I'm thinking...

I'm thinking I'm gonna go ahead and post the next two chapters of "Echoes", though they haven't been proofed recently.

Also, to anyone reading the story:

There was a suggestion in the comments on the first two chapters concerning Miriam's name: I used some of the phrasing from that comment, and there is an explanation in the story- and it's a lot better in my opinion than that I didn't bother to check name spelling before writing the thing :P

I hope that those who are reading my story continue to enjoy it, and also: if anyone wants to become an additional proofer, or just help me work out bugs in the story, I'd appreciate all the help I can get! Thanks!

Melanie E.