Bern. This is tough enough for me to do without interruptions, okay?” Willow took a deep breath and slowly exhaled it. “I’m giving you permission. Oh poop; I’m encouraging you, okay? Date other women. Make love to them if you need to. If you fall in love and want to marry one of them, then do so. I’ll come to your wedding and cheer for you. But if the summer hits and you want to start to date me again, then we’ll see what happens. After all, I’ll be dating around too … if someone asks me out, that is.”
“The summer. What day in the summer?” Bernard quizzically asked.
“The day after Montclair High lets out. Didn’t Poppa tell you that?”
“He may have; I don’t specifically remember all the details, I was so surprised that he was grounding us.”
“It wasn’t just him, Bernard. Earlier this morning, Dr. Estrada, Momma, Poppa, and even my sponsor Julia had a big pow-wow about the turmoil we’ve had involving our romance – the emotions, the break-up, and my acting out afterwards, little anger fits, and that stupid stunt I pulled at the coffee shop. So this ‘grounding’ is from all of them. What do you remember about what Poppa said?”
“Willow, he started out by saying how much he appreciated my role as your friend, and he thanked me for helping to save Angie. Then he emphasized that he wanted our good friendship to continue. Just not the romance. He wanted that to stop, or at least be on ‘hold’, for the whole spring semester – while you continued to work on your behavior and emotional issues. Evidently they hope that if you and I are still mutually “unattached” by the end of school, we’ll will be mature enough to handle a romance together.”
“Yes. That’s what they told me. They’ll still allow me to use my phone and to go out with Angie or even Julia; heck, you and I can even still meet at NA meetings, or in a group afterwards for coffee. We just can’t be alone, as in a date. How do you feel about that, Bern?”
He shrugged. “Doesn’t matter how I feel about it; that’s what’s gonna happen. You’re still a minor and have to do what they say.”
Willow fretted. “No, Bern. How do you feel about us still being friends but dating other people?”
“Well I’m not thrilled about it. Taking Sandy out – that’s her name, the blonde girl – was a substitute. I’d still rather date you.”
“And I, you,” she replied. “But I found that the one thing I have to have from you – HAVE to have it – is your friendship. Losing you as a lover for the past week was really lousy. Losing you as a friend – no talking, no texting – was DEVASTATING. I won’t commit to a romance with you if it means I could lose my friend. You promised me once that we would always be best buds. I’m holding you to that, Bern – no matter who you date, who you make love to, or who you marry. Can you handle that? Will you still be my best bud this semester?”
Bernard looked directly into Willow’s eyes. A slow but assured smile developed on his face. “Yes, Willow. Best buds. Cross my heart and hope to die.”
They hugged tight, then Willow kissed him on the cheek followed by a whisper in his ear. “So date Sandy, or whoever. Sow some wild oats. But if we’re both unattached by June 5th, I want dinner and a movie, OK?”
“Ahem,” said Gwen at the door to the room. “Twenty minutes is up. I’m coming back in.”
Bernard rose to leave. “I’ll text you later, Willow.”
“I’ll be waiting for it, Bern. My hero.”
It was now early May.
Willow was in her room, finishing up her homeschooling work for the day. A knock came on her door.
“Hey sis,” said Angela. “Can I come in?”
“Sure. What’s up?”
“You know my senior prom is in 3 weeks, right? Joey’s asked me to it, and I’m getting my dress tomorrow.”
Willow smiled. “You and Joey are hitting it off. It’s been, what, a month since your first date?”
“Yeah.” Angie now frowned. “And it’s been over four months since your last one – the Denny’s date with Bernard. He’s still dating that Sandy girl. I wish you could date other people!”
“I can, Ang; I just don’t have a chance to meet boys I could date. Most of the guys at the NA meetings are older, like mid-20’s or more, and they see me as jailbait since I’m still 15. If I actually attended high school I’m sure it would be different.”
“Well, here’s the deal sis. I’m going to prom, and I want to experience it with my best girlfriend – you. Even though you’re technically a sophomore, you could go if a senior asked you.”
“There’s the rub, as Shakespeare would say,” Willow smiled. “From my English lit readings.”
“I found a way around ‘the rub’, Willow. I submitted your name to Action 6 News; they have a program called Positive PromPosals. It’s where youth leaders in the community volunteer to go to the prom with disadvantaged teens.”
“Angie! I’m trans, not disabled.”
“You still fit the profile.”
“Ang – no. I don’t want to be someone’s ‘pity date.’ I’ll pass.”
“Are you suuuuure?” Angie replied with a half-grin. “Look at the stud who volunteered for you!” She showed Willow a picture on her cell.
“It doesn’t matter who – oh. Oh my,” stammered a now-flustered Willow. “Who is that big blonde hunk of beefcake?”
“His name’s Adrian. Adrian Brody. He goes to Truman High, and he’s everything a dream date should be – quarterback, wealthy family, and really really cut. You can see his six-pack through that shirt.”
“Wow. It’s tempting … but a little scary. If Action 6 broadcasts my story, then everyone there – all my peers – will know I’m trans.”
“Sis, most of the school knows anyway. Word got out after that coffee shop fiasco with Rico. I want to experience prom with you! If you won’t do it for yourself, do it for me!”
The next day, Adrian Brody drove up to Willow’s house and gave her a bouquet of flowers as he went down on one knee and asked her to the Montclair High prom. Action 6 News was there to document the event. Willow was shaking, but also beaming a huge smile.
3 weeks later.
Willow sat in front of her bedroom mirror, putting finishing touches on her hair and makeup. Angela walked in to check on her.
“How’s it coming, little sister?”
“This is crazy,” Willow flustered. “I’ve been kidnapped, nearly mutilated, and had a breakup – all in the last 6 months. Survived them all. And yet tonight I can’t get calm; I’m tingling all over!”
Angie laughed. “It’s your first prom. You’re supposed to be nervous!”
Willow stood back and took in her look. She wore a red trumpet /mermaid dress with an off-the-shoulder sweep; the hem didn’t quite hit the floor in her heels, which was better for dancing. The 4 inch red heels were gorgeous, and walking in them had finally become second nature after weeks of practice. Dancing was a little more challenging, but she felt confident enough. Her bob wig was in the closet; now she sported extensions to her natural brown hair, and her long straight hairstyle looked as if it was totally all her. Zirconium teardrop earrings and a thin neck chain with a cross pendant were the perfect little accessories, enhancing the dress without drawing attention from it.
As she looked, Angie’s hands came from behind and grabbed her waist. “OMG, sis; your lower curves are so amazing in this dress!”
“Really? Do you think it shows off my J.Lo butt?”
“Oh yes. You’ve got that guitar shape that guys love. And, you’re finally getting your boobies!” she remarked as she tapped the A cup prominences on Willow’s chest. “And the makeover Elle did on your face this afternoon – WOW.”
“Yeah, I thought that my makeup skills had gotten pretty good. Having a pro work on me … it shows I’ve got a long way to go. Look at these smoky eyes!” Willow turned to the side and gave the mirror a seductive, ‘come hither’ look.
“So … the pop thing to do on prom night is to “go all the way” after the dance is over; half my virgin friends are planning on losing it tonight,” said Angie.
“Well you know my thoughts on that, for me at least,” replied Willow. “I don’t have a front door yet, and my back door is locked and bolted shut, thank you very much. Now, handiwork? I’m open to that. Oral? Um … I don’t know, yet. What about you, Ang?”
“Joey has been such a gentleman. But I know he’d like sex. He may want us to go all the way tonight; I’m so worried about disappointing him. I wanted to remain a virgin until I at least got engaged; but it seems like boys these days won’t even consider a long term relationship – much less an engagement – without sex.”
“Angie – do YOU want to have sex tonight?”
“All the way? I’d rather not, for the reasons I just stated. I’d be into heavy petting, like you and Bernard did on your first date.”
“Then Ang, let him know. Joey seems super honorable. I bet he’ll respect your wishes. Whatever you do, DON’T have sex just for fear you’ll lose your guy. That ignores what you want, and you’re worth more than that.”
“Thanks, Willow. I needed to hear that.”
“Now, Angela; let’s take a look at you!”
Angie wore her hair up in a bouffant style with ringlets coming down around her ears. Her dress was a white A-line princess tulle mini dress with a satin sash; the pulled-in waist emphasized her C-cup breasts and her attractive legs lusciously emerged from under the high cut minidress hem. Her heels were white satin.
“Hot you are, big sis,” admired Willow. “Hot-hot-hot! Such a lucky boy, your date is!”
In front of the Eiken house, a stretch Humvee limousine pulled up; two young men in tuxedos emerged from it.
“Hey Adrian; thanks for letting me share the ride with you. What an awesome limo!”
“No problem, Joey; that’s the way Willow wished it. These sisters wanted a double date, anyway. And Channel 6 paid for it, so why not?” Adrian rang the doorbell.
“Come in, gentlemen,” said William Eiken.
As he said that, the intercom to the estate gate buzzed. “Hello? This is the Action News 6 van. We’re here to interview Willow and Adrian. Can we come in?”
“Sure.” William buzzed them in.
“Girls – your prom dates are here, and the limo’s waiting outside,” said William into the indoor intercom. “And Willow, the local news is here as they promised.”
Willow emerged from her room and rushed in hurried high heel steps to the front entry. “Hey Joey, Angie will be out in just a few minutes – oh my! Adrian! Look at you!”
He stood there in a black tux with tails, cummerbund and a red bow tie; his mustache was professionally trimmed, as was his hair. Willow smiled. “You, sir, pull off this classic look immaculately. Bravo!”
“Willow, in that dress, you’re a movie star; no, a goddess. You’re classy, sexy, sophisticated and – I have to say this – Oooo girl, dat ass!”
“Don’t talk like a gangsta, Adrian. I don’t like gangstas,” Willow remarked with pursed lips. She then turned to the other young man standing in the foyer.
“Joey. Wait ‘til you see your date. Angie’s dress is a knockout. If you guys think I’m sexy – hold on to your hat!”
Gwen excitedly snapped pictures of the four teens before they left for prom in the limo. Action 6 News interviewed Adrian and Willow; he said he was happy to take her to the prom, and she said she was honored that he asked. Willliam could tell that both of his daughters were thrilled to be attending this formal affair together as sisters and close friends.
Attendance at the prom was a significant social breakthrough for Willow. Word had indeed spread about Bill Ramos being a trans girl now, and everyone craned to see her as she made her entrance. Those who remembered Willy the Dude from two years prior were especially amazed; Willow showed little resemblance to that person, save for the unique dragon tat on her right arm. Socially, this was a triumph for her. Romantically, it could have been better; her date seemed intent on making the rounds with some other friends he had at Montclair High, often leaving Willow alone as he did so.
One such time late into the prom, Willow sat by herself at a table drinking some punch. Angela drifted over from the dance floor and sat down with her.
“Joey’s done for the night. His poor feet are suffering in those dress shoes. Why are you here all alone, sis?”
“I’m just taking it all in. I’m at a prom, as a sophomore no less. This is awesome!”
“But you’re sitting. Are you tired of dancing?”
“Oh no. I could go hours more. But once the dances became slow – you know, like where the couples hold each other – Adrian danced with anyone but me. I’m trying to convince myself that me being trans isn’t the reason, but it’s hard to ignore. See him out there with that strawberry blonde? That’s their second slow number together.”
“Maybe if the news cameras were still around, he’d be with you flashing that All – American smile,” Angie smirked.
“Excuse me, ma’am. May I have the honor of this dance?”
Both sisters turned around. There stood Bernard, extending his hand to Willow.
“Why yes, kind sir,” accepted Willow. She was led onto the floor as Angie clapped and cheered.
Willow and Bernard danced the next three dances, talking the whole time.
“Where’s Sandy, Bernard?”
“She’s had enough dancing and is cooling her heels over at the dance troupe clique table. So I told her I’d promised at least two dances with you, and came over to make good.”
Willow smirked. “You never promised me two dances.”
“Nope,” replied Bern. “I promised myself that I’d save two dances for you. We may be still banned from dating, but this is a dance not a formal date, right?”
“Bernard,” Willow whispered, “Sandy is gorgeous. Yet you texted me that you’re considering breaking up with her. Why? Does she refuse to make love to you?” Willow held her breath. She’d purposely avoided asking Bern that in their texting; but she had to know why.
He sighed. “Okay, Willow. I’ll tell you, just so we can drop the subject. No, she doesn’t refuse. And yes, we’ve made love on a number of occasions. It’s just; I dunno, it’s missing something.”
“She’s stunning! What could be missing?”
“Willow – I’m just not in love with her. I like her; she’s a great date, and fantastic arm candy at a dance like this. I ought to be head over heels. But someone else has my heart. And I think you know who I’m talking about.”
“Bern. I gave you your heart back when I said we should date around!”
“And I tried to take it back, okay? Things would be much easier if I could control who my heart chooses! But I can’t. It’s chosen you. I’d give up on thoughts of us if I knew you were in love with someone else. But our texts tell me you’re not.”
“Bernard. June 5th is a month away still. And when it comes, I still won’t be able to make love to you legally; I’ll be 14 months away from my 17th birthday. And making love is a must with you, isn’t it?”
Bernard smiled as he adjusted his step to the slow waltz now playing. “I think I’ve matured some, Willow. I believe I can be patient enough to wait for you, as long as we can kiss and hug and occasionally do the heavier petting.”
“Omigod, Bern. Tell me I’m not dreaming. Are we both going to be unattached when June 5th comes around?”
“It looks like it. Could I take you out for dinner and a movie that night? My Pop upgraded my allowance two months ago.”
“I’ll clear it with Momma and Poppa. Well, that will be nice. A date. A date with my good friend Bernard.” Willow couldn’t stop what happened next; she started bouncing up and down on her toes, and squealed. “EEEEEEEEEEEE!!!”
At the end of the night, Joey and Angie shared sweet kisses at the front porch. Adrian dutifully gave Willow a quick peck before heading back into the limo. As their dates left, the two sisters dished the details to their mother. Later in Willow’s room, she and Angie compared mental notes. Finally exhausted, the two girls retired to their beds.
Willow was about to drift to sleep when she got a text.
Hey Willow
Hey my good friend Bernard
I want to tell u - u were so pretty. Felt like a king dancing w/u
I M sooo happy about our dancing tonite and our upcoming date!
Willow – were U happy with everything else tonite?
With the prom? YES!! Music and décor off the charts. Felt so free dancing in public with everyone around treating me like a regular girl. Acceptance amazing. And limo was awesome!
Well u pass perfectly – that helps with acceptance. And ur attitude is so positive – u don’t come off strange or weird at all.
Hey Bernard guess what
What
MOMMA’S GONNA LET ME ATTEND MONTCLAIR HIGH NEXT FALL! No more homeschooling all alone! Yaay! She and Poppa told me tonite!
Awesome dudette!
Hey subject change; did u hear about Rico Santos?
No – still in jail rite?
Rumor is he and that vet tech dude r turning state’s witness against Lobos gang. Prob going into witness protection.
So new life and new city. May I suggest Buttcrack, Alaska? Or the eastern Gobi desert?
Hahaha thass funny, Bern
Hey Willow were u happy with ur date? Blonde dude?
Yes, Adrian was fine. … He was okay I guess
Spent very little time w/ me; feel like he asked me 2 prom to show what a “kind and generous” boy he was, asking a “disadvantaged girl” to prom. Like if I was disabled or something. I mean, nothing against disabled girls! I just think he did this to enhance his public standing, to include it on his resume’ in future.
Oh man. Is your heart broken?
I dunno. It hurt some; more disappointing than anything. But that’s all history because I have June 5 coming up!!! Oh Bern. I so wished that it could have been u giving me that promposal earlier this month.
I dunno. I remember what happened last time I propose 2 u!
Well if u hadn’t used a toy ring we might be married now! JK, neither of us were N E where near ready.
And we prob still aren’t. But getting closer; one day?
Don’t start me imagining. Won’t b able 2 sleep, and it’s past my bedtime.
OK. I need 2 call it a nite too.
Goodnight my good friend. I love u. U R still my hero.
Goodnight Willow I love u 2. And U R mine.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 13
by **Sigh**
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“Son, the next time you set foot in this building, I expect you to be wearing slacks, a jacket and a tie. How dare you flaunt what you’re doing in God’s face, in our faces! Dress right, or don’t come back!”
Willow looked right back at him plaintively. “And if I do come back like this … ?”
NOTE TO READERS
Well, this has never happened before. I try to make a point of finishing a story before I start to post it, so most all of the work is done and I don't risk having an unfinished story (a pet peeve of mine) here on BC. But this story has defied my attempts to finish it. I have received input from readers about how they wish "this thing" was in the story, and others about how "that thing" should have been addressed; look, the story is the story, and if I'm happy with it, then take it or leave it. But twice now as I've prepared to wrap this up, Willow keeps coming up with unresolved stuff that I want to address. I evidently am no longer in control of it; it has control of me. So, I'm continuing this story. It may end with part 14. But who knows anymore? I sure don't. Sorry if my inconsistency is frustrating you.
Oh, and as for part 14: I need a break from the writing. So it won't be here tomorrow. It may take up to a week? But I hope not. Just watch the BC list, and it'll happen when it happens. As always, I appreciate you. **Sigh**
Late July.
Dr. Estrada was seeing Willow for her counseling; these visits had lessened to every 4 weeks, though the injections were still every 2. Today the teenager’s mother was waiting out in the lobby while Willow and the doc had a private session.
“So tell me, Willow. How are you doing? Now that you’re out in public more, have there been any problems? I understand you and Bernard are still dating. Has he had any blowback from his parents or friends regarding his dating a trans girl?”
“His mom’s not thrilled,” admitted Willow. “I think she wants natural grandkids between her son and a daughter-in-law. She isn’t rude to me when I’m at his house, but she’s not warm either. Bernard’s going to move out as soon as he finishes trade school; he’s going to be an auto mechanic.”
“And Bernard’s father?”
“He’s just not around much. I’ve seen him like, once this summer – and he was heading out the door to his second job. I’m worried; what if he has a woman on the side? Even though Bernard’s relationship with his dad is getting more distant, if his folks divorce I’m afraid it would crush him.”
“So, that’s stressful for you. How are your emotions doing? I especially want to know about anger.”
Willow smiled. “I work every day on my spiritual program, doc. I’ve been through the 12 steps and am still working on the maintenance program. I’ve got nearly 10 months off of any alcohol or drugs now; and neither Angry Bill nor Willy the Dude have popped up since the Rico incident in January. Aren’t you proud of me?”
“I’ve always been proud of you, young one. But that doesn’t relieve me of my duty of making sure you stay grounded. So tell me; what do you and Bernard do on your dates?”
“Ummm …” Willow blushed bright red. “We don’t have sex. Yet. I mean, most people wouldn’t call it sex. Uh, I guess you could say –“
“No, no Willow! That’s not what I meant. Although when you decide to “do it”, no matter who it’s with, I expect you to practice safe sex. We’ve talked about that. No, what I mean is what activities do you two do? Where do you go?”
“OH!” Willow exhaled with relief. “We’ve done a lot! Last month we visited Carlsbad Caverns. We’ve gone sand surfing at White Sands; last week he took me for dinner at Chala’s Wood Fire Grill, and we went to a movie afterward. He’s a great boyfriend.”
“Chala’s,” contemplated Estrada. “That’s in Las Cruces, correct?”
“Yes, sir. Have you been? It’s excellent!”
“Willow, all of your activities seem to be in New Mexico. Are you purposely avoiding El Paso?”
Willow suddenly got quiet as she considered his question. “Well … when school starts I won’t be able to do as much out-of-state traveling …”
“Young one, in a month you’ll be experiencing life as a trans girl in high school, suddenly surrounded by peers who previously knew you only as a boy – a drug dealer, no less. Are you afraid of running across them right now?”
Willow felt shaky inside and her breathing quickened. She immediately identified the emotion. “Omigod. I do fear it! I guess I’ve been unconsciously avoiding any uncomfortable situations. I’ve not been to the mall since I got my prom dress!”
“So, this is a valley you need to walk through – better sooner than later. Let’s see if you can go public in your home city and survive any turmoil it produces.”
“Okay, okay. I get it, doc. Will do. Even though I’m nervous about it.”
“Father, your 2 o’clock is here. Mrs. Eiken and her child. Shall I send them in?”
Father Joseph Wilson removed his glasses and rubbed his eyes. This promised to be one of the more uncomfortable moments he’d experienced as head minister of Chula Vista Episcopal Church, and he wasn’t looking forward to it. “Yes, Marie. Please send them back.”
