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can someone help me

Submitted by wargamerguy on Mon, 2009/04/13 - 10:28am

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Someone told me that my latest story attempt was very disjointed, so can someone tell me what that means, and how I can correct that problem? How can I make my story join?
I will appreciate any sugestions. I really have good ideas for this story and I want it to be awesome.

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