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7,100 word story revision - Adventures of Sara: Evolving into Femininity

Submitted by Donna T on Sun, 2021/08/29 - 3:58pm

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Adventures of Sara: Evolving into Femininity story revision -

I felt bad about leaving Sara hanging at the end of the story so I added 7,100 words to tie up loose ends. Rather than adding a LONG edited post script I improved the story to help Sara. Sara had an adventure I hadn't counted on in addition to a new ending. I didn't know how else to add the 'adventure' & the new ending. Hopefully I didn't stomp on Big Closet protocols.

Thank you for your understanding. Regards, Dee - 8/29/2021

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