He stood up as two people entered his office – one female and a person who appeared to be one. “Gwen – welcome. And welcome to you, too; you must be Willow, correct?”
“Yes, Father,” the teen replied as she shook his hand.
“Have a seat please, both of you. Now; I think I know what it is, this issue you want to discuss. But let me hear it from you, ma’am.” He pointed his open palm towards Gwen.
“Father. I assume you know my child’s status. It was all over the news during prom season, and I’ve heard the poorly-hidden whispers in the foyer after services. My daughter Willow was formerly my son Bill. And she wants to start attending services here with me and the rest of my family.”
“I see. Is that all?”
Gwen was surprised. “Yes, that’s pretty much it.”
“I have no problem with her attending services. You are welcome here, Willow.”
The girl blinked. “Wow! That was easy.”
“Yes, your attendance is welcome. As long as that’s all you intend.”
Gwen’s eyes narrowed. “Explain.”
“What I mean is this: Chula Vista is a house of worship. I don’t want it used to push an agenda, or for political posturing. The church leadership has a stance that gays, lesbians, and transgenders are practicing sinful acts in God’s sight. Now, the church is supposed to be here to help sinners; I see us more like a hospital than as a spotless museum of icons. All sinners – including me – are welcome to come here to seek God and hear his truth. But I don’t want anyone actively promoting LGBT positions as if we were “all right” with it. No pink-and-blue flags, no GLAAD meetings, no outlandishly inappropriate dressing. Did you have any of this in mind as you came here today?”
Gwen opened her mouth but Willow beat her to the response. “Can I wear a Sunday dress? Or is that “outlandishly inappropriate”?”
“I personally would prefer you wear pants of some kind, Willow. Having said that, if you show up in a dress, I will defer any judgment or action to the church elders. Expect some negative feedback from other church members, too; I cannot control how they feel.”
“No, but you can affect it,” Gwen asserted. “If you announced from the pulpit that Willow was to be accepted and treated as any other church member, that would help a lot. Even if you said that our job as Christians is to love and not judge; you wouldn’t necessarily have to mention her name to do that.”
“It’s the acceptance part I have trouble with, Mrs. Eiken. We accept sinners, but not the sin. I will not be a part of turning a blind eye to behavior that is sinful.”
“But you guys allow drug addicts to come here and hold their NA meetings,” Willow urged. “Heck, some of them come to your services and help with various volunteer things!” She was thinking especially of Bernard and his position at the soundboard in the balcony.
“Yes we do, Willow; but all of those drug addicts acknowledge that it’s wrong behavior, and they are committed to quitting! We support their efforts. I would be very supportive of you if you acknowledged that your attempt to become a woman was wrong, and if you were seeking help to quit it.”
Gwen exhaled. “I was afraid of this, honey. The central El Paso Episcopal church follows the National Leadership and accepts trans people. I guess we’ll have to move our family to there.”
“No, Momma,” she whispered. “All my NA friends - and Bernard - attend here!” She then turned to father Wilson. The girl’s eyes got slightly watery, but her face was pure determination. “I’m going to attend services here, Father. I will probably be wearing a proper church-going dress. Let the members talk; let the elders judge. I will be the perfect, respectful church girl, not doing anything to ‘stir the pot’ except showing up.” Willow stood, and pulled her mother up by her hand. “I’ll see you Sunday, Father.”
“Very well, young man. I’ll see you then.”
Willow’s head jerked around to stare at the minister. Her face began to show fury, but then a calm serenity slowly transformed her to where her visage was relaxed and showing a sweet smile. “It’s young lady, please. God bless you, Father.” With that, both women left the office.
Grandpa John was asleep, having been put to bed right after supper. The rest of the Eiken family was at the dinner table. Bernard Andujar, Willow’s boyfriend, attended also.
“Before we get started,” said William, “how about a round of applause for your Mom’s supper tonight? Green chile sour cream chicken enchiladas. Honey, that’s my new favorite.”
“You say that after every new dish I serve,” Gwen smirked.
“And I really mean it each time!” he smiled. Then his face got serious. “Okay. We’re here to discuss what the plan is for Monday. Willow’s first day of high school as Willow. Angie, Bernard – what do you think she should expect?”
“Oh, I think some kids will make trouble for her,” said Angie. “Not most, but enough that she’ll have to always keep both eyes open. Nasty comments will happen for sure. Physical violence? I don’t know. And that’s what scares me; I really don’t know. I just know that at the end of last year, after the prom, I got teased and shoved just for being related to Willow.”
Bernard added more. “There are some tough dudes that she’ll have to watch out for. I know, because they threatened to beat me up once they learned we were friends. You need to stay in well-populated places on campus, dudette.”
“How can I avoid them?” fretted Willow. “I don’t even know what they look like yet.”
“I called the administration to make sure they know all of the people Angie and Bernard are talking about,” said Gwen. “Still, I wish one of us could be there. I can’t leave Grandpa alone in the house. Angie, is there any way … ?”
“My UTEP classes have already started, but that’s not the obstacle. Montclair doesn’t want me, a recent grad, to be roaming the halls protecting a student. So they refused to give me a hall pass. They think with their cameras they can prevent anything. They may document it, but prevent? I don’t think so.”
“I faced the same roadblock,” piped Bern. “I almost wish now I had flunked senior year so I could be back there to protect you, babe.”
“Guys, this is real life for me now,” sighed Willow. “I just need to face it. I can handle the talk and the looks. The only part I’m not sure about is getting beaten up. It would be nice to have a bodyguard to keep me out of trouble, but I guess –“
“I’ll do it.”
The whole assembly turned to where that voice came from. Gwen addressed the speaker.
“Malachi, are you sure? You’ll be just a freshman!”
“Mom, look at me. I know I’m only 14, but did you notice my growth spurt this year?” The young man stood up to show his full 6’1” height.
“Dude,” said Bernard. “You’ll have to have a real badass attitude to pull this off. These guys are upperclassmen, and they intimidate anyon - URK!“
Bernard’s “urk” was due to Malachi grabbing his coat by the lapels and pulling the older boy face-to-face. “HEY! Are you the piece of trash who’s threatening my sister? ARE YOU??”
Bernard smiled nervously. “That’ll do, dude. That’ll do!”
It was the Sunday before the first day of school at Montclair High. Most teenage churchgoers would be thinking about what was to happen on Monday. But thoughts of class were now superseded by the sight of a girl standing in the foyer of Chula Vista Episcopal.
Said girl wore a modest knee-length dress with pretty ruffled sleeves; it was a pastel mint sage color. She stood by her family as her mother and father greeted their friends there. Some people were formally introduced to the girl, who courteously shook hands with them; she even gave a hug to an older gracious woman. None of the teens present approached her. One young girl angrily elbowed her boyfriend for staring a little too long.
Willow stood and twiddled her fingers as she grinned nervously. Smile, smile. You’re glad to be here. Make a good impression.
“You doing okay, daughter?” Gwen side-whispered.
“So far,” breathed Willow. “Where’d bro and sis go?”
“Mal’s gone to the teen church, and Angie’s sitting in the young adults' group. Poppa and I are going to the sanctuary to take our seats now. You’ll be going upstairs, right?”
“Yeah. Bernard should be already up there at the soundboard. I’ll see you guys back here after it’s over!” Willow walked quickly to the balcony steps, and up them. Reaching the top, she scanned the upper seats and saw her boyfriend.
“Hey!” she chirped, her face beaming as she sat by Bern.
“Man, I must’a died and gone to heaven,” he said. “Because this is surely an angel sitting next to me.”
“Oh, stop,” Willow chided. “Wait. No, actually, keep it up. I think I love it.”
The worship began. Traditional songs accompanied by organ were played and sung. Prayers and statements were read, with the congregation saying “amen” in unison at times. Then Father Wilson came to the podium.
He spoke on Jesus’ Sermon on the Mount out of Matthew; He barely got one-third of the way through the first chapter before the time came to end the service.
“So, Jesus said that stuff. That didn’t sound too bad to me. Where were all the 'thou shalt nots'?" asked Willow as the crowd began to disband.
“I liked that too, Willow. At least in that part of the Bible, Jesus sounds a lot like the Higher Power that we follow in NA.”
“I remember when you first mentioned the letters 'HP' to me. You spoke about him like he was a real person, and was helping you. To be honest, I thought you were a little flaky there. But now I know what you mean. Boy, do I! If it weren’t for my HP, I’d have relapsed on drugs and probably be back in Juvie.”
“So how was your first time at church as Willow?”
“Not bad – I liked it! And being next to you? I LOVED it!”
“I’ve got to secure the board here for next Sunday. I’ll text you tonight as always, OK? I won’t make it too late because tomorrow’s your first day back at school.”
“I shall await your message, my hero. Bye!” With that, Willow hopped down the stairs. “Well! This was a wonderful morning,” she muttered to herself as she descended. As she stepped onto the floor level, a large hand grabbed her left upper arm. She turned her head to see a balding middle-aged man invading her personal space. He had rage written all over him.
“Son, the next time you set foot in this building, I expect you to be wearing slacks, a jacket, and a tie. How dare you flaunt what you’re doing in God’s face, in our faces! Dress right, or don’t come back!”
Willow looked right back at him plaintively. “And if I do come back like this … ?”
“DON’T,” the man growled. He then looked to his right and his left and skulked away.
Willow felt the sting of the rebuke, even though it was undeserved. Her eyes squinted shut and her mouth puckered as she felt the words slowly ebb. “So much for the “wonderful morning”. Spoke too soon,” she said under her breath.
As she stood there, she felt a hand once more grab her left upper arm. She quickly reacted – “Hey! Sir, leave me alone!” Then she saw to whom the hand belonged. It was a teenage girl with an anxious face.
“You’re Willow, right? The transsexual?”
“Who wants to know?”
“I need you to follow me. Hurry!” The girl then took off running down the hallway that led to the church classrooms.
As Willow ran, the hallway got progressively darker. They were shutting down the building lights. Either that or I’m running into a trap, she worried.
The girl she was following stopped in front of a classroom door, and opened it. The room was pitch black except for a slim window that let in a little light from the outside. “Go in there,” panted the anxious teen.
Willow balked. “Uh-uh. No way. You’ve got a bunch of dudes in there ready to beat on me.” She started to turn and run back to the foyer.
“NO! No, please! It’s my little brother! You’re the only one!” anxious girl urged.
Willow still wanted to run. But something in this desperate gal rang as authentic. HP, what do I do?
In her mind she heard Dr. Estrada’s voice: face your fear, keep on walking. Then in Julia’s voice: you can’t stay clean and sober unless you reach out to those in need; it may mean taking a risk.
Okay, HP. But if I get killed, I’m blaming you.
She stepped into the dark room and felt for a light switch. Finding one, she turned it on.
There in one of the classroom chairs sat a young boy, maybe about ten or eleven years old. He had obviously been crying. But now he looked with wonder at this girl who had entered.
“Are you Willow? The girl from the Action 6 News prom thing? Your eyes look different.”
“Yeah, I can’t reproduce that professional smoky eye just yet. Who are you?”
“I’m … Amanda.”
“Amanda?!”
The boy began to cry, and rose out of his chair. He ran to Willow and grabbed ahold of her waist as he bawled uncontrollably. Willow gradually realized what was happening. She wrapped her arms around the youth and squeezed tight.
"Amanda ... you're like me, aren't you?" whispered Willow.
The child nodded her head and continued to weep,
Through her sobs, Amanda recounted how she’d known she was a girl for as long as she could remember. Her parents, especially her father, wouldn’t allow it and had punished her for mentioning it. She felt trapped and desperate. The only one she had to confide in was her sister.
“Well, Amanda; now you’ve got me to talk to, also,” Willow assured him with a tight squeeze.
“But how can we do that?”
“Do you have a cell phone? Give me your number.”
Willow called the number Amanda gave her.
“There. Now we’ve got each other in our phones. Text me later when it’s safe, maybe after you’ve gone to bed, okay?” whispered Willow.
Amanda and her sister left so their father wouldn’t get angry trying to find them. Willow went back to the church foyer, where the rest of her family was waiting.
“Hey there, Weeping Willow. What are you crying about now?” Angie asked.
“Oh! Yeah, I guess I have been,” Willow sniffed. “Don’t worry. These are tears of thankfulness. I think God’s using me to do some good stuff. It’s about time; I’ve screwed up so much of my life, I needed to start canceling some of it out.”
The next day – the first day of school this Fall semester at Montclair High.
“Hello, class. This is Basic Geometry, what you could call Geometry 101. I’m your teacher, Ms. Moscowitz. You say it like I just said it, and you spell it like I’ve written on the dry erase board here.
“Before we start today’s lesson, I want to introduce you to one of your fellow students. Actually, it’s a re-introduction; this student was Bill Ramos in his freshman year. He’s been gone for the last part of freshman year and all of his sophomore year. Now he’s back, but he’s no longer a “he”. I’m speaking of Willow Ramos. Willow, could you come up here, please?
“You may remember her from TV news PromPosal feature last spring. In any event, she has graciously agreed to stand here and meet you all, and answer questions you may have. Because once I start my lesson, there will be no murmuring or talking, understand? Also, keep the questions respectful, free of profanity, and free of any sexual talk. Otherwise? Detention.”
“What do you consider a sexual question?” one smart-aleck in the back yelled.
“If you’re wondering if your question is sexual – THEN IT IS, SO KEEP YOUR TRAP SHUT,” dictated Ms. Moscowitz. “All right, Willow. Shall we proceed?”
Willow nodded. Boy, if all of my teachers are like this, it may be a smooth running semester, she thought.
“Father Wilson. Your 4 o’clock appointment is here.”
“Yes. Mrs. Eiken and Willow. Go ahead and send them back.”
The mother and daughter entered the room and exchanged quick pleasantries.
“So, you two. I saw you were at services on Sunday. Was there a problem?”
“Well, some middle-aged man grabbed my arm and threatened me. But I think he was trying to scare me off more than anything,” Willow responded. “I’m really here for another reason.”
Willow told of her encounter with Amanda, being careful not to name names.
“So, I’ve been texting back and forth with her every day this week.”
“What are you telling me this for?” asked the Father.
“A few reasons. One, I don’t want to conceal from you this new relationship I have with a young church member. I don’t want you thinking I’m going behind your back. I didn’t ‘win her over to the trans side’; I just responded to her urgent plea.
“Two, I would appreciate it if you would consider talking to this girl’s father. He needs to know it’s not okay to threaten his child with physical punishment, or with being disowned. According to this child, that’s what has happened. I have to believe that Jesus wouldn’t be okay with that. Would you talk to the father if I told you his name?”
“Perhaps," answered the minister. "However, I ask that you stop texting with this boy. You’re not a licensed church minister, and you’re interfering with the parent-child relationship.”
Willow calmly addressed that statement. “She’s not a boy; she’s a girl. And I wasn’t acting as a minister; it’s just coincidence that we met inside a church. All of our contact since has been via text when we’re in our homes. As to this parent-child relationship? It needs to be interfered with. This girl is suffering; she’s the kid you read about in the obituaries, killing themselves before they get out of high school.”
The Father grunted in frustration. “You’re asking me, once again, to accept a trans–“
“No, I’m not,” interrupted Willow. “You don’t have to accept anything. I’ll do the accepting. What I need you to do is exercise your influence on the girl’s father. Get him to back off the threats. Tell him and teach him to love his kid unconditionally, in spite of their disagreements. You don’t have to tell him that the TV transgender girl is talking with his kid; in fact, DON’T tell him.”
Father Wilson once again removed his glasses and rubbed his eyes; he sighed heavily.
Willow smiled and leaned over to grasp the minister’s hand. “Father. Just re-read that Sermon on the Mount thing you talked about on Sunday. You know the right thing to do. Be brave, and do it! I’ll be so proud of you.”
“All right. Give me the man’s name. I’ll do my best to help, young ma-“
He caught himself. “ah … young lady.”
Willow smiled big. “See? I’m proud of you already!”
To be continued ... well, my statement at the beginning.
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Weeping Willow
Part 14
by **Sigh**
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“Okay. Bend over. Hmmmn. I see no bumpiness; all is smooth as silk. You should take some pix for your boyfriend. Not of your crotch, mind you – just in the suit in general.”
“Already did, and sent them to his email. That will give him something to obsess over when he’s on his lunch break,” she dreamily exhaled.
Gwen moved behind her daughter and began adjusting the bows of her top. “Have you two had sex?”
“URK!!” gulped Willow.
NOTE TO READERS
Hello, all. **Sigh** here. I'm finally (at long last!) posting the rest of the Weeping Willow saga. It took a lot longer than I'd planned, mainly due to health and real-life issues. I will be picking up the story where I last left it at the end of part 13, published way back in March. I thought about writing a little recap of where we are, just to jog people's memories; but after a few unsatisfactory tries, I figured I'd just let you guys refer back to the previous chapters for the full details. Hopefully, I've put enough "memory joggers" in that you don't have to go back and re-read all 13 previous chapters (tho if u want 2, please be my guest!). Thank you all soooo much for your readership. Now on with the tale!
It was 102 degrees Fahrenheit outside – dangerous, even for people used to August afternoons in El Paso, Texas. Heatstroke was a concern for the Montclair High football team as they practiced for their first game this Friday. Most of the other students had left school and gone home, or to friends, Dairy Queen or anywhere there was air conditioning. Willow Eiken – formerly Bill “Willy” Eiken – was in a counseling session in Dr. Estrada’s office, where the temperature was controlled and comfortable. However, the emotional climate in the consultation room could be described as cloudy with a chance of storms.
“What’s wrong, young one?” asked the doctor. “You’re tapping your foot, glancing all around. Tentative – that’s how you look. Is something bothering you?”
The girl sighed. “It’s nothing important; nothing worth taking up your valuable time. We were gonna talk about the first day of school, and how others were treating me. It went fine, and people have either accepted me or they’ve avoided me. That’s it, nothing much else to report.”
“Bullshit.”
Willow gasped – Dr. Estrada had never used such language towards her before.
“Forgive me, patient,” he continued, “but I can’t let you get away with that. You, of all people, must be aware of your emotional state and how it’s affecting you. If you ignore it, then it silently builds and bad things happen, like you throwing a fit of anger or getting your sister kidnapped. Do I have your attention now?”
“Yes sir,” mumbled the teen in a tone that was submissive yet irritated.
“So do the exercise. What emotion are you feeling right now?”
“I – blast it – I don’t know? I can’t say I feel fearful, or anxious, or sad or happy. I’m frustrated some, but I don’t know the reason. If I don’t – wait. That’s it. That’s it! I know what it is. But I’m not sure it’s an emotion?”
“What do you mean, Willow?”
“I’m BORED, dammit! – oops! Sorry, doc.”
“No problem, child; I deserved that, after saying ‘BS’ earlier. So you’re bored. Elaborate.”
“Oh … life is fine; it’s just - … not changing much. Dad works; Mom’s full-time job is sitting with and caring for my Grandpa – he’s got Alzheimer's. School is new, but I don’t have friends there yet. Bernard’s working for a car shop; long hours, and he loves it, but we don’t get as much time together. Physically, I had seen rapid changes each month since starting hormones – but not so much the last 3 months. My ‘J-Lo butt’ is great, but my breasts are still barely an A-cup and my face has too many sharp corners; if I wasn’t so short, there’s no way I’d ever pass. Don’t know if I’m being impatient, or if this is all the ‘mones are ever going to give me. And one more thing, a big thing …” the girl took a big breath and exhaled slowly before proceeding.
“I miss – God, I’m afraid you’re gonna get so mad when I say this – I miss the action. The drug-dealing action. It was an illegal thrill – and boy was I was good at it! I was such an important guy, Willie the Dude, the kingpin of North Montanas. Now, I’m just Willow the trannie. I wish I had something to replace the excitement I had when using and selling drugs.” She hung her head.
The doctor frowned. “Are you feeling remorse about choosing to become female? Or about obeying your parents and the rules of society?”
“NO. No! No regrets.” Willow shook her head forcefully, then looked to the other side of the room as if to avoid eye contact with her doc. “Um … not yet, anyway.”
“Not YET?” Estrada paused. The room was uncomfortably silent as Willow struggled to compose a response.
Finally, she spoke. “Most times I love the new me. It’s only when I think about the future that I get shaken. There’s the concern about not being able to produce kids for Bernard; you know, ones that are truly his and mine. Also, I worry about being able to satisfy him as good as the girls he’s had before. Heck, I worry that I myself won’t be able to get sexual pleasure – there’s no guarantee that SRS will leave me with the ability to come, you know?”
