EAFOB 208

I'm disappointed with my latest effort, there isn't much subtlety in action stories, at least, not in the way I write them.

I could say I was tired and full of cold, and it was late, all of which were true, but that sounds like an excuse. I've touched on another topic of current affairs, the trade in women from Eastern Europe for prostitution. It's abhorrent and if I'd discovered that about the two lowlifes, I'd have kicked them again, even harder. So the soap element is still working, sort of.

So my apologies for what I consider a sub standard episode, I'll try and do better tonight.

hugs,

Angharad.