Who wants to be the first with a caveat

Who would like to be the first to read my new story? The only caveat is that you will have to edit the story. Sneaky huh? This is the one I wrote as a fluff piece and it grew to be a bit longer than I expected. It's a story about twin boys who witness a murder and the family goes into witness protection, WOW is that original or what? It really is a nice story, no sex but the coming of age of a special young woman. I normally have Holly edit my scribbles but I don't have the heart to ask at this time in her life. It's more important for her to rest than edit a story for me. Any takers? Arecee