“To orgasm,” Estrada specified.
“Yes. And I don’t know what I want for my future, what to do with myself when school’s over. Bernard and I still plan to marry, but I don’t want to be just a housewife. I have NO idea what to pursue.”
“What was your life plan before becoming Willow?”
“Um … becoming drug kingpin for all of El Paso, and Juarez.”
“That doesn’t sound like a viable career either. I doubt you’d see the age of 30 if you continued that path. Murder rates along the border here have decreased in the last few years, but still –“
“I know, I know, doc,” sighed Willow. “I just … feel lost when I think about what to do. My sister Angie has a plan for college; even little bro Malachi does! EVERYONE does, except for me. Stupid, little old me.”
The doctor put down his pen and smiled at his young patient. “Good work, Willow. You really were able to put a lot of difficult feelings and thoughts out there for us to work on. And I’m relieved and encouraged to hear them.”
“You are? Even the ‘I miss drug-dealing’ part?”
“All of your concerns are ones that almost all teenagers – even non-transgender ones – go through. Parenting, sex, career choices, enjoyment of life after high school, and dread of a boring J-O-B; these are pretty common anxieties. The body issues, parenting, and sex function worries are ones most all male-to-female transitioners deal with. There’s a huge amount of resources available, locally and online, that will likely help – I’ll send them to you via email.”
With that, the psychic clouds dissipated a little as the sunlight of peace broke through for the doctor and his patient.
The fourth day of the fall semester had just ended. Willow gathered her belongings and walked to her locker to drop some books off; she mused about her high school experience as she did so. Junior year seems like a breeze so far, at least as classes go. I was worried that my time being home-schooled might have left me behind my classmates here; looks like Momma actually got me ahead of the pack. And so far no one here has hassled me –
THUMP!
Willow spun halfway around and stumbled, almost falling. Someone had bumped her left shoulder as they’d walked by, delivering a staggering blow. Before she could gather herself, a large hand grabbed hold of her arm. A deep voice said “I’m so sorry, Miss! I didn’t see you there!”
She turned her head to see an older boy steadying her. Concern etched his visage. “Are you okay?” he said.
“Uh, I think so? There’s no one else in the hallway – how did you happen to run into me?” she mumbled, temporarily dazed.
His face relaxed into a smile. “Sorry! My mind was, um, preoccupied.”
Willow shook her head free of the remaining stars and grinned back. “You’re forgiven. Thanks for being so nice about it –“
“Preoccupied with how wrong it is for a pervert like you to be allowed to come here, and how we’re supposed to treat you like we would treat real girls, you steaming pile of puke. You make me sick. Go somewhere else. You’re not welcome here.” The boy said this with the same relaxed smile and posture as before; his body language didn’t match his words at all.
Willow was confused by the disconnect, but now angry also. “Look, whoever you are. You can’t bully me. There are videos all around the school and I’ll have them pull this footage up tomorrow,” she said as she pointed towards the hall camera. She then aimed her finger in his face as hers glowered red with ire. “Then your ass is in deep –“
“Whoa there!” he replied. His hands were up in a gesture of concession and his eyebrows rose with alarm as he took a few steps backward. “The vids are picture only, no sound. All they’re gonna see is a poor guy who accidentally bumped into a girl and tried to apologize, just to have her throw a psycho rage-fit.” He turned and walked away, resuming his pleasant smile. “Have a nice day. And watch your back.”
The young transgirl stood there stunned as he walked away. She realized the tape would appear just as he’d predicted.
Bernard prepared to drop a fresh battery into the Volvo XC40 he’d been assigned. Working on cars was a dream to him; it hardly seemed like work at all. He especially enjoyed figuring out difficult engine problems and was fast developing a reputation as the “car whisperer” at his place of employ, Torres Auto Repair. As he tightened the cables onto the terminals, he felt two sensations: satisfaction in a quick job done right – and the urge of a full bladder.
Five minutes later, Bern was still in the locked toilet as his phone beeped indicating a text from Willow. Hey Bern – I’m here 2 drop something off 4 you. Julio sez U R in bathroom so I’ll leave it @ front desk K?
In 20 more seconds, Bern exploded out of the door of the lavatory. “Hey baby – wait up! Don’t leave without me getting a chance to see you!”
“Hello love,” Willow laughed as she met him just outside the garage intake doors. “I made these this afternoon,” holding up and wiggled a baggie filled with warm homemade chocolate chip pecan cookies. “They taste pretty good, I think; they could be more rounded, but it was my first time.”
The young mechanic grabbed the goodies with his left palm and both her hands with his right; he squeezing them tight. “I’ve got some oil on my clothes, but I just washed my hands. On our date this Friday I plan to give you a proper hug and kiss though.”
Willow smiled at him, then sniffed once or twice. “Are you sure you washed your hands good?” she queried with one eyebrow lifted slightly.
“Well, I was quick. What? All I did was pee.”
“I know … but I think you were doing something else,” she whispered. “You smell … a little spunky.” She mouthed the last word silently.
Bern’s face went a whiter shade of pale. “Uhh … errr … oh God. I’m sorry. How can you smell that with all these oil and exhaust fumes here?”
“I think it’s the estrogen. I seem to smell – and hear – with more sensitivity and intensity since I started HRT last year. So, were you getting off to porn?” she said with a pained look.
“No. To a hot chick in her yellow bikini.” He pulled up a set of pictures onto his phone and showed them to her. “Remember sending these to me?”
“You know, I’d forgotten,” she said as she viewed all the poses she’d modeled in that two-piece earlier in the summer. “So these turn you on, huh?”
“Like nothing else, babe.”
“Okay. That’s fine. Just go wash really good, with soap this time; don't forget to sanitize your phone, too," she said as she squirted some alcohol from a nearby dispenser into her palms. "And once I turn legal age, we can relieve each other properly. Are you counting the months? I am!”
“I’m not obsessing over it or anything.. Only 11 more months. And 3 days. And eight hours,” Bern said with a devilish snicker.
“Babe,” Willow queried, “what’s that in your shirt pocket?”
“Oh – I got employee of the month. This was my reward. It’s one of those video doorbells that people use for their home security systems. To be honest, I think it’s just something Mr. Torres – my boss – bought, then found he had an extra, so he’s giving it away as a prize. I’d prefer a gift card to Rock Auto Parts, to be honest.”
“Well, I’m proud of you. You’re so good at cars – at anything mechanical, babe.”
As Willow left the shop on her bicycle, she mused over the day she sent her beau those pictures, 2 months ago. She and her family were traveling on their summer vacation, and she was wishing her boyfriend could be with her …
“I miss Bern,” fretted the young brunette as she rode in the Eiken family SUV. “I’m finally going to spend some quality time in some swimwear, and he’s not around to see it.”
“We’re only gonna be gone for three days, sis,” whispered Angela. “Bernard had to work this week anyway, remember? Besides, if you got to bring him, then Mal and I would have argued to have a pal or friend to come with each of us too. That would be 8 people total Dad would be paying for. He had to dole out a lot of cash for grandpa to be taken care of while we were gone anyway. So please keep the lovesick moaning to a minimum before Mom’s mood sours, ‘kay?”
It was the end of July, and school was to start in 3 short weeks; this was the last opportunity the family had for a vacation together. So they were taking the long drive to the Texas hill country. Willliam, the father and family head, had booked a cabin near the Guadalupe River so they could do some tubing. “Maybe we can visit that huge water park at New Braunfels too,” he’d suggested.
Gwen Eiken was riding shotgun; she turned her head to look at her kids. Malachi was in the back seat engrossed in his phone. Her two daughters in the middle seat row stopped their whispering to return her gaze. Their “Hi Mom” was almost in unison, except Willow said “Momma”, her unique name for Gwen.
“Hey kiddos. Whatcha talkin’ ‘bout?”
“Oh, just things. Ya know. Silly teen girl stuff,” Willow replied with a clearly artificial smile.
“I was wondering if we’re going to stop at that 100-year-old bakery in New Braunfels. I read online that their cream puffs are to die for!” chirped Angie, hoping to distract her Mom from addressing Willow’s forced grin.
“Yeah, Naegelin’s has reportedly been there over a century,” inserted William as he kept his eyes on the road. “Don’t know that I want to eat a 100-year-old cream puff, though. Haha!”
“GROANNN,” sighed his two daughters, this time in perfect unison. Gwen agreed. “On a joke scale of 1 to 10, that was a minus 2, honey,” she laughed; then she turned back to facing the front.
Willow exhaled. Angie kept silent, but texted her sister. No more Bernard talk ‘til later.
The family had arrived and checked into their riverside cabin; then roamed around the historic downtown before taking in a movie and finally all hitting the sack. They slept in until about 9:30 when William boomed “IT’S BAKERY BREAKFAST TIME! EVERYBODY UP AND AT ‘EM – WE NEED TO EAT AND THEN GO TUBING!”
Although the reveille was harsh, the breakfast was heavenly – a selection of sweet and savory treats from Naegelin’s, accompanied by fresh hot coffee and juice. “You’re so sweet to get this for us, honey,” cooed Gwen at her spouse. “But for future wake-ups, a good morning kiss is all that’s needed, okay?”
“I know, babe – for you. But the kids usually require more volume to break their slumber.”
“He’s right,” mumbled a still sleepy Angie. “We need a loud alarm.” Sister Willow nodded as she sipped her hot java.
“There was an alarm? I didn’t hear nothin’. The smell of the coffee woke me up,” Mal garbled in-between huge bites of bear claw.
Willow preened before the mirror in her room. Her two-piece was a yellow top held by bow ties behind her neck and back, and a matching skirted bottom. She liked the look, yet her face was fretful.
“Stop worrying. You’re perfect. So-ooo hot,” reassured Angie.
“What if it gets transparent when wet? I’ll be so humiliated.”
“Willow, look at the fabric. That’s not see-through. Is that really what you’re worried about?”
“Umm … no. To be honest, it’s - ”
“Knock-knock, girls. Can I come in?” spoke Gwen from outside the bedroom door.
She entered with their assent. “How are the arrangements working out here? Any discomfort with you two sharing the same room?”
The girls blinked their eyes in wonder back at their mother. “No. Why?”
“Let me be blunter. Any undesired junk sightings? Any unplanned penis peeps producing pangs of panic?”
“OHMIGOD! MOMMA!” Willow's face was redder than the jelly from the donut she’d eaten.
“No, Mom. Willow is, as always, super discreet. We don’t go nude around each other, and we don’t look at each other when we’re dressing,” said Angie. “Unless we’re making fashion suggestions.”
“Good,” replied Gwen. “Though I’m a little disappointed that neither of you commented on my nifty bit of alliteration earlier.”
“Well, please pardon our perceived paucity of praise, Parent,” grinned Angie.
“And pardon the peculiar preponderance of “P’s” in the preceding passage,” added Willow.
“Awesome. I’m raising a couple of vocabulary geniuses – sarcastic ones, at that,” Gwen said. “So, Willow – are you worried about something? You look nervous.”
Her middle child sighed. “Angie, can you step out of the room for a sec?”
“Sure, Sis. Mom, how do you like my suit?” Angie twirled about in her red string bikini.
“Well, you’re 18 and an adult. I’ll allow it – but your Dad may not. Better cover the bottom at least with some jean shorts before you step out of here. Remember right now you still live at home and he’s paying for your vacay.” Angie complied then stepped out; Willow’s momma turned to her. “What’s up?”
“Well … speaking of ‘junk’ … is mine hidden enough?”
“That skirt bottom hides it all, daughter.”
“Yeah, when I’m standing. But in the water, it might flip up and I’m afraid lumps might show. If the suit was jet black instead of neon yellow, it might be hidden better. I’ve tucked and even taped, but can you check me?”
“Okay. Bend over. Hmmmn. I see no bumpiness; all is smooth as silk. You should take some pix for your boyfriend. Not of your crotch, mind you – just in the suit in general.”
“Already did, and sent them to his email. That will give him something to obsess over when he’s on his lunch break,” she dreamily exhaled.
Gwen moved behind her daughter and began adjusting the bows of her top. “Have you two had sex?”
“URK!!” gulped Willow. “Why – what makes you think that?”
“Just a simple, reasonable question. You've spent a lot of time together this summer. He’s dated you every weekend, and you go to NA meetings together. Now, you’ve never broken curfew – I respect him for that. But sometimes you get home with your lipstick worn off and your hair a little mussy. It would be logical to think that you two might have gone all the way – at least in some form. I know you don’t have a vagina, but there are other -”
“I KNOW! I know. I know all about the ‘different ways’. But that doesn’t mean I’ve done them. I’m still 16 for a few more weeks; if Bern and I had sex, that would mean you guys could turn him in for statutory. Dad threatened him with that when you two first allowed us to date, remember? ‘Cause Bern and I sure remember.”
“So, just to be specific. No oral?”
“No.”
“No anal?”
“NO.”
“Hand job?”
“No contact with his groin at all! Um. Not … directly. No ‘skin touching skin’ down there. And he doesn’t touch my groin … skin.”
“Does he touch your boobies?”
“That’s not sex. And, yes.”
“So. A lot of rubbing with no one’s pants off or unzipped?”
“Yes. So see, no sex has happened yet. Right? Are we in trouble or something?”
“No, honey. I was just curious.”
Willow turned right and left before the mirror, checking out the suit fit. She then faced her parent. “Momma … I know you. You don’t do light talks about stuff like this. Is there some other agenda you're hinting at, something we need to deal with?”
“No, baby - I promise. Just being a parent, making sure you're making good choices. As long as you're honest with me, I promise not to be TOO intrusive." She laughed. "I'll just be appropriately intrusive. Now let's get out there before your father starts complaining about too much idling being bad for the SUV."
The family was now tubing as a group down the Guadalupe, each in their own personal rented tube. The water was cold, but the sun was hot, and so all present were relaxing with their swimsuits and sunglasses as the flow slowly took them down past glorious riverside houses and foliage. There was only one exception to the serenity: Willow. She was spread out atop her tube, not allowing any part of her body to touch the water. Angela paddled with her arms over to where she was.
“What’s up, sis? You look so tense.”
“Ahhh … I’m … I’m fine, Angie. I’m okay.”
“Liar. You’re lousy at telling fibs now that you do that 12 step stuff. Why won’t you touch the water?”
Willow sighed. “Okay, look. I’ve swum before, but always in swimming pools. You can’t see through this water – and who knows what kind of things are down there to bite me?”
Angie gaped at her little sis. “Like what? Freshwater river sharks? North American piranhas? Nope; none of those things exist.”
“What about snakes or other reptiles? I thought this river would be clearer!”
“Sis. Just relax,” – but Angie was suddenly interrupted by a bearded man yelling from 15 yards back upstream; he was floating just behind the Eikens. “Hey you! Girl in the yellow bikini! There’s a big green croc right beside you, see it?”
“Wh – WHAT!?” Willow squeaked as she glanced furtively all around her. Then she saw it – a huge gator nose poking out of the water, just inches from her left foot. “AAAAAAHH! GET AWAY GET AWAY GET AWAY FROM ME AAAAAAA!!” She paddled furiously with her arms while raising her legs away from the creature’s snout. In the process, she became unbalanced and the tube flipped her over into the water.
“HELP! HELP!,” the girl shrieked as she swam downstream as fast as she could, past her laughing brother and smiling Momma. Willow’s Poppa grabbed her arm as she passed his tube.
“Hey, daughter! Look back at Angie.”
She did – and saw her older sister grab the croc’s nose. She pulled it out of the water – revealing the monster as just a big, green, floating foam rubber shoe.
“Did you lose this, sir?” Angie yelled at the bearded man. He nodded, and she tossed the “Croc” brand slipper back to him.
A sheepish Willow swam back to her tube and climbed back onto it.
Willow rode her Schwinn bike away from Bernard's job as she mused on the memory. Slowly, embarrassment brewed into resentment. I can’t believe I was so stupid. Everyone was laughing at me like I was an idiot. Yeah, as if THEY hadn’t ever made a mistake before. Her frustration began to burn a hole in her psyche, and without realizing it she started to grind her teeth as her face twisted into a furious rage.
“FUCK ME! FUCK THEM! FUCK EVERY-GOD-DAMN-BODY,” she screamed as she, in one fluid motion, dismounted her moving bicycle and flung it by the handlebars into the street. Two cars almost crashed head-on into each other as one swerved to miss running over it; both of them screeched to a stop. The swerver, a bald man in a red sedan, rolled down his window. “Young lady! What the heck did you do that for? You almost killed me and this other guy!”
“Oh God – I’m, I’m so sorry!” she blubbered as she ran out to retrieve her Schwinn, tears suddenly gushing from her eyes.
Hey Bern. U there?
Yep! Those cookies were awesome, babe. I shared a few with the guys at the shop, and they were all wishing you were their GF. They were jealous of me before, but the choc chips sent them thru the roof with envy.
Oh good! Needed 2 hear that. Been a rough day.
What? Really? U seemed fine at the shop.
Didn’t have time 2 tell u. I had a guy bully me at school, and he was super slick about it. The cameras won’t pick up that he was doing anything wrong. And latr on my bike I threw a tantrum; nearly caused huge car wreck. Happened after I left the shop.
Whaaaat? R u OK? And – Rage/fit??? Where did that come from? Long time since that’s happened, right?
Not since I had run-in with Rico at coffee shop all those months ago. I’m OK physically, not so much emotionally.
So what’s the root of that?
THAT’S THE PROBLEM, I DON’T EXACTLY KNOW! Was having a stupid memory, next thing – EXPLOSION. Came on so fast – wasn’t expecting it! I’m scared, – can’t have that kind of stuff happening again. Is Angry Bill trying to come back? Or am I becoming Angry Willow? Oh God please not that! Wish u were here; could really use being held. I know, it’s after 10, no visitors allowed.
Babe. Calm down. U R gonna be fine. Do these things, K?
- 1 – Call ur sponsor ‘bout this fury-fit.
- 2 – Go tell ur mom that u need 2 be held. Ur nevr 2 old 4 a momhug.
- 3 - Then text me back & tell me bout this bully. We’ll figure out sumthin’ 4 him.
- 4 – Say out loud x25: Bern luvs me like crazy and no matter what we’ll face all this together.
…..
Babe U there?
Sorry, I was doing the last thing first. Feel a li’l bettr. Will call Julia now. I love you, BF!
To be continued tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 15
by **Sigh**
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Amanda U sound pretty desperate
I am
Desperate enough 2 end it all?
You mean like running away?
No, I meant ending ur life. Suicide.
R U saying I should think about it?
NO! YOU NEVER EVER SHOULD! YOU WILL COME THROUGH THIS – trust me! But plz answer question – have you been thinking about suicide, even a little?
Maybe a little.
“Another inventory? I already did that – a BIG one – 6 months ago. Did it not work?” Willow sighed as she spoke on the phone.
“No, not another step 4,” replied Julia, her Narcotics Anonymous sponsor. “You don’t have to re-do that huge initial emotional inventory. But this river float episode happened since then. So you should be regularly doing a step 10 – where it says continue to take personal inventory. If you’d been doing so, you’d have dealt with the shame of looking foolish – and the memory would now hopefully make you just laugh at yourself, not fly off the handle.”
“Okay, I’ll do that. How come you’re so wise, Jules?”
“Ha! Not wise; just experienced. I’ve been through this crap myself – not with anger, but with extreme, crippling anxiety. I’d be dead or drugged up in a flophouse right now if I hadn’t held on to NA and my sponsor. So I’m glad you called, my little sponsee.”
One week later.
Willow had just completed a 30 minute session with the school counselor; they required this even though she still saw Dr. Estrada on a regular basis. She guessed administration wanted to make sure they were meeting her needs; it was hard to tell if they genuinely wanted to help, or were “covering their butts” to prevent possible accusations of neglect or discrimination. After all, she seemed to be the only openly transitioning student at Montclair High.
As Willow walked down the east hall toward the doors leading to the bicycle racks, she confronted something new: yellow cones draped with plastic DETOUR tape, cutting off passage down the hall. A sign said WAXING FLOOR. And yes, there were red arrow signs pointing to an open staircase that had to led down to the ground floor. She grumbled to herself. First I had to stay after classes for this session, and now I have to navigate around the janitor crews.
She turned towards the stairs for two steps then stopped. Shaking her head, she sent a text to 2 numbers; one of them promptly replied. She then reached inside her purse to press a button. I’m probably being paranoid, but better safe than sorry. Then she headed down the staircase as the arrows instructed.
