Shooting the Rapids: Some Editing

I have to apologize for the original ending I posted To "Shooting The Rapids: An Adventure. It was rushed and the last 1k words or so had some fairly eggregious typos as well as not quite striking the tone I wanted. I've gone over it a bit though I won't make any claims to proper grammar or spelling... or even some aspects of the timelines of stellar evolution.

I will say I'm a bit happier with it after some minor editing but I'm never quite happy with what I write.... oh well. If you already read it with the original last bit, you might find a reread of the last page or two interesting.

It was great fun doing this even if it did turn out to be a great deal more difficult than I had anticipated.

I hope you enjoy and thanks for reading!

P.S. I'm not opposed to comments and kudos and such...

Abby