King Of The Rim-Redux

This story has been expanded from its original posting. I decided to expand it when several authors said that I was getting better, and I wanted to show that they are correct. I do feel that I am improving, but i needed others to confirm it so that I would not get a swelled head about it. There's nothing worse to me than somebody who believes they are perfect.

It really began with my Gaby stories, Maddy Bell told me that she could see an improvement in my stories. And then in the contest, several people here wanted more of Kelly and so I am expanding her story as well.

But I have a question, should the title be: Kelly's Journey-Redux, Kelly's Chronicles, Kelly's Story, Or do any of you have another idea?

By the way Laika, I'm ready for your witty reply. L.O.L.