Honest opinions

Hi
I just wrote this so i can collect views on what people think of what I write. I'd just like some honest assessments of what I'm doing, as in where I'm messing up, doing well, how i can improve on it.I'd also like to know which stories people would like me to finish fastest and why you want it finished. i would really appreciate this so i can plan my time properly and improve my work.

Thanks

Sydney Moya