Arriving downstairs, she immediately felt in danger – the only light was a solitary hanging bulb, and there was no hallway, just a room with no exit other than back up the steps. She turned to run up them – and would have, except for a hand that now gripped around her throat. Turning her head as much as she could, she saw she was being held by the boy who’d harassed her last week.
“Sh-sh-sh. Shush now. Stay quiet if you want to live. I only want to punish you. But if you make me, I will kill you. Pervert.”
Willow choked out some speech from her compressed larynx. “I know who you are, Connor Irving. Looked you up in the yearbook. Told the counselo-“
“Shut up!” hissed Connor. “You must think you’re pretty smart. But there are no cameras down here to save you, and I guarantee no one saw me set up the cones and arrows. No one knows we’re down here. Now get ready for a beating.”
“Connor, you’re wrong. There is a camera down here. And it records both video and sound.”
“You’re bluffing.”
“Check out my purse. See the little lens protruding from the corner? It’s a modified video doorbell we’ve adapted to be like a body cam the police use. It even transmits live video – it’s doing so now. I told a friend – and the police - about you, and we made a plan to catch you in the act next time you tried something.”
Suddenly the boy’s cell rang from his back pants pocket.
“I’d get that if I were you,” said Willow.
“H – hello?” stammered the would-be assaulter into his smartphone. His face drained of color, and he ended the call. “That was the cops. They have my number. They’ve been recording all of this from your transmitter – and they’re 60 seconds away.”
“You’re going to jail for attempted assault, Connor. At 18, I think you’re too old for juvie.”
“Well if I’m going there, I might as well make it worth it,” he snarled, pulling his arm back and making a fist to aim at his abductee’s face. Willow gasped and tried to pull away, but –
WHUDD!
Someone had punched Connor before he could get his hit in – someone who’d flown down the stairs ahead of the police; someone who now sat on the older boy, pinning him to the floor.
It was Malachi Eiken, Willow’s youngest (and biggest) sibling.
“HEY, YOU PIECE OF TRASH. YOU MESS WITH MY SISTER, AND I’LL MESS WITH YOUR FACE, GOT IT?”
The law arrived and carted Connor away. Willow walked with her brother out to where her bike was. “Mal, how did you get here so quick? I mean, I sent you the same text I sent the officers – and you arrived before them! Weren’t you at home already?”
He smirked back at her. “You must not have believed me when I said I would help protect you, sis. On days you have these after school meetings, I hang around campus until you’re through. As you ride your bike home, I follow on mine. When you sent your message I was just outside the main entrance; I kept one of the doors propped open in case I needed to get in.”
“I – I had no idea you were doing all that!”
“Well … I didn’t want you to feel I was being a pest, or overprotective. So I’ve been kinda sneaky about it.”
“Let’s get something straight, little bro. I would be proud to bike or walk anywhere with you beside me. You are not a pest. Is there anything I can do to express my thanks for your heroics today?”
Mal’s eyes lit up. “You could make me my own batch of your homemade cookies! Please?”
“Why sure! In fact, there’s plenty left at home – I made 3 dozen yesterday. Why don’t you take twelve of them as yours?”
“Umm … because they’re already gone. Mom, Dad and Angie got some, but I ate most of them. I sure would like some more, though.”
Willow chuckled, amused and amazed at her brother’s bottomless pit stomach. “I’ve changed my mind. You ARE a pest! But I’m still proud to be seen with you.”
It was 3:30 pm; another day of school over. Willow unchained her bike for the ride home. Her phone suddenly buzzed indicating a text. It was the 9 year old trans girl from church she’d been secretly communicating with.
Willow – you free?
Amanda! 3 days since last mssg?! Been worried. Wanted text u but I never sure if yr Dad is around r not. R U ok?
Oh, I’m the same. Feel better when talk 2 u.
Did u get ur Mom alone 2 talk?
Too scared 2 – she always sides with Dad! So I got my older sis 2 talk w/ her. You kno. About TG people in general.
And???
Mom told her that it’s a sin; TG people R mentally ill, going 2 hell unless they change. So no it did NOT go well. Don’t know what to do!
U sound pretty desperate
I am
Desperate enough 2 end it all?
You mean like running away?
No, I meant ending ur life. Suicide.
R U saying I should think about it?
NO! YOU NEVER EVER SHOULD! YOU WILL COME THROUGH THIS – trust me! But plz answer question – have you been thinking about suicide, even a little?
Maybe a little.
GF we need to get u 2 talk 2 an adult. Will u go to ur school counselor? I’ve already called and checked her out – I didn’t use ur name, but told her ur problem. She’s ready 2 help – you just need 2 drop by her office during lunch. Will u do that?
She’s going to make me talk 2 my Dad isn’t she. O God.
Not at first - and not EVER if he puts u in danger. Will u meet with her? Gonna keep asking til I get answer.
Okay I will
When
Next semester?
Amanda!
OKOK. Tomorrow
And u text me ASAP after?
I promise
Holding u to it! Love you GF. Hang in there. It gets better; might get worse before it does, but WILL get better eventually.
Promise?
Yes
Now I’M holding U to THAT. CU Sunday!
B there or B square
?? is that something old people say?
Yep. My Grandpa used to say it 2 me all the time, before the Alzheimer’s. I think square used to mean basic in his day. BYE.
William Eiken rushed into the house from his garage. It had been a busy day at his orthodontist practice – and then as he’d finished the last patient, he got a text from his daughter Willow …
Poppa come home ASAP! Grandpa spazzing out – Momma & Angie & I can’t control him, all r crying! HELP!
“Honey?” the dad yelled into the main hallway. “Willow? Angie! I’m here – where is everyo-“
“P-poppa,” Willow blubbered, her head now sticking out of the door to Grandpa’s bedroom. Her eyes were red and mascara outlined the tear streams down her cheeks. “Over here!”
William ran in to a distressing scene. His father-in-law, Grandpa John, was in the bed on his back - being held there by Gwen, Angie and Willow. The mother had ahold of his arms, and each daughter held a leg down. He emitted growls and hisses instead of formed words, and a huge fresh bruise was on his chin.
“He’s been confused all day,” sobbed Gwen. “He wants to walk but keeps falling – see his chin? - and he won’t sit in a wheelchair. I can’t let go of his arms or he’ll take a swing at us. Angie got punched in the stomach! I don’t know what to do – I’ve been trying to hold on until you got home, but I’m … I … I’m at my wit’s end. God, honey, I can’t do this anymore! He’s gotten so bad – faster than what his doctor …” Gwen’s voice dissolved into wracking sobs now, ones that convulsed her whole body.
William grabbed the old man’s legs to relieve his daughters. “Angie! Are you hurt?”
“I’ll be okay, I think. I really need to throw up now, though,” she said stumbling towards the bathroom.
"Where's Malachi?"
"Still at cross-country racing practice," his wife cried.
“Willow – is your phone still on you?”
The young girl wiped some tears away with her hands. “Yeah, Poppa.”
“Call 911 for an ambulance, NOW. I want him taken to the nearest ER. And we’ll follow in the car – I need to get your sister looked at there, too.”
The emergency room waiting area was packed full of sick people, suggesting that the
gurneys inside were full also. It was no surprise that the ER doc seemed to be running from patient to patient, and he burst into the exam room holding the Eiken clan. He was an Asian man in blue scrubs and tennis shoes, with a white coat and a stethoscope draped around his neck. He approached Gwen.
“Your father has a bladder infection. I’ll bet that’s why his mental state deteriorated so rapidly today. Normally we could treat this at home with antibiotic pills, but seeing as he’s been so combative and resistant – he refuses to swallow any meds we’ve offered him – he needs admission, and possibly some temporary restraints.”
He turned to Angela, who sat in a chair rubbing her tender tummy. “Young lady, your CT scan looks normal, so you’re probably OK to go home – but any new developments like blood in your stool or worsening vomiting, and I want you right back here. Don’t try to eat yet; just keep hydrated with watery liquids for the next day.”
“When will you be sending Grandpa back home?” asked Willow.
The doctor furrowed his brow with concern. “Is your home the best place for him?”
“We’re his family!” Gwen gasped. “It’s our duty to take care of him!”
“And thank God you haven’t shirked from it. But from the story of how much you all have to do for him, I’m wondering if his needs are beginning to overwhelm you.”
“Don’t be concerned about us,” Gwen fumed as she sat on a stool next to her father’s gurney. “I only want what’s best for Dad!”
The doctor nodded his head, and squatted down to get eye-to-eye with her. “Believe it or not ma’am, that’s exactly what I want too. He needs two things: nursing care and his family’s love. You’re so busy filling the first job that you have little energy to do the second; and that’s the one you absolutely cannot delegate to anybody else.”
One week later, the family drove away from the parking lot of Springhaven Nursing Facility and Alzheimer’s Unit.
“I feel like a failure,” Gwen sniffed as her eyes moistened. “I promised Dad years ago that I wouldn’t let him be placed in a nursing home. And now I’ve done just that.”
“Honey – this is for his sake more than ours,” replied William “If he kept falling, something really bad was going to happen – bleeding in his brain, a broken hip or pelvis or spine. You can’t watch him 24 hours a day – and they can, with a fresh set of nurses coming on duty every 8 hours. You’re planning to do lunch with him daily, and the rest of us will visit him as much as we can during the week.”
“But I promised!” Gwen bawled.
“Honey – shhh, shh. It’s OK. Listen carefully to what I say now.” He spoke with depth and authority – the rest of the family fell quiet as he uttered:
“You’re under no obligation to keep a promise that’s going to harm the person you made the promise to.”
The car continued down the road in silence, all the occupants digesting the father’s words.
“That … that makes sense,” whispered Gwen.
“Wow. I’m remembering that one,” Willow whispered to Angie in the back seat.
Father Wilson was praying in his office at Chula Vista Episcopal. He glanced at the clock.
5:41. It’s almost time, Lord. This is the father of the child Willow Eiken told me about, the one she's secretly counseling via phone texts. I pray for your peace to be on them and me. Soften their hearts and guide my words.
The office intercom beeped. “Father – the Guidrys are here; all four, as you requested. However, the father wants only he and his wife in here with you to begin the session … is that …?”
“That’s fine, Darlene. Send Phillip and Rebecca in. Please watch the children in the waiting area while we talk.”
Right away a handsome man and an attractive woman, both thirty-something in age, entered. The man smiled as he and the father shook hands; then a mild frown appeared on his face. “I got the phone call saying to meet you here, Father. What’s this about? Is it good news, bad, what?”
“Phil, Becca … I received a concerned report from one of our Sunday School teachers. It involves your son.”
The 2 parent’s mouths both dropped. “Did Toby do something wrong?” queried the father.
“He’s not acting up or behaving badly. He’s just extremely withdrawn, and takes no joy out of life – according to Ms. Saldana, who teaches his class." I asked her to evaluate Toby after Willow talked to me - but that's information you'd best not know, he thought as he spoke. "She took Toby aside last Sunday and did a formal assessment for signs of abuse and mood disorder. She found no evidence of the former – but your son appears clinically depressed, and has even considered suicide. Your quick intervention is critical; he needs professional help from a child psychiatrist.”
“Who are you to tell me that my son needs a shrink?” bellowed Phil.
“Our teachers are trained to pick up signs of danger in their students. The church leadership insists they all be certified for this. Now: I’ve checked, and there is a child specialist who could see him Thursday. I strongly urge you to take Toby in for this, Phil.”
Phil’s wife was trembling some, and staring down at the floor. “Honey,” she whispered, “maybe we – “
“NO. NO HE’S NOT SEEING A PSYCH, AND THAT’S FINAL,” Phil yelled, slamming his hand down on his knee for emphasis.
“Why are you so angry about this suggestion?” questioned the Father.
Phil shook his head. “I guess I can tell you – I know you’ll be on my side in this matter, at least. Look, transsex, transgender … everything and anything ‘trans’ – is trendy now. Pediatricians are starting to give medicine to stop puberty in kids as young as 9 now – Toby’s age! Yet what I’ve read says that many kids outgrow this compulsion when they get past their teens. My son’s already got it in his mind that he’s a girl, and I don’t need other adults reinforcing that belief!”
“Phil – if your child is even just playing with the idea of suicide, then we need to intervene. You don’t have to commit him to a gender change to deal with that.”
“Father, you have my answer – NO. Come on, Becca. We’re leaving.”
“Phil!” barked Father Wilson in a volume that made both parents jump. “If you ignore my suggestion, I’ll be forced to call Child Protective Services. Toby is in danger, and you’re not seeking help.”
“You – you’d do that to us, to my kid?”
“Ahem. No, he won’t,” spoke Becca, now with some strength and resolve. “Because, Phillip, I’m going to take Toby to this psych doctor. I’ll be damned – sorry, Father – if I let my child kill himself when I could have prevented it.” She now glared angry eyes towards her husband.
Phil was now seething and steaming, shaking his head as he wrung his hands together. He stood up out of the chair he’d been in and began to pace about the room, mental gears appeared spinning furiously. Finally some words spilled out of his twitching mouth.
“Okay. He can be evaluated for DEPRESSION. But NO discussion about gender things!”
“We’ll see,” muttered his wife.
“Damn right we’ll see,” answered Phil. “I’m headed back to the office to get some files I’ll need to work on tonight. I’ll meet you and the kids back home. What time is supper?”
“Shooting for six. I’m probably just grabbing a rotisserie chicken and some sides at the grocery deli.”
Phil grumbled almost inaudibly and stomped out, slamming the door to the room. Becca sighed, closed her eyes and shook her head in frustration. She grabbed her purse and started to stand, only to see Father Wilson hold up his hand as he mouthed “wait”. Then he spoke in a whisper. “Rebecca – I’ve never seen him so angry, so intimidating. Are you and your kids safe? Are you in danger at all from him?”
“He’s … well, he’s never laid a hand on me, nor the kids – to my knowledge.”
“Is he threatening or overly controlling? Verbally abusive?”
“Father – we’re fine. I’m resolved to hold this family together, and going down this path of questions isn’t helping.” She then rose and turned towards the door. As she stepped out, her husband stepped back in.
“Hey. Before I leave, I need to tell you something else. Some of us church members have been talking to each other, and we’re concerned. As you well know, our congregation split from the national Episcopalian leadership on the subject of gay marriage and gays in leadership positions. We still hold to the biblical position that those things are wrong. But lately some people are attending our church and flaunting their LGBT positions – and our leaders, specifically YOU, haven’t done anything to address it.”
“Hm. When you say ‘some people’, Mr. Guidry, who do you mean specifically?”
“That Eiken boy. The one who dresses like a woman and now calls himself Willow. Surely you’ve noticed him, or at least heard of him? He comes here Sunday mornings in dresses and makeup, sits in the balcony. His parents don’t seem bothered in the least by it! One of my friends - Sam Fredricks - confronted the boy a few weeks ago at church, but it hasn’t stopped him from doing his crossdressing act.”
“Phil. I have indeed spoken to that young man and his mother, and told them I do not think it is God’s will for him to dress that way. This hasn’t changed their minds, as you can see. What more are you wanting me to do?”
“Condemn this perversion from the pulpit. Let the Eikens and any other LGBT’ers know that they are not welcome here unless they repent from their sexual deviancy and act as the scriptures prescribe. Please do this soon, Father. Otherwise, I and my family – as well as the others I spoke of – will seek another church to attend. We’ll take our financial support with us, too. Do you understand?”
Father Wilson sat silently, staring at Mr. Guidry. Finally he whispered “yes”. He continued to sit motionless for a good ten minutes after his congregant left the office.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 16
by **Sigh**
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“Maybe if someone warned you early, before you ‘lose it’, then you could stop it. I can tell when you’re starting to get too irritated.”
“What? You can? How?”
“Your cheeks get flushed. It can be seen even through your daily makeup. Sometimes you’ll frown, or sigh, or wrinkle your brow – but the most reliable indicator is a red face, especially the cheeks.”
Saturday nights in the El Paso autumn meant watching college football to many; it was fun to cheer the UTEP (U. of Texas – El Paso) Miners as they played on Sun Bowl field. Bernard Andujar and Willow Eiken could see the lights emanating from the stadium from their vantage point at the nearby drive-in carhop eatery. Staying in his El Camino afforded more privacy so they could talk about things.
“OOF! The chili on that coney dog was extra spicy tonight. I’ll probably have some vivid dreams tonight after I go to bed,” Bern burped.
“Do you remember your dreams after you wake up?” asked Willow.
“Most of the time? No. Sometimes I do. Why?”
“Do you ever dream about me?”
“OH yeah. Mostly in my daydreams. MMmmm. Yellow bikini bod.”
“Psh! I’m a little frustrated with my body now, to be truthful.”
“Maybe you just need reminding of just how hot you are. Short and cute, with that long black hair that’s now down to your chest. Your sensitive boobs with those hard nipples, and of course your awesome butt and hips that I love to run my hands over. And when you smile, it brightens up my rainiest day.”
“My boobs are too small. I need implants.”
Bern choked on his cola. “Wha – NO! Please don’t do that, Willow!”
She was confused now. “Don’t you want me to look hot for you? Won’t I turn you on more with big D-cup breasts?”
“Willow. You remember the blonde I took to prom? She had implants.”
“You mean Stunning Sandy? Yeah. She has a really nice rack, as I used to say when I was Bill. That didn’t attract you?”
“Willow … breast implants aren’t the real thing. A guy can feel them in there; I can feel the edges at the base a lot of times. And implants don’t look or hang like natural breasts. I just don’t prefer them. And on most women, those falsies aren't good for life; after ten years they bust, or turn hard, or any number of things that really are a turn off. Then you've got to get 'em replaced or removed. Mom had implants, and she said they turned rock hard after 8 years; they became so uncomfortable she to get them taken out. Even if yours don’t grow one more bit, I’d rather you just keep what you have.”
“But there’s not much there for you to play with!”
“There is, baby. And you know what the French say, right? A mouthful is all that’s necessary.”
"Ha! Well, I'm thankful that you don't have a big mouth," she laughed. "So, is there anything else that attracts you to me? I keep worrying that there's nothing I can do for you that some natural born girl couldn't do better."
Bern squinted as if concentrating, and looked out into the sky. "How do I describe this? Um ... your peaks fill my valleys. And vice versa."
"What does that mean? Are you talking about my hips, or butt, or -"
"No, Willow. I mean you - boy, this sounds sappy - you complete me. Your strengths kind of fill up the holes and flaws in my character - and I think my best points help fill any shortcomings you have. As guys, that made us great friends. Now as BF and GF, it makes us a fantastic couple. I think that we could accomplish anything in life, as long as we did it together."
Willow was warm with affection now, but still had concerns. "Back when I was Bill, I kind of gave the orders and you carried them out. That sounds more to me like an employer/employee relationship than a friendship. I mean, I don’t order you around like that now, but … were you happy with that?"
“You know, Willow … I’m great at following directions. I can absolutely accomplish a task, if I’m guided in when/where/how to do it. But if I have to organize the plan, and give the orders? That’s not my strong suit. And you are great at making a plan. That scheme to get Angie away from Rico and those hoods? Pure genius. All I had to do was follow your instruction. Together we're an unbeatable team; and yes, that makes me very very happy."
“Bern … if we stay together, I'm worried I'll just be a dead weight holding you back. I don't have a plan for my life. The only thing I know how to do is be a drug dealer!”
“Have you really tried doing anything else?”
“Hm. No. But !'m at a loss for thoughts. How do my talents translate into a real legit job?”
“I don’t know. I’m not the plan maker, remember? But I know there's an answer somewhere out there. Don't give up hope, babe. Have you talked with with the Montclair High career lady? Maybe she's got an idea.”
“The Guidance Counselor. Yeah, Dr. Estrada talked about me seeing her too. That sounds like a good next step."
"Just trust, babe. Trust in our love, and in your Higher Power. The answer is out there. Like Fox and Mulder said."
"You mean 'The Truth Is Out There'. That was the X-Files motto. You're such a nut!" Willow held her tummy as she threw her head back in a big, giggling laugh. "Oh, Bern. Now you’ve done it; you’ve lifted my spirits again. Can I have a taste of the spicy chili?”
“Umm … I already ate all of the chili dog.”
“There’s a little left on your lip,” she whispered as she got close and licked his mouth, then proceeded into a deep sexy kiss.
Willow was back home when she got a text notification on her phone.
Amanda! Howzit going friend?
Great day so fa; went 2 counselor @ school like u said 2 and she was so cool! Really wants 2 help. Said she would even talk 2 'rents for me – prob this week. So nervous! But feel some hope now
Thass good! Tell me more!
…
Manda?
…
Amanda u still there?
This is Willow, right? Bill and Gwen Eiken’s kid?
