Help please

I have devised a fictitious UK company and would be grateful for help in making sure that the profile that I have written makes sense.

It has already featured briefly in one of my stories (There's Life in the Old Dog Yet) and is the main setting for a story that I am writing at the moment.

I have written a company profile - loosely based on my previous employer - and wonder if a reader would be kind enough to review it for me. The company operates throughout the UK but not overseas at the moment.

Thanks ever so much.

Susie