My China Cross Dress Cure -an update

I've tidied the original version a little mainly to correct some minor mistakes. But I was sorely tempted to expand it to a longer version.
I wrote it for the Summer Romance competition and I could have easily extended it that I might do if the story was of interest.
In really didn't know if it was a suitable story for this web site or not and I can't tell if I made a mistake or not since a single story is hit whether its of interest or not.
Maybe by looking at the response to this note I'll get a feel of whether I should just focus on accelerating 'At Last a Life' or writing other stories or expanding this story.
I have enjoyed writing just as much as reading other stories.