?? Umm … Who’s this?
Are you Willow or not?
Yes I am
I’m Mr. Guidry, Toby’s father. I saw him on his phone and grabbed it to see who he was texting with. Are you and your parents home? Need to talk to you in person.
I’m home and Momma is too. Poppa’s still at work. Sir instead of coming here can you just call my Momma? I can give u her cell #.
On my way. Stay there.
Willow numbly stared at her phone screen for a few seconds as she held her breath. Then she gasped “Omigod!! Momma – MOMMA, HELP! WE HAVE A SITUATION COMING, AND HE SOUNDS TICKED OFF!”
An angry man drove up to the Eiken’s front gate with his young son strapped into the passenger side of his Cadillac Escalade. He rolled down his window and punched the intercom button. “Hello? Mrs. Eiken – Gwen, are you there? Phil Guidry from church here – just need to talk to you in person. It’s about your kid – you know, the transvestite. So please let me in, and let’s talk inside.”
“Let’s not,” answered Gwen, driving up to the closed gate on her golf cart from the inside of the property. Willow rode with her. “You look mad, Phil. I’d prefer my husband to be home before I meet with you in your current state. Or you can just stay over there and we can talk through the gate. Your choice.”
“Stay in the car, Toby,” barked the man as he exited the ‘Caddy and walked up to the gate. “Gwen, you look nice. And my, isn’t your son as cute as a bug.” He scowled towards Willow as she sat in the cart, wearing jeans and a pink T-shirt that had overlapping white heart patterns.
“Let me guess what this is about,” replied Gwen as she redirected the conversation. “Willow has been communicating with Toby via text, and you’re upset about it.”
“Really? Upset? Whatever gave you that impression? Of COURSE I am, dammit! If you want to raise your son to change his sex, then fine but KEEP IT TO YOURSELF. I don’t need any of my family infected with this shit!”
“Watch your language please, Phil. We are supposed to be Christians, after all. As I understand it, your child sought out mine – that’s how they got to know each other. And I’ve done a quick scan of their texts; it looks like Willow is only encouraging your boy to reach out for help, and speaking words of encouragement. What’s so bad about that?”
“I’m confiscating Toby’s phone, and YOU,” – he pointed directly to Willow – “YOU are to NEVER have contact with him again, you hear? Or so help me God I will find a way to hurt you; physically, financially, socially – SOME way.”
“I’m not quite sure I got what you meant there,” quipped Willow.
“THEN LET ME BE CLEAR, PERVERT. YOU STAY THE HELL AWAY FROM MY SON AND MY FAMILY, OR I WILL BEAT YOU TO A BLOODY PULP. DID YOU GET THAT?”
Willow lifted her smartphone up high and pushed a button. A video of the Phil at the front gate came on, as he said “ … OR I WILL BEAT YOU TO A BLOODY PULP. DID YOU GET THAT?”
“Yes sir, I did,” smiled Willow as she wiggled her phone at him. “I got all of it.”
“Now it’s my turn to get mean, Phil,” said Gwen in a shaking but resolute voice. “I’m taking that video to the police, and filing a restraining order against you. And I’m calling Child Protective Services; pretty sure they’ll want to see it too.”
“Well, that was Becca Guidry, Toby’s – I mean, Amanda’s – mom,” related Gwen as she placed her phone back in her purse. “She was shocked and hurt to hear what her husband threatened. She’s taking both her kids and they’re leaving to stay in the Residence Inn; Phil’s alone in their big house now. Their family needs prayer and tons of counseling. I hope it works out for Amanda; heck, even for Phil.”
“Wow, Momma,” sighed Willow. “His face! Is that how I looked when I got out of control?”
“Are you kidding?” Gwen laughed. “THAT was NOTHING compared to ‘Angry Bill’s’ rages! I only handled this because you’ve put me through a lot worse. But since you raised the subject … how is that old anger problem? I know you’ve been better since you became my daughter, but does it ever come back like it did with Rico at the coffee shop?”
“Oh, sometimes,” Willow hemmed, deciding against telling her Momma about the bike-in-the-road episode. “The problem is that it comes on so fast! I don’t realize I’ve gotten out of control until it’s too late.”
“Maybe if someone warned you early, before you ‘lose it’, then you could stop it. I can tell when you’re starting to get too irritated.”
“What? You can? How?”
“Your cheeks get flushed. It can be seen even through your daily makeup. Also, sometimes you’ll frown, or sigh, or wrinkle your brow – but the most reliable indicator is a red face, especially the cheeks.”
“I … I had no idea!”
“Even your Poppa and Angie have seen it. Sometimes I’ve even warned them to keep their distance because you’ve gone crimson. How about I tell you when it’s happening?”
“So I can abort the coming meltdown?”
“Exactly. This will be the code phrase: ‘Willow, your face is red.’ That means STOP. Take a break, call a friend or your sponsor, laugh at the situation – just anything besides letting the irritation fester.”
“Sounds like a plan. Anything to avoid tossing my bike in the street again.”
“Wait! Wha – aaat? What are you talking about?”
“Gaaah!” Willow groaned, slapping her palm against her forehead. One day I’ll learn. I should always be open and honest, especially since I can’t keep a dang secret anyway.
William Eiken was in the middle of adjusting a patient’s upper braces when his assistant interrupted him.
“Doctor, you’ve got a call – from your minister, at church. He says he urgently needs a few seconds of your time.”
“I’ll be back in a sec, Ms. Stratelli,” he said as he walked out of the room and over to the front desk phone. “Hello – Dr. Eiken here. Is this Father Wilson?“
“Yes, William. Sorry to interrupt you. Are you planning to come to church this Sunday?”
“Of course. We won’t be out of town or anything. Why?”
“I need you and all of your family there when I give the morning sermon. I know your wife has missed services recently due to her needing to stay home with her father; if possible, can someone else take that duty so she can be here too?”
“Grandpa John no longer stays with us; as of last Tuesday, he’s in an Alzheimer care facility. Father, what’s this all about? This feels like bad news. Are we being disciplined? Does any of this have to do with Willow?”
“Yes, to the Willow part. No one’s being scolded. But there are some concerns I am going to address publicly – some tensions and unrest that need to get dealt with. I will not go into it over the phone; I just need your commitment to be present.”
“Father. Please tell me you’re not going to hang Willow – and my family – out to dry.”
“William ,” assured the minister. “I’m asking you to trust me. I know you feel some alarm with this mysterious call, but if you’ve ever trusted me before, I need you to do so even more now. Please.”
The orthodontist took a big breath and exhaled. “Okay. We’ll all be there. I’ll trust you, Father; but will have a ‘plan B’ just in case. It involves sitting next to the aisle, so we can beat a hasty retreat if things get nasty.”
“That’s fine, Will. I’ll see you Sunday.”
The Career Guidance Counselor for Montclair High was encouraged to hear a knock on her door, especially since it came just 4 minutes after the end-of-the-school-day bell rang.
“Come in,” she chirped.
“Ms. Steinberg? It’s me –“
“Willow Ramos, correct? Thanks for being so prompt! Some students leave me to cool my heels for a good 20-30 minutes before they finally show up. How can I help you, young lady? Most kids wait until their senior year before they come to me for career direction; you’re just a junior.”
“Um – first of all, let me put all my cards on the table. I’m –“
“A transitoning girl, right? An ‘M to F’ transgender student. I haven’t been living in a cave, cutie; the whole school’s aware of you. I’ve read up on your history and grades in prep for our meeting, so I know more about you than you realize. How is the year going here at school? Teachers treating you okay?”
“Oh yeah – especially Ms. Moscowitz in geometry. She’s awesome.”
“I heard about the awful near-assault from Connor Irving. Any more bullying or threats?”
“No, not at all, amazingly. It’s been a good first couple of months here. The biggest problem is most people avoid me like the plague; making friends has been a little tough.”
“Part of that is your transition; but part of it is likely because of who you used to be.”
“Used to be? You mean when I was Bill?”
“Not just Bill; Willy. Willy the Dude, drug dealer, and rage monster, someone you didn’t dare cross. The scuttlebutt going around on you is that you still can get upset at times, though you don’t lose it as bad as in the past. When your face gets scarlet, everyone stays away from you.”
Willow gaped. “How is it everybody knew about my red cheeks, and I just found out recently??”
“We’re all blind to ourselves the most, honey. That’s why you need friends; some people to keep you grounded, who won’t tolerate any poop from you. Why don’t you reach out and take the first step – join a club, try out for a sport, invite someone to just hang with you? Speaking of clubs, the Spanish club is trying to recruit more members. Your last name is Ramos – do you speak the language at all?”
“Just enough to get by. Wow, I appreciate your interest in my social health. I’ll try to reach out more. But the reason I’m here is I don’t know what to do with my life; the only thing I was ever good at was dealing drugs.”
Willow recounted her concerns that she’d spoken of with Bernard during their chili dog date. Ms. Steinberg asked some more questions too; then stopped and jotted down a few notes as her visitor watched.
“So … am I only fit to flip burgers or be a supermarket cashier?” the girl fretted.
“Don’t count on the grocery thing. Technology is advancing so fast, human cashiers will become obsolete in the next 10 years. No, my young friend – I think you’re destined to be a businesswoman.”
Willow’s jaw dropped. “What? How so?”
“The things you did when you dealt drugs – setting up a supply and distribution chain, making contacts and contracts, keeping your promises – those are business skills. You appear to be a genius at networking. You just need to do it for a legitimate business, not narcotics.”
“But - what kind of business?”
“You can leave that up to someone else. Businesspeople are experts at taking another’s dreams and making them reality. You don’t have to have the initial vision. Why don’t you take some college level courses next year, maybe do an internship this summer? Yeah, you’re only 16, but you’re precocious. I’ll see what strings I can pull. How does that sound?”
“Like I might actually have a purpose!” Willow exulted.
Malachi Eiken was spending his Saturday in a most inglorious manner – on the toilet. Every 15 – 20 minutes, having to have a movement; although the last 3 had been mostly liquid diarrhea. He exited the bathroom yet again, looking drawn and tired. As he stepped out into the hall, he was met by the younger of his two sisters carrying a big glass of sports ‘ade’ on ice.
“Here, Mal – you need to stay hydrated. You washed your hands good, right?” fretted Willow.
“Yeah, I did. Thanks for the drink. I dunno what’s happened – food poisoning, maybe?”
“Maybe you ate too many of the double chocolate chip cookies I made this morning.”
“I ate ALL of them. You know I can’t control myself when you bake sweet stuff. But I didn’t start with the shits until a few hours later. And this has never happened to me before – with ANY type of food.”
“Who knows, bro. Maybe it’s the type of flavoring I used. Cocoa syrup, choco chips, and – oh, yeah, I remember now – chocolate flavored laxative. Like, a triple dose.”
Mal’s face, already ghostly, turned a whiter shade of pale. “You POISONED me??”
“I medicated you – well, overmedicated. You’ve got only yourself to blame! I can’t cook sweets for the rest of the family, because you steal and scarf them up before anyone else has a chance! I’ve warned you the last few times not to do that; Monday I almost had an anger meltdown over it. Thank God Mom was around to help me stop that.”
“So I ate all your Monday cookies. Big deal!”
Willow shook her head. “Monday was Bernard’s birthday. Those were to be his present. I left a big note on the platter warning everyone of that.”
“Bern’s … birthday? Oh crap,” moaned Mal. “Sis – I’m sorry. I didn’t read the note beyond the DON’T EAT. Are … are you still mad at me?”
Willow’s face relaxed with a smile and a sympathetic look. “Anger doesn’t work for me; it just hurts me and those I love. Now, revenge … that works,” she laughed. “I just made this special batch and left another DON’T EAT note; and no one did, except you. So drink plenty of fluids; I’ll bet the rest of the day you and “cousin John” are gonna be close friends. And in the future don’t let me hear of you ever taking more than your fair share of my cookies, because I know of many ways to get even.”
“You’re so full of crap,” he smirked – then his eyes opened wide with panic, and he grabbed his tummy.
“Can't say the same for you,” snickered Willow as Mal ran for the toilet again.
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Weeping Willow
Part 17
by **Sigh**
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“Momma?” breathed a voice into Gwen Eiken’s ear.
There was no response, just the continuing slow breathing of sleep.
“Momma … wake up,” the whisper continued, slightly louder and more urgent.
“Hmph. Uhmmm … wha’s … huh? Willow? What’s going on, baby?”
The only answer given was Willow’s left ring finger, illuminated by a cell phone glow.
That Saturday evening two young lovers sat in a dirt-brown El Camino at Overlook Park in El Paso. Both munched on take-out as the sun set and the valley lights slowly turned on.
“Mmmm. This warm Whataburger really hits the spot on this chilly night. And look at the gorgeous sunset,” said Bern, mouth half-full.
“Reminds me of our first date,” Willow sighed.
“Me too. Except the sun sets so early now, off of daylight savings time. I can tell it’s gotten colder in just the last half hour.”
“Yeah. I’m pretty shivery, even with my coat and gloves and toboggan on. Don’t know if I’m up to much skin exposure later. Unless … are your folks home?”
“Yes. Yours?”
“Of course. Nuts! I’m getting pretty impatient, following everyone’s rules about what we’re supposed to do. Physically, I mean. How are we gonna wait another year and a half, Bern?”
“You don’t graduate Montclair High until then, true; but you’ll be 17 years old just this summer. In Texas, that’s adult age. Then we can legally go as far as we want.”
“But Bern; we go to church at Chula Vista. They frown on sex outside of marriage. And I kinda promised my folks I’d wait until my honeymoon. You know how I have to keep my word to stay abstinent from alcohol and drugs; guilt screws up my emotional state.”
“So … I have a suggestion. What if we got married this summer, after your birthday?”
Willow tilted her head. “You mean before my senior year? I’m not dropping out of school!”
“I know, baby. So finish high school; just attend your last year as a married woman. My wife.”
“Bern … have you thought this through? This is starting to feel like your Denny’s vending-machine-ring proposal.”
“This time I prepared, girl. I’ve put lots of thought into this, and did some research. Your school allows married students to attend, no problem. My salary at the auto shop is enough for us both to live in an apartment. We’ve been talking about getting hitched eventually. And I’ve been saving up for … this.”
He reached into his jacket pocket and produced a small felt cube, which he opened to produce a modest but definite diamond ring. “Willow Ramos, will you do me the honor of being my wife?”
Willow had stopped breathing and started shaking – not from the cold, but shock. “Bern – what if Poppa and Momma say no?”
Her beau smiled. “I already asked your folks for their blessing to do this; I met with them at your dad’s office last week. They both said yes!”
“I say yes too! Yes-yes-yes-yes-yes! Yes times INFINITY!” she bawled, as she once again became Weeping Willow.
After a long time of kissing and petting, the young lovers sat on the bench seat of the Camino, their arms embraced and their minds dreaming.
“What kind of a wedding would you like to have?” asked Bernard. “Church, backyard, huge, small … ?”
Willow grinned. “Believe it or not, JP. Justice of the Peace, at the courthouse. I never had a dream of having a huge, fluffy princess ceremony. A JP will be much cheaper, and we’ll under the radar. Not to mention we can have a great honeymoon using the money we saved from a huge wedding.”
“But your Mom told me once she’d overheard you wanted a big wedding with a white dress and a honeymoon in Tahiti.”
The young transgirl gave her beau a quizzical look. “I don’t remember saying that. Wait. Oh! Yes I do remember! My biological dad called me up months ago and threatened to disown me if I stayed a girl. I told him that I was going to have a dream wedding and honeymoon – in an attempt to get under his skin. I didn’t really mean that it was what I wanted. Okay?”
“Okay. Where should we honeymoon?”
“You go first on this one.”
“South Padre Island? Maybe a VRBO down there?”
“I like the beach idea. And they have a waterpark there too, like the one me and my family visited on our float trip to New Braunfels this last summer.”
“Sounds like a plan. Maybe that can be our wedding gift from my Dad.”
“Umm … Bern?”
“Yeah, Baby?”
“I haven’t had SRS yet. Dr. Estrada prob won’t approve it ‘til I’m 18. You’d have to live at least a year with a wife who’s got a … “
“Dick. Yeah. Does that bug you, Willow?”
Her eyes almost popped out of her skull. “What?? The big question here is you, not me! But since you’ve asked, it does bug me a little; I want a vagina! I can’t wait to be Willow completely. Ready to leave Bill and all of his hang-ups behind me. But back to you: do you … want me to have a penis when we marry?”
“Not necessarily; I, too, want you to have a box*. But I’m a patient man, and there are plenty of other things we can do. I don’t think I’m open to you going inside me, but everything else is at least discussable. I mainly want you, Willow. I want to live with and love on my best friend, the girl who completes me. I’m sooo ready for that.”
“Bern, you ought to be on Jeopardy,” she whispered as she neared her lips toward his, “because you always give the right answers, did you know that?”
*Slang for vagina
She ended her fantastic date that night with long minutes of kissing at the front door, then sighed dreamily as she watched her new fiancé drive off into the night.
Her sister met her as she came in. “Wow, Willow. You look a little dazed. Are you okay?”
“I might need to see a doctor, sis. I’m lightheaded and giddy, and feel like laughing, screaming and crying at the same time!”
“Umm … are you on drugs? I’m only half-kidding when I ask that - I’ve never seen you like this!” Angie scowled with suspicion, arms crossed. “Did he give you something to make you high?”
Willow laughed. Oh, I’ve got to have a little bit of fun with this. “Please don’t be disappointed in me, Ang. He offered me some stuff I’ve never had before; in a moment of weakness I took it, and I’ve been on the highest high since. Want to see it? I’ve got it here on my finger,” she said as she held her left hand up.
Angela’s face and body language turned from sour to ecstatic. “OMIGOD! He really did it?!”
Willow nodded emphatically, and both girls embraced and jumped up and down together, squealing and crying for the next few minutes.
“Oh sis. He was so-oo smooth. I had NO idea that this was coming, and then when it did I couldn’t speak for like an eon!”
“So you feel better about it than you did after the Denny’s proposal?”
“No comparison. This was perfect. Well-thought-out, simple, intimate, romantic. And not some big flashy public display – he knows I hate those types of things. And by the way before you ask – the wedding won’t be until after my next birthday. Bern actually already worked that out with Momma and Poppa before asking me!”
“So they knew he was gonna propose tonight?”
“I assume so - but they surely don’t know if I said yes or not, right? Where are they – the den room looks dark; I figured they’d be watching a movie.”
“They’re asleep, sis. They went to bed at 9:30. I wonder if that’s what we’re gonna start doing when we hit our 40’s. But no matter; we’ve got to wake them up and show them your diamond!”
“Ooh,” said a deeper voice, speaking from behind the two sisters. “I wanna see Mom’s face when you show her!”
Both girls turned to look at their brother. “Mal – how long have you been here listening to us?” squeaked Angie.
“Oh, for a minute or so. Both of you were so gone that an earthquake could have hit and you wouldn’t have known.” He smiled big. “So, sis, I see that Bern is off the market, eh? Congratulations!”
“Thanks, Mal. That was sweet of you to say, especially after my ‘revenge’ with the cookies today. Are you back to normal?”
“Me and ‘John’ haven’t had to meet for the last 3 hours – I’m not uncrossing my fingers though. So are you gonna show the ‘rents your ring now, or what?”
“Momma?” breathed a voice into Gwen Eiken’s ear.
There was no response, just the continuing slow breathing of sleep.
“Momma … wake up,” the whisper continued, slightly louder and more urgent.
“Hmph. Uhmmm … wha’s … huh? Willow? What’s going on, baby?”
The only answer given was Willow’s left ring finger, illuminated by a cell phone glow.
Gwen snapped to attention; she grabbed her sleeping husband’s shoulder and shook it. “William, wake up! He did it! Our daughter’s wearing a ring! Oh Willow – this is fantastic! Are you happy?”
“I’m over-the-moon happy, Momma,” the newly engaged girl sobbed.
Embraces and tears followed. Angie and Mal were there to share it all; William too, once he finally woke up.
“Bern told me that he met with you guys and both of you agreed to allowing him to propose – I’m amazed! I thought you’d make me wait until I was 18,” the newly engaged girl gushed.
“Well, you’ll be legally an adult when you’re 17, just this next summer,” William said with a smile and a yawn. “I can’t stop you from marrying then, even if I wanted to. And after hearing Bern’s plans for supporting you and allowing you to finish school – let’s just say your Momma and I feel good about this. Right, honey?”
