can someone please give me a little input please

the reception to my last two posts is disappointed. And while I did get a nice personal message that the second chapter of Revenge hooked them and they enjoyed it. That helped inspire me further on that
I hoped someone would tell me what they thought about the Star. I do know that may be of the most brutal stories

I did voice some concerns earlier that this may not be the place for my style of stories.
I know FM has these types. Like Cheryl Lynn and Thorn and a few others. But I am no where as skilled as they are. My stories are still filled with errors that I struggle to find
im getting better at finding them but im still very inexperienced.