The content of Jem.

So I gotten a PM and while it was just the opinion of one person it did get me to thinking and wondering?

Is this getting stale?
The main thing is actually the play by play for the club scenes and to a lesser extent the things in Angel's day.

Is her doing stuff the way I've been writing it getting stale enough that I should push the plot more? I don't really want to force things in stories or gloss over stuff in a time line that much but...it has been niggling away at me a little before the PM.

People seem to want action, or stuff to happen more so should I trim these parts?

I'd love some feedback on this and maybe what you fans would like to see too. I don't just write these stories just for my pleasure for me they're interactive in a way too so...

Let me know:)
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