Gwen wiped away a tear or two. “The only ache I have is that I’m losing my new daughter; I haven’t gotten to know you well enough! You guys are going to live in El Paso, right? Will you keep in touch with me, and visit your old frail Momma weekly?
“OLD? Momma, you still stop young men in their tracks when you walk by!”
“Not just adults,” added Mal. “My cross-country friends Eddie and Pablo tell me I’ve got the hottest Mom they’ve ever seen.”
“See? Now do you believe me?” said William, nodding. He turned to the children. “I tell her all the time she’s a super-babe, but she thinks I’m just flattering her.”
“You guys are making me blush,” gasped Gwen.
William laughed. “Okay, okay. It’s hard for you to hear the truth. We’ll shut up-“
“I didn’t say y’all had to stop,” his wife whispered.
Willow motored her Buick SUV carefully down the road; after all, she was just in her first year of driving. That’s the year that people are most likely to have an accident, and this was her mother’s car. Furthermore, that parent was riding shotgun and watching her like a hawk.
They pulled up to the entry and the teen punched the remote gate control on the Buick’s panel.
“Wait just a second while I check this,” Gwen yelled as she opened her door and stepped to the mailbox. “Just one letter – or a card. It’s for Angie.”
“Pink envelope. Who’s the card from?” inquired Willow as they rode through the gates.
“Looks like it’s a card for her birthday; hmm, arriving actually a day early. That’s better than his usual one-or-two-weeks-late routine. Does that give you a hint?”
“Oh. It’s from my birth father, Roberto Ramos. Right?”
“Correct-a-mundo.”
“So he sent Angie a birthday card; and sent Mal one last July for his 15th. They got Christmas cards from him last winter. But ever since he disowned me for becoming Willow, he hasn’t acknowledged my existence.”
“That’s to be expected, daughter. You even told him on the phone you were never going to speak to him again. So this should come as no surprise, right? Are you upset at all about it?”
“Nope. Not at all, Momma. I’m fine. Peachy.”
“Umm … Willow,” said Gwen with narrowing eyes, “your face is getting red.”
The Eiken family had dinner that night together; afterwards the parents started gathering the dishes while the children went to their rooms to do homework.
“What’s up with Willow? She just stared down at her plate all meal, and didn’t say a word,” fretted William as he ran the sink water.
“She’s had a rough day emotionally. Angie got a birthday card from Roberto, and that set her off. She’s been trying to fight off an anger fit; I’ve talked with her, and she’s called her sponsor and Bernard. But she’s still hurt, badly. We need to pray for God to do something, because I can’t think of anything else to do,” replied Gwen.
“I know something you can do, Poppa.” Willow’s voice came from the kitchen entrance, and both adults spun around to look at her.
“Adopt me.”
William was taken aback. “Okay. It would be an honor. Tell me why you specifically want me to do this – at this point in time.”
“Poppa – you’ve been more of a daddy to me than my birth dad ever was. And I hate Roberto. I hate him! He’s just a lazy, pot-smoking, foul-mouthed sperm donor who despises me. I disgust him. I don’t want his name. He doesn’t deserve me having it! I know I’ll become Willow Andujar when I marry, but I don’t want to have Ramos even as a maiden name!”
William slowly produced an evil smirk with his mouth. “Boy, I bet that would stick in Roberto’s craw – for him to be rejected.”
“That’s what I want. Give him a taste of his own medicine.”
“I see,” nodded William, now sober-faced. “No.”
Both Willow and Gwen did a double take. “No?”
“No, I won’t agree to adopt you. Not for that. The main reason – the ONLY reason – to ask me to take my name on is if you truly want to be my child, legally. It should be done out of love – not hate, or hurt, or revenge. You can change it to anything – Smith, Jones, Hernandez, Chewbacca, Skywalker, whatever. But not my name – not for the wrong reason. Even if Roberto deserves it.”
“D – don’t you want me to be your daughter officially?” Willow’s bottom lip quivered, and she began to sniff back tears.
“Oh Willow,” said her Poppa as he took her in his arms. “I consider you my daughter fully, no matter what some piece of paper says. And in the future, if you wanted the Eiken name for the right reasons only, I’d gladly agree to it. But your heart needs to heal towards Roberto. Believe it or not, you need to forgive him.”
“He doesn’t deserve my forgiveness,” she sniffed, head planted firmly into her father’s shirt sleeve at the crook of his arm.
“I didn’t say he needs you to forgive him. You need you to forgive him. As long as that grudge eats at your soul it will destroy you, not to mention giving your toxic anger a doorway into your life. Don’t hold on to resentment towards him. It will hurt you more than it ever hurts him.”
“I – I don’t know if I can do it,” Willow bawled. “I don’t want to. I wish I wanted to, but I just don’t want to. I can’t forgive unless my heart’s really in it, right? It won’t work!”
“That’s not necessarily so,” William cooed. “Let’s do a little ritual.”
In the Eiken living room the fireplace was cradling some burning logs, as a cold front had blown through on this November day. A young woman squatted in front of the fire, holding five pages of legal notebook paper, all heavily written on.
“God,” she prayed, “these are all of the resentments I have against my dad Roberto. They are making my heart and life sick. As an act of my will, I forgive him of these, and I release them to your cleansing flame.”
She threw the pages into the furnace; they lit and burned up to black ashes quickly.
“Okay, God. I did my part. Now I ask you to change my heart; heal it up, and put love where there once was hate. I’m asking you because only you can do it.” She promptly buried her face in her hands and wept.
Gwen and William circled and held her in embrace.
“That was a big time grown-up thing you just did, Willow,” said Poppa
"Poppa ... it still hurts. When does the heartache go away? Did God hear me?"
"It might take months to get better, daughter. If the hurt starts again, repeat your words of forgiveness out loud. But in my experience, within days or weeks you'll start to feel the wound lessen. That's how you'll know total forgiveness is happening."
“So proud,” Momma choked out as she herself teared up. “So proud.”
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Weeping Willow
Part 18
by **Sigh**
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“Now, we have a person in this congregation who identifies as a woman though she was born male. I have met with her, and told her the traditional view I stated above. She chose to not follow that tradition, and continues to present herself as a female.”
Willow’s blood froze as she noticed several members of the congregation turn and look at her – some with smiles, but more with frowns. Sam Fredricks – the man who had grabbed her arm weeks ago when she first presented as female to church – was one of the frowners.
“Let’s split, babe,” Bernard whispered as he grasped her hand.
“Willow – go. We’ll stay here and handle any flack the haters give us,” her Poppa breathed into her ear.
She shook her head emphatically. “No! I want to hear where he goes with this.”
The next Sunday, the Eiken family walked into the foyer of Chula Vista Episcopalian Church a little earlier than usual.
“Bye, Momma. I’m going up to sit with Bernard,” Willow said as she turned to the stairs.
“Wait, Willow. Today I need all of us to sit in the main service on a ground floor pew. Mal, Angie; you’re to stay here too. All the family together. Father Wilson has a special message that involves us,” warned Gwen.
“But Bern-“
“I told him; he’s given the sound board to someone else, and he’ll sit with us – by you, of course. Here we go – everybody scoot into this pew, but make sure we keep bunched to the aisle side.”
“Why the back row? We never sit here,” asked Angie.
“In case we need to leave quickly. I’m not sure what he’s going to say,” shushed Gwen.
“Hey guys,” said a baritone voice.
“Bern!! Come sit by me!” smiled Willow. “Do you know what’s about to happen?”
“Nope – but I’ve got a feeling it might not be good,” Bern whispered.
The service proceeded normally, with hymns, recitations, a choir performance, and the introduction of a new charity service the church was partnering with. Then Father Wilson took to the podium to deliver his sermon.
“Good morning, brothers and sisters in Christ. Today, I will speak on some sensitive issues involving our church. This talk will make reference to sexual topics. There are rumors going around, and some people are getting unhappy. If any of you got past the ushers and have young children in the sanctuary here, I suggest you allow them to go to the children’s church wing – now, please.”
The Father paused as any remaining children left the main worship area.
“Most all of you know that over ten years ago this particular congregation – along with many others scattered throughout the country - decided to intentionally break away from the Episcopalian leadership in the USA. It was over the subject of homosexuality; the national leadership decided it was not a sin, and began to endorse and perform gay marriages as well as induct practicing gay ministers into their churches.
“Our official stance here at Chula Vista was that being gay is a choice people make, a lifestyle choice; and that the Holy Bible condemns the gay lifestyle. This is the conclusion our elders and ministers, including myself, came to at that time.
“The scriptures are not as clear regarding intersex/transsexual people. In general, we believe that if God assigned you a clear male or female genitals at birth, then that is the identity you should live as. This belief is more based on tradition than actual bible verse.
“Now, we have a person in this congregation who identifies as a woman though she was born male. I have met with her, and told her the traditional view I stated above. She chose to not follow that tradition, and continues to present herself as a female.”
Willow’s blood froze as she noticed several members of the congregation turn and look at her – some with smiles, but more with frowns. Sam Fredricks – the man who had grabbed her arm weeks ago when she first presented as female to church – was one of the frowners.
“Let’s split, babe,” Bernard whispered as he grasped her hand.
“Willow – go. We’ll stay here and handle any flack the haters give us,” her Poppa breathed into her ear.
She shook her head emphatically. “No! I want to hear where he goes with this.”
“Ahem. I need all eyes on me, please,” Father Wilson boomed with a deep bass voice. Everyone turned back to the front, except one. “You too, Sam. Please,” urged the minister. Mr. Fredricks promptly turned back to face the front, face now pink with embarrassment.
The minister resumed his sermon. “I have been approached by some members of this body who demand that I expel this person from the church; they have threatened to leave and to take their substantial church monetary support with them if I fail to meet their demands. So you can see I have a dilemma here.”
The Father took off his glasses and rubbed his eyes; he then replaced them and peered at the congregation. “I have devoted more study and prayer to this topic, and this crisis, than any other situation in the last 10 years. I believe I have heard from the Lord in my meditation and scripture reading. So please listen closely, now.
“Is being transgender a sin? What about being gay, bi or lesbian? Here’s the answer …
“It shouldn’t matter.”
A number of jaws in the audience dropped open.
“It shouldn’t matter to you because scripture tells us that it is the Holy Spirit’s job alone to bring about conviction and repentance in a person’s heart. It is not your job!
“It shouldn’t matter to you because it is God the Father’s job alone to judge. Would you suggest that you’re better suited for that task than He? No! It’s not your job!
“It shouldn’t matter to you because every one of us here today is a sinner. I doubt anyone can live a full day without committing a sin – at least a white lie, or a mild curse, or a fleeting impure thought. An extra dinner roll you really didn’t need. Lying, cursing, lust and gluttony are sins that will absolutely send you to hell just as sure as murder or sexual sin. All of them require God’s forgiveness. All of them!
“I hear some of you thinking ‘yes, but I don’t flaunt my sin in public’. When you walk in to church severely overweight for the past decade – is that flaunting it? When you actually make eye contact with the girl you’ve been ogling, and lick your lips?
“Some are also thinking ‘Sexual sin is especially bad; it’s called an abomination in the Bible.’ Well, holding resentment in your heart towards anyone – while you seek forgiveness from God for your own misdeeds – that’s an abomination too! And I can guarantee we’ve all done that at some time.
“I’m telling you that we ALL fall short of the glory and righteousness of God. We ALL need His love and forgiveness on a daily basis.”
“So what is our job towards other sinners then? It is this: to love them. And not from a distance. We are to embrace them, encourage them, show kindness, Love them in spite of sin, in spite of any disagreement you have with them. After all, they will have to overlook your sins if they are to love you back!
“Jesus Christ is more than our savior; He’s our example for living. How did he deal with sinners, and outcasts from society? Did he expel them from his midst? Did he demand they repent before he lowered himself to interact with them?”
The minister paused for effect.
“NO HE DID NOT. Instead, he talked with them; walked with them; ate and drank with them, and visited them in their houses and in the bad areas of town. He fed them and healed them. And he loved them as they were. To Jesus, the gospel – the good news he carried – was for them especially. His hours spent with the so-called dregs of society caused a scandal among the religious folks of that time.
“So am I living like Jesus did? I asked myself that question this week. The answer I came to was an emphatic NO. I have allowed myself to get so caught up in the workings of the church and squabbles between staff and members, that I’ve neglected the most important things: caring for the unloved, reaching out to the outcasts, feeding the hungry, healing the sick hearts. When I saw what I had become, I was shocked to my toes - and then, filled with shame.
I have been a hyper-religious Pharisee. Jesus called Pharisees snakes, vipers, arrogant, blind, self-indulgent hypocrites; white-washed tombs, pretty and clean on the outside and full of death inside. These are the only people in the Bible that Jesus was verbally mean to. He warned that they were more in danger of hellfire than the outcasts he met with! I realized this week that I had become one of them. It caused me to immediately fall on my face and weep.
"I then prayed to the Lord with more emotion and desperation than I have in two decades. I begged his forgiveness, and asked him to change my heart inside out. And now, my flock, I ask you the same thing. I have been wrong. I have worried more about offending our donors than ministering God's love. I beg you all, from the bottom of my heart - please forgive me."
The priest then turned away as he brought a handkerchief to his eyes and blotted them. He gently blew his nose. Finally, sniffing, he turned to the podium again.
"When this church started we wanted everyone to come to worship, no matter their beliefs or spiritual state. All would get Jesus’ love with no exclusion. Yet what has happened is that I see many of us wanting to exclude the “LGBT” people from church. It’s almost as if we feel that they are evil, and more than that: contagious. There is almost an attitude that this place – this house of worship – should be a comfortable social gathering, a country club where we can all huddle together with others who feel the way we do. I see this attitude in more and more of us each year. God forgive me, I allowed it to happen.
"So, here’s the big announcement: I’m disbanding the chummy country club. It’s time for this church to be a hospital. I need all of you to cancel your galas and tee times; instead, become nurses to help the Great Physician with his work.
“We will welcome all patients – people abused, rejected, addicted, homeless. People we don’t agree with. They may be unpleasant to some of us. Others may not smell too good. But we will be a refuge, a place of healing, to all. And as we minister to them, we will find our hearts and lives transformed for the better. Many of us who think we’re spiritually healthy may find that we have a serious heart condition called Judgement-itis. Don’t worry; Dr. Jesus can heal that too, and you’re in the right place – his hospital.
“Please hear what I’m about to say now with an open heart and open mind. I … I am not prepared to say that homosexuality and transsexuality are not sins. For now we will still not actively promote the practice of these conditions. But we will no longer reject nor condemn LGBT people. We will embrace them and love them. Talk to ... listen to … and care for them. They will be accepted to attend all church functions if they desire.
“If any here feel that they cannot continue as members here after hearing what I’ve said, well … I cannot physically stop you from leaving. You will be missed; more than that, you will miss out – on things Jesus wants to do in your heart, with your life.
“And to our trans member, I say: you are welcome here. Please feel free to continue to attend Chula Vista, and teach us how to show love to you and others like you. I humbly ask your forgiveness for treating you with disdain on our first few visits.”
“I forgive you, Father,” came a voice from the back of the sanctuary.
Most of the congregation looked to the back row to see what appeared to be a short teen female tastefully dressed in a blue dress with lace adornments. She was standing, beaming a wide grin, and – true to her nickname – weeping.
“Thank you, my child,” replied Father Wilson, with a hint of a smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. “Flock; over the next four Sundays, I will outline how we shall put our spiritual hospital into actual practice. I request your patience and attendance as I do so. For now, let’s all rise for the closing recitations and prayer.”
The church did so. Gwen Eiken ran to the podium as soon as the last “amen” was said.
“Let us take you out to lunch, Father.”
“Thank you, Gwen, but I need to go home and lie down. I may not look it, but I’m so emotionally exhausted. Rest is what I need now. Maybe next Sunday?”
“Absolutely,” gushed Willow’s Momma; she gave him a quick hug and went back to her family.
The Eikens went out for lunch that Sunday anyway, to the Olive Garden. Bernard came along.
“So, I have mixed feelings,” Bern garbled as he chewed his linguini. “He said the church would accept you, but still says that being trans might be a sin. Are you really happy with that, babe?”
“Yeah … yeah, I am for now,” his girl said, nibbling on a piece of salad. “It’s such an improvement from his previous stance. The Rev’s mind is opening; I think his heart is changing. Hopefully much of the congregation will start to do so too. If God is using me – even in a small way – to help do that, then I don’t dare leave our church now.”
“Daughter, do you realize what you’ve done?” said Gwen. “With your love and courage, and your support of Toby/Amanda, you’ve changed the heart of your minister and the direction of our church! For the better! I’m just amazed with you.”
“As am I,” William agreed. “As am I. So – are we all still happy with Chula Vista as our church, then?”
“There’s nowhere else I’d rather worship at,” replied Willow.
Seven months later.
It was now June. Willow had finished her junior year of high school with exemplary grades, earning her the right to a summer junior internship with a stock brokerage. One of her first assignments was to help host an evening cocktail hour with some of the firm’s bigger clients. She walked around making sure the hors d’ oeuvres were circulating well; she was still way too underage to handle alcohol, even just transporting it to others. Dressed in a grey dress jacket with a business skirt, she walked the floor as the adults gabbed, ate, drank and laughed.
“DAMMIT!”
Willow whirled around to see where the oath came from. A tall man in a sports jacket stood holding his right arm away from his body; deep red liquid dripped from his coat sleeve.
“Oopsh. Sorr – ah, sorry;” said an inebriated fellow who stood to the right of the curser, holding a nearly empty glass of red wine. He wavered back and forth over his heels, obviously more than a few drinks over the line.
“Whoa there, sir,” Willow said to the drunk one, grabbing his lapel to stabilize him. “Jenny!” she quipped to one of her fellow interns, “Come help this gentleman to the lobby; I think he’ll need a cab ride home.” She then turned to the tall one. “I’m sorry that happened, sir. Shall I take your jacket and work on it before the stain sets?”
“Sure,” he mumbled. “You know how to deal with that, huh?”
“I’ve dealt with a grape juice stain before; it’s probably pretty similar. My Momma taught me,” she smiled, slipping his jacket off and running to the kitchen.
Minutes later she returned.
“Wow. It looks mostly gone – only a faint residue left,” he marveled.
“Club soda, and a little hydrogen peroxide. I’d still get it dry cleaned tomorrow if I were you. Tell them about the wine spill.”
“Thanks again, little lady. This was about to be my worst day of this month before you came along. My car gave out on the way over here, and then I get splashed with Merlot.”
“Your car?” Willow hoped that being a listening ear would improve this client’s mood and help the firm’s relationship with him.
“Yeah,” he sighed. “European import. The engine’s been dying on me lately, and no one can figure it out. That’s pretty embarrassing to admit, with my business and all.”
“How so?”
“I’m Sam Tarpley, of Tarpley Auto Repair centers. Currently have 32 shops scattered around New Mexico and Texas. And my best three repairmen can’t figure this out. I need a car whisperer, some kind of automotive savant.”
“Um … Sir, my fiancé is a car whisperer – that’s what they call him at the repair shop he works at. I’d love to ask him to take a crack at your ride.”
“Hmph. Because you saved my favorite jacket, I’ll allow it. If he can fix it, I’ll buy you guys a gift certificate for Montague’s Steak House.”
“Or maybe a position with your company with potential for advancement?” Willow cooed, batting her eyes.
“Hmm. We’ll see. I don’t usually …” his voice trailed off as his vision became fixed towards the entrance into the room. “Oh. Oh my god. Who is that woman there? The one in the striking red dress?” Mr. Tarpley pointed to the foyer area.
“The one with her hair in an up-do? Ah … that’s my sister Angie. She’s my ride home when this ends. She’s early – her college professional society meeting must have ended sooner than usual.”
“Young lady – what’s your name?”
“Willow, sir. Willow Ramos.”
“Willow. Could you please introduce me to your gorgeous sister?”
One week later, Willow and Bern were on a double date with Angie and Sam Tarpley at Montague’s. Sam was singing praises to Bern.
“You figured out the problem, buddy. A vapor lock in the fuel line that all the sensors missed. My guys reworked the tubing, but I may need to trade in that roadster for something else eventually.”
“Yeah,” replied Bern. “The 2002 models had that flaw – and it’s worse in hot desert climates.”
“How did you know that?”
“Cars are an obsession for me. I like reading up on them, and I like the thrill of solving a problem that’s stumped everyone else.”
“You know, I wish I could clone you. Have one of your clones for each shop I own – because each shop has one or two ‘stumpers’ that are hard to figure out.”
