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The Gift: A Drabble

Submitted by Nicki Benson on Mon, 2013/02/18 - 7:54pm

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THE GIFT

By Touch the Light

This was my first attempt at a drabble. I won't clog up the front page with it.

It was a mistake.

I felt like crying. I couldn't.

She'd gone without a word.

I still held the gift I'd bought her. She hadn't even looked at it.

Maybe my breath stank of alcohol.

Maybe it was just me.

The street was an alien place. I didn't belong. I walked. I drank. I smoked. I got angry. I still couldn't cry.

I called her. Of course I did.

She didn't answer.

It was time.

I'd be taking a big step. I knew that.

But never again would I feel as alone as I did now.

I dialled the number.

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This is probably more representative of the style to which I aspire than the more verbose offerings I've posted on this site.

The best song ever written about Marilyn Monroe - 10cc's 'Somewhere In Hollywood' - doesn't mention her name. I want to write a tg story that doesn't refer to a sex change.

I'll leave it up to you to decide whether I have the ability to pull that off.

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