Who Am I? - Views?

Hi all my patient and long suffering readers,

As some of you might be aware, I am in the middle of writing my series, Who Am I? it's a bit different from my normal sort of writing as I am trying to write the story from two different perspectives, a boy, physically who is really a girl and a girl physically who considers himself to be a boy inside.

I am alternating the characters in each chapter and linking them to the shared experiences of crossing over to a different reality that is very similar to the one they had originally but with a few changes.

I have noted that the number of kudos and reads have dropped somewhat and I was wondering if the reason is that concept is too confusing for it to be a viable story for some readers.

One kind reader said:

This two lined story in parallel universe gives me headache. I guess I am just too tensed up to see how it will end.

and I can understand the confusion as it's hard to write a story like this and try to keep all the threads and continuity going.

I would love to have your feedback about the format of the story and whether you believe that I am on the right track or alternatively, maybe I should just move on and try something new that doesn't give people a headache (including myself!).

Hugs
Sue