Willow broke in. “Maybe you don’t have to clone him. Why not do video conference calls? Have your regional guys explain the cases to Bern, and have him work on troubleshooting them. If your centers get a reputation for curing the tough ones, think what that would do for your revenue!”
“I’d have to invent a new job position for him … Master Auto Technician. Yeah, that’s a good idea. Say, you two make a pretty good team.”
“Bern’s the one with the skill,” Willow demurred.
“And you’re the one with the plans and vision,” Bernard smiled back at her.
“So far I think you and I make a good couple too,” purred Angie as she kissed Sam on the cheek.
To be continued tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 19
by **Sigh**
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“Are you the friend who’s picking me up? I don’t know who you … wait. … *gasp!* … AMANDA?!”
**CONTENT WARNING: Sex; not salacious, but very descriptive**
**CONTENT WARNING: Spiritual content (a conversation with God)**
Five years later.
The non-stop 737 from Seattle had landed safely and was deplaning at the El Paso International Airport. Most of the exiting passengers looked to be experiencing a little jet lag, as the flight was a red-eye departure; now it was noon in the border city.
Willow had been seated near the back, so was one of the last ones off. The wait and her wobbly legs couldn’t dim her mood, though. No more follow-up visits. Hallelujah! Now I just have to find my ride.
Her usual routine was to get an Uber to drive her into town, to home or work; It was cheaper than parking at the overpriced airport lot. But Bernard had told her that an old friend would be getting her this time; he didn’t reveal the name, as he wanted it to be a surprise. So Willow was starting to feel a little uneasy, until she saw a young man with a cardboard sign:
WILLOW ANDUJAR
“That’s me!” she said, hopping over to the man. “Are you the friend who’s picking me up? I don’t know who you … wait. … *gasp!* … AMANDA?!”
“That’s me,” smiled the handsome male. “I now go by my original given name Toby; I have for a while now.”
“What – how – ?”
“I called Bernard and told him I’d be in town and wanted to meet with you. He suggested I surprise you this way.”
Willow approached him and gave him a bear hug. “I can’t believe it! You’re actually a real, solid, living, breathing person!”
Toby tilted his head. “You were thinking I was no longer real or living?”
Now her eyes narrowed and her lips grew thin with a scolding smirk. “I wasn’t sure; you’ve been ghosting me for the last 3 years!”
Willow and Toby now sat at a table just outside the Starbucks nearest the airport. Both sipped their coffee drinks in silence. Willow dabbed tears away with a napkin.
Toby grimaced as he saw her pain. “You hate me. I don’t blame you.”
“No. I don’t hate you. I love you like a brother, stupid! It just hurts. I thought that I’d dealt with it, but seeing you suddenly brought all this emotion to the surface.”
“Are you mad at me?”
Willow sniffed, then smiled. “No. I can’t afford the luxury of anger. It would open up a Pandora’s box of bad stuff for me. So let me tell you now in person what I told you in my heart years ago: I forgive you. Tell me, though; why did you stop communicating?”
The boy hung his head. “I’m sorry I cut you off, Willow. I thought you’d be disappointed in me; call me a quitter. Your opinion of me mattered to me so much, and my fear of rejection was so huge, that I just withdrew from you. Then as time went on, the lack of communication was what I worried about – worried that you’d be angry with me about even that. I hear that you forgive me, but I don’t deserve it. I wouldn’t blame you if you never spoke to me again.”
“Neither of us deserve mercy for anything, in the grand scheme of things. But I needed to give it to you, for my sake even more than yours. And you need to forgive yourself,” she said as she arose, walked to Toby and hugged him briefly. “If you’re open to it, let’s resume friendly communication, OK?”
“You’re pretty awesome, Willow. OK, let’s restart this.”
“GREAT!” she exulted as she settled back in her seat. “Now: what’s this about you fearing I’d call you, what was it …OH. A quitter? And why are you living as Toby and not as Amanda?”
“Well, you know that after Mom separated from Dad she moved to San Antonio taking me and my sister with her –“
“Yeah, I knew that; let me catch you up on all I remember. Your folks divorced. You started your real life test, taking testosterone blockers and presenting as female full time at your new school. We were texting daily at first, then 1 – 2 times a week. Then, nothing. I even contacted your mom to make sure you were safe, and she said you needed a break from all the texts; I backed off to give you space, and that’s the last I heard from you. Now you’re Toby again; so what the heck happened?”
“Being in a new city away from my angry father did wonders for me,” Toby replied. “I did start on the blockers and lived as a girl; but after a year I started feeling like I needed to try being male again. I think the antidepressants they started me on really helped with my mood and overall happiness. So I detransitioned, and I found I was content – even happy - as a guy. I’ve been living as a boy for the last two and a half years – I’m active in football, I’ve got a girlfriend and I’m really enjoying my senior year of high school.”
Willow raised an eyebrow. “You like being Toby? You promise me than no one’s forcing you to be male against your will?”
“Yeah, absolutely. I’m one of those kids for who this really was a phase – probably aggravated by the emotional turmoil at home and a verbally abusive Dad.”
“Then I’m happy for you, Mr. Toby. I don’t think you’re a quitter. But you’ve got to promise that you’ll never ghost me again!”
“I promise, cross my heart – and again, I’m sorry.”
“So: different subject. Why are you in El Paso … surely not just to meet me today?”
“I’m here to spend the weekend with my Dad. It’ll be the first time I’ve been with him for more than a day since he and Mom divorced. He’s gone through some therapy, and says he’s dealt with his anger and emotions. He really misses me and my sister. She’s still a little too hurt by his words he spewed before Mom and us left him for good, so she doesn’t want to be here. But I’m up for trying to reestablish a semblance of a relationship.”
“Toby,” Willow worried, “are you going to be safe? I remember how furious he could get.”
“I think he’s a changed man. And the few times he’s come to San Antone to spend time with me – things have been fine.”
“Just in case they don’t – put my phone number in your speed dial. If you need to bail, Bernard or I will come and get you.”
“Okay,” smiled Toby. “If the visit goes even half as well as ours just did, there will be no problem. I’m supposed to meet him in an hour. I probably need to go drop you off at your place so I won’t be late.”
“Ah! Home sweet home. Or, apartment sweet apartment.”
Willow pulled her carry-on bag into her domicile and laid it on the chair in the bedroom. She checked in the mirror to see if anything needed freshening, then got on her computer. She started a videochat. A man in his mid-30’s appeared onscreen, sitting at a desk in a suit and tie.
“Hi, Willow.”
“Hello, Steve. I’m back in E.P.”
“So how was Seattle? And – if you don’t mind me asking – what did you go there for again?”
Willow smiled plaintively. Actually, I do mind – since you know it was a private thing, and yet you keep grilling me about it. “To deal with a personal family matter, just like the other times I’ve gone. Thankfully, that issue finally appears resolved, so I don’t anticipate any more routine trips there unless it’s for the business.”
“Business? We don’t do any business outside of Texas.”
“Steve – there are liquor franchises up there that have a different sales model from what we’re used to. I spent an afternoon examining a few of them. In the process, I met a supervisor and took her out for a drink; she didn’t mind telling in detail about the strategies they employ.”
“A supervisor spilling company secrets! You must have gotten her really drunk.“
“Come on Steve – you know I’m a strict tee-totaler*,” Willow chided. “We went for coffee drinks. The talk at first was just about life stuff, what we had in common. We kind of connected personally – talking as if we’d been friends for life. Towards the end, she opened up about those sales models; she didn’t feel like it was any problem since – being half a continent away – our operation is not really competition for her. But since, my mind’s been buzzing with ideas about how we can grow our stores!”
“You’re amazing, Willow. The best networker/connection maker I’ve ever seen. Making new business contacts by pretending to care –“
A flash of ire rose in Willow’s spirit, but she recognized it and snuffed it out with the mental ice water of humility. “Hey! I wasn’t pretending. We became true friends, and the info she shared was given freely – and with the understanding that I would use it confidentially. So this is for our use only, got it?”
“Got it, my star employee. I’m in awe of your gift. You should let me take you out to dinner to celebrate. Just us two.”
Willow smiled sweetly and shook her head. “Steve, play along with me for a sec. Repeat each word I say, starting with; ME.”
The man in the suit chuckled, but looked a bit taken aback. “Okay. ME.”
“TOO.”
“Too.”
“MOVEMENT.”
“Movement”
“Now say all 3 words together.”
“Me Too Movement.”
Both employer and employee stared silently at each other through their screens for a long twelve seconds before Steve choked out a response.
“Okay. So you’re taking a rain check on that dinner, then,”
“We're never having a 'just us two' dinner, Steve. No 'just us two' anything.”
“Gotcha. See you at work on Monday?”
Willow nodded, as she turned her monitor off. Yes, I’ll be at work on Monday – in spite of having to see you. Thank you, Higher Power – whom I choose to call God - for giving me self-control just now.
* A person who abstains from drinking any alcohol
Bernard Andujar’s cell phone rang with a wind-chime noise. Willow was calling. He grabbed the device and put it to his ear.
“Hey there, my hot foxy babe! Are you home now?”
“Hello, my handsome husband. Yes I’m back. Say, you’re quite a sneak, setting up Toby and me like that!”
“Toby? You mean Amanda?”
“Toby now. Long story. What’s work looking like – when are you getting off?”
“Murphy’s law is in full effect today. I’m a greasy mess; I’ll be done here at 6:30 – if no more things go wrong with this Jag engine. Nuts – I wanted to take you out to dinner, but I might not be clean and ready until 8.”
“How about I order some delivery for us? Just come home, clean up and we’ll eat here. I’ll dress for comfort, and we can exchange back massages or watch the next ‘Jack Ryan’ episode. Then we can hit the sack; you sound tired and I’ve been up since the red-eye flight this morning. Sound good?”
Bernard paused for a few seconds, then replied. “Yep! Sounds good. See you then.” He walked back to the troublesome Jaguar he was working on, wondering about unasked questions and their answers. She didn’t mention her doc visit. Are things okay down there? Is she wanting to try ‘front-door’ sex, or has he not OK’d it yet? I should have asked – no, I shouldn’t. Don’t want her to feel I’m pressuring her.
Bern walked in to their apartment. “Hey, I’m home; give me 30 minutes to clean up, and –“
“Hi lover. The food’s already here and hot. Just take off your shirt and pants, and put these on,” as Willow handed him a white tee and some gym shorts. “Then just wash your hands and come sit down and eat. I ordered a 3 course Italian meal from Tony’s; you deserve the full treatment after such a hard day.”
“Okay – at least we’ll be matching,” he replied as he looked at his wife while he changed. She wore a similar shirt and shorts ensemble. “Tony’s, huh? Did you get me – “
“Spicy lasagna with a side of eggplant parm,” she smiled.
“OH boy! My fave!”
Not much talking occurred over the meal, as Bern was ravenous and rather inhaled his food. Willow gently ate her Italian house salad with chicken breast. As her hubby took a last bite of the dessert (a cannoli), he rubbed his tummy.
“That was soooo good,” he sighed. “Okay. Now I’m gonna hit the shower to get the rest of this sweat and dirt off of me.”
“It’s been a big, busy day for both of us,” his wife replied. “I’m going to go ahead and go to bed, if that’s okay with you.”
“Aww – no back massages?”
“Sure – we can do it in bed before we get to sleep.”
“Okay. See you in about 15 minutes.” Nuts. I was hoping for some sex tonight. But she’s been up for more than 17 hours now; she probably needs sleep badly. Oh well. He walked towards the bathroom and started shedding his clothes.
Willow hopped into their bedroom and quickly disrobed The sound of water starting to run meant that hubby was entering in the shower. She got naked, then stopped to look in the big wall mirror.
My face is still that nice oval shape that I’ve had since my second full year on hormones. Didn’t need FFS to shape my nose, and never developed an Adam’s apple; lucky, lucky. Wait – not lucky, blessed. Thank you, HP. Hmmm. I think I like my current hairstyle better than any other I’ve had – down to my shoulder blades in wavy brown ringlets. Ha – remember the blonde phase, Willow? Yuchh!
I’m satisfied with my A-cup boobs, especially since Bern loves them. I do wonder at times what it would be like to have bigger ones; women with D’s have such obvious power over men. That could help in business – wait. No, not my current workplace. Steve would be salivating over me all day. Okay, it’s settled – I love my breasts just like they are.
She ran her hands down her waist. That’s gotten nice and hourglass-y. Then she struck a pose, bouncing her generous hip out to the side. My gift from God, and Dr Estrada and his hormones. My J-Lo butt. Made to straddle my big stud hoss as I ride him to the finish line. Oh, how he loves to squeeze and caress it. Now that we can do a proper missionary position, I’ll bet he goes ballistic over it.
Her hands drifted down to her groin, and framed the newest change in her form. Hello there, Miss V. Are you ready for tonight? You should be; I’ve been pretty diligent with dilation, and last night in the hotel we finally did it. Took a long time and a lot of lube and rubbing; it wasn’t the hugest come, but we got there, didn’t we?
She stopped and bowed her head. God, this may not be the most spiritual subject, but there’s no one else who I can ask. Please let me come when I’m with Bern. I know I can masturbate to get off, but I want him to experience the pleasure of seeing me orgasm when he’s the only stimulation I have. I know that will fulfill him so much. What a gift that would be – for both of us. Thanks for listening – your kid, Willow. Amen.
Willow had newly acquired lingerie, a red tinted near-sheer set with lacy bra, panty and matching gauzy kimono wrap. She donned only the kimono – then sat down and cradled her head in her hands.
“Dammit. Calm down.”
She felt her heart speed up, and a slight tremor entered her hands and breathing.
What if I can’t get there? What if it hurts? What if he doesn’t like it? What if I wasted all of that money and travel and time for something that’s just going to be mediocre, or worse – horrible? What if I can’t stop worrying and am unable to get mentally involved in sex tonight? What if –
Willow.
She stopped and held her breath. My name? Where did that thought come from?
Calm down. Don’t worry.
Who is that? Is that me? Am I talking to myself? Who is that?
Who do you think it is.
Uh … God?!! Is … is that you??
You’re so full of questions, precious one.
Okay. I’m not hearing a voice in my ears – it’s in my head. But it sounds slightly different from the voice I talk to myself with. Am I … am I going schizophrenic??
Maybe. Or maybe you really do have a Higher Power who cares.
.
Okay, God. If this is really you why haven’t I heard you before?
You have – in other ways. A friend’s advice. A newspaper. An idea as you were thinking. Tonight, I had to be more … interventional. You need help.
I’m … I’m scared. About so many things!
Yes. I heard.
So – do you have the answers I need?
No; I have the questions. I’ll ask them, and you give me the answers.
But –
Do you trust me?
As best as I can in this emotional state I’m in.
That’ll do. Why did you get your SRS from that Doctor in Seattle?
Because of his reputation for slow careful work; it takes him twice as long as usual to do the procedure, the better part of a full day. He claimed to have the best success with his patients, as far as their achieving vaginal orgasm post-op.
Did you invest a lot into this?
Oh yeah – his prices were double the usual SRS fees, not to mention the multiple pre and post-op trips to the west coast. That’s why we still live in an apartment, even with 2 incomes.
Do you feel guilt over this?
Of course I do. Bern deserves to be living in a house, but because of me we still have to rent.
Did you seek this for selfish reasons?
What else could they be? I’m the one who’s put us through all of this trouble.
So you didn’t do it for Bern at all?
Yes … yes I did. I want him to experience –
Yes, I heard your thoughts earlier. Your concern for him is a good thing. You function best when you put others ahead of yourself.
My boss Steve keeps carping on “looking out for #1”; he says you’ve got to put yourself first.
There are times for self care – but taking care of you is mainly my job. Your job is to be my hands to take care of others.
So, in this situation, what does that mean?
Put Bernard first in your priority and heart. Trust me to take care of you. Don’t worry about it.
This can’t be that simple. There must be something else I’m supposed to do.
Don’t worry about it.
Got that – but what specifically should I do?
Don’t worry.
Maybe I’m not being clear. WHAT DO I DO TO MAKE THIS SEX SUCCESSFUL? I NEED YOU TO SPELL IT OUT SLOWLY AND CLEARLY, please.
Oh. Okay. Here it comes. Ready?
Ready!
D-O-N-‘T W-O-R-R-Y. That is what to do, your main job here.
Oh. OH!
Worry inhibits your participation and your pleasure. Just trust your body, and me.
Okay. I’ll try my best!
Focus on pleasing Bern. I’ll help him to fulfill you. We work well together. He listens and talks with me, just like you. It’s time to get dressed, by the way. And prep below.
Below? OH – THE LUBE! Got it! Hey, HP – thanks!
She heard the shower turn off, and so resumed her dressing and prep with increased speed.
Bern toweled his short brown coiffure, then worked the cloth down his cut figure – past his well defined biceps, his tight pecs, six pack abs, and firm gluts and thighs. He hung the towel up to dry and reached for his comb; then noticed that his razor, shave gel and cologne had been strategically placed on the counter. So she wants me smooth and smelling nice. Maybe we’re gonna get busy tonight after all?
Bern eventually opened the door into the bedroom proper. Candles were lit, and light saxophone jazz played through the Omni. Willow lay in their bed, covered to her neck by the comforter. “I forgot to dilate today, baby. Can you help me with that?”
He nodded. “Okay. Where are the dilators and the lube?”
“I’ve already lubed up. And I’m so done with those hard plastic dildos. I figured we could use your built-in dilator.”
Bern’s eyes got wide. “So the doc cleared us for …?”
She pulled the comforter off, revealing her form through the gauzy kimono wrap. Her sexy hip curve was accentuated by her right-side-lying position. Her left hand dangled a plastic storefront sign that she’d gotten at the office supply store earlier; it said
“Open for business, sir,” she cooed.
Willow began to take off her kimono, but Bern put a hand gently on her shoulder. “No, babe. Please, allow me. You deserve – what did you call it? -the full treatment.”
He sat on the side of the bed and guided her to sit in his lap, facing him with her legs wrapped around his firm midsection. She breathed in the scent of his warm, fresh skin tinged slightly with the cologne. A sharp inhalation entered her mouth as he suddenly pulled her tight, his huge potent hands grabbing and gliding up and down her back. She felt his mouth kiss her cheek, his teeth nibble playfully at her earlobe.
Pulling her head back, she placed both her palms on the side of his smooth shaven cheeks. She was starving for his kiss, and pulled his mouth to hers; his moist tongue watered her parched teeth with hydrating passion.
His fingers began to slowly peel the gauzy kimono off her shoulders; kisses and occasional teethy nips attacked the newly exposed areas. His onslaught slowed as his mouth eventually descended to her warm breasts, with nipples already erect and hard. His mouth encased first the right and then the left; Willow felt that if she could give milk, she would more than fill his throat. The sensations from those points now were overwhelming, and her body began to tremble; a new feeling arose in her groin, one she’d never quite felt as a male. It was … heat. It was intense. A furnace, a pyre between her thighs, a glowing aching need. It required feeding.
She grasped Bernard’s thick erection. The flame below flared to an inferno. “Please,” she gasped. “don’t make me wait any longer!”
In one fluid motion she was on her back with her lover laid on top of her. His manhood touched the inlet of her moist slit. “Here I go, baby.”
She broke out in a fresh sweat as she felt this new, wonderful sensation slowly invade her being. It was ecstasy. The tremor now shook her every breath. All of her worries about her new body began to break up and dissipate as she luxuriated in every slow, full, deep thrust inside her.
“Am I hurting you, babe?”
“No. It’s … ooooh … it’s wonderful. Oh. Oh! Baby – keep it up – whatever you do don’t stop!”
He continued thrusting in a slow, elliptical motion, churning as if he was making butter. Over, and over, and over. Willow made sure she expressed her pleasure verbally; oohs, ahs, moans and groans to let Bern know just how great he was performing.
The shivering intensified to where her whole body was an earthquake. She began to feel a tingling – a bit like numbness, but more like a rush of adrenaline injecting into her belly and rapidly spreading outward. Her fingernails dug into her lover’s back, her forehead slammed into his chest.
“Ooooohhh … OOHHH GOOOHHHHDDD! G-GOOHHDD! AAAAaaah! *gasp-gasp* HAAAaaah! … Ohhhh … oh God yessss…”
Bern was smiling wide as he paused his movements. “Babe! It works?!”
“It … it DOES! Oh my God, Bern – you made me come!” Willow suddenly burst into sobs.
“Oh no,” said her husband with concern. “Please tell me I didn’t hurt you, right”
“No, no! *sniff* It was great! Happy – *sob* – happy tears, lover. All the money, all the time and wait and hassle – it was soooo worth it!”
