Are there Any Golfers Out There?

I have been working for some time on The Cynthia Chronicals - Volume 2. One of the stories in the series is completed; however, it was written out of sequence and must wait for other stories to be written before it can be published. I need someone who is golf knowledgeable to read my current effort that should be finished within the week. It is written around Bobbie Anderson (nee Schmedlap) who is Cyndy's best friend, so it would be very helpful if the reader was familiar with the previous stories in the series. It will probably be in the neighborhood of 35 - 40,000 words, as is the completed story. This is not about editing. I just need someone who understands the game to comment on my telling of the tale. If we can write about football(soccer), I think golf will find its place, too.

All help appreciated.

Portia