Bernard cradled her head to his shoulder as she continued to weep. Eventually she calmed, and kissed his neck. “How does it feel, knowing you just sent your wife and her new little pussy to the moon and back?”
“I’m on top of the world, babe. Nothing can top this feeling.”
She felt a new erection reforming against her leg. “Nothing can, huh? Not even another go?”
“Babe – are you up for it? I don’t want to hurt it – the new pussy, I mean.”
“Bern – I promise I’ll stop if I don’t feel right. But I’m ready for round 2. Just one isn’t enough; there’s still plenty of lubrication there.”
“Okay, then. Let’s have you roll over and we’ll try it this way. Here goes. Does that feel okay?”
“Does it ever,” she moaned. “Bern – don’t stop. Keep it going, a little faster. And maybe even harder.”
Much later, both husband and wife lay together naked on the bed, glistening wet, physically spent.
“Open for business,” Bern sighed. “You did a bang-up job on your first business day.”
“YOU did the banging, sir – quite well, I might add. Oh God, Bern. That was so much better than the back door sex we’ve been having. I think I want most deliveries via the front from now on.”
“Are you sore?”
“Ask me tomorrow. But I’ll still need to dilate daily for a while. And I hate hard plastic. Now, penis? That’s where it’s at! Rocks my world. Are you up for dilating me daily?”
“Ha! Is my El Camino burnt orange? YES!”
To be concluded tomorrow.
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Weeping Willow
Part 20 (conclusion)
by **Sigh**
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"I pulled down these scrapbooks – I always have wanted to. I’m learning about you and our family’s history. They’re pretty amazing – especially this one,” she said as she lifted a tome with a deep green cover.
“That’s your aunt’s book,” sighed Angie. “I wish you had gotten me to go through it with you so I could explain it all. How far have you gotten?”
“Far enough to know that Aunt Willow – she used to be a boy!!"
Yes indeed, this is the last part of the Weeping Willow saga. I appreciate everyone's patience and forbearance with me. I know that I included various elements that were controversial and not everyone's cup of tea (like God and religion). The Sex chapter (part 19) was nerve wracking for me because I worried it would be clumsy, stilted, tasteless or boring. (I haven't written many sex scenes, especially one that explicit). Your encouragement and input was precious and life-giving. I love you guys; thank you.
Angela Ramos Tarpley was looking for her eldest daughter. The child was supposed to be in her room working on an idea for the science fair next week, but the bedroom was empty. Her little brother and sister were off over at friend’s houses. The mother had already scoured the rest of the upstairs.
“Gwendy? Where are you??”
She heard a muffled reply from downstairs. “In the big chair room, Mom!”
Angie descended the staircase. The “big chair room” meant the den; it was full of comfy overstuffed furniture. “What are you doing, honey? Did you finish the research for your diorama?”
“Yeah, I think so,” replied an eleven-year-old girl with brown-blonde hair, dressed in jeans and a pink shirt that had FLOWER POWER outlined in white daisies. She sat on the floor surrounded by big decorated books. “I want to run my top 3 ideas by you in a minute. But I pulled down these scrapbooks – I always have wanted to. I’m learning about you and our family’s history. They’re pretty amazing – especially this one,” she said as she lifted a tome with a deep green cover.
“That’s your aunt’s book,” sighed Angie. “I wish you had gotten me to go through it with you so I could explain it all. How far have you gotten?”
“Far enough to know that Aunt Willow – she used to be a boy!! Wow – no way! She looks all girl to me – and she’s so short!”
I should have told the kids well before now, but I kept procrastinating, she mused. Well, here goes. “Okay. Let’s sit down and I’ll tell you the story of an angry violent boy named Bill, the changes he went through and why. We’ll do it by going through this memory book. I’ll tell your little brother and sister when they get home. And listen close, Miss Gwendolyn Willow Tarpley: you will NOT take this and spread gossip or rumors about your aunt. Do you understand?”
“Yes ma’am,” shouted Gwendy with a sharp salute, just like her Daddy had taught her.
They thumbed through the scrapbook, starting at the beginning.
“Oooh, Mom! Aunt Willow – I mean, I guess she’s called Bill in this photo – he looks so mean, almost evil!”
“Not evil, hon; but close. And mean, angry? Definitely. Bill was no fun to live with. He would explode with rage if he didn’t get his way. He got into drugs, too.”
“And then the next page, she’s Willow – and I see her laughing! She looks relaxed, and happier. Oops, except this photo – she’s crying. Why is she crying?”
Angie stroked her daughter’s hair. “Crying was a good thing for her. As Bill, she couldn’t shed even one tear. Becoming a woman allowed her to feel and then deal with emotions. She wept so much that I nicknamed her ‘Weeping Willow’.”
“Momma!” the daughter gasped. “You made fun of her?!”
“No, no. Sometimes nicknames are out of affection. Like when we call you Gwendy-boo-boo.”
“I don’t like that; it sounds like a baby name.”
“You loved it when you were five.” Angie changed her voice to mimic Patrick the Sea Star. “You’ll always be my lil’ Gwendy-boo-boo.”
“Sooo … back to this book,” Gwendy-boo-boo said (purposely changing the subject), “Bill changed to Willow and suddenly was happy and off drugs?’
“Oh no – it wasn’t instantaneous. But it was quicker than anyone could suspect. In less than a year, she was fully into girl mode, clean and sober. No one who didn’t know her from before suspected anything about her boy past.
“I wasn’t trying to hide her secret from you. She doesn’t keep it a secret; if anyone asks her, she is truthful with it. But she’s been Willow for the better part of thirteen years, and we feel that this is who she really is, who she was always meant to be. We don’t bring up Angry Bill because – well – he no longer exists.”
Gwendy turned the page. “Hey. There’s an article from the paper in here – the picture, that’s Father Wilson from church! What’s that got to do with my aunt?”
“The Father writes an occasional article for the religion section of the El Paso Times. This one – well, why don’t we read it out loud together?”
Religious or Spiritual? By Father Joseph Wilson.
I have been a deeply religious man for all of my adult life. Teaching and spreading my religion has been my calling, my purpose for existing. It was what God wanted me to do.
Or so I thought.
See, I have learned something. It is possible to be religious without being spiritual. Spirituality implies a humility, a change in heart, and a living, active relationship with God. With other people too, since we are all made in the image of God.
Without spirituality, religion degenerates into rules, judgemental attitudes, rejection of others due to their “defects” while brushing our own sins under the rug.
I did not know it, but somewhere along the line I had become an aspiritual, hyper-religious hypocrite. I am quite sure that had I continued, I would have missed heaven. But thank God, the Lord intervened with a jolt that woke me up to the reality of my situation. He used another human being to do this.
You are wondering what person it was. A regional overseer? One of the church’s elder statesmen? A saintly evangelist? No. Not even close.
The Lord sent me a teenage girl. One with a past of violence and drug use, although she’d been clean and sober for weeks before she started attending. Oh and one more thing: she was transgendered. A male-to-female transgender teen, who wore fancy Sunday dresses to services.
I tried to straighten her out. I warned her that though I would not reject her attendance, I could not say the same for our members. She was a pain in the neck, this one. She continued to attend, without protest or threats or civil disobedience or rude behavior. A smile and cheerful attitude were always in her ensemble. Her outfits were sufficiently chaste – so much so that some of our other teen girl members started dressing more appropriately for church. Less cleavage and lower hemlines, if you catch my drift.
This trans-girl also became a lifeline for a young child in our congregation who was experiencing feelings of gender distress. Her friendship likely averted a possible suicidal attempt by him.
Soon I saw: the transgender teen was doing more of God’s work than I was. That was the jolt. I was flabbergasted. Jesus’ warnings to religious hypocrites now shook me to my core as I read the books of the Gospel.
So I fell on my face and repented, right there on the floor of my office in Chula Vista Episcopal. I asked God for forgiveness, a new heart, a new mission, and courage to carry it out.
Now our congregation has three food banks spread throughout the poorer sections of El Paso, and the fourth is scheduled to open next month – across the border, in Juarez, Mexico. Our homeless shelter has recently expanded to a capacity of 80, and we hope to add more space soon. Doctor Curtis is in the second year of his work at the free clinic we co-opened with him in the central south of the city. And our congregants love to volunteer for these endeavors; they feel like the Lord is finally using them for real good. And of course, He is.
So I thank God for my second chance. For transforming Chula Vista Episcopal. And for using a person (who many rejected as an outcast), a child, to humble me from a proud arrogant religious Pharisee into a living, breathing minister of true spirituality. She has given me permission to print her name.
Thank you, Willow.
“Wow,” Gwendy sniffed. “Aunt Willow did all that? Now I’M the one weeping!”
“Me too, Baby,” whispered Angela as she dabbed a tissue to her eyes. “Hey, do you remember the big birthday party we threw for her last year?”
“No, Mom – remember, I had to go with our city team to the regional soccer playoffs? I was so disappointed that I had to miss her celebration. We lost the stupid soccer game, too.”
“Have you ever seen the video of your Dad’s speech to Aunt Willow and Uncle Bernard? He gave it at that party. No? Well, let’s pull it down from the cloud and get it on the TV!”
On the television screen.
A tall, slightly pudgy man in a tux stood up on a stage in front of a microphone. Before him was a dance floor surrounded by tables where a crowd of well-dressed people sat. Behind him a band prepped for their gig.
“Hello, is this thing on? Sorry, folks. I knew it was on. It’s just tradition for speeches to start with those five words. I’m Sam Tarpley, owner of Tarpley Auto Repair Centers, your co-organizer and emcee for tonight’s festivities. I’d like to thank William Eiken and his orthodontic practice for co-sponsoring this event. Thank all of you here, too, for coming. And finally I’d like to thank the lush who spilled me with Merlot wine over twelve years ago.
“Because of the lush, I met Willow. Through Willow, I met her sister, who became my wife and mother of my children. I also met Willow’s then-fiance, now husband; Bernard is the Master Automotive Technician for my car repair empire. Just four years ago, I hired Willow away from her job at a liquor company to become our Director of Franchisee Operations – in that time she has directed our expansion to 124 shops spread over eleven states.”
“I’ve never been so happy and prosperous. And my sister-in-law has had a hand in almost all of it. Yet there is a glaring deficiency in her history: Willow has never had a party held in her honor!
“Now, most of that is her fault. She hates big productions about herself. She didn’t even want much of a wedding – at her wish, she and Bern were married by the Justice of the Peace. But seeing as it’s both her birthday and her wedding anniversary – they got hitched the day she turned 17 – we feel she’s long overdue for a high class blowout.
“So with that in mind, I welcome you to the formal ‘Birth-iversary’ of Willow, and Bernard! There is food, and music, and dancing, and nonalcoholic drinks – both Willow and Bernard are long term tee-totalers, so if you have to have some booze today, get it after you leave the party.
“You’ll be hearing more from me later; I now give the floor to my in-laws, William and Gwen Eiken!”
Little Gwendy turned to her mother. “Yay! I didn't know Grandma and Grandpa spoke there!”
“They look good, don’t they? Let’s be quiet – Mom didn’t speak into the microphone very loudly …”
“I’ll speak first, since I’m the cause of this party,” said Gwen Eiken. “I complained that I didn’t get to have a formal wedding with my middle child; I felt cheated! Yes, I know that this is supposed to be about Willow, not my own wants. But I must admit I’m enjoying this; it’s still not a wedding ceremony, but I feel it’s at least like a wedding reception. I can live with that.”
William then spoke. “Lots of people who have met Willow tell us how blessed we are to have had such a pleasant, professional, hard-working child to raise. Well, we are super blessed now – but we sure didn’t feel that way during her mid-teens! She made life H-E-double hockey sticks for us for a few years, and I’m pretty sure she felt the same way; home was almost like a war zone. I began to despair for her future. Then she had a turnaround, brought about by a caring doctor and good friends, substance abuse recovery, and – I believe – God. She ought to write a book about it. Willow, we are so proud of who you are, who you‘ve become, and what you’ve had to go through to get to this station in life.”
“We’re so, so proud of you," Gwen added. "You make us so happy! And we continue to pray and wish the best in life for you.”
Sam Tarpley took the mike again after the Eikens stepped down. “The birthday part of this celebration is all for Willow, but the anniversary part involves her husband, also. Bernard Andujar is one of the best human beings I’ve had the honor of knowing. When it comes to cars, he is a genius – a Mozart of the motor. He loves all aspects of car care, but he shines brightest when given a tough problem to solve, one that multiple other mechanics have failed at. With him as the chief “car whisperer” – that’s my fave name for him – my shops have developed a reputation for excellence, the place you go to when things absolutely have to be done right.
“He’s developed many others under him, and our model now is for each shop to have a head mechanic trained by Bern; then twice a week they hold videochats and run any “stumpers” by him. He and I also host a radio call-in show about car repair where people tell him their engine troubles and he diagnoses them over the phone. Last I checked, he has an over 97% accuracy rate (per the feedback we get). The show is called – what else? – The Car Whisperer. It’s on from 9 – 10 AM on Saturdays, and we just got a contract to be aired regionally. So without further ado, everyone – here’s Bernard Andujar!”
A sturdy man with a mop of hair and stubbled face took to the stage. “Hey, thanks. Thanks everyone, for coming. Willow and I really appreciate it. Umm …” he started to appear uncomfortable. Sam took a step towards him and whispered in his ear; Bern’s face lit up with relief. “Oh yeah – thanks to my Mom and Dad; to the Eikens, and Sam, and Angie. Thanks to Mal for protecting Willow at school. And thank you to my hot, wonderful wife – Willow. You’re amazing, babe. … “ – he paused again. “Ah, sorry … public speaking really isn’t my bag, unless I’m talking about cars.”
“Okay, let’s talk cars then,” interjected Sam. “What brand of catalytic converters are used in the 1950’s El Camino models?”
“Dude, none of those models had catalytic converters. If you’re going to challenge me, at least try.”
“And there we have it, the real Bernard Andujar everyone!” grinned Sam. “You know it’s him when he says ‘dude’ like an ‘80’s California surfer! You may sit down, sir, because we have one more guest of honor – your wife.
“Willow Andujar is a force of nature. It’s rare to see someone so driven and talented, yet humble. This unique combination of gifts enables her to do things other business managers – heck, even other people of any type – can only wish for.
“How did we grow the radio show and franchises so rapidly? Again – Willow. She acts as Bern’s manager, and has the vision to guide our growth. She takes other people’s dreams and makes them reality; that’s her gift. No one can network and build business relationships like she can.
“Yet I feel her most impressive quality is a personal one: she knows herself. Her strengths, her weaknesses, and especially her limits. If she even starts to feel anger, she’ll deal with it – even up to the point of dropping what she’s doing and stepping away for a while. She works extremely hard, but when she needs to stop, she’ll do so. I’ve learned to respect her limits and not push her past them; in return, I get a partner and friend who is worth her weight in diamonds. Willow – will you come up here and say a few words?”
“Ooooh,” gasped Gwendy. “Aunt Willow kills it in that dress!”
“Yes, she’s a knockout. That’s called an off-the-shoulder red sweetheart gown; that slit that goes up to her hip really shows off her leg,” her mother replied.
“Mom – is she crying?? Why?”
“Hello and … th-thank you all,” said the short woman with flowing brown locks at the microphone. She put her hand up to dab at her eyes. “Knew this’d happen,” she faltered. She took another long moment to wipe her tears.
“Now all you guys know … why I don’t like to be the focus of big events. I can’t turn off the waterworks! My sister Angie dubbed me Weeping Willow years ago, and I sure live up to that name – especially with things like this,” she said motioning to all of the ballroom. She turned to the side, wiping her eyes again as she softly cried. Eventually she regained some composure.
“Seeing everyone here just reminds me of where I came from, and how far I’ve come. This is supposed to be the part of the speech where I tell everyone never to give up, to chase your dreams, grab your destiny by force and achieve your victory. Like it was all up to you and you alone, right?
“But the truth is – although my effort and hard work was essential to my future – none of it would have ever happened without the help, grace, perseverance and gifts of many, many good family and friends. Momma – you bore the biggest brunt of my rebelliousness, as you were the one who had to stay with me during the day for those two years as I homeschooled. Anyone else would have given up on me; but you hung around and loved me in spite of me giving you hate.
“Poppa – I will never forget the day your love broke through my crusty heart and started me weeping for the first time in years. *SNIFF* I still do, every time I think of it! Angie – you are a great sister and friend; you decided to stay so even after I put your life in danger that night where we met Ric – er, you-know-who. Mal, thank you for protecting me at school; and thanks for the forgiveness after the cookie prank.”
“I heard about what she did to Uncle Mal,” laughed Gwendy. “Still, that was mean!”
“Oh, he deserved it honey,” chuckled Angie as she paused the video. “And he got his revenge a year later, sending her a plate of brownies that were labeled as being from me. Mal made them, though.”
“Oh no! Were they full of lax … er …”
“Laxatives? No. They were real homemade brownies, made with flour and bittersweet chocolate. Nothing bad added. No sugar or other sweeteners added either. The yuckiest, most bitter things you ever tasted.” She pressed PLAY again.
“Bernard … where do I begin? Your love and friendship saved my life, literally. You’re patient, uplifting, and loving; you hold me accountable when I need it, and stay silent and strong when I need that. When I need you to talk, you have just the right word. I am so lucky, so blessed to be your girl, your friend, your wife.
“Sam – our meeting was a divine appointment. Both our lives got better from that point on! Thank you for being so good to my hubby and my sister, too. Julia; you are a rock for me, one I’ve leaned on many times.
“Dr. Estrada … I don’t know if you can hear me from heaven, but I miss you. You were awesome, and so patient and forgiving. We lost you too early. I know I’m supposed to focus on love … but I really hate cancer.
“Many more have helped me in big and small ways – for each and every one of you, I won’t forget your kindness.
“Now to all of those I just spoke of: from the very bottom of my heart, thank you all so so much!” She sputtered the last words quickly out before bursting into more tears and being helped off the stage.
“That was so cool to see, Mom. When Aunt Willow cries it makes me cry.”
“I don’t tear up quite as often as she, but I did today watching this with you.”
“Mom, I only have one question. Nobody there talked about Auntie being a boy when she was younger. Did everyone there already know? Or are we keeping that a secret?”
“Honey – what do you see your Aunt as, a boy or a girl?”
“A girl, all the way! Or really, I guess she’s a woman – she’s too old to be a girl.”
“Hush your mouth, daughter! I’m a woman, but a girl also, and I plan on being girly right up until I die at age 101. But back to Willow. Just like you, all of her family and friends see her as a woman. Not a ‘special’ or ‘handicapped’ or ‘freakish’ or even ‘trans’ woman – but as a woman. Who she was born as is really the furthest thing from our minds. So we don’t feel it’s necessary to bring up the ‘trans’ subject when we talk about her.
“Yet, we don’t hide it either. So if someone else brings it up or asks about it, we just acknowledge it and move on. We don’t dwell on it, just like we don’t dwell on her being Episcopalian, or half-latino, or brown-eyed. It’s a fact that has very little to do with her day-to-day life. That’s how she wants it, and that’s how we treat it. Does that make sense?”
“Yup!”
“And that’s how I expect you to treat that subject, both with her and with others, okay?”
“Yes ma’am!” said the young girl with a nod and another salute.
The doorbell rang.
“I got it!” yelled Gwendy, running to the front. She looked through the nearby window to see who it was, then grabbed the doorknob and flung it open.
“Aunt Willow! You won’t believe this – me and Mom spent all afternoon talking about you! Come in! To what do we owe the pleasure of your visit today? What’s in the bag? Are you going to stay for supper or - ”
“Time out, little niece!” Willow laughed and turned to Angie. “I know the perfect career for her – one of those salespeople on the cable shopping network! Those guys have to talk all of the time!” Then she squatted slightly, bringing her face to Gwendy’s level. “I’m here to fulfill a promise. I told you that I’d teach you how to make my famous chocolate chip cookies, and I brought all the ingredients to do it.”
“OMG! Right now?”
“Yes. Your mom knew I’d be coming. Go get us some aprons and I’ll meet you in the kitchen!”
“Wheee!” screamed the girl as she sped off.
Angie and Willow watched her run.
“She knows that you’re trans. She got into the scrapbooks, so I told her. I’ll be telling my other 2 when they get home from their friends.”
Willow raised an eyebrow. “And?”
“Didn’t faze her one bit. She’s a strong, loving girl. Just like you and I.”
“Thank you God. I love you, Angie. And I love Gwendy … so, so much.” *SNIFF*
Angie produced a tissue and a smile. “Come here, Weeping Willow.”
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